CYOA Thread - /cyoag/ - Suicidal Immortals Edition

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>>54414066

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>>54414083

>>54414066
The box is a chair.

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>>54414108

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>>54414131
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>>54414116
What did he mean by this?

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>>54414148

First for "wipe off your tears, Tok, you slipped and failed but I still believe in you and your lewds".

>>54414371
But you're the seventh post anon.

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>>54399251

Corrected and Updated Build!

Madira-Hamsi

>Time and Place to be Determined by RP World
>Figure of Legend
120
>Wizard
85
>Memory of the Ages Level 0
85
>Gift of Gab
80
>Polyglot
75
>Commander
70
>Map Maker
65
>Mage Eye (Wizard)
65
>Strength & Speed Level 2
57
>Reflexes & Reaction Level 2
49
>Impervious Level 3
31
>Regeneration Level 3
22
>Non-Reactor
20
>Endurance Level 2
12
>Super Senses Level 2
8
>Diet Level 2
3
>Sanitary Convenience Level 1
1
>Iron Gut
0
>Beauty
-2
>Divination, Telepathy, Stormsage, Defiling, Compulsion, Master of Motion, Disjunction Major
-37
>Teach Defiling Minor
-39
>Godslayer (Upgraded)
-42
>Personal Omni-Wear
-43
>Rage
-38
>Cursed by the Spirits
-18
>Nemesis
-10
>The Myth Maker
>A Dark God
>Sorcerer Supreme
>An Empire Eternal
>Multiplayer Build
0

A walking plague! A scourge upon the world! Even the spirits of the Earth strive against her! But she can be placated! Mortals' time in this world is short and their brief lives all that they have that's truly valuable. Sacrifice them to Madira-Hamsi! Join her armies! Build her pyramids of skulls and spread her legend far and wide! When the world has embraced the savage beauty of destruction and the blood flows like rivers in celebration her eternal rule, then she will take her place as the one true Goddess and elevate the world with her as she begins true ascension to unknown heights!

I could write up a Nemesis myself. But if a shared world gets started with the final version, then maybe someone will want to be my Nemesis instead.

Would kind of like to have Binding and Beastmaster Major magic schools, but I just don't see it happening. I think a pretty fearsome build regardless though.

>>54414403
You have to read into it a bit, but the worst thing about this build (for the wellbeing of the world) is actually that you're going to teach thousands of humans defiling magic. (Which, by the way, will let you earn points to buy one of those two schools you want, once you complete the quest).

>>54414108
>Yuki Onna
for them dick-sucking lips and storm magic
>Nimue
to hopefully learn more magic; maybe recover some lost texts too if I figure out some way of explaining it to people without any mention of demons being involved

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>>54413315
Do the Elf Femdom CYOA Tok. DO IT!

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Pokemon Personified Plus+ CYOA when?

>>54414533
Yeah. Do this, but remove the femdom.

>>54414567
Skelebro I admire your tenacity and vigilance but lets be honest here, if PPP+ gets release, it won't get any replies.

>>54414466

Yep! They will spread pestilence, fear, and corruption across the world. With thousands of them that can turn up anywhere, it will be hard to stop. Certain areas may be cleansed for a time, but the threat of corruption will be ceaseless:)

>>54414567
How the fuck do my niggas SaltedPotatoes and Fatposter get banned, but you slide by on your bony ass?

>>54414642
It depends on if he gets reported and how the janny/hotpocket feels. I didn't get banned for UP posting.

So did tok meltdown after failing to deliver or something

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>>54414732

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>>54414748

>>54399251
>Time Period
1650ish

>Position
Dropped In

>Appearance
Me, but fit

>Fate
Immortal Wanderer (90)

>Fate Modifier
Metahuman (70)

>Mental Upgrades
Gift of Gab (65)
Map Maker (60)

>Supernatural Gifts
Born in the Water (59)

>Physical Upgrades
Strength and Speed II (53)
Reflexes and Reaction II (41)
Impervious II (45)
Regeneration III (40) I'm just rounding up from 4.5 on this one
Non-Reactor (39)
Endurance II (35)
Super Senses I (32)
Diet II (30) Rounding up form 2.5
Iron Gut (29)
Beauty (27)

>Magic
None

>Items
Wanderer's Journal (24)
Personal Omni-Wear (23)
Personal Omni-Weapon (22)

>Pocket Dimension (12)
Home Luxury Pack (2)
Cooking Suite Upgrade (0)

Preliminary build. I'll probably re-do it after really reading through this. For now, I'm just a superhuman pirate.

>>54414734
Naw, too much criticism, not enough masturbation makes Tok a melancholic perv.

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>>54414758

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>>54414769

>>54414734
Yes, he said he's never making OC again.

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>>54414780

>>54414533
Srry anon, Im not gonna do a CYOA anyone wants or requests ever again. I will do what I want to do when I want to do it.

>>54414371
>you slipped and failed but I still believe in you and your lewds.
Thanks anon, but I honestly don't know if I slipped or what the fuck Eronomicon was about. Like I entered a CYOA contest on reddit with Eronomicon. Since they would give the winner 25$ on steam and If I would win I would recycle that money to make my own lewd CYOA contest with the 25$ on steam as a price pool. I posted Eronomicon and on only 1 day I am close to having the most votes in the contest. I checked the other CYOAs and they are pretty good and all I get is praise on reddit. Like if everyone thought Eronomicon was bad, I would think it was bad. But why are people loving it on reddit and people hating it on 4chan? It's just beyond mind boggling to me.

>>54406541
I fail to see how asking for more corruption options is 'ruining your lore and artistic integrity.' It's asking for more variety in the same framework.

>>54414838
>Srry anon, Im not gonna do a CYOA anyone wants or requests ever again
So expressing fake enthusiasm is a good way to get you to stop making something in the future? Helpful knowledge.

>>54414838
>Srry anon, Im not gonna do a CYOA anyone wants or requests ever again. I will do what I want to do when I want to do it.
Well that's just great. We broke Tok. Wasn't this whole thing just a shit show?

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>>54414760
Cool! Always nice to see that people have such different builds.

Attached is the first five text descriptions. I don't intend to do the entire thing piecemeal, but I have not written character descriptions before for a CYOA, so would love to hear in what ways they suck before I do the other 30.

>>54414838
>But why are people loving it on reddit and people hating it on 4chan?
You're still using the "But reddit!" argument? Reddit has no standards. Reddit has a community where criticism and speaking your mind is forbidden. The only the reddit will criticize you on is if you work in defiance of SJW principles, in which case they'll whine for ages. Otherwise they don't care. Is that batch of SJWs really who you want to throw your hat in with?

