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Anons - is it better to rule in Hell or serve in Heaven? Would you choose to make the world a far better place and live as an unexceptional citizen, or would you wish for great power and control in a dystopia?
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>>51738854
Hell
Dystopia
i can make the dystopia my utopia
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>>51738854

I'd rather live as ordinary citizen in much better world. But I might be tempted by great power depending on just how much you mean.
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>>51738854
Depends. Which one guarantees a better quality of life for Me, Myself and Moi?
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>>51738854
Isn't Heaven considered paradise? Serving someone isn't something I consider to be great.

Great power honestly.
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>>51738854
I think the duality of heaven and hell is fucking retarded and a huge detriment to any story it's seriously used in.
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Here's that dirty Indiana Jones CYOA that was promised a few threads back.

This is my first time doing a CYOA, so as my mother always says, bless this mess.

Let me know if you want another texty, game-bookish CYOA, except maybe better planned and done in paint.net. I'm between serious writing projects right now, so I'd love another excuse to write smut.

Also let me know if I'm a fucking faggot who should do a line of Clorox shots. I already know that, but it never hurts to get a reminder.

>>51738854
Great power, probably.
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>>51738960
It's only paradise in the sense of "everything was so much better before we started figuring things out and got responsibility to go along with it". So basically the same thing as a lobotomy.
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>>51738854
Serve in Heaven. Living as an ordinary citizen is fine as is for me, and if the world gets better, life will also get better.
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>>51738854
You should never offer me this deal, because I always choose to rule in hell and then make the most terrifying cyber dystopia I can think of.

Yes, there will be cyberdemons.
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>>51738976

Omg! You included my Angel shrine idea!!!!!
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>>51738729
Ah, anon, posting and out-dated... oh wait, that's the up to date version.

Weirdo.
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Old thread: >>51720672

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>>51739098
but you just shoot those until they die
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>>51739187
that is why you have multiple cyberdemons, all shooting in all directions simultaneously.
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>>51738854
If you held great power, or any real power at all, why would your home resemble Hell for long? Do you suck? Or have you confused appearance of power with actual power?
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>>51738854

>No option to serve in heaven's army and fight against hell

Come on man
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>>51739229
>why would your home resemble hell
It has always been my dream to run a magical cyberpunk dystopia.
Running hell would be literally ideal. Especially if I can release robocops to clean up all the crime that all the dead criminals do.

Double especially if I get to declare war on something, like bugs, or the surface, or heaven, or space.
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>>51739359
Guess that the new POTUS can be pretty sexy if you're into older men, but why would you announce your desire to have sex with him on a Cambodian cheese making board?
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>>51738756
This one I quite like, though I wish the Slice of Life quest had been more comfy rather than starting you off with your soul having accidentally been sold.

My build for this would be:
>Biotech

>Synthetic skin
>Translator
>Pheromone gas
>Hacking Tools
>Alternative model
>Anatomically Correct
>Wardrobe

Alternative model is to make her look like she's in her early 20s.

I'd rather not pick any quest and just enjoy life.
If I must though, I'd pick mastermind, but then goof off and make it more of a private roleplay thing than a genuine effort to take over the world, so I wouldn't take/spend any extra points from it.
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>>51738743
Combat Savant
Antique Diving Helm
Pathwork Rucksack
Caesar
Fuck it I'll take all the coins

>>51738782
Magical superheroes are so lame and her costume sucks too but her powers are so good
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>>51738756
Where's the way to accidentally turn her into an AI goddess? Sheesh.
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>>51738782
psychic hero : physical PK
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>>51738756
>electric
>hidden arsenal ( with upgrade), wing blades, hologram projector, synthetic skin, sensors
>alien pistol, anatomically correct
Quest: mastermind

time to keep doing some MAD SCIENCE with a misaka bot
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>>51738976
I think I must be doing it wrong. If you take Fame and just load up on companions, then can't you reduce the AT to 0 or subzero? Or, if that's not allowed, you reduce it to 1 and spend the rest on tools. It becomes impossible to fail unless you roll a 1. And if you just buy more tools (if you run out) by selling artifacts, then you autowin everything.

That...can't be right, can it?
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>>51738782
Shifter Hero (DNA Shifter) is still the best - Mutant and Alien Heroes' powers explicitly come from their DNA, and anything else (like the intended powers) are just a bonus.
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>>51739808

Can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing it out.
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>>51740594
2/9
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3/9
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4/9
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>>51740617
5/9
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>>51740621
6/9
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>>51740625
7/9
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8/9
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>>51740642
9/9
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>>51738193
I've posted images of half the enemies you will be facing.

I don't have my PC with me at the moment but if someone can repost it that would be nice.

There will be 20 companions that are more distinct and unique from the v.2.0 of Hell Invasion. Also there will be a Zenyatta like character (monk with magic wumbo jumbo).

There will be a choice of respawning type (one will be where you literally are a chestburster for the demons) and some boons and drawbacks.
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>>51740756
>one will be where you literally are a chestburster for the demons
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>>51740756
>one will be where you literally are a chestburster for the demons

L-lewd...
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>>51738976
I want one about fighting aliens
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>>51741497
Author here. Still willing to take suggestions
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>>51741857
Why not let you be a lewd symbiote that can bind to girls and then you work as a team to do heroics? You're the source of the powers then but she's the body.
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>>51741497
>choose both
gross
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>>51741857
Can you use Alternative Discharge to get more than one extra fluid, and if so, do you get a point for each fluid, or just the one?
What exactly does the bit about "defaults" in Auxiliary Storage mean?
Is there going to be a non-self-targeted shapeshifting power?
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>>51741913
Kainda cuck since she is gonna have sex with other men. You will have sex with other men too as you will be part of her.
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>>51741497
>>51741857

every time I try to make a build I lose interest when I see that rather than being empowered by busting a nut I get weakened.

idk why it's called pervy superhero when it should really be called abstinence super hero. what a stupid mechanic.
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>>51742063
Why would she have sex with other men when you can please her with your tentacles?
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>>51742087
Because she is a slut like all other heroes?
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>>51742082
It's called pervy hero because just about every villain or ally is trying to get some with you, either because of your sexual prowess, to receive power, or because sexually violating you is a great way to beat you. And getting weakened when you bust a nut isn't a problem if you just don't bust a nut, or have enough energy gaining methods that busting a nut becomes trivial.
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>>51741913
Hmm, I'll have to figure out how is make that work. I do know that there's a lewd parasite cyoa being worked on currently, so if I can't make it work here, we can all at least look forward to that :)
>>51742052
I can add in that it can be taken more than once, but how many fluids are you considering discharging?
Defaults are supposed to be where your power is normally stored. I.e., balls of you have them, tits if you have them, or your ass if you have neither balls nor tits. I'll see what I can do to clarify that.
Also, yes, there will be a shape shift others power added.
>>51742082
Well, there are several modifiers that make it so that getting off is considerably less detrimental. And if you have an idea for a modifier and/or archetype that would make it more to your liking, please let me know!
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>>51742110
A slut for your tentacles.
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>>51742087
>>51742220
Where do the tentacles come from in all this
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>>51742206
>Defaults are supposed to be where your power is normally stored. I.e., balls of you have them, tits if you have them, or your ass if you have neither balls nor tits. I'll see what I can do to clarify that.
So by default you store your power in one of those locations? In that case, I'd like to repeat the Alternative Discharge question for Auxiliary Storage.

As for the whole "how many are planning to take" thing? I'm mainly just curious as to what the limits of the system are (for now, at least).
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>>51742246
Ah. Well, I suppose there is no limit, though it doesn't give you additional points.
Again, I'll clarify that for next time
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>>51738854
Well, there are only a couple of things I really want. I'd like to live a really long time without aging, I'd like to find true love, it'd be nice to be smarter, and I'd appreciate being able to live comfortably without working. I'm selfish enough to forego improving the world to get some of those things— up to a point; I wouldn't end civilization just to find true love, or something like that. But I'd definitely give up X-ray vision or magical power to make a substantial improvement in the lives of everyone else. I'm just one guy, after all.
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>>51742225
How else do you anchor yourself toher?
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>>51742334
Why would you need tentacles though?
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>>51742360
Look if you don't know anything about lewd symbiote clothing just say so.
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>>51742410
>clothing
Where was this mentioned?
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>>51739173
not a faggot
>>51738729
foggot
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>>51742476
That op doesn't forget, they steadfastly refuse to add them relevant infos because they're a dummy.
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>>51742357
>Fisher
>"Hey, I HAD to eat that surfboard!"
>Translation: a double-dog-dare is srs business

Every time I read this, I wonder what she considers a prank, and why the police get involved. I picture her pretending to be a scary shark and faux-chasing children around the beach— I'd bet a lot of her pranks trade on her playing games with children in the role of "horrible shark monster," really— or ruining a game of beach volleyball by spiking the ball so hard it pops. And the police are sick of her, because they know that Fisher is basically a good egg, but have to investigate complaints about her anyway, and she's infuriatingly smug every goddamn time.

I'd still pick her, though. Those torpedo tits, man. And the mandatory cuddling.
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>>51741857
Mh, well corncerning the Lust motivation, I'm not sure why it comes with a minimum one ally and one adversary clause. Wouldn't that make more sense for the Hero?

Choosing that, I think I'd rather be altogether unable to gain any points from adversaries and have tools cost more but get the regular amount of points from modifiers.

Sidekicks are not mentioned. Does their cost stay the same?

Anyway, the Reabsorption modifier seems like it can easily be exploited, i.e. I can just take my free modifier point without any intention to ever actually eat my own fluids.

>>51742281
So what you meant to say is that these "default" locations are not valid options because already in use?
I can't really think of any other parts that would work well for this though.
Couldn't they isntead be made to swell and increase in sensitivity?

