/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>>52989730

Let's establish some ground rules first:
1. No shitposting
2. No attention whoring
3. No artificial dramas

Call me a nigger, you are the cancer of /tg/

>>52989786
I spend couple minutes scratching my nose and someone steals my upload ;<

>>52989730
In surprise twist, being a wizard is kinda shit.

I would personally pick either the space ship or watching humanity prosper. None of the others appeal to me, the universe described in space ship doesn't sound all that exciting whereas the prospering one does.

>>52989804
Nigger.

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>>52989749
Awwww shit, Eternal Darkness CYOA!

>>52989829
you too

>>52989851
That's what it is? I honestly didn't know.
By the way, what is an Eternal Darkness? Is it good?

>>52989877
No, you.

>>52989882
one of the best games of all time, cannot recommend highly enough. Sadly the company that made it cruised on its success for a few years before just falling apart.

>>52989882
An old gamecube game. I had terribly shit taste the last time I played it, so take this with a grain of salt, but I liked it. I've no idea how it holds up.

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Reposting the newer Beri CYOAs, with the typos fixed.

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And here's the other one.

>>52989882
An old horror game for Gamecube. A forgotten masterpiece.

>>52990209

Wasn't there suposed to be an update to this?

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Since the OP posted Choice of Smalltext, here's a recent CYOA with small choices and some text.

>>52990231
That's the newest one in the Drive, the older version lacks the four under For Honor/Deus Ex.

If there's newer, I don't know anything about it but inventing new choices honestly wouldn't be too big effort.

>>52990231
>Wasn't there suposed to be an update
There was.
>>52990293
>If there's newer
There isn't.

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sometimes simple is best

>>52989851
>I ENCHANT THE KEY WITH INSANITY

>>52990439
"It opens bitch's minds!"

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fresh OC by your boi SDA

>>52990439
>>52990465
> Not infusing your gun with CORPSE GOD.

>>52990519
CRANK THAT FUCKING PARGON

>>52990515
the death of /cyoag/

>>52990519
"Insanity Shotgun" and "Corpse God Revolver" are two of the greatest names for legendary artifacts I have ever heard.

Show me what you get for worm 5 so far?

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Is the guy Doing Delinquent CYOA still around? You giving us sukeban options to go with it?

>>52990609
Sound like the kind of weapons you could get in Elona+

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I wish /tg/ would get IDs.

Anyway, I posted Branching Hearts couple threads ago and people wondered about it being almost 30 pages. This one is shorter, only 15.

However, Branching Hearts was EASY. Just read until you find your waifu and then it's just half page of text, maybe the library bonus. This one tells you refer to different pages for rules, has you picking skills multiple times for different states of childhood and have potentially RETROACTIVE cost reductions for skills.

No waifus tho, some q3.14s but not a word about how much they love you no matter what.

Brace ur butts.

>>52990743
Isn't this supposed to be updated?

>>52990609
Why not switch up the combinations? Insanity Revolver and Corpse God Shotgun?

Or Corpse God Insanity and Shotgun Revolver?

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>>52990743

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>>52990772

>>52990757
This is the newest one on the Drive and I can't find anything about newer version existing.

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>>52990816

>>52990767
Why not Corpse God Insanity's Shotgun Revolver?

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>>52990840

>>52990849
Corpse God of Insanity's Revolving Shotgun?

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>>52990913

>>52990767
>>52990849
>>52990871
SUPER INSANITY TENGEN CORPSE GOD TOPPA SHOTGUN GURREN REVOLVER LAGANN

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>>52990956

Star Dust CYOA please

Also summoning SDA, because he is my favorite author.

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>>52991084
Praise the Emperor, glory to imperium of man!

>>52991114
The emperor protects!!!!

Jesus Christ how many pages does it have

>>52991207
15. That was the last one. He said it when he posted the first one.

>>52990743
Thank you for posting Branching Hearts. I greatly enjoyed it.

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>>52989730
>tfw just discovered the most tasty thing I've ever eaten

Who here /comfy/

Am I wrong in disliking cyoas that have both waifu picking and "standard" elements like picking magical items or other perks? Both are fine but rarely work well together

>>52990130
Is it still legally available anywhere? The Wii U virtual console or whatever?

>>52991357
Semen on french fries?

>>52991357
did you bukkake on a plate of fries?

>>52991358
What CYOAs even do this?

>>52991384
>>52991398
It's kebab sauce.

>>52991419
So it's semen?

>>52991419
Yes, that's what we're saying.

>>52991405
The ones that do, they usually call them Companions instead of Waifus but have long description on which ones will fuck you and how.

>>52991358
So you dont like waifu content mixed with standard cyoa content or what? i dont really understand what you mean

>>52991376
Well, it's not available digitally, so far as I know, but it's not one of those old games that's been bid up to obscene prices. You can get it for around $25 on eBay.

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>>52991419
I hope you've already come out to your parents.

>>52991358
I prefer those the most. I think both the elements blend well. I'm not a huge fan of CYOAs that are just "Pick a random waifu"

>>52991419
Shouldn't it be thicker then?

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>>52991441
>Have long descriptions on which ones will fuck you and how
Not ringing a bell, can you name or post some?

>>52991470
He probably just dislikes it because they're usually lazily written sextoys that don't mesh with the rest of the CYOA. It's fine when it's doone well.

>>52991441
What is wrong with mixing both? or is it that you want Husbandos[\spoiler]?

>>52991494
The new adventurer one Beri just released.

>>52991494
>bulleted list waifus
Truly the scum of waifu CYOAs.

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>>52991466
You sound salty.

>>52991517
If i remember well A new adventurer and its other components have no waifus

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>>52991517
There were waifus in that? I guess there was the page with the fairies. That's the one you were talking about, right? I don't remember there being any other waifu options.

>>52991524
Here's another for you.

>>52991114
Holy fucking 15 pages, Batman

>>52991607
>Zodiac waifus
ZODIAC KINGDOM WHEN?

>>52991605
Fairies were the waifu option.

>>52991719
You can't really fuck any of them with the exception of boux

>>52991605
A new adventurer is narrated by the waifu

>>52991741
There is not much explained about her anyways so does it really count?

>>52991737
Not with that attitude
>>>7289015

>>52990943
SUPER INSANITY TENGEN CORPSE RINNE TENSEI MADARA UCHIHA GOD TOPPA ETERNAL MANGEKYOU SHARINGAN RINNEGAN PERFECT SHOTGUN SUSANO’O GURREN JUUBI GEDOU REVOLVER MAZOU LAGANN

>>52990743

Hope that this gets a fair number of responses, I really love this CYOA.

>Prophecy
Silencer of Fates

>Childhood Events
-Kidnapped (Yes)
-Foreign Playmate
-Lost Critter

>Training
Points: 5 Positive, 5 Neutral, 12 Negative
Convert 6 Negative into 3 Neutral.

