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/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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HUSBANDO CYOA WHEN
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>>52817669
When someone with enough interest in husbando CYOAs makes one.
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>>52817700

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>>52817691
Like you?
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>>52817707
No.
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>>52817691
Just don't respond. Let him tire himself out.
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>>52817692
are your children with the waifu also immortal if you chose that option?
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MORE WAIFU CYOAs WHEN

Still waiting for the Zodiac guy to deliver it.
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>>52817714
Yes.
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>>52817720
Nope, but if you take the tier 2 for immortality you can give immortality to up to 10 other people so you could do that.
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>>52817732
But what if I have more than 10 kids?
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>>52817718
anon, if he isn't tired after all these years, i don't think it's gonna happen
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>>52817721
Dont we get a new waifu waifu cyoa like every 3 days?
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>>52817744
Thank Allah for filter option
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>>52817748
If only.
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>>52817737
Well, then some of them have to die I guess or you could possibly get the tier 2 power and choose some power which could prolong your childrens lives by a limited amount of years.
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>>52817773
Wait can you use wish to make EVERYONE immortal?
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>>52817758
4chanX? Freedollchan?
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>>52817656
Super Heroine, The Future, Alchemical Blood
Hopefully my new half-vampire body will let me keep up with the Super Heroine as we protect the new world of 2117!
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>>52817779
Yeah you could, but earth would then face huge problems with over population. I guess you could always bail on earth and go to another world with Adventure or get a pocket dimension.
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>>52817767
>If only.

Bitch, these threads might as well be called "Waifu General". Waifu-shit is everywhere.
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>>52817692
>>52817700
>>52817705
Normal Mode

>Compensation
Power Tier 2 (-7)
True Copy-Cat; able to flawlessly and safely copy the abilities/powers/skills of anyone or anything I encounter. (Copy the goddess)

>Appearance
Shallow as Fuck (-9)
Just describe my type to her

>Quirks
Twin Sister (-8)
Extremist - Atheist (-7)
Clingy (-6)
Favourite Toy Tier 2 - Tight Collar (-4)
Yandere (-3)
Milking - The sisters can milk each other, lets me decide whether I want to join in on a particular session or not (-2)
Favourite Hole - Oral (-1)
Blunt (0)

Extras
Iff Serial Killer has no downsides - like law enforcement, revenge etc. (+1)
Weapon Obsession Tier 99 (0)

Extra Extras
Iff above is true, then
>Compensation
Adventure Grimdark Fantasy (-3)

>Quirks
Cumaddict (-2)
Sensitive (-1)
Can't decide - Favourite Color Green maybe (0)
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>>52817902
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>>52817925
No immortality anon?
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>>52817932
You know, I'd like to think I've gotten rid of most/all of the spelling mistakes, but I know that's not even slightly true
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>>52817951
Copy the goddess's powers and give myself + the 2 sisters limited immortality (basically unaging and revive them if they die but in a way that they don't remember, so they do not know that they won't die. Keeps the fear of death in them and keeps things fun. Also seems like less of a power abuse).
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>>52817758
I'd jerk off Japanese Moot if he'd let me hide posts and responses on mobile
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>>52817969
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>>52817989
>Not picking up standard inmortality and pleasure tier 2 so you can do whatever the fuck you want forever without geting tired of it
Shit taste
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>>52818020
>Not going on crusading adventures with the remnants of humanity as they struggle to stave off extinction in an increasingly hostile world with your super-humanly skilled waifus.

It's almost as if you don't want to create varied and interesting memories with your waifu.
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>>52818053
This and that are not mutually exclusive anon
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>>52817989
>Copy goddess powers
>make myself and waifus immortal
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>>52817705
>>52817925
Does Serial Killer have any hidden downsides like making an enemy of the state, or rival assassins trying to kill you or the like?
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>>52818061
What defines a power as silly?
Is removing a concept e.g "remove cyclists fucking not driving when it's red" silly?
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>>52818061
The power by itself isn't making you immortal or doing anything, it's the goddess's powers that are. It's semantics but honestly that whole choice is loosely worded and very open to interpretation.
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>>52818075
>>52818090
It's subjective and ultimately comes down to choosing your own adventure which is the whole point.
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>>52818162
Except some powers are illegal because.... reason.
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>>52818075
>What defines a power as silly?

You're autistic, so I'm giving you the answer you can process - CYOA's text does.
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>>52818075
>Steal the goddess that gave your power her powers so you are now the avatar of the despair sadness and loneliness of all the multiverse
Are you sure are you REALLY sure that is not kinda silly?
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>>52818346
>Steal
Don't steal it then copy it, or have some thing that compels her to help you with her powers.
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>>52818373
Still sounds kinda silly though but whatever
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>>52818061
Can I pick the power to simultaneously erase the past, present and future?
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>>52818409

no
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>>52818409
>Offered true and pure love, along with bonuses that may trivialise any difficulties the world may throw at you if used smartly
>Choose to erase existence instead
Ah, you are M O T H E R F U C K E R ?
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>>52817989
I think any power that undercuts one of the other options probably counts as silly and it's a shame that anyone has to point that out to you.
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>>52818448
You get that with every CYOA, but particularly with waifu CYOAs. And even more so with TokHaar's.

It's fun to think out of the box with a cyoa, but some autists play it out of spite and think they're proving a point by "breaking it"
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I want to be;

A dragon
An alpha werewolf
A demon king of a comfy evil kingdom
A magical girl
A magical girl (male)
A student of a crazy anime school
A sexually agressive younger sister/brother of an older sibling
A succubus
An incubus
A dog in outer space

Don't mind this list. Just me immortalizing my impeccable taste.
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>>52818493
A dog in outer space? sounds boring
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>>52818542
Your taste is but a baby compared to mine.
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>>52818460
Open to interpretation.

>T1 Power Telekinesis
No mention on how fine a control you have. Achieve T1 immortality by manipulating yourself at the cellular/genetic level.

It's called thinking outside the box.
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>>52818600
It is called breaking the game with your autismos
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>>52818600
You really don't even need powers to get immortality. Just buy the 2nd level of skill, set it at something like nanotechnology or biotechnology or something and straight up SCIENCE your way out of the problem.
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>>52818542
The case is very small, a tiny silver ball that makes you a hero the moment you step inside.
The world is watching you.
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>>52817656
>The Future
>All your knowledge becomes obsolete
worst option
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>>52818737
Sure, you can do that. But how can you SCIENCE your way to omnipotence?
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>>52818614
>le autismos Stop creating your own adventure in a way I don't like.
Yeah, nah, fuck off you hypocrite.
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>>52818760
2nd Tier Skill: Technological Singularity
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>>52818760
Make an AI?
Make a VR where you're omnipotent?
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>>52818770
Strong AI as a skill would probably also work
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>>52818764
Not that anon, but quite a few people here think they're very clever for coming up with unintended ways to play these things.

