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It's that time again where we make fun of people, mostly children, who are doing the exact same shit most of us did at their age but we didn't have the internet so our retardation is only known to ourselves, our parents, and our various respective deific beings.

It's time for cringe, except this time, let's take some of these cringy concepts, give them actual critiques, and TRY to improve them.
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>>51919596
I'm not even sure where to begin with the OP pic.
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>>51919665

Just think on it a little. I'm gonna post a couple more from my folder and then I'm gonna let the thread sit for a bit.
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>>51919647
I'm pretty sure this is a parody.
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>>51919697
>>51919701

The saddest part is that I find them difficult to tell apart.
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>>51919708
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Does it count if it's an adult doing cringeworthy things?
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>>51920622
17s the limit because if we go Higher it will become a chris-chan thread
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>>51919633
>wyvern
>four legs and two wings
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>>51919609
>Creepypasta OC

You can make OCs for creepypastas? Is that allowed?
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>>51921487
Well, it sounds Fucking Retarded, so unfortunately... yeah, probably.
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>>51921487

It's an unexpected goldmine of cringe. Creepypasta, Sonic, and Homestuck OCs are amazingly bad.

Steven Universe and Adventure Time seem to have more than their fair share of cringe OC characters as well.
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>>51919596
This /b/ now

Shit thread, op. Not relevant to the board at all.
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>>51921703
well....the /tg/ Discord has OC roast nights each week so maybe tangentially???
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>>51921703

Report me then.
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>>51921657
SU has it bad because the show is unashamedly the most gay show on any kids network. I still enjoy it though. Still better than TT:GO or most anything else that's airing

This is how Steven walks in the latest episode. Granted it was a Ronaldo(read: Meg) episode, so the whole thing was Shit.

Adventure Time is really no more worse than the next fandom, it just has more fans and an easy art style.
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>>51921703
Well, maybe that's not a bad thing. At least we're having fun, which is more than can be said of most /tg/ threads.
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>>51921733

The problem with SU is that all of the social commentary is sort of lost once you consider that the Gems, although feminine, are actually genderless. Their life cycles just don't sync up with any known lifeform on our planet except for maybe single celled organisms.
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>>51921797
Oh, totally. Somebody post the /pol/ Critic of SU, now that's something worth reading.
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>>51921910
I'd like to read this if anyone has it.
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Sometimes I feel like it'd be fun to play an rpg where everyone is full of OC Donut Steal Mary Sues. While I think it'd be fun for ironic reasons, I could see it being refreshing going full retard and playing against the grain of what makes a good character.

What system would would be good for this. On one hand you could go Gurps with every source book or maybe something like Mutants and Masterminds if you wanted full autistic crunch behind it, but I feel like something more rules light would be in the spirit. Maybe a reworked MAID wouldn't be a bad place to start.
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>>51919697
>trolls having siblings
>fucking rainbow blood

>>51919624
>letting your mate fuck around yet not getting culled

God damnnit, I don't even WANT to remember how to nitpick that shitty comic, but I do.
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>>51921657
>>51921733
>>51921797
SU is bad because it's bad. There's no better way to put it; it's terrible on every level.
We should not do that creative abortion the honor of discussing it. Just post cringe.
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>>51922377

>Daughter of Gordon Ramsay he is a chef but he is a full demon
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>>51922377
Yes, I am getting these from the Bad Roleplayers FB page
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>>51922377
NOPE. /pol/ review incoming.

>>51922097
Here you go, part 1 of 2.
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>>51922447
Got a version that isn't for ants?
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>>51922447
DISHONOR ON YOU. DISHONOR ON YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY.
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>>51922464
Yes, I was just being considerate of the ants also there's three images now.
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>>51922522
And Ta Da. Enjoy, discuss, and ragepost.
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>>51921487
There were so many fan Jeff the Killers that the Creepypasta wiki banned them.
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>>51922247

You're stained forever anon.

At least the music was good.
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>>51922567
Go sit in the corner and think about what you've done.
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>>51922522
He comes to the wrong conclusions for the right reasons. The show doesn't play into the typical SJW misandrist/psuedo-communist ideal, but it doesn't really play into traditional roles either. It generally assesses each character as an individual rather than their identity. I think almost every character would be essentially identical if switched from male to female and back.

