Zootopia Post bune and bune accessories

fox > bun

>>2330836
No Dickriding Weaver Edition.

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GLADLY.

Given Weaver's latest page, do you think Musk Street goes both ways? Does Judy really love Nick's earthy, cracked-pepper smell?

>>2330854
in your dreams

Checking in.
Dis gone b good
-j

>>2330860
Even he's sick of it.

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if only

Reposting in a non-dead thread.

>>2329225
>>2329800
>>2329981
Okay, critique time.

First, let's get the dialogue out of the way. Of the three versions, the last one finally has that sweet spot of natural delivery, characterization, and content without being too wordy. Nick working his way into her fetish word for word is really believable for someone trying out a kink for the first time, and it's natural for him to still clear a boundary while doing so. While the corny final line is perfect for Judy, the one sentence that feels unnatural is "Big, strong Fox...I won't resist." It comes off as a bit stilted, almost too abrupt, too matter-of-fact. The rushed "I need to take my shirt off" is golden.

Your expressions are the high point, as always. Nick's half-dreamy half-drunk face in panel 5 really nails it for his sudden goofy impulse, and the spacing-out effect of Judy's eye in panel 7 really shows off how well Nick's carrying her away into the roleplay. The one nitpick I have is Judy's face in the final panel. Everywhere else, you have a steep taper to her profile with a slight bump for her nose, but here you've wandered too far into pony-muzzle; kind of gives her a donkey-ish face with her ears. Also, where you'd given her a proper open-mouth profile in all the other panels, she's got a side-mouth kind of thing going on (or she's got her mouth closed and that's her bucked teeth, if you don't mind clarifying).

I'm adoring the story so far, not even on a kink level. You're telling the characters true to their movie counterparts and I couldn't ask for better on that front. Can't wait for the next page.

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>>2330871

>>2330859
Well, this list places rabbits at 11th best sense of smell, and foxes aren't even ranked.

http://news.discovery.com/animals/10-best-sniffers-in-the-animal-kingdom-140722.htm

Mind you, it's ranked by amount of olfactory receptor genes. Number of actual olfactory receptors is different, with rabbits at 100m and dogs at 125m-300m. Dunno about foxes.

>>2330871
i... i don't understand. You don't need to put the j there. You don't have to. I'm starting to think you really are doing this for attention.

>>2330922
Foxes are the same family as dogs, so the numbers should be in the same ballpark.

>>2330878
You can get pet bunnies - I have one, and it's a lot of fun to watch her scamper around, or roll over when I scratch behind her ears. They're usually not that big, though, and while they can wear clothes, they normally don't.

>>2330930
So why are you giving it to him?

>>2330937
good point.

>>2330878

The fuck is wrong with her stomach.

>>2330934
Shouldn't you have two? I hear that they get lonely. Unless that's for guinea pigs and rats rather.

>>2330930
>>2330937
just report. it is against the rules, you know?

Could you guys post all of the weaver comic so far,I've missed the past couple of threads

>>2330945
I think she's preggers.
>Rabits ARE good at multiplying.

how do i learn to draw cute furry stuff

>>2330949
no. check the archive, e621 or his tumblr

>>2330947
We've been looking into it - we've had her for two years now, and she's been pretty darn happy! It helps that ours is a large family, so there's almost always somebody in there with her.

>>2330948
Rule 13 isn't enforced here

>>2330949
Unfortunately until the other thread dies, reposting will be a bitch. You can find the old thread here: >>2317462

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Most recent ones
Pt. 4
-j

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>>2330922
all i read is that you want the roles swaped

>>2330953

>pregnant rabbits

Oh buddy you are hitting on some fetishes here.

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>>2330986
Then Pt. 5 I could be wrong on this. Correct me if I am
-j

>>2330970
youre right.I assumes it wouldnt be an exception

>>2330987
I wonder if they have power preys in their universe.

>>2330836
Does Mayor Lionheart have a secret catnip problem? That man has way too much energy for a Savannah patriarch.

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>>2330883
I appreciate the critique, anon
Getting Judy's button nose right is hard because I tend to draw profile mouths coming up and cutting into the head, but the cartoonish 'break' it introduces makes it look too stout, and I've done my best to avoid that

I took another swing at a few of the things you mentioned

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baywatchbune

>>2331031
nick is prey for bigger predators, so i guess the answer is yes.

>>2331038
>I'm the MAYOR, I'm makin' it legal!

>>2331055
He already way, derp

Zootopia's underbelly must be seedy as FUCK. Do you think they have back-alley spay/neuter stations near the XXX theaters?

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>>2331055

>>2331100
I need one with a Borat mankini.