Sometimes, it is. Piss Bomber was pretty clever. But taking such an open ended option and making yourself a god isn't clever or thinking outside the box at all.
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>>52818770
>>52818788
I don't see how that makes you omnipotent
>Make a VR where you're omnipotent
In this case, you're not omnipotent outside the virtual reality.
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>>52818764
>Open to interpretation
>Clearly telekinesis gives me so fine controlling allows me to manipulate myself at a genetic level right at the start not only that it also gives me the knowledge to don't fuck up so i don't turn in to a mess
Sure
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>>52818770
>>52818793
So that would cover T1 immortality, T2 entertainment, T2 adventure if true immersive VR and possibly T2 money?
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>>52818806
They make you omnipotent the same way being a Downstreamer makes you omnipotent - sufficiently advanced understanding of the universe. AI specifically does this because once you have a theory of mind that is predictive, i.e. you can design a working brain, you can apply that theory to the limit of your understanding, make the best brain you can and then let the brain you created, which is very likely much smarter than you, refine the theory and apply it again. And on and on, with each cycle taking less time than the last because each brain is smarter than the one before. If you're being paranoid about it, you're upgrading yourself after every iteration.

Eventually you become hyperintelligent in a way that humans right now simply are not capable of understanding. We assume it's easier for a creature like that to make sense of the universe, and thus control it better.
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>>52818824
If you can build something equivalent to a Mind from Iain Bank's Culture novels, it probably covers everything.
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>>52818801
>>52818813
You're right.
Taking the T2 Skill and bringing about the technological singularity is way better and cheaper.
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>>52818969
i would say you would still need to get the resources to make it happen but then you would just take infinite money
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>>52818987
Not necessarily, research grants would probably come thick and fast after you demonstrate your supernatural AI programming skills.
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>>52819028
Then some faggot steals all your work and kills you
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>cyoa offers adventure, friends and wonder
>still ugly and autistic

Fixing looks and sanity should be free in every cyoa.
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>>52819150
We already had this pity party yesterday. ffs dude you're even using the exact same image.
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>>52819150
Beauty options are common in CYOAS pay the points fixing your mind usually comes bundled in inmortality or in regeneration and intelligence boosts pay the points
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>>52819114
Give your waifu the weapon skill perk. Maybe also yandere. Boom, supernaturally badass bodyguard.
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>>52819192
Is it really a party if no one shows up?
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If you could erase one cyoa out of all possible timelines, which would it be?
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>>52817692
I feel there should be an option here to ask the goddess what her quirks are, pick them and then pick her appearance. She's obviously thirsty, and there has to be some extra bonus for boning a god.
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I'm just gonna say that 10 bucks is 10 bucks.
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Reminder that Beri recently made a thing.
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>>52819741
I'm gonna try to have something else done this weekend.
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>>52819710
>no Obari As Fuck setting for the anime glasses
pleb-tier cyoa
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>>52819753
Will it include catgirls (male)?
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>>52819753
>mfw more neat stuff
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>>52819741
>Boux
Lewd fairy who can make things grow is what I need.

A less horny me would probably go for Balie, since alchemy is cool
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>>52819698
If you want to bone the goddess just take nightmares
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>>52819753
:D
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>>52819874
You don't need anything, anon. There's worse things in life than having a microdick. A big heart is more important.
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>>52819812
No, this one is less companiony.

>>52819818
>>52819893
I hope you'll like it!
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So I heard there was a new hell invasion? could someone post it so I can make a neato build?
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>>52819971
It was posted at the end of previous thread, I think.
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>>52819902
What is it about?
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>>52819741
>Want to choose sui for the cute but also want to choose hydri for the endless marble-dungeoncrawling to get sweet marble-loot but also want to chose cocoa for the chocolate magic but also want to choose chryos for ZA WARUDO!
>Can only choose one
It has been a day or so and i can't decide yet...
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>>52820019
It's a surprise! It ties into some of my other CYOAs, I'll tell you that much.
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>>52820042
Don't forget Windi who can upgade any game to a VR world experience.
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>>52819984
apparently that was out of date
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>>52819741
Cocoa a best. I'll take her and become the chocolate girl.
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>>52820059
Er, meant for >>52820025
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>>52819741
Thanks I forgot
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>>52820072
I dunno im not that into VR
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>>52820067
>Black as coal
>Straight hair and small nose
Is this an anime Somalian?
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>>52820067
shoop that wooden bar into pregnancy test and the picture will be perfect 10/10
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>>52820119
Looks more like dark brown than pure black though
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>>52820140
That's true for most anyway. Only place you'll find people that are literally black is in the middle of the congo and shit like that.
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>>52820042
Does it have any of >>52818493 ?
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>>52818744
what you're about to do, will live on forever
even though you'll be dead
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post lewd qyoas
i know it's your favorite thing to do
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The most dangerous cyoa. You must choose!
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>>52820215
Waifu trash. Hit me with the mystery.
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When did this thread became anime general?
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>>52820179
This piece, no.
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>>52820240
You poor fool. The mystery box is only MORE WAIFUISM!
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>>52820240
>Albedo
>Trash
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>>52819741
[Zankoku Doumei] Liry-shee Rohi & Vis ver1.1
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>>52820215

>>52820240
no u
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>>52820276
I'll take the tails but you can keep the waifus, puto!
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>>52820312
Tu madre.
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>>52820306
The mystery box is shit because it is fluffy that you did not earn
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Choose yer hero /tg/
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>>52820380
SNEK
BEAR BROS
PROF LANGFORD
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>>52820380
snek, spooky, B.E.S.S
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>>52820411
Gon' have to double this.
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>>52820042
Glad to see you're back.
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>>52820430 #
I was only gone for like a week or two. It was just a quick break for OW & NieR My poor save data... . But thanks. I hope you'll like my next project.
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>>52820341
Sometimes we get the fluffy we don't deserve, friend.
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>>52820533
And sometimes we deserve fluffy but never get it.
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>>52820380
THE KET
2PEN
AGENT SNAKE

The only path left to the bed-monster will be a desperate, futile struggle as it is utterly destroyed by my skilled operatives.
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>>52820576
Does anyone really deserve fluffy though? What makes us worthy?
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>>52819741
Does anyone know what font Beri uses?
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>>52820687
I use AR Essence
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Since the fluffy cyoa wasn't so well received, how about this one?

