CYOA General

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Steam CYOA.

Suggestions for more games and changes to upsides/downsides welcome.

>>52236256
Link the thread in the old thread when you make it you fucking faggot.

>>52236575
All it needs is Diablo 3, Infamous, League of Legneds, Assassin Creed, Shadow of Chernobyl, DayZ and Quake and you have literally listed all the popular FPSs, western RPGs and MOBAS in the last 15 years.

>>52236679
Wow, you're right. The taste of gamers these days is complete fucking trash.

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But it's only Steam games frienderino.

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>>52236575
Witcher maybe? Unless that's an origin exclusive and I forgot.

>>52236689
Dido did nothing wrong.

>>52236575
Put in Undertale for guaranteed (you)s. Also maybe Civ V?

>>52237029
She burned herself alive over a guy.

>>52236575

Why is the shit Mass Effect there?

As for suggestion you have no RTS or TBS. Add in Europa Universalis 4, Wargame Red Dragon, Civ 5 or something along those lines like Crusader Kings 2, Men of War or Endless Legends.

>>52236575
Maybe add in a Total War game?

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Making a build for this. Are by chance the same guy who made Times of troubles?

>>52236736
>But it's only Steam games frienderino.
Then why is ME3 in there? ME2 was the last one to be released on Steam AFAIK.

>>52237233
Well 1 and 2 were on Steam and 3 was the only one I know of with the downside of a shitty ending.

I could just change it to 1 or 2.

Rolled 1 (1d2)

>>52236256
Don't mind me, just praying to RNJesus for what CYOA to make next
1 is H, 2 is MS

>>52237322
Oh poo ! I wanted the other one, I came up with the idea not too long ago and I have so many ideas....

>>52236575

Civ VI, King's Bounty, Kingdom, Long Live the Queen, HunniePop, Hatoful Boyfriend, Age of Empires II, Papers Please, Terraria, Super Meatboy, Spelunky, Assassins Creed, LA Noire Don't Starve

That's a random list, but there you go.

>>52236256
Couple questions for ya:
Do you prefer having certain companions be explicitly romanceable or assume that all are down to bone?
Do you prefer characters having a fixed sexuality or all being biscum?

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>>52237277
>Name
Ocher Orlena
>Age and Gender
16 and Female
>History
New Arrival
I turn up naked in a field outside of a city I don't recognize. I don't remember why I'm here. And I have a tail. And my dick is gone. Shit. It's coming back to me though. This is Remnant, and I came here to stop something, but I don't remember what. I do, however know where this story begins, and that's at a dust store in a few hours with a young girl and a huge scythe. I'll go see her and help her. There's a robbery involved too. I don't think I'm a vigilante (admittedly I don't remember much) but it'll be good to get on the good side of the authorities as I am a foreigner.
>Race
Faunus
Fox ears, tail, and eyes.
>Starting Location
Beacon
>Semblance
Force of Nature (Gravity)
It's a bit different than just "controls gravity." I can make 2-10 objects, depending on how far along my training I am, either completely ignore their mutual gravitational pull, or have it greatly enhanced. Obvious uses include floating in zero-g, and locking people down under a large weight. Other uses resemble Kiss from Jojo. I can pull objects together to smash into each other.
>Gifts and Talents
Beauty
Intelligence
Memory
Guile
Combat
I don't understand why people choose between school and play. I gonna work hard and do well in school. I'm also gonna fuck around at Beacon... In both senses of the word.
Cont.
>Weapons
Variable
Form 1: Essentially two ice picks fused together at the handle pointing in opposite directions to form a staff.
Form 2: Each of the picks separates, with a chain in the middle to connect the two. Both picks can let out large lengths of chain and also rapidly ratchet them in at a button press. Makes for a great throwing weapon and grappling hook, which is particularly useful for maneuvering in zero-g.
>Weapon Mods
Weight Reduction
>Items and Gear
Scroll
Targeting Glasses
Wilderness Gear
Motorbike

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Save me, /cyoag/.

I've fallen in love with the supernatural childhood friend trope lately. You know, kid takes care of a cute cat he found by the road and 10 years later a busty cat goddess shows up to turn him into her "bride".

I want to make a cyoa about stuff like that.

Problem is that it assumes quite a lot on my part: specifically I would decide your backstory as to how you met which might be completely out of character for you. Like, maybe you don't give a shit about cats and would never save one.

That's my issue. How do I incorporate that aspect of the cyoa, the initial meeting, in a way that doesn't break immersion?

>>52237411
The latter to both, unless you feel strongly as the author about a certain character.

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>>52237411
Consider that someone was triggered enough about locked romance options to make this.

>>52237449
Just remember that all known faunus that have animal ears have them in addition to their human ears, and therefore look super gross. No one needs that many ear canals. They just don't.

>>52237810
Someone getting triggered does not warrant catering to them

>>52237850
Considering how entitled and lazy most people here are, I'd make an exception for anyone getting triggered enough to produce OC. Clearly some kind of ultra-trigger was involved.

>>52237772
Maybe have it happen in a dream, and/or give a few options as to what sort of animal we encounter and how we end up saving them. It could be anything from direct intervention (e.g. the "find cat, take care of it" you mentioned) to pure rube-goldbergian happenstance (e.g. you happen to kick a rock while walking, the rock startles a nearby animal, skip a few steps, and a branch falls on whatever beastie was threatening our supernatural critter).

>>52237772
>specifically I would decide your backstory as to how you met which might be completely out of character for you. Like, maybe you don't give a shit about cats and would never save one.
I have no problem with that. Hell, there's a CYOA that assumes I'd stick my dick in an ugly fat chick to get dick powers.

>>52237862
It makes sense to trigger them even more to get more OC though

>>52237772
I think assuming past actions is fine as long as you don't assume current actions (like, if you try telling the reader what he does in the present moment, while he's reading the cyoa).

If you're still unsure about it you can easily only hint at some sort of event that the cat saw as favorable, but can be interpreted as many different things because it's never outright stated what it was.

>>52237890
You get one for free, which is all you need to pick the white hole

>>52237780
Don't you think it's ridiculous that 100% of people in a setting are both into your gender AND into you specifically?
If that was true how could you get anything done when you're too busy managing a harem.

>>52237772
It canbe your autism imagenry childhood friend that was given life due to some magic incedent later in life when you were adult already. Like in Misfits.

>>52237926
They're gay if you want them to be gay. They're not if you don't. If the author doesn't want to specify then that's the assumption I'm gonna make.

>>52237926
sexually bribe your more competent haremites to manage the incompetent ones for you

>>52237411
>certain companions be explicitly romanceable
>fixed sexuality
seems about right

>>52237942
That's what's so bizarre to me. It's totally autistic on my part I know but you're basically treating them like play-dough. They're not people just play things.

>>52237964
I just fill in what isn't stated with either what is most logical or what I want the best. If it's stated I'll color inside the lines, but if it isn't I don't see why I can't just assume some stuff.

>>52237411
Everyone having some sort of sexuality is natural, so I assume everyone is down to fuck under the right circumstances.

I don't really give a fuck about fixed sexuality. Though being bi is still a type of fixed sexuality.

>>52237926
Not him, but that's not necessary at all. If the author doesn't restrict options, you can imagine whatever you want. Your desired princess might be a lesbian but the others might not. It's not all or nothing.

Even if that were the case, everyone being biscum isn't that farfetched. In a world without prejudice, people would be more openminded.

I believe the Vikings had a saying like that: "the older you get, the more one enjoys the feel of a boy". Basically, older men would have fulfilled their marital duties already and have nothing left to prove, so they'd be more inclined to give into ACTIVE homosexuality.

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Name: David Dietrich
History: new arrival (100)
Age & gender : 16yo male
Race: human
Starting location: beacon academy, vale
Semblance- unstoppable
Gifts-Strength (80) agility (60) intelligence (50) fear (40)
Talents- combat (0)

Weapons
Variable - Hammer / Energy Cannon
Weapon mods- Dust Mod - charges hammer in energy/ overloads cannon (550) Weight enhancement (450)
Items&gear- Dust charges (400) armor (300) motorbike (0) scroll- phone (0)

so here i am, in a new world, with a new (and much improved) body, a big hammer and a motorbike - with nothing but my wits, grab-bag of abilities/powers and a basic gist of where the plot happens. guess ill head over to that shop then..

In combat, if they are far away shoot them with cannon, if they are close hit them with the hammer, 30% of the time it will work 100% of the time.

