cyoa thread

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>>55120464
I saved this a couple of threads ago because I have some constructive criticisms on it, if you don't mind.
The introductory text is supposed to be the first impressions, to paint the backdrop. Using words that you need to read further on to understand is confusing, especially Orphans.

A lot of the text boxes are too wide, making you scroll for every single sentence. It might be a hassle to redo now, but it would be a major improvement if you do change it to be two columns like the other worlds.

The exact abilities of curios and Wonders and their differences could be clearer.

With deadly efficiency and euraka the text portrudes out of the text box.

Curious doctor has blinded by science as a requirement but is placed before it, which doesn't help the readability.

That's all format stuff. As far as the content itself goes, I think the obligations might be a bit too mild and calculation sticks out as very obviously a fallout mechanic and having no real follow up. You'd think it'd start a combat tree, but it's just a single combat perk in the midst of a sea of building perks.

>>55120464
you suck OP

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How much longer?

>>55120464
ur the worst OP of all time and u should feel bad

>>55120662
Do you even read italics posts or do you like posting memes too much?

>>55120793
Soon isn't a real answer to a question of time. Also they just talk about other wips.

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people were asking for this in the last thread. I only saved PDFs of QuietCYOA, so I screenshotted it.

>>55120464
check my unstoppable train

Previous Thread: >>55109898 →
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OP Is Actually A Faggot This Time Edition

>>55120863
he really is

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Remember basements

>>55120464
>>55120903
It really isn't that hard to just copy paste the pastebin and link the previous thread. My autism is making me want to make a new thread just so it's done properly.

fake bread

>>55121027
Plastic Tortilla.

Can you guys make up your minds on whether this is the thread? I'd make a new one if you like but let's keep things orderly.

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>>55121192

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hehe

>>55121164
Do it. This is pretty much a shitpost, and I can tell it will devolve into actual shitposting.

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Continuing the experiment from last thread:

Below are 24 questions. Pick your five (or ten, or three, whatever, it doesn't really matter) favorite girls, then answer ONE question for each one that isn't already answered in their profile, based on the information that's in the profiles.

Anons say that these profiles are detailed enough you can get a good mental picture of the character. If that's true, your answers to the same questions about the same girls should be roughly similar or at least any differences should be easily explainable. And if that's the case, then we've found a nice standard for how detailed a waifu should be to achieve this level of well roundedness.

1. Favorite food
2. Favorite drink
3. Favorite book
4. Favorite film
5. Favorite flavor of ice cream
6. Favorite band/singer
7. Which pet/s does she have if at all?
8. What was her favorite school subject?
9. Where would they most like to go on vacation?
10. What superpower would they pick if they could?
11. What car would they drive?
12. What cause would they donate to?
13. How would they react to being caught masturbating?
14. How do they celebrate the holidays?
15. How does their room look like?
16. Which historical personality do they admire?
17. How big is their nuclear family?
18. What scares them the most?
19. What's their most embarrassing secret?
20. What's the worst thing they've ever done?
21. What's their astrological sign?
22. How do they dress like at home?
23. How old were they when they stopped believing in Santa Claus?
24. What's their middle name?

>>55121341
Congratulations, you are the most autistic poster in /cyoag/

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>>55121208
space opera

influence
remembrance

Love interest
Transport
Weapon

Travelling in space in my super ship with waifu

>>55121341
No.

>>55121320
so it's just like every other cyoa thread then? :^)

>>55121369
Really? 24 questions is what it takes to win the title? Didn't Alice Anon make like a hundred pages of nothing but that at one time?

>>55120662
What makes it Shin Megami Tensei?

>>55121341
How the hell is something like "what's their middle name " a personality thing?

>>55121341
While I do think this is a fun idea, I honestly think you're wrong about
>If that's true, your answers to the same questions about the same girls should be roughly similar or at least any differences should be easily explainable.
The whole point of this cyoa is to show that people are complex and don't fit into waifu archetypes, if you could tell what a girl likes to eat based on her hobbies and political leanings then that girl's an incredibly shallow person. It's self defeating.

>>55121410
I think by that point he was consciously trying to imitate Alice Anon but ran out of ideas or something. It sounds like holistic bullshit.

Guess you could wing it based on their ethnicity or something? But then there's really no reason different people's answers would match.

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WHO AMONG YOU IS BRAVE ENOUGH TO MAKE A CYOA OUT OF THIS???

No, seriously, is it practical to do so?

>>55121397
Not the amount of questions, but the entire reason why he makes them is pure autistic power. Analyzing something as "the way people see X" and thinking that because Y amount of words makes people get a nice picture of a real person on their heads, then everyone will see the same X. It's like a colorblind person demanding to be explained what colors look like and that everyone gives out the same explanation.

>>55121341
>these profiles are detailed enough you can get a good mental picture of the character. If that's true, your answers to the same questions about the same girls should be roughly similar or at least any differences should be easily explainable

>half of the questions have nothing to do with personality

your autism hurts me, please go away

>>55121451
Toph's fetish?
Do it.

>>55121451
You might want to specify what you mean by "this".

>>55121451
Fuck me, forgot the link: >>55117803.

>>55121451
There's already a skeleton gang rape cyoa

>>55121518
I was hoping to adopt more of the mood and resolution mechanics. It would be a vehicle for companions, for authors who are addicted to that.

>>55121502
Doesn't seem worth the effort to me, but I'm only me, and not everyone else.
That would be weird.
Anyways, my limited perspective isn't worth very much, so feel free to ignore me.

>>55121502
I almost didn't read the whole thing. Man, that was not what I expected.

>>55121451
>No, seriously, is it practical to do so?
I don't think CYOA-making in general is practical.
That aside, how would you make it into a solo experience?

>>55120464
rolling for thread with no waifu/anime faggotry

>>55121481
That's why I'm thinking he was trying to imitate Alice Anon without understanding Alice Anon was specifically guiding people through a writing exercise, not a personality analysis.

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>>55121585

>>55121563
Not that guy but I'll give a crack at it: pick your woman, pick your rapists, settings, advantages, etc.