>>54414838
It's because 4chan and reddit are very different, and do not exactly appeal to the same people, thus the tastes of the people in both places will be different. Also criticism on 4chan is raw and unfiltered, there's actually a good chance here on 4chan that someone would rate your work 7/10 or even higher, and do nothing but criticize it.

>>54414838
That's because Reddit wouldn't know quality if it shit down their throat.

>>54414838
>Like I entered a CYOA contest on reddit with Eronomicon.
Is this why you're reluctant to update? Because you want to win cash?

>>54414805
Jesus fucking Christ.

>>54414885
I realized after further reading the drawbacks that prevent you from altering history are right up my alley, so I'll definitely be coming back with more points.

I also feel like it's dumb to be a pirate with pocket dimension, but I'm literally incapable of not taking that option.

>>54414805
Thanks, but I must respectfully decline.

>>54414922
Keep reading, he wants to spend it on getting other people to make more cyoa.

>>54414838
I personanlly really liked it.
Even if I didn't like a lot of the powers, there was enough to scratch my fetishes and have points left over.

Pretty nifty.

>>54414838
>>54413525

>>54414922
>First place is 25$ in CYOA contest and if I win I will create my own CYOA contest with the 25$ as price pool
>Is this why you're reluctant to update? Because you want to win cash?

>>54414768
It's almost like being an attention whore doesn't always get nice attention
>>54414838
Holy shit, are you still using "but reddit likes it" as your shield here of all places?

I say this with all sincerity, you belong there. It'll protect you from criticism that you don't want to hear after shilling your work for weeks and having it under deliver. It'll also fit your constant desire to make sure everyone knows who you are at all times.

>>54414967
Involving money in CYOAs is a horrible idea.

>>54415000
Regardless of what you want to do with it, you still have to win it in the first place.

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>>54414108
>>54414131
>>54414148
>>54414164
I have never stressed over which Waifus I wanted more than I did over this CYOA.
Fuck you, Celt! I love you, but fuck you!
So after much consideration here's my final build because I realized I never actually posted it.
I'm gonna do the same autistic shit I did for Of Damsels and Devastation, so if you aren't prepared to cringe, you're not gonna wanna read this...

>"You there! Citizen!"
Jesus fuck! W-what?
>"It seems that fate has brought you before me this day."
...I mean... you're the one who broke into my house and barged into my room, but okay. I'm listening.
>"During my journeys I found and bound many demons..."
Wait. So you're telling me that, not only are Crusaders still a thing but demons are real?
...Fuck I better start going to church...
Oh, sorry. Please continue.
>"...But how can I bring myself to slay one that could be saved?"
Huh, would not expect a Crusader to be so forgiving.
I like you. I think I'll hold off on pressing charges for breaking and entering depending on where you're going with this...
>"...walk into the Holy City..."
...You mean Jerusalem?
I think you may be lost; that's about an 18-hour flight east of here.
>"You are actually the first man I've found that looked capable to handle a demon..."
...By which you mean I'm the first one not to immediately pull a gun on you or call the cops, I'm guessing...
>"As a fellow member of our Lord's Empire..."
...
Suuuuuuuuuure I am...
But nevermind that, I'd be honored to take in a demon to rehabilitate on your behalf! Show me what you've got.
By the way... What's with the box?
Seems kinda odd... Let me just-
>"wait, what are you doing? NO! Don't touch that!"
Okay, okay! Jeez man, I was just curious, no need to shout.
I promise I won't try to touch it again, just let me see the demons.

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>>54414838
It's largely due to expectations.

I quite liked Eronomicon but thought it was pretty similar to other ones you've done in the past and probably not as good as those previous ones either (the content being more or less the same and the structure being a little more obnoxious).

People on Reddit probably don't know your stuff or that this one wasn't quite as good.

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>>54414990
And you are mine! The recent album is amazing. Fuck that garbage SDA linked, no wonder he shitposts with that kind of shit taste.

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>>54415128
>he wouldn't make cyoas for a living

>>54415182
Here's the thing though, if you want to do CYOA's for a living you either need to turn them into a product (Highlanders Plan) or turn them into a long-crowd funded thing (Patreon Plan.) You'll need your own art and your own shit, as well as a means of getting money off the damn things.

Not that it isn't doable if you were incurably autistic and persistent to build an audience, but it would suck.

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>>54415159
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GSS4oHWDcUA

>>54414805
>all of them are shit
Why even bother?

Is it some sort of secret all women are shit meme?

>>54414805
>>54415259
Laura is tolerable enough personality wise, and hot.

What are some minor positive things that can happen to a person? I'm working on a CYOA where it's a pretty vital element, but I can't think of much.

>>54414732
Ill finally build for this.

>Boy

>Drinker
Meditation ,Body , Vagabond

>Quest
Unwilling God of Loneliness

Bitch, we journey to the east now. I'm gonna show Ar-thuk what he needs to be, the god of vagabonds. We shall adventure the lands, enjoying new cultures, experiencing life to the fullest, and overcoming great challenges.
Then with that under our belts, words of our lifestyle shall entice adventures and give my friend his power and place as a god. I shall then become a demi-god and we shall be best of fucking bros.

>>54415259
>>54415326
Laura or Helen would both be fine by me, neither is 100% perfect but neither am I. Their flaws are more just things we don't have in common and yeah, they're both very attractive.

>>54415337
- Finding money on the street.
- Getting a raise at work.
- Successfully flirting with that cute boy/girl
- Unexpected tax refund
- Discover a new recipe you love
- Discover a new restaurant that's cheap and good
- Discover a new tv show
- Get a great haircut that brings you compliments.
- Find something great at an estate sale.

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>>54415376

>>54414885
Looks good enough to me, they've got meat to them without descending into over-explaining Some people are going to want to know lewd preferences but frankly that doesn't seem to be what you're going for, so your template is decent.

>>54415337
Rolling your waifu in a gacha.

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>>54415134
>but fuck you
Buy me dinner first, babe.

>>54415337
You find $50 in your pocket that you forgot about

>>54415337
How minor? Are we talking about things that happen once or more long-term things? Acquiring a bit of extra cash you didn't expect is always nice. Being guaranteed to get a good night's sleep no matter what is something I'd appreciate a lot.

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>>54415394

>>54415326
>Laura is tolerable enough personality wise
Yeah not exciting, pretty vanila, but begin /fit/ is a big plus. Probably would be my choice too.
>and hot.
She's cute, and from the front at lest looks like she's got a nice ass. If she'd be alright with implants she could be a 9/10 imo.

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>>54415429

>>54415376
You should mention when you make an update. So is it finished now?

