/cyoa/ - "Choose Your Own Adventure" General

>>50197618
>argue
We are not arguing.

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I should be pretty much done with this now.
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>>50197655
A good bit more on this page. I clarified some text here & there. Also some more options.
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>>50197648
Anon we're always arguing.

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>>50197669
In case you still weren't comfortable with your odds of survival, here's someone to take care of you.
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>>50197655
A number of us no longer care, unfortunately. Better luck next time.

>>50197680
No we don't.

>>50197699
You're turning this into a argument.

Wow, making a new thread solved everything!

>>50197704
No I'm not.

>>50197687
Well, the new options are largely supplementary, so in that sense, you're not missing out on anything... I'm sorry that it no longer holds your interest.

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>>50197709
>>50197704
This isn't an argument, it's just contradiction!

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Are there any slice of life cyoas out there where you go to school, hang out with buddies, and waifu your childhood friend?

>>50197631

>enemy

Is that a cassowary? Despite their looks they're vicious bastards.

>>50197752
There's no contradiction here.

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Been taking a break from making cyoas out of a desire for a break, but now I feel the need to work on one. I have several ideas, but I'll only post them if someone asks for them.

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>>50197780

>>50197687
That number doesn't include me.

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>>50197795

>>50197803
You are excluded.

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>>50197804

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>>50197773
Yes there is! An argument is a connected series of statements intended to establish a proposition. It isn't just saying "No there isn't".

>>50197823
No it isn't.

>>50197830
Yes it is.

What is the purer expression of energy; Fire or Electricity?

>>50197840
Stop trying to create an argument.

>>50197871
Fire is incandescent smoke. Electricity is electrons moving around. Neither is an expression of energy any more than a rock you throw.

>>50197875
Stop trying to prevent an argument from starting.

>>50197885
Okay, but which one is the better representation of energy?

>>50197885
Reductive fallacy. What do you mean when you say "expression of energy"?

>>50197871
Mana

>>50197875
This isn't an argument, it's contradiction! Argument is an intellectual process. Contradiction is just the automatic gainsaying of any statement the other person makes.

>>50197893
You realize that energy as defined by science is boring as hell, right?

>>50197906
No it isn't.

>>50197871
I would say Electricity, simply because it is purer than Fire.

>>50197683
Cute, we can get a friend now. Give me a few hours to get home and I'll make a build.

>>50197687
Bet you're the same whiner from last thread.

>>50197900
The other guy is using the term, I'm telling him it's meaningless.

>>50197893
Neither. Just pick what you think is cool or something.

>>50197916
It is!

>>50197918
What the fuck do you mean by purity?

They're both different expressions of energy. One is oxidation the other is electron flow.

>>50197871
Energy comes in many forms. The defining aspect of "Energy" is that there are many kinds that can be changed into each other. There is no base form for energy.

>>50197924
Your argument for its meaninglessness hinges on the term. If you don't have a valid interpretation of the term, it invalidates your whole argument.

>>50197950
no it doesn't

>>50197655
>Intense
>Effeminate

>Big Bigger 34
>Dotable 31
>Nimble 29
>Squishy 26
>Balanced Diet 24
>Reproductive 20
>Good Luck Charm 15

>Intense Anti-Curse 12

>Imp 0

>Go to the Demonic Barbecue

>Illene

I embrace my new life as a tiny succubus twink. Do boys get the stretchy part of reproductive too though?

>>50197912
Yes. I do. Sadly.

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>>50197631
Holy shit, someone actually drew all these birds in their little uniforms

This is pointless, yet at the same time so adorable I can't even complain

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Girls! Girls! You're both pretty!

Now shut the fuck up and stop shitting up the thread.

>>50197950
No, actually, it validates it, since that's what I'm saying. Durr, even the shitposter got it better than you by mistake. Learn to logic.

>>50197943
Fire involves changing states of matter, hundreds of chemical substances being created and/or destroyed, changing volumes, etc. It's complex and relatively dirty.

Electricity is the movement of electrons. That's it. Pure.

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Can I cook with soul fire?

>>50197958
At least the shit you can do with it is still cool.

>>50197978
No, "fire" itself comes from all that, but in itself it's just glowing gas and particles.

>>50197922
I'll look forward to it.

>>50197954
Um... I mean, there's no mechanical reason why that would need to be disallowed... On that note, a suppose girls could have the male effect too, if they wanted, not that it would be useful for procreation.

>>50197977
You didn't show the term was meaningless, just used it without explaining your interpretation. Is it that unreasonable to ask?

>>50197978
Wouldn't kinetic and potential energy be even purer? Because you're not chemically changing or altering matter at all.

>>50197979
Worldly Body
I will create harem planets. Due to the skewed gender ratio (and natural acceptance of it), there will be somebody for everyone. There will be ones for any decent fetish. You guys are welcome to have one. I'll also make some more adventurous ones 'n' stuff if/when I get bored.

>>50198002
My point is that there is no meaningful interpretation, if I actually somehow did what you want I'd be contradicting myself.

>>50198001
I just want to stick large things up my bum is all. Thanks for the clarification.

>>50197992
There are plenty of glowing particles that are not fire; fire is more than that. Even at its simplest fire still fundamentally displays inherent attributes that electricity itself lacks.

>>50198034
Than do that and don't tell us about it.

>>50198004
That wasn't one of the options provided. Additionally, it could be argued that kinetic energy and potential energy aren't expressions of energy, they ARE energy.

>>50198033
You can't just say that it has no meaningful interpretation, to have to make an argument to that effect.

>>50197979

>Pick Worldy Body
>Make a god that worships me inside myself
>Bring the god out and make it give me all the powers I could ever wish for

GG no re.

>>50197871
Lightning, if it has to be one of the two. Otherwise I would say something more like your standard magic missile or laser beam.

>>50197631
>not a single raptor and the only Corvid is a magpie

I understand that birders are pedantic in the extreme and love to show off, but passerines are TRASH TIER AND BORING AS FUCK. PICK COOLER BIRDS, NOBODY IS IMPRESSED BY YOUR KNOWLEDGE OF FORGETTABLE TRASH PASSERINES

>>50198045
Just because fire is a specific type of incandescent smoke doesn't mean all forms of incandescent smoke need to be called fire.

>>50198061
Hence why they are purer.

You can also include vibrational and rotational energy in there as well.

>>50197655
>>50189828
Since the extra curse now adds +5 points I may as well add Vitamin C back on. A full fairy build is now also viable with the point bonus but I've been running Android all along so I'll stick with it.

So that's

>Shrinking Violet
>Effeminate (extra curse)
>Crystal Shell
>Escape
>Regen
>Mana Shield
>Bit Bigger
>Nimble
>Iron Grip
>Vitamin C
>Android

>Journey to the Fairy Kingdom
I said in my last build I wanted to be able to interact with fairies on a sort of equal footing. It'd be nice to know where to find them. There's also one other essential I've been completely ignoring until now: Clothing. I'm sure the I can get something way better than doll clothes or homemade junk here.

>Isaac
I'm really split on this one. On the one hand, he's basically a cyborg, I'm an android, and he's got all sorts of cool tech I could play with. On the other, he's kind of a creep. I'm sure Beri wouldn't have put him on here if he were actually bad.

Shoutout to Miya. She's kind of perfect being both my size and with the resources to take care of herself and me. I just can't stand alcohol or drunkenness. I like Ver but i don't see how it would work out. I kind of have a physiological need for computer stuff now.

I'm going to assume that all the caretakers are natural exceptions to the Shrinking Violet curse, being at least slightly magical except for Illene.

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>>50197655
Went for stuff that would make me a good friend or partner. Forced me to skip most survival perks, so I'm sure to die fast.
>Effeminate
That lack of strength is pretty debilitating t b h.
Had to skip Dotable, but it's not like I need more than one person to be that way to me.
>Nimble (27)
I desperately need more speed. I don't need Iron Grip since I plan to chill in a pocket often.
Had to skip Flutter, sadly.
>Squishy (24)
I need to not die. Also gotta get dem T H I C C thighs! Seriously, this option better not make me fat, but genuinely curvy...
>Balanced diet (22)
Since I can't eat much food, I want to make sure I only eat tasty things.
>Reproductive (18)
Because it is necessary
>Good luck charm (13)
>Vitamin C (8)
Wooboy, that description though....
>Comforting (5)
Gotta be the best waifu.
>Anti-curse - Inconsequential (4)
To fit into society.
>Regen (0)
I guess. I wanted Tiny Tools, but the Anti-curse was more important.

I'm a little too dependant on my human than I wanted to be, but I had to pick the options that made me a better waifu...
Really wanted to get Android because eating sucks, and not sleeping is an amazing bonus, too.