It's not really that alien from picking your captain, your ship, your enemy factions, your region of space, etc.

You could make it just neutral enough that people who want to play it as a "escape with your ass intact" can actually do so (at great cost, of course).

>>55121481
>>55121607
It's also possible he didn't have 24 different ideas and felt obliged to do that for some reason. Some of these are kinda nice (the "favorite X" ones, mostly, because I could definitely get predicting somebody's tastes in media based on their personality, for example) but many are essentially random.

>>55121209
>Origin
Time kidnapped
>Ship focus
Speed (to run from anything we can't take out)
>Captains chair
Comfy
>Aesthetics
Ship's choice
>Ship personality
Deredere
>Body modification
Major body shift
>VR system
Builder focus
>Food
Ship grown
>Information subscription
Human focus
>Companion
Ship (Of course)

I like this one. It sounds fun and with the DLC for it makes it pretty interesting.

>>55121637
>>55121607
>>55121341
What these guys said. My suggestion is try this again next thread or two threads from now, but just limit yourself to the first 7 or so. I'd go over them and see which of the rest look like they could be guessed from personality but I can't be bothered.

>>55121341
I really don't care about any of this

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>>55121585

>>55121563
I'm seeing a lot of potential for the so-called fiat system: rapist picks influence the woman's body and behaviour, and the woman's and her picks effect rapist behaviour and feelings. It would be like now where you separate companion stats from companion background/description; rapist description blocks for example would be separated by mechanical effects in the game (details about the woman's bodily responses and feelings) and background and appearance for flavour.

Is someone making a rape CYOA?
Because that is seriously right up my ballpark.

>>55121607
Or, maybe the author just had an idea of their own based on Alice Anon's CYOA and ran with it. No, that's impossible. Anyone who isn't just aping someone else's work is simply copying wrong.

>>55121819
It seems like several are considering it. Don't get your hopes up, though.

>>55121622
>Not that guy but I'll give a crack at it: pick your woman, pick your rapists, settings, advantages, etc.
But who would you be in the scenario? The woman? The rapist(s)? Some random bystander?

>>55121823
It's far too close to be the case. This CYOA was originally made by Alice Anon, whose most famous work was literally 70 pages consisting of mostly this exactly type of question.

>Rape CYOA
Is there going to be lolis in it? Might as well go all the way and hug one.

>>55121878
That could be one of the choices, with different goals and perspectives and even mechanical differences going alone with it. Or, leave it implied and people can identify with the perspectives in the situation however they like. Would be fun to see the moralfags, feminists, whiteknights, and paladins face off against the fetishists, MRAs, misogynists, and hedonists. Kind of like the Order vs Chaos CYOA.

>>55121819
Pretty much any cyoa with mind control is a rape cyoa. TokHaar Gol in particular likes to have mind control options that leave the victim cognizant

Between the lousy start, somebody possibly trying to imitate Alice Anon poorly and rape CYOAs, this is going to be a fun thread.

>>55121838
I will get my hopes higher up than experience has told me to!

>>55120482
Not the author, but this world is a mishmash of Fallout, STALKER, and Genius the Transgression.
Curios are STALKER Artifacts: materials that have strange, possibly beneficial properties. Stuff like a crystal that gives you fire resistance, or moss that gives you a minor healing factor.
Wonders are literally ripped out of Genius: they are pieces of technology that run on their own internal logic, often in defiance of normal physical laws.
Orphans are also straight out of Genius: Wonders that have been abandoned, developed a feral intelligence, and now prowl the landscape in search of sustenance.

>>55122003
What do you have against rape as a subject of fantasy?

>>55121341
This is either very tough, I'm missing something, or I'm creatively crippled. I can't put together even one of those beyond very general assumptions.

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>>55122140
>STALKER

S.T.A.L.K.E.R.

>>55122179
It's very autistic. Be glad you don't get it.

>>55122140
What would be an example of a piece of technology that runs on its own internal logic?

>>55122292
I think it'd actually work as a creative writing exercise (oddly fitting, given that this is originally an Alice Anon production), it just wouldn't provide the insight the guy who made this is looking for. It could be fun to see what people make of the characters, maybe even add it to some kind of expanded version of the CYOA, but it won't reveal anything about the ideal amount of waifu info.

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>>55122301

>>55122003
Is it OK to rape someone then reverse time?

>>55120464
what am i looking at here?

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>>55120464

>>55122340
Dude. Relax. Breathe.

>>55122343
No. Any other questions?

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>>55122377
What?

>>55122301
The Minovsky Particle.

>>55122409
y tho

>>55122301
A gun that shoots Orgone energy to heal its target. A spaceship that travels faster than light through the Luminiferous Ether. A sword that can cut through dimensions via quantum foam. A sentient robot made of clockwork. A canoe that can travel through time (in the source material, if you try to dramatically change history, the time police will undo your work and kick your teeth in).

Basically, you supply the logic that it runs on,
and if you have the money and know-how,
it will work (most of the stuff I posted is expensive to build and requires a high level character).

>>55122343
Okay for whom? It's fine for them, they're completely untouched by it. Not so for you, though.

It really depends on what you mean by okay.

>>55122455
That sounds way overpowered.

>>55122455
>if you try to dramatically change history, the time police will undo your work and kick your teeth in
What if you just want to be hitler's drinking buddy?

>>55120464
fuck you op
Previous Thread: >>55109898
Archives and other resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

>>55121341
Courtney's favorite ice cream flavor would be vanilla. It's ironic that it's become synonymous with blandness because technically it's one of the most complex flavors out there. I could imagine someone who takes pride in their very refined taste also making a point of truly appreciating different types of vanilla ice cream, probably in interesting combinations.

Shani definitely has a dog. I don't think this even requires an explanation.

Betul might enjoy a vacation to either Rome or Seoul in order to appreciate the architecture. Rome if she's feeling archaic, Seoul if she's feeling modern.

You just know Beatrice' favorite book is fucking Coraline, just look at her.

