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Can someone let me know if this concept for a race seems to Mary-sue-ish?
>Humanoid, but taller then most humans. Average height 6'4, ranges from the extremes of 5'8" to 6'10", with the chance that a very rare big guy might crack 7 foot
>Muscular
>Deep red skin, ranges from crimson to lighter full reds
>thin, black, recurved horns, sprouting from above the brow, growing usually over a foot long.
>Some are bald, others have black hair to various lengths, but no body hair
>The eyes are completely yellow besides the pupil
>Temperments are typically strong willed, passionate, sinister, wrathfull, loyal, and smug ( and kinda dumb )
essentially a race for if a player wants a boost to strength minus int. that fits into my campainsaesthetic
Also general racial discussion I suppose
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that is now how mary sue works
a physical description says nothing
a list of "normal personalities" makes your fantasy race a rubber forehead alien, not a culture
what is their culture
what is their society
why are they how they are
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>>50084654
Isn't that just a tiefling?
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>>50085194
a tiefling with yellow eyes
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>>50084654
The good news is that they dont seem mary-sue-ish at all. The bad news is that they also sound like fucking nothing. Maybe give us some more info?
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>>50084654
How rare are these big guys?
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>>50086619
Let's just say they don't get to bring friends
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>>50084654
I want to fuck blackfeather
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>>50085396
So a thiefling
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