>Build a Doll House
That is BRILLIANT!
God, that's gonna be funny, having my own house inside my human's house!
I mean I'll sleep in his bed but it's nice to have a tiny bathroom... Still, I want to bathe in a cup. That sounds more fun.
Peace Conference sounds fun, too, Introduce me to Technology, too.
>I had to talk to some scarier people.
>We became friends, though
She is A C U T E
Explore the Sugar Fluff Kingdom sounds amazing but I still want to build that house.

>>50198071
Sure I can. Look up in the thread, I said it several times.

>>50198098
Good, because I didn't say that.

Fire doesn't cover all types of glowing gas and particles; therefore, fire is not just glowing gas and particles as claimed in >>50197992.

>>50198100
An expression of something is not simply the thing itself. So, anything that is pure but not an expression does not qualify for the original question at >>50197871.

>>50198107
>Trump school of debate

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>when the CYOA thread is filled up with idiots arguing about nothing

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>>50197683
Rodney "Naturally, she's an exellent musician. He's a great singer."

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>>50198204
What do you mean?

How often do authors put out new cyoas? What are some cyoas currently in progress?

I JUST WANT TO BE A SLUTTY GODDESS/ IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK

>>50198101
Isaac is just a perverted closet otaku. He'd get along really with with android or living toy forms. He wouldn't try to abuse you unprovoked. Ver isn't a total stranger to technology. Even fairies are familiar with electric lights. They just don't understand computer stuff. Besides, she mentioned wanting to learn more about that stuff. As a living computer, you'd be the perfect teacher. Gulliver's also a true human.

>>50198104
>this option better not make me fat
Yes, it's curvy. Ver can shape it however just so long as there is more.
>She is A C U T E
thanks! I tried.

>>50198239
Oh hey... I'll fix that. You know druids, always turning into animals... including those frogs that can change sex...

>>50198251
You sir, are smarter than I am.

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>>50198104
>Cressela
Hard to argue with that. Gotta get the perfect mindset now that I have the boons to make me a near-perfect waifu.
I'll be honest: I really want to pick Sarah, too. She deserves that. I'm gonna talk to Cressela and see if I she will let me stay with Cressela.
I'll still go on "missions" with Cressela, but I'll be staying with Sarah during "down time".
We're gonna make ALL the potions and I'll make sure she doesn't accidentally sap all her willpower and pass out so some rude boy breaks in and makes potions in her workshop!

Oh God but I also need to pick Miya!
Why do you do this to me, Beri? You've managed to make a real, old-fashioned CYOA where all the options are so good and you can't decide which to get!
I think Cressela will be proud of me.
Mavelina is cool, but since I didn't pick Talented, I don't think we'd work out. If I had, dang, that would've been a good team-up! I could handle the tiny details for her.

>>50198253
Most authors are relatively inconsistant, but we get new CYOAs every couple of threads. Sometimes people do one offs and then never make any again. Sometimes old authors who made a bunch in a row fall off. Sometimes we get new authors that make stuff consistently. Ordion makes a new CYOA every month or so, for example. Highlander has made one CYOA but has updated it over the course of almost two years it seems.

>>50198251
>not sharing the extension you use to make it so
That's just showing off now, and rather cruel.

>>50197655
>>50198101
What a fairy build would look like and why I've avoided it until now

>Effeminate
>Shrinking Violet +5
>Fairy -14
>Crystal Shell -3
>Escape -4
Basic necessities all. Escape and Shell are both needed to prevent accidents while Shrinking Violet prevents intent.
>Vitamin C -5
Disease kills. There's no way around it if you live long enough it's going to get you, and I intend to live a long time.
>Tiny Tools -5
Obsolete for androids, absolutely ESSENTIAL for a fairy who wants to do anything outside fairy town. This puts me at 31 points, making my build non-viable prior to the +5 After this things aren't necessary
>Bit bigger -1
Fairy-sized-fairy.
>Nimble
So I don't get as tired mainly. Very useful if it affects fly speed
>Journey to the Fairy Kingdom
Not planning to stay or really hunt down those fairies, but I'd still like to visit, and I explained the clothing.
>Ver
I guess why not, I'm sure she has her ways. I'll probably just actually stay with humans I know though.

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>>50198298

>>50198274
>first spoiler
It was already referencing two other CYOAs. I wasn't sure about a third.

>second spoiler
Thanks! That means a lot.

>>50198324
Nimble does affect fly speed. That's why I deliberately described fly speed relative to walking speed (which Nimble increases). I wouldn't say Tiny Tools is obsolete for androids. There's more to life than a computer. Hmm, I didn't think people felt that tight for points. Glad I added a way to get a few more.

>>50197762
Nah, but it would be great if you made one!

>>50198383
I explained it to someone else, but android+shrinking violet makes it pretty obsolete. I don't eat, I don't sleep, and I don't interact with more than 1 human. I suppose you could stretch tools to include clothing, but otherwise I really don't see ANYTHING that I actually need.

The best argument I've come up with is to be able to carry a cell phone, which I can use as an android regardless. I'm still not sure if I can talk on it though.

>>50198456
Well it isn't much of a "need" but I can think of plenty of reasons it wouldn't be useless. In particular, it would be vital if you wanted to pick up some sort of physical craft.

>>50198253
I put out new stuff whenever I feel like it, while others may have a more strict schedule.

As for what I'm currently working on now, I've had an idea for a magic cyoa.

>>50198253
You know that first question can only be answered by "depends on the author", right?
The Scientist releases one cyoa between semesters, smug-anime-girls makes one every year, Beri makes one on a crazy schedule, like at least one every month.

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>>50197631

> Not having the Robin as British.

>>50198204
I don't know, the bit about fire or electricity being the better expression of energy was kind of interesting and CYOA related.

>>50198559
Not until the anon who asked clarifies that it is for a CYOA of some sort. Although there would be no other reason to ask here, so that may be assumed.

>>50197655
So I guess I'm going with
Effeminate
Nimble, 2
Many Mini, 8
Talent, 3
Fireproof, 2
Fairy, 14
Bit Bigger, 1
Journey to the fairy Kingdom, Ver

I thought about taking double curse but what I would want most is to buy Effeminate without the strength drop, but it and Shrinking Violet are the only curses I care for that much so yea. But plan still involves getting the fairies that cursed me to remove the curse, for purely thematic reasons of not wanting to be under the effects of too many curses. Otherwise I would be focusing on learning magic from Ver, though the lewd care taker is appealing, I would also want to change my build to include Regen and Squishy if I was to go with them but I don't want to give up enough things to buy those. So basically I'm picking learning magic over lewd.

>>50198665
>tfw have this weird feeling of emptiness inside
>Please tell me someone else experiences this?
we always have it

>>50198665
>Please tell me someone else experiences this?
You get used to it after a while.

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>>50198786
Highlander, could you post Traveller and the Traveller companion card?

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>>50197655
>CURSE: Wild Magic
So it begins.

>BOONS: Adjusted (28), Notice Me (25), Giant Strength (21), Iron Grip (18), Giant's Appetite (15)
These should help.

>>50197669
>RACE: Living Toy (9)
It's fun.

>FURTHER BOONS: Loofah (5), Regen (1), Bit Bigger (0)

>CARETAKER: Well, honestly, let's try to get me back to my family. If that doesn't work, I suppose I can work with Mavelina.

>>50197655
>>50197669
>>50197683
Alright, haven't made a build since the first time you posted this.

Update time!

>Wild Magic
It'll make my life interesting, that's for sure.

>Giant strength (26)
>Nimble (24)
>Iron Grip (21)
>Squishy (18)
>Tiny Tools (13)
>Reproductive (9)
>Animal Friend (5)
>Comforting (2)
>Balanced Diet (0)

I still want to be Mini Spider-man, but I had to get rid of regen if I wanted Animal friend and comforting.

>Build a Doll House
This is nice. Will let me have some sort of a normal life when I feel like it. Introduce her to technology was tempting though.

I like Elle and Felae, but I'm going with Illene for obvious reasons.

I was thinking of taking another curse like inconsequential to be able to keep regen, but if I did that I feel like Illene is going to view me as nothing but a toy for her to use.

There certainly has been an inordinate amount of comfy CYOAs lately.

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>>50197669
>Sprites, can revive if they die

Jesus, fuck, not only did you beat me to the punch on the tiny cyoa, you also have the same immortality lore that I have for sprites.
I thought I was the only one, I was gonna writefag!

YOU'VE TAKEN EVERYTHING!!!
...why I am I still here? just to suffer?
No mater how good my cyoa is. it'll never be anything more than a phantom...

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>>50197655

Right... never mind the old imp waifu build. There's a FAR cooler option. Fairyland seems to run on magic, but truth is I'm from a tech-based culture. Miniature hardware specialist coming right up!

