Leviathan OC Chapter

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They had ignored calls for caution
from the Dark Angels, who had been hunting these Eldar for their own purposes. Through foul Xenos sorcery , the Eldar survived unscathed through the Monsoon Bombardment, and ambushed the overconfident marines. Half of the 1st company died covering the retreat. Only the timely arrival of the Dark Angels prevented an even greater massacre.

>>53007468
you come as a what op?

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Dubin has sworn vengeance on "Those pointy eared bastards"

>>533007429
As a Tsunami.

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heres my OC chapter the void whales..they are a raven guard successor chapter active mostly in the Halo Stars to the galactic north of Terra. The chapter is fleet bound and and have a single resupply facility on a barren ice moon the location of which is known only to the chapter. The chapter excels at boarding actions, hit and run raids and precision strikes on the enemy. They are given a large amount of freedom even among space marine chapters and are only required to report to Cypra Mundi once a century. In recent decades they have been heavily engaged in anti pirate operations against Boss Skullboila in a partially unexplored sector.

How about "Get tsunami'd LOL"
Much more effective if you ask me.

>>53007468
That's a lot of cum!

>>533007944
>Chapter Master Dubin feeds you to his pet shark for heresy.

>>53007468
For the color scheme, needs a spot color, like a bright red or something. Too lazy to read story.

>>53007468
>Battle Cry: We Come As A Tsunami!
Suggested replacement: WE RISE

Fun fact: Since the Dark Angels are Jewish, these guys are Estonian Jewish, hence the name of their homeworld and Chapter Master

>>53007468
I think "like a great wave" or "swift as a storm, sure as the tide" would both be better battle cries than what you've got there.

>>53008112
I really like the Storm and Tide one. It can be their secondary battle cry, or their out of battle mantra.

>>53008192
From one fa/tg/uy to another: your current battle cry sucks.

>>53007905
I'd change that purple to a more bluish tone and consider doing their Aquila in a different color.

>>53008452
i dunno what color i would do the eagle though...i dont want it to be 2 bright you know? this is a chapter that still tries to use a bit of concealment

>>53007468
I wondered when someone would try to force another "Take the Knot" meme-chapter.

Surprised it took this long to be honest.

>>53008540
Maybe a bluish gunmetal? Perhaps a dark bone color?

>>53008578
Huh?

>>53008660
Let’s dispel once and for all with this fiction that OP doesn’t know what he’s doing. He knows exactly what he’s doing.

>>53008660
Lurk moar, newfriend.

>>53008738
This is basically how the pre battle conversation went.
(DA's) >Don't go down there bro. Something is fishy.
(Leviathans)>Fuck You Grandpas. Waterworlds are *our* thing.
*After batte*
(DA's)> We told you so.

>>53007905
well...il post more about my chapter..training is a period of time known as the whales trial. It consists of a multitude of extreme survival courses on both planet and space borne vessels. Some of the notable ones include surviving for a week aboard a derelict vessel with depressurized areas and being dropped in feral ork territory with only basic supplies, aspirants are then given a week time limit to make it to the extract point..if they are not there at weeks end they are left behind.

>>53008853
So do you got a name for the Chapter Master? What's their culture like?

>>53008941
honestly no...i dont have a name for the chapter master. The culture is somewhat animal worship like their parent chapter the raven guard, they hold strength, stealth and spacefaring as most important though. I guess i would try to base them off of a pacific islander culture...I dont really wanna do polonysians though because thats what the charcaradons are.