/cyoag/ CYOA General

>>51440084
>Previous: Deleted
One before that, for reference: >>51420731

>>51440084
>>51440109
It was >>51433028 , for the sake of archive diving.

Anyway, my theory is that OP got banned for something they were doing elsewhere. Sometimes mods will do a board or site-wide purge of an IP's posts.

>>51440109
>>51440084
Why was the last thread deleted?

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>>51440167
No, this is clearly the sign of the End of days! Mods no longer look favourably on us, we are doomed!

>>51433079
Dominant -5 (Mandatory as the CYOA was shit.)
Customized Personality: (Blonde waifu) Submissive, (Redheaded waifu) Submissive to a fault. -1
Harem: One is Blond haired, blue eyed, thin and delicate looking but yet very resileant. TWo is Redhaired and green eyed, more robust but not much. Taller, and resileant.
I don't want to live in this world anymore -1 (Culture Orbital)
Different life, different place plus upgrades -3
Minor curse: Intelligence x2 -2

(Freebie!) +1
Cut and Stab over the body +4
Public Humil +2
Non-con +1
Collar/Begging +1
Piercings +2

>>51440167
The cow girl cyoa was reposted after it was deleted in the same thread, so I guess maybe they purged the thread?

>>51440167
>>51440172
>>51440193
I thought it was because of inadequate censoring in the CYOA posted by OP?

>>51440228
Didn't see any nudity in it, so doubtful.

>>51440193
Cowgirl was obviously deleted because it had a furry image or two. In addition, that probably pissed someone off (or the cannibalism did) and caused them to report it a bunch, otherwise mods ignore us.

>>51440276
>Didn't see any nudity in it, so doubtful.
Ban reason would seem to indicate otherwise.
>https://www.4chan.org/bans
I think it might've been either the uncensored fluids, or potentially that one character looking rather feminine and having exposed nipples.

Anyone got that one cyoa where you create your own dimension? It's the one where the points are called baubles.

>>51440339
Probably the nipples then desu.

>>51440084
why the fuck did they delete the thread???

>>51440403
See >>51440339

>>51440339
Based anon sacrificed hinmself to kill OP's faggotry.

I think it was the 'full' version of the image that ticked a mod off. Because there no reason to cut the fullk CYOA down to size.

>>51440396
That'd be Magical Realm. Should be in one of the archives listed in the pastebin.

>>51440429
I'm not sure I understand what you mean. The full CYOA (i.e. the one with all the pages in one image, posted by someone other than OP) had _more_ censoring than the one posted by OP.

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>>51440084
>Previous: Deleted

RAGE INDUCING

SPENT ALL MY FUCKING TIME DOING THIS

WEW LAD I'M MAD CUNT

Posting so I can redo it mother fuckers

>>51440538

Sex
Milking
Yearling
South america
Brown
Black
Ponytail
Dominant
Adoption
The basement
Milkmaid
Heels/collar
Large dose
None
None
Hand
Rape/isolation/chores
Sex x3

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>>51440574

Posting this one so I can do it too

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>>51440597

>>51440339
>>51440422
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

>>51440538
Well, if nothing else we can see if it is, in fact, the Cowgirl CYOA behind all this fuckery.

Fuckery aside, good job hitting most of my fetishes, anon. Your CYOA will hold a special place in my hard drive.

>>51440691

I didn't make it mate, but I sure did get a boner from it

>>51440161
Was anything good posted or can I forget about the thread?

Rolled 4, 1 = 5 (2d6)

>>51440578

Nizana
Sleeping chamber
All you can eat meat
Nude
Blessing/immortality/servants/
Aphrodisaiac +upgrade
Mistress nectar + upgade
Facesitting + upgrade
Sexual harrassment
Milking + upgrade
Foot worship
Sucubuss + upgrade
Liquid production + upgrade
Demonic device + upgrade
Orc
Dark elf maid + upgade
Forced incest + upgrade

ROLLAN

+5

miz'ri telenna -5
Mistress bedroom -6s
slave rations -2s
Fine clothes -6s
yandere -2s
immortality -4
blessing -3
courtesan training -2s
Romantic Gift -2s

be the girl +1

aphrodisiac +1
upgrade +1

Cursed +2s
Upgrade +2s

Mind alteration +1

Favorite Toy +2s
Upgrade +2s

Trigger Word +1
Upgrade +2

Demonic Device +2s

Sexual Harrassment +1

Succubuss +1
Upgrade +2s

Nightmares +1

Dark elf maid +1
Upgrade +1

Forced incest +1
Upgrade +2s

32 submission points

Going to skip the roll, either I end up with romantic relationship (roll 3-10) or mai waifu (1-2 or 11-20), both are pretty much the same thing under the circumstances.

>>51440097
>Nobledark
>Skill Thief
>Cursed One
>Astral Mark
>Khanda and Kodring
>Witch Allen
>Erefexus and Tatrenua
>Giant Crow
>Putrid Slum

Starting out at the very bottom of the bottom I'll became a powerful Wizard of Legend with a cult of devoted followers to destroy the corruption that plagues the world.

>>51440084
One Last Hope.

I am more or less Eldar Emperor without a physical non-warpstuff body, it seems. Well.

After attending to immediate and low-effort tasks with quick and visible benefits, I'll go and try to make an alliance with Emprah in exchange for fixing the warphole he is sitting on and letting him actually do stuff instead of slowly rotting away.

Then we go and stomp over the rest of the setting, I guess. I'll try to get myself an actual physical body at some point, probably. Depending on difficulties, it might be either one of the first things I do or post-victory development. Then I fuck off into another dimension to relax after a job well done.

Or I get betrayed by Emperor eventually and die. Forces of destruction are unlikely to be capable of defeating Emperor/Humanity united with Eldar, but Emperor hates aliens sooo...

Or Emperor refuses my offer and then we all slowly die because I probably can't make eldar alone strong enough to handle Tyranids or whatever other apocalyptic threat is probably incoming quickly enough. Maybe I can sit out tyranids inside of Webway.

Alternatively, Emperor. Emperor option is easy modo of the good side in this CYOA, more or less, especially since cyoa just gives you functional webway entrance for free.

what are /tg/ opinion on cyoa that has point/credits to choose option and a cyoa that did not implement point but tells you the amount of option that you can choose?

>>51440988
the first can be good as long as it isn't 50000 credits and every option is 6.75 credits.

The second can be good as long as there is a drawbacks section so I can take more.

>>51440084
Alternatively, team evil. C'tan and Hivemind are easy mode.

Orc needs to ramp up before hitting that level, and is vulnerable to headcapping in a way neither C'tan or Hivemind are.

