How would you fix this twist?

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She just realizes she likes the other guy better and has to tell him. After that he turns on her. Pic related.

Weaselton makes powerplay for their kingdom. Don't care what they do with Hans, just delet that twist.

>>85238636
He rapes her while she is dying

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>>85239574
This.

>>85238908
>ifunny

Fix what? What's wrong with it?

What a shitty movie. I don't know why little girls like it so much.

>>85238636

Make him more villainous starting with the middle of the movie. If the audience is aware he's an asshole, it creates an extra layer of tension because we know something Anna doesn't and she almost dies for it. It comes off more as an organic story development and Hans being the smug asshole we've already learned that he can be instead of a sudden 180 that reeks of pushing her and the other dude whos name I forget together and the last minute replacement for the original villain.

>>85240377
Story was interesting because she meets two great guys and will have to choose one of them by the end. But then they just make one of them evil out of nowhere, and openly evil for some reason even though it was better to keep their intentions to themself

>>85240996

The movie needed a replacement villain because they completely rewrote Elsa's character mid way because Let it Go painted too sympathetic of a picture for a character that was supposed to be the bad guy. Of course, since this is a Disney movie and nuance doesn't exist, this means she had to become a secondary protagonist with an atonal song (It's still about her shutting herself out and not giving a shit about anyone, but she's back to her bumbling self by the time Anna arrives and lost any sense of charm or power she had) and shoehorned Hans into the role without rewriting anything outside of the final act except MAYBE Love is an Open Door.

They should have made Hans stay sympathetic, even if he was secretly the antagonist. Maybe make it obvious in the earlier scenes that he really does care for Anna, but is still more interested in her position. He doesn't necessarily love her for who she is, but who she represents.

He could still have a hateboner for Elsa and try to execute her. Instead of not kissing her, he should have tried to, and the "true love" thing doesn't work. Probably making him mad and jealous.

it's a kids movie

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>>85240283
>Giving a shit

because disney have only ever been able to make like 1 hour of their movies good, the remaining time has to be barely watchable crap

>>85238636
Frozen is fine. Why are you retards discussing kids movies?

Hans best boy. Saved Elsa n shit. Took care of the people. The trolls brainwashed him. Look it up.

>>85238636
He suffocates her with a pillow. Elsa then kills herself because she believes she is to blame. Literally all he had to do.