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How many ship building CYOAs are there? I dig those, might try my hand at making a simple "pick one" since I don't know hwo to photoshop

>>53852694

Titan, I guess, but none of those are appealing
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Right, here we go then
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Updated with more options and more options to choose from, though only for the second half of the cyoa.

Posting in new thread as mistakenly posted at the end of the last one.
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>>53852751
I've made so many builds for this I don't even know what's left to make.
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>>53852836
And here we have the fruit of todays labours, the second DLC for Beastmaster.

As always, feedback and pointing out my inevitable many typos would be appreciated.

I think I'm done with this particular project for now; its been fun but I want to try a few other things next.
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>>53852838
That's pretty obvious, anon. You make a remake or an expansion. Add more races and shit.
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>>53852889
SDA, I have to warn you, I knew a guy who acted like you are acting more and more in another general. Now he went full on bipolar disorder, literally hired thirdworlders to perpetually spam the general, and has probably killed himself.

You should take control of your autism before it fully takes control of you.
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>>53852889

I mean aside yours stardust senpai. I'm thinking less sci-fi than space faring. You ever wonder how baller it would be to ride like Baba Yaga

Hey, is it true you're a slim guy
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>>53852889
>>53852929


I'm a casual fucker, what's up with SDA?
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>>53852929
>>53852940
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>>53852971
His addiction to anal sex is consuming his life and only thing he can distract himself with is shitposting in here. Please try to understand, he's in a lot of pain
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>>53852881
Huh? I didn't make the cyoa.
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>>53853004
Would you say he's butthurt?
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>>53853005
I absolutely know that because I did.
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>>53853029
I don't think you understood my post at all.
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>>53853135
I'm pretty sure I did.
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>>53852993
SDA are there going to be lewd job options?
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>>53853263
For you to be a hyu-man manwhore for the cats?

Hmm...
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>>53853301
>In catgirl waterworld utopia anal is really popular for some reason
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>>53853301
Delicious
Fur
Clothing
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>>53853301
Let me describe the differences between human and cat penis and how this would affect the intercourse

I'll just quickly kill myself first
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>>53853465
They have human penises and vaginas, anon.

>>53853455
These are our genetically-enhanced children, anon. Their physical traits are top notch, as is their tastes in music, books, CYOAs, and sexual activities. Of course anal is very popular.
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>>53853506
>anal is very popular
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>>53853506
>They have human penises and vaginas, anon.
Immersion ruined, can't play
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>>53853434
Wizard Police is the comfiest, so that's my choice
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Rolled 18, 28 = 46 (2d50)

>>53853555
stability (41)
true chaos
stability (44)
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>>53852868
So if you have Ryanne or Cally, you'll get 1 less extra companion?

Anyway, typos.
>Under Kalos Centholen
>. . . his skill with a bow in almost unparalleled.
Change 'in' to 'is'.

>Under Skirmisher and Scout
>. . . in your factions favour.
Should be "faciton's" here. Add a '.

>Under Control of the Waves
>. . . simply to large for you . . .
Change "to" to "too".

>Under Exterminator
>one of your enemies greatest strengths . . .
Change "enemies" to "enemy's".

>Under Strike Targets description
>. . . whether its in open combat . . .
Change "its" to "it's".

>Under The Prospect of Peace description
>A would be peacemaker . . .
Make "would be" into "would-be". There are actually a number of instances in the rest of this page that require this type of correction, but I ignored them since it would be tedious to type them all out. But this one definitely needs the -.

>Under Rewards description
>. . . courses of the war . . .
Change "courses" to "course".

>Under The Blessing of Life
>. . . stretched out of over the span of years.
Remove the first "of" here.

>Under Valanna Swangsong
>. . . on joining holy orders . . .
Change to "on joining a holy order".

>Under Lyla DeKrill
>Lyla a sly . . .
Should be "Lyla is a sly".
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>>53853555
>God of worlds -2 rolls +Adventure
>25 Sense Lies
>47 Read minds
>7 Sense emotions
>15 Fire affinity
>26 Change hair colour

Huh to be random it got a consistent theme sort of a shame i didn't get inmortality
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>>53853677
Thank you very much anon, I've fixed all those now.

>So if you have Ryanne or Cally, you'll get 1 less extra companion?

The idea is you can continue with Ryanne or Cally if you chose them initially, but you have a selection of new companions to replace others that are unavailabe for the war.

So if you picked Ryanne and Whisper, Ryanne would continue being a companion for the war and you could have Kalos in lieu of Whisper for the duration.

If you'd chosen Gideon and Whisper, neither would come to the war with you, so you could pick two of the new companions instead.
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>>53853961
... but now that I think about it, it'd be better to give the option to swap Ryanne or Cally out in favour of one of the new companions if you were so inclined anyway; can just say they went back to talent scouting mercs.

I'll make a revision and post again in a future thread.
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Can someone post the fixed version of that RWBY cyoa?
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The lewd one?
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>>53854262
If you mean the ahegao one, a fixed version hasn't been released yet.
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>>53853827
>>53853862
>>53853895
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>>53853989
Never did a CYOA build before

Name: Felix LeChat

Charges:
Unethical Experiments
-Medical Science[used to be a mob doctor, knows all kinds of obscure surgical techniques]
Skills:
Basic- Small Arms, Evasion, Durability, Small Unit Tactics, Linguistics, Bluffing, Disguise, Politics, Navigation

Advanced: Biomechanics, Leadership, Charm, Science, Business Management, Anthropology

Expert: Medicine, Strategy

Perks:
Psychic, Advanced Ship, Connections, Well Prepared

Drawbacks:
Rookie, Public Enemy

Equipment:
Weapons - N.G.B.R., Archimedes' Mirror, Noble 550, Reichardt 6
Armor - Juggernaut, Regulator
Misc - Guide Book, Survival Gear, Medical Kit, Valiant
Implants- Neural Enhancer, Cardiac Regulator, Dermal Transplant

Crew Equipment:
Spare Parts, Fake IDs, EVA Suits

Ship:
Explorer
Ship Extras:
Jump Drive, APC, Sickbay, Sensors, EMP Shielding

Location:
Independent

Pursuers:
Victoria Maxwell, Poppy Appleby

Crew:
Pilot - Kyrsia Marczak
Engineer - Mary Palmer
Cybersecurity - Zara Agassi
Boarding Party - Joseph Spencer, Rurik Bakyov, Hawk
Salvage - Johanna Hunter


I figure my strategy would be to lay low for a while, searching abandoned/primitive worlds for tech and supplies that would let me eventually create duplicate bodies for all of us and use them to fake our deaths, ending the manhunt. In the meantime we'll pose as salvagers, selling everything we don't need.
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>>53854262
I was planning a cyoa and then that was released and I trashed everything. Why make anything when it will be worse anyway
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It's a fresh new day guys! Let's all be awesome!
1/5
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>>53854477
2/5
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>>53854493
3/5
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>>53854516
4/5
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>>53854540
5/5
Small update to this page at the bottom of the choices. Basically states any damage done physically and mentally is reverted after one year.
And also no one gets raped. Kinnda weird I had to flat out write that in.
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>>53854561
It's also dangerous to go alone, take this.
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>>53854561
Does anyone else feel like this CYOA is just a bit underwhelming next to Zodiac Brides? For me, it made quite a bit of difference that the waifu text was written by the waifus, which gave them some personality and life. This one just feels like a generic waifu+power CYOA.

A good generic Waifu+Power CYOA, but it doesn't have that same spark. I dunno, I'm a worthless lurker and am probably not fit to pass judgement.
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>>53854633
The waifus are better in this one.
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>>53854633
>worthless lurker
You made a clear and concise point without shitposting so that makes you a lot better than most my dude.
I wouldn't say it's worse or better, just a different type.
But then again I'm biased so I'll shutup.
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>>53854516
>>53854540
Pictures and headers below aren't centered.
Bloody disgusting.
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I forgot how much work making cyoas is.
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>>53854671
Do you need a hug?
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>>53854671
How? That boggles me.
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>>53854625
Gloryhole is really gay but money is money, especially in this economy and I'm not going to turn down opportunity to earn good wage while being able to work only about hour per day at home. Even if it's gay as balls.

Apprenticeship, hoping that it leads to some form of employment. Hopefully to one that doesn't involve the gloryhole.

Not really sure what to take for third, none of the stuff really strikes my fancy. The love doll I guess, good night's sleep is important. I hope it's not going to murder the cashier at the store I go to, that would be kinda inconvenient.
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>>53854477
>You will never smite evil together with Ma
Why live?

>Waffle fortune cookie
Other cookies simply can't compete
>Grass jelly
I Anon the shapeshifting Master of Darkness unleashed an unspeakable evil! well not really
>Chopsticks
SSS rank combos unlocked
>Custard Tart
After a long day of adventuring there is nothing better than to rest in your pocket dimension
>Lucky charm bracelet
*You Will Know Our Names intensifies*
>Ma
Best waifu
>Forgotten
Better give closure to this world because i am not going back
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>>53854701
>cashier at the store I go
I swear I've seen you post this exact build before, just worded differently. How ya doin cashier lady anon?
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>>53854689
I need an egg for these trying times.

Yes please.

>>53854697
I put a lot of effort in them. I'm also a slow writer, and very particular about my designs, though I'm keeping it fairly simple for this one.
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>>53854783
Nothing worth doing is ever easy. You're doin good anon.
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>>53854783
>I need an egg for these trying times.
Angel has many to spare.
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>>53854783
Damm i am using this image a lot this days
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>>53854671
You can do it ! I believe in you !
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>>53854783
Do not give up, you made some excellent cyoas in the past.
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>>53854671
>>53854783
You get into that set of editor programs, and you kick that CYOA's ass. Don't let it out until you're happy with it. We believe in you.
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>>53852868
>I think I'm done with this particular project for now
Awww, no Age of piracy or Dragonrider DLC?
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>>53854783
May as well end it all
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>>53854885
3 out of 6 sections done so far, shouldn't be too difficult from here.

>>53854921
You'd like that wouldn't you, big tittied whore.

>>53854831
How's your audit cyoa going?
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>>53854561
I really think forced drawbacks, if present, should always be the first choice in a cyoa. Exudes a kind of 'gotcha' feeling otherwise. Also, has there been a mad lad who picked experiment?

>And also no one gets raped. Kinnda weird I had to flat out write that in.
I mean my first association with a tough prison is 'pick up that soap'. Considering that it doesn't really state what happens, the imagination just kinda runs wild, you know?
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>>53854824
Don't talk about your mother that way anon.
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>>53854980
What is the audit CYOA meant to be? The name itself isn't exactly riveting.
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>>53854980
On hold and is third in line right now.

>>53855279
You audit things. That's it, pretty much.
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>>53855279
nazis
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>>53854434
>Why make anything when it will be worse anyway
It MIGHT be worse, it might also be better, you won't know until after you've made it, so make it anyway. When you decide not to do anything because "it's just gonna be worse", you're letting the worst part of you win, so forget about whether it's gonna be worth it.
Forget about whether it's gonna crash the thread either. If it's not gonna be over your shit, it's gonna be over someone else's shit. Might as well make what you and your fans want.
As a creator, you've only got one option: Damn the shitposters and go full speed ahead! Let the future decide whether it was worth it! you live in the present, a time of action, so act. Show your fans why they believe in you, show the non-fans why they should believe in you and remind yourself why you create in the first place
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>>53854434
That's really fucking dumb
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>>53855200
No one's picked experiment yet. General consensus is mute.
When I first wrote it I tried to imply "Yeah these all suck ass, but nothing too bad will happen", but we all saw how that went.
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>>53854477
Cookie: Waffel and Regal Fortune Cookies

Dessert/Trinket: Almond Biscuit and Chopsticks
(in a fight I prioritize vitality and speed, it is better to chip away on your enemies defenses than to be impatient and try to end it early with strength, just to be knocked out yourself)

Waifu: Rabbit (hard choice, I think the waifus were really solid, more consistently good than in Zodiac Brides, although I liked the introduction via letter better, Monkey and Rat are second best)

Drawback: Mute (not that big a deal, although it does negate the Regal Cookie for a while)

I am gonna travel through Triforge and get to know it. Once my voice returns I will attempt to establish my own kingdom to pass down to the eldest of my innumerable children.
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>>53853506
>Of course anal is very popular.
Catgirls and anal?

