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>http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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>>50152362
Latest Traveller Release, Companion PDF and the next text edition still to come.

Also does anyone know what a fucking judgment egg is?
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>>50152493
>behlit fragments
Is this what I think it is?
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>>50152362
Dark Souls Boss CYOA about 1/3 finished.
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>>50152362
So, that's it, then? That's how it ends?

Funny, that.

Let's take the SAND. I dream, and the world trembles.

As for how much of myself I'll give? I shall become this world's AVATAR. Should a greater expanse take me in, I will rise to defend my home if necessary, but at no point before.
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>>50152200
With the enhanced tensile strength of my vines, if they're stretchy enough we could probably make a huge slingshot for you. Using the Arachne's Aimbot alongside it, you might as well be a free Artillery power.

>>50152317
I'm more specialized at keeping the people around here alive, but waste not want not. Our facilities can probably patch your legion's damage up just as well.

Wanna ride on my slingshot?
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>>50152493
>>50151758
>>50152515

Looks like we are all interested in the same things lol.
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Friendly reminder that OG Azriel is best Azriel
but Kristel is still better
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Is it possible for an incarnate to become a demiurge without killing and absorbing their other universe specific incarnates? if not can an incarnate become as powerful as a demiurge in through other means?
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>>50152918
If you post this and don't want to be called a shit, post boxes and demon version as well.

Otherwise, good CYOA.
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>>50152971
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Question, does anyone know what happened to the incoming necromancer update, has there been any news or have I missed it completely?
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I pick Worldly body
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>>50152965
Boxes? You mean mickey and Big D?

Mhyrie best demon btw
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>>50153099
Those of you who chose to shadow Mickey in the archangel cyoa
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>>50153099
>Boxes? You mean mickey and Big D?
Yeah
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>>50152764
Behlit Fragments is from the Berserk manga.

In the Manga you can become a Demon "Apostle" to five reality warping Demon Lords called the God Hand by sacrificing the thing that you love the most to them.

Apostles can do all sorts of crazy shit. Their original Human bodies look more inhuman and they can transform into their Demon bodies which are basically unstoppable by normal men.

One Apostle has supposedly unbreakable diamond scales for skin. Another couldnt die unless his head was cut off. Their powers vary widely.

Pic related is what some of the Apostles look like.

The Godhand themselves seemingly had no limitations.
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>>50153050
Still being worked on, AFAIK.
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>>50153171
and those of you who chose to serve Big D in the archdemon cyoa
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>>50153213
you uh, forgot something
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>>50153222
fucking capcha ate my image
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Thanksgiving update is going to be about historical figures. Give me any input if you want to see someone specific.

Im still working on the Quest but ive been busy/tired so sorry about no updates recently.

>>50152945
>Is it possible for an incarnate to become a demiurge without killing and absorbing their other universe specific incarnates?

You dont have to kill them. If something else kills all of them you will become a Demiurge.

>if not can an incarnate become as powerful as a demiurge in through other means?

Yes but it would take a very long time and only very few could do it.
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>>50153271
Is it bad that after seeing the "Mover" and "Shaker" options, I half expected the next option to be "Candlestick Maker?"
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>>50153210

>Another couldnt die unless his head was cut off

Can you say

LAAAAAAAAAAME
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>>50153050
>still expecting a necromancer update
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>>50152362
So the woven basically makes you god? I'll take that with living world.
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>>50153613
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>>50153279

And if that something else is another incarnate?
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>>50152730
Being an artillery shell sounds like a great plan. It'll help me get into combat faster too.
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>>50141421
Italics if you're still here do you have an estimated release date for this cyoa? Also will there be more did nothing wrong yanderes in Order? We need more yanderes.
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>>50153255
>Self-Insert
>Kid Win Mode
>Drawbacks (6)
Shard 3
Case 53 1 (Obvious)
Enemy 2 (Protectorate)

>Minor Powers
Thinker
Trump

>Major Powers
Mover

>Perks
Augmented Powers (Both minors)
Ally 1 (A fellow case 53)

At first, I was excited. I got to be an elf-looking motherfucker with some of the most broken power imaginable - Superspeed + Spidey Sense + the ability to turn off the powers of anyone I get within sixty feet of. I figured as long as I stayed away from the biggest Tinkers, I would be fine.

I didn't figure on how the Shard drawback would affect me. I'm the world's biggest asshole. I've started avoiding saying anything at all, because whenever I speak, it almost always hurts someone or makes them hate me.

My interpersonal skills have made me so many friends: the entire protectorate hates me and wants me dead. They fear my abilities and have sent some of the most powerful parahumans in the world, including members of the Triumvirate, after me. I've been here three weeks and I already have a kill order. The only person even remotely sympathetic to me is a fellow case 53 I saved from some jumpy cops, but I can't spend too long near them, because they need their powers to stay alive.

I live on the streets, surviving via superspeed pickpocketing. And worst of all - Jack Slash keeps calling me. I wish I was fucking dead.
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>>50153210
Looked it up. First off it sounds like a total crapshoot in what you get, and even the good options don't warrant a price 1000 above a transfusion. Not to mention it makes you "evil" and it can't be fixed. The main character "guts" kills a ton of them and frankly his abilities are not that much above human baseline (haven't read the manga just going of some wiki info). I would expect any highclass Nisetic traveler to be able to reach his level with a bit of effort. And of course the biggest thing is that the Travelers have access to an entire multiverse of possibilities for empowerment and the cost benefit seems really bad.

I would much rather go to Bio and say "make me a spess mareen", than become some kind of demon that will go to collective unconsciousness hell when I die.
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>>50152955
>Noikari, Red, Male
>Ryuketsu
>Perks
-Fleet
-Experienced
>Classes
-Strategist
-Fleshwarper
>Blessings
-Divine Speed
-Multiply
>Army
-Fleshwarpers x30
-Reclamationists x30
-Diversionists x20
-Artillery x20
>Allies
-Zzvt'va
-Valentina Stefoniou

Against an infectious foe, it is better not to rely on throwing bodies at them. My Fleshwarpers will take acceptable sacrifices of local wildlife or livestock and transform them into impervious horrors, then immediately sever their lives to prevent the horrors from being infected. Then our Reclamationists raise the horrors as undead, immune to the infection.

The Fleshwarpers themselves kill without bloodshed, meaning less chance of becoming infected. Our Artillery provides sniper fire against key targets such as enemy harriers, and our Diversionists make up for a lack of numbers by confusing the enemy with phantom troops.

My clones zip across the battlefield, reducing foes to quivering gelatin as they pass, and should they die Valentina can patch me right back up with no loss. I manage troop movements and vision from my command center.

And then I will make beautiful half-breed children with my bee-wife.
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>>50154146
The powers arent random, they are a reflection of that individual.

This is basically a way to write in whatever powers or abilities you want.

You're basically a daemon prince at this point but bonded to the material plane instead of the warp

>I would expect any highclass Nisetic traveler to be able to reach his level with a bit of effort.
>i would much rather go to Bio and say "make me a spess mareen"

Kek. OK.

If you don't want take that option it's fine but let's not pretend that option that costs 3000 credits isn't going to give you an absurd power boost
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>>50153210
>Another couldnt die unless his head was cut off
Well fuck, nobody's ever done that before.
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>>50153210
that's what showed up when I googled it, but it didn't seem to justify the cost or fit the description.
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>>50153279
>You dont have to kill them. If something else kills all of them you will become a Demiurge.
What happens if a foreign Demiurge collects all the Incarnates in one place, then kills them all at the exact same second?
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>>50153694
There's no reason why you couldn't (read: this is basically mandatory) go to foreign universes and make pacts with other Incarnates: If you help me kill my guys, I'll help you with yours. There are many ways you could use such a pact: you could focus on just one of the members, get them to godhood and then just steam roll the other Incarnates. Then repeat the process but with an increasing number of Demiurges.
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>>50152493
What's Terra D1236 referencing?
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>>50152362
Does anybody have the latest version of No John You are the Demons? Can't seem to find it.
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>>50153595
>woven makes you a god
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>>50153595
Woven kills you.
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>>50154984

You're a big guy.
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>>50153255
>Kid Win Mode
>Self-Insert
>Complications
-Asimov 2 (cannot rescind on a deal)
-Case 53 2 (huge devil horns, flaming halo, tail, red skin, think Hellboy without getting swole)
-Enemy 2 (Protectorate, because I don't discriminate with who I work with)
-Enemy 1 (Merchants, never liked drug dealers)
-Enemy 1 (Coil, for being a hole in his power)
-Enemy 1 (Haven, who think I'm actually the devil)
>Perks
-Mental Fortress
-Temporal Ghost
>Powers
-Major Stranger
-Major Thinker
-Minor Brute

I offer answers to life's questions, solutions to life's problems. Not for free, of course, and I only take cases that interest me.
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>>50152955
I like it but how about changing knights gift? A shield kind of locks them into that choice, stopping them from using a 2-handed weapon. How about the gift is some sort of armor, or something that keeps your weapons and armors in pristine condition?
I like the oc anyway

Noikari (Red)
Ryuketsu

Experienced
Fleet

Knight
Harrier

Regeneration
Skilled

Foot Soldier x5 (500)
Bowmen x5 (500)
Knight x10 (100)
Artillery x10 (100)
Strategist x5 (5)
Harrier x10 (100)
Fleshweaver x20 (40)
Cavalry x5 (150)
Blade Dancer x5 (150)
Reclamationists x10 (10)
Diversionist x5 (25)
Assassin x5 (15)

Set up my army into 5 units, with every unit being
Foot Soldier (100)
Bowmen (100)
Knight (20)
Artillery (20)
Strategist (1)
Harrier (20)
Fleshweaver (8)
Cavalry (30)
Blade Dancer (30)
Reclamationists (2)
Diversionist (5)

Assassins are for different missions.
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>>50153050
>>50153212
>>50153519
see
>>50154957
if you can
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>>50155326
sheeeit forgot allies

Inugami Taikan
>noikari bro
Tegyd Erdudvyl
>magical waifu
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>>50153130
Operation: 2 Comfy Too: Electric Boogaloo is a go, gentlemen.