>>2331095
>spay/neuter stations
I doubt thats a common fetish

>>2331042
fucking love your work

>>2331042
Man, the line edit really took that panel somewhere special. It feels like she's getting into the roleplay, specifically HER role in it, a lot more strongly. And the wider smile in the last panel has a lot more devilish charm to it. Ya made my night, Weaver.

Which section of Zootopia is best to live in? I think the rainforest looks cool,and Usually hate rain.

>>2330986
Is there somewhere I can view the current comic in its entirety? I'm not sure if I've missed any pages or not.

>>2331143
Rather live in BunnyBurrow. City living has never been my thing.

>>2331157
https://imgur.com/a/MUoeV

>>2331157

The (mostly) sfw part is on his tumblr.

He's going to post the rest there when he's done.

>>2331139
Thanks, anon
Your suggestions were really good and I think the whole thing came out better as a result
I didn't realize how much that line broke up the flow until you pointed it out, now it's a perfect segue into talking about pred-prey as a whole for the following panels

>>2331143
The rainforest would be pretty amazing. I'm honestly a pretty big fan of the rain, and I don't think they'd have that one parasite living there that swims up your urine stream and hooks into your urethra.

>>2330992
>>2330953
Is your fetish uterine cancer?

>>2331042
He needs to eventually snarl/growl and send her spine shivering with arousal/fear

>>2331083
Also a switch-hitter, don't forget.

Don't shoot the messenger.

>>2331146

>>2331179
I'm this (>>2330953) anon.
No, not really. Just seems like that was what the artist was going for.
>>2330992
I'm hitting on some fetishes? What do you mean?

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>>2330836

Was this supposed to be like Chun-Li?

>>2331162
Much appreciated!

>>2331005
Hey. From a storytelling point of view there's a gap between Nick finally rubbing himself off in front of Judy and jumping to having his hand down Judy's pants in the first panel of the next page.

I honestly thought I had skipped a page when reading it. To be fair, of the material covered everywhere flows consistently and with good sense for passage of time. There just feels some disjunction here.

>>2331227
no prob :)

>>2331218

I got a thing for rabbits and preggo women. I got a few others but they are irrelevant right now.

>>2331179

I just thought she was pregnant is all.

>>2331245
There is in fact a page missing.

>>2330657
>>2330655

im just saying there isn't much individuality or characterization to it, not that it's 'unrealistic' or anything

>>2330878
This is going to happen one day. Either we contact aliens at some point or gene manipulation goes to far, but it's going to happen.

>>2331245
i think you skipped a page

>>2331215
Sounds like a faggot who doesn't appreciate CHARACTERIZATION of Weaver's storytelling, and CHARACTER of his art that conveys genuine FEELING. More so than many other detailed, but soulless abominations from other artists.

>>2331285
>hustle me Sweetheart, hustle me!

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>>2330563

>>2331330
If you are Weaver, I swear to god....

otherwise, literally no.

>>2331350
Weaver already responded and posted a corrected page in this thread >>2331042

>>2331330
>>2331350
Out of all the boards I've been on, I have never seen one that was so lacking in the ability to read. The fucking. THREAD.

>>2331383
lost it

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>>2331042
>>2331005
>>2330987
>>2330986

It might be late advice but could you try moving out of the MSpaint shit? If anyone compliments you on it then its because it looks like it was done in 5 minutes and they want to draw fast too.

Also try boning up on your subjects, at least if you want to try and stick with this. Even dA tier zootopia stuff has been more on model than you have made.

Really, just draw better. Like bringing the fucking cursor size to small or fine for a start and trying actual line weight. Your artstyle is shit, the only reason you have any fans is because you have the ability to communicate with them which is a skill in of itself.

>>2331368
oh shit, I missed one post from a previous thread. Fuck me.

>>2331218
>>2331256
Nah, I was just referring to the high incidence of uterine cancer among rabbits, basically 100% if they never have a litter.

>>2331397
>inb4 pathetic mass cringe reaction

>>2331368
thats because its thirty feet of meaningless autismal spam

>>2331407

Then it's a must to cum lots in Judy so she doesn't get cancer.

>>2331397
congratulations, you're a massive faggot

>>2331368
Nah this thread's just extra special.

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>>2331397
someones angry and jealous, people have paid millions for splashes of random paint on canvas, and you're trying to tell people what art is? gtfo

>>2331419
best chemo i can think if

>>2331409
Well, theres some substance if you remove all the fanboys.

Honestly, when the artist says "shut the fuck up and say something meaningful", there is an issue.

>>2331420
no u

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>>2331408
Welp, here it comes.

