Zootopia thread: Superspy edition Pastebin: pastebin.com/iY

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First for more spies

Also, shilling Nobby's stream

>https://picarto.tv/nobbydraws
>https://picarto.tv/nobbydraws
>https://picarto.tv/nobbydraws

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Heya everyone!

Today's gonna be a bit busy as it turns out. Still working out whether I'm gonna dedicate my free time today to audiobook stuff, blind read throughs, text editing of whatnot.

On my to-do list is Gideon VS Tiger Corp final chapters blind read through, Hot and Cold next two chapters blind read through, more Stoutwell audiobook and getting started on Water under the Bridge audiobook. I've also got text edits of people's stories and workshop stuff on Discord.

What I am knocking out now is going to the gym!

See you later, buddies! I hope you all make sure you get at least 30 minutes of exercise a day! It'd make Judy proud!

>>4014200
Is that a Kingsman sidearm? Excellent choice, that artist.

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>>4014367
>Kingsman
thanks for reminding me Japanese like both Zootopia and Kingsman

>>4014363
Hi Comic! I only want to say that I am extremely happy that you liked the seal I made! Looking at past threads I've seen that you put it onto your mug, I feel honoured!

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>>4014211
Here ya go, best spies in the business.

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>>4014481
I would really dig the idea of Jack Savage and Nick working together, excellent taste.

>>4014468
context?

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also this

>>4014481
source of image?

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>>4014523
I made this crest for Comicanon some time ago, then looking at past threads I found that he liked it and put it on his mug

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>>4014503
I can certainly see them having good chemistry as spy buddies. Maybe with a "The Man from UNCLE" vibe to top it off.

>>4014539
No idea I'm afraid. Just more images I scavenged from here and there.

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>>4013845
what a cute couple

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>>4014201

I like how japan portray him, some of them make him a director, some gave him bad smoking habit because of his voice and that pacifier thing, and in that really long comic it's shown he can pull off Puss's "cute stare".

What would zootopia's Russia be called?

>>4014607
hot damn, this is nice. I wish more artists had creative ideas like secret service shenanigans, with plots, betrayals and intrigue instead of
>lel cool rabbot stole your cute raboot cuck cuck

>>4014319
Was this translated?

>>4014651
I know man

>>4014663

Tundratown.

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>>4014667
enuff with cukc

>>4014651
Yessss.

Stu, you here?

Or any writefag. It's Clunk, I need some advice on this fic At least this entry to this fic

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>>4014667
Well to be fair, that's what most people automatically think with Jack; A fitting love interest for Judy, because bunny. It's hard not to consider it.

>>4014663
Russia

>>4014725
which is why tropes like that are called cliché

>>4014663
Medvedia

>>4014705
>>4014725
source?

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little toot toot <3

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>>4014762
Do you think he enjoys pretending to be naive and happy?

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>>4014738
Cliche, sure, but that's what all tropes pretty much are. The difference between a good and a bad one, is delivery.

>>4014740
Still same guy who scavenged from here and there, so sadly no idea m8.

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>>4014762

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Again, can a writefag help me with something? I need advice, a quick edit of a one shot. No prior reading needed.

It's Clunkbot. I don't ask for help a lot, but I need some advice.

I will pay in (you)'s and this vintage R63 Nick picture

Test do not reply

>>4014503
>>4014607

>After becoming part of the ZPD Nick gets his talents recognized
>He becomes a secret agent under the wing of his mentor, Jack Savage
>He's sad because he can't tell Judy of his second awesome job (national security reasons)
>One night he is on a mission with Jack
>They have to catch a spy that has continually escaped capture
>For this reason they have called the best
>Jack is chasing the spy, Nick is on a nearby hill, tranquillizer rifle ready
>With an astute stratagem the spy is able to outrun Jack and make him lose its tracks
>But Nick has seen everything
>He steadies the weapon, hold his breath and he is ready to shoot
>But the spy removes its mask
>It's Judy

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Hi. Looking for practice and out of ideas - searching for suggestions what to draw please?

Would be very grateful for any comments pointing out any errors or areas of improvement. Thanks.

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>>4014864
What the fuck is this "test" meme going around /trash/

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>>4014864
SKYKING SKYKING DO NOT ANSWER

>>4014663
Bearland

>>4014874
predictable ending, but solid greentext. Good stuff, anon.

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>tfw you miss all the pedo Nick stuff in the last thread because you were sleeping.
I don't know whether to be happy that it's taking off, or be upset that you guys did some without me.

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>>4014874

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>>4014874
Helluva hustle, sweetheart.