Perfect world!
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>>53854477
So many interesting and tempting choices here.

>Fortune Cookie
Waffel

Hey man who doesn't want a little isekai. Regal would be a great combo with this as well but I don't know.

>Dessert
Almond Biscuit

>Accessory
Jade Ring

>Extra Fortune Cookie
Regal

So many great choices, again, but the Ring + Biscuit combo was too strong, and the Ring also meshes well with the extra cookie I decided to get. The Hat would be very strong as well but it seems a bit risky to me.

>Girl
Lóng

Tiger, Snake, Monkey, and Rat would have been great as well, but since I plan on becoming some sort of king in Triforge I think Dragon would make the perfect queen.

I don't feel super into naming someone that I didn't make myself but I'll come up with a few to try on her and she what she likes.

>Cost
Homeless

Lóng isn't going to be super happy about this but I absolutely adore that type of fish-out-water story and plus I think it'll be better for our eventual rule if we come from humble origins. Besides, we're going to be adventuring and traveling and exploring a new world. Staying cooped up in a house would kind of defeat the purpose.

Is Triforge a setting from another CYOA or anything? Just wondering if there's any extra information on it.
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>>53855515
Triforge is my default name for my high fantasy, high magic world I use in my other cyoas.
Plus when I eventually make a card that allows you to fuse any two of my cyoas it'll be somewhat fitting.
Very good build too. I like how you thought to use homeless to your advantage in the new world.
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>>53855579
Has triforge been used in other cyoa than this and worlds collide?
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>>53855515
>dragon wants to settle down and life a quiet life
>lets force her to be homeless and go exploring with you
You sound like an absolute top tier waifu, anon.
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>>53855612
Ummmmm....Now that you mention it no.
I did mean to have it in my crusader one for Hecate, but my dumbass forgot.
My next one definitely will.
Four horseman based kingdoms with armies and all.
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>>53855615
>You will never be a top tier waifu like anon
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>>53855665
>Four horseman based kingdoms with armies and all
Can I waifu the horsemen?
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>>53855615
Are you implying there aren't deep and meaningful conversations, streams and rivers, sunsets, or cuddles in a fantasy adventure? Besides, after a year of roughing it a bit we'll be in a much better position to get pretty much anything we want.
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>>53855703
As king you are the horseman. But I'll be sure to add queens and shit. Thinking two choices for each of the four. Even that's a lot for my strung out brain tho, so we'll see.
Basically Your powers are embodied by the name of the horseman you choose, but your kingdom is actually the opposite. While the kingdom of War has a kick-ass king and strong army, everyone knows the value of peace and community and strives for it. Just don't piss them off.
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>>53855703
>>53855752
Also kingdom of death has an unaging populace and minor necromancy
Kingdom of Famine are masters of agriculture and nature
And finally the kingdom of Pestilence are masters of medicine and chemical warfare.
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>>53852781
>Be the servant
I'll take the Fifth grail war, and I shall nudge things so that Kotomine makes the wish, and then grant his wish for destruction by basically consuming everything myself, I shall eat the entire world and gain all of their powers/souls/whatever for myself. I guess anyway. I think that's the most power I could get out of it. Though I also think it would be really hard to make it so that anyone but Kotomine, or one of the Emiyas wins, so the only wishes I would expect being asked to grant are basically utopia or destruction. For a Utopia wish I'd just grant it by manifesting a higher being that would manage the world, and also do whatever I want. If somehow someone else got a wish chances are it would be for something like a true magic or knowledge from root, in which case I'd likely grant it to not only them but myself and still end up with an absurd amount of power. As for the Servant I'm taking, it's hard to decide, but I'm going to go with Rider, as I expect I would get along better with her than Caster.
>Infinite Banner, and Mech
I guess I shall take over a nation somewhere with whatever powers I got from being the grail, my mech and enhanced leadership skills. Probably Indonesia or some other island nation near them.
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>>53855724
No, I'm just saying that's literally the exact opposite of 'settling down'. Forcing that on someone who has had enough of that seems like a really huge dick move to me. I don't really see the reason behind it either, besides 'she's a dragon and dragons are an imperial symbol'.
Also, if you want to become king that also really sounds like the antithesis of quiet life.
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>>53854477
Can't I just eat alone? do I need to take one of those generic fetish fuel with me or no deal?
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>>53855783
Sounds neat. Does you are the horseman imply immortality? Otherwise the first choice seems like it would be pretty strong in comparison.
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>>53855783
>Pestilence
You better ducking include Conquest I swear on your mother....
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>>53855814
He mentioned war in his first post.
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>>53855783
I prefer the Good Omens version of the Horsemen, where humans had slain Pestilence but replaced him with Pollution.
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>>53854980
Hey Bliss, while you're here:

Do you remember much about your concepts for this? If so, can you clarify how Mimicry works, both in general and with Evolved Physiology?
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>>53855814
>Conquest
That sounds like mystery box potential
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Fuck, captcha ate my image or something.
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>>53855812
As king you can only die in battle.
>>53855805
If you're an asshole, just ditch her after leaving.
>>53855814
What this guy said, they're basically the same thing for the sake of this cyoa>>53855828
>>53855855
>slain Pestilence but replaced him
Wut?
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>>53855855
>Slain Pestilence
>Replace him with something that can be considered within his field of influence
Sounds dumb
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>>53855858
>>53855877
Mimicry allows you to pick up and use any of the other elements until you run out of mana. You simply do not have any element until you come in contact with another one.

Everything else works as if you had the other element, but your type remains mystic.
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>>53855892
>Wut?
In a metaphorical sense.
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>>53854540
how do people react to centaur lady
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>>53855996
She is best girl
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>>53855515
>Lóng isn't going to be super happy
what a nice way to put it
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>>53855892
>>53855923
With development of penicillin and witnessing effects of pollution, like acid rain, mankind's fear of end shifted from disease to pollution
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>>53855892
>War and Conquest is the same
You are no nigga of mine
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>>53856045
What is the difference.
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>>53855793
I dunno, I saw things going differently but you make some good points. Really the best option would be the opportunity to eat and hang out with a few of the girls and discuss your plans with them first before committing to any one plan of action. We really hardly know anything about them aside from the broadest strokes.
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>>53856079
War is two men shooting at each other. Conquest is one man holding a gun to the other's head and stealing his wallet.
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>>53855953
So, you can freely drop your current element to pick up a nearby one, but can't cast any spells without having an element? Is there a limit (time-based, until draining your pool, etc) on how long you can keep an element?

Also, does Physiology just not work when you don't have an element equipped? How does it work for more abstract elements?
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>>53856079
War is the slaughter of men. Conquest is the domination of men
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>>53856105
Surprisingly, that's actually the dumbest thing I've read in a CYOA thread all day. Quite an accomplishment, you know, considering.
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>>53856123
>Is there a limit (time-based, until draining your pool, etc) on how long you can keep an element?
Whoops, ignore that bit; didn't reread well enough.
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>>53855877
Reminder that mystic crystal is best element
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hello.

i am making a cyoa

i am requesting images of uncomfortable looking white men in suits (preferably about 40+)

they will be in cyoa
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>>53856105
>>53856045
Would a mercenary band lead by Conquest be okay? You'd get extra armies, but no kingdom unless you took it yourself.
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>>53856164
Actually, asides from what I've already stated, what else do you guys wana see in it?
I know people want proper kingdom builders, and I wana try and make a good one for ya.
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>>53856154
> Self-Raping Child
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>>53856183
I want to conquer a kingdom rather than be given one. I want to earn my spot as king.
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>>53856191
All sexual contact is rape because Obi-Wan didn't consent.
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>>53856246
I have the high ground though
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>>53856164
Why not make Conquest an emperor with a far larger population and thus a greater dominion over man?
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>>53856123
>you can freely drop your current element to pick up a nearby one
That's your power, yeah.
>but can't cast any spells without having an element
Raw mana cannot exist so it will fizzle out, whatever you do.

Physiology will still work. And you use the energy from abstract elements to power yourself.
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>>53855855
Technically he retired whilst complaining about penicillin. Joke's really on him, if he'd played the long game he'd be back, stupid antibiotic resistant strains.
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>>53856282
with not thus. Hinting more at oppression and such?
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>>53856242
>>53856282
I'll keep these in mind. Anything else?
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>>53856291
>be Pestlence
>retired for 75 years
>living the good life
>open the newspaper one day to read about new measles outbreaks in America
>apparently "anti-vaxxers" are bringing back all my old hits
>tfw have to go back to work because of some dumb suburban moms
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>>53856306
In the kingdom of death there is a ancient master necromancer who is a loli that no one takes seriously
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>>53856285
>That's your power, yeah.
Just checking that you didn't need to drain and recharge in order to mimic something else.
>Physiology will still work. And you use the energy from abstract elements to power yourself.
I was trying to ask what Mimicry, Spacetime, and the like's Physiology forms looked like. If mimicry physiology just turns you into raw mana that immediately dissipates, it's basically a suicide power, and the abstract elements are harder to conceptualize.

Also, how does Absorption interact with the mimicry? Can you recharge while you're mimicking in addition to your new element's power, do you not get the utility power that you're copying, or are you locked out of recharging unless you fully drain?
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>>53856098
I mean, yeah, that's kind of in the nature of cyoas. It just struck me as a really weird choice, because dragon and rooster are the only options that state that they want to settle down. Even more so because dragon even mentions having traveled and just wanting to live in peace now. Seems like the 'anti-adventure' option to me.
I guess exploration could theoretically be somewhat peaceful, but I doubt that's going to be the same in a fantasy world, and even then being king is pretty stressful, I think. The other possible candidates you mentioned seem like a way better fit to me (except rat maybe).
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>>53856285
Oh hey now that you are answering questions transmuted objects with the crystal element are unstable?
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>>53856306
Please, as few 'generic'/flavour only choices as possible.
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>>53854561
Did I miss something? Forgotten is basically a no brainer if you pick the waffle cookie.
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>>53856383
After transmution they are the same as other materials and no longer unstable.
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>>53856412
What do you mean?
>>53856448
That was the point
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>>53856340
Give me the pic and she'll be a Death specific bodygaurd.
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>>53856468
Good it seems that my plan of opening a shop where i sell my transmuted objects is viable
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>>53856473

>That was the point

y
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Rolled 24, 39, 15, 47 = 125 (4d50)

>>53853555
God of Stability: #10
God of Worlds:>>53855930
God of True Chaos: 4 rolls
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>>53856502
Oh shit i didn't thought i would get this far how about this one?
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>>53854477
This is really well done.

>Cookie: Waffle and Ginger
As others have said, escape fantasies are pretty standard. The fact that it says "you would surely last forever, through legend or other means" really gets my brain ticking (pic related). Also, exploration and adventure goes together amazingly with a fantasy world.

>Dessert: Red Bean Soup.Trinket: Lucky Charm Bracelet.
Tk and danger sense synergize amazingly well. Also, telekinesis is the most versatile power. Use it as a lockpick, a sixth sense based on telekinetic "feeling," a primary weapon, a toilet paper substitute.