>>52237277
Can't really enjoy this cyoa anymore since the show upped its powerlevels with those retarded Maidens. Also, some of those semblances are shit: Ring Leader is like one aspect of the Schnee' Glyphs.

>>52236741

Class: Sorcerer
Sorceries: All (Free due to Pragmatic Faction)
Spell Schools: Conceptualism and Planarism
Spellcraft: Concept of Ruin, Concept of War, Concept of Defense, Interdimensional Assault, Metaspace Theory, Continuum, Planeshift, Summoning

>Reunionism
>Drain Limbo for mana
>Restricted Blood Magic
>Evacuated Worlds
>Flexible Gateway Controls
>Experiment w/ Diabloism
>Expedition
>Unregulated Mana
>Maintenance
>Limit Bureaucracy

Followers: Prometheus, Hysteria, Invidia, Rhea, Cassandra, Robert.

Forces: Old Guard, Conscripts [2], Artificierst, Enchanters [2], Planar Scouts, Battlemages, Void Stalkers

Quests: Our Solemn Hour, Darker Skies Ahead

Final Loyalty:
Pragmatics: 100
Purists: 10
Reformists: 20
Adversary: No Change

My character will recognize that the Convention needs to stop the harvesting of Planes for mana, but also realizes that it will be impossible to do so without either crippling the Convention further or starting a Civil War. Instead he will direct his forces to Limbo to harvest it as it is one of the places all the factions can agree is better off not existing.

The energy harvested from Limbo will help restore the Conventions military forces and my character will use his own personal Sorceries to destroy the hostile entities sealed there for good.

Meanwhile I'll open up research on both Blood Magic and Diabloism to see if they offer a solution to our mana reliance and to try and cool relationships with the Adversary. My overall goal is peace with the Adversary but it is not my first priority.

My followers include the leaders of each faction to serve as my advisors and to make sure each faction has a voice. It also includes Cassandra and Robert as my personal enforcers and generals against Limbo. Rhea is an anamoly but as I suspect (and will later confirm) that she is actually one of the prior leaders of the Convention, namely the one whose policies I'm following it will be useful to have her advice.

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>>52237277

>Name
Olivier Armstrong
>History
New Arrival (100)
>Age & Gender
18, Female
>Race
Human
>Starting Location
Beacon Academy, Vale
>Semblance
Force of Nature, Ice
>Gifts
Will (90)
Beauty (80)
Agility (60)
Intelligence (40)
>Talents
Combat (0)

>Weapons
Variable, Military saber that can extend into a long, bladed whip for ranged combat. (Like that Chain sword Gypsy Danger has in Pacific Rim) (600)
>Weapon Mods
Dust Mod (550)
>Items & Gear
Dust Charges x4 (350)
Scroll (350)
Rebreather (300)
Wilderness Gear (250)
Armor (150)
Parachute & Grappling Hook (0)

Let's do this shit.
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>>52238029

One letter away from team DOOM, topkek

>>52238318
just need someone named M and team DOOM is a go

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>>52237277
Diana Doe

>History
New Arrival 100

>Age & Gender
17, F

>Race
Human

>Starting Location
Bacon... No wait, Beacon.

>Semblance
Door Maker

>Gifts
Will 90
Intelligence 80
Precision 60

>Talents
Tactics 40
Medicine 0

>Weapons
Ranged (Bow) 800
Ranged (Sidearm) 600
Collapsible (Bow) 550
Dust Mod (Bow) 500

>Items & Gear
Scroll 500
Wilderness Gear 450
Dust Charges x2 350
Rebreather 300
Dust Collection 200
Spy Drone 0


So, I guess this is a thing. At least no one questions a Doormaker showing up from nowhere.

Well, at least I got a roof over my head. The wilds here aren't very friendly. The job is a little too stressful, but I'll try to keep my friends safe. I can get you where you need to be, and an eye in the sky is all the better when you can drop enchanted rods from it. Don't you dare die on me.

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>>52238446
You are now DOOD. ;^)

>>52238456
Fuck yeah. Team DOOD.

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>>52238456
Dude...

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Here it is.

Part 1 of 2.

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>>52238605
Whoa!

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>>52238624
Well, I'll get into it tonight. I need to prep for my table top group. I'm Wizarding in one game, and GMing another, so I don't have time for this fun.

>>52238605
It's happening, fellow skeletons!

>>52238605
At last this meme can die.

>>52238605
Not sure what to think of it.

I think I preferred the old design. It was more accessible. Easier to read. Felt more necromanticy.
I love the perks though.
The spells seem mostly unchanged on a first look.

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>>52238605
Part 2 after some last-minute fixes.

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Whoever posts this next time needs to spoiler the 7th page.

Now, "how to win the meta" build.

>Ideology
Saulin the outside at least, because end result is closer to None in practice. Hopefuly formal declaration and superficialy doing things the Saul way will placate Purists long enough for shit to start working, because if the deception does not hold my whole program is fucked. Pragmatists will suck it for now.
>Planar Chart
No world drained. Fuck. This. Shit. We will go another way. Purists Don't like me now, Reformists become my fan club.
> Blood Magic
Free. This whole Convention is built on a 12 000 years old lie, so time to fix it. Plus, I need that mana. Pragmatists start to like me, Reformists collectively resign from my fan club, Purists hate my guts.
>Refugees
Abandoned. Some corners just need to be cut. Pragmatists fill the empty room of my fan club.
>Gateway regulation
Strict control, purists need to be placated for now. Let the next Omniarch pick the better option.
>Diabolism
Banned. I don't want Civil war on my hands. Trap or no Trap, the deal sounds fishy, devils did not get their name for nothing. Let next Omniarch deal with it.
>First Contact Protocol
Expedition. Purist's tits need to be calmed, plus it seems like this would actually produce results faster in the long run.
>Mana regulation
Unregulated. I don't want this thing blowing up in my face too soon, so we'll bite the bullet.
>Coverage of living expenses
Maintenance. Take your welfare and choke on it. At least this will placate Purists enough not to start a war, plus Reformists suddenly like me. Damn hippies.
>Government focus
Limit Bureaucracy. I need the other two for this to work, and Purists still won't hate me enough to start the war, and I'm fine with it. Fuck these guys anyway.

>>52238763
Which leaves me at +55, -40 and +25 with the factions. Enough to score best and second-best bonuses from two of the factions while avoiding war, so, good enough.

>Class
Wizard. Self-made man all the way, plus this class focuses on wits, and I will need A Lot of those to make this work.

>Attributes
E
E
E
A
The program I am running spreads us thin enough, and my and Convent's responsibilities, challenges and goals are much biggern than my or anyone else' self is, so I will gladly sacrifice my personal power if it means the greater good will be achieved. I will have to rely on my wits and my supporters to carry me through.
This leaves me at 300 mana.

>Sorceries.
Good thing I don't have to pay for those.
- True Immortality
With how squishy I am, I'll need it.
- Mind's Eye
I will need to keep on a lot of tabs, and this will help.
-Temporal Spiral
Global reset button. I have a feeling I will need that.
-Diabolism
May something have mercy on my soul.
- Eternity's End
When I absolutely have to choke a bitch but the bitch is immortal. My followers will have to deal with it.

>Spellcraft.
Arcanism
-Retroactiviy
-Arcan Lore
-Unseen Mystery
-Physical Mystery

Planarism
-Metaspace theory
-Temporal Theory
-Planeshift
-Summoning

Blood
-True Destiny
-Parasitic Engineering
-Absolute Denial
-Angel

The package is designed to provide me with tools to gather information and subtly but effectively manipualte events. Picks from Arcanism provide me with light "divination+ reality-warping" package, and Planarism will augment them and make them even more precise. True Destiny imrpoves this even further, and Parasitic Engineering and Absolute Denial provide me with some contingency in case of emergencies. Angel is a multi-purpose tool.

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>Followers
Starting at 300 mana
- Rhea
- Merlin
- Tsar Gorokh
- Merovech
- Clovis
- Cassandra

Reformists like me enough to join me for free, and I need every help I can get. Merovech, Merlin and Rhea seem to be particularily useful, and Cassandra and Gorokh looks like good enforcers.

- Hysteria -65 mana
As the leader of my biggest fan club, it's good to have her on my side, especially as someone who can win the crowds.

-Prometheus. -55 mana
Will need her help for the future mission. You cheeky cunt, I know you will approve and you will see to it that I will succeed.