>>4014849
Huh are there really no writefags?

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>>4014776

he's a sly fox. it doesnt matter. it's part of the hustle.


i hope judy convinced him to be more than just a grumpy old fox.

>>4014923
They have all left us alone but sometimes shafts of light grace our corners of the room.

>>4014849
Sorry, I'm not one, here's your (you) to make your post more noticeable - best I could do, sorry.

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I saw a lot of stuff I didn't like here, so I'm expressing my dissatisfaction with this. Cut it out or else.

>>4014940
I'm pretty sure there's several still but they just aren't here now.

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>>4014849

Heyo. I might be able to help. Shoot me a link.

>>4014721

Stu here -- what's up?

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>>4014949
go die fag kys kuk

>>4014663
The Federation of Vodkaplian Bearuskia
Capital: Mosgrowl
Current leader: Vladof Polarin

>>4014849
Uh, sorry, was kind of writing my own stuff.

I can give it a look over, but I'm not great.

>>4014923
I'm busy cuddling with people.

>>4014905
I'm really sorry, we can do more later!

>>4014949
Okay we will all stop posting forever now.

>>4014982
Don't lie to us.

>>4014993
tulpas are people too

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>>4014949
You can't stop the sensual dance of life!

>>4014993
Anon, for what purpose would I lie to you?

I gain nothing.

>>4014972
10/10

>>4015005
Isn't a tulpa that fatty pubic area.?

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posting more agents/spies

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>>4014969

>>4014962
>>4014968
Okay THANK YOU!

Here's effectively what I need help with

>Is this a good spot to end it
And as for themes and basic philosophy:
>Is there enough play between karmic justice, between Judy's perceived failure, and the actions of the shooter to be some kind of greater force at work.

This is an entry into Short Tails, it's written in Intake style. It's a short analysis of PTSD Judy while also trying to tell a heavy and tragic story. No prior reading is needed and I promise it is short.

This is it again
http://pastebin.com/jfRavJkd

I would really love some general feedback, because I feel like I'm playing with some strong themes here. Also blatantly ripping off a song I heard.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!

>>4015027
they all look either high or that they have varying degrees of downs.

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>>4014949
Are low wage burga badgers cool?

>>4015027
I'm working on some Savage writing, I should have it down in a while.

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>>4015034
fag kuk kys fgt fox its on shit fox fuk u fite

>>4015024

That's a FUPA.

>>4015023
I'd give it a 5/10, its not one of my better shitposts, but I've certainly made worse

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>>4015047

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>>4015055
Tell me more, anon. You have piqued my interest.

>>4015053
Why haven't we seen any of this guy yet?

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>>4015055
You have my interest,anon.

>>4015095
That Judy face, what the fuck

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Old myths are important to a culture, and the stories that are told inform a lot of how our ancestors and ourselves see and interpret the world.

So on that note, what sort of myths do you think Zootopia had?
Any that you can make up, whole cloth?
Any that can be easily transplanted from real world myths?

>>4014902
Thank you, I usually don't write but the situation was too perfect for something like >>4015095

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>>4015110
I can easily imagine Slavic/Celtic (depending on one's taste) brand of paganism, venerating the elements and nature or a big spiritual bear in the roaming in the woods plausible fancanon.

>>4015110
I always like to imagine a lot of our classic fables are historical events.

Little Red Riding Hood, Three Little Pigs, that type of thing were actually massive political incidents in early predator-prey relations

>>4015045

On it like a bonnet, Clunk!

>>4015091
Lotta other pack streeters to work with I assume.

>>4015095
source?

>>4015144
Thank you so very much!!

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>>4014363
Hi, bud, glad to see you.

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Gazelle getting a train ran on her by Tigers when?

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put this together for someone who rolled a silver fox

I'm still streaming some draws, dunno when I'll stop

https://picarto.tv/nobbydraws
https://picarto.tv/nobbydraws

>>4015095
>Bullpen after Nick and Judy get married
>"Officer Wilde?"
>"Yes?" they both respond in unison

>>4015045
It kind of needs a bit more of an ending.
At the moment it kind of cuts off at Judy's story, we don't see her response to it or anything else.
It kinda feels a little incomplete, just to me at least.

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not spies, but cute noir

>>4015053
>One time, Remmy had a dream where Rex was his mailbox
>He handed Remmy his mail and said "Looks like you got some bills today. Would be nicer if they were dollar bills. You know?"
>Then he chuckled to himself until Remmy woke up.

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>>4015094
>>4015078
Jack Savage on his first field assignment, bodyguard duty.