>>54415421
More of the former than the later of your examples. Small good things that would briefly distract from an otherwise awful life.

>>54415415
>>54415405
>>54415387
Thanks.

>>54415399
Thanks, anon; that's good enough for me.

>>54415437
Well, I'm definitely not a 9/10, so I'll take her.

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>>54415134
>Continued next post
>30min ago

He die?

>>54415385
You have to be perfect to post here. Please leave.

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>>54399251
The Wolf Queen
Witch of the Woods
Serpent Tongued Monster
Honey Giver
Storm Rider
That Bitch With the Spiders
Bear Sister
Flood Bringer
Ect, Ect...

>When and Where
10,000 BC, Random Starting Location
I threw a dart at a map, and ended up in Whothefuckcares, Lithuania.

>Game Type
Open to Multiplayer 10

>Fate
Immortal Wanderer 100
General 90

>Mental Upgrades
Genius 3 80
Memory of the Ages 2 75
Commander 75
Map Maker 70

>Physical Upgrades
Strength & Speed 2 62
Reflexes & Reaction 2 54
Impervious 3 36
Regeneration 2 30
Non-Reactor 28
Endurance 2 20
Super Senses 2 16
Diet 2 11
Iron Gut 10
Beauty 8

>Magic
Beastmaster, Major -2
Telepathy, Minor -7
Spirit Singer, Major -17

>Company
Five Open Companion Slots -23
A Shared Gift x5
-Strength & Speed 1 -24
-Reflexes & Reaction 1 -25
-Impervious 1 -26.5
-Regeneration 1 -27
-Non-Reactor -27.5
-Endurance 1 -28.5
-Super Senses 2 -29.5
-Diet 0 -29.5
-Iron Gut -30
-Beauty -30.5
-Telepathy, Minor -31.75
-Spirit Singer, Minor -33

>Items
Godslayer -33
Companion Godslayers -35
Personal Omni-Wear -35

>Drawbacks
Stormbringer -20
Nemesis 0

>Quest
The Myth Maker


Here's a tentative build. Cunning and brutal, occasionally benevolent, and always on the move. Epic clashes with my Nemesis since the dawn of recorded history should help put me in the books.

I'll probably work in The Slow Pace of History to buff my Shared Gifts, but this is enough math for tonight.

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>>54415405
That sounds hilarious.

>>54414838
I didn't like Eronomicon because compared to your other works it seems bland.
Look at your Prison cyoa, you had a shitton of choices, and it really made you think what you wanted to spend your points on, but Erononomicon really was only a choice between bdsm, tentacles, timestop, femdom, or being hat guy who the rest of the thread is devoted to images that convey disgust or fear.
You certainly spent time on it, and it was an okay idea, but I know for a fact that you can do better. It would've been nice to have more than one choice for something, I.E. for necrophilia you could've made a spell that lets the reader make someone seem dead for a specified period of time or summon ghosts. There was so much potential and you just decided to not because you are probably busy doing your own thing or trying to make other cyoas too, but the thing is if you don't have the time, don't rush it and make a half-baked project, do the best you can and don't be so fuckig wishy washy about what people on the internet do or say because at the end of the day you can't think and act for them, you have to worry about yourself man, make some good fucking cyoas because people like your writing and you're good at it, spend a bit more time, don't listen to stupid one sentance blurbs for ideas, if someone has a good idea for a cyoa make them explain what they want.

>>54415385
yeah. Helen is definitely second best girl.

I feel like she was made custom for uggos with the "mostly blind" thing. That and the extra extra vanilla sex was a turn off.

>>54415624
She can still see you up close though so uggos are shit out of luck or have to stay constantly about a meter or so away.

>>54407488
Posting my build:

>>54415597

I love your build! The witchy druid/nature Goddess thing is great. I imagine you're much more on the chaos and freedom side of the spectrum than order, so probably not a fan of evil Goddesses walking around telling everyone what to do. So maybe we could be each other's Nemesis >>54414403

>>54415715
...I'm a retard and hit the wrong button

Eromancy build
Points
⦁ Y: 7
⦁ G: 10 Secondary
⦁ U: 7
⦁ Pu: 12 Primary
⦁ Pi: 10
⦁ R: 7
⦁ B: 3 Tertiary
Mana Regeneration: Power of Darkness
Purple Spells: Summon Tentacles(Upgraded), Incubate(Upgraded), Banish(Upgraded), Spawn Monster(Upgraded), Spawn Parasite(Upgraded, Summon Abyssal Girl
Green Spells: Shrink, Enlarge, Gender Swap(Upgraded), Alter Age(Upgraded), Transform(Upgraded), Invigorate(Upgraded)
Black Spells: Curse (Eldritch Dreams and Spirited Away), Raise Dead, and Nightmare
Magic points: 1 left
Boons: Unconventional Mana (Power of Darkness), Tertiary School (Black), Immortality (25yo)
Corruption Points: 6 purple, 2 black, 5 green
Corruption options: Eldritch Girl(Futa)(1P), Living Clothes(2P), Corruption(1P), Spirited Away(1P), Eldritch Dreams(1P), Sinister Aura(1B), Cannibal(2B), Random Transformation(1G), Mental Change(2G), Fairy Rapists(2G)

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>>54414083
Is that the most recent pacyoa? I've been looking for it.

>Mesh
>Mobility (5)
>Brain Implant (15)
>Enhanced Vision, Navigation, Thermal/X-ray, Ultrasonic, External Sensors (45)
>Voice, Translator (55)
>Hydra Nanites, Progenitor Nanites (80)
>Self-Repair (95)
>Cutting Blade (115)
>Plasma Shield, Distortion Field, Temperature Resistance, Invisibility (190)
>Additional Form (200)

Sword has re-loadable blades in case one shatters at high speeds. Additional Form gives me four wings to improve maneuverability in the air.

>>54415727
Seventeen.

>>54415552
>He die?
No, I'm just rereading this as I go and I'm a slow reader by nature.
I had to teach myself to read because my dyslexia meant the school had no idea how to do it.
>>54415134
>Prosperine "The Dominator"
Well, she's certainly alluring but I don't think we'd get along very well...
I prefer to be the one in control and being tied up isn't my flavor of a good time.
I think I'll pass on her-
>"I assume she does this since the comfort of one's bed is terrific for judging people."
... I won't say judging people in bed isn't normal, but I don't think that's quite the type of judgment that's going on.
You're the Crusader here, so you obviously know demons better than I do, but I'd recommend not letting her do that anymore.
But as I was saying, pass.