>Units.
Now, the biggest challenge. I bit myself in the ass when I pissed off Purists, so most of these are limited off.
-Elite
Crown Vanguard x1 45/180
Old guard x1 85/180
Conscripts x3 130/180
Magical Girls x1 160/180
Enchanters x1 180/180

Magical Girls as shock troops and Conscripts as base troops compose the core of the army. Enchanters remain in support roles, augmenting
the troops. Crown Vanguard as special operatives, Old Guard as the last resort forces.

>Missions:

Our Solemn Hour: To at least somehow justify me breaking meta in half I must take the spoiler-revealing mission.
At the edge of time: No cost to great to prevent the ultimate destruction. With us merging with Eclipse, it will be possible

Net result

>>52238456
>>52238498
>not team DODO

>>52238797
Let's hope we don't go dodo. I'd really be disappointed in that tactical and medical knowledge I got magically handed with zero effort if that happened.
Man, I just want to chill out...

>>52236575
Howe come you don't have Half Life on there?

>>52238855
He's probably waiting for half life three.

>>52238855
>>52238868
>Half Life
What's that?

>>52238605
Also why is there tier 2 and 4, but no tier 1 and 3?

>>52238879
Nothing.

>>52238887
I just checked and I found all 4 Tiers, where are you missing them?

>>52238777
Predicted net result:

The Omniverse became much crueler place to live in and the Convention became more monstrous. Blood magic is legal, and sacrifices will begin anew. Diabolism was prevented from setting foot in, but with me embracing it there is a precedent, and that means, a foothold for it to be introduced. Many threats remained unanswered. Iriy is ruined, Chaos wizards remained unstopped, First Sinner still acts, Spark of Defiance spreads and voices in the dark still Sound.
But the conflict with the Adversary is stopped. I can't imagine that integration with the Eclipse will go peacefuly, but with Pragmatists on my side hopefuly we will be able to hold Purists in check. Tons of time and resources will be freed, including much of our Mana resources and the original temporal Spiral, now that the Eclipse knows of our ultimate goals. With them learning of reason behind planar splitting, some tensions have to be lowered at least from their side. With our hands free, we may finally move on to toher threats and tasks. And hopefully, the continued existance of the Multiverse will be assured.

If you were to take over from this, what would you do? Would you approve of my actions?

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>>52238624
It's so...cluttered.
I mean, it's good that it's small, but feel lacking. To be honest I liking the older version layout more.
More aesthetic ya know.

>>52238902
Oh shit, there is a whole other column of pages on the right

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>>52238605
Huh one post gone?

>>52238945
There were some errors in it i missed first time posting, so i reposted it here
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>>52238957
But yeah, it feels empty now. Somehow. Too many empty spaces and frankly too vanilla and colour clashing font.

>>52238605

The magic school invo,lving a spirt bound in the grimoire is lacking a name and the spells lack a name. Oh, light text on a light background is really shit.

>>52238605
Typo under the Kroveri Haema's description.
>Those that do no master it will be mastered"
The 'no' should be 'not'.

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>>52239058
>1
It can also be used to disturb
peace, inviting stress and anxiety instead.
The target will have a steady and slow heart
rate, a clear mind, and all other symptoms of
being calm and collected; or the opposite
1.
Huh? Why are there 2 1's in superscript as well? This is the Pulse of Calm description.

>>52238605
Do Nosferatu automatically obey their creator? Since there's an actual spell for commanding the undead, and the Create Thrall description specifically points out that they obey their master, I'm unsure if it's the same for Nosferatu and why Undead were specifically singled out as needing a control spell.

>>52238605
Under the Blood Runs Dark description
>If the spell is Ritually Enhanced, the blood
becomes cold, causing the caster is thermally
invisible, and dampen sounds in the shield.
Should be
>causing the caster to be thermally invisible . . .

>>52239084
It's to link the "opposite" with the description part after it.

>>52239112
Regular undead are mindless, and command undead forces them to obey, while the nosferatu obey their sire.

>>52239136
It should be too.

>>52239112
Without checking the PDFs, I'd think that "command undead" would be for controlling undead that weren't made by you, whereas any undead or other creatures you make would automatically be under your control in some way.

>>52239149
Nah, it says right there that it's needed to ensure that the undead you raise obey you. It's pretty much a prerequisite.

>>52238754
Where is the wereform ability mentioned in some of the minions requirements?

>>52239271
I thought i caught all of those.
I removed wereform and replaced it, and i thought i got all the spell requirements changed over to "create abomination", though your post tells me i missed a few.

It's late now, and i'm off for the night, but i'll be back tomorrow to take note of and fix all the things pointed out.

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>>52238605
>Scourge
>big guy wearing a mask
>mastered Limit Bane
>mind for planning
>i have broken many

>>52236575

Make it not steam exclusive.
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>>52237356
>good ideas for games to include

Or I guess somebody else could do a new CYOA with more games in it.
inb4 'Udooeet'

>>52238605
If a particular method for Immortality states that it uses a spell from one of the previous tiers, does that mean it's a prerequisite? Additionally, Body Snatcher lists methods that sound like previous spells, but since they don't specifically name them, I'm assuming they're unrelated?

Under the Liber Animas description
>Written in magic in and bound with the soul of a sacrifice
Should be
>Written in magic ink . . .
And also
>this grimoire contains the knowledge to bind souls and spirits to your will, manipulate the spirit realm
Should insert an 'and' before 'manipulate' here.

Under Speak with the Dead
>Mages of all kinds do not like called up like this>
Should add 'being' before 'called'.

Under Cure Inury
>The spell is not able to able to re-attach limbs nor reverse death
Minor typo here. 'able to' repeats twice.

>>52238605
Does the Reunu Pertemru deliberately have less spells than the other books? Since it seems like random spots were left blank. Or rather, they have to be highlighted, copied, and pasted to be read. Was that intentional?

>>52238605
Under Create Mummy
>These mummies are loyal servants that carry out the every command of the one that created them.
Should remove the 'the' before 'every command'.

Under Curse of Death
>the affect of this curse
Should be 'effect', not 'affect'.

Under Curse of Slavery
>or the curse caster, if near
Should be 'nearby', not 'near'.

Under Mummification
>tRequiring that your minions
Remove the 't' at the beginning.

Under Worm That Walks
>for those that have committed the most henous treason
Should be 'had', not 'have'.

Under Seir Luukis Akeldam
>An great warrior
Typo right there.

>>52237983
>everyone being biscum isn't that farfetched. In a world without prejudice, people would be more openminded.
>"here we see the biscum pretending they're the natural ones"

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>>52239351
Udooee...

>>52238605
>>52238754
Fuck yes.
Why must I be out for the day and only able to peek with my phone!

>>52238605
>>52238754
Gee Scientist! How come your mom lets you post two .pdfs?

>>52238605

Death ward seems massively overpowered, do you still age? It seems like total immortality

>>52238605
Under Duchess Victoria
>she decided host you her castle
Should be
>she decided to host you at her castle

Under Nazar
>instead he prefers captive audience
Insert an 'a' before 'captive'.

Under Morgan
>In constant contact with souls from a childhood
Remove the 'a' before 'childhood'.

Under Sho'khah
>Able to kill even better now he is dead
Should add 'that' before 'he is dead'.

Under the Face, there's a strange spacing right before 'socially'.

Under Peter Blauerhimmel
>He Know much about
Should be
>He knows much about

Under Zyanya
>much-lvoed by her subjects
Typo right there.

Under Moskheon
>A ancient
Should be
>An ancient

Under Sitamun
>Wishing to expand and conquer other lands and Lands
Intentional?

And aaaaahhhhh. Way too many typos.

>>52238605
impossibru

>>52238605
>>52238754
Remaking my undead pirate build. Yarr!

>Focus: Liber Animas
>Tier 4 Spells
Command Undead [Purple]
Summon Spirits [Blue]
Create Ghost [Blue]
Spirit Ward [Blue]
>Tier 3 Spells
Trap Soul [Blue]
Astral Protection [Blue]
Memories of the Soul [Blue]
Circle of Bones [Blue]
>Tier 2 Spells
Create Greater Ghost [Blue]
Craft Soulwell [Blue]
Create Soulstone [Blue]
Create Mass Undead [Purple]
Enhance Undead [Purple]
>Tier 1 Immortality
Soul Drinker [Blue]

>Companions
Nadya [Blue]
Seboket [Orange]
Peter Blaucrhimmel [Green]
Edward [Red]

>Minions
x100 Skeletons [10, Purple]
x4 Ghosts [8, Blue]
x1 Chained Soul: Ship Builder [8, Blue]
x1 Soul Collector [12, Blue]
x1 Primeyst'Ma [15, Blue]

>Perks
Naturally Gifted
Moocher
Cunning Linguist
Wealthy

>Enemies
Angry Mob [+4]
Wild Elf Tribe [+3]
Death-fearing Duke [+4]
Vampirates [+5]
Rampant Undead [+7]

>Lair
Island Fortification


Skeletons are handy manual laborers (and can swing a sword), with the nifty trait that they don't use valuable souls.