>Niu
Has a great personality. Also, a healthy mind is a healthy body. Adventure involves lots of exercise and lifting after all. Ma is probably more well suited for Triforge, but I don't like her personality or her armor.

>Curse: forgotten
I am going to a new world, so this is more of a way to stop my family from worrying. Although to be in the spirit of things:
>Another curse: homeless.
The fact that this and broke are two different curses is a bit confusing. My interpretation is that I can still use the adventure card for anything other than food or lodging. So get a tent, equipment, and go murderhobo.
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>>53856539
Cause I'm a bad writer thats constantly high
>>53856570
I already guessed thats who you wanted. Great minds think alike anon.
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>>53854477
>Regal Fortune Cookie
I've always wanted to set the world straight.
>Jade Ring & Lucky Charm
For a great combo with my cookie and each other.
>Lòng
for some reason ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
>Blind
Doesn't invalidate my gift and I think it would be a learning experience to say the least.
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>>53856580
>tent
Broke and homeless are different in that broke means your money is limited, but you can have a house and homeless lets you use any money you come across but no house. So in other words no tents since I count that as a house, blame the native American in me.
Enjoy the underpasses of bridges.
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>>53856732
You forgot your two powers.
How do people keep misreading it?
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>>53856690

>Cause I'm a bad writer thats constantly high

y
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>>53852728
>1000 super human fucks running around the world after a year

Holy shit no
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>>53856742
What if I use telekinesis to build a small bridge in the middle of nowhere?
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>>53854477
i really like this one, good job anon.
my choices:
>regal cookie
>golden cookie
>grass jelly + jade ring
it's a hard decision for me as to which waifu i want, but i think i'm gonna go with she because of her musical aptitude.
as for the final thing to take, they all suck pretty hard but i think the one i'd be okay with the most is probably being sick in a hospital for a year.
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>>53854477
Golden Fortune Cookie
Almond Biscuit
Tangyuan
Lucky Charm Bracelet
Jade Ring
Niu
Separated

Get unlimited money and have a one year journey looking for my waifu. Travel the sights, obtain skills from my travels and end with a happy ever after with the waifu. Not bad overall.
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>>53856769
Because I'm 19, going to a Uni for two diplomas I don't want and generally don't know what I'm doing in my life.
>>53856820
I'll allow it.
>>53856829
First guy to take sick. So will you visit your waifu or will she visit you?
>>53856845
A wonderful plan mate. That's why I put in Separated.
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>>53856886
i'd be the sick one in that case. i think it'd be harder for me to see someone i'm very close to be very sick than just be very sick myself.
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>>53854477
>waffle cookie
Adventuring in a fantasy world sounds dope, especially because the trinkets seem pretty strong.

>red bean soup
>custard tart
>lucky charm bracelet
>bent spoon
Bent spoon for defense and because it sounds quite fun. Lucky charm and soup should be able to defuse anything that bent spoon is not able to deal with. The soup would also be a pretty good offensive item, so there should be no dangers that can't be dealt with. Also using telekinesis to mess with people is a dream of mine. Custard tart to find out whether immortality is possible and if so how to acquire it. I'm wondering, would custard tart be able to open a portal to the required resources?

Tiger appeals to me (especially because her interests are pretty nice) and tsundere is fine with me, so not taking her stings somewhat, but
>broken used goods
no thanks.
Monkey is my pick, as she sounds like a really good buddy and also pretty useful on an adventure, not that additional defense or anything would be required. It doesn't really state what she is like personality wise and what specific interests she really has, but that probably shouldn't be too big of a deal. Being wise and smart is also really nice.
Dog is pretty good too, but sounds more fitting for a comfy life. Horse has that lord-servant dynamic which I'm not really fond of. Others are decent, but not really my type besides dragon, who doesn't want to adventure.

>forgotten
Basically a freebie. Almost feels like cheating here.
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>>53856765
Heck, I think one cookie and one passive and one active is more than enough.

For the extra cookie I ( >>53856732 ) would probably go for the golden cookie.
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>>53854477

Waffle Cookie

telekinesis, almond cookie, chopsticks, jade ring

monkey waifu, if i'm going on adventures my waifu can't be dead weight

Forgotten so my family doesn't miss me. if that doesn't count I choose unlucky
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>>53854477
>Fortune Cookie
The Regal Fortune cookie, I've always wanted to rule the world.

>Desserts
Red Bean Soup and the Almond Biscuit

>Trinkets
Jade Ring and the Old Military Cap

With this, I'm pretty much always invisible due to the jade ring keeping me calm, as strong as 100 men, and able to throw cars through the air and fly.

>Waifu
Tough choice, Gôu, Zhū and and Mâ are all pretty cute. I think I'll choose Zhū because doing sexual stuff with Mâ would be hard and as much as I like Gôu, she could interfere with my plan to gain power and be a little suffocating, and Zhū's ability to cook and tiddies are pretty great

>Drawback
Being separated for a year won't be so bad, it won't interfere with my personal life at all, and once the year is up me and my waifu will be back together.
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>>53852868
I really like this DLC, the conflict feels layered, with formidable figthers on both sides and varied scenarios
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>>53856552
Looks like I got 10 Regeneration, 24 A single Shadow Clone, 39 Master Entertainer/Bullshitter, 15 Fire Mastery, 47 and I can read peoples minds....I am the best two man team ever.
>>53855930
History: New Arrival
Age & Gender: 17/male
Race: Human.
Starting Location: Beacon Academy, Vale
Semblance: Executioner, being brought from the outside left me wrong, I blame the Chaos god, tricky dick.
Gifts/Talents: Strength-20, Agility-20, Energy-20, Tracking-20, Will-10, Intelligence-10.
Weapons: Melee-100(Weight Enhancement-100) Long Sword, Ranged-200(Dust Mod-50) Heavy Sniper Rifle.
Items & Gear: Scroll, Wilderness Gear-50, Dust Chargers-50, Rebreather-50, Armor-100, Parachute and Grappling Hook-150.
I am a two man team that got a chance to fuck with the gingerman and help Ruby. Its a pretty good day, even got some more facts on Cinder's plans.
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>>53857113
Invincible*
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It's been a while since I've posted this. Here's the first and currently only CYOA I've ever finished.
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>>53852751

>Angel -10pts
>Grace (Free)
>Magic Affinityx4 -6pts (1 Free and discounts cuz Angel)
>Flight (Free once I get wings)
>Lifespanx2 -2pts (1 Free and discount cuz Angel)
>Exceptional Appearance -2pts
>Vitality -2pts
>Regeneration -2pts
>Low Magic Fantasy Setting

My plan is to explore and learn about the world while growing my magic powers. I can eventually get wings and heal and protect people and smite too. I think since low magic setting I can become most powerful sorceress around and get followers and try to ascend to Goddesshood of beauty and light.
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>>53857483
Huh i never saw this one it is kinda neat
>Vaguely omniscient to-do list
I am so forgetful of things that this is obligatory it also allows to so see the future in a really really vague way and that is kinda neat
>Half-minute time skip
Holy shit this thing is amazing drink water? done do a skill rotation in a MMORPG? done punch a dude in the face? done It just works
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Rolled 3 (1d4)

>>53852775
Going with a simple yet kinda broken build here.
Male
Commoner
Human
2x might
1x stamina
4x speed
1x vitality
2x toughness

Danger Bait

rolling
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>>53857483
I feel like I'm missing soo much by not reading PDF CYOAs but I just can't get into those that long and that don't have pictures. I like reading and all, but the amount of choices in PDFs is too much that it feels tedious to make builds.
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>>53855930
History: New Arrival
Age & Gender: 17/Male
Race: Human
Starting Location: Beacon Academy, Vale
Semblance: Ring Leader
Gifts/Talents: Combat-40, Strength-20, Energy-20, Intelligence-10, Fear-10.
Weapons: Melee X2-200(Weight Enhancement) Pic related in each hand.
Items & Gear: Scroll, Wilderness Gear-50, Rebreather-50, Armor-100, Parachute and Grappling Hook-150, Pocket the last 250.
Scary motherfucker walking by and attacking Ramon's goons when they break into the Dust shop, I do not take off the mask for any reason to better instill fear.
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>>53856261
And Padme had the deep cave...
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>>53856570
Isn't that from kore wa zombie desu ka? Euclid or something.
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>>53853434
Sphess Ranger, I wanna be a cop, in space. And fug several aliens when I'm not on active duty
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>>53857824
It's 6 pages long, and the font size is massive.
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>>53856961
Smart, but kinda selfish. The year for you will pass by as you drift in and out of consciousness. She will watch you suffer for an entire year. This is why I didn't take sick.
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>>53855377
I like this song.
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>>53858104
No idea
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>>53858243
yeah either way it can be interpreted as a pretty selfish choice. as long as you can make up for the year of suffering after the fact, i think you should be alright.
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>>53858369
>>53858104
Yes. She never fucking talks.
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>>53853506
>They have human penises and vaginas, anon.
Both? At the same time?
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>>53852861
Giver of sanctuary
Medicus
Great smith
Seeker of wisdom
Potent of mind

Title: Saint

Artifact: Armour, Bound soul and ultra tech
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>>53858467
Why?
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>>53857040
>broken used goods
In the 'release thread' they mentioned that she wasn't in a romantic relationship, but that it was more a crush on a childhood friend or something.
The broken part still stands, but if you don't want to mend her heart, you're not a true romantic.

>>53856829
Why not take mute? If you're really sick you won't be able to much, probably can't talk often either. With mute you have a lot more freedom and if you are fast at typing can communicate very well still.
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>>53854477
>Ginger
I like ginger. Isn't fortune cookies reserved for after meal complements though? all the chink places around me jew up and sell them instead of just giving them. Guess that's not a problem anymore.
>Red Bean Soup+Custard Tart
>Lucky Charm Bracelet + Jade Ring
It's hard to make a build without knowing what sort of threats I will be facing. Am I the only meta-human in the world? did the chinese lady went western and opened up a bunch of franchises around the world? Will it be some Jackie Chan adventures shit fighting shugenja, jiang shi and
LE Kung Fu masters? This build should be adequeate for everything, including a life of peace.
>Lóng
Sound like some sort of hostess bar. I believe this is the one I could connect on a personal basis. Still waters run deep as they say. Unless they are just a puddle I guess.
>Homeless, Amnesia, Forgotten
I feel like this combination plus Lóng's nurturing nature could result in a much better new self. Live a life in tension before returning to placid rest. She's just like me, we could face the hardships present in the regrettable nomadic petit burgoise of today's Young Adult life but we don't wanna. Still, I think such voyages could be a sobering drought so we don't lose contact with reality.
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>>53852758
This kind of ship?
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>>53855648
Mentor: Adventurer

Spells
Arcane seed
Shifting eyes
Call swarmers
Poison blood
Boiling blood
Celestial wings
Hydrokinesis
Geokinesis

Minor powers
Repair
Decipher
Item enchantment
Heal
Call fire
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>>53856886
>Because I'm 19, going to a Uni for two diplomas I don't want and generally don't know what I'm doing in my life.

most of us don't qt
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>>53858719
mute isn't that bad when you think of it like that but everyday life is going to be that much harder when you can't speak. you're gonna have to go about your daily life either using your waifu as an interpreter or by using pen+paper or a phone that you can type on. as far as i know i don't think this cyoa writes off your issues as stuff no one will notice so you'd also have to worry about everyone around you thinking it's super weird that you're not talking and having to explain that. if i'm in a hospital not only can i still speak but that's an explainable as an illness and that's my alibi for that. if i just go mute for a year people will be like "wtf"
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>>53858726
Are you some sort of vat grown ultimate masochist/sadist?
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>>53858918
I mean everyday life is going to be a lot harder if you're stuck in a hospital.
And sure, being mute wouldn't be easy, but it wouldn't be terribly difficult either (unless you're someone who has to do a lot of presentations). Just go to some bullshit doctor and get a certificate that you're ill and can't use your voice for some time. Alternatively go to a psychologist and make up some mental illness/trauma. I don't know what your occupation is, but a lot of jobs that come to mind can be done without much problem even if you can't talk. If it's possible to work from home, it probably won't be much of a problem at all.
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>>53852766
Booming Drake
Strong Bond +1 Power
Lucy Harpford
Event: Great Joust
Opponents
1. Raktor is handily defeated by my Drakes speed closing the gap between us, with me destroying some of his bombs and then immediately flying away, letting him blow up.

