CYOAs and discussion

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>>51902054
Since last thread had a discussion, let's ask!

>Have you made any CYOAs?
http://www.strawpoll.me/12416757

>>51902107
I'm surprised no one pointed out anything about the companion's names.

I am currently working on a CYOA based on a magic school for boys and girls between 14 and 24.

Is it an overused idea? How many anons would like to see the finished cyoa?

Is this going to be another cyoa with people obsessed with turning into girls or have we sent them all to d?

>>51902154
If one's made custom edits of existing CYOAs and shared them (not covertly, making it clear they are edits), should they answer yes or no?

>>51902154
It should have a 'Not yet, but I'm working on one'-option.

>>51902224
It may be common, but it never really seems to get old if you put the right spin on it.

>>51902270
That depends on the amount of work you put into it.

Did you just make a few text changes to a CYOA that took the author a lot of time to do? Then no.

If you did a significant amount of work, such as recreating the CYOA or made an expansion that holds up to the original, then yes.

Consider the work effort involved because editing a CYOA and creating something completely from scratch are entirely different.

>>51902224
I would DEFINITELY like to see that.
Make sure to include Houses too, kinda like Harry Potter's Gryffindor, Slytherin shit.

>>51902184
Didn't read it fampai

>>51902270
Are you that guy who changed an option on the Archangel and Archdemon CYOA? No, that isn't making a CYOA.
Editing and making are not the same anon.
>>51902413
You're free to make a new poll later and add that !

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NEW GENIE GALLERY COMING THROUGH

it really shouldnt have taken this long...

its the first cyoa I've done desu
>>51896501
>>51899012
i-im sorry it took so long you guys

i had to go to sleep and I had stuff to do :(

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>>51903209
and heres the mystery box!!

>>51902224
Make the cyoa that you would want to play. It doesn't matter how overused the idea is, as long as you do this you will find success.

>>51903257
I still can't believe CYOA got so big out of troll images about arguing over the blue sword being better then the red one and other best combo images. The idea being to get a lot of replies arguing which weapon + armor combo was optimal with the joke being the stats and numbers are meaningless without a game system.

Now people post giant pages of itemization and power sets without any sort of game other then imagine if you picked these out wow you chose your own adventure!

I used to joke that someone was doing this as some sort of psychology study on gamers. Especially as the same time the first CYOA were released there were these weird black and white minigames on grids with stock art taking from warhammer that would get posted here. supposed to be one image playable and the gameboard was in ASCII. The poster never explained them but would make and post new ones for months.

>>51902224
do it

as long as its not harry potter lite its not an overused idea

>>51903530
There's a surprisingly small amount of Harry Potter-lite CYOAs.

>>51903209
Blind picks:
>See Me Sit With Me
>She's really into femdom
>The Divine Nature of Conf
Pretty good.
My favorite of my mystery submissions:
>Are They Getting Bigger?
>Touch Me Give Me
All of mine (including H-cup Hypnosis and The Easy Life) were top tier choices, but these two synergize well, giving both simple pleasures (housework and hot chicks) and grand desires (being the hypnotist and/or hot chick).


For regular picks... Can I take mystery box picks instead of regular ones?

>>51902224
If it's good, it doesn't matter what genre it is.

To answer your question, though, it's common enough that finding a niche would help

To the anon who posted this >>51902924 , would you mind giving a source? It looks interesting enough for me to check it out.

>>51903530
Wouldn't say it's Harry Potter lite. There's Houses in a way really similar to HP, but the magic is more on the pure fantasy RPG feel. So far I've come up with 4 great magic types: Elementalism, Arcanism, White Magic and Black Magic. These are then divided into other more specific magic types.

So far the main idea was that some kinds of magic suit certain personality traits while others are more fit for others.

ex. passionate/outgoing -> fire magic
reserved/unemotional -> ice magic
kind/compassionate -> life magic
calm/controlled -> earth magic
etc.

Anyone has tips or ideas?

>>51903725
Latin. Part of a collection of one shots that only has two stories translated, and one is an epilogue to the first.

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>>51903628
yes

whatever picks you dont use in the main section can be used in the mystery box section as well if you open it

>>51901461
If you do the scrapyard one, make sure one of the options allows to replace parts with new ones.
Nobody wants a used and thrown away fleshlight.

>inb4 actually some do

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>>51903738
What will we be killing with this magic?

>>51903810
>>51903209
Alright then:
>Daily Reminder... Seinfeld
Oh no, I'm too attractive. How horrible.

>Just B Urself Lol
Synergizes with Seinfeld.
>Are they Getting Bigger?
>H-cup Hypnotist
What flat girls?
>Touch Me Give Me
And the objectively best option to cap it off.

Entirely self-aware lewdness. Truly, there is no better life.

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Updated.

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>>51904258

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>>51903750
Origin:
>Simply Insane
Dream:
>My Attention
Body Type:
>Curvy
Breast Size:
>Big
Hips, Butt and Thighs:
>Average

Yandere:
>Worshiping
>Monopolizing
>Stalking

Personality & Traits:
>Confident
>Pessimistic
>Girly Girl
>Dominant
>Gifted
>Total Fucking Bitch
>Filthy
>Short

Gifts:
>Fetish
>Youthful
>Adorable
>Protective
>Together
>Income
>Beautiful
>Great Cook

Quirks:
>Closer
>Romantic Trip
>Consent Not Required
>Teasing
>Hers Forever
>Addict
>Diary
>Decorator
>Bondage
>True Friends

Naturally she has to be just simply insane, how else could she love me?

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>>51904321

>>51904118
Looks to me like you forgot a choice (after all, you get four choices for the main thing plus two to start with for the mystery box).

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>>51904264
with what

>>51904400
Rebalanced stats and skills, though I might add more stuff.

Could someone post the cyoa where you had demon blood and had to choose a master, job, and some other things in hell?

>>51904399

before i read all this, can i waifu my siblings?

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>>51904431
This one?
>>51904468
It's explained like they're already accounted for.

>>51904431
Doesn't ring a bell.

It does remind of one where you have demon blood, choose a demon lady to serve, and then a year later get the chance to have them serve you instead (in which case you pick a house, servants, and a job - although you can also choose to mooch off of your newly enslaved demon lady, which gets you out of having to pick a job but also doesn't give you the house or the servants), or continue serving her for all eternity.

>>51904468
>can i waifu my siblings?
IIRC, technically possible but not a presented choice.

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>>51904491
No, the illustrations were the work of dante won't die, if that helps. Pic related as Big D.

>>51904506
That's the one.

>>51904369
Pretty sure you spend a choice for the mystery box, leaving a total of five.

If I do get a sixth, though,
>See me Sit with me
Lets me enslave oppai-fied monstergirls, which is well worth the otherwise increased proportion of flatties.

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>>51904431
>>51904585
Here you go, then. Were you by any chance asking for it because you hadn't seen it for a while?

>>51903209
I'm going to be honest, I like this more than the majority of the OG genie cyoa's.

>Touch me Give me
>Love me Save me
>Its me Finally

Touch me Give me is fucking broken that thanks to its reality bending powers I can (potentially) grant myself any wish if I invest enough time of course.

I chose the waifu one because

And the last one is out of respect for a fun cyoa.

>>51904646
I had it but lost it, new computer. Thank you very much.

>>51903209
There you are. Lets see how I did.

Help me Hold me : So a nerdy tech girl with social issues. Yeah ok. I can deal with this. She seems fun and we can talk tech and games and stuff.

Dailyreminderthatonlykidsdontfindseinfeldfunny: I'm ok with this. Basically maxing out my charisma.

