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Jumpchain CYOA Thread #1169: Look Upon My Editions, Ye Mighty

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>>50160502
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So is Lunar Dial and either Omega Super Speed or Arrowverse Speedster enough to Quicksilver's Apocalypse scene?
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What are some good early chain waifus?
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Not sure how many folks are around right now, but I have a shiny new WIP to share. It's getting close to being done, but the item section leaves me wanting, and yes, obviously, I still need to come up with some drawbacks.

But I thought I'd remind everyone that I exist, and ask for input. Please be as harsh and thorough as you can. I need it.
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>>50169310
Sekirei.
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>>50169310
Pokemon.
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>>50169305
Lunar Dial can do it on it's own.
Sakuya cleans so fast she doesn't even disturb the surrounding dust.
Timestop and really good timeslow can work wonders.
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Man. I can't decide between being a Host with 5 or less Parasytes for Multi Parasyte... Or whether to be Cranial Parasyte with some Multi Parasytes.

Why? In first case, once I import the Parasytes and get them perks/alt forms and This is my Final Form I can completely change their configuration on my body to utilize it...

But with latter I can also serve as a limb like Gotou did, and have one of imported Parasytes be a host. This way me and other Parasytes serve as boosters or helpers with the main skill set being changed depending on leader. Yes, this means we could Open Get and Change Getter without mechas.

But I can't decide which is better, help me jc!
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>>50169311
I still do not approve of this Jump. I believe the setting is too lewd to qualify as a Jump. Especially considering the Keidan Drawback you added.

Please stop your efforts in this direction and find a less lewd Jump to make if you're still inclined to do so.
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>>50169333
But that won't let me maintain momentum to run up walls and shit will it?

The style is just as important as the actual effect, after all.
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>>50169251
>1169
>69

L-l-lewd!

What are some good jumps to find forbidden love in?
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>>50169310
Your Pokewaifu is an excellent choice even if it's played out.
There's a reason it's babbies first waifu and that's not just because it's easy.

Alternatively Overlord NPCs are excellent and it's still totally doable early chain.
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>>50169295
Spend next 4 years walking house to house and slap everyone who answers door and yell "You did this!"

Do same thing if Hilary wins.
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>>50169311
...??
This honestly seems really too...dry? Like I know you're trying to probably not bring the lewd to the forefront but it's hard to tell what this is actually ABOUT from the perks alone
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>>50169357
Don't screw your pets!
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>>50169352
You might want something else for that.
In the timestop/slow you can run along suspended cloth, but if you want to defy gravity entirely you'll probably want something like Naruto wall walking.
You could totally fake it with touhou flight though.
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>>50169347
Anon, I respect your opinion, but jumpchain is a community, and isn't defined by an individual's preferences. If Brutus tells me he can't allow the finished version on the drive, I will respect that decision and move on. Otherwise, I intend to keep chipping away at it.

>>50169372
Yeah. I get you. On the one hand, I didn't want to passionately describe nipples and ass cheeks for paragraphs. On the other hand, I didn't really know what else to do. So right now it's a super-dry, bland powergrab. I'm more or less just moving forward and hoping I stumble over quality.
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>>50169310
PJO.

Be the child of a fertility goddess and then waifu your mom.

I'm literally not even joking.
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>>50169360
I didn't do shit. I refuse to be responsible for either one of them becoming the most powerful person in the western world.
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>>50169390
>nipples and ass cheeks for paragraphs
>didn't really know what else to do
>super-dry, bland powergrab

These are all reasons I suggest you focus your efforts on something else. There is very little, if anything, to the setting other than raw fan service.

Mind you, these are your own words. Please, simply stop. More people than myself have pointed out that the setting is simply not worth the effort.
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>>50169311
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>>50169377
Movies X-Men Superspeed (Quicksilver) is arguably some form of Time Dilation with how things sometimes went during his Days of Future's Past and Armageddon scenes (Either that or some really decent super durability because hitting those water drops at the kinds of speeds he was moveing at would have torn his skin to ribbons. Hell at those speeds even wind friction gets to the point where you'll end up raw faced, but the Time Dailation theory pans out better when the odd times when the explosion would suddenly speed up happened during Armageddon.)
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>>50169403
More people have also told you to fuck off. Senran Kagura got on the drive, this can too. Fuck. Off.
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>>50169023
Background: Villain (-100)
Races: Pokemon [Anorith] (Free)
Age: 28 years old.
Location: Prowldent Virginia Community College
Perks: Pokemon Type [Bug] (-200), Chaotic Mastery (-600), Trolle Fatale (Free), Witch (-100), Brainwashing (-200)
Items: Wooden Badge (Free)
Drawbacks: Shopping! (+100), Sammy (+100)

>mfw I'm at the community college
>mfw I'm stereotypically obsessed with shopping
>mfw I'M AN ANORITHFACE

[SCREAMING]

>1. Kill la Kill
>2. SOMA
>3. Undertale
>4. Hellsing
>5. Akame ga Kill

[CONTINUED SCREAMING]
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>>50169421
>Senran Kagura
>Let's see who made that one...
>SoftAnon

I'm seeing a pattern. Had I been here at the time, I would have spoke out against Senran Kagura as well.
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>>50169416
Personally, I think it's some combination of super-speed and personal time manipulation. He's had a weird version of personal time travel in the comics before.

I mean, either that, or the writers gave it less thought than we nerds did. That can't be right, can it?
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>>50169311
This jump is emptier than my dorm's refrigerator.
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Jump # 113 “They Live”
Background: Drifter (100)
Age: ???
Gender: Female

Perks:
*Situational Sharpness (0)
*Incredible Wealth (100)
*Hero Sense (300, Discount)
*Mastermind (400)

Equipment
*Bubblegum (0)
*Special Glasses (0)
*Special Contact lenses (100, Discount)


It’s sad how common this situation is getting to stumble upon. Humanity once again sheep, blindly fallowing their masters without realizing they are really slaves.

I befriended Nada and Frank long enough to awaken their Aura. They both thought I was a little crazy but I was helping them and I was cute so they tolerated me.

I helped them where I could but I had Rick gathering materials and prepping for the big reveal just in case. I Also convinced Holly to turn on the Aliens…

It turns out she was a huge B**** but she had a weakness for tons of cash I purchased her loyalty such as it was. She didn’t ask where I got the two suitcases full of hundreds that I gave her not to backstab Nada and Frank she just took them.

Of course she wound up getting arrested for carrying around two suitcases of money with no explanation on how she got them. She was later released but the money disappeared in the evidence locker. It wasn’t my doing either.

Nada and Frank succeeded in revealing the Aliens, they however were partially bullet proof and Archer took care of the police helicopter for them so they actually lived.

They became big figureheads in the “war” that fallowed. I put war in quotes because it turns out the aliens kind of sucked at fighting and the ones that didn’t run died and Humanity acquired their tech.
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>>50169421
>>50169403
Senran Kagura is approved despite it being 90% lewd. First two minutes of anime is pretty much all panty shots and boob jiggling.
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>>50169434
>I
Well there's the problem with your argument isn't it? The majority doesn't mind it, because apparently only you and one other guy are against it. You not being there cut all the protests in half.

So stop speaking as if you're a majority when you're only one guy with an opinion people either disagree with or just do not care about.
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>>50169416
I'm pretty sure the speeding up and slowing down was just Quicksilver gaining and losing the focus needed to have his reflexes so accelerated. When he wasn't paying attention, it would speed up, when he was paying attention it slowed down again. As for the water drops not exploding him, that's just typical speedster Required Secondary Powers. Some sort of inertia-dampening field, or something like that, that he has semi-conscious control over how it extends to things he's touching.
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>>50169452
Yeah, exactly.
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>>50169452
Senran Kagura has actual serious danger and an overarching plot to go together with the power levels and fanservice.

Keijo is just... one tenth parodied shounen tropes (very little of which is properly reflected in the jump) and nine tenths fanservice.

Get serious.
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Drawbacks: They Take Notice (1600)

Name: Diamond D. Brando
Age: 26
Starting Era: Rise of Dio
Origin: Bad-Blooded Brando (1500)
Gender: Female

-Perks-
Calisthenics (Free)
Joestar Secret Technique (Free)
Dramatic Persona (Free)
Dynamic Entry (Free)
Blood Vessel Needle (1450)
Shadow Walking (1300)
Create Zombie (1100)
Bodily Mastery (800)

-Items-
Stone Mask (600)
The Arrowhead (0)

I crouched on one knee while inspecting Blaze's shuddering form. That bastard Dio had punched him while he was busy checking at Frisk and had sent him flying into the wall. Speaking of Friisk, I was sorta worried. I'd never seen them knocked out for this long before. The others were around the room trying to shoot Dio full of sunlight, but the fucker was proving to be more agile then I would have thought. I lazily dodged a stray solar bolt that was moving at speeds that made it almost invisible to the human eye. “Hey, watch where you're aiming that shit! He's not the only vampire around here!” I shouted, and turned back to my patient. Sensing a shift in the air currents, I looked up, and saw Frisk moving around. Relieved that they seemed to be alright, I was about to return my attention to Blaze, when I sensed a sudden...malice in the air.

I looked over at where Dio was dodging the bolts of sunlight. Nah, not him. Too...insanely homicidal for him. Hmm, couldn't be Caim. I'd asked him to deal with any other vampires in the town. None of the others, with the possible exception of Lucifer, could be that blood thirsty, so who could it be? I looked over at Frisk, who had gotten up and...was wielding a knife? What the fu-oh. Oh shit. I quickly grabbed the others with my telekinesis and threw them to my position.
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>>50169390
>>50169311
>But I thought I'd remind everyone that I exist, and ask for input. Please be as harsh and thorough as you can. I need it.

I don't understand why you've made this jump if this is all you can muster for it. People can try to defend you by saying that the setting itself doesn't have any worldbuilding, plot, or any trace of uniqueness aside from the assfighting, but what that boils down to is that you're making Female Assfights the Jump, and deciding that giving it a Japanese name somehow makes it more acceptable.

As it stands, your intro and fluff text tell me the bare minimal about this world. Your items are, as you recognized yourself, bland, because they also seem to have a very tentative connection to the world. I feel like I'm just walking inside 7-11 to pick up a couple perks and leave. Now normally this would be fine for a setting that I'm otherwise unfamiliar with, except the only drawback you've had makes the world seem like nothing but a magical realm.

I'm told that this setting is supposed to have a lot of parodies of some common anime themes, but I'm not seeing any of that reflected in your writing, your tone, or your perks. You're very good at delivering what the effects of each perk is in a straightforward manner, but here it doesn't do your jump any actual service.

Take some examples: Your Qikong (It's Qigong if you're referring to the Chinese practice, and Japanese doesn't have a Qi character) perk is probably one of the perks with the most "character", but the way you've written it turns it into a bland "Here you get Ki" perk. There's nothing indicating where Ki/Qi shows up in the world, how it's used, what it does, etc.