I want to fuck Connie's mom.
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>>51922684
>I am 17 years (in rp but if you want change for the rp we will doing, you can)
Man, that's asking for some very weird shit
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>>51922732
Okay, this can't be real, this is some kind of joke. Right?
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>>51919609
Ok. I can work with this.
> Lesser villain for WOD, he's a creepy little degenerate who had a horrifying encounter with some monstrous creature.
> became a cannibalistic serial killer as a desperate attempt to imitate the power of whatever he encountered.
>Basically, emphasize that he's gross and kind of pathetic.
> ferocious when he attacks, but fundamentally cowardly. He can be dangerous to other mortals, or people who manages to get the drop on, but most pcs would walk all over him.
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Pretty sure this one is satire, but it's too funny not to post.
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>>51922766
At this point it's hard to tell which is real and which is satire. Coldsteel is satire, if that's news to anyone.
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>>51922766

Here's the artists gallery, choc full of similarly bad OCs. At lest Mona Lisa is torn apart in the comments section.

http://kawaiiassassingirl.deviantart.com/
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>>51922820

There's a certain point with satire or pretending to be retarded where if you spend your day making joke OCs, you're equally as brain damaged as the people who make them for real.
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Somehow, the proper spelling and capitalization makes this one even sadder.
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>>51922912
Monster High is a cringe motherlode.
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>>51922912
In all honesty this seems genuinely harmless. It's just a punky skeleton rocker chick. It's fit right in with some kid show on CN or something
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>>51922951
Wow. Her legs are legitimately unnerving.
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>Secretly glad I did all my autistic roleplaying before the days of social media.
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>>51922974
Yeah, and the idea of the skeleton girl tripping and falling apart is amusing.
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>>51922951

Alissa G. must be the most ruthless motherfucker on that list.
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>>51921703
A good amount of cringy characters are attempts at D&D edgy OC inserts so its close enough and just let people have a bit of fun
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>>51922912
This one isn't so bad. Not quite good, but it's at least thought out a bit more than your typical OC.
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>>51922974
Oh I didn't realize there actually was a cartoon about monster high schoolers. I was giving it some credit for a fairly cute and unique idea. Either way I still wouldn't classify this one with the others in the thread.
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This

I

I don't even

Just

What
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>>51922974
The template comes from Monster High, a webseries/Netflix series. I agree that the skeleton girl there is mostly inoffensive.
The worst Monster High OCs come from real life serial killers, I remember a Zodiac Killer's daughter and a Black Dahlia ?daughter? But didn't save it.
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>>51923049
What the fuck are you holding? Does he plan to bludgeon something to death with a modern art sculpture?
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>>51922912
Dammit. And Skulduggery Pleasant was pretty damn charming too... Now that's what I call a Skelebro.
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>>51923081
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>>51923057

>Character is member of race where your place in society is determined by blood colour
>She is usually the highest of nobility, but becomes a complete outcaste when angry.

>>51923081

He's holding this.
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>>51923081

It's a sword made from a bunch of angels fused together, if I recall. It's magic, I ain't gotta explain shit in weapon form.
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>>51923109
Real talk 'Tyrantopphirus' sounds like a neat name for a weapon.

The rest of that makes me want to kill myself though.
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>>51922684
>my parents kicked me out of my house cause I trying to seduce my father
>I live in the street and with my body
Wait, I've read that doujin!
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>>51923111
Okay ignoring literally everything about this being the stupidest thing I've ever seen, is it supposed to look like an orgy got frozen in carbonite, and is the tip of it actually supposed to look like a jizzing dick or is that just coincidence?
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>>51923161
No. Fuck you.
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>>51923174

It's from an H game where you fuck monster girls, so that might not be entirely wrong.
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>>51923174

Considering that the sword is from Monster Quest? Probably, yeah.
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>>51919659
It looks like another variation on having to engage your 'inner darkness' in physical battle, which is a classic. You might disagree on whether or not it's a /good/ classic, but it's a classic.
So, broad strokes around that core idea: edgy loner somehow stumbles into a power he wasn't ready for and tries to do good with it. However, his own edginess and power-overload-related brain damage make him get increasingly unstable and dangerous to those around him, despite his good intentions. Ultimately, he makes a last desperate ploy to 'split himself in two' and purge the darkness of his soul from himself by physical violence. Succeed, he becomes a well-adjusted individual in full control of his powers; fail, and the opposite happens.