One more question, with regard to the Phylactery modifier, is it willed or can the detachment happen mechanically, by accident?
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>>51742887
Pretty much all the modifiers can be exploited.
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>>51742440
Too bad this was never continued (I assume that's what the vast amount of empty space at the bottom was about).
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>>51742899
Middle option here really ought to be Succubus/Incubus.
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>>51738743
Artistic Enhancement, Alien Abduction, Bald Eagle.
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>>51742813
>Cooperative Machines
>Sentience
>Gross Manipulation
>Regeneration
>Vow of Knowledge
You learn new things every day -- even if they're excessively trivial things. "I learned I left my phone over on that ledge." It's basically a free point.

Anyways, spend a lot of time raising AIs for a number of tasks. See about creating the perfect artificial Dungeon Master, maybe. Pray that the Super Regeneration doesn't give me Super Cancer. Maybe it can help with the whole "damaged cells from aging" thing.
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>>51742206
>>51742281
If you have multiple storage places (via Auxiliary Storage), and also have Elastic Capacity, can you control the rates at which each storage place fills up (or even move around the stored fluids between the storage places)?
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>>51738743
>Rosetta Tablets/Egyptian Eye/Medusa's Visage
Speak ALL the languages.

>>51738854
I'd be lucky if I got to be a hobo in Limbo.
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>>51742985
>not being a succubus (male)
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>>51743344
That's because I wanna be an incubus (male)
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>>51738854
As much as I wouldn't want Hell...

>"Heaven has no taste."
>"Now-"
>"And not one single sushi restaurant."
>A look of pain crossed the angel's suddenly very serious face.
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>>51741857
Can you clarify something; can we take multiple Secret Identities/Day Jobs?
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>>51739297
>Faction
5th Auxiliary Legion
>Perk
Perfect Loyalty
>Monsters
Cryptfalcon
Siren
Hellhound
Myrmidon
Djinn
Salamander
Wolpertinger 2x
>Nemesis
Princess Okai Charnos
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>>51743393
Sushi is awful though.
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>>51741857
Transformation Sequence - one form has boosted powers but is a constant drain to keep active with the other form having weakened/suppressed powers.
Alter Ego - two forms with separate modifiers, powers, etc. and possibly motives.
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>>51742813
Shapeshifting:
Gross manipulation
Regeneration
Permanency

Spirit Powers:
Gross manipulation
Improved telekinesis

Vows:
Silence
Honesty
Justice
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>>51743357
>not incubus (female)
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>>51743557
Lemme guess. You don't like raw fish?
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>>51743601
>>51743344
>>51743357
When will you guys stop being retards(faggots)?
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>>51743601
That's gay.
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>>51743615
>doesn't like women
No anon, you are the gay.
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>>51743632
You mean woman (male)
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>>51743614
There's no need to be a mad, it's just a meme (joke)
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>>51738854
Serving in Heaven sounds pretty lame. The expression gives me this image of faggy androgynous angels running around doing menial chores for a deity that's supposed to be omnipotent. But I do generally find it really rewarding when CYOAs offer options for helping out people and making others happy.
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>>51743673
>faggy androgynous angels
Someone hasn't been reading the source materials of angels.
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>>51743725
Where do I stick my dick
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>>51743567
To elaborate Transformation Sequence could be something like a magicgirl getting into her super power persona or Bruce Banner hulking out. I Imagine it would be a good modifier. Alter Ego on the other hand could be a Hero the moonlites as a villain for extra cash or could be a full blown split personality with goals directly counter to you character and could be put into the Allies, Adversaries and Nemeses category. Taking both could net you a situation like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde or the aforementioned Bruce Banner/Hulk depending on how you interpret that relationship.
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>>51743750
You would dead even before you knew what you were seeing.
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>>51743777
That's not what I asked
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>>51743725
Where in the Bible does it talk about babies radiating tribal tattoos?
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>>51743777
that doesn't answer his question
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>>51740594
>Princess
>Regal Room/Rose-Tinted Room/My Room
>Diana
>Pancakes
>Figure Cake/Spirit Dye
>Prince Victor of Paladia
>Whimsy/Naivety
>Fashion/Regal Hobbies/Etiquette/Animal Handling
>Diplomat
>Help Test New Magic/Enjoy the Party/Clean the Storeroom

Wonder how long it'll take me to forget about Earth.
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>>51743812
Ezekiel 1:16
This was the appearance and structure of the wheels: They sparkled like topaz, and all four looked alike. Each appeared to be made like a wheel intersecting a wheel.
There are some really monstrous-looking ones.
>>51743815
>>51743784
You can try through its rings but I think that will burn.
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>>51743891
What do babies have to do with it though?
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>>51743812
Same place it talks about fat little babies with wings (i.e. I doesn't. Though in the older version of the Bible angels were described as bizarre things such as a fiery wheel covered in eyes. Such things where basically ripoffs of the old Mesopotamian depictions of angels.)
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>>51743922
Ask God.
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>>51743931
Dear God:

What the fuck do babies have to do with it?
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>>51743944
i put them there to confuse mortals
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>>51743985
You're a right dick
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>>51743944

"lol i unno"

[Makes Platypus]
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>>51738854
I choose to rule in Heaven of course.
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>>51743601
What would that be?
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>>51744275
If you go by the DnD distinctions an incubus (female) would be more violent and rapey while a succubus (male) would a seducer/corrupter/manipulator.
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>>51742206

Can you stop raising the prices of everything please?
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>>51743603
Exactly.
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>>51744371
Great, another person who dislikes sushi without having any idea what sushi is.
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>>51742887
For lust, those are the point values, not how many you have to take.
I may add another motivation specifically for battle that does that.
Also, I'm confused by what you're saying about the default locations. It sounds like you're mixing it up with elastic capacity.
Phylactery is supposed to be by will only.
>>51743419
I don't see why not so long as you can explain how they fit together.
>>51743567
>>51743766
I could make alter ego an ally/adversary. That would actually be pretty cool and check off something that someone else had requested before. Also, there is a rage/beast form in the powers section. I will see what I can do to add something like what you're asking for for the magical girl style transformation.
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>>51744421
sashimi is what is commonly mistaken as sushi
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>>51743272
I don't see why not
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>>51744316
Yup. In fact, expect a cost reduction of many powers in the next update.
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>>51744455
I'm personally indifferent about sushi and sashimi.

I prefer to eat raw salmon and cod alone though.
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>>51744496

Thank goodness, also will you be adding more ways to get points as well?
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>>51741857
I want more rivals. The nemesis addition was nice and all but I want actual new characters.
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>>51744535
I'm considering adding nemesis schemes, or global threats. But I haven't really gotten very far with that.
Any ideas/suggestions/requests?
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>>51744599
Got any ideas/requests?
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>>51744421
Sushi is raw seafood plus rice and kelp. If you don't like raw seafood, you basically just have rice and seaweed.
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>>51744433
A for battle motivation? Wouldn't that be just the same as hero/villain sans the alignment?
Anyway, I was suggesting those changes for lust because it seems to make more sense to me. Being that your motivation, gaining adversaries would not help you uphold justice like a hero, or fulfill your ambitions as a villain. There isn't really an in-universe reason for modifiers to be less effective (unlike with apathy) whereas the reason tools could cost extra is because no one really cares to help you by providing them since you'd use them selfishly.
But that's just my point of view, not gonna insist if you think otherwise or believe it wouldn't balance out well in terms of points.

Anyway, you're confirming that sidekicks, unlike allies, don't have a cost reduction with the Lust motive?

It's possible I got confused concerning the Auxiliary Storage. Can you make some example of a spot where you figure it would be plausible for the storage to occur?

Mh, then the Phylactery too (similarly to Reabsorption) can provide free points without any need for the player to make themselves vulnerable by leaving their power source behind (or, you know, a different downside like an unintentional detachment when it's most inconvenient).
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>>51743725
Idiot. Christian angelogy has both freaky eldritch monsters AND humanoid angels. The first two choirs, the angels and archangels (not to be mistaken with Archangels) look just like humans.
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>>51741497
Name: The Conqueror

Both

Villain

Heroic

Female

Breasts: Flat
Ass: Petite
Penis: Huge
Eye Color: Red
Head Hair: To ass
Body Hair: Bald
Hair Color: White
Voice: Smooth

Restricted Infusion (+1p) Vaginally
Restrained Donations (+1p)
Phylactery (+1p)
Enhanced Production (+1p)
Hypno‐Junk (+1p)
Sticky Situation (+1p)
Edging Amplification (+1p)
Forced Denial (+1p)
Reabsorption (+1p)
Waste‐Not (+1p)
Elastic Capacity (+2p)
Coming Apart (+2p)
Nutrilicious Output (+2p)
Shock and Awe (+2p)
Super Swimmers (+2p)
Generator (+3p)
Seed Bearer (+3p)

Butt Plug of Power (-2p)
-Super Swimmers (Reversed)
-Teleportation
-Mind Control

Chromantium

Adversaries
-The Milkmaids (+3p)
-Barbara Sidekick‐No‐More (+3p)
-Coochella (+6p)
-The Mountaineer (+3p)
-The Trupta (+6p)
-Doctor Robotica (+3p)

Nemeses
-Andromeda the Amazon (+2p)
-The Keeper (+2p)

Wealthy Philanthropist (-5p)

Core:Military (-1p)
-Mod:Opulent (-1p)

The Plucky Youths (‐2p)

Self‐Sustenance (‐1p)
Thermal Immunity (‐1p)
Minor healing factor (‐2p)
Disease and Toxin Immunity (‐3p)
Magical and Psychic Immunity (‐4p)
Complete Physical Immunity (‐4p)
Enhanced Reflexes (‐1p)
Adaptive Muscle Memory (‐2p)
Super Senses (‐2p)
Super Strength (‐4p)
Super Speed (‐4p)
Enhanced Mind (‐0p):
Flight (‐1p)
Density control (‐4p)
Vibration Emission (‐4p)
Teleportation (‐1p)
Whore‐aura (‐2p)
Get Sprung (‐3p)

Perfect Healing Factor
Mind Control
Disintegration Beam

Me and my army of Amazons and Monster Girls shall take over the world.
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>>51744739
>Female
>Penis: Huge
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>>51744620
How about a Yandere loli who's power is to know everything about you?
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>>51744752
"Female" was their choice for the "body gender type" part, which just means that their body looks clearly feminine - so much so that everyone will automatically assume that they're a woman.
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>>51744752
She's a futa. Female is her body type.
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>>51744604
>>51744604
>global threats.