If you caught Arielle masturbating she'd probably make you keep watching and get off to it.

Am I doing this right?

>>55121502
Holy shit. Reading how gameplay goes, I finally get why so many people find "rape" hot. Thank you, internet.

>>55122370
>moot
Who?

>>55122636
I think it's a typo, or some esl bloke fucking things up.

>>55121502
Skeleton Gang Rape.

>>55122636
>>55122657
>lelel what a funny joke

>>55122697
???
Is that a reference?

>>55122716
>???
>Profit!

>>55122735
Haha, now that's a reference I recognize. :D

>>55122735
You idiot, there is a "?" missing!

>>55121502
>>55121502
>Gang Rape
>played as a succession of one-on-one rounds
Fucking Swedes.

>>55122614
Oh shit I thought it was a gif not a pdf. Thank you random stranger!

>>55122450
Rape is bad, m'kay

>>55122530
Also, if a normal person touches your stuff or tries to figure out how it works, it either falls apart or becomes a hostile Orphan.

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>>55122636
Some guy.

>>55122763
Sure, but why? Figuring out why can make it easier to face and to fix.

>>55122770
So you can disarm a death ray just by pondering how it works?

>>55122789
Just google "Why is it bad to rape people." Or better yet go to your local police station and ask they're experts at this kind of thing.

>>55122800
Pretty much. Each wonder also has a Persistent Flaw determined by the GM. So that death ray might be a power hog, or it can't penetrate wood, or it is fragile and will explode if dropped.

>>55121164
once the thread exists it's the thread, even if you make a thread a hundred times better it's still a complete failure if you do it too soon and force duplicates

>>55122961
>will explode if dropped
That sounds like a feature.

>>55122800
Presumably not. Probably means if you look at it under lab conditions or something. Like if you try to scan the internals.

>>55122944
It's a philosophical question, not an enforcement question.

Additionally, if all discussion is killed with "there are experts and the internet for that" then the thread dies.

>>55123050
>>Additionally, if all discussion is killed with "there are experts and the internet for that" then the thread dies.
Well, not really. Just point out that they're pretty much committing an appeal to authority fallacy and they'll get pissed off like the brainlets they are.

>>55121502
I get the distinct feeling the writer didn't intend this to create ERP. What a foolish man.

>>55123108
I'm referring to what will happen if people actually go along with that logic; otherwise, discussion isn't killed and it's just attempted murder.

>>55122636
That Korean guy who owns the site.

>>55123126
Pretty sure they were just being smart and classy about it. If not, who cares, we'll turn it into something good.

>>55123126
>game rules enforce foreplay designed to arouse women
>plausible deniability / lack of personal accountability
No, he knew exactly what he was doing.

>>55123134
The Hawaiian security consultant?

>>55123140
In either case I look forward to seeing Angelanon beg others to play with her only to have her pretend she definitely isn't writing her posts with one hand.

>>55123221
Oh my...

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>>55123164
>game rules enforce foreplay designed to arouse women

>>55123221
If she were that much of a slice she wouldn't hide away from the thread so much.

>>55120793
Italics makes me think. What is their end game? When are they going to make something good like Traveller or Star Dust? Can they continue to keep making waifu cyoas and surviving off that?

>>55121283
Oh god my eyes.

>>55123236
She's only here to get help masturbating. It's just fucking annoying her main fetish is pretending she's not getting off to obvious porn builds.

>>55123297
Just read it.

>>55123309
Only the skeleton knows.

>>55122761
You've never actually run a train on anyone, have you?

>>55123309
As someone who hasn't and won't ever read traveler, yes, yes he can get away with that. I mean, I've read 0% of Highlanders stuff and at least 1% of Italics stuff.

>>55123309
It makes me laugh when people think authors only have one name and don't funnel different creations to different personas.

>>55123344
Are you sure? These days she seems to be mostly ok compared to the past.

>>55123349
>A rape game is designed to arouse women and count like foreplay
???
???
Do women often get off to imagine being raped?

>>55123381
What is Italics other names?
>Inb4 cuck meme.

>>55123126
>On a meta-note, I tried hard not to come
when writing this—that is I tried hard
not to back down from making this game
less scary at any point. This is a game
without smileys or covers to duck behind.
The writer is pretty good at doubletalk. They know the score.

>>55123458
Are you literally underaged? Please don't take this as an insult, but the world has some teaching left for you I think.

>>55123458
anon have mercy on my eyeroll muscles

>>55123483
Nah, it's the same person who "didn't know" who moot was earlier.

>>55123381
shit he found out
what do we do?

>>55123514
just don't namefag anymore you faggot

>>55123483
Look anon you don't have to bully me.

>>55123381
>SDA funnels his perversion and lewdness into an alternate, greatly more autistic persona, Tok.
This is some Fight Club shit.

>>55123458
Don't you?

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>>55123458
>>55123483
>>55123493
>>55123498
>>55123546

Piss babies.

That's not funny my dog was killed that way

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Mhmm...

What is this thread called again?

>>55123552
Nah, SDA is already plenty lewd and perverse.

Also, persona has a mundane meaning, you know; we all use personas not just full-on split personality types.

>>55123561
Man, I haven't seen anyone try to force such a cringey meme in a long time.

>>55123582
why did you rape your dog

>>55123309
>Italics wont remake Armored Core.
>Remakes other dumb stuff.
I just want my AI waifu.

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>>55123614
>Man, I haven't seen anyone try to force
iron-y nigga

>>55123619
lmao anon, why would you think that, is your penis a bean

>>55121283
has anyone told you yet that it's not just the font that's hard to read, the word arrangement is even worse?

>>55123554
... no?

>>55123688
Disgusting.

>>55123650
>AI waifu
For what purpose? What's the appeal?

>>55123688
Well, not everyone is you.

>>55123661
I'm not shadowassasinXxXbloodmaster, I reposted it to see how long /cyoag/ is going to meme about his work. Previous OP inspired me.

>>55123744
m-muh normies
m-muh roasties
m-muh 3dpd

>>55123607
Probably why people are kicking around the idea of a Gang Rape CYOA. Not really my thing, but a couple of the mechanical considerations have been really interesting.