>>2331397
He's seen it, faggot

>>2331430
>Honestly, when the artist says "shut the fuck up and say something meaningful", there is an issue.
That's not what happened

>>2331424
He literally isn't though. Don't compare Weaver, a 4chan cartoon drawfag, to acclaimed abstract artists. Its a flawed comparison for both sides.

>>2331397
The only worthwhile bit of advice out of this would potentially be the line weight, but everything else is just shit flapping from the gums of a spastic.

>>2331398
Try multiple posts from this very thread. Thanks for proving my point.

>>2331427

Doctor's orders.

>>2331397
you want quality?

nigga u on /trash/

>>2331397
I have been waiting to post my feedback and I won't do it until the next panel is released but to be honest I think one of the biggest reasons this comic is so great is because it's made with the paint tool or whatever he's using. To be honest I have read and seen a lot of shit as far as comics go but he is able to portray the facial expressions so well that this comic in particular has just grabbed me like no other.
-j

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Good story but LEARN HOW TO DRAW
Spend 10 mone minutes on it, i mean are you happy with the result? Can't you do better?

>>2331465
You'd be taken a lot more seriously if you dropped the signature.

>>2331451
see
>>2329397

he's nice about it, but he's sick of the shit. And when someone does point out what they think can be improved, they either candy-coat it or get shat on by a wave of fans. Is that a constructive environment for an artist?

You want weaver to become a better artist? Stop treating him as perfect.

>>2331481
Again, that's not what happened.

I bet y'all niggas don't even remember the best pred/prey thing ever: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cqZc7ZQURMs

>>2331478
>a lot more
that implies anyone takes him seriously already.

>>2331494
Fuckin' I'm a dipshit: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WsWgrf3XLKQ

>>2331489
are you this dense you cant understand a message? how can you appreciate his comics if you cant understand his words?

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>>2331471
...was anyone else just enjoying them for the character interaction?
I mean I'm not even getting off to Weaver's art, I'm just in it for the believable shipping.

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>>2331481
>And when someone does point out what they think can be improved, they either candy-coat it or get shat on by a wave of fans. Is that a constructive environment for an artist?
Several people in this thread and the last have given perfectly valid criticism. In some cases I either can't accommodate their suggested changes, or disagree with their conclusions as to what needs to be changed.

But several times I have attempted to change things based on the critiques and helpful suggestions of various posters. The best version of the last page is easily one that the thread helped whittle down and revise, most especially areas I didn't even realize were flawed, like Judy's face in the last panel or the breakup of the dialog flow as pointed out here >>2330883 and instituted here >>2331042

I don't think it's entirely fair to say the criticisms only get shouted down or ignored.

>>2331478
>expecting people to take me seriously in the first place
>being phased by over hindreds of people saying its a faggy thing to do
It takes a lot more femenism and hillary voters to trigger me. Im just here for the weaves & lewds. Once this comic is over I'll probably dissapear. You might as well report it or ignore it like everyone else and move on
-j

>>2331505
holy shit, so thats where the song is from? It literally played five minutes ago and I never knew the source (its in Lulz: A Corruption Disc 3 (/f/lash)

>>2331517
This. The art can be a draw, but it's the setup and characterization I care more about.

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This. Is. Good.

>>2331517
No, people that can't draw themselves want to criticize a style that's fun and unique and has been seen in even published works if you actually look.

I wonder how much of this lollern2draw sperging comes from ignorance of weavers history

>>2331517

The little bunny nipples killed it for me.

>>2331553
A lot of it probably.

>>2331553
People should go read his older stuff. Alot of his old work is good too
-j

>>2331553
Can't say whether or not it's a significant portion or not, but it wouldn't surprise me if it was. Pretty sure some anon just stirring shit for giggles is more likely, though.

>>2331517
I'm getting off to it, but just for the writing. It's cute and believable.

>>2331517
I agree with you anon. Too bad raging autists and stupid folk happen to be the loudest of all.

>>2331481
Get fucked nigger. Don't gotta be an ass with your critique just because you don't like the minimalist style. He's not drawing it to the official model, but it's representative of the characters. Most of the critiques are about the flow of story, because that's one of his strongest points that we care the most about.

I wish there were fanfiction writers who could write in-character this well.

Your complaints about the art make you seem like a person who preferred the Prince Valiant comic strip to Peanuts.

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>>2331581
>minimalist style

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>>2331553
Here we go
Fanboys and circlejerk everywhere

>these faggots got tired of shitposting on /co/ and now they have to ruin comfy trash threads too

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>>2331517

Actually, the writing is abit weak. All the characters speak like they are the same person there is no real characterization and the clearly inherit Weaver's strange aversion to sex. You would think that a uptight bumpkin bunny would use a different vernacular than a fox would has lead most of his life by his word choices.