A yandere that wants to wipe out the world to just the 2 of you?, A queen of a far off planet that wants a mate?, an astertiod heading for earth
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>>51744778
A woman. With a huge dick.
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>>51744752
The both option means you become a futa and the female option is just your general bodytype.
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>>51744798
Is this your first hour here or is there any other reason why you'ren't aware of stuff like futa?
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>>51744787
>A yandere that wants to wipe out the world to just the 2 of you
>not the perfect waifu
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>>51742887
>So what you meant to say is that these "default" locations are not valid options because already in use?
>>51744433
>Also, I'm confused by what you're saying about the default locations. It sounds like you're mixing it up with elastic capacity.
>>51744706
>It's possible I got confused concerning the Auxiliary Storage. Can you make some example of a spot where you figure it would be plausible for the storage to occur?
I think the point was that the "default locations" lists where the energy gets stored in a decreasing order of importance (i.e. if you have balls, the energy is stored there - if not, breasts, and if not again, butt). It doesn't seem like the other ones are invalid choices at all (again, if you have balls, then you could still pick boobs and/or butt as Auxiliary Storage locations).
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>>51744829
Exactly, a futa. Not a woman.
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>>51740594
Prince
Regal room
Diana
Waffles
Crystal dagger
Shield shards
Living bomb bag
Belus
Tolfir, Reginald
Charisma, fashion, manipulation and dark magic
Adventurer
Hunt a giant monster
Assassinate General Markus
Defeat the Crystal Overlord

>>51744249
Cecaelia
Edge of the Abyss
Weapon mastery
Light bender
Current shaper
Magma triden
Bone armor
Syria, Thresh, Jaceen
Frozen sea, Leviathan's return and Mimics
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>>51744433
>I may add another motivation specifically for battle that does that.
How about a motivation for being more of a mastermind type (as in, less front-and-center cover-story stuff and more about doing things in the shadow - could be hero, could be villain, perhaps even neither)?
What about some kind of neutral-ish motivation that's less flacid than Apathy, but also not as rigid as Lust?
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>>51744249
>Race
Sharkfolk
>Background
Kelp Gardens
>Abilities
Climate Shifter
Sneaking
Alchemy
>Special Item(s)/Artifact(s)
Crystal Pearl
Magma Trident
Shell Shield
>Companions
Blue-Claw
Eaomond
Basco
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>>51744927
No claims were made for or against the person being a woman (except your claim against it), only that people would automatically assume that the person was a woman (at least until decisive evidence against it was shown to them).

Which, to be frank, describes futa rather well (i.e. as long as they keep their male parts hidden, you'd never know they weren't female).
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>>51745034
>a motivation for being more of a mastermind type
Interestig idea.
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>>51745086
Still pretty gay though
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>>51744697
The key ingredient of sushi isn't raw seafood. It's the cooked vinegared rice, which is then combined with any of vegetables, fruit, meat, fish (raw or cooked), seafood, fried tofu, egg, seaweed, soybean paper, etc., etc.
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>>51742520
That's what enrages me too. They think they're proving some kind of point, or something. People just don't wanna miss out on previous threads, and people like to check out the Pastebin before asking for a CYOA. What point is he trying to make?
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>>51744887
I don't see how such a yandere couldn't be both a global threat _and_ the perfect waifu. After all, where does it say that you have to prevent global threats? Heck, I'd bet a villain might actively work towards enacting one (or more) of them.
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>>51745215
its going to be hard to believe but there's people who don't like eating cooked vinegared rice.
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>>51745236
He's said before, he hates the idea of generals and that this is a general. He thinks not using general in the name, or including backlinks and a pastebin of links, somehow removed continuity from the thread and makes it less of a general. The thred/throg/throb thing is just his idiot brain's idea of humor.
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>>51745253
>>51745215
I've actually never had vinegared rice.

Or sushi.

I just know I hate fish, and raw fish especially.
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>>51745265
>that feel when constantly choke on fish bones whenever I try to eat fish
They're pretty good otherwise though
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>>51745265
Than don't eat sushi or sashimi.
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>>51745303
Fish is slimy, smelly, and has a weird metally taste.
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>>51745241
I'll try and phrase them in such a way that there's still a downside if you're a villain. Or maybe I'll have to restrict them based on motivation (and I'll be adding more motivations too)
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>>51744315
Does an "incubus (female)" look like a man, and vice-versa for the male succubus?
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>>51745314
I meant cooked fish.
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>>51745360
Cooked fish does too though.
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>>51745312
"Than" is for comparisons, "then" is for sequences, you silly billy.
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>>51745322
If a waifu has downsides she's a shit waifu.
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>>51745371
I don't know, man. It tastes pretty good. Don't know why it'd be slimy, and considering it's cooked.
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>>51742357
Is there really any other option besides Fisher Price? She's kinda awesome besides mild concerns over the lack of remorse over the deaths she caused that one time. Teaching kids how to swim, acting as a wildly effective lifeguard, smug as hell, real tall, muscular other things.
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>>51742899
>Incubus
>Induce desire, Generic Magic, Corruption, Hypnosis
Go around fucking hot chicks. Simple as that.
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>>51745434
>remorse
Why do people make such a big deal over this?
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>>51745373
Yeah I don't care.
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If the author's here, I'd like to say that the lack of spacing is making it hard to read this.

Also, the term "Exoskeleton" almost literally means "external skeleton"... But that's just me getting really technical, so I guess that can be ignored.
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>>51745682
What does the X mean? Feels like there should be a description, like how most lvl -1 are base Human abilities, but what's a lvl 0 exo skeleton supposed to be like?
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>>51740594
>Princess
>Bedroom
Honeymoon
>Mentor
Alexander
>Breakfast
Vinian Toast
>Gifts
Starshot Parasol
Living Bomb Bag
Weather Ball
>Suitor
Prince Zang of Flanere
>Retainters
Death
Jason
>Courses
Tactics
Chivalry
Healing Magic
Force Magic
>Long-term Responsibility
Master Doctor
>Quest
Join the Fight
Destroy a Dark Spirit
Enjoy the Party
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>>51745799
Personally, I think it's that it simply does not exist... But that's just my guess.
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>>51745799
It means nothing. If it (or any technological trait) is at level 0, you simply don't have it.
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>>51745953
>>51745976
I thought you always had the exo skeleton on
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>>51745164
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>>51746073
Do you
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>>51746035
"Technological Traits - Gain no benefits on level 0 as they have not been installed."

If the trait is level 0, you don't have it. The only mark to start with an Exo-Skeleton is Mark 6.
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>>51745329
Well it would be a bit of a homebrew thing so depends on what the DM wants?
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>>51746090
Do I what?
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Did the Anon's Imouto update happen yet?
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>>51746107
I was just wondering how you actually get all the powers.
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>>51746217
Your original question was "What does the X mean?" and "what's a lvl 0 exo skeleton supposed to be like?". The answers to those are, X is n/a because technological traits do nothing at level 0; and a lvl 0 exo skeleton is not having an exo skeleton.

As for where the powers come from. The ones that aren't technological traits, they come from genetic manipulation of some kind as it states at the top that you were selected because of your genes.
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>>51746318
That makes sense. The whole mark 1-7 stuff got me confused thinking you needed the exo skeleton to have the powers
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>>51745402
Maybe the rest of the world gangs up on you and tries to keep you apart?
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>>51746580
I don't see how that's a downside of the waifu and not the world
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>>51739297
>Freelancer
>Nemesis: Princess Okai
>Perk:Perfect Loyalty
>Monster:Dragon
Excuuuuuse me Princess
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>>51746111
No
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>>51744433
So does the body part energy storage system work? I mean for penis it's obvious but for vaginas it seems a bit weird base line, especially with Elastic Capacity. Does their butt or breasts swell up shrink based on how much vaginal fluid they squirt? I think it would make more sense that their mons pubis/labia were the part that swells up and gets more sensitive with Elastic Capacity. And if a character has a non-flat breast and takes Alternate Discharge (Milk) would they automatically make the breasts a storage area or would you also want to take Auxiliary Storage to go with it?
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>>51745434
One neat thing about this particular CYOA is that it raises lots of interesting questions about its characters. In Fisher's case, we have to ask why she's in this program. She sounds like an aggressive, confident person who wouldn't have much trouble getting a date—particularly given her physique. So why is she here? Because she drives all her partners nuts, most likely. They probably get sick of her shit around the 20th time she's questioned by the police, especially after she blows it off and gets in trouble again a week later. Or possibly she radiates smugness at an intensity that incapacitates most humans. We don't know.
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>>51747448
>he doesn't like smug monstergrills
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>>51744249
Cecaelia living on the edge of the Edge of the Abyss
"I suppose my talents might be good for unraveling the details of this regicide."
>Light Bender
>Weapon Mastery
>Enchantment.

>Crystal Pearl
>Beast's Maw

Xianta, Eaomond, and Sea-Drift will aid me in exonerating myself. Also they want a cut of the rewards they think they're getting.

