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Did the guy working on the Evangelion CYOA ever actually finish it?
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>>50317265
A
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>>50317265
A
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>>50317265
Cheating edition I see
B&C, setting earth cpmbined with the two next from this post. Bring it fucking on you saggy tit neckbeards
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>>50317345
>RACE: Black Dragon
>VOW: Dominion
>BOONS: Magic (4), Other Magic [Day Vampire] (1), Haven (0)

Gotta have a place to unwind. A command center of sorts, you know? More than that, political power isn't my sort of dominion. The true power lies in having eyes and ears everywhere. The more connections I gain, the more I know. The more I know, the more connections I can gain.

They say it's not what you know, it's who you know. I say it's what you know ABOUT who you know. Do me a favor or two and your secret's safe. Don't, and... well. You'll see.
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>>50317265
C
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>>50318137
Is she even still around? Haven't seen her or her cyoas in a while
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>>50318275
>thinking that the sort of CYOAs this general is for are anything like Quests
>>>/trash/
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Made this a little while ago. I've posted it before, but no one seemed to notice. Feedback appreciated.
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>>50318240
>>50318611
A complete waste of C.
>The Emergency Exit
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>>50318287
>A senior monk and a junior monk were traveling together. At one point, they came to a river with a strong current. As the monks were preparing to cross the river, they saw a very young and beautiful woman also attempting to cross. The young woman asked if they could help her.
The senior monk carried this woman on his shoulder, forded the river and let her down on the other bank. The junior monk was very upset, but said nothing.
They both were walking and senior monk noticed that his junior was suddenly silent and enquired “Is something the matter, you seem very upset?”
The junior monk replied, “As monks, we are not permitted a woman, how could you then carry that woman on your shoulders?”
The senior monk replied, “I left the woman a long time ago at the bank, however, you seem to be carrying her still.”
She is here as long as we carry her in our memes
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Is there a Repo! the Genetic Opera cyoa?
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>>50318287

I'm still around.

>>50318958

Interesting story.

Haven't seen this be a waifu one in awhile.

>Light Elf
18

>Intriguing
17
>Well-Endowed
15
>Lifetime (I ain't dying yet!)
9

>Sweet
8
>Yan
7
>General Magic
5
>Weaponmaster
3

>Wells
0

Just adventure with my brave hero succubus and do everything I can to help with her quests, protect her when I can, and attend to her special needs as a succubus.
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>>50319169
Nope, you're not Angel. Her writing style might be obnoxious but she sure as hell don't needlessly add that many line breaks.

She also dismissed that CYOA because of the line
>What do you mean you're not a girl? Well, you are now.
Which she interpreted as
>Lol what do you mean there's girls on the internet?
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>>50319169
Dude you're obviously not angel
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>>50319255
The Pen.
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>>50319443
What CYOA are you using it on, though? Unlike the meta CYOA in the OP, >>50319255 doesn't specify that the "next CYOA" has to be something someone else posted after your post, so you could've just posted the CYOA yourself if it wasn't in the thread already.
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>>50319224
Found it
>If they aren't gender neutral or can't be made to easily fit being female already, then I just ignore them.

>>48657093
>>48662536
>>48663468
>I don't want to sound like a tumblrina
>All I'm saying is, where's my lesbian CYOA?

This is such a good quote
>If that thread taught anyone anything it is that throwing a tantrum will get you pandered to. No reason to quietly enjoy a cyoa when one can make some noise and get some shit started
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>>50318611
In Final Fantasy, every item I get, I just keep. There might be a boss that I will need that item for. And if there is only one of that item in the game, I need to be super sure I'm going to need to use it. This turns into a never-use-any-item scenario.

Because of this, I think the only way I'd use a one-time use power would be to profit or to save my life. If it is to save my life, it has to be automatic otherwise I wouldn't realize I needed to use it until it is too late. This make Ejector Seat an option for auto-life. I don't see a means of making money from any of the other options.
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>>50319835
Get Out of Jail and The Pin can be used for profit by stealing something and dodging the consequences. You need to have a good plan and set up and actually get away and hide whatever you stolen, but it can be done.
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>>50319169

None of these heroes are worthy. I'm not settling for some pure yuri romance with lots of hand holding. I want a big strong rugged manly hero with heroic manly muscles and carefully cultivated stubble who can just pick up a vulnerable dainty waifu like me and then ravish me until I can't sit down for a week.
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>>50319835

Well, you could use the get out of jail free card or the pin to make a profit. Find a good target to steal crazy amounts of money of valuables from and then escape the legal punishment.
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>>50319619
>If they aren't gender neutral or can't be made to easily fit being female already, then I just ignore them.
Is Angel really that hostile to the idea of making a male character, even if it's just for a short CYOA?
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>>50319835
Well ... The Coward's Way Out is the one option where you'll be super sure when you need to use it.
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>>50320438
Yes. Her idea of a utopia is a space setting with no men because women can inseminate each other, so apparently men die out.
She believes masculinity = war. I wish I had the screencap. Like most of her posts it was bonkers.
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>>50320540
Space? Not a neovictorian extradimensional empire where all men are warped into women, body and mind?

To be honest, I'm not an angelologist, but I never heard about this space setting.
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>>50320590
I'll try to find the post. She says she's okay with men genderbent into women. Her magical realm even does that, and men who want to stay men aren't allowed.
She gets very angry if you mention that.
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>>50317341
path-inquisitor
No man's land
Reanimation-save state, regeneration, false sacrifice level 2, raise undead, rebuild
perception-intuition, reality check, prophecy level 2, signs level 2, fate trance level 2
discipline-classic
traits-eldritch level 1, marks level 1

knife, pistol, wanderer armor, blindfold, phone, apartment

covenant-supremacy
companion-yekaterina
mission-it has to be this way
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>>50320617

Dammit I can only find references to the screencap
>>44924775
>>49795416
I quit
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>>50318137
Last pic is super cute.
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does anyone have the meta challenge cyoa?
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>>50320446
I don't own guns to avoid rash decisions. That would be like having a loaded gun against my head at all times. No thank you.

>>50320403
>>50320427
Strong uses that I failed to see. Probably use GOoJ.
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>>50320988
F
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>>50318219
How different is this version from 1.25?
How much was added to the Knick-Knack section and the prior ones?
Are the new options added at the end of sections or mixed in between the old options?
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>>50320988
A
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>>50321087
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>>50320707
>war and politics are fundamentally male traits and therefore the world's problems are caused by men
>soon advances in genetics will allow women to procreate via parthenogenesis and men won't be needed anymore
>women being attracted to men is a social construct and all women are lesbians who are brainwashed into being attracted to men by society
Jesus Christ
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>>50321138
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>>50313236
The only update I'm gonna do is to fix the whole antimatter thing. Might as well just do the whole dark force energy thing.
>>50303463
I'd like to see what you have so far of the kinda-smutty tiny cyoa
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>>50321149
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>>50321102
>all women are lesbians
Oh right, I completely forgot she believes that!
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>>50321165
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>>50318611
"consolation prize"?
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>>50320988
G
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>>50321150
>I'd like to see what you have so far of the kinda-smutty tiny cyoa
That'd be >>50304367.
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>>50321175
I'm pretty much convinced that most Angel posters aren't really her now. People can copy her typing style and pretend to be lesbians, but her beliefs are fucked up far beyond standard trolling fare. She's legitimately crazy.
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>>50320988
A
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>>50321286
That's how I think about all shitstorms/bait.
I'd rather believe they're all trolling then actually think like this
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>>50319005
That would be awesome, you should make that.
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>>50304367
I like it so far! Definitely going with either Science or Magic origins.

>Sometime during the
move, you were mistakenly knocked into the trash. Your parents were too
busy fighting to notice.
Geez that took a turn.