Your Ass of Babylon perk, something that seems intriguing in the title, again has absolutely no references to the world, and instead entirely focused on "You can copy anything you see and replicate it". So why call it Ass of Babylon, what was the connection?
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>>50169390

I mean...the jump doesn't have to exist. Like, I could make a jump of freakin' Animator Vs. Animation but if there isn't anything there then I can't make it happen
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Right, so seeing as we're now allowing more and more lewd jumps, I'm going to begin work on Generic Pornstar / Porn Director.
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I need jumps that provide inspiration anons, any jumps that let me take dramatic leaps in tech or grants insight or even just some hyper-obsessiveness that allows a jumper to invent something wonderful...
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>>50169478
“Hey, what's the problem, Mr. boss sir? We almost had him.” Garchomp said, arms motioning in Dio's direction. “Yeah, he's not important right now. Quick, through this portal.” I said, creating a portal to the warehouse on the ground, careful not to take my eye's off of Frisk. “What!? But, sir!” Rapidash protested. “Forget about him, grab Blaze here, and leave!" I shouted. Seeing how serious I was, she decided to shut up and follow orders. Everyone began to jump through the portal. “Wait, what about Frisk?” She asked, before she stepped through. “Trust me, Frisk is not the one to be concerned about right now.” I said.


I shoved her through the portal and closed it. There, they should be safe enough on the other side of the world. I returned my attention to what was going on in the room. Frisk, or Chara I guess, was just staring at the knife. Dio, who had been busy catching his breath until now, finally turned his attention to the last remaining occupants of the room. "So, all but two insects have run away, have they?" He asked, though I could tell it wasn't really a question.
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>>50169311
I feel obligated at this point to remind everyone that "WIP" stands for work in progress, meaning the jump is not done yet. Yes, there's shit missing. Yes, it needs polish. That is why it is a WIP. Because it is still being worked on.

Should I not post WIPs anymore? Does that bother people?
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>>50169311
Generally unimpressive and you're missing text out of the Auto Mode perk

Is the only reason why this became a jump was because the premise was downright strange to normie viewers, leading to its accidental popularity in some weird variant of the Streisand effect?
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>>50169442
Weren't you going to add something to super speed about being able to interact with things normally despite your speed and being able to extend your speed to objects you are carrying?
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>>50169476
>actual serious danger
Has never been a requirement of any jump and more then a few jumps don't meet it anyway.

>Plot
As does Keijo.

And what the fuck are you even talking about not properly reflected? You're a fucking troll if you think this given people have complained that the fanservice is underrepresented compared to power stuff. Fuck off shit poster.
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>>50169489
"Dio, none of us were running running from you. Though, if you value your life, you'll want to start right now." I said keeping my eyes on the biggest threat in the room. "What the devil are you talking about?" He said turning to look in Frisks direction, unfortunately for him though, it was too late. One second Frisk was standing at the opposite end of the room, the next they were swinging the knife, it's blade, sheathed in light, slicing effortlessly through his stomach.


“W-what?” He asked, staring shocked down at the bleeding stomach wound. While he was still reacting to this, another knife slipped out of Frisks sleeves - why did I ever give everybody those damned extra-dimensional storage places - and into their hands. Gripping it with both hands, they stabbed upwards into Dio's chest. The force of the stab rocked him backwards, and he fell to the ground. Reeling from this turn of events, he was unable to lift himself from the ground, nor was he able to defend himself when Frisk-Chara jumped on him and began punching him in the face. Seemingly growing tired of this, they retrieved the knife from Dio's chest, and with a single swing, sliced off his head.


Well. That went about how I expected it to. I teleported behind Chara, and the reaction was swift and brutal. They swiftly turned around, and stabbed me in the stomach. I fell into a crouch, holding myself up with one arm, and looked into Chara's face. Their eyes were bleeding some sort of tar like substance, and the mouth seemed to be full to the brim and leaking the same substance. My free arm fell down around their waist and grabbed them. They started stabbing me furiously, arms pistoning in and out. I brought them closer, hugging them to my chest. “Stab me as...much as you wish. I won't fight back.” I said, gasping from the pain. They stabbed at me even faster, knife going at every place it could reach. “The two of you are family, and family doesn't hurt family.”
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>>50169486
Dwarf fortress, Symbiote, and Infinicon.
Take all the hyperfocus perks and push your limits.
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>>50169463
I AM only speaking as a man with an opinion. I have ONLY spoken as if I was a man with an opinion.

I would point out that there are at least several other people speaking out as well, in addition to the unknown number of anons that spoke up when it was mentioned last.
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>>50169492
You said "close to being done."

Your words, sir. Your words. This shit feels half-finished and rushed.
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>>50169492
Does seem like people are being extremely critical and harsh.
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>>50169492

I mean, again, you've already admitted that it's hard to find some inspiration for it and even if it's a WIP it's still an impression you make

If you're showing a WIP it's because you're either trying to drum up some excitement or get feedback and this is the feedback you're getting

If you want to take it as "I need to make the perks a bit more grounded in the source" or anything similar, you should, but showing a WIP implies you want to know what the thoughts on it are
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>>50169497
Wait, is that not already there? You can definitely do that.
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Where to first, /jc/? Please, no gauntlets.
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>>50169499
They stopped stabbing me. “That...is the one rule none of us will ever, SHOULD ever break. It is the rule I created when this adventure first began. Heh...That feels so long ago now, and yet I remember it perfectly. Curse of having...such a good memory I guess. Heh.” I laughed, the elation helping ease the pain a little. “Have I...told you how that rule came about? I don't think I have, though I'd imagine...bits and pieces have trickled down to you over the... years. It was back... when this whole journey began, and the only one with me was Blaze. We were being terrorized by a dream demon, you see, and one of the most powerful criminal organizations were after us. I was not nearly as strong or capable as I am now, so we were forced to run most of the time. We were shacked up in this shitty motel one week. I was on guard duty with a shitty steel pipe, and Blaze was out getting stuff from the store. I hadn't slept for a couple days, and we had just survived an attack by a couple goons. I was pretty paranoid at the time. I heard someone at the door. I thought it was another attack by gangsters, or I fell asleep and the demon was going after me. The door opened. I swung with the pipe. It wasn't a gangster or the demon.” I said, voice sombre and wistful.

"He still has the scar, you know? Right there on his arm. We're not sure why it's on all his forms, though we suspect it's because She wants to keep me reminded of it. Anyway, I freaked out afterwards, apologizing and crying. He just stood there, saying ‘no, it's not your fault’. Heh. The fucking idiot. Of course it was my fault. It was my fault for not being strong enough to end the organization, for not being able to stop the demon before. It was my fault, for being too much of an emotional hot-head to check who was opening the fucking door. I promised that day that I would never hurt anyone as close as he was to me again.
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>>50169507
He said it's "GETTING close to being done". Not that it is close to being done. If you're going to bitch him out, at least give him the respect of reading his posts.
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>>50169513
Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles
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>>50169513
Girl-chan
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>>50169513
Charles Barkley shut up and jam gaiden.
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>>50169513

Minish Cap. It's an amazing starting jump, you can clear the setting with Hero/Drop-in gotten from the +300 CP drawback and get a whole lot with it
It is recommended you get the Walkthrough drop-in capstone in that case though cause you're basically being run through the game AS link
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have you ever run for political office, /jc/?
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>>50169514
I looked down to where Chara was sitting. They were sitting there, face - back to normal, except for the red eyes - staring up at me. “Have you calmed down?” I asked. They nodded, face quickly shifting down to look at the floor. “Alright. ...I think I need some candy. How about you?" I asked. Again, they nodded their head. I got up, grabbed their hand, and we began walking forward. “I think chocolate bars have been invented by this point, so if we're lucky, we might find some.” I said idly. They began to move ever so slightly faster, and I smiled.
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>>50169528
>run for political office
>run
Pfffft.
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>>50169311
>Please be as harsh and thorough as you can. I need it.
For starters I think this is a stupid idea as there's nothing to do in the setting outside of fighting with your ass, and even the drawback you have reflects this. This entire jump has no plot outside of asses, and it shows with bland perks that are equally one-dimensional.

Got that out of the way, I still feel like this jump is really, really bland. It's all just vague power-ups that you can walk in and gain abilities that aren't related to the setting at all, and to be frank that makes you come off as trying to play up how you want to put lewd into the chain because it's "fun" then use it as a boat to put in completely unrelated things.

>>50169492
Finally, you take criticism worth shit. You say "Please give me criticism" and then you ignore everything that isn't praise and fueling your temptation to spite others. You posted a WIP of a setting that only has to do with fighting with asses, one that is practically robotic in both flavor and intent. You then decry people who are giving you honest criticism, and your constant objections and ignoring of that criticism comes off as you crying not to be bullied when you ran around inviting it to begin with.
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>>50169484
And already running into issues - should Drop-In just be the Camera Man origin?
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>>50169510
You said almost the exact same thing the last time I mentioned this, you forgot to add that part.
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>>50169528
>not ruling from the shadows
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>>50169311
Aside from the sport, which I understand is a focus, is there a plot beyond fan-service?
I'd like you take the setting more seriously if so.
I mean like is there a romance or some kinda feudal class system in place to give people something other than the sport to think about?
Usually these kinds of things can reflect political ideals of the artists that even they don't notice. Other times it's just fan-service for fan-service. I'd like to know which this sides on, because that's the major deciding factor here.

>>50169442
Personally I vote Time Dilation, it gets around so many things and would explain how fragile he is out of his speed.
[One of the things that spawned this was the fact that they used https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nTvkArcVYFA as a BGM, which in my opinion is shaky ground but it could be a subtle hint I guess.]

>>50169471
He hit's people several meters with finger pokes but again it's just a theory. I get where you're coming from I just like to point it out is all.
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>>50169528
I ran for president in just about every jump with an America post Metal Wolf Chaos.
No rigging, just good clean politics.
I've never won, but that's ok. My businesses basically run the country anyways.
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>>50169537
Man, if people's criticism all started with "This is shit, we don't need this jump, drop it if this is the best you can do" I'd be unenthusiastic about answering it too. There's a difference between harsh critique and being an asshole and telling a guy to piss off because his jump isn't needed and his work is shit anyway cross the line. People gave great criticism after they said that, but they still said that.
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>>50169510
>>50169544
>The loops are getting closer together.
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>>50169555
Fuck me, so much. And fuck you too anon.
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>>50169311
>>50169480
I won't make any judgement on your design choices as far as origins go. I'd assume that you at least considered carefully whether gender locking the origins was a necessity, and the impact that would have on people's builds and stories. Ironically though, your intro text already seems to suggest that everyone should lock themselves in on the path. Whether that's intentional or not is up to you, since you're the author.

Other than that your fluff text reminds me of tera's stuff back in PS238. I have no clue if this is because the setting doesn't give you enough to work with (as some people have told me) or if you're hesitating (judging by >>50169390), or if you just can't think of anything. Did you do any research into the origins of this anime, and the game shows that it draws from? Have you watched many of the game shows on NHK at all?