>The Frozen Sea (Climate Control)
>Leviathan's Return (Ancient Mount)
>The Maelstrom King (Blocking)
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>>51744249
>Merrow
Reading Shadow over Innsmouth lately, going for the deep one
>Edge of the Abyss
>Weapon Mastery,Enchanting, Summoner, Blocking
>Bone Armor and Magma Trident
>Blue Claw and Xianta
A Crab Frodo and another Abyss Dweller seem like excellent additions to my team.
>Maelstrom King, Stranger's Arrival, Protect the Princess
I'm glad there are a few quests that involve sneaking. I was hoping for a few scenarios where Xianata would sneak around for a bit then report back to Blue Claw and I for us to storm in.
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>>51744249
>Merfolk
>Mage Sphere
>Current Shaper/Climate Shifter/Light Bender
>Crystal Pearl/Ancient Mount
>Gregor/Syria/Blue-Claw

>Blood Fish Swarm/Leviathan's Return/Abominations

The crystal shows me a vision - I must lead the Swarm and the Leviathan to the workshop where the Abominations are made. There, they will tear one another apart, and we shall be saved. If we are to survive, this must come to pass.
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>>51747448
Fisher's my choice, but there are some pretty obvious ways in which a relationship with her could go horribly awry.

Worth it, though.
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>>51747892
You could say the same for all the others.
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>>51738854
Could I rule hell and turn it into heaven? Otherwise heaven.
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>>51738976
Rolled a 20 sided dice 5 times for a total of 68 (average: 13.6):
9,16,8,17,18
rolled a 20 sided dice 1 times for a total of 12 (average: 12):
12
Fame!
Pet Monkey, Ninja, Magical Girl (300/600)
Amazon (Success, Sell) (350/600)
Catacombs (Success, Sell) (400/600)
DOOM (Success, Sell) (450/600)
Atlantis Success, Sell) (500/600)
Sacred (Success, Sell) (550/600)
Ruins (Success, Sell) (600/600)
Broke exactly even but I am the greatest and most famous adventurer.
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>>51738854
>implying I get either of those options
>implying I don't get consumed body and soul be the Great Old Ones
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>>51738729
Anons always go on about waifu this and waifu that all the time, and I can understand why. People get lonely.
But in the depressive state I'm currently in I just wish to be left alone in a place a maximum comfort to try and forget about my woes.
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>>51748072
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Is Italics kill?
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>>51748122
No, he's cuck.
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>>51740594
Princess
Triple Room, High Energy, Study, Harsh
Elizabeth
TOAST
Warp Crystal
Simon
Simon and Mercutio
Elemental Magic, Healing Magic, Enchanting, Boost Magic
Adventurer
Join the fight, Hunt a giant monster, Enter the Tournament

ADVENTURE!
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>>51738782
Alien Hero and Alien Suit sound pretty rad.
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>>51740594
What's the most "evil" build you could make here?
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Heres a little thing for MAX Comfy for you guys. Take OP's post here >>51738729, expand it with >>51748313, if you chose the waifu option in both of the cyoas, take this >>51748290, then finish it off with a nice pizza between you and your new waifus.
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>>51748329
Something something killing
>implying killing is ever evil
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>>51741497
I choose neither.
Mostly because I really don't think I would honestly touch any strange objects IRL.
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>>51748329
Be an assassin and kill your sister to take over the throne?
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>>51748409
You touch yourself.
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>>51748443
Point taken.
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>>51748436
Does it say anywhere in the CYOA who sits on the throne and who the heir is?
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>>51748436
I mean, true. Especially if your weapon of choice consumes souls.
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>>51748490
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>>51748436
>>51748474
>>51748490
According to Beri, the way the monarchy works here, the king nominates which of his offspring will be his heir. This way siblings aren't encouraged to kill each other, since that'll almost certainly disqualify them from inheritance. It also means you have as much of a shot as anyone else of taking the throne.

So no hurting your sister.
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>>51748674
Who is the king?
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>>51738976
Could use some dullahan smut CYOA what with the growing number of anime that contain it these days.

I'd honestly love to see a CYOA centered around being a dullahan even if it wasn't smut. (though smut preferred)
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>>51748681
Your dad.
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>>51741857
Are you going to be putting in that body disassembly of both self and others power you mentioned a number of threads back?
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>>51748689
And who's my dad?
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>>51748727
He's never given a name in the CYOA.
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>>51748727
The king.
Keep up here.
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>>51748727
I'm your daddy.
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>>51748683
I would prefer being with.
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>>51748741
Yeah, what's the deal with this?
>>51748743
>>51748746
So what if the king dies before he pick the heir? Or the chosen heir dies? And then the king dies right after?
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>>51748762
It could always be one of those CYOA that lets you choose to either design a waifu or design yourself at the beginning.
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>>51748708
Planning on it
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>>51748352
so what if i make an egg, pepperoni, pineapple sub on a pizza?

From Scratch -10
pineapple
pepperoni
eggs
mugs vanilla root beer
so $14
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>>51741497
Poinus Weanus
Villain
Mild Mannered
Body Gender: Female
4 3 1 4 1 5 2
Restrained, Production, Hypno, Sticky, Edging, Denial, Sharing, Waste-Not, Elastic, Coming Apart, Nutrilicious, Effecient, Superswimmers, Generator, Open Tap, Seed, Adaptive
Cock ring of POWER, Ring of Erasing
Chromantium
Wealthy Philantropist +1
Advanced (Core) Opulent Hidden
Magical, Psychic and Physical Immunity
Time Freeze
Tantalize, Irresistable
Time Dialation
>>51748443
There I did it the futanari rapist villian or whatever
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>>51745260
He's a real humor tumor that's for sure. Some people just can't be cured of stupid.
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>>51748793
Awesome. Also is Double-team able to use their ultimate power that is listed in the Nemesis section as an Ally?
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>>51744249
Shellfolk

Edge of the Abyss

Blocking

Light Bender

Forging

Bone Armor

Jamming Crytsal

Gregor, Thresh, and Tia

Leviathan's Return, Abominations, Monsters of the Deep.
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>>51748313
>Sunrise
Probably change to Midnight, Noon, Dusk, and Twilight fairly often
>Clear
Most of the time that is, I'll use the other weather types plenty
>Bed, Electronics, Fire Place
I may switch out for TV and Couch once in a while. Other seems nice aswell
>Other
Just my Waifus, maybe some real people though
>Hot Chocolate, Fruits and Pastries, Radio, Heater
May occassional have some Orange Creamsicle scented candles, Mobile Games, and Workout equipment
>>51738729
>Other
Bit of a mix between Log cabin, a man cave, and my childhood home
>Touch Me, Touch me
Most practical
>Auto-/ck/, 200% Comfy, Normiestation Gaymen Piisii, The Rest, FUCKING NERDS, /lit/ as heck, Ocean Man
>/out/
Mostly flat woodlands of my home, A lush beachy island, and Pennsylvania like hills and forests
>True Love
>Interbot, HQ HQ, Life Reset, Reality Convert, Charm Cognition, Never let go, Machine learning, Beleive it, Multiply, lasting effects, be the girl
Just make myself thinner, better looking but still recognizable
>>51748290
Probably going to have multiply but I'll just make one.
>High School
>Equal Height
>Chubby
>Busty
>Badonkadonk
>Cute
>Ponytail
>Fair
>Receptive
>Private Sub
>Generous, Awkward, Tomboy, Pervert, Pragmatic, Bant-Master, Cunning, Motherly, Neat Freak, Laidback
>Cuddling, Impregnation, Frottage, Oral (Them on me), Momdom, Milking Dry
Going for more than allowed cause I've read Paul Satire's Cyoa
>Television, Reading, Video Games, Anime, Shooting, Fishing, Hiking, Computer, Sleeping, Lazing, and Writing
The other two gals would likely be a Flat, Scrawny, Caramel Girl with a bun and a Fun-sized, Scrawny girl with twintails but otherwise the same.
>>51748352
Finishing this all off with
>Ready Made
>BBQ Chicken, Pepperoni, Sausage, and Pineapples
>Root Beer
Max Comfy guys. Rate my picks
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>>51748770
What if your waifu orbits my dick?
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>>51748791
Usually a good approach, yes.
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>>51748329
STEP 1:
Princess
My Room
BFF Teresa

Most of the other choices are irrelevant, but preferably you should have a focus on combat and getting close to your dear sister. Be the happy and inspirational princess that everyone wants you to be.

STEP 2:
Your main quest should be 'Join the Fight' Tell your sister that since she's such a good teacher/warrior/sister, you have complete faith that this routine mission will go as well as she says it will. Then, get yourself killed on purpose.

STEP 3:
???

STEP 4:
There is no profit in completely and utterly ruining someone, you monster.
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>>51748992
Fuck you Tycho, I don't have a waifu.
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>>51749076
>Step 4

There is if you're EVIL!
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>>51749015
I'd love to see Beri do one like that.
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>>51747649
So when she's shy with a touch of flirty I can tell her "Don't be Koi"....
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>>51749375
Do you really wanna start this, anon? Because I don't think you want to sea what will become of this thread if you do.
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>>51749395
LOL
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>>51748674
The king doesn't have to know, does he?
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>>51748674
>>51749859
Just marry your sister or something.
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>>51748968
Loser: +25
Deviant: +25
Nerd: +20
Weeb: +40
Neckbeard: +15
Edgelord: +30
Insanity: +15
Total: 170

Ward: Prison School

Alignments: Loser, Deviant, Weeb, Edgelord
Stuff:
Anime Paraphernalia (Free)
Porn and "Toys" (Free) (implying I have physical porn)
Belt of Baneposting (-30) (140)
Katana (-15) (125)

Powers:
Transformation (-40) (95)
*teleports behind you* (-25) (70)
*Nothing personnel, kid* (-15) (55)
Magical Realm (-40) (15)
15 x 3 = $45/week income

>tfw this isn't real life
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>>51749883
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>>51749859
Daddy isn't dumb, anon.

Why don't you just be a good girl and bask in the love of your sister, and make sure all of your other siblings love you too? If you do a good job, maybe you get to be queen. If not, and Theresa does, you know for a fact that if you REALLY want something to happen, she'll make sure it does, and for all the rest, you'll at least be the first person they listen to on anything as long as you're competent.