Tried to retain some of the 'teenage edge' flavor while moving out of cringe territory. Not sure if I succeeded.
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>>51923205
Oh so it's actually perfectly appropriate for its setting. In that case keep up the good work.

Although Now it just adds the question that someone would seriously make an OC for a fucking monster girl H-game.
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>>51922977
Is she sure she's human and not some sort of Jersey Devil?
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>>51923174
Yes. It is supposed to look like an angel orgy dripping semen, because that's what it actually is. It's a weapon made out of angels that were melted tigether while fucking, designed to fight angels and monsters.

It's from Monster Girl Quest, a 2010 porn game.
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>>51923261
>Is Demon
>But is also MTF

That seems like an unnecessary tag on considering that, if there are demons, there is likely an easily explainable way for one such demon to appear as any gender they wish.

Unless, of course, the demon chooses to look MTF, in which case it must be among the trickiest of devils for what better way to disguise one's gender changing abilities than too appear as a transexual.

But I'm pretty sure I put more thought into that detail than the author did to that entire character, so oh well.
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>>51923296
NJ fag here. Not even the Jersey Devil has legs that horrifying
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>>51923261
You know, Devils advocate (forgive the pun) what else would something literally called a disaster be but a bright neon tranny catgirl?
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>>51922802
He should only be a cannibal based on fear that unless he disguises himself with the smell of others god will come back and hurt him again. He makes scrolls out of human skin in a childish attempt to summon Satan to protect him. Jokes on him he's not dealing with Abrahamic forces.
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>>51922704
>right conclusions for the wrong reasons
That's /pol/ in a nutshell
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>>51923400
I had an OC like this before. She was sort of a testing character, if any other character ideas popped up and I fleshed them out, I'd put them against her.

If any of them had an inkling of a chance for surviving past a second, I considered them too strong.

Dear lord I used to be so autistic.
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>>51923323
Bad OC creators have this obsession with giving their characters fancy/obscure genders or sexualities, probably because they think it's a decent substitution for personality.
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>>51922912
I'd pay for a statue of Slender Lady as a 40s housewife
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This is obviously intentional, but I can't stop laughing
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>>51923502
>walking through woods
>female spook shows up
>remind her that being a spook is a man's job.
>take her home and put her in the kitchen. Set her to work.
>five years later and we're happily married.
>best part is I can imagine any other woman's face during sex.
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>>51923516
Reminds me of this
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>>51923575
>New Battleborn Character
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'I win'
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>>51923049
>can turn into a snake lady
I don't remember that bit.
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>>51923262
It's not an OC, it's the main character being presented in the style of one.
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I died a little reading this.
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>>51923049
Ok, so the thing that bugs me is how blatantly OP that one ability is.

I mean, impenetrable anus in a monstergirl world? Might as wel have a tattoo that says "blatant power fantasy."
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>>51923393
I love it. I'd emphasize that he's not a Slasher or anything supernatural himself, just a sad, broken little creep. I think he also doesn't have the technical know-how to tan human leather or anything like that, so his lair is just this really gross, foul smelling place infested with maggots.
This is good anon. I might even use him in a game some time.
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Which freefrom rp site has the worst userbase?
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>>51923814
boards[dot]4chan.org/qst/
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>>51923814

/tg/

Gaia was pretty bad back in 2007 before I left.
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>>51923888
>Asexual
Why is this the hot meme sexuality for these people?
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>>51919659
I'd lose so scourge could have his way with me as his servant.
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>>51923888
>>51922951

Now I'm confused whether all of these teens are basing their edgy OC designs off of a rule 34 Jason figure or if there's some latent human tick that makes "cute" versions of serial killers have their masks in the exact same style and location on their head.
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>>51923835
At least /qst/ knows what they're about. It's usually a 70-30 split on the shit vs. the good stuff.
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>>51923953
Well... I'd still fuck your pic preying mantis style.
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Idea: Homebrew Space Marine chapter themed around being horrible cringey OCs. Cringe Marines, maybe?
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>>51924099

I feel like Chaos Space Marines might be better.