Effeminate - of course
Beastling - mouse girl - 9
Cozy Cubby - 12 - places to stash my stuff
Good Luck Charm - 17 - things work out well for me on the whole. Hopefully means hitting things to make them work will, well, work
Tiny Tools - 22 - for access to human tech
Talent - 25 - and improved ability to do my own things with it
Regen - 29 - in case of accident with some overambitious mechanism

Yes, fine, unoriginal build blatantly ripped off from well known character, I know. Look, I've wanted to be her since I was eight years old and now's my chance and there's nothing wrong with that.

>>50198849
Include the option to start a tiny person only paramilitary organization/mercenary group. You can still win.

>>50197780
>Pyrokinesis
>Electrokinesis
>Geokinesis

>Lava Manipulation (Earth)
>Lava Manipulation (Fire)
>Weather Manipulation (Electricity)
>Seismic Waves
>Heat Resistance

Storm, Earth, and Fire, heed my call!

>>50197683
>Cressela
"Naturally, she's try to take"

>>50198849
Gotta be faster midgetanon. Also you could one up his by adding something like a tiny people settlement building sextion. So dwarfanon get to work and make the tiniest civilization building setup.

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>>50198887

>>50198834
>Not wanting to be her sex toy

>>50198794
Latest version with the new upcoming romance marks.

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>>50198862
That reminds me. I found this nice image when looking for tiny people. I want to use it for something.

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>>50198912
>>50198794
Fuck me to death.

>>50198665
I do.

>>50198849
I still want to see it. Your own CYOAs aren't as fun as those of others.

>>50198873
Oh, thanks. I'll fix that.

>>50198915
Then use it exactly for what I said.

Take back what's ours.

>>50198849
Do it anon. Just put a heavier emphasis on lewd.

>>50198887
Dex: 4
Dur: 2
Pow: 13
Rec: 8
Spd: 5
Str: 3

>Medium

>Bio
>Tauric

>Soldier

>Brainwave Harness

>Hawkeye
>Advanced Suit Status
>Thermal Vision

>Terminal

>Plasma Bow
>Beam Saber
>Crowd Control

>Scrambler

>Capacitor

>Cyberbrain
>Martial Arts
>Veteran Soul
>Kinetic Stabilizers
>Maneuvering Rockets

>Progenitor
>Hydra

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQrWQ_FG3xU

Probably a build type that's been done before, but I was listening to Tengger Cavalry and felt like doing it.

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>>50198862
>>50198880
>>50198940

I've been thinking of expanding it.
It was originally just going to be about living with a human girl while also being extremely lewd-and fetish-y (I'm actually from /d/, don't play /tg/ games much...)
But there is definitely room to expand it way further. I have an 'origin' and 'role' section right now

Origin is for how you got to be tiny, things like science, magic, being part of a tiny race, freak of nature etc (that's about half of 'em)

Role was originally for your relationship with the girl (friends, dating, servant, pet, etc
But if I expand it to be more general, I could turn it into a 'societal' role like: ambassador, service worker, white collar worker, celebrity, hidden, lab rat, etc.

I think I might keep the girl and fetish parts, but under a 'girlfriend' section.

Tiny settlement creation is...difficult. It just doesn't work with a lot of things. I'd have to throw the 'role' section out. I'd also have to throw out any origin story where you're the only tiny in existence (You know, since a settlement of one is kinda shit).
I think I have to abandon that Idea.

But you will be able to choose how you get around, where you live, where you sleep and possibly more.

Originally, your max height was going to be ass-high (compared to a woman), but there's simply too many other options that don't work with that, so now it's about a foot tall.

This is shaping up to be at least 4 pages but most likely more.

>>50197683
Oh hey, Miya is back! She was my favorite in thi-
>she can see arousal
Wait, what?! D-did she always have that?

>>50198918
What's the best program to do this with?

>>50199171
Pixlr's editor for me, though that's just what I've been using so far.

>>50199171
As someone who's made like twelve of these? Paint. Paint is your friend.

The exact dimensions for the image box is, I think, 494x494

>>50199160
Remember one of the options the very first girl she introduced (Fei La) had? Letting you see arousal & also making your eyes glow? Miya's eyes are always glowing. That's where she got that trait. Also on the page where she returns from the restroom, she mentions seeing something in the mirror she couldn't believe (her own attraction towards you). I mean, it was never explicitly stated anywhere, but it could sorta be pieced together.

>>50199156
Four whole pages? I wish you the best of luck. Hope it turns out well.

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>>50198934
That's an old version

>>50199171
GIMP
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bwl-aJm3wG4nLWV2NzFtVW9rVjQ/view?usp=sharing

>>50198383
>There's more to life than a computer.
Where do you think you are? But yes, there's also hugging friends, which the CYOA can also provide!

>>50198138
>Fire doesn't cover all types of glowing gas and particles; therefore, fire is not just glowing gas and particles
Yes it is. All glowing gas and smoke are not fire, but all fire is glowing gas and smoke. This isn't a contradiction. Learn 2 logic

>>50199249
This really needs an expanded semblance list.

>>50199245
how long do we have to make a build for it to be on the pdf?

>>50197979
i pick astral gates so no one else can have it. I kill worldly body the first day before his/her powers can be achieved, and eventually kill all the rest before they can get to me. open one portal to them and another to the bottom of the ocean or something.

>>50199306
you missed one word there, champ. your error is related to being necessary but not sufficient.

>>50199383
You do realize that there is no incentive for you all to kill one another, right?

>>50199384
Your post makes absolutely no sense if you're pinning this on something else. The only explanation I can think of is the very basic logic error I've shown you.

What you said is the equivalent of
>All fruit isn't apples, therefore apples are not fruit.

>>50199403
Yes, I would just want to do it so they can't do it to me later.

>>50197631
I need comfy CYOA ideas.

>>50199436
This comfy meme is getting idiotic pretty fast. The word is almost as meaningless as autism around here.

>>50199191
>>50199195
>>50199275
Alright I'm going to make one tonight. Let's hope I know what I'm doing.

>>50198887
--SUIT CLASS-

* Medium

--BODY TYPE--

* Mount (180)

--FEATURES--

* Skates (free)

* Adhesion (170)

--AI--

* None

--UI--

* Manual

--HUD--

* Suit Status+Advanced (165)

* Floodlights (160)

--COMMS--

* Radio

* Defense Maze (150)

--WEAPONS--

* Metalstorm (130) (Left front mount)

* Metalstorm (110) (Right front mount)

* Metalstorm (90)) (Front middle mount)

* Missile Launcher (70) (Back mount)

* Revolver (60) (On my person)

--DEFENSES--

* None

--UPGRADES--

* Capacitator (50)

* Kinetic Stabilizers (40)

* Grappling Hooks (35)

* Maneuvering Rockets (25)

* Collapsible (20)

--NANITES--

*Mycelium (10)

* Hydra (0)

--FINAL STATS--

* DEX 3

* DUR 3

* POW 14

* REC 4

* SPD 7, SPD+1 on flat ground

* STR 3

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>>50199005
This is neat, but
>Can't be a dragon or lich with Monster Heritage
>But can be a golem.
I mean, yeah, you can be a lich if you die while you have a lich follower. But what if I want to start as one?

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>>50199005
>Fugitive

The potential of my people is spent. We were great once. But there is no more hope for us now. We had not expected to get so close to our purpose so quickly. We had not expected to fail when it was so close.

Now all that made us glorious has faded. We gather dust and fade away. All we can hope for is a painless end. But She has found us. The likes of us cannot go quietly in Her presence.

>SKILLS: Necromancy (free), Elementalism/Earth (free)

We once bent the very stones to our will. Great towers and walls were our craft. Now our wonders are little more than grave dust. But the skill of our ancient warriors can still be put to use. They can fight for us again. We can only hope that will be enough to delay Her.

>Lich Princess (free), Drider Princess (5)
The first came to us seeking servants of her own. She is willing to work with me for as long as I live - upon my death, my soul is hers. This is only fair. The second came due to her kind's ancient kinship with mine. She seems to consider herself the Lich's rival.

>PERKS: Monster Heritage/Drider (4), Dungeon Dungeon (3), Magic Lock (2), Reinforcements/Myconid Rotpriests (1), Dungeoneering/Arrow Trap+Possessed Objects+Ghost Armors (0)

These fungal folk moved into the ruins in the interim between our empire's fall and our return to the ancient capital. They will be useful.

We have secured the ancient citadel. There, I will make my final stand if necessary. I might hope for a peaceful death - but She will not leave us in peace. So be it.

To live is to die.

>>50199436
That "Everyone on fire, forever" idea was pretty neat.

>>50199548
I liked that one.

>>50199548
You should play Exalted.

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Saw this in the last thread, it's worded as if souls for food gives more power than the other 3. Does anyone know if this is the case?