You're positioned to have great power and influence as long as you are competent and a good sister. It's not hard.
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>>51749932
That's actually purest love.
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>>51749944
>Lesbians think they aren't the spawn of the debil
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>>51749954
I wasn't aware you were talking about a princess, but still.
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>>51749942
You don't seem to be understanding the EVIL part.

Your solution would make perfect sense to anyone who is not Evil, but anon specifically asked for the most Evil possibility, implying that the player in question is, in fact, Evil.
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What happened to Highlander? Have we heard anything since before Christmas?
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>>51750124
But good and evil are subjective.
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>>51750150
She came back and said that shit was gettng done.

Also brought up a Touhou Souls CYOA that giga-triggered folk.
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>>51750150
Sidetracked by some Africa CYOA
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>>51747448
It's because monstergirls outnumber humans and most men prefer human girls.
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>>51750455
>most men with shit taste prefer human girls
Fixed.
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>>51742899
> Devil
> Strike a Deal, Induce Desire, Forget, Corrupt

I run for office.
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EDP/Tok, how's the parasite girls cyoa coming?
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>>51750150
Dead as all the other authors.
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>>51740594
Harsh High-Energy Study Room (3-in-1)
Victoria as mentor.
(Vinian Toast)
Clairvoyant Ribbon.
Nathan, Son of Goldberg as a suitor.
Gestalt [Lady Killer] &Sheila [Spy] as Retainers.
Stealth, Gardening, Divination Magic, Dark Magic classes.
Detective Role and Responsibilities.

Search and Rescue
Help Test New Magic
Guard the Ambassador.
Free a Friend (overachiever)
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>>51750150
Name: Miss Pauling
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Origin: The Now; the Watcher
Tech Understanding: High
Skills: Violence Mutability, Martial Training, Frontliner, Sneak, Organizer, Friendly Face, Critical, Tactician, Penmanship, Sniper, Seemingly Useless, Hearty
Armor: Segmented Armor
Weapons: Stun-prod, Seven Shot Revolver, Dangulf Sword, Bozar,
Knick Knacks: Anonymity Mask, EMP Cluster Fucker, Glepnir Chain, Hover Bike, Infiltration Equipment, Monomolecular Wire, Lock Cracker Module, Tech Virus Cancer Software, Muscle Memory Modules, Neuralizer, System Jammer, Bottomless Bag, Ring of Dispel, Toshamark Computer
Little Things: Forever Alone x5, Govna’s Dolla’s x5
Faction: Home Guard
Home District: Central Headquarters
Hubworld: Free Traveller
Mission: First Respondant
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>>51750993
>traveller's
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>>51740594
Time for the NEEERD build.

>Princess
If that's what I was.

>Study Room/My Room
For maximum knowledge.

>Elizabeth
I could use some of her tricks.

>Pancakes
Delicious. I'll have to introduce this world to grits someday, though - especially with butter, cheese, and shrimp mixed in.

>Alchemy Starter Kit, Featherweight Perfume, Figure Cake
What can I say?

>???
Not decided on a suitor yet, I've got NEEERD business to be doing. It'd be Nathan if he could actually replicate his father's work and we could be NEEERDS together, but as it stands, nah.

>Pouf, Lewis
If I had more options I'd also hire on Zoey, Whimsy, Kaufei, and Mercutio, but as it stands this is all I've got. Why do I need Lewis? Well, we can look up Earth's advanced chemistry once we've got an Internet connection. I get the feeling Verend won't very much appreciate napalm (if I'm even allowed to make it), but everyone will greatly appreciate chemical fertilizers. Also, if I ever do decide to go back, well, there he is.

>Management, Boost Magic, Gardening, Alchemy
Now if only I could hire on Zoey, too. Then I could pick up Cooking and make this picture complete. Or if I had a bit more flexibility with classes.

>Earth Studies
Ooh, the compounds we'll create! I don't think my sister will approve of mustard gas, though.

>Investigate the Mysterious Object, Help Test New Magic, Enjoy the Party
The cell phone just needs recharging, but with no sources of electricity, that's going to be an issue. As for the rest, I'm going to trust my new (old?) friends and family in this world to know what they're doing.
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>>51742899
>Devil
>Strike a Deal, Induce Desire, General Magic and Attractive.

I'll be using this for a mix of altruism and selfish gain. Come to me seeking to hurt others or profit at their expense? I'll play along but you'll be losing out way more in the long run as I'm probably going to use Induce Desire to make you will to trade just about anything to get what you wanted. I'll probably offer a decent deal to your victim afterwards to make it up to them.... and profit just a tiny bit off them. Come to me wanting something that will make the world a better place? Sure, depending on the specifics I might be will to take a very small profit margin on that deal. And if some one come to me with a middle of the road request? Well, I'll make a reasonable deal. A year of your life for a years worth of income is fair isn't it?
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Are there any xianxia-style CYOAs?
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>>51751243
No. We had a couple of Wuxia-esque things, but that's as close as we got.
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>>51750150
Trapped because she was buried under word errors.
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>>51751243
Why is Chinese pop culture so popular all of a sudden? This isn't the Victorian era.
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>>51751677
exclusively to annoy you
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>>51751725
That's not how you spell 'mystified', because annoyance implies opposition to it.
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>>51751729
you sound more and more annoyed by the minute
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>>51751738
>>51751729
You're both faggots that forget that tone can't be easily read through the internet.

Now realize that I could've just as easily said this in an overly-chipper voice.
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>>51751746
You sound incredibly annoyed anon.
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>>51741857
Some more ideas
Modification:
>Long-term Investment: Increases how long imbuements last. Maybe slow the recharge rate slightly?
>Something new or change to Multi‐Membered to effect storage parts so a character can have quads like a krogan?
>Bizarre Breeder: Any hole they can get fucked is a vector for pregnancy. Some one came in your ass our you swallowed? Prepare for a butt baby. Took HolelyVulnerable? Beware of breast and/or ball pregnancy.
Ally/Adversary:
>The Creep: A race of nearly immobile viney tentacle plant monsters. Stuffs victims with their seeds to spread. Can grow to huge sizes by draining supers. Blends in with natural surroundings.
Headquarters:
>Animate: Your base is some how an active possibly living thing. It could be a giant robot, construct or living creature.
>Hive: You base has a large number of, potentially disposable, minions to do your bidding. Exact nature of the minions varies.
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>>51749322
Or you could fucking do it if you want it so bad
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>>51742899
>Succubus
>Induce Desire (free)/Feed (spirit energy)/Girl/Hypnosis

So I have to act as a corrupting seductress to survive now. What's the worst that could happen?
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>>51738729
>Room Type
I'm going to have a whole mansion sized area designed like [Suburbia] and another designed like [Ethnic as fuck](Indian). They will be connected by a massive [Virtual] 3D maze that will be great for parkour and skateboarding so I can really put the [Infinite Life] freebie to use. Also, in case I don't want to have to get through the maze, I'll have a dimly lit underground tunnel with plenty of tastefully placed trash, graffiti, and rubble to keep it feeling like home.
>Entrance Method
[Power Gem]-It looks like the one I normally wear.
>Physical Items
1.[Auto-/ck/]
2.[NormieStation]
3.[Gaymen Piisii]
4.[The Rest]
5.[FUCKING NERDS]-playsets of every MTG card in existence
6.[/fa/bulous]
7.[L-LEWD!!]
8.[Thrill Ride]
9.[Aesthetics]-flowers everywhere, every strain. Also a large variety of carnivorous plants
10.[Jam Session]
/out/
-mostly forest
-a river
-a mountain
The weather allows for all 4 seasons and it rains a lot except during the summer
>Abilities/Extras
17-[Be The Girl]
15-[Redesign]-so other people can Be The Girl too
14-[Inter-bot 9001]
12-[Lasting Effects]
10-[Reality Convert]
8-[Last Resort]
5-[Never Let Go]
4-[Aether Orchestra]
3-[Multiply]
2-[Believe It]
1-[Attractive Forces]
0-[Size Up, Size Down]
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>>51740594
Let's give that Verendian bastards FREEDOM the are waiting for.
>Prince
>Study room
>Alexander
Items:
>Binding band
>Warp crystal
>Crystal ring
Last one seems useful as not only it will double effectiveness of warp crystal but I think that I will be able to get hold of more crystal items in future.
I plan to use warp slowdown to plant binding band on hand of “unwilling” persons.

Spouse:
>Princess Katelyn of Verend
Immediately start “princess Katelyn for Verend faction” to press her claim and get a comfy position of “prince consort”. Also this is a best way to end a war, it aligns with her goals so I think she will not be to averse to this idea. Lowered morale of enemy is a plus.
Possibility of sparking a rebellion is something I count on and intend to work for it.
My main goal is to make Katelyn a ruler.
If I could I'd offer hand of my future child to the elves in return for their aid in the war. Elves live so long that I think they can wait that ~20 years
Retainers:
>Lewis
>Sheila
Courses:
>Tactics
>Chivalry
>Charisma
>Manipulation
>Divination and elemental magic

Duty:
Mage
I will do research into combat magic, each battle will be testing theory in practice. Let's see what I and Lewis can think of. Also branching into earth studies after the war.
Achtung Kampfmagie! Will be my intended magnum opus. Short guide of how to utilize minimum amount of magic in surgical magical strikes on vital parts of front and how to use divination I determining what parts are this.

