World Building

>>51563454
Yes, I tried creating a 14dchan page today for this, but the CAPTCHA was fucking terrible mate.

>>51563767
So, the Brissi'tir are divided into castes. Queens being at the top, worker drones being at the bottom. Intelligence also depends on caste. Castes cannot interbreed, as the queen is the only one who is fertile and if it were to happen it would be "Dissapeared", suspiciously.

>>51563849
yea i like to think of them as plant like insects not like normal insects but like the arborec from twilight imperium but with some xenomorph sprinkled on top

>>51563849
The Blood Caste, Breeder Caste, Metal Caste, Queens, PSI Caste, White Caste.

>>51563849
>>51563924

yea and their queens are almost their own ecosystems that churn out drones and collect mass

>>51563924
Alright, I am fairly new to RPG's, so can you explain twilight imperium?

>>51563985
its an sci fi civilazation building board game

>>51564017
Oh. I actually designed something similar to this. There was this one guy, who designed the funniest race ever. I decided to keep his in my novel.

>>51563966
I really like the rivalry between Obloss and Koruul. Reminds me of Grievous and Obi-Wan Kenobi's rivalry..

>>51564176
We need some more charecters
C'rok Plor- A famous Volupoteum general in the slaver wars. He was known for his famous exploits, including his sexual ones. His famous sidearm is the energy whip.

>>51564211
James Glenn- A famous commando who is known for his bravery. He is very famous for killing the Kjsst war-herder.
Queen T'Lin'Om- The queen who saved the brissi'tir from extinction. Currently at near death, she is treated with near god-like reverance.

>>51564176
thats really what i think koruul is greivous buit better

>>51564268
War herder Hgyet -the successor to war herder skjal,he is famous for his absoulte hatred of all other races even his own allies and has began a horrid crusade into the delta sector

>>51564362

approved, although his name is too short. that'll be like the "filtered" version of his name.

>>51564211
High Baroness S'hon Tinn-The current ruler of the voluptatum,somewhat dispised by her people as she refuses to succumb to the imfamous degernercys of the voluptatum but she is wise and under her rule the voluptatum have florished

>>51564393
To add to that, Glenn is wanted by the Kjsst.
Another Charecter:
General Dinos:
A female general, who was orpahned at the age of three, she is the leader of the 65th Death Guard. They fight the Emperors enemies, and bring doom to their enemies
Admiral Orot: He is a admiral who is known for this heroic actions at Ithonak, and want's revenge after his wifes death. He also repelled the Nova Republisk Incursion.

>>51564450
im guessing Ploraxians

>>51564450
Yes.

>>51564492
Fun fact. Koter, my industrial moon orbiting Ploraxia has a compton the size of Ireland.

>>51564211

Grand Poisoner Hjla'''brival-xatch: a prodigal Kjsst’’’latch-ival scientist who spent far too much time living amongst the Koruul, she has become a bounty hunter who specializes in extracting information from her targets and leaving them mindless husks instead of killing them.

>>51564575
What would a tabloid like the enquirer headlines be in your species.

>>51564575
you mean the Rumar,Koruul is the "king"

>>51564600
Plorax:
Emperor Kinrotos XVI secretly EUPHORIUS ADDICT!
Novoros- Kelgast Preist "I fuck volupoteum whores with donations.)
What regiment does your personality match with
Are you a perpetual?

Brissi'tir
None cause it is a fucking waste for them
Volupoteum: Most of the headlines are actual news that happen there.

>>51564600

which species? I have two.

for the Kjsst''''latch-ival, the best weekly publication is called Mokal'''shizal-ikani--Firasi'''masye-lasiy, which translates into "The Status of Everything Weekly" and takes about 3 hours to read.

>>51564612
yes. yes i do.

>>51564646
This is excellent. Tell me some important worlds.

>>51564646
Rumar: just someone in the town center screaming about who is fighting in the death pits and how many people the local leader has killed and who can kill who

>>51564667
damn. I just want to imagine the headlines for the tabloids.
>I married a Yanweir! Sex is fiery
>Secrets about War hearder Hjet. No. 12 will shock you
>RIP SKJAL 4999-5559

>>51564711

it reads like the New York Times meets Marvel Comics.

>>51564711
Some famous gangs/ pirates.
Oobosian Corsairs: A famous pirate gang started at Oobo. They wer very powerful and influential. Destroyed by Great House Oriii. Leader is Jotor Issi, considered dead.

>>51564750
Yes lol. Do the Kjsst have gangs and criminals?

>>51564760
The Hydrogen Boys- A gang which has a massive influence. Originating from the bowels from Hikeros, they are known for fighting against the Red Cells. They control illegal arm sales. Currently led by K'llin Olis (Not plorax, but a Yzzerian, a species conquered by the plorax.)

>>51564789

no. they're too busy fighting amongst themselves to recognize the value of most other species, seeing most as non-threatening at best, and allies or mentors in very rare exceptions.

