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>>50843530
>LIPIDS

POWER THAT WOULD BE MINE
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>>50843590
It isn't really 0.75, but this shit ain't complete yet.
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>>50843530
>No nucleic acids
Shit tier.
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>>50843320
The power of Christmas has brought us together
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>>50843530
Proteins is good. I could always use more strength for when furniture and appliances need moved.
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>>50843979
>we know who's nalighty

And I hear Mark Millar flicks goats, as well.
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>>50843530
Lipids. Fat distribution would be fun and it could give you limited shapeshifting abilities.
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Content for the sake of content.
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>>50844066
Now I want to do a NEXTWAVE cyoa
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Does anyone have a link to super perv CYOA. I want to read it.
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>>50844177
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>>50844196
>That feeling when you are reminded that someone saved your cyoa
:D
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>>50844232
Not him, but I really enjoy that CYOA. I still need to update my Mammary Man build.
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>>50843443
>Demonic Vulnerability
>Vampiric Thirst

>Insight - Seduction/Being a dudebro dickhead
>Specialty versatility
>Lust 1, Lust 2: Pride
>Pride 1, Pride 2: Envy and Lust, Pride 3
>Greed 1

tl;dr be Dan Blitzerian except I don't live off Daddy's money and I occasionally force innocent girls to do depraved porn. At first I'll use The Voice for it but later on I use my Lust powers for it as the victims don't know I commanded them to.
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>>50844232
Several versions of it, and waiting for the next.
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Here's a refresher.
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>>50844294
I didn't realize you were actually waiting until Christmas Beri.

You putting in a submission the the collab?
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>>50844132
Hello my new wallpaper.
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>>50844294
Since it seems like there might be quite a few things on Christmas, I might go ahead & post the contents of this tomorrow to help spread things out. It depends if I'm around at a good time tomorrow to do it.

>>50844310
Yeah, I had it done a long time ago.
I put in a submission a bit earlier today. It... will be pretty easy to guess which one is mine...
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>>50844312
There's a bunch you can choose from too.
>>50844330
If you're doing what I assume you're doing, don't worry. It will be incredibly obvious which one is mine as well.
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>>50844273
>>50844289
Thank you to both of you!
Version 4 is still being worked on, but like I said in the /d/ thread before it got deleted, I just recently became a parental person and that has significantly stalled my progress.
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>>50844330
>>50844372
Mine (if I get to it) will be rather obvious as well. Most of them are, although some are hard to guess.

I have about 5 more to go and I'll have caught up with all the submissions.
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>>50844090
>DECONTAMINATION DELUGE
Is it only physical illnesses? Even if so, this is a great thing to have.

>ROMAN SOAP
Soon I'll remember everything.

>NIMBUS TOOTH BRUSH
Minty fresh.

>HAIR BRUSH
That oughta keep it in line.
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>>50844294
Calling it now, "I want to be a loving waifu" puts you together with the one who wished for "I want true love"
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>>50844403
Was mine okay?
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>>50844294
to be left alone is going to win the popularity contest (im picking it too)
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>>50844294
PHENOMENAL COSMIC POWEEERRR
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>>50844196
>Penis
>Villain
>Mild Mannered
Much more fun to be a sex-symbol and have people go "whaaaaaat" when they see me
>Male
>Flat
>Bubble
>Above average
>Same as before
>Same as before
>Same as before
>Same as before
>Same as before
My body stays the same or there's no point to it.

>Restricted infusion - anal, +1
>Restrained donations, +2
>Edging amplification, +3
>Forced denial, +4
>Sharing is caring, +5
>Elastic capacity, +7
>Generator, +10
>Adaptive response, +13

>Allies:Legiona, +10
>Adversaries: The milkmaids, +13

>Full-timer, +13
There's no reason my original identity would somehow be removed.

>Minor resistance, +13
>Self-sustenance, +12
>Complete physical immunity, +8
>Minor enhancement, +8
>Enhanced reflexes, +7
>Enhanced mind, +7
>Danger sense, +6
>Super grip/Wall crawling, +6
>Shape shifting, +4
>Vibration emission, +0
I know when I'm in danger before it happens, I can react close to instantly and if you touch me, you explode. Thank you based vibrations!

Pretty dull imo. Most of the cyoa is companions and while there are many powers, they are so boring and ordinary. If you're supposed to be a lewd superhero, why not include a power where you grow stronger the more of your costume gets ripped off? The power to blind people when you flash your junk? Being Mr. Fantastic, but only with your dick?
I wanna dick-slap some super-heroines dammit!
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post ravnica girls please
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>>50844294
When does this get posted?
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>>50844381

>having children

And I thought I was a /d/egenerate. Your lewdness knows no bounds.
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>>50844613
Either tomorrow or Christmas
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Can someone post the Broken Waifu CYOA?

Please?
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>>50844678
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>>50844678
I hope he makes things line up and stuff in the final version
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>>50844587
the order of the girls are all like wrong and shit...

this makes for more color clarity
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>>50843530
Lipids, especially if there's some way for me to cheat it so I can control the fat distribution on other people.

Otherwise I'll just use it to stay 100% natty all the time.
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heres hoping for more lewd CYOAs this next year
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>>50844774
There are way too much already, I hope all this lewd and waifushit goes away.
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>>50844507
If you're Beri, then yes.
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>>50844774
There's going to be at least one.
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>>50844829
It's easy to make waifushit go away.

Do what Italics does and mention the female characters having a previous relationship and might not be virgins.

Shitstorms happen and eventually people will stop doing waifus because one man ruined it all and shitstorms get annoying.

Example: Spire
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Merry christmas everyone, have some terribly written OC on me.

As always, I hope you'll enjoy playing it as much as I enjoyed making it.
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>>50844972
page 2
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>>50844829
fuck off

they're the only reason 60% of us come here

autistic tolkien/generic sci-fi garbage is boring as hell
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>>50844972
>>50844994
looks really good. Is it your first CYOA?
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>>50845021
But not as boring as choose a toon girl and wish fulfillment powers cyoas.
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>>50845021
>>50845074
>Two very different kinds of autists from different parts of this website are at odds with each other.
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>>50844972
Profession: Law Enforcement
Suit: Survivalist Eveready Mercury Apparel
Augmentation: Star Child
Suit Augmentation: Resculapius Gene Therapy Nodule
Faction: Station Security
Wepon: Station Pulse Rifle
Sidearm:Smart-Guide Pistol
Utility Weapon: Crowbar
Location: Bridge
Companion: Albina
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>>50845042
No it's my fifth, it's also the fifth time someone asks if this is my first cyoa which I guess is a sign I need to up my visual design skills.

>>50845021
>he says right after I post my generic sci-fi garbage cyoa

This stung a lot more than I expected it to sting.
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>>50844419
It would cure mental illnesses too though if they were really severe it may take a month or a few weeks.
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>>50845120
no it looked fine like Stardust. Just didn't see a name and couldn't really tie the style to another author.

My only nitpick is some of the text is too close to either the pictures or other text. Doesn't hurt anything just makes it a bit harder to read. Anyway hope you keep things up (and hope you sent in a submission for the collab)
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>>50845092
And the third kind shows up to narrate I take it?
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>>50845120
what are the other ones you've done?
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>>50845204
Nightmare waifu
Dark Souls waifu
Hell Island Survival Ripoff
Monstergirl refugee crisis waifu

And this.

>>50845144
It's not that I don't want to, but I don't feel I really have the expertise since I'm still a newcomer to the threads and it seems rude to get involved in something that's obviously meant for the regular thread goers.
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>>50845120
Dude, your's isn't generic. i like the horror vibe you've got going.

I mean the formulaic star wars, tolkien stuff that feels so lifeless and dull
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>>50844330
Nah, post it on Christmas. Having a bunch of new CYOAs on Christmas will be like Santa delivering to the thread.
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>>50845186
Of course, but it doesn't dismiss the fact that it's just funny as fuck.
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>Find out about collab 10 minutes before having to leave for the night
>Actually get an idea

Ever since I got a social life my timing has been fucked up.
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>>50844886
That's some horrible logic, matey.
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>>50845276
>Nightmare waifu
>Dark Souls waifu
>Hell Island Survival Ripoff
>Monstergirl refugee crisis waifu

Wow dude you've been killing it lately. I wish I had that work ethic. Rip.

>It's not that I don't want to, but I don't feel I really have the expertise since I'm still a newcomer to the threads and it seems rude to get involved in something that's obviously meant for the regular thread goers.
w/e these threads are mostly just shitposting. I think last thread they were arguing over breasts on men or something?

I threw my name (I made a new one just for CYOAs) on my first CYOA so I don't think you should worry about it .
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>>50845276
Monstergirl refugee waifu? I don't recognize that one, care to repost it?
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>>50845334
Then be a NEET / pseudo-hikikomori like the rest of us.
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>>50845334
Submissions are still up.
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>>50845395
hope he adds expands it a bit like that other monstergirl CYOA
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>>50845092
>/a/ immigrates to /cyoag/ and fucks everything up
why am i not surprised?
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>>50845427
I was talking about Branching Hearts which if anyone hasn't read is here

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bxbrh3Q2CTiydDVRZHZROF96ODA
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>laying in bed, listening a bbc documentary and writing up waifu options while eating chocolate

Is there anything comfier in the world?
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>>50845120
All OC is good as far as I'm concerned. I hope to see more from you.
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>>50845523
Getting to Floor 30 in Let It Die.
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>>50845534
Ayyyyyy
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>>50843592
This. I might commit a crime for that power.
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>>50845523
>bbc
>chocolate
>waifu
is that a cuck cyoa?
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>>50845534
All I know of that game is that Uncle Death makes me smile.
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>>50844294
As much as I want to be cute, I'm gonna have to pick world peace here.
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>>50845606
Uncle Death is OP incarnate.
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>>50845276
Did you finish the island survival one? Last one I have still says WIP in the filename. Island Survival WIP(1200x10000pixver).jpg
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>>50845637
Yea that one's finished. I don't know why I left the WIP there. Sorry about that.
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I'm pissed, I started doing Lavender builds, only for the damned game to fade from the center of CYOA-conversation. Gah, the world is screwy.

Damnit, I'm slow alright? But I started doing builds for the latest PDF CYOA.
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>>50845587
the other kind of bbc
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>>50845276

>Dark Souls waifu
>Hell Island Survival Ripoff

Could you post these? I don't think I've seen them.
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>>50845755
I don't even know what "latest" PDF CYOA you're talking about Anon, unless you're referring to Lavender again. I never cared more than an inkling about that CYOA, but if you're going to start something, you may as well finish it so the author can look at it.