Positive Powers: Clerical Training (Greater), Natural Cache, Statecraft Apprenticeship, Luck of the Gods

-Neutral Powers: Magical Training, Magical Lineage

-Negative Powers: Blood Thicker than Loyalty, Essence of the Void

>Companions
-Orin, Pitus, Sianna
-Flame Draminth

>Challenge
-Trial of the King

>Character

Loptr was a relatively studious child, but an adventurous one. Tales of the past instilled within him a deep passion for magic of all kinds, one furthered by the discovery that his magical aptitude allowed him to wield both divine and arcane magic with surprising skill for a youth. Loptr is surprisingly eloquent for a young child. His manners are impeccable for one so young.
Naturally lucky and charismatic despite occasionally seeming a little off, Loptr made three fast friends during his youth-the flighty Orin, met during a foreign diplomatic meeting hosted by the Church, Pitus, who met him during a meeting between the king and the master swordsman, and the witch Sienna, who once abducted alongside Loptr and helped the prince escape. He is also close with a young Flame Draminth that he once aided. It has the loyalty of a hound, but the temperament of a cat.

The prince's greatest challenge was the Trial of the King, where he encountered monsters who would have surely taken his life were it not for the aid of his tireless protector, the enigmatic Knight of the Red Thorn, who allowed him to move through the ruins without loss of life. The experience left the prince a little wiser and more cautious, although he seldom shares specifics of what he encountered there.

End childhood with 10 neutral fate points and 10 positive.

>>52991524
Honestly, I prefer them to those that are just three paragraphs of "she loves you and [fetish]".

>>52991928
But three paragraphs of actual character are preferable to either of those.

>>52991928
>She loves you forever and [fetish]
Those are not waifus those are sex toys

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Here, first attempt at modifying the venerable "choices with a sting" CYOA. Over 2 hours in GIMP, though most of them coming up with ideas for a choice I've eventually scrapped. I wanted to remain true to the old "style", without too many frills or additions. Most of the choices are basically the same, sometimes with a little rewording. Others I've modified, added or removed as need be. The theme I've tried to keep to was that the drawbacks should be natural consequences of the essential wish between each choice itself. Ideally, at least with some of them, when someone decides not to make a choice because "the drawbacks feel too severe" it should be possible to point out them that it's effectively the same choice they've made in any number of other CYOAs, hopefully getting them to really think about something.

>>52992009
Someone who couldn't be happy playing with their dog for eternity probably couldn't be happy ever.

>>52992009
>the beloved has no downsides
if you were expecting people to come to the conclusion that having a bang-maid with none of their own opinions might eventually get dull on their own you came to the wrong place

>>52992198
She is boring as fuck anon you have terrible taste

>>52992009
Too, many, commas,.

>>52992009
>Most of the choices are basically the same, sometimes with a little rewording
lol

>>52992220
Then you ask her to not be boring. Done. Did you reach the limit of her current ability to not be boring? Ask again. According to the wording, she'd be able to .

>>52992009
Hmm i can't really choose between the degenerate and the innocent

>>52992009
Hero.

>>52992238
like which?

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>>52991453
>>52991494
I mean things like part 2/3 of vampire king (everything between wife and ambassadors), item section of harem island or last parts of angel/demon roommate cyoas (no items but the same priniciple). There is very little interaction between those parts and waifupicking

>>52992252
No, according to the wording she'll DO HER BEST to. She's clearly not superhuman, she's a probably miserable person who at best has no free will and more likely is programmed to obey your every selfish order. Even the whole sex part is described mechanically. She's not into you, she's programmed to be forcibly aroused by you.

The point of the choice is asking you whether you're okay with having a wretched fuckslave so long as they make a good enough show of pretending to really like you.

>>52992009
>Ideally, at least with some of them, when someone decides not to make a choice because "the drawbacks feel too severe" it should be possible to point out to them that it's effectively the same choice they've made in any number of other CYOAs, hopefully getting them to really think about something.

"The Genius" and "The Artiste" fail that criterion hard: plenty of CYOAs allow you to get smarter or more artistically talented, but I've never seen one that tacks on "your work will never really help anyone" or "your art will never be popular in your lifetime." (If it was me, I'd take The Genius, use my insight to anticipate the deadly consequences of certain fields, and actively steer humanity away from them via fraud--effectively creating anti-science to improve the lot of humanity.)

"Nobody will ever truly love you" is also somewhat overused in this version of the CYOA.

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>>52992314

>>52992314
Ah yes i never bother with those parts i just pick my waifus and be on my way if it does not mix well might as well not be there

>>52992318
The only time that's implied is when it says they'll never say they have a headache despite potentially having one. Otherwise, there is almost no indication that they're a miserable person putting on a show instead of a robot that happens to be made out of meat. If that is intended to be the dilemma, then that should be what is emphasized.

>>52992337
Hence the comment about the essential wish behind choices. It's kind of the old "Well, you've wished for _____, so surely you'll be happy with this, right?". The wish behind the Artiste is to become a great artist, presumably for some lofty purpose, not gain riches and fame. If you read it and the fact you won't makes you hesitate, it forces you to consider whether you really wanted to be an artist or just a celebrity.

Same as for the Genius. When you see choices like that in CYOAs, it's very common for people to say they'll choose them for the chance to "advance humanity" or "for the science" or something along those lines (which is what's being referred to in the CYOA). The choice asks you just how truly pure is your dedication to science as an ideal, and how much of it really stems from some other motivation, like wanting to enforce your own particular vision of the future on humanity. After all, you are offered the choice to limit yourself to small discoveries that won't get abused. But then you won't get to develop AI or fusion power or whatever it is you so dearly wish to see the future revolve around.

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>>52992009
The Innocent. Becoming a cute girl to live a fun and positive school life with caring family and friends would be amazing, especially if it lasted forever. It would be perfectly comfy and pleasant, as fulfilling and exciting as I could ever want.

>>52992411
Not the guy who made this, just my interpretation. It's a pretty common argument of antiwaifuers in general, so I wouldn't be surprised if it was used.

>>52992411
>instead of a robot that happens to be made out of meat
I'm not sure what's more disturbing, that you're implying you WOULD be fine loving a "robot which happens to be made out of meat" because it's pretty good at going through the motions of loving you or that the alternative never even crossed your mind.

keep trying mate

Short but sweet OC

Uncensored Version
>>>/d/7393598

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>>52992571
Fucking hell here is the CYOA...

>>52992318
>>52992411
^that was my intention. The Beloved's "waifu" isn't exactly a robot and I won't go as far as to explicitly compare her to someone who's been brainwashed (or for that matter, threatened) into going out with you, since that would be contrary to the atmosphere of the CYOA, but it's supposed to be pretty strongly implied that what you're dealing with here isn't true love but the shallow act thereof. It's the same question that's been brought up in a million waifu shitstorms: how much *unlike* actual love is having a tailor made robo girlfriend who'll do nothing but fulfill your wishes.