Chaos god option is probably the weakest out of the bunch. Now there are Five Chaos god in the galaxy, big deal. Without worship you'll probably soon sputter out and demote yourself to just being one of the five.

>>51441039
>Chaos god option is probably the weakest out of the bunch. Now there are Five Chaos god in the galaxy, big deal. Without worship you'll probably soon sputter out and demote yourself to just being one of the five.

Chaos gods do not need worshipers to maintain their power. As long as their element is present and active in the galaxy, they keep growing.

Having many worshipers spreading it faster helps, but it's not that decisive.

>>51440988
I prefer point system because it's easier to balance. It's just so weird whenever an effect like "immortality with inbuilt reincarnation in case you do get killed" competes with "You don't need to take showers and always smell nice".

Point system allows you to combine larger and smaller effects within the same list, as well as allowing people to prioritize different sections (e.g. body, artifacts, companions, whatever), by spending more points on those and less on the others.

>>51440988

I agree with>>51441172
But I like the simplicity of "choose 1 from this category" for each section, preferably with at least 5 options each. eg. choose 1 of the 5 types of immortality, body, companions etc.

>>51440582
pride seems the best

>>51441245
>pride seems the best
pride *is* the best

>>51441172
>companions
This is why I like point systems over choosing from each category. I get more stuff because I don't want companions instead of being forced to pick the people I least dislike

>>51440988
The former has bigger chances of build variety as you aren't restricted to only choose one per section. However, a "choose one per section" is simpler and doesn't run the risk of backtracking or meticulously tracking your spent points.
If done well, points are better, but it is easier to screw up.

>>51440538
I dont know, this just goes like, 18 steps outside my comfort zone. There's no way I can even pretend this is could be part of a wholesome and loving relationship. But im going to darn well try.

Goal: Love
Income: Farming
Age: Heifer
Origin: North America
Skin color: tan
Hair color: Black
Hair Style: Bob
Personality: Dominant, Loving
Acquisition: Free Will
Living Quarters: With you
Clothes: Human Clothes
Accessories: Cowboy hat
Breasts: All natural
Transformative drugs: Bull Cock
Surgery: None
Milking: By Hand
Punishments: reprimand, chores
Rewards: Praise, affection, sex

Fuck you for making this. Fuck me for playing this sick CYOA.

>>51441874
>sick
Ignore the "slavery", "turn into meat" and "cut her tendon" options you baby
No one forced you to play it

>>51441874
>Not wanting a cute sub to be your 24/7 petgirl

>>51441990
Fuck you. I took Dominate, loving and bull cock because the Gentle Femdom CYOA has opened doors that I can't shut. CYOAs are ruining my life and showing me things about myself that i'm not wholly comfortable with.

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>>51442062
>CYOAs are ruining my life

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>>51442062
>Gentle Femdom made me a futafag

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>>51442073
>CYOAs are ruining my life

They are, escapism is bad it prevents you from having to face reality or improve yourself

>>51442062
So leave the thread idiot

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>>51442101
Don't you think I know that? I used to just fantasize about hetero normative relationships. Now i'm like, at the gym and a tall jacked lady walks uses the treadmill beside me and i'm all "take me now". CYOAs have led me to question my own sexuality. Crises mode GO.

>>51442158
>used to just fantasize about hetero normative relationships
>a lady walks
>i'm all "take me now"
>question my own sexuality
Tits or gtfo.

Does anyone know the max size of the files we can upload? I saw SDA post some GIF card things and I want to make OC with animated content. I'm thinking a 36 frame loop for each page.

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>>51442109
CYOA authors are the devil. The better CYOAs they make the more evil they are.

>>51442158
Oh you sweet, sweet summer child. This is just the edge of this very dark hole you're about to jump down into. It's gonna get very, very weird, very,very fast. I've gone round the bend so many times and seen such genuinely fucked-up shit that I'm right back to being able to get off to a shapely girl simply walking down the street and flashing the camera a wink/smile.

>>51442202
8mb

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>>51442239
8mb? Boss. And SDA said making CYOAs in video editing programs was a silly idea. I'm going to show her.

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>>51442158
Is this boy really worried about liking healthy women?

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>>51442329
This girl is worried about liking tall powerful women and then wanting them to have dicks.

>>51442257
If you plan to export a .webm, you're still limited to 3mb on /tg/. Only images and .pdfs have the 8mb size limit.

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>>51442359
Ah. Well, homosexuality is nothing new, I'm sure she will figure it out.

>>51442402
Do GIF's count as "images"?

>>51441505
Lots of cyoa just ask you to pick too many companions. I can't even imagine what I would do with 3 people let alone 5 or 10.

>>51442448
>mfw playing wizardry

>>51442448
I always go with the headcannon that all companion choices are people I'll run into eventually during my adventures. Maybe just once, maybe some'll have reoccurring roles. Helps flesh out the world for me.

did anybody get that hero cyoa from the last thread before it got deleted?

>>51442446
no

>>51442704
ok, so let me clarify, if i was to export a cyoa as a gif, id be restricted to 3mb?

>>51442719
>>51442446
Anon I think it would be faster if you just tested this yourself. I mean, really, wow, posting an image on 4chan, such effort.

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>>51442728
Worlds will burn before I take that obvious option, that I didn't think of at all. Good idea anon.

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>>51442446
>>51442704
>>51442728
Let's test that out.

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>>51442764
Well, shit. Here's a version with 204 frames.

>>51442764
Alright! 4.24Mbs! Fuck yeah, that means we are go for the 8mb cap! Ballin!

>>51442764
pls remove effect on name it gives seizure

>>51442801
Anyone have a link to the image version?

>>51442851
It's in the PDF at the top.

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>>51442851
Check the Pastebin for Slut Life Anon's Mega folder.

>>51442859
>>51442870
Does anyone have a non download based version?

>>51442870
But is Sarge trained on gorilla warfare?

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>>51442904
>gorilla warfare

>>51442870
holy fuck,
looking back my old drawing really makes me want to kill myself

These threads have been really slow the past couple of days.

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>>51442934
Lies

>>51443173
Why don't you fix that by commenting on people's build asking them questions?

>>51440183
What CYOA is this one from?

>>51442158
Oh just give it a month of indulging in futa and you'll rise back up to vanilla. Right before you fall right back down to an even deeper pit then the one you are in now.

>>51442158
>using the treadmill
You're gonna lose your gains man

>>51443352
Anon Brah, I'm not a dude. And I squat all the time to defat dutch flat butt.

>>51442158
>>51442359
>>51443478
Stop attention whoring.

