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/cyoag/ - CYOA General - Imouto Edition

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Archives and other resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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>>54898258

Wow, Nevidd is hot. Mostly the way you wrote her. How often do you think she wants to fuck? I would appreciate sauce on the pic too.

(Also, sexiness aside, I may use some of that e.g. "human hive" for the fae when DMing.)
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OC here, sort of. I was trying to make something more intricate but got stuck on multiple projects, so I made something experimental instead. It's almost pure narrative, so I don't know if it's any fun to "play," but I did learn a few things while making it, some which can maybe be further applied and some which were just total dead ends. If nothing else, I hope you find it interesting. Oh, and it does have connections to another CYOA but I'm hoping it works as a standalone Weird West story.
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>>54912682
Intersting. I could only glance over it but it looks very nice to look at. Some of the options also grabbed at me, and I'll definitely post a build later.
Goodjob Anon.
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>>54912756
i wanna do lewds to rika
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>>54912790
Fluffy twintails is my secret weakness.
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>>54912756
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>>54912395
>Found it.
>Can't lewd the imoutos.
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>>54912756
How is this cyoa inspired from Earthbound?
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>>54909458
>All the good authors left
>Not included on the list of good authors
Oh. Ok.
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>>54912960
your symbiote has inspired me to post this
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>>54912985
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>>54912985
>>54912960
Can I lewd the symbiote?
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>>54912682
I hope I brought sunscreen.
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Mech body seems the most disadvantaged start in this one. It gets absolutely nothing as a bonus or that's unlocked by it, whereas everything else does.
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>>54913017
Yes, but taking separate form would probably make it easier
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>>54913088
All the waifus and husbandos are pretty garbage too. No bonus for mech body on this page either.
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>>54912682
good shit, anon.

>Horse with No Name
This is why you should never drive after a long day.
>Middle Path
I dunno man, I probably had a really clear purpose when I got here. You lose some focus after the 10,000th dune.
>Ordinary Pebble
If there's one thing I know about weird rules of strange locations, it's to always stick to them, especially when it comes to food or drink.

>LITERALLY ALL THE COMFORTS
Nice n' relaxing. Good hospitality around here.
>A mystery
Relationships worth enough to go on a journey like this are kinda hard to describe after years of isolation to be quite honest with you fampai.
>Just Water, Thanks
muh pebble. I know what's going on here, I've heard literally any story where someone's traveling and they're offered some kind of extra thing.

>A dropout
Can I even take this without a snazzy hat?
>A New Way
I feel like I'm getting into a rut. Decades of walking probably does that, I guess.
>Empty Handed
A couple overdue bad jokes layered over genuine frustration and regret later and I'm outta here. Now where did I park...
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>>54912620
Where are the friends?!
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>>54912649
Wow, I'm really glad you liked her so much. I was worried I was a little too try hard with her weirdness.
>How often do you think she wants to fuck?
Fairly often. Sex is big bonding thing for fae in the setting I based this CYOA on. They mate for life and are really big on sexuality as means to communicate with non-human mates because they're so foreign to humans and it's one of the few things they share in common.
Also, they're reproduction is kind of weird. She said "breed" but with them, "the seed won't take root unless you tend it carefully and with love." So go nuts with your unprotected fairy sex.
>I would appreciate sauce on the pic too.
I'll dig it up, but honestly it's like one of the 3 NSFW Sylvari images out there, so it's pretty easy to find.
>>54912960
It's okay buddy, I'm part of the new wave of cancer, so at least you've got that over me!
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>>54912960
>>54912985
Update when?
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Is there anything more adorable than a yandere symbiote?
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>>54912756
Lindsy
>Play video games against AI
Is she that bad or is she just retarded? Who the fuck plays against AI?! Pass!

Morgana
>Smug rich bitch
Yes, this is good very good!
>Betrays the human race
Fuck the human race!
>Gives money to plebs to help them
Pass....

Rika
>Sidekick and childhood friend
Ehhh...
>Is obsessive about you
>Has a locked filled with pics of you
>Have a shrine dedicated to you
Bueno!!! Best girl so far, but is she the best?

Blair
>Mute
I don't like mute girls.
>Stalks you
That's pretty vanilla, where are the shrines?
>Stalks you very much
If stalking is the only thing she is good for I will pass!

Kurka
>Autist
Aren't we all? Where is the good stuff?
>Wants to monopolize you completely
>Wants to experiment on your body
Starting to get interesting!
>If you flee she will use force to get you back and experiment on you without your consent.
YES! This is how I want to be treated this is what a woman should be like! I need a woman like this in my life! But is she the best?

Titania
>Big bully
Good, very good
>Used to bully you
Yes! Yes!
>No longer bullies you and admitted she likes you
No! No!
>Was hoping you would grow a pair and dominate her
Nooooo!!!!! NOOOOOOO! It was going so well in the start....

Yila
>Half alien half human
Less human is always good!
>Has been serving the roll of waifu and servant to you
Nice
>Nothing except you is holy for her
>You may use her until she is completely broken
Whoever wrote this you have good taste and you know how to make desirable waifus. Not my first pick, but she is still a very solid waifu.

Paris
>Is a weakling and fragile girl
Fuck did I jinx it?!
>Supports you
>Is a harmless yandere
PASS! I guess men with bad taste also need waifus.

Lalu
>Parent-child relation ship with you
Ehhh
>Pretends to be your overprotective mother
Pass!
And best gril goes to Kurka!
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>>54912649
Yup, like I said.
Literally the only thing that pops up on Gelbooru when you search "Sylvari."
>Nevidd Sauce:
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3623291
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>>54912775
Thanks. Hopefully you find it interesting to read later on too.
>>54913059
It might run out slightly before you need it to, but good thinking in general.
>>54913188
>spoiler
Oh, I should probably explain that if it was unclear. One of the things I was experimenting with was optional dialogue. Except for Lost at Sea all the parenthesis notes indicate optional/unlockable dialogue. So you can tell her she looks like a dropout all you want, even without the item, but if you do have it while telling her it also jogs her memory. Thank you for the build, I always love reading them.
Also, I should thank the anons who provided plausible things to ask her for her second row a few threads back.
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>>54912620
Does anyone have the latest version of Necromancer? I checked the pastebin and it has the first iteration of Version 3 instead of the latest.
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>>54913210
NO
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>>54913210
It's pretty hard to beat
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>>54913210

A LOYAL Yandere symbiote
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>>54912904
I missed this.

P.P.
>Not a human
Good, I hate humans.
>Super militaristic just like her race
Looks good, so far.
>Loves human culture
No!
>Her people where going to drive humanity into extinction
YES! YEAS! YESSS!
>Started loving humans and turned against her own people.
NOOOOO!
>Has show you her true form
What is this true form? I NEED TO SEE THAT TRUE FORM!!!! This has the potential to redeem her.
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>>54912985
>Toxin

>Strength
>Tendrils
>Resistant

>Bro
>Sidekick

Wait, sidekick? I have no idea what I'm doing! Just fucking great - now I'm babysitting AND I'm looking after a high school student. I'm only in college, I'm too young for this shit. Well, great power, great responsibility, yadda yadda yadda, let's go punch some bad guys in the face.
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>>54913460
>Tok is a literal race traitor
She's a squid shark, not your waifu.
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/r/ing that one become a dragon CYOA
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>>54913502
She's both, but she probably wouldn't like him if he hates humans.
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>>54913460
She's some kind of shark-squid.
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>>54913460
Get back in the goo farm Woolie.
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>>54912620
4-6 year age difference
Real Sister
First Name (because I'm fucking american)
Protective

>personality traits
Genki, pure, elegant, kind
>physical traits
headpatting, waking up, bapping
>hangouts
Park, bar, outdoors
>physical features
similar height, regular breasts, noble face, regular b&h, normal physique, fair skin, fashionable

>desire
to shape you up
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>>54913547
Nah, if Tok were secretly Woolie, he'd have fighting game lingo woven into his every day sentences and CYOA's.

Matt on the other hand...
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>>54913502
Did someone say Squid shark?
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>>54912756
>>54912904
REMOVE HIDEAUZE
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>>54913502
>Tok is a literal race traitor
Humans are disgusting as a race and I would eradicate them all if I could and replace them with a less disgusting and purer race. Like Twi'leks or Asari. My misanthropy is so strong I am addicted to apocalypse movies where I can watch a lot of people die. It just feels satisfying to watch for some reason. I have thought a long time to make about making a lewd or none-lewd CYOA about eradicating the human race. Like I adore this CYOA (pic related).