Regular ghosts are flying scouts. They find ships to plunder. Eventually, they can learn to fight.

The ship builder's job is obvious. He organizes skeletons to construct new vessels and repair old ships.

Primeyst'Ma is sent if the merchant vessels are heavily defended. The Soul Collector generally accompanies any attack to gather new souls (which are primarily used for Soulstones and Trap Soul).

Seboket is the lair's security expert and my bodyguard. Peter beefs up the nearby nature to make it incredibly hostile to everything (and to produce lumber without needing to kill the plant). Edward builds up the Lair's library and handles research/logistics. Nadya hangs around I guess.

Obligatory: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXoZsgNHquM

>>52238722
I'm afraid I'll have to second this. Old format was far more catchy and I'm not a fan of the (excessive, IMO) fade out along the border of pictures.

Still, it's nice to see this revamped with new options.

>>52238111
Sucks to be you.

>>52238754
Under Wight
>Far rarer and even more powerful zombie
Should be
>A far rarer and . . .

Under Thrall
>Requires: Create Nosferatu
Err, shouldn't it be the Tier 4 spell that creates Thralls? Doesn't make sense for it to require the Create Nosferatu spell when there's a Create Thrall spell already.

Under Lequitoch
>they drain the blood
Should be
>they drain blood

Under Spectral Knight
>Requirements: Undying Servitude
Probably a mistake, as there's no Undying Servitude spell at all.

Under Chained Soul
>Enslaved and bound to the its soul
Typo. Remove 'the'.

Under Phantasm
>it does well as a excellent
Should be 'an excellent'.

Under Chimera; someone already mentioned it to you, but it's here that the 'Create Wereform' thing shows up, which you said you meant to remove.

Under Sadikh
>stand them apart from the rest
Should be 'set them apart'

Under Chitter Scarab
Has Wereform as a requirement.

Under Ripper
Has Create Ghoul as a requirement for the Promraen Caro requirement. Presumably, it should be Create Abomination.

Under Mummified Vampire
>they have few equal in combat
'equal' should be 'equals'.

Stopping here. It's just tiring going through all of these mistakes at the time it's currently at for me.

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>>52238605
>>52238754
AT LAST, WE'RE FREEEEEE!

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>>52238754
Race
>Elf
Gender
>Female
Primary Tome: Promrean Caro
>Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Create Abomination, Warp Flesh, Cure Disease, Enhanced Senses, Mass Growth, Rejuvenate, Devourer
Secondary Spells
>Curse of Hallucination, Scourge of Scarabs, Curse of Death, Curse of Slavery, Mother's Khopius
Companions
>Kreie, Angiela, Shanina
Drawbacks
>Cannibalistic Urges x3, Lycanthropy, Scavengers Love
Enemies
>Wild Elf Tribe, Bounty Hunter, Psychotic Count
Perks; Naturally Gifted
>Surgeon, Animal Whisperer, Silver Tongue, Golden Tongue, Remorseless
Minions
>Debauched Priest, Lone Wolf x3, Coven, Chitter Scarab x2, Nightwing x2, Ghoul x2, Ahüdrien x2, Abomination x2, Cerberus
Country
>Teb'Eis
Lair
>Forest Home

Insinuate myself into a nearby community as a cunning woman or healer with the help of the priest and my own charm. Have them act as a smokescreen for my actual life as a predator, preying on travelers that get lost in, or lured into, my woods. With the help of a number of beasts and a pack of werewolves anyone tries to come after me and they'll quickly find the hunters become the hunted.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J8J9HXcOxrs

>>52238605
Does this still have the whole prerequisite system in place?
Like, you have to purchase 4 Tier 4 to open Tier 3, 3 Tier 3 to open Tier 2, etc.
Also, I'm assuming we can still only have 1 Immortality option? I think I know the answer, but doesn't hurt to ask.

Super stoked about this. Looks great.

>>52240474
>Like, you have to purchase 4 Tier 4 to open Tier 3, 3 Tier 3 to open Tier 2, etc.
Nah. Right at the beginning, it tells you how many spells you can select from each tier. 3 Tier 4s, 3 Tier 3s, 2 Tier 2s, 1 Tier 1.

>>52238754
I forget, am I allowed to pick companions from other colors?

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>>52238605
So you're done. Guess we won't be getting any other oc for the next few weeks.

>>52238605
Where did the hellraiser as pocket dimension stuff go? And all the items?

>>52240784
I think highlander might drop stuff in the next little bit now that she's done helping Scientist with that.

>>52240871
Can confirm I'll be trying to in the next week.

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>>52240920
The two updated Traveller PDF's, Deus Ex Machina and Fallen Gensokyo are all on the table. Ill be worrying about the other things later.

>>52240784
We get OC every day

>>52240930
Oh Highlander, you've made me the happiest girl in the world.

>>52240734
where can i find the previous version of this CYOA?

>>52240945
"Worthwhile" OC

>>52241075
>Skellies
>Worthwhile
Jesus Christ How Heretical.

>>52241075
Necromancer 2.0 is what it is, an update. It's not a an OC per se, it got redesign and new stuff indeed, but 2/3 is same old text.

>>52241075
Always with the goalposts and moving thereof.

>>52241143
>Necromancer 2.0
It's actually Necromancer v3. NCYOA v2 was the one that had to be split into 4 separate PDFs in order to be postable on 4chan.

>>52238605
Race & Gender
>Human, Male
Primary Spells: Promrean Caro
>Gentle Repose, Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Warp Flesh, Enhance Senses, Cure Disease, Rejuvenate, Alter Age, Potion of Khizaz
Secondary Spells: Kroveri Haema
>Pulse of Calm, Lift Bloodstain, Blood Tracking, Ritual Enhancement, Empower Bloodline, Blood Pact
Companions
>Valaul, Kreie, Shanina (10u)
Drawbacks
>Common Mark x 3, Flawed Summoner x 4, Amputation x 4, Limited Control (58u)
Enemies
>Vampirates, Rampant Undead (70u)
Perks: Closed Circle, Naturally Gifted
>Scholar, Artificer, Animal Whisperer, Surgeon, Silver Tongue, Sleight of Hand, Gold Tongue, Streetwise, Storyteller, Undead Activist, Bloodcrafter, Stone Writer, Rune Crafter, Cunning Linguist (0u)
Country & Lair
>Lorekhmu, New City

I weave myself into the city's highest through bloodline management and intimidate the underworld into cooperating by beating them at their own game. We mercy kill the one rampant undead and band together to drive off the pirates. With immediate threats taken care of I settle down to further my research, father my adopted children and build the city into a shining beacon of hope.

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>>52238605 >>52238754
This is overwhelming.

>>52238605
IT IS TMIIME FOR NECROLOLI

>>52240632
Coincidentally, I made four builds for this just last night.

>>52240632
>>52240645
>>52240656
>>52240675
>Human
>Nano-Soldier
Because let's face it, the only way I'm fighting is the old-fashioned way, and that's an express ticket to BTFO Station. I'll be needing those nanomachines, son.
>Psionic Strength 3
>Psionic Regeneration 3
>Psionic Cloak 2
>Psychogenic Focus 3
>Targeting Computer 3
>Bionic Eyes 3
>Adaptability 3

Now it's time to arm up.
>Unarmed power fist with Jet Booster, Superheated, Vibro-Weapon, and Superheavy
>Ballistic rifle with Scope, Recoil Absorber, Grenade Launcher, and Armor Piercing
>Explosive launcher with Miru, Guided Missile, Clip, and All-Out

No flight. No support powers. No auras, or pheremones, or scaling effects. Just all the reflexes, endurance, information, and firepower a soldier could ask for. FOR THE EMPRAH

>>52241437
No revives or perks either?