Dont Forget us: Do I even have any dreams I remember? Well, hope my next dream is good?

bawks: well. I'm totally ok with this.

Touch me Give me : For reasons.

Are they getting bigger?: For more reasons. I'll steal all the money going to those pesky plastic surgeons.

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>>51904258

Witchy Princess build.

>Princess
Obvious choice.
>Study Room
Good for studying magic.
>Diana
Teach me to be inspiring and work on looks.
>Vinian Toast
Yummy!

>Spirit Dye
Great for witches.
>Midnight Sarcophagus
Good for witches.
>Alchemy Starter Kit
Good for witches.

>Stone King Dessian
Can teach me ancient secrets that might be helpful for magic and stuff and is good husband for me.

>Pouf
Seems nice and can teach me about alchemy.
>Suice
Fellow witch and forbidden love interest.

>Dark Magic
Good for witches.
>Charisma
Not exactly my thing, but as Princess might be good to be able to give good speeches when I must.
>Fashion
Do magic and look spectacular while doing it!
>Regal Hobbies
So I can be a better Princess.

>Reaper Witch
What I've been preparing for all this time!

>Help Test New Magic
Want to learn all the newest spells.
>Destroy a Dark Spirit
That's like literally my job!

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>>51904258
You won't pull me back into the dream, you won't do it! You wo-

>Princess
>Study Room/My Room
>Teresa
>Pancakes
>Crystal Dagger/Crystal Ring/Figure Cake
>Prince Victor of Paladia
>Sydney/Lewis
>Crystal Mastery/Defense/Combat/Animal Handling
>Crystal Knight (Shield Shards)
>Join the Fight/Search and Rescue/Assassinate General Markus

You said I was screaming when I awoke. What was I saying? I was shouting like you'd imprisoned me?

Why ever would I do that? Having my soul wrenched back from the aether must have been more painful than I recall.

Hey hey, im about to post some OC, but I need to optimize it. DOes anyone know the max file size for this thread?

>>51905364
8 mb

>>51905364
8MB is the max file size on /tg/. Or if you're talking dimensions, 10,000 x 10,000.

>>51905398
>>51905417

Thank you. Thats alot of room to play with. Rendering and re-optimizing now.

Slow night tonight?

>>51904646
Wasn't there an angel/heaven version of this?

>>51905530
OC incoming soon.

Maybe next thread at the latest.

>>51905572
Hell Invasion 3.0? If so, looking forward to it.

>>51903209
>>51903226
Glorious Rascal, Shes Really Into Femdom, Fiat Justica Ruat Caelum, Mystery Box, Are they getting bigger ?, Modern Day Taoist

>I'm a perfect leader that can instantly learn any strategy and fighting style with an extra set of floaty hands
>Modern Day Taoist + Riat + Rascal makes me Emperor Status
>Aliens literally don't stand a chance

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Its new, Its fresh! Its everything you wanted! Its OC!

This was a bit of an experiment to make CYOA using animated Gifs. Parts worked, parts did not.

By my friends? The future looks pretty awesome.

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>>51905639
Second part.

>>51902154
Several. Currently working on page two of my newest one.

>>51905639
>>51905658

Suck it SDA. You CAN make cyoa on Nuke.

>>51905639
>>51905658
It's very... abstract. Is there more?
>Vocal
>Wind

>Laurel

>King makers

Also, make the fading loop. Right now, there's a really distracting jump (in the first page, at least) every few seconds.

>>51905679
I never said you couldn't, it's just not worth it.

These are 7MB gifs for tiny dimensions.

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>>51903226
What happens if I take Lament of the Eternal Loli with Make Them Happy or Are they getting bigger?

>>51905753
LotEL doesn't have any magical effects preventing breast growth, so I assume it'd just make sure your 'natural' size remains the same (and maybe ensures that breast growing wishes are never permanent).

>>51905734
I fucked up on one of the rotos. Its animating when it should be held. Which is weird because I fixed that. Granted, the transparency optimization kind of defeats the soft god-rays.

Also, I had some ideas for companions and traveling, but this was mostly a proof of concept.

So. Community learning experience. Keep the animation tight and dont do giant background stuff or else you'll blow out the GIF or waste your file size.

>>51905751
It was worth it to add a spinning thingy behind a nuns head and to make a ladies eyes move around. So worth it.

But your right. using an unanimated background would have keept everything down file size wise.

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>>51904264
What happened to the version with items? This one...

>>51903209
Weird that my image gives energy from running but not for running, but I'll take it either way.

Shame that the blind pick doesn't give me caffeine, but ah well.

Forgot the rest of what I choose.

>>51905639
>Vocal/Percussion
>Brand
>Eden's Augers

I'm not even sure what's happening.

>>51905751
Actually, if you are SDA, what would you have done differently? Any recommendations for next time?

>>51905885
CYOA with animation. its now a thing.

>>51905905
Now do a CYOA with animated waifus

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>>51903209 >>51903226
Blinds: >>51893351

Whatever the great war is referring to in Fiat Justitia Ruat Caelum I'd be set up for it. Would take Lament of the Eternal Loli and Modern Day Taoist with my new choices. Knowing all I know my current choices are different.

Wishes: N/A
Mystery Box Wishes: Lament of the Eternal Loli, Modern Day Taoist, Its me Finally

Rather than go for a power play and pick a CYOA that would make me a god I'm going to use the first I thought of.

>>51904258 >>51904276 >>51904292 >>51904303 >>51904321 >>51904360 >>51904372 >>51904387 >>51904399
Gender: Female
Room: High-Energy Room, Study Room, Harsh Room, Regal Room
Mentor: Teresa
Breakfast: Pancakes
Gifts: N/A
Suitor: Prince Robert of Nelsland
Retainers: Tolfir, Whimsy
Classes: Combat, Defense, Crystal Mastery, Enchanting, Healing Magic
Responsibility: Shadow
Quests: Join the Fight, Clean the Storeroom, Help Test New Magic

Would've Prince Victor of Paladia but he seems too blunt and well-off. I don't want to bump heads with him or his sister, which might kill. Prince Robert of Nelsland seems like he comes from a kingdom just leveled enough against mine for it to seem like I'm being generous to get married to him. I wouldn't mine a cute waiting on me and if I can get him to be more princely I might be able to score points with his family. They seem incompetent so that shouldn't be very hard. For better or worse.

I really just want to become an enchanter capable of rivaling Whimsy. Between Whimsy fixing my room while also teaching me with Tolfir that shouldn't be as hard. Get some of that Paladian white steel and make a set of incredibly strong healing armor. Eventually get some crystal items and make some more cool things. Picking Shadow instead of just Live because I'd feel guilty about not helping around at least a little bit. When the time comes I'll just go full Crystal Knight. Until then I'll enjoy being a pampered little girl.

>>51905921
I put a spinny thing behind a cute nun and then animated the eyes of a painting! I even added sparkles and glow to a ring, God what more do you people want!

But ok. That'll be the next one.

>>51905905
What do you mean?

I understand the want to make a .gif and that you wanted to make it in Nuke, so I suppose anything goes. I can't really tell you.

Unless you're asking design wise and what not but that'd just mean you should migrate over to photoshop.

>>51906285
Design wise. I'm just messing with you about the nuke thing and trying to start shit. It's the tool I had at my disposal.

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>>51904646
Addendum

>>51903572
Thank Christ,because that's the project I'm currently working on and was worried that it was overplayed. This is Harry Potter-lite so much as it is an actual Harry Potter CYOA.

>>51903226
>help me senpai made it in

You're a saint anon.

>>51902107
LOL at the fantasy Nazis and ISIS, but I have a question is our goddess good or bad? I mean she is princess of torture which is bad, however she would be mad if we raped people which is good.

