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Haven't seen this in ages.
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Let's bring some fun the treat
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>>49240048
2/2
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>>49239579
My tech is based on the idea of hyper space, the technology uses genetic engineering to create Hyperspace Shamans who are each capable of opening hyperspace portals through meditation. The minions are high powered super soldiers capable of laying waste to entire armies. Our tactics revolve around communication sabotage and bringing chaos into the midst of our enemies.
The leader often takes time to study the results of his many genetic experiments.
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>>49231957
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>>49241597
>>49231957
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>>49240107
Method: Brute Force
Material: Innocent
Girl: Alina
Complication: Active Police
Stats:
Power: 28
Cost: 0
Time: 1
Threat: 20
What to do: Stockholm Syndrolm, Shows, Pictures, Public Play, Humiliation, Accomplice, Sexual Contact, Penetration (All), Taboo, Denial, Attire, Routine, Money

I never figured out whether "A Friend In Need" required a new method or not.
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Where the fuck are the American NEETs? This thread isn't supposed to have had 10 posts during prime time.
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>>49242693
They're in school right now, they won't be active for another hour or two.
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>>49242693
Wiggly boners.
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>>49242693
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>>49242724
>NEETs
>At school
confusedjackchan.jpg
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>>49242768
Are you a NEET anon? Or just some procrastinating college kid?
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>>49242724
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Conduit

Give me your 60 point builds nerds, no drawbacks.
Bonus: have related char art for the build
Hard mode: stick to a theme
Godlike mode: No waifus
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>>49242693
Slider: (70% to the right; many things were different.)
Sex ratio 1:9; M;F

Male puberty:
Not sure, so rolling. (1 or 2)
Claws
Horns
Wings
Tail
Cycle
Pheromones
Libido

Females:
3
Mammaries
Hips
Horns
Tail
Cycle
Libido
Aggression


Male Intelligence: 130-160 IQ, medium spread.
Female: 140-160, high spread.
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>>49242693
Memory Slider at 55%
M/F ratio of 25/75
Sliders to 3 for both sexes.
Turn on horns, tails, and wings for both sexes. Turn on pheromones for men.
Adjust average IQ to 200 for both sexes, leave the thickness the same.
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>>49242813
The latter. Curses, how did you guess?
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>>49242922
A NEET is just a college student waiting for school to start.
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>>49242693
Hanging out with friends. Oh wait, I'm not a NEET, I'm just awkward.
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>>49242693
I was at classes most of the day.
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>>49242724
The NEETs are in school?
>>49242753
Hi. Thank Christ there's 7 more IPs now, I thought I was going more insane.
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>NEETs
>School
Explanation please?
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>>49242956
Bullshit.

Have some waifus you fucking NEET, I know you need your fix.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B5vYX1bZd1SBUU05dGYtNzFydFk

Seriously though, there is only like 6 dudes among the Adventurer faction. I need manly men to be rivals with.
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>>49242945
Impossible by the very definition of the acronym. They're just shut ins.
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>>49243132
Every time I look at Pokemon Personified, I kind of just say "Fuck it". I'd probably actually do it if someone ever complied it into a PDF.
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>>49239378
Djinn

Elementalism
Curse
Ruin

Heritage
Magic Wand (Curse)

Cleric
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>>49242693
Reality Slider: Middle
Gender Ratio: 50:50

Males:
Puberty: Level 4
Hair: On
Hips: On
Claws: On
Gigantism: On
Hide: On
Tail: On
Intelligence: 250 IQ
Maximum arrow length and bell curve Steepness

Female:
Puberty: Level 4
Hair: On
Mammaries: On
Hips: On
Claws: On
Gigantism: On
Hide: On
Tail: On
Cycle: On
Intelligence: 250 IQ
Maximum arrow length and bell curve Steepness

We yetis now.
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>>49243190
Someone did, but it was 2 PDFs since one would be too big to upload.
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>>49242956
>awkward
>hanging out with friends
Does not compute
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>>49242821
>Godlike mode: No waifus
What's even the point?
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Anyone have Desert Soldier?
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>>49243190
There is really not that much information and choices to pick from, the problem is Italics Anon made all the images fuckhuge and spaced all the options and images with a shitton of empty spaces inbetween for the sake of aesthetic.
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>>49242693
Reality Slider: 4
M/F Ratio: 50:50
Men:
Puberty 4
Maximum intelligence/bellcurve
Women:
Puberty 4
Maximum intelligence/bellcurve

Basically just geniuses with comic book bodies everywhere.
Wow. My magical realm is really bland.
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>>49243450
It's okay, I'm even blander. All I'd do is make everyone a bit smarter, adjust the intelligence curve so there are less idiots but geniuses are still far above everyone else, and remove flat chested girls.
Maybe have some of the guys be traps, but I don't think I can do that. It would mostly be for fun.
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>>49243375
My biggest problem is trying to get the text at a reasonable size without having to scroll around all the time. Plus navigating between a bunch of pages is a pain in the ass. Usually in PDF format, I can justify the image.

On the other hand, it's my fault for trying to do this on a phone.
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>>49243271
I would get her just so i could kill her and rid the world of her evil
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>>49242693
Spire CYOA soon! You will enjoy returning to the world Dusk City is set in.
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>>49243168
>>49243123
>>49243035
>>49242945
>>49242813
>>49242768
>>49242724
>>49242693
You all know what he asked, stop adding on fake autism on top of your real autism.
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>>49243669
But then you wouldn't have an ally to rid the world of evil even worse than her.
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>>49243711
We posting WIPs now or what?
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>>49243784
Not if we have any sense of self respect or respect for the thread. So yeah, a lot of people will inevitably post it.
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>>49243806
What about a single finished page that might be the entire cyoa unless the anons want more from it?
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>>49243784
See: >>49243806
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>>49243711
Can't wait anon, Kyur & Kyab and Nani are my favorite companions in any CYOA ever.
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>>49228091
>Dryads are hermaphrodites
Ewwww.

>Alraune and Harpies
>Non-sapient
So bestiality. Ruins them pretty hard too
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>>49244242
Most plants are hermaphrodites though, plants are also in general massive sluts. Though mythological Dryads, being nymphs, were all female.
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>>49243861
Yes, I can see a post that was a response to my own. Just like I can see your post that was a response to my own.
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>>49243841

If it actually works on its own, post it.
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>>49244295
>Though mythological Dryads, being nymphs, were all female.
Exactly. In addition, there are Gingko trees, which are gendered. On top of that, there are a lot of types of trees with variants that are gendered, such as Fig trees where you have both fully female and hermaphrodite trees.

He should have left it up to us what gender they were. Maybe I wanted a gingko dryad. Maybe a female fig one or something else like that. Or we could just go with the mythological depiction where they're all female by default. It's fantasy.
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Here is PERVY SUPER PERSON 3.0

Every section has had changes. The power section in particular has been completely redone.

Enjoy!
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>>49243132
So, when buying stats, do you have to buy each level of stat, or just for whatever level you want?

Cause if it's the latter, I'm buying all the stats.
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>>49244420
Are the powers actually worthwhile and fleshed out?
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>>49242821
I decided to grab an image first and make a build that would fit that character.
Then I realized I only save cyoa's and waifus. So I grabbed this guy from the character art thread.
Now, he looks like an old rogue. But he's seen some shit. I think it would really fit this character if he has some of the more subtler outright sorcery powers and mostly physical acumen.
I was going to stick to canon worlds, but he just didn't fit.