And abit too much talking. I think you could erase alot of the dialogue and just have nick giving some enticing stare. But that would again bring us back to the art.

>>2331609
Thats what THE THREAD is FOR

>>2331521
I'm not saying you aren't reading criticism. In fact, I think it's great that you are actively asking for it. I understand that you disagree with some, or others can't be taken into consideration mid-comic. I am not disputing that.

I am critising the attitude of the loud, apparent majority of fans in these threads, who attack people who give you a critisism, and the only ones that aren't being attacked are ones who bathe them in compliments. Again, I reiterate, this is not a critisism of you, but a conglomeration of Anons. However, I would debate that the intolerant attitudes of them may affect you indirectly by discouraging honest criticism. (Anon or not, no-one likes being shat on for an opinion)

I mean, look, someone is already telling me to (verbatum) "get fucked nigger" because I didnt sugar coat my comment. How can that not be toxic?

>>2331609
ITT: /trash/ finally becomes /trash/

It was a good run, fellas.

>>2331616
I'm /b/tard
Btw if you want we can all go and leve you autists sucking weaver's dick as this retard said>>2331618

>>2331505
>Implying implications
Nigga I can't wait for the sixth step

>>2331521
I don't want you to think that that faggot anon represents any significant portion of those who read your stuff, Weaver. Your art *has* gotten better, your line work has improved. Others have been able to speak to some technical work you can change and you've been receptive. You've tried things that haven't worked because you're willing to experiment.

On the scale of Prince Valiant wasn't better than Peanuts because Charles Schulz was incapable of drawing an actual dog or children with realistic proportions.

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BTW this was posted and removed
Not me, i'm just reposting the deleted comment

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>>2331517

Actually, the writing is abit weak. All the characters speak like they are the same person and there is no real characterization. You would think that a uptight bumpkin bunny would use a different vernacular than a fox would has lead most of his life by his word choices.

And abit too much talking. I think you could erase alot of the dialogue and just have nick giving some enticing stare, but that would again bring us back to the art.

>>2331648
>>2331649
>>2331617
Deleting doesn't mean shit. We can all still see it. Are you manually refreshing the page? Nigga, this isn't 2009.

>>2331649
>>2331648
Oh well

>>2331644
I agree with this, honestly. These are supposed to be fun little comics that can be hashed out pretty quick, not fucking Lackadaisy. I'll take what it is over what some are demanding it become.

>>2331619
>I am critising the attitude of the loud, apparent majority of fans in these threads, who attack people who give you a critisism, and the only ones that aren't being attacked are ones who bathe them in compliments. Again, I reiterate, this is not a critisism of you, but a conglomeration of Anons. However, I would debate that the intolerant attitudes of them may affect you indirectly by discouraging honest criticism. (Anon or not, no-one likes being shat on for an opinion)
I don't disagree with what you're saying necessarily, anon, but the problem I face is that people then turn and blame me for that


I can't control that.
It's not really within my power to control how everyone who speaks up (or, as seen in /co/, falseflags) in my defense acts, and there's not really anything I can do to stop them -- I've tried numerous times to say I don't need people to jump to my defense and I don't need white knights
I appreciate the sentiment and that people like me enough to defend me but it never helps anything and it only leads to conflict and argument

But then that becomes my fault and /co/ or whatever board I'm posting on starts calling for my head

>>2331648
>>2331649

>aversion to sex
Wut.

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less sperging

more bune

>>2331668
All good, I see what you mean. I'll calm down a bit and try to enjoy the thread.

>>2331680
haha, be the change you want to see.

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>>2331680
Bune.

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Moral of the story: don't be faggots, ignore faggots, post helpful critique.

That being said, more lewd lapins.

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>>2331703
Hear hear

I don't stockpile images and all the stuff I have is OC or from the last two threads, so have more roofie rabbit

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>>2331521

Art and criticism are instantaneous. You have to keep working on it.>>2331042 was an improvement but you have to keep doing it until you master the subject.

Shit man, trying too hard to not be bad at art is the point of art.

>>2331668
Sorry. I just don't want the main thing you take away from this to be unfair criticism that's vitriolic because someone else called them a nigger.

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2000 when?

>>2331648
>>2331661

I deleted the first one because I made too many mistakes. It would seem to drift from the point of talking about quality writing when the first post read like crap.

You guys are too sensitive.

>>2331649
but in the movie... they don't...? so what's your point exactly?