>>50845798
Here, I'll post this one for you.
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>>50845840
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>>50845798
Here you go. the other anon is already posting the dark souls one it seems.
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>>50845276
all of your cyoas are 10/10 imo
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>>50844090
>>50844090
Zen Exhibitionist <Mates keep telling me chicks are checking me out, but I never know in the moment>

Veg soap so that I can spend more time doing what I want to do, and less time eating.

Tooth brush to be a convincing guy

Cologne for obvious reasons.
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>>50844972
engineering degree
riot squad pax gear
drone control
electro-receptic retina
probability reader
interloper gauss rifle
microwave blaster
vibro hatchet
research labs
Weapon trader Iskra, Scavenger Agatha, AI researcher Irina
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>>50845826
>>50845840
Guess we're going to pump the rum.
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>>50844829
/d/eviant here. I would LIKE to go away, all this SFW rule bs is bogging down my lewd CYOAs. Our mods/janitors are still sperging out and purging all the attempts at /d/ cyoa threads though, so /tg/ it is.
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>>50845021
What if I like both, Anon?
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>>50845866

>Owl Harpy
>...cannot speak human languages but can learn to copy set phrases and single words.
>copy set phrases and single words
Onii-chan
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>>50843530
Proteins. No more juggling variants endlessly just to get the musculature I want. Lipids might not be as good as it sounds, depending on how you interpret "stored".

>>50843652
>nucleic acids
>a macronutrient
What?
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>>50845975

O RLY?
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>>50844774
Does being rubbed like that actually feel good for girls?
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>>50845120
Aww. I want to give that monster a hug.
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>>50845630
Is he the Oest G of all?
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>>50845886
Thank you for feeding my ego, I'm deeply grateful for any donations I can get.

>>50846000
When I saw it my heart melted into a puddle, It's literally one of the cutest things I had ever seen and it makes me want to be its friend
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>>50844829
Been here longer than you, staying long after you're gone.
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>>50845970
This. It's more than possible to like both.
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>>50846044
There were wars fought as to why you can only choose one, you know.
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>>50845970
We need more openly lewd/waifubaiting CYOAs with actual lore.
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>>50845995
Depends on a lot of factors. Pretty much anything feels good if she's into it / you do it right.

It's not a common kink as far as I know, and a fair number of girls find it pretty uncomfortable to be touched there.
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>>50845986
>What?
Nonnutrient macromolecules > micro nonnutrients.
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>>50846134
And neither really have a place in a macronutrient CYOA. You could always fork it and add nucleic acids yourself.
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>>50846110
I have no idea but this image made me burst out laughing. I can't even look at the thumbnail.

Conceptually it isn't even that funny
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So I've mentioned this before (but got no respones) for the update to Hell Invasion (if I make it).

Would people like it if instead of picking premade weapons, you'd get to design the weapon yourself? Kind of like Morrowind spell making, you pick a type (Plasma, Slugthrower, Energy, Explosive, Melee, etc.) and pick effects under that type, with some universal effects. For example, Plasma may have fuel cells which produce hotter plasma, something that prevents it from locking up due to heat, or some other stuff.

I was also thinking of that for armour too, you design the armour yourself with certain origin specific and universal mods. There will be a set of mods that let you live permanently in your armour by cleaning you, removing waste, and injecting nutrients into you, for example.
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>>50846284
I never played the original Hell Invasion, so I don't know what's best.

Making gear to order sounds nice in theory, but it's hard to get right. Even when it is done right it's not guaranteed to give that much value entertainment-wise over the much easier premades.
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>>50844972
>Outworlder
>Segmented Combat Mass Plate
Augmentation
>Natural Weaponry
>Disassembly Nanites
>Resculapius Gene Therapy Module
Weapons
>Kinetic Energy Projector
>Pressurized Flamer
>Crowbar
>Location: Medical Bay
Companions
>Iskra
>Alexei
>Albina

Since I'm stuck here, I might as well kill everything that gets in my way and just hope I survive long enough for rescue. If not, let's hope I go out in a blaze of glory.
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>>50844294
To be cute is my go to.
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>>50846263
Same.
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>>50846284
I think that sounds much better than picking premade stuff. Especially since I found the options to be a bit too narrow in some cases.
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LADIES AND GENDL- GEMT- LADS, MY ENTRY TO THE COLLAB IS COMPLETE! Let's hope it's up to snuff.
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>>50844294
>Phenomenal Cosmic Power
...And itty bitty living space, right?

Get lewd, to minimize the damage.
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>>50844972
Wait so are we fighting against all three categories of enemy factions or just one?
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>>50844294
Lets get lewd! Wait, yeah. More lewdness!
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>>50846013
I really enjoy your CYOAs!

And you should make one about adopting a monster then. No sexual stuff, just a "my pet monster" sorta thing. Include that picture, I don't care if you've used it for the nightmare waifu cyoa. I love when big giant scary guys are big softies.
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>>50844994
>>50844972
Profession: Engineering Degree

Hab Suit: Outworlder

Augments: Electro-Receptic Retina
Probability Reader
Temporal Contriver

Weapons: Electric Arc Conductor
Mag-Rail Pistol
Mechanized Gloves

Location: Research Labs

Companions: Repurposed Sex Droid
Wii-NX
Shifter Droid Ada

There's an old Interloper story about home, about how a station fell apart...
said it was like watching the stars themselves grow angry and hurl themselves at the station. Said that the forests of twisted life spat out something so cruel, to fight a growing sea of chrome and light.
Interlopers obviously knew when their time was done there, or at least the smart ones, the foolish ones died transmitting about thunderous gray clouds smiting legions of twisted monsters no man or mutants ever seen before.

'Tis a story.
A story that started with a man and his pack of wandering machines. One seemed normal 'till ya met her wandering, One was crazed yet probably had a better idea of what was going on than anyone else, and the final was just...strange...stories changing what she was like all the time.
While the man never was the villain in the story, nor was he the hero...

He certainly still maintains the "highest score ever" whatever the fuck that means.
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>>50844294
Cosmic power.
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>>50846588
Yup. It's a three on one.

I thought about adding something to the effect of "You can ally with them under very specific conditions" but I think doing so would lead everyone to just allying with interlopers to get the fuck out and cheapen the rest of the choices. So in the end I just added faction specific companions rather than adding faction alliances themselves.
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>>50844972
I'm confused, why aren't the suit specific augs directly under the suit choices?

It doesn't seem like you can pick with suit aug you want to go with which suit, am I wrong?
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>>50846728
That's just cause I added the suits and augmentations first and then thought It'd be nice for each suit to have its own specific augmentation but rather than reformatting it logically I just added it below the already existing augmentations.

Sorry, I just can't into clean visual design. I end up cluttering everything I do.
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>>50846635
This is probably the best mystery box I've ever seen, and I always pick it when I see it.

Kudos to the CYOAA.
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>>50846568
Got it, thanks.
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>>50846568
Gotta go with the Pizzagram.
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>>50846675
Can't you still ally with the Station Security with the right choices? With the Pax Gendarmerie Emblem the AI should recognize you as the highest authority available and be subservient, or at the very least the station security should just ignore you, going off the description.
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>>50846758
Oh it's cool, I just thought you could mix and match which didn't make sense after reading more.
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>>50846675

This is important anon can I waifu the shape shifting bot or the motherly agent anon?, also on a less important note can I ever hack the AI or destroy it and become the new overseer and head of security?
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>>50846080
15 Starting Points
+2 Met: Arranged Marriage
+1 Race: Middle Eastern
+2 Age: 14-17 years old
+0 Height: 162cm (5ft 4in)
‒2 Breast size: D Cup - Large-breasted and proud of it
‒2 Ass Size: On the larger size of average
-10 Attractiveness: Aphrodite is beautiful
‒5 Hair Style: Beautiful Hair - She really looks after her hair well
+3 Emotionally dependent - Derives happiness from you
‒5 House wife: Submissive housewife, defers to you
+2 Shut in - She doesn't leave the house much

>Sexual Features:
+2 Miss Milky
‒3 Nymphomaniac

‒3 Hobbies: Cooking - She loves to cook all kinds of things
+0 Occupation: Student
+0 Sluttiness Level: Normal - Has had sex a few times

>Personal History:
+2 Single Parent - Raised solely by her mother
+3 Biker Dad - Her father is in a biker gang, he is a big guy
‒2 MILF - Her mother is a hot milf, and will hit on you constantly

I always laugh hard when I remember the Scientist's race because of this thing.
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>>50846906
Yes they'll ignore you and you can more freely wander their controlled territories with the exception of the unknown combat droids who will always be hostile

>>50846925
Both are waifuable, they just have their specific goals which they need to carry out.
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>>50845755
Hold onto those builds for the moment. I'm still working on the next update.
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>>50846794
I can't wait to see the finished project.

When will the project be finished?
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>>50844294
More time.
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>>50844294
>Phenomenal Cosmic POWER!!
Do I really need anything else?
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>>50844972
>>50844994
'August'

>Profession
Managerial Courses

>Habitation Suit
Riot Squad Pax Gear

>Augmentation
Pheromone Diffusion
Disassembley Nanites
Pax Gendarmerie Emblem

>Weapons
Electric Arc Conductor
Microwave Blaster
Utility Hatchet

>Location
Bridge

>Companions
System Engineer Albina
Station Outcast Alexei
Mech Infantry Alise


August is a former executive trainee turned into the equivalent of an emergency riot cop. After awakening from his incredibly long slumber, he looked out across the station and found the idea the contaminants were allowed to go relatively unmolested was intolerable. The occupation of the Interlopers or even the malfunctioning of the security systems don't bother him, at least not with the infected roaming. His Arc Conductor and Microwave Blaster make him adept at dealing with all forms of infected, provided he has a few moments of concentrated fire, which is easy enough with the use of his Pheromone Diffusion. The unique combination of his executive pass and gendarmarie emblem means he has nearly unrestricted access to any part of the station, while the Disassembly Nanites and Utility Hatchet quickly grant him access to all other areas.

His first move his conquest of the infected is a trip to the Bridge with Albina, in order to reclaim control of the defense systems in the Medical Bay.
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>>50847056
>Both are waifuable, they just have their specific goals which they need to carry out.