>>50199548
Shit, I want that one.

>>50199423
>apples are not _merely_ fruit

>>50199656
Then make it.

>>50197655
>Effeminate
Cuz all of the others make things even worse.

>Nimble, Iron Grip, Pop Glide (10)
Get me some leet parkour skills and a super jump. More expensive than flutter, but this way I don't depend on fragile wings for mobility.Also the flower seems cool

>Lucky, Crystal Shell, Regen (12)
The obligatory "not being crushed to death by a stray foot" section.

>Talent, Comforting, Anti-Curse: Inconsequential
The "not getting tortured or locked up by the gubberment" section. Talent lets me paint beautiful handmade portraits of people - that are so small people miss all of my fuckups. Commissions from these gives me a source of income. Also:
>"Hey Ver, does the comforting blessing work on you?" *hugs*
>Ver: O///////////O

Adventure: Build a Doll House
I might not be entirely human anymore, but I still want a house to live in. That said, some of these other adventures look fun. I'm definitely keeping Ver's number. Trying to teach her how to use a giant Iphone sounds fun. And getting her to introduce me to what are (to me) two hot demon amazons also sounds fun.

>Friend:
This is tough. Spending all day around a scantily-clad elf sounds rad, til you realise she actually wants you to do secretary work. Giant cuddle lady sounds good too, but I'm worried she's more interested in me as a doll than me as a person. Plus my power makes people want to cuddle me already. Illene seems really... fun, til you realise people with her kink usually don't care too much about trifling things like a tiny's "consent" or "survival". I love you Ver, but if you want to keep your faith in humans, stay away from /d/.

>>50199668
They are.

>>50199548
Kind of confused as to how detailed this should be, though. Just a "choose 2" CYOA?

>>50197655
>>50199676

Sarah is actually the one I'd pick. I could build my house on her land/in her apartment and pay rent by selling my art. Also she sounds really stressed out - looking after a house, a brother, a full-time job, possible college plus magic shenanigans can't be easy. My rent could make things easier for her, and occasional cuddles probably don't hurt either.

That said, I definitely want to keep in contact with Ver to learn more about magic and the world outside the mundane. Plus she seems fun to hang around.

>>50199005

>your dungeon slowly drains the mana of heroes

If there's mana regen over time this does very little

>>50199684
> List of colors.
> Each color has the primary/secondary shit that was mentioned.
> Have a table describing what the combinations get you.
> Pick ways to manipulate it.

Honestly, this more the concept for the ability, you can still add some story to it.

>>50199681
Looks like we agree.

>>50199748
No, you're saying that fire isn't "merely" incandescent smoke. The funny thing is that you still haven't even said what else it also is supposed to be.

>>50199725
Disabling (either directly or by siphoning off as much as they'd regain) mana regen could be pretty potent, depending on how fast adventurers burn through mana.

>>50199789

It says slowly, and I'm guessing mana doesn't regen slowly enough to be significantly affected by it.

It would probably add up over time though.

>>50199818
Effeminate is worded vaguely enough that you could justify being a trap.

>>50199359
As long as you wish, but well developed characters usually have the best chance of getting in.

>>50199818
It doesn't turn you into one though?

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>>50199728
All I want is my wonderful green fire aura.

>>50199828
is that to say publication is not imminent?

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>>50199837
> Such shit taste.
> How quaint.

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>>50199837
>>50199857
You faggots know nothing.

>>50199854
I've already picked out the next fourteen to be included with the new companion text pdf. So that and the next version of the PDF, and the actual image version after that.

>>50199895
Eta?

>>50199825
>>50199832
IIRC, Beri outright said that Effeminate would turn you into a girl in a previous thread.

>>50199676
Cute build. Was fun to read.
Elle's secretary work is pretty much just keeping track her of schedule and maybe taking the rare request of a denizen of the forest. She doesn't exactly have a computer, so you can't be expected to track her email or sort of files or anything. You'd have to worry about Felae treating you as a child more than as a doll (though I was considering adding someone that would see you as such). Illene wouldn't risk doing any serious harm to something as rare as you. She isn't really associated with the magical, so you're a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity. Plus, she didn't try to kidnap Ver or anything. Sarah's a good choice, though. She could use the help.

>>50199818
As your chosen curse, it has to be at full strength, but I edited the text around Anti-Curse a bit so that the descriptions given are "recommended" changes. Just say, "Hey, Ver, I think the completely being a girl thing is a downside. Can you remove that part, too? Thanks."

>>50199921
I've got work to finish up and I'll be including it with the 1.40. I'm not sure, but hopefully next week, Monday if I can get Sunday off.

>>50199924
Then why have it written ambiguously?

>>50197979
>>50197979
>Soul Fire
First, I'm going to train. Then, I'm going to use my fire to clean the streets of all the trash. How? My fire shall burn it all, leaving nothing but a clean slate behind.

>>50197683
...
Goddammit, Miya.

>>50199937
any hints about the chains, or is it strictly an easter egg thing? Can you tell us how many chains there are?

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>>50199941
I'm really not seeing this. I thought, "strong enough to even turn the most masculine man into a dainty little girl" was as clear and straight forward as possible. I guess it is the name of the option that is misleading? Effeminate is most often used to describe a man (feminine would be used for a woman), but going deeper into the Latin origins that google provides, Effeminate means "make feminine" whereas feminine just means "womanly" I felt that it was a better word to indicate a transition.

>>50199982
She can easily afford all the alcohol she's ever wanted now!

>>50200025
Currently there are nine chains, though that number could be extended to 15 by the time I finish Traveller. I'll try to add some things in the lore section to give some more convoluted information.

>>50200042
The first line is "makes you more girly", not "makes you into a girl". The later line just makes it seem like a comparison rather than a statement.

>>50200080
"makes you into a girl" wouldn't make sense to femanons.

>>50197655
>>50197669
>>50197683

Vitamin C and Loofah both make you clean.

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>>50200042
>no option to seek Death

Death is close. Why cut out the middleman?

>>50200097
At this point I imagine they just roll with it.

>>50200157
> Doesn't post the Old God of death.

>>50200062
Are all the builds you said you saved being put in the pdf?

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>>50200168
The quote was C'Thun's, but I getcha.

Now where'd I put my Yoggs, I know I have a few.

>>50200131
Yes, but I already had Vitamin C when I found a picture with soap. I can see about tweaking away the overlap if you think it is a problem. Vitamin C directly links to health while Loofah is more about hygiene (you could just roll around on the floor until it gets clean).

>>50200162
That's no reason to try to alienate anyone. I'll see about rewording it somehow, though.

>>50198918
I think those listed text sizes are off

>>50200216
Nothing wrong with a little overlap. Staying clean isn't a side benefit, anyway.

>>50200200
All builds and writefaggotry are saved in a side document that is around 350 pages at the moment, not including all the images and pdfs I've received.

>>50200223
It is set to Pixlr standard editor settings.

>>50200062
I notice there are nine 'Paths to walk.'

I've noticed plotlines for: Gadraki's leadership of the Fighter's, Reotri and Judicial, The augur and Alexa, Igra's leadership and whether he's a bad guy, and Duwal's absense.

There's a path for each of those.

I don't see a plotline for "a champion in the flesh," though I think you've said one might appear when you add the anon-made companions.

AFAIK, 'In tall shadows' only has the hub world related to it.

There's a bunch of stuff about the Children of the Second and the Third which 'Estranged Children' might be related to, but it's pretty abstract.

I don't know of any material related to 'Quarantine.' The only thing I can think of is that Marco administers the test, or something.

>>50197655
>>50197669
>>50197683
Effeminate

30
Bit bigger (29)
Dotable (26)
Nimble (24)
Iron Grip (21)
Squishy (18)
Pop Glide (13)
Comforting (10)
Beastling (Bunny) (1)

I'll live with Ver

>>50200240
>>50200216
I noticed it when I read through, and thought that Vitamin C giving a discount on Loofah would be a way to fix it.

>>50199924
Giant cuddle lady is still a problem then. Its not about my needs as a person, its about her getting to go "awww" and cuddle me. Illene is the same thing - she's getting what she wants out of this, but there's really nothing she could do for me that I couldn't get by going to a strip joint and paying a dancer let me walk on her boobs. Ver already seems like she digs me and she's much more "accessible" for someone my size.

Elle sounds better, but it doesn't really mention what we do together. It just says she can look after me and that she wants me to do paperwork, although Sarah and Ver are still winners.

Could the CYOA get changed so we can get more than one adventure/friend? It makes for some interesting interaction.

>>50200240
Er, IS a side benefit, I mean. The illness immunity is the main part of Vitamin C and loofah has bubble-travel.

