World Building

>>51396124
I like the samurai borg
though they should be more than samurai in SPESS try harder

>>51396124
Is there a recap anywhere? I want to join in, but I need to know what has been added so I don't add something that is already in the setting

>>51396170
Located deep in the Delta sector,boarding the Borderlands and unknown space the Synthesis are the leading technologoical force in the galaxy though few know this as they remain secluded and ever watchful of outsiders that refuse to be taken into the fold.During times of conflict,both outside and internal,the Synthesis make use of augmented troops with spliced xeno genes that make their troops unpredictable and tough.
LIST OF ASSIMILATED RACES:
HUMANS
RUMAR
KJSST
PLORAX
VOLUPTATUM
STARMEN

>>51396276
they have the URL in OP

In the galactic north lies a very small empire of an alien species called Tauzavons. Their home planet Vaax IX is a mega metropolis as 90% of the landmass on the planet has been urbanized. They prefer not to leave their home-world; they use robotic probes to explore the galaxy instead.

>>51396276
RECAP:
several major races are located in this galaxy:
Humanity(three factions-The Federation,The Free States,and the Nova Repubslik)
Rumar-barbaric shark people who help push humans back aeons ago now are manily stupid raiders
Ploraxian-one of three aven races these are allied with mankind to make veagenace on the rumar
Mithfell-The second aven race that are split into two factions Good Noodle and Astro Burger both once were just fast food joints now they are huge empires that compete for 100% market control
Voluptatum-Hendonistic slavers whose lives are either decricated to pleasing the merchant lords or being a merchant lord
Kjsst-nive based incest allied with rumar that reproduce by spores
Yalwenir-mysterious star eaters that help infulaence from the shadows

>>51396447
do the female sharks have tits?
if so im in

what type of battles take place like whos with who or what type of ships are used and are there tules to warfare

Mithfell
the greatest argument of burger king or mcDonald's

so the federation is the basic HFY army
needs more fluff

so what is the general plot line or don't you have one

>>51396776
It's a setting, not a story

>>51396795
okk but whats going on is it just another saterday morning or is a war brewing these we need to know

>>51396809
with makind returning the alines are getting ready for war while good noodle is trying to stop it

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>>51396630
>needs more fluff

The dense barren world of Var'rav is the main source of metals, ores and alloys for the Federation. Vast mining facilites are spread out across the planet, along with drills, mining lasers and workers mining all that is worth.

Var'rav have seen it's fair share of battles during it's history. The most notable was the 3rd Kerallium conflict that took place in orbit over the planet. The agressive Kerallians took a chance of oppertunity when the Federation moved it's defencive fleet to protect other assest within it's borders.

It was at this time that the Kerallians occupied the planet. And when the Federation arrived they had dug in deep. The space battle itself took several weeks before any troops could make planetfall, the reclaiming of the planet took the better part of the year, killing many from both sides. In the end the Federation was victorious.

And thus ended the "3rd Kerallium conflict". The Kerallians left behind by their own empire became forced to work the mines as a part of the debt fro causing the war.

I am not the best writer, but what do you guys think?

>>51396957
pretty damn good more on both sides would be nice

>>51397022
Thanks. And feel free to come up with some stuff for the Kerallians and the Federation yourself, it is a group effort after all

The prosperous world of Nyotcs 3 stands as the greatest and wealthest trade hub in the entire Voluptatum trade spine. the grestest rade on Nyotcs is a rare element Dersium and light purple element that can be refined into a very powerful engine fuel for starships. Another newer use of the element is the illegal creation for Nyte a very additive drug created by the natives of the world while even the Voluptatum illegalized this drug its sale has increased greatly with the return of mankind and the fleeing races into the borderlands

you forgot the david bowie species

>>51396957
The Kerallians are reptailes please say their reptiles

Are the fuck arks still a thing or what

>>51396293
They actually hail from the magellan cloud, but are making a precense in the Andromeda Galaxy.