Somebody told me that this was supposed to be a parody. Would you agree to that statement? Because right now I'm not seeing that either. This jump is written in a very "serious" tone, and your very straightforward approach to writing fluff reinforces that notion. So if it really was supposed to be a parody, that part has been lost in the jump as well, but that's a personal matter.

>So right now it's a super-dry, bland powergrab. I'm more or less just moving forward and hoping I stumble over quality.

If you're doing that, then why are you working on a setting that barely helps you, and why are you trying to get it to the drive? If you can recognize that the quality isn't there, then scrap the project, move on, and come back when the setting is either more favorable, or you have better tools at your disposal.

It should be pretty simple to accept that we can't always produce quality, but trying to pass it as "well I'm still trying to get better, so accept it anyways" just seems like a lame excuse if anything.
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>>50169555
You poor bastard
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>>50169528
funded many a soul, never ran personally.
a scientifically-minded merchant's place is behind the curtains, not in front of them.

who else is going to make cutting edge plagues with the soul of a damned orphan in them? or who will create the legions of amped-up deathclaw black-op shock troops? HOW is a biological machine THAT BIG supposed to get built and WHO will paint on it "gozilla".
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>>50169480
>I don't understand why you've made this jump if this is all you can muster for it.

Because I like it? Do we need other reasons for jumpmaking, now?

>People can try to defend you by saying that the setting itself doesn't have any worldbuilding, plot, or any trace of uniqueness aside from the assfighting, but what that boils down to is that you're making Female Assfights the Jump, and deciding that giving it a Japanese name somehow makes it more acceptable.

The setting does have a plot, although that plot is "protagonist-chan works her way up the ranks of keijo players." So far, it's literally been training arc -> tournament -> training arc. That's it. As for worldbuilding... it's just another Japan. The uniques comes from the contrast being characters taking assfighting Very Seriously, and the assfighting itself being totally ridiculous. Are you saying I should focus more on that? Try to convey a sense of the ridiculous taken seriously?

I think that's a valid approach, but part of my reason for writing such restrained descriptions is my desire to actually produce a jump that isn't blatantly lewd. In order to be appropriately ridiculous, I would need to be appropriately frank about, you know. The stuff. But it's worth a try.

This indeed Female Assfights the Jump, but, like I said, I am trying to rely on more than just the Japanese name to make it acceptable.

>Take some examples: Your Qikong (It's Qigong if you're referring to the Chinese practice, and Japanese doesn't have a Qi character) perk is probably one of the perks with the most "character", but the way you've written it turns it into a bland "Here you get Ki" perk. There's nothing indicating where Ki/Qi shows up in the world, how it's used, what it does, etc.

Fair. Part of that, to me, is subjective. I dislike excessive flavor in perks. But I agree it currently lacks pretty much any flavor at all. I will attempt to look over the descriptions and include more characterization in them.
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>>50169562
>Says please be harsh as possible
>Starts pulling back when people get harsh
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>>50169492
Stop worrying about whether things come off as lewd or not. That seems to be the main problem. Ignore the couple of whiners that'll bitch about a bit of fanservice and describe the perks more like they are in series. It'll add some much needed flavour.
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>>50169566
A/S/L?
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>>50169594
Like I said anon. There's a difference between harsh critique and insulting someone. What Dirge has done is mostly harsh critique. Digger telling he guy his work isn't needed and if he can't do any better he should piss off and stop making it? That's an insult, not harsh but helpful critique.
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>>50169544
I blame school, man.

Don't do school, kids.

If I haven't fixed it by Thanksgiving, bring it up again and I'll do it. I'm planning some minor updates to a few of my jumps anyway.

>>50169565
How long until we're trapped in a perpetual moment for eternity? I want to make sure I'm eating or something when we get there.
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>>50169311
After having read the Jump, and knowing the series though what I've seen through random clips, I find myself needing much more in the way of information about the universe itself. Your Jump lacks the 'Muchness' of tone that brings a document to life. Without a tone tying it all together, there lacks any feel of cohesion between the perks, only powers to grab.

You mentioned items being lacking and work still needing to be done. This is evident. If you want harsh criticism, I think you should pack it in and find a series that does not appear to be 80% fan service. Your lone written drawback does little to help your own cause.

>>50169492
You need to take the criticism you have been offered into advisement if you intend to pursue this Jump in a serious manner.

>>50169430
[Continues laughing at your suffering]

>>50169486
GUNNM has some incredible perks that will allow you to rapidly advance your understanding of cybernetics as a whole. Karmatronics is not a field of science to be ignored either.

>>50169528
Not yet, in the new chain. I may at some point in one of the more tame, quiet Jumps. My Coordinator likes to be entertained and seems to derive great pleasure in thinking up punishments for my failing to do so.
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>>50169620
By my calculations, we'll be trapped sometime in the latter part of Thanksgiving Day.
It could be worse, all things considered.

Hope you're American.
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>>50169576
Hey Digger can we expect any sweetness coming from you anytime soon-ish?

>>50169587
Not that guy but...

>Because I like it? Do we need other reasons for jumpmaking, now?
Well not really but a passion for the subject matter can only carry you so far, as you've noted, before you need something more.

>Try to convey a sense of the ridiculous taken seriously?
That'd be a bit more interesting, might be a way around the bland without making it such a bland Jump.

>Fair. Part of that, to me, is subjective. I dislike excessive flavor in perks. But I agree it currently lacks pretty much any flavor at all. I will attempt to look over the descriptions and include more characterization in them.
You might actually find things out that you were taking for granted. The background could be a thing. Is this one of those 'Everyone settles their fights, even on the political level, through a sport.' settings?
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>>50169548
Yeah, I'm not sure what to do. I'd like to allow people to replicate the scenes — because why bother with super speed if you can't do that kind of shit, right? — but the calcs for that are ridiculous to the point it would both overshadow the other powers and most every other speed ability in the chain that I know of, time manipulation or not.

That was a goddamn good choice for music, regardless.
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>>50169481

>I mean...the jump doesn't have to exist. Like, I could make a jump of freakin' Animator Vs. Animation but if there isn't anything there then I can't make it happen

Jumps in general don't have to exist, Digger. We make them because we want to.

>>50169507
I guess distance is a subjective sort of thing.

>>50169509
Oh yes, absolutely. But I'd like thoughts other than "It's shit, fuck off." Not that I'm referring to your posts, Digger. Just... other people.

>>50169548
>I mean like is there a romance or some kinda feudal class system in place to give people something other than the sport to think about?

Heh, no. The closest thing to romance is some incredibly light yuri bait. There are no politics aside from a generic school rivalry that apparently ends the moment the protagonists win the inter-school tournament. I wouldn't say Keijo exists purely for fanservice, though. It also exists for comedy.

>>50169570
Other than that your fluff text reminds me of tera's stuff back in PS238. I have no clue if this is because the setting doesn't give you enough to work with (as some people have told me) or if you're hesitating (judging by >>50169390 (You)), or if you just can't think of anything. Did you do any research into the origins of this anime, and the game shows that it draws from? Have you watched many of the game shows on NHK at all?

Let's call it all three. I admit, my research ended on the manga. But I am extremely inclined to avoid actually watching NHK programming if I can. For personal reasons.

>It should be pretty simple to accept that we can't always produce quality, but trying to pass it as "well I'm still trying to get better, so accept it anyways" just seems like a lame excuse if anything.

Good thing that's not what I'm saying. Kinda the opposite. I'm still trying to get better, so please don't accept it until it's good. That's what I'm trying to say. Also, comparing me to tera is very harsh. But I understand where it's coming from.
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>>50169562
Then maybe he should ask to have baby criticism next time.

>>50169587
>The setting does have a plot, although that plot is "protagonist-chan works her way up the ranks of keijo players."
Then make the jump reflect that instead of whining every time someone insults you. It's a WIP you asked us to rip into, you asked us to be harsh. If you can't take us being harsh, then why are you asking for it?

>Are you saying I should focus more on that? Try to convey a sense of the ridiculous taken seriously?
If you want to put your money where your mouth is, then yes. That is exactly what we're asking. You can be ridiculous without being lewd, but you keep acting like that's an impossible feat.

> I dislike excessive flavor in perks. But I agree it currently lacks pretty much any flavor at all.
You don't have to go all in or nothing at all, you know. There's a little thing called middle ground.

Holy fuck you are literally worse than Red when it comes to criticism.
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>>50169587
>Because I like it? Do we need other reasons for jumpmaking, now?
If you like it, then why are you doing such a bland job of conveying that? There's nothing in there to suggest that you like this setting at all, and a lot of it reads like a set of wiki articles, except wiki articles would have more background information.

What you have right now could literally be called Female Assfights the Jump, because remove the Japanese name, blur the nation, and suddenly it becomes completely generic. That's arguably the result of your perks lacking flavor, in addition to the rest of the document.

If you feel you need to deliberately hide things away to make it acceptable, then aren't you just trying to avoid the fact that people will hurl shit at it once they find out whatever it is that you're hiding? I don't see why you should have to hide away fluff in order to produce a jump that isn't blatantly lewd. I was under in the impression that you believed this setting had more to it besides the ero aspect.

>The uniques comes from the contrast being characters taking assfighting Very Seriously, and the assfighting itself being totally ridiculous.
If this is the only unique aspect that you can see, then it must be exactly what you focus on. Otherwise aren't you just taking the most innocuous aspects of the setting and trying to pass them off as "the entire deal"? Right now there is no sense of ridiculousness that's conveyed in your jump.
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>>50169666
Wow, someone's feeling cunty today.
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>>50169653
Actually the calcs posted previously were shown to be crap, you only need to be a few mach over the Omega level soft cap to replicate the first quicksilver scene.
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>>50169674
When a jumpmaker is all braggy about wanting harsh criticism then ignores all of it and acts like we're bullying him for something he wanted and actively encouraged, then yes that's grounds for being blunt. Talk shit, get hit.

If he can't play by his own rules, he shouldn't be making them.
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>>50169622
I'M A BUGGY SCHOOLGIRL WHO CAN'T SEEM TO ESCAPE THE BARISTA ARCHETYPE. HOW IS THIS AMUSING.

>>50169430
...So. A thought occurs.

How do Parasyte powers affect things if you're a Kamui? Is shapeshifting clothes a thing? Are your life fibers all Parasyte muscles? Could I conceivably condense myself back into a humanoid form?
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>>50169622
>After having read the Jump, and knowing the series though what I've seen through random clips, I find myself needing much more in the way of information about the universe itself. Your Jump lacks the 'Muchness' of tone that brings a document to life. Without a tone tying it all together, there lacks any feel of cohesion between the perks, only powers to grab.

Despite the incredible ambiguity of the word muchness, I appreciate the sentiment. It appears to be a popular one. I may have to start over from scratch.

> I think you should pack it in and find a series that does not appear to be 80% fan service.

I am trying to take criticism well, but anyone telling me "give up because this might be too hard for you" will, respectfully, find that particular advice ignored. If I were the type to give up that easily I would have just killed myself years ago.