You know it's a real cyoa because it was in the google drive collection.
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>>52820729
thank you kindly
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>>52820215
I choose fluffy mystery box to become super fluffy fox!
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>>52820737
I know it's not a CYOA because I can read the text.
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>>52820843
Translation of bottom right?
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>>52819741
Great, I love his work, minus the jelly girl stuff.
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>>52820278
>tumblr filename
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>>52820933
The bit behind the speech bubble starts with "All hope is lost" and continues on and on about how wrong things are going. The part trailing past the bottom of the screen is something along the lines of "god fucking damnit" and "hell no".
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>>52819741
>>52819753
It's a good thing I made this then
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>>52821117
I don't recogize the sweets or the girl on the bottom right.
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>>52819741
So many of these list doing laundry as a perk, did Beri make this on laundry day?
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>>52821163
They're not all from Beri cyoas. I just got generic images of a magical girl, and a stock picture of some chocolate sweets, complete with watermarks
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>>52821185
Right, A New Magical Girl. But why the sweets?
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>>52821202
Because he is beri sweet.
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>>52821177
Laundry day is a very dangerous day. But no, I just figured it was a pretty standard chore. Fairy queens are powerful enough to have super-powerful creatures doing mundane chores for them.
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>>52821202
There's just some sort of chocolate/dessert in a loooooot of Beri cyoas. and I was sort of trying to copy the original image which just had a bunch of knives there, so I wanted to put an inanimate object
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>>52821218
>blushinganimegirl.jpg

>>52821232
That makes sense. I didn't realize I had such a big sweet tooth. It's well put together.
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>>52821223
Fair enough, makes sense to me.
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>tfw you'll never have a supernatural parent

Am I bad person for wanting to replace one of my parents with a dragon?
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>>52821340
Yes.

Why not a cyoa where you retroactively give powers to your parents which you then inherited?
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>>52821340
Dunno, don't really care. Have a CYOA with a sufficiently similar premise.
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>>52821381
You trying to make me fall in love with you?
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>>52821414
Nope. Your moping just reminded me of the CYOA, and I think the CYOA is neat, so I posted it.
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>>52817656
Royale Revival never gets posted enough.
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>>52821466
Maybe because it's shit.
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>>52821466
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>>52821475
https://www.stopbullying.gov/
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>>52821466
Mostly due to the length of it, I'd wager.
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>>52821475
>Beri cyoa
>shit

pick one
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>>52821494
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>cyoa lets you pick your own personality
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>>52821541
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>>52821475
It's the favorite of several people. After all being a princess is the evolution of being a little girl.
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>>52821562
>can alter his body and mental capabilities
>not up to altering his own personality
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>>52821570
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>>52821466

Ravyn Mallor: Witchy Princess

>Princess
Obvious choice.
>Study Room
Good for studying magic.
>Diana
Teach me to be inspiring and work on looks.
>Vinian Toast
Yummy!

>Spirit Dye
Great for witches.
>Midnight Sarcophagus
Good for witches.
>Alchemy Starter Kit
Good for witches.

>Stone King Dessian
Can teach me ancient secrets that might be helpful for magic and stuff and is good husband for me.

>Pouf
Seems nice and can teach me about alchemy.
>Suice
Fellow witch and forbidden love interest.

>Dark Magic
Good for witches.
>Charisma
Not exactly my thing, but as Princess might be good to be able to give good speeches when I must.
>Fashion
Do magic and look spectacular while doing it!
>Regal Hobbies
So I can be a better Princess.

>Reaper Witch
What I've been preparing for all this time!

>Help Test New Magic
Want to learn all the newest spells.
>Destroy a Dark Spirit
That's like literally my job!
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>>52821202
He did make a Sweets CYOA. I'll post it if I have it in my folder.
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>>52821534

>Angel -10pts
>Grace (Free)
>Magic Affinityx4 -6pts (1 Free and discounts cuz Angel)
>Flight (Free once I get wings)
>Lifespanx2 -2pts (1 Free and discount cuz Angel)
>Exceptional Appearance -2pts
>Vitality -2pts
>Regeneration -2pts
>Low Magic Fantasy Setting

My plan is to explore and learn about the world while growing my magic powers. I can eventually get wings and heal and protect people and smite too. I think since low magic setting I can become most powerful sorceress around and get followers and try to ascend to Goddesshood of beauty and light.
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>>52821594
Well all little girls want to be princesses, and /cyoag/ wants to be a little girl, so it simply adds up.
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>>52821687
>>52821671
Oh great this again. Can't wait to see another thread ruined from angel attentionwhoring/someone pretending to be angel
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>>52821594
>being the princess
>Not using your romance with Chrysanthemum to use the elf kingdom of Enela to push the Greve front and save both your kingdoms.
>>52821657
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>>52820062
It's supposed to be update but it'll probably take a while.
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>>52821466
>>52821570
>princes can't marry princes

Why, Beri, why?!
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>>52821720
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>>52820380
BEAR BROS
SPOOKY
2PEN

NO SURVIVORS.
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>>52821741
>gayshit
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>>52821767
>>52821741
For the glory of Jesus Christ, our lord and savor of course. (:
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>>52821775
Homophobia is not okay!!!
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>>52821804
It very much is.
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>>52821802
>>52821466
Well, fuck Jesus in his yaoi hole.

This goddess thinks boys belong with boys.
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>>52821741
Please fucking stop. You've been at it for weeks.
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>>52821741
Because that's forbidden love! If you want to marry a princess you better work hard either get people to acknowledge your love, or do it all secret and filled with taboo, sexy sexy taboo!
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>>52821741
They can. Your sister won't introduce you, though. At least I think I remember that being how it worked.
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>>52821741

Author said joining the Reaper Witches is best option for potential /u/ cuz they're all women and live kinda off on their own.
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can I reply to that post too?
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>>52821534
>Human

>Hedge mage (1)
I don't care if I'm mocked, I'll likely be stronger than anyone else anyway.
>Magic Affinity x3 (6)
Gotta get dat magic son.
>Lifespan x2 (8)
Living forever is usually nice.
>Tongues (4)
If I can't talk to someone, how can I make mates everywhere?
>Equipment x2 (2)
Useful for blending in, eating, fighting, playing knifey-spooney, all sorts of stuff.
>Money (1)
For getting anything else I need to get set up here.
>Artifact: Choker that grants flight (Free)
Honestly, I just want to be able to fly around.
>Companion (2)
>Survivalist [2]
>Knowledge: Society [1]
>Entertainer: Musician [1]
I assume that a human companion gets human discounts. At any rate, having an immortal musician pal adventuring with me will be sweet.
>Low magic fantasy setting
I unironically like isekai stuff. I'm not even sorry.

Time for musical adventures!
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>>52821843
Don't kinkshame me! If you can't handle a big beautiful fujo in cyoag, you need to wake up and buy a calender or something cause it's 2017.

This place is for all kinds of adventuresm not just your hetero white privileged waifu fests. *drops mic*
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>>52821843
Ignore him.
Ignoring shitposters is the only thing we can do.
All attention is good attention to them.
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>>52821741
Maybe because it's set in a world with technology and culture about a thousand years behind our own and their social norms are equally as progressive? It could also be because as a person of royal blood you are expected to produce an heir, and gays can't reproduce.
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>>52821978
>gays can't reproduce.
Not with that Attitude!
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>>52821947
https://streamable.com/1txkf
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>>52821978
mpreg

Shouldn't be hard considering they can magically change people's genders too.
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>>52822008
Can't argue with that.
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>>52822029
I like you more when you smugpost t b h.

When's your next cyoa coming?
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>>52821720
> Chrysanthemum
> not picking Azalea
Shit taste confirmed.
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>>52821937

If you need friend who can fly and is good with magic, maybe we could quest together sometimes! >>52821687
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Who is your favorite Author?
Who is your most hated Author?
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>>52822029
Saber CYOA when?
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>>52822078
That was not a smug post, it was a disdain post.