>>51397715
oh i think you said that to me yesterday too

>>51397381
MAJOR TOM TO GROUND CONTROL(but seriously, they should be kept in as a running gag in the universe.)

>>51397747
yea told my friend about this universe ten minutes later he had a book of aliens based of david bowie(he likes bowie alot)

>>51397737
Yes, also, just to recapt humanity is desended from 6 cryostasis ships. One went to canis minor, the other to Gliese 4456, two to the magellan clouds, (north and south repectively), and also one to the Andromeda Galaxy. One was destroyed mid-flight. Their bodies, and souls roam the great expanse.

>>51397768
Whoa! He writes fast! Even I don't write that fucking fast. Also, the setting is based in the Pan-Galactic war, which was started by a small skirmish by Rumar and Plorax forces aiding Noodle Bites forces.

>>51397768
Yes, RIP Bowie, you will be missed.

>>51397813
he does and i havent even posted half of it he has culture history veiws and even religion

>>51397839
only thing we dont have is a name

>>51397813
Okay, here are some important Plorax Purse worlds.

Ploraxia-The homeworld of the plorax, an unspoiled and pristine world
Koter- The habitable moon orbiting Ploraxia, it is the industrial base of the systems and ploraxias first line of defense. It is mined for it's reserves of Duranium, used to make durasteel. IT is noturius for it's slums however. There is one which is an Britain sized compton
Ithonak-Once the mightiest fief-world in the United Ploraxian Kingdom, it was attacked by the Rumar, they glassed most of the surface. It is being made reinhabitable, and it is home to two spaceship corps, who are recovering from the Rumar.

so today are we gonna do history or more races
also we need the map of this place

>>51397898
Worlds in the Rumar blood Marches
Rumar-the Reef world that the Rumar hail from once a highly advanced fortress world now a savage planet with giant undersea predators and cruel pirates
Nol ge-the first world settled by the rumar it is a swampy hellhole filled kept only for its historic wargames and big game
Quar-a huge training world for the rumar tribes a world that had no clan controling it all rumar are welcome (save exiled) and has annaul tribe meets with galdiator marches
Jorgar-the only world in the entire marches that was not "raped" by the rumar pristine and well protected by its rumar overseers any violence is swiftly taken down it is so calm because of is spiritualistic value to the rumar as it is seen as the birth of their hunt god Rukarr

>>51397910
We will be focusing on history for the time being. But people can post race ideas.

>>51398059
(major worlds their are over 100 in total)

>>51398076
Ploraxia has over 200 worlds, not counting orbitals or mining settlements.

So i the time before most races evolved 5 major races ruled the stars,Mankind,the Yawneir,Early Voluptatum,The Rumar,and The Gorgu

Early humans invaded the western end of the galaxy treatening the Yawenir who called the gorgu to help form a defensive.humans exterminated the gorgu race within 30 years with the few survivors number only around 100 fled in space arks into the borderlands.The yawneir fearing for themselves called then the rumar who,at the cost of their own minds,push mankind to bear extermination and only on planey remained earth

>>51398218
yeah but how many have fallen to the rumar

>>51398303
So far, 20 planets and 10 orbitals, along with 30 mining settlements have been lost. But, we are finally making a comeback.

>>51398303
But, we have taken 10 rumar worlds, three of them production facilites. Also, one tip, looting is not a viable strategy.

>>51398303
Thus we cover the Rumar Blood Hunts,the rumar since the great war with mankind have been plagued by a disease engineered by the humans to weaken the rumar.The humans never got to see its effects until their return an aeon later.this virus cause rumar intellect to drop from their once high standreds to dumb beings eho can barly work a basic machine.Lucky for the rumar they had on evolutionary trait that has saved them time to time agian-Their reaction to blood.
Rumr when they cosume blood gain a small piece of the creature who the blood belonged too's smarts this builds up over time casuing the leaders of the rumar to be bloody,cunning,and brutal in tactics.once a rumar consumes enough blood they will travel to Jorgar to go into the blood sleep and in some time they will awaken as an eldar.so to make sure this happens the rumar go onto blood hunts into nearby systems to kill and consume until one can go back to jorga

>>51398485
Yes, the savegry that has comsumed the world.