Log Cabin
Power Gem

Auto-/ck/
Jam Session
200% Comfy
PaymenPiisii
The Rest
Stronk Gear
Fully Loaded
/diy/ zone
FUCKING NERDS
Ocean Man
Thrill Ride
Aesthetics

Companions Purchased

Redesign
Lasting Effects
Reality Convert
Last Resort
Never Let Go
2 Birds, 1 Soul

2 Instances of Min-Max to get the points for companions.

I'm a little miffed that I had to miss out on gravity powers, a L-Lewd room, AI bots, understanding buddies, music and lighting, but if I really REALLY feel bad about it, I can eat a shotgun shell from my armory and re-do the whole thing.
Either way, I can grab my buddies and my wife whenever it's time to chill, and just go have fun. If no one's down for some shit when I am, I can split myself up and have some crazy /tg/, /v/, /k/, /diy/ or /mu/ times with a couple knuckleheads that could probably figure out what my game plan is for this game, project, or jam session.

I was born too early for an AI world where this is possible. ;_;7
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>>50153423
Drink Blue, drestroy green, save red.

Obtain wizard powers.
Git gud.
Hand off the red drink to a non-disciple that does some seriously heroic or helpful shit.
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>>50154519
I am not pretending that it does not give a power boost. But all things considered I don't think it is worth 3000 credits compared to say paying 2000 to become an actual minor God or the terminator.

>>material plane instead of the warp
That is a very bad deal long term. The amount of opportunities closed off to a traveler that goes this route is not worth it. Granted the boost may be larger initially.

I won't argue too much about the power level of a male manga/anime protag, except to say that all travelers already have the kernel of determination/conviction/will that is the true power of such characters. Would it be unfair to assume Guts does a lot of yelling? The point is he is able to fight these things as a human.
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>>50152493
Alright I finished reading it.
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>>50155515
>that all travelers already have the kernel of determination/conviction/will that is the true power of such characters.

I am pretty sure a good portion of travelers are also motivated by insanity.
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>>50155632
Oh, so the other great source of power in anime.
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>>50155650
And in real life!
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>>50152493
>Also does anyone know what a fucking judgment egg is?

The only time I ever saw it mentioned was Sunless Sea. It was a special kind of soul you could get, the description said something about the spore of an elder god or some shit.

If I recall correctly, you needed one for a few endgame quests. Like one for some kind of eldritch cannon, another to escape from an ice citadel that made you face all the terrors of the world.
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>>50155711
I really wish I knew what the "transformation" was.
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>>50155515
>that is a very bad deal long term. The amount of opportunities closed off to a traveler that goes this route is not worth it. Granted the boost may be larger initially.

Why would it be closed off to you? I only meant that you can stay indefinitely on the material plane as opposed to various entities that can only access the physical world under special conditions

As for the rest, you can easily infer that if an infusion is 2000 cr and the shards cost 3000, then the later is the more powerful option by a large margin. Also, the shards are essentially power amplifiers, so a more powerful individual would in turn become a more powerful demon

I'm not going to argue power levels either since this is also speculative, but to put it in context individuals in Warhammer have killed daemon princes and avatars of Khaine. That dosent mean they suck.

Really though if you think an infusion or bio/cybernetics is a better fit for your character though it's all good.
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>>50152493
Anyone know what the Token of the Dawn is?
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>>50154804
The new Five Nights at Freddy's cartoon.
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>>50154804
Gravity Falls, I think?
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>>50152493
So can we agree this is the most 'shit's about to break the fuck down' update thus far?

Those paths at the end, even if you don't take any red point buys shit is mega fucked.
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>>50155843
I'm not sure. You use it in a room of pure darkness to brighten it. I'll see if I can find the description the game gives you if you use it.

>Birth?

>The Egg cracks. The dark withers. For a moment, you see a reflection in the Frostfound wall - a shining shape of many limbs, crowned with law and masked with light, a seed-fragment of a greater whole. YES, the voice you heard intones. YES.

>The reflection is gone, and so is the Egg. You are alone in an empty cell of softly glowing ice.

Not very helpful, but nothing in SS is straightforward.
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>>50155927
I'm looking forward to A Champion in the Flesh, Strike Down the Horns and That Rare Frown.

I really find it interesting that the anti-Gadraki coalition decided to ignore the Fighter you, while Gadraki himself is requesting a parley. Like this shit is really strange.
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>>50155881
That is what we are really arguing about is the price. It might be worth it but I do feel there is already a steep price inherent in the choice that HL is not considering. Of course many players don't care about such costs anyway. Being stuck to the physical (and a tainted humanity) is quite a price IMO.

>Also, the shards are essentially power amplifiers, so a more powerful >individual would in turn become a more powerful demon

That could be what makes it worth it I guess.

I didn't make the space marine comparison on accident. I know a daemon prince is better than one, while in raw power a apostle is perhaps better than Guts. Thing is Guts seems to have killed a lot of them.
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>>50155914
The summer mission is what gave it away for me. Also triangles have 3 sides and 3 angles hence 3 in 3. Have fun fighting Bill travelers.
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>>50156002
> TFW Gadraki turns out to be a cool guy who's just trying to keep things quiet for Igra.
> TFW He takes you out for pizza to discuss postponing until Duwall comes back.
The Chain boxes are the neatest shit so far.
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>>50155393
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>>50156035
I haven't really read Berserk, but I could have sworn Guts had a Behlit too, based on the picture. Or does that not affect him?
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>>50156002
That seriously intrigued me as well. It shows that the conspiracy could be two pronged. I really did just think it was Igra but the opposition may have a dark agenda as well.
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>>50156080
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>>50156075
He did not use it according to the wiki.

Bad guy did and became a god or something.
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>>50156059
It seems obvious that he may be choosing us as his successor in opposition to the other group. That he would give a fledgling that chance is disconcerting because it means he does not trust established people.
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>>50155949
>not "choose your own bizarre adventure"
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>>50152493
Question for highlander, how many user created characters are going to be put into the cyoa. Like are you just going to put a few through the ranks like before, or are you just gonna make a Mage pdf as a testament to a few years work.
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>>50156146
*massive
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>>50156094
Hmm... I guess Highlander will have to divulge a bit more about it then. I know they accept a lot, but personifications of evil might be pushing it a little.
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>>50156161
I should mention that that one was "special" most just turn you into a demon.
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>>50156117
Could it be, assuming Igra is corrupted, that Gadraki has either had a falling out with Igra? Or perhaps those meetings between them haven't been buddy-buddy talks.
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>>50156075
Guts COULD have used a Behelit, but he never did, and ever since getting the Brand of the Sacrifice, he is no longer able to. Not that he would knowing how they work.
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>>50153255
>Game Mode
Self-Insert
>Difficulty
Kid Win Mode
>Minor Powers
Brute
Mover
Trump
>Major
Trump
>Perks
Power Immunity
Temporal Ghost
Mental Fortress
>Complications
Asimov (3): I must save innocent bystanders from cape & endbringer attacks.
Case 53 (2): I look like a tentacle rape monster
Enemy (2): Jack Slash and the Slaughterhouse Nine want to recruit me and have me act like an archetypal tentacle monster.
Enemy (3): Endbringers seem to target me once I join the battle. This is good for civilians to escape while I distract them but not good for me.
Shard Influence (-1): I don't know why but I feel like I'm being guided into events against my control every once in a while. I always kick myself in hindsight but I just don't know why I act like this sometimes.

Traditional style superhero that speaks just like a golden age cape from the comic books. I really want to be the best I can be for the Protectorate and use my powers for the best. It's just that my appearance makes people think otherwise.

"Citizens of Seattle have no fear for... Wait I'm not an endbringer. People stay calm I'm here to help against the..."

Everyone panics and runs away from him except the villains who turn and stare at me in weird mix of revulsion and anticipation.

"Well at least the civilians are safe. Now prepare for punishment you dastardly villains."
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>>50156212
>>Not that he would knowing how they work.
That's my issue with the price is it only considers the power we get. Of course it may be our punishment for power-gaming without regards to anything else. The wiki said that when apostles die their spirit goes to the abyss where the evil godhand is. NO THANK YOU.
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>>50156198
I love how we all pretty much agree Igra is corrupted.
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>>50156117
you can only replace him if you beat him in a fight, though. That's why he's usually in hiding.
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>>50156271
Actually, I'm more leaning towards Igra being innocent and stressed the fuck out. I'm only entertaining the idea, without accepting it yet.
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>>50156271
I think Highlander has hinted that Igra isn't really so bad. He might just be rationalizing, but he thinks his holding onto power is for the best interests of the Travellers.
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>>50153904
I'm not exactly sure what you are talking about but I also require yanderes.
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>>50156285
Simply giving us the chance is tantamount to an appointment given the circumstances. He may not let us win (otherwise how would he know we are worthy), but giving a particular person a shot at the title means he would prefer them over others.
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>>50156257
I'm pretty sure everyone in Berserk goes there, actually
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>>50156294
>>50156295
Maybe. He could be so far trapped in his own bureaucracy he does not see that his increasingly authoritarian policies are hurting his cause.
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>>50156257
Apostles also lose their humanity entirely and become rape monsters.
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>>50156346
Really? Well that is stupid. How is Guts supposed to even have a chance of winning then? I do hope the answer is not kill the afterlife/god.
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>>50156295
I mean, it's not really a hint. That's what his description literally says.
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>>50153595
>you will lose yourself
Unless you believe God is dead, then you don't become God.
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>>50156379
Guts doesn't even know about the Idea of Evil. He just wants to kill Griffith for killing all of their friends and raping his girlfriend into a retard.
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>>50156354
Pretty standard fair it seems. I would tell travelers (even the evil ones) to spend their credits on more no govnas dollas myself.
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>>50156379
Japan really likes god-killing for some reason.

>>50156350
That's likely. And hell, if we want to assume his complete innocence, what are the chances that Igra, being neck-deep in shit involving Duwall and Tildras, is keeping full tabs on his associates under him? It would only take one or two people in high places corrupted to slowly warp things to hurt the Travellers and blame everything on Igra.
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>>50156379
Berserk is not a nice place, anon
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>>50156412
But we do. I guess it is ultimately one of those downer manga's.
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>>50156418
So why is it such a popular/famous manga/anime? I don't want puppies and rainbows but come on.
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>>50156462
It's an anime that people like because they like to see Guts turn into a raging madman. Also the art of the manga is fucking fantastic. The setting is bleak as fuck. Everyone's fucked. Everything's fucked.
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>>50156462
Because its hack and slash power fantasy done right.
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>>50156486
>>50156526
So top tier violence porn. Got it.
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>>50156462
Personally, I love the art style, and the over all quality of the art. The way that fight scenes flow and watching Guts just become an avatar of rage and violence is great too. I also just find the world to be interesting, if bleak as fuck. And I really want to see him succeed. Though I have already accepted that Miura will croak before we even approach a conclusion to this.
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>>50152362
>Sand
>Woven

My life for an entire universe? That's a fucking rad death. I'm in.
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>>50156598
At least they aren't on the boat anymore.
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>>50156618
Suicidal.
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>>50156462
Becuase not only was it well done, it (was) genre subverting.