>>50169646
>You might actually find things out that you were taking for granted. The background could be a thing. Is this one of those 'Everyone settles their fights, even on the political level, through a sport.' settings?

Well, no. It's just a professional sport, exactly like horse-racing or boxing. It's just a popular and successful one.

Honestly it is kind of funny that people who do ask questions like this, with sincere attempt to help me, result in me going "no, the setting is not that interesting. It's just assfights." Still, I will soldier on.

>That'd be a bit more interesting, might be a way around the bland without making it such a bland Jump.

The more I think on this, the more appeal it has. I will almost certainly have to start over from scratch now.
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>>50169654
>I admit, my research ended on the manga. But I am extremely inclined to avoid actually watching NHK programming if I can. For personal reasons.
Then why the fuck are you doing this if you don't want to put the effort into it.
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>>50169476
>danger and an overarching plot to go together with the power levels and fanservice

So by that logic Queen's Blade shouldn't be banned?
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>>50169702
I'm glad you're still continuing in spite of a few people being assholes. I liked your work in the past and I hope to see you make something good again.
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>>50169702
>If I were the type to give up that easily I would have just killed myself years ago.
Way to go overboard there, drama llama. How the fuck do you go from jump criticism to suicide.
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>>50169702
>If I were the type to give up that easily I would have just killed myself years ago.

Don't you think its a little bit dramatic to imply there was a possibility you would die on your sword for boobs and ass
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>>50169709
But-but DDanon made it! How could we possibly have something he made on the drive! You take those vile words back you fiend.
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>>50169709
>be banned?
Unbanned
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>>50169722
But anon

He is fighting for his life and his hometown.
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>>50169709
That's exactly right.
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>>50169722
You wouldn't?
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>>50169725
Who the hell is DDanon? Been here since May and haven't seen that name.
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>>50169709
There's a whole lot more sex in Queen's Blade than this. This setting is just butt and boob fighting, that's full of a lot of other lewd shit.
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>>50169709
It really shouldn't be banned but the jump is ass anyways so if it's going to get unbanned someone should make a new one.
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>>50169653
>>50169684
Correction, you need to be able to go at about mach 60 to replicate the first scene. That is double the soft cap but attainable with training perks or combining it with another high level super speed power.
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>>50169742
The jump is perfectly fine.
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>>50169653
Heard that.

>>50169654
>Heh, no.
Then I've got nothing.

>>50169698
>Dat Spoiler...
Maybe... I dunno actually. Ask the Jumpmakers?

>>50169702
>Well, no.
Well darn...

>The more I think on this, the more appeal it has.
Awesome. Glad you're keeping a good attitude.

>I will almost certainly have to start over from scratch now.
Eh, you don't gotta scrap everything just need to rework how you were approaching things.

>>50169709
Queen's Blade got banned? I can't remember anything from it but I enjoyed that manga once.

>>50169739
I think it's the Namefag who made DXD?
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>>50169736
The human body is great and all but this is not the battle to do so man
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Origin:
Drop - In

Perks:
Fightan' - 0cp
Shut up - 0cp
Nobody else is shocked? - 100cp
Background - 200cp
Listen to the rhythm of the street - 400cp
That explains everything - 400cp

Items:
Sackful of quarters (1x) - 0cp

Drawbacks:
Crossed a line + 100cp

Right, well. Well. I just, I don't know what to say. Ten years of living around a bunch of characters that I couldn't handle more than five minutes of in a previous life, made by people I couldn't stand.

You'll note that there is no location. That's because the location is completely irrelevant. Completely. Because the second I arrive in this hell hole, I'm moving into my warehouse, and I'm only coming out to refresh my food stores. Hell, maybe I can get some hydroponics going in the mean-time.

I just wish I bought that gun.
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>>50169698
It's amusing because of the Universal Law of Comedy. "It's not happening to me."

As for Parasyte powers affecting Kamui, the clothes are already shapeshifters by default, so perhaps you can have an extra sleeve/weapon? As for the spoiler, probably not. But that's just my guess.

>>50169702
Muchness is a reference to Alice in Wonderland. It's a purposefully ambiguous term that can mean any number of things. In this case, I was referring to the tone of the Jump, the style and flavor text that is lacking.

>I am trying to take criticism well...
I would like to point out that I am not telling you to give up because it is too hard. I am telling you to find a less lewd way of describing the setting or a less lewd setting in general to make a Jump of. I don't think making this Jump is too hard for anyone, merely unwise.

Is there another anime/manga that you feel passionately about? Something you love enough that you have dug into the lore of your own free will?

Those are the kinds of Jumps you should be making.
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>>50169742
Inheritance Cycle and Underworld jumps are shit and we have those.

Overall /jc/ deciding what's shit and lewd seems random and more based on the popularity of author instead of its quality.
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>>50169643
Good enough for me.

>>50169755
Good to know.
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>>50169702
I liked your Senran Kagura Jump, really.
But this one is plain bad, what i am supposed to do as a guy without that drawback? fap from the natioal sports channel?
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>>50169712
I appreciate the encouragement, anon. I too hope to see me make something good again.

>>50169720
>>50169722
Yikes, you guys. Really? If you really need it explained, I was making a joke referring the popular internet advice of "kill yourself" and the common relationship between escapist hobbies like jumpchain and extreme personal discontent with one's life. Okay? Are we cool now?

>>50169758
Well, not LITERALLY from scratch. I won't just delete my old draft. But I need to rethink the entire jump and come up with the sort of style that will convey what I want.
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>>50169767
Man, can you stop telling him to give up in general? Seriously, fuck off with that talk.
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>>50169769
>Inheritance Cycle
If you want to remake the jump the author has given his permission to anyone who wants to.
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wait...wasn't some anon doing a space station 13 jump?
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>>50169758
>I think it's the Namefag who made DXD?
Strike-Chan made it, but ragequit and gave it up because Red kept ripping into her.

>>50169702
Honestly you sound more like you're purposefully trying to piss everyone off with a jump you don't even want to put any effort into. That's tera-grade trouble.
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>>50169769
I agree, but those are both on the drive.
Since Queens Blade is technically not on the drive, it's still up for a revamp.
Although I doubt anyone really cares enough about the setting to do that, so I guess it doesn't really matter.
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>>50169774
>I was making a joke referring the popular internet advice of "kill yourself"
>HURR DURR IT WAS A JOKE GAIZ
Can you just stop now? You try to pull off sympathy points then you pull back when it's not helping you. You're not doing yourself any favors at all, you just make yourself look worse.
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>>50169654
>Also, comparing me to tera is very harsh
I think you're overlapping tera as an individual versus tera as a jumpmaker. Since this was about jumpmaking, I was making a comparison between your jump and tera's PS238 jump and drawing similarities, so really, it's not that harsh at all.

Aesthetically the two jumps are about the same, except PS238 is more fleshed out. Perks wise, if you read through PS238's perks without considering the scope of the functions, it reads largely the same. Nearly 100% of the perk text for each perk is dedicated to "How the reader is modified" and little else besides.

This isn't necessarily a bad thing. Some people like this style, maybe you do too. If you find an aversion towards it, then you should begin to correct it, through your writing. If you find this to be a good thing, then you should continue with it and call that "your style" as it were. But no, comparing you to tera isn't harsh at all, it's just an observation based comparison between what you've delivered versus what tera has delivered, and pointing out the similarities.
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>>50169767
>Is there another anime/manga that you feel passionately about? Something you love enough that you have dug into the lore of your own free will?

Just to be clear, I have like four other series I'm trying to make jumps for as well. Those are moving forward at their own pace. I'm focusing on Keijo because it's something of a fad right now, and I'm a vapid sheep.

But yes, your point about the tone is relevant.

>>50169773
>what i am supposed to do as a guy without that drawback? fap from the natioal sports channel?

Go Drop In, accept a female alt form for 2 seconds before shapeshifting out of it, or just deal with having tits for a while.

>>50169793
I agree, it was a mistake to reply to them. A mistake to reply to you, too. I am a poor decision maker.
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>>50169799
Funny how it's always someone else's fault. Never yours.

>Go Drop In, accept a female alt form for 2 seconds before shapeshifting out of it, or just deal with having tits for a while.
So now you're railroading everyone into accepting a fetish? Really?
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>>50169787
>Red

Lawd jesus are you forgetting MULTIPLE OTHER PEOPLE did the same, or are you just pinging an incredibly topical namefag for brownie points?
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>>50169739
DDanon made Dragon's Dogma, and was a very good jumpmaker for aesthetics and visual ease of use, but his choice of jumps that he wanted to make (Corruption of Champions and etc.) and his insistence that people should accept them by spamming the thread with them led to his eventual departure.
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>>50169811
Alright, that's reaching a bit isn't it? If anything, the jumper should just be able to participate regardless of gender. Like being a guy in strike witches.
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>>50169799
>I'm focusing on Keijo because it's something of a fad right now, and I'm a vapid sheep.
Even if I did make Chroma Squad the week it came out by bumrushing all of the story content I at least did it because I liked the game and not cause it became a weird fad to capitalize on

I'm sorry I'm not exactly gelling with your motivation philosophy
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>>50169787
>Strike-Chan made it
I'm out of guesses... oh >>50169819

>>50169799
Quick aside. Will we get some not stealth perks that make ridiculous stuff something we can pass off?
Also Pic Related.
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>>50169826
Hasn't Keijo been airing for a month/few months now? Bit of an exaggeration there anon
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>>50169798
>I think you're overlapping tera as an individual versus tera as a jumpmaker

No comment.

>This isn't necessarily a bad thing. Some people like this style, maybe you do too. If you find an aversion towards it, then you should begin to correct it, through your writing. If you find this to be a good thing, then you should continue with it and call that "your style" as it were.

I don't really care that much either way, honestly. If I have a preference, it's to create jumps that people can enjoy. Since my current work is not meeting that standard, I'll have to revise.

Also, since I did, in fact, get assblasted for saying I don't want to watch NHK, and you're apparently familiar with the subject, dirge, would you happen to remember the title for that show offhand? I will attempt to look it up.
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>>50169799
>something of a fad
Keijo had never been a fad, will never be a fad, and will continue to only plague this board because you insist this Jump must be made despite very clear indications from your own posts that you have very little idea what you're doing or inspiration to see the project through. Drop it and move on.
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>>50169819
I still think Heroic Age is garbage.
His other non lewd jumps are ok, but that one is so bare I don't even know what to do with it outside of ending my chain.
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>>50169822
Nope, apparently not. He's forcing everyone to be a girl regardless of if they want to or not, because all he cares about is doing something that's a fad. And his only excuse is "lol deal with it" because who cares about other people?
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>>50169834
It only became the hot shit when the anime started airing this season and the average consumer was weirded out by it.