Now for the not as important question, Can I overtake the AI and become leader?
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>>50847370
I'm leaning towards yes but since I never imagined the possibility I'm guessing it would require a massive full frontal attack on the bridge with full stationer support and several diversions across the entirety of the station to draw away attention before you move in to take it down before you have an android army descending on your position.

But I can't see a reason why you couldn't do so.
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>>50847364
Basically I just wanna hunt down the contaminants, leaving the Interlopers and Security System to fight each other in the aftermath. I figure there would at least be some kind of security camera system on the Bridge that Albina can hack in to and give me remote viewing privileges for the MedBay (Something like a turret system would be even better). With those I can abuse the ability of the Microwave Blaster to kill the infected through walls. Alexei and Alise are there for backup in case Red Deaths or a Marquis appear. Then we can gather the data on the contaminants and use it to clear the rest of the Med Bay and Hydroponics area, perhaps breaking into the Research area for advanced weaponry to combat them.

Nanites and the Hatchet can get me through any door the pass and security clearance won't. The Nanites can also deal with the only security system that my Emblem doesn't stop.
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>>50844994
>Wii-NX
This is amazing and I wish you ripped it off from somewhere so I could see it in a real game.
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>>50847465
>>50847465
>>50847465
>I'm leaning towards yes but since I never imagined the possibility I'm guessing it would require a massive full frontal attack on the bridge with full stationer support and several diversions across the entirety of the station to draw away attention before you move in to take it down before you have an android army descending on your position.

That's a lot of work. My plan was to be dropped into the bridge and hack into or destroy the AI mainframe since I would then be the highest rank person for being an elite officer and then use those drones to over run the interlopers and provide protection to the stationers.
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>>50847805
I'm not saying it's not possible. I'm just saying that you'd need to be a real sneaky motherfucker to get away with that.
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>>50847805
Without the interlopers who is going to help combat the spread of the infected?
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>>50844972
>Profession
Medical Preparation
>Suit
Survivalist Eveready Mercury Apparel
>Augmentation
Drone Control
Probability Reader
Mercury Schematic Input Slot
>Weapons
Grenade Launcher
Unidentified Gun
Mechanized Gloves
>Location
Medical Bay
>Companions
Alexei
Irina
Emi

Being a medic and partnered with Alexei allows us to make a killing on the medical salvage we find. I'd hit up Irina on her offer of going full robotic and hybridizing with my suit so I can repair my cyberbody using the molecular fabricator in my suit when needed. By using probability computer as a base towards my cyberbrain implant, I could possibly mimic Irina's process and run a dual core processing system between my mind nad the supercomputer. As a doctor I would see if I could help Emi by either helping her go robo like myself to rid herself of the infection or at least be a friend that she wouldn't have to worry about infecting after going full metal. Alexei and Irina arguing about him going full robo would be fun to see while we survive together.
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>>50847825
>>50847805
>>50847821

Me and the army of droids that would be only focusing on them and maybe help from the government after getting her a ship to fill in her report.

>>50847821

That's why I intend to earn the AI's trust and keep my nanites hidden until I have my chance.
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>>50841869
Sorry, I wasn't thinking about greentext when I selected the symbols for different category levels. I started with the smallest symbol I had, the minus, and moved up picking symbols with more weight as I went.
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>>50846066
I hear this and all I can think of is making a ridiculously over the top isekai magic school tournament battle harem anime cliche cyoa...
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>>50847056
Will the unknown combat droids be hostile if I have Primate Murder as a companion or accept the AI researcher's uplifting?
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>>50843590
Built an ally, tell me how crappy she is so I can fix her

Some back ground stuff

Low tech understanding
Adaptability
Homebody
Woodsman
Scavenger
Survivor
Alchemist

Tribal Attire

Weapons
Stop Sign, Poisons, Needle Gun

Tribal Vestment, Pop-wall Shield Mark-4 (Wall size and one on each wall), Morell Alcohol Subscription, Alchemy Set, Personal Gravity Manipulator (It's how she moves her stuff), Replicator, Universal Thumb, Pet Rock,
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>>50847121
It's essentially finished at this point, I'm just waiting to see if any more submissions come in.
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>>50844972
>>50844994
>Profession
Engineering Degree
>Habitation Suit
Mercury Apparel [Fabrication Suit]
>Augmentation
Electro-Receptic Retina
Drone Control
Suit Specific: Schematic Input Slot
>Weapons
Primary: Grenade Launcher
Secondary: Riot Revolver
Utility: Crowbar
>Location
Hydroponic Deck
>Companions
Bounty Hunter Jax
AI Researcher Irina
The Flesh Watcher

Spam rare grenade and revolver ammo through fabrication suit. Salvage anything and everything, trade goods with interlopers. Act like an independent scavenger, but actually work for the AI - gathering outside information and resources for the AI.

Use Flesh Watcher to make updated maps of the station. Drone scouts ahead - Jax watches my back as grenades are unfortunately extremely loud and attract everything hostile.
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>>50844066
>And I hear Mark Millar flicks goats, as well.
He doesn't fuck goats, anon. He makes love to them.
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>>50845427

"Hotaru" will be protected.
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>>50846080
Random Encounter (15)
West European (11) (Erin's Isle)
Skinny (8)
18-20 (5)
4'0" (15)
D cup (13)
Larger than average ass (11)
Beautiful (6)
Thick (Irish) accent (7)
Freckles (6)
Average, wavy hair, common color (4) (Red)
Bad vision (6) (Are contacts allowed?)
Travel addiction (8)
Emotionally dependant (11)
Overly attached (15)
House wife (10)
Clumsy (12)
Barren (15) (I am too!)
Easy to please (11)
Business owner (5)
Orphan (8)
Kissed (3)
Clever intelligence (0)
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>>50846568

Okay, hear me out because you need to pick either "Fruit Bearing Dryad" or "Dairy Centaur."

The others may be great companions, and may have interesting offense and support spells, but if I may state one painfully obvious fact, you are (probably) not a wizard. Even if you are a wizard, you know where magical power comes from. Souls? Blood Sacrifice? Not anymore:

>Fruit Bearing Dryad
>Convert Sunlight to Magic

>Dairy Centaur
>Convert Grass to Magic

It is December now, and depending on where you live, you may have forgotten just how much sunlight and grass are normally available. It isn't about how much grass you need, it doesn't matter how efficiently solar energy converts into magical energy. You (probably) didn't have ANY magical power before, now you have a way of getting a ready supply!

And resupplied and RESUPPLIED!!!

So many apprentices, and so SO many evil wizards spend all their time trying to get a ready source of magical energy! Your problem will not be "getting it" but efficiently storing it and using it! This will take time and experimentation, but you don't need to worry about the storage container "leaking." If it does, not only can you refill what leaks out, but you have other magical energy for whatever your needs are besides what was in the experimental container!

No more sacrifices, no more waiting eight hours of rest and spending an hour to memorize spells. Magic is now freely available "all day!" People will now pay you to collect magical energy from them, mowing it down and RAKING IT IN!!! Spells, enchantments, truly magical items in the modern age if you choose one of these
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>>50844972
Profession: Engineering degree

Suit:Survivalist eve ready mercury apparel +augment

Augmentations: Electro receptive retina, dissociated flesh

Primary weapon: Unigov laser rifle (with the fabricator the ammo weakness is reduced)

Secondary weapon: Riot revolver (once again the fabricator helps offset the ammo weakness)

Utility: Vibro hatchet

Location: Crew dormitory (easiest starting location)

Companions: AI researcher Irina, Unigov Operative Jan, Repurposed sex droid

My plan should be fairly apparent. Embrace the singularity and have Irina make an artificial brain for me (use dissociated flesh to make sure spirit gets transferred as well) and implant it in the sex droid (yep I am a pervert), over time upgrade myself to be a badass (suit fabricator, engineering). My big goal would be to recover unknown combat droid tech (especially the programming). All the while getting in good with the interlopers (getting their tech too) and eventually escaping with Jan.
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>>50848516
>Emotionally dependant Irish shortstack
Mein gott.
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>>50844972
>Research & Develop
>Environmental Aesculapius Preserver
>Polymelia
>Aesculapius Gene Therapy Module
>Kinetic Energy Projector
>Unidentified Gun
>Crowbar
>Transport Hub: No man's land
>Vigilante Droid Isaac, Station Outcast Alexei, Scavenger Agatha

I like this one. I'll give it a closer look later.
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>>50845120
I'm really enjoying it, don't lose heart.
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>>50844972
Questions;
Does the Kinetic Energy Projctor use ammo?

Would it be ok to say that an Outworlder has combat and repair skills if they aren't as specialized as someone with Combat Training or an Engineering Degree?

Could the nanites be used to make raw materials for the survivalist suit?

How difficult would it be to lead the Contaminants to the hangar so that they could distract/overrun the Interlopers while my companions and I steal a ship?
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>>50848926
>Does the Kinetic Energy Projctor use ammo?

No Ammo, just needs recharging after extensive use.

>Would it be ok to say that an Outworlder has combat and repair skills if they aren't as specialized as someone with Combat Training or an Engineering Degree?

It's reasonably believable to say that an outworlder would have okay combat and okay repair skills without excelling either field like an engineer or combat specialist does. More than anything they're travellers and as such jack of all trades for whatever they need at the moment

>Could the nanites be used to make raw materials for the survivalist suit?

As far as I imagined the nanites eat anything you order them to eat and create more nanites with the digested material, so you could feed them to the suit to produce materials, but I can't see why you'd do that when feeding it the raw materials achieves the same effect and doesn't require you waste nanites.

>Spoiler

You'd be better off watching for marquis sightings and waiting for the day they try to overrun the hangar. Major attacks occur anywhere from every few months to years and are always preluded by their appearances. In the chaos you might slip by unnoticed.
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>>50844972
>Profession
Medical Preparation
>Habitation Suit
Survivalist Eveready Mercury Apparel
>Augmentations
Done Control
Polymelia
Disassembly Nanites
>>50844994
>Weapons
Grenade Launcher
Pressurized Flamer
Welding Tool
>Location
Medical Bay
>Companions
Scavenger Agatha
Bounty Hunter Jax
Officer of the Law, John

>>50845120
It took me forever to find how many augmentations I was supposed to take.
I found it eventually, but it was really easy to miss.