Not for awhile. These things take time.
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>>52822089
SDA
SDA
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>>52822089
Beri

I don't know if I have a least favorite author. I guess I'm really indifferent to Angel, but that one time she complained was pretty dumb
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>>52822153
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>>52822080
It's for the war effort, not some selfish lust. Verend must be driven back, Greve must be saved and sacrifices must be made.
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>>52822151
You hurt my feelings. I would've gone straight for you, I swear. But now you break my heart.
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>>52822084
Aw yiss, admittedly, I don't have any overarching plan or goal, but chillin with a soon-to-be-goddess should be interesting if nothing else.
I may learn some nature magic, so I can make puns about being a hedge mage.
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>>52822089
Italics.
myself.
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>>52822229
Hating yourself is unhealthy unless you're a white male cyoa author.
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Whew finally finished my Star Dust build. Was 50k over in my budget. Had to cut out my pistol from Solider of the Stars to be under by 100k now.

Great CYOA SDA. Spent a while trying to get everything I want and imagining situations where I fly around the galaxy before getting scooped up by a wormhole.
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>>52822089
Beri, He captures my imagination the way no other author does, plus Royal Revival is my favorite cyoa.

I guess Spadesy, but that's mainly because I don't really like far future settings that Spadesy sets the CYOAs in, not because of some big flaw.
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>>52821466
>Princess
>Study Room
>Julius

>Pancakes
>Clairvoyant Ribbon
>Binding Band
>Fairy Flower
>Insightful Spyglass

>Suitors: Hol the fuk up now

>Mercy
>Sheila

>Etiquette
>Manipulation
>Management
>Stealth

>Spy/Detective

>Adopt the Orphaned Princesses
>Enjoy the Party

Okay, we have yours truly the walking propaganda coup, an enemy princess in our dungeons who wants to end the fighting, and an enemy with an unhappy populace that treats their soldiers as cannon fodder. If I can't construct a Verendian rebellion out of THIS perfect mess, then I didn't deserve to come back - I'll bet my recently-lost left nut that there's one forming already, I just have to give it a little push and supply some (non-crystal, can't trace this back to us) weapons. Hell, we could even move to send Katelyn back and stage a Verendian attack designed to look like a false-flag Eclean attack (the civilians think the Verendians did it looking like Ecleans looking like Verendians), get a bit more support that way too. And did I mention that with the fairies and a queen, I can get eyes anywhere and everywhere? Nobody pays attention to the cute dumb fairies.
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Necromancer updated at which point in the near future?
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>>52817969
All these companions seem a bit too combat oriented, or otherwise just vicious cunts. Needs more bros and chicks to hang out with either on mission, or afterwards. Maybe a healer, or a dashing rouge type.
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>>52822267
>50k over in my budget
You know, you could write it off as being in debt until you fulfill your next inevitable contract and I wouldn't be angry at you.

I don't think anyone else would really care about something so minuscule either.
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>>52822229
Same except Cowgirl/GFD-waifu anon for favorite
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>>52817692
Will there ever be an uncensored section of the paste bin?
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>>52822358
I have seen autistic tantrums started over less when it comes to Stardust and you know it. Do you sustain yourself with the salt your cyoas generate or something?
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>>52822358

Its just a pistol. I can just get a Forcify instead of a Sabre too. It does not even count towards my equipment level.
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>>52822089
SDA, Highlander are my tops. I tend to like just about anyone who makes something

I don't like whiny authors, though. Or people that whine at authors
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>>52822358
https://pastebin.com/5fQ1SwSs
Rate my build SDA
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>>52822388
The tantrums are more about metashit or stats on the CYOA. I hardly see anyone throw tantrums over actual builds, and I often don't really care if someone breaks a rule here or there in a build as long as it isn't obnoxiously done.

>>52822430
Fair enough, but as you said, it's just a pistol. Hardly gamebreaking and I don't think most people would mind.
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>>52822439
What about people that whine about people whining about authors?
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>>52822179
They're sisters though, you get the alliance either way. So if it's all the same for the two nations involved, why not pick the better sister?
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>>52822459
I don't really know what to say other than that it's a big ship.
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>>52822483
>Pb, Mn, Sc
Combined, can increase my density, safely, from 1x to 60x.

>I
Can grow to 10x human size.

>Rn
Strength and speed increase based on mass.

>Th, Ru
Gain a powerful hammer and the ability to shock people with the voltage of a car battery, plus 1/day lightning strikes.

>Ho
Anyone I capture is immediately subject to Stockholm Syndrome.

>La, Ac
Gain four additional elements

>Es, Pd
IQ and wisdom both double

>Pt, Re
Gain $100,000,000 and cure cancer for everyone forever.

So now I'm a sage, genius, millionaire playboy philanthropist, with the ability to grow 10x larger and 60x denser, with strength and speed proportional to my mass and the hammer of Thor. I'm a world-wide hero for curing cancer, so I'm definitely not going to be a suspect in any missing persons cases. Nope.
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>>52822503
I haven't been in these threads for a while, why did you flip your D backwards?
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>>52822503
For you.
I don't care for the size of the ship, I just picked it because of the amount of guns you can put on it and the hull armor.
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>>52822344
Yeah, a few people said that. Don't think I'll change it any more though, I'm sort of burnt out for now.
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>>52821510
>too long to post
People are just too lazy. Incoming branching heart CYOA.
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>>52822189

We could have great adventures! And when I become a Goddess I won't forget you and your companion!
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>>52822502
Chrysanthemum specifies you get Enela's prized rose warriors and petal dragon troops if you marry her. Azalea may be beautiful, but my first priority must be to my kingdom and our staunch allies in the kingdom of Greve.
>>52822549
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>>52822618
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>>52822543
I could maybe make a second page of companions for you?
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>>52822372
Sure. Compile all the cyoas and put them in one.
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>>52822520
Because he loves the D.

He also mixes up the other letters sometimes.
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>>52822656
Sure, go ahead. I'd send you the XCF, but I:

A) Can't be arsed
B) Lost it to corruption
C) Can't be arsed.
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>>52822654
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>>52822618
> Chrysanthemum specifies you get Enela's prized rose warriors and petal dragon troops if you marry her.
Pretty sure you would get that either way, since marrying Azalea would still bring Enela into the war and I doubt they'd be stupid enough to have their troops just sit the whole thing out simply because of which sister you picked.
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>>52822684
>going on /d/ on college wifi
Yeah that's a no for me, but I'd appreciate someone else putting in the work.
>>52822696
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>>52822372
>title font
utter shit
dropped
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>>52822691
s'cool. can I at least know what font you used?
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>>52822735
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>>52822718
I'll go ahead & tell you: this is the case. You get the same benefits from both. I just wanted to make both sides even. Since there's 2 male knights & 1 girl, I made 2 elf options instead of 1, with identical rewards.
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>>52822735
>Yeah that's a no for me, but I'd appreciate someone else putting in the work.
Right back at'cha
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>>52822520
>I haven't been in these threads for a while, why did you flip your D backwards?
Because he likes messing with us but it makes it such a pain to search for his posts in the archive.
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>>52822753
Post some CYOAs you like then. Bring some positivity to your criticism.
>>52822763
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>>52822761
Sylfaen.