>extra world(x2) (5)
>scrying (6)
>calling (7)
>boon companion (but she died) (9)
>guide (10)
>sands of time (11)
>bridge building(x2) (Earth & Phaeron) (15)
>bridge finding (16)

Earth
>inheritance (20)
>Tongues (21)
>Directed Contact (23)
>Soft Contact (25)
>Human Facade (27)
>Earth Meister (32)

Arcadia
>wyrd oath (33)
>binding pledge (35)
>Pathfinding (36)
>Hag's Eye (37)
>Crone's Omen (38)

Phaeron
>Awaken (39)
>Outpost (40)
>Predator (41)
>Unawaken (42)
>Indoctrinate (43)
>Mesmerize (45)
>Conjure (47)
>Infusion (49)
>Claim (50)
>Infuse (52)
>Crown (54)

The Deep Dark
>Runecraft (56)
>Flyting (57)
>Crafting of inherency (59)
>Darkvision (60)

Straight out of a celtic myth.
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>>49244541
Well, considering the power section is now 5 pages and each power has a full description written out for it, I certainly hope you'll think so.
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>>49244420
It's fucking perfect.
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>>49244611
Cool. Give me a moment.
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>>49244420
I always think it's weird when a cyoa makes assumptions about the player. I know it's dumb, but it throws me off. No, I don't masturbate five times per day or whatever you're implying.
It's like I already don't feel the cyoa is happening, right off the bat, and the fantasy is broken...
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>>49239378
This is harder to read than it could be.
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>>49244767
>No, I don't masturbate five times per day

Usually closer to ten!
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>>49244505
Each level has its cost next to it, so you only pay the cost for that level.

But even if you took every Challenge/Event, join Underground, and sold all your companion slots for points, you'd still be about 200 points short of maxing every stat I think. If you dumped one of your attack stats, yeah, you could max the rest. Or you can max everything but Accuracy and Evasion and have 15 points left. Assuming you're okay with only being one type, which limits your movepool in the CYOA.

There's an obvious way to effectively max every stat, but you can figure it out yourself now, so go ahead.
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>>49244817
It's been like four days since last time, maybe more, I can't remember. You seriously do it ten times per day?
It kinda sucks I'm forced to pick "Apathy" as my motivation in the cyoa. Picking "Hero" seems like false advertisement.
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>>49239378
Slow thread. Whats your favorite CYOA?
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>>49244242
>Monster=Non-Sapient

But that's wrong. There are multiple monsters that are clearly sapient like the Animal and Insect People (Insect People can become Minions once you get a Queen for them). Minions are you actual subordinates who work for you while monsters generally just live within your dungeon. Depending upon the obedience and intelligence of the monster though, you might be able to order it around like a Minion.
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>>49244936
Beyond Sanctuary.
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>>49244936
New World.
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>>49244420
Wasn't my cup of tea.
>Vagina
>Apathy
>Mild mannered
>Female
>Breasts C
>Ass Bubble
>Eye color Purple
>Head hair To shoulders
>Body hair Light fuzz
>Hair color Brunette
>Voice Smooth

>Wealthy Philantropist (4)
>Minor Resistance (5)
>Self-sustenance (7)
>Shape-shifting (10)
Went with a "nice comfy life"-build, I guess.
I had to pick Apathy and not Hero since, well, I'm apathetic especially when it comes to fucking, so there weren't many options.
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>>49239579
All this is too vague for me to make any kind of build, i can't invent technolgies like that myself, i don't see how is that a proper CYOA.
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>>49244936
This.
Add on soon perhaps?
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ancestry mer
powers necromancy, pyromancy, marking, mean and green, madness and raven tongue
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>>49242693
It's always slow at night
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>>49244945
Never actually read it. It looks good though.
>>49244983
Patrician taste my friend
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>>49245018
>Wasn't my cup of tea.
Thanks for giving it a try!
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>>49243669
I thought I was the only one. Still, feels more spiteful than useful.
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>>49245038
As soon as you finish it.
I mean, considering how often you beg for it, you seem like the ideal candidate to do it.
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>>49245038
>>49245123
But someone else is already working on it and managed to get pretty far with it.
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>>49244420
Not thrilled with the cost changes. Totally destroys my last build with the same stuff, so hate it. Nice to see you're fleshing it out though.
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>>49244943
>There are multiple monsters that are clearly sapient
You are correct. However, the harpy and alraune entries specifically so they are not sapient. Alraune are 'only semi-sapient', and harpies are 'unintelligent'.
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>>49245095
Well, the whole thing relies around wanting to fuck everything that moves (and getting the powers to do so).
I care for neither.
I do appreciate you included the Apathy motivation, so I felt I could get something. I skipped the companion section though, I figured they were just whatever your fetishes are.
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>>49245150
Then maybe stop asking about it nearly every thread and let them work?
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>>49244843
Awesome, thanks. I'm still looking over it to try and figure out what sort of build I want to try.
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>>49245165
Not that guy, but I gotta say that unintelligent doesn't necessarily non-sapient. I could easily just mean stupid. Bird brained, if you will.
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>>49245244
It isn't clear, but the implication I get is one of being non-sapient.
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>>49245207
>nearly every thread
I haven't asked for the past seven or so threads, and the reason I asked here is because >>49244936 asked for favorite cyoa and I decided to bring that little fact up.
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>>49244983
Why?
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>>49245123
Amazing.
You somehow fail to realize that if one asks for it often it means they can't do it themselves.
To everyone else, this is obvious, a given. But it just flies right past you. Further research into this astounding lack of awareness is required.
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literally never seen >>49244983 or >>49244945 before, are they well known?
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>>49245576
Beyond Sanctuary is old as fuck. I'm not sure which one New World is.
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>>49245586
I looked them up on google, i do recognize beyond sanctuary but never read it. new world is one of those ones with the tiny italic text that is frustrating to try to read and has anime pictures.
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>>49245514
> it means they can't do it themselves
Or they're lazy. Or, and this is uncommon, they don't want to end up making a cyoa that another dude is making.
Why wouldn't he be able to do it himself?
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>>49245629
If everyone could make CYOAs, everyone would. Do you know how expensive a CYOA budget is? Specially if you're hiring professionals.
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>>49245497
High fantasy kingdom building bullshit in a world currently re-discovering ancient technology and magic after the last war obliterated civilization as they knew it. It's dumb and probably too open ended about what the world is like, but I enjoy it a lot.

>>49245576
No, Italics is known for Girls Military or Pokemon Personified, but I like New World the most.
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Anyone got the prison island cyoa from a few months ago, the one the creator said contained clues and hints?
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>>49245662
What? I'm actually interested in hearing your reasoning behind "it means they can't do it themselves". Why can't he?
He has the interest, evidently.
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>>49245795
Making a good CYOA requires you to know image editing and using specific softwares. Not everyone does, not everyone is interested in learning.
The guy you quoted said he only asked for the add-on once, but even if he asked a million times he would still be well within his rights not to wanna make it himself.
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>>49245667
>I like New World the most
How about this then?
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>>49240107
Method: A Drunken Night Out
Material: Odd Fetish (taboo)
Victim: Abigail and Myu
Complication: Shy
>Power: 11
>Cost: 0
>Time: 3
>Threat: 4
What to do:
>Friendly
>Taboo
>Attire
>Routine
>Money (from extra Power)
On a night out, Abigail lets something slip about her (or her daughter's)... proclivities. It's relatively harmless, but enough that she's willing to bribe me to keep quiet. I'll spend some quality time with the pair, while secretly indulging them (or myself) in private.
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>>49245993
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>>49245907
Basic image editing isn't that hard as the only thing you need to know about image editing in regards to CYOA creation is how to crop a picture and you can do that in mspaint without a hassle. The trick is to find images of sufficient resolution and size.

But I will say this though, a lot of people make stupid cyoa requests for extremely specific feitshes that only carter to that one individual. And the only time someone actually followed up with one of those request was that fantasy giantess cyoa which got like only three builds and a dozen replies of people saying they aren't interested in 2d women that are much larger/taller then themselves.
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>>49245907
And I'm well within my rights to call him a lazy monkey, and make what he wants himself.
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>>49245230
Affiliation: Underground
Name: Void
Gender: Male
Body Type: Fit
Appearance: Adult
Typing: Dragon, Ghost
Moves: Shadow Force, Dragon Claw, Extremespeed, Dragon Dance
Ability: Levitate
>Stats:
Health: 400
Attack: 500
Defense: 350
Special Attack: 0
Special Defense: 350
Speed: 250
Evasion: 25
Accuracy: 25
>Items:
Griseous Orb
Mysterious Rings x6
>Companions:
Flicia Eve *
Liuse Eve *
Brawl
Deco
Dig
Flafnir
Jeanne D'
Mali
Rabi *
Tex
Wiggle
Xjel *
Gawain
Arrgle * Don't judge me.
Haro Eve *
>Events:
Idol Year
Making Underground
The Grand Hunts
The Hashashins

But seriously. Don't ask me why I had to take every female orphan. It hurt my heart to not do it.
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someone post the overwatch cyoa
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>>49246024
Sure, whatever.
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>>49246076
CHEERS LOVE
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>>49246109
Power Mystery box.
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>>49246017
Hence why I said "a GOOD cyoa". Obviously anyone can shit out something basic in MS Paint, but would that be a fitting add-on for a well made CYOA?
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>>49246123
The contract is sealed.
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>>49246109
love genie mystery box
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>>49246109
>>49246135
Oh hey, someone is reposting my dumb genie thing. That's a good feeling.
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>>49245907
Not to mention, the person who originally wanted to make it had most of the ideas laid out right here.