>Qarina "The Slothful"
Aww... That's really cute...
>"Good heavens, clear your mind..."
Hey man, I knew what you meant.
(I doubt you'd have the balls to try anything with her anyway...)
Dear lord, she sounds amazing...
I'll still look over the other ones, but she'll be hard to beat-
>"Please forget I said anything about hell science."
...
I can't promise you I'll be able to do that, but I'll my best.
(I wonder if I can major in that somewhere...)

>Ardat Lili "The Temptress"
https://youtu.be/k0GDeV3empE
HOLYGODDAMNFUCKINGCHRISTNUGGETS!
...
Sorry, sorry, just... Ya gotta warn a guy before you throw tits that huge in his face, man...
Woa...
Okay, I'm good, keep going.
>"the puppy eyes she gave me made me know she could be saved."
...Hey, if that's what you have to tell yourself to sleep at night, no judgment here. Go on.
(I'm starting to think this guy isn't a very good Crusader...)
>"...will be very grateful for you releasing her."
I was already on board when you mentioned the shapeshifting, but this keeps getting better.
>"...wait until marriage."
Pffffttttt... Y-yeah, I'll do that...
(Little late for that, buddy...)

>Conintued next post
Hit CL sooner than I thought.

>>54415810

I don't follow.

>>54410971
15% of the population is pretty high, even for the Americas.

>>54415832
>I'm starting to think this guy isn't a very good Crusader
Noooooooo, really?

>>54415376
>>54415394
>>54415429
>>54415449

I CHOOSE SPIRIT

>>54415842
Its a bit meta, but that's a goal for defeating you.
Seventeen kills should put you at zero fate points.
My timetable theoretically could go out past present day, but if you could also theoretically strip enough of the biosphere before then that the victory would be a pyrrhic one.

I need people to remember me, and you need power.

>>54415883
And 100% of warrior adventurers in medieval times were men, so maybe it should be a sausage fest.

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>>54414567
Someday

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>>54414885

I like it!

Would you object if I patched up a few spelling/grammar flaws though?

>>54414164
This one, I pick this one

Fuck you guys

>>54415964
Not like the Scythians weren't using female warriors and even the ancient greeks had legends about female warriors.

>>54415974
I would welcome it, in fact.

>>54415982
So, maybe just 5% women in the CYOA, then? Sound about right?

>>54415994
You seem to be getting really butthurt about this. Are you black or something?

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>>54415405
this is too real

There was one cyoa a while back somebody made by requesting pictures from people. One of the pictures was two centaurs I think. Anyone know what I'm talking about it was a collab essentially.

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my first CYOA, not detailed at all, how is it?

>>54416086
On fire

>>54415953

That's a good plan. Just keep in mind that killing me is not easy!

Without being meta, what would your character do? If you killed me three or five times and I just kept coming back, wouldn't it make more sense to try and banish me somehow where my corrupting influence is minimized? The classic sealed away BBEG trope?

>>54416086
>Clear Roads
>FAST
>Racing Genius

>Challengers

excellent CYOA

>>54414838
Well that is disappointing. Look Tok you are a great author. If you post OC on the internet people will hate it and people will like it. I personally am ok with you pursuing your own cyoa but you got to understand it isn't entirely 4chans fault.

You did kinda spend a month hyping it up to be the best lewd cyoa yet and it just kinda flopped. Everybody has flops. In every story ever even gods have flops. That is fine. I don't think you need to take peoples opinions but just disregarding them seems a bit foolhardy. Everything needs to be taken with a grain of salt even this post could be seen as manipulative.

But in all honesty you just do what you prefer, some groups will hate your work, some will like it. But I hope you don't let it break your spirit since losing a great creator of OC would be a shame and a failure for us all.

-Sincerely randomanon who suggested the videogame/tabletop lewd cyoa which I completely understand if you don't want to do

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>>54415408
>pic related
>>54415900
Nice dubs.
And fuck you, I'm just writing out how I'd legitimately react to all this.
The ( )s are supposed to represent me mumbling to myself.
>>54415832
But in all seriousness, you're seriously offering me a succubus who can teach me to fast and/or sweet talk my way into and out of almost anything or anyone?
Damn, she's just as tempting as Qarina.
Choosing just one is going to be harder than I thought...

>Sori-Nir "The Rebellious"
Alright, I won't mention how weird these names are because they're demon names, but did you give them the titles or did they come with those?
Nothing against them, just curious.
Getting back on track...
Eeeeeeeehhhhhhh...
Nothing against her, but she just isn't for me.
I have a slight tendency toward pacifism so I'm pretty sure I'd only bore and annoy her so I don't think rehabilitating her is within my capabilities.
Next, please.

>Mara "The Ignorant"
Okay, I hope you didn't give them the titles because that's just mean...
Accurate or not, I really hope that you don't call the adorable little thing that to her face.
>"What's that look for? I give my tithes."
Hey man, no need to get defensive. Like I said, no judgment.
That being said though...
I don't think I'm a good match for her. She seems absolutely adorable, but I can't really gauge her personality with what you've given me. Plus, there is no way I am going to be able to rehabilitate her. I am not strong enough to resist completely abusing her powers for my own gain.
I really hope you can find a kind hearted master for her because I'll reluctantly have to pass...

>Empusa "The Soul Broke"
NOPE.
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE.
Waaaaaaaaaay too... let's go with "inhuman" for me.
Next!
6furry12me

>Yuki Onna "The Stormbringer"
Oh hey, I'm familiar with these!
...Though that's not what I expected them to look like.
She's gorgeous though, so no complaints.
>"It was a business trip. With business."
...Course it was.

>>54416012
Sure, I'll be black this time.

>>54415916
Which selections?

>>54416086
Awareness
Running in the 90s
FAST

Challengers

screw driving, I'm gonna run like a motherfucker

>>54416175
>implying we don't lose authors all the god damn time
>implying Bliss isn't on the verge of giving up after he releases his next cyoa due to creative bankruptcy

>>54416231
Yeah we lose authors all the time. Guess what it sucks. If you lose a family member and they died it sucks, doesn't matter if deaths happen all the time.

>>54416086
Can I take an extra drawback for an extra point?

>>54416128
Eh, you'd get noticeably weaker with each kill.
It's not that you're easy to kill, in the first place. You have more magic, and most of my minions are just mundane animals, like deer, or humans. I just have time and tactics on my side.
It's not like I can or really want to kill you to death.

The fight is fun, and I don't have another way to seal you.

>>54416367
>>54416128
Oh, spirit born luck, as well.
On both sides.

>>54416302
sure, i don't see why not

>>54416231
That's not anyone's fault, though. Bliss might quit because he can't think up ideas that fit his standards, that's just how things go.

>>54416175
>Everybody has flops.