Also it has only been a month
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>>50169850
So 4 times longer then the example you tried to use.
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>>50169859
Its principle not length
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>>50169878
Sure.
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>>50169771
Ok time a more accurate estimate

The part of that scene where Quicksilver is moving at super speed lasts 87 seconds. The time he has to stop the bullets is .05 seconds.

This means he is experiencing time at approximately 1740 times the speed of a normal human. Since an average human can run at 15 mph the speed you would need to be able to run to replicate that feat is roughly mach 34.02. Considering he also displays super speed within this accelerated perception of time he is able to move several mach above that.

Mach 40 is a reasonable estimate and mach 50 would be a generous one.
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I worked at a dog kennel once where we let the dogs run around the grounds. One day a dog tripped and yelped in pain, immediately the other dogs turned on started ripping it apart. Some of these attacking dogs were litter mates to the fallen dog, it was just instinct to go after the weak and injured.

This thread is reminding me of that day.


The dog ended up alright, needed to stitch his stomach up and a couple weeks of car.
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>>50169836
I don't believe you.

I really don't. You come off as someone who's been fishing for positive comments and don't care about the glaring holes in your work, refuse to listen to anyone who's telling you about the holes, and only care about the setting so far as being able to score internet points and to look cool for sticking it to The Man. For all your talk you seem to only care about looking good than the setting you claim to love soooo much when you don't even want to bother researching ways to find other options. No, you instead go "You're going to love asspushing, you're going to be a part of it, and fuck you if you don't want to be a part of it, because I'm making you do it"

That's why you're being compared to Tera. You actually feel worse than him because at least he tried to improve, even if it was only by a small amount. You just seem like you only want to hear praises and good things while putting in nowhere near the effort you put in for Senran, all for... what? Because it's some "fad"? Because you want to be popular on a web board? You say you enjoy it, but you don't sound like you're doing it for enjoyment.
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>>50169897
You sound like an asshole trying to start shit. particularly with how you ignore Dirge's own clarification on the tera comment in favour of using it to start shit.

You're a shitposter. Leave.
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>>50169903
Replying to a shitpost just to call it a shitpost is, in itself, shitposting.
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>>50169888
How much pressure would that put on the air if they weren't doing weird Time shit? I mean the most we see is a pair of knives move in mid air but I think he bumps them.
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Right we're pretty much going insane over a fucking tits n ass jump so I'm just gonna back out the entire internet before shit explodes even more in a few hours
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>>50169836
Considering the show was aired in the early 2000s I think, I have no clue off the top of my head what the title was. It was notable because it had a lot of JAV actresses on it, and I only remember searching for a part of it on youtube because Bananaman Himura did a spoof song on the same show. That in turn I only found while watching a rerun of Majiuta. There are plenty of other game shows however that deal with similar ridiculous shit, and things like Gaki no Tsukai come to mind, but Gaki no Tsukai is not one that deals consistently with strange water sports. No you don't have to tune in to NHK specifically for it, but at the same time I don't think you'll find too many videos from that era subbed.

If you're native Japanese or at least fluent, it'll make searching for it a lot easier, even if it's still ridiculously convoluted.

>>50169838
Unless the author specifically requests criticism generally I'm more than happy to say "the jump looks good". In DD's case, the jump does look good, and honestly all of his jumps have always looked good in terms of visuals. Whether or not they have enough content is a completely different matter admittedly, and while I'd certainly do things differently for my jumps, I believe that's a matter of stylistic preference moreso than anything.
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>Neo-Heisei Part 2 still isn't in the drive
WHY THOUGH
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So uh. Let's discuss something else.

What did everyone get up to in the Hero Exchange Board jump?
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>>50169924
>missing out on the meme dream of the century
It's all but confirmed my dude, just buckle in and enjoy the ride.
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>>50169918
>weird Time shit
I would argue that it is more the ability to manipulate how his speed affects things he is interacting with. That is how he can touch things as if he was moving at normal speed or at super speed depending on the situation.
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>>50169932
UPLOAD IT BRO
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>>50169924
>Right we're pretty much going insane over a fucking tits n ass jump

It's not just about tits n ass, it's also about FREEEEEDOM!!!!!!!
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>>50169937
Since I can neither confirm your or the other theory they are still both up in the air. But my question without some kinda inertial brake what Kinda damage would that shit do such a small area?

>>50169958
>FREEEEEDOM!!!!!!!
Wut?
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>>50169951
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On a completely unrelated note, I'm finally watching watching the Flash S2. And I realise it says this in the jump, but I just saw the part where they freeze security trip lasers.

This is the first time I've ever seen something so nonsensical from something comic related that I had to pause it and just go "What."
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>>50169951
FINE I DID
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>>50169929
I'm not a native or even fluent, but I am a truly titanic weeaboo. I will try my best. Tomorrow, though. It's getting late and I work in the morning.

Thank you for offering what information you could, though. I appreciate it.

I guess... technically... I should reply to the anons who were probably shitposting but did have comments on the jump...

>on being female

Keijo is a women's sport. It's a spectator sport. Men are not allowed to play. If I lock origins to being keijo players, which is pretty much the entire point of the jump, then those origins will be female. I can barely accept the existence of male strike witches and umbran witches, because magic is bullshit. But keijo is a sport with rules. End of. I wrote Drop in with the express purpose of not entirely genderlocking jumpers, but apparently that was not enough.

That said, I've already committed to a rewrite. If I learn on dirge's suggestions and mix the manga in with the idea of a variety show game, I could probably get rid of the gender-locked origins. We'll see, though.

>on it being a fad

Wasn't referring to just /jc/. That should explain what I meant.

Now, I do agree that this has been discussed to its logical conclusion. I'm going back to the drawing board. You guys should just talk about some other upcoming jump, like RK.
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>>50169969
>Wut?
Freedom to create the jumps we wan't, not the jumps others determine worthy by their own standards.
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So I'm going through the drive and making note of jumps with weapon import options.
Holy shit there are a lot of jumps.
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>>50170003
Well I'm this dude >>50169548 and I've asked the questions I wanted answered on that subject. I was hoping you just knew something else about the IP that could make it interesting.

>>50170018
Over 668 at this point right?
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>>50170039
I'm not sure on the exact number, but it is honestly pretty ridiculous
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>>50169916
Replying to a shitpost that's replying to a shitpost just to call it a shitpost is, in itself, shitposting.
This is a shitpost too, and if you reply to this, you're a double shitposter.
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>>50170039
>>50170044
As of the latest Jump List update, we're at 685 jumps. More if you include Joke Jumps.
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where have you gone for your hand-to-hand training jumpers?
are you a kung-fu master? heavy weight wrestling champions? Boxer than cant be put down?
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>>50170070
Wuxia, Ranma 1/2, Naruto, Gurren Lagann are the ones I can remember off the top of my head
I identify as a Punch-Wizard
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>>50170092
>>50170070
Don't forget Kenichi and GUNNM.
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>>50170070
We had a Martial Arts Anon once who jumped with the end objective of fighting Pre-Crisis Karate Kid Val Amor. Cool endgame objective.

>Boxer than cant be put down?
Wishing for Hajime no Ippo Jump intensifies!
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Jump-chan come and whisk me away to adventure. Please.

Anything but this.
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>>50170142
Seconded. I legitimately don't care if Chain death is permadeath at this point. Just let us leave.
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>>50170142
I'll second that.

I will become Exodus Jumper. Master of RUNNING THE FUCK AWAY.
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>>50170142
I'm actually going to try to finish my chain, and then try to do the ritual I come up with, to try to get jumper-me to come and take me away from this nightmare.
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>>50170142
>>50170146
>implying this isn't literally the best possible outcome.
Get outta here with your politics.
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>>50170142
I would like this too, please Jump-Chan? Take me away!
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>>50170142
>>50170146
The risk of permanent chain-death is no greater than the risk of mundane, normal death. I would accept the offer in a second.
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>>50170153
The lesser of two evils is still pretty fucking awful in this situation anon.
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>>50170158
I'd put him at chaotic neutral with a side of attempted heroism. He ain't evil, but I have no fucking clue where things are going from here.
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Guys, you're getting politics in my escapism!
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>>50170142
>>50170146
>>50170151
>>50170154
>>50170155
Fools. This is the best result for the future.
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>>50170173
See >>50170158
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>>50170142
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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>>50170142
Hell, I've been in favor of this regardless of my circumstances.
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>>50170142
Funny enough the only thing I accept as a personification of Jump-Chan was the original text that started it all. She's nice in that depiction.
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So hey, who won?
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>>50170178
It's like watching an argument about which testicle you'd prefer to have crushed.
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>>50170189
Trump. It's not even close like close either.
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>>50170189
It isn't officially over yet. . . but trump. Well at least he isn't Hillary.
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>>50170142
This is one of the first times in a long time I've felt happiness with the state of the world, but I'd still like to get /jc/'d.
I think that's pretty much a given for everyone.
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>>50170209
We all want to see Jump Chan come for us anon.
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>>50170212
>We all want to see Jump Chan come for us anon.
You cut that subliminal lewd out right now, young Jumper!
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>>50170163
I think we were headed down the path to destruction no matter which direction we chose, but now instead of a slow crushing existential death we're in for a roller coaster! I'm looking forward to it!
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>>50170242
Yeah, at least this way we'll get to see what the Cold War would've been like if it hadn't gotten so damn cold.
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>>50170269
No that's if hillary won.
She has a hateboner 16 miles long for russia and wasn't afraid to use it.
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>>50170269
Putin has stated that there would be war if Clinton won.
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>>50170272
Oh. So we were facing Armageddon either way instead of nukes vs more slow fascistic erosion of rights and privacy. Oddly comforting.
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>>50169528
Define "run"
I've conquered once or twice.
And more than once my insane Appearance and Charisma perks led people voting for me, despite me not actively running.

>>50170142
God I wish I could go. I would even grab you chuckle-fucks after I got my spark and take you all on multiversal adventures.

You touch my waifus and you get locked in the Lab with my experiments.
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>>50170272
But now the dude who couldn't handle twitter gets the nuclear launch codes.... Whatever. I don't think this is the place for these discussions.
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>>50170282
> spoiler
... c-can you at least clone me a waifu?
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>>50170284
The launch devices use floppy disks and there are dozens of steps between the president and the nukes.
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>>50170295
None of mine, but I get you other waifus sure.
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>>50170282
Just drop me off anywhere this side of Bloodborne.
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>>50170282
>>50170303
You're a good guy
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>>50170303
Is there anyone you haven't waifued? I think the pickings must be very small.
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>>50170302
This is the one solace left. That despite having an insane, racist, raping president, there are hundreds of other more sane people there to keep him under control.
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>>50170312
I have 52 Waifus, several of them are OCs.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, I might be the most famous harem-jumper but I have nowhere NEAR the largest harem.
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>>50170295
There is an infinite multiverse anon, there are infinite versions of every waifu you could imagine.
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>>50170282
Actually, that makes me curious. Say one of us shows up post-spark and offers move each of us to a world of our choosing.