>>51443332
>>51443352
Stop endulging the attention whore.

>>51443478
squatting for shape is great because it gives a nice shape to the ass, thighs, and stomach, but it isn't exactly a defattening exercise

>>51442446
Yes, they do. I'm amazed that no one else knew this.

>>51443478
>defat
Can't do that through exercise only through eating less.
If you want dat ass you will see far better results with hip thrusts

>>51443526
I need a fatter butt, not the other way around. How else will I tempt people into sloppy makeouts? But like >>51443523 strongly suggested, lets do CYOA. Anyone have any suggestions for an online image sequence to GIF converter? im looking for something that can handle 48 495x800p images

>>51443556
if you are at a stable weight and then start to exercise more but still eat the same you will lose fat

>>51443580
Yes, if you increase your exercise without changing your diet you will be at a deficit, correct.
When I say "eating less" I mean "eating at a calorie deficit" which can be achieved through eating less or exercising more.

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>>51443568
Found it! http://ezgif.com/maker
it comes with an optimizer! XD
test render bitches. It lives.

>>51443647
except the first post you made said that you can't do that through exercise only through eating less, which isn't true, you can take either approach or both

anyone either know the name of or have the cyoa that details transforming into a woman? It has two pages, is an image based cyoa, and starts of with options about how fast the change takes place. It also has options that prevent being able to wear underwear, become a (hyper)bimbo, and some other stuff I can't really remember.

>>51443658
>XD
Jesus Christ. One chick comes into the thread and this place turns into Gaia. Get the fuck out of here.

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>>51443705
Make some OC that makes me.

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>>51443690
Sharing is caring.

>>51443745
except your first post said that that's not the case

>Can't do that through exercise only through eating less.

>>51443731
That's exactly the one I was looking for, thanks.

>>51443705
Good lord now I remember how much of a complete anus people can be on that site.

Still working on Hell Invasion, I think you guys will like the new abilities.

Wow, the thread's slow today.

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>>51441402
Yeah, Pride is just straight up broken.

It was balanced a bit in the fan remake tho

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>>51443718
ok

>>51443752
Fine, I'll make it absolutely clear, just for you:
> I squat all the time to defat dutch flat butt.
sounds like you/her is saying that spot reduction - removing fat from an area through specific exercises - is possible.
It is not.

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>>51443910
fan remake also added a lot of things, so now it's seven pages

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>>51443932
I really need a pdf of this

>>51443917
i see what you meant now, but you phrased it very poorly since any simple interpretation of what you said leads to a completely different thought

really, i still can't find any clue of you saying a thing about exercising a single spot specifically even after you explained what you said

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>>51443941
If I can remember to, I might post the virtues much much later tonight. I can't now because I have to go soon

>>51443915
To be honest, managing to get five shots off into your own head would be kind of impressive

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>>51443954

>>51443961
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>>51443962

>>51442448
Harems.

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>>51443731
>>51443754
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>>51444023

>>51440538
Goal: FUN!
Income: Farming!
Age: Calf!
Origin: Who knows!
Skin colour: Tan I guess.
Hair colour: White! Moo!
Hair style: Straight!
Personality: Cheerful & hardworking!
Acquisition: Adoption!
Living quarters: The cottage!
Outfit: Human clothes!
Accessories: Cowboy hat!
Breat hormones: All natural!
Transformative drugs: None!
Surgery: None!
Milking technique: By hand!
Punishments: Chores & isolation & reprimand!
Rewards: Praise & affection & rest!

>>51443917

Lets make this more clear. "Dutch flat butt" is where people with dutch ancestry dont have a very large butt. A "flat" butt. So when we do squats its to get butt gains, making it a larger butt.

>>51443915
You went really far to prove a point. I can see how much getting femanons off the board means to you.

>>51443393
>Male
>Wildman(+2 Lit, +1 Tech)
Never lived in a city, and never will. If ya ask me, they're for pansies too weak to make their way in the wilds.
>Women's Weapon(Club)
>Survivalist Clothes
I mean, all I've got are a club and the clothes on my back, and I get by just fine.
>Inheritor
Not much to say, really. The old hag more or less forced me to fend for myself, and I think that club's the ONLY thing she ever gave me.
>Talented(Phys)
>Special(Phys)
Not that I mind too much. Wouldn't be nearly as strong as I am if I hadn't had to fend for myself.
>Close To Nature
>Berserker Rage
And I've definitely learned how to get by as a result.

>Stats:
Phys 10
Tech 3
Lit 3
Rep 0

Companions:
>Xandra
>Franz
Now these two, they love a good fight almost as much as I do. Almost. Together we're be a force to be reckoned with.

>Moonchild: The Beast
And what better enemy to test our mettle against than the greatest beast there is?

>>51443909

>>51443173
>>51443216

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>>51442158
>tfw 4chan made you want to become a girl
This website has taken everything from me.

slow thread today, anons.

>>51444173
4chan has given me all kind of horrible fetishes. I don't think it's been worth it.

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>>51443393
>Men
>Fulmin (+2 Tech)
>Special (+3 Tech), Gifted (+1 Tech), Gifted (+1 Lit)
>Elder Scrolls, Technical Marvel
>Cpt. Verdin, Hunnard

>Mission: The Highway

Sehm, hm? I suppose I'll tend her interests for now. But this 'oil' stuff, its applications - imagine what I could make! Where the flesh fails, steel will prevail. No matter how strong a human becomes, the body has its limits. But technology - technology can grow stronger and stronger without limits!

You see, nature is unfair. The Gods did not make us equal. So I WILL.

When I have evened the playing field, given even a born cripple the means to fight back against the long night, they will hail a new god. A God of the Forge.

ME.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9SITtJDz5X0

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I've got roughly 3 pages worth of content left and three days before my deadline (nobody cares about it except for me). Can I finish my CYOA in time?

>>51443910

Lust because I basically already do that

>>51440578
1D20

>>51440578
>Peaked her interest
>peak
Delete this CYOA

>>51440538
>>51440691
A lot of anons had their jimmies rustled by two options in particular, the beef sale and the tendons cutting. Someone even jokingly posted a version with the beef option removed (not gonna lie, I kek'd at the "Nothing to see here" text). Would have preferred an alternative source of income over just removing an option but eh...

Concerning the second issue, the thought that the "cow" would be prevented from standing (having instead to go around on all four) is intriguing, but not every anon would want to inflict this permanently and surgically. So maybe an option could be added to accessories for bindings that would achieve this result (like leather bands, connected by a metal rod, that are wrapped around her tighs and legs) but aren't used as a form of punishment? (Might take a while to find a picture for those though)

>>51444340
What CYOA are you working on anon?