>She's a squid shark, not your waifu.
Pics! I need pics!
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>>54913542
>>54913595
I stand corrected!
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>>54913605
Give me lewd parasites and I'll 'destroy' humanity.
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>>54913595
Holy shit is that her? If it is her, her true form more then redeems her.
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>>54913605
I have to at least say congrats on getting even cringier than I thought possible for you.

Good job.
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>>54913595
I'd do her in that form.
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>>54913605
>can't slowly lewd humanity to death
Whats the point of bringing genocide upon people if I'm not rewarded eternally?
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>>54913683
genocide is its own reward
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>>54913631
>Give me lewd parasites and I'll 'destroy' humanity.
If nothing else you are persistent. I will reward that and tell you about my plans for a lewd parasite CYOA. It is on my list on potential projects that I will make as my next CYOA. If I make a lewd parasite CYOA it will either be you joining the cult of Golthuem the giver of eldritch gifts and gaining rituals to summon certain parasites to give them as innocent gifts to people and then lewd shit happens. Or it will be about you becoming the lab assistant of the mad scientist Meridith Vickers from Infected and you will get to bio-engineer your own parasites. Or it can also be a third option, which I will keep secret.
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>>54913636
>That redeems her.
She didn't need to redeem herself in the first place. That's not even her her true form that is just an example of a squid-shark I found that gave me an idea of her people's race.

Honestly the idea in my head was originally more Seath than anything.

>>54913666
Okay calm down Satan.
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>>54913758
>Seath
I'd do her in that form too. I may have been Satan, but don't underestimate the power of love.
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>>54913747
And here I though you were still interested in collaboration, tok...
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>>54913747
I'd like if I became a parasite spawner or created them myself rather than some god doing the work.
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>>54913747
>Or it can also be a third option, which I will keep secret.
Dark or corrupted magical girls who are convinced they are working for justice despite tentacles firing out of where their rainbows used to?
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>>54913758
Honestly Italics, if you can't love her in her squidshark form, then you don't really love her at all. It's basic mathematics.
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>>54913796
If you are the one I think you are let's talk on google drive.
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>>54913876
Okay.
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>>54913190
They're in the update that will never come.
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>>54913595
That is SHIT

Now this is a proper female I would fuck
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>>54913825
If you say so. Hopefully whenever I get around posting the cyoa (proper) where the characters are from with its full lore, psychic abilities, items, and factions y'all like it.

More aliens will be inside of the cyoa proper including: omnicidal robots, fish people, ghost aliens, and others.
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I got a thing for Lichs, any cyos that can scratch my itch for Lich?
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>>54908428
>Training
Personal Combat 3
Tactics 3
Strategy 2
Patrician 3
Plebian 1
>Wives
Barbare, Legios Auxilios
Considering we are in a constant state of war, we should start treating it as a more serious matter. There will be no mercy for those who would undo our great works.

Ken-Eytor, Unseen Blades
Weaken the enemy through sabotage and subterfuge. Expose and strike at weaknesses. Make your foe collapse under their own weight. That is how you win a war without taking major losses.

Bassalia, Syntetica
The squandering of technology on petty politics and greed will no longer be tolerated. With Bass' help, scientific progress will be set back on the proper course: mastering our universe and bringing it to order.

Queen Voudica, Xernite Frontier
Her administrative skills will help where mine lack, allowing me to focus on other areas. Furthermore, her power's emotional bonding effect will be vital to maintaining a stable relationship among the Empresses, ensuring their loyalty to each other and to myself.
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>>54914022
Like, to be, or as a waifu?
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>>54913890
why won't anyone take over production and finish it?
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>>54913088
>>54913167
Page 3?
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>>54914052
Nope, just the two
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>>54912682
>The ladder
>Middle path
>Silver dollar
>Hot bath&Comfortable bed
>A mystery
>Pristine cake
>An apprentice
>A way out
>Lost at the sea

All this in the end was for naught because i was hungry... How tragic. Ahhh i guess i deserve it.

I am not entirely sure what i just played but it really worked up my imagination regardless. This is good stuff, great work Genieanon.
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>>54914023
>Loyalties
Boundless Flame: 3 - Disloyal
I don't much care for primitive practices like ritual sacrifice, or for this talk about culling the weak, or for the purist propaganda. Anyone who is loyal has their place.
Cosmech Faithful: 0 - Revolt
Useless hippies. You can't be friends with everyone.
Crucibii: 7 - Positive
Useful as guerilla strike teams; things smaller scale than the army can handle, but more direct than the Blades can handle. Will want to maintain good relationship.
Xernite Frontier: 12 - Absolutely Loyal
Loyalty like this should be rewarded, not squandered.
Legios Auxilios: 9 - Loyal
We must be ready to do what must be done to win this fight and secure a future for our nation.
Legios Qomani: 7 - Positive
You don't want to make enemies of the people guarding your house.
House Renon: 1 - Revolt
Corrupt authorities are in need of a good cleansing. I might not be marrying Venhalia, but her familiarity with subterfuge would be an asset when dealing with the Blades. I will offer her my support in her reforms.
Unseen Blades: 7 - Positive
It's time to rein in the rogue elements and make the Blades great again.
Orion Empire: 0 - Revolt
Useless separatists. Crush them and take back their resources.
Futuristic Front: 1 - Revolt
While I sympathize with their cause and respect their tenacity, their organization has decided to make themselves a problem for me. A grave mistake.
Solar Lords: 9 - Loyal
The lost children of Earth will be raised up. Holy Terra will be reclaimed and healed, for the first seat of humanity deserves our respect.
Syntetica: 8 - Positive
Once their direction is placed back on track, it is my hope that they will give us the technological advantage over our enemies. And we will continue to have them feed our enemies new, tantalizing technology - with a big 'off' switch under our control.

I seem to have created a secular military dictatorship.
They will follow the man who turns the wheels.
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>>54913758
>Cute Seath-like waifu
Nice now i don't regret taking the box. Does she come with crystalline powers too?
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>>54913747
No Dark general option? I want hordes of lust demons to overwhelm the MG defenders of a world.
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>>54914069
Sweet tooth can do anyone in if they aren't careful. It doesn't have to be all bad though, there is a lot of company in the desert if you know where to look. Thank you for the build.

I guess it might not work well as a standalone story. To know what's going on, see the "Species" description in Dream of Genie for Marid, Juno, and Jann, plus the "Tracker" mundane skill..
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>>54912682
Washed Ashore. Because I dont know if it matters.

MIddle Path. One walks because one must walk. That is all there is.

Silver Dollar. The floods shall return and with it the ghost of fairies past shall tear this desert asunder. Or, at the very least it may grant me a ride from death's shores.

A Hot Bath. Perhaps it is hot enough to burn away the dust of infinity.

A dream. Though in the end it was a mere mirage.

Just water. Perhaps it will wear away this corrosion, if I try long enough. Besides. The hunger wont stop. The more we eat, the stronger it will come back to us.

An apprentice perhaps. After all. Everyone learns from someone else. And everyone is an apprentice to time.

A way out. A mere 20 years. With each passing grain of sand we are all closer.

I came empty handed. And I suppose I will leave empty handed. But then again, doesnt everyone, in the end.?
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>>54914126
Negative inches, then I ask for the mystery box.
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Stock Show is breddy gud
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>>54914247

Is it now?
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>>54914258
Yep. I think it's fun so far.
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>>54914156
>Spoiler
Ohhhh... when i saw the ladder i knew it was related to genie but i didn't drew that much together. Well now that i understand what just happened i guess that it is not so bad, but only because i gave closure to all this pursuit.
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>>54914126
burn a school down once and that's it
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>>54914034
That would be rather rude.
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>>54913605
>50%
>World War III
>Lesson Learned

This might actually happen.
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>>54914371
>Lesson Learned
>This might actually happen.
That's a good joke anon.
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>>54914386
Well, maybe for a few generations. Especially if this time we don't let the losers put up fucking statues for their leaders.
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>>54914185
Just the right amount of melancholy. Everyone has a long journey. Thank you for the build.

>>54914267
Yeah, I probably should have been more explicit. Maybe use a bit more specific terminology. Still, I'm glad that cleared things up.
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>>54914427
>Not wiping the slate blank and personally guiding the renmants in to the new world of magic and wonder
It is like you want things to repeat again, at the very least change the nature of this pointless cycle.
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>>54913605
>99.999%
That leaves 1 in every 100,000. Plenty to rebuild humanity.
>From Heaven
Short, quick, and with minimal damage.
>A Canticle for
At least one other person will want humanity back.