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/47797594/#q47797937

Would feel wrong to make it when someone else is working on it.
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>>49246144
WOO! I'm a genie! Phenomenal Cosmic power, here I come. Sure, I'm granting wishes to idiots, but I still get power. I just have to be patient.
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>>49246135
You can make a good cyoa in MSpaint too anon. However I think the problem is there is this expectation that good cyoas must have gorgeous aesthetically pleasing graphic design then just neat organized boxes of images and descriptions with a blank white backdrop.
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>>49246113
thank
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>>49246113
>Soldier: 76
>Mei
>Reinhardt

Get /fit/ bros and have qt. I have simple needs.
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>>49245993
>>49246005
Remake when?
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>>49246156
Thanks for making it, man, it's very creative and well thought out. I don't keep up with namefags and authors, so I don't know who makes what, have you made any other CYOAs?
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>>49246403
Dunno Italics is currently working on either final fantasy or dusk city 2
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>>49244419
>>49244295

>On top of that, there are a lot of types of trees with variants that are gendered, such as Fig trees where you have both fully female and hermaphrodite trees.

I didn't actually know that, Anon. Thank you for the new information!

If you have Trees that are dioecious (I went ahead and looked it up) as opposed to hermaphroditic then of course you're going to get binary Dryads both Male and Female, but plant sex is a fickle thing either way- I'm not exactly a Botanist, but I'll gladly accommodate new information.

>>49244242
>>Alraune
>>Non-sapient
>So bestiality. Ruins them pretty hard too

Sorry, Anon; that's just how the Alraune do things; they're an extremely socially complex parasitic plant that has adapted to "prey" off of the hearts, minds and genitalia of the numerous Humanoid species within our wonderful fantasy setting.
The plant itself is the Alraune- the cute girls and boys you see it waving around are literally nothing more than very convincing love-doll flowers the plant basically puppets in order to get what it wants.
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>>49246135
Is this worth it at all?
It seems like D and E just mess you up to badly.
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Half the lewd CYOAs I make builds for I never finish because I almost always stop halfway through to fap, then lose interest once I'm done.
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>>49246639
>but I'll gladly accommodate new information.
Then it'll be in the Halloween update? If so that's good news.

If you change the Dryads to account for the above information, then I'd be less bothered by the Alraune. The reason I'm as bothered by both of them is because there's no alternatives, both fall into a camp I didn't like despite me wanting plant people around.

Anyway, what about the harpies?

Also, did you see the post last thread asking if there'll be any new aquatic monsters/minions next version?
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>>49245907
>not everyone is interested in learning
Irrelevant. They CAN do it. It isn't hard, everything is out there.
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>>49246754
Now imagine what it's like making a lewd CYOA
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>>49246560
>currently working on either final fantasy
Explain further.
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>>49246818
0rder is a CYOA inspired by Final Fantasy. That's all we know unless you take the one post that said it was going to be over 100 pages seriously.

I think he's going to release Spire first, though.
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>>49246135
E - Immortality
D - Luck
C - Love
B - Wealth
A - Power
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>>49246661
There's literally no combination where dying wouldn't be the better result.
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>>49246779
>Then it'll be in the Halloween update? If so that's good news.

It's just a minor text fix, so I don't see a problem sneaking it in there, something like "Dryads sex/gender is dependent on the species of their host tree" etc.

Though, it sounds like your real problem is there aren't enough Plant People for your liking. I'm not opposed to introducing a Plant Minion (I'd actually like a minion of every sapient type to be honest, I.E: a dragon minion, fey minion, etc) but I couldn't find/think up a satisfying Plant Minion... But what sets apart minions from other sapient monsters, you may ask?
Minions are basically species that are sapient, civilization building AND can be all four of their unspoken classes, exempli gratia: you'll notice every Minion has a worker, range, warrior and caster class in their little group shot.

>Anyway, what about the harpies?

Sorry Anon; Harpies are Monstrous Animal; they're about as smart as a macaw or a cockatoo. They're based of Dragon's Dogma's harpies.

>>49246779
>Also, did you see the post last thread asking if there'll be any new aquatic monsters/minions next version?

I do actually have MANY more Aquatic creatures planned, but I'd like to save them for a "Tropical Island" themed update further down the road that would include: more interesting things to do with water, lots of Polynesian/pacific flavored features, monsters & minions (with a few western guess stars like Ogopogo & Kelpies).
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>>49246882
>Inspired by Final Fantasy
Did he ever say which Final Fantasy per se? The series is pretty big, and sometimes the spin-off are way better than some of the main entries.
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>>49246950
>I don't see a problem sneaking it in there
Thanks.

>There aren't enough plant people
I feel like a few of the categories, like elementals, are a bit barren. With plants, I can only think of stuff like mandrakes and sheep plants etc, I'll probably look around a little bit to see if I can find anything but you might have to get into OC species territory to have civilization building ones.

>(I'd actually like a minion of every sapient type to be honest, I.E: a dragon minion, fey minion, etc)
This would be neat to see.

>Harpies aren't sapient.
Another real shame

>Tropical Island update
That sounds cool too. I thought the Halloween one was going to be the last, I didn't know you had other updates planned.
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>>49246135
This is one of those "you're fucked regardless of what you choose". the only really safe choice, unless you're gay or female het, is the small genies box. Otherwise enjoy your assfucked life.
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>>49246135
>>49247067
I actually found the one combination where you win. Power, Immortality, Luck, Wealth, and Love, in that order. Power overrides Love, since all I have to do is order people to love me and they will. Meanwhile, it doesn't matter what I own, because I can just use other peoples' things. As long as you just borrow them, they can never be taken from you.
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Posing one that I really like, though gets totally broken if you take any of the complications.
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well this thread is kinda floundering like some kinda dead fish 'innit?
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>>49247199
Slowest one in a while. I don't really understand why. Is there another thread up that I'm not seeing?
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>>49247267
School just started for all the kiddies.
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>>49247305
Oh I see.
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What happened to Quiet's Urban Fantasy CYOA?
I've been away for some time and couldn't find it in the pastebin.
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>>49247305
Thank God.
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>>49246109
luck 1
love 2
Immortality 3
wealth 4
power 5
>>49246135
Well my luck will protect me from being horribly abused and same with waifu who wont tire of caring for a mentally handicapped individual for the rest of her life.
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>>49247329
He said it'd be done by September, but here we are.
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>>49247329
Like all authors when they try to work on a cyoa. They become a kill.
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>>49246950
You could base something on this
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vampire_pumpkins_and_watermelons

It'd be pretty funny.
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>>49247399
Yes, it is indeed September.
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The pirate queen shall be my nemesis for fame and glory
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>>49247823
I think your brain is your nemesis currently.
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>>49244420
Choose Both
Motivation: Hero
Body Archetype: Heroic
Body Gender Type: Female
Breasts: D
Penis: Above Average
Eye Color: Green
Head Hair: To Ass
Body Hair: Extra Thick
Hair Color: Red
Voice: Powerful

Modifiers:
Enhanced Production (1)
Hypno-Junk (2)
Edging Amplification (3)
Forced Denial (4)
Alternative Discharge - Milk (5)
Sharing is Caring (6)
Elastic Capacity (8)
Coming Apart (10)
Efficient Exchange (12)
Auxiliary Storage - Breasts (14)
Technophile (16)
Shock and Awe (18)
Generator (21)
Open Tap (24)
Seed Bearer (27)
Adaptive Response (30)