Where do you go?
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Sausage Party jump when?
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>>50170269
If anything we're probably going to end up formally allied to Russia. It's gonna be us and them versus the world, baby.
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>>50170318
There is an agreement where anyone who gets their spark sends everyone else on their own chain. Have you opted in to it?
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>>50170282
Drop me off at Nanoha, please.
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>>50170322
When you make it.

Make it snappy though. We don't have too much longer left in this universe.
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>>50170302
Sure, it's more of an analogy than a literal statement, but you take my point. Still, the world's going to keep on spinning regardless of who's in charge - on the left or the right.

Unless a Jumper comes along, that is. What's the most SPECTACULAR way to end the world (and/or stop it spinning)?
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>>50170318
Depends, do I get a guarantee that I'll be able to use the "special thing" of that setting? Like magic in Fairy Tail, or Super Powers in any Supers setting?

If yes, probably Fairy Tail. So many cute girls, and lots of cool shit to learn.

If no? Fuck I dunno, I'd have to think about it. Some setting that's good for a NEET.

>>50170332
I'll hand you an Anti-Moon laser and drop you off.
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>>50170318
Santa Claus
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>>50170323
America and Russia tag-team. Huh. I think I'd rather just fight NATO, to be honest.
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>>50170318
Assuming I get to jump that world properly? Naruto. Fanfic drawback.

Assuming I don't? Nanoha. I want to live in a magical future society.
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>>50170318
I'll take Steven Universe.
>>50170337
Stack time paradoxes until it ceases to have ever existed.
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>>50170282
Please, just drop me off in Gravity Falls.

It's weird, but better than this.
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>>50170318
Pokemon. It would just be so nice.
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>>50170318
Eh. Harry Potter? I'm pretty sure common sense counts as a superpower there, even if I don't get magic.

Or just Star Wars. Can't go wrong with Star Wars.
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>>50170318
Play to live, there is no jump yet but I like that setting.
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>>50170337
Dragon break a lot. You get to kill it more than once that way.
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>>50170361
Going perma would be nice.
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>>50170318
> Where do you go?

... how many worlds have an internet?
Which worlds have the best internet?
Which worlds are easiest to survive in and have internet?

These are important factors to consider.

> tfw I realize that given the opportunity to go to any world imaginable, I just want to be a stay at home NEET.
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>>50170378
So you want to go to GitS or Shadowrun?
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Wanted to get this out before everything bows up.

>Changed the version number.
>Capitalized a bunch of words.
>Lowered the price of the AT-AT from 1000cp to 800cp.
>Added new vehicles [TIE, X-Wing, A-Wing, TIE Interceptor, Lambda Shuttle]
>Clearified that imported companions get discounts.
>Made it so that people can purchase multiple Starships (800cp each.) and import additional ships. (900cp each.)
>Gave Starships their own seperate pool of 800sp.
>Changed cp to cred
>Made it so that impoted ships can be given a Star Wars skin regardless of weather or not they've been given a new frame.
>Made the Docking Ring free.
>Lowerd the cost of the 400cp weapons to 200cred.
>Allowed the purchase of an additional set of Dual Laser Cannons for 50cp.
>Lowered the price of the Homing Beacon Launcher to 50cp.
>Altered the description of Deflector Shields "... intense heat, lasers, blasters, harmful radiation, and space debris." Removed, "Physical projectiles such as missiles can bypass your shields."
>Lowered the price of the Magnetic Containment Field to 50cp
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>>50170378
It's alright anon, I'm the same way.
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>>50170380
Shadowrun's pretty cutthroat, I don't know if you want to go there as a regular ass human, unless Jumper-san is willing to give you a lot of freebies to get you started out. Then it might be fun.
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>>50170390
I just want to buy a Star Destroyer, man.
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>>50170318
Touhou. You don't even have to give me any points. Just make me a fucking fairy and set me free.

A lunarian is fine too.
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>>50170390
Is the 800 for ships an extra 800 that can only be spent in the ship section? Can we still spend our regular creds on our ship?
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>>50170407
No.
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>>50170425
I'll pay literally all the CP, tho.
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>>50170424
>800 for ships an extra 800 that can only be spent in the ship section?
Yes.

>Can we still spend our regular creds on our ship?
No.
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>>50170390
Nice.


Speaking of Star Wars what ever happened to that one jump getting made about star wars galactic empires?
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>>50170390
>mfw when happy about update but realize need to rework my build
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>>50170433
>No.
Damn, this is a rather painful update then. I wanted to focus on the ship.
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>>50170438
I wanna know what happened to Old Republic
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>>50170433
CP to Cred conversion option? Please?
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>>50170432
Anon, I can't just let you buy a Star Destroyer. I have to make a jump specifically centered around capital ships like Battlefront or Galactic Battlegrounds.

>>50170438
No idea, someone showed me a WIP for Empire at War but I haven't heard from the creator in months.

>>50170448
You can still upgrade you ship over the course of the jump, and the rest of your chain.

>>50170452
Brutus was working on it, he's still around but I don't know what he's doing with it .
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>>50170390
I'd really like a CP to Cred conversion, please. Some of us really dumped a lot of money into the ship.
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>>50170433
>>50170460
>CP to Cred conversion option? Please?
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>>50170468
>Battlefront
Are...are you trying to tell me something, KOTOR?
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>>50170487
He has talked about a jump where you could get your own Eclipse class in the past.
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>>50170492
>Eclipse class
That sounds big. How does it compare to a LoT?
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>>50170487
>>50170492
>>50170468
>Battlefront
The shitty remake or the gloriousness that is Battlefront 2?
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Well guys no matter what happens in the next few hours. I just want you all to know.

I love you all.
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>>50170505
It was actually an executor class, which is about 19 km long.
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>>50170510
Love you too bby.
I think you and everyone else is overreacting, but stay safe ok?
I know some people are planning riots depending on who wins.
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>>50170505
17.5 Kiometers for the original but the one in Battlefront is fucking huge! See also >>50170507.

>>50170518
Ah still a good one.
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>>50170473
>>50170470
>>50170460
I'll think about it.

>>50170487
Battlefront wouldn't translate well to jump format unless I made up a lot of shit. I'd rather try to make a capital ship centered jump for Star Trek.
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>>50170510
Don't worry anon, he isn't in office yet, the only things he can destroy right now are moral and the stock market. But oh boy is he ever going to destroy the stock market.
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>>50170510
I'd give you a hug if I could. As it is, let's all just hope that the benefactor appears.
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>>50170507
>260 Kilometers at base
I like it/I love it/I want some more of it
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Praise Nike.
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>>50170603
Praise Prometheus and Hephaestus.
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>>50170530
>I'll think about it.
Thank you for doing so.
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>>50170603
Praise El
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I'm going to travel to different worlds and build walls.
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>>50170652
Build a Wall and make Chaos pay for it
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>>50170318
If I'm just being dropped off somewhere, then someplace like Undertale, Splatoon, Pokémon, anywhere optimistic and fun. If I get CP for that jump and that jump alone? Maybe something like JoJo or Kamen Ride, also optimistic and fun but also dangerous.
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>>50170652
I'm Australian and the only thing I know about Trump is that he was a rich kid and that he's filed for bankruptcy tons of times. Is there something about him that I'm missing that has so many people thinking he'd be a good leader? I'm honestly confused about why he's actually a legitimate candidate let alone your actual president.
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>>50170672
>he's filed for bankruptcy tons of times.
He filed for bankruptcy on about 3 companies, out of about 100 he's started up. People take that out of proportion.
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>>50170672
My brethren. People, for some reason, think a guy with a history of screwing the little guy for his own interests is going to now help the little guy.

I know, I don't understand the logic either.
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>>50170360
You can go pretty awfully wrong in Star Wars, depending on where you get dropped off. Sarlaac Pit, for example.
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>>50170672
>he's filed for bankruptcy tons of times. Is
That's literally a bullshit meme. Trump has started a fuckload of businesses, most of them are successful.

Basically aussie, like 80% of all businesses start fail. He's someone that keeps starting new ones and keeps making money.

He unsurprisingly uses the system our croney capitalist government has created to kill off businesses before they can hurt his successful ones. Because he's not a fucking retard who pointlessly throw away money.
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>>50170685
So you're under the impression that the woman who got caught proven lying about everything through the wikileaks shit and who caused the migrant crisis by saying no to a peace deal that would have prevented it? Who has supported every bad trade deal that fucked over the little guy is going to be better?
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>>50170390
Noice!

>Vocabulator [Free/50cp] (50cp version if free for Humanoid)
Should "if free" be "is free" or am I confused?

Can I import my Digital Ally from MCU as a Droid _without_ it becoming sapient?
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>>50170318
Tough choice, but if I had to choose I'd say either Pokemon or Teen Titans.
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>>50170759
>Can I import my Digital Ally from MCU as a Droid _without_ it becoming sapient?
Don't you know? There's a secret rule where you can't import any companion from a Red jump because otherwise they might actually be useful.
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>>50170750
You can alter the course of conversation, anon.
Be the change you want to see.

Jumpers.
For those of you who've specialized in some way, how badly do you freak out when one of the natives beats you at your own game?
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>>50170768
Ooh, I knew you were around here somewhere, my fellow fedoraman!

I'd love to ERP with you sometime. I'll be the dom. You can be the cat.
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>>50170769
>one of the natives beats you at your own game
There aren't that many people who really practice summoning in the chain, so I generally like to recruit specialists whenever I can find them.
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>>50170768
Ram a cock in it, Exhausted / Nianque.
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>>50170759
It's supposed to be "is free."

>Can I import my Digital Ally from MCU as a Droid _without_ it becoming sapient?
Maybe if you wipe it's memory regularly.
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>>50170530
>spoiler
I'd be happy with that!
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>>50170782
>implying it's either of those faglords
It's obviously Guest45886, fucker couldn't keep it in his pants
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>>50170800
>faglords

The entire IRC is one, why do we still have them.
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So, given that Grimm can apparently "talk" (the jellyfish Grimm shown in the latest episode of RWBY volume 4 seems to communicate either through clicks or telepathy), what does that mean for Abyssal Jumpers? Would these Grimm take longer to form/create?
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>>50170769
Figure out if their plans contradict mine, and if they do, kill them in the simplest method with the least variables possible.
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>>50170769
If they're willing to teach me and/or join me, or at least not be my enemy, then freak out is little to non-existent. If not? Pull out all the stops, they are going down.
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Changelog:
-Force Manipulation now runs off concentration, not strength
-Telekinesis now runs off mental strength/power, not physical strength
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>>50170837
boo
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>>50170837
Changelog:
-It's the white version
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>>50170847
But what does that mean?
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>>50170847
Thank you.
>>50170852
It means this version won't murder my eyes.
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>>50170787
Oh well, scratch that idea off the list then.
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>>50170837
That's a shame. I can kind of understand why you did it, but I really liked the way Telekinesis worked before. I guess that does give me extra CP to buy some of the other powers I had to miss out on last time.
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>>50170806
If they're not particularly stronger I think it'd be the same as normal just with the added moral issue of creating a sapient lifeform for a task. I'm kind of confused about the thing in the notes that says the grimm grow stronger every time you defat them, would this apply to companions or people we teach?
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>>50170879
It's not canon so good luck figuring anything out with that.
Grimm don't actually scale. It's just muh setting that got out of hand.
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>>50170837
>force manipulation and telekinesis no longer run off strength
Please add a baseline for what the perks can do in the jump?
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>>50169251
I'm surprised there isn't an Overwatch jump yet, considering how popular it is.
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http://pastebin.com/EvvAqV0s

So the Rurouni Kenshin jump is basically done, aside from some jump fluff. Last second suggestions or error point-outs are acceptable, but I think it's about done. Most I'd add are some more general combat perks.
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>>50170888
Not enuff lore yet.
Dick and Head are supposed to be working on in I think though
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>>50170882
>muh setting
It's more that Clover in particular likes adding arbitrary mandatory restrictions and challenges into his jumps.