For the new Mayor.

>>4015168
A sexy panther lady looking sexy

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>>4015168
someone had me roll as well.

I got raccoon.

>>4015182
Okay, I feel you. I can see some avenues where we could go. I just don't want it to turn into Intake part 2: Electric Boogaloo

>>4015095
Mr. and Mrs. Platonic-Friends

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>>4014849
Oh that's rare indeed, I thought I had all swap pics. Thanks.

>>4015233
upload and tag here zoo.booru.org/

everyone who rolled theirs, upload and tag them their because they'll get lost otherwise if you're not a local celebrity

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>>4015255

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>>4015255

>>4015233
holy crap what a qt

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>>4015233
Have a giraffe and jaguar, MT.

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Working on the Marten I rolled earlier this morning. She's coming out cute. Lives in a treehouse.

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Zistopia just updated with a much more competent guest artist

>>4015246
Ah no problem, it's just... maybe it's me being a huge sperg, but while the ending was dramatic, it kind of took me out of it.
Since it's an in-universe document, having it unfinished like that seems just bad practice.

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>>4015221
Sweet, anon. I was just fooling around when I threw the greentext for that yesterday, but it's got potential. Is it gonna be Spaghetti Savage?

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>>4015233

>>4015293
You're completely right. Thank you for that. I will indeed finish it. Did you pick up on themes of justice, Karma, regret? Was I blunt about those? Were they even a factor?

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>>4015045
>>Is this a good spot to end it


I felt the need for some kind of catharsis. The ending is tragic and shocking, but it felt like Judy needed something to either redeem her for her imagined sin, or condemn her for it. The former being much more preferable.

The connection between her and the kid could be stronger so there's more impact at the end. What does the kid represent to her? What does she represent to herself? What is the conflict between those two visions?

She questions her work and the ramifications of her behavior because of what happened, but how deep does that go now? Is she bound for a desk? For a leave? For Bunnyborrough?

There are GREAT themes at play here and I think a writer of your caliber could totally expand on them. This could honestly be the Dark Night of Judy's Soul. The point of both our stories for Judy has been (a bit flippantly perhaps) "it's all fun and games until someone gets hurt". Now someone's been hurt: where does that leave Judy?

BTW, did you just write this today? Because if so, I'm in total awe.

>>4015218
That sheep needs a burga.

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>>4015298
Well, some spaghetti.
The sort of thing where he starts off trying to be a cool collected secret agent, but she won't stop with this shit!

>>4015349
when are you gonna post the full thing you fag

>>4015311
Yeah, there's also... there's almost like a feeling that Judy had a subconcious knowledge of what was coming, knew the perp was as much at risk, hence her trying to do it as fast as possible, shutting everything else away because she feared for the consequences... of losing two lives because she couldn't save one.

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>>4015291
Kinda late a bit there.

>>4015289
Does she have a name?
Iji or something else?

>>4014849

I've written a few oneshots, though not nearly enough to be a writefag. If there isn't anyone else, though, I could look...

>>4015394
No idea yet. Still trying to figure that one out. Dunno if I'd have her take my name or not.

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>>4015045

I'll second what >>4015182 said: it seems like it ends too soon. We finally get a sense of the denouement of the incident, but not what it means for Judy. Take it a bit further, let us see what that means for her, how she really reacts to it, and how she's going to deal with it going forward.

As far as "a greater force at work" is concerned, I guess I don't get a sense of that. Again, you can build on that going forward--show that the whole "eye for an eye" bit is actually playing itself out, with Judy as an emotional outlier to the whole affair. Perhaps, thematically, you could play with the idea that the scales of the universe are still unbalanced because of how Judy feels toward everything? I might even suggest a few more scenes earlier on to give a better idea of where Judy's coming from--admittedly, that opening line of hers reads a bit too strong for the bunny we all know and love. Give us a bit more of a lead-in to her mindset during this fic--show exactly why she's thinking about the "eye for an eye" style of justice.

>>4015317
>I felt the need for some kind of catharsis. The ending is tragic and shocking, but it felt like Judy needed something to either redeem her for her imagined sin, or condemn her for it. The former being much more preferable.


I was honestly thinking of having a sad ending, tragic ending. She's in there because she feels she fucked up and has PTSD from it, yet she talks about karma. She punishes herself but a karmic system (one of law and order) has punished the kid. It's kind of convoluted, I know.

>The connection between her and the kid could be stronger so there's more impact at the end. What does the kid represent to her? What does she represent to herself? What is the conflict between those two visions?
Which kid.