>>2331755
Own your shit, and do a better fucking job in your next post.

>>2331767
Real life is messy. We all have limitations. We all make mistakes. Which means―hey, glass half full!―we all have a lot in common. And the more we try to understand one another, the more exceptional each of us will be.

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>>2331783
>body writing

Jesus, Judy is into some kinky stuff in this comic.

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>>2331783

>>2331783
FIRST

>>2331783
I love how Judy's (aka Officer Toot Toot) still a huge dork even now. That's very much her.

Also Nick's puns being a problem in bed, that's great.

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>>2331783

>rabbit hole

now I wonder if this one inspired you

>>2331783
Heh. I'm sorry, I don't have any criticisms. I'm just loving this dialogue. Judy's absolute enthusiasm for a stupid vagina pun is great.

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>>2331783
>you should write it on me
Its like she wants to postpone the dick

>>2331783
Fuck, why is fingering so rarely depicted in porn? It's so intimate.

>>2331783
The master of blue balls strikes again
Fucking L i love this
-j

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listen guys, the thought of being gazelle and teasing and eventually giving up my pop star ass to this cute but fat and undignified character gets me diamonds. Got it? good. thanks for listening

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>>2331843
>self-inserting fantasy

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whoops
I forgot something super important

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>>2331783
Needs more blushing/sweat emotions etc. shouldnt she be blushing at the foxhole comment and while saying it's really hot?

>>2331823
Not the first comic to use the term "foxhole" suggestively in the context of Judy and Nick dirty talk.

>>2331763
>Nick frequently uses nicknames and lays on the 'rabbit' racial slurs indiscriminately.
>Judy rarely addresses people by their names.
>Judy uses courtesy phrases often.

They do actually. Its how you can tell if a line was from Judy or Nick. Bogo is a good example, he says things much more bluntly than any other character.

>>2331843
you are now imagining saying this to your father

>>2331783
>the way Judy's eyes sparkle when she calls it hot

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>>2331783
I swear this gif is me reading this entire comic. It's not like, laugh-out-loud in-your-face comedy, but I keep giggling with each new page.

>>2331859
>>2331857
that was quick

>>2331859
>>2331857
ffs lmao, nevermind my critique.

>>2331783
Calling Judy "Carrots" always reminds me of the Asian friend I had in high school who we called "General Tso". It was pretty funny until his dad was shot and killed and no one wanted to talk to him for like 2 weeks.

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>>2331874

>>2331843

So, is it the thought of being a pop star or that you want that caramel so badly?

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>>2331783
>>2331857
Good LORD

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>>2331874

>>2331857
So wait, why is he worried? Is he not fucking her already? I thought the last page implied penetration.

>>2331874
The fuck? Did you call your black friend "Original Recipe" too?

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>>2331878

>>2331897
That wasn't penetration, that was just biting.

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>>2331874
that got dark fast

>>2331783
>Judy's reaction to puns.
I can't tell what's making me laugh more, Nick's smirk or Judy's face.

>nipple play
Please tell me you're coming back to this. It'd be a waste to have them there and only have it happen for a single panel.

>body writing
That's a interesting kink for her to have, and I wonder if it's more her finding being "marked" as a possession a serious turn-on. Aaaand of course her being an utter dork about it is bucking the mood. Wonder how Nick's gonna get it back on track.

One thing I've noticed, Judy's eartips keep swapping from rounded to pointed when you draw her, leaning more towards pointed in the pages you've posted so far. I know in her official design they're quite rounded when she's attentive and sharpen up when slack/directed (http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/disney/images/d/d9/Judy_Hopps_Animal_Instincts.jpg), but they never get as pointed as they've been drawn in this comic.

>>2331897
he's having a hard time fitting in.

>>2331899
No I didn't hang out with the black kids, one of them had a gun.

>>2331897
No. In the last comic, it was foreplay: he was nibbling on her shoulder, breathing in her ear, etc. In this one he's fingering her in the first panel and wondering how she's going to possibly fit his dick, presumably because she can barely fit his fingers.

>>2331908
Well shit, apply that post to this one >>2331857

>>2331903
I guess you trumped me

>>2331857
Luminescent blushes! I know you don't like "this is good" comments, but characterization and expressiveness remain your greatest strengths as seen here. I wish there were writefags who did this shit. I can practically hear Ginnifer Goodwin and Jason Bateman speaking these lines.

>>2331917
>one of them had a gun
I think we found out who shot your Asian friend's dad.

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/co/ is so far gone even this edit wouldn't be safe to post
RIP /co/
nerdy judy is cute CUTE

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>>2331866
And then you suddenly realize that you're on /trash/, reading a squigly line comic about a two Disney characters stuck in a patrol car.