It's pretty late now so I'm going to go to bed. If by the morning it seems like too many people have missed the point I'll look into maybe rewording the option. It seems to be a 50/50 so far, so no point in fixing what might not be broken.

>>52992497
Oh, sure, I wasn't trying to attack you or anything. Just discussing the CYOA in general. It's where the emphasis is that makes the difference in terms of considering the dilemma.

Let's use the example of Innocent. The dilemma seems to be that your life is really comfortable, but you will never really grow or change. But that is exactly what people want out of that sort of life: stability and freedom from pain. Now, what if instead of just presenting that as a potential negative, we look more into the implications? Maybe you personally don't want to grow or change, but what about every other person in your fantasy life? Did they want to grow and change, to move on? Is the father frustrated at his job that he never seems to advance in? Do all your friends feel anxious to move onto a new stage of life that never comes? Now there is a real conflict: how many people are you willing to sacrifice for your perfect life? Because if they're all perfectly content, the choice basically becomes "are you sure you won'the be bored?" which is a much simpler question. For the waifu, more indication that she doesn't have a choice despite wanting one, rather than that "she" has been engineered to make choices that conveniently slot into your desires, would make it much more of a moral dilemma.

>>52992009
The Adventurer: The Magician

>>52992628
>Let's use the example of Innocent. The dilemma seems to be that your life is really comfortable, but you will never really grow or change. But that is exactly what people want out of that sort of life: stability and freedom from pain. Now, what if instead of just presenting that as a potential negative, we look more into the implications? Maybe you personally don't want to grow or change, but what about every other person in your fantasy life? Did they want to grow and change, to move on? Is the father frustrated at his job that he never seems to advance in? Do all your friends feel anxious to move onto a new stage of life that never comes? Now there is a real conflict: how many people are you willing to sacrifice for your perfect life? Because if they're all perfectly content, the choice basically becomes "are you sure you won'the be bored?" which is a much simpler question. For the waifu, more indication that she doesn't have a choice despite wanting one, rather than that "she" has been engineered to make choices that conveniently slot into your desires, would make it much more of a moral dilemma.

A. the cyoa is enough of a wall of text I really wouldn't do it
B. There's making a pretty unsubtle "reconsider your life" cyoa then there's just spoonfeeding the reader guilt. You've just proven it's perfectly possible for someone to come up with all those questions without having to have them spelled out by the text. Assuming the point was to get you to think, it's done its part.

>>52992602
>Pocket dimension that you can change 4 times per year
>Super fast internet
>She loves to spend all day playing videogames or watching anime

How can any of the other 6 compete?

>>52992520
I'd pick socialite, not beloved.

>>52992009
The Innocent is pretty great - the only real drawback I can think of is the fact that I'll never grow breasts. Also >>52992628, but I'm a selfish piece of shit anyway.

>>52992602
Sloth seems like a great girl to NEET out with. Do I get taxed while I'm the pocket dimension? Does time move, and if not, can I still speak with people on my friends list.
Also change myself to basically myself but with better skin, softer hair, and a more fit/fat body. Live with her in a mix between a log cabin, man cave, and beach house with a single huge bed.

>>52992628
I thought the dilemma of the innocent was the inevitable insanity of an eternal, risk free life.

>>52992702
I think that is pretty much it but he wants to find something else too because apparently it is too good

>>52992461
That seems silly, actually.

I suspect that many people who want to be good at art have an expectation that people will look at their stuff and say, "Hey, you're good at art!" This is not the same thing as wanting to be rich or famous.

Most of the people who actually do science-- I'd guess maybe 80%-- do it because they want to improve the lot of humanity. The other 20% have some mysteries they really want to crack; they're the people who think that learning about the universe is intrinsically good, and they usually don't do stuff with practical applications. It's generally acknowledged that we don't know how things are going to play out, but the emphasis really is on helping people, in the long run.

In other words, I'm pretty sure the vast majority of actual, practicing scientists wouldn't take The Genius, and they'd excoriate someone who did. I pretty much assumed that most people who took science options in CYOAs had the same motives.

>>52992702
Right, so "are you sure you won't get bored?" But for the kind of person who would ever pick that option in the first place, the answer is probably an immediate "no" because boring stability is what they're looking for in the first place.

>>52992009
Correct me if I'm wrong about the "question" of each choice (since you want to know whether they're clear and all):

The Genius: Do you have a true desire to advance humanity for the sake of advancing it or do you want to control its future?

The Artiste: Do you really care about your art or is it more about the perks that come from being a successful artist?

The Paragon: Do you hate your current body/want a different body enough you'd be willing to trade your whole life for it?

The Socialite: Do you want to get popular without effort even though that popularity is shallow?

The Degenerate: Would you really be happy doing nothing for the rest of your life except NEETing it up?

The Innocent: Would you really never get tired of living the exact same saccharine fantasy every day for the rest of eternity without any chance for change or growth?

The Hero: Do you really want to live the life of a superhero?

The Predator: Do you really have it in you to become a completely amoral badass?

The Terminator: Pretty much the same as the Predator desu so far as I can see

The Magician: Do you want knowledge that much you'd be willing to accept knowing something painful, i.e. that your actions cause misery

The Explorer: would you be okay never seeing home again if it meant seeing something wildly different

The Adventurer: basically the same thing with an added layer of paperback fantasy wish fulfillment

The Stranger: Do you really want a life that's perfectly stable and predictable?

The Beloved: as discussed

Did I get it right?

>>52992731
>I'm pretty sure the vast majority of actual, practicing scientists wouldn't take The Genius, and they'd excoriate someone who did
To be honest, most people who actually want to love someone would never pick a standard waifu option, most people who want a "stable life" would never pick something like the Innocent and most people would never pick something like the Predator or Terminator under any condition. /cyoag/ is kind of a bubble filled with a very specific kind of person.

>>52992731
I read it more as the Artiste asking people whether they want to be remembered/affect a great change in culture. It certainly seems to be something a lot of wannabe artist teenagers like to talk about until they realize how demanding and unfulfilling the life of an artist really is (just like in the option)

>>52992699
Time will work like normal in the pocket dimension, otherwise the free internet wouldn't work.

>>52992739
Eternity is a very long time. If you seriously don't think you'll ever get bored out of having the same of something FOR ALL ETERNITY, no matter how good it is, 99% chance is you haven't given it enough thought.

>>52992530
>>52992551
I always find it interesting how people portray lust in CYOAs/settings in which all of the sins are already based around sex. Like, do you just add more sex? I think you solved it very well.

A question though, with Pride, is "being humble" a skill?

>>52991888
Loptr's teenage years.