>>51398420
just wait until they reach the wilds when the predators get them

also yes looting is a legitament strageygy is and they have but one is a production world and that is rumar itself

>>51398485
Also, let us talk about one thing. Religion and spirituality in your species. Lets do it.

>>51398523
Well before the great war they had no religion,then after their minds fell into bloodlust Rukarr takes hold of them

>>51398554
Well, the Plorax are not that religious anymore, as most are not affiliated. But, the second most is the Church of Kelgast. Kelgast and his pantheon are greatly worshiped. I based this religion off norse mythology and from some monotheistic religions. But, most are agnostic. The church of Kelgast has their own moon, Novoros, which I will talk about later.

Rukarr is shown as a large rumar with blood red skinn white eyes and teeth armed with a spear made from the bones of Hg takk a grand serphent from rumar's past and legend says the rukkar killed Hg takk and made the first starship of the rumar allow the rumar leave the planet to claim new blood for him

>>51398680
There are different heavens in Ploraxian Spirituality, and Kelgast is potrayed as the greatest god. Kelgast is shown as a bulky bird, and his heaven is the best of the best.

>>51398774
So, anybody else wan't to expand on their spirituality.

>>51398277
That is a nice origin story.

-The Battle of Ithonak-

AW 775

At the beginning of the Seventh Era the Rumar directly lead by the warlord Xrunmer The Heavy-Handed,called for the 15th Holy blood hunt,a request granted by the clan council of the rumar in 773 taking 3 months to prepare for the invasion of gamma sector(ruled by the Plorax) in was ready to launch.

In a month of FTL travel the Rumar fleet of 8000000 warships and trillions of gunboats and fighters the rumar would begin the invasion after cutting all comms to other worlds...

>>51397898
Novoros: The Holy Moon, it is orbiting a Gas Giant. It is known as one of the holiest sights by the Church Of Kelgast. The Usi'ron is located in this world. It does have a low population, but it is a vital part of the empire.
Hikeros: A massively urban planet, it is known for it's factories. It is ruled underneath the sixth house. It does have slums, but most of it is beautiful spires. One famous landmark, the highest building's in the ploraxian empire is located here. It's shipyards are here as well
Or'tessa: This is one of the major agricultural and financial centers of the Empire. Most of the finances of it are here, and it is also known for it's agriculture, esecially it's cheeses and meats. It's bread is very,very famous. Nearly 25% of most famous plorax food comes from here.

>>51398945
Yes, although we managed to repel the, they glassed the entire surface. Grand admiral obloss started his career here. There was a massive battle, with causalties of over 50 billion.

Part 2 of the battle of Ithonak

The Ploraxian Navy of Ithonak was only at 35% strength when the rumar began the assault with a bombardment of army bases and medical bases under the orders of Xrunmer and the first forces landed into the Ploraxian fortress of Kerosth the first landing force was lead by Koruul the scarred the rumar had 89% loses

>>51399036
Yes, also, We need to expand the other races. Also, where did everyone go?

>>51398967
Orsterp: An oceanic world, it is renowned for it's spendid islands,night life, and of course its beaches. It is also used as a secret holding site for experimental prototypes.

Part 3 after the landing force lead by Koruul(who was not soppused to survive) took the fort Xrunmer landed the entire army as the fleet battled the ploraxians and local mercs above the army fought below while vastly outnumbered and outgunned the Ploraxian Naval Marines lead by high marshel Obloss fought the rumar street to street house to house and even room to room in one lucky strike from the ploraxians Xrunmer was mortally wounded by a lucky grenade witch would have horrid effects on his mind later one while he was wounded Fgronn the Enraged lead the rumar...

>>51399173
Yes, also, now to tanks and starfighters
XV-25- The main battle tank of the Plorax, it is versatile yet advanced. Packing a main railgun cannon, 2 machine guns/auto-lasers, and a flamethrower, along with shielding and Durasteel-Nanocomposite Armour, it is known to be very versatile.