>>51444359
Don't you want to pick any perks?

>>51443731
>Transformation
Slow burn.
>Body
Atheletic build, Subte chest size. Feminine butt that is Built to last. Full-scale height.
150 points.

>Sexuality
Dual-classing. In-charge. Right moment.
130 points.

>Identity
Enemy territory. Continue: 20 years!. No overdrive.
130 points.

>Companions
No idea.
Karen Iruga, help her out a bit.
Estelle Wright because she sounds odd in a fun way, and her family sounds great.
110 points.

>Abilities
Balls of steel.
Menstrual cancel.
Feeling fresh.
Spark touch.
Birth control.
Flawless skin.
Love Life Link

That should be all.

>>51444340
Assuming your deadline doesn't involve having a finished and polished product, then yea, you could do it if you could get two of the pages down in one day, leaving the last day to edit and clean it up. If you don't mind terrible mistakes all over your cyoa, then just do one page a day. If you can't even get an average of one a day down, regardless of your reasons, then you probably won't be able to meet your deadline. Of course, a page is very vague, as it could potentially fill several images if your going that route.

>>51444405
It's a sequel (kinda) to the Blood Magic CYOA. I've posted WIPs earlier in the month on it.

>>51444435
Rushing things sounds terrible. But I'm going to do it anyway, because that's what I promised.

>>51444456
I mean, as long as there isn't a big reason for you to meet this deadline, aside from your sense of duty to do so, then you could always just rush it to meet the deadline and polish the product afterwards. There is no need for it to be perfect from the get go.

>>51444415

Missed that part
Fluidity II
Black cane
Demon advice

>>51443393
>Woman
>Catamite (+1 int)
>Majestic attire
>Animal scout
>Special X2 (Beau +6)
>Elsvira
>Korbon
>Harridan, the city
I'm not focusing on military might, but on subterfuge. I'll use my charms to take over the city from the inside out and let the clan members in. Then I'll use my understanding with the men to craft a working society that can sustain the women.
The animal companion is to deliver messages to the invading clans, Elsvira seems like she'd understand the written word and could comprehend a complex plan.
Final stats:
Str: 1
Dex: 1
Int: 4
Beau: 10
In an alternative build I take inheritor for less stat increases and swap out the majestic attire for a title.

>>51444042
Only the attention seeking ones.
I'm pretty sure I never notice most female Anons ("femanon"? stay in /soc/) until they go out of their way to say "i'm a girl btw" and instantly draw in orbitters whom they keep stringing along in off-topic egostroking conversations

>>51444427
>slow burn
gross

>>51444568
I'd like to make most out of my current life, thank you.

>>51444456
could you post it? it sounds cool!

>>51444605
np ;)

>>51442764
>>51442783
Just think, the more colors you add that crappier that's going to look as your palette gets spread real thin.

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I just started this one
There isn't much but is the overall feel and colour palatte good?

>>51444795
I can immediately see you read the SDA tutorial
looks good though

>>51444795
yes

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>>51444484
I think my sense of duty is a pretty big reason. But we'll see. If I fail to truly finish it in time, I'll just push the deadline back.

>>51444638
What, you mean a WIP? Sure, I can show the first page. I can't find the previous version that I've shown, so I'll post how it currently looks like instead.
Might as well listen to any complaints. I think I've managed to make the text more readable than the last time, but I would never know.

>>51444826
It works though
anyway, thanks dude

>>51444069
>all I've got are a club and the clothes on my back
you get 4 items as a wildman actually

>>51444392
I made that edited image. I honestly hated the cannibalism option myself, but I hated the bickering and shitposting about it more in the previous thread. I didn't have the skill to make an alternative, but that's changing.

>>51440538
Gonna make a fetish fulfilling build for this cause why not.

Sex
Milking, Breeding
Yearling(tempted to go calf but I'm not that depraved yet)
Europe
Pale
Red
Straight
Skittish
Kidnap
The Basement
Bikini Combo
No Accessories
Overdose
Udder Growth, Extra Breasts, Weight Gain
Machine
Rape, Restraints
Affection, Food, Sex
Because she has so many enormous breasts there's no way she's going anywhere. I'll just keep her down there constantly breeding her, while living off the profits. She'll probably get used to it eventually.

>>51444880
Looking forward to finding out what you'll replace it with then.

What do you think of my alternative to tendons removal? Would you consider throwing that in as well?

>>51444795
>palatte
You seem to be mixing the words "palate" (relevant definition: "a person's appreciation of taste and flavor") and "palette" (relevant definition: "the range of colors used in a particular picture").
>>51444840
Intro bit, center column, topmost paragraph: "begun" should be "began".

>>51444795
>>51444930
Also forgot to mention that yes, what is there looks fine. Looking forward to the finished product.

>>51444930
I did mean palatte

>>51444840
The Convention sounds like a very large group with an even larger god complex that probably shouldn't be helped back on its feet. Is there really a reason to beyond having the means to beat the unnamed bad guy? Do they REALLY do more good than harm?

>>51444840
> The end justifies the means
> Right off the bat
While I can respect the straightforwardness, everything's going to be alluah ackbared for that mentality at some point.

>>51444795
Color wise It's a good start. I suggest using a red-orange for things you want to have pop, but make sure to use it sparingly. Also, seeing what your already using, instead of using a true black go with a deep blue to keep the color scheme or a deep brown to throw a bit of warmth into it.

>>51444930
Tsk tsk, don't be salty.

>>51444909
>Looking forward to finding out what you'll replace it with then.
Think of making an expansion. It's simple enough and there's already a rule set, setting, and palette.

>What do you think of my alternative to tendons removal?
The Enslaved CYOA above has a similar option where the tendons are shortened by magic, which seems like a good middle-ground. Not too gruesome, cruel or painful, but the fetish anons still get their immobile girls. I mean, we have "drugs" that transform the cowgirl, so why not have a drug for high-heeled feet? Foot binding is an okay alt too.

>>51443876
Sure I will, enjoyed Hell Invasion in spite of the excessive points given for Powers, Weapons and Companions.

>>51444945
>I did mean palatte
What, like a portmanteau of the two actual words?
>>51445002
>Tsk tsk, don't be salty.
I think you may have linked the wrong post. If not, please point out where you found the salt.