>Teenage Events
-Childhood Drama (Kidnapped)
-Leofin of Aquitas (Helped set-up, 2 neutral)
-Grand Festival of Light (Foretold great influence)

>Training
Starting Points: 15 positive, 12 neutral, 7 negative


-Positive Powers: Clerical Training II, Restricted Knowledge I and II, Divine Field, Restricted Tomes I and II, Statecraft Apprenticeship II, Tactical Acumen I and II, Battlefield Protection I, Shifted Perceptions I, Divine Magic Synergy

-Neutral Powers: Magical Training II, Elemental Magic (Fire), Martial Training I and II, Complex Hybridisation I and II

-Negative Powers: Sealed Tomes I, Sealed Knowledge I, Blood Thicker II, Essence of the Void II, Dancing Rose, Outer Clerical Training I, Sapper

>Companions
-Charlie, Dainslef, Haylie

>Medals
-Prowell: Grand Festival

>Challenge
-Predetermined Proposal

>Character
Loptr's magical studies progress impressively, supplemented by a new interest in physical combat. He takes to swordplay well, now wielding a blade in tandem with his diverse magics.

He stays close to all his old friends, who joined are all doing well at the school. Pitus' encouragement was at the heart of his decision to take up the blade.

He makes two new friends at the school-the cocky illusionist Dainslef and the carefree Haylie. He's also become very close to Charlie, daughter of the Arch-Mage Oberon. They knew each other as children but were more rivals in magic than friends. At Aquinas their relationship has blossomed into mutual appreciation-although their opposing elemental specialties and Loptr's 'brutish' swordplay cause no end of bickering.

Both expected to win Matia, and only the immense prestige of Prowell kept Loptr from a meltdown when Charlie beat him to the medal. Even so, Loptr jumped quicker than anyone to answer Charlie's call for help when she was revealed to be the bastard heir to the Pallidian Empire, managing to release her from an arranged marriage through clever statesmanship.

>>52992873
The thought of pride bragging about how humble she is cracks me up

>>52992875
please tell me this is a intentional FE4 reference

>>52992867
That's what I figured too. It might take a hundred or a thousand or a million years but eventually all the strawberry cakes and cute tea parties and blue summer skies in the world are going to get old.

Plus, you'll never again get to enjoy whatever stuff you really might be enjoying about being an adult. I think the choice actually could benefit from adding a subtle comment about how unfortunate it is you'll never again get to watch an R-rated film, never have sex, never get a license, never drink, never achieve independence and never even accomplish anything (since your skills are only good FOR A NORMAL KID, not an adult. Even if you really munchin'd the wording and went "there ain't no rule saying I CAN'T break into the town library and teach myself quantum mechanics every year until I'm eventually good at it!" the very act of doing something like getting a job would break the "perfectly normal childhood" fantasy, so it probably won't be possible)

>>52992931
>so it probably won't be possible
Just present it as a ridiculous version of a lemonade stand, and you're golden.

>>52992970
That might actually work...

>>52992602
Man you were having some trouble today.

>>52992602
So Wrath would be okay with polygamy, then?

>>52993025
Wops, forgot her. No she would be so fucking mad at you and your other waifus. Will add that to the next version. Also Envy was named Elizabeth before, but I changed it to Evelyn and there is a "Elizabeth" in her description.

>>52992817
I don't know... I could see myself picking one of Beri's waifus. We might not be soulmates or lovers, but I think we could be friends.

Then again, I'm definitely a few standard deviations away from the mean where romance is concerned, so I guess I'm part of that bubble.

>>52992009
You seem to be going for sarcasm with a few of the options here. Word of advice: CYOA isn't a good medium for sarcasm. Especially if you're trying to pull of some kind of thought provoking deconstruction. I guarantee you the implied drawbacks of half of those are going to pass right by exactly the kind of audience they were meant for.

>>52992602
>>52992571
small patch

>Changelog
>Added Wraths reaction to pologamy in the intro text.
>Envys power had Elizabeth in it, changed it to Evelyn (Elizabeth was her name before I decided Evelyn was better).

Uncensored Version
>>>/d/7393719

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>>52993208
Fucking hell I forgot to post the CYOA again.... I'm so fucking tired...

>>52992337
One thing I've just noticed about the Genius and Artiste which is kind of neat is that both of those give you to the option to just about completely circumvent the drawback if you're okay with giving up the Big Prize. With Genius, you have the option of never inventing anything earthshaking, in which case you'll STILL BE A GENIUS, WHICH ISN'T ALL THAT BAD OF A DEAL (how many people do you think can name 3 Nobel Prize winners in chemistry from the past twenty years? Just because these guys aren't part of Joe Redneck's tiny reference pool doesn't mean they aren't freaking celebrities in academic circles, WHICH IS EVERYWHERE THEY GO ANYWAY). For the Artiste, yeah it sucks to dedicate your life to art and never see any of the rewards but if I'm reading it correctly you aren't actually any worse off for it if you choose not to. You pretty much remain yourself, except with good ideas.

Don't know if it's intentional or just a fluke, but it does seem like it might prevent some of /cyoag/s usual "ALL THE OPTIONS ARE SHIT SO I CHOOSE NOT TO CHOOSE AND EVERYONE MUST KNOW HOW MUCH I DISLIKE IT" shenanigans.

>>52992602
Lust, Sloth and Wrath are a no. The others are various degrees of yes.

I would probably go with Gluttony.

>>52992817
>most people who actually want to love someone would never pick a standard waifu option
Naturally. Waifus are for people who just want to be loved by someone who will ask nothing of them in return.

>>52992817
Oh hey, here's an expert psychologist.

>>52993298
Jesus, if you try to give some thought to the psychology behind why people would make some common CYOA choices, shit gets really depressing.

>>52993318
There's a reason armchair psychology is mocked, anon.

>>52993318
I'm pretty sure that's >>52992009's point. Not that it takes a genius to figure out someone who thinks being locked in a room with junk food and video games for the rest of their lives is a good deal is probably not mentally healthy.

>>52992602
Tokhaar you make decent CYOAs but your image layout is so bad.

>>52993298
>Naturally. Waifus are for people who just want to be loved by someone who will ask nothing of them in return.
Some people are just realistic about the fact that they have nothing worth asking for.

>>52993334
Yeah, it's only really apparent with Otaku, Innocent, Beloved and maybe one of the "psycho" options (Terminator and Predator, frankly they're pretty interchangeable thematically if you ask me)

>>52993370
Then it shouldn't bother them that the only realistic way they're getting someone to act like they love them is if they're forced.

>>52992875
Loptr's adulthood begins with his father's death. He takes the throne with little protest from his older brother, who he gets on with but isn't very close to. He has:

8 positive, 15 neutral and 7 negative fate points. He also has 14 fame points.