Even supposedly serious/action oriented stuff has to have large injections of "lol so kawaii" bs thrown in at random intervals. (I'm looking at you Hellsing OVA)
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>>50155945
I appreciate the actual dialog even if it is vague.
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>>50156706
Stop being an autistic fuckhead whenever someone picks woven.

>>50156722
I still groan at those parts. They're not that funny and get in the way of my vampire murder porn.
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>>50153279
Here's a few suggestions.

Andrew Jackson
Benjamin Franklin
Abraham Lincoln
Theodore Roosevelt
General George S. Patton, Jr.
Leonardo DaVinci
Nikola Tesla
Alexander the Great
Jesus
Plato
Aristotle
Genghis Khan
Robert E. Lee
Michelangelo
Julius Caeser
Confucius
Crazy Horse
Sun Tzu
Rasputin
Ivan the Terrible
Emperor Nero
Caligula
Nefertiti
Cleopatra
King Tut
Blackbeard
William Wallace
Hammurabi
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>>50153637
likeable
lovely dreams

>>50151822
*Hyun-ae > *Mute
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>>50156632
People have died waiting for Guts to get off the boat.

RIP
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>>50156080
>>50156090

Lets give it a try:

Normal Difficulty: +0 to start
Aging: Normal (I'd take option 2 but I'm unsure how it'd work with permanent transformation.)

Transformation: Witches Curse Permanent (All dose points on page 2)

Attributes
Body: Average, Girly, Oppai, Pettie, female. (-8)
Strength: 1, Intellect: 2, Wisdom: 4 (-16)
Exotic eyes, Charm, Fast Learner, High Metabolism, Energetic, Exotic Hair, Exotic Eyes (-17)
Magical Girl (-8)

Parents:
Witch and Professor (An interesting pair and good parents I hope.) (+35)
Magic Hands (+6)

Peers:
Apprentice and bookworm siblings (-2)
Rich Brat friend (-4)
Goth, Artist, Socialite, Demure, Nerd aquantances (-5)

House
Rural, Simple Bedroom, Hot Spring, Enchant (-17)

School
Arcane Academy (0)

Clothes
School uniform, Cute Wardrobe, Transformation Sequence (0)

Food:
Home cooking, Pre Packaged (0)

Hobbies
Literature, Recreation, Parental lock (-1)

Misc:
Fortune, Genre Shift (0)

Routines - None

Confiscate I and III (+8)
Spanking II (+5)
Mouthsoaping (+WHARRGARBL)
Pacifier II(+5)
Private Humiliation (+6)
Chaperone (+8)
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>>50152493
Could a K6BD Angel be a Traveller?
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You know, I been rereading the worm cyoas today, and I kinda wish we had got to see Scion in his ultimate form, most of the shards that used to be part of him were fused with hosts, and they were all limited in some massive way.

Scion with all his shards back in prime condition and all limits disabled would be the ultimate antagonist for any cyoa.
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>>50156035
By all means try to get Highlander to come down on the price.

I had to give up my fiery acidic avaricious vampiric rune inscribed double barreled tricked out to hell maxim gun to make my build work.
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>>50156885
What does an avaricious enchantment do?
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>>50156996
According to highlander, super acid
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>>50152918
Azriel
Postpone Marriage just long enough to get my own power
High-class penthouse
Seraphim
Shadow Me
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>>50155949
>first roll for power
>Blade Storm Generation
Hmm, that sounds kinda op. Probably can't choose that
>second roll for power
>Milk manipulation
Can I get something between those, please?
>third roll for power
>cross combat
That just might be crazy enough to work!

[Angel Wish] (cheated a bit. Nightwish's "Wish I had an Angel" doesn't really roll off the tongue)
Power:a
Speed:b
Range:d
Durability:a
Precision:d
Development:c

All that glory of being the main character isn't really for me, though. I look pretty normal, and even though my irl name really could be shortened to Jojo, I'm just a Brojo. But one hell of a Brojo I am!
Sign me up for every 1 buff on the menu, from battle-cries to poses
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>>50157105
Oh yeah, and just so you can see how far Patience has fallen...
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>>50156885
Meh I would never buy it anyway. I was just in awe of the price when I saw it (it is currently the most expensive option in the darn thing), and thought wow this must be amazing. I suppose it is but I certainly don't want it.
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>>50152648
Number in parenthesis is my current points

>Hard(0)
>None

>Keep my own body(20)

>Apartment(10)
>Girly Apartment(12)
>Deluxe Apartment(7)
>4 Deluxe Bedrooms (3)
>Bar to forget our sorrows(2)
>Kitchen(1)
>Deluxe Bathroom/Walk-in Shower to wash away the filth(-1)

>Nude(4)
I'm actually more comfortable being nude than wearing clothes. Thanks neetdom.

>Fresh Food, Large Budget(-6)
>Semen, Sweet(-1)
Good protein source.

>Life Partner(-26)
>NTR(4)
I suppose they will create a person who would be perfect for me and then proceed to destroy her with anal rape and shit. I am wiling to endure watching some random stranger getting fucked in the ass.

>Victor and Lilian(3)
>Crystal, Henry, Tanya, Kylie, John(8)
I'm not sure why some of those neighbors give credits, most sound harmless or even useful. For Steven, fedoras I can stomach, but /pol/ is the deal breaker. John and the two fa/tg/uys should give hilarious Magical Realm hijinks.
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>>50157214

>Stamina Injection(-2)
>Mandatory Injection, Permanence(38)
5+ years of daily masturbation have dulled sex for me. Can't kill what's already dead.

>Yandere Owner(48)
I'm required to take one, and I sort of have a thing for the devoted who swear Absolute Loyalty to me.

>Daily Enema(49)
Anal Hygiene is very important.
>Body Writing(51)
>Milking(54)
This is a punishment? Free daily morning handjob? Seriously? I pretty much already drink my own, reminds me of a milky espresso.
>Vibrators, Everywhere, Implants(74)
Hold on, I'm onto something here.
>Public Humiliation, Sensory Deprivation, Curse(100)
Nothing too bad really. The nightmares might be an interesting change of pace. Do Man boobs count toward Breast Expansion?

>Climax Control. Edging, Manual Control(140)
A lot of points and it counteracts the force stamina drug. What's not to like.

>Pastry Shop, Bartender(150)
/ck/ as fuck.

>Longplay(200)

Time to cash out.
>Android Transformation(35)
>Powers(5)

I suppose Ill round out the HQ with the last points.
>Living Room, Empty Room. Drink Bar(0)

Who wants to come to uncle Robo Anon's
non-sexual funtime mansion? Rent is reasonable, there won't be any rapings(by me at least), you get your own room with shower and a space in the fridge. When we get out this hellhole, we'll have enough power to take over the World.
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>>50155949
>Stand
Double Vision
>Ability
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Holographic_Projection
>Stats
Destructive Power:B
Speed:C
Range:C
Durability/Staying:A
Precision:A
Developmental Potential/Learning:A

Stand User
>Looks
Ripped As Fuck -1
>Story
Villain -4
>Misc.
Do You Even Pose -1
Sharp Dresser -1
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Since The Scientist mentioned a possible future for Necro CYOA, I'm going to repost it. I'm also going to post my Eremite Build with Lady of Pain waifu, since it may be not valid in future editions, altought I don't understand how you guys don't like the hellraiser stuff.
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>>50157374
God:
Atheist (none of the options looked very nice, also, gives more freedom to research)
Race:
Elf (I think that spending a long life might make one more comfortable in seeking the rituals of the Eremite, searching for sensations out of the ordinary)
Country:
Teb’lhr (something near a desert to justify more the mummies, also something with living beings to open the Shmerz Ratsel)
Lair:
Forgotten Laboratory (because I like the Idea o research)
Spells:
Tier 1:
Eremite
Tier 2:
Domum Lacrimas (because it looks like a prerequiste to Eremite, I’m not sure)
Ressurrection (because I can resurrect who I wish and torture until death and repeat the process as well)
Tier 3:
Curse of Chains (some spell to serve as direct offense)
Curse of Suffering
Curse of Deprivation (mostly as a measure against other Eremites).
Tier 4:
Curse of Pain (So I cain use curse of suffering for the well being of those that I wish)
Create Mummy (So I can have minions)
Sand Storm (may be useful in tactics)
Embaling (may be helpful with the mummies)
Items:
Shmerz Ratsel (seems necessary to have one to be Eremite)
Liber Nocromos (why content with the most terrible imaginable horrors, if you can deal with the unimaginable too? Might come handy in dealing with a bigger threat.)
Necromantic Staff (no other item looked more useful in this build)
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>>50156632
The dread pirates will return!!!
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>>50155949
>Stand Name:
Blood Magic (Blood Sugar Sex Magik)
>Roll for Power:
Haemopotent Replication. So I can steal people's blood and use it to replicate their powers, so I guess I'm a sort of mimic/Temporary stand stealing guy.
>Stand Stats:
Destructive Power: E (I don't need much of this since I can steal other stands powers anyway.)
Speed: C+2=A
Range: D+2=B
Durability: C+1=B
Precision: D+1=C
Developmental Potential: C+2=A
>Appearance:
Ripped as Fuck (6)
>Origin:
Brojo (4)
>Misc:
Sharp Dresser
Cool Hair
Animal Mascot
>Animal Mascot Stand:
Snow Manipulation
>Animal Mascot Stand Name:
Cold as Ice
>Animal Mascot Stats:
Destructive Power C+2=A
Speed: D+2=B
Range: C+2=A
Durability: C+2=A
Precision: D
Developmental Potential: E
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>>50155949
Whoever made that should add in Requiem and Awakened options for Stand abilities
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has anyone even made a new build since 1.35
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>>50157403
Clothes:
Mage Clothes (Seems reasonable and an adequate stylistic choice)
Companions:
Nerrit (useful with the mummies, being able to pass as a living person might help in case she needs to convince someone into open the Shmerz Ratsel in case I become trapped again for some reason)
Lady of Pain ( older sexy powerful wise mysterious woman mentor that probably is into BDSM but it’s not completely crazy like Teremum, great tier waifu).