Also, spelling error:
>In fact, the think it's really cute and kinda...sad?
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>>50321087
>>50321100
>>50321138
>>50321149

I'm a princess, because of >>50321029

>Flavor
Medieval realm, wizard. (15)

>DreamRealm shaping
Arboreal Enhancement (15)
Ancient Ruins Enhancement (14)
Lascivious Enhancement (13)
Magical Land Enhancement (12)
Humanoid Enhancement (11)
Sky Islands Enhancement (10)

>Skills, abilities, and perks
Sorcerer Princess (free with wizard)
Scholarly Princess (free with wizard)
Crown Princess (9)
Princess of Maps (8)
Princess Stallion (7)

>Princely Paraphernalia
Personal Palace (free with Crown Princess)
Amu'zan's Armament (6)
Amu'zan's Aegis (5)
Copacetic Conveyance (4)
Expedient Rebirth Egg (3)
Fen's Flight Fabrication (2)
Gaia's Gnarly Gem (1)
Murky Move Mantle (0)
Opulent Outfit (-1)
Prodigious Phial (-2)

>Darker Dream
Peasant Revolt (-1)
Vile substance (0)
Capture Prone (1)
Danger Prone (2)
Easily detracted (3)

>Quests
Lofty Lanturn Lament
Pixie Poachers
Strip Club Struggle
Paradise Perverted

>Damsels in Distress
Anastasia Davenport (3)
Gwendolyn Bennet (2)
Vamina Taradon (1)
Taleri Kassendel (0)


This one was fun, thanks anon.
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>>50321039
They're mixed in. It added a handful of new items. There are new "paths" at the end of the pdf as plot hooks.
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>>50317265
Everyone who uses a MetaCYOA is a total cuck. The ones who start threads using them are even bigger fags.
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>>50321800
>I'm a princess, because of

Wish I had thought of that for my build.
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>>50321844
>mixed in
Dang. That's very inconvenient honestly. But if it's just items it isn't all that bad.
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>>50317265
My last post got drowned in an argument about veganism, so I'll ask again: any features you would want to see in a Gorillaz CYOA?
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>>50322207
I'm unsure as to what features there would be in a Gorillaz CYOA in the first place.
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>>50322207
Vegans are terrible.
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>>50322223
Basically, you'd be creating a character in the Gorillaz universe. You'd choose a race from Cyborg, Ghost, and Human, some sort of background, maybe an item you've picked up on your travels, that sort of thing.
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>>50322236
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>>50322245
>Gorillaz universe
Will it be accessible to people who know jack shit about that, or will encyclopedic knowledge on the subject be required for it to make any sense?
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>>50320988
A
>>50321087
>Flavor
Arabian + Asian + Roman (24)
>Enhancements
Ancient Ruins Enhancement, Lascivious Enhancement, Magical Land Enhancement, Humanoid Enhancement, Technology Enhancement, Lost World Enhancement, Steam Punk Enhancement (18)
>Skills
Merchant Trader, Lover, Melee, Negotiator, Navigator, Sailor, Scholar, Arts (Drawing and Painting, Prose), Prince of Thieves, Magical (Technomagic), Mystical (9)
>Paraphernalia
Personal Palace, Displaced Domicile, Copacetic Conveyance (Space Ship, Robot Helpers), Travelers Transcript, Opulent Outfit, Immaculate Sponge, Expedient Rebirth Egg, Amu'zan's Armament (Lightning Saber), Speaking Satchel, (0)
>Adventurers
Kidnapped Cuties, Confiscating Catburgler, Misappropriated Mask, Sphinx Snafu, Pixie Poachers, Strip Club Struggle, Disgruntled Desert Djann
>Damsels in Distress
Anastasia Davenport

Science-Fantasy in the vein of the Princess of Mars, except I'm an Arab rogue trader.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W7qRjZ7pYdI
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>>50322305
I'm intending to explain things in the description of the options, so hopefully it'll be accessible.
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>>50322313
That CYOA was posted before your Meta-A-choosing post, so you can't use your point-doubling on it. You'll have to use it on this (or if someone else posted a CYOA after your post but before mine, then that) instead.
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>>50322370
I always assumed it was the next CYOA posted after the meta-CYOA, not the next CYOA posted after you respond to the meta one.
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>>50322391
Which, now actually reading the meta-CYOA, I realize was never the case. I have a bad habit of not reading the top line of CYOAs and trying to just infer what it wants from the rest of it.
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>>50322370
I'm going to need a source on the image of the bear with the sniper rifle.
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>>50322391
>>50322401
So when will you be rectifying your mistake by posting a 10-coin build for >>50322370?
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>>50322207
Explaining what it is, for starters. I hate these cyoas based on existing franchises when they aren't explained.
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>>50322420
Quick google of "bear sniper manga" leads me to believe the source is Biomega.
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>>50322420
I think that's the manga Biomega.
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>>50322421
Well, if you say so.

>Penmancy (8)
>Sustenance (5) Well, I can still get high right?
>Skull Ring (3)
>Thermosaturation (0)
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>>50322461
You're an idiot. If you have more coins and don't go for the ridiculously op combo of heavy metal +autokinesis you fucked up.
>>50322370
With the standard 5 coins I think the best combo is heavy metal + penmancy. Go statue-mode with pen touched to head after instructing someone to touch paper to the pen (and refill it) regularly so you can communicate while being immortal. For me, I would probably set up shop in a temple somewhere and have a sect devoted to documenting all the papers that come from the process.
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>>50322552
I hope this is the right order.
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>>50322567
I already fucked up, holy shit!
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>>50322555
Autokinesis + Heavy Metal doesn't change anything, unless you're already beefcake mchuge. Steel is heavy as fuck, and you already get taken down to half your strength. So you'd basically be scrapping yourself along the ground at any given time.
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>>50322572
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>>50322586
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>>50322552
Comfort bear would be pretty cool. Get to talk with all kinds of people while giving them a good nights rest.
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>>50322594
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>>50322611
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>>50322621
Sorry for ruining the order. I really love this CYOA, I can't even put a finger on why. I'd love to do something similar but I don't know if I can catch the same tune.
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>>50319169
How true would be the descrption regarding threatening your characters? If it's true then I choose to hold your hand cause you're silly but cute.

No homo, though.
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Devourer is pretty amazing desu. Except for eating people. She's adorable and cute and you have to protect her smiles.
(I forgot to save the first page but they aren't nearly as good as these two girls)
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>>50322579
Still immortal and mobile
Plus you can take Bearly Human if you want more strength to go with it (and be a badass metal bear)
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>>50322672
>filename
I disagree. If nothing else, you could post it just to show how much better the choices in the page you posted are to those on page 1 (pic related).
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>>50322723
Noted. Seriously, holy fuck both mystery box girls are great. If it weren't because ??? gives me almost my idea of the perfect afterlife (if I had her powers it would be my ideal), I'd have a hard time picking between them.
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>>50322633
>I'd love to do something similar but I don't know if I can catch the same tune.
You could always try. Having more content in the form of a bootleg Raven of Happiness CYOA sounds better than not having more content.
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>>50322723
Picking Xam, moving to her world and getting high as shit with her while banging all the hot xenos.
This isn't that bad of a life. Only problems is when she brings over dudes to fuck and I need to leave while they fuck.
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>>50322886
>spoiler
Perhaps thinking about things that would make you/others happy could help?
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I come bearing OC.
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>>50321102
I... I need sources for that. I generally liked Angel for her CYOA even if many weren't up to my taste but if she really believes and upholds such kind of hateful bullshit, I am severely disappointed.
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>>50322886
Sounds like you're in the perfect mindset, actually. Nothing gets the creative juices going better than suicidal thoughts.
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>>50322951
Wouldn't making other people happy make you feel even worse about yourself because other people seemingly can be happy just from small gestures of friendship and kindness while you wallow in inadequacy and despair?
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>>50322951
yeah i btu I have no idea what people want? what owuld make them happy?
>>50322965
I don't know, the only power i can think of revolves around either a) sleeping or b) having dreams while sleeping
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>>50322723
Post the Rest.
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>>50323014
>yeah i btu I have no idea what people want? what owuld make them happy?
Less typos for a start. Other than that, while I would question the "suicidal thoughts help crativity" bit (certainly it doesn't work like that for many people) I'd suspect that feeling bad would help in this particular case of happy CYOA and imagining what feelings, experiences etc could help you and others to feel better.
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Hmm. I saw a WORM CYOA a few threads ago. Anyone have one with six or less pages?
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>>50322953
Interesting. Am I in Carcosa? Have you seen the yellow sign?
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>>50317265Give me the C
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>>50321087
>>50321100
>>50321138
>>50321149
>>50321165
>>50321186
>Realm
Pirate
>Enhancements
Lavicous, Ancien Ruins (14 points left)
>Titles
Free Prince of Thieves and Navigator from my realm
Aquatic, Fast Swimmer and Tide Sense
Pirate Prince
Prince Stallion
Prince Charming
Melee Master
Scholarly (8 points left)
>Items
Free conveyance from Realm
Al's Armament
Al's Aegis, adding Opulent and Murky Mantle
Immaculate Sponge
Climbing Clodhoppers
Water Warper (0 points left)
>Drawbacks
Easily Distracted
>Quests
Massive Monsters Main Quest
Strip Club Struggles as my side quest
>Damsel
Taleria

I have one point left from my drawback. I'd usually put it into the Monsters Enhancement from the DLC.
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>>50323014
Controlling your dreams, controlling others dreams, entering their dreams, making dreams a reality, living a second life within a dream, dreams acting as a portal to something else, and all sorts of stuff.
Sleeping could be sleeping to pass the time, to heal, to stay comfy, to go either backwards or forwards in time, to act as a catalyst for something else while asleep, choosing to sleep eternally to change the world, to make others sleep, or whatever really. Tons of stuff.
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>>50323033
Do you mean one with an actual pagecount <= 6, or one with 10 pages for the CYOA proper (compressed into 2 pages per image), and 3 pages for the DLC (all compressed into one image)?
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>>50323038
Lol, if ya like, why not. Just don't take off your mask.
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>>50323033 you might be looking for this? i'll post anyway
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>>50322953
>Mask of the Many
Have one person study and one person eat/lift/sleep. I hope I won't have to sleep double thanks to the clone?
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>>50323092
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>>50322642
Don't worry about it anon. Angel's admitted to being mentally ill. As in actually diagnosed by a psychiatrist. It's hard to say how much of that she really believes, whether or not she believes it all the time or just during "episodes", and how responsible for those thoughts she can reasonably be held.
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>>50323029
But I don't know what feelins whatever would make people feel better. not beoynd sleeping for a whole night wihtout mawaking up and not lying in bed for two hours before falling aslepe.
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>>50323120
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>>50322953
My clones would snap if I had them work and slack off at the same time. Mask of fortune for me then.
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>>50322953
I really like this one.