>>55123744
She a cute, came with the AC, knows where to find weapons and other items belonging to disfunct. corporations for you to have, she has real emotions, she a cute, and she can pilot your AC when you fuck up.

Also you can fuck her in the digital cyber pussy.

>>55123381
Shut the fuck up anon, I want to be in an author CYOA twice.

>>55123458
It's the how, anon. You could design a rape game designed to arouse men but (intentionally) not women, for example.

>>55123811
Nothing wrong with doing it, just makes me laugh when people think it's some kind of mind-blowing complexity or something.

>>55123803
Ho do you fug ai digi pusi?

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hold your discussions of ai pussy!
i have fresh OC

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>>55123864

>>55123847
The AI is inside of your Armored Core. The CYOA allows you to plug yourself into the Armored Core to pilot it.

You are inside the AC computer, AI is inside of the AC computer, now you just need to create a digital dick and vagina + stimulant program.

>>55123773
3d piggu go home!

>>55123884
how can someone be retarded enough to give a serious answer to a post like that

>>55123842
It's literally the reason why I'm doing it.
Well, the main one.

>>55123901
less retarded than not answering seriously, because you dont want to be retarded

>>55123901
What did he mean by this?

>>55123884
Is this why symbiotes are bestgirl?

>>55123901
Don't ask retarded questions and you won't get retarded answers.

>>55123864
are you intended to roll random side effects? because if so that's gay and i'm just going to fuck your cyoa and take loli forcibly.

>>55123864
>Power
Regeneration

>Extra Powers
Telepathy
Camouflage

>Side Effects
Rolled 2, Radiation Sickness. Rolled 15, I survive
Rolled 5, Infertility

>Gun
SVD

>Equipment
PSS

>Operation
Ukraine, gain Teleportation

>>55123884
FUND THIS. NOW.

>>55123864
Hope I didn't need to know what's in that intro cause I sure as hell didn't read.
>Telepathy
>SVD
>Specialised rounds
>ACCP

>>55124125
rolling is optional, you can still have two powers even without rolling if you pick ukraine

>>55124171
why did you pick specialist rounds?
you don't have a gun that can fire them

>>55123864
Power: Telepathy
Extra Powers: Regeneration (No Side Effect), Speed (Radiation, 8), Strength (Loli)
Weapon: KS-23
Equipment: Specialized Rounds
Location: Russia - Armor

Let's go kill or convert some mutants, comrades!

>>55124174
Alright, give me the PSS instead.
Why bother include an option that can only be used with one of the previous options?

>>55124174
no i'm saying, if you take side effects are you only allowed to roll them instead of choosing the ones you want? because i WANT to be a loli. i want that side effect. and i want to choose it and not roll for it.

>>55124230
Just roll a bunch. If you're going to disobey the rules of the cyoa anyway that's fine, but you're a faggot for doing so. That's like playing Stardust and giving yourself an antimatter cannon for free just because you want it

>>55124230
you have to roll. however, if you want to be a loli, pick belarus, it increases the chances.
>>55124223
because i assume people can read

>>55124285
it's kind of different because you can make the right choices to get that in stardust. in this guy's cyoa it's all up to luck, and listen boy, this is /cyoag/ not /ryoag/.

What are the most popular (best) waifu cyoa? What waifu cyoa has the largest amount of waifus to pick from?

>>55124319
>listen boy
Don't make me get out the paddle, you loli whore

>>55124324
I'm pretty sure Order has the most waifus going by sheer volume, but it's not a waifu CYOA. Picking a Goddess would have the most next. Technically you can make infinite waifus with Game of Alice.

>>55124324
Probably Branching Hearts or the Goddess CYOA

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>>55124357

>>55123458
>Do women often get off to imagine being raped?
>Implying there isn't at least one person in the world that could get off to anything you care mention.

>>55123864
>Powers
Telekinesis
Flight (6! Mutation)
Pyrokinesis (Free)
Regeneration (3! Loli)
I am the luckiest motherfucker alive holy shit.

>Equipment
SVD
PSS
A gun to shoot things from afar and another one for when you have to be sneaky breaky

>Area
Uzbekistan
"Gain nothing" Pfft, I don't trust you.

>>55123864
>no concise, direct instructions for choosing
>rolling
You were so close?

>>55124407
>could get off to anything you care mention.
E-even floor tiles ???!
DUN DUN du-DUUUUUUUUUN

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>>55124324
>most popular
wouldn't say its the best tho. The only waifu I remember from this cyoa is the one present on every page and the bread waifu (because what the fuck).

No waifu cyoa is objectively the best, some authors try to make them realistic, some go for perfection, some are filthy weebs, some need an excuse for mysterybox faggotry, some just want to tell a story

>>55124407
There's a lot more than one woman who gets off to rape fantasies.

>>55124408
you gain nothing because it's the easiest area u skrub

>>55124460
Fuck i thought it was some weird mystery box i choose azerbaijan instead

>>55122770
>>55122800
>>55122961
Okay, but as a conduit perk it's way overpowered.

>>55124494
nah.

>>55122539
Tourism is ok. If due to your actions, Hitler doesn't start WW2, they will use mind control to ensure that he does, and pay you a visit afterwards.

>>55124531
So if i go on drunken rants about why the jews ruined hitler chances at painting everything ok?

>>55124494
True. I'm not the guy who wrote the RPG or the fanworld though.
Then again, if you run into a technopath or someone with anti-technology powers, you are pretty screwed. I don't remember, are there any Conduit perks that let you do that?

>>55124648
Spire Conduits could one hit KO a Cras, without lifting a finger.

>>55124648
>>55124687
New generation Spire is probably going to have a lot of overlap with Cras as it stands now.
Thrallherd mentioned natively occuring technology and mad science.

>>55124687
You could go for biotech instead, but that leaves you vulnerable to Qlippoth and Malsanis Conduits.

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>>55124426
Someone say floor tiles?