>>51445049
Baise-moi I always mispell palette
thanks for pointing it out

>>51440578
5 points
>Nizana Rhomduil-2
Her and Miz'ri Telenna are the only two slaves I'd consider here.
Going to start off with reprimands first
>Aphrodisiac+upgrade-4
>Cursed-6
>Favorite toy-8
>facesitting-9
>trigger word-10
>sharing is caring, Miz'ri Telenna
>Milking+upgrade-13
>Liquid Production+upgrade-16
>Forced Incest-17
No going oto how I'll spend my day
>Slave Shack-15
>Red Sludge-15
>Slave Outfit-15
>More Free Time-10
>Immortality-6
>Secret Submissive-1
>Escape tools-0
Freedom Pts-8 minus a rolled 9=0
Sub Pts-4
Fate Number:0
Indifferent.
Ain't so bad really. Not the worse that could have happened. I still get my mistress, I;m still respected by the other slaves, and I still have my relative.

>>51444930
Thanks, fixed.

>>51444957
Sure, you can instead destroy the Convention if you want, this CYOA can be played that way too, it's included. Personally, I think they do more good than harm, but the question is whether or not I succeed at showing my point later in the CYOA. Probably not.

>>51444984
In the end, it will be up to the player to decide whether the end justifies the means or not, and then make appropriate decisions based on that.

>>51440106
Winter.

Blue.

Feather.
Instinct.
Rekindle.

Elmata.

>>51445032
I think bindings are a better option since, being grounded in reality, they work as fetish fuel (more so than a magic spell). It also is something that you, as master, decide when to apply and when to take off. Granted you could make that the case with magic too (have the tendons grow back whenever wished), but with the bindings the girl could take them off herself. Getting her to not do so would be a pretty impressive display of loyalty.

>>51444880
>editing cyoas
you are garbage

>>51445314
Not him, but I've been stealthily editing cyoas for months and no one has noticed.

>>51445314
cyoas are already garbage someone edited up at home lmao

>>51445341
Add more cuck shit.
The butthurt amuses me.

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Finished the header
It is basically going to be a mix of pocker dimension and superhuman

Anyone know if the Lavender cyoa has had an update?

>>51445447
We know many things.

>>51445314
>Caring about joke edits.

>>51445263
Well, you got me sold on your idea.

>>51445447
I has had many updates.

>>51445447
AFAIK there hasn't been an update since "WIP #6".

>>51440538
Goal - Fun
Income - Breeding, Beef (given that I'm in for this for fun options that won't tie me down for too long are preferable, plus I've always wanted to know what cowgirl meat tastes like)
Age - Heifer
Origin - Asia
Skin - Tan
Hair Color - Black
Hair Style - Straight
Personality - Submissive, Loving (poor bastard probably haven't realized what I've got planned for her)
Acquisition - Foreclosure (bet that she didn't think that this would be the way how she would end up paying up for her family's debt)
Living Quarters - Barn (there is no fun in having a cow if she ain't gonna live like a cow)
Outfit - Nudie Cow (since when cows have wore human clothing?)
Accessories - Cowbell Collar
Breast Hormones - All Natural
Transformative Drugs - None (here on anon's ranch we don't live in such things as harmful drugs or hormone treatments, our cow meat will be 100% organic and wholesome and the cows are treated with care and respect they deserve)
Surgery - Septum Piercing, Ear Tag, Branding (would had taken tendon cutting too but I think that the meat quality suffers if the cow aren't allowed to regularly exercise)
Milking Technique - By Hand
Punishments - Restraints, Isolation, Reprimand
Rewards - Praise, Affection, Sex

Now we only need to find a good quality breeding stud, wouldn't want that calf to end up having bad genetics, would we?

>>51445438
>criptic
I think you meant to type "cryptic".
Also, if you're going to have the number's color fade to dark like that, you should give it a drop shadow or something that separates it clearly from the dark background. Or just ditch the light-to-dark gradient on it.

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>>51444069
It's a shame your talents are wasted on mere survival, friend. With your wilderness experience, you could bring undiscovered medicines and crops to the cities. You could do what nature failed to do - GIVE everyone born into this world a fair shot at success.

Besides, can you really say you don't wish for anything more than barely scraping by in the cold, with only the same two people for company at any time? Wandering the wastes with no record of your name? Can you really say you wouldn't like someplace warm to spend the night, a bandage for your wounds, and to know you won't be eaten in your sleep?

Every bear must have its den, after all.

>>51445497
Cool. In the description for the bindings you may also want to throw in something like "Comes with optional knee pads, for caring masters or just to keep her knees from becoming rough and thick-skinned."

>>51445547
I appreciate the criticism. This is my first ever attempt at making a cyoa, I am learning.

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Better?

>>51445594
With how dark the darker shade of the gradient is, the dropshadow doesn't do much. Try a glow instead (like dropshadow, but with white instead of black, and preferrably right behind the thing instead of slightly down and to the right of the number).

>>51444795
Outer glow could probably be a light sickly greenish yellow instead of a pure looking white.

>>51445438
much better background.

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>>51445641
something like this?
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>>51444551
I must commend your remarkably clever solution to the problem at hand! Talent such as yours ought to be respected in this world. If someone could make the cities overall a safer place to be, then perhaps they will. With how instrumental you'll be in the founding of your new society, you could even become royalty in your own right!

And if it does come down to it, another might always offer mechanical assistance.

>>51445497
Oh, you know what's another thing a cow wouldn't normally be able to do? Grasp things.
You could include special gloves designed to not let her use fingers.
No eating using cutlery. Or hands. Just bite into the stuff.

>>51445796
Having the gradient on the number end on a lighter shade is good, the number is much more visible now.

What are some more military building cyoas that lets me become a Big Boss with my own MSF or DD? Only one I found in the drive is Girls Military.

>>51445796
I think that gives it a unique flavour. Should consider contrasting the text a little more, maybe with a very subtle transparent text box.

Also think you should lessen the opacity on the cloud texture a little; let the space background stand out a little more.

Not sure how I feel about that "4" though. It looks too detached from the rest of the text. Maybe if you had some sort of icon to represent the resource (a coin or whatever) beside the 4, it'd make sense. Otherwise, it'd be better to stick with just a "4 joker points" with an underline beneath it in the normal body typeface.

>>51444840
I still think it's pretty hard to read a lot of the text bodies here. It's much better than before, but I think you should aim for paler and brighter colours on the text. Particularly for the red/green/blue text, it doesn't contrast too great with the black shadows.

The drop shadow around some text (particularly smaller and thinner fonts) is also too defined, making it hard to see the text itself.

anyone know what happened to the guardians of the galaxy cyoa?

>>51446050
Still being made, from what I've heard.

>>51446050
I've just been kinda busy, sorry. The first page is completely done, I just need to finish writing up some companions for the second page. Some of their backstories are absolutely ridiculous, and I need to try to figure out how to trim it down into a little profile.