2 Elenora presents more of a challenge, with her fending several of my attacks off, but she ultimately loses control over her steed, do to it being desorientated by the sonic booms.

3.Sir Sardions fight against me is the stuff of legends and lasts for hours, but in the end I am barely able to defeat him.

4. Everybody expects me to stomp Grom Undertow now, but due to his resilience it becomes a long fight and I ultimately let him defeat me, knowing that his wish is of far greater importance than mine.

It does not matter, I am gonna win next years tournament anyway.
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>>53855930
>Name: Deus "Let-He-Who-Does-Not-Praise-God-Nor-Follow-His-Laws-Be-Cast-Into-Damnation" Volt
>Guardian(90)
>25/M
>Human
>Beacon
>Blackbird
>Fear(80), Memory(60)
>Tactics(40), Combat(0)
>Weapon: Variable with Collapsible, Dust Mod, and Weight Reduction (Whip/Staff, collapses into baton (400)
>Gear: Scroll, Dust Charges x2(300), Motorbike(0)
"Yes, that is my real name. Yes, I come from a religious family. Yes, just Dace is fine."
I'll be a newly minted instructor on Martial Arts, using my significant knowledge and experience to teach students how to read their opponents and disarm and take down, lethally or non-lethally, all kinds of people and creatures using their weapons or just their bare hands. When I'm not teaching kids how to snap an Ursa's neck, I'm moonlighting as a vigilante, doing God's work and leaving criminals with broken bones to be picked up by the police.
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>>53858988
i disagree about everyday life being harder in a hospital. if you're a person with no job and you're not in school then there's really no difficulty to just lying in a hospital bed all day (besides the pain and sickness and discomfort). personally i think the muteness makes life more complicated than just sitting in a hospital for a year does.
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>>53854477
Golden Fortune Cookie.
>>53854493
Grass Jelly, Jade Ring, Almond Biscuit, Lucky Charm Bracelet.
>>53854516
Zhu
>>53854561
Experiment.
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>>53859123
Need a Batman?>>53857918
Also you need to re-read the rules, you cant be anything but 17 years old if you don't pick the new arrival.
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>>53859256
Ah sonuvabitch
>>53859123
Fine I'll be a new student/vigilante maintaining a proud family tradition of beating criminals into bloody pulps instead, teaching other students how to whoop ass in exchange for favors
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>>53859373
I can send a bird for you from the rooftops. We shall fight the night together...right after I'm done plowing Weiss and Yang.
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>>53859172
First person to take experiment. You got some balls man, and I applaud that.
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>>53859160
>there's really no difficulty to just lying in a hospital bed all day (besides the pain and sickness and discomfort)
That's a pretty huge 'besides'. And I guess we have different views on what constitutes a hard everyday life. Not being able to do anything but lay on a bed would make a normal everyday life impossible to me, so I would consider it a lot harder than just to be mute. Also, that's basically a year of your life you are wasting if you are sick the entire time. With mute you can still at least do some things, even if not as efficient.
>>53859172
>Experiment.
The absolute mad man.
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>>53859395
>>53859406
I wont leave my waifu or cripple myself waiting for her.
>>53859406
I get a beautiful girl that likes to cook to take care of me after I get abused by scientists. Worth it. Plus I get to use the shapeshifting to make myself get a giant dick to plow her with, and the iron skin and focus to be the hardest cock she will ever take. A little pain and suffering on my part is fine.
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>>53858918
That's what I figured. How many hours a day do you talk? Less than one? Compare this to how many hours you see, hunger, or otherwise enjoy life without misery.

Besides, most communication is nonverbal as they say, and you'll learn sign language and other fun stuff.

Plus you can do lewd things. Like: The first words once you get your voice back can be "I love you."
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>>53859445
>All he wants is a massive iron cock to plow his thicc waifu
This nigger is going places.
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>>53859395
You know, Ring + Biscuit is going to make it pretty interesting for those experimenting on him. By the rules of the CYOA they'll still succeed though. Probably better to just not use the powers for that.
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>>53859473
>How many hours a day do you talk? Less than one?
Just because you and are I shut-in NEETS doesn't mean it's easy-peasy for your waifu to go an entire year without being able to talk to you. Personally I'd rate it just below poverty in terms of preference.
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>>53859474
It was either her or the horse girl, I could easily do both...but the centaur may just try to kill the scientists instead of waiting, so a soft cuddling pig girl does my work better. Plus there's good cooking to be hard after they finish mutilating me in my sleep.
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>>53858670
she has words of power or something
i forgot
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>>53859475
If any of their experiments mean leaving something in me, I can just harden and flex it to submission. And the Jade Ring will let me ignore the pain if I can meditate long enough...having a girl that loves to eat "helping" doesn't hurt either.
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>>53858670
Insanely powerful magic, the armor is for suppressing her magic, but she also can't talk because the things she says are imbued with a lot of magic. She does get to talk a few times in total, but mostly she communicates through writing.
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>>53854561
Hmmm...

Broke: Graduate school is like this already. Probably the one I should pick.
Homeless: Can't do research while homeless.
Shunned: Need cooperation from advisor and others to do research. No.
Sick: Already used medical leave.
Unlucky. FUCK NO THIS IS HARD ENOUGH ALREADY.
Amnesia: Ha ha no.
Mute: Yeah, that's a great quality in a TA.
Experiment: I could take this one. For science. Fuckers would need to prove they'd passed an IRB, though.
Imprisoned: This might actually help me write up. Shame I'm not at the dissertation-writing step.
Separated: Acceptable. Sorry waifu, I have shit to do.
Forgotten: Is the soulless golem capable of doing my work without fucking up?
Blind: Yeah, no, it's hard to read papers when you can't see, and the disabilities office is worthless.
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>>53856154
>And people wonder how little Johnny grew up with a bondage fetish.

Shit, when I was that kid's age I could already slip out of a straight jacket, no joke.
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>>53859579
It's easy to slip out of a straight jacket when you're a kid, they don't really work quite right on the build of a child.
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>>53859473
>>53859406
upon rethinking i think that mute could be workable if you can get a psychologist to diagnose you with some kind of temporary anxiety disorder that disallows you from speaking which could explain to everyone why i can't speak.
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>>53859622
god damm for some reason i read
>upon reiwaifuing i think that mute could be workable if you can get a psychologist to diagnose you with some kind of temporary anxiety disorder that disallows you from speaking which could explain to everyone why i can't speak.
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Can someone post the hero academy CYOA?
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So how does amnesia work, do you lose all memories or just episodic memories?
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>>53854561
>spoilertext
>shitposted so hard I actually got someone to clarify their CYOA

I am become Death, destroyer of worlds.
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>>53859576
>Separated: Acceptable. Sorry waifu, I have shit to do.
It says you have to search for her by traveling through the world. May mess up your schedule a bit.
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12 Waifu Disciples CYOA when?
7 Virtuous Waifus CYOA when?
>inb4 make it yourself
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>>53857755
Yeah, that half minute time skip is insane if you play your cards right. There was originally gonna be a sequel to this, a whole series with you aiding some budding god as they grew in power and fought others like them to be the one who Ascends, but I lost interest before I finished any of them.

>>53857824
I hear ya, I always groan a bit when I try to open a CYOA in a new tab and suddenly something is being downloaded into my phone. Unfortunately I have zero desire to mess around with image editing stuff, so any CYOAs I manage to make will end up like this one.

Currently working on a "Highschool JRPG" one after seeing a CYOA yesterday that had an option like that.

Pic related, as it's the CYOA that inspired the one I'm trying to make right now.
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>>53854477
>>53854493
>>53854540
>>53854561

Cookie:
Royal- It's good to be the king
Waffel- Adventure in a new world always appeals to me

Dessert:
Red Bean Soup- Telekinesis is always a good power to have

Trinket:
Jade Ring-keep calm and carry on

Partner:
This is where it gets tough. Most of them are very appealing and I am had a tough time choosing between Long, Hu and Hou. But I have to go with Hou for a great traveling companion and I have a bit of an S streak in me.

Price:
Amnesia- quite fitting for a new life in a new world with a new friend.
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>>53852758
soon anon, hopefully soon.
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>>53859917
I don't even understand what you're asking for. What would they be disciples of? How would the waifus embody the seven virtues?
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>>53859917
Good luck with that.
I'm never trying to fit 12 waifus into a single CYOA again. Was going to take a break from waifus after ZB but then Celt came along and convinced me otherwise. Gotta step away from the forge for a bit or I'll burn myself out.

How bout one of you make me a waifu for once?
Also kinda surprised how popular Lóng is. She was the one I was the most worried about being too boring.
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>>53859747
>So how does amnesia work, do you lose all memories or just episodic memories?
I...I don't remember
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>>53860137
He's asking about two separate ideas.

>12 Disciples
Waifus based on the 12 disciples, like Simon in pic related

>7 Virtues
Waifus based on the 7 virtues, contrasting the 7 sins ones.
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>>53860125
Sloop is a funny word.
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>>53859917
You answered your own question. Congrats!
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>>53860125
If they live in herpaderp and daddykins left shouldn't he be called the Ever Deadbeat instead of all father?
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>>53860229

>Judas cucks you
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>>53860231
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>>53860204
Are you into cop ladies? I'm trying to pin down the specifics of the final companion I have to write. I figure I should offer something for you offering to look over my wall of text earlier in the week. Also yes, Long is great.
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>>53858495
Sure.
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>>53860204
>I'm never trying to fit 12 waifus into a single CYOA again
That's a shame but understandable anyways take a fucking break i don't want to see you leave for 4 months and 2 weeks to recover
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>>53860271
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>>53860229
I know, I just wanted examples for each. Though wow, I have absolutely no idea why anyone would want a 12 disciples waifu cyoa, or how to even make that. Good luck, whoever takes the job.