Font size is 40 for the names, and 30 for the descriptions. Title is 100 and the bit of flavour text under the title is 50.

If you could do me a favour, could you try to make sure the companions fit? Making them comfy is cool, but please try to make them mesh with the rest of the characters reasonably well.

I'll give you a heads up if there's anything egregious.
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>>52822775
Like I said I'm not going on /d/ when I'm on a college campus that logs my browsing history, but in a month if it still hasn't been done I'll start the process.
>>52822814
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>>52822656
Don't forget to give the guys 12" dicks and rock hard abs.
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>>52822857
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>>52822857
>college campus logs browsing history
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>>52822890
If your internet login credentials are a college username/password, it isn't unreasonable for them to be able to track who goes where. The real uestion is, why would the college care?
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>>52822886
>>52822890
Yep. Welcome to America.
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>>52822926
They probably don't care, but regardless I don't want to go on /d/ knowing that someone is watching me do it.
>>52822927
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>>52822967
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>>52822967
Completely understandable.
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>>52822982
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Goddam it. I haven't even finished my primary build for Stardust and yet I've come up with a cool idea for a new build. A Mercenary Mobile Suit squad filled with former Syndicate members.
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>>52823011
Syndicate a shit. Federation did nothing wrong.
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>>52823010
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>>52822967
>he doesn't look up exhibitionist porn when he knows people are watching
You're not living your life correctly.
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>>52823056
>tfw you know how to spy on any wifi networks you're on, but you don't care about your roommates' porn preferences.
Why did I go to college to gain this skill?
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>>52823056
>>52823011
>acknowledging the shitty factions in stardust
you can't do it more wrong than this
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>>52823056
I'm sorry I'm disappointing you.
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>>52823120
Almost half done! Maybe. Hopefully. I may have underestimated how long this would take.
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>>52823144
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>>52821947
You need to tone it down a little if you want replies. Nobody actually talks like that.
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>>52823144
>I may have underestimated how long this would take.
Honestly I'm surprised anyone bothers to post Branching Heart. I mean it's not bad, but 28 pages, I think it's 28 anyway.
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>>52823174
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>>52823024
>Syndicate a shit. Federation did nothing wrong.
>>52823116
>you can't do it more wrong than this

Oh who are the best and worst factions?
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>>52818090
>that whole choice is loosely worded and very open to interpretation.

Munchkin lvl 9000 bro. It is intentionally vague because the creator is nicely letting us pick our dream power but it has a don't be a cheating jerk clause. You ought to know that you have broken said clause.
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>>52823184
Just think about the people who dump manga/comics/etc.
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>>52823184
Yeah, but nobody else is posting CYOAs in /CYOAg/ so I had to take initiative.
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>>52823215
all of them are the worst
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>>52823237
I love them for it. I got The Boys of of /b/ years ago and that crazy fucker dumped close to 300 images.
>>52823241
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>>52823262
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>>52823176
Yet I still got 2 (You)s out of it which isn't up to my usual standard but hey, (You)s are (You)s.
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>>52823243
How did I piss you off, anon?

Was it a shitty suggestion?
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>>52823288
>>
I have gotten this request several times on regard to Wilds Outside. In regards to the creatures.
More than one person has requested some flavor text and, due to the "Living Arms" skill, I'd really like to do so, but I am REALLY hurting on space and I don't want to make the CYOA longer than I have to.
Y'all think I should add an annex outside of the CYOA itself or just fuck it and put the flavor text in there and just work out the rest?
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>>52823312
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>>52823331
I think you shouldn't touch that cyoa until you've removed the stats.
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>>52822832
I... Don't seem to have Sylfaen. I can get it though, Here's a sample?
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>>52823347
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>>52823331
You've seen how long some of these CYOAs get right? No one cares if it becomes an extra page longer just add it in.
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>>52823363
That's good. I like.

One nitpick, though, but if you mean wards as in shields, it would be defensive magic.

Sorry, I get super nitpicky with stuff like this.
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>>52823309
So would members of the Pirate factions immediately be arrested if they entered Federation or Blackhawk space?
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>>52823215
Federation best. Syndicate worst. Talons good, red daggers okay, blackhawks kind of meh.
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>>52823379
Almost done!
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Yo older Conduit players, what the hell is an Outpost? I see it mentioned on the start/earth page, but the only other mention I see is in Aether.
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>>52823400
Yeah, you'll still have crazy cunts like me posting them, even if it's 28 pages.
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>>52823400
Oh I am seeing it right the fuck now, don't worry.
Still, the question was more along the lines of "Do I put flavor text in the middle or in the end?"
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>>52823404
Wards as in protecting against scrying, illusions and other forms of magic oreinted on altering the mind of, or detecting, an individual. I'm not sure what else to call it.
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>>52823454
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>>52823470
Ah right. No, warding would work in that case.
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>>52822814
???
Where did I say CYOA is bad? It may be good, but I refuse to read it because this font is literally, unironically unreadable garbage.
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>>52823474
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>>52823458
Oh ok, I'd say if it's getting to be a lot either dedicate a page to creatures alone or put it at the end.
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>>52823484
I never said you said it was bad, I just wanted you to post some CYOAs so I wasn't the only one posting.
>>52823501
and the fan dlc
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>>52823446
You should read it a bit more closely.
Outposts are explicetly mentioned as perks.
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>>52823528
Delete this
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Is the hell invader anon about? I have a mighty need to find the source and original of the impact gel armour image
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>>52823536
Oh, it turns out that none of the world's I read before Aether had Outposts as perks. derp
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>>52823299
Yous are low-hanging fruit.
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>>52823554
No thanks, I just spent over an hour posting it all.
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>>52823528
I'm not saving CYOAs. I liked that one >>52817902 and oldschool survival CYOAs but they never posted here for unknown reason.
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>>52823554
I would love it if you could post some CYOAs more to your taste, I'm always looking to expand my collection.
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>>52823605
Delete the shitty "DLC"
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>>52823564
Ordion is not here and also may not be coming back so you might be shit outta luck on this one anon. Maybe someone else here can help you.
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>>52823409
When suspected/caught, sure.

It's not like they all have a label that says "I'M A PIRATE" on them, though.
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>>52823624
Old school survival CYOAs like this?
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>>52823649
Yeah kinda.
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>>52823631
Whats so wrong with it?
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>>52823642
Not coming back? Howcome?
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>>52823624
Thanks anon!
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>>52823664
Give me a couple minutes I'll look around some old threads for some that fit your taste.
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>Doing an update to a cyoa I did a few months ago
>TokHaar Gol's CYOA has a ton of stuff I was gonna add in it and it'll look like I'm ripping him off now

damn it
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>>52823642
>>52823670
He just said he's got shit to do in real life, so he doesn't know when he'll be updating what.
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>>52823682
Have you tried not being a disgusting frogposter?
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>>52823528
Thanks for posting the whole thing. It's been updated since I saw it.
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>>52823667
Not him but it's basically a "Fuck the CYOA, fuck its mechanics, fuck the characters and their traits, give me everything ever that I want with no risk or choice involved whatsoever even if it makes no sense."