Have them worship some OC Chaos god that they claim is better than all the rest and is actually the Emperor's daughter from an Eldar mother.
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>>51924099
>Rainbow power armor
>Chain-katanas
>Warcry is "Psssh... nothin personnel... kid..."
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>>51924139
>the Emperor's daughter from an Eldar mother
But anon, Macha is still a virgin
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>>51924195
Not for long.
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>>51919596
>Scourge
Goddammit why did you remind me anon. He was actually such a good character, he was evil sonic done right. Then fucking Ken Penders sent him to the shadow zone. forever.
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>>51923953
I think it started from Kingdom Hearts when Sora had his mask during Halloween Town
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>>51924162
So just old style noise marines?
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>>51924099
>>51924139
The answer is simple, do both. Make them worship a chaos god, or all of them, give them all the powers and benefits they could want from them, but somehow they stay pure, loyal and uncorrupted because they're speshul
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>>51923262
It's a recolour of the main character, Luka. Note that he also has a normal sword as well that that fucking monstrosity in >>51923111. That actually becomes important in game.
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>>51922503
Well, this is pretty much correct, although I doubt the series creators set out to do any of what either side of the discussion is claiming.
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>>51923686
>paralyzed for 20 seconds
>allowing for 'an extra hit or two'
fucking
kek
i don't care if this is fake, that is 100% on the dot for shitty OCs
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>>51922443
>Cause of death: was killed.

Yeah, that'll do it.
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>>51922443
>Likes: Happy CP Boys.
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Can somebody post our Sue?
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>>51922443
I thought that was a Qu from the thumbnail.
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>>51923575
Who let Randy out?
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>>51923112
>House: No House (Special Case)

I'm not even a Harry Potter fan, but this is the one that pisses me off the most. The character is kind of stupid and snowflakey, but it isn't that bad overall.

However, I think there's nothing worse than breaking the rules of the fiction just to make your character cooler. The whole school functions with the house system, hell, the first fucking day has everyone immediately sorted so they have dormitories and are organized. What does she do sleep in a box?

If you're not going to follow the rules of the universe then why the fuck are you making a character for it?
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>>51922567
Thanks for posting that my man.
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>>51922443
>bullied by classmates because of her tail and ears
>then she died

Boy that escalated quickly.
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>>51923370
Kek'd
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>>51919721
>Leo
>not exploding
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>>51933672
>[Gundarium enhanced laughter]
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>>51932369
I feel like I'm missing a massive chunk of context that would elevate this one to another level of cringe... But, let's go ahead and cover the basics.

Lets start with the name: Siren Gale. While not exactly the best name, but could be worse. We'll leave this.

Race: Oooooh boy, this is a hybrid mess. What the hell even is an ani-human? Anime human? Not to mention the 'Cat' part... Considering succubi tend to be shape shifters anyway, it's easy to say that she just finds cat-like features aesthetically pleasing. Now, we could say that her non-demon parent was human, that makes more sense, but that just means she's a succubus with possible identity issues.

Job: I like the jobless angel, but can lose the 'Reaper' and just say she failed at her succubus duties and now wanders the mortal realm trying to find a place to fit in.

Likes/ Dislikes: Ow, the edge. Alright, lets trim this down to, "Skimpy clothing, her body, one on one interaction, being in control". I'm leaving out the part about 'rape' because deep down, it's really a way to be in control.

Dislikes: This one isn't so bad, but lets do some slight adjustments... "Authority figures, small spaces, groups larger than three people".

Personality: Ow the Edge MKII. Between the 'psychotic, and 'Chaotic Neutral', looks like this needs some heavy pruning as well. Let's go with a more narrative approach "Siren has a desire to be the center of attention at all times, going to extreme lengths to ensure that everyone's eyes are on her for as long as possible. However, her violent tendencies and jealous outburst tend to frighten more people than it attracts, leaving her with only a very small pool of friends and acquaintances that she clings onto desperately. She desires approval from everyone she meets, and when she doesn't get it, Siren may become aggressive and violent. She does have a soft spot for children, as many of them find her feline-like features cute."

Thoughts?
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>>51936116
a definitive improvement
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>>51923953
That's how the Japanese wear there equivalent to "Halloween Masks" when not "in character".
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>>51922951
Pros
>Actually gets little girls into monsters

Cons
>Promotes cringey OCs
>Actual toys heavily imply that the father of Red Riding Hood's kid is the Big Bad Wolf.
>And not in a Bigby Wolfe sort of way; she seems to have just fucked an actual wolf.
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Obviously parody but I feel it necessary to wash away the feeling of disgust.
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>>51923718
I dont know anything about monster high but this seems like it fits the setting?
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>>51921721
Wait, /tg/ has a Discord?
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>>51919708
>That filename
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>>51923161
That's a pretty hot doujin
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>>51922875
Well, sure, but there's something to be said for attempting to create additional levels of irony to stand upon. Once you reach a high enough level, you can transcend space and time and become a psychic gestalt entity.
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>>51922977
I think that's intentional. Y'know, mannequin style.