But fuck it, we love it all the way.

>>2331931
Give me a chance to see this movie finally and I'll see what I can turn out.

>>2331934
My friend actually joked about that the first week when we weren't hanging with The General. They caught the guy though and it was his brother-in-law over a money dispute.

>>2331931
I think I expressed myself poorly
I don't mind complimentary comments and I wasn't asking specifically/only for criticism
Just that a reaction image and posting a one-word "GREAT!" doesn't say much, that's all
i probably should have kept my mouth shut in the first place

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>>2331881
because he wants it that badly, and I'd give it him. enjoy every moment of him getting his fantasy. I'd very much like feeling his sweaty, trembling paws reaching up my lean body. and the feeling of his fat soft belly pressing my body as he struggles to get his small dick in

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Why am I just now finding about this?

>>2331935
Fuck /co/. That's why we have /trash/. /co/ is just for storytimes.

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>>2331953
GREAT!

>>2331965
/co/ mods stamp down hard on storytimes and writefaggotry.

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>>2331938
theres no going back now

>>2331983
Since when? There's been like six Injustice storytime threads over the last two days. The last one is still up.

>>2331857
I just jacked it to a fucking weaver comic


Never thought I'd see the day.

>>2332004
There's nothing wrong with fluffy bunny muff.

>>2331950
That sucks.

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>>2332004
The /trash/heap is a pathway to many-a fetishes, some would consider... Unnatural.

Enjoy the ride down.

Anon from the previous thread who has still gone 4 months w/o fapping. If weaver gets to penetration tonight I'm breaking the break.

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>>2332004

>>2332049
Weaver. You have been given a mission from God.

>>2332049
YOU KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS

>>2332049
>>2331857
WEAVER
WE NEED YOU

>>2332049
>>2332060
sorry folks
next page is coming tomorrow
I imagine we've got maybe 2-3 more pages before the story's done

>>2330987
Yanno, I betcha male rabbits in Zootopia are more or less the ultimate example of 'motion of the ocean'. It'd take a LOT to satisfy a female rabbit, after all.

They probably ORA ORA pussies hard, long, and fast: Exhausting sexual partners that underestimate them.

Then they do it eight more times for a four hour total session.

>>2332067
But Weaver! Blue balls are counting on you!

>>2332049
>1
>>2332060
>>2332063
>>2332064
>>2332067
Weaver you have got this man C'MON
God himself could not give you greater euphoria

>>2332068
I just want to see roaming packs of rapist rabbits overpowering women of much larger species, and leaving them blissed out and dazed on sexual overload.

>>2331857
>Nick, NICK, put your dick away and find a maker right now!

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>>2332004
there's no coming back from this

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>>2332068

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>>2332067
>2-3 pages
>still hasn't gotten to penetration

Their stakeout target's going to appear, isn't he.
They're going to have to go back to work, aren't they.
You've found a way to blue ball us AGAIN, haven't you.

>>2332082
>>2332115
>A group of male rabbits are having a bachelor party for their buddy who is getting married. So they go out to Zootopia to have some fun before he gets hitched.
>They are all an overly nice bunch, almost like a group of Mormons or something.
>Some predator women, such as tigers, lionesses, bears, and foxes, start hooking up with them at a bar because they never did it with some country bumpkin rabbit before.
>They don't expect much. Heck the guys are all trying to make sure the girls are ok with it. They roll their eyes and tell them to give their best shot.
>With a bright smile, they do just that.
>Thirty minutes later, we go to one of the hotel rooms. We see a Lioness: Panting and dripping with sweat as she can barely find the strength to lift her head.
>The rabbit that had been fucking her raw for the past twenty minutes returns with a full carton of carrot juice, guzzling it down.

>"Whew! Okay lady, ready for round two?"

>She wants to refuse, but her pride (And weakened voice) prevents her from doing so.

>"Alrighty, I'll take that as a yes!"

>>2332129
>male rabbits having that kind of stamina

If there was ever an animal that defines "two pump chump", it's them. They fuck for like three seconds, orgasm, and literally fall off the doe in bliss.

>>2332129
lions mate for hundreds of times a day for several days during their mating season

>>2332165
Males maybe.

>>2331857
I recommend dropping the double "huh", changing the second to: uhh?/wha?

It's just a bit awkward reading the same 'uncertainty sound' twice in the same panel.

Also wow Judy is really into her fetish.

>>2332177
you do realize the female is involved in the mating and both are having sex hundreds of times

>>2332122
>2-3 pages
We're at 14 according to e621.
https://e621.net/pool/show/8263

Somebody hasn't uploaded the latest yet.