The guy who made it was also a cunt who pretended to be beri and shitpost throughout an entire thread.
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>>52823705
Of course, the whole point of these threads is sharing CYOAs after all.
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>>52823682
Any thought or action that results in you not working on your CYOA as soon as you have time is an excuse and nothing more than that.
Take it from another author - no matter how many flaws there are with the finished product, it's still many times better to have created something that could have been better than it is to never have done anything at all.
Back to the workbench with you.
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>>52823667
>>52823709
Also it invalidates Miya as a waifu choice because she's being hypnotized and raped by her assistant.
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>>52823678
Thanks anon.
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>>52823709
Alright, I'll refrain from posting it along with the rest in the future if people are really that opposed to it.
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>>52823670
>>52823688
He also said he's not really feelin CYOAs so much anymore and that he may be done.
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>>52823709
>>52823724
Both of these >>52823667
It's shit. It ruins the whole cyoa. To make it worse it's someone else shitting over the cyoa.
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>>52823702
No can do anon, it's in my nature.
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>>52823682
> >Doing an update to a cyoa I did a few months ago
> >TokHaar Gol's CYOA has a ton of stuff I was gonna add in it and it'll look like I'm ripping him off now
Unlikely, unless you use the exact same wording/picture. Plenty of CYOAs out there have similar options.
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>>52823736
>With the rest
There's nothing wrong with posting Branching Heart. It was well-liked and there's nothing controversial about it.

Just don't post the fan DLC.
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>>52823723
Chill anon, it's literally open in another tab


I just want my cyoa to feel original
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>>52823649
What's the hatchet's flavour text referencing?
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>>52823766
Yeah that's what I meant, just not posting the fan DLC when I post the rest. Sorry if I poorly articulated that.
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>>52823789
You've really never read it? You should check it out, it's a pretty great book.
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>>52823649
There's no water purification method in there so chances are you are going shit your guts out during first week and die.
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>>52823724
>>52823709
I don't get it, where does it invalidate the CYOA or even show she is being 'raped' by her assistant?
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>>52823874
The first post doesn't like getting cucked by the assisant.

The second post thinks the fan page taints the entire CYOA and makes him not want to play it.

That's what both uses of invalidate are getting at.
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>>52823814
>check this out on wikipedia
Doesn't seem all that interesting
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>>52823645
>When suspected/caught, sure.
>It's not like they all have a label that says "I'M A PIRATE" on them, though.

So would a former Syndicate member who fought in the war and destroyed several Fed and Blackhawk warships be arrested immediately or it would they say something along the lines of "The war is over so as long as you don't do anything now we don't care about your former affiliations"
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Finishing up the Perks page of MGSI. Last chance for any requests. I already have the "Be the Girl" option.
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>>52823874
>>52823885
>one minute and seven seconds apart
Make it more obvious you're baiting will ya?
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>>52823901
That depends on the entity within the Syndicate you aligned to. Some are more favourable than others, some to the point of being granted amnesty. Others, not so much.
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>>52823905
>Finishing up the Perks page of MGSI.
What does MGSI stand for?
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>>52823905
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>>52823874
The fan page had to be re-written from the initial version and most of its content deleted because it included all of that. The updated version still invalidates the mechanics of the CYOA, though he scrubbed out all the rape.

Nobody wants to tolerate that guy or his 'fan' page for him falesflagging beri and shitposting, regardless.
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>>52823938
Pick an Alp then.
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>>52823926
SDA, why are Talon's companions so bad?
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>>52823930
Monster Girl Survival Island. I'm updating an old CYOA with the new monstergirls that have been added to the Monster Girl Encyclopedia, and adding perks.

>>52823938
Alps exist. Adding in more cute boys would invalidate the point.
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>>52823958
You made that assessment from a 1-2 sentence description?
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>>52823885
But there is no implication of the assistant cucking you. I don't understand. Then again all of it reads like non-sense to me regardless.
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>>52823926
>That depends on the entity within the Syndicate you aligned to. Some are more favourable than others, some to the point of being granted amnesty. Others, not so much
Alright thanks but getting back to my original question, if someone is a known affiliate/member of the Talons or Red Daggers but isn't suspected of any crimes (or at least there's no sold evidence proving any) how would they be treated in Fed and Blackhawk space.
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>>52823983
See >>52823941
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>>52823905
What about a be the gi-
Oh
Carry on!
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>>52823980
I mean, one is a generic asshole pretty boy, one is a bitchy and insubordinate sniper, one has no personality but does have a man-face, and the other is a guy with no personality or a face at all, he's generic soldierman.

Pretty much the only positive one is Tavia.
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>>52823961
>Monster Girl Survival Island. I'm updating an old CYOA with the new monstergirls that have been added to the Monster Girl Encyclopedia, and adding perks.
Ah cool. So in that case what types of perks are you looking for?
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>>52817656
>Fluffy Fox
>Elemental Ancestry (Mom's Air, Dad's Water)
>Butterfly Effect

What could go wrong?
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>>52823735
Is this more your style?
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>>52824012
Am I experiencing déjà vu or did you make this post before? I swear I saw "manface" as an insult to stardust before
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>>52823905
I don't care as long as I can genderbend the monsters. Alps are fucking disgusting caricatures. "You want to be with men that means you want to be a girl lolololol"
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>>52824012
What about Jerilyn Hayata from Soldiers?
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>>52823923
I'm only the first guy, I was legit confused. Obviously getting 2 waifus invalidates the whole thing, but I couldn't tell what was so bad about it (especially the rape part) aside from that.

>>52823941
Ohhh, I see. It does seem odd it offers you the Employee/Specialist/Surveilance option at the end, since you had already been offered it before.
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>>52823998
I only have the girls from the Monster Girl Encyclopedia. I'm not adding anymore. There's the golem and the Automaton, but that's about it as far as tech-related monstergirls go. There are Mindflayers for "alien" girls.

>>52824020
I'm not sure. That's the problem. If I knew what people wanted, I could just put it in.
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>>52824012
> one is a bitchy and insubordinate sniper
> not being man enough to wrestle Alessia into a bath and fuck her into submission
Why do you think you're cut out to command a starship?
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>>52823735
What about this one?
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>>52819150
>sanity

If you weren't sane, you wouldn't be here.
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>>52824033
It was like half a week ago.
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>>52824036
I'm not sure where you're getting that. Alps are still male, they're just twinky and gay.
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>>52823905
Do you have tech options? I think monster girl tv/internet would be interesting.
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>>52823930
Metal Gear Solid: Inception.