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>>50199591
>Drawbacks : Strong Victims, Harbinger(+10)
Total : 25

>Cause : Paradise
Hell, if I'm going to become an inhuman aberration for all eternity I might as well enjoy it.

>Soul food
IT'S GOOD FOR YOU

>Location : Small Town (Prison)
First 10 years I'll feed on the undesirables of society. Find a cozy crime-infiltrated mexican prison(not sure how it is for you gringos but I get the impression your places are more corporate run than narco and gang controlled) and make their lives hellish(er). Whenever a prisoner shanks another prisoner my belly grows a little bigger. I won't go on huge ritual massacre orgies(not until I diversify my stock with secondary ventures on other major buildings across the city at least) or the place would turn into Bedlam house, soon to be demolished. Start and keep it small, a little trickle of blood is all I need to remain healthy.
Total : 18

>Powers
-Telekinesis(1)
Incite shanking and revengeshanking to instigate gang warfare

-Unseen Force(1)
Always fun when there is a curfew, or a riot and the security room with all the shotguns suddenly will just not open.

-Ghost sound(2)
Purple Monkey Dishwasher.

-Corruption(4)
You lose a little bit of yourself with each life you take, every fee you extort, ever anus you tear. Then is when you are ready to be harvested.

-Spatial distortion, Major Warping(4,4)
Sometimes, people just disappear. Felons might think they were released early, jailers will think they died and the gangs are hiding the bodies or maybe that a corrupt higher up sprung them out. They are still there, in the walls, in my garden, serving me.

Total : (1)
Use the remaining point for a shy qt ghost waifu, why not.

>>50200454

After a couple of decades the institution I'm haunting will earn a grim reputation as a bloodsoaked hellhole of the lost. If it's just abandoned, I could take Portals and lure in vagrants and others. If it's to be demolished then I should jump to my next venture.

>Spoopy Hospital were the Crimson Gentleman offers poor families the necessary loans for their loved one operation, only for the debtor to suddenly disappear a few weeks later
>Amusement Park with the Haunted House that seems to go on Forever
>Abandoned Projects that occasionally eat hobos alive
>Beauty Parlor with Happy Endings that have a weird sensory deprivation tank where all your fantasies come true
>Death Note/American Pie I think? ripoff circulating in the University library, write the name of the dean or that old grumpy professor who shoots down all your thesis
and will just not fucking die and free the council chair

The possibilities are endless.

>>50200336
>>50200431
In my yet-to-be-posted typo-fix version, I've changed it to Vitamin C = clear, smooth skin & Loofah = actually being clean. So while Vitamin C will no longer automatically make you clean, there's not real lasting symptoms of filth (sickness / skin damage) that will plague you.

>>50200357
In a word, Felae is motherly. If hugs were really bothering you, she'd mope and let you go. I won't lie. Illene is mostly just in it for the lewd. She'd be a decent partner in other areas, sure, but at the very least she would sexually tease you whenever she gets the chance. As for Ella, dryads do... nature-y things. She might go heal a diseased tree or kill a Garfloph that worked its way into the forest or help a kitten out of a tree. Her job is just to keep things in the forest running smoothly, keeping the peace and prosperity. You could help out with those things or take up gardening. As far as your interaction with her is concerned, you'd be "cute little second-in-command."
>Could the CYOA get changed so we can get more than one adventure/friend? It makes for some interesting interaction.
Well, the caretaker options are all pretty mutually exclusive. You can't have more than one person looking after you like that unless you star in a sitcom. And taking ALL of them would just be too many cooks. As I have written it, Ver is taking you one adventure to help you get used to your body. But since staying with her is an option, time isn't really a factor in your way. So you could technically do more than one. The ones you don't pick won't disappear just because you didn't do them first (well, you might miss out on all that cake and ice cream). But as far as Ver is concerned, she just wants to know which of these things you want to go do right now. And that being said, any caretaker you pick is likely to have some adventures of their own, of varying magicalness.

>>50198887
Heavy class
Tauric 190
engineer ai 180
brain wave harness 170
advanced suit status 165
hawkeye 160
radar 150
radio transmitter
comm buoy 140
defense maze 130
beam sabre 115
ion cannon 100
particle beam 85
plasma shield 70
2 medium drones (Autocannons) 50
capacitor 40
grappling hooks 35
cyber brain 25
veteran soul 20
maneuvering rockets 10
mycelium 0

3 dex
4 dur
14 pow
2 rec
5 spd
4 str

>>50198918
>Fuck me to death.
Sure.

>>50198918

What does the ж mean?

>>50198390
>>50197762
I've never made a CYOA before, but I mean I will give it a try.
Might be ugly though.

>>50200615
>Vitamin C will no longer automatically make you clean
I prefer the other anon's discount-suggestion. Plus it makes the bathwater-potion sound much less appealing.

On that note, could Vitamin C be used to prevent Miya from getting a hangover by having you take a dip in the glass first?

Also, could "Reproductive" be used to ramp up the production of certain other related fluids to human-like levels?

>>50200812
>I prefer the other anon's discount-suggestion.
Something like a discount is a bit hit to the word economy. Since I have to precedent of discounts in the CYOA, it'd take a couple of lines to describe, which would mean cutting out some other effects or fluff. I'll see what solution I can come to.

>could Vitamin C be used to prevent Miya from getting a hangover by having you take a dip in the glass first?
Is dehydration a disease? I wanna say no, but on the other hand, it's the power of orange juice condensed into human form, and orange juice is a fluid, so why not? sure.

>Also, could "Reproductive" be used to ramp up the production of certain other related fluids to human-like levels?
Depends on the fluid. Blood, for instance, would break the (blood) bank. It also isn't romantic at all.

>>50200615
>>50199676
>Adventures: Sarah
-Take brother to a strip club so Sarah can have an evening to herself.
-The terror of... THE LANDLORD!!
-NEXT DOOR OWNS A CAT AND IT KEEPS TRYING TO EAT ME FUCK YOU SNUFFLES
-A bunch of beast-people kick in Sarah's door and carry their dying friend in on a stretcher... a few minutes before the landlord arrives for inspection.
-Sarah is horribly ill, so I have to go to class for her and get notes. By taking the bus. All by myself.
-Hang out with her at the cafe she works at. Watch people come and go... and try not to be abducted by a curious stranger.
-SERIOUSLY FUCK YOU SNUFFLES STOP CHASING ME AAAARRRGHHH
-One day, Sarah just... won't get out of bed. She has a shift at work, classes after that, rent to pay plus apothecary stuff, but she won't budge. She just... lies there. Have to kick brother's ass to get him to cover for her while coaxing Sarah out of bed. Eventually, convince her to go to work by agreeing to spend the whole time snuggled into her collar.[/spolier]

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>>50197683
Effeminate

Bit Bigger

Adjusted

Flutter

Balanced Diet

Reproductive

Vitamin C

Sprite - Super Volcano

Slay a monster

Mavalina

Don't piss me off or I'll nuke ya.

>>50200934
This is cute. I like imaging you climbing up the bus on your own, the driver not paying any mind to how small you are and just accepting you fare like normal.

>>50200982
>Super Volcano
Well, that's an interesting choice. It's certainly a safe type of sprite. It is unlikely that someone can destroy that... But you don't have fireproof, so you might have to be careful around your native biome. Sprites don't strictly have to hang around what they represent, though. It's not like Mavelina would be living beside a volcano anyhow. You'll have a rad fire/lava aesthetic goin' on.

>>50200615
Can you interact with the other caretakers later on? Shrinking Violet would obviously hinder some interactions, but could you visit Mavelina's shop or hang around with Mercius or sneak into Isaac's 'toy box'?

>>50201063
Sure, there's no reason you couldn't be introduced to the others. Just because you don't pick them doesn't mean they'll be sealed off from you or anything.
>sneak...
I think Isaac would notice something(one) new show up... not that he'd mind.

>>50200615
>>50200934
What kind of adventures does Illene have? Apart from the obvious fetish scenarios, like she sticks you in her clothes for the day Do you swap sizes with her? That could be fun.

My worry with Illene is that what she thinks is sexy - dominating me, tormenting me, stepping on me, etc. might not exactly be the kind things that would be fun for me. Even if she avoids the really cruel stuff she's still into me mostly because she's a microphile.

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>>50200042
>Body Image (Major)
Guess I'll have to update my wardrobe, 'cause it's time for cute.

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Post some outer space and cyberpunk!!!

>>50200042
"You get immortality, but lots of people want to kill you"

Didn't realize this CYOA was you the first time I saw it, definitely one of your more dickish moves there.

>>50201062
I kinda figured that essentially being a fire elemental would come with being fireproof honestly.

>>50200042
>Major Gratitude
This was already almost ideal for me anyway.