Adversaries
The Milkmaids (32)
Coochella (36)
Andromeda the Amazon (40)
The Keeper (42)
Doctor Robotica (44)

Allies:
Ally: Barbara Sidekick-No-More (42)
The Mountaineer (41)
Second Skin (40)

Secret Identity:
Full-Timer

Superpowers:
Minor Resistance
Self-Sustenance (39)
Adaptive Response (37)
Perfect Healing Factor (32)
Enhanced Reflexes (31)
Adaptive Muscle Memory (29)
Super Senses (27)
Super Strength (23)
Super Speed (19)
Enhanced Mind
Danger Sense (18)
Super Grip/Wall Crawling
Flight (17)
Force Blast (12)
Force Fields (10)
Probability Manipulation (4)
Pheromone Manipulation (3)
Wardrobe Malfunction (0)

Basically a Superwoman with a whole lot of sexiness. This was a fun one, and hot as hell. Kudos!
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>>49243259
They're as awkward as I am. We were playing D&D.
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>>49247144
This isn't the latest version. Latest version goes up to at least the size of the Sun.
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>>49248211
Nice build! Thanks for posting it :)
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quests demon king, a realm reborn and vampire reign
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left switches hair, tail, cycle, claws, horns, hide and pheromones
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>>49245993
>Only power you have is that when you die, you wake up completely healed and in good condition with clothing far away from where you died.

Doesn't sound that bad. Strange cyoa though as you are literally choosing your adventure.

Bad End Run - Quests:
Wonderland (Critical)
Star Crossed Lovers (Critical)
The Lords Saint (Critical)
Demon King (Critical)
The Empresses Toy (Critical)

Academy Student (Hard)
The Wine, The Worker, & The Witch (Hard)
A Dragons Roar (Hard)

Grave Man (Normal)
A Witchs Nightmare (Normal)

Taking Refuge (Easy)
Fox and the Hound (Easy)
The Little Ones (Easy)
I Wanna Be A Hero! (Easy)
Eleven Moon (Easy)
A Realm Reborn (Easy)
Echo (Easy)
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>>49239417
"Consume.
You may gain the latest memories before the death of any animal WHOSE FOOD you consume. This includes humans."

I figure this is a typo; otherwise I guess this makes you go break into people's houses, kill them, and steal their breakfast to gain their memories.
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>>49239378
Sprite
Detect magic/Enchatment
+2 Green
+6 Blue
+2 Red

Consume -1 Green
Daze -2 Blue
dreamwalking -3 Blue
Familiar(Raven) - 1 Green /-1 Blue (+2 Red)
Wand - 1 Red
Afinity(Air) -3 Red

Hunter -Cleric

Since I live in the West the secular culture will hinder the cleric
Also I'll just live incognito
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>>49246109
Love
Immortality
Power
Luck
Wealth

I'm kinda a sucker for lovey duby shit
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Already posted this last thread but im spreading the newest version around.

Opinions? Thoughts? Input?
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>>49248712
>Latest version goes up to at least the size of the Sun.
I found it in one of the archives. I don't know where the latest version would be.
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>>49250211
It was posted some 2 or 3 threads ago as a webpage.
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>>49250189
How will I get off of Earth?
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>>49250230
ah ha. I found it. Thanks. Link for anyone else interested.
https://63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html
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>>49242693
Are men in our world puberty 3 or 4? What about adult women?

Is puberty 2 late teenagers (16-19) or late pre- pubescent/early-pubescent (11-14)?

At what point does one leave infanthood? Does "childlike" mean 3rd-4th graders?
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>>49250251
>God Gates Power (Opens portals to other worlds in another universe)
>Flight 3
>Instant Transmission 3
>Any Starship
>Kings Road Writ
>Probably some Companions will help with that too
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>>49250189
Remove the costs on Special Perks desu.
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>>49250318
Read the CYOA desu
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>>49245038
>>49245150
I never liked the powers in these, they just feel so weak compared to the champions of sins.

They're not even very useful at countering their corresponding sin.
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>>49250366
If I have Miracle can I cure Avery?

What if I kill him then use Lazarus to resurrect him but minus the illness?
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>>49250543
>If I have Miracle can I cure Avery?
Sure, but it would take a few months.

>What if I kill him then use Lazarus to resurrect him but minus the illness?

Well im sure that could work too if you can convince him to let you kill him.
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>>49250602
Oi though. You didn't mention in your post that you updated the CYOA. Do that. There are hella changes.
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>>49250620
Sorry lad, I didnt think I made enough important changes to mention it
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>>49250666
You did.
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>>49250276

[97] Protection 1
[93] Portals
[92] Insertion
[82] Population Increase 5
[75] Area Increase 4
[74] Attitude Adjustment
[72] Population Demographics
[68] Extrahuman Population
[66] Culture & Customs
[65] Technology Upgrade 1
[63] Magical Upgrade 1
[62] Secure
[61] Sanitation
[59] Aesthetics
[58] Public Education
[56] Diplomatic
[55] Healthy
[54] Music Affinity
[53] Festival Affinity
[52] Food Affinity
[51] Sports Affinity
[50] Intellectual Affinity
[49] Nature Affinity
[48] Literature Affinity
[47] Art Affinity
[46] Theater Affinity
[44] Cosmic Adjustment
[41] Landscape Adjustment
[40] Fertile
[38] Rich
[37] Fauna & Flora 1
[36] Dungeons 1
[35] Lifestyle Upgrade 1
[34] Influence 1
[32] Immortality
[30] Shape Shift 1
[29] Tongues
[27] Memory
[25] Awareness
[23] Inspiration
[21] Peak Condition
[19] Blessing
[17] Psychoactive Awakening
[14] Nullification
[12] Waifu 1
[9] Familiar
[6] Scrying
[2] Guidance 1
[0] Spirits

Just a very comfy, cozy world. Not too many personal powers or crazy magic going on, but people overall should be happy and busy.
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>>49250666
6 tons for Alchemy per month is pitiful. It should be set to 6 tons/week or something desu. 6 Tons is a large African Elephant. It's just not enough power for a Tier 3. Also, imo, Occultism's Telekinesis level 2 should also offer a strength multiplier as well.
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>>49244879
>It kinda sucks I'm forced to pick "Apathy" as my motivation in the cyoa. Picking "Hero" seems like false advertisement.

So pick Villain and just don't take any allies or adversaries. It even says you don't have to use your powers as a villain for criminal purposes, just selfish ones. Don't want to have sex all the time? Grab Generator. Anytime you cum you get 20 energy, so masturbate away. Throw in Edging Amplification if you really don't care about fapping or shlicking at least and push towards 100% more strength and efficiency. Then just do whatever you want.

A lot of the modifications are basically free points if you go that route anyway. Easily far more than the ten points you'd get from Apathy, granting you way more power for the same amount of sex and masturbation.
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>>49250276
[96] Portals
[93] Protection 1
[90] Population Longevity
[88] Culture & Customs
[78] Magical Upgrade 5
[76] Mercantile
[74] Wealthy
[70] Mystical
[67] Industrial
[65] Diplomatic
[63] Infrastructure
[62] Sanitation
[61] Healthy
[60] Secure
[59] Occult Affinity
[58] Gaming Affinity
[57] Food Affinity
[56] Intellectual Affinity
[54] Rich
[53] Fertile
[48] Lifestyle Upgrade 3
[46] Immortality
[43] Spirit Walk
[41] Memory
[39] Peak Condition
[37] Alchemy
[34] Energy Manipulation
[31] Biomancy
[29] Enchanting
[28] Teleportation
[27] Levitation
[25] Psychoactive Awakening
[50] Nightmare!
[47] Nullification
[44] Time Manipulation
[41] Elementalism 3
[39] Geas
[37] Blessing
[34] Superhuman Body
[33] Tongues
[31] Spirits
[30] Malice
[27] Exceptional Materials
[52] Exile!
[48] Guidance 1
[45] Scrying
[43] Conjuration
[41] Healing
[39] Glamour
[37] Machina Mind
[35] Inspiration
[33] Awareness
[28] Shape Shift 2
[23] Automatons 2
[18] Dungeons 3
[15] Landscape Adjustment
[14] Gambling Affinity
[13] Warfare Affinity
[12] Mechanical Affinity
[37] Trapped!
[22] Area Increase 8
[17] Gateways 3
[15] Division
[14] Attitude Adjustment
[10] Metahuman Population
[4] Technology Upgrade 6
[2] University
[1] Public Education
[0] Theater Affinity

Gonna work towards godhood and the removal of the complications. All while living a comfy or exciting life.
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>>49250839
>6 tons for Alchemy per month is pitiful. It should be set to 6 tons/week or something desu. 6 Tons is a large African Elephant. It's just not enough power for a Tier 3

You could be creating six tons of the most precious and rare materials in the universe from nothing. Nothing. Its a pretty good deal.