>Rewind Senescence
>Chronicler Blessing
The future needs me.
>Divinely Appointed
Looks cool.
>Nephilim Ancestry
Strength will be the law in the new land should I fail.
>The Mystery Recurs
More magic, more solutions.
>God's Accomplice
Definitely going to be useful in rebuilding.

Bring it on world. I will fix you.
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>>54913284
So, what do you think. The best way to learn magic is? Are any of the roomies likely to be good teachers?
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>>54914478
>magic and wonder
That's not how it works. Dragons don't appear just because humanity died.

Also,
>not allowing the world to pass through a crucible and come out the better for it
PLEBIAN.
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>>54914156
So our character in this one is a Jann? Not sure who one at the end is, if they're even meant to be anything in particular.
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>>54914427
>Erasing history is how you prevent history from repeating itself.
Goddamn, you really have learned nothing from history. With someone like you leading it, they're going to be killing each other again before you even die.
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>>54914501
Who said anything of killing humanity? i am just saying that preserving the old world is a shit idea.
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>>54914528
I'm not saying "erase history." I'm saying "don't let the losers glorify the ones who caused the fucking war in the first place."
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>>54913798
>>54913810
>everyone in my classroom is much happier now that I hid them under city.
>sure they still scream a bit but not as much as the first few weeks!
>they're safe here and they even make their own bodyguards thanks to the tentacles.
>they still scream an awf-
>whats wrong? Is it the tentacles?
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>>54914565
You're saying to destroy monuments like a discount ISIS based on ideology. You're an ideologue, a book burner, a history-eraser. The sort of person who defends these acts and all others of vandalism and violence if they target those you hate. Your type would definitely cause history to repeat itself.
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>>54914515
The Marshal is a Marid whose job it is to prevent regrets from materializing into Jann. The Hostess is a Juno. The Guide is a regret on the edge of actually becoming a Jann, like the Fiancee. Your actions (in place of the Marshal, as she is just one very short staffed woman trying to deal with billions of regrets) determine whether the Fiancee moves Beyond or if she exits the desert with you as a materialized Jann. You're essentially Orpheus, but what species that means is up to you.
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>>54913605
The World Renewed CYOA:
Lethality:
>90% (+2)
Apocalypse Scenario:
>A New Ice Age
New World:
>Forgotten Glory (+5)
Powers and Gifts
>Primordial Lifespan (-1)
>Rewind Senescence (-1)
>Chroniclers Blessing (-1)
>Divinely Appointed (-1)
>The Mystery Recurs (-1)
>Nephilim Ancestry (-1)
>Holy Nourishment (-1)
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>>54914588
"Destroy?" Where the fuck did that come from? History belongs in museums and history books so the future can remember it. The history of traitors, war-mongers, and genocidal maniacs should be kept, yes, but as a reminder of what went wrong - NOT as a rallying cry or a memory of lost glory.
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>>54914427
Dash them against the stones, erase them, their history, their people, their culture. Crush all those who appose you, purge and genocide, all are welcome for you are the victor, and morality is only for those beneath you.
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>>54914643
Nice strawman, there. I literally just said "put them in a museum to remember them" and you keep insisting that I want to erase them.
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>>54914638
I'm not stupid. I know you're celebrating the recent destruction of historical monuments. These are the things you support, and someone as ignorant as you of history shouldn't speak of history books and museums.

>>54914653
Who of your ilk is putting anything in a museum, book burner?
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>>54914655
>Pisonics
>Mutation
>Occultism
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>>54914653
You're talking about crushing the losers, so yeah, it's not a strawman.
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>>54914491
>The best way to learn magic
Well, unfortunately, the best person to learn magic from leaves at the end of the CYOA.

But in terms of roommates, you actually have a few options.

Danae could teach you divine magic is you're patient with her awkward, flustered teaching style.

Olesya would be able to easily teach you classical schools of magic.

Nevidd would be able to teach you more chaotic, fae magic.

Edelmira could teach you some simple profane magic, but not a lot past that.

And of course Taavetti can teach you t̙̼̐̀́h̬͚ͫ̂͊̓̕i̝̜ͬ͞ń͖͓̃͋ͯ̾͞ĝ̰̤̣̩̇̆͞s̩͓ͪ ̷͈͓͍̹̬̻̺́̉̚ņ̤̹̩̙͖̟̿ͪ̚o̢̮͂ ̛͎̳͗ͮ͛͊ͬͭmͦͅo̺͈͈͆͐̃͒ͤ̓ͭr͉͂̏t͈͖ͮͧå̵͖͎̀͊͌̂̊l͇̱̖̩̃ͬ ̴̙̗̍͂̍̆ͅẃ̜̩̜̥̞̍͗ͧ̃a̼̩͕̜ͬ̿s̪͙̫͔̤̿͛͛͌̀ͦ̿͞ ̷͚̟͇͙̾́́̄͊ͩm̢̱̥̘̻̠̃̎e̜̰̠͇̭̳ͤ͠a̪̔̿n̯̤͕͎̝̊͗͋ͭ̂̍t̹͍̎̋ ̤͐ͨt̪̗͓͇̪ͫͬ̏̏̐̆o͚͆͛ ̣͓͗kͦ̈́n̢̞̳͆ͬ͑̈̓̂̄o̦̹̓̈́̿ͨw͍̑ͬ͋̚ ̤͔̟̱̭̺̣͌̒͗͂ͮ̇a͔̖̥͞n̟̹̕ḍ̫̤̳̯̤ͩͯͤ͑͜ ̙̝̻̹̻̍ͭ̎̐̄͗͘ẗ̳͇́̐h͚͎͇̖̜̄ͧ̒ͫi͔̤̱̤͒n̼̳̱ͧͩͯg̤̪͇̣̩ͦ͐̀̄͛́s̩̗̯̼͗ͯ̽͝ͅ ̟ͫ̒̾͛̚ṫ̞̜̫̩̮̈́̊͒̐ͅh͍͙̤̘̋ͬ͂̃̆͊̃a̴̭̰̼͙̼̎͆ͮ͊̎̀t̡̗̙̩̋̓͌́ͣ ̯̰͍ͫ̋͂ͨ̓͐c̵͉̪̪̘̓̏̑̍̏̐ą̞̦͇̹̙̼̍ͩͫ́ṇ̼̂ͩ̐͐̃ ̻̞̯̐͋͌̃̌́̄n̫̗̺̭̹͕͑̑́͟ẻ̺̰̜̦̎ͤvͨ͐e̶͍̝͓̤̒͊ͧr̹̥͍̤͍͎͌̿̓ ͬͯͧb̢͖̽ȇ̆ͮ ̨̥͙̯̗̮̗ͮͨ̚f̬̜̺̘̬̮̐ͪ̀͘o͆̓r̩̪̳̹g͉̣̗͗ͬ͋̆ǫ͚͕̱͔̣̠̏̏͑tt̹͈̋͊͜e̷̻̜̣̜̾͒̓ͣ͐n̘͔̮̬̈̆̐̔͐͟ͅ ̩ͯͣ̈́̒́o̭̳ͫ̀͋n̗̙͇̥͓̺͂̒̋ͅċ̣̩̞̰͚͔ͯ̂̐͗e͕̭̖͛ͭͩ́͒ ̡̯̗̩̹̖̖l̫̥̮͇̦̝͎͛ͦe̮̯̦͎͈̙͗̎͌̓ͨ̽͐a̪̣̺̟ͬ̋́̏ͬ͊r̶̰̠͚͕̿ͬͣ̃͆ͅn͓̠̹̺͙̝ͬ͌e̹͎͖̣̞̣d̥̯̖ͣ̄̒̈̈̍
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>>54914667
IIRC, the original resolution was to move the statues to a FUCKING MUSEUM. That's where I got the idea from. That would be what I support, and (unless I'm very much mistaken) what is happening in many places. And "who of my ilk?" I'd say a bunch of people, and it might help if you would actually ask.

Also, "historical monuments?" Get real. These statues weren't, for the most part, put up immediately after the Civil War - they were put up during the civil rights movement and the era of Jim Crow laws. They were a response by angry racist white people to black people ACTUALLY GETTING RIGHTS, made of cheap materials, and they celebrate the traitorous losers of a war for the freedom of an entire race in one of the largest countries in the world. They were built because the South couldn't handle the idea that they were in the wrong, so they had to build themselves participation trophies. If you call that an important historical monument, then I have a bridge to sell you.