>>50201195
>Didn't realize this CYOA was you the first time I saw it
I normally don't like to repost my own things unless it was requested / there is an update, but it's Ver's sister.
I think you're overestimating how potent the immortality dislike is. It won't make an otherwise mentally stable person suddenly try to kill you. But if someone is already having problems, you might become the right target. It's only a problem in the scope of infinity. It isn't something you can expect with any frequency. But given the extent of your lifespan, it'll happen from time to time. Just don't walk down dark alleys at night where someone can attempt a no-witnesses murder. Murder is the most extreme consequence for those most envious of your youth. Like, lifetime obsession envious.

>>50201280
It will certainly help, but you still shouldn't take lava baths.

>>50201296
Being the submissive housewife seems to be a lot more popular than getting the submissive (non-lewd) housewife.

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>>50197655
>Wild Magic, Shrinking Violet(35)

>Race:Android(25)
Different updates sometimes fuck up my config file.

>Giant Strength(21)
>Bit Bigger(20)
>Nimble(18)
>Regen(14)
>Many Mini(6)
>Tiny Tools(1)
>Inconsequential(0)
Nothing to see here people, just a tiny robot soldier doing merc work.

>Slaying a Monster
Let's fry up that motherfucker. We'll hit up a gunshop afterhours so I can properly gear up on ammo and guns.

>Companions
Fuck that noise. I'm going solo. I'll find the bitches who made me like this and unleash divine retribution on their midget asses.

After that, I guess I could remain as a one man army or maybe become my own IT Startup.

>>50201094
>Do you swap sizes
Come on, Illeen is a regular human. Something like that is going to be off the table.
>what she think is sexy ... might not exactly be the kind of things that would be fun for me
What if I said that her favorite thing was seeing how much of a sexual impact her most minor actions could have on your body? Seeing how gently and easily she can arouse you. That's got to be some sorta win-win.
>What kind of adventures does Illene have?
This much should be in the jurisdiction of your imagination to decide, but here's some examples:

* lewd fetishy thing 1
* lewd fetishy thing 2
* lewd fetishy thing 3
* you decides to switch sexual roles for the evening
* she eventually questions if she's being too hard on you, if you'd leave her if you could. She brings this up to you.
* it's your birthday, so she lets you do anything you want to her
* still concerned you don't like her despite your words, she starts spoiling you, making you fancy dinners and taking you to your favorite movies.
* eventually you get through to her, telling her you love her.
* despite her position of dominance, your words put her at a complete loss. She's powerless before you.
* going out on a date in public
* announcing your relationship to her friends
* introducing you to her parents
* because you're so dependent on her, she's the one to buy you an engagement ring (more of a tiara or belt or something on you)
* your wedding
* your honeymoon
* you have your first child

>>50201314
Well, I'm already a submissive trap, so it's a logical extension.

>>50201333
If only you could shrink tanks and attack helicopters. You would be the most powerful 「STAND」
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ww5GXbk58R0

>>50201088
Yeah, but you could just make him think another toy mysteriously appeared until you pounce on him during his 'special time', that is.

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>>50199005
>Conqueror
>Religion

>Orc
>Goblin
>Holstaurus

>Groundhog's Stopwatch
>Monster Heritage
>Cursed Sword
>Reinforcements (Free) (Dragon)
>Fear Aura

ERE
WE
GO

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>>50201314
I want to be a sub-leaning switch lesbian with a loving wife that tolerates my utter incompetence.

But priorities.

Highlander, A quick question while I'm finishing up my companion. What are the limitations in going back in time? Can a Traveler travel back into the past of their homeworld?

>>50201314
It really is uncharacteristically cruel of you, though. Everyone wants to be immortal, so everyone is going to hate and want to kill you, even if you think most won't leap to it. You'll get lynch mobs.

>>50201550
>Everyone wants to be immortal
That's also true for those playing the CYOA. I had to temper the option somehow. That's just the result of standard immortality debuffing + the natural drawback focus of the CYOA. It has still been chosen a couple of times.

>>50201550
>Everyone wants to be immortal
I'd be pretty happy living just ten years in a body I'm completely comfortable with, free of physical ailments. Anything beyond that is gravy.

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Alright here's a rough draft of my Companion for Traveler.

>>50201578
But it's just so hateful. Not the kind of attitude I'd expect from you.
>>50201579
You'd say otherwise on your deathbed.

>>50201443
This is a simple way of looking at time travel

>Easiest way to wrap your head around it I've found, is to think of it like the Star Trek holodeck whenever you time travel. Say you're palling around with a tribe and you get word that a rival one is gonna come down the mountains and wipe the whole area out. You decide to travel forward to see for yourself or go backwards to scout out the opposition. This is where you go into the holodeck and get a realistic depiction of everything. Just like the holodeck, what happens in the 'past' or the 'future' has no bearing on where you just left. You're simply playing out potential outcomes or getting front row seats to whatever event you want to witness. Whatever happens there doesn't affect the prime timeline. If you wipe out the enemy tribe in the 'past', they'll still be there when you leave the holodeck. This makes it so time travel alone can't just solve your problems. It's an awesome tool but not an 'I win' button.

>Just remember that unlike in Star Trek, when you time travel you're still affecting real people and real events. Treating them like playthings is likely a quick way to getting a lot of Travellers very angry with you.

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>>50201152
As you wish.

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>>50201802

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>>50201814

>>50201679
>You'd say otherwise on your deathbed.
Nah. My great-aunt died quite peacefully, happy with what she had accomplished with her life. Given ten years of living life to the fullest, I think I could do the same.

>>50201679
I didn't mean for it to hateful, really. I just wanted to balance with the other options of the CYOA. It was more about seeing what people would be willing to sacrifice to get what they want than to make people suffer.

>>50201836
She was probably Christian and believed in an eternal afterlife.

>>50201852
It's about as cruel as you can go. The only way to add suffering to that scenario is with physical pain. It's already maxed out on psychological and social torture.

>>50201347
That seems a little anit-lewd, straying more into cute. I'm getting a more friends with bennies vibe from her. Like, we have nothing in common or very little in common apart from lust.

>Adventures:Ella
-Find where Ella put that thing. You know, that thing? With the thing?
-Tell Ella IMMEDIATELY when the first leaf in the forest of millions of leaves turns brown for autumn. IMMEDIATELY.
-Order a pizza. With no phone or internet. In the middle of a forest.
-Don't be eaten by bears.
-Leave Ella's love notes where that one druid with the lute and the floofy blonde hair will find them. DON'T GET CAUGHT!!! BUT MAKE SURE HE GETS THEM!!!
-A cow belonging to a farmer in a field near the forest is experiencing difficult labor. Go help deliver it. Ella is... busy. With other things. So she can't be the one to stick her arm up a cow's gooey hoo-ha. But you can.
-Count all the mushrooms in the forest. Ella needs to know EXACTLY how many there are.
-Chase out a bunch of campers. They're leaving litter everywhere and scaring away animals.
-Ella has gone into heat again. You better find that druid. She's giving you weird looks

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Major changes in The Basement Experiment.
Followed some advises and went for balancing some prices.
Also added a few options, like the internet. (Yes, very salty. But if you want, there is a price to pay.)

Update:
>Changed the layout for the top part.
>Now you start with 45 points.
>Cutting the prize to a half will get you 50 points to start.
>Reducing the prize to 0, will get you to start with 60 points.
>Added a bonus option. The one that reduces de prize to 0 and allows you stay 20 years in the basement. You'll be starting with 75 points.
>Peanut Butter Sandwich and Milk now has a different description.
>Peanut Butter Sandwich and Milk's cost increased to 1.
>Microwave's description changed to instant meals mechanic.
>Fast Food's cost reduced by 1.
>Full Kitchen's cost increased by 1.
>Gourmet Food's cost increase by 1.
>Ugly Bitch's description changed. She now has a very high chance of STD.
>Ugly Bitch's cost increased to 1.
>Alone's description slightly changed, basically the same.
>Puppy or Kitten's description changed. Now you can pay it twice to have both of them. Their food is also included.
>Old Radio's cost reduced by 1.
>Air Conditioning's cost reduced by 1.
> All TV Shows and Movies' cost increased by 1.
>Desktop or Console's Cost increased by 1.
>Indoor Pool's description changed. Now you can spend an extra point for wave and constant current function.
>Fetish Room's cost increased by 1.
>Pool Table's deleted.
>Skylight's description changed. Now you can pay separately for the scope.
>Multi Game Table Added.
>Birth control absorbed as an extra to Medical Care.
>Medical Care's cost decreased by 1.
>Any Concert's cost decreased by 3.
>Lab Research's cost decreased by 1.
>Lab Research's description changed. Will not work for your companions.
>Streaming's cost decreased by 2.
>Internet Added.

>>50201857
You live on through your effect on the people you leave behind. And in turn, how your impact on that shapes the way they act, which leaves an effect on the people they leave behind.

