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CHAPTER ROLLING THREAD

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I'M FUCKING BORED LETS INVENT SOME SHIT

LETS START WITH A FUCKING SPACE MARINE CHAPTER

YOU ALL KNOW WHAT FUCKING TABLE WE'RE USING, ROLL A D10 SO WE KNOW WHY WE WERE FUCKING FOUNDED JESUS FUCK
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Rolled 6 (1d10)

>>49405851
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Rolled 4 (1d10)

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>>49405867
WE WERE FOUNDED TO COUNTER A SPECIFIC THREAT EVEN THOUGH IT TAKES LIKE A HUNDRED YEARS AND EVERYONE IS PROBABLY DEAD BY NOW OH WELL D100 WHEN WERE WE FOUNDED

>>49405880
LETS MAKE IT FUN AND SAY WE WERE FOUNDED TO COUNTER A SPECIFIC THREAT VIA STRATEGIC PROGNOSTICATION. BECAUSE IT'S MY THREAD AND I FUCKING SAY SO
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>>49405895
WHATS THE NEXT TABLE DICE
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>>49406138
I SAID D100 GODDAMN
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Rolled 88 (1d100)

>>49406353
OH SHIT NIGGA, I'M RETARDED
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>>49406426
41st Millenium (Twenty-Sixth and last known Founding)


WE'RE FUCKING NEW KIDS ON THE BLOCK, D100 FOR PROGENITOR

I KINDA WANT TO STOP TYPING IN ALL CAPS NOW BUT I FEEL LIKE I'VE COMMITTED TO A THING
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Rolled 8 (1d100)

>>49406477
Naw, you can stop.
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>>49406494
>>49406426
Uh, think we could swap these rolls around? They're both all eights anyway.
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>>49406494
Ultramarines.

Contrary to popular belief I like the ultra's, but >>49406512
has a suggestion. I'll consider it, but I say lets see how the dice pan out first. I want to know our chapters demeanor and tactics before we commit to anything - though white scars are pretty cool
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>>49406552
>>49406494
Oh and I need a d10 next
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Rolled 4 (1d10)

>>49406568
I too like Roman/Grecian space marines, but lets see.
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>>49406625
Pure gene seed. Nothing unusual here. Now we get to the meat - d10 for Demeanor
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Rolled 4 (1d10)

>>49406643
rolling
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>>49406662
PURITY
ABOVE
ALL

d10 for flaw!
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Rolled 8 (1d10)

>>49406684
>flaw
NO WE /PURITY/ NOW
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>>49406693
WHAT BETTER WAY IS THERE TO SHOW THE PURITY OF THE HUMAN FORM

THAN TO PUNCH XENOS IN THE FACE SO THEY MAY BASK IN THE GLORY OF OUR HUMAN FISTS
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>>49406693
Eye to Eye - The Chapter hates any method of warfare other than running up to the enemy and punching them.

WE ARE PURE, PURE AS FUCK. PURE HUMAN PUNCHES.

D100, FIGURE OF LEGEND
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Rolled 13 (1d100)

>>49406725
We pankration marines?
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Rolled 85 (1d100)

>>49406725
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>>49406741
A Battle-Brother seconded from a previous generation Successor or even the First Founding Legion that provided the new Chapter’s gene-seed. Roll again on this table to determine what type of warrior he was, rerolling if you get this result again.

>>49406744
Company Captain (roll d10 to determine which company).

GIMME D10
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Rolled 4 (1d10)

>>49406781
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>>49406797
The 2nd, 3rd, 4th and 5th Companies are known as Battle Companies and are split into six Tactical Squads, two Assault Squads and two Devastator Squads.