The one who was wrongfully shot or the shooter? I feel you. I'm gonna have to break some knuckles to edit this

>She questions her work and the ramifications of her behavior because of what happened, but how deep does that go now? Is she bound for a desk? For a leave? For Bunnyborrough?

I never inteded that to be about her, more about the story itself. Commentary about justice, but I see now thanks to your help and others, it needs to really go somewhere, especially for Judy.
>Kid kills someone
>BUT MUH KARMA
>Killer kills self

>Now someone's been hurt: where does that leave Judy?
That's the hard part. She's stricken, she's maybe thinking her efforts were...futile? If she trusts in an eye for an eye? I don't know, good commentary though!

>BTW, did you just write this today? Because if so, I'm in total awe.
I just hashed it out, yeah. Thank you very very much.

Seriously, thank you. I'll take all of these into account. I might not publish today, but I will edit. Maybe not today because I try not to edit when I write.

>>4015388
You're kinda right. I was thinking how her drive to be just would conflict with the narrative, unless I'm tryuing to critique Zootopia's justice system.

>>4015395
See >>4015045

>>4014905
Honestly I just like it because it means I get to talk about Nick n Finnick

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>>4015358
Looking forward to it anon!

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>>4015422
I, too, love these foxes

>>4015402
There, a name generator for ideas
http://www.behindthename.com/random/
however zootopians name are usually very punny on the animal part (Hopps, Wilde, Clawhauser and so on)

>>4015415
The great trouble is trying to keep this relatively small yet also do all these things. I think it's entirely possible.

>As far as "a greater force at work" is concerned, I guess I don't get a sense of that

Okay, that's good. How can I improve? My ultimate goal was very loose. I started off just wanting to tell a short story and use those lines but I see now how I could maybe have Judy's quick and effecient justice clash against some form of cosmic righteousness as far as application of law and order are concerned. Maybe she quits the force? At the very least she's PTSD from it

>"eye for an eye" bit is actually playing itself out, with Judy as an emotional outlier to the whole affair
I was hoping to do that with the following outline
>Kid kills another kid by accident
>Kid kill self in guilt
>Thus an eye for an eye

It's heavily entrenched in morals right now, and I need to dig it up. Boyyyyy this might be a good one if I could pull it off. Because we have the kid talking about heaven and hell and if he's fit for either because of what he did.


>That opening line of hers reads a bit too strong for the bunny we all know and love. Give us a bit more of a lead-in to her mindset during this fic--show exactly why she's thinking about the "eye for an eye" style of justice.

Of the whole fic? It's Intake styled, so it will have to be notes from a therapist

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>>4015091
>Why haven't we seen any of this guy yet?
He was the first character we meet in the first story, other than Remmy.

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post you're face when you realize the sheep were waken up

>>4015505
Well I meant like interactions. I remember that one pic you posted, dunno if I missed any others.

>>4015465
Only trouble is I'm not terribly punny. Will need to do some more research and figure something out.

>>4015494
Okay, so we have

>Heaven and Hell
>Killer and Killed
>Action and reaction
>Karma
>An eye for an eye

We have two opposites or two black and white choices at play here, with Judy who thinks she can intervene between them all.

Perhaps this conclusion?

>Judy learns that she can't save them all
>That her (and our) justice systems are powerless against emotion, guilt and consequence
>That she is simply the reactive force of things greater than her.

I'm confused. Damnit. This could be so good, I just need to work these themes out. I can mop up her character easy. I'm god damn Clunkbot, I'm a writefag.

This theme work is rigorous shit I tell you

>>4015533
He interacts with Remmy, unless you just mean art.

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>>4015419

Clunk,

I've got an idea: hear me out.

What if she's having this conversation with a priest and not a therapist? What if she's wracked with guilt over this whole incident and seeks out spiritual guidance? Not a confessional, but a heart-to-heart with a man of the cloth. She walks into a church late at night, right as the priest is closing the door and they sit on the pew discussing what happened.

I think with that scenario, you could really explore the themes you're working at. It would also be a good conflict point about how she serves justice on Earth and on how her action reflect the greater ideas of fairness, justice and righteousness.

The story told from the priest's point of view could be really interesting. You've got the chops to do it.

>>4015513
>I get no respect. No respect at all I tell ya.
>When I was born, the doctor said to my father, " I'm sorry, we did everything we could but she still pulled through!"

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>>4015446

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>>4015513

>>4015582
I literally went "Ooooohhh" when I read that.

Me likey. It would even free me up from the therapist style, I could do a back and forth dialogue.