Any idea for a small, beginner friendly cyoa?
I have some ideas for a cyoa but it's probably beyond my abilities so I want something else to gain experience.

>>51446169
Pick a planet/time-line/alternate universe to be reborn in. Everything from different rules to different races to different ways that people interact.

>>51446169
Farm CYOA?
Post-Apocalypse CYOA?
Quirky waifu CYOA?

>>51446169
all cyoas are beginner friendly, the cyoa genre itself exists because of this in the first place

>>51446207
>All cyoas are beginner friendly.
What is Traveller and other massive cyoas?

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>>51446169
a smug cyoa

>>51446227
>doing something for a retarded amount of time means it's harder xD

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the first "great one" you can align yourself with
working on the description

>>51446258
>muslim phosphorus - "the mother"
Ah yes, the most motherly combination possible, it truly does invoke motherhood more than anything else.

>>51446256
No, it means it's not beginner friendly.
No way someone who isn't into CYOAs is gonna read through these things.

>>51446169
Any CYOA that uses "pick X number of options," rather than "spend Y number of points options that cost a varying number of points."

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>>51446169
Anything that isn't fantasy or space. You don't have to make a space opera in the beginning. A little lore would be nice, but don't go full elder scrolls, just a few little tweaks to the norm that make it stand out or something completely new that you don't have to take a page to explain.

>>51446300
kek I just came up with a random name

>>51446207
Hardly. Monster Waifu and Star Dust are both cyoas but clearly took a lot more effort than the other.

>>51446191
I know jack shit about farm and post-apocalypse is too nice for a single page cyoa.

>>51446183
I'm probably going to make it or the quirky waifu. Get some experience designing and writing.

>>51446339
>it's impossible to read more than 3 pages of plain text unless you're into CYOAs
>no no no, books don't exist, what are you talking about

>>51446258
Can't wait til the whole thing's out, matehead.

>>51446360
Quirky waifu it is, then.

>>51446360
Doesn't matter how much effort it takes, it's still far less than almost any other creative endeavor. Even a 100 page CYOA takes a lot less effort than 100 pages of a novel. A CYOA about space ships takes a ton less effort than a video game about space ships. That's why CYOAs, even long and involved ones, are completely entry level.

>>51446227
Actually a Traveler-clone is incredibly newbie friendly. It's very simple when you think about it. Most of the CYOA is "pick one of the options here", and each section has a bunch of items that are pretty much copies of each other or ripped offed from games or other media.
And since it's just text you can easily add more bloat and you don't have to think of its presentation.

>>51446371
Oh, so you mean "reading", instead of "playing" the CYOA. Because yeah, good luck getting your friends into point-counting multiple-paged pictureless CYOAs.
I don't get how this is hard for you to understand.
Some CYOAS are "choose 3 items" and anyone can get into them. Others are long and no one who's not interested in spending their time adding and subtracting points from a makeshift character sheet on Word will give them a shot, so usually they're not beginner friendly. This is so unarguable that I don't even know what point you're trying to make.

>get an idea for a cyoa you could make
>have never made a cyoa before and don't own the programs people normally use to make them in

fug

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>>51446350
>You don't have to make a space opera in the beginning.

>>51446419
>have never made a cyoa before
First time for everything.
>don't own the programs people normally use to make them in
So get one of the ones you can acquire for free. Symbiobro has provided some tips for peeps that use GIMP, for example.

>>51446418
no, i was replying to the post i linked, the original issue was about creating

but hey, i don't mind a change in conversation topic

i disagree with what you said in this post now, and not because it's wrong, but because it's irrelevant to the issue of whether cyoas in general are beginner friendly

the entire genre exists because it's beginner friendly compared to other genres like books and video games and so on that take incomparable amounts of dedication, planning, and skill

even traveler is just a cyoa like any other, except the author didn't feel like making 20 cyoas like most other authors do and just stuck to one and layered on more and more of the same easy stuff into it

>>51446455
>first time for everything
Very true, and I think I did actually try making one before.

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>>51446455
>GIMP

>>51445549
Y'know, you city-dwellers do like to talk fancy. But unlike most city-dwellers I've met, I kinda like the sound of what you're saying. My name going down in history? Teachin' city-dwellers to not be such weaklings? I might just give some thought to it.

After I've hunted down that great beast, that is. Can't go letting a hunt like that slip past me.

>>51446455
>So get one of the ones you can acquire for free
I want someone to try and use blender to make a cyoa. I know it's 'possible' and it's free, but good luck.

What are some cyoas currently being developed?

>>51445796
Yes that looks better imo.

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>>51446556

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>>51446602
some lazy stuff

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>>51446642

>>51445046
You'll have 30 total options for powers and 15 choices. I do believe that isn't too much.

As for weapons there won't be preset weapons, but each weapon has a certain amount of mods (rapid fire, scope, cooling mechanism, etc). Basically design your own.

>>51446602
Something lewd and/or fetishy.

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>>51446663

>>51446587
Reminder that many kinds of paid software can be acquired for free if you know where to look.

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>>51446602
>got 3 different projects going on
>stuck with a writer's block

>>51446665
In your WIP you posted at one point, I noticed people had 2 free ranks in something. So is it 30 powers as in 10 powers with three ranks each, or something like that?

>>51446169
Do a choose an item or three type with a standard background intro like, "Antique store being closed", "store that you've never seen before, when you go back it's gone", "saved a person who rewards you with a choice or three", etc..

Those are the easiest to start with if you can come up with interesting powers for the items.

>>51446678
What the hell am I looking at?

>>51446678
>Visionaries
>Boobageddon sizes.

Wat? Is this a fan page?
I thought that CYOA was complete already.

>>51446746
>>51446775
I work on it infrequently from time to time.
Threw together the companions as a proof of concept with whatever art I had.

>>51446724
12 powers with 3 ranks which are generalized.

4 powers with 3 ranks which are class specific.

Hold on I did my math wrong it should actually be 16 x 3 = 48 total points. I might actually increase it from 15.

>>51446721
I recently managed to put and end to a nearly month-long writer's block for mine. Now I'm just hoping that I can avoid getting into another one.

>>51446798
Then you have some weird taste in art. If that changes, then colour me interested.

>>51446798
you could develop some taste for art before doing this, it would improve your life a lot more

>>51446678
Boobageddon page came completly out of the blue

>>51446300
Mother of explosions and goat sex.

>>51446828
>goat sex
Shib Nigurrat is called black goat of the woods, you on to something there.