My only other nitpick is how much text there is.
ESPECIALLY at the enemy write-ups. That shit was not brief.
I get that you're trying to lay out a setting, but most of it felt extraneous.
Not just talking about redundancy (well that too, but)... horror in particular benefits from ambiguity.

Really liked the placement of the enemy write-ups though.
It was nice to see what you're up against before making all the decisions.
I usually see that sort of thing at the end, but it's definitely better near the beginning.
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>>50844994
>>50844972
>Job
Research and Development, going Black Mesa style baby.
>Suit
Survivalist Eveready Mercury Apparel, free food and water and I can make grenades, ammo and guns with the right shit. Also looks like a sci-fi version of the Elite Knight armor in DaS, what's not to love?
>Augmentation
Temporal Contriver, bullet time baby
Disassembly Nanite Cuties, Shino style
Schematic Input Slot
>Weapon
Grenade Launcher, the Interloper and Station Security enemy sections got me scared.
>Side arm
Revolver hnnngh, this is where the Mercury Apparel comes in handy. Revolver ammo is always a no. 1 priority.
>Utility Weapon
Crowbar
>Location
Research Labs, dangerous as all get out but experimental weaponsss.
>Companions
Old Guard Carth to help me kill the bots
Agatha for ammo, schematics and research weapons, Iskra sounds like a cunt.
Albina, leave her in the dormitories or wherever she stays at but make trips back to her when I finish missions. We can be research buddies

Basically, the goal is to hoard weapons and create new ones until I can rally the stationers and Big Stick the fuck out of the enemy factions with science.
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>>50844972
>>50844994
This CYOA has really gotten me excited, what are some video games in a similar vein?
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>>50848999
Thanks, making a build now. This is the first cyoa I've liked in a long time.

>can't see why you'd do that when feeding it the raw materials achieves the same effect
It mentioned some things require appropriate raw materials so I thought it could maybe reconfigure some of things I broke down.

>Spoiler
That sounds slightly safer and less guilt inducing that what I had planned. But I want to get of the station as soon as possible.
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>>50849139
Dead Space 1 & 2.
System Shock 2
SOMA
Bioshock 1 & 2
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>>50849180
Been up ~14 hours straight putting this together, plus about 6 hours of work yesterday.

Ugh, deadlines.
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>>50849139
I based 60% on deadspace and 30% on deus ex with 10% risk of rain.

Deadspace 1 and 2 are absolutely perfect games in the horror/action genre and they do everything I tried to put down on gimp. By now any mildly good computer can run them no problem.

Deus ex is a lot more about cyberpunk and class warfare manipulation of information and stuff in that vein.

Risk of Rain is a 2d game but the atmosphere, classes, and item recollection system make it one of my favorites and I play it every day.

>>50849094
I was particularly afraid that it would be overwhelmingly wordy, I ended up padding quite a bit so that the columns wouldn't look too ugly or uneven. I think brevity is a much needed resource in my CYOAs.
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>>50844294
cosmic power

But i'd also like to not be restricted to itty bitty living space
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anyone got the latest island cyoa from the same gui who did the nightmare waofu?
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>>50849254
waofushitters need to go back to /a/.
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>>50849174
>>50849208
All games I've been meaning to play, this is a good kick in the ass to finally get on top of that.

All other games not in pic related I already had but never got around to playing, except Risk of Rain, I fucking love RoR, good taste.
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>>50849180
I think I'll stick with my hand.
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>>50849208
The augmentations were on point at least?
Star Child is the red headed step-child though. Seems awful on it's own, but doesn't really go with anything.
Nice synergy with Carna Medling, I guess? Feels a bit redundant though.
Half the suit augments were underwhelming, but everybody took Mercury so w/e
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>>50849349
Star child was my attempt at an immortality option that wasn't 100% beneficial but I agree it ended up being too damaging to make it worth it. I think I'll remove the asthma and hemophilia bits and increase some of the benefits while maintaining the extremely frail part.
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>>50849208
Not him but I like the enemy write ups and I wouldn't make them any shorter if you had to cut any of the atmospheric fluff there. I found the enemy parts the most engrossing. Weirdly enough, I found the Interlopers and Station Security in particular the most intimidating but the Contaminant are obviously NOPE fuel.
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>>50844294
cosmic power
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>>50844972
>>50844994
If I take Jan and Alise can I join or at least be allied with the Interlopers?

>>50849180
>>50849188

Shit this has a lot of good choices. I'm having a lot of trouble deciding.
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>>50849188
>OMIKRON Chip

SIX MILLION BODIES STOLEN
DAVID CAGE A SHIT
BORN TO NOMAD
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>>50849472
I almost wish you could pick more than one roommate, but there's nothing saying you can't befriend more than one.

Remember, each roommate was written by a different author. While it looks like a generic waifu CYOA, I think something like this just had to happen.

Here's to another year of autism and shitposting.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
This is a fun guessing game, trying to figure out who did who.

I still haven't decided who to pick though.
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>>50849349
Star Child + Engineering + Mining Deck.

You have control over the mining facilities that you can rewire, at which point you can create whatever since you're an Engineer. Make your own version of the Security Bots, or just make a really huge gun and some magnetic boots. Walk the outside of the station with the boots and punch huge holes in the side of it, depressurizing the other decks.

You essentially nullify the Interlopers since they can't survive vacuum, leaving you against the Contaminant and the Security Bots. You're the only one who has the ability to gather more raw material for your 'soldiers', since the CYOA mentions the Security is having to cannibalize the station itself. All the biological material is dead so the infection is fucked as well. You can essentially overwhelm them with unlimited numbers.
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>>50849554
I don't think you understand how bad hemophilia is.
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>>50849518
I have trouble deciding between The Laughing Man, Volentia, Divia Bellis, Clarissa Kant, Lacey McNeil, and Elysia. I also have trouble deciding between Vampiric Immortality, OMIKRON Chip, and Pocket Dimension since I can only take two.

by the way could you post Divia's pic?
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>>50849180
I love how obvious Zhay is about who wrote her.
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>>50849598
"Suffering from hemophilia and ashtma while in the bounds of gravity"

Anon you are aware there is no gravity in space, right?
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>>50849188

Does the "Chains of Azeria" circumvent the whole "because... there's no way for you to come back here." thing?
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>>50849383
>I think I'll remove the asthma and hemophilia bits and increase some of the benefits while maintaining the extremely frail part.
The hemophilia and asthma seem nice and flavorful. Frail was the turnoff word for me.

Also, I really wanted to want the Engineer Suit, but that awkward to move in bit seems a bit crippling with how many super fast enemies there are.
Maybe fold Drone Control into Minerva Repair Drone? I guess do the same thing for Tellus Radar Drone.
Since that leaves an empty spot in the augments, maybe add a semi-friendly-with-contaminants option?
There's already a semi-friendly-with-security augment, and (>>50846675) Interlopers are the only ones you don't want us taking.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
> One android has never touched a human.
> Another had to throw somebody down a flight of stairs to avoid being molested.
Oh boy it's one of these.
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Here's a list of everyone who submitted to help with the guessing games. Hope it doesn't make it too easy, but I can imagine that some are actually rather hard to guess.

>>50849614
<insert author's name here> actually sent me an image to replace the one they originally gave me after I had received it. It was the exact same, save for edited, enlargened tiddies

>>50849631
I haven't thought of that, but likely not. I'd imagine interdimensional magic is more powerful than even a god's spell.
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>>50849678
>Here's a list of everyone who submitted
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>>50849747
You had your chance. Now, submit so I can continue adding more for later versions.
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>>50849753
I will never submit to you!
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>>50849651
>The hemophilia and asthma seem nice and flavorful. Frail was the turnoff word for me.

Well I've never had either condition so I can't really speak about how severe they might be in comparison to frail but I'll consider both options when I modify it.

>maybe add a semi-friendly-with-contaminants option?

To be honest I was seriously considering giving the melded carna symbiote augment the specification that most contaminants other than chaotic maws and marquis no longer recognize you as human and therefore ignore you on the station but I'm unsure if that negates too much of the horror aspect of the station, I'm very much considering it.

As for the engineering suit, I don't want to make it fast since its already pretty fucking strong defense-wise (dissipates laser weaponry + extremely resistant to conventional firearms/explosions) and the awkwardness is the only thing pretty much stopping it from replacing the segmented mars plate. However I do agree that the repair drone doesn't make much sense in the scheme of things since electro-receptic eyes already makes you good at repairing and also has built in robo-detection functions. All of this leaves me with the conclusion that I should switch out repair drone for something else, maybe something that will aid movement but I'll be thinking on it to see how I balance things.

My greatest regret is that the eveready apparel looks so fucking aesthetic and I can't blame anyone for picking it. Though my personal choice is and always will be the caelus drags.

Thank you for your responses, they've been extremely insightful and I'm really grateful for feedback on how to make it more fun for others to play.
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>>50849188
...is Carmen a Medabot?
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>Want to make a CYOA again
>Remember I'm not that good at it
>Remember that I only made one half-decent CYOA
>Remember that all of my other 5 CYOAs are all but completely forgotten and never posted
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>>50849809
If you got it right once, you can do so again.
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>>50849809
You should try and post them again.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
Lessee if I can't figure out a few of the suggestions.

Beri's submissions are pretty obvious, as is Zhay's creator.
Did Ferrean put in Raine (ergo the Dragonstone)?
Clarissa and the CapeHarmony are definitely a pair, and it seems like Super Perv made them.
Blues is 90% likely to be Quiet, though might be another 'dark' author.
Lamas is... Sam?
Tay is very shipfu-esque, so I'm guessing Tanasinn.
Angelanon definitely put in the angel halo, and... Christara?
Astrid is paired with Frankenwaifu, with maybe 3_tan or case as an author. Dunno.

That's all the thought I'm willing to put into it right now.
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>>50849809
Go full autism and create a CYOA the stuff of legends.

I'm planning my magnum opus, and plan to begin writing in about two CYOAs from now.
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>>50849839
I did make my magnum opus
It was shit and only I liked it
I spent a good 4 weeks making it and a good 18 weeks planning it
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>>50849852
I know that feel bro.

My magnum Opus was completely ignored and some shit I made in a week's worth of drunken idiocy is what everybody knows me for.