>What if she's wracked with guilt over this whole incident and seeks out spiritual guidance? Not a confessional, but a heart-to-heart with a man of the cloth. She walks into a church late at night, right as the priest is closing the door and they sit on the pew discussing what happened.

But the problem being the priest will be partial to the side of faith. That steers me towards more religious commentary than philosophical. He'll be forced to defend his position of heaven and hell.

>I think with that scenario, you could really explore the themes you're working at. It would also be a good conflict point about how she serves justice on Earth and on how her action reflect the greater ideas of fairness, justice and righteousness.

I think you have a really good idea here...Problem being I just have to make it work.

>The story told from the priest's point of view could be really interesting. You've got the chops to do it.

Thank you. I'm starting to believe I do too. This is just the toil and labor of our craft. From one Writefag to another, I sincerely thank you. You've all been a HUGE help to me.

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>>4015422
>>4015446
>>4015635

>>4015657
I should remind myself I'm also only 20 and that I'm probably trying way too fucking hard for fanfiction. Need a break, brain killing me. Might pick this up tonight.

So much to think about.

but what if ozzy wasnt kill

>>4015677
Meant for>>4015657
and >>4015582

>>4015582
source?

>>4015692
I can't believe ozzy is fucking dead

>>4015692
He faked his death once, he could do it again.
THE CASE ISN'T CLOSED UNTIL I SEE HIS BODY MYSELF, YOU UNDERSTAND?

God I fucking hate Cracked. Someone got paid to write a scientific expose on the bunny breeding joke basically.

http://www.cracked.com/blog/the-dark-but-sexy-truth-behind-zootopias-imminent-demise/

>>4015635
artist of this?

>>4015423
Hmm, one problem arises though.

I can't decide if I should keep them pure, or have Savage ram the ham.

>>4015720
>reading Cracked

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>>4015494
>How can I improve?
As far as making it clear that there's some greater force at work, maybe make it clear that all the actors in play are really playing their rote roles. The shooter could gain a bit more characterization from this: give him a bigger reason to view the world from a give and take perspective, either through his final few words or through his uncle and the profile he creates for Judy.

>Kid kills another kid by accident
>Kid kill self in guilt
>Thus an eye for an eye

Ja, ich verstehe. I just mean that an idea I can see you playing around with is the fact that the karma is still unbalanced due to Judy's involvement. Yeah, the scales have been leveled, but all the observers to those scales still have to deal with the result. Perhaps her therapist can seize on this idea and serve as the cosmic counterweight to it all?

>opening line

I meant that I don't see Judy uttering the word "motherfucker" outside of the most extreme circumstances. The line seems OOC for her. That said, if that's just the style you're rolling with, go right ahead.

>>4015692
Don't be ridiculous. We saw him buried, and zombies aren't real.

>>4015705

I did a GIS and it came back with something that looks Polish -- sorry, Anon.

>>4014282
That might be my fault for posting the comics on e621.

>>4015720
Nice try, shill, but I have Cracked automatically go to an archive so you dont get upvotes

>>4015737
I don't, I check it like once a month for /pol/ content and saw this and decided to post it here.

>>4015778
>reading Cracked ever

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>>4015677
>I should remind myself I'm also only 20 and that I'm probably trying way too fucking hard for fanfiction. Need a break, brain killing me. Might pick this up tonight.
>So much to think about.

Take a break, Clunk. Youth burns bright, but it's not immune from burning out.

>>4015793
you're on a fucking ghetto board of 4chan, get over yourself

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>>4015663
>wolf muzzles
fucking furries

>>4015739
>>4015739
SO MUCH good advice. I'm archiving this thread to read back from.

>Perhaps her therapist can seize on this idea and serve as the cosmic counterweight to it all
I was thinking of this because his job is to care and support for Judy and a mantra could be "There was nothing you could have done" sorta thing.

Fuck this fanfiction is getting existential

Fuck. Will think on all of this, might pick it baclk up tonight.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU

>>4015802
That's my plan. Gf coming in an hour. Gonna watch TTGL. THANK YOU AGAIN!!!

>>4015808
At least I don't read Cracked.

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>>4015663
"Alright, raise those arms and go 'Banzai' for me~"
"......................"
"Oka~y, you are a big boy, after all~"

Holy shit Nick is engaging smug factor five

>>4015841
>you are a big boy after all
For you

>>4015723
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/dontbeazombie/
There's a lot of Mpreg stuff, you've been warned.

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>>4015720
>we see Fru Fru, a shrew, go from her wedding night to heavily pregnant in a matter of days.
>Cracked author didnt even watch the movie to note that months had passed between the two ice scenes

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>>4015818
>That's my plan. Gf coming in an hour. Gonna watch TTGL. THANK YOU AGAIN!!!