I'm normally all about shapeshifting, but I actually think mask of the many is best for me. I can send one clone to learn stuff and the other to just work while I play video games all day.

Do the clones need to eat? What happens if one of them dies or gets sick?
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>>50322953
>Mask of the Wild
>become any existing animal
>humans are animals too, doesn't say you need to be the same every time -> shapeshifting with biological immortality
>communicate with anything that has the remotest semblance of a mind
>no distance requirement -> make contact with extra terrestrials, if any, or just harass people accross the globe or something
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>>50323225
I'd say that's stretching it a bit, but whatever floats your fancy.
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>>50323103
Nope, just your own needs are a concern as long as you recall them every 24 hours.
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>>50323219
see >>50323235
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>>50323044
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>>50323225
It doesn't say you get telepathy. You still need to talk to whatever you're trying to communicate with.
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>>50323245
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>>50323225
You're just trying to bend the wording of a clear description.
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>>50323252
>It doesn't say you get telepathy.
It doesn't say you don't.
>You still need to talk to whatever you're trying to communicate with.
It doesn't say you need to talk to communicate with whatever.
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>>50323259
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>>50323264
Just for the communication bit, and only for funsies.
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>>50323266
I guess it doesn't say you get omnipotence either. Guess that must mean you get it!
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>>50323290
That's the spirit! :D
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>>50323281
Eh, whatever makes you happy.
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>>50323143
Then don't make a CYOA till you'll be up for that.
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>>50322723
>>50322672
Lilly is cute. Would start a hive with. As long as I can get her to not break tech stuff, we'd manage just fine. Going home is also cool.

??? girl is also pretty sweet; yandere lucid-dream dimension? Why not.
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>>50323033
http://pastebin.com/avqyp3dg
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>>50322953
Mask of Identity. It's like the Death's Head Mask, Mask of Revolution, and Mask of Fortune all rolled into one.
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>>50323092
If author is around, I have a question.
Do the standard tinker limitations apply? 'Cause that would be a bit poopy imo.

If yes, what if I take Perfect Memory as well? Can I remember the science involved?
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>>50323092
Hey does anyone know if the trump power Paramount lets you have ANY power in the cyoa less than 7 or is it just limited to the trump section?
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>>50323368
In all seriousness, though, I take it there's no immortality option for this one?
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>>50323475
Any power in the cyoa.
Why would you do that, though, when Kingmaker+Copycat is clearly the superior option?
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>>50323092
>>50323146
Path to Victory (-10)
The Outsider (-12)
Blind Spot (-15)
Godslayer (-20)
Kidnapping Target (-17)
Max Wanted (-7)
S9 Recruit (0)

The Candle

Time to out-Contessa Contessa.
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>>50323092
start with 10:
>Villain
>Fictional Engineering (Supreme Commander) (-20)
>Abbadon (-2)
>Home (-1)
>Financial Resources (-2)
>Equipment and Costume
>Buying Time
>Kill order (+10)
>Endbringer Target (+7)
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>>50323536
Nope, none in this one. Well, unless you take death's head and just grow old forever.
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>>50323602
err...
hmm...
if I took Fictional Engineering twice for two different worlds, would THAT work?
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>>50323603
Ah, so you can ward off death multiple times on the same target.

I see.
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>>50323576
mind explaining how those two are superior? i dont see it
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>>50323657
You can't. Max drawbacks is 20, so max points is 30.
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>>50321087
>>50323245

>Realm
Arabian [Merchant Trader/Rider + Lover]
Asian (12) [Mystical Arts Student, Martial + Musician]
Egyptian (9) [Pharaoh + Engineer {Aether Scientist}]
Medieval Realm (6) [Wizard {Life /Healing/Alteration of Life/Creation Of Life/Shapeshifting} + Singer]


>>50321149
>>50323259
>Darker Dreams

Oathbound [Defend children, make sure they're well taken care of.] (7)
Capture Prone (8)
Danger Prone (9)
Easily Distracted (10)
Impish Sibling (11)
Bedeviled (12)

>>50321100
>Princely Skills
Sorcerer Prince (11) {Transmutation like from FMA/Material and Object Enchantment}
Sorcerer Prince (10) {Classical Greek/Indian Element Control + Wu Xing as well.}
Psionic Prince (9) [Telekinesis]
Psionic Prince (8) [Telepathy]

>Enhancements

Monsters.
Humanoid Enhancement [All, Faerie Prince] (7)
Floating Islands (6)
Lost World (5)
Magical Land (4)
Lascivious Enhancement (3)
Arboreal (2)
Ancient Ruins (1)

>Paraphenalia
Time's Tardy Tide
Wondrous Artifact

>Quests
(1/2)
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>>50323737
Take Kingmaker, acquire random trustworthy mook, find really shitty unpowered person.

Either via Consumption or some Tinker power or other, graft brain of shitty unpowered person on own body.

Suppress higher brain function in shitty unpowered person via some other Tinker power.

Because Kingmaker can revoke powers and lacks a cooldown, you can give the retarded brain any combo of three 7 point and under powers on a whim.

Because the retarded brain is always within arm's reach, using Copycat you have unfettered access to any three 7 and under powers you want.

Of course, I'm not even gonna get started on breaking Kingmaker via Ace, which is borderline trivial and makes you ridiculously OP.
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>>50323746
>Quests
Disgruntled Djann
Lofty Lantern
Pixie Poachers
Sphinx Snafu
Strip Club Struggle
Turtledactyls
Valkyrie Venture

>>50323259
Coruscating Charger
Eerie Edifice
Bare Battle Babes
Occult Ogre
Troglodyte Troubles

>Damsels
Darsha
Gwendolyn
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>>50323576
I mean, the most superior option is Postcognition + Unlimited Shard Works, but you do you.
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>>50323853
Kingmaker can only give powers to unpowered people. The Ace projection isn't an unpowered person.
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>>50318219
when is 1.40 going to come out? highlander said it would drop this weekend.
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>>50322567
>>50322552

So, what, you take both options of this one? Like you chose power, you get Ghost Arms and the Dragonstone?

Ah, fuck it. I'll take the box. Ravens are known for being trustworthy, right?
>>50322572
So it's like vampire but without the blood high and mixed with toothbrush anon? Lame.
>>50322586
Why would I want to become a furry if I don't a)get to confuse my enemies with illusions and destroy them with fire or b)instamagically get my own comfy shinto shrine? I should have gone comfort.

I suppose I could sell the foxgloves to south korean doctor sons. Send one free to some influential furfag artist, claim it's tea or some shit, and use them as my entrypoint into this new untapped market.

Wait, Everyone you eat?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KE7dweeL2fk
>>50322611
For the Bath bombs, besides myself cars or motorcycles are obvious choices. Then perhaps heavy complex machinery, if I start a manufacturing plant I could save thousands in tech support(unless of course each small part uses a ball by itself, what a gyp). Then maybe a gun or something?
>>50322621 >>50322633
So I guess I could decline one(or all?) gifts and get instead a feather? Ah who cares it's wish fulfillment regardless. Not interested in the biting thing if I don't get a cape too.

I guess I'll take the car. Though I would prefer a van so I can cruise through the country like a smelly hippie.
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>>50323603
Damn you, Strife.
Now I can't decide between Death's Head with its certain but shitty immortality and Identity - pumping ridiculous amounts of funds into life extension in the hope that some breakthrough is made -.

Why must you do this to me?
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>>50323883
Both are 7 points and under powers. Mine includes yours, famalam.

>>50323909
Power fluctuation. Give Mook Power Fluctuation and a projection with power fluctuation.
Even assuming you can't do feedback loop shenanigans with it, you can just extend the five person limit indefinitely by having them all boost you. Shit, you could even access ten and twenty point powers if you wanna be REALLY munchkinny about it.
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>>50322633
Black Raven Sharpie

>>50322594
Adventure, change "Two" to "Eight," take all the powers but Doggo.
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>>50323853
I mean yes, there's synergy there--effectively free benefits for a build with mid-cost powers. But this is a CYOA with "turn into an Endbringer at will" and "become the flash" as option. I wouldn't say your Copycat combos are especially dominant since those cost what, 14 points each? Locking you out of the god-tier individual powers.
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>>50323995
Still not as good as Godslayer Path to Victory.
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>>50323922
>So, what, you take both options of this one? Like you chose power, you get Ghost Arms and the Dragonstone?
The way I see it, you get one choice per set of five (power, comfort, adventure, lewd, mystery), but you can opt to exchange one of those choices with a feather (>>50322621), which you can then use either in the shop (>>50322633) or one of the other sets of choices.