It's extremely depressing when you realize your worst is better than your best.
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>>50849852
If you put all that work into it then post it.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
Carmen

Equalizer
Pocket Dimension Hop

Best waifu and good items that mean I can have eternal fun.
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>>50849864
It was meant as a replacement of a popular CYOA game that involves rolling
Needless to say people said "I'm not making myself wtf this shit isn't even a cyoa"
Maybe I should just replace any mechanical complexity with a shit ton of writing
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>>50849837
Blues is just the personification of a Protomen song. It could literally be anyone but Symbiobro and Beri.
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>>50849674
Go for the sexbot
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>>50849604
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>>50849908
I was mostly going on

>>50836758
>Wait what

>I already handed my submission in

>SANDRA MY SUBMISSION IS NOT COMFY
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>>50849934
But Blues is comfy.
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>>50849952
Blues isn't Quiet's.
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If I wanted to make a late collaboration to the roommate cyoa what should I do exactly?
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>>50849785
can't beat that sweet sweet fabricator.
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>>50849926
Thanks
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>>50849977
You can go to the form here:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScazaT0Yh0rBz2NqE4D-YWsit5EHBRB-aUoNs3qtY4lpMJ7Vw/viewform

Guidelines are inside.
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>>50849188
Sam and I are going to have the best time hopping around the pocket dimensions.

Also, give me the bio solution, because I hate myself.
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>>50849961
Any other comments on >>50849837, or did you want to wait a while before giving hints?
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>>50849678

There was also mention that I might not be returned to my original time in my original dimension.

Given that the "Chains of Azeria" allow communication as well as switching places, I could still let the wizard know I was in the wrong time.

Would it help?

I mean, would my roommate informing the wizard and using whatever powers of persuasion be able to undo the temporal shenanigans and restore me to my proper time?
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>>50844972
>>50844994
>Profession:
Outworlder

>Suit:
Survivalist Eveready Mercury Apparel

>Augs:
Drone Control
Electro-Receptic Retina
Somatic Stem Platelets

>Suit Spec. Aug.:
Mercury Schematic Input Slot

>Weapons
Unigov Laser Rifle
Pressurized Flamer
Vibro-Hatchet

>Location
Crew Dormitory

>Companions
Isaac
Klara
Ezekiel

Objective number one, get the fuck off this station.

Instead of trying to infiltrate the Interlopers I'm just lure a horde of Contaminants to the hangar and steal a ship in the confusion. Hopefully I'll be able to convince some of the survivors to help me, or maybe if we all work together we could lure the bulk of the Interlopers into a trap then retake the hangar?

Regardless, I'll probably be here a while so I'm going to learn as much as I can from my companions, and I'll probably be relying on my suit for survival and trading.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PG8kQeRBaZI
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>>50849785
Hemophilia means even paper cuts bleed and bleed and bleed and bleed.
Small wounds close eventually, but by all rights demand immediate medical attention.
Large gashes are lethal unless manually sealed. So it's not dangerous, but obviously that isn't an option mid-fight.
Asthma ranges from unpleasant to incapacitating.

>was seriously considering giving the melded carna symbiote augment
Don't really like the idea of the Carna suit being a Contaminant thing though.
It seemed more like a posthuman thing. Or maybe xeno tech. Reminded me of the Venusian stuff from Battle Angel Alita.
>but I'm unsure if that negates too much of the horror aspect of the station, I'm very much considering it.
The Interlopers are bad enough, say nothing of the nigh omniscient murder-hobo AI.
Having sec AND the contaminant as *allies* would spoil the vibe though, so I can see why you wanted the contaminant friendship to be a suit augment.
Maybe give it to the medical suit? Outright contaminated but only a vector, or something to that effect?

>My greatest regret is that the eveready apparel looks so fucking aesthetic
The Mercury honestly looks less protective than the Caelus.
But hey, speaking of ruining the survival horror vibe, why the free food?
did you know Star Child and Carna Melding partially offset food issue?
I bet most of your readers didn't, because why would they worry about food?
no but seriously, that's why everyone and their uncle snagged the Mercury
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>>50850099
>that video

Absolute perfection
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>>50850078
I'm gonna refrain from giving out too many hints right now. The fun's in trying to guess, right?

>>50850089
I don't think that'd be possible, given that once you're gone from his world, the wizard can't bring you back, as he's said. He wouldn't be able to manipulate you interdimensionally as well, to restore you to your time line.

As for communicating via the Chains, I don't think that would be possible. Again, the magic involved in interdimensional travel is greater than any in-universe power.

Thus, if you leave the dimension with the Chain still on, I think you're basically fucked with a dead collar on that you can never take off. That is, unless you bring both collars with you and you use it on someone in the same dimension.
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>>50843530
carbs
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How do I make my CYOAs popular
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>>50850163
Stumble on some waifus and get lucky.
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>>50850137
Do the chains work with the AI characters?
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>>50850112
You still need to feed the suit the raw materials so its not like you just get free food.

In the best case scenario you're stuffing it full of contaminant meat and hoping the fabricator cleans it while processing

In the worst case scenario you're actually cannibalizing other humans.
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For how many people want to start a Contaminant outbreak in the hanger, I'm surprised that not one person took the Contaminant Canister.
Ayy, speaking of which >>50849208, if it's meant for psychological shenanigans... why no dead man's switch?

>>50850099
That's 4 augments. The suit lets you pick it's augment, but it doesn't give it free.
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>>50845120
Do Ezekiel and John know each other?
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>>50849180
I think Angel created Jeanne.
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>>50849188
I can always rely on Lamas for a good husbando option.
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>>50850208
>>50850099
In that case, I'll remove the the Stem Platelets since I don't plan on getting shot too often and I doubt I'll ever be a situation where I could escape with a crippling wound.
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>>50849180
>Zhay is a Symbiote waifu
>Highlander made it

See, this is what would happen if this general was clever.
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>>50850230
I personally like to think so, though I can't imagine a reunion that doesn't involve gunshots and tears.
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>>50850137

So the magic allowing the collar to work is broken, but the magic that makes it impossible to remove still works?

I'm just trying to understand, because in some fiction when a person stays in an alternate dimension for two long it causes "problems." Destabilization of dimensional barriers, destructive dimensional interference, constructive dimensional interference, all kinds of feedback. Sometimes returning to your home dimension is the only responsible choice, and "Chains of Azeria" sound like the sort of dimensional anchors that are used by summoners. The link between the two, if established before the portal is opened, should be maintained between dimensions..

...but if not, I may need to invest in some sort of immortality that will allow me to avoid aging as I travel from the distant past to my own time in the "old fashioned way." If placed far in the future, my only hope of returning seems to be the vain one that someone in the future invents time-travel.

The OMIKRON Chip could help if I personally need to invent time-travel. However, I can't help wondering what might happen if it were installed in the pervert wizard. He or she says they can't find a way to get me home, and I have no reason not to believe them, but perhaps the person who gave it to him or her intended the pervert wizard to USE IT rather than giving to me as an apology. If I understand correctly, the wizard is re-gifting these items from the roommates.
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>>50844972
how big is the station supposed to be?
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>>50844972
>>50844994
Hm. Are you the same guy who made the Ship CYOA?
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>>50850539
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>>50849180
>>50849188
>Blues

Gifts
>Vampiric Immortality
>Chains of Azeria

I want a Hero and I want to be a Hero for someone else
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>>50844972
I don't understand the Augmentations and Suit Augmentations. Are you supposed to choose 3 Augmentations and 1 Suit Augmentation? As the description under Augmentations says that it was your body which was modified 3 times, so it seems like the Suit Augmentation is a separate thing. I'll assume this is so until anything is stated otherwise.
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>>50850617
No, wait, just realized that they correspond to whatever suit you picked. Never mind.
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>>50850599
Mother fuck
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>>50850666
Nah, I'm just pulling your leg. I'm not even the CYOA author. Just wanted to post a BLAME! reference.
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Merry Christmas Eve everyone.

Glad that SDA was able to get the roommate CYOA out so quickly.
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>>50850779
>Tfw at this rate I won't be able to finish my CYOA in time for Christmas.

Now we wait for New Years. Merry Christmas.
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>>50849180
>Jeanne Geiantre
What is meant by "refuses to hold your hand in any way but physically"? She won't into emotional intimacy?

>Vampiric Immortality
>Cape Harmony

This was more fun than I expected. Good work, Sandra and the others!
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>>50850851
>"refuses to hold your hand in any way but physically"
How are this many people that don't understand the connection to the phrase "hand-holding"? Did I just word it poorly?

It means she's going to expect you to be the one to ultimately solve your own issues, and not have her do it for you.
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>>50850851
as in won't help you
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>>50850871
Mostly it's a really roundabout and unnecessarily confusing way to say "won't coddle you" or "expects you to be an independent thinker".
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>>50844762
>>50844587
There's a version that lists personalities and fetishes for all of them. I recall Orzhov being 10/10 but Azorius is also tempting because she puts SDA to shame with her favorite fetish.
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>>50849180

This, I like this. But I'm too tired to do this right now. I was rereading what the wizard said on the second page a few times, then digging around looking for a mystery box before I understood what the other "reward" was.

That said...

>Uriah
>It's a girl

That's pretty jarring, I grew up with a guy named Uriah, I had no idea it could be a girl's name.
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>>50844294
SET SAIL FOR ADVENTURE
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>>50844090

>tfw no shower of youth and liquid soap
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Does anyone actually use the Discord server in the pastebin?
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>>50851013
It gets a decent amount of use.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
I have no shame and am gonna choose my own girl. It's not like it wasn't already incredibly obvious which one I made.

>Zhay
When I made her, I sorta was thinking "what would make me choose any other girl?" so then I made her boobs bigger than they already were. So even though she basically could already do that, I made it blatantly clear how big she is by default.
I'm obviously staying, and the gifts I take will be:
>Bio Solution
I'm a sucker for shapeshifting.
>Genesis paper
It was a tough choice between either this, chains of Azeria, or AR glasses. The glasses are just all around useful, and the chains are nice, but I've got a pretty creative imagination, and the book let's me create what ever I want. I'll just get a good scanner and then I can basically live off commissions and a patreon or something.