Tasks:
>Join the fight.
Try to encircle army and make them swear loyalty to princess Katelyn. Rename it to 1st free Verendian Army or something. I am taking that charisma classes for something!
>Assasinate general Markus
He will bend the knee or die

After I win the war or die I will probably fund university and settle in as researcher/professor that from time to time dwells into some ruin for fun and profit and spend free time with family. If possible also with my earth one.
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>>51751788
>What's the worst that could happen?
That you realize that is a shallow life and you end up regretting being a slut?
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>>51752494
Being a slut is less shallow than being a kissles virgin who never showers, like most of the people here
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>>51752504
>this is what sluts believe
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>>51752504
Can you explain this? Isn't sluttiness for the sake of it inherently shallow?
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>>51752528
Sure, but that doesn't mean some things aren't even worse
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>>51752555
I thought you were discussing whether something was more/less shallow, not whether it was better/worse?
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>>51752555
Like being a slut AND a whore?
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>>51752494
Eh nothing stopping them from doing other interesting things between bouts of sluttiness to feed.

>>51752528
Yeah but in this case they aren't being a slut just to be a slut, they are using it to fuel their presumed immortality being a sex demon.
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>>51744249
Cecaelia from the Mage Sphere, where I learned Climate Shifter, and green manipulator magic, as well as enchanting.
I have an Ancient Mount, and a Crystal Pearl to aid me.
I obtained the aid of Xianta, Eaomond, and Kiandra in my quests.
Of my quests I'm going for.
Blood Fish Swarm, and obtain Forging.
Frozen Sea, and obtain Current Shaper.
Abominations, where I become part merrow.
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>>51741857

Companion suggestion:

Lillith: Succubus. Was accidentally summoned to Earth and intends to enjoy modern life.
Ally: Will assist in sexual duels and help you blow off steam. Wants to store up enough of your power to instigate regime change back in hell and put the succubi in charge.
Adversary: Teases and tempts you, difficult to resist. Wants to chain you up as her permanent sex battery forever.
Nemesis: Intends to use your power to open a portal to hell and begin the apocalypse.

Modifier suggestion:

An additional sub-option on modifiers that make them more extreme or potent which could either cost or give points depending on the modifier. Might not work for all of them though.
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>>51753024
Why would sex demons want to be in charge
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>>51752528

Promiscuity in service of hedonism doesn't seems shallow to me.

Aren't we all just looking to enjoy our lives? Must there be a greater meaning than that?
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>>51753240
yes.
The greater meaning is surviving stellar disasters.
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>>51753259

Isn't survival for survival's sake also completely shallow?
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>>51753278
Who cares, I get to live
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>>51753278
>>51753286
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>>51753286

I care about survival too, second only to enjoying myself.

I want to survive longer so I can experience more pleasure, or retain the capacity to experience pleasure.

Would you take a deal for immortality over the guarantee to never experience any enjoyment or pleasure again?
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>>51753311

Shit - with, not over.
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>>51753311
Sure. Then you kill everyone and everything so nothing can feel pleasure. No way to lose.
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>>51753340
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>>51742899
>Devil
>Strike a Deal
>General Magic
>Hypnosis
>Girl
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>>51753055

That does bear explanation. My bad on being too brief.

The succubus is the first to be summoned since the middle ages. Modern life, technology and such fascinate her. In the ally scenario, she wants to bring that to Hell, but knows she won't make any headway with the head honcho's, hence revolution as a means of change.

Since succubi don't strike me as being top dogs in hell normally, putting them on top ensures that Hell actually does reform and becomes a much lewder place.
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>>51753708
Aren't they all just about getting dick and shit
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>>51745312
There's nothin' wrong with egg sushi.
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>>51753259
A slut is naturally more capable of surviving an interstellar disaster than a basement virgin. Sluts would just bunk up with a spaceship captain or something, meanwhile the mouthbreathing virgins would be abandoned like the trash they cast themselves as.
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>>51753740

More power = More dick.
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>>51754062
It's not like they can take 37 dicks at the same time or something.
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>>51754088
Not with that attitude they can't.
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>>51754139
I mean it's physically impossible for them to take 37 dicks at the same time. It just can't be done.
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>>51748770
>what's the deal with this
He'll be important if I get decide to make a sequel. By keeping him vague now, you can learn all about him later with less duplicate info. Besides it just makes sense for you to call him "Papa," and for others to call him "his majesty" or similar.

>>51749322
I made a "design yourself to be a waifu CYOA" once. It had an optional last page to instead use it as a waifu builder.
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>>51742899
Devil
Strike a Deal
Girl (cast on self)
General Magic
Forget

Very boring and basic, really.
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>>51754174
>magical demon
>physics
m8
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>>51753708
>Getting in charge & reforming hell to be lewd.
Well, it worked for monstergirls.
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>>51754251
>that feel when no qt3.14 succubus gf
She doesn't have to be magical
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>>51751136
When I made my build (which was somewhat similar albeit more military and engineering oriented) I thought I'd aim for napalm.
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>>51751778
I like these!
Though I don't know what a krogan is, auxiliary storage is going to get updated to say you can take it more than once
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>>51754215
That sort of option would be better made known right away though. Some potential players who could have been interested in a waifu builder, but not in a CYOA that constantly addresses them as if they were turning into the waifu, may just have read the premise and stopped there.

I'm glad you made it known right away in Royal Revival that we could choose our gender. At first glance I thought it might be a more elaborate take on the concept of Dream Princess CYOA.
Turned out to be one of my favorite CYOAs instead.
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>>51754439
>I don't know what a krogan is
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>>51754348
If she's not magic then she's not a succubus.
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>>51754473
>>51754439
But basically Krogan have 4 testicles instead of 2 like humans. I'm sure you can find some furry porn describing what their scrotum are like. I assume they would have to be much bigger.
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>>51754439
He's talking about having 4 balls, though I assumed if you take multi membered you'd get 2 balls along with every extra dick.
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>>51754466
>That sort of option would be better made known right away though. Some potential players who could have been interested in a waifu builder, but not in a CYOA that constantly addresses them as if they were turning into the waifu, may just have read the premise and stopped there.
IIRC, it was _supposed_ to just be a "become the waifu" CYOA, but people complained so the extra page was added.
And later on, another extra page was added for those wanting to be the waifu for another girl.
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>>51754485
Why not? They're pretty much just monstergrills.
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>>51754538
>Succubi are just monstergirls
Shitty ones yeah. Succubis should be proper demons trying to suck your soul out through your dick, not big tittied girls with small horns and a cutesy tail.
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>>51754538
Demons. They are demons, inherently magical creatures.
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>>51754516
I see. Probably would have been a good idea then to also revise the first page to let new players (ones who ran into the CYOA later on) know about the new pages from the start.
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>>51754576
They just need semen, that's food for them. They're not all hungry for countless dicks. Succubi need love too.
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>>51754602
So they're inherently magical just because they can do magic?
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>>51754611
I'm okay with Succubi so long as the person being drained is actually drained. So long as you are physically fatigued or in any other way "punished" for the sex.
>they just need semen
Shitty Succubi do. Good Succubi need "stamina"/"sexual energy" which should translate more to orgasms in general.
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>>51754492
>>51754508
Thanks! Yeah, I'll make that an option
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>>51754630
They're inherently magical because they're demons. Just like Angels are inherently magical.
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>>51754640
No such thing as "shitty" succubi. They're all the same. I really don't get your logic for the orgasms part though.
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>>51754681
So they're inherently magical because they're demons, and they're demons because they're inherently magical. You know how stupid this is, right?
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>>51748290

>Age
New Year Noodle
>Size Ratio
Equal Height
>Physical Build
Athletic
>Breast Size
Busty
>B&H
Average Behind
>Facial features
Noble
>Hair
Sex hair
>Skin
Fair
>Sex drive
Receptive
>Romantic attitude
Fulltime Dom
>Personality traits
Charismatic
Cool
Tomboy
Pragmatic
Mean-Spirited
Cunning
Bant-Master
Heavy Drinker
>F&D
Orgasm Denial (1x)
Oral (1x)
Milking Dry
Rape-Play
>Hobbies
Shooting
Hunting
Travelling
>Extra Features
Scarred
Smoker

Rate my Balalaika.
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>>51754693
Are you trying to make sense of magic? The reason it's magic is because it DOESN'T make sense.
If it did it would be science.
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>>51754710
So basically, pic related? How were they even created in the first place?
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>>51754721
>How were they even created in the first place?
AFAIK, that (and certain other aspects of succubi) would depend on the setting.
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>>51754721
Magic.
Probably the magic of some higher demon, or an evil god, depending on the setting.
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>>51754739
God damnit, horny girls are my fetish. Is there even a create your own succubus waifu cyoa?
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>>51754682
>shitty Succubi
What you're describing, Succubi living off sperm, is a shitty Succubi. They would be much better off breaking into a fertility clinic or wherever they store sperm.
Succubi are seductresses. Saying they only need sperm means only men can be targeted which is just dumb, and means the whole seduction part is not important. It would be much easier to rape a guy.
tl,dr your Succubi is shit. Shit!
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>>51754749
How was the higher demon, or evil god created?
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>>51754762
Where is the love in any of that?
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>>51754603
Well, the narrator is being snarky about it, and a lot of the features of the CYOA are nullified by it, so it didn't seem core enough to include at the top. 'sides, there's plenty of waifu builders / body customizers out there. The gimmick of that one was you were designing your body to match your chosen suitor. Taking that out, it's a pretty run-of-the mill waifu-builder.