>>51903226
>Journeyman
Look at her shorts again.

>>51906796
She'd be mad because you're raping someone else not her. For whatever incomprehensible [insert character story here] reason she wants you.

I'm currently working on a CYOA and it's nearly done, i just have a lot of critique to work through before i can post/publish/release it in good conscience.

How much critique should be addressed, because i feel like if i don't at least consider seriously each point and try and work with it, the CYOA won't be as good as it could be.

>>51905803
Sir John Prior is the best companion.

>>51906900
So she is evil? Why is she enemies with Fantasy Nazis and ISIS?

>>51906920
Just post it when it's done, ya mook.

>>51902054
Is there another Woadheim thing? It seems odd I want to go back there when I dunno what it is

>>51907018
It's already been going over a year and people are probably wondering if i'm even real at this point.

How can the CYOAs be real if our authors aren't real?

>>51906920
Sounds like you have it written up for the most part. Just check it over for grammar and spelling errors. Not much else you can do at this point. Don't let it get to you, all this cyoa stuff is for fun. So long as you enjoyed putting it together you're coming out ahead.

>>51903209
My blind picks had been
>Daily reminder that only kids don't find seinfeld funny
>Don't forget us
>The Divine Nature of Comf
and the Mystery Box.

Wish I'd known the box could be picked multiple times (granting two choices each time, if I understand correctly, right?), would have gotten it a second time instead of Don't forget us.

>>51903226
From this I'll pick
>Touch me Give me
>Journeyman
I'd use the elevator to cheat the lottery and become Biff Tannen.

If I could have picked two more, it would have been:
>Memes Into Miracles :)
>Rock-a-bye Lullaby

Combined with Journeyman, I could travel the world getting married couples to conceive monstergirls then went to the future to enjoy the fruit of my labor.

>>51907260
*oh yeah, forgot to add: pretty clever and intriguing ideas, especially for the mystery box options.
Good job, hope to see more CYOAs from you.

>>51902054
Never seen this one before.
>Penance
>Bludgeon, Bows, Shield
>Charismatic, Tactician
>Chasity Rune, Efficiency Rune, and Comfort Rune
>Resurrect and Vampire for my one handed warhammer
>Seeker and Chill for my Crossbow
>Barrier and Repulsor for my Kite Shield
>Feather, Radiance, and Weathered.
Cool seems a little redundant doesn't it?
>Titan
>2 more levels of Toughness, level 2 Regeneration, Raw Material 2, Natural Weapons 3, Burning Pain and Against all odds
Protection Sphere
>Totem, Heal, Fortify, Ward
Personal Attack
>Missile, Harm, Cripple, Blind
>The Everwalking Knight and the Band of Friendship and fellows
Big factions and legitimate threats are for the weak, I take up drinking buddies and roadside attractions as my army.
>The Longbowman, the Atoning Knight, the Wolfmaster, The Templar, the Escaped Gladiator, The sister, The living wall
My character is some kind of Overlord type class. Trying to deal to keep as many resurrected foes around as possible along with defensive and bludgeon skills. He's Cowardly, has a hard time controlling his minions, and focuses on whether or not history would remember him kindly rather than being kind.
It's very short, and I'd like to expand on this guy the next time this is posted, but I'm kinda tired right now.

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>>51906920
I don't know is kind of vague what you are saying
I think you could post it and then do an update with the criticism to this new vertion!

>>51907231
I'm going to uni for a /gd/ degree and this CYOA is the first i'm using InDesign to make, so i'm exploring the tools of the trade, in a way.

As for having it written up, it's largely the same as the last version, about 60% the same i think.
That one was popular, but requiring 4 pdfs to post it made it unpopular after a short amount of time.

>>51906920
I'd say when you think it'd make for a solid version 1, post it then. Plenty of authors make tweaks after they've released the somewhat final product.

>>51907373
>but requiring 4 pdfs to post it made it unpopular after a short amount of time.
I'll take Dark City for 100, Alex.

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To the anon that is making the Made in abyss CYOA could you post a list of your CYOAS so I know what to save in my fastanon folder?
and that I love the idea of making it into various CYOAS that become darker and darker!
and I wanted to say that you got an awesome taste!

>>51907413
Not quite whatever that one is, but i've been working on and off this CYOA for years, including a v1 and a revised v2, and this v3.

>>51907404
>>51907371
I still want to address the flaws of the last version, which makes it a hard decision.
There's still too much to address to simply update it after, sadly.

>>51907477
Then I'll take Necromancer for 200, Alex.

>>51902154
I've made a few actually. I've also made a low effort RYOA that's earned more (You)s in one post than all my serious work ever did.

>>51907495
Indeed, all 59 + cover pages of it.

The changelog of changes would probably not fit in a single post, and that's not even 1/5 of what i have left to address.

>>51903750
>>51903763
Okay, I've given the new version a shot, taking many more quirks than in my previous build. Didn't manage to pay off for all the gifts I owuld have wanted by 8 points.

Starting Points 5

>Harmless -2
>Worshipping +1
>Delusional +4

>Wealthy -3

Current Points 5 again.

>Closer +1
>Religious +2
>Decorator +1
>Consent Not Required +3
This still doesn't say if she's try to go at it in public or not. Makes quite the difference.
>Love Bites +2
>Feeding +2
>Addict +2
>Diary +1
>Charisma +2

Current points 21

>Fetish -2x2
>Youthful -3
>Videogames -1
>Beautiful -6
>Together -7
>Good People -4
>Good Taste -4

End result -8

I wish I could take more than three Yandere type traits. I'd be happy to add Dependant and Stalking, which would give me 5 more points.
I'd still be 3 short, but it'd be closer (guess I'd have to give up the Fetish upgrade and Videogames).

All in all, I like the new options, but I think the rebalanced points were taken a bit too far (though not by much, add an extra point to a few quirks or lower the cost of a few gifts and it'd be just right) and it made the CYOA less fun.

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>>51907552
wow dude good luck!

This thread needs more CYOA's with some THICC in them

>>51907477
If you feel that updating it after release to address further criticisms is what you need then just take the extra time to polish off what's already done with the critique you already have until you feel you've addressed everything. I've already waited this long. I can keep waiting.

>>51907626
I just checked, it's currently 4093/2000, so it would take 3 posts to post the changelog now.

>>51907712
Thank you for your patience. I'll tell you now there's +3 minions per school, and +2-4 companions per school. Combo minions are more of a thing too.

>>51906993
why does al qaeda hate ISIS even though they are both muslim extremists? Just because they are both evil doesn't mean they have the same goals.

>>51907769
Actually my reasoning was originally they were rival gods that she wanted to kill.

Also holy shit rereading that made me realize I made so many grammatical errors. It's a good thing I'm not studying English or something.

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>>51907735
>3 posts
man I can't wait to see it finished!

>>51904258
So, I'm getting the vibe that we're the bad guys and we're just blaming everything bad on Verend. Is that just me, or is anyone else feeling it too?

>>51908064
That's just you.
Verend is literally trying to ruin a bake sale. That's Saturday morning cartoon villain tier evil.

>>51907971
I have 30808/2000 characters/words left, which is 15.4 posts worth of valuable user feedback to deal address.

Some i disagree with and ignore, some i've already addressed prior to reading and thus just delete, and most i have to read through and change.

>>51908064
Perspective, perspective. What does it matter? If you and yours benefit from it you shouldn't care. Well, that, and the obvious demonic theme that they got going on and how the whatever they're called witches siding with you basically make you right no matter what.