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>>52240632
Hell Invasion Build - Primary
>Race
Giant
>Soldier Type
Hybrid - Nano-soldier/Gene-Fighter
>Powers [20]
Psionic Strength 3 [19]
Psionic Juggernaut 3 [16]
Psionic Regeneration 3 [13]
Targeting Computer 3 [10]
Bionic Eyes 3 [7]
Hypertrophy Booster 3 [4]
Biotic Organ 1 [3]
Mind Reading 2 [1]
Psychogenic Focus 1 [0]
>Weapons
Melee Sword - Superheavy,Superheated,Monoblade,Vibro-Weapon
Energy - Red-Blue Focus Shift,Charge Up,Armor Puncher,Energizer
Ballistic - All Overmodded
>Armor Mods [10]
Cleanser [9]
Waste Disposal [8]
IU Tubes [7]
Gun Mounts [6]
Servos [5]
Impact Gel [4]
Vampiric Assimilator [3]
Bulwark [2]
Upgrade [1]
Combat Drugs Cocktail [0]
>Pleasure Mods
Tobacco - Cigars
Radio
>Planets
Mars
Irion
Elduras
Lazaria
>Respawning Method
Reconstitution
>Boons
Hybrid
Overmodded
>Drawbacks
Sanity's Eclipse
>Companions
Jerda Ramparo
Pharinalia Laotari
Ludrak
Simon Hayes


Big, tough, strong this build is mainly focused on physical enhancement. The armor is a massive suit built to enhance my strength even further and is capable of limited self repair thanks to the Vampiric Assimilator, the weapons are a Superdense Blade that has been sharpened to a mono edge, super heated and is capable of high intensity vibrations. The guns are my Lazer Shotty a close to mid range weapon built for a variety of combat situations it is my primary ranged weapon. And of course the piece de resistance my Twin-linked Gauss Gatling attached to my armor by a robotic support arm one of the two weapon mounts this baby is the street sweeper and boss killer meant for large enemies, crowds, and sustained fire on super durable targets

>>52238605
Can we pick Naturally Gifted twice?
Or are those modifiers a one-time deal?

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>>52238605
>>52238754
just posting this in response. lovely work though.

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>>52238605

Praise be to the Skelly Gods! Its here! Its finally here!

>>52238111
The powerlevels thing is a fair point, but there's only four of those maiden fucks on the entire planet. You kind of expect there to be a bigger fish somewhere out there.

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>>52241644
>Ghost Skeleton.
>Pickelhaube.
>Flight.
>Super Strength.
>Spooky Tomb.
>Professor Dracula.

As night falls a great hero rises! DOOMBONE rises from the crypt on his flying motorcycle, struggling to defeat his nemesis in an arson contest! Who will set the most public property on fire? Will good prevail? Either way, DOOMBONE will fight on!

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>>52238754
>Human Male

>Primary Book: Reunu Pertemeu
>T1: Mummification
>T2: Resurrection, Curse of Slavery, Curse of Death
>T3: Mother's Khopius, Father's Shield, Regeneration
>T4: Sandstorm, Embalming, Curse of Enfeeblement, Create Mummy

>Secondary Book: Liber Mortis
>T2: Create Mass Undead, Enhance Undead
>T4: Command Undead, Invisibility to Undead

>Öbottakh
>Nerrti

>Sadikh x1 (10)
>Aptrganga x4 (24)
>Akert x2 (2)
>Ze'Atashma x2 (2)

>Kobold Dragoon x1 (1)
>Soldiers x2 (4)

>Highborn
>Silver Tongue

>Amenthes
>Abholean Witch

>Deparmiya
>The Necropolis

Immediately, I must set about growing my forces with the vast array of dead within the Necropolis; my rivals shall leave me no quarter, and I fear that they may strike early while I am most vulnerable. Once my military might is of considerable size, I shall reach out to the masses of Deparmiya with either an open hand of invitation, or a clenched fist of conquest. My legions shall encompass both the living and the ancient dead, with my elite mummified upon death and my most stalwart of servants being granted the blessing of resurrection. I shall not stop until all the sands cry out my name in praise, and no ancient king or forgotten god will deny me!

I do not serve.

I rule.

>>52239700

I assume that the modified Death Ward can be dispelled, or will fail if you take too much damage at once (ie getting incinerated or crushed to a pulp.)

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>>52238694

Yes. Now it can be resurrected in service to Calcium.

>>52238111
The Maidens can be conquered with the D, so who really has the power here?

What are some things people do after school? Not extracurricular activities but hobbies and such like videogames and anime and things of that nature.

>>52242363
Videogames, TV, books, shitposting, and going to bed and waiting for sleep to claim you.

>>52242363
Polar bear hunting.

>>52242363
Playing sports outside of school, boy/girl scouts activities, hanging out with friends, going to the movies, etc.

>>52236575
Mass Effect 3 was never on Steam, mate. Also why is the Dark Brotherhood sigil on Morrowind?

For additions, add in HuniePop, Crusader Kings 2, and Stardew Valley.

>>52241437
OH SHIT, THERE'S MORE
>>52240692
>>52240706
>>52240717
>>52240734
>mod Armor with IV Tubes, Jump Jets, Impact Gel, Resistant, SelFix, Mini-Turret Pods, Charger Pack, Grappling Hook, Upgrade, Overclocking
Eating, terrain scaling, impact/fire/electric/energy damage, and armor damage/overheating are now non-issues. In addition, defensive and offensive capabilities as well as longevity have been multiplied.

I'll be fighting at Mars, Cadyria, Transyvius, and Lazaria.

If I die, I'll be Reconstituted, though that seems unlikely as my rifle is gonna be Overmodded.

No companions. I go it alone.

>>52241551
I just now got back from the store.

>>52242363
…Are you an Ayy Lmao?
How do you not know the answer to that question?

>>52242521
presumably, autism.

>>52238754
What country is the Necropolis located?

>>52242521
Quite unironically I'm an unlikeable autist who never had any friends. So I wanted to ask for options for my CYOA.

>>52242585
But what if autism was implanted into our genepool by aliens to create anti-psychic mutants?

>>52242632
well then most of this website suddenly got a glorious destiny that they will likely never accomplish because this place has bogged them down.

>>52236686
What are some games you'd recommend ¿?

I've been gone for a bit, why is the necromancer cyoa such a big deal?

>>52242713
Good story, lots of variation, no real 'god' builds. It was never my cup of tea but I can see why people would like it.

>>52242713
It's not outside of a few people who really really like it.

It won't make a splash.

>>52238754
I thought there was a section more detailing what each worship and race will give you? Oh Well whatever. Lets do this I guess

Main Interest: Caro

Tier 4 : Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Gentle Repose
Tier 3: Warp Flesh, Cure Disease, Alter Appearance
Tier 2: Craft Plague, Create Life
Tier 1: Clone

Generally going to go healer route and set up myself as someone who can bless the city. Use create plague to help everyone who drinks from my spring live healthier and longer. Have the city set up a monument with a spring running from it. So long as they offer their prayer and respect, the spring shall provide health and strength. Eventually it'll become a pilgrimage spot.

The other 6 spells: Imbue Life to create a few servants, Resurrection because come on, Alter age easiest way to convince people in power to listen to me, Trap Soul should help me create some interesting items, Father's Shield to ensure my soul doesnt get trapped on the way to a clone, Empower Bloodline to create a few families totally loyal to me.

Kreie - Will be teaching them to be warriors and doctors.

Shevyla - For protecting me from living things

Kalia - To protect me from the spirits

Now I have at least one spell in each spell line so I should, eventually, be able to research and learn a lot of spells despite not having teachers.

minions:
1 phantasm [10]
1 Skinwalker [8]
1 Scholar to help researching more magic [5]
1 Coven(3) to help spread and set me up as some sort of semi god figure [4]
2 Slaves (20) to do misc jobs and help spread the word [2]
1 Tavern Wench for cooking and food and all that [1]

I kind of want undead activist but I can work towards that myself. Instead Ill take Cat's eyes and Silver tongue.

Enemies: Death Fearing Duke [+4] You know what would help him? If I just freaking make him younger. Seriously. Easy way to get a backer, if a bit of a paranoid one. (Until I can get rid of him quietly anyways).

Fire mage [+6] Do you think fire can burn ghosts?

>>52242713
Because v2 came out ages ago, and v3 has been in-the-making for quite some time, so people are just reacting to the latter finally being released.

>>52236575

>Mount and Blade
+Charisma: Gain followers by hiring them or besting them in combat and taking prisoners. +Faction Rep: Governments will hire you as a mercenary and give you quests.
- You will fail these quests through no fault of your own and allies you make will totally bail on you for dumb reasons. Also, your followers will eat all your food.

...I think I sprinkled a little too much salt on that negative...

>>52242740
Cont:

Mammoth Riders [+5] I'd like to see if I can capture a few mammoths as pets and or test subjects.

Thats +15 just enough for one companion. Going to take Endhinat so I can learn about soulwells faster and how to build them.