>>53860204
Wait are you asking to be given a waifu, or to be turned into a waifu?
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>>53860271
you're a faggot?
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>>53860204
I'd choose Long if I was making a more sedentary build. But for travel and adventure I can't say no to my monkey queen.
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>>53860334
But she's a super granny. That doesn't sound very good for adventure.
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>>53860323
That one wasn't me.
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>>53856358
>>53855877
Since Bliss hasn't answered my last questions at >>53856285, I'll post my build and its assumptions:
>Mystic: Mimicry
Really good, able to essentially spam someone else's magic given a way to recharge
>Evolved Physiology
Awareness would help find other users better, but physiology has different effects based on what I copy - making me even more versatile.
>Domain
The kicker - not only would I be able to use Space magic to expand it, I could tap into the plane itself (even if just disassembling the furniture) to recharge indefinitely and for free. Plus, there may be some Physiologies that can survive a quick jaunt to the source of all magic - and that has to do something.
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>>53859678
anon that's silly, and you're silly.
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>>53860265
My tastes are kinda varried.
The common through line in all the fictional girls I've ever really fallen for is that they're really devoted and just a touch crazy.
Pic related being the most recent fictional character I've fallen utterly Head over heels for.
But even though I'm really touched that you're considering pandering to me, you should follow your gut and try and find the best character to fit into your CYOA.
>>53860285
I'm one of those boring people who just wants to keep his Y chromosome and have a loving Waifu.
>>53860342
>super granny
Actually she's a Buddha
Read a book, anon
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>>53854477
>>53854493
>>53854516
>>53854540
>>53854561
Reminder: The tiger is a man-hating sexist, the dragon fucked the old man, the snake tried to fuck the old man, and the rabbit fucks vegetables.
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>>53859917
The thought to do a Seven Holy Waifus CYOA has crossed my mind. Like after I did the Seven Sexy Sins CYOA it would only be logical to have make a CYOA based on the seven heavenly virtues, where every virtue is a arch angel waifu.
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>>53860462
so?
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>>53860462
Does it matter when you plan on renting them out for cash before donating their bodies to science and being hailed the discoverer of a new people?
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>>53860440
I'm always reading books.
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>>53860474
So they're sluts.

>>53860488
Not really, no.
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>>53860462
>rabbit fucks vegetables.

I know who I'm picking.
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>>53860499
>>53860462
Hey, ntr-anon is back!
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>>53860466
>Seven Holy Waifus
>Sevenly Deadly Sins
>Angels
>Demons
Uhhh... Guys?
Are you forgetting we already have a version of both of those?
And that they're pretty much the bar by which all other Waifu CYOAs should be measured?
Guys?
Remember?
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>>53860462
>the dragon fucked the old man
I know this is probably bait, but just in case it isn't:
people hug each other in a non sexual way, anon.

>>53860518
oh my god, I never realized this before. I think I may be retarded.
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>>53860518
Not trying to say Tok did a bad job or that he copied an already thousand year old concept, I like Seven Sexy Sins more than most of his stuff and I already like a lot of his weird fetishbait.
Just pointing out. We've been here before...
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>>53860518
>>53860551
Why are the demons so much better every time
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>>53860501
t. ent

>>53860542
>Doesn't have an excuse for the snake
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>>53860518
>>53860551

>>53860542
In a lot of ways, the 7 virtues are a lot more complicated that the sins and they're nowhere near as present in contemporary fiction.
The only thing I can think of in recent memory that's made them a central aspect of the story is the video game Conception 2.
Which is quite honestly an incredibly convincing argument to never, EVER use them in anything again. Fuck I'm still bitter I paid actual money for that piece of shit...
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>>53860466
>where every virtue is a arch angel waifu.
>Michael as Diligence
>Gabriel as Charity
>Raphael as Patience
>Uriel as Chastity
>Raguel as Temperance
>Ramiel as Humilty
>Sariel as Kindness

Like pottery
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>>53860551
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>>53860606
they're all actually just embodiments of shit, so you're wrong there
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>>53860606
Gabriel is my spirit animal.
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>>53860597
The snake is a sloot, I agree. Dragon is definitely fine though and the Tiger has some issues, though I don't think they are deal breakers or anything.
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>>53860627
So why did ZB make such a shitty slut snake?
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>>53859890
FUCK. No. No traveling. No.
I guess it's Broke, then. Pretty much nothing changes; my financial situation is already horrible beyond horrible.

>>53860125
Totally going to find some way to take a sloop or a brigantine with both Submersible and Airship, for that awesome go-anywhere Baron Munchausen feel.

I also like the idea of a place named Herpderp, or Herpaderp. Kingdom Herpaderp, the Herpaderp Empire, Herpderpia. Herpderpistan? Herpderpington. I should probably get more sleep.

>>53860518
>And that they're pretty much the bar by which all other Waifu CYOAs should be measured?
I appreciate SDA's work, but this isn't even remotely true.
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>>53860661
Fisher Price is best girl
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>>53860693
I like Tanith
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>>53860647
Just because someone is a sloot outside of relationships doesn't mean that they're going to be one inside a relationship. Also, she has other positive qualities. Some people seem to like snake. Not every option has to cater to your personal taste.
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>>53855930
History: Outlaw (90)
>I see myself more as chaotic neutral
Age & Gender: 17/F, "Gin"
>The kickassery of this world favors the fairer sex
Race: Human
>Don't need any more discrimination
Location: Vale
>Where the excitements at
Semblance: Taskmaster
>Key to being a grandmaster martial artist
Gifts:
Beauty (80)
>Life is better when you're pretty
Agility (60)
>Taking up parkour as a hobby
Energy (40)
>Gotta have stamina in a grand battle
Talents:
Combat (0)
>Highly trained fighter who only gets better
Weapons:
Cybernetic Arms (0)
>Packs more punch, durable, probably annoying to maintain
Weapon Mods:
Blaster Aug (-200)
>When I can't get within melee distance
Blade Aug (-300)
>Extendable claws in fingers, extendable sword blades on forearms
Requirement: Write +3,000 words
>Guess I got some writing to do tonight!

Gin was orphaned when a grim attack on her village took her parents and her arms. Growing up with cheap cybernetic arms, the most her parent's estate could afford, made her a less than ideal choice for adoption and kept her in the foster system. During this time she grew to resent people, save for the broken and downtrodden like herself, and learned she had to fight to claim what she wanted.

Her descent into crime began with purse snatching and shoplifting before progressing to breaking into people's homes. After a couple tussles with unsavory individuals Gin learned she had a knack for fighting and graduated to mugging. With the lien she saved Gin managed to upgrade her cybernetics in a blackmarket clinic, swapping the skeletal arms for something more powerful and human looking.

With her new arms and semblance Gin made a splash in underground fighting, entertaining the crowd with her ability to use her opponents' own moves against them. It was in the ring that Gin drew Torchwick's notice and after the match he approached her with a job opportunity.
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>>53860730
Someone who randomly tries to fuck old men is a huge whore who will try and fuck other random old men

>Just because someone is a sloot outside of relationships doesn't mean they're going to be one inside a relationship
That's some real virgin talk.
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>>53860693
>>53860698
Tanith is for sane people who want a functioning relationship with a sweet and loving partner.

I would pick Fisher, myself, but I know it's not going to work out, and there's going to be some incredible fireworks when it finally blows up.

Luna seems like the least popular option, for some reason.
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>>53860661
lol, they are more placeholder names till I get around to it. I am pretty shit with names.

Also I probably will have it affordable for that build, considering i plan on looping the ship/enhancements/crew/ship items all into one point pool. Then prolly char/boons/items/important crew in the other point pool.
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>>53860770
Probably because Luna tried to fuck her former friend and feels the need to tell you about it.
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>>53860698
>Flat chest
>Man jaw

No thanks, senpai.
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>>53852781
Be the Hero(ine) - Powergirl Mode
Infinite Banner
Beach Globe

I'll be the hero the world needs and deserves, and eventually lead the world. And whenever I get tired of it all, I'll take a nice long break in the globe.
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>>53860693
>>53860698
>Not liking Akrisia
>Not wanting to marry a mafia boss
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>>53860828
>Trusting an evil criminal
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>>53854477

>Finger fortune cookie

Literally perfect. Yes, please. Time to become a tall tale.

>Almond Biscuit & Tangyuan
>Lucky Charm & Jade Ring

I am the Avatar/Buddha tommy, it was me

>Having to choose between Long, Mã and Hóu

Now that's just plain evil man.

I'll g with horse waifu because since I'm the avatar now anyway and can become fuckinginvincible.jpg then I'm down for dispensing some JUSTICE. I'm not too keen on the whole lord first lover second but eh

>Broke

I'll just go live innawoods as a nomad since my free food/lodging card makes it so that the earth helps. Gonna suck not having any tech but still, at least I'll have my waifu and JUSTICE

This is a real nice CYOA anon, good job
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>>53860770
>Luna seems like the least popular option, for some reason.
Hmm, I couldn't say why.

Maybe it's the questionable stain on her photo.

Or maybe it's the fact that something really shady obviously happened in her past, and she seems to be dreaming of her old memories.

Or maybe it's the fact that she's managed to injure herself extremely often despite not having any hobbies that would lead to broken bones

Or maybe, just maybe, people recognize that someone who can't tell the passage of time and lacks even fundamental pathfinding would be a full-time job to take care of because she's functionally disabled.
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>>53860647
Because in my mind a dancer dancing, suggestively or otherwise, doesn't equate to fucking her entire audiance.
In my original draft I included that the reason she started dancing all sexy for grandpa was because she literally noticed his wife standing behind him and she wanted to get him in a bit of trouble as a little goof. And that as the old lady dragged him away he could hear Snake laughing her ass off.
But I really tried not to make these too long so I cut it down to what we have here.
She's not even getting as much shit as Tiger, who I just wrote because Celt wanted a tsundere, and poor Dragon who just wanted to help the old man feel better.
Either way, you guys can think whatever you want. I already got too emotional last night so well done, ya got me. Now that I've slept this is kind of just like watching a car fire burn. Terrible, but oddly compelling.
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>>53856079
To my understanding, they're better visualized as Conquest and Strife. Invasion by an outside force, and the breakdown of society and infighting.
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>>53860871
A dancer trying to show off and seduce an old man wants to fuck that old man. And hell, it makes her little different than a disgusting stripper.
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>>53860374
>>53856468
>Bliss
If I'm passive-aggressively complaining about Bliss-senpai not noticing me, it might help to give him an alert.
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>>53860647
Because not everyone is an autistic purityfag like you.
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>>53854477
Fortune Cookies CYOA:
>Waffle Fortune Cookie: Triforge
Deserts:
>Red Bean Soup: Telekinesis
>Custard Tart: Pocket Dimension
Trinkets:
>Lucky Charm Bracelet: Danger Sense
>Jade Ring: Increased Will
Girl:
>Hou: Monkey
Cost:
>Mute

I really enjoyed this CYOA and I can tell the author has improved immensely from when they started making CYOAs. Good work.
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>>53860895
>Don't like the idea of a wife who is a slut who wants to fuck old men and gets off on seducing random people.
>Hurr purityfag
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>>53860836
Evil waifus are best waifus
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>>53860871
Please stop responding to the sad and obviously demented basement troll.
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>>53860871
I have a feeling NTR anon, Immortality anon and Identity Death anon are either the same poster or they share the same medical condition. He/they have this pattern of reading wild implications into completely innocent descriptions, insisting that those implications are the only possible interpretations, and then incessantly hounding authors to change them to suit their particular obsessions.
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>>53860919
Seconded.
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>>53860871
>who I just wrote because Celt wanted a tsundere
Way to oust me.
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>>53860919
Evil waifus are for slaying.
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>>53860950
>>53860919
>>53860836
someone post the mystery box of that waifu cyoa where it was a super villainess fem doctor doom lady
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>>53860931
I don't know anon, every time those arguments come up, I see multiple posters supporting that side. I think it's more likely that you're just trying to paint people you disagree with as a singular shitposter so you don't have to confront their thoughts as legitimate because they're not the same as yours.
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>>53860948
Celt gets off on waifus who hate his gender.
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>>53860950
Speaking of evil waifus
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Let's say that, hypothetically, a CYOA was in progress wherein you would be placed in the role of an interstellar emperor. Let us also hypothetically posit that said CYOA offered the player training to make him more adept in this role - training in such areas as tactics, strategy, the politics of the upper and lower classes, and economic affairs in general.

