Fat LoZ girls thread
Sup, /v/irgins. Fat Midna writer here. Keep this thread alive until tomorrow, and I'll do some more writing.
In the mean time, here's a compilation of the greentexts:
https://pastebin.com/9LQXgfVf
>>8803429
How dare someone do this to Mipha.
>>8803554
Cry some more, bitchnigga.
>>8803554
>Knows the internet exists.
>Doesn't think this was going to happen.
>>8803554
They should have kept going desuyo
inb4 404 when I wake up
Dont fatten up my feeshy
>>8803506 here. Any writing requests? I love writing me some Midna.
>>8809892
Sexy cuddling with blob Midna.
>>8810052
I'm considering moving into a more traditional style for this instead of greentext. Do you have a preference?
>>8810078
You can do regular writing if you want.
>>8809892
Midna losing the ability to float, having to rely on walking, then waddling, then using a wheelbarrow / cart just to lug her gargantuan stomach, then finally ending immobile on her fatty expanse.
>>8810958
Feel free to share more ideas, though! Doesn't have to be Midna.
>>8810052
Here you go, anon:
https://pastebin.com/bW1FNpVX
Thoughts? Criticisms?
>>8812442
got a boner/10
also suggesting a fatty Mipha or Ruto story, with Mipha giving you TLC, or Ruto demanding you help her grow into the role of queen of the Zoras
>>8813065
Those seem like seem pretty interesting ideas, yeah, but do you have any other thoughts about what I wrote? Could I have gone above a boner/10 ranking, and if so, how?
Mind if I dump the Saxxon Zelda pack?
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>>8813209
Just to grammatically nitpick, there were a few conflicting tenses. Specifically at line 21, it goes to present tense, then stays there until 25.
There's also using bare in place of bear, and thrusted instead of thrust.
It also felt like there's a couple places where you could truncate or rearrange a sentence by (re)moving a single (or a few) words and the accompanying comma to deliver information faster or avoid the passive voice, but that might be more to taste.
>Groggily rising from his slumber, Anon is awoken by Midna’s multi-chinned face, her iconic fanged smirk present.
might be rewritten as
>Anon groggily rose from his slumber, awakening to Midna’s multi-chinned face, her iconic fanged smirk present.
That also plays into how some of the wording is a bit clunky.
>Midna wanted to watch, but due to her sheer mass, was unable to
I'm not much of a writer, but I think this is where Show, Don't Tell comes in, or elaboration. Maybe have her huffing and puffing with effort as she tries to turn around and watch, moaning from both pleasure and exertion.
don't listen to me though, I'm just some faggot with rudimentary knowledge of writing and no motivation to actually do it
the faggots with more than rudimentary knowledge (maybe) at >>8703098 could probably give better advice, or even some of the faggots on [>spoilerson/trash/]/mlp/'s AiE general where I got some of my knowledge[/meme] could help.
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>>8814964
And that's the end of the picture dump
>>8814905
Pretty useful advice, honestly. Writing enough imagery for the lewd scenes tired me out and messed me in the head, which explains the sudden shift in tenses and the misused words. I have this problem when I'm detailing a scene. I need to use some more flavorful language.
Showing, and not telling has been a problem for me at times as well. I'm sure it's something most writers struggle with, or at least I do. Either way, practice makes perfect, and maybe I'll git gud at it someday.
I think you're a trustworthy source, you've pointed out some actual problems with my writing. Don't beat yourself up.
[Iwish/trash/hadspoilers]We all start from somewhere.[/fuckniggers]
Plump
Are big bloated belching bellies fine?
>>8817509
Yes
>>8817578
If you could do something fetishy with Ruto, what would you do?
>>8817917
Fill the fishfu
>>8818070
With what? And how much? Be detailed about this.
>>8814632
>>8821635
I wish to impregnate the imp
>no Oren
for shame
>>8823450
Is there even any fanart?