>>51754466
>turned out to be one of my favorite CYOAs.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
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>>51754770
How was anything created?
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>>51754793
It is a mystery.
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>>51754762
You're making the mistake of assuming they are ravenous, wild beasts without any social environments. I'm not tge anon you were talking to, but personally I just state they require "sexual fluids" in my CYOAs, so they can target anybody. Since they're intelligent, social creatures, they'll naturally be desperate to invite you out on a date so that they can be fed properltly in a monogamous relationship. Rape would be like dine-and-dashing, not very respectable. I'll admit that draining energy allows for some more versatility, but I personally feel that adds too much of a magical emphasis / worry about your soul.
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>>51754758
You could abuse certain options in the Living With An Incubus CYOA to make what's basically a succubus (you choose to have your "incubus" be a cuntboy trap - which is basically a flat-chested girl - and optionally have them lactate so they'd grow breasts).
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>>51754758
Nope, not yet. You should make it!
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>>51754897
>trap
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>>51754899
I've never made a CYOA in my life, not gonna start now.
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>>51754911
Well, technically the "incubus" wouldn't be a trap anymore, since they'd be female (because female genitalia instead of male ones due to picking the cuntboy option). But the bodytype option is listed as "trap" since you're sort of supposed to make a husbando (or "an actual incubus") rather than a waifu (or "pretty much a succubus").
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>>51754929
Too bad. We'll never have it then.
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>>51754791
You're welcome (I'm the guy who thought of using divination to unlock the phone, if you recall that build).

Looking forward to that map/dlc/expansion/continuation/whateveritmaybe you've been considering doing!
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>>51744726
>archangels (not to be mistaken with Archangels)
What's the difference?
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>>51754788
>love
Anon did not describe a Succubi that feeds on "love". He described one that feeds on sperm. We both are in agreement: His Succubi are shit.
>>51754893
>assuming
I am not. I am saying his idea of Succubi is shit.
His idea is the rape kind of, IIRC, Slavic lore: Where Succubi were invented to explain wet dreams.
>drain energy
All I want is a demonic approach to Succubi, ie. Succubi are Succubi, not Monstergirls. Not necessarily the "steal your soul through your dick", but the idea that Succubi are nothing but perpetually horny women who are totally monogamous and have tiny horns. Succubi are not for monogamy.
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>>51754936
You never know. YOU could end up making it.
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>>51754979
>All I want is a demonic approach to Succubi, ie. Succubi are Succubi, not Monstergirls. Not necessarily the "steal your soul through your dick", but the idea that Succubi are nothing but perpetually horny women who are totally monogamous and have tiny horns. Succubi are not for monogamy.
Exactly this.
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>>51754979
>Succubi are not for monogamy
>being this cuck
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>>51755019
Nope!
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>>51755063
Awww. I'm sure you can do it. I believe in you.
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>>51755072
Nah. You want it more.
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>>51755046
>waifuing a living embodiment of the sin of Lust
>being this stupid
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>>51755139
are you implying you cant satisfy a succubus? what are you a deficient male?
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>>51755139
But they're cute. Cute!
Also, since when are they a living embodiment of the sin of Lust?
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>>51755150
>Also, since when are they a living embodiment of the sin of Lust?
Do you literally not know what a succubus is?
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>>51755156
A semen demon, duh.
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>>51755149
Of course I could.
Then they would go out in search of someone else anyway, because that is what they are for.
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>>51755139
>having strong opinions about things that don't exist
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>>51755181
>Of course I could
>Then they would go out in search of someone else
>Literally contradicting yourself
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>>51754693
They're demons because they're demons, and being inherently magical is on of the properties of demons.
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>>51755234
But why? What makes them inherently magical?
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>>51755219
Succubus are demons of lust, they can't get enough of it.
Think of it like this. Imagine a demon of gluttony going to an all-you-can-eat buffet and stuffing themselves. Then as soon as they leave, they drive across town to another all-you-can-eat-buffet to repeat the process. Gluttony is all they care about, and they can't get enough of it no matter how often or how thoroughly they indulge.

>>51755243
The fact that they're demons. Pay attention, it's not that hard.
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>>51755250
You basically just repeated >>51754693
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>>51755250
Anon still thinks succubus are waifus.
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>>51755264
That's because >>51754693 explained things perfectly, even if they think their own explanation is stupid.
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>>51755270
Everything is a waifu.
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>>51755287
i want to be your waifu
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>>51755250
Man, if they can make demons that are essentially personifications of concepts, how come everything else isn't extinct?
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>>51755276
But it is stupid, and it makes no sense.
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>>51755328

>>51754710
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>>51755316
Are you a succubus?
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>>51754940
Thanks. Yeah, I remember that build.

>succubi are not for monogamy
Good luck making that into a successful CYOA

>>51755150
>>51755156
I actually had these as two separate concepts in a CYOA once. The embodiment of lust technically wasn't an option, but she was mentioned by the embodiment of greed.
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>>51755334
So how come magic is the only thing that doesn't make sense in an existence full of things that do make sense?
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>>51755390
Because that's what makes it magic. That's it's definition. It's like asking why matter has mass. Or why gravity pulls objects together.
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>>51755381
>the embodiment of greed
You mean jews?
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>>51755421
Those are good questions, anon, if you weren't a moron you'd realize that.
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>>51755421
>why matter has mass
There are scientists trying to figure out why.
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>>51755465
And there are people trying to make sense of magic.
Neither has yet succeeded.
Actually, since it's entirely fictional I suppose you could have people successfully make sense of magic in a setting, that's where you get magitech from.
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>>51755421
That is such fucking bullshit.
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>>51755484
And people in the real world make sense of arcane physical principles, that's where you get nuclear weapons from.
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>>51755423
No, it was a loli
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>>51755484
I like to view mages as being scientists studying magic instead of atoms and shit. That's way more fun.
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>>51755558
And I prefer magic to be something mysterious rather than just another branch of science. That's way more fun.
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>>51755558
Yeah, I dislike the completely unknowable type of magic too, it makes for shit stories.

I mean some unknowability is fine, otherwise it would already be solved, which is the other extreme and even more unlike real world science.
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>>51754968
The difference exists mainly in the minds of modern bible-believing evangelicals, who rarely ever open a bible, since most of what's in it runs directly counter to their beliefs.
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>>51755571
Then why even call it magic? Why not just call it science and be done with it?
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>>51755569
Then why even call it magic? Why not just call it arbitrary ass-pulls and be done with it?
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>>51755569
Magical thinking is actually closer to science than what you're espousing here. What you're saying is closer to religion.
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>>51755571
Exactly! If magic is completely "mysterious", how do you even know how many spells you can use? At that point you can do the "it's magic"-meme and magic can do whatever you need it to do. It's silly.
Magic needs SOME restrictions.

>>51755585
What is your idea of magic? Wave a hand and say whatever you want to do, you can do anything without "fuel"?
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>only -one- "CYOA throg"

We need a Thread
Throg
Throod
and a Bread

All at the same time.

If you include backlinks and pastebin info, you're doing it wrong.
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>>51755616
Basically I like alchemy from Fullmetal Alchemist way better than how magic is usually presented in CYOA's. They're not creating stuff out of nothing like magic, they're converting one thing to another and you can't make up a "spell" on the spot. You want to make a steel sword? Cool, you can do that. You need an equivalent amount of dirt though.
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>>51755340
perhaps, i can be many things
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>>51755637
And a general, don't forget a general.
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>>51755616
>What is your idea of magic? Wave a hand and say whatever you want to do, you can do anything without "fuel"?
There are rules, but they are completely different and irreconcilable with the rules used for traditional science. Thinking about things in terms of "what created X" or "where did Y come from" will get you no where.
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>>51755637
here you go, new thread

>>51755655
>>51755655

>>51755650
nah, that's dumb
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>>51755660
Good work Anon. You have pleased the CYOA Overgod.
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>>51755658
You said exactly nothing beyond "we just don't know". Like the other guy said, that makes for a lousy story. That turns magic into "it just works lol!"
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>>51755658
>There are rules, but they are completely different and irreconcilable with the rules used for traditional science.
Then there are no rules.
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Actual CYOA thread, for those who care: >>51755675
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>>51755660
>cyoa general
>that's dumb
>not building an army where all the officers are CYOAs
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>>51755703
oh hey someone who actually cares good shit
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>>51755687
>>51755698
Why is it important to know why people can shoot fire out of there hands, or why only some people can do it? How does knowing the answer to those questions improve a story?
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>>51744604
Global Threats
>Some one is trying to start WWIII
>WWIII is happening.
>Nuclear Winter from use of Nukes in WWIII
>Seemingly Incurable Plague. It wouldn't have to be deadly, it might just reduce most victims incapable of doing almost anything but basic survival need fulfillment and sex, a Fuck Fever if you will.
>Planet Killing Asteroid like the one that wiped out the dinosaurs.
>Some alien race wants to wipe out humans before we can establish our own interstellar empire and compete with them for resources.
>Some alien race, maybe the Trupta, want to enslave humanity for laborers and fuck toys.
>Cataclysmic volcanic event is pending that would set of the yellow stone super volcano and most other volcanoes. Maybe a villain has an earthquake machine and is hold the world hostage? Or is it just an impending natural event?
>Said volcanoes go off all at once starting a new Ice Age on top of untold destruction.
>Some one accidentally or purposefully sets loose a rogue super smart AI that is hostile and wants to destroy or enslave humanity
>Giant Death Laser Satellite Network. Maybe some government or multinational conglomerate built it to deal with super threats and a villain stole the control codes or just built it them self.
>Trump runs for president of the world. It looks like he might win.
>A coronal mass ejection is headed towards Earth.
>Some archaeologist discovers a tomb and accidentally unleashes an ancient 'god' that wants to take over the world and usher in an age of darkness. Said god might just be an amazingly powerful super, perhaps even the first super. (This could also make for an interesting Ally/Adversary.) Reports vary on whether the Archaeologist was a busty British woman or an American man with a whip and fedora.
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>>51755703
>Actual CYOA autism, for those who want to see these threads banned

You should be more honest with what you're selling.
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>>51755703
Good job retard, now we're back to two threads because you're autistic.
>>51755731
And you're encouraging making him far worse. If you care so much, make the thread first. Don't make two and get us banned.
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>>51755735
It's extremely important if magic is limited to specific spells, or if you can do an ass-pull with magic because magic can do everything.
Why can't What'shisfaceWizard in Lord of the Rings just make a "teleport the ring to the volcano" spell?
Would make a shit story.