You're welcome, Clunk -- go be 20 and awesome!

>>4015869
I specifically did not write "big guy" for the sole purpose of escaping that

I guess there is no escape

>>4015841
Nick would make such a good father.
If not for the whole pedophilia thing.

>>4015884
>Cracked not getting all the facts straight
What's new

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>reading fic

>get to latest chapter

>ends with Nick tortured and disemboweled

>>4014874
>Nick comes out pointing at Judy
>"take the shot!"
>"I can't..."
>Jack is catching up behind Judy
>"take the shot Wilde!"
>"I-I..."
>"SHOOT WILDE!"
>Nick shoots Savage

>>4015977
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MU4Ww7MR-5U

>>4015943

>ends with Nick tortured and disemboweled

GAAAAAH!!!

Well that's a cheery fucking note then, innit?

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>>4015977
fuck off

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>>4015943
>reading fic
>get to the latest chapter
>ends with Nick/Judy/Whoever finding out they have stage 10 super cancer

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>>4016042
I will, after leaving you bound and gagged with Mr. Smiles

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>>4015943
>reading fic

>get to the last chapter

>ends with a giant meteor crashing into Zootopia, obliterating all life on the planet

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>>4015926
Anyone else have any sketches I might have missed?

>>4016109
>reading fic

>get to the last chapter

>ends with McHorn spraying Nick in the face with fox repellant

>>4015884
Not only that, but the author made some baseless assumption and extrapolations. It is not true that every rabbit family is the same size of the Judy one (e.g. if I remember correctly Judy's granddad in that little piece of journal was said to have a thousand or so grandsons and granddaughters, invalidating the baseless extrapolation made by the author). Also it is completely ignored that Zootopia is at the level of a post scarcity society with capability of local terraforming. Also the example with Australia is incorrect, from one side we have controlled, agricultural land on the other we have an horde of 10 billion rabbits eating indiscriminately everything

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Why is he so perfect?

>>4015943
Can I get a title so that I know to avoid it in the future?

>>4016142
depends, what else do you have there?

>>4016156

Because he was designed as the self-insert of a gay man.

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>>4016183
then how come he never rubs dicks with anyone?

>>4016183
So you're saying Nick has AIDS?

>>4016164

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7399309/chapters/16807834

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>>4016092
Really? And you think i won't be resisting?

>>4014529
pure autism

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>>4016142
If you want there is this horrible one I made when someone requested something Zootopia Cromartie High School related

>>4016191
Every scene he's not on camera you can consider him frotting with Finnick.

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>>4016168
151 sketches in all, obviously can't show all of them right now

Mostly save first sketches by new drawfags, all of TheMechanic's stuff and that other drawfag from my time in /co/, and miscellaneous stuff I don't exactly remember

>>4016216
where do you think you are, sweetheart?

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>>4016218
Hahaha, that's one of the first ones I saved

>>4016226
damn, you're a cool dude, anon.

>>4016191
He literally kissed finnick.
I know someone has a cap.

>>4016253
Dammit. I didn't think someone would have saved it.

>>4016215
Let's be real. Savage wouldn't resist for a moment at the thought of being tied up by a pred.

>>4016218
have you drawn anything since? The head shape is of course off and features are angular, but that's nothing that practice can't fix. Plus you've shaded eyes, which is nice - as I said, shape can be corrected, but having a feel for shades is a really good knack to have.

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>>4016215
to be honest, that's just half the fun

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>>4016253
Have a friend drawing my zoosona for me, this is the latest sketch
Now he's got computer troubles and cant draw
I guess I'll have to doodle irl and find some way to sketch her, after all she is my OC

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>>4016268
it was a business kiss between business partners who fuck each other raw every night

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>>4016281
>>4016300

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>>4016276
>mfw there is at least one of my doodle in every screenshot
they're crap, but it's nice someone has been saving them, thanks anon.

>>4016226
>Saving tegaki
Post the one with Judy reading the book on the couch under a blanket

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>>4016226
Did you get the stuff I posted yesterday?

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>>4016316
Just business bros being bros

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>Try
Stop using this word!

>>4016299
Well, I'm still training, that one was a one time thing. However I did the Golden Moose Nocturnal District Thematic Thursday drawing and I posted a Jack Savage sketch some days ago (also the Nick as an emotional cucumber).
Here I mainly posted maps, edits and various things made with GIMP.