>>51908074
Or, rather, our sister (who man-handled our soul in a very uncomfortable fashion) is blaming it on the Verendians. Funny, how she seems to always blame everything on Verendians.
Not "Verend," mind you, but "Verendians." As in the whole lot of them. What an unusual way to look at civilians of a despotic monarchy, who have no influence in how their country is run. It's almost as if our dear sister is a biased source of information.

>>51908113
The enemy always seems to look monstrous, and I don't see how the she-Ghostbusters being on Eclan's side makes them morally right.

Does anyone have a homosexual cyoa? Like not in a faggy type of way but literally for/about homos

>>51908203
Also she kidnapped their princess and can potentially force her to marry you.

But see, I somehow doubt any of that was Beri's intent, ya know? I imagine it's all supposed to be taken at face value.

>>51908240
Even more telling than just capturing their princess, they kept her in a fucking dungeon of all places. Why would you capture a diplomatically important member of the enemy's royalty, yet keep her chained in a dungeon instead of in a tower-cell? Trading away a princess in poor health will only make matters worse, so why chain her up and throw her into the oubliette?
I'll tell you why: because they were never planning on trading her away in the first place.

>>51908214
Pls halp. I really need this

>>51908064
Careful, last time someone thought that it started a big stupid shitstorm

>tfw you only like writing up companions
That's normal..., right? Would you play a CYOA about picking companions and nothing else?

>>51908565
Sounds like a waifu CYOA.

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I've probably made tons of grammatical errors and the balance is probably fucked, but I'll fix those some other time.

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>>51908582

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>>51908591

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>>51908606
Halfway there.

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>>51908310
Like I said, that doesn't seem to be the intent.

Sure, looked at through a jade-tinted or even clear lens you'd likely see it that way, but this is meant to be viewed through rosy eyes. We're even asked what syrupy breadstuff we want for breakfast - it's clearly not supposed to be a psychological horror story or anything.

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>>51908630

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>>51908639
Oh yeah, it's all happines and gumdrops, and not a smidgen of evil to be seen. Just like Coraline, or the Stepford Wives.

>>51908718
Those two /are/ intended to be more than what they seem on the surface, anon. I just really doubt that Beri was trying to pull that on us.

>>51903628
>submitting at least four images
Scum of the earth

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>>51908582
>Race: Dwarf

>Gender: Female

>Soldier Type: Nano-Soldier

>Powers: Psionic Barrier 3 (19), Psionic Regeneration 3 (16), Targeting Computer 3 (13), Bionic Eyes 3 (10), Adaptability 3 (7), Organ Mulcher 3 (4), Psionic Strength 2 (2), Psionic Press 2 (0)

>Weapon 1: Unarmed (Barrier/Pain Train/Superheavy/Electrified)
>Weapon 2: Plasma (Bolt Launcher/Vaporizer/Lightning Infusion/Plasma Flare)
>Weapon 3: Unarmed (Superheated/Superheavy/Barrier/Pain Train)

>Armour Mods: Waste Disposal [9], Cleanser [8], Servos [7], Impact Gel [6], Bioplasma Battery [5], Charger Pack [4], Upgrade [3], Overclocking [2], Bulwark [1], Resistance [0]

>Pleasure Mods: Radio

>Planets: Kamalo, Transylvus, Lazaria, Quadroonic

>Respawning Method: Reconstitution

>Boons: Fellowship

>Companions: Theodore Franklin Roosevelt [5], Ming Hua Liang [4], Nikolai Sikorsky [3], Ajeenda Beburo [2], (open slots for teaming up with other players)

>>51908582
Very nice, I gotta dive in to make a build tomorrow. You still working on that mutant thing?

>>51908214

I know of exactly one about picking your homo husband... you should bank on the lack of gay shit and make your own!

>>51909019
Please post it. And I'm working on the beginnings of an Eldritch Entity cyoa so I don't want to switch my current project for now.

>>51909037

Why the fuck would I save that?
>I don't wanna do it... can't someone else do lol?
Every fucking time

>>51908582
Name:Serna Lennof

Race: Innuri

Soldier Type: Nano-Soldier

Powers: Psionic Regeneration 2
Targeting Computer 3
Mind Reading 2
Bionic Eyes 3
Psionic Strength 2
Psionic Juggernaut 3
Psychogenic Focus 3
Rise to the Challenge 2
No Sell 2

Weapon 1: Seperator, Melee (Vibro-Weapon, Monoblade, Superheated, Jet Booster)
Weapon 2: Suppression, Ballistic (Full-Auto, Gatling, Ammo Belt, Gauss Rails)
Weapon 3: Singled Out, Energy (Sights, Charge-Up, Siege Mode, Longshot)

Armour Mods: Cleanser, Waste Disposal, IV Tubes, Gun Mounts, Lightweight, Charger Pack, Bulwark, Upgrade, Mini-Turret Pods, Whirlwind of Blades

Pleasure Mods: Radio

Planets: Cadyria (I want that sword, dual wielding with Seperator will be fun)
Transyvuis
Lazaria
Kamalo

Respawning Method: Reconstitution

Boons: Hybrid - Indomitable

Companions: Nikolai Sikorsky, Gerald Boomhauer (The man knows the importance of Perimeter Defense), Ahlam Abbas, Kattusha Isinbayeva, Free Slot for other Players

Soldier-type was completely decided by Respawning method, not gonna lie. Also, when you saw the robo-skeleton is Robust, is this Final Bosses are going to have a hard time busting it as it runs it's ass away or do I need to avoid dying near one of those dudes at all costs.

>>51909128
But I'm not asking someone to make it. I'm just asking someone to post the one that already exists

>>51903209
>>51903226
>See me sit with me
>Has Science gone too far?
>Acknowledge me and think me be?
>Mystery Box
>Are they getting bigger?
>Touch me and Give me

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>>51908214
This one makes you a heroines' girlfriend. Does that work?

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>>51908582
I was going to go for a really cautious build but then I noticed the respawn abilities.
>cepalian
>darkhand
>mind readin L3 (17)
>psionic cloaking L3 (16)
>psychogenic focus (13)
>psionic mindwipe L3 (10)
>psionic barriers L1 (9)
>Psionic regeneration L1 (8)
>insubstatial L3 (5)
>Rupturing scream L1 (4)
>Soul Rip L3 (1)
>Stormhands L1 (0)
I'm not interested in insta-kill abilities. In a fight what matters is incapacitating your foes. I can then execute them one by one for delicious soul powers.
>Melee (rapier)
>>electrified
>>pain train
>plasma (a little raygun on the belt)
>>bolt launcher
>>fuel tube
>explosives
>>shaped charge
>>clip
>>EMP
>>fusion

>cleanser
>waste disposal
>iv tubes
>jump jest
>impact gel
>lightweight
>vampiric assimilator
>grappling hook
>resistant
>bulwark

>radio

All planets
Screw it. I have infinite tries, so I'm going to succeed no matter what. Yeah, sure, I'll destroy my own sanity but that's a reasonable sacrifice for saving all those worlds.

>pass the mantle
(apparition would be great for chatting up the snow witch)

>hybrid (sorcerer)
>exemplar (L3 mind control, L3 psychic potential)
I'd like to see what psychic potential does to my darkhand abilities
>succubus
After my mission is done I will be too dangerous, too warped, to remain in the world of the living. The succubus will be my retirement.

>tena
>ming hua lang
>katyusha isinbayeva
>Mercielle von ziegler
>ajeen beburo
the hot chicks

>>51909278
no actual male heros dude

>>51909315
lesbians are homosexuals

>>51909315
>This one makes you a heroines' girlfriend

Way too much waifu shit in these threads.