>>54914727
No. No I'm not. I'm talking about preventing the kind of shit we're seeing now from coming to pass.
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>>54914733
Katriel is the best girl! Thanks for making a waifu so bright and bubbly!

Also Katriel, Olesya, and Iines ares my choices.
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>>54914638
>a memory of lost glory.
>Don't celebrate your past, wallow in misery and self-loathing for the rest of your existence instead!
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>>54914714
Dare I ask where that image is from?
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>>54914774
Don't celebrate your past, move forward. Don't celebrate mistakes, learn from them. The past exists only as a tool to teach the future.
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>>54914655
Psionics, Martial Arts, and then Occultism. It's Cultivation time, we Xianxia now!
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>>54914791
A last hurrah before another kind of slavery and the slow, eventual slide towards death is no mistake.
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>>54914778
Bloodborne
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>>54914774
Yeah, I'd say "don't celebrate the enslavement and subjugation of a race that you valued so much you fought a war over" is a valid and reasonable statement.

>>54914791
This guy gets it.

>54914799
If you start talking about "muh globalist conspiracy" enslaving us all, I will find a way to reach through the internet to punch you in the throat.
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>>54914667
There a tons of civil war museums, pick your favorite.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:American_Civil_War_museums_by_state
If you think that a statue in front of a court house or a capital building is required to remember something, then you have an awful memory. You put up a statue in your public square to celebrate someone, not simply to remember them. You can remember someone much more effectively with a chapter in a textbook that millions will read than you can with a statue that only thousands will see. If you really want to go look at a physical likeness of someone from the past, that is what museums are for. A statue up on a pedestal is for people who deserve to be up on pedestals, not those who start wars in order to keep enslaving an entire race of people.
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>>54914763
It's happening nowhere. They're all being smashed or tossed in a warehouse. Your ilk are destroying history because your arrogance over your victory has only grown over time.

They're monuments to a historical event. Ergo, historical monuments. Do you not know what those terms mean?

Also, if you want to whine about 'angry racist white people', isn't it funny that your friends who are destroying history are a bunch of angry racist black people in the BLM group I'm sure you're a massive fan of?

Also you're a huge idiot if you think anyone involved in that war was 'genocidal'. Or that the original cause of war on the north's side was over slavery. Shows what you know about history, book burner. Their original justification was over succession, slavery only became the rallying cry midway through to scare off Europeans. Say what you want about what motivated succession itself, but whatever motivations were there, they weren't what war was declared over.
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>>54914818
Don't celebrate your independence and history, you mean. Instead, hate yourself, like any good yankee does.

And your own paranoia informs what you think I was talking of. No, I meant slavery to you yankees, I mean cultural extinction through assimilation to yankee values and beliefs (And self loathing), and if there's any racial extinction it'll come on the heels of your immigrant policy and the massive surge of hispanics.
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>>54914839
If you think the destruction of physical monuments aren't a prelude to a destruction of textual sources then you're rather new to your book-burning culture.
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>>54914733
What do you think Katriel's likely to do if we don't pick her? She seems... intent.
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>>54914818
No globalist conspiracy, just the simple slavery of "reconstruction" destroying the South's prosperity and putting it in chains so that northerners could profit even more off of the South's labors.
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Hey guys with respect. Move the destruction of the monuments talks to /thrash/ or /pol/. This shouldn't be a topic on /cyoag/.
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>>54914862
Yes, xenophobia and racism is surely the perfect way to go!

>>54914874
>destruction
CITE YOUR SOURCES, NIGGA.

>>54914878
>destroying the South's prosperity
Well, yes, I suppose that because the south's entire economy was BUILT ON SLAVERY, emancipation WOULD damage it a little bit.
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>>54914874
We tore down statues of King George without removing him from our history books.
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>when you hide the post that started the shitfest and don't have to actually read any of it, while knowing others are forced to wallow in it

The best feel.
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>>54914848
>They weren't the reason why war was declared.
>Confederate Constitution is a literal copy & paste of the US constitutions except every state in the Confederacy must be a slave state.
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>>54913190
>>54913890
I always though they where intentionally left blank as they where supposed to insert other anons build into them
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>>54914890
My post didn't even have anything about racism, yankee. Unless you think it's racist to point out how your open borders nonsense is going to kill your people off. Most of it was about how you're trying to erase southern culture and people and make the land a little summer home and appendage for your nation. Quite a bit like how your country treats Hawaii too. If you think all southern culture is just 'xenophobia' then your ignorance really is profound.

>>54914896
You remembered King George as a blighted enemy and a madman, and a measured look at the guy can only be had because another nation exists with no grudge against him.
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>>54914888
Trips confirm. Statue shitposters need to go.
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>>54914922
And risk someone else touching my pure imouto?
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>>54914934
>You remembered King Geoerge as a blighted enemy and madman
Not that Anon, but you're projecting hardcore with that post.
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>>54914904
Read my post. Whatever reasons you will argue for being why the South declared Succession, the reason the North declared war was BECAUSE Succession. Early on Lincoln even gave a speech about how it wasn't over slavery. This is further evidenced that the Emancipation Proclamation happened much later in the war, and how slave states within the Union itself weren't required to free slaves until even further after that.
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>>54914953
I don't think you know what projection is. American education does sell the guy entirely on his negatives.
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>>54914818
>>54914862
We could always go with the Vladimir Lenin approach instead.

>Give me four years to teach the children and the seed I have sown will never be uprooted.

Isolate the next generation and fill them with propaganda. When the old ways die out, the new socialist utopia will rise up.

It's the only way to truly alter the way humanity is built to think.
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Posting my cyoas to get help with the sequel.
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>>54914934
We remember him as being kind of loony in his later years because he was. America might not have become independent when it did if someone who wasn't mentally ill had been on the throne at the time, since a big chunk of the American colonies merely wanted a change in status rather than full on independence. King George being less reasonable than a mentally healthy person was a big part of why history played out the way it did.
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>>54914890
Reconstruction was damaging because it was botched trash run largely by ideologues (a lot of people wanted and worked towards ONLY blacks being in southern governments as a pet project), or people pocketing money (corruption is famously rampant in reconstruction) and a radical congress that wanted to use it as a punishment tool and not a rebuilding too. I actually dislike Booth quite a bit for this last part, because Lincoln, monstrous though he was, tried to prevent this from happening. Sort of a case of slaying a monster and getting a devil in reply, you were better off with what you had.
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>>54914987
It's gonna be about the battle between people with powers and what you encounter during this time.
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>>54914973
I don't think you know what projection is. Who gives a shit about American education YOUR post focused entirely on that Anon and HIS education and IT CLAIMED HE THOUGHT, George was a madman.
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>>54915008
His education as in his nation's education. Do I really have to explain that to you?
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>>54914982
Worked real well for the USSR, huh? But no, they're trying that, but kids rebel against anyone trying to force ideology on them as long as they're allowed an outlet, so it's backfiring a bit.
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>>54915006
Would people prefer they just pick from a few events they encounter, or something more like the Hidden Tournament where you can potentially lose your powers but gain others depending on luck?
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>>54915006
I want to punch a cat demon.
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>>54914875
I gave the "Canon Stamp" to this post >>54897193 because it is a better answer than I could have given.
Though if you'd like to ignore that, then probably stalking with a 75% chance of going yandere if you don't find a way to deal with her.

Also, just realized it never actually got posted this thread, so here it is for anyone who didn't see it yet.

Also, I finally made a drive for anyone who cares:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B2qox--RA0CqY2JnUFFERFRnUnc
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>>54915019
Then you should've correctly said "American education..." then. Its not my fault you're shit at wording things correctly.
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>>54915035
It's just gonna be other people with powers, sorry.
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>>54915028
I don't trust my luck.
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>>54913502
Well he's Swedish, so duh.
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>>54914982
Oh Jesus, I hope you're just throwing those memes and don't actually believe this. Anyone have a Command and Conquer CYOA or at least a Fallout one? Commies need to go and stay go.
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>>54915028
The hidden tournament uses a neat concept but it kills replayability. Consider that before deciding to use it.
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>>54914922
Yes, that was the idea. But the author never did that.
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>>54915041
This is something you could easily expand upon in the future.