The person posting just messed up with the ordering, and accidentally posted the first picture (containing the non-mystery choices) of the second set before the second picture (containing the mystery choice) of the first set.

Also, can't remember if the "mystery" choice was supposed to be an actual mystery box or not, but it was always something decided by majority vote when the choice set proper was posted.
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>>50323921
Should be out in about four minutes :=3
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>>50322953
Mask of Identity.

Steal money from the rich and play with people's forms. All the blackmail!
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>>50324017
My current build is Kingmaker, Copycat, Schrodinger and the "be Siberian" power.

Add Power Fluctuation to the mix and shit gets pretty wild.
Also, consider the fact that via Kingmaker I have access to a very wide variety of Tinker tech. Also, the Thinker tree. And Unlimited Shard Works/Power Hub, meaning I could just use Dragon/Masamune powers to figure out how to mass produce my Tinker tech.

Yea, Kingmaker is pretty fucking OP.
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>>50323921
>>50324085
>>50318219

1.40 is coming out this Tuesday, I have work to do tonight and tomorrow, and I want to do another lookover of the companion PDF.
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>>50324019
Even with Godslayer, Mantellum, Dinah, Eidolon and a few others remain blind spots.

Also, no immortality.
Pleb.
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>>50324133
darnit
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>>50317341
Contender
The Free World

Invocation
Alteration
Imp (Free)
Dark Pact (Free)
Lilith (22)
Executor (19)
Red Armor (Free)
Masquerade (Free)
Rejection 2 (14)
Blood Agent 2 (11)
Homunculus (5)
Classic
Hair 3 (0)

Knight Armor (13)
Futuristic Rifle (6)
Documents, Apartment, Money (3)
Sacrificial Dagger (0)

Eclipse

Yang, The Watcher

And the heavens shall tremble
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>>50324109
I mean, that seems strong certainly. It's a high-power, high-synergy Worm build. Of course it's going to be good.

Mine is Final Form, Adaptation, Respawn. If I really wanted, I could've gotten Final Form + Hyper Speed to become indefensibly strong...but I'm instead going for gimmick power resistance and nigh-immortality in case something happens to me in my base form. I'd rather not have to be perma-Endbringered.

I agree your combo is strong. But it requires a lot of set up and there are many comparably strong options. Like every single 20-cost option by itself.
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>>50324137
Maybe, maybe not. It does say my power is free from Entity restrictions, and PtV's blind spots are Entity restrictions. Remember, Scion's version worked on him.

Also, Path to Obtaining Immortality. Bet you it involves Panacea, or maybe Bonesaw.
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>>50322953
Mask of Fortune

I could really use the money.
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>>50322953
Mask of Fortune

Make the world a better place through my businesses.
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>>50324238
It's probably not the strongest in terms of sheer combat ability (although infinite inertia is a lot of fucking inertia), but I feel it's unrivaled in terms of sheer versatility.

What's more, it's one of the few ways to make permanent, lasting changes to the world.
Cheap energy, space travel, etc. all within reach.

If there's anything I dislike about this cyoa it's how few options are actually constructive.

>>50324286
Free from "inherent anti-entity restrictions".
Which is to say those that make them not work on the entities and the endbringers.

PtV's blind spots are not all entity restrictions.
Mantellum is a blind spot because PtV assumedly taps into the clairvoyant shard and, as such requires sensory input. Any powerful sensory deprivation powers will be blind spots.

Jack Slash is a blindspot because his power lets him communicate with shards. He can sense Contessa's path as it's being broadcast.

Eidolon is questionable. Him being a blind spot could be because of Eden's tampering or it could be because the powers he gets are decided by his shard, which Contessa can't sense because it's in a closed off dimension.

The immortality thing was just me being nitpicky.
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>>50322953
Mask of the Phantom seems really fun.
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>>50324723
>>50322953
Actually, hold up the mask says I'm undetectable to all senses except touch does that extend to farts?

Because if so that might be a deal breaker.
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>>50322953
I'm too shy to be comfortable at a ball naturally, so I'll be needing the Mask of the Fool to not make a fool of myself, paradoxal as that sounds.
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>>50324286
>>50324238
>>50324687
>Needing drawbacks to beat the setting
Plebs.

>>50323092
>Conspirator
>Animal Control 3

>Iscariot
>Evangelist

>The Thinker: Eden 4
>Manton Effect Bypass 0

>The Candle

Khepri won with a sliver of the radius, no language skills, and two fewer support capes. I'll be fine.
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>>50324749
Yes your scent and sound are undetectable.
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>>50323128
>making excuses for her blatant attention whoring
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Well Anons, Travelers Tales has inspired me to make my own Cyoa. I'm not much of a writer so sorry for any mistakes I make.

It's not complete yet, but the introduction is for the most part done.
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>>50324826
When the mask of Wrath says "You also lose the fear of pain that holds others back." does that apply only to fighting? Or can it apply to any other form of exertion and pain (such as exercising and putting yourself through intense mental strain?)
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Do you generally prefer waifu cyoa's in which the waifus are described in third person, by a narrator, or first person, with the waifu introducing herself directly?
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>>50324687
Jack Slash isn't a blind spot. Cauldron intentionally left him alive because they needed him to set off Golden Morning a decade early while there were still enough Parahumans to win. Also, I'm pretty confident that Eidolon's not a limit because Scion was able to borrow the unrestricted version of Path to Victory and use it to kill him.

Mantellum might be a restriction I can't get around, but I also might be able to use a simulation stand-in the way Contessa gets around her limitations. Bare minimum, I know how to deal with him - Nanothorns wielded by someone who isn't me.
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>>50324872
You don't fear pain whatever its source.
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>>50324870
What's it about?
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>>50324992
Huh. In which case, I might just take the mask for that reason alone. I feel I need to push my body and mind to their limit and beyond. Sure, I may day quickly, but I'll burn bright.
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>>50324870
This has the look of something complex and interesting, but as for now it's a tad generic. I like the gods, though.
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>>50323092
Rogue, 40 pts
Companion: Farseer
Shard: Scion
Flaws: S9 Recruit +7, Kidnapping +3, Kill order +10
The Candle
Perk: Home
Extras: Cycle Continues +10

Hyper Speed, Divine Shield, Shroedinger, Stamina.


Thought for a long time and this is by far the strongest combination of powers I could come up with. Hyper Speed basically makes me the flash, and while it doesnt give me "infinite punching power".., well, Divine Shield does just that. It gives me infinite inertia for ten minutes. How? Well, as Newton put it..

>The vis insita, or innate force of matter, is a power of resisting by which every body, as much as in it lies, endeavours to preserve its present state, whether it be of rest or of moving uniformly forward in a straight line.
>whether it be of rest or of moving uniformly forward in a straight line.
>moving uniformly forward in a straight line.

I would be able to punch through literally everything, no questions asked. Combined with Schroedinger, which gives me ten actions to perform at the same ONE PUUUNCH just became TEN PUUUNCH. Stamina is there to make sure I dont get too tired bitchslapping everything to oblivion and back.
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>>50324959
Any of those are fine with me.
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can someone post the tg order form?
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>>50325239
Your wish is my command, anon.
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>>50324870
Looks fun.
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Lets try this.
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Rolled 95, 98, 46 = 239 (3d100)

>>50325347
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>>50325256
Instant Girl
Thin
Girl-sized
Cute
Slender
Full-Scale
The Power of Yuri
Variable 20/160
Powerful
What Change? 40/160
Take Two (back in time) 50/160
no persona override
Weeb Squad, Nanami, Katherine, Karen 100/160
Contact Corrupt 110/160
Menstrual Cancel/ 125/160
Feeling Fresh 135/160
Social Amvicalence 160/160

Page 2 when
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>>50325256
20 p
Instant Girl
Thin
Itty-Bitty
Barren
Stilt-like
Shorty
Dual-Classing
Equals Only
Right Moment
What Change?
Take Two
The Weeb Squad
Dildus Maxiumus, Feeling Fresh, Birth Control, Hair Affair
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>>50325256
>Terminus Est

So unless you don't trust yourself not to ruin your new life, why pick this?
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How interested would people be in a cyoa about the edge chronicles?
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>>50325615
Don't know about the setting, but that map looks cool. Give it a shot!
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>>50325615
Hell, the setting practically begs for it,

Sky Pirates
Guildsmen
Academics
Cloud knights
Deepwoods Traders
Slavers

I'd confine the players to the pre-mother storm, or even earlier.

The status-quo of before the stories is the ripest for adventure, because the adventures the main characters have kinda see the Edge spiral lower and lower as each narrowly-averted disaster takes its toll on society.
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>>50325842
>>50325615
Oh bay and the races, you could do a CYOA on those alone.