>>2332187
There are normally only a handful of male lions compared to the female ratio, right? Most females at best would be mated with a couple of times.

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fuck u

>>2331857
Geez Judy is getting into that marker fetish stuff. Hopefully water-soluble fabric markers exist in Zootopia.

One question, given the distance between Nick and Judy's crotches in panel one, am I to assume he's just inserting his fingers at this point?

>>2332187
how many females are in an average pride? Yeah they'll each go several times, but far less than the males.

>>2332208
You a bitch ass nigger.

>>2332205
they all don't go into heat at the same time and the female wanders away from the pride to get the male to follow/fuck her or find another male while in heat

>>2332195
>2-3 pages before the story's done

There's no way they actually fuck with the same level of interaction in those pages.

>>2332208
>no nips

I'm okay with this. The original with her "raisins" was okay too, but I've always leaned towards flat-chest Judy when it comes to porn.

>>2332214
average is 5-6 females

>>2332208
I get the no nipples, but why remove the awesome chest fluff?

>>2332213
>One question, given the distance between Nick and Judy's crotches in panel one, am I to assume he's just inserting his fingers at this point?
Yes. He's talking about how tight she feels and wondering if he'll be able to fit.

>>2332235
Wrong, its closer to about a dozen. And 2 to 3 males. So on average it is six per male.

>>2332222
This is all true, but their mating period is a mere five days. A rabbits is far, far longer.

Also the fucking is hardly satisfying for the lioness. A lion's dick is painful and their sperm is weak as fuck. Odds are they find very little pleasure in the actual mating and can even stop a lion's sperm from conceiving in her if she finds them unworthy.

So to summarize: Male Lions might have stamina, but their actual fucking is weak as hell, hurts like hell due to their dick shapes, and has little ejaculation payoff. Female and Male lions get off more from dom/sub play than anything else.

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>>2332218
>>2332238
FINE

>>2332292
fucking lolling

>>2332292
I wasn't asking for tits. She should still have nipples. And she should absolutely have a chest-tuft. Never remove a chest-tuft!

>>2332292
>She wants boobs
>Surgery is expensive
>Stuffs her bra with balloons
>Her secret is out
>They stick to her chest because of static
>Before they fuck, Nick pops them with his claws

>>2332306
>She should still have nipples
Those things like erect tumors against such a small flat chest. Its like im looking at mrs. skeletor's roast beef all over again

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>>2332292
ZZZZ

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>>2332360
This is acceptable, but still no chest-tuft.

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>>2332360
>>2332292
>>2332208
>stop

>>2332360
literally [_._][_._] and I'm happy about it

>>2332380
>what is humour
>baby dont hurt me

>>2332360
So there's gonna be a huge boob edit soon if my calculations are correct.

>>2332385
>what is irony
>baby don't hurt me

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>>2332375
>no chest-tuft.

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>>2332375

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>>2332375
Oh okay like this then, right?

>>2332389
>what is stealing a niggas joke
>baby dont mug me

>>2332407
FUG
MUH DICK

>>2332407
Fuck, made me laugh.

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>>2332407
>>2332399
>>2332395
>>2332375
>>2332360
No regrets

>>2332407
I'm surprisingly ok with this

next comes concave?

>>2332407
Kek. I'll take it.

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>>2332407

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>>2332445
???

>>2332450
>>2329327

>>2332459
Sorry, I'm at a loss here.

>>2332459
God, is this gonna lead to a revival of Judy's Sad Tits?

>>2332459
2/10 last one should be missing the nipples.

>>2332461
ahh, dewlap

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>>2331954

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>>2332470

>>2332459
>>2332500
Is this a new meme

>>2332516
>2007
>new
It's a timeless meme.

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>>2332516
>>2332522
yeah, pretty old

captcha: cock lane

>>2331935
>WHOOPS - Can't show that in a Christian manga

Weaver don't be upset, just post the uncensored version

so I can remove those little shits for real

>>2332556
>not reading the thread

>>2332556
what
there's already an uncensored version posted, that's the edit you're replying to

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>>2332534

>>2332558
I fucked up, its late, fuck u

>>2332561
When?

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>>2332560
Now this is doing it properly.

>>2331857
> NICK!
> That's actually really hot!
Can I just say, I really love how they these characters can be sexy and also total dorks at the same time.

>>2332576
It was one of the fan submitted designs for that pokemon. Imagine if it was actually added to the games.

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>>2332582
We would have lost our collective shit.