Don't even get me started on them Saber posts.

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>>51908214

>>51909315
>>51909347
I actually expected their to be at least one male hero by the time I went through all of the female ones.

A little bit disappointing.

>>51909395

>>51902054
Not waifus
>>>51903209
Not waifus
>>51903750
Waifu
>>51904258
Not waifus
>>51904264
Not waifus
>>51904491
Not waifus
>>51904646
Waifus
>>51905381
Not waifus
>>51905639
Not waifus
>>51908582
Not waifus
>>51909278
Waifu

Man, a whole THREE waifu cyoas!!!

>>51908310
Because your sister flipped shit after you got assassinated. She's unbalanced, but don't pretend the CYOA hasn't shown Verend is the aggressor in this war.

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>>51908064
>Muh every setting is actually grimdark and it's all a conspiracy!
Is this what 40k does to your brain?

>>51909403
>post a CYOA in response to anon wanting homosexual CYOA's
>even say "This one makes you a heroines' girlfriend"
>Anon still surprised it's a homosexual CYOA
Que?

>>51909414
Referring to these threads as a whole. You're blind if you don't see it.

I bet you're a saberfag.

>>51909414
Don't respond to people who bitch about genres they don't like. They just want to vent asshurt at someone.

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>>51909506
>waifu genre
>saber genre

You're a fucking faggot

>>51909523
What are you hoping to accomplish? Reverse psychology?

>>51909553
He probably just wants to waste time anon.

Like the vast majority of people here.

>>51909577
Don't acknowledge it. Don't let it know.

>>51909492
I don't care if it's about homosexuality or so, but I was a little disappointed in the lack of F/M options.

Not even one.

I only saw the CYOA and responded to it's responses, not looking at what it had responded to.

>>51909414
Fell for obvious bait, friendo.

>>51909614
There's always the Incubus cyoa, unless you already know of that.

>>51909634
Not bait.

Waifu + Saber = Lonely obsessive neckbeards

>>51909634
>waifu shit is an obnoxious cancer that takes over the threads years ago
>there's more and more of it over time
>people spam their bullshit all the time now and it's completely impossible to get away from it
>suddenly it's bait to say that this isn't /wcyoag/

>>51909772
>whining accomplishes anything
>people will agree with you if you whine

>>51908582
sweet

>>51909790
Talking things out accomplished pretty much every time a new general split off from here. Otherwise all of those other CYOA threads would still be here.

Face it, you have more than enough content for your own threads, many times more than necessary. Why are you ramming your inane bullshit down everyone else's throats?

>>51909772
Talking about the saberposting, faggot. the CYOA got posted a couple thread ago, and saberposting died off quick.

Waifu posting is still clogging up the thread, though.

>>51909819
If you're talking about something else then why are you linking it to me?

>>51909808
> I don't like a thing other people like, stop doing it!
Actually eat a dick and calm down. If you want different content, request it or make it yourself. Bitching about something that doesn't fit your interests only serves to eat up thread posts.

>>51909808
>Why are you ramming your inane bullshit down everyone else's throats?
That would be you.

waifu faggots getting all pissy

>>51909918
It's a valid point no matter how juvenile your response to it. Otherwise there would be no reason to have separate threads at all.

This whole thing is retarded on all sides.

>>51910046
Welcome to 4chan.

>>51910264
Wonder what happened to that one anon who was working on finishing that gallery.

>>51908582
Name: "JACK"
Einarcol
Nano-soldier

Level 3 Targeting Computer
Level 3 Bionic Eyes
Level 3 Adaptability
Level 3 Organ Mulcher
Level 3 Psychogenic Focus
Level 3 Psionic Regeneration
Level 2 Psionic Barrier
Level 2 Mind Reading

Energy: All mods
Ballistic: All mods
Explosive: All mods

Upgrade
Overclocking
Gun mounts
Servos
Impact Gel
Resistant
Bulwark
Adrenaline Shot
Grappling Hook
Jump Jets

Reconstitution

Overmodded x3

Sanity's Eclipse
Succubus


Super Soldier LFG. Overwhelming firepower with weapons from various upgrades, letting me use all three pimped-out weapons simultaneously as the AI aimbots enemies. Energy can snipe enemies from vast distances or deal tremendous damage if I'm protected with Siege Mode, ballistic never needs to reload and can constantly fire a barrage of bullets, explosives wipe out swarms of fodder or deal immense instant damage. I'm fairly tanky too with good mobility so it's hard to gank me, but it in our best interest for me not to die due to Sanity's Eclipse.

Warning: cannot stay in one location for too long due to Succubus. That might stop some otherwise sound strategies. I also have no melee/unarmed weapon or offensive psychic powers so will need to be covered by allies in that regard.

>>51910305
got aids from you asking all the time

>>51910352
That's good. He should finish it faster with help.

>>51910389
why should he do anythin for you

>>51910264
Kaiju War, Border God, Electric Underclass

>>51910264
never gonna happen m8

>>51910474
IIRC, the aforementioned anon who was working on it had added text to somewhere between one to two thirds of the options, judging by that preview he had posted quite soon after announcing that they'd be completing the gallery in question.

If he truly won't be finishing the job, then it'd be nice if he'd at least post a full version of the partially complete gallery (the preview being unreadable by design).

>>51908666
I kinda prefer v2, but holy shit that Evolve respawn is awesome. Injected continue to be my favorite class

>>51910479
You're here so probably.

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>>51910503
I hope so. It's one of three or four galleries that were never finished. If any of them are completed I'll be glad.

>>51910640
>three or four galleries that were never finished
Is that counting the ones where the person didn't even post the blind picks version?

>>51910640
Not the image I wanted, but oh well.

>>51908666
I assume the bosses are immune to the Darkhand method of respawning. How does that work, then, if they kill you? Likewise, won't the demons get wise to you breaking out of your coffin in the Pandora's Box method of respawning and just try and destroy your body entirely if you die enough times?

>>51910658
Yes. There are maybe one or two others if you only count ones that compiled the images.

>>51910640
he said that his computer crashed and none of the text got saved, or something along those lines so he wouldn't be continuing.

>>51910426
>anythin

Sounds like a lowfat chip.

>>51910788
You sound like you have experience. Fatass.

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>>51904646
Maybe it's also one of his favorites.

It actually *is* one of my favorites, solely because of Lynneth. Choosing her would give me my ideal lifestyle.

>>51905545
Yes.

>>51910640
Why do you care so much? Seems like the galleries are popular only by a few people spamming multiple pictures, and the full version never get much responses

>>51910812
More disgusting waifu shit.

Fuck off.

>>51908606
>Psionic Potential
>Level 2
>Your energy is still drained, but it still causes harm
Uh, typo? Your energy is drained, as per usual, and you're still harmed, as per usual? I'm assuming one of these is supposed to be cancelled out (guessing the latter).

>>51910812
Does this end with a chance to waifu God?

>>51910875
I don't know how to soften the blow so I'll be direct:
God isn't a virgin

>>51910893
God is also a MAN

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>>51910807
I like most people have eaten chips. But nah I'm a skinny nerd. Have a pizza cyoa.

>>51910893
Just curious, never seen the angel version before and hadn't seen >>51906368 either.

>>51910904
Are you sure about that?

>>51910830
Because they're a way of involving the audience and usually creative. Any decent OC is welcome here.

I didn't submit any pictures to the unfinished galleries, but I still find ones without my input enjoyable. And whatchu talkin bout, not getting responses? Scroll up ya git.

DAILY REMINDER THAT WAIFU CYOAS ARE FOR LONELY NECKBEARDS

>>51906368
>>51904646
Lucifer could have been good. Instead she talks like a drunk transvestite.