Our founder/figure of legend is a Hero from ANOTHER ultra successor, someone so great they were given the honor of founding their own chapter. Because it was prophesied they would need to counter a specific threat. Interestingly enough, we favor assault over shooting, even though THE CODEX ASTARTES DOES NOT APPROVE OF THAT ACTION. Perhaps we reserve the ASSAULT positions for our veterans, rather than the tactical squads. Assuming we don't go back and flip our progenitor to White Scars, in which case we are ALL JUMP PACKS ALL THE TIME probably

d100 for deeds of legend
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Rolled 6 (1d100)

>>49406837
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Rolled 47 (1d100)

>>49406837
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>>49406840
>>49406857
Our choices are ORKS or SLEW A FUCKING DEMON PRINCE.

It's always fucking Orks and killing a demon prince is hard core. I'm going with Roll #2.

I will use >>49406840 for our homeworld, which is apparently A HIVE WORLD. No wonder we like to run up and hit people close, URBAN ENVIRONMENT FUCKERS.

I just had a glorious idea, if we switch to White Scars, we make our marines all ex-gangbangers and our chapter strategy is drive bys and hood-stomps.

Ok maybe not.

d100 for terrain
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Rolled 3 (1d100)

>>49406915
Ocean terrain get!
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>>49406922
>>49406915
YES TIME FOR URBAN JUNGLE
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>>49406922
Sorry fucker, you got JUNGLE.

JUNGLE. HIVE. WORLD.

Cities literally built into massive tree's! Back Alleys prowled by dangerous predators!

d10 for rule!
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>>49406973
>Cities literally built into massive trees

Please not this, it has been done almost every time someone rolsl up hive and jungle in these types of threads
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Rolled 9 (1d10)

>>49406973
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>>49406989
How about we just do a hive world where they haven't fucked the planet over by polluting. Maybe there is some clean DAoT recycling machine or something that has kept pollution to a minimum
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>>49406989
How about the hives were built in the jungle, but eventually the jungle just started growing back into the hives. The lower levels are covered in mosses and twisting vines, and it's hot and steamy like no ones business.
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>>49406989
alright how about that the sprawl and the jungle just sort of... grew into each other.

the whole place is a hothouse filled with displaced wild animals probably being carved up by the sick fucks in the lower parts of the hives. Weird poisonous plants thrive in the sewer systems and the wealthy use large, but not building sized trees, to shield themselves from the sun at immense cost. Take a wrong turn and you'll run into some fuckers personal preserve or a huge beast being milked for some chemical.

Maybe the Marines left for a while to go fight that Prophecized threat, and when the got back the Hive had backslid a little.
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>>49407029
>>49407033
I like the idea of dark age machines or just machines in general has taken care of the waste and toxins that a hive normally leave behind. But it has become "too" clean and now the jungle has started to reclaim some parts.
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>>49406992
Distant rule - "You see that castle up there? It's inhabited by the mighty sky-warriors of Emp-rar. Sometimes they come and steal our children."

>>49407033
>>49407054
considering this

Just a city half overgrown with aggressive jungle

D10 for organization
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Rolled 1 (1d10)

>>49407077
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>>49407077
>Just a city half overgrown with aggressive jungle

Like this?
Just googled something quick
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So what are we calling these curb-stomping jungle dwelling fuckers ?
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>>49407081
Literally as codex adherent as you can possibly get.

d10 for combat doctrine
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Rolled 1 (1d10)

>>49407077
>Distant Rule

>'BRRRRRRROTHER, PERHAPS WE SHOULD TAKE A MOMENTARY RESPITE FROM OUR TRAINING TO CHECK ON THIS WORLD'

>'I'M SURE THE HIVES FLOURISH, WE NEED FOCUS NOT ON THIS WORLD WHEN MANY MORE RELY ON OUR INEVITABLE AND GLORIOUS DEFEAT OF THE COMING FOE'

>meanwhile someone's entrails are smeared across the outside of a nearby window by a roaming Space Tiger

>>49407139
rollan
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>>49407122
I've got some ideas for the name of the planet:

>Zhad's Rest
>Unver-Seum
>Tropik
>Uran'Tang
>Redrokorbotov

Just brainstorming here really
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>>49407160
>close combat

Was there EVER ANY FUCKING DOUBT?