Part 4
the battle raged for seven months before Ploraxian royal navy untils arrived form the outside to help the stranded only seven of 40000 relive ships made it to the surface.those seven only 5 made it out lucky with over 10000 survivors inculding Obloss fled Obloss was promoted for his actions in the war and given his own fleet

The rumar meanwhile after killing over 99% of the population were having problems with infighting and mutiny Fgronn was killed by Koruul who earned his new name the War chosen it was this time Xrunmer was awaken and he began to order the deaths of hundreds of rumar only for his madness of parinoia to be cut short by Koruul himself who earned the right to lead the rumar and he pull all forces from Ithonak after the glassing of its surface.

>>51399289
There is the TR-70. It is a little... peculiar. It contains a gyroscopic cockpit, along with missiles, gauss-auto guns, energy weaoins, and ion cannons. It has sheilds and Durasteel-Nanocomposite armour.
SR-50- a scout init which is weak, but is a mainstay of scouts. It has energy or gauss weapons. No missiles. It has little armour, and is very reliant on speed.

We need some Human fleshing out! The OP will you come back and flesh out your race.

well i identify as the rumar but yea give me a moment

>>51397898
>>51398967
>>51399161
All worlds developed for the plorax for the time being.

Journal entry 133-Mj Adam Dino

We've made quite the Impression to the beings of this universe and im happy to say they are in full chaos that makes are job as easy as the purging of Flor,only one race even can compete
and their outnumbered and outgunned by as and our "ploraxian" allies i told the Admiral not to help them after they almost killed us at titan. but i will say that they are very happy they can kill the xenos of the stars and we are happy to help as long as they can keep paying us the way they are now.

>>51399581
Log entry, captain Osreena
>I was sent to boster terran forces during the march to the hiveworlds. It was, terrible. Most of the terrans were xenophobic to such an extant. We had to fight against a ever relenting enemy. We had captured a ship with marines, the entire crew committed suicide in front of our eys, and they released gas and anthrax spores, most of the mareins were dead. I barely survived.

(>also, let us not let this degenerate into retard RP.)

>>51399671
Log two
>My husband's homeworld got attacked, I don't know. I hope he's alive. My children- no. I can't. Our engines have been disabled by some rogue drones. We can get regular engines up and online, but warp might take 12 hours to get ready.

>>51399759
Log three
>Damn! We were attacked by a Bloodweaver Cruiser! We are not in the shape to fight. We're sitting ducks. I pray to Kelgast to save us and this crew. For now, we just need more power to shields. Also, I lost my lieutenant in the first boarding. I had to kill with my own pistols for the first time.

Culture of the Borderlands

The borderlands are lawless at the best murderous crime filled hellholes at the worst,most border worlds are infulenced by the voluptatum at the least or out right controled due to the voluptatum trad spine crossing trough most worlds and the cration of slave and harem hubs

>>51399817
Log four
>this decimator class Battlecuiser is a mighty ship, but with power and engines gone, we could be killed. We need reinfocements. Right now, we are getting any civilians off this ship immediatly.

>>51399871
That is a nice concept, could you also make it the only neutral zone in the war.

>>51399871
Borderlands have a plethora of races that make lives their form the strange "harvester" race to the angelic sholg the borderlands is the most wide ranged sector of the galaxy due to its far spread locations and lawless scapes make the perfect hide away for criminals of the galaxy and has many jobs for those who are willing to get their hands dirty

>>51400036
thats what they are they have no ruling goverment other than the voluptatums

>>51400040
Oooh, can you design me some ficitonal drugs?

>>51400104
ill think of it

>>51400119
The current state of affairs
Pan-Galactic War- Aggressors: Kllst''''latch-fungul
Rumar
Defenders: Terrans, Plorax, and allies

Neutral: Volupoteum
Synthesis
Starmen
Mithfell
Volupoteum
Yalenwir

>>51400119
Also, interspecies porn companies are based there.