What other fields might such a CYOA be well-suited by offering personal training in?
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>>53860871
>But I really tried not to make these too long so I cut it down to what we have here.
Honestly, I really wish you wouldn't. All the autism so far could have stopped if you had simply elaborated and not kept things vague. I mean, I don't even really blame them. These parts definitely give me some kind of weird feeling. 'She won't go into details' just makes that shit seem way more ominous than it is.
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>>53860970
The people interested in actually having a discussion are not the one persistent shitposters who refuses to even consider anything else.
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>>53860979
No, I just like tsuns and that kinky light bondage shit. Ropes and wax m8.
>>53860985
>
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>>53860950
They're for praising and supporting
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>>53860989
Tantric sex
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>>53860979
>not wanting to dominate someone like that
you have some pretty terrible taste.
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>>53860871
dont take it too hard anon. you've done a very good job with your cyoa. it's just a few autists who can't keep their cucking fetish to themselves.
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>>53860931
I think the guy who calls everyone NTR anon because I've literally seen this same individual accuse random people in /cyoag/, jumpchain, towergirls, and the /d/ thread. Hell in the /d/ thread he actually went on a long spiel about how he didn't understand how people hate cucks and how people who complained about NTR were mentally ill. So I really think he/you is one guy who likes cuckshit and gets pissy at anyone who insults his fetish.
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>>53861002
>
>>53861020
This too.
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>>53860931
Might be, but I doubt it.

/tg/ as a general whole can get pretty autistic about identity death, because losing all of your memories and personality means that you're functionally not you anymore, and immortality is one of those things that people have sperged out over since before the written word.

There's no reason to assume that they're all the same person, and it's rather uncalled for to tar them by implying that they're as retarded and illiterate as NTRanon.
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>>53860931
just like how jumpchain has one single shitposter, right?
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>>53860871
Tiger is best grill
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>>53860997
It seems to me you're using the term arbitrarily, probably based on 'he must be the shitposter if he didn't listen to MY argument which is obviously perfect'.
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>>53854477
>Ginger and Golden cookies
I knew I wanted ginger as soon as I read it, wanderer options have always appealed to me in cyoas and with gold I'll be able to still live the high life wherever I go.
>Chopsticks
While I will already have insane luck from the golden cookie this will help if I ever want to climb Everest or some shit. Also a useful nerfed version or the regal cookie.
>Tanguan
It was honestly a toss up between this and the custard tart but I figured the cookies would handle most of my needs and wants and elementalism is just too badass to pass up.
>Long
Now I know her description says she wants to settle down but I figure we could have a network of homes across the world that we move between every few years. Plus little adventures or vacations every once in a while, she's an intelligent and cultured person and would probably appreciate using the ginger cookie to sneak into museums or something at night when no one else is around or going to explore some ancient ruins no one else would be able to see. When we have kids in a few years we'd settle on one home and tone down the vacations. Not sure if she has a human lifespan or what's going on there but it's a fantasy so I'm not thinking that far ahead.
>Separated
While Long seems amazing I think I would actually like a year on my own with my new powers. It'd let me have time to do the things she didn't want to and the reunion sounds like it would be beautiful. This is probably an overpowered drawback and I'd probably nerf it in the future if you're planning on doing a second draft.
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>>53860985
Those waifus aren't evil. They're beautiful and pure.
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>>53860931
>>53860970
its true there is alot of autism and festering waste that screams in these threads

makes me think the genepool needs a lifeguard sometimes man
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>>53861033
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I fixed up a few of the typos and little errors i made. probably the only update of this fucking thing ill do
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>>53861031
Meant to say, I think it's only one guy trying to paint everyone against him as a shitposter.
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>>53861052
Sure anon. I'm sure they are.
>>53861047
>nerf it
Put it as one of the "Cop-out" options
>second draft
Asides from spelling, probably not.
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>>53861057
Can we tell Harbinger to force every demon to shift into the image of a human who died, move to the exact spot that said human was when they died, and willingly allow the corresponding human's spirit to possess their body?
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>>53861086
...Specific shapes? Yes. Trying to bring back humanity in any form? They wit the Lord now anon.
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>>53861114
They don't need to be though, I have bodies for them. Tons of bodies.

Are you a ghost? Wandering spirit? Vengeful spectre? Not any more, because I got bodies for days!
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>>53861133
Human souls are not compatible with demonic bodies. They would be sheered apart. What's dead should stay dead.
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>>53861114
>They wit the Lord now
What if they weren't Christian tho
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>>53860890
Try again tomorrow, he's probably sleeping.
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>>53861085
Fair enough, it's already amazing I'm not sure what else you could add that wouldn't feel unnecessary. Great work.
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>>53860948
You blamed me last thread for writing her that ya, dick! Don't be ashamed of who you are Celt. Own your love for tsuntsun puddy tat.
>>53861047
>it's a fantasy so I'm not thinking that far ahead.
>a fantasy
>fantasy
I already liked your build but now I love it.
You are a wise man, Anon, and I'm sure you could easily convince Lóng to go on a few more adventures before settling down.
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>>53860931
I mean, people definitely overreact towards identity death, especially because most of the time it's just people not understanding why it is possibly bad. However, I don't believe that it's unfair to say 'this option has unfortunate implications'. The 'magic can't do it' anon can get fucked though.
Honestly, while I think some anons definitely are a bit excessively paranoid/just shitposting, I think it's reasonable to question some parts. There are definitely sentences where I can understand interpreting it in a negative way. It may not have been intended that way, but things like 'began putting on more of a show than my wife was willing to let me see' sounds pretty questionable to me.

>>53861031
Wait, I thought NTR anon means the guy who is hyper paranoid about getting cucked?
>>53861060
Fuji is the objectively the best option.
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>>53861150
Then they in hell now.
Probably with me.
>>53861161
Thanks anon, but I couldn't have done it without ZB.
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>>53861150
I like to think God gives people one final chance before annihilating them with fire.
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>>53861150
>Nor is there salvation in any other, for there is no other name under heaven given among men by which we must be saved
I'm sorry, anon.
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>>53861192
>You blamed me
D...did I? Fuck, I'm sorry. I'm sure that's not how I meant it to sound.
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>>53861224
Where's that in the scripture
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>>53861200
>However, I don't believe that it's unfair to say 'this option has unfortunate implications'.
See >>53860997. There is a massive difference between expressing displeasure or criticising something and just aggressively shitposting.
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>>53860605
Dang, I bought that game too, but honestly just lost interest welk before I could feel angry about it or find anything particularly annoying. What about it bothered you?
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>>53861224
>God
who?
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Last two threads were shitfests.
Pretty sure they both had 35-50ish unique posters each.
This one is pretty damn good. Decent discussion and mannerisms.
82 unique posters.

Hmmmmm....I think this means something.
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>>53855930
RWBY CYOA: (+100)
History:
>New Arrival (Free)
Age and Gender:
>15
>Male
Race:
>Human
Starting Location:
>Beacon Academy: Vale
Semblance:
>Black Slate: Alchemist: Low level transmutation of inorganic matter, requires physical contact and slowly increases in power and skill.
Gifts:
>Beauty (-10)
>Intelligence (-10)
>Memory (-20)
>Precision (-20)
Talents:
>Medicine (-40)
Shop: (+1000)
Weapon:
>Cybernetic Arm: Dust Mod + Blade Aug + Blaster Aug (-850)
Items and Gear:
>Scroll (Free)
>Dust Charges (-50)
>Dust Collection (-100)
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>>53861256
>"The Lord created us in His image and likeness, and we are the image of the Lord, and He does good and all of us have this commandment at heart, do good and do not do evil. All of us. 'But, Father, this is not Catholic! He cannot do good.' Yes, he can... The Lord has redeemed all of us, all of us, with the Blood of Christ, all of us, not just Catholics. Everyone! 'Father, the atheists?' Even the atheists. Everyone! We must meet one another doing good. 'But I don't believe, Father, I am an atheist!' But do good: we will meet one another there."

Pope Francis.

Via Papal infallibility, this is canonically Christian doctrine, that even non-believers can get into heaven through their deeds.
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>>53861342
>anything post Vatican II
>Canon

S E D E V A C A N T
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>>53861342
>Via Papal infallibility
Papal infallibility only comes into play when the Pope is specifically speaking "ex cathedra", not for every statement he makes. I think the last time it got used was to ensure that Mary was a perpetual virgin.
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>>53861200
>Wait, I thought NTR anon means the guy who is hyper paranoid about getting cucked?
I'm talking about the guy who calls people NTR anon. My post is referring to that person, not the people he calls NTR anon.
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>>53861359
Despite the comfymeme this is actually a pretty good CYOA. I wish it went into more specifics with the wonders. At first I was basically offended by the nonsensical design of the ship size bonuses. If it was me making the CYOA, I would definitely have put facilities in the large hull (makes fucking sense with the extra room a large hull gives you), wonders in the medium hull (need to economize size while still bringing plenty of supply for long travels), and special features in the small hull (since they don't take up as much precious space they make the most sense here). In the end though the bonuses aren't that important for any sort of build and you probably get too many points as it is, so whatever.
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>>53861258
Who gets to decide what is and isn't reasonable?
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>>53861342
>Pope Francis
>Listening to that heretic
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>>53861386
And as for my build:

The center of my build are the T3 cloning tank, T3 medical lab, and T3 AI companion. I make plenty of hiveminded clones of myself to crew the ship, probably around 15-20 or so to start and possibly many more later on if I ever got bored of constant travel and settle down. Each of my iterations of course has a personal AI companion, and there is at least one community-wide AI who oversees things in general. I slowly shed old bodies and take new ones, genetically and cyberneticaly experiment on them, modify them to reach ever greater superhuman heights of fitness and ability, all while maintaining varied but outwardly human appearance among most of my iterations. This hivemind and AI crew means I don't ever really need any close interactions with outsiders, but perhaps I will make friends if things got too stale, possibly eventually inviting them to join the hivemind if I like them enough.

The T2 fabricator, T2 phasal transporter, T1 training complex, and the arsenal of powered armor are secondary to the build, but along with the alien scout hull's stealth system they make up a nice support group that ensures I can handle all sorts of possible problems. The T2 expanded cabin and T1 augmented reality are really just tertiary comfort utility, though in many ways they are the most often used of all of my choices on an everyday basis during the long months of travel through the vastness of space, in between sightings of alien creatures and civilizations, various natural anomalies and phenomena, and of course return trips back to Earth from time to time.
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>>53861342
Isn't this the guy who invited Muslims to pray in the Vatican?
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>>53861256
I didn't indicate that it was in the Bible. Can you imagine how many people would just ignore everything Christian during their lives if they knew they had a final chance after the first death?
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>>53854913
>Awww, no Age of piracy or Dragonrider DLC?
I thought about doing a Piracy one, but I ran into the issue that my source of images is limited; I don't want to stray from the game art and there just isn't enough pirate stuff to use.

Dragonrider I just couldn't think of a way to flesh it out enough to warrant DLC. So for now I guess consider them the "free form" events.