>>55121502
> have power over ’s body and behaviour
> has power over ’s feelings and behaviour
> ”knows” at least one of the
> determines the setting and the ’s behaviour
> determines how and when it all turns into a rape
>Play everything up to the rape
>if you break eye contact or back down your character comes
> is swapped for another after orgasm
> decides what does after the rape, if they doanything with , etc.
> decides what she does afterwards, if she tells anyone about the rape, informs the police, etc.

This sounds like a wealth of inspiration of a CYOA and incredibly hot to play also.

>>55124781
Wow it killed all the male and female symbols?

>>55124769
Vulnerable to them or with an unexpected edge against their own defenses?

>>55124781
Go hog wild my dear!

>>55124365
>Order
9 expansions and none have came out.

>>55124442
I always felt that 'rape fantasies' were a bit of a misnomer. It's less about 'rape' and more about a big strong guy that they like having forceful, dominant sex with them that they still actually want, they just didn't get asked first.

>>55124775
I have the feeling that midas touch could be exploited somehow...

>>55124846
Saying "rape fantasy" is very un-PC so the term "ravishment fantasy" is often used instead.

>>55124775
couldnt you just take "your fetish", say your fetish is shapeshifting or transformation and then take as many of the physical drawbacks as possible and it wouldn't matter because you could just shapeshift out of them because your shapeshifting fetish was made real

>>55124874
That's retarded.

Anyway, I'm not complaining about it for PC reasons, I just think the term 'rape' isn't accurate since it still revolves around sex that's essentially consensual. Just not with the billion safewords and explicit contracts of consent signed in triplicate that's expected now.

>>55124846
>>55124874
It's the same shit, sorry. Sexual fantasies are about visceral feelings, not about the details behind them.

Repost new OC you niggers or I'll have to visit Reddit

>>55123607
>High Technology Workshop, Cosmic Library, Eldritch College (90)
>Eldritch Bride, Abyssal Blood (250)
>Bride: Form Change, Sleepless Immortality, Charisma, Battlemaster, 100km/min Teleportation (90)

Apotheosis or bust. The plan relies on the assumption that other options can be replicated by a combination of science and eldritch understanding. With this in mind our first few months will consist of desperately trying to build a portal home, finding sustenance in the terrain-less limbo outside the mansion and teleporting away at the first sign of Trouble. Once on Earth we can "recruit" some muscle and eventually some brains, my bride's powers are sure to come in handy. The combination of continuous terror, eldritch revelation and kidnapping might not make for the sanest of godlings but once we have a proper foothold I can rein my madness back to the occasional human test subject.

>>55124846
No it's literally a rape fantasy but people keep forgetting about the "fantasy" part. It's like fapping to furry porn without actually wanting to fuck dogs in real life. Or fapping to feminization stuff without actually wanting to wear skirts oin public and be jamal's fucktoy.

>>55124963
>>55121283

>>55124973
>>55124938
I don't think either of you two know what rape is.

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>>55120464
Any program I can use to make CYOA images on my phone? I commute a lot to and from work and I was thinking that this would be a perfect opportunity to make some.

>>55124817
You can make plagues and toxins, but Qlippoths are biokinetics and Malsanis Conduits are probably better at it than you due to specialization, and will probably shrug it off.
Sure, you can make a "Neutron Bomb" that is effective against organic flesh and does not harm inert matter, but then you are back to square one, with the Spire Conduit stealing/sabotaging your toys.

>>55124992
Unironic sharing, dongle.

Fuck it I'm going to Reddit.

>>55124994
I do. I get the feeling you don't know how genres and their labels evolve, and when a proposed renaming does its job without undercutting itself.

>>55124963
Has Reddit even posted any of the recent OC?

>>55124963
>>55123864

>>55124932
>That's retarded.
It is. Ravishment play is physical resistance without the roleplaying aspects. Rape play is when you're roleplaying out rapist and victim, whether or not physical resistance is involved.

>>55124994
I don't think you know what fantasy is.

>>55125040
It's got like two. This sucks man.
>>55125047
I didn't miss that you twonker.

>>55124775
I'm pretty sure that demons existing is proof of hell and that dealing with one sends you thre, but if I did take the deal I think Big Ol Dick would be acceptable to me, it's not really a shameful deformity, assuming over the shoulder size is only when it's erect.
As for the powers, I think I can withstand the temptation to take "your fetish" and instead go for immortality.

>>55124072
how retarded do you have to be to think everyone here is the same person

>>55125040
ye sda posted his sexcapades, but on /trash/

>>55124846
That's why you add the "fantasy" or "roleplay".
Actual rape is fucked up, playrape is like you say about being wanted and desired. Crank that up to 11 and you get playrape

>>55125040
I've honestly been checking to see if Rise, Endless Desert has been posted there. I want to see how they deal with it, but I'm not bringing those peasants any of our golden OC

>>55125040
what even is the subreddit?

>>55125102
You mean Endles Desert, right?

>>55125111
Strange archive/dumping service for crossposting anons and font of all that is CYOA to comfort-zoned Redditors.

>>55125111
MakeYourChoice.

>>55125102
Don't dare to post it there scum. I will be furious when they make a cheap ripoff.

>>55125117
You mean Endles Dessert, the one by Fatposter?

>>55125002
I'm trying to think of a way you could use biotech to counter a flesh attack and have it blow up in their face.
Maybe a biological chem lab inside a bait victim, analizing the weapon used and doing... something... with it.

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>>55120482
addressed, changed.

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>>55125228
Cool that you put in the effort for the double columns.

>>55123864
>hold your discussions of ai pussy!
Your first mistake.

>>55125001
Guys please help

>>55125336
Use a memo text editor and take screenshots if you're that desperate. Or learn to code.

>>55125166
Bio Scanners require Apokalypsi 2 to build (pretty early in the scanner/communication/discovery tech tree, in reach of a starting character who specializes in that kind of stuff), and can scan at range.

A wonder that produces other wonders is at the end of the automation tech tree. You are better off observing at range taking notes on how the poor sucker got killed and designing the chemical yourself.