Minions:
1xScholar (free)
2xSadikth (4) (more for convenience than anything else)
1xAlchemist(7) (assistant)
2xKhri-Habi(13) (seeking people for “my” religion)
1xAccopliance(16) (someone to act in towns if Nerrit is unable to).
1xDisgraced guard (20) (someone to protect the others while I’m out)
1xTurned Huntress (26) (keep control of the place while I’m out)
25xSlaves (31) (all other purposes).
11xAkert(75) (infantry)
Enemies:
Fair one Huntress (10)
Fabled Hero (11)
Solaris Paladin (18)
Fire Mage (25)
Mostly because I want to corrupt them to serve me, they seem like they could be nice minions, specially Fair one Huntress.
Amenthes(35) (because I took Nerrit as a companion, and seems to make sense story-wise)
Khepri-la(45) (because it looks interesting, specially the bit about the only weakness being as old as land itself)
Being able to command life and death, pleasure and pain to whom I wish and have immortality and great waifu, how people dislike the hellraiser stuff? The fact that you can instigate suffering or pleasure remember me more of the line “Demons to some, Angels to others”.
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>>50157435
>Requiem
Fucks everything up the ass

>Awakened
Fucks everything even harder
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>>50157442
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>>50152493
What Tech Level would a roughly normal person have, in a developed nation?
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>>50157374
>Since The Scientist mentioned a possible future for Necro CYOA
It's happening.

Also, it's going to be a new version (3) with a new aesthetic, hopefully one that's better.
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>>50157552
Mid for basic level understanding (IE high school equivalent), High for those who are in specialized fields.
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>>50157555
>it's happening
Let the flesh weaving commence
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>>50152493
What exactly is Material Proficiency for? Is it for something like Steam, as in anything related to Steam you are good at (stacking with like Steam Adept). Or is it something like Iron, giving you greater skill with things that are made partially of iron?
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>>50157555
I'm more excited than if Valve announced HL3
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>>50157639
Protip: i work at valve as the lead creative director, and HL3 is being made after i get this done.
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>>50155393
A
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>>50157605
I do believe it is mostly in concerns to crafting materials but I can't say for sure.
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>>50157158
The addition of cuddling is nice. The rest isn't though.
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>>50155949
Lust For Life
Mental Assimilation
Like >>50157424 but edgier, being able to trap the minds of others in a maze of illusions and summon their Personas as I see fit. Using the memory/powers of someone for too long could start to weaken my own ego and make us act more like the person I summoned. I'm the fractured identity of the modern bourgeois world.

>Power
D+2+1=A
>Speed(need to press the gun to my head to change the PERSONA!)
E+1=D
>Range
D+1+1=B
>Durability
C+2=A
>Precision
C+1=B
>Potential
C+2=A
>Ripped as Fuck
>Villain
>Cool Hair
>BattleCry(See pic related)
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>>50157073
I remember this series from before the author was arrested for tax evasion

>Class
Swashbuckler
>Race
Wolf Hair
>Production Class
Woodcrafter
>Roleplaying Class
Pathfinder

Guy roleplaying as a stereotypical wild west movie native american complete with Tomahawks to throw at opponents
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>>50157555
I am tumescent with anticipation.
Have a build.

>>50157374
>>50157403
>>50157442
>>50157468
>God:
None
inb4 Fedora
>Race:
Human
>Country:
Teb'Ris
>Lair:
Serene Village
These people seem nice.
>Spellbook:
Promræn Caro
Trust me, I'm a doctor.
>Spells:
>T4:
Gentle Repose
Cure Disease
Cure Injury
Reinforcement
>T3:
Warp Flesh
Alter Appearance
Fleshpoint
>T2:
Mass Growth
Create Fleshpoint
Craft Plague
>T1:
Potion of Khizaz
>Items:
Small Fortune
Mark of Zatai
>Clothes:
Mage Clothes (Promræn Caro)
>Companions:
Studious/Socialite minmaxing to trade 1 item for 1 spell
Sarah
Morgan
>Minions:
-4 Merchant
-5 Evdokiya
-3 Scholar x2 (1 free)
-9 Alchemist x3
-6 Soldiers x2
I'm just a druid and a healer, no need to worry about me. I just wanna help people. Making monsters is boring. Making Ubermenschen is where it's at.
We're just gonna be doing a lot of non-intrusive research. Sure, it's time consuming, and inefficient, but I have forever. In theory. My Soldiers will help guard the little village, while Evdokiya will bring in extra income and food through hunting.

Maybe I'll catch a few critters live and 'enhance' them with Reinforcement and Craft Plague. Give Evdokiya a challenge. She seems like the type to enjoy it.

Oh, I'm also gonna set up a set of Fleshpoints, for easier trade.
We can take others with us when we use a Fleshpoint, right?
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>>50157456
Since the cyoa uses the superpower wiki for getting powers I think Awakened could allow you to pick one of the powers associated with your Stand power and Requiem would allow you to take the power that yours is a Sub-Power of.

For example lets use this guy >>50157313 his Requiem ability would be http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Illusion_Manipulation
Going from creating an illusory construct or two to creating all sorts of seemingly real illusions
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>>50153265
Uuugh. I don't mind the sacrilege, but I do mind the absolute retardation. This is like creating a zen CYOA where you replace the Buddha with Goku. It just is cringeworthy.

>Dohohoh
>Honey
>Rawr

Fuck. I mad.
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>>50157374
>God
Child
>Race
Kobold (Gonna litterally be a Kobold)
>Country
The Untamed lands
>Lair
Cliffside Settlement (Chill with other Kobolds)
>Spells
Tier: 1
Mummification (Kobold Veteran, you have served me long and well my friend)
Tier :2
Resurrection (Hello again my old friend)
Regeneration (Retire my kobold vet buddy and begin on my own)
Tier 3:
Shmerz Ratzel (Ancient puzzle box, don't mind if I do)
Curse of chains (Gotta have that sand metal asthetic lel)
Curse of Suffering (Pain unyielding)
Tier 4:
Curse of Ageing (Gotta play the long game)
Curse of Enfeeblement (Really feeling old Ay?)
Create Mummy (If my old buddy dies maybe he'll come serve me again in the near future)
Embalming (Just make those mummies better))
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>>50157853
I like these CYOAs. Here's a few critiques:
>Intro paragraph: Change "half your payout to 0" to "reduce your payout to 0"
>Needs 1-2 more options per category to be more immersive (there's many levels in between a lot of these but 1-2 would be fine)
>Possibly reduce the amount of money for the bonus because everyone who isn't retarded is going to go for 45 points and 5 million dollars given that most people can't conceptualize the difference between 5 and 10 million.
>Under "Streaming" : Rephrase so it makes sense
>Possible extended life option given that you're throwing 10 years of your own with nothing to show for it

Other than that, I like it! Keep up the good work anon
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>>50152493
Is it possible to sell a skill that comes with an origin?
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>>50157820
>Items
Necromantic Staff
Liber Necromos
Xanthuun Vat
>Clothes
Mage Clothes (Why Not?)
>Companions
Jinpen (Kobold Theme Ayy))
Kobold Maid (Welp, almost picked Lobsang, but she seems a little more useful, Flavour text also got me)
>Minions
-2 Kobold Bards
-10 Kobold Warriors
-5 Kobold Veterans

Be a kobold that free's all the kobold's from dark elf slavery, in the end companions have a choice to leave and live on once mummification kicks in for myself, or server forever longer.
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>>50157853
>>50157905
I should make a build as long as I'm giving out criticism.

>45 points for 5 million

>Gourmet food - 9
>Loli - 7
>Desktop - 9
>Library - 4
>Skylight and Scope - 2
>Birth control - 1
>Television and Movies - 6
>Spa - 6 points
>Total: 44 points

If I am going to throw away a decade of my life for nothing I will do it with as much luxury as possible.
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>>50157853
Black text on deep purple makes me want to hurt you. Nice to see modern variations on The Room CYOA.

5 million, what >>50157853 said.

Full Kitchen(6)
Hipster girl(5)
Surround System+Radio(6)
Computer(9)
Garden(2)
Skylight(2)
Birth Control+MedCare(4)
Unlimited Drugs(10)
I guess weed, I have one point left regardless.

Mindbreak hipster girl with /b/ fap threads/drugs and aphrodisiacs. I like cooking so that's no biggie.
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>>50153171
>>50153265
>posting outdated versions
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>>50157961
There are literally two differences between what you posted and what I posted.
1) Most obviously, yours has both in one image. Though I prefer them separate, as they are technically part of different cyoas
2) At the end of Big D's kink segment, where she says she hasn't had sex in a long time. The one I posted has an extra space before the last long, placing it about 3 more pixels to the right
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>>50157941
>>50157957
Alright, taking notes
I might make some changes
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When is the Traveller submitted builds odd supposed to be out?
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>>50157853
>Companions (Required)
'no'
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>>50153255
God, this is imbalanced as fuck.

Major powers
Mover - 9-10 rated power. What the major powers ought to be.
Shaker - I rate it 10+. One of the better powers but still not ridiculous.
Brute - 9 rating. Reasonable.
Breaker - 7, MAYBE 8 rating. Suffers from a lack of control. Decidedly inferior.
Master - 7-8 rating. Basically just a buffed Crusader. Again, inferior.
Tinker - 6-7 rating. I remember people getting a bit excited about this when it first came out but, frankly, it's a bit shit. You're basically Armsmaster minus the innovative nanothorn type bs.
Blaster - 6 rating. Literally no good reason to ever take this.
Thinker - 12+ rating. Welcome to proper OP territory. You'd have to be retarded not to be able to fix the worm-verse with this alone. Shit, even a 1 point version of this is hella op.
Striker - 8 rating. Underwhelming. Depending on the extent of automation (can it be used to deflect bullets and such?) rating might go down. Not the worst on the list but not good either.
Changer - 10+ rating. See Shaker entry. The "not limited by biomass" aspect is what makes this good. Fleshscapes ahoy.
Trump - 12+ rating. Another foray into OP land. Even the one point version of this can effortlessly solve most of the wormverse's issues. Includes many other major powers on the list. Overall ridiculous.
Stranger - 7-8 rating. Only thing that makes it really worthwhile is the Thinker immunity.