It's cyoa about making your own Snake and Outer Heaven.
The ending twist is that Patriots have hijacked the cyoa and used a clone, in their bid to eliminate concept of zero as number. Playing as newly reborn Vapor Snake, you need to take them out before they can detonate a dirty bomb inside the internet.
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>>52824012
>one has no personality but does have a man-face
Who are you talking about here?
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>>52823985
Blackhawks are outright hostile against both and would likely hold up one on the spot if they find one in their territory.

Feds are more likely to be less scrutinizing of Talons and would probably just keep a close eye on them until something goes wrong. They'd probably do the same to Red Daggers to a more scrutinizing extent.

>>52824012
Should I have made them more moe?
>>
mek new throg
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>>52824061
I was considering adding an "Urbanization" perk of some sort that would push up the average tech level from medieval to modern-ish.
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>>52824054
Don't they canonically become more feminine and slutty the more energy they consume, eventually out-bimboing even the greatest succubi?

Anyway, I really liked how we were allowed to just make all monsters male in the original. Is that option still included?
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>>52824048
This CYOA had such potential but
>Only one real waifu option
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>>52819584
saber
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>>52824080

>Should I have made them more moe?

This should not be a question. The answer is always yes.
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>>52824040
>I'm not sure. That's the problem. If I knew what people wanted, I could just put it in.
To ensure we can live a normal life in a human/human+monstergirl village and not suffer discrimination? To not be turned into an incubus and lose my mind?
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>>52824080
>Should I have made them more moe?
Don't worry SDA I think they're fine. I do hope you get around to making a Talon squad.
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Stop replying to SDA.
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>>52824033
I wanted to get SDA's views but forgot about it.

>>52824037
I don't remember anyone in the DLC.

>>52824077
The one that's a doctor or engineer, she's very ugly and her description is about her skills entirely.

>>52824080
Made them more interesting, more like.

For one, it strikes me that Talon has the stereotype of being classy and well-educated despite being considered 'pirates' by the Federation, but not a single one of the Talon crew are classy or presumably well-educated.
>>
>>52824121
Stop replying to the gayposting/frogposting//dragonposting/Ican'tevenkeepupposting shitposter
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>>52824096
They get more powerful, not more bimbo'd, at least how I'm writing it.

>make all monsters male
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhh, maybe. The story I have for the reason you're on the island wouldn't make much sense if you could make all the monsters male.

>>52824108
Ah, yes, immunity to unwanted transformations. That was another one.
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>>52824040
>I'm not sure. That's the problem. If I knew what people wanted, I could just put it in.
Immortality.

Maybe getting a mansion or a lot of money? I only know the basics of the setting.
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>>52824100
I want to castrate you and spit on your balls. There's more to cyoas than waifus.
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>>52824054
Have you read the encyclopedia?
Alps are 100% biologically female.
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>>52824126
You've barely scratched the surface of my personas.
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>>52824123
>The one that's a doctor or engineer, she's very ugly and her description is about her skills entirely.
Son you're hiring a nuclear engineer to keep your ship running not a hooker. Plus you can find out about her personality by reading the Romance DLC.

By the way what do you think of Arachne since you didn't mention her?
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>>52823980
Of all the shitposters I like you the most D-all-quantor.
Much more than that pretentious asshole sda
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>>52824100
>delicious cake
>shy oni
>grow your own waifu 'loli edition'

Granted the last one takes longer to develop properly (or you can risk being lynched) but she can introduce you to an older sister or two.
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>>52824159
I'm not sticking 100% to the encyclopedia. Otherwise, 95% of entries would be "ATTACKS MEN AND DRINKS SEMEN". I'm going for more variety than that.
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>>52824159
Whoever came up with monstergirls felt so threatened by the idea of non-mc male characters that he even made the twinks female.
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>>52824172
She's another no personality type.
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>>52823926
How was Dramvel viewed?
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>>52821466
I wouldn't say I did much good for Earth. But I'm not their problem anymore,
am I?


>Princess
>My Room
>Teresa
>Vinian Toast
>Spirit Dye, Sealing Spear, Midnight Sarcophagus, Soul Box
>???
>Dynamo, Suice
>Combat, Defense, Force Magic, Dark Magic
>Reaper Witch
>Help Test New Magic, Destroy a Dark Spirit, Assassinate General Markus

Now I'm this world's problem.
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>>52824210
>She's another no personality type.
Read the fucking Romance DLC.
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>>52824139
that's hot desu
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>>52824225
Why do you think personality is entirely tied up into how they like their pussy smashed?
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>>52824048
Thirty post and no CYOAs. Why is CYOA general like this?
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>>52824187
We get it, you like dicks. Don't have to ruin everyone elses fun
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>>52824103
Is this more like it?

>>52824119
Eventually.

>>52824123
>classy or presumably well-educated
Because one has a "man face", one is stuck-up and one doesn't like to talk much? And your credentials for "classy/well educated" is when they don't want you to call them by a nickname they dislike?

Some might be stuck-up but nothing about them indicates incompetence, other than maybe the angry bitch.
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>>52823416
Blackhawks seem to be the main protagonists from a meta view (I.E if we had 6 movies in the setting they would be at the center).

Me personally I would want to be a legit pirate and the Talons don't really seem like actual pirates so Red Daggers. Ten Cred is exactly the kind of hive of scum and villainy I dream of in a space port. I would probably not be using one of their ships though.
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>>52824256
When did I say I thought Tavia was classy? I said she was the only positive one, the rest are assholes. That's a separate criticism.

And none of them are classy because nowhere are they said to be and none of them act like they are. I don't see how you think a butch sniper punk or a soldierman are classy, for example.
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>>52824256
[desire to purchase charisma intensifies]
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>>52824256
>She certainly doesn't want to be a part of your crew
If you wanted extra weeb, it sould've said "She certainly doesn't want to be your nakama"
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>>52824256
Change the cost to a positive number.
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>>52824280
If I could write more than a sentence for each, maybe I'd do that. But as they don't have more than a sentence or two for each, it's meant to be part of your imagination to give them that.

I mean nothing about their descriptions really even indicate how they operate in the field or interact with opponents.

>>52824292
I am not at that level of weeb, yet.

>>52824316
What do you mean?
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>>52824252
Monstergirls are the lowest form of entertainment. 90% of them are accesorized humans someone barfed a rainbow over. No one can ruin them any further at this point.

I'm actually really interested in Wyrm's project. I wonder if he can uplift the setting somewhat. Turn the girls into something beyond "she looks like X and eats human semen which she gathers using Y".
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>>52824325
That she gives you money. It's not like she wants to be on your ship!
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>>52824338
If someone doesn't make an anime harem trope squad, I'm gonna be disappointed.

I might because I have a shit ton of weeb /k/ girls from my art scouting for some CYOAs.
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>>52824332
You're still doing it. You can play the Incubus cyoa to get your monsterboy you know.
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>>52824325
They don't really inspire much inspiration with how generic they are.
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>>52824100
Just curious but what other options for companions and friends would you have wanted to see?
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>>52824387
The same could be said about any companion with a sentence for their description.
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>>52824063
You know I considered getting into those games but trying to read up on the setting I have to say your joke makes MORE sense than the real thing.
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>>52824377
Have you considered not being autistic?