I make my lair in the border of Teb'Ihr and Teb'Hai. Near enough to access TebHai's people and ports, but not subject to their laws.

My lair shall be the New City. They would be facing a lot of hardships and they would appreciate a healer. I can hopefully extend my influence far enough to completely take control sooner rather than later.

>>52242686
Connect 4.

>>52238605
>>52238754
>Race
Human

>Main School
Promraen Caro
Tier 1- Potion of Khizaz
Tier 2- Rejuvante, Create Life
Tier 3- Natural Weapon, Warp Flesh, Cure Disease
Tier 4- Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Gentle Repose

>Secondary Spells
Promraen Caro
Tier 2- Mass Growth, Craft Plague
Tier 3- Enhanced Senses, Alter Appearance
Tier 4- Inflict Paralyis, Create Abomination

>Companions
Catherine
Dereena

>Perks
Surgeon (free)
Silver Tongue
Gold Tongue

>Enemies
Pyschotic Count (+7)
Abholean Witch (+15)

>Drawbacks
Single-Minded (+3)

>Nation
The Untamed Lands- Lorekhmu

>Lair
Forgotten Laboratory

Point spending time! Base 30+25 (55) from other sections

>Extra Spells
Promraen Caro
Tier 2- Create Skinwalker (40), Alter Age (35)

>Minions
Skinwalker (28), Created Life (21), Slyther (12)

>Extra Perks
Cat's Eye (2)

>>52243095
I will settle into the abandonded labratory, deep within the Southren tropical jungles of The Untamed Lands. I'll ply my craft as a healer
and a miracle worker, the latter for the right price. My end goal is really eugenics. With Dereena's past as a super solider prototype and
Catherine's knowledge, I should be able to boost myself and my companions into something normal looking, but amazingly powerful. Shifting forms, weapons appearing from flesh, the very living world around you becoming your enemy.While I do intend to do good with my gifts, I'll take promising patients under my wing as the first of my new race.

The jungle around my lair will be become increasingly deadly to all trespassers. My skinwalker will find prospective patients and lead them safely through to me. Not that
I won't go venturing out myself, but I don't want anyone associating me with the rumored miracle man in the jungle.

The Count became my enemy when he sought my service, only to find Alter Age could not take him back as far as he wanted. Perceiving this as a slight, he has hunted me ever since.
He knows where I'm located, but does not know my face or the faces of those in my service. In time, perhaps I will take his seat of power for myself, once the jungle is fully mine.

The Cult of Witches has pursued me since childhood, confident that my death is the key to unlocking Old Ones, who will teach them new ways to shout and kill and revel and enjoy themselves, bringing all the world down in a holocaust of ecstasy and freedom. Little do they know, I'm already working on that myself, just without any need for Old Ones. When they learn my goals, perhaps they will forsake the eldritch horror and embrace something a bit...better looking

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>>52237277
Murder hobo time?
> New Arrival.
> Age: 20.
> Human.
> Vale.
> Force of Nature: Fire.
> Will. (-10)
> Fear. (-10)
> Strength. (-20)
> Energy (-20)
> Combat. (-40)
> Melee: Greatsword. (-100)
> Collapsible: Longsword form. (-50)
> Weight Enhancement. (-100)
> Dust Mod: Lightning infusion. (-50)
> Melee: Even more armor on my left arm. (-100)
> Dust Mod: Lightning. (-50)
> Armor. (-100)

So there's my Soul of Cinder build.

I'll just keep murdering my way across the planet and growing stronger and stronger. I guess I don't need a name since I'm not heading to any academy. Qrow did mention actual combat is where the real growth occurs. At this point all I know is that some things need to die. The White Fang, Cinder's group, all of that shit. They need to die so that Pyrrha doesn't have to. They need to die so that Penny can still enjoy having a friend. They need to die so Ruby can go on and life a nice little life of happy adventures with her happy little friends.

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>>52243180
I fucking love the Soul of Cinder.

>>52243095
>>52243120
Just noticed Tavern Wench is a thing. Adding one of those to be my agent in town, referring people to my Skinwalker. Puts me down to 1 point left and 25/30 towards the minion cap.

>>52238111
Ring Leader has better applications than Schnee's master glyph if you use it right. Weiss is a main protag so she'll have power creep but the main benefit of ring leader is that all the creatures summoned are instantly loyal and you can summon multiple creeps with practice. While Weiss will have the leg up on with the other effects of her glyphs, it has been shown that she does not have complete control over her summon power and some of the Grimm such as the Boartusk turned on her. Since she's a main protag she'll probably master it soon enough and go godmode but as of now it's a small ace that can backfire in her face. Plus it takes a bit of time for her to activate her glyphs and it seems like she can only summon one creature at a time (similar to you at the start) but with your soul focus being a pet semblance then you'd probably master it faster than her since that's the only thing necessary to the power while Weiss will probably have to mix dust and new glyphs to hone her power.

Honestly I chose Ring Leader for No.52235910 because certain grimm, primarily Geists and Seer combos would be insane with good tactics. You let them possess manufactured guard bots/armors for shocktroops, let them possess enemy weapons to turn them against them such as having Ruby's Cresent Rose jam or Yang's Gauntlets backfire, allow them to spy on enemies by possessing drones, scrolls, phones, etc, and even using them to possess your own variable weapons, armor, or cybernetics for living armor/weapon symbiosis. With Dust Infusion you could create variant custom Grimm and since they're completely loyal to you. Hell you'd probably be able to mass produce several White Armor mechs but with a sentient and adaptable intelligence at your command.

Also I want to go full rule of cool with a possessed motorbike autodriving so I can joust and shell enemies while having other creatures like Nevermore and Beowulfs supporting me in the air and ground until I kill a few dragons.

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>>52243354
Looking quite decent my man. Looking forward to it.

>>52243354
This is looking pretty nice so far.

>>52243354
Sir is the illuminati/aliens/demons/wizards. Calling it.

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>>52243461
Now why would you think something like that?

>>52238605
Human, Mother worship

Liber Animas
-summon spirits, command spirit, create ghost
-memories of the soul, trap soul, exorcism
-craft soulwell, create greater ghost
-soul drinker
kroveri haema
-pulse of calm
promraen caro
-inflict paralysis, limit bane
reunu pertemru
-scourge of scarabs, mother's khopius, curse of slavery

cassandra, morgan

bestial spirit
3x wraiths
spectral knight
chained soul
phantasm (uh, the non-crab one)
primeyst'ma
tavern wench
coven

+perk
scholar, runecrafter, sensitive

solaris crusader, spellsword
amputation, lunar powered

Home:Teb'Eis
Lair:Roadside Inn

>>52238908
The future seems bleak, I'm not sure how long you would last before a coup, with all those changes happening in rapid succession. I wouldn't want to be the one to follow you as the leader.

>>52242448
Yes I'll just follow the way of Valve and cut out the 3.

>>52238855
Why should I remember something Valve forgot about?

>>52237239
Total War: Warhammer sounds quite fun. Might be interesting to have a WAAAAGH.

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>>52236575
>steam cyoa
>no bad rats

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>>52238754
I think it's sort of weird the different races come from the DnD race list desu. I can half understand the elves, but the kobolds and tieflings are a bizarre addition. It'd be better if they got their own names and appearances.

Specialized School: Liber Caro
>Gentle Repose
>Cure Injury
>Create Abomination
>Limit Bane
>Alter Appearance
>Cure Disease
>Craft Plague
>Create Life
>Potion of Khizaz

Additional Spells:
>Liber Animas:
>>Create Ghost
>>Astral Protection
>>Trap Soul
>>Create Greater Ghost
>>Extract Soul
>Liber Caro:
>>Mass Growth

Perfectly preserve the bodies of the dead, rich people can pay me to preserve their body and trap their soul inside it. Making them eternally deathless. I also chose the immortality type that can be granted to others, the potion of khizaz, that's the deluxe immortality where you can still enjoy carnal pleasures.

Companions:
>Xihal
>Lady Aino
They can help me develop my neglected skills. Plus, I need the money.

Minions:
>Ghouls X8 (There's no "create ghoul" spell, I assume it's supposed to be "create abomination" since it's green) (8)
>Slither X3 (35)
>Flesh Golem (60)
>Alchemist (63)
>Coven (67)
>Debauched Priest (70)
Spending some points I'll earn back with the drawbacks I get a little cult and some monsters to collect flesh for the golem.

>Surgeon
>Apothecary
I'm trying to become a doctor.