>Companions
-Faeron

>Training

-Positive Powers: Restricted Knowledge III, Restricted Tomes III, Battlefield Protection II, Creation

-Neutral Powers: Magical Training III, Martial Training III, Complex Hybridisation III

-Negative Powers: Thicker Than Loyalty III, training to convert 5 neutral fate points to 5 negative, then converting 2 positive to neutral, Essence of the Void III

>Days of Fame
-Kosan Empire and Detia
-Trained Fighters, Rangers, Arcane Knights

>Companion Final Quests
-Charlie, Dainslef, Faeron

Will finish off the history in a separate post.

>>52993370
>>52993394
Why do I get the picture that people making posts like this where they play at psychology and superiority are actually the fattest of neckbeards sitting in their basement either venting their extreme self-loathing through projection, or else filled with an arrogance born only of a slowly achieved liberal arts degree and/or a fastfood job?

>>52992731
Yeah. I don't see why I should care about having a great impact or being famous after my death, I'd just like to be able to make pretty pictures and have people say "that's a pretty picture" when they look at them.

>>52993362
>Tokhaar you make decent CYOAs but your image layout is so bad.
I know, but I'm too lazy to git gud on photoshop.

>>52993432
>where they play at psychology and superiority

Arent you doing exaclty the same now?

>>52993452
When in Rome.

>>52992783
Observation: with the exception of Hero and Paragon, all the options actually come in pairs based on what fantasy they examine. Genius and Artiste both share the theme of "do you really want to improve mankind or just get the perks", Terminator and Predator are about "will you really be okay killing people if you had the power", Innocent and Otaku are both about getting a perfectly safe leisurely life in return for never getting to live a full one, Explorer and Adventurer are about getting to see amazing things in return for never seeing anything familiar and Stranger and Beloved are about asking yourself whether it isn't sometimes the work you put into things that makes them worth getting.

>>52993432
I hope the irony here is intended

>>52992783
The Artiste is dumb. If you truly care about your art why would you even care about becoming influential or famous after death?

>>52993481
You'll be moving people, inspiring people, changing opinions and expressing your emotions. All the noble ideals of art.

>>52993432
>criticism hurts less if I imagine the critic is ugly!

>>52992009
>looks at hero option
>nice powers and such
>requires the deaths of millions of innocents

the only winning move is not to play.png

>>52993520
Criticism is easy when it's built up around a fantasy of your ideal target.

>>52993527
Just choose artist and be on your merry way

>>52993298
>Waifus are for people who just want to be loved by someone who will ask nothing of them in return.

Wrong. I pick my waifus twice, once with my dick and once with my brain, never with my heart. You cant find love in waifu cyoas.

>>52993527
>innocents
>implying there aren't only degrees of guilt

>>52993509
True, but the whole realizing your genius after death thing is an unrealistic romanticized fantasy in itself. Many artists would be fine if their influence was only on a very small scale or unconventional, wordwide renown isn't the only way to make an impact with art and not necessarily every "true artist"'s goal. Some people get off to "sure, no one recognizes my genius now, but when I'm gone they'll see, they'll all see." I'd say the desire for something like that can just as easily be a narcissistic power fantasy as it can be pure artistic aspirations.

>>52993527
Supposedly the point now is you think why you've even wanted superpowers in the first place (e.g. "if it was so you can lord them over other people and do whatever you like, is it really all that different if someone else torments them for you?" or something like that)

I'm pretty sure most /cyoag/ regulars would just want it for the cheap immortality though

>>52990743
I love this cyoa because it lets you marry a foreign prince as a prince without making a fuss about it. You can even miss it if you read over it.

>>52993674
But that's gay anon.

>>52993674
>>52993694
This is honestly way more embarrassing than the typo.

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>>52993700
I know.

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>>52993714
People who can't spell are the devil's minions. You have to correct typos for the love of baby Jesus.

>>52992602
Sloth is the way to go. I would simply never leave the pocket dimension. We would cuddle and play the vidya forever.

>>52993721
kawaii skeleton

>>52993737
Homosexuals are the devil's minions though. Read your Quran.

>>52993737
Seriously no one fucking cares, unless your post was unreadable don't delete the reply, it's just annoying for everyone else. Make a reply correcting it if your autistic brain absolutely has to,

>>52993417

>History

So Loptr has inherited the throne. He proves an effective and popular king, although he's a little distant. Even so, he's able to make crucial alliances with the Kosan Empire and Detia, giving him global influence both political and military. Alteria's military is numerous, versatile and efficient-whilst Loptr avoids expansion, he is capable of facing off most attackers, especially aided by the Kosan.

Loptyr's abilities are more impressive than ever. with both magical and physical abilities almost unparalleled and command of divine magic allowing even death to be undone. The power of the Essence of the Void renders magic meaningless against him and diminishes the effect of physical attacks such that his skills and Battlefield Protection render him unstoppable. Creation is very useful both for utility and creative use in combat. The undying Knight of the Red Thorn remains a deadly asset.

Loptr remains close with all his inner circle-Orin, Pitus, Sianna, Charlie, Dainslef and Haylie. He chooses to take Charlie and Dainslef's quests due to considering them the most world-changing. He and Charlie uncover the secrets of time manipulation together, and he learns the secrets of true illusion magic with Dainslef. He also works to uncover the mysteries of rune magic alongside a new friend, Faeron, causing Loptr to gain armor empowered by ancient rune magic.

Loptr's Fate, the battle with the seven escalating assassins, will almost prove his undoing but the myriad magical abilities he's accumulated, the powers of his many companions and the unique magics he's uncovered should see him through. His Fate concluded, he'll spend his time trying to challenge the Fate of his companions so that they might share immortality. Once he's done his duty to his kingdom, the group will travel together. I can see him eventually settling down with Charlie, the pair researching all branches of magic and bickering with one another for all eternity.

Finished.

>>52993754
>We would cuddle

Read her description again

>>52993806
>No cuddles
Where does it say that because i cannot see it

>>52993828
Cuddling requires activity

>>52993806
>watching anime or sleeping in your arms, she is very affectionate

She's a cuddler, anon.

>>52993849
Vidya requires activity and she does it anyways

>>52993850
Shes a warm bag of bones

any fresh new cyoa not involving wafus?

>>52993861
We all are bones in a warm bag

>>52992602
>Redesigning your body is becoming the standard like immortality had become
You guys don't have that low self esteem, do you?

>>52993849
Sloth doesn't lack all activity. She just favors sedentary activities like video games. If she truly did no activity at all she would be comatose.

>>52993896
I consider myself pretty attractive

>>52993931
Neckbeards and double chins aren't attractive.

>>52993946
I don't have a Double chin though

>>52993896
>like immortality had become

The fight is not over comrade, eventually they'll learn if we keep starting shit about it.

>>52993958
So you have a greasy neckbeard?

>>52993973
I don't know the difference between a beard and a neckbeard so i can't answer

>>52993946
Not everyone here is as fat as you anon

>>52993993
Next thing you're gonna tell me is that not everyone here is a spooky skeleton.