If I had to choose a girl that wasn't my own, it'd probably be Jeanne Geiantre, followed closely by Cera. Honorable mention goes to Clarissa Kant.
>>50849614
That's what I'm here for. Subtlety never was my strong suit.
>>50850324
Eh, I had no idea we were going for a guessing game at first. I thought we were even gonna put gift tags from the authors. If I didn't do a symbiote, it was probably gonna be like a lamia or mini giantess or something.
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>>50849180
Seems my entry has hardly any text after following your guildeline of 300 words. Is the link still up and I'll resubmit more text to fill it out? Looks more like 1k words or so for that text box.
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Proteins, I guess.
I could look like I lift, and perform like I lift, without having to lift - I fucking hate lifting.
Even if I did lipids, I'd only be the same skinnyfat I was when I was a kid, rather than plain old overweight.
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>>50844294
Be waifu
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>>50851013
its gotten hundreds of posts today
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>>50844294
Get

Lewd
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I just remembered that I made this a while ago, but it was never posted again because quite frankly, it was kind of shit.

Here it is again.
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>>50844294
I want to be a loving waifu
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>>50851161
there just isn't enough choice man. you gotta have like 3 different sets of choices at least to make it interesting.
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>>50844294
be happier
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>>50844294
how crazy would it be if he subverted all of our expectations and deemed us all naughty and gave us twisted versions of our wishes

that'd be crazy right
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>>50851161
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrxwUxKiI5E
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>>50851228
Beri is the nicest CYOA maker, that's not something he'd do. If you want an asshole to shit in your stocking, look elsewhere.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
Oh shit it's out. I'm pretty curious to see if someone picks mine and guesses it's mine correctly. Blues isn't mine people. She's a bit more subtle.
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>>50851029
>>50851149
Should any random nobody content-creator here join?
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>>50844294
I'll take true love
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>>50849180
I'll shack up with the cutie witch. Turn vamp. Then either grab the Halo or Dragon wing depending on the specifics. Unless.. Volentia wants me to get the serum.. I'd do it for her.
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>>50849180
Tay, with vamp and equalizer
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>>50844774

>>50846066

Here's hoping you make one !
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>>50851268
why not dude. It is in no way a secret club.
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>>50851268
Chats kill threads, nobody should join.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
I might have made Carmen, but you made her shine. Thank you, seriously.

>>50849800
I was wondering if anyone would get that.
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>>50849285
but i wamted islands....
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>>50849180
>a googirl
>girl-Venom

Wow I SURE fucking wonder who could be behind these. Pathetic…
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>>50851482
don't be such a sourpuss anon
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>>50851482
The original intent wasn't supposed to be a guessing game. That's just a fun little thing that came out of it.

Why you gotta be like that?
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>>50849180
>That moment when you've been away for a month and missed the chance to do an author super friends team up extravaganza

Welp it's a fun read at least. Here's to another year of healthy shitposting!
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How many waifus options is too many?
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>>50851607
42.
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>>50851607
There's no such thing as "too many" when it comes to waifu options.
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>>50851607
Keep going until you no longer hate yourself.
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>>50851582
see
>>50849982
You can still submit something if you actually want to.
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>>50849809
The sooner you give up and make waifu shit the happier you'll be. Just look at SDA.
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>>50851673
Guess that it will be a cyoa with million waifus then.
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>>50851652
we finally did it boys
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>>50851761
Ain't that the truth friend. Ain't that the truth.
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>>50851343
Hell yeah, I loved Medabots. When I was a kid I had a bunch of toys for them complete with interchangeable parts. It was the coolest shit ever.
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>>50851725
>>50849809
Waifu options are integral to a successful CYOA.
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>>50851266
You are The Laughing Man.
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>>50851862
Na
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>>50851761
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>>50851860
Seriously. One of the first responses to your CYOA was a build with a bunch of female siblings for max degeneracy.
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>>50851866
what laifu
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>>50851871
Yeah, I know. It's pretty hard for me to write waifu options, cause I'm in my thirties, but I've closely studied 'anime' and 'weabshit', and after intense research, I was able to make waifus that I believe both fit the theme and would encourage more people to open the CYOA.
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>>50851882
>also in my 30s
>loves waifu options

Y-yeah, it sure is hard.
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>>50851892
I know what you mean anon. Shit, I mean, how the hell are we supposed to have time to research things like tsundere, kuudere, chuuni and all that other crepe. We're too old for that. Not to mention we also have a crap ton of work piled up. But hey, such is the price we pay for (You)'s.
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>>50848214
do it
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>>50851871
Wait. Which CYOA was this.
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>>50851909
The name anon. The name.
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>>50851909
>>50851892
Also, if you're into Wafu options, you'll love UF. With over 60 companion options (majority female), and 36 city specific companions, you'll have plenty to choose from!
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>>50851892
He's frontin' you, son.
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>>50851607
5-20 x the number of waifus you are allowed to pick.

5-20 depends on quality of waifus, the better they are the harder it is to pick, so you can't have that many. But if you have harem options, you can multiply that number.
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>>50851918
Oh, Quiet CYOA? Huh. I'm not seeing it in the dropbox.

Not sure what UF is either.
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>>50851933
O-Oh. I thought I was semi popular...
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>>50844972
>tfw I will never make OC as popular as this
Feels bad man.
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>>50851900
Best solution is to look up some interesting looking girl or "girl" on some weaboo image storage site and then get inspired.
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>>50851938
I mostly just scroll down a lot and skip whatever CYOAs I think I may have already seen. Otherwise, as most people here don't name their files, I may have just not seen the CYOA because of that. Show me the way, mang.
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>>50851946
Someone posted it in the last thread. I hope you'll like it senpai~
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>>50844294
I can't say I wasn't tempted by power, but I'd still go for more time.
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>>50851949
Thanks kouhai~
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>>50851952
Actually wait it was the last last thread. Here's the link >>50815905
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>freely available waifus
>waifus locked behind freely available missions
>waifus locked behind location specific missions
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>>50851985
waifus locked behind a door in my basement
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>>50851969
Ooooh. Yeah, I've seen that one before. Didn't realize it had so many apparent waifu options? I had it saved and intended to go read through it later because of how many pages there were.
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Newbie CYOA maker here again. For my first CYOA, I switched the numerical values for the race stats into words. I will probably changed the wording (I am open for suggestions). I decided to keep the level ranking for the skills because of simplicity more or less. I also added some more skills to the list at the bottom for things I am planning on making available. Also again, up for suggestions. I just want your guys intake on this. Thanks again.
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>>50852012
I don't even know what makes a companion a "waifu". That they're female? That they love you unconditionally?
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>>50851985
Waifus locked behind becoming a little girl. Because otherwise you don't deserve any waifus.
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>>50852031
If it is female or even just feminine male someone is bound to waifu it.
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>>50852022
I appreciate you removing the rolling, and fleshing out the races made a lot of them seem more appealing. Would make sense though if humans were atleast above average in intelligence, considering the lower end of the spectrum consists of pigfolk and kobolds. Interested to see how the skills will work out.
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>>50852031
as long as your love for her is unconditional too (I mean of course as long as she's not a SLUT)
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>>50852082
That is the thing though, Humans play the archtype of the "Balanced" character, but I gave them an increase in exp gained to balance out the decrease. I mean, I suppose, I could increase their intelligence to average, but I do not think I would put them above average, at least not at the time.

The way I have planned the skills is to function more as a "talent" rather than a "skill" (for now). That is, there would be a odd intuition in that field. For a combat talent like sword arts, once you pick up a sword, you would have an understanding of you field of depth, whether slashing and thrusting would be optimal, and how to optimize your attacks. For something like, say Survival, one would be able to differential between edible and inedible plants, conceptualize the best way to create a shelter, understand the general ecosystem of your location. At least, that is how I see it for now. If that is unpopular or seems flawed, I am willing to alter my current plans.
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>>50849180
There's way too many clingy / femdom girls here. There's also way too many who enjoy cuddling and are overly enthusiastic / hyperactive. Why did so many people write ditzy bimbos? And who thinks "is desperate for physical interaction" could possibly be a positive? Clingyness is not attractive.
The more I read the more obvious it is that most of you are desperate for a girlfriend. Fuck there's a lot of clingy bitches. And way too much focus on "I've never touched another person" and shapeshifting.
>Immacia Celesto
Because Angel being forced to live with a guy for a year will drive her nuts. She's also one of the few who don't plan to rape me.
I'm not helping her with her art stuff.
>Go back to earth
I doubt I got any gifts but if you insist.
>Equalizer
>Stasis Pocketwatch
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>>50852138
Sounds good! Look forward to it.
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>>50851836
You, good sir, have impeccable taste. Feel free to assume that if you two enter the dueling circuit together that it will be pretty Medabots in tone.
Mr. Robattle, getting free parts for winning tourneys, and a QT-PA-2T as your rival's ace.

>Carmen
I'm shamefully proud of how much Futurama I stuffed into her apartment.
>Chains of Azeria
The best thing I can offer her is a display of returned loyalty and support. She'll probably appreciate the power boost too.
>Vamp.
So she doesn't have to fret about not being able to cure old age.
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>>50852258
I wish Tay was my gf tho
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>>50852258
what can i say, i get off on being needed
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>>50851161
>>50851161
Antagonist option?
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>>50851878
I really like that image, anon.
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>>50844090
>Shower of Youth
>Roman Soap
>Nimbus Tooth Brush
>Cotton Swabs

Shadowy overlordship, here I come!
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>>50844294
As appealing as adventure, cosmic power, or true love might be, not having humanity nuke itself into extinction would be nice. World peace, ho!
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>>50850556
No, but I do love that one.
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>>50849180
>>50849208
>Laughing man

Seems like fun.
>Vampiric Immortality
>Angel Halo

Sounds interesting. Though I don't want to pick what I put down.
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>>50852613
Crap. I meant to link to the other image. Sorry.
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>>50849188
Could I please have Lilly's picture?
Or at least a source.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
> The Laughing Man
> Equalizer
> OMIKRON Chip
I'll live with him for an year and maybe some more in order to learn cool magic and to find a way to erase the drawbacks of the chip. After that I'll try to return to Earth and if Equalizer-sama will blesses me I won't have any problems with my return otherwise I can spend the rest of my life with the lich.

Was The Scientist the one who designed The Laughing Man?
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Merry Christmas to all, I hope it is good for each and every one of you.

All of you.
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>>50852734
even me?
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>>50852744
Filename
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>>50852258
Are you sure that's Angel? Immacia appears to be completely straight.
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>>50852758
The time will come when people will understand the superiority of the skeletons and will free themselves from their cage of meat.
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>>50852022
When you make changes start incrementing your numbers otherwise people don't know what your current version is and you should have the same numbers inside the cyoa itself.
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>>50851266
Izzit the wish-twister?
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>>50852828
Look at all the exclamation points. Only Angel could write in such a cancerous manner.
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Im making a CYOA and I need pictures of a man sitting on a throne surrounded by hot girls.
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>>50852995
It's not a good habit to depend on others for your image hunts.