>>51446854
isn't shub niggurath one of the three elemental forces of the universe along with yog sothoth and azatoth

>>51446419
>I started making it

heyyyy nice
granted all I did was start filling in the background but shit even if I were to get that and the title made by the end of tomorrow I'd consider myself to be somewhat productive

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>>51446817
>>51446819
You should cultivate some appreciation for the female form.

>>51446863
No, she's an Outer God and thus a far, far, FAR greater deal than beings like Cthulhu, but she's not on Yog and Azathoth's level. One of them is literally the god who dreams reality into being, the other is everything in the universe and somehow what's outside of it.

>>51446874
I have an appreciation for he female form, but it has to match the setting and not be blown out of proportion.

You know you can tell who's the normie when they have a fucking epiphany when they discover a new fetish.

>>51446910
fuck you, discovering a new fetish is always a delight

>that feel when you come after masturbating for four hours straight and shoot a fucking geyser across your room

>>51446874
There's female form, and then there's this >>51446678

Overalll it's looking pretty terrible so far.

>>51446775
>>51446827
Can't seem to find Boobageddon, is it also a mix of in depth strategy and inexplicable busts?

>>51440538
it's time for slice of life with qt cowgirls

Fun!
Farming
Calf
Pale
Brown
Ponytail
Cheerful/Hardworking
Auction (Rescuing her)
With Me/Cottage (at her discretion)
Human Clothes
Cowboy Hat
All Natural
None
None
Whoever she marries will decide it with her
Reprimand/Chores
Praise/Rest/Gifts

>>51440097
Nobledark
Skill Thief
Marked Hero
Astral mark
Solais
Kriscarn
Witch Allyn
Micaela
Erefexus
Giant Crow

>I have no idea how things will turn out - whether I'll have my gifts upon arrival or find them over the course of wild adventures. But whatever the particulars, I can be sure I'll be at the forefront of a reformation. Let the games begin.

>>51446925
>he can do a basic male function
Truly impressed anon. You should write that in your blog.

>>51446966
The busts are not an intregral feature.
The boobs are going to be replaced in the final version. (unless you really really like them or hate them enough for me to keep them out of spite)

>>51447001
>his every orgasm is the same, a few drops of cum
I think you should go see a doctor.

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>Everyone else is posting their wips.

Well, then, so shall I. Tell me what you think.

>>51447001
>>51446925
He's an alien, trying to pretend to fit in.
>tfw when you use your eyes to perceive light
>tfw you get really hungry so you eat something
>relatable, right?

>>51446468
Sitcoms are an entry level media for TV shows and movies, and yet there are entry-level sitcoms and more complex ones.
Same thing with CYOAs.

>>51447073
Oh? Okay then, let's see the sitcom you made if it's just as easy as making a CYOA.

>>51447038
Oh no, I don't care about the portraits, I can imagine characters looking however I like. Just couldn't find boobageddon anywhere and wondered if it also had strategic elements.

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I added the gods' images and I am now brainstorming for descriptions, pros and cons

So each god pretty much represents how you'll be using your newfound powers

>>51447092
No it's a post-apocalype survival where you choose companions and things for your settlement.

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>>51446602
New Space Opera?

>>51447090
>onions have layers
>cakes have layers
>therefore cakes are a kind of onion (or vice versa)

>>51447052
I skimmed it rather than thoroughly reading it, what I'm not seeing yet is the thing you do to stand out.
The setting uses some existing and recognizable tropes, which is servicable and carries a story without needing much elaboration but it's not your wow factor either.
Any unique mechanics?

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>>51447090

>>51447045
You should start a youtube channel all about how much you ejaculate anon, you'll get alot of views.

>>51447139
>he never ate an onion cake

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>>51447092
Boobaggedon is, and a lot of people are telling me this, boobageddon is, really smart people, boobaggedon is the best cyoa. It's huge, okay?
They're huge.
The boobs, they're simply huge boobs, what can I say?

>>51447148
That's what you're trying to do yes, even after I spelled it out for you.

>>51447107
Maybe the joker point number would work better if instead of being at the end of the first line, it was at the start of the second line?

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>>51447167

>>51447167
trump plz go and stay go

you have a country to run

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>>51447190

>>51443393

Gender: man

City: Bourg
>+2 tech
gear: men's armour, technical marvel

Talents: close to nature, gregarious, leadership, manipulative, heir.

Companion: CPT. Verdin, Kafka, Hunnard.

Destiny: the beast
>I'm not doing this because some bitch in the sky told me to, I'm doing this for the good of humanity.

I rise amongst the lower classes, gaining followers, where I then usurp the throne of Bourg, and ally with this anon >>51444278. I give the military might of Bourg,and he gives the scientific power of Fulmin.

>>51447144
>Unique mechanics.

I might have some, especially with the glow which I haven't even begun to write about, but you can guess the powers of just by looking at them. I say might because it might just be the way the power is used as opposed to the mechanics of it itself.

I think I can still do something with the worlds and travel between them; make it so only certain worlds can be traveled to from other worlds, or something like that.

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>>51447232
Sounds interesting, I look forward to it.

>>51447220
This sounds a little silly, doesn't it?

>>51447167
One of the great examples of how you can add a fetish to CYOA but it's perfectly playable even for those who don't care for that fetish.

>>51447293
No it isn't you fucking retard.

>>51447270
I'll try and get the rest of the text finished by the end of next week. Image version will come out sometime after.

>>51447287
Nah, a Hunter/Soldier/Mechanic team is good. Now if only they had a healer.

>>51440578
I really like this one. I hope I got the math right.

Mistress: The Empress. Might as well aim high. My service, obedience, and submissiveness should lower her strictness and bitchiness a little, as well as increase her affection. Maximum wealth and lust means I get to live in luxury and fuck a lot, and I don't mind attending my mistress all the time.

Sleeping quarters: Mistress Bedroom (-6 Influence, +6 Submission)
Food: Royal Buffet (-6 Influence)
Clothes: Fine Clothes (-6 Influence, +6 Submission)

Boons:
Blessing (-3 Influence)
Immortality (-4 Influence)
Courtesan Training (-2 Influence, +2 Submission)
Romantic Gift x4 (-4 Influence, +4 Submission)

Influence Cost: 31


Predicaments:
Aphrodisiac and Upgrade (+2 Influence)
Favorite Toy and Upgrade (+4 Influence, +4 Submission)
Mistress Nectar (+2 Influence)
Whipping (+1 Influence)
Bondage (+1 Influence, +1 Submission)
Trigger Word (+1 Influence)
Sexual Harassment (+1 Influence)
Sharing is Caring and Upgrade (+1 Influence) - I rolled a 5, so my mistress will share me with Nizana, the assassin. She's insane, but she's also affectionate and a great fuck, so I can deal with the insanity.
Milking and Upgrade (+3 Influence)
National Service and Upgrade (+3 Influence)
Succubus and Upgrade (+3 Influence, +2 Submission)
Liquid Production (+1 Influence)
Orc (+1 Influence)
Dark Elf Maid and Upgrade (+2 Influence) - I'll be doing so much fucking that her cockteasing won't bother me.
Total Influence, including the 5 free points: 31
Submission Points: 25

I choose to be loyal to Mistress, and rolled a 9, which leaves me with 16 Submission Points. Since I have no Freedom Points, my Fate Number is -16, so I get "It's Not Like I Like You or Anything..."