How many spells you can use and if different spells have different costs is insanely important too. If I have a "instantly kill anyone" spell and it has no cost, how is that fun?
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>>51755839
>Would make a shit story.
Only if somebody actually does those things.
Which, if an author has them do it, then they'd still do it in a setting where magic is more clearly defined, because that is the story author wants to tell.
It's different if you're talking about a game of some kind. Then magic needs rules to keep one person from ruining it for everyone in a tabletop setting. But there is no narrative reason to give magic rules unless you are making a story about the rules of magic.
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>>51755796
Nearly all of those are not the tiniest bit lewd.
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>>51755960
Yeah, it's hard to come up with lewd global threats. I was just spitballing to come up with anything and maybe spark other ideas.
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>>51755921
>But there is no narrative reason to give magic rules unless you are making a story about the rules of magic.
I disagree. I dislike a CYOA that says "you can do magic" because it doesn't actually tell me anything. It doesn't tell me what my powers are or what I can do because magic isn't defined.
Replace "magic" by a made up word and it would tell me the same:
>You can do sxcjalwd
Okay cool, what does that mean?
>You can do magic
Okay cool, what does that mean?
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>>51756004
CYOAs are as much games as they are stories, thus need rules for magic. But in a purely 100% narrative work, like a book or movie, there is no need for magic to have rules.
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>>51756040
So why didn't What'shisfaceWizard in Lord of the Rings just make a "teleport the ring to the volcano" spell?
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>>51756062
Because then we wouldn't have a story. There doesn't need to be any other reason.
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>>51756040
I agree with both your points (assuming the first is "because CYOA's are player-driven, the player needs to understand the mechanics"), but less so for the latter. Yes, since the characters only do what the writer wants them to and magic works like the writer wants it to, there is no need to explain magic... but it leaves open the risk of
1) Asspulls
and
2) Readers asking "why didn't they just use magic here?"
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>>51756103
Asspulls are always a risk, no matter what.
And an author would need to be omniscient with an infinite amount of time on there hands to be able to write a story that no reader could find a flaw like that in.
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>>51756040
>But in a purely 100% narrative work, like a book or movie, there is no need for magic to have rules.
There kinda is. The rules can be implicit or flexible, but there needs to be some kind of picture of what magic is and isn't or the story won't make sense.
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>>51755796
I can work with these. Thanks!
>>51755960
Not yet they're not!
>earth quake machine to set off the Yellowstone volcano is actually some prophesied super-fucking (literally earth shattering sex) .
>WWIII may be triggered by a sexy arms race. Lewd super weapons are increasing global tensions.
>A cabal of supers that mind control world leaders by fucking them is trying to take over the world.
>Asteroid headed to earth is actual am interstellar being that kills planets by making all the inhabitants fuck to death and feeding on the energy released.
But seriously, I'm okay with some non-lewd global threats.
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>>51755735
Because then things make sense. Things that don't make sense don't belong in the world. You might not care about how things work around you and just go on without thinking about it, but not everyone does.
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>>51756160
But Anon, to a retard, nothing makes sense. Does that mean that nothing should exist?
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>>51756147
>>51756160
Plenty of stories with magic don't explain how that magic works.
Most Fairy Tales I can think of fit that pattern.
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>>51756127
You don't need to "write a story with no flaws". You need to write a story that makes sense, or one where the reader's suspension of disbelief makes them overlook such flaws.
I think it would make the most sense for What'shisface to teleport What'shisface2 to the volcano. Since magic isn't explained I have no reason to see why he can't do that besides "he can't do that".
And that's my argument: We don't know what magic can and can't do, which to me makes magic meaningless. It makes magic a "get out of jail free card"

Take the book Mogworld. The narrator doesn't describe exactly how magic works but I accept it because what he does describe makes sense. He succeeds at suspension of disbelief. He mentions spells having levels without saying what that is: All we need to know is the higher-leveled spell is better.
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>>51756205
you mean
>to me nothing makes sense, that means nothing should exist
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>>51756215
Most of them still have internal consistency, which are knowable rules. Almost 0% of stories actually explain how magic works to the last minutia, so it's balanced on the whole.

The stories that have no consistency and no rules either are idiotic.
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>>51756230
Nice to see shitposting hasn't lost its appeal.
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>>51756281
Alter Saber CYOA when?
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>>51756281
>>51756230
>>51756205
That was the point you morons. I was calling him an idiot.
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>>51756228
Have you considered the problem is you and not the story? Because that's not what most people take away from LotR.
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>>51756294
Never
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>>51756320
Best girl demands a CYOA all for herself
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>>51756215
>Plenty of stories with magic don't explain how that magic works.
Sure, but they still have consistency and implicit rules.
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>>51756316
Have you considered the problem is you not understanding what my point is? My main point is:
>Don't include an option in a CYOA that says "you know magic" and then not explain what that means
Treat magic as any other unknown thing in the story. You wouldn't include an item that has a blank description, would you?

I know the point of Lord of the Rings is the Journey from Manletville to ScaryVolcano. Not destroying the ring. I'm not arguing the plot of the books, I'm arguing magic. More accurately, I'm arguing "don't include shit in a CYOA then don't say what it does". I used Lord of the Rings as an example.
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>>51756342
Well make it yourself.
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>>51756316
Stories are for people, not the other way around. If the story isn't for him then it just isn't for him.
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>>51756364
I agree with you just so you know.
>>
anyone has the femdom CYOA?
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>>51756364
>Don't include an option in a CYOA
I was never talking about magic in CYOAs. I never implied I was. I was talking about what makes a succubus a succubus narratively, and when the conversation switched to magic in general I assumed we were still talking about media at large, not CYOAs specifically. As I said here >>51756040, CYOAs are games, and require rules for their magic so that they can be played.
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>>51756427
>CYOAs are games, and require rules for their magic so that they can be played.
Then we're in perfect agreement.
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>>51756467
dude, do you really think an author is going to literally sink hours upon hours of work into the lore only for people to ignore it?
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>>51756427
>>51756467
I disagree with both of you on general principles.
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>>51756478
yes
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>>51756409
If you mean the gentle femdom one, see >>51756446.
If you mean the non-gentle one, see >>51756472.
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>>51756489
thank you very much lad
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>>51756478
That's the entire point of lore, it's what authors always do.

Yes.
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>>51756467
I wouldn't say perfect, but enough that continuing this conversation would no longer be productive.
If it ever was.
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>>51756486
>>51756498
well then forgive me for preferring short, specific and conscice lore rather than thousands of text lines to get across a point which didnt need that much words to make
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>>51756478
Nope, and I never said that. It needs to make sense, that's all.
>>51756532
>short, specific and conscice lore
That's... not what I'm arguing against. We actually agree: Explain what magic/anything new you include is.
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>>51756562
What determines if it makes sense
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>>51756532
Sorry, it's too soon, I can't forgive you yet
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>>51756570
wether you have the same kind of Schizophrenia as the author or not
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>>51756588
What if I don't have schizophrenia
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>>51756570
Consistency.

Or, if you want a long as fuck read on this topic, here:

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MagicAIsMagicA
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>>51756598
It depends on the autism levels of the author and you.
Therefore if the author has a higher autism level than you, you wont be able to understand
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>>51756585
We'll bang, okay?
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>>51756585
you are not funny
>>51756628
you are not funny either
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>>51756641
And you're actively anti-funny, congratulations.
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>>51756570
You and I both know that's literally impossible to answer. You've given me no frame of reference, nothing to compare it to etc.
"Makes sense" would include telling me whether or not magic requires some kind of fuel that puts a limit on how often you can cast a spell. If magic requires spells or if I can say whatever it is I want.
Saying "You know magic" doesn't describe how it works. I don't need details on how fast you regain mana (if you need that), or exactly how much each spell uses (if you use those). But i do need to know if making the equivalent of a 50 megaton nuke is as hard as making the equivalent of a flashlight, if they require the same level of knowledge etc. etc.

Battlemage "makes sense" even if it doesn't explain the mana cost of spells. I can overlook that because the rest of the spell section "makes sense".

And a whole bucketload of consistency, as the other guy said. But that's probably easier in a book rather than in a CYOA.
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>>51756670
I mean, you said it has to make sense.
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>>51756654
if i am anti-funny, then i guess you must be a dementor, becouse you suck the fun out of everything
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>>51756670
It's perfectly possible to answer. Internal consistency is the answer. You can make up anything you want, but don't break the rules you made up if you want it to make any sense.
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>>51756688
>he's a harry potter fan too
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>>51756688
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>>51756715
get some proper puns, then come back in a couple of years. Kid
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>>51756730
>he thinks puns are praiseworthy, or even noteworthy
this guy's the limit

i couldn't careless, fuccboi
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>>51756689
Yes. That's the simplest way to say it.
Wow, that's way simpler than what I've been saying.
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>>51756773
you clearly care enough so as to answer.
White boi
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>>51756797
you obviously have a ship on your shoulder, so stop your denial and error, because what comes around is all around and you can't deal with the supply and command without getting two birds stoned
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>>51756842
2deep4me
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>>51756730
You seem to be mistaken puns for references.
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>>51754968
>archangels
Second choir of angels. In charge of watching over and protecting peoples and nations, in contrast to regular angels, who just watch individual people and places.

>Archangels
The highest of angels, those more powerful and dearest to god. Raphael, Gabriel, Michael are the three core ones, Uriel is often the fourth, and often three more of varying names are added to reach the holy number of seven.

The jury is out on whether or not other big deal angels like Metatron and Sandalphon are Archangels or not.

>>51755581
This is actually from Roman and Medieval Catholicism, so it has zero to do with modern time or evangelicals.
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>>51755805
>>51755802
Why is it that shitposters always threaten other people with banning whenever they are the ones to do something bad? It doesn't happen. Our threads haven't been deleted since fucking Christmas, stop this paranoia myth.
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