For simplicity's sake, I'd break it down into sections: Forthlings, goblins, waifs, trolls, etc.
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>>50323092
>Path
Villain
>Powers 27 points
Survivalism -5 points
Consumption -7 points
Adaptation -7 points
Perfect Memory -6 points
PeaK Human Strength -2 points
>Shard
The Thinker +1 point
>Perks
Blind Spot -3 points
>Flaws
Identity Revealed +1 point
Bad Reputation +2 points
Trouble Magnet +4 points
Case 53 +2 points
Birdcaged +10 points
>Gifts
The Diary
>Extras
No thanks

Goin full monster man mode. Slow to start but ending pretty monstrous, especially if I can get to the corpses of one of the endbringers and get myself a swanky encbringer core and super skin.

Kind of guy who gets stabbed through the chest and "fixes" it by eating an engine block and getting a loud bio-mechanical one til something new could replace it
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>>50325563
I wouldn't know. I only added it because I needed a fourth option and I knew that it appealed to some people. Any length of time on the /d/ TG thread will let you in on that. Identity death is way too popular.

I suspect it involves some amount of self-loathing and a wish to really just "try again." It's not like it makes you a totally different person, though.

Also some people might just not want to deal with having memories of their life as a dude. I imagine that would be a knock on some peoples' sanity. "Was I ever really a man? Did I just dream that up? Am I going crazy?" and the like.

>>50325435
8/10 would do the yuri with.
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>>50325123
Congrats on dying horribly. Scion and Eden fight by only projecting a tiny bit of themselves into the world at once - no matter how much damage you do, you're damage-capped at "one human-sized body worth per punch", and they're continent-sized.
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>>50325435
What would even be ON a Pg 2? This seems pretty in-depth as it is. Plus the points are hard enough to manage.

I hope Roseanon actually says something about this, because they brought it up a thread or two ago and it's bugging the hell outta me.
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>>50326495
Curses and other drawbacks.
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so hows the progress on your OC /cyoa/
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>>50326586
I was making slight progress with it, but then I had a better idea for a cyoa and I decided to start working on that instead.
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>>50326586
Putting the final touches on the player customization. Not sure if I'm going onto companions, tools, or drawbacks next. One of those.
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>>50326495
Drawbacks and more lifestyle-modifying stuff maybe? I always have way more points than I need for this one to the point that I just start grabbing silly stuff that be funny so...maybe more stuff to spend on too?
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>>50326481
Not to mention that he's completely squishy. With all the mind-altering, body-altering, trapcard, surprise attack abilities in the setting...he'd pretty much always have to be in fight mode 24/7 and hope he's moving so fast at all times that nothing can even know to target him. That's no way to live.
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>>50326670
Unless you're just going for just the averages, you're going to be struggling with points. I had about 50 points left when I got to Mental Overrides, and ended up skipping on those and Companions so I could pick up just a couple more Extras that I liked.

Drawbacks helping you get more points might be good, though.

>>50326586
Terrible. I'm actually pretty dogshit at making new stuff from scratch, and I'm having trouble with concept because I feel like most of the stuff I'd want to do has been done before, or would just be "yet another build-a-waifu simulator". Plus, with the latter, I'm worried it'll end up being too fetishy.
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>>50321305
>>50321334
Vigorous Ichor
Distilled Vitae

Songbird Egg
River Fish Head
Bubbling Fat
Spider Web
Anglerfish Lure
Imitation Crab meat

Pure Sugar Flavor
Apple Cider Flavor
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>>50326719
Your experience does not match mine at all. I go full sexbomb physique, spending liberally, and have 90 left when I get to mental. I usually feel like I have too many points in this CYOA.
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>>50323092
>Path
Conspirator

>Powers
Power Sight -1p
Hacking -2p
Ace -7p (Probability Manipulation) (Power Hub)
Save & Reload -10p

>Shard
Abaddon -2p

>Perks
Blind Spot -3p

>Followers
Jack
Alecto -5p

>Flaws
We Know +2p
Kidnapping +3p
S9 Recruit +7p
Wanted x4 +8p

>Gift
The Candle

The Team is rather iffy, still worm needs a li'l positivity.
With Alectos vast powerset the ace will work as a field backup while I cover the rear behind a desk.

By gaining access to security feeds I could watch the action unfold fully before resetting it all and let the ace roll a dice in our favor.
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>>50326586
I got a fucking picture done, 10k pixels high
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>>50324870
>humans
>earthly colored skin
Fug
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>>50317341
>Seeker
>The Free World
>Corruption
>Perception
>Usurpation
>Corruption
Spell (cost) [sin]
Suffocation [2nd]
Boundary [4th]
Transmutation 2 (5) [3rd]
Wormhole 2 (5) [3rd]
Quantum Evasion 2 (3) [2nd]
>Perception
Intuition [4th]
Reality Check [4th]
Clairvoyance 2 (2) [3rd]
Abyss Watch 3 (3) [4th]
>Usurpation
Bleeding Effect [3rd]
Cold Blood [4th]
Suggestion 3 (7) [2nd]
>Esoteric
>Hair 5, All level 1 traits.
>Items
All the free stuff.
Crown (7)
Ring (1)
Hood (2)
Phone (1)
1 Million Dollars (1)
Sacrificial Dagger (3)
>Ark
>Gregory
>At Doom's Gate

If I'm going in, I'm sure as hell coming back out again. Gonna spend a fair amount of time on research while I recover from charging my "sacrifice battery" thanks to esoteric. First of all, I'd want at least one good offensive spell, or to take control of someone who does.
Then I'll portal a small team around, taking control of certain mages to gather the information required for getting the fuck outta there.
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>>50326784
Maybe I'm mis-reading something then. I'll try again and see if I might be missing something.

I usually go with most of the highest options and the tallest for the first few segments, though.
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>>50325256
Instant Girl - 1 Hour
Body Type: Athletic
Chest Size: Endowed (155)
Butt Size: Developed (150)
Hips/Thighs: Built to Last (140)
Height: Protector (130)
Sexuality: The Power of Yuri
Dominance Coefficient: In Charge (120)
Libido: Powerful
Reception: Enemy Territory
Time: True Reset - Age 6 (110)
Persona Override: Mild Butterfly (100)
Companions: N/A
Powers: Spark Touch (75), Refuse Change (55), Contact Corrupt (45), Hair Affair (40), Flawless Skin (30), Dildus Maximus (0)
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>>50323092
Vigilante

>Powers (10)
Peak human strength (9)
Razor Hand (7)
Liquid form (4)
Cloak (-4)

>Followers
Pandemonium

>Shard
Warrior

>Perks/Flaws
Psychic Nosebleed (0)
Bad reputation (2)
Kidnapping (5)
Home (4)
Financial Resources (2)

>Revisions
True Sight (0)

Going for a sort of mostly evil vigilante symbiote person.
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>>50325256

So what's to stop you from taking genderbender and making yourself a dude?
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>>50327144
nothing. but did you come to a "become the girl" cyoa to become a dude?
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>>50323746
>>50323861

Heh, You're going to have one heck of a time with bedeviled on top of all the other darker dreams. Quite an interesting adventure! Sooo why did you choose Darsha and Gwen?

>>50321138
Did this come out too big to repost again? Maybe I need to flatten layers more before exporting it or crank up the compression on my end a tad more.

>>50322313
>>50323044
Nice to see builds
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>>50325256
I found v1. to have a bit too many points, though it was fun to spend them all and v2 to have too few points, which makes me lose interest. 200 to 250 would have been the sweet spot imo.
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>>50327159
Maybe he wants to become a cooler dude with the powers of the TG-Note.
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>>50327247
Agreed. It'd also work if some of the high-ticket items were cheaper; I don't see why a magic feeldo is 30 points, or why every option besides "completely lose your identity" is 20 or more points.
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>>50322953
I'd like to say thanks. Good new OC!
zero waifus. Simple yet thought inducing.

bravissimo!

I'd probably pick fortune for life EZ mode, but clone one seems fun, and all choices are pretty nice!
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>>50327234
can you tell me about the bottom of page >>50323245 , where it says the realm flavors and then has what they mean. where it says (prince charming), does that mean that it automatically gives that, or that that is required to have that flavor?
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>>50326586
Still learning a bit more every day since I'm vastly new to actual graphic editing and thus constantly applying revisions to mine.

Do any of you mind backgrounds where it's more like detailed artwork and wallpapers? I know that question obviously depends on the type of background and how intrusive it is, but it seems gradients are generally the go-to format anyways so I'll probably just switch to using them.
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>>50327438
Negotiator and Prince Charming are interchangeable names for the same skill.
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>>50323092
(10/10)

>The Diary
I'm fairly vain and want to hear people react to my exploits.

>Cycle Continues
I have no idea if Endbringers or Cauldron will still be around, but I'll pretend they still have some capacity for the purposes of preserving the other options. If it's an issue, Mirror World is also fine, but it's less dramatic that way.
(20/20)

>The Warrior
Honestly not sure I get it; they're not shard powers, but they are? Almost picked Abbadon, but I'm gonna start shit anyway.