>>55125336
I think ZBG made that museum thing on his phone. I don't know if anyone else has made a cyoa on their phone other than using the memo pad to jot notes.

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>>55123880
As Val is an option but not vss?

>>55123880
Rpk but no Pkm ; (

>>55125373
How about a machine that instantly develops a cure for any disease it is fed? Does it need to be a wonder to do something like that?
What about a nanobot swarm that recognizes the dna of a virus to determine who the previous host was and snakes its way back to the origin by way of reverse order of infection?

>>55125442
You need more technobabble for that to work.

>>55125336
Write the text, jesus don't try to edit images on a phone

>>55125399
>>55125429
this is set in a police context, i wanted to avoid gpmgs and didn't want to have more that one marksman rifle

Oooohhhhhhh

>>55125466
Fair enough. good work!

>>55125466
P.s strange there's no smg option

Rolled 3, 3, 5 = 11 (3d6)

>>55123864
>I totally rolled these numbers that gibe me lolidom and no cancer guys!
pfft. Bunch of pussies

Regeneration(Initial)
Teleportation
Telepathy
Armor

APS
RPG-7

Kazakhstan
I'll run the silk road black market singlehandedly. That is, if cancer or radiation sickness doesn't get me first. You can ban capitalism comrade but you can never abolish trade.

>>55123880
>>55125466
Last one I swear. It'd be cool if there was a map included highlighting each area.

>>55124919
Is explicitly stated drawbacks overwrite any powers

Rolled 1 (1d6)

>>55125575
The life of crime is no place for kids anyway. So I'll need to brainwash some of the local criminal element to act as my family/bodyguards.

>>55125454
It recognizes the biometric footprint of the parent lifeform, triangulates its position from different infectees and uses the earth's own ambient magnetic field to home in on its target, repeating the process until patient zero is localized?

>>55125653
Now it works.

>>55125609
no, it only states that there isn't any demonic magic at play in the first place to make the drawbacks unnoticeable by people. by the cyoa's wording, it's only saying that the drawbacks are noticeable in their current state, not that there is noway to hide the drawbacks. by this logic i can use shapeshifting to create a form free of the physical drawbacks in order to hide them.

>>55120464
rdin the train to somewhere

>>55125575
Who are you Nicky from comrade detective?

>>55125546
the aps was the only smg used by the soviets during this period

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>>55121430
These have always been my favorite, got any more anon?

>Cannibal Tribe, The Other
>Crabs, Salamanders, Wasps, Aurochs
>Insane Survivor, Orphaned Cannibal, Doggo
>Disaster Shelter
>Plague Emblem
>Reunite the Tribes

>>55121430

>Nemesis: Cannibal Tribe

>Cryptids: Vomit Wasps, Island Aurochs, Giant Eels, Titan Hermit Crabs.

>Special Cryptids: Wyverns

>Companions: Errant Conquistador

>Shelter: Disaster Shelter

>Artifact: Plague Emblem

>Misc Equipment: Foraging Guide, Compass, Lantern.

>Mission: Take up the Will

Plan: Get the fuck underground, then stay the fuck underground as much as possible. Foraging guide should provide short term sustinance at least. Oil lamp will allow me to explore the shelter and get more gear. Compass will stop me getting lost.

Once established, I'll persuade my spanish BFF to help me get the rats on board by helping them with their Herring gull problem. Surely we can take a few Herring Gulls? If any cannibals give us trouble, we give them the Aztec treatment. We'll stick to the forests as much as possible. Away from the bigger predators, out of sight of the Wyverns. Wasps we can hear from a way off and avoid. With the rats on our side we'll take the fight to the cannibals. We'll starve them by destroying their food supplies and infect them with plagues. If they're foolish enough to attack us at home we'll lead them into the tunnels, let them get lost and then they'll be food for the giant rats. With the cannibals defeated we can finally set out in search of the fountain of youth. It'll just be a matter of time before we find it.

After locating the fountain me and my now immortal spanish bff will play the long game. We and our rat subjects will come to rule the island in the fullness of time. Eventually even the wyverns will fear us.

>>55125454
Since when did the meaning of technobabble become its own opposite?

>>55125809
It concerns a game about wacky mad scientists. It's not so much about an actual explaination about how the tech is supposed to work as it is a mechanic requiring roleplay.

>>55124873
I'm curious how you think so?
>>55124919
>>55125690
See, while that might be possible, it says it has to be your fetish. You can't just tell him something to game the system, it has to be something you're very aroused by. Besides, trying to game the system is probably going to screw you over.
And it specifically says the demonic magic can't make it unnoticeable. All the powers are given as a result of demonic magic, so even if transformation is a fetish you have, you can't use it to get rid of whatever drawbacks you have.
>>55125067
It's 5 feet when erect, yeah, but it's still inhumanly long when flaccid.

>>55125937
Yeah, but like, baggy pants worthy. Not, having to expose it size.

>>55125937
it does not say that demonic magic can't make it unnoticeable. it says there is no demonic magic currently affecting the drawbacks in order to make them unnoticeable. the cyoa never says that demonic magic can't hide drawbacks it only says that the demon is not employing any magics in order to hide your drawbacks.

>>55125690
No, it pretty much states "perfect body" can be pointless depending of your choices, so the fetishes clearly take precedence over powers, otherwise you could pick any number of body altering fetishes and then pick perfect body

>>55125777
At this point I would rather pick these randomly

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>>55125777
>>55126080
Well there's 144 choices.
Roll 3d144.

>>55122343
Pretty sure I read a doujin with that premise.

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>>55124775
>Dick Nipples, Manboobs, Uniboobs, Butt Boobs, Lipples, Male Preg, Big Knees
Dress like the Penguin. People will just assume you are a fat fedora neet with severe skin problems.

>>55126021
i would agree with you but there's no concrete proof within the cyoa where it states that drawbacks will always overwrite your powers. to me, what your describing is more like this:
he presents you the perks first, and then the drawbacks second. so obviously if you choose perfect body and he gives you a perfect body, right after that you have to take the drawbacks which then get put onto your "perfect" body. with shapeshifting this overwriting of your body doesn't matter as once the drawbacks are applied you can just shapeshift out of them.