>>50201900

You know what I just realized? You gotta take medical care, because even if you take healthy food and lab research, some random disease can just kill you like that.

>>50202011
That is very true my friend

>>50201968
No you don't. Legacy doesn't matter. Only your ability to think and experience does.

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>>50202044
That is your opinion.

>>50201900
>Healthy food (40)
Tasty, and will actually keep me alive.

>Kitten (37)
Inexpensive. And doesn't get pissy when I bone my masseuse.

>Air Con (34)
So I don't have to live in a pool of my own sweat.

>Surround Sound System, Television, Library, and SPA (15)
So I don't get bored.

>Indoor Pool, Medical Care (7)
So I stay healthy.

>Garden, Skylight, Radio (3)
For my mental health.

>>50201968
>>50202044
>>50202057

Doesn't the matter which you two are discussing hold absolutely no meaning given that "what matters" is essentially an opinion and completely subjective?

>>50202082
Subjective as it may be, it holds value to me.

>>50202082
Is it too late to argue that nothing does?

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>>50201900
>You'll get infinite power
Say no more.

>>50202099
And that is as good a reason as any.

>>50202138
No it is not. You are still capable of it.

But why can't we all agree that shitty sonic fanfics DO give life meaning?

>>50201895
Well, I was specifically asked for non-lewd adventures, so that was the next best to come to mind.

>>50202175
>spoiler
Well, what is life without laughter?

>>50197655
Curse: Effeminate
Perks: Nimble, Iron Grip, Mana Shield, Escape, Cozy Cubby, Balanced Diet, Vitamin C, Tiny Tools, Comforting
Activity: Build a Doll House
Caretaker: Sarah

Becoming a girl doesn't seem so bad. I'll miss having some muscle, but it's not like I'll be hitting the courts anytime soon.

Mana Shield is a must; I don't need more curse hi-jinks throwing my life upside down. And with Escape, no bottle-wielding green-clad meanies will get the best of me! Well, not for long, anyway.

Nimble and Iron Grip should be enough to get around with. I'm kinda relying on hanging around people most of the time, and being able to just catch a ride if I need to go far. And since it was hard enough preparing proper meals for one when big, Balanced Diet will be great. With my size, gosh, a milkshake could last me a couple of days!

Using Cozy Cubby and Tiny Tools, technology and proper not-toy outfits are still within reach. The latter is especially important if I end up spending much soaking while around other Sarah; with my body like this, it'll be embarrassing enough with a proper bathing suit. Hopefully she can make good use of the mild healing potions I make with Vitamin C, or maybe even use them as reagents for more potent stuff. I just hope I don't have to _see_ anyone drinking it. Just the idea of people drinking _that_ is a bit...

Anyway, with the immune system boosting (and comforting), maybe I could occasionally work as a specialized sort of stay-in nurse for folks who need that extra little boost to get over a sickness? I imagine Sarah comes into contact with folks through her work that could use that. And we could try convincing / nagging her brother to help with vetting clients, since I can't get taken home by just anyone. Well, we can work on that. He'll turn around eventually! Worst case, I can shrink down his computer and hide it (and myself) away until he gets off his butt!

Tiny Nurse / Apothecary Assistant adventures, go!

>>50202211
>Tiny Nurse / Apothecary Assistant adventures, go!
I can see why you're worried about green-clad adventurers.

>>50202211
Really cute. I'm really liking the builds the CYOA is getting.

>>50202061
You start with 45 points now.

>>50197655
As an alternative to drinking bath water or licking me, could Vitamin C work if I kiss them? I mean, sure, it'll probably take longer for the same effect, but it seems less gross to me...

>>50202176
Alright, so who else needs adventures?

>Adventure: Felae
-WHOSE A CUTE WIDDLE TINY?? YOU ARE!! YES YOU ARE!!!
-Hey, where'd you go? Oh there you are!!
-How many tinies can fit in one hug? That's right, all of you!
-Awwwww! They fell asleep in my sock drawer!
-OH MY GOD, LOOK AT YOUR LITTLE FEET!!
-Dinner time! Come and get it! Look at the tiny cutlery I found for you! It's so cute!
-Heehee! Just look at your little jammies! They're so big on you!
-HAHAHA GET OUT OF THERE I'M TICKLISH AHAHAHAHAHA
-OH MY GOD I'M SO SORRY I DIDN'T MEAN TO HURT YOU OH PLEASE BE OKAY PLEASE BE OKAY
-OH THANK GOD I THOUGHT I SQUISHED YOU ABLUHBLUHBLUHBLUH
-Hello my fellow tiny. We've called you here on an urgent mission. We all like Felae and we all like living with her. But she's recently made "friends" with a young minotaur beast man. A very large, muscular beast man. With a very large... umm... thing. Which she really really likes. And she really likes the rest of him too. Which is a problem, cuz he doesn't like us. Enough that he's going to ask her to kick us all out. And she might say yes. So we're beginning Operation: Bull Break-up. You in?

>>50202174

I think you mean unlimited.

>>50201900
I'm not taking any bonus, losing 5 million for 5 points does not seem appealing to me. You can buy so much shit with it
I decided to go without the internets

>Peanut Butter and Sandwich (1)
I had one point left, figured I might get this if I'm ever feeling too lazy to cook.

>Full Kitchen (8)
Even knowing I'm a lousy cook, I figured this might get me to learn a few stuff. Good for killing some time.

Mandy Muse (18)
I know what is her favorite genre of fucking music, so I think I'm fine. Sex is a good exercise and it will get me out of any depression or boredom.

All TV Shows and Movies (25)
I'm actually addicted to this. Prolly never be bored.

Desktop (35)
A lot of games to play. Help killing some time. No online is a shame tho...

Indoor Pool (41)
Decided to pick this over the Workout Room, because it provides good exercise and helps a lot if it gets too hot. No need to pay for Air Conditioning.

Skylight (42)
Vital for mental state.

Medical Care + Birth Control (45)
In case I get ill. Also, cannot have bitch go preggo.

>>50201900

>only need 1 more point for my build

Why does this happen

>>50201900
>healthy food
>kitten
>air conditioning
>desktop
>library
>medical care
>lab research
>internet
have 2 points left so I'll get a garden to use up my points, worst case scenario I just don't use it

Hey highlander, how many builds total are you putting on the pdf

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>>50201802
>Background
•Machine Body

>Hardware
1.Armored Systems
2.Armored Skin
3.Enhanced Senses
4.Stability System
5.EMP Mesh
6.Enhanced Musculature
7.Respiration Augment
8.Thermal Adaptation

>Wetware
1.Muse
2.Reflex Package
3.Mnemonic Augmentation

>Nanoware
1.Medical Nanites
2.Self-Repair

>Skills
1.Combat-(1)
2.Bot Ops-(1)
3.Technology-(1)
4.Infiltration-(1)

>Ally
•The Console Cowboy

>Enemy
•The Fixer

>Complication
1.Duty

-------------------------------------

>Settings
1.New York Arclogy-2 (Home territory)
2.Paris (Neutral territory)
3.Baghdad Research institute (Enemy Territory)

>Antagonist
•Iteration Zero

-------------------------------------

>Gear
Basic credstick [0 credits]
+Gold upgrade [4 credits]

Basic Apartment [0 credits]
+House sized upgrade [2 credits]
+Workshop [3 credits]
+Security System [2 credits]

Ident Card [0 credits]
----------------------------------(11)

Monoblade [4 credits]
+collapsible addon [2 credits]

Street Sweeper [2 credits]
+Scope and laser sight [2 credits]
----------------------------------(10)

Peeper Spy Drone [3 credits]
+Stealth Armor [2 credits]
+Network Interface [2 credits]
----------------------------------(7)

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>>50202442
Tell my story huh? Well, I suppose I'll just get right into it then. I'm a cyborg and an agent of the United Nations Special Tactics Group. The accident that caused my transformation happened back when I was ten, I was one of the victims of the Olympus shuttle disaster, although my body was still intact enough to be repaired through normal surgery, my parents decided to go in another direction.

They rebuilt me into a living weapon. They fixed my damaged organs then augmented me with some of the best technology and biological treatments available at the time. Bullet immunity, disease immunity, self healing, and super strength are just a few of the upgrades they gave me, and you'd never even be able to tell I'm any different from a non-augmented human unless you put me under a scanner.

I've spent nearly every day since my transformation learning and training to become an agent, I'm a skilled combatant, pilot, drone operator, mechanic and infiltrator. I'm not a hacker at all, and I lack a lot of social skills because I've been locked up in UN HQ for so long.

Overall, I'm just an unremarkable cyborg soldier living in New York. I'm going to be sent on my 1st mission soon, wish me luck Undernet, I have a feeling I'm going to need it.