>Also, imo, Occultism's Telekinesis level 2 should also offer a strength multiplier as well.

Maybe
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>>49246113
Mercy, Winston, Soldier 76

I manage to cut my right hand's upper part of the index finger a lot so Mercy.
Winston because yes
Soldier 76 for extra defense
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>>49250276
>>49250758
>>49251018
After I make the perfect world I'm going on an adventure to recover my memories, ascend to godhood, kill Cthulhu, and maybe one day liberate Earth. Fun times are ahead.
[140] Rolled: Trapped!
[180] Rolled: Nightmare!
[220] Rolled: Amnesia!
[260] Rolled: Benevolent!
[245] Area Increase 8
[240] Gateways 3
[236] Portals
[233] Transient
[227] Protection 2
[217] Population Increase 5
[216] Attitude Adjustment
[214] Culture & Customs
[212] Pretty Population
[210] Population Demographics
[207] Population Longevity
[203] Extrahuman Population
[199] Metahuman Population
[193] Technology Upgrade 6
[183] Magical Upgrade 5
[181] Aesthetics
[180] Public Education
[178] University
[176] Diplomatic
[174] Mercantile
[172] Wealthy
[169] Industrial
[165] Mystical
[160] Technomagic
[158] Infrastructure
[157] Sanitation
[156] Secure
[155] Healthy
[154] Music Affinity
[153] Theater Affinity
[152] Animation Affinity
[151] Occult Affinity
[150] Art Affinity
[149] Literature Affinity
[148] Nature Affinity
[147] Intellectual Affinity
[146] Mechanical Affinity
[145] Gaming Affinity
[144] Food Affinity
[143] Warfare Affinity
[142] Festival Affinity
[140] Cosmic Adjustment
[137] Landscape Adjustment
[136] Fertile
[133] Exceptional Materials
[131] Rich
[126] Fauna & Flora 3
[121] Dungeons 3
[119] Spirits
[118] Malice
[115] Afterlife
[111] Pantheon
[107] Theme
[102] Lifestyle Upgrade 3
[97] Automatons 2
[91] Influence 3
[88] Equipment
[86] Immortality
[83] Spirit Walk
[82] Tongues
[80] Memory
[78] Awareness
[76] Inspiration
[74] Peak Condition
[71] Superhuman Body
[69] Blessing
[68] Teleportation
[67] Levitation
[65] Psychoactive Awakening
[63] Alchemy
[61] Healing
[59] Enchanting
[56] Elementalism 3
[53] Energy Manipulation
[50] Time Manipulation
[47] Scrying
[44] Nullification
[34] Guidance 2
[24] Divine Spark
[21] Familiar
[18] Rivalry
[15] Friendship 2
[13] Waifu 1
[8] Dominion
[6] Machina Mind
[4] Conjuration
[1] Fate
[0] Insertion
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>>49244420
Motivation: Villain
Body Type: Twisted
Body Gender Type: Female
Breasts: A
Ass: Petite
Penis: None
Eye Color: Green
Head Hair: To Shoulders
Body Hair: Bald
Hair Color: Blonde
Voice: Meek
Modifiers:
Restrained Donations (+1)
Enhanced Production (+1)
Hypno-Junk (+1)
Edging Amplification (+1)
Forced Denial (+1)
Technophile (+2)
Open Tap (+3)
Generator (+3)
Open Tap (+3)
Power Leak (+3)
Adaptive Response (+3)
Items:
Sound of Fury (-2)
Adversaries:
Andromeda the Amazon (+6)
Doctor Robotica (-1)
Secret Identity:
Wealthy Philanthropist (-4)(Extra rich -1)
Powers:
Minor Resistance (0)
Self Sustanance (-1)
Thermal Immunity (-1)
Magical and Psychic Immunity (-3)
Complete Physical Immunity (-4)
Perfect Healing Factor (-5)
Minor Enhancement (0)
Probability Manipulation (-6)

I'd usually just end up hanging out in my little mansion thing with the sexy robot lady and fucking the shit out of the amazon whenever she decides to show up. Plus, with probability manipulation, I can screw things up for the amazon so she won't show up when I don't want her to.
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>>49251053
>You could be creating six tons of the most precious and rare materials in the universe from nothing.

I could also be needing to defend myself against some shithead chasing me by turning the Earth under them into sand, m88. This is before we get into the conversation of arming niggas; guns, cannons and even medium-sized artillery aren't particularly light. What about if I want to make a small, not overly impressive, car? That's 6 tons.

This power is incredibly annoying. You can only use it like once or twice a month for at most medium-sized project and that's it. It's only consistently useful if you spend 90% of your time making small gems or some shit.
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>>49246113
Winston
D.Va
Zenyatta

D.Va and Winston are for funnin' around, Zenyatta will keep D.Va and I grounded. Winston can also build me some sweet armour or something.

I also find Zenyattas' innocent understanding of the world hilarious but not like in a mean way.

I will protect his mellow.
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>>49250958
That cyoa guts how much bang for your buck you get choosing modifications due to the huge increase in power costs. Last build and this build I ended up with 3 less points taking the same disadvantages and now the powers cost 3x as much on average. Not really fun anymore due to that.
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>>49246113
>Zenyatta
>Hanzo
>Pharah
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>>49246113
Does this count?
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>>49251770
>no zarya
SHIT/10 FUCKING PATHETIC GET THIS SHIT OUT OF MY FACE RIGHT NOW
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>>49251770
>Short distance teleportation
Reaper it is then. Hell, I don't even have to love him forever; I could just ditch him after I learn the teleportation. Though that would be dangerous, so I might have to kill him. Ah well, power is power.
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>>49251770
Mercy is obviously the best choice, but Zarya should at least be an option
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>>49251053
I just wanna say that I hate it when Telekinesis is linked to your own physical strength. Only being able to lift the same amount you could with your arms nearly defeats the purpose of Telekinesis completely.

Personally, I feel that the best thing you can do is change the wording to "powerful telekinesis" or something similarly vague and just lets the player know that their mind powers are suitably strong without having to buy a whole separate power.
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>>49251819
>>49252111
Any ideas how she should be?
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>>49246113
>Soldier 76
In addition to combat, he can probably teach me some discipline so I may better further my power.

>TorbJorn
Cool technology such as turrets? Heck yeah.

>Winston
Just to see if his tech can aid with TorbJorn's tech, and visa versa.

So, I get soldier training and some cool tech gadgets to use. May the world tremble at my strength.
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>>49246950
>>49246639

Just popping in to casually the new Halloween content is coming a long no problem.
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>>49252063
>being an unabashed teleport digging slut
You belong with the edgelord.
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>>49252188
Hags must be pretty bad.
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>>49252189
I'm okay with that for some reason. Have a nice day.
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>>49250189
>So many pages
>So much potential for power.
I have some reading to do. By the way, I see what you did with the spirit powers section.
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>>49252240
Honestly, I'm with you there.

> Teleportation using naked man wearing a paper-bag over his face continues inexplicable alligator based theft spree - More tonight on your local news.
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>>49252063
>implying he wouldn't just teleport away if you tried to kill him
>implying you wouldn't just teleport away when he came for revenge
>implying the pair of you wouldn't just keep trying and failing to murder each other eternally
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>>49251770
Widowmaker. No downsides whatsoever.
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>>49239378

Djinn ancestry

Channel
Drain
Madness

Heritage x 2
Two Magic Wands, one to cast Channel and one to cast Madness.