Like, he was going to do a full-throttle nerf for Uber because "jumpers don't fit the tone of the setting".

So, yeah, I guess it kind of is "muh setting".
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>>50170883
Sure, I'll have it for tomorrow since I'm going to be heading to bed soon.
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>>50170896
So how much have you slept this past week?
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Okay, so I went through the drive searching for weapon import options, to save time I just looked for instances of the word 'import' so I definitely missed some.
Here is what I found though.
http://pastebin.com/euRvdH3Z
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>>50170914
How high powered are the foes in Last Avenger? They're not at their comic book levels, are they? Would an army of Iron Man level robots - the sort you can make with the scientist perks - be a challenge for them? How about if they could all run at mach 30 and turn invisible?
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>>50170769
Every time the natives beat me at my own game of "melee combat" was due to drawbacks, like You Made Her Cry.
Or a gauntlet.
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How far does the Goblin Made Sword's 'imbibe that which makes it stronger' go?
Would exposing it to adamantanium make it more durable? Could it get the anti-whitewalker properties from valyrian steel or be able to hurt Beldr from mistletoe?
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Citizens of /jc/. In honor of the election results, I give you Councilor Trumpus' current build.

http://pastebin.com/vhy4kvsc
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>>50171007
>No Elder Scrolls
WHAT ARE YOU DOING COUNCILOR. YOU WERE GOING TO MAKE TAMRIEL GREAT AGAIN.
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I just want you chuckle-fucks to know. You guys are great, and I'd like to consider you friends. I love /jc/ and this little community.
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>>50171034
He's not been Inaugurated yet. At that date, I will release an updated build with indeed, Elder Scrolls.
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>>50171034
Build a wall, make the Thalmor pay for it.
Build a wall, make the Hist pay for it.
Build a wall, make the Khajit pay for it.
Build a wall, make the Daedra pay for it.
Build a wall, make Anu pay for it.
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>>50171043
Do Star Wars too.
MAKE THE REBUPLIC GREAT AGAIN.
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>>50171007
Do Percy Jackson and get Kek as a patron.
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>>50171007
>That YJ build

Is... Is that even legal?
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What are some good early chain jumps for picking up the basic essentials; things like reliable income, a home that follows you through the chain, and/or good waifus?
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>>50171111
Reliable income is as easy as getting a fucking job. If you're too lazy for that then try Monopoly.
Home is achievable via the first option or spending points in your warehouse.

Waifus are to be obtained at your discretion. I hear create an OC options are rather popular these days.
Overlord comes to mind.
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>>50171111
>Reliable Income
Model Jump easy
>A home
Only the one in Van Helsing pops to mind immediately, sorry.
>Waifus
Sekirei, Rosario Vampire, Overlord.
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Can someone post Ravenloft? Google is being a shit

Also if the guy who did Wheel of Time's around, how far can you customise your Sa'Angreal and in terms of powr what is it comparable to? I'm assuming it's not Callandor-tier.

Also, does the dream world carry over to other jumps or do you just navigate dreams well? If so is it retconned into being there all along, or is it like a miasma of meta-Pattern that follows you?
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>>50171111
Animal Crossing has everything you ask for except the good waifus, and maybe those too depending on your preferences.
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>>50169251
No POTUS/MAGA Jump?
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>>50171311
Pick a property like Shadow President or the like.
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>>50171311
Well, we got West Wing and Metal Wolf Chaos for what that's worth.
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>>50171311
I should be president. Waifus for everyone will be my platform.
Also harsher punishments for repeat criminals who refuse redemption
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With the goal of getting fun (though not necessarily strong) powers with a low level of danger what would be some good starting jumps?
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>>50171393
Harry Potter is the king of Utility, and damn good for pranks. Just leave England, or be a Pureblood.
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Are there any jumpers who followed the path of an evil Mr. Rogers?
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>>50171411
This guy?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_G7CV_TqLI

I could probably do it, but I don't really feel like it.
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>>50170390
Companion Import doesn't allow the Drop-In or Royalty backgrounds, any particular reason?
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>>50170070
I've gone everywhere. My jumper has picked up dozens of martial arts, everything from Hanbojutsu to Sloshi from Discworld, to Hyuga Gentle Fist and a couple of Exalted martial arts...but I definitely don't know White Veil Style since it doesn't exist.
I even picked up a couple I couldn't find a sensei for by putting Exalted books into the Adaptinator to convert them into video games, then learning Exalted martial arts from the video games through Playing with Super Power.

>mfw I looked through my list and all the GUNNM martial arts are mis-typed as "Marital" arts...

>>50170318
Maybe Dinotopia or The Polity.
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>>50171453
>mfw I looked through my list and all the GUNNM martial arts are mis-typed as "Marital" arts...
Panzer Kunt.
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Election jump when?
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>>50171486
Panther Cunt.
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>>50171453
Myr, two important questions.

Do I need the hybrid perk for Body Snatcher + Hybrid to work or can I just try to do what Migi did in verse to have benefits of hybrid perk. And does this combo, if you are a host, literally let you give people biological stuff transfusions of blood or it only works if you are Body/Cranial Parasyte?

If I was a host and a Parasyte of mine went into fugue, can I take on his Parasyte form or I can only morph that body part?

If I have a Parasyte companion and keep them, then do they, when I import them in later jump, also get ability to morph the body part they originally were? As in, like how a jumper who was a Parasyte can do. Because that would be great and fitting
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>>50171486
>>50171534
A good use of vibrations.
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So, quick update on Stargate Atlantis:

Races/Backgrounds are Drop In, Tau'ri (Security, Science, Medical, Administration), Pegasus Local (Pre-Industrial, Post-Industrial), Wraith (Wraith, Queen).

Goal is two perks per cost level plus another 5 or 6 general ones, with the exception of Wraith Queen who gets one at each level as well as buying the normal Wraith perks at discount (higher background cost, probably 300cp or 400cp to balance).

Of perks, only about 9 are "blank", but I haven't finished re-watching it all yet.
Of items, about 6 are "blank", mostly in the higher brackets of Pegasus locals.

Drawbacks are done, I think. Might add a couple more oriented towards Wraith.

>>50171592
>Do I need the hybrid perk for Body Snatcher + Hybrid to work or can I just try to do what Migi did in verse to have benefits of hybrid perk.
The Hybrid perk is "all the benefits that Shinichi had, with no downsides". It is possible to do what Migi did in jump, but whoever's the parasyte is expending some of their mass, so will probably have to sleep like Migi.

>does this combo, if you are a host, literally let you give people biological stuff transfusions of blood or it only works if you are Body/Cranial Parasyte?
You don't *have* to be a parasyte for it to work, but it will only work while you are *connected* to whoever you're giving your blood to. So sticking your blood in a pack won't share your biological powers with the donor, but if you stuck one end of an IV in you and the other end in them, it would.

>If I was a host and a Parasyte of mine went into fugue, can I take on his Parasyte form or I can only morph that body part?
You can only morph that body part.

>If I have a Parasyte companion and keep them, then do they, when I import them in later jump, also get ability to morph the body part they originally were? As in, like how a jumper who was a Parasyte can do. Because that would be great and fitting.
I didn't really consider that, so I'm going to say go ahead.
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Jumpers, who did you companion in Sitcom?
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>>50171682
If we find a way to regenerate lost mass as Parasyte, we don't have to do Migi's sleep?

As for doing what Migi did, I meant: would leaving bits of ourselves like that through host's bloodstream, if we have body snatcher, work to let them use our powers? As in, without hybrid perk?

Now the issue is, how to do the same if you are a host. The Parasytes are connected to you and share your bloodstream... But if them giving up pieces of themselves is necessary to make it work without hybrid perk then that is fine

>Go ahead
Oh boy. OPEN GET
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>>50171682
Since Gotou was able to protect most of his insides with five parasytes (him in the head and one in each limb) could I have everything but my head protected with one in each limb and one somewhere in my torso?
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>>50170070
Mines a heavily individual level martia art that would be extremely difficult to impart onto another due to the sheer amount of augmentations and skills I have, both metaphysical and bio technological ones. Things like Anima,Tower of God,GUNNM, Wuxia, Wakfu and many more allow me to do some scary shit. Shoutout to "Temple of Thought" from Binbougami, allowing me to make my stand energies work with Shinsoo making for some scary ways of combat.Or my Path to Victory giving me a guide to defeating the opponent helped by my other precognition or calculatong programs. Also some D-Ripper technology supplemented by Symbiote matter reprogramming technology allows one to handle some more monstrous opponents by turning the very organic matter they have into say, anti-matter.
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>>50171761
>If we find a way to regenerate lost mass as Parasyte, we don't have to do Migi's sleep?
If your parasyte can regenerate its lost mass, I suppose it wouldn't have to sleep.

>would leaving bits of ourselves like that through host's bloodstream, if we have body snatcher, work to let them use our powers?
Yes.

>Now the issue is, how to do the same if you are a host.
If you are host with body snatcher, it probably works.
If you are host but your parasyte has body snatcher and you don't, it won't work because Body Snatcher is what is causing the sharing.

>>50171879
Sure, but you're still going to have weak spots.
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>>50171915
huh, only having body snatcher as a host is enough? Interesting.

And I think the weak spot Anon will already have a weak spot. His head
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>>50171915
>Sure, but you're still going to have weak spots.
What I mean is since Gotou was able to only have a few weak spots on his body with just parasytes in his head and limbs could I have them in my limbs and torso to make my head into my only weak point?
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Is anyone working on a Muv Luv jump?
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>>50172269
Nope.
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Alright. One last thing before I release the final final version of Shaman King.

Companion Cp. Right now, they get 700 cp. Thats... Well, its a lot. And if I reenable companion drawbacks, then they'll get even more.