D100 for beliefs!
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>>49407160
>close combat
sounds about right
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Rolled 6 (1d100)

>>49407214
100 get!
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>>49407224
Revere the Primarch - "Our Spiritual Liege is better than yours!"

KEK

d10 for strength
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Rolled 9 (1d10)

>>49407286
stronk!
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>>49407293
THE CHAPTER IS READY

FOR

THE FORETOLD THREAT
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>>49407163
I like unver-seum
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>>49407328
I dub thee...The Fists of Guilman!

Dorn can go suck it!
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>>49407361
Imperial fists are just showcaste marines anyways. All they do is parading
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>>49407293
>>49407328
Fully fit and damn near over strength

d100 for friends

>>49407361
I like the idea of marines that straight up advance in formation with Lockshields like the Arbites use to literally phalanx up on mother fuckers with bolt pistols and gladius combat knives. FULL ROME.
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Rolled 17 (1d100)

>>49407474
Administratium get!
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>>49407498
So close, SO close to Administatum or even better, Arbites. Instead, we get another chapter. We have to choose....

d100 for enemies
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Rolled 82 (1d100)

>>49407539
How about we roll our allied chapter too?
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>>49407553
A particular Chaos-aligned group (i.e., Traitor Titan Legion, Chaos pirates, renegade Imperial Guard, etc.)

Makes sense, as our Chapter Founder fucked some Demon Princes shit

I don't have a chart to roll for allied chapter though!
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>>49407553
Sure why not. Who knows, we may even get Imperial fists as our allied chapter.
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>>49407578
Just roll up another chapter and say they're our allies
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>>49407614
>>49407599
>>49407553
>>49407578
Op returns after 10,000 hours in MS Paint. Roll me a d100. 100 is Choose or Reroll
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Rolled 82 (1d100)

>>49407709
C'mon Imperial Fists.
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>>49407783
>White Minotaurs
>literally who: the chapter
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>>49407817
I am a pathetic twat of a man!
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>>49407858
>>49407817
>>49407783
Hm. Well, I hesitate to enforce fanon onto canon, but we could always fluff these guys on the fly. Or reroll.
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GOD FUCKING DAMN WHY ARE WE ALL FUCKING YELLING?

DO ANY OF YOU PANSY-ASS SPACE ROGAL DORN BITCHES WANT SOME COLORS GENERATED OR SHIT?
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>>49407971
We're Guilliemans Girlies, not Worst Chapter. How do you propose color generation?

>>49407875
>>49407817
>>49407783
Given our chapters Roman leanings, the mysterious and unknown White Minotaurs could represent a mysterious and unknown benefactor, in similar fashion to the Cult of Mithras that was wide spread in Rome pre-Christianity. Little is known now or survives of Mitraism, and so too the White Minotaurs

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mithraism
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WHERE IS THE SUMMARY POST

FUCK
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>>49408220
>>49405851

OK FUCK JESUS I HAD TO GO EAT

ULTRAMARINES SUCCESSOR

FOUNDED TO COUNTER A SPECIFIC THREAT (VIA STRATEGIC PROGNOSTICATION)

41ST MILLENIUM FOUNDING

PURE GENE SEED

PURITY ABOVE ALL DEMEANOR

EYE TO EYE FLAW

CLOSE COMBAT BATTLE TACTICS

FOUNDED BY A COMPANY CAPTAIN FROM A PREVIOUS GENERATION

HE KILLED A DAEMON PRINCE

OUR CHAPTER WORLD IS A JUNGLE HIVE WORLD

WE RULE DISTANTLY

FULL STRENGTH

OUR ALLIES ARE THE WHITE MINOTAURS

OUR ENEMIES ARE A SPECIFIC CHAOS GROUP/FACTION

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ASSORTED IDEAS INCLUDE:

WE USE BOARDING SHIELDS TO MARCH UP CLOSE

OUR HOMEWORLD HIVES ARE HALF OVERTAKEN WITH AGGRESSIVE JUNGLE

OUR RELATIONSHIP WITH THE WHITE MINOTAURS IS MURKY AND MYSTERIOUS AND NO ONE KNOWS QUITE WHAT TO MAKE OF THEM

WE PUNCH THE FUCK OUT OF PEOPLE
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>>49408220
I tried.