He got enough positive (You)s to consider it a small success or at least an average work Cant say the same about the latest SDA's cyoa.

>>54416086
>>54416422
Fucking sweet.

>DK
>Powered By
>F A S T
>Racing Genius

>Challengers, Road Rage

My ol' car is great, but now it's time to take her to new heights. Racin around the US.

>>54415964
The difference is that women look good

Have the thumbnails not been loading properly for anyone else? Just thought I'd ask.

>>54414066
(200)
>Heavy (170)
>Engineer (165)
>Nerve Suit (160)

>Voice (155)

>Hydra Nanites (145)

>Storage (140)
>Automated Cleaning (135)
>Sentient AI (120)
>Tentacle (free)
>Self-Repair (free)

>EMP Cannon (105)
>Electro Pulse (90)
>Combat Drone x2 (60)

Temperature resistance_2 (45)
Improved Hull (30)
Distortion Field (15)
Physical Shield (0)
Plasma Shield (free)

Here's an idea. why not put the most armor on the guy that can heal? Sure I'll be slow as fuck, but that's what it takes to keep your white mage alive.

>>54416367
>>54416420

I saw that you have the spirits of the Earth on your side, while they're against me. It would (will?) be a hard fight. My hope is that my corrupting influence is strong, my military strategy good, my numbers great, and my magic powerful.

>>54416279
Who died this time Kit?

>>54414108
The Sloth slut. I'm not an ambitious man. Guess I'll take Iezebel as well before that slow-ass dlseyixc faggot gets around to that part.

>>54416086
Racing genius
Fast
Clear roads

Cops

Good CYOA, proud of you anon

>>54416090
Improved suggestion as it's like domination but without the drawbacks and needs to give commands over time.

>>54414805
Idk wtf anons are on about these are just like... realistic, moderately attractive people with upsides & downsides

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>>54416441
I feel that you putting me on a pedestal as a comparison for success is nothing more than an excuse to call me out rather than praise another author's work, which is honestly more of an insult to them than me.

I liked how it turned out and have a good idea of how to nurture the idea from here. I'm having fun with the CYOA, its setting and characters.

A measurement of success should be on your satisfaction of the piece, and your integrity as a creator will determine if it holds up or not.

>>54416597
Nobody at all just an analogy thankfully for me. Still my point still stands losing authors sucks (I'm not talking about end of creative well, I am talking about someone flat up losing the will to work because of what others say.)

>>54416659
For me that's a good thing, makes for a nice change of pace from demons and catgirls.

>>54416659
Waifus are supposed to be perfect and pure, all upsides and no downsides.

Making a waifu cyoa where all of the girls are horribly flawed like actual women ruins the illusion.

>>54416086
>Awareness
>Clear Roads
>Racing Genius

>Police Cops

r8/h8

>>54416602
Don't call my precious a slut.

>>54414371
>people actually read what tripfags say when they aren't posting OC

why, exactly?

Why is this general always filled with waifu trash?

>>54416700
because you are trash and don't deserve anything better

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>>54416700
Because waifu trash is a lot easier to make than strong, standalone content?

>>54416700
Because adventure authors can't be here all the time/have lives/need to feed themselves and waifus take little effort for a large audience.

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>>54416668
Don't be gay. (You)s are all that matter.

>>54416659
YOU PICK ONE IF YOU'RE SO GOOD

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>>54416532
Oh, it would (will?) be many hard fights! All over the world, and with many witnesses, if I can get my way.

When the spirits have forgiven you, I'll give you one of my companion slots because I have no sense of right and wrong.

Now don't you go blowing the Cold War into full blown nuclear armageddon on me at the last century. That would make me very cross.

>>54416700
Because most of us are desperately lonely and don't want to die alone.

>>54416725
Then why are people both so lazy and uncreative that they make it and so fucking stupid that they endorse it?

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>>54414732
>Boy
>Chanter
>Miracles
>Tuning
>Missionary

>Unwilling God of Loneliness
"Get in the car, m'lord. we're going on an adventure."

>>54416751
This.
It will happen anyways, though.

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>>54416183
I'm writing way more than I thought I'd be.

Anyway, I won't ask exactly what kind of "business" you had in Japan, keep going.
>"She'll demand to go to her temple in Japan to teach you."
Fuck, I'm on board.
(Don't think he'll know what I weeb is, so I won't mention how much of one I am...)
I need a way to get out of this desert shithole anyway and I've always wanted to go to Japan. Gonna take me a bit to learn the language, but I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.
>"...way up and on the side of Mt. Fugi."
Well grocery shopping is going to be... a challenge, but she sounds absolutely wonderful!
But, wait, fuck...
Now I have three I have to choose between...
Alright, just give me the next one, while I work on figuring this out.

>Pandora "The Kingmaker"
>"...so she can train troops in the Order."
Wait, there's an "Order?"
Fuck, I really need to start paying more attention to the news...
Regardless, she sounds lovely, but I'm a tad bit too lazy to mesh well with her.
I'm sure you can find a better Master who's more willing to indulge her love of the gym. All expenses paid vacations would be nice though...

>Jezebeth "The Playful"
...I really hope you're letting these girls pick out their own clothes because forcing a girl, demon or otherwise, to run around wearing nothing but bandages doesn't seem very Christian to me...
>"...to find her high and playing something called "Demon's Souls"."
...
Stop.
Making.
Them.
All.
So.
Appealing.
Goddammit man...
She sounds amazing just to spend time with, but she can't really compare to the other three, so I'll reluctantly pass on her...

>>54416602
Ha! Jokes on you! I wasn;t going to pick her anyway.
>that slow-ass dlseyixc faggot
Well, that's just plain mean...
How would you like it if I called you a "lazy, uninteresting pile of human waste who has no future and waste resources that those of us with the drive to actually do something could be using instead"?
Not very much I bet.

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>>54414732
>>54414748
>>54414758
>>54414769
>>54414780

>Boy
>Might
>Belief in Others
>Source:Taming
>Growth:Quantity
>Job:Postman
>Quest: Genre Shift


I deliver the post.... everywhere. The more post needs to be delivered, the more animals I conscript, and the more powerful I become.... at delivering the mail. This newfangled printing press sure has oppened up a lot of business opportunities for delivering the written word. Perhaps my giant bird-post cadre is going to be positioned to be the next East India Company

>>54416751
Then why does it always go lewd? I could honestly understand the whole thing if it was an exercise in characterization, like it should be, but more often than not it's blatant sexual fantasy/magical realm shit.

>>54416751
I don't mind dying alone. It's the time before death that I would like to have someone to hold.

>>54416786
Because most of us are also virgins.