Cleric
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>>49243132
Anyone got the What I Read reaction image to this?
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>>49252252
>By the way, I see what you did with the spirit powers section.

What did I do, anon?
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I would like CYOAs where I could have more than one waifu. And that the potential waifus have some personality, not just "you get a harem" or something.

I usually disliked this idea, so I ignored any option with such until recently. I changed my mind, so I would like to re-visit the opportunities.

I like the ideia of more than one woman taking care of me.

Bonus if they don't fight each other.

It could be old CYOAs, no matter how old.
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>>49253234
So literally want 1 of the top 10 waifu cyoas posted?
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>>49253260
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>>49253280
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>>49253291
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>>49252127
>I just wanna say that I hate it when Telekinesis is linked to your own physical strength. Only being able to lift the same amount you could with your arms nearly defeats the purpose of Telekinesis completely.

It gives your strength range, its pretty powerful as is, you just need imagination.

>Personally, I feel that the best thing you can do is change the wording to "powerful telekinesis" or something similarly vague and just lets the player know that their mind powers are suitably strong without having to buy a whole separate power.

I dont like the idea of making it more powerful. Any other suggestions?

I would like to improve Occultist overall but I cant think of much to do with it
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>>49253260
>>49253280
Hard to decide between Inari and Hathor, for me. I know there's Polytheistic, but I just don't think I'm emotionally capable of being a fulfilling partner for multiple people. I'd honestly have trouble just keeping one person happy. Especially when they're literally a goddess. Man, this is depressing, when I think of what I'd actually do in this situation instead of just having it be wish fulfillment.
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>>49253303
Box
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>>49253318
Someone posted the latest version for you last thread. What's your excuse for posting the wrong one this time?
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>>49245907
>only asked for the add-on once
No, he said he hadn't "asked for the past seven or so threads". If you see that cyoa posted, it's most likely him.
In fact, lets count how often he's asked (both implicitly, like when he asks "how long does it take you to finish making one?" or explicitly "update when?") / posted the cyoa.

>>49245038
08 September
>>49177374
05 September
>>49118071
02 September
>>48995996
26 August
>>48962200
24 August
>>48893766
20 August
>>48851948
18 August
>>48821076
16 August
>>48779838
14 August
>>48689825
08 August
>>48595720
03 August
Fuck this list is getting way too long. As autistic as it is chronicling all his posts, it is nothing compared to him. What the holy hell is wrong with you, anon-who-keeps-begging-for-an-update? You could actually have made it yourself in less time than you've spent begging for it.
>>48544508
31 July
>>48503726
28 July
>>48471499
26 July
>>48437899
24 July
>>48348954
19 July
Some nice reverse psychology here.
>>48314160
17 July
Again some reverse psychology.
>>48244852
12 July
>>48197959
10 July
>>48185965
09 July

And now for some posts with explicit begging:
>>48159997
07 July
>>48036735
30 June
>>47972556
26 June
>>47935772
24 June
>>47882524
21 June
>>47825090
18 June
I'm skipping some posts since he isn't begging, just posting the cyoa.

>>49245514
See these two posts:
>>47287805
>>47341346
20 and 16 May. Now we learn that the excuse of "I don't know how to make a CYOA" is void.

>>49245038
>>49245150
Now that I bothered to check your earlier posts, you even suggested making it yourself:
>>48893766
>I wonder if I should do the update myself.
Yes, anon. Yes you should.
Or continue posting it every 2-3 days. I wouldn't be surprised if your constant begging got the author to stop.

I worry for your sanity, anon.
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>>49253355
I wasn't in last thread.
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>>49253405
Go look.
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>>49253420
But I fucking don't want to. You wanted to know what I didn't have the latest version and I told you.
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>>49253204
This what you were looking for?
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>>49253462
That's the image. Thanks.
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>>49253462
>CK2 pokemon mod
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>>49253462
I get everything except the Marche part.

Where does the Marche part come from in the cyoa?
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>>49253634
Marche is infamous for screaming "Escapism is unhealthy!" and dragging his friends from a life where they're happy back into a world where they're all shitty cripples.

So in this situation he's pissing on you for seeking escapism in a CYOA.
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>>49250276
>https://63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html