Kjsst'''latch-ival believe in eliminating threats completely. if they think of another species as a potential threat, its a species-wide near-genocidal event led by a War-Herder for either survival purposes or because the Rumar requested aid.

i say near-genocidal because they don't want to be responsible for wiping a fellow sentient species out entirely.

>>51564899
Yeah. Do you like making pop-culture references in your work. Like in my gangs, the second one (Hydrogen Boys) is referencing to the Bloods and the Crips.

>>51564899
Yeah. I wonder about the Rumar. The volupoteum have gangs, and there are criminals of thought crimes in the Brissi'tir. The Terin do have criminals, but they are mostly hacker gangs.

>>51564924

not particularly. since pop-culture is continually shifting and not entirely cyclical, the references lose contextual relevancy pretty rapidly.

I prefer to approach world building from an unexpected angle. like with the Yalwenir, who don't really -have- technology, as in manufactured goods from raw materials. they just -do- their crazy high end science naturally.

>>51565000
Depends, mostly. Most of my references are allegories, and sometimes I am very cynical.

>>51564989
the rumar have crimanials as they have no laws

>>51565049
Topkek. So I can do anything?
>Le lenny face.

>>51565049

its pretty safe to assume that most, if not all Rumar, are homicidal hedonistic one-man-armies with access to tech they can no longer explain but use with alarming effectiveness.

yes?

>>51565088
Yeah. Ploraxians are Germans who don't give a fuck and are badass.

>>51565088
not hedonistic though. I guess they could be sadists, maybe.

>>51565088
What are your spec-ops
Mine is the Death Guard.
The Pleasure Bastions
Geno-Hunters.

>>51565168
Emperors Centurions
Void Marines.

>>51565168

o.O
spec-ops in a culture constantly at civil war? I don't think anyone -survives- long enough to design a spec-ops training course.

if you manage to life long enough to fight something other than another Kjsst'''latch-ival, then survive the war that follows, you could be considered a Xenos Specialist. but that just means you've killed some aliens.

>>51565239
Alright. The Death Guard are the most elite soldiers ever fielded by the Ploraxians. Given through a brutal training course, cybernetically augmented, tough and resillient. They are one of the best ever made

Emperors Centurions: Some of the best warriors. They are tasked with maintaining the palace, and protecting the Emperor and his family
The Void Marines are knwon for their skills in the void, and their boarding of ships.

>>51565239
>Survives
What? Jesus Christ It'd not the the best life to be a common Kjsst Soldier.

>>51565239
Yeah. How would a Xeno specialist fare against an Eliete Death Guard Assasin?

>>51565310

the average lifespan of a Soldier is 6 years.
War-Herders are typically 10 or older.
Elders are range from 15-20.

the oldest Kjsst'''latch-ival ever, who was blessed by the Yalwenir when they arrived, was 45 when she died. her descendants are considered blessed with unnaturally long lives, living to about 30 if they're lucky.

I have a question for yall

What about the space pirates

>>51565397


Here desu sempai.
>>51564760
>>51564886

>>51565349

if they have eyes, they can be blinded.
if they have ears, they can be deafened.
if they breath air, they can be poisoned.

if one fails, they send another. if they fail, another takes its place.

>>51565088
yea the only "law" is no stealing as if you are caught and of not able to defeat the person you stole from you are sentecance to death or carrying

>>51565460
That... is a nice philosophy. I really like it. Soun ds badass.

>>51565621
>Battle log one
After Ithonak, I was sent to therapy. They healed me, they say I suffer from PTSD. I just got told that we are being sent to Old Sibula, to capture the place where the entire fracking war started. I guess you could call it another hell within a hundred lightyears.

>>51565669
>Battle Log Two
We were loaded onto the sixth transport fleet. Damn, I was scared. We were with the 35th Xenos Regiment. I got to meet Ton-Tir Zon, the General-Regent of the battalion. The first journey was just reading, and practicing, along with playing. I was never that social, really.

>>51565168
Each Clan Leader has his own personal guard
Koruul's Are dubbed the Cursed for their bad luck when they were given the job of taken Oothos Hu(the greatest fort on Ithonak) by themselves

they succeced

>>51565819
Yes, we heard about them. Some were able to take down Death Guard with their bare hands.

>>51565720
>Battle log three
We were given some shore leave while the ship got supplies, and we were enjoying it, until the Kjsst attacked the system. They were damn near close to finishing us off, until we went to warp speed right in their noses. I think most of the ship was incinerated, anyways. Kelgast bless, that was close.

>>51565819
One, Jonuum, took down 20 with only a box. Before his head blew up by a .75 calibre T-345 Sniper Rifle (Gauss).

>>51565925
Death Guard are not to be fucked with,

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>>51565885
>Battle Log four
We landed on Old Sibula, at a former Noodle Bites base. We repurposed the weapons left beind, and were mounting an attack on the kjsst.

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