Learn to use gelbooru for this kind of stuff
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>>50844972
Research & Development (robotics)
Unregistered Carna
Disassociated Flesh, Star Child and Carna Symbiotic Moulding
Unigov Laser Rifle, Microwave Blaster and Vibro-Hatchet
Research Loboratory
Psyaug Timothy, Researcher Irina and Flesh Watcher

To think that all the time I spent fiddling with robots could have been to improving myself. No matter, better late than never, and my new friends are sure to be interesting sources of inspiration. It'll take a while for the carna suit to counteract my new frailty and until then I will lie low, either blasting psychically-sensed enemies through sturdy bulkheads or dueling in the void where I enjoy the advantage.
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>>50852955
Ja
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>check what i wrote up last night
>elder sister types, elder sister types everywhere

Fuck, why do I always end up including so many of them?
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>>50853108
Because you're weak and unsure of yourself and you want an external agent that approves of your actions.
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>>50853157
Thanks for the analysis Freud.
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>>50849852
That is the worst feeling
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>>50852022

The question is: why would anyone want to be a slime?
I mean, it seems mostly a death sentence for whoever picks it.
Even assuming it's a free option, not many would consider playing it: it's literally "You suck and you'll die in 5 years, if you're lucky."
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>>50853332

Furthermore, while the halved cost of skills and abilities helps a little bit, there is very little that a slime could actually -use-.
All the weapon arts, educating, craftsmanship, and so on, can be a bit...bad to say the least on a slime, what with a lack of hands, lack of time, and lack of human rights.
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>>50853332
>why would anyone want to be a slime?

Guess that someone who is really into slime rape could want to be one.
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>>50849180
>>50849188
So who's the best waifu?

And who's the worst?
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Is it better to have pre-set background for cyoas like Traveller or let people come up with their own story for their characters?
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>>50851161
if you made it were is the mistery box?
and it has been reposted severeal times
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>>50849809
fuck that shit, man. I've made two CYOAs, one of which gets occasionally posted, the other someone took the concept and made it 100% better because I never updated it. But every time they get posted, once ever other month MAYBE, I get a warm fuzzy feeling.

So make something. Anything. Even if it's something shitty in MS paint that makes people chuckle. Because sometimes, that's all you need.
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>>50853157
The same can be said for all who write gentle Femdom.
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>>50844972
>>50844994
Med
Environment Suit
Voluntary Metabolism, Somatic Stem Platelets, Gene Therapy Module
Pulse Rifle, Revolver, Hatchet
Med Bay
Flesh Watcher, Wii-NX, Primate Murder

I refuse to believe the contaminant is just some bargain bin zombie strain. There has to be more to it and I'm going to get to the bottom of it. With my medical training and Environment suit and augmentations that allow for a wide variety of personal tinkering I can use my own body to test some theories. Flesh Watcher and the information still in the Med Bay will be instrumental in piecing things together. My system security buddies will keep the fuzz off my back and help me deal with anyone who gets in the way of my research.

Given the fate of John and Emi I must believe that perhaps the contaminant was designed with something specific in mind.
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>>50853534
What about people who are into hard femdom?
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>>50852610
Thanks. I like your stuff too (especially this latest one).
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>>50853556
They're pretty cool guys who are secure in their masculinity and heterosexuality.
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>>50851882
What does being in your 30s have to do with writing waifus being hard? My waifu options just seem to get better and better as I age.
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>>50852114
>not waifuing a SLUT
>not knowing that to waifu is to monopolize
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>>50853653
With every year that passes my waifus gain more pathos while still complementing their cuteness. It's the best thing ever.
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>>50851925
>106 companions
Just.... why?
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>>50853709
A waifu for every possible fetish and personality.

Nowadays you can't just have a tsundere, you need a tsundere who is submissive, a tsundere who is domineering, a tsundere who eventually turns yandere, a tsundere with twintails etc etc etc.


Everyone needs to be perfectly catered to.
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>>50853709
Not the maker of that as someone who's current CYOA project also has +100 companions: because I fucking can, plus the material that it is based on is also focused around having shitload of waifus.
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>>50853673
Monopolization as in Purification, or Breeding?
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>>50853746
>or
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>>50853709
>106 Companions
Because you can. Look at Traveller or Pokemon Personified. Over 100 companions.
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>>50853742
You better not put lore in any of those cause I sure as hell ain't reading them.
>>50853739
It would be cool if he could give a tl;dr at the top of the character then, if he's turning them all into waifutropes.
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>>50853709
Because sometimes it's appropriate. The rest of the time, people have inadequate judgement and self-control.
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>>50853766
No way, man. The fun is in the details. Imagine a menu that just listed an item's macronutrient % by volume; that's just not most people's idea of appealing. Besides, the image should serve as a quick scanning cue to what the waifu is like.
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Are there actually anti-cyoas where you get to be the waifu ?

Like, you choose parameters that define you like is possible in >>50846080 and then you check what kind of anon chooses you ?

I'd love to see something like that
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>>50853801
That's actually just a normal cyoa, anon-san.
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>>50853801
There are plenty of cyoas like that.

Not my cup of tea since I actually enjoy the A in CYOA, but there are a number of them.
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>>50853012
I forgot to say I need the picture to not be animeish. The pictures I use are more in line with western fantasy.Sorry for asking for pictures, but I can't seem to find a good picture. And Im almost finished with my CYOA as well ><
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>>50853780
The later seems to be the most common.
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>>50853801
I'd love to see you make something like that !
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>>50853653
I never watched animu as a kid. I don't know what people want in waifus. I didn't even know what that term meant till I was 27.
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>>50853801
Just take any "customize your waifu" cyoa and just create yourself instead, then hope desperately anons will say "wow that's so hot/perfect". Then masturbate furiously on the validation.
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>>50853859
I want someone that I can fall in love with tbqh. Real life of course has destroyed that illusion for me.
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>>50853766
Not planning to put anything beyond stats, personally info and occasionally mentions about their relationships some other companion options (i.e. companion y is companion x's cousin or how companion b has rivalry towards companion d).
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>>50853859
"Waifu" doesn't really have a meaning special to anime despite the origin of the term. I'm certain it didn't take you until 27 to realize that there are people attracted to women in various ways.
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>>50853871
Being female is suffering, famalam.
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>>50853800
>>50853766
I do both actually. A stat breakdown plus the lore.

>>50853873
Plenty of people to choose from anon.

>>50853876
I meant that I never did any romantic writing as a child or anything of this sort till then.

>Pic related is a spoiler for UF.
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>>50853887
Oh come on there must be some social advantages for being a female.
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>>50853900
Well, statistically speaking, nope.
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>>50853887
Make a make a husbando cyoa then.
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>>50853859
>I don't know what people want in waifus
Good. Means you aren't desperate enough to like them which means you know there's actually a chance of getting laid.
>>50853889
> A stat breakdown plus the lore.
Guess your cyoa will be pretty shit senpai. Still not gonna read them.
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>>50853889
>Plenty of people to choose from anon.
I've known quite a few.

Anyway did you get into the fate setting fairly recently or something?
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>>50853905
Did someone say husbando CYOA???
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>>50853917
>fate setting
I did actually, about two years ago. It's what sorta inspired me to make QuietCYOA.
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So what waifu archetypes should appear more often in CYOAs?
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>>50853913
What's your fav CYOA?
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>>50853889
>do both actually
They weren't asking for a stat breakdown, but a waifu trope listing. Slightly different imo. I've seen such listings on characters, but I enjoy being enticed to read the thing and decide for myself. And showing is better than telling, and all that.
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>>50853931
none at all
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>>50848525
You know, you put more thought into this than I ever did. You've done well, anon.

>>50846781
Thanks anon, it's always bugged me when a cyoa punishes you for your curiosity.
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>>50853709
60+36 is 96 anon.
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>>50853931
Broken waifus.

Things like mental illness, serious disabilities, family problems.

I can't stand happy go lucky waifus.
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>>50853900
Oh there definitely are overwhelming social advantages. I just meant in /cyoag/ exclusively.

>>50853905
Doesn't help me. I want to be able to offer my customized, hyper-sexualized self to anons and be chosen. But people rarely respond (or at least not at the rate that gets me off the hardest) when I make a waifu from a CYOA where the nominal goal is to make a waifu for yourself. Vocally subverting the CYOA and asking people to waifu me comes of as authentic and underperforms in comparison.

Captcha is fucking obsessed with indoor seating lately.
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>>50853932
Domain master
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>>50853931
It's not better archetypes that will yield the most waifu improvement, but better execution.
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>>50853972
You need to just go ERP on a site for that, you're not going to get what you want from here.
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>>50853972
That would be fucking hot, if you weren't a fat neckbeard with a porn addiction.
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>>50853972

I second that.
Also, knowing nothing about the anon who chooses you makes it less interesting. Like, are they rich or poor, tall or short, abusive or kind, etc...
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>>50849180
Raine Edsol and the MCN Starpiercer and Dragonstone.

ADVENTURE AWAITS
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>>50853972
If you want attention just post tits with your build. That'll prove you're a girl too, so guys are more likely to roleplay fucking you.
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make a vocaroo with your build if you want attention that badly
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>>50853801
This?
I don't want to post the whole thing since the version I have on this computer isn't up to date. The most recent edition can be found here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bxbrh3Q2CTiyfjMySGlKdDJJTEFzeXhjV3BDYWI5aVk5Zjg4LWo4c2x3TVpBY044c1NiUTg
I also added a new page in the last month.
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>>50853995
Sometimes I do, though. And when I do it's really, really good. That and I'm here anyways for conventional CYOA creation and enjoyment.

>>50854004
If a CYOA offered to help me lose a pound or three in the right places I wouldn't say no, and I do love me some porn, but I am very happy to say that I've never needed to epilate my neck at all. Whatever gets your rocks off.

>>50854037
I have this weird thing where I try not to break blue board rules on purpose.