>>8826237
Wew
>>8828056
>>8829548
>tfw you will never fuck Oren as she is expanding
>>8834562
>you will never steal her smooth stone while she is sleeping
>you will never run off with it and store it somewhere safe, so nobody will easily find it
>you will never spy on her expanding form and temper in the shadows of the domain
>you will never see her breasts blossom and her belly expand
>you will never disguise yourself as a common hero and promise to her that you'll search for the missing stone
>you will never come back for daily "progress reports" - more of her growing size, and not your efforts in locating the missing stone
>you will never gasp but be turned on once her body outgrows the boundaries of the pool
>you will never witness her sudden growth spurts, seeing cracks form on the sides of her pool, with her curves jiggling with every fit she throws
Suffering, my man.
you ain't dying yet
plump
>>8842893
artist?
>>8845799
Could be SolitaryScribbles, although I'm not sure.
>tfw no fat bird daughterfu
>>8837662
...Have I come full circle? Am I an ironically bad now, or am I an unironically ironically bad? I don't know anymore. Last place I expected my old, shitty art, was on here...welp.
Link is the cutest girl.
>>8850600
This thread needs more Link
>>8850600
Are there any good fatfics with crossdressing/normal Link? I'd be interested.
There is NOT enough fat link, it kills me
>>8856290
Commencing Link dump
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>All these fat links
YOU ARE A SAINT
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And that's all I have
I hope you've enjoyed this, fellow Link lover
>>8857431
Good lord yes, thank you anon
>>8858212
>fat LoZ girls thread
>hoba-do, better dump a metric fuckload of fat Links!
Fuck off.
>>8858258
He's done more for this thread than you
>>8858258
I wouldn't mind either fat LoZ girls or fatty Link, as I'm fine with both.
Any Link writing ideas? I would like hearing them.
>>8858280
Nigger, that's like saying someone who posts futa in a thread that explicitly says "no futa" is contributing the thread in any positive way.
>>8858366
Thread was pretty dead anyway, or would you rather he shit up the board with another specific general like this one was
>>8858402
He can fuck off to the SSBHM thread on /aco/.
>>8858433
And this thread could do the same with the ssbbw thread on /aco/
>>8858402
>specific
This is a thread for fat art of any female character that's appeared in the Zelda franchise.
There's dozens of charcters that can be posted here.
This is hardly the most specific thread on /trash/
>>8858448
I made this thread because writebro said he wanted somewhere to write his story.
>>8858498
I don't mind anything with Link, as he can be pretty good sometimes.
Midna's my waifu for laifu, though.
Can we bump this? I'm trying to get to these images but they won't...like, load.
>>8869245
If the url lists is2.4cdn at the start, remove the 2
otherwise, add the 2 if it isn't there already
Hiroshima can't keep it together
Fucking faggots ruin every thread on this forum posting their gay shit in any female focused thread and then when the thread dies they go and jerk each other off talking about how fat fucks they are until someone dares to make a thread about girls again. I hope Mike Pence electrocutes you.
>>8881078
>ywn revoke their internet access
>>8881078
retard
>>8881078
>forum
fuck off idiot
>>8881201
>>8881207
Oh look its the two faggots now. Dont you guys have your own thread up right now? Why aren't you in there repeating yourself over and over about how you don't care how fat you get and how much you love being a diabetic shitlard? Here's an idea, go make a fucking subrebbit for grotesque pieces of adipose trash like you two to just echo chamber each other into an early grave you gelatinous mass.
>>8882725
what
I just said it's not a forum you stroke victim
>>8882725
Just get out if you don't like it
Sumo Zelda when?
>>8886563
>sumo
>>8803429
Kill yourself fat american
>>8903343
You'd think the four words wouldn't be so hard to understand.
>>8902002
No
>>8904717
I love this Medli. Cute chubsters being cute is the greatest.
>>8924704
Artist?
>>8926578
http://crossedcurrents.tumblr.com
>>8928154
hot
>page 10
Plump
>>8937255
Thicc
>>8941338
sauce?
>>8817917
I'd lay my head on her gut after she's had a ton to eat, and fall asleep listening to the sloshes and gurgles of her overstuffed tummy. It'd be like, the best waterbed ever.
>>8956863
Okay, you can stop now
>>8956881
Damn. This close to silently reaching bump limit.
Is he gone?
Dead
Fuck this bumping faggot
Spamming bump while on autosage. How shameful.
Before we get pruned, are we going to have a new thread?
>>8958257
Yeah
>>8958333
Link it once you make it.