>>51910875
No. Instead, it's an archangel named Michelle (who probably should have been the one in charge of Heaven's army, since that was the archangel Michael's position).

>>51910904
If there is a God, I doubt it has a gender.

>>51910965
Would you happen to have that?

>>51910945
>And whatchu talkin bout, not getting responses? Scroll up ya git.
Generally speaking.
I don't like them, mostly because people are twats and post multiple pictures. The fun is supposed to be getting your image in right? They fuck it up for everyone else

>>51908666
>666
Oh cool, my suggestion got in.

>>51904258
>>51904276
>>51904292
>>51904303
>>51904321
>>51904360
>>51904372
>>51904387
>>51904399


>Princess
Well, I was a man in the last? next? - er, otherlife. There were some good things and some bad things, but I've always been a bit curious.
>Regal Room
>Julius
I didn't manage to fulfill my potential in my last life...Ah, no, don't cry! I didn't mean it like that, I'm sorry, sis. Still, I believe in words and law, so I'd like to work with Julius. He's cute, too, and I'd be sad if he gets in trouble.
>French Toast
Oh, sis, I have so much to tell you about. French being near the top of the list, what with us being royals.
>Shield Shards, Sealing Spear, Insightful Spyglass
D-don't look at me with those pitiful eyes, please. If I really was killed in our home, it'd only make sense I prioritize protecting myself when I'm going to be in harm's way! And, um, I'm a bit of a voyuer...eep.
>Princess Katelyn of Verend, Prince Victor of Paladia, Stone King Dessian
I'm sorry, sis. I'd like to talk with her atleast, even if it's only to learns more about them - increases our strategic options, I meant. Prince Victor looks lovely. I'd like to talk more with Dessian, learns how I was, before.
>Sydney, Lewis
Yes, he can sends me back home. No, I don't want to. My life there - it wasn't a bad one, but I don't mind moving on past it. Being here would let me do more things -and I couldn't bear to let my sweet sister cries anymore. To be honest, I'd feel safer if I have someone who can heals on hand. I'll do my best to keep her on the narrow!
>Defense, Etiquette, Manipulation, Academia (Law, Culture)
I - like to spend more times with you, sis.
>Diplomat
>Adopt the Orphaned Princesses, Search and Rescue, Free a Friend
I'd like to give back, take care of others in similar positions to me. I'd like to clean the storeroom too, but maybe I'd asks the help to take care of it?

>>51908606

Rise to the Challenge 3 seems kinda OP. Considering it's going to make you better than the bosses in literally every area they are strong in or make you faster than foes who are notable for being faster than a supersoldier.

>>51910975
Most monotheistic religions refer to their god as male, I too think of God as a male since that's what I was told all my life, but being all powerful who's to say it couldn't be whatever it wanted.

>>51911056
senpai all the true monotheistic religions out there are just sub-divisions of one. Who is to say what it'd be like if there was more than one monotheistic religion?

>>51911070
Sounds like the idea for a CYOA !

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>>51911026
Yeah, here it is.

>>51911056
Well, I don't particularly care for organized religion. It seems more logical to me that the creator of the universe wouldn't have a gender as we know it, if it even has a form at all.

>>51911091
Thank you friend.

>>51911070
>are just sub-divisions of one
Which? I forget.

>>51911126
Abrahamic or Yahwehist, take your pick.

>>51911030
Ah, I see where you're coming from. Those people are scummy and should be strung up, but they don't ruin the gallery itself. Choosing (from images that made it in) ones that you like, then seeing what you end up with is fun. It's a bit like gambling, but you can't lose. Even if you wait for the reveals to make choices, it can be a nice bit of wish fulfillment.

>>51911111
>wouldn't have a gender as we know it, if it even has a form at all.
True, but people like a boundary, something to make sense of things. Plus when you stop to think about all gods are human creations, so of course they will reflect us in some way.

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>>51911111
If you made the universe and everything in it, wouldn't you want to be a cute immortal girl shitposting on 4chan about how God is a jerk?

>>51911194
Shut up Cagliostro no one likes you.

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>>51910781
Are you mistaking the new anon with the original author whose GIMP crashed or something?

>>51910812
Here, have the latest version.

>>51911198
>Shut up Cagliostro everyone likes you.
fixed

>>51906368
That's the asshole 'edit' I presume? (Originally she was named Lucia, granted same thing but that's too fucking blunt.)

>>51908666

Super Soldier
Name: Keldan Dematius
Race: Volandir
Type: Nano-Soldier

Powers: Mind Reading 2
Organ Mulcher 2
Targeting Computer 3
Bionic Eyes 3
Adaptability 3
Psionic Regeneration 3
Psionic Barrier 2
Psionic Strength 2
Psychogenic Focus 2


Weapons:
XM37 “Grendel” Auto-sense Nano-Rifle – Full-Auto, Gauss Rails, Armor Piercing
M315 “Thor” Missile Launcher – Shaped Charge, Guided Missile, Fusion
M41 Personal Combat Knife – Vibro-Weapon, Monoblade, Pain Train
M8 “Cavalier” Nano-power armor – Upgrade, Overclock, Bulwark, Lightweight, Impact Gel, Waste Disposal, IV Tubes, Resistant, Mini-Turret Pod, Selfix Mode

Boon: Fellowship

Death Method: Reconstitution
Squad: Ahlam Abbas, Nano-Soldier
Ajeenda Beburo, Sorceror
Gerald Boomhauer, Biomorpher
Shirley Godfrey, Biomorpher
The Brother of Us All, Crusader
Free Slot (Other Player)

Definitely like the new update, especially the change to equipment. Boons and drawbacks could use a bit more depth though.

>>51903226
Does the helping hands' "exchange cup sizes for boobs of all kinds" thing only work like a direct swap (meaning they can't, say, average out a flat chest and huge boobs into two pairs of tits of equal size), or can they siphon the size from any one breast and into any other breast (meaning they could fix and/or induce drastic size differences even in a single pair of breasts)?

>>51911164
Usually I have not enjoyed the final product of galleries. The blind picks I get never give me anything I expected, and I don't like RYOAs for the same reason.
Then there's how random all the options seem to be. There's no connection, so many options that don't appeal to me giving me very few things to pick from. I'd much rather a normal CYOA where the options relate to eachother or share a theme.

>>51910919
I'll have a large pepperoni pizza with ham and extra tomato please.

>>51911250
>having a fetish for lopsided breasts
whyyyy

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>>51911266
Box.

>>51911290
> >having a fetish for lopsided breasts
I don't, I'm trying to find out whether the power could be used to help people afflicted with 'em.

>>51908582
>Though they may seem slow, giants are actually quite intelligent
What does their speed have to do with intelligence? How fast are they?

>>51911569
Is English not your first language? Being slow is a common euphemism for stupid.

>>51911590
The fuck did you just call me?

>>51908606
So if you have lvl 3, or even lvl 2 self-feeding rage, wouldn't one symbiote making you angrier make the other one do the same, and then make the first symbiote make you angrier again? Isn't this an infinite loop or something?

>>51903209
>It's you it's me it's this see?
Very confusingly worded.

But then I kept reading and realized that the Papika option is far better because I don't need to steal someone's body to get the same result, or use Make Them Happy to get powers as well.
But with Make Them Happy I would need Are they getting bigger to avoid sagging.