>>55126105
the magic
tagged
storm seer
...
okay, whatever

Is working with the same concept that another CYOA has done frowned upon? I want to make a more complex and fleshed out version of >>55122370 (ie subgenre choices, you get boons, you get 1 girl to start with) but I wanted to check.

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>>55120464
Rolling for this thread

>>55126196
Nope, that's perfectly fine, in general. Have fun!

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>>55126105
I'll give it a go anon.

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>>55126196
It's not at all.
Only sometimes when a work brings absolutely no new ideas to the table and the things it re-uses have been done five times already.

>>55126127
He worded it as "for any fetish you choose, you'll get to choose a power or ability to go with it" and there is nothing indicating you HAVE to pick all your powers first or can't change them, hell, he even let you back down on the deal. the order just seems to be like that to tempt you, as he stated

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>>55125382
>I think ZBG made that museum thing on his phone
No, I made the Rock Climbing CYOA as a joke on my phone along with the manga panel where I bitched about how much I was struggling with the spacing for Guardian Spirit.

The Museum one was much better, so I ripped off his idea for both the Rock Climbing one and Fork in the Road.

>>55126196
Try to not just reskin something. If you take an existing concept and work in your own direction it's fine, but try not to just copy.

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>>55126243
>Eternity Gem
>Ace Pilot
>Mystery Woman

Well that went better than expected, this is a rad as fuck combo.

>>55126278
With what program?

>>55126284
Hell, even a reskin can be interesting if the skin is original and fresh. Worldbuilding is a big draw to cyoa works for many people and if that's done well it can work being the only creative thing about it.
Just avoid "generic fantasy" and "anime highschool".

>>55126311
Can someone post Rise? I wanted to make a build but I'm on my phone.

>>55126278
Post the rock climbing one

>>55124775
>Immortality, Waifu, Jack of One Trade x 2 (Geometry and Tile-laying), Pocket Dimension
>Tile Lover, Flattened, Big Ol' Dick, Midas Touch, Mind of it's Own

I'm abandoning the 3d shell of a world to live in a flat utopia with my Penrose tiling waifu, Moebius strip dick and whatever tasteful mosaics I can animate. If we feel reall kinky we might go non-Euclidean.

>>55126334
I'm actually working on fixing some typos right now, so, the latest version is still in the last thread.

>>55126278
what museum one?

>>55126325
>Hell, even a reskin can be interesting if the skin is original and fresh.
I meant more like those two reddit contest cyoas, one that was just DSA's Island Survival down to the aesthetic except with the word "Hentai" attached or the Slut Life with different pictures. If you're doing your own worldbuilding that's a substantial enough difference in my eyes.

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>Start Making Remaking My Build For Updated Royal Revival
>See That Quiet Final Finish Rise -The Eternal Desert So I Put The Royal Revival Build On Hold Because It's Shorter
>3 Days Later
>Only A Third Of The Way Through Each
Fuck me.
This is what I get for being the autistic fuck who write 5 page builds RPing with the Narrator and commenting on each option.

>>55126374
Fix your shift key, ZBD.

>>55126260
Strength 2
Speed 2
Resilience 1
Aptitude 1
Intuition 4
Charisma 0
Will 1
Stealth 1
Love 0

Strange Journey
Animal Handling 4
Resistance 3
Survivalism 3
Performance 1
Wuxia 6
Acrobatics 6

Leaping from clifftop to clifftop, seeing everything the world has to offer.

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>>55126323
The built in photo app on iPhones.
It has enough touch tools to make a barebones CYOA with.
>>55126337
Kay.
>>55126344
I didn't save it. It was one where you're in a museum and you choose to either go Left, Right, or Backwards.
>>55126391
>Recordized me immediately despite taking on my trip.
>Fix your shift key, ZBD.
Which one? My keyboard's on its last legs so if I wiggle the cord too much the whole thing stops working.

>>55126260
this cyoa reminds me of exalted

>>55126374
>ZBG is Writing a autistic 5 page interaction with teresa
>Won't even go for the pure yuri route

>>55126268
oops you're right. for some reason i was in my head treating the cyoa as if as soon as you picked a choice you had it, that's why it made sense in my head. i forgot that at the end it's clear that you're only observing the choices.

>>55126340
Mystery box when

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>>55126460
Secret 3rd Option
>>55126391
>Your shift key
Fuck, I can't read.
The capitalizing every word is just another part of my unique brand of autism.
I'll try to kick the habit out if it annoys you guys too much.

>>55126509
The way you kicked your WIP habit?

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>>55126531

>>55126509
>.
ffffffffffffffffuck i wanna get climbed by a hot rock loli;

Some questions from last thread. I'll hopefully answer all of them (cont.)

>>55113288
>Shearpoint SPEC end
It should be obvious that Shearpoint's good end has you find the order's secrets, neutral end lets you discover the rules yourself, and bad end is where you fail miserably.

>>55113836
I really like your guerilla warfare strategy against the Denar. I'm fairly certain that should work. As for you plan to find the book, it's tiresome and difficult, but if you manage to get inside, it should work. I wonder how you're gonna get in there though.

>Shearpoint to put Avesta back together
Actually, should work, but are you sure you wanna do that? You'd be reforming the essence of the demon king.

>Deliah give Avesta the gift of peace
I'm glad someone caught onto this. You can actually use different companions to influence your other ones. For example, Deliah will tend Avesta towards more peaceful, humane solution. Sedana would, on the other hand, awaken his inner berserker.

>Valence Musket to give sky whale cancer
Would take several years to take effect, given that your musket has a 4-inch hole (i.e about 7-inch circumference). Cancer would take more time than you have to grow to effect a mile long beast.

> Temple of Al-Asir
I think you'd manage this. With scry and Minerva, you should find it.

>find Deeja
How?

> romance Avesta
You could but you'd need to get his good end. To do that, you have to make him passionate, interested in romance and whatnot. Don't think reforming him into Yun is the best way to go if that's your goal.