The Fists of Guilliman were founded in the 41st Millennium in order to counter a threat foretold by prognostication. The Honor of founding this bulwark went to [UNKNOWN] of the [UNKNOWN] Ultramarines successor chapter after his valiant slaying of a Demon Prince.

Possessed of a gene-seed and doctrinal legacy most pure, the Fists have become extremely sensitive to Purity in all things. They often prefer a closer ranged form of combat, moving as one in a tight phalanx to crush the enemies of the Emperor and their Spiritual Liege. However, this same zeal for Purity often compels them to force the assorted Xenos and Heretics arrayed against them to appreciate the glory of the Human Form by punching them in the face.

While the world the FoG rule is one of the great Imperial Hive Worlds, they have let their hold over it grow loose and unused as they instead hone their skills and bolster their numbers in the face of the FORETOLD THREAT. This has allowed the native jungle life of the planet to reclaim much of the lower depths of the hives. Whispers lay the blame on ancient machinery from the Dark Age of Technology, but who can truly say?

The FoG speak in hushed tones of the 'White Minotaurs, a near-forgotten chapter who the Fists regard as a secretive but benevolent ally against the FORETOLD THREAT: A particularly large force of Chaos.
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>>49408887
Powerfists are revered wargear only given to warriors of renown. Only the greatest have the privilege to PUNCH HERETICS AND XENOS IN THE FUCKING FACE!

Also based on how this thread has gone, I feel like they have to yell whenever they mention PUNCHING PEOPLE IN THE FACE!
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>>49409569
>>49408887

Well, it passed the time at least

Our custom chapter didn't turn out too wierd or unique, but it has potential.

I need to go to bed now though. I have no delusions this thread will still be here tomorrow. Thanks for playing with me anons

Have a /tg/ safe tiki elf
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bumpin
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>>49408887
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>>49407163
I like Unver-Seum.

it just sounds good.
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>>49408887
How about we roll up a chaos warband that is literally called "The foretold threat"?
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Rolled 24 (1d100)

>>49415610
I'd be down for that.

rolling for what brand of sick these guys work for.
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>>49415668
did you die?
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Rolled 9 (1d100)

>>49415791
I realized that doing it by myself kind of defeats the purpose of the thread.

I mean, I'll keep going.

rollan for """"blessings""""

>>49415668
>Chaos Undivided
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>>49415816
Ok, maybe you can put what needs to be rolled into the next post?
Didn't mean to come of as rude...
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>>49415816
>Chaos Undivided

Clearly we're fighting shooty Chaos Marines.
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>>49415836
nah that's fine, just felt kinda weird taking over for OP.

>9
>none
shit this warband hasn't gotten anyone's (well. any-horrible-singularity-of-extreme-emotion) attention yet!

fits with the whole "foretold" thing. still building up strength.

I guess we should skip the "what kind of blessing" roll and move straight onto the HQ roll.

gimme a d100!
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Rolled 96 (1d100)

>>49415917
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>>49415924
>none (Ex. Inspired by or originates from Alpha Legion)
well that's never a good sign.

roll up a d100 to find out how much of the warband is cannon fodder
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Rolled 97 (1d100)

>>49415961
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>>49415973
>no cultists
>only marines
when the FoG fight these guys it'll be like looking through an edgy funhouse mirror

1d100 to figure out how they get people in that armor
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Rolled 91 (1d100)

>>49415989
>inb4 90+
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>>49415993
You fucking called it.
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>>49415993
>Recruits from other Chaos Legions or Warbands
Poaching bloodthirsty maniacs and hitting up the coherent ones in a brain drain to assemble an actually working force?

seems about right.

nice rolls by the way. 1d10 for combat doctrine.