Minor powers are severely underpowered compared to major ones.

Perks are downright retarded. You can either pay 6 points to get the standard Trump/Master/Precog immunities or you can buy the Major Thinker or Trump power for 2 points and get the perks for free. I wonder what I'm gonna do.

I appreciate the fact that the author tried to make this less curbstompingly OP than the previous Worm Cyoas. It's just that they kinda failed.
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>>50157158
>>50157718
That's the only real change though. That and "enjoys purging limbo filth" but I don't see why anyone would hold that against her. Also retainer changed from "carry stuff" to "help fight".

Some of the other stuff was reworded a bit but still basically says the same thing
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>>50158159
Why are you so buttblasted by this old, janky cyoa?

Besides, Worm is not a setting that is easily depicted through a cyoa. It's too… subtle. The powers are, anyway.
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>>50157663
>>50157853
*Gourmet Food (9)
*Loli (7)
Mandy Muse (10)
Old Radio (2)
*Surround Sound System (4)
All Tv Shows and Movies (6)
*Desktop (9)
*Jacuzzi and Sauna (3)
*Library (4)
Workout Room (5)
Themed Party (7)
Unlimited booze and drugs (10)
*Birth Control (1)
*Medical Care (3)
Stuff with an asterisk is what I'd take if I didn't have the x2 from the meta CYOA.

>>50157905
>because everyone who isn't retarded is going to go for 45 points and 5 million dollars given that most people can't conceptualize the difference between 5 and 10 million.
What the fuck am I reading

I'm going to go for the maximum bonus every time. In this particular case +5 points isn't worth halving the payout, especially when you start with 40.

The only critiques I have is the fact that games which require Internet (like MMOs) are out, and the fact that companions are "required".
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>>50158202
I am Autismo, the Great and Powerful.

Honestly, I'm just a tiny bit frustrated because I feel it had potential.
I dunno, thought I'd give it a brief review.
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>>50155949
>Name
Devil's Right Hand
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U72ZRh4W8OU
>Power
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Caustic_Phasing

Basically, touching shit fucks it up and causes it to fucking disintegrate. Not only makes any defense utterly useless, but can also no sell any sort of physical attack that my Stand is fast enough to intercept by utterly annihilating the weapon.

Pic related is how I imagine he'd look.

>Destructive Power
C+1 = B
>Speed
C+2 = A
>Range
D+1 = C
>Durability
D+2 = B
>Precision
E
>Learning
C+2 = A

I need my Stand to be quick, powerful, and cunning to keep me alive since its powers are so offensively biased. Since the power is all based on contact and simply ripping matter to shreds, precision and range are of less concern.

>Fabulous as Fuck
>Woman
>Minor Villain
>Plot Armor x4

I'm gonna be one of those early antagonists who is always beaten by heroes due to some contrived circumstance, until eventually I just give up on the whole evil thing and just become a minor recurring comic relief/fan service character.
Might possibly show up to the final battle on the side of good if the heroes have a good enough argument and enough cash/booze to hold my interest.
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>>50152918
>bath play

Nice. Whoever came up with that is awesome.
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>>50152493
>Name
IT that IS

>Cold Eternal: Woken Elder (Elder Thing Body)

>Falling 3500
>Aberrant Appearance 4250
>Marked+ 5250
>Minor 5750

>Forever Alone * 4 7750
>Destined for Ten Percent Greater Things (50 words, 100 points) 7850
>No Governa's Dolla * 12 3050c, 15 total skills

>Advanced Tech
>Master Ethereal

>Adaptability
>Utilitarian
>Sage
>Scavenger
>Superhuman Body
>Adokori
>Survivor
>Traveller Adept
>Experimental
>Memory
>Horsepower
>Founded in Madness
>Self-Aware
>Stone Soul
>Cheaterman

>Behlit Fragments 50 (Growth)
>Noble Beast Minor 0

>True Travellers (+Biological Adept)
>The Inheritors Association

>Alexis the Watcher

>Glendale: A Great Heaping Mass

IT IS, and IT will BE.

IT is yet nascent, young. But IT grows.

IT sees the worlds, and learns about them.

IT has learned of She who woke IT from ITS slumber.

IT has learned of the Travellers, and of their strange ways.

IT has learned of how reality fractures around it, and of the Things that reach through.

IT has learned of how They reach closer every day, and of where they will try to take IT.

But IT has decided many things as well.

IT has decided that IT will return. This will be so.

IT has decided that IT will grow. This will be so.

IT has decided that IT will not stop; that IT will use what it learns to grow beyond anything IT knows. This will be so.

IT has decided that IT will BE.

But, in the meantime, IT has decided that IT very much enjoys ITS cat.

This is the strongest build I can see (give or take different perk choices and more Destined For... points), and everything really derives from that.
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>>50157853
Getting the full $10 mil, so 40 points.
>Food
Full kitchen (6)
>Companion
Mandy Muse (10)
>Electronics
Old radio (2) & all TV/movies (6)
>Side rooms
Garden (2), Jacuzzi/sauna (3) and the workout room (5)
>Entertainment
Skylight and scope (2)
>Services
Birth control (1) & medical care (3)

See ya in ten years.
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>>50153613
Glad someone liked at least one of my cyoas to repost it.
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>>50152362

Does the text that runs along the left and right edges of the Polydimensional Collapse cyoa translate into anything interesting? Too tired to try and puzzle it out, I'm assuming it's some sort of warning?
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>>50159907
It's a thematically related song translated into some sort of phonetic alphabet.
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>>50157555
Scientist senpai, might we get any promises of ETA?
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>>50157853
Full Kitchen (6)
Mandy (16)
Surround Sound (20)
Library (24)
Workout Room (29)
Skylight (31)
Workshop (36)
Birth Control (37)
Medical Care (40)

I considered the TV and the console, but I decided this is a good chance to make myself not be a lazy pile of crap for ten years. So I'm going to read, get in shape, make things, and fuck Mandy raw.
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>>50157853
>Full Kitchen (36)
>Workout Room (31)
>Jacuzzi and Sauna (29)
>Library (25)
>Garden (23)
>Radio (21)
>Skylight and Scope (19)
>Mandy (9)
>Birth Control (8)
>Spa (2)

That's all I really want or need. Tempted to drop Mandy for the Booze/Drugs since the spa would be getting me laid anyway, but oh well. Why would I ever want to leave this paradise?
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>>50153613
1. Who Needs the Gym?
2. NEET Blessing
3. Just Plain Ol' Luck
4. Chauffeur
5. Subspace House
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>>50160214
Oh shit, I mathed wrong. Full kitchen is 6 points, not 4. Seeing as how I had 2 leftover anyway, it still works out
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>>50153637
"Home Teleport" is something I really wish I could do. "Likeable" seems pretty great as well.
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>>50153130

when it comes to True Love can I choose someone who is real but modify their personality or body? also do they retain the same skills, always thought it would be neat to have a waifu to paint models with (pic related)
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>>50160327
In that case, wouldn't it be better to do Custom Character? Keep in mind that with an endless amount of time, your tastes might very well change and it could be beneficial to mix it up
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>>50156059
>TFW He takes you out for pizza

He's a pedo?
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>>50160388

yeah true, good point
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>>50159452
>no technomage
>no aenathari peach

Also, the strongest build would be one that dumps all their resources into allies.
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>>50160632
>Technomage
Point. What perk would you drop for it? I'm leaning towards Traveller Adept right now.

>Aenatheri Peach
Costs more than a perk and Elder Thing Physiology, Biological Adept, and Behlit Fragments give some or all of its benefits. Besides, it'd say if you couldn't find another.

>Implying it can't grow beyond whatever Justice League build you make
But fine, strongest *character*. Any other complaints?
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oh shit it's time for a bad CYOA that'll be dated in about 12 hours
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>>50161533
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Kitchen 6
Hipster girl 11
workout room 15
jacuzzi and sauna 18
birth control 19
medical care 22
all tv and movies 28
Garden+weed 31
skylight 33
Desktop 42
old radio 44

Would still probably kill myself, but hey it's something.
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>>50161550
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>>50157853
Gourmet Food (9)
Loli (16)
Desktop (25)
Library (29)
Workout Room (34)
Skylight (36)
Birth Control (37)
Medical Care (40)

Spend the next ten years with free healthcare, getting /fit/, getting /lit/, feeding, and breeding.

And then I get 10 mil at the end of it all, hell yeah.
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>>50157853
Hi! Anon that made this here.
Since some people are putting some thought into this. I closed a few more options to tempt you guys. And now I'm editing. Will post soon.
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>>50154607
A lot of them were also used together to forge a sword that sliced between dimensions/realities, allowing teletransportantion and possibly murder gods.
Still, a lot of behedilts were used on that, I can't say if the cost is worth it.
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>>50152493
still reading through companions, here's some stuff I found before that section:

madalorian full suit -> ‘mandalorian?’
auger -> augur
under-augur -> not sure if supposed to be sub-augur
adokiri -> adokori
You're face and you're body may change -> your, your
The only thing you can't replace with enhance bionics are you're torso and head -> enhanced, your
let anyone with the skill produce all matter of creations -> manner
And if you tell them your donating blood expect them to never leave you the fuck alone. -> you’re
will drive you in all things and you're key motivations shall be this -> your
Negations has been growing more -> negotiations
while remaining to be a key member of the seekers -> remaining a key
Sigma retrieves whatever it is the archivist’s needs -> archivists need
The Fighters are not so much as a single faction as a hundred warbands -> not so much a single
he is often seen in the company of Irga -> Igra
even new members grow quiet accustomed to the nonsensical -> quite
and life easy lives as they ensure the constant flow of goods -> live
Those that deal with the goods that the council may or may not have decided what can and cannot be sold yet. -> idk
Req: Tech-Head. Unformed AI & One organ replacement. -> Free Items: Unformed AI…
Home too many strange and wild beings -> to
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>>50161550
just citizenship will be fine

i hate my country
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>>50161533
>Get out of Jail Free.
I might find a use for it, eventually.
>MAGA Hat
I could use as much motivation I can get my hands on.
>Form of Citrus
Orange is my favorite color.
>Campaign Mug
NO SLEEP IS BEST SLEEP!!
>The Art of the Deal: Book 2
Anything to help me with money would be well appreciated.
>Cold Fusion
UNLIMITED POWER!!!
>Dollar Bill
I'm running out of things I'm interested in.