>Blind Spot
>Identity Revealed
>We Know
>Endbringer Target
>Trouble Magnet
>S9 Recruit
Blind Spot was because I'm going to fuck the time stream up and I don't want to get paradox'd. Also because the game gave me PtV-proofing for no reason, so I felt I should pay for it. The others are basically natural consequences because I don't believe in subtlety, so I might as well get payed. I don't plan to say "you guys aren't real lol" like a jackass, but they should easily grasp that I've got some time dickery going on.
(37/40)

>Conspirator
>Shard Administration
>Copycat
>The Seraphim
>Taylor Hebert
I almost picked Villain but then I realized Cauldron would jump throw hoops for me. Anyway, I take Taylor because I don't know what will happen to her and this build relies on her. I basically just Administrate her Administrator into Administrating my Administrator and then Administrate, landing me Real Eater and The End for an "I can do anything" combo. Waifu is there to help me get in contact with people and begin gathering powers in an optimal way. I imagine the other Endbringers will be sent to test out this magic capacity, but I'm hoping Cauldron is intact enough to also help me. Anyway, once I start gathering some powers I'll hop around and try to level up the setting some by manually evolving other capes' powers. I'd hope it doesn't cause too many issues, but what do I care?
(0/40)
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>>50327533
>backgrounds
as long as its simple and not to eye destroying, it should be good
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>>50327571
thanks for clarifying that, now for my build:

>>50321087
>>50323245
Egyptian realm (Pharoah, Musician)
Arboreal Enhancement
Ancient Ruins Enhancement (14)

>>50321100
Bard prince x3 (Singing, Poetry, 6 stringed bass) 11
Prince Stallion (10)
Scholarly Prince (9)
Melee Master (Melee Weapon: Shield as a weapon) (8)

>>50321165
Sphinx Snafu

>>50321186
Felicia Sackhoff
can i just say that i really appreciate all the fellatio puns that went into this character?

>>50323245
Luck Blessed Prince (7)

>>50321087
Lascivious Enhancement (6)

>>50321100
Aquatic prince (5; Fast swimming)
Bard prince (4; Musical instrument: Aulos)
Cultured prince (3; Drawing/Painting)
Bard prince again (2; Guitar)

>>50321138
Expedient Rebirth egg (1)
Opulent outfit (0)

i was reeealllyy stretching to find things i wanted to buy, lol
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>>50327810
Consider the DLC pages then. I believe they've already been posted, but Imaginos shared a Imgur dump of his work here:

http://imgur.com/a/ju8fa
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Can someone post noseland?
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>>50327234
>Darsha and Gwen?

I really like the blood theme. Blind touchy thing is a plus. Not having eyes would be weird, but I'm sure I could create some magic objects that could be used for navigation. I thought Gwen was alright and would be nice for the magic. Typing now, I just realzed how little I like the idea of a menage-a-trois much less a harem. So she's getting cut out.

Replacing with Lucky Prince. 99% lucky except for once in a blue moon when everything collapses.
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>>50326586
Barely anything.

I have the intro written to mechfu and a ton of pictures, worth a bunch of ideas for weapons and items, but that's basically it. Haven't even started thinking about the girls or chassis.
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>>50327316
Glad ya liked it!
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>>50327316

>zero waifus

So, 0/10?
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>>50322953
Mask of the Many.
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>>50326495
Roseanon made a google doc a week or two ago to brainstorm drawbacks for it
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>>50321087
>REALM: Roman (Scholar, Negotiator, Drawing & Painting)
>ENHANCEMENTS: Humanoid Enhancement, Ancient Ruins Enhancement (14), Magical Land Enhancement (13)

I dream of marble and of empire. And yes, I've got gorgon blood. It's a bit difficult to explain.

>>50321100
>PERKS: Crown Prince (12), Prince Charming (11), Scholarly Prince (10), Sorcerer Prince [Transmutation] (9)

My mother taught me how to turn flesh to stone. My father taught me how to turn minds and hearts to my will.

>>50321138
>ITEMS: Amu'zan's Aegis [Earth] (8), Fetter Flask (7), Personal Palace (free), Magnificent Mount + Mount magnification [Gryphon] (6), Expedient Rebirth Egg (5), Travelers Transcript [book] (4)

Stay safe, stay mobile.

>>50321149
>DARKER DREAMS: Succubus Victim (6)

That's going to smart.

>>50321165
>QUESTS: Sphinx Snafu, Valkyie Venture, Paradise Perverted

Oh, I see how it's going to be.

>>50321186
>DAMSELS: Zariea Sha'tul, Simone McLeod (5)

Technically my people are cousins to the Naga. We've got to stick together, after all. As for Simone, she'll know just how to unlock Goldwing's true potential. We'll both need to be stronger for what's coming.

>>50323245
>EXTRA PERKS: Luck Blessed Prince (4)
>EXTRA ITEMS: Bulwark Band (3)

>>50323259
>EXTRA QUESTS: Province Particle, Maniacal Mermaid

>>50323275
>EXTRA DAMSELS: Bula Ghorza (2), Telatha Persys (1), Vera Godiva (0)

Bula's clan will prove stalwart allies against the creatures the succubus conjures. Vera's power over forms may well be able to turn the tide of battle. As for Telatha - she simply seems like she could use a friend.

More than that, we will all need all the help we can get, carrying the Dream Realm Seed to its rightful recipient. I wonder who it might be - and why the realms of Princesses are so often different from those of Princes. That's a prime subject in some scholarly circles, you know.
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>>50321087
>>50321100
>>50321138
>>50321149
>>50321165
>>50321186
>>50323245
>>50323259
>>50323275

Realm Flavor
Aboriginal Relam
Realm Shaping -2
Ancient Ruins
Lavicious
Magical Land
Skills, Abilities, Perks -6
Fury Prince
Martial Master
Prince Stallion
Prince of Beasts: Hunter-Gatherer, Lover
Psionic Prince: Telepathy, Possession
Luck Based Prince
Princely Paraphernalia -5
Ama'zan's Armament
Ama'zan's Aegis
Ama'zan's Augment
Climbing Clodhoppers
Mythical Magnification
Darker Dream +1
Easily Distracted
Quest -1
Paradise Peverted
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Be one, get one.
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>>50328570
Wait, huh? That doesn't make much sense, what did I-

>MONOPOLIZING

Senpai will never need anyone else ever again~...
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>>50326495
>>50328193
found it https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MmW5kbzpCWrWTeeG3Ac309JJffuf94GjCq7xph6nIgw/edit
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>>50326118
You start off in the birdcage. You are not going anywhere.
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>>50328570
Can I get the sauce on the bottom left and middle images?
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>>50328719
No, you get transported there somewhere. You could start there, I guess, but you don't automatically. You'll just get dropped somewhere in your journey and sent there. You'll probably start there if you're too OP, I guess, though.
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Fuck, we need some more CYOA in here.
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Don't know where I found this or what it's about, but fuck it.

1/9
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>>50329310
2/9
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>>50329321
3/9
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>>50329339
4/9
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>>50328570
>pick more than one waifu
>get turned into a yandere waifu for retribution
>become Harmless type yandere
>somehow perfect girl senpai notices me
>we date
>she cheats on me relentlessly
>and openly
>rubbing it in my face
>making me prep her partners
>sometimes passing me around
>they mock me for it
>even publicly humiliate me for anything
>but she's so happy

It's like pottery
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>>50329350
5/9
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>>50329367
6/9
:^)
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>>50329383
7/9
Dead thread? I hope not, 4chan is annoying to dump on.
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>>50329391
Shit, forgot image.
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>>50329404
8/9
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>>50329391
I appreciate your efforts anon.
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>>50328570
wtf I want more than 1 waifu now
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>>50329410
9/9
Kill me. I hope this is in order, if not, who cares?
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>>50329419
Your thanks make it all worth while.
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>>50329391
Not dead, just lurking and appreciating. If I'm any indication, at least. Thank you very much for putting this one up--I actually still need to make a build for it!
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>>50329427
So what's the mystery box took that with fighter/ book smart/ lucky hope that turns out to be good setting
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>>50329517
Don't know mate, don't even know where I got this.
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>>50329427
>>50329517
>>50329554
I'll post the Mystery Box I have, but I recall someone making a more complete pdf a while ago.
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Requesting more like this.
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>>50329427
>>50329629
RIP Quiet, couldn't escape Pakistan.

May your 72 virgins include a few traps and at least one that looks like Illya.
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>>50329633
More comfy CYOAs or more comfy CYOAs involving superpowers?
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>>50329641
Yeah, pretty much.
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>>50329638
How does on become a trap? Is it just estrogen injections over the counter? Or is it something more?
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>>50329654
Which one, though?
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>>50329686
Both, just post 'em.