What do I cap the drawback CP at, and do I drop their base cp at all?
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>>50169486
I think there's a perk in Age of Mythology that explicitly gives you a lot of inspiration.
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>>50172338
Giving companions a significant amount of cp is good, otherwise they'll be irrelevant compared to the jumper unless you have invested in said companion considerably in previous jumps.
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>>50172338
Make their cap to half or a quarter of Jumpers limit, drop their allowance to 400cp.
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>>50172413

Don't do this.
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>>50172413
That is way too painful.
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>>50171532
>200cp Twittering - with even the most rudimentary media proliferation devices you can get your message out and heard by everyone either directly or by proxy. Armed with only a Twitter account you could garner enough like minded citizens to form a solid base.

>400cp Meme Magic - Even if you're not fully versed in the nature of viral memes, your supporters will be. They will turn everything you say in to a catchy sound bite or an entertaining image macro that supports your position. More capable than an advertising firm with several hundred million dollars, tireless and almost impossible to turn away from your cause. Memes have changed.

>600cp The lesser of two evils - No matter how bad you are, you will always be up against a candidate with a fatal flaw that could seriously, at least in the minds of the citizenry, undermine their ability to administer the nation. Be it low energy, a horrible personality or perhaps an impending RICO proceeding, you'll always have something you can focus in on.

AAWWWOOOOOOOO
How the fuck did we do this?
This is unbelievable
I'm still laughing
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Is Louise from FoZ a decent companion? She seems kind of abusive, not that that's a issue for a jumper.
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>>50172617
LN yes, anime no.
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>>50172617
Personally, I think she's a decent one. LN Louise, that is. The anime version is sorta bad?
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>>50172568
I refuse to believe in meme magic until Aiden Gillen joins the Central Intelligence Agency, Tom Hardy undergoes a spontaneous growth spurt and Christian Bale becomes obsesed with pointing at multiple identical objects.
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>>50172661
Anon
Really?
How much more evidence do you need?

Armed with only a rudimentary understanding of Twitter the God Emperor rises.
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>>50171111
Building on this, what are some good early or starting jumps that grant perfect memory?
Besides Pokemon Trainer, of course.
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>>50172568
Lol MAGA
You still need a Hill and a Johnson/Jill origin.
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Here you go. Knock yourselves out.

Questions, suggestions, or error point-outs all welcome.
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>>50172694
It's like you don't want to win bigly

actually, no

There has to be a 100cp perk for a gauc bowl company and calming turtles
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>>50172714
>Jeb drawback
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>>50172708
2/10 not enough God-Emperor.
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>>50172708
Thank you for another good jump. Been looking forward to a Ruroni Kenshin jump for a while
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>>50172694
The origins should be:
>drop in (3rd party)
>republican
>democrat
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>>50172338
Please, keep it at 700. I do agree that Companions should only have half the CP cap from Drawbacks though.
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>>50172617
She’s nice unless you’re going out of your way to push her buttons.

Also, as I once said before, teach her a good magic system (Hero BBS comes to mind) and she’d be YOUR familiar in all but name.
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>>50172760
Need one more though
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>>50172802
News reporter who hates everyone
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>>50171363
Justice, were you a member of AoG?
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>>50172824
AoG?
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>>50172802
Super-pac: instead of becoming a canidate yourself, you support and existing canidate.
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>>50171532
>>50172568
>>50172694
>>50172760

But why should Trump be limited to his own jump?

I vote we start replacing and editing every other jump - make them all show proper respect to Lord Kek's chosen one.
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>>50172855
We just need to change the WWE drawback
>>
so jumpers, what are jumps i can get a supernatural voice/music skills?
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>>50172916
Musician
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>>50172916
Ar Tonelico, Neverwinter/Forgotten Realms
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>>50172916
Fifth Element has several.
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>>50172916
Fate. One of the servants from extra, barthory(?) was half dragon. Her breath weapon was /sound/.

Shoot people in the face with hard rock music. You know you want to.
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>>50169295
Plutobase. Maybe even accepting immigrants.
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>>50172708
The Perks we've seen and they are damn good I say.
Items are nice in general and for a low powered Jump the Reverse Blade & Heavy Coat are awesome. Dojo and Sakura Garden are cool. Palace is neat as a starting property. Whilst I don't want any of it the entire Revolutionary Item line has a really good 'feel' to it.
Destiny is interesting
Imports are cool.
Canon Companion option is neat..
Drawbacks range the gauntlet of giving too many points (Rival is only talented at your level in one thing? The right of the Challenged is to set the challenge, unless the Samurai/Whatever the Rival Is do things differently) to not enough (A Darker Shade makes things that seemingly, by the wording, scale to you so that no matter what it's hard to win). Other than some minor quibbles I have nothing but golden song to sing of your creation. Please make more.
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>>50172708
Required take before hitting Light of Terra. Seriously being a badass with a sword and /having/ a sword at the starts kinda cool. Going to sit it right next to Blade on my list of things I'm going to exploit the fuck out of during LoT.
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>>50172708
Oh yes.
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>>50172708
Eeeeeep. So good. Building!
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>>50172916
Anima Beyond Fantasy. One of the Ars Magnus sets is called the Compendium of Impossible Weapons, which includes Virgo, which lets you play music so hard it damages your opponents.
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Is this taken? Because if not, I would like to claim it.
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>>50173366
No and I'd love to see it made.
>>
>>50173366
Please, BLADE. You've done good so far, m80.
>>
>>50173388
I am not BLADE.
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>>50173395
The joke is that BLADE is Cthulhu from SB I think. He's done good work and the other anon is saying he should save the world I think.
>>
>>50173395
So you say, BLADE. So you say.
>>
Is there any reason to buy "I Reject My Humanity!" over going Missing Piece + White Science in Neo-Heisei Part 2?

First option gets you a Phantom Form with 600 points to spend, after spending either 1,000 CP or 500 if it's discounted.

Second option gets you a Phantom Form with 500 points to spend, and a WizarDriver + Ring to essentially grant you the best of both Wizard and Phantom worlds.

As well, the second option is actually obtainable by Companions whereas the first one they're locked out of due to their CP allotment not covering it.
>>
>>50173460
Oh thats a bald faced lie. Elves were for lewding long before generic hentai was ever a thing.
>>
>>50173464
>Second option gets you a Phantom Form with 500 points to spend, and a WizarDriver + Ring to essentially grant you the best of both Wizard and Phantom worlds.

Forgot to mention the price here: 600 CP if White Science is discounted, 900 CP otherwise.
>>
What jumps have meme magic? I am now convinced that it is the strongest force in the multiverse.
>>
>>50173507
I think Creepypasta has a meme option.
>>
>>50173413
...

And we're okay with this?
>>
>>50173578
What's there to not be okay with?
>>
>>50173578
Yes. Many of our jump-makers have come from SB. There's nothing inherently wrong with it -- there're just a few... problem posters to be wary of.
>>
>>50173578
Yeah. He's cool now and that's all that basically matters to me.
>>
>>50173588
I thought we hated him for new bleach?
>>
>>50173646
Nope.
>>
>>50172338
As long as you explain how some drawbacks specifically affect companions.

Also, companions are not affected by our of jump power locking drawbacks? Can't find the jump pdf to check
>>
>>50173646
No. He never once tried to push NuBleach or his Lew jumps over here, so those are not really valid reasons to hate him.

Unless you're the kind of person who hates specific console-exclusive game developers.
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>>50173658
I suppose if you take singular reincarnation, your companions would be reduced to their base powers. So if you imported superman, he would still be superman.

If superman takes singular reincarnation, he stopes being superman and turns into just man.

That make sense?
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>>50172338
300 CP Worth of Drawbacks would make them standard Jumper 1000 which would be unique because I don't know of any that allow that. So maybe that?
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>>50173507
Could probably make some sort of Stand based off of it.
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>>50169430
Background: Drop-In (Free)
Club: Crafts (-100)
Perks: Chef (Free), Tailor (-300), Fiber Hybrid (-200)
Items: Life Fiber Spool (-400)

I'll make any dumb, ghoul-inspired clothing for you that you'd wish. I will never wear one. Ever.

Seriously why would anyone ever come to me for fashion, I'm the last person you'd ever want to take fashion advice from.

This can only end in pic related level of bad fashion choices.

>1.
>2. SOMA
>3. Undertale
>4. Hellsing
>5. Akame ga Kill

Gonna need a new slot one.
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>>50173683
Yesssssss.
Thank you Blade.

>obligatory Blade TBFP reference
Hey BLADE, where's your blade? You can only use it while you're in rage mode?
>>
>>50173684
I know a few with 800, and a few with no technical cap, but none with 1000.
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>>50173703
Darkest Dungeon
>>
>>50173710
I AM NOT A SWORDY PERSON.

I DON'T WANT TO BE A SWORDY PERSON.

GET THAT THING AWAY FROM ME.
>>
Rolled 5 (1d5)

>>50173718
>1. Darkest Dungeon
>2. SOMA
>3. Undertale
>4. Hellsing
>5. Akame ga Kill

This has turned into a magical chain so far. Simultaneously even worse than all my others but still upbeat.
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>>50173711
I meant that with the 700 CP and the 300 CP worth of Drawbacks they'd have 1000 CP. That'd be unique.
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>>50173719
BLADE, I promise you can have a giant book of spells from across the multiverse when you drop the Shaman King update.

Personally, I like the 700 CP with 300 CP of Drawbacks.

Don't worry, the swords can't hurt you anymore.
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>>50173808
Alright, then the last last question is whether or not they take half cp.

I think I actually have two for and two against at this point.

After that i just need to reword that section, and it will be done.
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>>50173828
>two against

If they aren't posting here, where it matters, then their opinion's worth jack shit.

Going to guess one of them's Red?
>>
>>50173828
Honestly? If the Companions can at least get most of their Origin tree + capstone, I'm down for that.
>>
>>50173828
Half CP?
>>
>>50173901
Is this the new meme now?
>>
>>50173901
You've got that backwards, anti-red. If the question is 'half CP or not half CP', then being against it means they want full CP.

Given that you seem to think Red wants to nerf ALL THE THINGS, you just asked if she was in favor of giving your companions more CP.
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>>50173958
He's a god damn retard, how are you surprised he got the question mixed up.
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>>50173828
I'm against the Half-CP thing. Also I'm this dude >>50173795

>>50173946
Me too.

>>50173955
>>50173958
Report and Ignore friends.
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>>50173946
50 cp perk - free
100 cp perk - free
200 cp perk - 100 (100)
300 cp perk - 150 (250)
400 cp perk - 200 (450)
600 cp perk - 300 (750)
600 cp perk - 300 (1050)

...Just barely over. Almost.

>>50173948
Companions taking a 200 cp drawback, but only getting 100 cp out of it.
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>>50173974
Hence why I said Most of the origin tree. If it falls short by one perk, hey. is good.
>>
>>50173974
Looks good other than the Half CP from drawbacks thing, but that's just my opinion.
>>
Alright, this is the final version of the jump.

For the record, the softcap is me saying how much drawback cp you can take, and hardcap is me preventing you from abusing RAW too badly.
>>
>>50174070
Both, technically.

Think of it more like stat points. Wizard 30, fighter 1.
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>>50173901
*I slowly stroke my fedora, staring deeply into your one eye that still works.*
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