Be it more waifus/husbandos, plotlines or maybe that bro 'shaman' finally finding a cure.
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>>54913502
>>54912904
Why would anyone pick P.P
>Shark shaped twin tails.
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>>54914973
I don't know about people from other states, but I was taught that he was fairly capable during his first decade on the throne, leading Britain to victory over France in the Seven Years War. That's why at first people in the colonies honestly thought "King George is a reasonable guy, I'm sure we can straighten this all out if we just explain our grievances to him." The people pushing for independence were only a fringe minority at first. It was just that by the mid 1770s he was going down hill mentally and by 1775 (particularly when he got news about Bunker Hill) he was not in the mood to talk to anyone about anything.
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>>54915006
>battle between people with powers
Guy with infinite infinite pens vs guy with a cellphone that slowly eats pens
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>>54915096
It's like a Jojo battle only the powers were literally scraped from the bottom of the Stand barrel.
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>>54915042
Pedant.

>>54915094
I didn't learn any sort of nuanced approach until college.

That said, everyone seems rather focused on the more irrelevant part of my post (American attitudes towards King George III) and not the main point (Being forced into the US is killing Southern culture.)
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>>54915096
Eat my pen
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>>54915041
he's the crawling chaos, isn't he
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>>54915120
>more irrelevant part of my post
Is was your only justification for why removing some stupid statues will inevitable end in book burning
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>>54913605
If whoever made this is out there, is there any benefit to taking Primordial Lifespan with Rewind? Also what else have you done, this is bretty gue
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>>54915160
It was an example of how having a singular source of history will lead to a corruption of the truth because of the innate biases of the source.
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>>54915041
I hate destiny.
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>>54915179
Oh, so it was just moving the goalpost from book burning to book corrupting, my bad then.
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>>54915076
> bro 'shaman'
Dr. Gabe is a character I've been using in non-CYOA stuff I've made for a long time.
He also serves as a stand in for myself in a lot of ways.
As my go to Mary Sue, he'll probably show up again.
>>54915140
>he's the crawling chaos, isn't he
Very close, but no.
The secret to what Vetty is lies in his name and even less concrete ideas than Lovecraft's creations.
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>>54915215
It was about how destroying one source/recording of history is a bad thing because then you have less sources of history, which as I just said, would give you a biased view of events.

I can see though that you don't really want to argue that point in good faith.
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>>54915120
> I didn't learn any sort of nuanced approach until college.
Then your high school history class wasn't very good. We got walked through the lead up, and a big part of it was a steady ratcheting up of hostilities starting in the aftermath of the Seven Year's War. The cost of war leading to Britain getting harsher and more controlling to try to boost profits from its colonies, which led to unrest in the colonies, which led to a British crackdown, which led to sporadic resistance, which led to more of a crackdown. It was a fairly impartial take on things, we even had as a project a series of in-class debates on whether each side was justified at various points. General consensus was that early on after the Seven Years War the colonists were the unreasonable ones, but as time went on and you got into 1770s that shifted to the British being less reasonable with their responses.

Anyway, as said before, none of this was stopped by taking down statues of King George. Removing monuments from positions of prominence in the public square isn't some sort of slippery slope to book burning and deleting things from history. We still remember King George, we just don't celebrate him.
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>>54915270
>>54915215
Any chance I could get you retards to "argue" in a setting that is actually for american politics or historical revisionism?
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>>54915240
So... Vetty is some sort of original god thing before the new one showed up?
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>>54915307
See >>54915270

>>54915308
I mean, nobody wants to argue the central point so there's not much to gain from debate.
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>>54915240
well i have no idea how you pronounce that shit so the only other idea i have is he's the personification of depravity
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>>54915357
I don't really care. This isn't the place for that kind of debate.

So what's your favorite CYOA?
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>>54915342
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>>54915393
>well i have no idea how you pronounce that shit
"deJvJd"
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>>54915399
Space Refugee.
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>>54915357
Just a little bit earlier in the thread people were literally accusing others of being book-burners because they were okay with moving statues from public squares to museums.
See
>>54914874
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>>54915399
Royal revival.
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>>54915270
Except that people aren't destroying a source/recording of history. They're taking down a statue that someone else put up to celebrate someone. The person is still remembered by both the person putting up the statue and the one taking it down. The sources of information are all still there. It's just that the public square is no longer being used as a platform to say that you should literally look up to this particular dude.
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>>54915403
Uh... He is god's old buddy that likes to be a fucking degenerate in hell?
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>>54914958
1 Power and 3 Perks
>The Answers
>Infinite Lifespan with Eternal Youth
>Regeneration and Immunity to Disease
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>>54915399
This one.
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>>54915518
Not him but that sounds like the First of the Fallen from the Constantine comics.
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>>54915342
That's a very interesting conjecture, I just took it literally and assumed he was a proto/false messia, like some kind of God's bastard
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>>54915442
Nice.
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>>54915399
Dusk City Troubles.
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>>54915399
Time Slow Chill Zone
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>>54915399
Mindslaver

I'm a sucker for CYOAs that give me immortality, waifus, and the ability to control or destroy the world.
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Where's the Neon Genesis Evangelion CYOA you fucking faggot bitches
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>>54915399
Either >>54915630

or hero academy. stuff that I'm actually tempted to write a story for and add fluff to
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>>54915773
I would make it but i can't understand the fucking ending.
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>>54915782
Congratulations you fucking white male
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>>54915782
Everyone gets melted into a gestalt and Shinji gets over his depression. By the time he manges to do that everyone had pretty much gotten used to being stuck in purgatory so they we're all pretty chill about it and congradulated him on finally getting over his teenage angst.

unless you're talking about the Movie, in which case that's a whole different kind of ass fuckery.
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>>54912620
missed opportunity for same age twin.
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>>54915518
>>54915580
>>54915588
Alright, I think I've had my fun...
I'll tell you guys since you're trying so hard to figure it out.
Taavetti's name is Finnish and, as far as I can tell, means "Beloved." Taavetti isn't god, demon, or technically even a "being," in the traditional sense of the word; he is the concept of being loved taken form. Of course, love isn't simple or consistent, so Vetty is only one facet of that concept. He's a personification of the infatuation and base desire that develop into love. His obsession with making others tainted and having them learn things and fix their problems on their own comes from his belief that only once people give in to their base desires, be honest with themselves, and be wise enough to be independent, can they truly appreciate and love him as he loves them.
Or maybe I never came up with a concrete answer for what he is and I'm just pulling this whole thing out of my ass. Who's to say?
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>>54915041
I'm going with Katriel, Olesya, and Iines.

If Katriel was not a heavenly creature I would strongly suspect that she was yandere. That kind of obsession appeals to me. Clearly, she's the best girl.

Olesya seems like the comfy choice. When I'm on Earth I'd spend my time reading and using the internet at her place. It would be a place to relax if Katriel gets to be too much.

Edelmira isn't my type and Taavetti looks like a flaming faggot so I guess I'll be babysitting Iines when I do something bad.
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>>54913210
>>54913017
>>54913095

Gwenom Cyoa when?
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>>54915952
That's shit, my man :^)
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>>54915630
Isn't this a worse version of another one? Where you're a space renegade/escapee
Not much worse, both are good, but worse aesthetically for sure.
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>>54915952
What about Gwenompool?
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>>54915986
If it is then it's at least the older one. that thing is one of the oldest cyoas you'll find before it all devolves into "which button do you press" images from 2005
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>>54915986
Most Wanted?
thats a fair bit newer then refuge
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>>54915986
Space Dust has a refugee/merc add-on. Better weapons and armor choices but the companions are kind of boring comparatively.
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>>54916009
> "which button do you press"
What do you mean by that because I always thought every cyoa even the first ones where like that
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>>54915041
Heaven-danae
Earth- Sylvain -but can I visit the others/have them over regularly? They seem lonely & nice... Can Olesya even go anywhere?
Hell- Edelmira, Taavetti’s close tho
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>>54916093
They're saying that was the earliest form.

>>54916075
I think it was most wanted. Yeah i guess I ought've said 'better refugee' rather than 'refugee's worse'. And refugee still holds up today even if there's a better one.
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I don't think I'll ever be able to understand why people are so into waifus, or ZBG's writing.
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>>54915994
Is it weird if I like the idea of a QT girl who has a symbiote creature, and they're best buds and act like they're BFFs, getting into slice of life shenanigans while fighting crime at night?
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>>54916314
You basically just described the Gwenompool issue.
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>>54914034
Yes why won't you?
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>>54915845
Can I make tender love to "her" anyway? Btw love your stuff.
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>>54916361
Was it really only one issue?

