Turning Chicken Shit to Chicken Salad

>>53118494
>Turning Chicken Shit to Chicken Salad
aquaponics

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>>53118494
How do I make it interesting OP. Character wise and plot wise

>A man at the age of 28 travels across the world in search of his wife who was kidnapped by bandits from their mountain home. The young man wears a burlap sack on his head and carries around a huge ass club, his clothes are worn and tattered. He eventually meets a girl at the young age of 16 whom she eventually falls in love with him and follows him on his journey, though she never see's his face.

>His wife is also a literal cat and dies as the bandits use her for food halfway through

>After sackman learns of his wife's death he decides to travel the world with the young girl, never removing the sack that covers his face.

>>53119461
>28
>young man

>>53119625
>30
>Old

>>53119461

>married to a cat

Stop with your sad feline degeneracy. Make it not some weird teenfucking power trip, and with the cringy sack and you should be fine.

>>53118494
I'm not sure I understand what it is you are asking. You want people to suggest roleplaying game ideas that they are having trouble with and you'll help them brainstorm a way to salvage the idea?

>>53119653
You OP?

>>53119797

Yes.

>>53119890
Nigga, if I could change this, I would've already done it. I just need to figure out how to make it work as is, ya feel

>>53119918

Kill them all.

>>53118494
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>>53118494
RIP Dusty