Major stuff
>The Great Seal
Magic is always well accepted.
>A small Loan
Just going to invest it in some dividend yielding stocks and enjoy my massive wealth.
>MAGAtron
Just incase things go really south.
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>>50161254
>Besides, it'd say if you couldn't find another.
>>Implying it can't grow beyond whatever Justice League build you make
Maybe, but, given enough time, anyone could grow into another Third or Duwall, and find artefacts of immense power.
And despite how much one grows it doesn't seem likely that they'd be able to beat a dozen second generation travellers.

>Point. What perk would you drop for it? I'm leaning towards Traveller Adept right now.
Yeah, I'd also drop Traveller Adept for it.

>Any other complaints?
Sorry, I didn't mean to turn this into a pissing contest.
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>>50161533
Where is the option to kill myself?
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>>50161869
Thank you, could you add some more variety to the companions?
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>>50157853

>all these people not picking loli
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>>50162451
ok you crossed the line pedo
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>>50162522
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>>50157853
>>50161869
Delivering new version.
This time I'm making it a bit harder to choose. Lemme know the answers.
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>>50162535
>Literally no self awareness
wew lad
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>>50162542
>full kitchen 6p
>alone 2p
>sound system 4p
>tv stuff 6p
>desktop 9p
>booze and drugs 10p
>lab research 8p
>total 45p
ez
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>>50162542
Oh god, you son of a bitch. How can I pass up the Fetish Room?!

>Full Kitchen (34)
>Mandy Muse (24)
>Library (20)
>Fetish Room (11)
>Birth Control (10)
>Indoor Pool (4)
>Jacuzzi and Sauna (1)
>Pool Table (0)

Losing the workout room is fine, since swimming is my preferred method of exercise anyway. However, losing the massage really stings. The garden and skylight would have been nice for reading, but oh well. My one fear is that Mandy will be bored as hell and get obnoxious when I need some quiet. At least we'll get great at pool since I had a spare point left.
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>>50162733
Fuck that, you know what? Half my pay out and give me The Spa.

After I masturabte I might change it to Garden and Skylight, but my eternal horniness demands sex massage threesome
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>>50161533
MAGA hat
Backstage pass
Hustler Economics 101
Uncomfortable Compromise
Essense of the Amazon
Dollar Bill
Book of Trump

The Great Seal
Magatron (I've seen those blow up whole planets)
Wall Constructors

I will become cute magical animu girl what can make HUGE money from performing magical services.
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>>50162542
Half the payout, I don't think I could even really use 10 million for anything
45 points
Full Kitchen -6
Puppy -3
Surround Sound -4
Indoor Pool -6
Library -4
Garden +weed -3
Workshop -5
Skylight and Scope -2
Lab research -8
Medical Care -3
Pool Table -1

I'll play with my puppy, grow lots of plants practice cooking and brush up on some new scientific topics.
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>>50162542
Are online multiplayer games available w/ the desktop or console?
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>>50162542
Full Kitchen 6
Alone 2
Aircon 5
All TV 6
Desktop 9 (without internet, I'll need to rely on SP games only, so I have to pick the biggest library).
Jacuzzi 3
Lab Research 8
Pool Table 1 (because I haf one point left)
I'll laze around all day watching anime and playing video games. I'll devote ample time (more than typically required) to cooking and bathing to help stave off boredom. Maybe I'll play a bunch of skill-teaching games and learn somethin' while I'm there. Sure, I'm completely alone. Not like that's a change or anything. Even if I can't leave, at least I wouldn't have to work. It would be more enjoyable than my life at present. When I get out, I can just retire.
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>>50162549

>literally all faggotry
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wanting to fuck kids irl is sick
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>Liking 3dpd.
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>>50162542
Half my payout, so 45 points.
>Birth control (44)
>Medical Care (41)
>Full kitchen (35)
>Hipster (30)
>Desktop (21)
>Workout Room (16)
>Library (12)
>Drugs (2)
>Garden (0)

Honestly sounds way better than my current life. Sleeping with a feminist is ez peasy. Gaming, working out, reading, gardening, and doing drugs will give me more than enough to do.
Plus I'll still get out with 5million
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>>50162994
>Trying to reason with degenerates
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>>50152986
If I might suggest, maybe have more varied companions in the future, only one knight and reclamationist really
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>>50163032
Maybe just maybe he can be saved!
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>>50163080

>implying little girls aren't miracles of the universe
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>>50162451
You have actually to take care of her, not just scar her with unconsensual sex
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>>50152493
>>50162168
Ultimate ringleader build ft. all second gen allies.
I'm gonna befriend the shit out of you.

Origin: Female, The Now; Watcher
Traits: Low-Tech, Common-Ether, Adaptability, Tactician, Sage, Lucky, Organizer, Cheaterman, Shining Soul
Armour: Traveller's Leathers
Weapons: Yuta Brace
Knick-Knacks: 'Pegs', Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Aenathari Peach
Little Things...: Waste of Skin x3, Notably Charitable x4, Minor, Aquarius Complex, Anon's Bizarre Adventure, Wanting Desire
Faction: The Hearthkeepers: Committee of Festival’s and Needs
Covenant: The Church of our Lady, Destroyer of Despair
Allies: Sir Richard Francis Burton, Marco 'Fulcanelli', Lia Fial, Cdlyfwylch, Lethice, Yarihei Neinta, 'Sam', 'Oghuz', Disurial of Chandesh, Shoth-uragamo'to, Rem-yurgardich'to, Zachariah Markarov
Home district: Tamit – Why wander far?
Hubworld: Ogulamacadi-H121 ‘Lurl’– A Universe Bright and Strange: Amidst the Spess Refuges
Panic Button: The Veteran
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>>50163169

I can barely take care of myself, let alone anyone else.
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>>50163175
And that's it, same for me
I'd like to learn to cook, so the hipster girl can fuck off and do her stuff while i do mine
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>>50163105
we all know what you really like...
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>>50163209

Eh, I don't really care about Bill Cosby either way.

Little girls on the other hand...
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>>50163205

You're better off just picking alone.
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>>50161533
MAGA hat
Backstage pass
Campaign mug
Essence of the Amazon
The art of the deal: Book 2
Cold fusion
Dollar bill

The Great Seal
Magatron
National treasure
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>>50162542
Healthy Food (5)
Loli (7)
Surround Sound System (4)
Desktop (9)
Jacuzzi and Sauna (3)
Birth Control (1)
Medical Care (3)
Lab Research (8)
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>>50157853
40
Fast food with CFA 35
Loli 28
Comp 19
Garden (who needs weed when you have mushrooms?) 17
Libary 13
Med care 10
Streaming 0

It's not perfect, but with this most needs are met. Can't wait to be the star of "Anon presents X book of the week with loli co-star."
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>>50161533

Binders full of women (fucking wafiu option.)
Cold fusion
ASS TO MARS

Good cyoa though
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>>50155949
Stand:
>"Just What I Needed" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z5-rdr0qhWk
Power:
>Object Creation http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Object_Creation
Stats:
>Destructive Power: B
>Speed: C
>Range: B
>Durability: C
>Precision: B
>Developmental Potential: B
Bizarre Points:
>Fabulous as Fuck
>Bro-Jo
>Sharp Dresser
>Do You Even Pose?
>Plot Armor (x3)
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>>50162542
40 points
>Food
Peanut Butter Sandwiches Freebie
Full Kitchen 34 points left
>Companions
Doggo 31 points left
>Electronics
Surround Sound System 27 points left
>Side Rooms
Library 23 points left
Workout Room 18 points left
>Entertainment
Skylight and Scope 16 points left
>Services
Medical Care 13 points left
SPA 8 points left
Lab Research 0 points

I'll treat it like the ultimate cleanse, doggo and weekly SPA visit keeps me from going stir crazy and without the distractions of video games and mass media I can just grow as a person through reading and excercise.
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>>50163105
Just curious, did you vote for Hillary?
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>>50164274

No.

What are you trying to say?
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>>50152648
I have some questions about this CYOA. The whole first few pages are confusing as hell. If I choose to take body modification, am I allowed to select any of the stuff on the chart below the instructions? Does 'adding breasts' add new pairs of breasts, or does it increase the starting size of my breasts? And what about the 'add dick' option? Does it add a dick, or make the starting size of my dick bigger? If I'm not already a girl, do I need to pick the 'add breasts' option?

Christ almighty, I wish this was just explained in the PDF.
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>>50164344
Yes, you choose any options on the chart that you like.
Adding ___ doesn't grow any existing ones.
No, you don't need to pick "add breasts" if you want to have them, even if you're male.
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>>50164344

Pretty sure the body modification section lets you choose how big your stuff is. It says in the descriptions that you get more of what you have. I have no idea how you managed to miss it.
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>>50164414
>>50164418
Thank you both.

I haven't seen anything that says, or even implies 'you get more of what you have', and I've re-read this like 6 times now looking for it. I'm reading the PDF version that has NSFW images in it. Is that detail omitted in that version for whatever reason? Some mistake? Still can't find it.
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>>50162542
>he took my suggestions for spelling and content and added them
Thanks bro. Feels like I accomplished something

New build (best build):

>45 points for 5 million (who wouldn't take this?)

>Gourmet food - 9
>Loli (who wouldn't given the amount of time you'll be in there for) - 7
>Computer (duh)- 9
>Library (muh learning)- 4
>Birth control (self explanatory, can't have a pregnant girl)- 1
>Lab research (literally anyone with any will to live should be taking this, especially at its really low cost for what it does) - 8
>All TV and Movies (need something to pass the time) - 5
>Pool table(more time passing stuff) - 1

Suggestions:
>Under Ugly Bitch: should be "doesn't know what you are talking about half the time"
>Some way to get internet; I suspect the majority (if not all) anons here want that bad
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>>50161533
>Eternal Debate
Most people have an angel and a devil on their shoulders. As for me, well...