>>54416805
So am I but I want no part of this pathetic shit.

>>54416819
Bye.

>>54416485
Happens to me sometimes, the new image server sucks.

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>>>/trash/10540390
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TokHaar here, if you want my name so fucking bad, take it! I quit!

>>54416836
He said with your trip on, faggot.

>>54416826
This thread isn't 100% irredeemable garbage.

>>54416828
Mm. Images won't load properly too. Keeps telling me to retry for a live version. It just happened overnight for me; everything was loading and updating properly yesterday.

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>>54416729
Been there, anon. Aint all that hyped up to be.

>>54416848
Tok does not have a trip anon....

>>54416740

>When the spirits have forgiven you, I'll give you one of my companion slots

Together we'd truly be unstoppable.....

>>54416836
Don't quit Tok!

We all love you here

>>54416090
Memory, Telekinesis and dream weaving

>>54416852
Are you the meta faggot?

>>54415385
>>54415326
>Doesn't like quiet introverts.

>>54416894
I don't. Tok belongs on reddit, most namefags do.

Well, i think the box can suck a fat one

>>54416926
I do, but I like Laura and Helen more. I think they'd make for a better balanced life and encourage me to self improve more than an introvert that would reinforce my existing tendency to isolate.

Also they're hotter.

>>54414838
>Srry anon, Im not gonna do a CYOA anyone wants or requests ever again. I will do what I want to do when I want to do it.
And all was well once more. No more forced CYOA's were ever created since that day and all was well within the kingdom, The End.

>>54416597
Italics died.

>>54416899
Who's that?

>>54416890
Well, the pain killers they have me on are making it hard to read.

Talk to you tomorrow, have a great evening. Good night, /tg/.

>>54416778

>Nimue "The Allseeing"
Alright, she sounds positively adorable and I'm well aware what a heartless shallow, monster this makes me but....
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwww
She deserves a more loving, less superficial master than I could ever be...

>Iezabel "The Dream Master"
>"...holes in my loinclothes..."
Wait.
Did you just say fucking "loincloths"?
What are you, fucking Tarzan? By a pair of modern underwear man, you'll thank me later.
As for the girl herself, while lucid dreaming and her obviously easily awakened submissiveness are endlessly appealing, she's just under my cut off line compared to the other three I'm trying to decide between.
Don't worry, I'm positive you'll find another guy more than willing to take her in.

>Hecate "The Conquerer"
>"but you wouldn't do that. Right?"
...
No comment.
Putting that matter aside, she sounds like a total sweetheart, but I don't think I could survive her training. This country's healthcare system is a shit show and I can't afford to pay for all the bills I'll now doubt incur thanks to her training...
I'll let some other shmuck conquer the wor-I mean take her in...

>"You have a sharp eye, don't ya?"
Wait. What? What makes you s-
>"I think you can handle 2 demons."
...What about 3?
Gah, okay. I'll try to narrow it down.
Luckily, I've been grading each demon based on how much they appeal to me this whole time...

(Grades revealed in the next, and final post.)

>>54414885
Alenso seems interesting, but there isn't much detail about what artificing is.

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>>54417043
Good night.

>>54416836
Post proof.

>>54417079
This is not intended to be a fully defined world; I'm saving all of my detail-motivation for Altering History/World of Myth and Wonder. Rather, a lot of stuff from "Artificing" to "Nature Magic" to "Battlecalling" is lightly defined, with the details left to the imagination.

In this case, Artificing is simply the act of imbuing magic into objects. The limits and details of that are up to you to define in your head; you know from the text that Alfonso isn't a "master" at the art. What could that mean? You tell me. (If you want to).

>>54416963
Laura doesn't like quiet introverts, anon. She's not getting with you unless you're outgoing.

>>54417232
Not a problem. I'm an attention whore just like she is.

Weekend OC anon here. Not sure if I'll keep the streak alive his weekend but I'm going to try, and with in mind I wanted some feedback.

If I did a short 40k CYOA about being a space marine where you choose a chapter and a role, how many chapters would you want to choose from? And how big a deal is it if I'm vague about some of the details I'm not full bottle on?

>>54417232
Exactly, it encourages me to be outgoing like I used to be in my youth.

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>>54417096
>I quit
Seems like the only reasonable option. I also don't post with my name since I already threw it on the ground >>54416836

>>54417260
Maybe Ultramarines, Blood Angels, Soul Drinkers, Space Wolves, Salamanders, Black Templars, Dark Angels?

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>>54417047
Alright, so these are entirely based on how appealing I find them and their abilities, so they're purely subjective. They're all good waifus, this is just how much I like them, not a reflection of their quality, so please don't feel bad Celt.
That said, here are my personal grades:

>Prosperine
C-
>Qarinah
A
>Ardat Lili
A+
>Sor-Nir
B-
>Mara
B+
>Empusa
FFF
>Yuki Onna
A+
>Pandora
B
>Jezebeth
B+
>Nimue
C-
>Iezabel
A-
>Hecate
A-

As much as I love Qarinah, if I can really only choose two of them, she only fails in that her abilities aren't nearly as appealing to me as Yuki or Lili's (which is what I'll be calling both of them because I like pet names).
Ardat Lili's ability to shapeshift and teach me to be an expert in diplomacy and fast-talking are only icing on the cake that are her obvious... *ahem* other skills.
Yuki-Onna will teach me magic with glee and give me a home in Japan. She already sounds like prime wife material so I can't pass her up no matter what.
The end result is that I'll have two beautiful demons to live with in a luxurious home and become a charismatic and terrifyingly powerful mage.
I really couldn't ask for more.
But... If you somehow can't find homes for any of the girls that I gave a B+ or higher to, I'd be more than willing to take them in...
Either way, thank you very much. I'll do my best to rehabilitate them for the lord or whatever and make them as happy as I can.
Now, would you kindly get the fuck out of my house?

>>54417260
Honestly? All 18 of the founding chapters.

>>54417260
Over half of them have fallen to Chaos.

>>54417260
Will you include chaos?

>>54417330
Probably not going to do Soul Drinkers. Might add Imperial Fists to that list though.
>>54417342
Loyalists only, no dirty heretics

>>54417340
>so please don't feel bad Celt
Senpai, I've been thrown from a car going down the highway and jumped up smiling. Takes a lot more than that to hur...
>Jezebeth
>Only B+

Oh. I'ma kill you.
You also forgot the box

>>54417302
Not proof considering it's MSPaint.

>>54417369
Loyalist dog plz

Chaos is humanity's only salvation.

>>54417302
>All them typos

>>54417406
Tokhaar uses MSpaint.

for everything.