I need them in my life.
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>>50329668
That's not trap, that's full-on tranny. And it won't necessarily make you attractive. You can pull off the trap look with just nutrition and the right exercise regime, which there's infographics and stuff for. There's a few other tricks but mostly it's the same as changing your body in any other way.
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>>50329668

Step 1: Become a faggot
Step 2: ???
Step 3: Profit
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>>50329699
give me a comfy CYOA idea, and I will make it a reality
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>>50329702
So the key to becoming a trap is getting off my ass and doing something? Fuck, all this time I thought it was something unobtainable, yet all this time it has been staring my in the face and laughing at me.
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>>50329723
super comfy sleepover cyoa with body customisation, /lewd/, little girl / hot girl / trap options, and fun companions that are also little girl / hot girl / traps
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>>50329739
This.
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>>50329739
>>50329723
>>50329749

it should probably also have an event section based around what you'll do at the sleep over, like pillow fights, video games, scary stories, watching a movie, and the type of food you'll have, and how everyone'll be sleeping (everyone seperate? sleeping bags? everyone in the same bed?)
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>>50329730
Well, if you're six foot ten with shoulders like a bull and a jaw like a block of granite, you might not be the most believable trap. But you can still have a cute ass.
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>>50329788
I'm not too tall, could probably pass as a tall girl. The problem is that I can't find any trustworthy infographs and I'm poor as fuck.
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>>50326586
hows progress on your OC?
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>>50329848
Hang around /fit/.
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>>50326586
Got the basics down (as in what options to include and such), currently writing up all the descriptive text (slow going, that) before I move on to putting it into pictures.
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Love this one, but it's always felt too short.
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>>50329904
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>>50329787
>>50329739


you should get right on making it ! you have a good idea
!
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>>50329871
Ok, thanks for the advice.
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>>50329875
Can't wait.
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>>50317341
Seeker
Free World
Aspects: Corruption, Negation, Perception
Spells: Runic words, Dispel, Boundary, Transmutation1, Intuition, Signs, Clairvoyance 1&2, Exorcism, Nameless Warrior, Reality Check, Suffocation, Concealment, Eye for an Eye, Abyss Watch, Wormhole
Discipline: Esoteric
Trait: Marks3
Equipment: Pistol, Normal Clothes, 2 Knives, Phone, Documents, Apartment, money, Ring, Staff, Spellbook
Covenant: Unaffliated
Companion: Olivia
Drawback: Fear of the Dark
Mission: Script for my Requiem

Well, I'm going to have to kill myself before I kill me. If I know myself, and I probably do, he'll have laid a trap for me. Probably a multi-layer trap, knowing I'm cautious enough to spot and dodge the first one. And he needs to catch me alive at first, which means I don't need to worry about snipers. And drugs are unlikely, since our bodies are very large (6.5") with high metabolisms. So the first thing to dodge will likely be something mundane but debilitating. Probably a bear trap or two. But that will be a cover for him to sneak up on me with a garotte to try to choke me out. I'll bring along a supply of pepper spray on my keychain (SOP for me). A quick spray of mace over my shoulder will disorient him long enough to put a 9mm slug between his eyes.

Or at least that's the plan I tell you. Yes, his 'return ritual' would be fatal to me, if I wasn't smart enough to take the Boundary and Nameless Warrior spells. With the combined powers of both of us establishing our own universal rules within a limited confines and ascending to temporary near-godhood, we can bend that rule until it breaks. Even if it's only within a 10 foot diameter, within our ritual circle, we set the rules, and we say that the spell trace back to our home dimension will be easily readable. We're both going home, on our own terms. And we're brining Olivia along with us, to a world with no wizard-war.
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>>50329957
You don't even know what he's making…
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>>50330004
Don't care, I have a vauge sense of it. Besides, it'll be fresh OC, whats not to love?
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>>50330054
>Don't care, I have a vauge sense of it.
"Vague sense", as in "I don't know what he's making but it could be neat", "it sounds like something some anon said some time ago, so it could be the same CYOA", or something else?
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>>50330054
What if it's [genre you don't like], hm?
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>>50330214
>>50330219
I don't care what it is, as long as it's new. Could be a shit eating cyoa and I'd still do it.
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>>50326586
Done with the graphical design and images but I've barely written anything.
Still no progress since spring.
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>>50319255
Credit card

>>50319169
>Kitsune (credit card)

>A cute (19)
>Twin (17)
>Well-endowed (15)
>I ain't dying yet (12)

>Sweet (11)
>Mechanic (9)
>General Magic, Specialized (5)
>Power Magic (2)

>Sikk (0)

Double the loving, double the power for Sikk. And I'm not a shabby supporter either.
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>>50327144

I took the book, a few threads back, but I suspect it wouldn't work on me. The magic that grants me the book is the same magic that made me the girl I am - to try to make myself a boy would be to use that magic for its own negation. Best case scenario is it doesn't work at all all; intermediate scenario is the whole thing just gets cancelled; worst case, I probably turn myself neuter or something. I don't plan to try it.
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>>50330416

It says people, so it means everyone.
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>>50317341
NO REGRETS!!!

Destroyer
No Mans
Classic Discipline
Level 3 eldritch trait

>Perception
Reality Check
Intuition
Fate trance (6)
Meta Knowledge(0)
Level 3 False destiny (9)
Death Vision (9)
True Simulation (0)
Clairvoyance(1)
>Invocation
First Sinner (0)
Lilith(8)
Devil(8)
Prometheus (0)
Executor(3)
Imp(0)
Guardian(3)
Dark Pact(0)
Demon Hunter(6)

>Items
Kalashnikov (3)
Stalker outfit (1)
Futuristic sword (5)
Money (1)
Pistol
Normal clothes
Hat
Necklace
Knife

Mission: See what I've become

Drawbacks(+35 spell points):
Last man Standing
Into the fire
Fighting the world
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>>50326586
Due to several papers being due at uni, I have very little time to work on it, and for my first one it's way too complex. I haven't finished the framework, I did very little on mechanics and I'm already terrifyed about how to balance it ... the more complex a CYOA is and the more values it uses, the harder it gets. And I'm already simplifying a lot.

I'm the guy working on the arcology CYOA.
Until now, I have decided on three levels of wealth and danger you can play on (The bigger you are, the more danger you are in. A small sanctuary is comfy, a rival to Old Nations may be in danger of war against the remains France or something), 8 locations, 5 location modifiers, 46 structures you can build within your arcology, 10 categories of civilians, 23 types of security force personel as well as intelligence- and counterintelligence staff. 11 forms of governance, 6 levels of security, 48 options for security policies, 5 economic systems, 9 trade focuses, 6 society values, 10 reputations (how a citizen gets renown and what your arcology is known for), 9 goals your arcology is working towards, 47 societal policies and the foundation for a chapter on personal training as well as living standards. It's currently tracking 17 values, though most of them will take little effort to handle. I also have collected 170 pictures for specific options, and 52 further pictures I have not yet found a use for.

The setting itself is as complete as it is terrifying. Unless you're sitting in a comfy arcology and able to watch the world burn while sipping your own personal brand of whiskey.

But, as I said ... There's still a lot to do and little time to work on it. The technology section is still barely touched on, for example.
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>>50330416
>The magic that grants me the book is the same magic that made me the girl I am - to try to make myself a boy would be to use that magic for its own negation. Best case scenario is it doesn't work at all all; intermediate scenario is the whole thing just gets cancelled; worst case, I probably turn myself neuter or something.
But if the magic that turns you into girl is the same as the one used by the note, then logically the note wouldn't work on you for the first year (since it says it's only usable once per year per person), but would function just as well afterwards.
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>>50321087

>Nordic Realm: Warrior, Berzerker, Poet

>Shape: Humanoid enhancement (Wide variety of non-humans, but I'm an Orc now),

>Dark Dreams: Oathbound (Protect and serve the people of my land first), Bedeviled (Blasted Imps), Danger Prone,

>Skills: Melee Master (axe), Berzerker, Mystical Master, Pirate, Prince of Maps, Scholar, Trader, Sorcerer (Stone Magic), Sorcerer (Illusions), Crown, Pirate, Cultured (Sculpture), Stallion, Prince of Thieves, Martial Arts Master (Unarmed)

>Equipment: Armament (a rime-coated axe of silver and sapphire), Aegis, Murky Move Mantle, Personal Palace, Gaia's Gnarly Gem

>Quest: Valkyrie Venture

>Princess: Zariea Sha'tul, Anastasia Davenport,


Oof. Busy night ahead. First stop, I'll visit our visiting Valkyrie. No challenge, yet. I'll let her know that some of the greatest fighters will be at the fighting pits. I'll even arrange a special VIP invitation for her. If she wants to find the best fighters and drinkers, that's where she needs to look. I'll leave her in my private box for the games. Then I'll go visit the fightmaster. A little subtlety and implied blackmail will see that he agrees to a small demand. The demand? I want to fight. Imagine the spectacle, his finest and most exotic fighters versus the prince of the land himself. Unarmed. Between my martial arts mastery and berzerker strength, I'll beat his five best fighters unconscious (without hurting them too badly). My prize? Once I've displayed my strength and skill for the crowds (and Thora), I will collect my prize and take her with me to visit Anastia's sister. I'll use my Mantle, stealth skills, and illusions to slip unseen into the homes and offices of Anastia's enemies, taking all the information I need to clear the poor girl. Then I'll arrange passage for Zareia back to her home and challenge Thora to a drinking contest to wind down at the end of the night. Of course, my illusions will make it look like my mugs are emptier than they truly are...
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Posting this one. I like the idea, though there are some problems.
1/2
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>>50330565
2/2
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>>50321087