>>52990757
I remember complaining about the "Conqueror of Self" Finality of Fate (Because it has nothing to do with conquering ones self, and it was the worse of all by far since all of them had guaranteed success but this one, and this one you can't do shit about for like two years) and that the author said that he would change it.

>>52994046
Except we're not spooky skeletons. We're just not.

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>>52994046
Don't even make jokes like that

>>52993298
I guess I feel like there's nothing TOO wrong with fantasizing about being loved. And loving someone back.

>>52992009
The Genius is interesting in that one can probably still help a lot of people (AIDS vaccine, cure for a particular type of cancer), just not develop something as permanently game changing as AI/fusion/FTL without it blowing up in everyone's face. Genius can also make you really, really rich. But I'd personally go pure mathematics and let others figure out how to apply my work.

Anyway, I'd choose The Predator. It's like The Paragon but better in every way. Nothing says I can't drink from blood bags or feast on fresh natural corpses. Have to eat corpses I've made dead myself? Turn into someone really hot and offer a terminally ill person sex in exchange for their life. A fair trade between consenting adults.

>>52994072
But is the truth

>>52993231
Going with lust. Always wanted to be a pornstar.

>>52990772
I don't get these pages,for example with magical training does it cost 8 points if you choose magical lineage, or do you gain 4 points?

>>52994072
Fuck off.

Skeleton posters be gone!

Fucking sluts I bet youre all spooky skeletons under your clothes and skins

>>52993896
This has nothing to do with low self esteem, people on /d/ just loves the concept of changing their bodies and to post related sexy pics and I like seeing related sexy pics.

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>>52994046
He's onto us guys! Cheese it!

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>>52994107
We run this place skinbag.

>>52990248
Manel Shortarm is top shelf.
That said, "Shortarm"? Really?

>>52994149
I know you are low of calcium you filthy pile of bones have no power here

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>>52993896
No, I know I'm pretty.

>>52994082
>The Genius is interesting in that one can probably still help a lot of people (AIDS vaccine, cure for a particular type of cancer), just not develop something as permanently game changing as AI/fusion/FTL without it blowing up in everyone's face.
The problem with this is that even if you did something nice, like cure AIDS, then only the rich will be able to have access to it, so very few people will actually prosper from it; then think of all the misery that's created by "Well the cure is out there, but I'll never get it" that most people who have AIDS will be thinking.

>>52989730
Harem mode
>>52989786
Prosper honestly.

>>52992602
I'm a lot between Greed and Envy.
But I think Envy is the best choice, best sex, great power and yandere.

>>52992009
The Magician starts with "To unveil great occult secrets, you will be gifted with the knowledge of magic." This implies that I can learn more if I study hard enough.

As a reference point, what would be an example of a "great occult secret," and what would the benefits be?

Right now, Genius seems like the best option. Work on cyborgization, turn yourself into an immortal machine, and continuously pump out new and exciting research, forever.

>>52992009
>when someone decides not to make a choice because "the drawbacks feel too severe" it should be possible to point out them that it's effectively the same choice they've made in any number of other CYOAs, hopefully getting them to really think about something.
A lot of the drawbacks don't feel natural to the boon. Invisible misfortune demons? What other cyoa does that? You're charisma perma locks you from having friends? An enemy with all your abilities but better? Take assassination contracts, or people will try to kill you? Forced cannibalism?
How the hell are those organic challenges that arise from the boons?

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>>52992009
Oh wow, this really fires up my neural pathways.

>>52993896
I'm fine with my looks for the most part but if I could get magically rid of all the acne I would.

>>52993896
I'm a yeti. There's nothing I can do short of having my skin burnt with a laser or bathing in Nair. So yes, I would like to change my body some.

>>52993896
Some of us have deformities. I'm not so much interested in being beautiful as I am living past 50 without needing constant medical aid. I mean, body modification isn't the only solution to this obviously, but if it's an option I would not discount it unless a better one were provided. Honestly, removing my hunchback would be sort of strange at this point. I'd prefer to just not have to worry about being a burden on anyone to getting rid of it.

>>52994082
If the Genius invented the cure for cancer then that cure would be used to create super cancer that only targets specific ethnicities bringing about WW3.

>>52993231
Envy

She is my greatest Sin, after all.

>>52994222
>The problem with this is that even if you did something nice, like cure AIDS, then only the rich will be able to have access to it, so very few people will actually prosper from it; then think of all the misery that's created by "Well the cure is out there, but I'll never get it" that most people who have AIDS will be thinking.
Isn't that already true though?
Consider the following: if you make more that 30,000 dollars a year, you are the global 1 percent. If you get something like diarrhea, it will suck, but you will be fine eventually. If you are in a poor country, well...
http://www.healthline.com/health/top-10-deadliest-diseases#5

>>52990248
Girza all the way.

>>52992602
are they all virgins before we meet?

>>52994564
Yeah sure lust is 100% virgin and was waiting for you all this time

>>52994564
Lust and Greed probably aren't. Maybe Gluttony too. Envy, depends on if she's been yandere for anyone else before you. Sloth is definitely a virgin, she's too lazy to seek out sex. Pride and Wrath who knows, but they seem like they'd put people off.

>>52993231
Do you have to keep working if you choose gluttony?

>>52992602
What happen if you tell Pride that she's best at everything except one thing- being a wife, then ask how hell handles divorces?

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>>52990743
Alright I'm kinda confused here.

On the second page with all the abilities and etc, some of them have subcategories or have +Fate Points. Anyone wanna walk me through this?

>>52994852
That's probably one of the reasons as to why it has to be updated.

>>52993787
seriously is this an intentional Fire Emblem Geneology referance

>>52990743
Jesus fucking christ what a barrage of images.

If there was ever a list of CYOAs that need to be programmed into a computer to help keep track of shit, this would be in the top 5 surely.

>>52989833
Is that a new revision?

>>52989869
Author here if anyone has any questions or requests

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>>52989749
>>52989851
Fuck yeah, glad I'm not the only one to recognize it.

>>52989882
Old horror game on the Gamecube. Would probably be considered a gimmick now but at the time was revolutionary for fucking with the player both in-game and out as their sanity meter depleted. Shit like displaying a mock-volume display as audio went down, pretending to turn off the TV, and other freaky shit. Also pretty fun lore & worldbuilding

>>52994585
that would be most preferable.

>>52995188
Really who do you think she is chastity?

>>52995125
>Shit like displaying a mock-volume display as audio went down, pretending to turn off the TV, and other freaky shit.

Those got so good. There was the one where the game pretended to end suddenly with a screen advertising the sequel, and the one where it threw up a message about a controller malfunction while your character was mauled to death... I really liked the one where the character with flintlocks could accidentally shoot himself while reloading and die, too.

The best effect was the one where the game pretended to delete your save file when you tried to save. That got me.

>>52992602
Susie.
Also, archangels when?

>>52995125
I remember freaking the fuck out when it said all the data in my memory card was corrupt.
That game had a way of fucking with you that's rarely been seen since.