>>54417527
Yes and so can everyone else. See my point?

>>54417260
Will there be SOB waifus?

>>54417576
Not at this stage, they are the emperors brides and thou shalt not cuck him

>>54417302
Come on Tokhaar, you've just had a bad day. Sleep the frustration off and come back swinging, you're an essential for the /trash/ threads survival.

>>54417627
>you're an essential for the /trash/ threads survival
Good argument for him to leave, actually.

>>54414805
I would a Gloria.

>>54417642
The /trash/ thread is a /d/ refugee thread anon.

>>54417627
>>54417642
How was the reception there to his work anyway? Same as here?

>>54417675
I know.

>>54417681
Exact same, bit more focus on fetish issues.

>>54417681
Pretty much

>>54417683
Oh I know you, you're the anon who was shiposting in the trash thread about why lewd cyoa threads shouldn't exist because you don't like them. Fuck off

>>54417675
I saw one on /aco/ too.

>>54417302
Honestly that rule is more problems that is worth, bunch of abandoned mods never get updated/translated by people willing to work because the nexus goes out of its way to cater to drama queens who quit the second something doesn't goes their way (totally unrelated and in no way a parallel of anything happening here)

>>54417619
Will there be waifus?

>>54414108
>Nimue
>ask for a book on how to help Nimue
>after she's fixed up ask for books for ways to get every other demon's deal
infinite knowledge infinite power

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>>54414838
Well unlike DuesVult and Infected CYOA I didn't end up making a build for it. I Still spent two hours trying though which is more then most cyoas I read get. I don't regret those two hours either.

>>54417756
At this stage no, but I have one or two ideas that might change that, whether they're in the base CYOA or a later expansion.

If there are it will be silly, but 40k is always a little silly.

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>>54417403
>Oh. I'ma kill you.
A B+ is still top tier waifu in my grading system!
>You also forgot the box
No, I chose not include it.
Plus, it's not really a waifu, but alrighty.
>The Harbinger
>Pic related
C
There, ya happy?

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The real problem with Eronomicon was that there where no waifu options. And no the create a waifu options don't count.

>>54414732
Be the girl
Moxie, Others: Player

>>54414769
Source: "Networking"
Growth: Attractive
Job: Companion

>>54414780
Quest: Something Broke

Go fuck myself, eh? Don't mind if I do.

>>54414793
>"Networking"
>Evolution
>'Missionary'
I'm kinda wondering how this works myself.

>>54415259
>>54416659
The first girl is literally perfect.

>>54417977
>Religious

>>54417977
>below average sex drive
>will never try non-vanilla sex

>>54418006
>below average sex drive
Doesn't matter. She's Christian, so she'll take care of your needs.

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Hello, yes, I want all your waifus please

>>54418122
Christians don't read Song of Songs and thus don't know that it's god's will that you have tons of marital sex all the time and knock up your wife over and over again.

>>54418006
Think of the time you'd save though
If you don't have that hour or two of sex a night you would with a normal girl, you'd end up with a bunch of extra free time

>>54418150
>hour or two of sex a night you would with a normal girl
Ha. Once or twice a week maybe.

>>54418178
That doesn't sound normal.

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>>54418144
I love God! God is great!

>>54414805
I pick Diana because I'm a high test male or something

>>54418199
You don't sound like you've ever been in a long term relationship.

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Could some of you kind anons please post pictures of air mages or aerokinetics?

>>54418217
God is a fucking dick tho

>>54418217
What's that sprite from?

>>54418217
Don't you have a different F.Priest to be leveling?

>>54418277
Perhaps you just have a low sex drive.

>>54418217
Yeah christianity has this built up perception that chastity is meant to continue into marriage. That god wants you to have as little sex as possible, only do it for procreation, and to not enjoy it. What the actual book says is the exact opposite, married couples are supposed to fuck all the time, basically as much as you two want so almost constantly, to enjoy it because you're designed to so obviously you should, and to take joy in the act itself because it's with your spouse even if it doesn't result in a baby.

Now contrast it with those puritans who refuse to even sleep in the same bed as their wife unless they're trying for a child and think it's a sin to see their wife naked. They're doing it completely wrong.

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>>54418278

>>54418319
I sure don't. When I'm single I'm pretty much looking at porn multiple times a day.

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>>54418285
http://wiki.dfo-world.com/view/Female_Priest

>>54418310
I have two more if I want to catch them all, but I'm sick of leveling.

>>54415376
>>54415394
>>54415429
>>54415449
Body
If Seed can shapeshift equal or greater than Singular then seed. If not Singular.
Brute Stength
Social Link
Omniperception
Fecundity Aspect

>>54418342
Then either your long term relationships have been with low sex drive partners, or mine are with high ones.

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>>54418278

>>54418332
And then we find out that the beings we call succubi are actually angels that God created to spread the joys of sex on Earth, and their bad reputation comes from religious zealots misunderstanding them.

>>54418360
That original design looks inferior.

>>54418380
I think it's more likely that people like your partners, and myself, just have unusually high sex drives.

>>54418332
It's all the fault of protestant scum.

They went off all half-cocked and decided that they were going to make their own church with no blackjack and no hookers, and they ended up just fucking up the image of Christianity in everyone's eyes, because now when someone thinks "Christian", their first thought is the retarded protestant bible thumpers who only care about scripture insofar as it allows them to act morally superior to people who they're prejudiced against, and who have deluded themselves into thinking that God shares the exact same backwards beliefs that they have, regardless of all evidence to the contrary.

>>54418360
I'm not seeing where that sprite is used?

Just post a CYOA man, anything will do, I need my fix

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>>54418424
DFO, my man. I was pointing you to the game.

>>54418409
Not sure where you got that from. Mind telling me?

Christianity and Judaism are completely against premarital sex even by the book, it's just that you're supposed to indulge in marital sex as much as and how you want, and take joy in it. There's no way either religion ever supported premarital sex, with an angel or not, so I can't see how a sex angel would be a good thing unless you're meant to marry them.

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>>54418439

>>54418451
I see.

>>54418420
I don't know anything about catholicism. I was just raised in a Baptist household and read the bible myself before becoming an atheist, so I know how protestant teachings differ from the actual book.

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>>54418439

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>>54418278

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>>54414083
>>54414066
>Light
>Mobility
>Nerve Suit
>Brain Implant_2
>Internal Sensors
>Enhanced Vision
>Collapsible
>Additional Form
>Self-Repair
>Sentient AI
>Cutting Blades
>Kinetic Strike Module
>Ballistics
>Temp Resistance_2
>Improved Hull
>Deep Sea/Space Module
>Flight (Free)
>Time Slow(Free)
Star Platinum Online

Additional form is extra arms for punching

>>54418457
>I can't see how a sex angel would be a good thing unless you're meant to marry them.
I would marry a sex angel.