>>49416013
IT WAS

FORETOLD
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Rolled 1 (1d10)

>>49416022
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>>49416030
>Close Combat
[edgy funhouse mirror intensifies]

THE PROPHECY

1d100 for the exalted champion, and my money's on the Demon Prince the Chapter Founder slew.
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Rolled 10 (1d100)

>>49416045
>THE PROPHECY
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>>49416056
>DEMON PRINCE
THE PROPHECY

1D10 FOR DEEDS
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Rolled 1 (1d10)

>>49416078
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>>49416088
>The figure is renowned for defeating the Forces of the Imperium in battle several times.

IT ALL COMES TOGETHER
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>>49416111
>The figure is renowned for defeating the Forces of the Imperium in battle several times.

>IT ALL COMES TOGETHER
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>>49416111
>IT ALL COMES TOGETHER
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Chaos recap?
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>>49416160
Chaos Undivided

No blessings/mutations

No HQ

no cultists, only marines

Recruits from other Chaos Legions or Warbands

Close Combat

Champion is daemon prince renowned for defeating the Forces of the Imperium in battle several times.

Anything else?
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>>49416184
Good. How about we fluff them out?
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>>49416201
They could be the Nega Fists. Maybe the chapter originally sent to deal with the prognosticated threat, but then fulfilled the prophecy by BECOMING the threat? They seem to be indectical to the Fists so there needs to be a connection between the two before the warband falls to chaos?
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I tried

Spoken of only in hushed whispers, enigmatic intelligence documents, and in hatred by the Fists of Guilliman, this fresh Chaos warband skulks about in the shadowed cracks in the Imperium, assembling forces for the prophecized onslaught. Made up entirely of veteran Chaos Marines pulled from warband and legion alike, FORETOLD THREAT has thus far been content to cover its tracks, a move that has brought it little of what passes for glory or blessings among their ranks.

In combat, they prefer to take the fight to the enemy, clawing at throats and slashing through ranks in a darkened, brutal mirror to the ordered zealous and punch-ous nature of the Fists.

Led by the Demon Prince [UNKNOWN], reviled across the Imperium for the tide of destruction he wreaked before being laid low by captain-turned-chapter founder [ALSO UNKNOWN], nearly destroying him. After many years of silence, he has returned to gather followers to his side for the time that was FORESEEN.

>>49416223
that could work. we'd have to work in the recruits from other Legions/Warbands thing somehow.
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>>49416254
...Now that I think about it, they could even be renegade Fists. The daemon prince could have been a captain who's company went chaos. They don't have access to spare geneseeds, so they need to recruit from other warbands and indoctrinate them in the art of PUNCHING
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>>49416295
>every battle with our archenemies is reduced to Jojo-style fisticuffs
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>>49416340
Yes!!!
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Anyone still here?
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>>49417758
si
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Are we going with the name Unver-Seum for the Fist of Guilliman's home/recruiting world?
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>>49418745
Yea, I like it.
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The planet Unver-Seum has 4 major hives.

The biggest and most densly packed hive is hive Kors-Seum (thinking of having "Seum" meaning home/known place in the langauge that the people speak) and is home to billions of imperial souls. From the outside the hive might just look like any other hive city, but when entering it one could see that has been overgrown with the jungle covering the planet.

Hive Kors-Seum is also the home to the majority of the planets nobility and the govenor himself. They mostly live in hanging garden style mansions overlooking the upper and middle hive from their "garden towers".
But the hive isn't without it's flaws, during the rain seasons many areas in the middle, lower and underhive are subject to rapid flash floods due to heavy rainfall. Along with hostile fauna wandering into the hive, that itself takes up a lot of the arbites resources. So crime in the underhive is almost rampant

Want me to continue fluffing the planet out?
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>>49419360
Fuck yea. I think it would be cool if they drop initiates in the very bottom of the hive and force them to fight their way through the hostile lower levels of the hive.