>>50854046
See, this amount of (You)'s just isn't as fun if people are responding to me explicitly admitting to being female. Don't know why.
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>>50854062
I get that. Getting attention for looks, tits, or voice is easy enough. Getting people to sexually respond to your ideas and your mind is a special kind of achievement.
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>>50854062
>want attention from guys wanting to fuck her
>won't do what it takes to get said attention
basically you want to be an attention whore without admitting to be one. femanons are weirdos.
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>>50854115
>>50854115
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>>50854097
I can't speak for all but I'd rather not ERP with a guy pretending to be a girl.
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>>50854120
Probably should've started with author roommate.
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>>50853095
Danke
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>>50854120
there were like 3 new CYOAs posted in this thread man
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>>50852258
>And way too much focus on "I've never touched another person"

Agreed. I like my women to be broken in by as many men as possible. Diversity is strength, so the more races she's gotten screwed by, the better a lover she is.
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>>50854122
This is how girls weed out certain types of guys. Quiet, this might help answer your question about pretending to be another pretending to be yourself.
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>>50854190
Sotra, I guess
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>>50854190
What, so because I'm straight and don't want to help a guy get off, I need to be "weeded out"?
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>>50854122
You don't sound like you're cut out for ERP.
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>>50852258
Well, it's one of the most natural traits for a slime. I'd have tried to diversify more, but I couldn't predict what everyone else would do.
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>>50854200
Don't get defensive, it's not a personal attack against you. Out of 7 billion humans, some women don't prefer something about you and select against it. Whoop de shit.
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>>50854202
I am anon, I enjoy it so long as I can forget I'm writing with a guy.
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>>50854231
Ah, so you don't mind it as long as you aren't forced to think about you're doing while it's happening. That's much better.
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>>50854246
If I understand your post, yes. If you lie and say you're a girl, it's okay, or never mention your gender.
The second you break character and I'm faced with reality, it's over.
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>>50849180
I feel sort of obliged to take Valentia, because she's too up-front and needy that somebody would come along to take advantage of her if you don't help her get her head on straight, but she sounds incredibly difficult to deal with.
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>>50854265
A lot of people can't seem to grasp this concept, and I never understood why. Blending IC and OOC in that way comes naturally to me.
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>>50854361
That's because you're a woman.
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>>50854361
It's that whole "being straight" thing. You can be an attractive dude and I can acknowledge that. Doesn't mean I want to bang you or do anything else sexual to/with you.
Which means when you admit to actually be a dude, and I realize I've been talking about fucking your female character, my boner dies. I'm not into dudes even if they pretend to be a woman.
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>>50854396
You misunderstand me. I don't understand why people don't get that they need to stick to their IC char OOC to a certain degree. When I'm playing with a male char and the player admits to being female, it's the worst. I listed as straight for a reason.
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>>50854420
Roger that, sounds like we agree.
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>>50854200
You come off as a whiny piece of shit. And you wonder why you need to be weeded out.
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>>50854231
Why are you so dedicated to the conviction that the other person is a guy, though? Is it a belief that girl's can't write, or don't have sex drives? Or some kind of maddonna-whore thing where any anon into what you're into couldn't possibly be a girl? Or is it just to foreign to think that girls like to play pretend, because the reality of certain fetishes isn't as fun as the fantasy and some are averse to that fact?
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Hey' what's going on in /cyo-
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>>50854516
>Or is it just to foreign to think that girls like to play pretend, because the reality of certain fetishes isn't as fun as the fantasy and some are averse to that fact?
Something close to that I guess. You'll call me sexist now, but I'd think most girls would be easily able to find a guy to bang. They don't "need" to play pretend when they can do stuff in real life.
That, or I'm old school and still assume anyone who doesn't prove they're a woman, is a man.
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>>50854516
Because he's terrified of being accidentally gay. His attitude would normally be a pretty good, albeit not perfect defense against getting false flagged. The hiccup is, he doesn't mind actually ERPing with men, he just doesn't want to think about it. This lacks conviction in the same way that a vegetarian who thinks eating meat is cruel and wrong doesn't mind "as long as it's not obviously meat". It's equal parts desperation, stupidity, squeamishness, and weakness - not really a pussy magnet.

This is further fucked by the diagram on the left. Whatever a girl might chase irl, certain kinds of sexual fantasy involves the red male on the right. In this case, even the yellow male is preferable to the blue male, because that is the fantasy at play and allows her to be the kind of character she wanted to play in the first place.
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>>50854597
Do you really think guys with steady girlfriends don't look at porn?
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>>50854524
endless suffering (bad cyoas)
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>>50854597
>they don't need to pretend to get their cunt torn ragged by a different man every night, they can do that in real life!
Seriously dude? There's so much stuff that's fun to fantasize about that no human being should do irl. Not even like "hurr durr life choices" but more "this isn't even as fun as my mongolian comics".
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>>50854650
No.
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>>50854700
Ah, that could be misinterpreted: Yes, I think guys/girls in relationships might still look at porn and get off alone.
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>>50854713
But not ERP? Why not? You're losing me here.
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>>50854625
>sneak-breeds with the females
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>>50854625
So the red guy know that some of his harem are probably actually male, but doesn't give a fuck because he gets to fuck bitches and isn't looking for love anyway? That... makes sense, sort of.
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>>50854842
>doesn't matter had sex
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>>50854842
I think it's less "some of his harem are male" and more "some of his harem gets bred by other male(s) when he's not looking".
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>>50854842
Something like that. The fucked up thing is, even when fantasizing about a blue male relationship, you want to be the girl that turned a red blue. You still want him to be a fiery furnace of indiscriminate desire, a magnetized dick that cares more about amplitude than direction.
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>>50854854
Yeah, that covers a lot of it. Guys that can't enjoy their own orgasm are the worst.

>>50854859
I don't think they meant that he fucks the yellow male regardless (though that kind of thing isn't impossible, see image), but that the yellow male rides on the red's territory and protection.

>>50854870
Basically I want to be the best hole.
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>>50853931
Dominant waifus
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>>50854870
>you want to be the girl that turned a red blue
See, this is why slutty girls are the best. Being the man who she'll stay faithful to despite indiscriminately wanting big cocks, because she can't get enough of yours.
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>>50854940
So they like yaoi.
I can't honestly say I'm surprised this exists in nature.
Life is so fucking weird already. Why not?
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>>50854940
>The females are incredibly promiscuous and always breed with all three types if they are available.
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You guys are terrible. Big party tonight or I'd be ERPing my hands off.
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>>50854200
Femininity is inherently more interested in being desired by masculinity than it desires masculines to be repulsed by other masculines. Imagine a dude too scared to even go on a date with a girl because "she might have a dick under all those clothes". Does that sound super manly to you?

That said, females are often the first to call someone out for being "unmanly", because it works. The fine specimens who don't flinch in their erections and still demand pussy are the exception.
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>>50854724
I don't know what you're asking here, if I think men/women would ERP with strangers when they are in a relationship? I'd hope they wouldn't and they'd do it with their partner instead.
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>>50855182
>Imagine a dude too scared to even go on a date with a girl because "she might have a dick under all those clothes
But that isn't what I talked about. It's more
>will go on a date because he thought it was a girl but will end it if "she" admitted to be a guy
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>>50850163
Make something with a clearish challenge to it like beating your choice of hero by becoming a bbeg and include some desecrate fetish bait. Actually make lore to hide your magical realms and stuff a few of them in for good measure.
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>>50854625
>>50854940
Dammit Nature stop it.
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>>50854625
Nature has nothing to teach you. Different animals evolved different breeding strategies and another animal's sexual behavior has nothing to do with our own.
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>>50851161
You need to add in compains, stetting, waifus and ememies and you'll have a well rounded setting. >>50853441 and one mystery box too doom us all.
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>>50855416
>and one mystery box
There's already two or three nested mystery boxes for that CYOA, the other anon was asking why the supposed author didn't post them.
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>>50855410
>200,000 years of human life
>10,000 years of culture and civilization
>but I'm pretty sure we figured out the one and only possible socialization strategy 50 years ago
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>>50855334
Right. So it's less "I'm straight and don't want to help a guy get off" and more "I'm straight and don't mind helping a guy get off - but rub my face in it or I'm gone".

Maybe a better example is a girl who says to you on date "lol I'm really a dude, you know." A guy who just walks out of the restaurant was worth weeding out; the one who calls your bluff and says "oh yeah? let's go to my place and you can show me your dick then" and then fucks the shit out of your pussy without missing a beat is a stud.
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>>50855503
You've figured out the socialization strategies you've evolved to do. Animals aren't trying to teach you anything. They don't choose their behaviors. Your biology is not designed to function like them. Don't start trying to push their reproductive strategies on your own species because it helps your SJW politics.
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>>50855410
>>50855503
>>50855534
Nature has lots to teach us about ourselves. We're just animals who are particularly able to take innovations and use them as our own. The fact that nature isn't "trying" to teach anything, and doesn't "choose" anything is beyond the point. Our biology is not designed at all; it just is.

Nobody is trying to push reproductive strategies either, from what I can tell.

>SJW politics
This is pretty funny, since I'm a traditional heterosexual monogamist in wedlock.
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>>50855574
>Nobody is trying to push reproductive strategies either
>HEY GUYS THESE BIRDS LIKE FUCKING EACH OTHER AND SHARING THEIR WOMEN.
>THAT MEANS KEKING IS OKAY!
You don't know anything about the creator of those images or how people on the internet have bandied them about, huh?
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>>50855534
My point was that white picket fence nuclear family american fantasy is only one small facet of the very very wide variety of different things humans have done and are capable of doing. Acting like we "evolved" into the only strategy you personally are comfortable with is a very simplistic and unscientific point of view.
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>>50855596
>nuclear family american fantasy
Hate to break it to you, SJW, but there are only two common human reproductive strategies for humans throughout all history. Monogamy, and polgamy in the actual definition (one man with multiple wives). It's not some modern invention. You trying to force animal's reproductive strategies on humans is trying to fit a square peg in a round hole.
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>>50855622
Well, see >>50855596 here. You might not be trying to use them like that, but he sure is.
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>>50855586
Sure I do. I'm just not concerned about guilt by association with these images, just like I haven't stopped using kitchen knives just because psychos and losers out there have hurt themselves and others with them.
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>>50855632
Se >>50855631
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>>50855612
>You trying to force animal's reproductive strategies on humans
That isn't what I actually said. Maybe that's what someone else in another discussion on another site said, but I didn't here and it doesn't seem that the other commenters on this thread said that either.

I honestly have no idea what you're actually saying. Also try learning some actual human history and anthropology.
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>>50855660
>That isn't what I actually said
>You're WRONG and all human cultures are WRONG! You should act like these cuck birds because you don't know!
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