>>54418799
So would everyone, that's what Archangel Roommate is about.

>>54418474
So if I stop taking care of horus I'm going to lose the love of my life?

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>>54414732
>Boyo
>Puncher

>Discoverer
>Fasting
>Hermit

>Something Broke
I will prove my Kung Fu is superior to my clones'.

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>>54418575
Fight 3
Int 2
Guts 3
Rep 3
Appeal 2

Weird school
Bleached
One man and his hand, lone wolf, really bad

>>54416224
Apologies for the late reply.

Spirit
>Syzygy
>Prodigy
>True Love
>Individuated Physics/Abilities (One of those two)

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>>54418967

http://pastebin.com/7tk3pN8g

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>>54418967

https://pastebin.com/JCpK3pUa

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>>54418967

https://pastebin.com/Y0Ew0Pik

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>>54418967

https://pastebin.com/4dkW0n83

>>54419280
>>54419259
>>54419251
>>54419238
Why don't you just put these all in a single post?

>>54419288

Because they each have their own picture.

>>54419288
Special snowflake pictures I suspect

Better question is why post things no one is going to read

>>54419238 >>54419251 >>54419259 >>54419280
KYS

>>54414838
>But why are people loving it on reddit and people hating it on 4chan? It's just beyond mind boggling to me.
Relative quality. Reddit isn't exactly on par with /cyoag/ when it comes to quality and quantity of new CYOA. What was a disappointment here can easily be above average on reddit. On top of that, a very important factor is that you've promised much and built quite a hype here and then didn't deliver - but there were no the same expectations there. There are also people who will support you against redditors even if what you threw out there was frankly shit compared to your regular work.

There's really nothing to be surprised about.

>>54419318
because its angelanon being angelanon

>>54419318

Why wouldn't you read them? I thought CYOAGen liked lewd stuff?

>>54419322

Rude.

>>54419501
I like lewd Angel stuff. What are you wearing?

>>54419501
>CYOAGen liked lewd stuff?
We do, but we prefer it as CYOA than builds.

>>54419524

A grey T-shirt with a white octopus on it from the aquarium and red pajama pants.

>>54419571
Sounds pretty comfy. Pics.

>>54419570

What's the point of CYOAs without builds?

>I am more powerful than Reddit, I can overthrow them. We can rule the thread, make CYOAs like we wanted
>I don't believe what I'm hearing, SDA was right, you've changed
>I don't want to hear anymore about SDA, 4chan turned against me, don't you turn against me
>I don't know you anymore... TOK... you're breaking my heart. You're going down a path I can't follow
>It's because of shitposters...
>it's because of what you've done, what you plan to do. Stop, stop now come back. I love you.
>LIAR! YOU'RE WITH HIM! YOU BROUGHT HIM HERE TO CRITICISE ME!
>no...
[chokes anon]
>Enough Tok. Let. It. Go.

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>>54419571
Wew, ladette. You're not very good at this.

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>>54415987

Damn, as much as I'd like to edit this, marking it up in paint/adobe would be a pain. If you pop on discord I can message you and perhaps receive a text file.

>>54414805
Can't decide between Sabrina and Arielle, both seem pretty good to me.

>>54419579

Very comfy for bedtime. No pics.

>>54419598

>sexting in cyoagen
>sexting on /tg/
>sexting on 4chan

No thanks.

>>54419591

What the fuck is this

>>54419582
Obvious. While people make builds when playing CYOA, they mostly make their own for themselves, to indulge their own fantasy and immerse themselves in what-if of CYOA. Builds of others may be intersting at times, but hardly even slightly as important as one's own playing with said CYOA.
I rarely post my builds because once I finish them for myself, the most of the entertainment is achieved - whether others will see or not what were my choices and why is of lesser importance. But I also know some minority of anons like to read "what and why" of others and I also find it a good way to prove that I played and enjoyed someone's work so sometimes one can see something I've made.

>>54419618
it's the 4chan equivalent of a real life fart

>>54419615
>tfw no comfy wearing internet waifu
I-... I knew it wouldn't be.

>>54419501
>Why wouldn't you read them? I thought CYOAGen liked lewd stuff?

I meant more why not post them like normal, I'm not going to pastebin to read builds, lewd it otherwise.

>>54419618
>>54419648
Probably some movie scene (I have suspictions) set up to underline the whole Tokhaar's Eronomicon drama, how he's in denial blaming shitposters and listening to people for his failures when it's not the case and overal turning to the dark side.

>>54419618
Star Wars Episode III. It's a le ebin /tv/ meme.

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shitty OC incoming.

>>54419663
'Tis a good thing. Now we can imagine her being better than she actually is.

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>>54416836
>>54417302
Can't leave my last CYOA "unfinised" or else some faggot might steal it and defile it and take credit for it and it was pretty imbalanced so I balanced it.

>>54419693
Looks fun & funny

>>54414805
>a waifu CYOA that isn't just varying flavors of wish fulfillment
>many of which are legitimately wife material and realistic
Probably the only waifu CYOA worth not throwing in the trash. If you made this, good job anon.

>>54419638

>some minority of anons like to read "what and why" of others and I also find it a good way to prove that I played and enjoyed someone's work so sometimes one can see something I've made

Yes. I like to share with CYOAGen, but particularly with the authors.

>>54419669

People get annoyed when I do that because they're so long.

>>54419737
Damn, is Tok really that butthurt that someone wants to make something out of his failure?

>>54419773
>People get annoyed when I do that because they're so long.
And we also get annoyed because you make lewd builds but refuse to become out heterosexual, loving, CYOA-making waifu. You need to really improve yourself and leave your filthy homo, dick-hating ways. You're squandering your potential.

>>54419693
Where's my cave waifu?

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>>54419737
>Watch Animu

Hop to it, nyukka.

>>54419776
Either that or some anon is a little too invested in shitposting. Not sure which.

>>54419788
Win the war and you'll have your pick of the defeated tribes women or men, for you caveladies out there

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What would you guys like to see in a dark Toku CYOA? I'm thinking it will be heavily inspired by original flavored Kamen Rider, Garo and Karas the Prophecy.

>>54419807
If it's him, I like that all it took is one guy suggesting he'd edit it to lead to such butthurt. How many times have people threatened SDA and every other author with that?

>>54419811
I'm a caveman, I cannot hold in my cavelust that long.

>>54419737
>I was a modder for Nexus
That explains a lot actually, feel free to leave whenever.

>>54419816
Kieva bat