>>4016365
this is so awful I'm not even considering saving it

>>4016341
I'm proud that I contributed to the Savage-is-a-massive-slut meme.

>>4016372
>also the Nick as an emotional cucumber
you fucking madman you keep drawing

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>>4016341
now that's more like it!

>>4015876
thanks

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>>4016338

>>4016307
>friend
but it's not signed, anon.

>>4016380
I mean, it's the logical extension of "Jack is a rabbit" and "rabbits are sluts"

The only specifics there are that he's a gay predslut

>>4016411
that's still in work, I made a png from a psd
nowhere near finished, he colors his shit

>>4016209
Wow.

The tough part is, from what little I skimmed over, that the author has talent.

What a waste.

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>>4016354
>>4016307
Thanks, saved

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>>4016365

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>>4016349
Here you go

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>>4016457
I've got a few more if you want.

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God how I love this.

>>4016447

Yup, sad isn't it?

>>4016489
It's pretty amazing

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>>4015730
Depends on Savage's spaghetti factor too, I suppose. I like the idea of no actual sex taking place, but that's because I'm especially tickled by a secretly-dorky Savage who's almost never actually gotten any tail, and is perceived as a sex-symbol through nothing other than hilarious shenanigans and misunderstandings. But that's maybe too extreme for the kind of Savage you're imagining, so...

Go with what tickles you more, really. Lewd or not, it'll be funny.

>>4016482
Sure thing m8

>>4016509
Somebody saved my crop of that pic

Glorious.

>dumb savage.png

>>4015298
>>4015358
Could someone explain "spaghetti" to me please?

>>4016508
indeed and me being very into CK2 it makes it even better. Now I want a mod for a Zootopia version off the game

>>4016539
lurk more

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>>4015419

I suppose I can't really offer much more insight then others haven't pointed out. But I am in agreement that there needs to be something... More at the end. We get this psychological analysis all from the perspective of the psychiatrist who probably wouldn't have much knowledge of what she does after.

The 'Eye for an Eye' comment was an interesting one, a world view that I could potentially see her having. But yet it feels more like it was due to procedure and orders of people higher up then her to wait outside and try to reason with the kid instead of breaching which lead to him killing himself before they had time to stop him. I do get the feeling that this incident was not her fault, but that may just be the intention and it's all about self blame despite the facts saying otherwise.

Of course it's obvious why she has PTSD. But in the end it feels like there's more to this story, that there is something else that has to be told. I think you handled the bit where the victim who was shot and how she feels regret over handling it is perfectly fine and doesn't really need to be changed. Once she deals with the shooter it feels like there's more to that story that made her come to the conclusion of there being some sort of karmic justice at work.

I suppose I just never really saw the 'karmic justice' playing out in the story, and it was more of her having PTSD for letting 2 kids die, the first one I could definitely see reasoning for he to be upset, feeling like she failed as an officer. But the 2nd one she wasn't really involved in the situation and hard order to stay her ground, so it was much less of her fault if anything.

So at the end, is she having PTSD over seeing them die? Is it more depression, thinking that her efforts are almost futile and that karma and 'An Eye for an Eye' will move the world forward and that she herself can't actually do anything to save people?

Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong on anything I'm saying, though.

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>>4016539
Spaghetti

>>4016553
I just want Zootopia mods for basically any fucking game I play

>>4016539
Savage is canonically Italian

>>4016477
artist?

>>4016539

Are you from reddit or tumblr?

Honest question

>>4016539
But you're making it right now!

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>>4016511
1/2

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>>4016387
I'll keep doing it

>>4016602
Neither?

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>>4016613
2/2

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>>4016142
Holy shit, anon... do you collect everything?

>>4016635

Well where are you from, cause it's not 4chins

>>4016598
one of the random lurkers on /co/ who got motivated to draw after watching the movie and skimming through a few tutorials
>tee hee, I haven't drawn in like 5 years, let me give it a try
>then they post things like these
>never to be seen again
all my REEE

>>4016539
'spaghetti' is a common 4chan term for generally being embarrassed or especially awkward, usually in public or in front of other people

comes from 'spilling your spaghetti', often out of pockets

lurk more, you're not gonna get spoonfed often

>>4016509
It's cool either way. I figure I might keep 'em pure, just because I find that hilarious.

>>4016655
I've been in these threads for a couple of months now.

>>4016669
Ah I see. Thank you

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>>4016539

Lurk threads, pick up on lingo, or even just fucking google it. Spaghetti has been a thing on 4chan for a very, very long time.

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>>4016539
How do you have Internet access but no spaghetti?