[125] Trapped!
[150] Bound!
[175] Amnesia!
[200] Benevolent!
[225] Nightmare!
[210] Area Increase 8
[207] Assimilation
[206] Insertion
[186] Population Increase 10
[185] Attitude Adjustment
[183] Culture & Customs
[181] Pretty Population
[179] Population Demographics
[176] Population Longevity
[172] Extrahuman Population
[168] Metahuman Population
[158] Magical Upgrade 5
[156] Aesthetics
[155] Public Education
[153] University
[151] Diplomatic
[149] Mercantile
[147] Wealthy
[143] Mystical
[141] Infrastructure
[140] Sanitation
[139] Secure
[138] Healthy
[135] Industrial
[134] Festival Affinity
[133] Warfare Affinity
[132] Sexual Affinity
[131] Gambling Affinity
[130] Food Affinity
[129] Sports Affinity
[128] Alcohol Affinity
[127] Gaming Affinity
[126] Intellectual Affinity
[125] Nature Affinity
[124] Literature Affinity
[123] Art Affinity
[122] Occult Affinity
[121] Religious Affinity
[120] Theater Affinity
[119] Music Affinity
[117] Cosmic Adjustment
[114] Landscape Adjustment
[113] Fertile
[111] Rich
[108] Exceptional Materials
[105] Magical Phenomena
[100] Fauna & Flora 3
[95] Dungeons 3
[93] Spirits
[92] Malice
[89] Afterlife
[86] Fate
[82] Pantheon
[78] Theme
[73] Lifestyle Upgrade 3
[67] Influence 3
[65] Immortality
[60] Shape Shift 2
[58] Blessing
[55] Superhuman Body
[53] Peak Condition
[51] Inspiration
[49] Awareness
[47] Memory
[46] Tongues
[41] Dominion
[38] Nullification
[35] Biomancy
[32] Scrying
[29] Time Manipulation
[26] Energy Manipulation
[23] Elementalism 3
[21] Conjuration
[19] Enchanting
[17] Healing
[15] Alchemy
[13] Glamour
[11] Geas
[9] Psychoactive Awakening
[8] Levitation
[7] Teleportation
[3] Waifu 2
[0] Familiar
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>>49253318
>>49253355
Updated version
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>>49250276
[125] Trapped!
[150] Exile!
[149] Friendship 1
>Trapped and Friends seem like obvious picks. Who would want to go back?
[137] Time Manipulation
>Extended to whole realm, extreme dilation: You can spend years in this realm with only a moment passing where you came from.
[146] Nullification
[143] Biomancy
[140] Scrying
[135] Conjuration
[133] Machina Mind
[131] Enchanting
[129] Healing
[127] Alchemy
[125] Psychoactive Awakening
[124] Levitation
[123] Teleportation
>Most these were taken for the combo of alchemy, conjuration, and enchanting that lets me make large numbers of useful magic items from nothing.
[121] Peak Condition
[118] Superhuman Body
[116] Shape Shift 1
[114] Immortality
[111] Spirit Walk
[110] Tongues
[108] Memory
[106] Awareness
>unaging superpowered lolimode activated
[101] Lifestyle Upgrade 3
[96] Automatons 2
>my golems and homunculae tend to my vast garden-palace-laboratory and keep the pesky normie tourists out
[95] Influence 1
>They know I created the place and they leave me to my own devices
[91] Theme
>AEtherpunk. I want a post-scarcity society powered by magic instead of science, like a fantasy version of Eclipse Phase only without all the apocalypse and Cthulhu parts
[88] Afterlife
[86] Spirits
>This realm is it's own afterlife. Anyone who dies here continues to exist as a ghost, and can be re-bodied by necromancers into a fresh body grown in the labs of the biomancers
>1/2
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>>49253862
[81] Dungeons 3
[76] Fauna & Flora 3
[73] Magical Phenomena
[70] Exceptional Materials
[69] Festival Affinity
[68] Mechanical Affinity
[67] Intellectual Affinity
[66] Literature Affinity
[65] Art Affinity
[64] Occult Affinity
[63] Theater Affinity
[62] Music Affinity
[61] Nature Affinity
[57] Mystical
[52] Technomagic
[50] Infrastructure
[48] University
[46] Aesthetics
[45] Public Education
[35] Magical Upgrade 5
[31] Metahuman Population
[27] Extrahuman Population
[25] Landscape Adjustment
>the realm takes the form of a single vast city, beautiful in design, full of gardens and parks and technomagical weirdness, like if Victorian London crossed with Ravnica had a lovechild with Tim Burton
[22] Gateways 3
[21] Insertion
[17] Portals
[14] Transient
[11] Protection 1
>The realm has countless gates, some permanent others temporary or cyclical. It's very easy to end up here by accident if world-jumping, but frustratingly difficult to find it on purpose
[10] Area Increase 1
[0] Population Increase 5
>300,000,000 may seem a lot for a realm the size of Belgium, but a lot of those are shades or homonculae, and the crazy high levels of magic can support basically unlimited population density
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>>49250276
What were some realms you guys made, like conceptually?
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>>49253701
>So in this situation he's pissing on you for seeking escapism in a CYOA.
I didn't know Italics had such huge balls to piss on the reader like that. I thought the pictures were for things that happen inside the lore of the cyoa/What's it about.
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>>49253924
Italics didn't make the image and it does not necessarily reflect his views. I feel like he made things super shitty to try and give you even more motivation to be a big hero and solve everything. However he kinda missteped in making the Great God shit talk you, since it makes everyone feel like they're worthless and it's all meaningless.
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>>49253260
Nyarlathotep is mai waifu, I spend the tokens on a comfy pocket dimension where we can plot the destruction of humanity
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>>49253939
>Shit talk you
Is it really even shit talking? They are being truthful, and fuck what the GG says.
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>>49253234
Here's one.
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>>49254204
Calling someone a janitor kills any sense of motivation they have.
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>>49253462
Its euphoric when a cyoa gives you what you expected.
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>>49254300
D-do you have this CYOA?
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>>49254373
Should be in the pastebin.
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>>49254439
Doesn't look like it.
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>>49254373
Here, I'll post it for you.
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>>49254524
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>>49254539
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>>49254554
>>49254539
>>49254524
Thankyou!
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>>49254554
Just remember that life has its ups and its downs.
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>>49254574
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>>49254524
>>49254539
>>49254554
>>49254574
>>49254583
Style of Life:
Wife:
>Mikoeme
Daughteru:
>Nia
>Toko
>Near
>Butterscotch
Slice of Life:
>New Year
>This and That
>Beach
Challenges:
>Lustful Daughter
>The Other Woman
>Red Mystery Box: SS
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>>49242693
Reality Slider: All the way to the left; rewriting history.
Gender Silder: 25 Male/75 Female
Male; Puberty: 4, Hair:Y, Mammaries:Y, Hips:Y, Claws:N, Horns:Y, Wings:Y, Aggression:Y, Gigantism:N, Pheremones:Y, Hide:N, Tail:N, Libido:Y, Cycle:N
Female; Puberty: 1, Hair:Y, Mammaries:Y, Hips:Y, Claws:N, Horns:N, Wings:M, Aggression:N, Gigantism:N, Pheremones:Y, Hide:N, Tail:N, Libido:Y, Cycle:Y
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>>49251770
So i guess it's a choice between the yellow beak and red goggles for me. Talking dirty in French sounds cool, but my own libido is probably not up for a constant sex, so yellow beak it is. Also would help to name them.
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>>49242693
Reality Slider:
>All the way to the Left
M/F Ratio:
>90% Female
>10% Male
Male Changes:
>Hair: Y
>Mammaries: N
>Hips: N
>Claws: N
>Horns: N
>Wings: Y
>Aggression: N
>Gigantism: N
>Pheromones: Y
>Hide: N
>Tall: N
>Libido: Y
>Cycle: N
>Puberty Slider: 1
>IQ: 100 Narrow Bell Curve
Female Changes:
>Hair: Y
>Mammaries: Y
>Hips: Y
>Claws: N
>Horns: Y
>Wings: N
>Aggression: Y
>Gigantism: N
>Pheromones: N
>Hide: N
>Tall: Y
>Libido: Y
>Cycle: Y
>Puberty Slider: 3
>IQ: 90 Wide Bell Curve

The age of ss has arrived.
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>>49251770
White hair pure doctor, please.
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>>49250289
Men are Puberty 3, women are Puberty 2. If women were Puberty 2 they'd be as big, hairy, and strong as men, and would be treated the same.
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>>49240107
Method: Just Buy It
Material: Money Troubles
Girl: Noelle
Complication: Strong Will
> 12 - Power
> -4 - Cost
> 4 - Time
> 2 - Threat
What to Do
>Money (All -Cost Points)
>Pictures
>Shows
>Attire
>Friendly
>Sexual Contact
>Penetration

I get a tip on someone who can get dirt on ANYONE. I know just the girl. it starts off small. first the money (obviously), then, the real fun starts. just a PICTURE or two start with. she has no idea who i am, only communicate through email, I got her by the balls and she knows it. it snowballs quickly. more pictures, then cam SHOWS through a private server. shes a stubborn bitch (STRONG WILL) so the first outfit takes some time and threats. she gives in eventually. it goes like this for a month or two, then, Contact.
she's abrasive at first but by this time I have enough on her to ruin her and she knows it. start off FRIENDLY and nice, have her treat me to a couple movies and stuff. get her comfortable around me. Slowly start SEXUAL CONTACT, a grope here, a Caress there. Another month Passes as such (gotta go slow). Finally, after a Minimum of three months, One last thing to claim...
>Pic Related
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>>49255464
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>>49252128
Technophobe, loyal as fuck, /fit/ fanatic, wears the pants in the relationship, hope you like gentle femdom.
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>>49255522
>Zarya
>Gentle femdom
Nah, she'd be into actual femdom, not the thing where she's sliiiightly dominant.
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>>49255577
That only makes it better, anon.
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>>49255577
She's probably the type who's going to be firm but affectionate, though. Her combat style relies on protecting people, so I can't see her as the degrading or abusive type, even in play.
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>>49250300

Can you use speed 3 to get off Earth?
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>>49244420

>Your points values are as-listed

What the hell does this even mean?
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>>49250189
Start everyone with 35 power points, and add 1-3 for being one of the few that goes over. Also, maybe let people buy locked powers for 2-3 points? The Will benefit is exceptional, and I'd love to pick it up without being locked into Death.
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>>49251770
Reaper is obviously the best waifu, I don't even know what you guys are going on about.
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>>49256331
You see how the other motivations apply various point cost/gain modifications? The one you're asking about doesn't.
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>>49256392

Then that little tidbit is quite unnecessary, isn't it?
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>>49256409
Not necessarily.
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>>49254524
What's the character Mikoeme is a reference to?
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>>49256423

How so?
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>>49256435
Since all the other options apply some manner of point modification, you might get people wondering if the author forgot to mention it for the Hero motivation.
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>>49256482

Or maybe because it doesn't mention anything there is no point change.
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>>49254524
>>49254583

Wife
Mikoeme

Daughteru
Near as dependable onee-san
Nia as her Imouto

Slice of life

Family renuion
what strange relatives she have, a priestess constantly asking for donations and a girl dressed as a witch.

bedtime stories

Play day
better make those precious memories before it's too late.

