game idea

In a land far away lies a world called Terra. After many wars the several braches of civilizations unionized and formed the mightiest civilization it ever known Retogar. Under the leadership of its king, was rich in its technology advances however; it kept a majority of its citizens starved, undereducated and in tight housing. As the king saw fit, they abandoned its people to the wasteland much of Terra was inhabitable due to the many previous wars of destruction and therefore there was nothing Retogar wanted more than the "Promised land," a place undiscovered that still naturally flourished with life.
As several other civilizations were shunned in the union of Retogar and they formed a group known as the Renegades and made their own home Bassys (pronounced Base-sis). As one of the last natural standing civilizations they are the strongest opposing civilization next to Retogar. Many of its inhabits are farmers, miners and sailors. However the civilization hides a secret terrorist group that infiltrates Retogar and shuts down its power plants that sucks away at the life of Terra.
A neutral city that rivals the size of Retogar is Nexus. It has a neutral standing with Retogar and rivals their military techological power with its golem protectors. Nexus is a sea side port town, residing many homeless, drunks, criminals, and fishermen. Oddly enough, it also resides the smartest people! Having the largest magic school with mechanical golem creations as protectors, unfortunately are easily out smarted by criminals. Adventures often get killed seeking glory in this dark civilization.
The last faction of people is a neutral group mostly humans who either ran away or were kicked from Retogar known as Freelancers. They are often the most feared of people and aren't welcome in many other civilizations other then Nexus but due to their survival skills their powers are unmatched.

Fellelica is a city unknown to humans, it resides highly magical beings known by few as Mutants or Espers. It's a civilization that doesn't allow its people to leave knowning that Retogar wants to dominate and control the vast magical power it provides. It is the Promised land golden city.

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Keep your story to yourselves until you've explained your rules's fuckeries.

>thermal expansion

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>>50526383
>In a land far away lies a world called Terra
>In a land far away lies a world called Dirt

>>50526383
If that pic is related, stop right now.
You're trying to turn video game mechanics into a tabletop RPG. That will inevitably result in an unfun, borderline unplayable mess.

Read, play and run a couple of systems that are not D&D or d20-derived, then come back and ask again.