Fan Chapter?

>>51217932
Something not already done by an official chapter.

>>51217932
>All i have now is the color scheme
It looks like a shittier version of the Celestial Lions colour scheme, and they were already pretty shit

>>51217943
My Attempts so far included an ultra marines successor that was from a culture that adored the human form, so they hated chaos, and any xenos (all of them) that resembled humans, as they were a mockery of the human form, however this also included Astartes, so they were ashamed of what they were, but knew they had to be Astartes in order to protect humanity

The Second was a Blood Angels successor that was obsessed with fire, home planet of tribals that thought memories were trapped in blood, and through burning you could wash those memories, and any sin or crime, from yourself. this evolved into them seeing death company marines as holding some of Sanguinius inside of them, and would honor them by burning them alive in order to return those memories to Sanguinius in hopes of bringing him back, this got them in a lot of trouble.

>>51217976
Thanks babe

>>51217976
Yeah do OP even color theory ?
Which color do you prefer OP ? White, yellow or cyan ?

>>51218014
The color scheme originally came from me shit posting with my history buff friend who has a massive greco roman boner, I'd honestly love to do a purple color scheme, but purple seems to be a touchy thing to go with for space marines.

>>51218035
I like purple but what is wrong with Space Marines and purple ? I'm not an expert of the lore.

>>51217932

Explain your reasoning for coloring those specific parts blue.

>>51217987
Your colour scheme, while not one I see much merit in, would perhaps not be entirely off for the former, but would appear wholly uncharacteristic of the latter.

Regardless, if you can't think of anything it might be for the best to just pick one of GW's alternatives.

>>51218052
Honestly i'd be entirely up for picking out a new color scheme, however I'm a Blood Angels man, I decided to try and make a fan chapter for the fun of it once, when i couldn't make an idea stick i got angry that i couldn't figure it out, so now i'm doomed to keep trying to prove to myself that i can.

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>>51218046
The Emperor's children were allowed to use purple, the personal color of the emperor, which was a high honor, and well they turned to chaos, then the Soul Drinkers were purple, and they were also a disaster. Could always go the G2 Ramjet route for colors.

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Tried to "fix" it but I ended up by making my own.

Which one do you prefer, anons ? Mine or OP ?

>>51218495
They both look like something out of a Saturday morning cartoon from 1985

>>51217932
>>51218106
>>51218495
Is there a editor somewhere ? I just used an equivalent of paint on Android.

>>51218558
Is it a good thing ?

>>51218495
What chapter is that, The Emperor's Circus?

>>51218611
Not a bad name.

>>51218573
Not really no. Both your colour schemes are way too bright and garish IMO

Just change the white sections into crimson and you should be fine

>>51218989
What about me ?

>>51218561
http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/smpbeta.php
It works on mobile too.

>>51219077
Thks.