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>>2332556

>>2332590
You missed her nipple in panel 1

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https://youtu.be/aqM-8iTXBxI

>>2332592
thats fluff and you'll never convince me otherwise

>>2332587
source?

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>>2332534
Well I don't get it but nobody will explain because
>hurr durr newfag
>hurr my exclusive memes
>muh jokes only oldfags will get

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>>2332604
/co/

>>2332605
bfy dot tw/2KKs

>>2332605
It's a spoof of the comic, Loss.

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>>2332605
Google "Loss Edits" or CADbortion

TL;DR shitty comedy comic artist does a serious comic in the middle of everything. Its badly done, and people have taken to doing abstract, minimalist, topical or otherwise symbolic parodies of it.

>>2332605
http://lmgtfy.com/?q=loss+meme

>>2332605
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/cadbortion-loss-edits

>>2332611
I mean, context.

Since this place gave me a new fetish, any drawfags up for something like this? >>2328691

>>2332638
Accidental facials huh

>>2332629
Everything is loss.

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>>2332605

>>2331042
> Holy shit its weaver
All I want to say is that I love your work, the comedy always cracks me up.

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>>2332605
>lurk for more than 5 minutes and figure it out
>google clues other anons have given you
>shitpost angrily until someone spoonfeeds you

You had 3 choices and you picked the wrong one

>>2332655
OH MY GOD
TOO FUNNY MAN
MAN TOO FUCKING FUNNY MAN
FUCK
REALLY TOO FUNNY MAN
WOW MAN FUCK
THAT'S FUNNY

>>2332663
l Ll
ll Lo

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>>2332663

>>2332640
Can't explain it, it just expands dong.

>>2332663
I' So
M
ry An
on

>>2332661
The meme is stupid and not funny
Not wasting energy on it

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>>2332576

how many more hours do you think it will take till a new page from weaver

>>2332726
He's asleep right now. Probably over 8.

>>2332726
He went to sleep, so probably 10. 8 to sleep, two to work. Accounting for morning grogginess. Assuming he has nothing better to do.

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>>2332681

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>>2332757

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>>2332661
They actually picked the most intelligent option, which is to say "you won't" so that people do it just to prove them wrong.
But you're right, it's sad that they're whining got them the answer to a meme that they probably won't find funny since they found out at knowyourmeme instead of finding out for themselves.

>>2332708
>filename.jpg
perfect

>>2332786
It's like
>i dont get the joke!
>ok, explaination
>but that isnt funny!
>yes, because we had to explain it

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>>2332708
>that filename

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>>2332792

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>>2332799
but Anon over there wont get it! because he had to ask what is loss

baby dont hurt me

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>>2331857
good shit.

>>2332380
Man I would do dark things for a yandere Judy fic.
>Nick feels guilt over his feelings for Judy
>tries to find a Vixen
>can't understand why every girl who seems interested suddenly seems to become scared of the relationship
>always seems to happen when Judy finds out

>>2333034
hey, I'm in there!

>>2333034
pretty good idea

>>2333034
Hey there Counterfeit Weaver, how're things?

>>2333048
twice!

where and how did everybody see memetopia?

I saw it at 12am in a white trash drive in theatre

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>>2332708

>>2333078
Sydney Aus.

Dead theatre (midday school holidays), only young kids and caretakers. At least there weren't interruptions.

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>>2333085
>>2332708
>>2332757
>>2332782
>>2332681
>>2332655
>>2332622
>>2332587
>>2332576
>>2332560
>>2332534
>>2332500
>>2332459
I think we have officially lost track of the "topic".


Full steam ahead then.

>>2333054
no I'm a NEW raging faggot.
At this point I'm probably not even a real person. Just a sentient force of internet nature. Existing only to create shit memes.

Seriously some body make yandere Judy a thing

>>2333113
The guy is working on it

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>>2333085
I remember this one.

Has anyone got the "gain" edit with the 3D baby?

>>2333105
You must be new to generals. This is normal behaviour.
I've seen much weirder stuff.

>>2333113
Sorry, I can only keep track of so many Weaver imitators. My apologies.

>>2333129
READ THE THREAD. uuugh

[/s]

>>2333137
But I've been here since post 2 anon!

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>>2333113
was...
>"no I'm a new superhero!"
was that a reference?

>>2333054
No am In the other thread. Hiding from Weaver.

>>2333154
But you've come here. YOU HAVE ENTERED HIS DOMAIN YOU FOOL

>>2333147
three threads back, six hundred and fifty nine posts down. how are you guys so lazy you cant even read

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>>2333105

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I don't usually do this, but I felt inspired to make my own shitty Zootopia comic.

This one is a Zootopia + End Of Watch crossover.