That's just ripe for a series. Maybe I should write a script to get the idea out of my head and down solid
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>>54916398
>Can I make tender love to "her" anyway?
Of course.
Why would I make a Waifu you can't make sweet, imaginary woopie to?
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>>54915567
Architectural Style: European Historic
Apartment Location: Penthouse Suite
Local Businesses: Uncle Icky's Takeout, The Heretic's Library, Abandoned Store, BlockBuster LLC, Gunrunner's Depot, Bar Between Floors, Bodega de Demonio, Irregular Grocery, The Pawn Shop, Crazy Dan's Supplies
Furniture and Appliances: Painter's Memento, Watchful Moose, First-Aid Kit, Sun-Kissed Cabinet, Vending Machine, Telepathic Landline, Ex-Tenant's Journals
Female Tenants: Hallway Wanderer, Ancient Witch Irina, The Gardener, Smug Hikkikomori, Charm-Giving Lass, Apartment Maid
Inhuman Tenants: Scarlet Youth in Paint, Yarn Spider's Nest, Bathtub Mermaid, Arm in the Basement, Apartment Gargoyle, Demon Falfarafax, Stair Standing Stones, The Changeling, Basement Apparition
Male Tenants: Bearded Chronicler, Apartment Janitor, The Housefather, Painter's Apprentice, Delving Adventurer,
Paranormal Phenomena: Your Secret Admirer, Unremarkable Jack, The Stairwell Window, High Five Hands, Bashful Haunt, Outdoor Courtyard, Odd-Jobs Listing, The Infinity Line, The Illustrated Stalls, The Memory Gallery
Hostile Phenomena: Message on the Wall, Stairswitching, Courtyard Chapel, Recurring Suicide, Indoor Livestream, Phantom Passenger,
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>>54912756
>Aliens are able to travel across the galaxy
>Just doesn't build their own Hive World on other isolated planets
>Has to invade specifically.
This is some holes in the lore of the cyoa.
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>>54916445
i feel ripped i thought vetty had a penor
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>>54916314
>kissformer
That's a deep cut, who the fuck is going to get a Kiss Players reference?
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>>54914958

7 Perks, easy!

1. Get Buff/Fit
2. Learn 5 Languages Instantly (with accent)
>French (Breton)
>Russian (St. Petersburg)
>Italian (Veneto/Venice)
>Japanese (Osaka)
>Cantonese (Hong Kong)
3. Choose 3 Trade Skills
>Carpentry
>Architectural visualization/Draftsman (that counts yeah?)
>Automotive Mechanics/Maintenance
4. Doubled Lifespan
5. Disease Immunity/heal quickly
6 & 7. $5,000/week, $1,000,000 in the bank

Live my life traveling and fucking, no worry of STDS or like Malaria. Design high end homes and work as a translator for foreign investors.
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>>54916578
>had a penor
...He does? What do you think that bulge is? A hamster he's got trapped in his pants?
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>>54916610
richard gere is that you?
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>>54916424

>Maybe

You should, that ain't no kind of question homie, you SHOULD write that shit, because it's brilliant and ought to be done if only for it's own sake.

And you're the one to do it!
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>>54916610
you referred to vetty as her so i was confused.

i like penis.
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>>54916623
I dunno man, that's how fanfics start, one day you have a nice idea for a script, next thing you know, you wrote the longest work of fiction ever.
These dark arts are better far from people as incline to escapism as your average /CYOA/ user
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>>54912960
I think you're a good author
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>>54916619
That was a gerbil.
Get your butt rodents right, Anon!
>>54916678
Oh, I gotcha. No Taavetti is your typical waifu(male), complete will top tier trap cock and mouth watering, demonic boypussy.
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>>54916832
sweet, i love trap cock and boypussy
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>>54916832
Is Sylvain dominant or submissive?
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Put penis in symbiote
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>>54917029
Go to bed, Symbio.
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>>54916832
Have you considered making a small footnote on your CYOA's about lore and the setting in them? I really like how you expand the world and characters afterward by answering questions. I think you could make a really good non-waifu CYOA.
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>>54915986
No way, space refugee blows that one out of the water.
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Anti-Venom is best Venom
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>>54917080
I swear to God I'm not even the one posting right now. I'm playing a shitty mobile game instead of going to bed.
>>54917113
I'm pretty partial to Agent Venom myself, but Anti-Venom is second best.
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>>54917018
Sylvain is switch.
Whether he wants to top or bottom is almost entirely based on how you react to his teasing and flirting.
Also the exact cocktale of narcotics in his body at the time can greatly influence how he wants to handle you in bed.
>>54917110
People have mentioned that and I've tossed the idea around my head, but I worry I wouldn't be able to figure out all the answers I've given over all these months.
>I think you could make a really good non-waifu CYOA.
That's what Guardian Spirit and my planned Mad Scientist CYOA are going to be.
Unfortunately, the lack of waifus may be exactly why a Guardian is taking so fucking long.
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>>54914294
'tis more offensive to leave it unfinished
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>>54914371
only in the age of eugenics
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>>54917176
Stark said yes, right?
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>>54913605
>possible to combine 50% with forgotten glory
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Remind me again what your favorite industry to be a tycoon of would be in a ringworld.
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>>54916565
Earth is a pretty neat place to invade if you ask me, it has trees and stuff.
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>>54912637
>Custodian
>Magic

Hopefully the Custodians will welcome a human with magic, given they're okay with angels and mages and welcome anything that gives humans an edge. I'll take a job in R&D and work on blurring the line between magic and tech. Staying the fuck away from the friendly or neutral nonhumans and befriend any good mages I find. To the ferals, pic related.

>The world outside don't like us much,
>'Cause they ain't got our classy touch,
>But they ain't good enough to breathe,
>This towns good air we make 'em leave.
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>>54917305
>implying he has a choice
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>>54917361
Mining so i can send people to space australia to get shiny rocks while they fight giant spiders.
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>>54917361
I want to be the Tycoon of the shipyards.
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>>54917361
Some sort of vacation resort.
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>>54917419
>>54917464
>>54917570
Interesting.
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>>54912756
>None of Italics cyoas will be games.
>None of your favorite authorfags cyoas will be games.
>None of the authorfags will be in charge of a video games story and writing.
>When video games are currently shit.
It hurts bros.
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>>54912682
It made me sad and I don't entirely "get" it, but I did enjoy reading it.
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>>54916832
Hey ZBG, the guy who made the Vetti, Viddy, Ioan build here. I thought about my plan a little more. Would Ioan make a good ruler of Heaven? I'd wanna install someone good in there so I don't have to deal with bickering celestials.

Hell I'm not sure what to do with besides exploit it for power. Could you explain how it works more?

And does Earth have anything useful besides tech and fae? It at least has a top tier waifu.
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>>54915240
Mary Sue or not, I don't give a shit. he is 110% bro. Willing to forgive me for killing him 17 times? Some people can't even let go of single occasions.
Also outsmarting Taveeti is a big bonus.
I hope he succeeds in restoring my soul into one superguy, and I can start paying him back.

>>54915041

Pure path
>Danae
>Olesya
>Ilnes
It think as a team, we could be a good influence in Ilnes. Becoming an archmage is a neat bonus as well.

Debauchery path
>Katriel
>Sylvain
>Edelmira/Taavetti

Depends what are you preferences at living
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>>54915041
Paste-anon get this in the pastebin please
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>>54912960
>hasn't made a CYOA in months
>butt hurt people think he's no longer active
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>>54918151
>Not included into "good authors that left"
>"That's because you don't do stuff anymore"

???
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>>54917895
>And does Earth have anything useful besides tech and fae?
If earth actually had fae it would be kind of a nicer place
>Inb4 all fae are edgelords
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>>54917865
>>54912682
The endless sea is some sort of underworld, or hell? Its endless suffering. I'm sure that the author probably drew from some mythology for the three people you meet. You're not able to leave the underworld once you eat it's food, yeah? I'm not entirely sure if it is a hell, maybe a purgatory. Maybe some symbolism for baggage. I dunno what the inhuman stuff is either. Lots of unexplained, but one the best CYOAs I've ever read, your writing Is amazing. Do you have a name?
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>>54914900
It is good. The best feel is when you filter images or phrases the shitposters use so they're hidden the moment you enter the thread.
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Update of Journey CYOA (I added offensive abilities to the Magical Drawing Power, I modified a little bit the Smart Compass and I erased the concept of the 200 other players)
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>>54918258
This might answer some of your questions
>>54914156
>>54914606
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>>54915399
Probably Black and White, or Hero Academy/RWBY for RP reasons.
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>>54918201
Sorta but every interaction would be a bigger roll of the dice than usual I would think.
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>>54918403
I generally enjoy fantasy cyoas more than any other type, but I'm finding it a bit hard to get into this one. With the power options it feels a bit like the player is given a strong ability that is then greatly limited in the scope of its usefulness, and with low potential for power growth.
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>>54912843
>Crushing Anons hopes and dreams that he had with his childhood friend and waifu.
Is there no greater tragedy inducing event that I love? Hold my beer, /cyoag/
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>>54914933
Strange land
Adventure and supernatural
weapon, compendium and fellowship
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>>54912985
Great. Now I have to add to the list of waifus to choose from,symbiote waifu. Maybe I can combine it with my robo waifu?
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>>54918403
>them gimped ass stand powers with literally 0 percent chance to grow or find new unique uses
Lame.