So I end up as the pampered concubine of the Empress herself, living a life of luxury and constant sex, and eventually, she actually falls in love with me. Plus, I'm also immortal.

Overall stats
Phys: 7
Lit: 7
Tech: 10
Rep: 6

City
>Fulmin

Equips
>Technical Marvel
Armor that enhances my physical capabilities to their fullest. Defense-Focused

>Technical Marvel
A gun that fires darts filled with heat-inducing, easily producible chemicals

>Technical Marvel
A disperser that disperses a cloud of said chemical in a wide area

Special Talents
>Close to Nature
>Berserker Rage
>Heir
>Gifted
>Special

Company
>Cpt. Verdin
>Kafka

Goddess
>Godless


According to this, men probably live like scared little shitheads with no self-respect, hiding behind walls and money in a world where even god has abandoned them. I'll correct this using two of the last sane ones and myself, glory and probably crushing defeat await, but at least it'll be accompanied by freedom.

I know it's pretty autistic, but considering the setting, it's pretty fitting

Let's recap...
>>51446169 requests idea for a CYOA that is beginner friendly in terms of execution (i.e. making it) and in comparison to other CYOAs.
>>51446207 states that all CYOAs are beginner friendly in comparison to other forms of media, ergo all CYOAs are beginner friendly.
>>51446227 suggests that there are CYOAs that are less beginner-friendly than other CYOAs.
>>51446256 claims that the size of a product is not in any way an indication of whether or not such a product is beginner-friendly in terms of making one.
>>51446339 attempts to point the error in the above claim.
>>51446371 & >>51446418 derail a bit into beginner-friendliness in terms of consumption rather than execution.
>>51446468 again states that all CYOAs are beginner friendly when compared to other forms of media.
>>51447073 puts forth the notion that sitcoms are a beginner friendly form of media in comparison to other TV shows, and that even so there are sitcoms that are more beginner friendly than others.
>>51447090 mistakes the above as a claim that sitcoms are as beginner friendly as CYOAs.
>>51447148 attempts to point out the mistake in the above statement.
>>51447173 completely misses the point.

None of the linked posts are mine, just trying to provide some third-party perspective into this little shit-fling.

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>>51446602
I'm working on this thing.

I forgot how long it takes to write a cyoa.

>>51446798
I like it. GHRanted those a secretaries at best.

(REmember all secretaries of the world's most powerful men, when female, are potentially Down To Fuck. Depending on how much work a boss put into that. From none-at-all to 'moderate'. I Would love a waiifu section for this CYOA. A Entire page of Waifuable secretaries and assistants. Yes, non-waifu'd female assistants can be very compitant[?].)

>>51447347
>>51443393

Forgot to link

>>51446678
Fashion in this era is disgusting. I like how the inner city skank had her boobs increased the minimum acceptable amount because she sees the elites' culture as an outsider.

>>51447131
that looks promising

>>51447354
>attempts to point the error in the above claim.
This is where you failed. There is no error in that claim, since adding more easy stuff on top of other easy stuff doesn't make it harder, just take more time.

>>51446169
I agree with >>51446349: If you want something beginner-friendly, don't use a point system.

>>51447358
>Monster Slayer

I've been waiting for this.

>>51446350
>Anything that isn't fantasy or space.
But that just leaves our current reality, which is boring as fuck in comparison.

>>51447406
Note the generalized nature of the claim as it is written in my post. Here's a less generalized version:
>Tetris (a small product) is just as easy to make as World of Warcraft (a large product), the latter just takes more time.

>>51447406
The less into CYOAs you are the less willing you're going to be to invest time into reading one.

>>51447460
What about historical or speculative future set on earth?

>>51447495
Recap guy here. The beginner-friendliness that was requested was, to my knowledge, in terms of creation, not (necessarily) consumption.

>>51446602
Fairy King

>>51446642
Interesting so far, I like the concept.

I don't entirely understand how the vertical integration mechanic and the Keiretsu bonus work.

Text could use a slight bit more readability enhancement. Like a drop shadow or outline to stand out slightly more against all the background stuff. (May or may not work in white)

>>51446678
Anon, your fetish is showing.

HARD.

This is kind of a case of your magical realm encroaching on an unrelated theme. you know? Besides that, variety is a good thing, you know? I don't see how "visionary" is synonymous with "Brown haired white woman with half her mass in her tits." Titty monsters are cool and all but branch out a bit.

Even that aside, given some other comments said this is placeholder art anyways, but is there a reason for all the visionaries to be women? That strikes me as odd.

>>51447489
That comparison doesn't work, we've discussed this several times now. CYOAs don't have the depth and complexity of a video game that would make creating a longer one a more difficult process.

>>51447107
Phosphora is done

>>51447528
>blah blah boobs bad
The author _did_ mention that the pictures are just placeholders made with art he had available.

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>>51447547
and here it is

>>51447511
Still boring, IMO. The way I see it, if you're going to imagine and fantasize, you might as well make it as fantastical as possible.

>>51446642

Oh hey, I made the original version of this...what's with the giant tits now?

>>51447528
Visionaries and other companions probably should just be generic archetypes that you can imagine your own personality and appearance on.

This part of the creation process is just about coming up with the mechanics and balancing them out against each other. The fluff is placeholder too.

>>51447543
>we've discussed this several times now.

maybe you did by yourself, but you're wrong, in the same way that a videogame can be as complex or simple as the creator desires and is willing to invest time into, a CYOA can be an incredibly complex and deep process.

Someone post the Alice Thesis.

>>51447552
people are justifiably worried about the kind of art he had available

it's like someone selling you silver plates over the internet and you look at the plate and notice that the guy took the photo while naked in the reflection on the plate

>>51447591
Alice is a good example of the non-complexity of a large CYOA. Just like with traveler its sections don't interact in any meaningful way - so much so that you could pick one out and repackage it as a full CYOA by itself and it would work.