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/FMG/: Shameless Shilling Edition 2017-07-17 04:08:46 Post No. 85084952
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I wrote this short film and I was hoping you /FMG/ guys could give me some feedback.
https://youtu.be/DwnqnQhYKhM
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Audio is shit and lighting is dark as fuck. The sound mixing needs work. Shots are well framed I'll give you that.
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/tv/ doesnt actually care about film
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>>85084952
Good effort. Indoor scenes are very badly lit and you should invest in some audio equipment, but I'm assuming you had no budget. You show talent for this.
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Why does it look like every other student film where it has this dull filter on everything and nothing contrasting as a result, is it a lighting issue? Or over/under color correction
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https://youtu.be/j4mjHYZapaY
feedback is welcomed
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>>85084952
You definitely got an eye for framing but you need some lighting equipment and audio equipment. Not too bad though.
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>>85085285
I was the one that did the audio on one day and fucked it up. We had to dub over the lines in a dash.
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>>85085302
Learn how to frame, for fuck's sake. I mean, why the fuck is this shot in the final cut????
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I honestly don't have the eye for editing and cinematography so I struggled picking good shots. My camera operator did a better job imo
https://youtu.be/AsqG6Xrc6rI
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