SCREENWRITING THREAD Share the load

Young man should snap sebastian's neck before telling adam to "tell that to sebastian's snapped neck"

>>80241181
lmao kek senpai

>>80241051
this sounds terrible
>EXCUSE ME
>YEAH

fuck you

>>80241350
Why so? He's asking for a lighter, senpai

>>80241381
no one says that
"Excuse me can I get a light" is better.

>>80241051
Inb4 hitler and Ann frank time travel duo movie copy pasta

>>80241587
I think it's a little bit culture-oriented, but I do agree, it sounds so much better.

>>80241617
We're not so different, you and I.

This isn't very good OP, but it's also a bad section to share. Post a part of the script that actually matters.

Your tenuous grip on the english language has me thinking that the rest isn't very good either. Prove me wrong.

>inb4 'tenuous grip on the english language!?

>the youth, WHO frequent...
>they are careFREE and happy...

>making it impossible to accurately pinpoint the country (what are you talking about?)

>thickly
>THICKLY
>?

>>80241617
Haven't heard this one so I'm hoping someone posts it.

Work has been a drain, so I barely write now. Was working on a all female horror that I plan on working on again once spring starts.
Also have a female Warriors script that I'm brewing in my brain.

>>80241640
>We're not so different, you and I.
literally plebbit: the post

>making it impossible to accurately pinpoint the country
You thinking that the only difference between european countries suggest you're not from here. You should write about what you know.

Ignoring the fact that them speaking english kinda narrows it down, you could tell from the beer they drink, the cigarettes they smoke, what's on TV, and if they go in the street at some point of the movies you would be able to tell from cars and license plates and signs...