>>51400208
starmen are allies with Rumar but only help if desperatly needed

and Yalenwir hate humans

>>51400248
Ok.

>>51400240
thats a givin

>>51400276
Also, here is a writing prompt. What would be the life of a normal, everyday joe in your species? How is it like, what are the living standards, etc.

>>51400307
for the Rumar?

>>51400324
In your species. Anybody who created one should answer this.

>>51400372
okay rumar

(the following records were found in a crashed Rumar huntship no rumar were found)

Access Granted:

-Today we got stcuk on sone dumb little borda world called,uh,helos yea it had some spiky fighters and free guns and lots of stuff i dont know i like it back in da marches were we had just us and we could hunt stuff when we are bored like great carbs or sea dragons and stuff but hear we sat in da "brothaals" dat da volup like so much and even some of dem tried dat tounge stuff with us and we told dem off cuz dey ugly and not tough like us rumar and rumar ladies.

>>51400390
This is Oriss Ten Tlot
He works as a civil engineer
He is designing a new summer palace for the Baron of his thralldom

0600: Wake up
0630:Excercise
0700: Eat breakfast of Tor'shi bacon and nuts
0730: Take a bath
0800: Catch the nearest maglev for office
0900: Work on planes
1000: Discuss
1100: Catch next maglev for the summer palace construction site
1200:Eat lunch on train, a wrap consisting of Tokel, Otir, and Morli, and other vegetables.
1300: Get there
1330: Start building the palace
1400: work
1500:work
1600: Board Maglev
1700: reach home, buy some food at the local Ordonali
1800: Read
1830: Go to bed.

>>51400537
This would what your life would be like as an ordinary citizen.

>>51400537
He is 27 solar cycles old.

>>51400496
That is nice.

I'm ramming my Levithian Bloodkillercrusher into the planet FAGGOT VII

well rumar all are warriors by the age of 7 winters
but here it goes
0930 wake up
1000 hunt and kill breakfeast
1100 wander around the village
1200 crave some new swords or a nice shiny breast plate from a great crabs shell
1300 test armor in a brawl
1400 fix armor hunt some more
1500 cook some sand squid
1600 go goughul hunting
1700 goughul
1800 goughul
1900 brawl some more and eat
2000 sleep in shack or boat

>>51400715
Looks good, what is the average equipment of a soldier from your species (i.e. volupoteum have dildo bayonets.)

>>51400742
well most have at least a clan bone blade
then their chest plate this can be bone or metal
then the ranged weapon some dont have any
but those that do prefer heavy plasma cannons with bayonets or dual barrel laser rifle
then spike grenades and slag grenades too

>>51400776
Okay,here is the average equipment of a plorax soldier.
G324 Assult Gauss Rifle, standard equipment for a plorax army trooper
Nano-composite assult armor
Medi-pak
TG-456 Energy Pistol
Rations
Uniform
Respirator
Urte Grenades
Shovel
Night Vision Helmet
Power cells and ammo
Backpack
Any book of choice.
>assult rifle can be swapped out for a KR-21 Energy Rifle, or a X4-Sonic Gun
>Rocket Launcher is optional

>>51400865
Also, personal shields are supplied.

>>51400776
manily rumar just grab what they find or make
so the msiths will be well equiped while the new warriors have basic stuff

>>51400930
Most species mass produce their own goods, but rumar, tsk. They barely lack any manufacturing capability, but they go by with looting. But, in a major war such as the Pan Galactic war, will this last out.

(For some weird reason, they remind me of kroot).

>>51401005
well think of this in a war everyone else has all this stuff before long the battlfeilds are filled with said stuff
(mix orks kroot and throw in sharks and other stuff)

>>51401043
I wonder if you are using plorax weapons right now.

>>51401043
Also, where are the rumar shipyards.

>>51401115
maybe if we took some

>>51401181
the few we have are on our home world rumar

>>51401237
make a main battle tank.

>>51401367
how about war beasts and armored skimmers as tanks would be usless on a water would

>>51401404
War beasts... Squiggoths?

>>51401445
war crabs