>Indentured Servitude X2
If this faction exists I'd rather be on its good side anyway.

>Grand Palace
I'll become lady Aino's court physician. Granting supernatural healing and boons to those that pay well. With the good lady's blessing we can work on the ever growing flesh golem.
Also, no offense, but I'm injecting myself with a custom plague that only hurts vampires. Just in case. Not accusing her of anything of course.

>>52243862
He didn't include any of the myriad shitty VNs that have been popping up on Steam either.

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>>52243899
>Sakura series
>+Tig Ol' Bitties: The cup size of every female on the planet is increased by two sizes.
>+Harem Protagonist: You will be surrounded by highly attrictive women for the rest of your life...
>-Gaben hates 18+: ... but you will never get laid. Ever.

>>52243944
>-Gaben hates 18+: ... but you will never get laid. Ever.

so, no change from my current life?

>>52243944
truly a sacrife worthy of heroes

>>52238605
>>52238754
It's kinda hard to read the text, especially the prerequisites for the companions.

>Human
>Father
>Promræn Caro

T4:
>Ward Undead
>Slow Death
>Reinforcement
>Create Abomination

T3:
>Ritual Enhancement
>Warp Flesh
>Alter Appearance

T2:
>Empower Bloodline
>Rejuvenate
>Mass Growth

T1:
>Potion of Khizaz

>Kreie (Free)
>Lobsang
>+1 Spell

>+3 Perks 0

>Rampant Undead +7
>Created Life 0

>Deathborn
>Bloodcrafter
>Stonewriter
>Runecrafter
>Wealthy

>Saliin

Pretty simple - enhance myself to crazy levels of power, Alter Appearance to look normal, and punch the two zombies shuffling about. Everything else is either supplementary to that (Rejuvenate + Ritual Enhancement + Empower Bloodline, Create Abomination for blood-trees, etc.) or utility.

Eventually, I might become a professor at the local Magic University™ as a hobby, with my assistants taking over whenever I'm busy breaking the fabric of reality over my knee.

>>52244004
More like your 0.5% chance to get laid becomes a hard 0% no matter what you do to try and improve the odds, but in the grand scheme of things, yeah, basically.

Although I hope your actual odds aren't REALLY 0.5%, Anon. I'm rooting for you!

>>52243840
>>52243862
>No Magicka
>No Psychonauts

>>52244030
Isn't Kreie only free if you don't take immortality?

>>52242713
>>52242739
^ same with all the "popular" CYOAs that never get builds. A few hardcore autists love it and spam it.

>>52244030
>>Created Life 0
>Requires Create Life
Whoops. I'll just fill it with neutral companions or something.

>>52244133
>By choosing a single School as your main School of
>focus, you unlock its bonus, written in its description,
>which gives you good things in addition to what you
>choose, helping you out in its unique way.
Pretty sure you just have to take the bonus from the same school you would take immortality from.

>no nep games in steam cyoa

>>52236575
Add a Mod option that lets you get out of one of the drawbacks but still takes a choice.

>>52244416
What drawback can't you handle ?

>>52244450
...most of them.

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>>52244475
I don't blame ya, pal!

>>52238605
>>52238754

Why aren't your tiers in order? The tier 1 - 4 spells are all there, but first page of spells you encounter are tier 3 and tier 4. The second page is tier 1 and 2. Third page, more tier 3 and 4. Then tier 1 and 2. This continues throughout the entire spell section. It seems like the spell pages are out of order, except the numbers at the bottom of the pages suggest otherwise.

You've provided an interesting CYOA, but the spell section is a clusterfuck.

>>52238605
>>52240809
>>52238754


I remember Scientist saying that he would remove most of the hellraiser inspired stuff because some people didn't like it.

I don't like this decision, but I understand.

But months ago he told me he would at least keep the Lady of Pain.

And now I can't find it.

I feel a great frustration. I don't see why any of the Eremite stuff was bad, it was my favourite build, and Teremum while didn't make a great ally could very well be an excellent enemy. But I was told that most of it would be removedand I accepted. But I was excpeting at least the Lady of Pain to still be in the CYOA. After all this time, I feel disapointed.

>>52244565
It's per tome you dingus.
There's special mechanics related to which book you get your spells from so the spells are grouped per book.

>>52244521
What drawbacks do you want reduced, and in which ways?

>>52244616
It's amazing how many complaints about OC end up being idiots who can't read or autists screeching because something doesn't make their peepee tingle

>>52244724
Or screeching because it does.

>>52244716
Tradefags on Steam abused me as a child.

>>52244716
I don't like the lolfunny drawbacks like Dota, Team Fortress, CS, Fallout 4 ect.

>>52244716
Not any of the other anons, but maybe at least tone down the "constantly" bits (since to me at least it'd sound like those things would happen basically every second of every day, rather than just happening often and regularly).

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>>52238605
>>52238754
Race
>Human
Gender
>Male
God
>The Mother
Primary Tome: Liber Animas
>Summon Spirits, Create Ghost, Command Spirit, Memories of the Soul, Astral Projection, Exorcism, Extract Soul, Create Greater Ghost, Korperlos
Secondary Spells
>Spirit Ward, Sever Soul, Trap Soul, Mother's Khopius, Father's Shield, Pulse of Calm
Companions
>Nadya, Aiyana, Lingjiang
Enemies
>Amenthes, Abholean Witch, Khepri-Ka, Psychotic Count, Banshee Queen
Perks
>Sensitive, Soldier
Minions
>Spectral Knight x18
Country
>Teb'Ihr
Lair
>Vagrant

Think the ghost army from LotR, but instead of being spooky it's incredibly righteous.

>>52238605
Pursue Immortality

Promraen Caro:
>T4
Gentle Repose
Cure Injury
Reinforcement
Create Abomination
>T3
Natural Weapon
Warp Flesh
Enhanced Senses
Alter Appearance
Cure Disease
Limit Bane
>T2
Rejuvenate
Craft Plague
Mass Growth
Create Life
>T1
Potion of Ahizaz

Alyona
Catherine

Surgeon
Silver Tongue
Animal Whisperer

Icelands Castle

>>52236575
Why does Bioshock: Infinite's "Vigors" benefit refer to "others who chose this"?

>>52238605
>>52238754

>Male Human

>Primary Tome: Promraen Caro (Free Surgeon Perk)
Tier 4: Gentle Repose, Cure Injury, Reinforcement
Tier 3: Warp Flesh, Alter Appearance, Cure Disease
Tier 2: Rejuvenate, Create Life
Tier 1: Potion of Khizaz

>Other Spells

Ward Undead, Command Undead
Command Spirit, Spirit Ward
Regeneration, Resurrection

>Companion
Melanya

>Minions
Groundskeeper x 1 (2)
Soldiers x 4 (14)
Commoners x 6 (20)
Tavern Wench x 10 (30)

>Perks (Closed Circle)
Surgeon
Silver Tongue
Gold Tongue
Barkeep
Wealthy

>Enemies
Rampant Undead (+7) I don't even have any undead under my control, are imaginary zombies attacking me? I guess I'll just get more tavern wenches or guards or something, I dunno.

>Lair: Roadside Inn

Shh, no necromancy here; only good food, drink, and a comfortable place to sleep.

>>52245136
2 pts
Common Hobby
East Asian
Skinny
10-13 years old
132 cm
A cup
Small buns
Pretty cute
Cute laugh
Long hair, straight hair, common color
Anime, internet and video game addictions
Bad vision, insomnia
Barren
Emotionally dependent, shut-in, shy
Student
Art, crafts, literature, traditional games, video games
Smart
Single parent, sheltered
Somnophilia
Kissed

>>52236575
Would be good to know how much of their world gets combined with ours. I assume it's a five way split.

>>52245445
I'm pretty sure the only changes are the benefits and drawbacks that you get from the choices.

>>52238605
Very important question.
If I go Mummy, can I keep my skin like Nerrti?

>>52244616
It doesn't matter if its per tome it's still out of order. You have 4s before 3s before 2s before 1s. Either list all tier 1, 2, 3, and 4s together or list them by tome in proper numbering order. Why the hell would you start with a larger number? It makes no logical sense.

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>>52245559
Shhhhh, don't meddle in things you aren't meant to know.