Please rate

>Arabian and Medieval (Imagine Morocco and the Iberian Pen. mixed together). Merchant-trader, Riding, Lover, Wizard (Illusion), Singer

>Magical land Enhancement, lascivious, humanoid (Sand elf) steampunk, arboreal, living land

>>50321100

Prince of thieves, scholarly, wright prince (can create small robots) prince of maps

>>50321138
Climbing clodhoppers, displaced domicile, fen's flight fabrication, murky move mantle, speaking satchel, opulent outfit,

>>50321149
Oath Bound (can never steal from a member of the thieve's guild, murder another thief or bring dishonor to the guild), Easily distracted

>>50321165

disgruntled desert ddjann, strip club struggle, confiscating catburgler, paradise perverted

>>50321186
Vamina taradon, Falicia sackhoff
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>>50330575
>>50330565
Anyway, for problems. Some of the points seem pretty weird, lactation is a feature rather than drawback, and having prettier face gives you a bonus?
It's not clear what kind of handicap is considered major.

For housing, there's no listed benefits for getting a larger one, other than... the idea of having more expensive house. Some limitations to cheaper ones would've done a lot, such as not being able to pick bathroom or extras on cheaper houses. Or giving bonus to some of the more expensive ones.
Clothing options seem really expensive.
It's not clear what some stuff does exactly, like Extra Cash or Haywire.

Also, some of the options are pretty fetishistic. You can just avoid them, but them being there and awkward western art kinda detracts from the experience.
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>>50330616
Well, it has been born on /d/ ... What did you expect?
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>>50326586
It's sitting there while i work on this new one i have going.

The new one is short, only 4 pages in projected length, and should be very straightforward.

The one on hold is longer, and a rework/v3 of an older 20p v2.
I'm going with a new look, new program to make it in, and an overhauled order of contents, as well as additional content.
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>>50330642
The fetishes are about expected with this stuff, but there's surprising amount of thought put into other options. I wouldn't be nitpicking if it overally wasn't good.
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Did based Highlander already posted the new Traveller?
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>>50331438
No. 1.40 is coming out on tuesday
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>>50330616
Lactation costs points because the kind of people who choose lactation are the kind of people who will pay points for lactation.
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>>50331482
thx
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>>50327931
It's your dream realm, nothing says you have to have a harem if you're a 1 gal Prince. Gwen could just be helpful and grateful if you wanted to keep her on.
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>>50327299
Yes a cost reduction would work the same as a point increase. I agree with you.
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>>50327810
>can i just say that i really appreciate all the fellatio puns that went into this character?

Yes, yes you can hehehe. Enjoyed writing that one, thought I was afraid it might suck too much and that would blow.....

BTW I like your build. I think you're the only person so far to take a single realm flavor only. What kind of things would you want to buy if you were having problems buying stuff?
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>>50328407
The transmutation angle is pretty cool with the half gorgon blood and magic.

>and why the realms of Princesses are so often different from those of Princes. That's a prime subject in some scholarly circles, you know.

Great line!
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>>50331492
>Lactation costs points because the kind of people who choose lactation are the kind of people who will pa
That's how fetish CYOA's should be done imo. You shouldn't reveive points for the things you want, that doesn't make sense. That's letting getting points for being able to do telepathy.
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>>50331679
That really depends on the fetish, since many fetishes are based on reluctance while others aren't.
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>>50331585
Thanks!
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>>50332343
Except regardless of how "reluctant" you are, you're still choosing to indulge in it because you're a pervert who wants to indulge in it. Otherwise you wouldn't take the choice or play the CYOA.
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>>50332410
Doesn't matter. The point system is what made sissy life work, for example. It wouldn't have been fun otherwise, since you'd be scrounging for points for other stuff. As that old meme image goes, it's about a fetish, not about being a hobo.
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>>50332322
>>50332322
>>50332322
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>>50332428
But this isn't sissy life. Sissy life and its variants are about pushing yourself to indulge in shit you otherwise wouldn't for points. This is a CYOA about being the little girl. So if you want to be the fetishy little girl, then it costs extra.
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>>50332483
At this point you're splitting fetish content out of it. You could say the same thing about sissy life if you wanted, I know some people tried to make minimalist builds where they just lived as themselves.
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>>50330575
when the best cyoa is posted when the thread is on autosage
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>>50332497
And some people are going to play this to try and keep themselves as close to who they were as possible. Does that mean that getting magic options, a luxury house, or an enhanced intellect should give points?
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>>50332694
They aren't playing a fetish CYOA then.
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>>50332759
...Yep. Like I said, this isn't a fetish CYOA, it's a "be the little girl" CYOA.
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>>50332818
This entire argument is based on you saying "this is how fetish CYOAs should be done".
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>>50332833
Nah, I'm >>50332410. I just object to the premise that getting points based on reluctance should be a thing. You're not reluctantly getting 30 dicks in your ass any more than you're reluctantly shoving your dick into 30 assholes.
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>>50332891
So basically, you're making sweeping proclamations about something that you neither understand nor are interested in.
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>>50332929
No, I understand fetish CYOAs pretty well. I think they're generally stupid, and really need to be done as a Choose X Options from Y Categories rather than pretending you're being forced to suffer from all these bad things you're gleefully choosing.
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>>50332982
Pretending is part of the fun for a lot of people, though. I'm not sure how you are purporting to ague against this fact.
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>>50332982
You're obviously wrong about your understanding somewhere, seeing how you're going against pretty much all of the actually popular CYOAs.

Remember, anon, fetishes aren't about being challenged. They're about gratification. Maybe that can give you a clue.
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>>50332997
Then why not pretend you're being forced to satisfy this harem of gorgeous women who are the exact composition of body types you'd find most appealing and share your fetishes?

>>50333006
They're fetish CYOAs, they'd be popular no matter how you handled the choices.
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>>50333035
>They're fetish CYOAs, they'd be popular no matter how you handled the choices.
Then obviously your entire complaint is irrelevant, if doing it your way changes nothing.
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>>50333035
Because not all fetishes are that straightforward; and even if they were, one kind of pretending being fun doesn't negate all of the other ways that pretending can be fun.
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>>50333006
>consensus theory of truth
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>>50333134
>These people aren't enjoying themselves no matter what they say! I know better!
Hello /v/.
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>>50333134
You know there's nothing faulty about using consensus as a way of confirming consensus-related things, right?
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>>50332343
"You receive points for something you'd be willing to pay for" is stupid. Then change the concept of the cyoa.
Maybe you're in debt and one of the options is to prostitute yourself. There, you aren't rewarded superpowers AND you get to indulge.
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>>50330604
Steampunk sand elves with a morocco flavor sounds pretty interesting.
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>>50333232
Why is it stupid when the CYOAs purpose wasn't to challenge you in the first place?
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>>50333142
Whether something is good or not isn't necessarily relevant to how much someone enjoys it.

>>50333164
Of course, but I don't think a CYOA is such a case as it's pretty much impossible to quantify whether it's objectively good or not.
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>>50333258
Why are there alloted points if it wasn't about a challenge? It should let you pick everything if there was no challenge.
If you want to lactate, it's a desire. It's something you want. Getting it for free and being PAID FOR IT is complete shit.
Would you expect a cyoa to give you points for receiving a million tax free dollars?
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>>50333292
Anon, that logic works perfectly well... unless you're talking about fetishes.

The only way you could make what you want make sense is if you tried making rules for people to make judgements on how much they want X and to pay for it fairly. Which wouldn't work, as nobody would like your CYOA.

>>50333289
>Whether something is good or not isn't necessarily relevant to how much someone enjoys it.
In that case it's irrelevant if it's good or not.
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>>50333316
Or made it so you had to pay for your fetishes. Or otherwise had to choose your fetishes instead of indulging. E.g., Slut Life with a "fill X timeslots with sexy things."
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>>50333289
> pretty much impossible to quantify whether it's objectively good or not
Thank you for clearly making the case for the subjective.

>>50333232
You're arguing from your premise, which isn't intellectually sanitary.
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>>50333366
That all sounds great for a non-fetish CYOA, but it wouldn't work in a fetish CYOA. I mean you literally spelled it out yourself.
>instead of indulging
You're SUPPOSED to indulge, that's the point.
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>>50333385
You don't think "you have X slots hat you have to fill of fetish activities per week" would work as a premise? I disagree; I think people would be pretty happy with that.
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>>50333406
It wouldn't work for me, because I don't give a fuck about activities in the first place.
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>some autist thinks he can dictate how people enjoy their fetish
Make your own CYOA instead of bitching.
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