But I like everything else
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>>54914958
7 perks

1&2: 5000 a week and 1 mil in the bank
3: Get fit
4: 5 languages ( French, Spanish, Japanese, Mandarin and German)
5: 3 instruments ( guitar, piano and violin)
6: lifespan doubled
7: 3 trade/ craft skills ( painting, automotive mechanics and architecture)
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>>54914022
Limbo Roommate will have a lich; I already have the setting & more figured out. Also, einherjars.

But, only if you vote!
http://www.strawpoll.me/13707742
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>>54914022
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>>54918657
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>>54918567
Each power offers virtually unlimited possibilities according to your creativity and your imagination. This is more powers to consider as HxH hatsu than One Piece Devil Fruits. Limited functions but which can be used in an incalculable number of situations according to your intelligence.
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>>54918403
Ayyy, I was hoping to see an update this morning. I'm glad you removed the 200 players, the more I thought about that the less I liked it.

>Power
Spiritual Music

>Gifts
Adventurer Mantle
Tattoo of the Wanderer
Belt of Forgetfulness

>Location
Ashen Islands

>Quest
The Thing in the Shadow
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>>54918609
I hate you.
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>>54918609
Stop being spooky.
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>>54918440
That may be true, but imagine the greentext stories.
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Is it just me, or is time magic completely OP in every way?
>>54918403
You claim you can't rape cute girls with time magic, but it's a lie. Savestate, rape girl, reset. No harm done.
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>>54918657
>Grimoire
Promraen Caro

Best book

>Spells
Tier 4- Cure Injury, Inflict Paralysis, Reinforcement, Gentle Repose, Create Abomination
Tier 3- Natural Weapons, Cure Disease, Warp Flesh, Enhanced Senses, Alter Appearance
Tier 2- Create Life, Rejuvenate, Mass Growth, Craft Plague, Create Skinwalker, Alter Age
Tier 1- Potion of Khizaz

Make life, improve existing life, do a bit of healing. Maybe that will excuse my constant experiments.

>Companions
None, trade for +2 spells

I can make my own friends. Literally!

>Perks
Surgeon (free)
Silver Tongue
Apothecary
Blood Crafter (20)

Pretend to be a normal healer. No spooky here, no sir.

>Drawbacks
Single-Minded (23)

All green, all day.

>Enemies
Abholean Witch (38)
Psychotic Count (42)
Wild Elf Tribe (45)

It's not immoral to experiment on someone who attacked you first, right?

>Minions
Slyther (36)
Skinwalker x2 (18)
Created Life x2 (4)
Groundskeeper (2)
Slaves x2 (0)

Just a start. My slaves will be treated well and buffed up by some green magic, at least.

>Location
Southern Teb'Hai

>Lair
Isolated Castle

>Factions
Loose association with the Fleshweavers

Haha, time for science!
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>>54909458
Sauce?
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>>54916565
the same force that attracted the yanderes to the MC must've attracted the aliens to him as well
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>>54912946
>says it's not inspired form EB
>people will call it a EB rip-off due to the psychic powers and aliens
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>>54919023
>Earth has Harem MC Aura making it the target of multiple alien space empires even if it has nothing of real worth
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>>54919047
They're here to mine harem-protagonistium, the densest material in the known universe.
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>>54919023
Aren't majority of them attracted to the MC because they saved them and proved to be a beast with psychic powers.

Aliens need to get off Earth. It is a Human planet.
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>>54918578
How did you manage to pick the literal worst combination of perks? The perks are great in this but seriously

>Get fit when full body customization is an option
>Learn only 5 languages/3 skills when perfect memory is an option
>Lifespan only doubled when eternal youth is an option
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>>54912756
gotta go with the mad science option for SCIENCE
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>>54912904
>Not Ikeman

dropped
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>>54918609
You push that too hard and people are going to vote Tok just to spite you. You are already winning, just lay off a bit.
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>>54918872
>>54918808
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>>54919128
Who?
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>>54919146
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>>54914022
I might be working on a cyoa that involves you becoming either a Lich, Vampire, or Lycanthrope.

And by "working on" I mean in limbo.
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>>54914655
top three
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>>54913088
The HFB gets a bonus.
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>>54914655
>You gain moderate aptitude in ONE of your choices
Cursed it is. Also make mad science a thing I guess. No third option.
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>>54915056
Oh, I tried to do a Command and Conquer CYOA. A Tiberium one. But I wasn't satisfyed with the quality and abandoned it.
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>>54915056
Not Fallout, but close.
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>>54919507
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I wish I didn't have good morals, so I could go off killing bandits and raping cute girls with Flatty
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>>54919541
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>>54913088
>Body Enhancement
Mech body
>Profession
Sec-Spec
>Alter Ego
Netrunner
>Specials x2
Renown (because anyone can be renownd in their profession)
Assisted A.R
>Connections
Reika (physical security)
Trixie Starr (information broker and gunrunner)
Mist (informant)
Juno Young (cyber security)
Bumblebee (Armourer)
S112-C9 (Informant and friend, has a photographic memory)
Lara Shinozaki (My boss)

In this city security of corporate property isnt respected. An i even i have my doubts about how far it goes. But there is one thing that holds true. If someone invents something, they deserve the reward. Its by this that progress jumps ahead. But theres a balance to be struck. Providing that balance is me, head of information security, a fancy term for a corporate detectice, i track down any leakes before they happen. My head of physical security is Reika, my right hand woman. Juno heads up network and cyber sec. We all work for Shinozaki Genetics. My personal mission is to aquire the best bionic enhancements and genetic enhancements into one package as the pinnicle tech is spread between each of the two. Weapons and such are modded by bumblebee, anything not exactly common i go to Trixie for. Bees always asking me to bring her back parts.

The weapons i use are a wrist mounted auto shotgun. Armed with flachette ammo with 3 destinct flachette penetrators and a 3 round burst it can be quite accurate. Its equipped with a casette band, which can cycle the ammo to allow me to change on the fly. I also have HE shotgun shells for anti material jobs. It has a removable silencer which vastly increases its length, so i generally only use it on missions.

My other weapon is a simple pistol. The Beretta M3000 comes with the -never bettered- fixed barrel. Its slide has micro friction dampeners which have to be replaced ever 1000 rounds, giving it a much reduced recoil. Its caliber is 10mm and can pack 15 rounds in a mag. These 10mm rounds have reduced signiture powder.
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>>54917361
some sort of elevated system of skyrails, sightseeing and travel in a beautiful mothod of transportation
gonna have to travel the ring and might not want an actual ship for it
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>>54913605
>Lethality
99%
>A. Scenario
From Heaven
>To the New World
A Canticle For

>Gifts
Primordial Lifespan
Chronicler Blessing
Divinely Appointed
Holy Nourishment
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>>54914093
Where can I find the NSFW version?
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>>54920029
There's no such version.
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>>54912682
I don't really get it but once again yours looks infinitely better than anything I've made, with far better content too. It hits me just in the right place, some sort of nostalgia mixed with heartbreak and a feeling of impotence and worthlessness.

The intro reminds me a lot of the Lonesome Road DLC which was 9/10.
>Horse with no name
>Middle path
Mostly because I can't really "sympathize"/self insert with the two other options.
>Old hat
>Hot bath
>A Mystery
Yeah sorry, here's where it breaks again. I just can't insert with choices that assume I've lost someone, or cared for someone.
>Just water, thanks
If I'm right that this is limbo, indulging isn't a good thing. Being stuck in seemingly forever, and to think back on luxury? No good.
>Do you recognize it [the wedding cake] ?
God damn you're good.