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>>4016539

>>4016725
>Using a spoon
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>4016253
Doubt you have my sketches
[spoiler]Judy in a sundress[/spoiler]

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I've lost control of my life.
Mr. Big is literally just a pair of giant eyebrows passed down from family head to family head.

>>4016623
>>4016636
I wish we had more of these two. They really got overshadowed by Sunny and Zeke.

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Vote Swinton and receive your complimentary raffle ticket.

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>>4016770

>>4016770
I like this.

>>4016770
More please.

>>4016787
you fucking faggot my sides

>>4016775
what

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>>4016802
he actually did it the absolute madman

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>>4016802
I'll admit it

I really like piggy mayor

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Post your gayest Nicks

>>4016856
So, thread, how did Savage get his stripes?

Is it some weird rabbit breed I've never heard of? Was it the result of a brush with some fiery superweapon? Does he draw them on with eyebrow pencil?

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>>4014363
Hey, comicanon! Gonna finish up the first part of Nightclub after I stop feeling like ass.

>>4016775
>"Son, I think the time fo' me has come..."
>"No papa, don't say that..."
>"I can feel the light fading... Take this sacred eyebrows... They will guide you, they will bring prosperity to the family..."
>"I will make grandmama proud, papa"
>"That's my boy."

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>>4016142
>>4016226
>>4016253
... also, I doubt you have ALL of mine... I never post my early ones that look like shit, and i have a handfull of unfinished ones thst never got posted... But I'm flattered, none the less

>>4016579

Heyas,

Clunk already left for the day, so he's unlikely to see this. Btu good analysis.

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>>4016857

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on that note I'll take some swinton related requests

>>4016752
You use a spoon to twirl the spaghetti onto your fork, what are you, a fucking savage? Wait, those look like two spoons. Fuck that shit, carry on.

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Hey thread
Gib requests please

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>>4016889
There are some species that have stripes. If Jack is the same breed as Judy considering he dark fur on her ears, he might have a gene.

>>4016920
Swinton on Pack Street for her "Big Bad Wolf" promotional event.

>>4016937
Nick not being a pedo for finnick.

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>>4016767
This?

>>4016926
I'm italian, can't stand someone who uses even one spoon with spaghetti.

>>4016920
Getting her skirt caught in her limo's door, as it drives off without her.

>>4016937
Judy and Nick annoyed about waiting for their food at a drivethru.

>>4016960
Nope! Shoulda been specific, she's twirling.
That is a nice image, though.

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Hey everyone, are we still on a Swinton kick?

Because the first part of my collaboration with writeanon (of Water under the Bridge fame) was just posted over at AO3: http://archiveofourown.org/works/7451746

Our Swinton isn't going to be a major feature of the JHT comics, but it felt like an anticlimax to leave her story hanging at the end of Chew Toy so I got a hold of writeanon and broke his legs. The bottom line is that there'll be more of this, chronicling the times and tribulations of that despicable sow

>>4016937
Nick and Flash car racing

>>4016937
Gideon hiding behind a fort made up of pies.

>>4016914
Yeah, I might have missed a few since I sometimes missed a thread and had to dig in the archive for it

Always liked your sketches, keep doing what you do man

>>4016920
Going through with her PR event at the Naturalist club and joining in on some yoga.

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>>4016092
Also who is Mr. Smiles?

>>4017026
Maybe conversing with some panther or other?

>>4016920
Mr Stevens spraying people who get to 'close' to Swinton at a public outing.

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>>4016990
Oh hi, man

also
>working together with Mead
damn, what a lucky sod. You seem to be both into each other's art so I guess we'll see an awful lot of great stuff supported by your combined talent. Best of luck!

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>>4017005
Well, it means a lot to me that you save everyones art... you're a real, articulate fella
And I am, and will continue to do so... gonna be on here a lot more now, and currently working on two drawings... this one is for an anon in one of the threads last night... but... i habent gotten very far. I'm kinda slow right now

>>4017048
BB's tiger.
The one with the pet buns

>>4016937
Finnick trying to take the entire Nicknot. Nick just sitting there cheering him on.

>>4016989
I must have missed it, sorry... Though I don't suppose you still have the image saved? I'd gladly take it

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someone rolled a springbok, really had some fun drawing this one

>>4016937
Wait,wouldnt that be "skinchan" instead?

>>4017112
please upload it to zooboru in the OP, tag it with
>zoosona
>your name
>species

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>>4016857

>>4017112
for some reason I can see him as the assistant off the Moose detective. getting near the edge off breaking.

>>4017141
it was a request man
I'm not even that good at uploading stuff to my own blogs