>Get Out Of Jail Free
If I ever end up doing something I'll regret at gunpoint, you know?

>Mariachi
I like these guys, they seem neat.

>Uncomfortable Compromise
I am just picking up a lot of friends here, aren't I?

>Dollar Bill
What am I, a newly-minted Illuminatus?

>Cold Fusion
I'd ask why anyone sent me this, but it might not be a good idea.


Frankly I don't even know if I'm playing this right.
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>>50164598
It's supposed to be 7 smalls and 3 larges but that's loads too much to make for an engaging cyoa so I like your build.
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>>50164573

Page 2, just after body mods, it says pick as many as you wish

Add penis,for example, which means you add another penis on top of the other one, if you picked one during body modification, and it tells you that extra penises start at 5" and all that. Don't know if there's a way to increase the size of extra naughty bits or whatever though.
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>>50164598
Wait, I forgot the major ones.

>>50161562
>THE GREAT SEAL
Who wouldn't say no to free magic powers?

>WALL CONSTRUCTORS
I know a couple guys who know how to program these sorts of things. Oh, the things we'll do.

>DELEGATION
Psychic quest to the noosphere? Where do I sign?
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>>50164612
And to think I hopped back to page three before seeing your post.
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>>50164625
The "extras start at" is actually old stuff left over from when you could gain/lose points by moving around the chart, now you just pick the size you like.
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>>50164625
The "start at ..." part is a remnant from when changing options on the table cost/rewarded points, now you can just pick whatever you want since there's noting like that.
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>>50164653
What's wrong with my post?
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>>50164674
Nothing, just that me going back for the Larges in the light of your statement about that being too much for an engaging CYOA is a bit odd.

Basically I have bad timing.
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>>50152362

Is there any CYOAs in non fantasy medieval times?
Something like Times of Troubles for example?
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>>50153255
Kid win mode
Changer - 2p
Perks
Augmented power - 1p
Complications
Enemy II - -2p
Minor - -1p
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>>50162542
Like the changes, except the Air Conditioning. That's just a dick move.
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>>50162168
>Maybe, but, given enough time, anyone could grow into another Third or Duwall, and find artefacts of immense power.
But not every Traveller starts out as the Captain America of Elder Beings or has that many growth abilities - and both together means IT'd reach that level a lot faster.
>And despite how much one grows, it doesn't seem likely that they'd be able to beat a dozen second generation travellers.
Definitely not at the beginning, but unless they have some fundamental benefit (besides age), a sufficiently determined eldritch being with several dedicated growth powers could probably catch up faster than you think - I'd guess a millennia or two of run-of-the-mill adventures.

Highlander! Wanna weigh in on this? About how strong is >>50159452 (with Technomage) compared to >>50163174 (compared to a 'normal' Traveller) at the start? What about after IT goes to the abyss and back? At their foreseeable peaks? If IT found the Potara earrings? Any other comments?
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>>50153279
Zoroaster/Zarathustra
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>>50165138
There are millions of Travellers, each with access to an infinite multiverse filled with powers, objects, tech and secrets ranging from okay to just plain bullshit tier. No one here is a PC surrounded by brain-dead NPCs. You're a PC surrounded by millions of PCs in love affair with cheating. Options, flexibility and the knack to use them when and where necessary determines who's a badass, not power levels.

Their greatest ennemies are eldritch abominations on steroids for christ's sake!
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>>50165138
>Let's turn this into a dickwaving contest!
Damn it, I hadn't even planned on posting my build, I just couldn't resist after I, halfway through, when looking for character art, realized that I was basically making Ryuugamine Mikado from Durarara!!
Anyway, I'll just point out some of the potential growth of >>50163174 and the cool shit you can get from companions:

>Marco 'Fulcanelli'
>Invented the current travel systems; will teach you time nuances you never dreamed of.

>Lia Fial
>Can tell if you're the chosen queen of England.
>You probably aren't.

>Cdlyfwylch
>Two millennia old sword who'll teach you to wield her.

>'Sam'
>Will give you technical and martial training, and turn you into a badass.
>Will also give you a set of power armour.

>'Oghuz'
>Will help you reach your full potential a lot faster than if you were alone.

>Disurial of Chandesh
>Hindu entity whose spirit will taint you and make you into a mega badass.
>The taint might kill you, and will turn you into a primal spirit when you die.

>Shoth-uragamo'to
>Master of stealth and hunting, currently on the prowl for an apprentice.
>If you survive your skills will be legendary.

>Rem-yurgardich'to
>Wise old monk who'll prevent you from making stupid mistakes.
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>>50165769
>Can tell if you're the chosen queen of England.
Ireland, actually.
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>>50161533
>>50161550
>>50161562

get out of jail free
cold fusion
dollar bill
bern heak
presidential threads
extradimensional server
art of deal

>>50161562
MAGATRON
The Great Seal
BINDERS FULL OF WOMEN
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>>50165910
>Ireland
Right, that.
I blame the press.
Does Ireland even even have a monarch now?
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>>50152493
>Background
Albert Chodkiewicz
Male
Glorious Commonwealth; Winged Hussar [The Now; Watcher]

>Skills
Mid-Tech Understanding
Natural Physique
Martial Training
Tactician
Frontliner
Beast Master
Critical
Rider
Touched by the Sky

>Items
-Clothing
Traveller Leathers
Armor of the Hussar
Tartan Cloak
Traveler's Medinah Scarf
Custom Period Clothes [Hussar Wings]

-Weapons
Yuta Brace
Seven shot Colt Revolver
Lucern Hammer
Contained Plasma Saber
Backsword [Custom Weapon]
Kopia Lance [Collapsable] [Custom Weapon]

-Knick-knacks
Pegs
Basic Surival Kit
Basic bag
ID Card
Blessed Hungarian Shield
Iron Halo
Flux Generator
Gleipnir Chain
Rail Line Pass
Leader Line
Omni Camping Equipment
Self Operating Cooking Gear
Noble Beast Lesser [Horse]

>Little Things...
Waste of Skin

>Faction
The Lonesome Road

>Covenant
The Warriors of the Sky-Father

>Companions
Salah ad-Din Yusuf bin Ayyub
Deniz Seljuk
Oghuz
Rimgaudas of Lithuania
Arcu

>Home District
The Altic Plains - Never stop riding

>Hubworld
Terra D100293 - Amidst Cowpokes and Dust

>PANIC
The Duke

>PATH
Rescue the Fifth

Never stop riding. No matter what troubles may come, no matter how many others fall. We will always ride onwards towards the sun.
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>>50152493
Out of curiosity, will the Anon made builds be added to the main CYOA or be a non-canonical addon?
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>>50165987
No. The last Monarch of Ireland that Lia Fial would count (being based on the mythica Lia Fail stone and all) would be Brian Boru who died in 1014.
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>>50152493
How strong are the individual panic buttons?
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>>50166081
They are being added to the main CYOA next edition.
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>>50155949
>Stand: "Crystal Soldier"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O-wxqpeFBso
>Power: Akashic Plane Manipulation
The power to learn anything, in theory. Not completely overpowered, since I still need the actual skill and capacity to utilize that knowledge. And I need to have the right questions to ask; turns out God-Google is really finicky and hard to use.
>Stats
Power: D
Speed: C + 2 = A
Range: E
Durability: C + 2 = A
Precision: D + 2 = B
Learning: C + 2 = A

In battle, my stand manifests as cyborg parts overlaying my body wherever they are needed. The utter lack of ranged weapons means I still need to rely on my abysmal reflexes.

>Stand User: 'Lunchbox'
Exactly the Same
Minor Villain + BroJo (recruited after defeat)
Do You Even Pose
Plot Armor
Animal Mascot

I am found by JoJo and the BroJos using my stand powers to cheat at gambling and get rich, after I clean them out at poker. A sound beating and lecture later, I've been dragged along to teach me to be less of a parasite on society. I hope it's okay if I bring my fish.

>Animal Mascot: Emperor Yamato, my pet goldfish
>Stand: "A Glorious Dawn"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSgiXGELjbc
>Power: Spacecraft Physiology
Having gained sapience and human(ish?) intelligence, Yamato rides his stand around from inside of his fishbowl and has ambitions to conquer the stars. Claims to be the reincarnation of the last rightful heir to Imperial Japan.
>Stats
Power: D + 3 = A
Speed: E + 2 = C
Range: C + 2 = A
Durability: D + 1 = C
Precision: D
Learning: C
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>>50156066

>>50156080
Me
Perma mind upload (30)
Avg body, Avg strength (30)
Girly face (31)
Minor paranoia and anxiety (41)
Agent father (53) and using his ability i unlock succubus mother (78)
Taking two relative caretakers, student and relative (98)
Off the hook to get rid of succubus punishment requirement (90)
Free Lv 4 int (90)
Lv 3 wis (86)
Oppai chest (82)
Bubble butt (80)
Libido for free cuz succubus (80)
Female genitals
Twin (75)
Artist (74)
Goth (73)
Android (assuming female cuz no stated gender; 71)

>>50156090
Suburban home (56)
Simple bedroom (51)
Basic bath (46)
Hobby room (40)
Public school (36)
Basic closet (34)
Music (28)
Computer (18)
Vidya (10)
Free wet dreams cuz succubus (10)
Spanking tier 3 (18)
Confiscate (music, vidya, computer = 24)
Fast food (18)
Revisions:
Charm (16.5)
Exotic purple eyes (14.5)
Exotic lavender hair (12.5)
Fast learner (10)
Petite x2 (18)
Home cooking (12)
Pre-packaged (9)
one size fits all (3)
Nightgown

>>50157073
Companion #1
Human bard? Don't rlly know how this works.

>>50157158
Companion #2
I guess how this will work is I will just select one of these to become the companion? And then select the bottom stuff for it?
I guess i'll pick Kristel.
Pocket dimension mansion, high elves, retail.
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>>50153904
Marrying her And her last wife is the only option...
Oh wait that should be best option
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>>50165769
fuck buddy, way to pick a bunch of second gen who are all going to drag you into a civil war.
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I really gotta get around to making v3 of this
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>>50155426
You area good person and I dearly love you.
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>>50164274
Anyone who got out and voted in this shit stew of people fucking each other over lyiing and just being plain bad persons should decapitate themselves with a rusty spoon, just sayin'
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>>50166474
what do you plan to change?
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>>50152493
Updated >>50162168 a bit, dropping three skills for that twelfth ally just doesn't feel like it's worth it.