>>52245559
Oh, so you are the autistic type, not the can't read type. Good to know

>>52238754

It is finally upon us.
>Focus: Promræn Caro
T4: Cure Injury, Reinforcement, Create Abomination
T3: Natural Weapon, Alter Appearance, Cure Disease
T2: Rejuvenate, Mass Growth
T1: Potion of Khizaz
>Extra Three Spells:
Alter Age, Curse of Slavery, Resurrection
>Companions:
Shevyla, Morgan, Kreie (Freeie)
>Minions(50µ):
Ahüdrien, Night Wing, Slyther, Slaves x2, Groundskeeper, Thief, Alchemist, Soldiers, Tavern Wench, Elementalist, Abomination, Kobold Dragoon
Perks: Silver Tongue, Gold Tongue
Enemies(+20µ): Angry Mob, Wild Elf Tribe, Vampirates, Bounty Hunter
>Lair:
Island Fortification
>Nation:
Wherever the coast of the Glatidio Isles belongs to. Probably one of the elf ones given the architecture, right? Anyways, the build plan is to set up a lavish high-end medical practice in my tropical paradise, charging exorbitant amounts to wealthy royals for health, life, and beauty, and get out every now and then for some adventures with my qt companionfu's.

Seriously though, this thing is awesome. Really a testament to how far CYOA's have come.

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>>52238605
>>52238754
>work is split into two .pdfs instead of a few images because the image and text size is 4x bigger than it needs to be

>>52245640
It did take a retarded amount to get finished and a certain someone wanted to add on some shit of their own.

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>>52238605
>>52238754
NECROMANCER
Elf

Spells-
Liber Mortis (Main School)
Tier 4: Create Undead, Command Undead, Ward Undead
Tier 3: Ray of Enfeeblement, Feign Death, Imbue Life
Tier 2: Create Greater Undead, Enhance Undead
Tier 1: Lichdom

Promran Caro
Tier 4: Gentle Repose
Tier 2: Rejuvinate

Reunu Pertemru
Tier 4: Mummification, Embalming
Tier 3: Scourge of Scarabs
Tier 2: Curse of Slavery

Kroveri Hæma
Tier 3: Create Nosforatu

Allies
Seboket
Seir Eljsa

Minions
6 Skeleton Mobs u6 (60 total)
2 Executioners u8
2 Aptrganga Squads u8 (12 Total)
1 Leiurqin u4 (9 total)
1 Zombie Giant u6
1 Mummified Vampire u10
1 Master Smith u3
1 Groundskeeper u2

Perks:
Trapper
Silver Tongue

Enemies:
Angry Mob
Wild Elf Tribe
Death Fearing Duke
Bounty Hunter
Disadvantages:
Scarred x2

Location: A mountaintop castle in Teb’Hai

Fortify my stronghold until it's all but impenetrable then set out establishing territory kept free of bandits and such then start taking tolls for merchants going through my lands.

>>52245136
how did you meet:
random encounter (15)
Race:
east european (13)
Age:
14-17 (15)
Height:
162 (15)
body type:
skinny (12)
attractiveness:
Aphrodite is jealous (2)
breast size:
c cup (1)
ass size:
on the larger side of average (-1)
hair styles:
average hair(-2)
straight hair (-4)
common color (-4)
personality traits
emotionally dependent (-1)
shut in (1)
shy (3)
equal (0)
overly attached (4)
occupation:
student (4)
hobbies
video games (1)
intelligence:
average (-1)
personal history:
sheltered (0)
orphan (3)
distinctive features:
cute laughter(0)

>>52243354
Amazing. Can't wait for it.

>>52238605
>Devourer
Jeepers creepers, man. That's a sight for sore eyes.

>>52245136
pts:1
random encounter
SE-Asian
Curvy
26-30
152cm
D-Cup
true average butt
cute
Hair: Common Colour, Average, Straight
Allergies
Dominatrix
Dependant
Easy to Please
walking
Music
Specialised Job
Smart
Biker Dad

>>52236575
Hyperdimension Neptunia.

Pokemon Personified Plus+ when?

>>52240632
human
gene-fighter

psionic strength level 3
psionic barrier level 2
psionic regeneration level 2
mind reading level 2
psychogenic focus level 3
psionic clones level 3
cryobreath level 2
biotic organ level 3
hypertrophy booster level 3
pheromone release level 3

Melee-chainblade, superheated, vibro-weapon, pain train
ballistic-overmodded
explosives-all-out, clip, mirv, emp
armor-cleanser, waste disposal, iv tubes, gun mounts, jump jets, charger pack, bioplasma battery, selfix mode, combat drugs cocktail, mini-turret pods, radio

Planets:cadyria, irion, kamalo, transylvius

healing vat

exemplar
overmodded
sanity's eclipse

the brother of us all, tena, ahlam abbas, nikolai sikorsky, shirley godfrey

>>52238605
why does the Reunu Pertemru only have like half the spells of the rest

>>52247364
He thought they'd 'make up for it' by being really good spells, but that's not the case. They're actually worse than the other books.

>>52247396
To be honest, I think all the spells are pretty meh. Then again, I never liked the original Necromancer much.

Also wow the text can be hard to read in this. It took me ages to figure out why climbing bonuses were under the Healing perk.

>>52246890
Italics said Spring Break.

>>52244565
.....you're a fucking idiot. Tier 4 is the beginner tier, Tier 1 is the ultimate tier.

>>52238605
Why does becoming a mummy make you a shitty, ugly, dry corpse when the mummy companions are pretty and life-like?

>>52247544
Because waifus.

>>52247571
It's unfair. We should get to be life-like.

>>52238605
>>52238754
>companion page says you may trade a companion for a single perk
>perk page you may trade a companion for two perks

which is it

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>>52238605 >>52238754

>>52247644
1:2 once, then 1:1 from then on. I guess.

>>52247586
Then take the companion that makes mummies lifelike.

>>52247544
Isn't that what Regeneration is there for? It explicitly allows you to look as you once did and even grows back missing organs. Am I missing something here?

>>52247765
There is no such companion.

>>52247767
Regeneration only works while you're alive.

>>52246890
Its never coming out.

>>52241317
It doesn't seem that liked by many, but the few that like it seem like they're humongous fans of it?

I guess that's all I need.

>>52247786
Mummification states that you 'live again' if we want to get technical about it. Plus, isn't that exactly how Imhotep from the movie got his looks back. If so, the intent seems pretty clear.

Can someone post that CYOA where you roll like d100/d% and get a few super powers and then it turns into battle royale among everybody who got powers?

>>52247847
Good.

>>52247855
Didn't quite a few people make builds for it when it was first completed?

>>52247889
It says you're dessicated too. Know what that means?

You can't make an assumption that it works like it does in a different property.

>>52247890
That's technically an RYOA, and while I would, I do not have it.

>>52247897
Quite a few builds, but not a particularly high number of people compared to some other OC. It's great that they really enjoyed it though.

>>52247910
>Technically a RYOA
Mostly, anyway, I remember you being able to trade like five for a pick of your choice, on top of picking a weakness or some other shit to get more powers.

>>52247904
Old man penis.

>>52247897
Enough to make a team of companions or two in the first or second thread

>>52247786
wrong bitch, Rejuvenate specifically says it works for dead flesh.

>>52248016
It's *'Wrong, bitch,' otherwise it sounds like your saying he isn't the right bitch!

>>52248016
There is no Rejuvenate spell in that book.

>>52248007
It means dried out. You look like a dry corpse.

>>52248159
I knew that! I'm five times your age, kiddo!

>>52248228
Why aren't you famous as the oldest person in history then?

>>52248251
Because you're younger than you'd have me believe, silly goose!

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Opinions?

>>52237277
is it too fedora tier if my weapon is a Sniper/Katana combo

>>52248375
>An actual CYOA

I think you got the wrong idea about what it is we do here kid.

's okay

>>52248398
How would that even work? How the fuck would the barrel fit in the blade of a katana while retaining any degree of usefulness that it may or may not have had even before?

>>52247904
>Restoring the body back to its original state
>allows the caster to recover from almost any injury
>heals damage and replaces lost organs
You're free to try to make this harder on yourself than seems intended, but the description, to me, reads like you can look like your old self so long as you know the Regeneration spell.

>>52248375
Visions of R.L. Stine.

>>52248464
Fight me 1v1 IRL.

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>>52248441
literally nothing in the RWBY world makes sense

>>52248441
Welcome to RWBY.

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>>52248441

>>52248516
Oh fuck yes. Sam needs to show up and fuck some villains up.

Already a weapon in the show though.

>>52248464
It's not an injury, though.

>>52248418
>>52248470
It'll be a traditional 4chan CYOA as we progress.

Discoveries are basically perks/abilities. In addition to customizing yourself, the plan is that you'll customize your enemies as well.

>>52248537
You're really going next level with this shit bruh.