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Comfy

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>>52995334

>>52995318
I don't think any of the 7 Virtues can top Susie though

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>>52995344

>>52995334
Tli
Grom
Jade
Ilmadia
Fae-angel
Post-Apocaliptic world
Really comfy this CYOA

>>52995334
I can't even get through this one because every time I read Tli's description I lose containment on my feels.

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>>52990743
> Arven Escreott

silencer of fates (3+, 5n, 12-)
kidnapped (2+, 1c)
military training exercise (1c, 1-)
foreign playmate (1c, 1f)

people's prince (-2+)
tactical acumen (-2+)
investigative mind (-2n)
mental training (-2n)
black dagger training (-2-)
blood thicker than loyalty (-4-)
dancing rose (-2-)
coming knowledge (-3-)

evie
fie
samantha
sianna

royalty under siege (10-, 5n, 2f)

> Knowing this child to bear a cursed fate, the King set to training him in observing situations and shifting the developments that follow. After several well known incidents, the public has come to see the "forth followed by death" as a bearer of the entire nation's ill fate.

---

school anarchy (2+, 1f)
magnificent masquerade (1c)
mice in the woodwork (2+, 1f)

people's prince II (-3+)
tactical acumen II (-3+, -3-)
investigative mind II (-2n)
mental training II (-3n)
black dagger training II (-3-)
blood thicker than loyalty II (-2-)
permanent waltz (-2-)
coming knowledge II (-5-)

darquesse
tia

communitas
teleportation troubles (2f, 11+, 5n)


> Soon, It became apparent that those near the boy would see misfortune. Only his closest friends would recognize his diligence. Only they would share in tears and true joy alike.

---

claudia
tracy

people's prince III (-5+)
tactical acumen III (-6+)
beyond impossible (-3+)
investigative mind III (-4n)
mental training III (-5n)
blood thicker than loyalty III (-4-)
coming knowledge III (-6-)
+ 1 companion (-4n, -1-)

merchant's alliance (-2f)
mage's association (-3f)
detia (-4)

trained fighters (-1f)
rangers (-1f)
war clerics (-2f)
knights (-2f)

> The poisonous sorrows meant to kill him as a boy only made him more durable as a man. His people know him as unbroken, one who has carried a burden and chooses to miraculously take on still more weight from others.

Man, this was neat but really badly laid out. The skill page basically repeats three times, and the friend content locks you if you're not starting near neutral.

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>>52993896
Self esteem, self schmesteem, I know for a fact I'm deeply unattractive.

I'll take immortality over looks every time if I *have* to choose, but if a C.Y.O.A. can give me both (or just the attractiveness option) then, yes, of course I'll go for it.

>>52990156
>Unchanged
I feel like I could be caring without being a girl.
>Nexus
Seems like a nice place. Be nice to be able to have people to talk to about this stuff if it's going to be my job.
>Authority
>Comfort
I figure if I'm in a city where everyone is doing this, kidnapping wizards aren't going to be a big problem. And I feel like comfort is the best thing to pair with authority since it would nullify the fear part of authority which I'm not too keen on.
>Existence
>Color
>Pop
I feel like Existence could get along with anyone given a little time to establish a few boundaries. Pop and Color would get along pretty well, with Color being able to basically draw moving fanart for Pop.
Also...
Cheesy romance?
Protagonists with hidden powers
I'M FINALLY GOING TO GET A FUCKING SEASON 2 OF REAPER THANK GOD

Can someone post Fulcrum?

>>52992602
Gwendolyn.

Kinda want Priscilla, but I couldn't handle being married to someone who would never admit they loved me.

>>52995541
>The description implies that someone left her alone and starving just so they could come back and harvest her blood
>It probably is not the first time this happened

Now i am sad and angry at the same time

>>52995695
Don't you mean season 3

>>52995742
It's been so long since I watched it I forgot it was two seaons, but yes. I'm still angry regardless.

>>52995777
Yeah, it sucks that it ended the way it did.

>>52995238
Until she meets me.

She can masturbate all she wants before though.

>>52995808
Nope, she's taken several cocks and some way bigger than yours.

Is Pokemon Personified Plus+ ever going to be released?

>>52995541
Just pick her and give her carrots and lamb, it's that easy friend.

>>52995832
several million cocks*

>>52995808
Are you trying to tell me that you actually belive that the incarnation of lust will be a virgin until she meets you?

>>52995334
Tli
Jade
Mute girl
Angel-fae
Pherophine
"Attuned to the magic world."

I like this cyoa

>>52992009
Take genius, proceed to create personal weaponry that would put iron man to shame. Conquer the world. Steer the world to a great future using absolute power.

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>>52995696
Sorry, I can't

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>>52995967

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>cyoa offers individual powers instead of thematic powersets

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>>52995988

>>52995995
>actually wanting powersets

>>52992314
Seeing as I don't like any of the waifus here I'm just going to pick Miki, and Shuria as I could easily overpower them and steal their shit. Miki's pack is obviously useful and an idestructible instrument would make a great weapon.
Creepy Crwlies, because I like bugs.
Unknown, because hey, maybe whatever's watching me would be a more appealing waifu than any of the regular choices.
Wild beasts, as it seems like a good food source I could fend off fairly handily with my indestructible stringed instrument.
Drama because it won't really affect anything.
Clover, First aid kit
Cabin, because of there is something spooky that's probably where it's source is.

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>>52996036

>>52996055
Thanks, vro

>>52996047
>>52992338
Also, venture on foot, Treasure.

>>52993231
What's in the black box

>>52994852
Those are 'add-on' abilities. They cost the set amount of points, but it'd make no sense to be able to buy them without first buying the top-tier ability. So you need Clerical Training (Greater) before you can get Natural Cache. Taking them both uses 4 Positive Points.

>>52996144
Naughty bits. Do you /d/are enter the mystical realm?

>>52995334
Tli, because she's super cute and need's a friend.
Grom, who seems like a bro.
Will-O-Wisp because I can't turn something like that down.
Ilmadia, as she seems a perfect fit for the lifestyle the wisp would force me into.
Yuriko, as she would be immensly helpful on my power seeking quest.
High magic world.
Shits gonna get crazy.

>>52996044
Nothing more bothersome than having to stitch together your powers. I'd much rather pick from various powersets, possibly with suboptions. Having to mix and match leaves you acutely aware of how limited your options are.

>>52996193
Yes I do, now show me what you got

>>52990338
Agent Snek, Specialist Chomp, and Tiger.

Those monsters are about to get spooked.

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Who's got stardust version 2.4

>>52995334
Tli
Tammy
Residence
Ilmadia
Valkyrie

Tli for cute daughteru
Tammy because I want to see the extent of her power and her heart is just.
Residence for comfy as well as a moral and easy way to feed Tammy plus Tli can have her food
Valkyrie because of the need for generic but subtle muscle
Ilmadia because of antimagic plus she was the only one who outwardly displays interest in being taken

Attuned to the magic

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Cyoa that makes current me irl feel like a speshul snowflake very wonderful baby beloved by the heavens please.