>>50202439
Initially 84, though that number is going to increase.

>>50202410
>Healthy Food 5
>Kitten 8
>Air Conditioning 11
>Desktop 21
>Library 25
>Medical Care 27
>Lab Research 34
>Internet 44

You have only 1 point left...

>>50201900
Anon who went full autism on this last thread here.
Glad to see I helped the cyoa out.
It's much better balanced and I have to really think on the choices.

>>50202504
Thanks for the input. Took the advises I thought were best, helped a lot on the balancing.

I'd like to see your new build.

>>50202345
>if I kiss them
no, but if they kiss you, it would. If you're kissing each other, that would also work.

>>50202348
I'm enjoying reading these, but she'd never to that last part and kick you out

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>>50202534
>no, but if they kiss you, it would. If you're kissing each other, that would also work.
Maybe I'll just take Fairy and practice healing magic, with it delivered with a kiss. Bigger time investment, though. Healing someone by giving them a kiss on their forehead or something just seems really cute to me.

>>50201900
Food
>07 Full Kitchen
Companions
>10 Mandy Muse
Electronics
>03 Air Conditioning
Side Rooms
>03 Jacuzzi and Sauna
>05 Workout Room
>01 Skylight
Services
>03 Medical Care (+Birth Control)
>04 Spa
>07 Lab Research

Work out, cook, eat, relax, and fuck. Once a week, relax even more and have a threeway. Then walk out perfectly healthy with 10 million USD and live 20 years longer with my current quality of life.

Pretty good 10 years.

>>50197655
>>50197669
>>50197683
I'm sticking with my invisible rape breeder build from the last thread. I guess ill take the elf.

>>50201900
Funny how none of the companions are good for waifuing here, usually there's at least one. Guess sexuality is limited to molesting the masseuse.

I had a hard time picking enough things to use up all the points, internet takes care of all the distraction you could ever want.

gourmet food
kitten
air conditioning
PC
jacuzzi and sauna
medical care
spa
internet

>>50199245

>Operabia Module: Latent Insect Control ([500] An Operabia Module developed by Medical/Experimental that grants the user basic controls over insect and insect analogue life-forms in a one mile radius, enabling the Module wielder to create massive swarms of insects. Not good against fire and armour but terrifying nonetheless. An Overclocked Module will enable for slow mutation and growth of controlled insects.)

>Portaling Dispenser ([500] Referred to as a 'Vorper' or a 'Portal gun' this baby will allow you to sever reality to your own accord. Best in the hands of the clever or the insane.)

Can these two items be used together to increase the range of 'Latent Insect Control'?

>>50202739

It's not exactly a choose your own waifu cyoa

>>50202534
Yeah, but the other tinies don't know that

>Adventures: Isaac
-"OK, here's your first assignment: deal with Ver. It doesn't matter what she's trying to do, just handle it so I don't have too."
-"You also need to deal with some people on behalf of my business. I'm not allow- I mean, I can't talk to them. For reasons. But you should be fine. They're all about your size anyway."
-"My secretary called in sick. I've set you up with a temporary password. Man her desk, answer her phone and use her computer. You'll do fine. You're not THAT small."
-"My implants are play-play-play-mucking up. I need you to go to the fair-fair-fair-fair-magical waifu kingdom to get the stuff I need to fix it."
-"I have a business conference coming up. Unfortunately, the latest Pretty-Pretty Princess Figurine is coming out at the same time in Japan. You need to take a plane to Japan and get it for me THE SECOND it goes on sale."
-"Look, it's easy. You just have to attend this barbecue. Say hi to everyone, do some networking. Make sure to talk to the two imps running it. You just have to be wearing this top hat I made for you. Yes, the one with the lens on the front. No, I'm not gonna say why."
-"There's a party coming up. Which is good. Unfortunately, my ex is also going to be there. Which is less good. I need to be seen here, but I don't want her to get all angry and start shouting baseless accusations at me again. So I need you to distract her for the evening. Don't worry. She loves little people."
-"Can you wash my figurines for me? I accidentally got some gunk on them and I need you to clean it off them. No I can't do it myself. It has to be you. I have to... run into the office. Get Ver to help if you need to. Look, just do it. okay?!"

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>>50201152

Adelheid Klein

>Drivers License
>Strategist/Admin
13,000c
>Solar Predator (with 2 Free Sparrow Fighters)
7,500c
>1 Lotus Bomber
4,500c
>Ironbill Dropship
1,350c
>Finer Fashion
850c
>Plasma Pistol
650c
>Chart (free)
>Lots of free turrets
>Repair Robots for ship
150c
>Novelty Attire x3 (Captain's Hat, Cape, Epaulets)
0c

Kriegenfist
>Pureblood
>Made in Kriegenfist
>Gut Feeling
>Youth

>Rajat Ambu Kukarni
>Nell Tam
>Donna Walsh
>Walton Quaid
>Tina Haywood

Just fly around having adventures. Little exploring, little trading, little bounty-hunting/mercenarying. Run back to Kriegenfist for protection when I get into trouble.

>>50202772
I'm talking about basement CYOAs, it's a pretty well developed genre even if most of the entries are pretty old. This one is a very standard example, it has basically the exact same things seen in countless others.

>>50201900
>Full Kitchen - 7
>Loli - 7
>Surround Sound System - 4
>Garden (+Weed) - 3
>Fetish Room - 10
>Skylight - 1
>Unlimited Booze and Drugs - 10
>Medical Care (+Birth Control) - 3

45 points
that loli will grow up goooood
my piece of art

>>50202522
New build
>Food
Healthy Food - 5
>Companions
Kitten - 3
>Electronics
Old Radio - 1
Air Conditioning - 3
Surround Sound System - 4
>Side Rooms
Jacuzzi and Sauna - 3
Library - 4
Workout Room - 5
Indoor Pool+ - 7
>Entertainment
Skylight+ - 2
>Services
Medical Care - 2
SPA - 4
Lab Research - 7
>Total
50

This made me think a lot more than the first version. I really wanted the instruments, tv/movies, and Workshop, but the cost was too steep.
Something else I just noticed.
You may wish to change the wording in the opening description.
>"Congratulations! You've been voluntold to live for the next 10 years in a basement as part of a sociomedical experiment. The basement is furnished and stock with the basic amenities of a small apartment. (choices notwithstanding) Utilities such as electricity, water, gas, heat/ac, and trash are also included. Once the required period of time is up, the experiment will end and you will be paid 10 million USD (adjusted for inflation and exchange rate) Below this description are 6 rows with various options for you to choose from to help ease your stay. You MUST choose at least 1 option from each row, but you can choose more than one if you wish."

In the Bonus section, 1 point per 1 million USD is a bit steep. Maybe bring the starting points back down to 40. That way, it feels like you spending 5 million USD for 10 more points and spending it all for 60 points.
You also may wish to remove Air Conditioning and replace it with something else as Heating and Cooling are a basic amenity.

Overall, much better.

P.S.
That yellow for side rooms is raping my eyeballs.

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>>50200042
>Body Image (Major)

Time to get myself a sweet and loving husband raise a happy family

>>50199005
>Trainer
>Darkness
>Kitsune, Mothman
>Leadership
>Monster Heritage: Kitsune
>Siblings
>Divine Right
>Reinforcements: Orc
The Earth will soon be beset by an unimaginable terror, one which can drive a man to futilely claw his own eyes out to escape the visions he sees. I must create a facsimile of this madness, and attract a hero who can resist its force.
Should humanity fail to save itself, my fluffy tail imouto and I will provide as many people as possible with perhaps the only effective refuge on the planet. The warshamans will ensure we do not fall to the same insanity we must inflict.

>>50201725
so you can curate a favorite timeline, but you're not really 'fixing' anything or being a hero. Your actual impact is infinitesimal, except that you get to enjoy the timeline that is the product of your labor.

>>50201900

You know what I've always wanted for these CYOAs? More points for more time, without the whole "reducing your payout" thing.

After this one is completely finished, I'll probably make a Marooned Island one...

>>50203007
That description is better indeed. I'l be sure replace it.
I'm not sure about the starting points just yet... I think I'll keep them as 45... But change the first bonus to be 55 points.And so on...

>>50203126
I'll consider this... Although people are far more interested in spending time in this, than money. So the bonus shouldn't be even.

>>50203108
>so you can curate a favorite timeline, but you're not really 'fixing' anything or being a hero. Your actual impact is infinitesimal, except that you get to enjoy the timeline that is the product of your labor.
I'm gonna need you to run me through your thought process there but if you want to fix something or be a hero, you have to actually do it in the in the 'present'(as defined by the clock on Ae). No jumping back into the pass to undo mistakes or killing your enemies when they were babies. There's no cosmic undo button, or at least time travel isn't one.