>Make them happy
I want Are they getting bigger because ridiculous breasts are not for me, but having to be molested by the hands is even less attractive.
It's basically the same as Papika, minus getting a new identity handed to me, but I also get powers.
I'm going for whoever has powers similar to Nyaruko but with different hair, and hips
>Touch me Give me
Basically like Come with me And you'll see, minus having to cheat. Also improves the odds for my fantasy to be real and not be shunned for it or otherwise have people react negatively.
>Just B Urself lol

I don't know what to do with my remaining 1 option for the primary cyoa or 2,5 options for the mystery box options
I am very dumb. This helps me greatly.

>>51904646
Mhyrienne
Extended contract.
Fuck everything else, i get to live with and serve the bringer of the Omnissiah.

She's not the bringer of the Omnissiah ?
She is now :^)

>>51911590
>>51911596

He's saying you're not a cunning linguist, anon.

>>51911836
>She's not the bringer of the Omnissiah ?
>She is now :^)
Or she decides she doesn't like the sound of that and hooks you up to some of her toys to shut you up, since you chose to remain the slave instead of becoming the master.

>>51911886
You're right, I've never eaten pussy before.

>>51905658
>>51905639
THINGS. ARE. MOVING.
Very cool, the plot of it is hard to follow though.
>Brass
>Laurel
>King makers

>>51903750
>be the yandere
>Curvy
>Average
Basing it off the image, not the text. "Big", to me, would be closer to "ridiculous"
>Thicc
Hips and butt beats breasts personally.

>Dependant (6)
>Worshipping (7)
Best options. Gotta be the best, gotta use this as motivation. The part about "needing love in return" isn't necessary.
I don't know why this turns me on. That's pretty messed up. but what's new
>Harmless (5)
I like the less-yandere versions of Stalking, Monopolizing and Delusional. I don't need extra traits to get that, it'll happen on it's own. I'm not allowing to pick more anyway.
You should be the best so your partner wants to spend time with you - and be friendly to their friends. Be the perfect girlfriend, not ruin their life. Even if it hurts.

>Insecure
And tries desperately to hide that, along with the yandere-ism
>Girly girl, Wealthy
Submissive isn't necessary. You should enjoy pleasing because you do natively, not because some new trait forces you to.
>Paranoid, gifted, filthy, classical romantic

>Great cook (2)
>Fetish, bonus (-2)
Yes please
>Perfect hair (-3)
>Talented (-6)
>Beautiful (-12)
>Good people (-16)
>Adorable (-25)

>Closer (-24)
Yes. hot
>Secret ingredient, bonus (-20)
>Religious (-18)
>Decorator (-17)
>Consent not required (-14)
>Collar (-10)
I'm assuming these two have me as the target, otherwise I don't want it. and I'll hav to find the 7 points elsewhere
>Marking (-6)
Nope, only markings on me.
>Tech Savvy
I thought of that already, while making the build. The best waifu should be the one who seems to already know your favorite foods and everyone you're into.
Don't worry why she knows.
It's because she's perfect for you.
>Bondage (-3)
Self-targeted, or I need to find 10 points somewhere.
>Love bites (-1)
cute
>Addict (1)
hot. thank you for adding that.
>Diary (2)
hot
While Charisma is fun, that's a bit too manipulative for my tastes... probably

>>51912051
>Lonely
Probably the most honest one, even if I like CHildhood friend more. It's more romantic. And it fits more with my fantasy
>Dream: To please you (-4)
Your attention and Your undying love are not attractive. I don't need or want love and attention, I just want to give it.

>>51911250
it works for every boob

i just kinda assumed this was in some mythical fairy tale land where all boobs were equal already instead of real life, but it would be able to work on each one individually like that yes

>>51906833
Its from the show that got cancelled

rip journeyman, we hardly knew ye ;~;

>>51905753
well, are they really getting bigger? :)

with make them happy you'd still get giant anime tiddies, but they would grow exponentially slowly

the modern day lolis lament, you dont know how long itll take, but for now you're painfully flat

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>>51912051
>everyone
Poop, meant everyTHING.
Like, turns on and stuff. It should be much better if she just knows the weird things you like and suggests it herself, right? Less embarasment and shyness and stuff?

>>51911889
Nah, if she remains in control she's less likely to out me to Big D, and i have all of eternity to make her warm up to the idea.
I mean, i can't hope to deceive her superior mind and make her construct the Omnissiah through trickery.
I don't like trickery anyway, i'm sure she'll see the beauty of the Omnissiah anyway, at least after some milleniums.

>>51912070
>it works for every boob
I wasn't questioning that part of it.
>i just kinda assumed this was in some mythical fairy tale land where all boobs were equal already instead of real life, but it would be able to work on each one individually like that yes
So, to confirm: The "size exchange" is NOT limited to simply swapping sizes around?

>>51912101
yes

>>51910919
One medium onion bacon pizza with pasta and chicken wings pls

>>51908582
Name: Wolf Hunt
Race: Giant
Type: Darkhand

Powers:
>Psionic Strength 3 (1)
>Psionic Mindwipe 3 (3)
>Psionic Barrier 1 (1)
>Psionic Regeneration 3 (3)
>Mind Reading 2 (2)
>Psionic Cloaking 2 (2)
>Psychogenic Focus 1 (1)
>Attract/Repel 2 (2)
>Psionic Press 2 (2)
>Psionic Clones 3 (3)
>Insubstantial 3 (3)
>Soul Rip 3 (3)

Weapons and Armour:
>Weapon 1 (Melee - Gloves): Vibro-Weapon, Superheavy, Jet Booster, Pain Train
>Weapon 2 (Ballistic - Handgun): Gauss Rails, Twin Linked, Armour Piercing, Hollow Point
>Weapon 3 (Ballistic - Handgun): Full-Auto, Gatling, Ammo Belt, Recoil Absorber
>Armour: Cleanser, Waste Disposal, Jump Jets, Servos, Impact Gel, Lightweight, Bulwark, Projectile Deflection, Adrenaline Shot, Pain-sharer, Tobacco, Fancy

Planets: Cadyria, Irion, Kamalo, Transyvius
Respawning Method: Pass The Mantle
Boon/s: Exemplar
Drawback/s: None
Companions: Fox, Nikolai Sikorsky

Name: Fox Hunt
Race: Beastman
Type: Gene Fighter, Sorcerer

Powers:
>Psionic Juggernaut 2 (0)
>Mind Reading 2 (2)
>Psychogenic Focus 3 (3)
>Psychic Arms 3 (3)
>Biotic Organ 3 (3)
>Pheremone Release 3 (3)
>Mind Control 3 (3)
>Psionic Potential 3 (3)

Weapons and Armour:
>Weapon 1 (Plasma): Vaporizer, Disperser, Fuel Tube, Lightning Infusion
>Weapon 2 (Energy): Charge-Up, Siege Mode, Energizer, Armour Puncher
>Weapon 3 (Energy): Reflection, Sights, Red-Blue Focus Shift, Longshot
>Armour: Cleanser, Waste Disposal, Lightweight, Vampiric Assimilator, Resistant, Mini-Turret Pods, Pet, Med-X Shot, Combat Drugs Cocktail, Psionic Muscle Fibers, Fancy, Radio

Planets: Mars, Deyphus, Elduras, Quadroonic
Respawning Method: Crystal Shell
Boon/s: Hybrid
Drawback/s: None
Companions: Wolf, Shirley Godfrey, Mercielle von Ziegler

Set up my own duo. Wolf and Fox, sworn brothers! Wolf fulfilling both roles of assassin and bodyguard, he gradually wears down enemies from afar before closing in for the kill. Likewise, Fox controls the rampant mobs and floods the battlefield with superior firepower.

Does anyone have that dark magical girl CYOA? the new one?

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>>51912126
Don't think an old one even exists.

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>>51912173
Thank you!