>>53857195
Thank you anon! I think I did a better job on the characters and scenarios here than I did on the main CYOA to be honest. Oh well.
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>>53861380
Is that possible? Wouldn't her hymen have broken during birth?
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>>53861420
The hymen being broken doesn't mean she isn't a virgin. Sometimes hymens break from random bullshit that has nothing to do with sex.
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>>53861406
>>53861403
>>53861372
>Not having faith in the words of his holiness

I would say that would make you protestants and heretical scum, but I repeat myself.
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>>53855855
They didn't slay you him you dunce.
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>>53861442
Then how can you prove she isn't a virgin or that her husband did not screw her later. She must be stoned.
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>>53861445
>his holiness
z warkoczykami czy bez warkoczyków, też ujdą
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>>53855930
>Name
Kairer [100 points]
>History
New Arrival [-0]
>Age & Gender
17/Male
>Race
Faunus (bull horns and tail, night vision; a total freak)
>Starting Location
Haven Academy. Mistral (because almost nobody will care for my past and I want to go rogue)
>Semblance
Ring Leader
>Gifts
Ferocity [-10]
Will [-10]
Beauty [-10]
Intelligence [-10]
Strenght [-20]
Agility [-20]
Energy [-20]
>Talents
I'll develop them in the academy.
>Shop [1000 Lien]
Variable (halberd / shotgun) [-400]
Additional Weapon Form (twin cimitars) [-100]
Collapsible (baton) [-50]
Dust Mod [-50]
Dust Charges [-50]
Dust Collection [-100]
Armor [-100]
Targeting Glasses [-150]
Scroll [Free]
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>>53861466
Doing drugs, while sometimes leading to sex, also doesn't guarantee she isn't a virgin.
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>>53855855
>slain Pestilence
Speedreader detected.
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>>53861445
>his holiness

God is dead, and it is we who have killed him!
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>>53854477
Waffel Fortune Cookie
Red Bean Soup + Almond Biscuit
Old Military Cap + Jade Ring
Gou (Dog)
Amnesia

Forgetting about Earth while experiencing a new world sounds fun. After a year you get to compare your experiences and memories. Gou should be capable enough keeping us alive with her nose guiding us away from "bad" people.

(Jade Ring improves the other three desserts and trinkets, letting you resist Old Military Cap for longer and improving focus for telekinesis and defense)
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>>53861224
Cease peddling your false hope.
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>>53860871
>She's not even getting as much shit as Tiger
If you had just clarified her past none of that would have happened.
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>>53861404
Oh, and the interior I chose was worn in and comfy. Think I forgot to mention that.
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>>53861448
>>53861481
Yeah you nobs this was already pointed out hundreds of posts ago. I was bein metaphorical a bit and got it mixed up with American Gods.
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>>53860819
And to think you missed such an opportunity with your post to use this image...
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>>53861538
That was a really fun series
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>>53861518
It doesn't need clarification if shit for brains don't go out of their way to read their insecurities into it.
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>>53861552
So, everything ever always needs clarification? I think you're overstating the problem, but okay.
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>>53861570
>>53861552
>>53861518
The issue wasn't mainly about her friend, it's actually about how her current personality is. She hates men. That's the crux of the complains about her, not that she had a crush on some faggot.
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>>53861263
>What about it bothered you?
I'm not apologizing for what's about to happen.
*Dramatically Inhales*
As a game, it's just plain not fun. The dungeons are tedious, uninteresting and only exist because they need an excuse for you to have weird glowing handsex and make special midgets come out of Russian Nesting Dolls. The combat is barebones at best, but there are so many mechanics at play that they actually kind of cancel eachother out. I went through the whole game forgetting that elemental weaknesses were even a thing because with the directional weakness you don't really need to worry about them and I completely forgot that you could combine three of your midgets into a giant robot until I got to the final boss who, despite me endlessly grinding to try to get rare drops to make the best midgets and being overleveled as shit, was still somehow fucking hard.
But even after busting my ass to beat it my only reward was a boring, almost tacked on seeming set of endings completely devoid of any kind of satisfaction or impact.
But when you take into account how almost astonishingly generic and predictable every aspect of the story and characters were, I'm not sure what I was expecting.
I honestly really like idea of making characters in RPGs that inherit you and your lover's stats which is a big part of why I love the new Fire Emblem games. I also honestly enjoyed most of dating sim parts where you just basically go through each girl's story like a VN. Some of them are honestly really creative and likable, like pic related. She's your childhood friend who died, but the church resurrected as an inquisitor and now has to ungo excruciating rituals to artificial regain mana.
And any game which includes a harem ending gets points in my book, no matter how underwhelming it is.
I could just keep going and going for like 7 more posts, but this is already off topic enough.
Also, Windee Lee and Karen Strassman are in their 50s. Stop making them voice high schoolers.
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>>53861573
There were some purtiyfags who got upset over 'muh used goods' which could have easily been avoided especially because ZBG evidently is one himself. The whole 'she hates men' thing could also be put into perspective if what had happened in the past was bad enough.
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>>53861593
I bet $100 you're the same person that calls everyone an NTR-anon or whatever. It's that same smug "Everyone that doesn't share my fetishes is one shitposter!" attitude.
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>>53861608
There's an obvious difference between this shitposting and not sharing a fetish, you complete and utter retard.
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>>53861608
>Conflates multiple people together as if they were the same person
>While complaining that he's been conflated with another shitposter as if they were the same person

Like pottery.
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>>53861588
I wish Nips would have some consistency and accuracy with the three sizes.
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>>53861608
Too bad, but I'm not that guy. I don't even know what ntr anon is supposed to mean.
Also, explain how I have that attitude.
I didn't mention anything about fetishes. Like, absolutely nothing.
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>>53860044
>talent

I will write the best cyoa ever
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>>53861300
I take this back
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>>53854477
One of the best I've seen. Well done.
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>>53861668
Purityfag is the same sort of term, lumping together anyone who complains about her past boyfriend as both caring about virginity in particular, or else being objectively wrong for caring about virgins.
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>>53861719
>Commentless and mindless praise to try and counter 'meanies'.
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>>53861696
You jinxed it anon. We only have ourselves to blame.
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>>53861593
Dude I don't care if a girl has been with other guys before me so long as she's mine now. Being someone's first is a romantic and enjoyable fantasy, but it can be nice to be with someone who actually has had expierence in the bedroom and relationships before so you don't have to guide them through everything and you can both be confident that she's not going to "outgrow" you, so to speak, once she knows more about romance/sex/herself.
I just do my best to keep all my waifus pure because it can ruin the fantasy and I'd rather see these threads hit bump limit because of CYOAs, builds, and interesting discussions instead of bitching about getting cucked and used goods.
Did not accomplish that this time, but live and learn I suppose.
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>>53861723
But that is objectively retarded
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>>53861192
Thank you, this comment genuinely made my day. Keep up the amazing work man, I can't wait to see what comes next.
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>>53861764
>I don't care if a girl has been with other guys before me so long as she's mine now

ZBD x Italics is now the official CYOA author celebrity relationship.
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>>53861802
Blame the one who invented and used the term.
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>>53861764
Preach it, brother. Real men let other men break in their women. Teaching your wife how to please you is way too much trouble.
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>>53861764
>it can be nice to be with someone who actually has had expierence in the bedroom
So you want your woman to be trained by another man's cock. It gets you hard thinking about how he's used her and shaped her talents to his whims.
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>>53861060
No genetically engineered perfect apple waifu
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>>53861820
>>53861825
But how can she know how amazing your cock is without comparison to a previous cock? How else is she supposed to know how lucky she is to be with you?

Unless you don't have a cock that will keep any woman by your side, I guess. But that isn't a problem for you, right anons?
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>>53861855
>Anon gets off on having his penis compared to other men
Are you sure you're not just into other men's penises? It takes a real freak to get off on hearing a woman talk up what her previous boyfriend felt like.
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>>53861806
>ZBD x Italics
I'm not sure how to feel about this...
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>>53861764
make a update filled with used-goods/netorsre/rape/memorydeathbullshit
break SDAs 1000 post thread record
Do It ZBG!

We believe in you!!!
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>>53861873
You should feel cucked, because that's what defines your relationship.
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>>53861855
I don't think about penises during sex.
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>>53861865
>not being pleased with ones own superiority
you need more self confidence anon
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>>53861876
>break SDAs 1000 post thread record
Wwat?
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>>53861883
>He defines his sense of superiority by thinking about other men's dicks
Seriously, you should try men.
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>>53861882
But she does.
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>>53854477
>cookie
regular fortune cookie (I didn't choose the comfy life, the comfy life chose me)
Ginger fortune Cookie (I would still like to travel and this one seems to make any trip memorable)

>desert
custard tart (seems like a good choice when in a pinch)

>trinket
chopsticks (very helpful in any situation)

>Girl
Tu (My zodiac sign is a dog, so she would be compatible with me).

>payment
Mute (I could stand to be quiet for a year and let Tu do the talking for me).
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>>53861806
Do not sully Italics, he is pure and too good for this thread.
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>>53861855
>How can you know how amazing food is if she hasn't eaten shit?
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>>53861896
it was glorious anon
i feared for my braincells that day
for they dwelled in great pain trying to comprehend the flowing bullshit
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>>53861764
>Did not accomplish that this time, but live and learn I suppose.
I'm curious, did you just not realize that people could get triggered by these things or did you not know how to solve it in an elegant way? Because 'past relationship shrouded in mystery' really seems like something that is pretty easy to see as easily 'problematic'.
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>>53861899
If she's thinking about other men's penises during sex, then you're doing something wrong, wannabee alpha.
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>>53861930
Not to forget the whole "Thinks men are scum" thing, or the one girl who cuddles old men, and the other that tried to seduce and fuck the old man.
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>>53861855
Pretty faulty argumentation. You don't have to experience something shitty yourself to understand you have it good.

>>53861883
Wanting to feel superior is normally a sign of people who are trying to compensate.
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>>53861925
Tell me there was a screencap?
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>>53861950
whats this?

some people on /cyoag/ have low self esteem and try to mask it by acting like what their autistic brain assumes is an alpha?

color me suprise
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>>53861990
The really funny part is when the wannabee alpha tries and disparage other anons with his 'alphaness' like you see above. It's hilarious and sad.
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>>53861972
nah youd hav to find it on 4plebs i guess
wasnt too long ago but good luck sifting
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>>53861896
Not them. I have a very good memory for things I find interesting. Enjoy.
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/52705335
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>>53861950
Do you really believe that if you're the only guy a girl is with she'll never wonder if she could be getting something better?
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>420 posts
Blaze it and make a new thread already.
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>>53862004
>>53862005
oshit
sifting predone
congrats
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>>53862007
Yeah? I mean, unless you're pretty shitty, I guess.
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>>53852775
>34 points
Male
Wizard [-6]
Kitsune [-5]
Stamina [-3]
Speed [-3]
Vitality [-3]
Beauty [-3]
Willpower [-4]
Quick Learner [-4]
The Affectionate Lamia [-3]
Danger Bait [+5]
Infamous [+4]
Fate Setting
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>>53862005
Let it stand that even when presented with statistical evidence, there are people in this thread who will continue to throw a fit.
>>
>its another /r9k/ thread
neat
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>>53860985
/monster/ here, it's got to be Nimue. She appeals to my fetishes.
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>>53862061
>/r9k/ /pol/ /r9k/ /pol/ polly want a cracker
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>>53862061
im beginning to think /diy/ would even run better threads then this
the neets natural enemy is any form of hard work
the woodworking and welding threads alone would scare a good portion away
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>>53862059
Talk about your CYOA or shut up, hoser.
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>>53861945
Please, stop trying to drag my argument down.
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>>53862090
Here's a little irrelevant truth instead while the thread slowly slides into the abyss anyway

I like pure, virginial waifus. I like the idea that I'm their first love.

But somehow, SOMEHOW I manage to restrain myself from launching into a flurry of frienzied posting when I am presented with options that do not meet my exacting criteria; I just pick the ones I like and move on with my life

what is wrong with me, /cyoag/?
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>>53862115
If your post is about him including things that piss anons off, those other three things are also notable inclusions that were poorly done on his part.
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>>53862129
I don't know anon, you're kind of whining yourself, so I think you whining about other people whining means your sense of superiority is a bit misplaced.
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>>53860661
>flat as a board baby-crazy snake bitch

Sold before even reading the others.
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>>53862129
not enough chromosomes anon

its ok but you shuld know i think you alone
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>>53862129
>what is wrong with me, /cyoag/?