It shows a basic understanding of horror aesthetics while simultaneously missing the point entirely.
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Cringe from the times of 4th edition
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>>51919708
How Naruto could have been okay
>Get rid of Sakura and Sasuke
>Make main team Naruto, Hinata and Shikamaru
>obviously Sasuke bullshit doesn't happen
>Series goes as is, but with Hinata and Shikamaru in more of it
>Get rid of any hint of prophecy bullshit, Obito or living Madara
>Akatsuki are main villains
>Naruto finds a way to finally coral Nine-Tails during the fight with Pain, Shikamaru makes a plan and the entire cast contributes to taking down all the members of Pain
>Anime ends when Naruto finally achieves the respect of the village
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>>51922377
>>51922429
its true
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>>51938986
that would have been
really good
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>>51923111
Not that it isn't stupid, but that could actually be a good power in a fanventure, being able to glamour your blood like that so you can pretend to be any color you want, but it requires constant concentration or else it'll slip back to your disgusting red blood
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>>51923218

I'd read it if the character in question was over the age of twenty-five. That seems to be the threshold age for cringe.
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I have an inexplicable embarrassment just opening up these pics to read. Like God is watching over my shoulder or something.
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obligatory
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>>51940095
Perhaps it is the deep ancient shame of how cringey the first character you created was.
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>>51941348

And so mankind was cursed with Original Cringe.
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>>51937919
> sex: strate

Holy crap this has to be fake
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>>51923161
Fuck it, why not. Got a link?
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>>51938986
>Get rid of Sakura and Sasuke
But Anon you can't have that, the textbook shounen formula clearly states that the main character must have a rival that appears evil but in reality only misunderstood. It also clearly states that the the main character must have more than one potential love interest to create the love triangle that can go either way based on the fans' character favoritism rating. How could you even dare to suggest a deviation from the standard formula that have been tried and true and polished over a 1000 times?
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>>51942793
Of course it is, half of this thread are fake and parodies.
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>>51936652
>Actual toys heavily imply that the father of Red Riding Hood's kid is the Big Bad Wolf.
>And not in a Bigby Wolfe sort of way; she seems to have just fucked an actual wolf.

... and what are the cons?
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>>51936652
Big Bad Wolf has a human form, I'd say it's more that she fucked a were-.
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>>51923400
Jesus, that was one wild ride, start to finish
Everything was pure cringe, but I must admit, that the final power/ability thingy was pretty fun
>Give an enemy so much knowledge and power that all their neurons and cell and whatnot fire up in activity and they go in full epileptic shock
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>>51945246
>not tried and true and folded over a 1000 times
You missed such an opportunity anon
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>>51922447
>>51922503
>>51922522
In general I have a hard time respecting online arguments/essays that associate themself with some kind of cartoon, like those youtube videos that portray the author as a shiba inu or deer while debating some important topic
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>>51922247
I regret reading the whole thing too, even when the fan base got ginormous and there was cancer everywhere. It was pretty neat for a while when I was in highschool, but then the fat white girls got ahold of it and the rest is history. (I've literally never met a thin girl that likes Homestuck. They're all fat. All of them.)
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>>51923112
>boggart: The death of Severus Snape
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>>51932504
>Hates: Being the Center of Attention
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>>51936677
This is satire, but fuck if it isn't funny
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>>51922443
>Nightcore
I swear to god I see noghtcore remixes of so many songs and I never touch them because of how garbage nightcore is as a "genre"
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>>51923138
>Tyrantopphirus
Sounds like the name a BBEG would give to a zweihander
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>>51922377
your complete inability to formulate a single coherent criticism is compelling
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>>51946711
I remember when I did rp in certain chatrooms /forums and the funniest shit was when someone comes in and broods in the corner and tries to look tragic and interesting to bait people into asking about their backstory and then you just ignore the fuck out of them and carry on with what you are doing.
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