Origin: Female, The Now; Watcher
Traits: Low-Tech, Common-Ether, Adaptability, Lucky, Survivor, Hearty, Organizer, Cheaterman, Critical, Self-Aware, Friendly Face, Shining Soul
Armour: Traveller's Leathers
Weapons: Yuta Brace
Knick-Knacks: 'Pegs', Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Aenathari Peach
Little Things...: Waste of Skin x3, Notably Charitable x4, Minor, Aquarius Complex, Anon's Bizarre Adventure, Wanting Desire
Faction: The Hearthkeepers: Committee of Festival’s and Needs
Covenant: The Church of our Lady, Destroyer of Despair
Allies: Sir Richard Francis Burton, Marco 'Fulcanelli', Lia Fial, Cdlyfwylch, Lethice, Yarihei Neinta, 'Sam', 'Oghuz', Disurial of Chandesh, Shoth-uragamo'to, Rem-yurgardich'to
Home district: Tamit – Why wander far?
Hubworld: Ogulamacadi-H121 ‘Lurl’– A Universe Bright and Strange: Amidst the Spess Refuges
Panic Button: The Veteran
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>>50166657
Oops, meant >>50163174 for that second link.
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>>50166645
it's gonna be a complete revamp, with hard stats in addition to the written details
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>>50165433
>There are millions of Travellers, each with access to an infinite multiverse filled with powers, objects, tech and secrets ranging from okay to just plain bullshit tier.
And I start out at a higher level of bullshit than most-to-all Travellers are implied to be at. I'm not saying experienced Travellers aren't better. I'm not saying the Travellers' enemies aren't stronger. I'm saying, as I read it, I am stronger than Travellers are 'intended' to start.
>No one here is a PC surrounded by brain-dead NPCs. You're a PC surrounded by millions of PCs in love affair with cheating.
Again, I never said otherwise. I said that, according to the CYOA's mechanics, I'm stronger than the new Travellers, and have a greater growth potential too. Could there be stronger? Absolutely. There just aren't described to be any.
>Options, flexibility and the knack to use them when and where necessary determines who's a badass, not power levels.
Those traits are represented by the perks that grant them - of which I have, while not all, more than most Travellers are 'intended' to have. They're included in the power levels, or at least the ones I try and use.
>Their greatest ennemies are eldritch abominations on steroids for christ's sake!
Presumably, without the cunning, trickiness, and raw Bullshit that Travellers - including me - have.

>>50165769
Sorry, were you not the same person? I assumed that a post linked to the person I was arguing with was them trying to make a point.

And Companions are very capable of improving you, but there's still that big if - you start out personally weaker and vulnerable to getting pushed too hard.

But yeah, this isn't going to do much without Highlander making rulings.
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>>50166946
The entire point of Traveler isn't to power game or make the strongest possible build, its to write interesting character that fits into the Universe.

Highlander made the cyoa to better structure and organize her thoughts and ideas, as well as ideas, characters and concepts from her contributors that she thinks are worthwhile to include for the book she plans to write.

I don't think there will ever be ruling.
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>>50166883
Great! I'm looking foward to see it finished
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>>50166946
This anon >>50167064 has it right, the point isn't metagaming. It's to make interesting characters.

That's why I made a guy with no skills but every waifu, why I made a super commie who wants to kill all the Second Generation, and a Polish Hussar despite a horse being an awful idea in this verse when you can just use a cloaked hoverbike.
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>>50166276
Judging from the title, I would assume "Panic Button" Travellers to be quite more powerful than a beginning Traveller, to be called if you bite more than you can chew. Eventually the power difference can shrink between you and them, eventually leading you to help them in a pickle.
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I have read Traveller for the first time yesterday.
Did I skip something, or there are none good waifus?
I find very strange that in a CYOA so big, with so many companions, there are no good waifus.
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>>50167472
What's wrong with Prophet?
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>>50167506
>Prophet
I don't think Mohammid makes a very good waifu anon.
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>>50167506
I dislike a little the idea or her obsession with fashion, but the biggest "problem" it's not something that's wrong - it's the lack of something that makes more atractive. This is valid for most of the other potential waifus that I saw.
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>>50167472
Than make what you think are good waifus and submit it to Highlander's blog.
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>>50166883
Ice onee...
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>>50164581
Thanks for the help anon. I take the spelling suggestions very seriously since english is not my native language. So I correct what I can.

I'm not sure I want to add internet for this kind of experiment. But I'll give it some thought. Aside from that I'll just correct the spelling and have it as the main version for a while... Might do some corrections in the future.
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>>50152955
>Race
Slythia/Noikari (Red), Male
>Location
Raidien Archipelago
>>50152971
>Perks
Giant, Berserker
>Class
Fleshweaver (Item: Scalpel)
>Blessings
Divine Strength, Regeneration
>>50152986
10x Harriers (100)
20x Fleshweavers (40)
20x Espers (600)

The great red force, the deathless beast, has come to liberate the slaves. May the goddess have mercy on Balthier. Sunk islands or no, his tyranny will end, and this my tiny knife will cut down his dominion and the cliffs it is built upon.
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>>50153130
Question: For the entrance method "other", can I make my entrance method a JJBA stand, like the JoJo trash that I am? (assuming that its ability is related to the purpose of the CYOA)
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>>50167637
You mean Liquid Nitrogen? What about her? The fact that her speed's weird? Yeah, that's was going to be way to show odd movement techniques, but has since been changed to make more sense. I'm not going to spoil too much, though.

Oh yeah, and expect one more girl as well as a hidden boss
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>>50167841
>What about her?
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>>50167966
Ahh. Yeah she's probably one of my favorites in terms of appearance alone (though I'm also fond of Oxygen and Virus)

It's a shame I have to downscale the images so much for this. While you wait for me to make v3 (which likely won't get posted tonight) you can get a taste of what they're like over here: >>50166474
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>>50162542
>All these idiots choosing alone when if you have workshop/garden and library and kill the stupid bitch with an "accidentally" primed bear trap or better yet, a dose of "special" seasoning from the garden included in her meal.
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>>50167472
Entirely up to your taste, my friend. In my opinion, there's quite the abundance of good waifus.

>>50167600
I mean, they haven't really been written as waifus first. Rather, they're teammates tat can be romancable.

Unless I'm missing something.
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>>50162542
>FOOD: Full Kitchen (34)
Something to do in my spare time.

>COMPANION: Puppy (31)
Adorable.

>ELECTRIONICS: All TV Shows and Movies (25), Air Conditioning (20)
Gotta have something to do.

>SIDE ROOMS: Garden (18), Jacuzzi and Sauna (15), Library (11), Indoor Pool (5)
Same deal.

>ENTERTAINMENT: Skylight and Scope (3)
For sunlight, ya know?

>SERVICES: Medical Care (0)
Just in case.
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>>50168077
Hey, it's just 2 points.
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>>50168077

Are you supposed to kill her with a book? All those words too much for her?

The captcha seems to think so.
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>>50167218
>>50167064
I'm under no illusions that it fits well, though - it just has too large of a scale (and breaks too many conventions) to not make things revolve around it.

I partially did it as a thought exercise, taking Highlander's comment about how Stone Soul and Survivor interact with Falling, and expanded that to a full min/max build. I guess I just got a bit too invested in it along the way - probably when I started an actual story that I ended up finishing.

I'll still wait for Highlander to comment on its power, but it'd only fit in as a background element.
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>>50165138
How beneficial is Technomage anyway?
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>>50168307
Dunno.
With max level in both, probably better than Traveller Adept.
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>>50155949
>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Path_Creation
Whelp, I rolled a power that's similar to a stand user in my JoJo campaign, so let's build him!

>User: Billy Williamson
Total (7)
Fabulous af (1)
Minor Villain (1)
Battle Cry (1)
Animal Companion (2)
Plot Armor (2)
Billy Williamson is an easily bought goon who happens to be a meme-loving fuck. He has a pet frog he named Pepe that also has stand powers.

>Stand:「Electric Avenue」
Power: B
Speed: A
Range: B
Precision: E
Durability: B
Learning: B

「Electric Avenue」is a semi autonomous stand that manifests as a single-lane road that is laid out wherever the user walks, and cars made out of electricity that flow down the roads. The cars emanate from the user and move down the roads until the end is reached, splitting in two if there is a split in the road. As a result, the user has very little direct control over the stand, but can grab onto one of the cars to travel to any point in the electric avenue almost instantly. The stand also grants the user a notably faster walking speed, and decent adhesion to ferromagnetic materials.

>Pepe's Stand: >Stand:「Friend Like Me」
Power: C
Speed: C
Range: C
Precision: B
Durability: B
Learning: A
Ability: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Enhanced_Ability_Learning
「Friend Like Me」looks like a buff, humanoid, frog. 「Friend Like Me」can copy any ability or technique that has been used on it, or its user. 「Friend Like Me」can use these to the same effect of the original owner, but can only use one ability at a time, and is limited to the bounds of 「Friend Like Me」's stats. Pepe cannot use these abilities to their maximum potential, as he is just a simple minded frog, but Billy occasionally shouts commands to use "moves." (as if Pepe was a Pokemon)
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>>50168307
Well, it says it'll allow you mix ethereal with tech, so if you're something like an Elementalist or Psionic, you could mix that with like Mechanical Adept or Biological Adept.

>>50168566
Traveller Adept isn't that bad, since the headstart in bracer knowledge could lead you to do shit like Marco in half the time or master the short blink like Gadraki.
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>>50152362
New thread?
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>>50168731
When you make it, friend. No one else will bother until it sinks.
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New Thread!

>>50168794
>>50168794
>>50168794
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>>50156884
Ehh, Eden had all the best shards, (Echidna, Gray Boy, Eidolon) and was supposedly smarter than Scion.

Earth Bet got really luck that she got killed first.
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>>50166883

I'm looking forward to it anon. Hope to see it in it's glory!
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>>50166946
>Sorry, were you not the same person?
I was.

>I assumed that a post linked to the person I was arguing with was them trying to make a point.
It wasn't, I just posted it because it seemed like a fun build; the original comment wasn't even intended to start a discussion, it was just a true footnote.
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