Reddit spacing for one.
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>>53862107
>the neets natural enemy is any form of hard work
I literally spent over six hours working on a relative's Mazda today and another hour working on the yard. Please shit directly into my mouth more.
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>>53852758
this is my favorite
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>>53860661
>>53862145
Actually, the others are great too. Who made this? Its top quality.
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>>53860661
Akrisia but would be friends with Tanith and Luna

>>53861538
Australia

>>53861588
black socks

>>53861849
honeycrisp

>>53854516
Hu

>>53860044
waifu

>>53860466
pride

>>53860518
Ea
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>>53861060
Second vote for Fuji. She's the type to chill and watch a movie with me, or play the vidya with me. The others don't stand a chance.
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>>53862144
>people are being dickheads
>"hey stop being dickheads"
>"IF YOU ASK THAT YOU'RE A DICKHEAD TOO HURRR"
go walk into traffic, this is one of the worst and laziest responses
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>>53861359
>>53861386
>>53862181

Who did the comfy meme better?
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>>53862151
if we're playing the meme game then I'm going to call you a summerfag trying to fit in
>>53862161
are you sure you're a neet?
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>>53862161
so would you say your fighting the good fight then?

also you better eat some fiber because i havent
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>>53862227
Thanks. I take being different from you people as a compliment.
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>>53862224
Monster Hunter is almost perfect comfy.
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>>53862257
No problem, though if you're so adverse to these boards then I'm surprised reddit namecalling was your first move
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>>53854477
Gold Fortune Cookie

Grass Jelly
Jade Ring
Chopsticks
Almond Biscuit

How do people react to Ma if I don't take Waffle?
Wife Shu

I'll be sick for the year.
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>>53862129
The thing wrong with you is that you fail to realize that, ignoring the shitposters, there are enough people who generally like a character but have a problem with a specific part. I don't see how it's unreasonable to voice their displeasure over that, especially if the problematic part probably wasn't even intentional.
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>>53862161
I read that as matza.
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>>53862227
>are you sure you're a neet?
Work needs done work gets done. Not all NEETs are pathetic. Some of us just can't deal for reasons.
>>53862239
>also you better eat some fiber because i havent
Granola is bae.
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>>53862304
You know very well theres a difference between "Hey, I don't really like an aspect of this" and... well, the last three threads are better examples than I could provide.

And even if they don't like something about a character should they really expect an author to say "Oh okay! Let me make her PERFECT just for you, anonymous poster!"
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>>53862333
>Work needs done work gets done
I'm positive you're not a neet now, just a guy that stays in for reasons
>>
Rolled 50, 11, 35, 29, 14, 46, 5, 10, 27, 29, 19, 46, 25 = 346 (13d50)

>>53853555
God of True Chaos and God of Eternity.
The three first rolls are for Chaos and the rest is for Eternity.
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>>53862342
>And even if they don't like something about a character should they really expect an author to say "Oh okay! Let me make her PERFECT just for you, anonymous poster!"
If multiple people politely voice their objection or displeasure, an author might decide to cater to them. Or even a single poster if they bring up a good point. People with objections are not the problem, shitposters are.
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>>53862357
NEET just means not in education employment or training. If anon is not in any of those he's a NEET, no matter if he likes doing hard work or not.
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>>53862304
See, this is how I've decided to approach things.
There are plenty of shit posters sure, but there are also plenty of people just voicing that they feel the character is flawed by me including that element.
I don't plan on completely rewriting her, but I do hear and understand the critism.
So I'm just going to try to use this as a learning expierence and move.
And also take a break from writing waifus because holy shit am I running out of ideas for them.
Like I said earlier, it's your turn to make one for me. I'm gonna go work on Guardian Spirit.
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>>53862387
The guy you're replying to is basically shitposting himself.
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>>53862357
I'm "not employed in education or training" and haven't been for three years. Fairly sure I'm a NEET. Don't even leave the house but once a month if that. An exception was this month because car parts.
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>>53862387
>If multiple people politely voice their objection or displeasure, an author might decide to cater to them. Or even a single poster if they bring up a good point.

Can't argue with that anon, shame it polite objection is not the norm.
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Rolled 45, 10, 25, 13 = 93 (4d50)

>>53862372
Rolling for the two extra powers and of the two duplicates.
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>>53862394
>I'm gonna go work on Guardian Spirit.

Do we get magic and weapons and stuff in it?
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>>53862394
>I don't plan on completely rewriting her, but I do hear and understand the critism.
Can't you please do something about it? I really don't care what, I just want it to stop. As long as it doesn't clarified in the cyoa itself, when it gets posted I fear this will come up again and again.
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>>53862396
how so?
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>>53862452
Something tells me this CYOA isn't going to get reposted much.
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>>53862452
>its not the shitposters fault, its the authors fault!
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>>53862394
you should write all the girls as used goods so it can just be like real life
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>>53862428
What if you put your guardian spirit in your weapon to make it magical?
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>>53862428
>20 Offenses Abilities
>20 Defensive Abilities
>20 Speciallized Abilities
Based on how you build your guy you can pick between 10 and 12 from those categories without dealing with drawbacks or bonuses.
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>>53862396
Please explain the shitposting parts
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>>53862475
I don't know, I thought the same about zodiac brides and I feel like the last few dozen threads were about 50% posts related to it.
>>53862478
I really don't care who is at fault.
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>>53862486
Could it be my destiny?

>>53862497
Okey dokey.
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>>53860661
Something about gyaru cockroach girl tickled me, I would choose her even though we probably wouldn't match...
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>>53862059
Cruiser buff when???
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>>53853989
Rebellion-Info Wars

Basic-Shielding, Escape, Leadership, Science, durability, Stamina, stealth, disguise, gunnery

Advanced-Evasion, Melee, Navigation, Charm, Small Arms, Medicine

Expert-Strategy, Public Speaking, +Seduction, Propaganda

Perk-New Body, Storied(Expert Seducer), Connected, Fully Manned, Advanced Ship

Drawback- Rookie(Expertise), Compulsion, Public enemy

Items- Enforcer R3, Hydra 2120, Intruder, guidebook
-Cyber-Cosmetics, Skeleton, Neural, Ocular, Cardiac

Equipment-Energy weapons, Fake Id, Wardrobe

Ship-Freighter
-Cloak, Support Ship, Medbay, Jump drive, Hydroponics

Enemy- Terranazis, Poppy(Killer), Peter(Reprogrammed)

Crew- Julius Ingram(vigilante, muscle), Robert Walker (Professor), Sila demir(espionage), Ed Butler (Sniper etc), Abigail driver (Star), Jesse Poole (Plants), You Jeong (Pilot), Amelia Young (Engineer), Wei Jin (Hacker)

A sustainable,evasive build with a team who can perform small, stealthy excursions and just being a good group to be around. Overall built towards a rebellion propaganda machine while evading capture by the gleeful assassin and ghost of rebellions past.
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>>53860985
>>53861002
>>53861033
>Nimue
She's even better than interlibrary loan and her eyes are hot. We share a hatred of loud noises and sudden movements, and she might even be interested in the work I'm doing.

>Ardat Lili
I definitely have a well-reasoned and non-shallow reason for making this choice that does not boil down to "boobs." Yup. Definitely. It's a secret reason and I can't tell you want it is.
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>>53861359
This one is so fucking hard. I can't decide whether to go full-on Silent Running and get the maxed Garden and Aquarium, or go for Tourist Mode and try to get as many Wonders as possible. It'd be great either way. Abductor is the logical choice for the former, Space Yacht's probably the best choice for the latter.
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>>53860466
Might as well! I kinda wish you included despair as the eighth sin though.
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>>53863024
Despair is a type of Sloth.
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>>53863059
I'm pretty sure the only types of sloths are the two-toed and three-toed variety.
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>>53859917
Had the idea for a non waifu seven virtues cyoa that was a single page and simple. Will get to it as soon as I'm done with my many other projects.
I've so much to do it's starting to become ever so slightly overwhelming.
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>>53862197
It's by DSA (the Village, Urban Unease, Derelict Station), and it's the best waifu CYOA I know of.

>>53862564
Someone needs to protect that smile, anon.
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>>53863007
For me the decision is between biological hive mind or digital hive mind honestly. Also those dangerous choices with the warning signs.
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>>53862274
Agreed. It's a little of everything. Excitement, a great beautiful world, cool super powers and nice looking waifus and friends. The cyoa really springs to life with the graphics and the town options and descriptions.
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>>53863275
Which one is this?
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>>53863275
I always thought it was trash, and that was before the first culling arguments years ago. Bliss has made other good CYOAs, but that one is not one of them.

Kind of like SDA's battlemage, when other CYOAs of his are actually good. Terrible idea.
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>>53863275
>>53863362

Same, I feel like I'm thinking of a different CYOA when you mention a Monster Hunter one.
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>>53863157
Some these dads sound like fucking bros, I would love to hang out with Wick and Ryota even when I don't want to date their daughters
No homo
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>>53863436
>hanging out with a guy who looks like he's a reflection in one of those trick mirrors, except for real
you madman
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>>53863275
I'm starting to think you made this CYOA up because that doesn't sound like Monster Hunter at all to me...
Also
>fat demon thighs
What dick has never craved damnation more than it does right now
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>>53863275
That doesn't sound like MH.
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>>53863628
Yeah what the fuck since when did MH have waifus?
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>>53863628
>>53863680
If he's talking about the one I think he is, then waifus, or more to the point companions would have been an addition that would have made it great.

As it is it was very nicely presented but kind of lifeless; even the events didn't mean much when they were just about faceless drones
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>>53860204
She IS boring, but all the other waifus a shit.
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>>53858805
It's been a long time since I saw that posted, and an even longer time since I made it.

I cringe at my design choices from back then.
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>>53863971
I thought it was a pretty cool CYOA anon
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>>53864006
It was from before the Great Standardisation, when long and skinny CYOAs were the norm, and you had to get as much out of the 5Kx5K res limit you could.

It was my first "fill a niche" CYOA, the next one being about necromancy.
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where's the new throg
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>>53860284
oh shit i remember this one. Wasn't it the trap son who had a femdom mother and GF?
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>>53854477
>>53854493
>>53854516
>>53854540
>>53854561

Golden Fortune Cookie
Red Bean Soup
Lucky Charm
Niu
Mute
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>>53863157
Mystery boxes?
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>>53864504
I'm going to take a wild guess:
Blue is you become the dad
Pink is obligatory you are the little girl/daughter
Last is romance the dad instead
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>>53864490
Fuck I forgot you get TWO OF EACH DESSERT AND TRINKET.

For real this time

Golden Fortune Cookie
Red Bean Soup
Almond Biscuit
Lucky Charm
Jade Ring
Niu
Mute
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>>53863157
Tomo fo sho
I like tomboys and would be good at proverbially holding her hand through learning normalfag stuff. and we share fetishes.


>>53853827
A very social and supportive thief, but one that is innocent! Unfortunately, I'm also a rookie.
>>53853862
I've got some cool sunglasses and my crew has a dog!
>>53853895
My ship has a pretty cool cloaking device, hopefully it will stop Victoria Maxwell from finding me as we run through Alliance space! But she's pretty cute so I wouldn't mind her slapping some cuffs on me!
>>53853948
Dawn. I help people with drug addictions irl, and I would be perfectly patient and encouraging for her if she wishes me to help her quit.
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>>53864706
>I like tomboys
>tomo instead of Karin
I question your resolve
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