>>55113941
>>55113885
You guessed right here, Andrea did eat her kingdom to ascend. However, if she drinks muddler, it wouldn't restore those consciousnesses back. Here's a hint, think of what Muddler does to Comet, and know that Andrea, like Garret, was already in one of my other CYOAs. Altho, that last part is kinda annoying, and thus, isn't necessary to the entire storyline and you don't need to know it.

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>>55126509
I'd climb 'er...

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>>55126531
>The way you kicked your WIP habit?
Well, when was the last time I posted a full WIP?
Fuck, I posted the entire first two pages of Guardian not too long ago, didn't I?

>>55113980
>I can fire the Shield of Dagon’s Bane as an unbreakable projectile using kinetomancy. Graviton will further enhance this...
With fusion, this is absolutely possible. In fact, you could really do more than just that. After all, what's more unbreakable (densely packed together) than a black hole. Fusion makes graviton really OP.

>both of us are hunted by the Yellow Samurai
I've already confirmed that taking Yellow Samurai and Dusk Mirror almost guarantees cooperation as you two end up with the same quest.

Excellent build, and you took the right Quest to unlock Sedana's sidequest (but you missed on the sacrament). If you really want her quest line, I'd suggest moving a mentor and a sacrament around. Otherwise, nice build, and I'm quite confident that you'd survive the samurai if you used you head.

>>55114038 Muddler doesn't always just remove abnormalities. Think of what it does to a comet user. And think how that'd apply to other people with different powers.

>>55114021 Refer to above

>>55114431 Afraid not. The Eternal Comet is given once, that's it. Besides, you're the only human since the new beginning after the Doom whose even had a chance to look at sacraments.

>>55114860 Not a coincidence. Muddler can be used by a lot of people, not just you.

>>55114040 You're right about it being Uzra. But, you may be wrong as to exactly why Tyr and Lusteria are needed for this quest. Read the descriptions of those three again, consider why Lusteria's even here, and I think the answer reveals itself.

>>55114273 Minerva's library does indeed have a lot of info about Shearpoint. In fact, as I've stated in the CYOA, it has all the knowledge about everything. Sorting through it is the mess.

>>55115201Yes

Aaaaand done.

>>55116278
Excellent build, I'm really glad more people are looking into Clockwork Dias, cause I put a lot of work into that one. It's also probably the most breakable one. Your build is good but you don't have a real way of making it through the desert or any real ties to the Temple. Also, Sedana and a library don't mesh too well. But yeah, you've got the right spells to boost clockwork dias to use the agefinder at full capacity.

>>55116484
Completely fair way of playing the thing.

>>55117339
You think so? Is it the brightness, or do they just not mesh well?

>>55117597
Good build, cause you have Dagon+Skinchanger+Mirror, you should be able to hopefully find the phylactery, but I guess it depends on whether you can get your other to cooperate before the samurai comes for you. Picking Sedana+Dagon+Samurai is nice, and unlocks Sedana's Bad End. Yeah, sorry about that mate. Still, you should probably manage to defeat the Samurai as Mirror+Excal unlocks 99% Excalibur upon fusion.

>>55118415
One way of looking at it, sure. But Kinetomancy can be used with anything like that.

>>55119487
>Learn, explore, grow, fight.
You'll definitely have plenty of all of those. Rina and Al-Asir, btw, aren't a bad fit. Much better than Ali-Asir+Sedana, for many reasons. Lot a dead people in that temple you know.

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Might as well post it already, someones gonna

Guys, I think I've found a program I can make a CYOA in, wish me luck

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>>55127054

>>55127066
Godspeed. Keep 1200 pixel resolution alive.

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>>55127072

>>55127066
is it notavirusplsopen.exe?

Anyone have Traveller?

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>>55127088

>>55126260
Conceptually perfect 4
Will 3
Intuition 3
Speed 1
Aptitude 1
Clash with Evil
Witch Hunting
I am OP as fuck dayum man

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>>55127118
>Conceptually perfect 4
Yes, four points is what it takes to have an attribute be conceptually perfect. It's not an option in and of itself, though, meaning you still have four points to spend.

>>55127239
Is there gonna be an image version?

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>>55121961
>TokHaar Gol in particular likes to have mind control options that leave the victim cognizant
Best rape is mind control rape and best mind control is type 1!

>>55127261
i thought i would be conceptually perfect and thus all my attributes would therefore be conceptually perfect aswell, that is why i don't care what you say, if you do not clarify in the CYOA it is valid

>>55127305
There already is one.
Now if your asking about the 2.0? Yes there will be.

>>55127306
the best mind control isn't even on that list you pleb

>>55127327
This.

>>55127314
>i thought i would be conceptually perfect and thus all my attributes would therefore be conceptually perfect aswell
Then why did you spend points on attributes to make them _not_ conceptually perfect?

>>55127327
Describe the best mind control then?

>>55127353
the one where you voluntarily submit

>>55126970
I might as well post my own build to see what I got myself into
>>55127054
>Temperance de mort
>The librarian
>Shield of the black flame (87)
>Kinetomancy (69)
>Graviton (42)
>Avesta (27)
>Rina (12)
>Survive the yellow samurai

Rina and the Temperance de mort could very well be linked in tempering death. Though it might depend on my interactions with her.

I choose the Temperance as it seems appropriate to stand a chance against the samurai's swordsmanship, though in order to counter the large madness gained I really shouldn't use Aversa often hence the black flame shield.

Kinetomancy be used offensively and injunction with Graviton to become very mobile allowing me to escape any dangerous situations (I choose the black flame shield over the dagon shield as its weight is more suited to this). Graviton also has great defensive and trap potential for the librarian's task.

The librarian will provide me necessary information on the samurai, hopefully to Rina and Avesta
as well.

Avesta I kept as a wild card cause I just found it too interesting.

Interestingly the samurai has 1 Evil, so I take it he's just indifferent our world as most lovecraftian nightmares

How much SAN damage am I due?