Just saying that if someone badmouthing something you like ruins it for you, you either need to live in a bubble or grow the fuck up.
>>
>>52824447
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>>52824100
Which of the two (Oni and Christmas cake) is the REAL waifu option?

They both feel valid to me.
>>
>>52824450
Anon you already admitted you want that monstercock. I told you where you can't get it. You're way too upset over this.
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>>52824408
just more anon


i like waifus


the existing one is great
>>
>>52824408
Cool bro guy
>>
>>52824492
i never picked up in oni that she was a romantic interest
>>
>>52817692
Normal Mode

Tier 2 skilled in music (-4)
Beauty (-6)
Luck (-8)
Pleasure (-10)
Comfort (-12)

I'll be choosy(-12)

Quirks_
High libido x1 (-11)
Twin sister (-10)
Clingy (-9)
Seductive (-8)
Horny (-7)
Sensitive (-6)
Cum addict (-5)
Meek (-4)
Daddy issues (-3)
Loli (-2)
Fetility tier 0 (-2)
NEET (-1)
Favorite hole (mouth) (0)

I WOULD have picked emasculation, as I have no problem physically turning into something cute / pretty, but it seems to entail also being mentally turned submissive and into a little gay boy. Personally I think that emasculation should have two tiers, the first being simply physical emasculation where your body is turned very feminine and the second tier changing the way your brain works and making you act more feminine and subby.
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>>52824584
She is totally alone in the world (and shunned a bit by the village) and has secondary sexual characteristics of a hominid (meaning she is unlikely to be asexual).

If that is not low hanging fruit I don't know what is.
>>
>>52824696
Plus she's a woman at all, unless she's described as explicitly asexual or uninterested in you, that makes her a potential love interest in a CYOA where all this shit is in your imagination.
>>
>>52824713
I would dare say she is explicitly meant as one though.

No one wants to be lonely and the cyoa gives us a desperately lonely girl on a silver platter that no one else wants (just like cake). So even though Cakes description mentions marriage that does not make her the only waifu.
>>
>>52824767
It's not like a non-human would even understand the concept of marriage.

I thought it was pretty obvious you're supposed to offer to accompany her on one of her trips, keep her warm and comfort her as she comes to terms with her existential crisis before inviting her to live with you.
>>
>>52824813
>It's not like a non-human would even understand the concept of marriage.
The same evolutionary pressures that give rise to monogamy and through the application of legal pressures gives rise to marriage could easily develop among other sapient species.
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>>52824813
What are pair bonds anon?

Come one it may not be as explicit as cake but she has literally zero other options for finding a mate and is a female of mammalian origin.
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>>52824247
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>>52822549
Here goes nothing.

>Library, Orb of Life
>Employment
Gotta pay the bills somehow. I've done data entry before.

>Yuki
She is the cutest little snowflake.

>Cool Decorations
>Flurry
>Scrying Snowglobe

>The Scarf
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>>52824813
> It's not like a non-human would even understand the concept of marriage.
Marriage exactly? Probably not. But long-term pair bonding is a thing that happens in some non-humans. There are particular traits and conditions that make such an arrangement beneficial from a reproductive standpoint, and when those occur, selective pressure could create an organism that gravitates toward having a single long-term partner.
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>>52824938
>Ultimate Life Forms
>Pocket Girl
>Feeling Ghosts

WHAT COULD GO WRONG?
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>>52824985
I think we are overthinking marriage to begin with. She may not understand the whole package, but she is a sentient being and the idea of a promise should be in her grasp. That is all marriage is at the core is a series of promises; most fundamentally romantic and sexual exclusivity.
>>
>>52823888

Are you not an American? Had to ask, when I went to school everyone had to read that book. Never spoken to anyone that didn't.
>>
>>52825312
Not him, am American, never heard of it either.
>>
>>52825324

You one of the rare actual old guys on /tg/ or you one of the younger whippersnappers muckin' about?
>>
>>52825312
Different anon, I didn't have it in school, but I've read it. I'm 22, so maybe it's an age thing.
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>>52825354
Nah, same age here, I'm just not really a book person. As far as books are concerned, sci-fi is all I'm interested in.
>>
>>52825336
25, so depends on your definition of old.
>>
>>52821802
This is such a great CYOA, but it's just a few steps shy of being amazing.
>>
>>52825354
>I'm 22, so maybe it's an age thing.
>>52825408
>25

Guess the first anon's right. I'm 29 and fully expected it was still something everyone has to read in English class, right alongside Where The Red Fern Grows and a bunch of Shakespeare's works.
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>>52824256
>no mention of a keikaku
>no TL Note: keikaku means plan

are you even trying
>>
>>52825461
18; I had to read it. It's possible that it's just down to school district or something.
>>
>>52825461
I'm 35, we never read it in school. We read Great Expectations instead. If I didn't know any better, I'd swear he was paid by word.
>>
One can't really pinpoint the exact age when one is considered "old", really.

I only consider people above 70 to be old, I might just be being generous.
>>
>>52825461
I'm not American, but in my high school they had us read shit like Pippi Longstocking, Don Quixote and I'm pretty sure I remember reading The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Not much of a reader though. There was probably a lot more books before and after that that I can't recall the titles of.
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>>52825515
>We read Great Expectations instead.

Don't think I had to read that one, but if I did it was probably about as memorable as The Giver. Less so, I guess, since I'm doubting I've ever even held a copy of that book in my hands.
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>>52825551
You're considered old once you're 25.

My anime logic beats your own.
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>>52825563
>in my high school

High school was all plays and epics for me. All the books like The Giver, Huck Finn, and Hatchet were in 6th and 7th grade.
>>
>>52825551

Generally, I agree with you. But when discussing people posting on 4chan, anyone over 50 counts as being old. Moot was only 15 when he made the site, I don't expect too many people over 25 were posting here then. Most seemed closer to his age.
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>>52825656
>you had to be 18+ in order to post here even though moot wasn't
What a fag.
>>
>>52825690

I don't think Snacks was when he was on the staff, either. And he loved swinging his banhammer out in public to hand out underage bans.
>>
>>52819753
Should *hopefully* still be this weekend. It's turning out a bit larger than I original expected. It'll probably be 2 pages.
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>>52825656
>>52825656
>>52825690
>>52825720
I find it funny that most people that came here post 2010ish don't realize underaged b& is one the oldest inside jokes.
>>
>>52825816
You saying that people that post "I'm below 18" don't get banned? I've seen it happen.
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>>52825883
It happens all the time. It's fucking hilarious.
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>>52825883
part of the tradition that started with Snacks anon
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>>52825883
Nobody cared how old you were. They only cared that you admitted to being underage in public. It's akin to a retard ban.
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>>52822089
Beri

tbqh if I don't like a CYOA I don't bother to remember it or the author
>>
>>52819741
Will there be another page to this?
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>>52827025
Kinda... It's hard to answer that without giving too much away.
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