I honestly chose this before reading the part under "With ordinary pebble" or remembered the first narrator's advice. It just seemed the right thing to choose.
Having your earlier choices interact with later choices this way is superb.
>A Droput + With Old Hat
>A Way Out
I won't be able to leave. Not for a long long time.
>Lost at Sea
And again it happens. Sorry I can't insert into these types of options. Even if the two other options are superbly written, I just can't feel the same way.
I can't leave. Maybe never.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9cUYMvcBmQ&
Sounds like I'm in limbo. The only way to escape is to let go, right? You'll never find your lost love, you'll never feel better for killing a man, and if you don't know what you're missing you can't let it go. You'll be stuck. It's not like it's human nature to let go, we're surprisingly stubborn.
I mean, both Silver Dollar can refer to Charon and the River of Styx, and the Ordinary Pebble can refer to Chloë eating a fruit when she was in Hades.

If humor cyoas are king, melancholy cyoas are God.
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>>54920029
There is none, it's a DLC for the 'SFW' version.
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>>54920185
>>54920237
Then what is even the point?
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>>54920262
The printed word doesn't give you a boner?
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>>54920312
It can, if it's better formatted and written.
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>>54914958
>1 power and 3 perks

The Warehouse
Learn 5 languages instantly
Immunity to disease and can regenerate limbs and heal quickly
Income of $1,000 per week

I'll go full Breaking Bad, but instead of cooking meth, I'll be closest thing to the real black market.
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>>54914958
Can I buy people with the warehouse? It's also a bit oddly worded, it seems like the mysterious corporation is paying for everything I want, but I'm not sure
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>>54920324
Let me see it.
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>>54919065
Made me chuckle appreciatively. Good one.
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>>54919534
Be the cute girl and get raped by flatty and problem solved.
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>>54912682
I don't understand this cyoa.
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>>54918984
No really, or not more than the other powers.
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>>54917361
Food. Someone has to manage the xeno ingredients, test them for human consumption, sell them to the masses, etc. I wonder how certain dishes would taste when made in space too! Mochi pounded on the moon. Coffee brewed at zero G. I'm bored with Earth food anyway. Send me to the stars!
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>>54919787
That's not how Renown works you nigger.
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>>54917361
How the hell did nobody mention the SCIENCE conglomerate yet? We'll do !!SCIENCE!!
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>>54921296
Go away Weyland.
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>>54921296
>How the hell did nobody mention the SCIENCE conglomerate yet?
Because I just got here.

>>54917361
"SCIENCE!"
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>>54921296
Science is incompatible with space travel. We will will only ascend into the stars once mankind has abandoned its wicked ways and devoted themselves to the Lord. Then He will make mankind His messengers and we will travel the universe through His guidance.
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>>54921317
Sounds more like Cave Johnson to me.
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>>54921348
I prefer the pagan Rocket Rider's Prayer.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3WLE6FpAcVs
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>>54920324
Go hog wild and write something that's better formatted and better written.
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>>54917361
And now tell me what the worst kind of people would be you're willing to accept money from in order to make it a reality.
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>>54921921
dark side academy city is fine- maybe cut the line at obvious child slave rings or something
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>>54921921
I don't get it. Give me my money for a ringworld lab, I don't care what you do to african children in your spare time or for business reasons if you pay for my research.
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>>54921921
Doesn't matter, I'm stripping the company and selling it to the gooks.
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>>54912682
What other stuff have you done? This is really nicely done.
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>>54921921
I would accept money from - Allah forgive me for uttering this word - a Jew.
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>>54922230
You seem to be a man of logic.
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>>54922276
but if you do not accept money from the jew, then the jew will continue to have the money.
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>>54922276
>feels guilty over saying the word of his hated enemy
>doesn't feel guilt after accepting money from said enemy
No logic present.
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>>54919507
>>54919524
>>54919541
>>54919553
I really,really like this Cyoa,simple but fun!
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>>54914987
>>54915006
very good shit. looks nice, cool options, comfy as fuck. 10/10.
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>>54922033
He's a good guy and doesn't need his dick sucked by you.
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>>54915482
People die, anon.
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>>54915845
He sounds like a retarded and naive college girl.
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>>54918475
If you try to make anons miserable they're just going ot hate your shit.
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>>54922792
>Complimenting good work is bad now
ok
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>>54919331
>One thing
wow impressive
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>>54912985
this is one of those shitty cyoas where you need to know a ton of stuff that isn't explained in the cyoa before you understand what the choices do
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>>54922956

All you need to know is that Venom is worst choice and will leave you and Carnage is best choice and has the most stable relationship and Toxin is good too I guess
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>>54923216
that doesn't tell me shit, you're an idiot
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>>54922956
I love it. I love that one of the option has only one weakness and it's the same weakness that all matter has.
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>>54923238
>that doesn't tell me shit, you're an idiot

I just told you what symbiote not to pick and which ones to pick ,you dummy
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>>54923321
yes, but that's worthless information since i still don't know what the fuck is going on and ultimately what i imagine is the only thing that matters in this imagination game
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>>54923339
Look.
Pick Carnage.
Then pick the companion with the big titty, the Black Kitty.
Then fuck if I care what else ya pick.
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>>54923371
you really are a fucking idiot
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>>54915056
I have a Fallout: China CYOA in the works that'll come after I remake some old ones with less videogame-y and more original ideas.
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>>54923371
I think you're misunderstanding. That anon is saying the cyoa has no context unless you're familiar with the Marvel Universe and some of it's niche properties (the symbiotes). This is an issue for pretty much any cyoa that's based on an existing property, it's appeal is limited to people who are already fans of said universe. Authors also fall into the trap of not giving necessary information to aid in an outsider's understanding simply because they don't acknowledge someone might be reading it who's not a fan, as they are.
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>>54923339
>yes, but that's worthless information since i still don't know what the fuck is going on and ultimately what i imagine is the only thing that matters in this imagination game

Okay then I'll make your build for you

You seem pretty gay so your Symbiote will be scream

Your powers will be

-Tendrils
-Natural weapons
-Invisible

Your companions will be

-Henchman
-Bro
-Scientist

Your drawback will be Menace

See now I dub thee Gay community now go out there and do whatever you gays do for attention, Other than molest children and spread aids
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>>54923450
see >>54923339
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>>54923455

Well stop being a dumb nigger and read the wiki, That's what I do when I want to know about a series I never heard of before, It's spiderman for goodness sake have you not seen at least one movie or episode of it?
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>>54923495
that's information external to the cyoa
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>>54922956
>>54923339
>>54923441
I dunno, I thought I did a fairly good job explaining everything I needed to.

What do you feel is missing? Anything you think I could do to improve it?
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>>54923495
Just because you're a fan of something doesn't mean that everyone else is.
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>>54923517
basically i have no context for what the basic powers do, so power upgrades seem pointless

i already have "shapeshfting", but i have no fucking idea what that means for example
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>>54923517
Not that anon, but I think it could have used a bit more explaining concerning what the symbiotes actually are, as well as why they look like Spider-Man and give you his powers. As it stands, it simply says "here's this thing, it can do these things". No real context for someone who's not Spidey-fan, although I'd say power fantasies are universally appealing if you can ignore details like "why do I like that menace"

Not that I think you should change anything, unless you planned on doing a huge update or something. It's fine as is
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>>54923441
>needing context when one of the options is a woman with big titties
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>>54923569
I just figured by context of the advanced shapeshifting and other listed powers, it wouldn't be too difficult to figure what you can do. I'll definitely consider updating it to be a little more clear though.

I think that's not a problem of not knowing the source material, rather just shapeshifting being a pretty broad power set.
>>54916809
Thank you kindly anon.
>>54918151
I just been real busy with schooling and work. Haven't had much time to work on MECHFU
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The Marvel universe isn't some niche fucking setting. Just because some under-rock-kin plebs aren't familiar doesn't mean it's necessary to explain basic shit.
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>>54923517
You didn't explain why is Carnage best symbiote.
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>>54923511
Here nigga 54923649
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>>54923637
>I just figured by context of the advanced shapeshifting and other listed powers, it wouldn't be too difficult to figure what you can do. I'll definitely consider updating it to be a little more clear though.
well as it is i have no fucking clue

i imagine that you can extend and deform your limbs and body while covered in symbiote form, which seems to be the reasonable extent of the power from the text

except the cyoa also implies you can shift your human body but gives no straight answers about that
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>>54923658
Nigga fuck >>54923649
Fuck why can't the other guy do his damn fucking job?
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>>54923517

I liked it but the symbiotes dont seem too different from one another for the most part. Maybe give them some unique powers? idk what, i dont read spiderman
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>>54923658
Nice link cunt.
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>>54923682
Suck my clit fag
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>>54923644
Content should stand on it's own.
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>>54923644
Anything outside the CYOA isn't actually in the CYOA.
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