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Do people prefer drawn images or photos? I'm thinking of just going around and snapping a bunch of pictures of hobos, but if people wouldn't enjoy it there's lots of drawings, western and eastern, that I can use.

>>52996389
Photos can work but outside of joke CYOAs they tend to look lazy or just out of place.

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>>52996389
Please don't include ugly 3d people in cyoas. Even hobos must be attractive by 2d standards.

>>52996419
They wouldn't be stock photos, they would be authentic hobos in their natural environments.

>>52996389
>Do people prefer drawn images or photos?

Drawings, generally.
Part of the entertainment value of CYOAs is escapism, and for me that is drained quite a bit by photos of people.
Objects and items? Not a problem. Just photos of people.

>>52996220
>Having to mix and match leaves you acutely aware of how limited your options are.
That's where the fun comes in. Power fantasies that let you become an omniscient and omnipotent godlike being are a dime a dozen. The fun doesn't come from being given the powers, the fun comes from figuring out how you can fully utilize what you have to get what you want done. Then going back and thinking it over even further. Working out the details, knowing what you can and can't do, and realizing that the limit you initially placed on your group of powers slowly gets pushed farther and farther away from where it began. And all that's only for one batch of assorted abilities. If you swap x with y but keep the rest your options change even more. And shit, what could you do with a set that's totally different from what you originally went with? The more options for customization, and the more restrictions there are, the better.
For me at, that is. Everyone does escapism differently. Keep on keeping on.

>>52995334
Nel, because she's cute and I like hanging around smart people
Grom, because I want to learn his riddles and ask him about the way things were in the past (if he feels like talking about it)
Ilmadia, because she'd have fun traveling
Yuriko, because she's a natural tourist and knows all the cool places to visit

and the residence, so that we always have somewhere to stay.

Modern world + supernatural creatures (the first entry)

We're going to travel everywhere and see everything!

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>>52995680

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>>52996488

>>52996440
You sound autistic. I never said I wanted omnipotence. I just don't like having to stitch together half a dozen abilities to come up with something functional. I don't appreciate any of the minmaxed characters such cyoas inspire either.

Instead of making me buy "enhanced strength + enhanced agility + enhanced durability + etc. " tie all those together in one "superhuman body" option. If you want to have anon have varied builds, then offer multiple broad options. Picking classic powersets apart to create the illusion of choice is meaningless.

>>52996389
Only if they're beautiful people.

And remember, DO NOT cross the streams.

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Can cyoas be unsettling?

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>>52995680
Honestly Lengmen seem like a Robes'n'Masks'n'Shiet kind of folk. But that description let's you make basically any dreamlands denizen short of a heavy hitter like the harlot.

>>52996574
No, show me a single CYOA that is genuinely unsettling.

>>52996527
Some people want enhanced agility but not strength, so it's not an illusion of choice.

>>52994588
>Envy, depends on if she's been yandere for anyone else before you
Good yandere are single target. If anyone can trigger their insanity then it loses the specialness.

>>52996574
Cyoas are an inferior medium incapable of evoking any other emotion than carnal lust or mild amusement.

>>52996624
That one with the mentally ill waifus made me all kinds of unsettled. It was actually painful to read through. I felt truly bad for those fictional girls.

>>52996695
I don't think I've seen that one. Post it?

>>52996695
I hated that one. My mental issues were arranged in such a way that I couldn't get any of the good girls. I think I only qualified for like, two drug addicts, who are the most disgusting kind of people in the world, and some other boring girl I can't recall anything about.

>>52996574
Not unsettling, but they can be comfily spoopy.

>>52995334
Tli
Mouse
Residence
Alva
Jade

Attuned Today Land

>>52990338
STEGOSAUR
AGENT SNEK
SPECIALIST CHOMP

but who are the monsters?

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>>52996709

>>52996695
I'm glad it made you feel that way.

>>52996800
Why is homosexuality not on there?

>>52996800
Do you need an actual mental illness to play this?

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why don't we just split these threads into CYOA and CYOW (Choose your own waifu) already?

>>52996847
No more than any other CYOA

>>52996851
Because some are both at the same time.

>>52996574
I'd say so, but I tend to get emotional easily.

>>52990338
Agent Snek, Bear Bros, and spooky.

>Be me, sitting at computer desk
>spooky monster climbs out from under bed and sets a course for my boi pucchi.
>Monster fails to see agent snek and treads on him, violating the NAP.
>Agent snek radios spooky, who flies over with the bear bros dropping tactical thumb nukes

we need a cooking cyoa

>>52997035
How would that work?

>>52996794
Patrician taste

>>52997047
i have no idea

>>52997047
It's a recipe book

>>52990338
B.E.S.S
Agent Snek
The Ket

>>52990984
>World Ender sounds the coolest but negative fate abilities are boring

>>52996546
>hobos
>beautiful

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>>52997181
>implying hobos aren't beautiful

Hobos are canonically the most aesthetic race.

>>52996816
Are you the anon that made it? If so, rock on. I felt terrible reading it. That's pretty rad. It's a skill to be able to elicit emotions from the reader. The more powerful it's experienced, the better a job you did creating it. I just wanted to say that you did a good job, and that I enjoyed the experience.

>>52997234
Thank you, I was aiming for somewhere between exhaustion and anxiety when I wrote that one. I hope you'll continue to enjoy my CYOAs in the future.

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>>52997217
hung hobo husbando CYOA WHEN!?

>>52989804
I call you a nigger only because you asked for it, since I agree completely with your post.

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>>52997299
never

>>52997047
>Origin of skill
years of practice, selling your soul for cooking knowledge, bullshit sense of taste and ability to recreate shit after eating it once, or you're the spirit of all things culinary.
>years of practice
studied under the best of the best, gives a massive bonus to a chosen region of food and kitchen management
went to a cooking school. Not as skilled as you would be had you specialized and took on a mentor, but you're well balanced. Gives a bonus to three different regions of cooking, starts with zero experience in a high paced kitchen environment and a significant amount of debt
You browsed /ck/, watched cooking shows, and followed internet recipes. You're self learned, and quick to adapt. You lack any experienced in a high paced environment, but you pick up on things fast. You start with minor bonus to six regions of cooking and the adaptability perk which allows you to gain skill faster.

>selling your soul
blah blah blah choose the type of contract, who you made it with, and the cost of doing so

>bullshit sense of taste
you got wrecked somehow but came out stronger. Choose your disability, how it impacts your life, and the extent of your superhuman tongue. The more you cripple yourself the stronger you become.

So on and so forth for the rest. It's not too hard.
It's too hard for me. I have no skill with gimp or even paint for that matter.