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>>51912173
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>>51912220
>Age: Average (+5% M, -5% P)
While I would've preferred keeping both at 100%, I guess I do use magic more.

>Pit: Carnal (Despair, Wicked)
Gonna continue being a lewd magical girl. Affinities as such because clones, free stuff, pocket dimension, etc.

>Magical Glamours
> Undermine S
Mainly for the clones, but swimming through the ground sounds neat, too.
> Abandon C
So I can use my abilities for fun and profit without people finding it odd.
> Twist S
Teleportation, item creation, pocket dimension, an undo-button... All sorts of neat stuff.
> Infestation C
Mainly so I can keep 'em away from me, but I could probably use them for stuff like cleaning tiny spaces or something.
> Alteration S
So I can make myself (and others) as sexy as I (and/or they) want.
> Invocation C
Free stuff is free stuff.
> Culminate B
Two (or more) clones going at it, constantly refilling from each others' climaxes... Possibly the best way to regenerate mana.

>Physical Glamours
> Mental C
Free stuff is free stuff.
> Defense S
Become nearly unkillable? Yes please.
> Reserve C
Free stuff is free stuff.
> Stamina B
So I can keep going for a while without resting (and use mana to keep on going for longer still).
> Siphon C
Free stuff is free stuff.

>Tool: Tome
Needed the extra glamours.

>Outfit
> Cosplay (Depravity S)
I feel that the passive you get from that rite is just too good to pass up for someone who recharges via lewds.
> Hybrid (Shadow, Alteration)
It's not like I'd be transforming stuff at all times, plus the Shadow stuff is pretty neat. Also the offensive capabilities seem good in case I'm accosted by Phantoms or some other nasties.

>Familiar: Shimmer
Smart assistant is smart.

>Boosts: None
I need both outfit traits, and the other boosts would just make me even more out of balance.

>What to do: Help People
Closest to what I'd be doing most of the time, although I don't think I'd be as "PRAISE ME" about it.

>>51903750
>no be-the-girl option
Ha, well then.

Athletic
Average
Thicc

3 Harmless
4 Worshipping
8 Delusional

Confident
Optimist
Tomboy
Submissive
10 Poor
Relaxed
Innocent
Scarred

8 Great Cook
-1 Forever
-6 Income

-5 Decorator
0 Her's Forever / Good fucking luck getting anything out of this.


Now I have a slave, loadsamoney, and immortality. Pretty good.

>>51912295
Ah, fuck.

3 Connections
4 Religious
6 Addict

Simply Insane
0 To please you

Done. And no, becoming a yandere doesn't interest me because I'm not a faggot and also refuse to have my mind altered.

>>51912090
>Social anxiety
I think I count as having sexual intrusive thoughts, but I most definitely don't have any "acts" I need to do, so I shouldn't qualify for OCD
>Depression
DOn't think I qualify enough to get Paranoia. Then again, I don't talk with enough people to have anyone to be paranoid of.
>Isolation
>Alcohol
I should not use that power. But I will.

These are still genuinely the best companions I've ever seen in any cyoa.
I'd go mental with Correy Hollern. Which is a shame since she's the prettiest. I need companions that don't rely on me, who don't need me, but don't mind me around either.
>Melania Wetmore
>Fenelia Meitzen
All seem nice and don't need me so there's no stress.
Sisile would probably not be a good idea with my two other companions, but her quote ruined her anyway.
Karon was an option until she needed my attention. Can't have that. Would break my brain.
I don't think any of the remaining would fit well with me, but I'm forced to take a third...
>Marabel Herrick
She won't bother me as much as the other ones will

So,so, how is that 2hu cyoa coming along?

>>51912420
You have to link the fire first.

>>51912076
>14, 20, 18, 15, 7, 17, 19, 20, 3, 9, 12, 2, 11, 6
>3 minor, 1 major

>Age: 14+4
18. Would prefer younger.
-1 Minor dispensation to set
>Age: 14
>Height: 20
Well that was awful. Wasting 2 Minor dispensations to get
>Height: Little taller than average
And even that is far too tall.
Not off to a good start.
>Skin color: 18, Caucasian
>Eyes: 15, Grey
Weird
>Hair: 7, halfway
i can survive with dirty blonde
>Identity: 17, eventually fade
Perfect
>Personality: 19, tomboy
Not a fan. Really, really not a fan.
>Considerations: 20, 3, 9
>Device
Completely useless
>Family Framework
>Loose ends: Remove old me
Turned out better than I feared.
>Split 1 Major into 3 minor
>Honor student
>Rich
Guess I'm a tomboy now.

>>51912464
I put on my wizard hat, robe and my straight sword.

>>51910919
If I'm eating alone, let's go with that 3-topping Small Pizza and two sides.

>TOPPINGS: Bacon/Ham/Onion
>SIDES: Dessert Pizza/Cheesy Bread

It's all so easy!

>>51902054
>tfw was motivated to make a cyoa
>lost it all after writing down a lot of options
Huh. Intros and balance and point costs are my enemy. I think I could finish a cyoa if it were just putting options I like in without worrying about overlap or how the options make sense together.

>>51912612
>Huh. Intros and balance and point costs are my enemy. I think I could finish a cyoa if it were just putting options I like in without worrying about overlap or how the options make sense together.
Have you considered making one of those "here's an assortment of things, pick X of them"-style CYOAs?

>>51912645
He included balance though so it still wouldn't be good.

>>51912666
He can do whatever he wants and anons would give feedback, satan

>>51912173
>>51912186
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>>51912205
>>51912220
>Age: Old (+15 mag, -15 phy)
>Pit: Carinal (Wicked, Despair)

Because lewd magical girl gets best powers! And while I don't think the affinity gives the 'pit' bonus, if they do, they're very useful for actively countering anything going on, at least for the start.

>Glamours:
Magical:
>Fury: None
>Despair: Abandon C
>Wicked: Deviance C
>Vanity: Exhibition C
>Obsession: Petrification A
>Cardinal: Alteration S Invocation S Cuminate B

Really this build lets one shape their enemies in however which way they'd want... And the rest is for generating mana, while Petrification is mostly for gathering cast speed. Not the worst of flaws, especially considering....

>Physical:
>Mental C
>Defense S
>Reserve S
>Siphon B

...The passives are ment for being unstoppable on a kill/mana level, without mana restrictions the prior build for emotional exploitation power buildup a massive boon to this that while with some physical flaws... nothing some alteration abuse can't change.

>Weapon & Outfit
>Ampoule
>Thematic
>Impactful
Recycle a lot of the already established ridiculous amount of mana I'm using, and a LOT of sudden burst power. If I'm going to fight to a point I'll be doing more than just granting wishes or something, as unkillable as I am I'd rather it just ends immediately.

>Familiar: Sh'ema Grath
Totally not because I'm a sucker for their character they are based on... That and stacking Invocation and Sh'ema would probably let something either become far bigger than they ever should, or far smaller. Wonder if Alteration combo's with Invocation to make someone permanently tiny.

>Boost: Magical

What'd I just say about absurd magical power a bit ago?

>What Do: Help People

I dunno, how much can a person who can change people into whatever, gain power through that, and grant (physical) wishes of almost any kind do with that power? Especially if that power may potentially end up instead recharging even more power?

>>51912645
I have. Skip the intro, just present choices. Not like it matters much who gives you the options and why
>>51912666
More like have some powers be more powerful, without worrying too much.

>>51912826
>Age: Old (+15 mag, -15 phy)
>Boost: Magical
Old starts with +15% P, -20% M, actually, and with that boost (+20% M, -15% P) you'd just end up at average levels for both (same as regular magical girls of average age).