But yea keep going dude.
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>>49419851
Ok, I'll keep on going. Just so you know, I am making up this on the spot and english isn't my first language so be prepared for some spelling/grammar mistakes.

The second largest hive is "Hive Mayra-Seum". Mayra-Seum lies on the far east continent "Normeko" and spans around a large piece of land around the coast and goes several kilometers into the ocean. This hive is the main commercial and mercantile hub for the planet. This is due to gigantic loading docks that have been constructed over the years. This has lead to the formation of a city wide dialect and langauge called "Gothic Void" on the planet. This is becuase the langauge itself is a mix of the imperial high gothic and the native langauge.
This has made the planet to be the "face" when it comes to imperial relations, this has in turn created a bit of jealousy between the leader of Hive Mayra-Seum and the govenor. But the rest of Unver-Seum wouldn't get the supplies they needed without the support from Mayra-Seum.

The hive is also known for hunting the exotic Jaw Serpents that are the kings of the oceans mainly due to their speed and snake like maw that are rumored to yeat boats and aircraft that fly to close to the ocean.

The underhive is also a hotspot for smugglers, crime lords and other forms of criminals. The most notorious crime boss is Cassy "the Snake" Korger. She is wanted and sought after due to her being able to hide and smuggle rogue psykers off world, away from the black ships.
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Do you guys want more regarding the hive cities? Or should I move onto stuff like; the jungle, flora and fauna, the people, languages, etc? If you have any ideas yourself then feel free to either pitch them to me or write something yourself
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>>49421107
The jungles and hive cities sort of blend into each other, so I think more of the hive cities and then the jungle in general.

Maybe one of the hives is completely over run by jungle, but people there just sigh and deal with it like catachan. So people have to deal with stuff like their door suddenly being blocked by a tree one day or something like that.
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>>49421728
Ok, I will try to brainstorm a bit on that before I post something more then. What about my other fluff parts so far? Any good, anything that needs changing?
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>>49421787
Nah man, nothing wrong with the fluff. There are a couple of sentence structure things that annoy me personally but you said english isn't your first language so it's all good. I like that the capital isn't most powerful city on planet, because it kind of reflects on the fact that the FoG just let the locals do their own thing.
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The 3rd hive on Unver-Seum is located in the middle of jungle at the planets equator. The hive itself is called "Hive Nobro-Seum", and this hive has been struk the hardest by the jungle. Wast portions of the lower hive become uninhabitable due to the jungle flora taking over making areas unreachable. The underhive, cut off from the rest off the hive has regressed into a tribal like society where mutation and disease are common.
But the rest of the hive functions like normal with the possible exeption of vines, moss and tress popping up in places where they are unwanted, like on maglev tracks, water pipes, elevator shafts. This has lead to a small sub-branch of the local Adeptus Arbites being formed nicknamed "the gardeners". They will burn and cut away the jungle with the help from holy promethium and razor charp chainswords.

The jungles doesn't always bring bad things into the hive, many plants needed for medicine normaly found deep inside the jungle could be found almost at their doorstep. And creatures like the Unver caterpillar that are draw towards heat vents and generators are used by the inhabitants for food, almost like cattle.

Nobles who live in the hive often use the surrounding jungle when it comes to big game hunting, since many beasts that would otherwise be rare near the other hives are plenty around Hive Nobro-Seum. Beast such as; the Egradon mammoth, Poison Apes and Steel Leeches. This rich hunting grounds have even drawn off world nobles and rich people to Unver-Seum and hive Nobro-seum in general.

Good so far?
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>>49422477
Looks good to me
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Bumping by saying that I will not write some fluff for a few hours, I need to hit the sack. Buf if this thread is alive tomorrow then I will continue
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