challenge
red box

thankfully my wife is a Buddhist saint, so she'll probably be able to support this useless husband.
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>>49256489
So regardless of which way the author decides to do things, there's bound to be at least one dummy who gets confused.
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>>49254240

skill
mechanical 3

site
the seed 6

colonists
Rei 7

complications
i do +1
Do you copy +1
You're here forever +1


the only right way to play this.
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>>49250276
[96] Extrahuman Population
[93] Population Longevity
[91] Pretty Population
[86] Technology Upgrade 5
[82] Magical Upgrade 2
[81] Public Education
[79] University
[77] Wealthy
[75] Infrastructure
[74] Sanitation
[73] Secure
[72] Healthy
[71] Music Affinity
[70] Nature Affinity
[69] Sexual Affinity
[68] Food Affinity
[67] Alcohol Affinity
[66] Gaming Affinity
[65] Theater Affinity
[64] Fertile
[62] Rich
[59] Landscape Adjustment
[58] Fauna & Flora 1
[53] Dungeons 3
[50] Afterlife
[46] Pantheon
[45] Lifestyle Upgrade 1
[44] Influence 1
[42] Automatons 1
[39] Spirit Walk
[38] Tongues
[36] Memory
[34] Peak Condition
[33] Levitation
[31] Healing
[28] Friendship 2
[25] Familiar
[21] Waifu 2
[17] Guidance 1
[15] Enchanting
[14] Intellectual Affinity
[13] Area Increase 1
[10] Protection 1
[6] Population Increase 2
[5] Attitude Adjustment
[4] Festival Affinity
[0] Portals
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>>49255942
I'm just tired of the gentle femdom meme, and waifus in cyoas having tame, safe fetishes.
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>>49254240
Skills: Medical, Mechanical (9, 35%)
Site: The Accident (40%)
Colonists:
Felissa
Brooks (8, 50%)
Madison (7, 55%)
Anastasie (6, 60%)
Kiera (4, 75%)
Shalaka (0, 100%)

Well, it was a rough landing, but I think we're going to make it.
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>>49250958
Sure, I can try that out if he ever updates it.
I agree that a lot of those modifications are free points when I don't plan to masturbate/have sex.
I was just turned off at having to do it to get stronger, since I would then never get any stronger. I'd be a shitty hero/villain.
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>>49239378
So I spend the last week frogposting on /pol/. What did I miss? Any new cyoas?
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>>49251317
Powers used to cost 2, and now cost 0-6 based on how strong they are. I think that's pretty reasonable.
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>>49256989
Nope.
Beri came back for half an hour.
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>>49257058
I can't find him what did he said?
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>>49256694
You and me both. I don't want a mother figure. I want a girl who's into orgasm denial and water sports.
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How much do I need to know about Cthulhu and his pals to make a somewhat creepy CYOA?
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>>49257252
Cthulhu is one of the least creepy entities in the Mythos. Maybe that's down to overfamiliarity, but by now his effects on dreams and the ancient cults embedded across the world are old hat.

Anyway, don't just take the beings from Lovecraft, make up some of your own.
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>>49257252
Nothing. They're certified memes meant for mainstream consumption. All that matters is that they're scary and/or have squid faces and/or came from "another world".
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>>49257301
Agreed. Cthulhu is a giant fucking loser and plenty of even the weakest supernatural creatures Lovecraft invented are creepier than that big lug.
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>>49257124
>mother figure
Oh damn. Yes, that sums up how I feel about guys who like gentle femdom perfectly: They want someone to provide for them economically and emotionally.
They want their mommy.
>>49257098
Just that he got a job and doesn't have any time for fun
>>49222720
>>49222933
>>49226397
He seems depressed but then again, how is it news that an author of fantasy wish-fulfillment images is depressed?
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>>49257301
Maybe saying Cthulhu was the wrong thing?
I mean beings with nearly infinite powers, who could wipe out all proof of my existence in an instant. Humanity will have risen and fallen in the time it takes them to blink. They could uncreate the universe if they wanted to, but they can't be assed.

So a being with (nearly) infinite power that considers you less than bacteria, who gives you weird powers for no apparent reason, because he's bored. Like a benevolent God who has no idea what you want because you mean so little to him. A "hero"-power might be mindraping everyone to feel nothing but eternal happiness because there, you just fixed all problems in the world. He doesn't consider the repercussions, or care for them.
I like the idea so much. It's frightening and awe-inspiring that they have so much power, and at the same time comfy that they don't use it. I wish to capture that feeling.
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>>49257342
Well at least it seems like he wishes he could keep making them.
And I hope he gets better.
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>>49242693
>Slider all the way right
>gender flip button
Basically just an excuse to get my be the girl option. As far as everyone else is concerned nothing has changed. It will probably dramatically impact history, but no one else will care. If I left the slider in the middle it would have a dramatic impact on gender roles instead.

>Slider middle
>Both
>Wings on
>Tail on
>Horns on
Because why not. A civilization with wings would probably be technologically stunted, but since this doesn't actually change history it won't matter. The CYOA doesn't specify the particular type of wing/tale/horns, but for our purposes we'll say it's the classic succubus style (leathery wings, spaded tail, small horns)

>Slider all the way right
>Male only
>puberty level 2
Sexes are now physically equivalent (though not identical). Before you complain about "reducing one instead of increasing the other", keep in mind that this setting has a trade off at least in terms of perception if not outright aggression. Also it means women get to stay conventionally attractive.

>Intelligence
>Both maxed out with arrow also maxed out.
This changes EVERYTHING. Really in the scheme of things none of the other changes matter at all compared to this. Welcome to the singularity (which probably started a few thousand years BC in the new history).

Honestly I should probably play it safe and only bump this up a little bit, but I believe that if everyone really was that smart that they would be able to work things out for the better.
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>>49257442
Honestly, I think he should focus on other things than making fantasy images for the internet.
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>>49257342
God save us from armchair Freudians.
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>>49246135
Blind picks
Immortality
Love
Luck
Wealth
Power

Immortality of course is my biggest want. I really have no desire for power over others, only freedom for myself.

So I end up being the ultimate sub. No freedom I guess, but at least with luck things shouldn't go TOO badly and I can't technically get hurt. Worst case scenario is I'm ordered to hate my life or something similar, but I think that the shred of willpower I have left is enough to counter at least that even if I still have to perform any action (I can't even kill myself, which is a benefit given the circumstances).

Changing things afterward, I think I'd still keep more or less the same and only swap love and luck. Love B isn't very good with Immortality (since I'll outlive them no matter what). Love D and below are pretty crippling. I guess being the ultimate sub (with invincibility) is about the best possible outcome given the options.
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>>49256433
She is, shockingly enough, a reference to Toyosatomimi no Miko, a 2hu character. And my waifu.

>>49256505
>Buddhist saint
Well... You're not wrong, she is that. She has to be, she only did good things.
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>>49257679
Then please, elaborate. What do you consider gentle femdom to be, and why do you like it?
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>>49257796
Gentle femdoms are powerful women that take charge.
Plenty of girls like men that take charge, that doesn't mean they've got an electra complex.
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>>49257838
Distinct from (not gentile) femdom in that it doesn't go out of its way to involve humiliation and sadism. She's not trying to hurt you, she's just the top and a bit demanding.
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>>49257796
You do realize Freud has been proven to be completely full of shit right?
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>>49244420
If your mouth is an erogenous zone can you eat normally? Or eating will feel like sexual stimulation?
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>>49257969
It could be, but I think that can be left to your own head canon.
My underwear doesn't usually feel like sexual stimulation, and it spends all day rubbing on an erogenous zone
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>>49244420
I want "sexy" without being stuck between heroic (which sort of implies muscles) and oversexed. For female build.
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>>49246113
Tracer (Best Waifu, 10/10)
Soldier 76 (Best Bro, plus I never really had a good father figure)
Zenyatta (Can probably help me with my crippling depression and anxiety)

...got real there for a minute. But sounds great to me.
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>>49257576
What else is there to focus on? I mean, I guess I've also tried on occassion contributing to drawthreads or making browser games for the internet.
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>>49254524
Anya, Nia, Near, Family Reunion, Bedtime Stories, This and That, and... I don't like these challenges. Let's go Mystery Box. Let's go... Blue!

>Mystery Box

Oh no, son. You fucking did not.
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I'm going to date/work with mercy for her love
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>>49258037
Heroic doesn't have to mean muscle bound; it can mean whatever you want so long as its beautiful and photogenic to some degree.
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>>49244420
thanks anon, it makes alot more sense now.

Choose Both

motivation:
Lust (lets not kid ourselves)

Body Archetype:
Oversexed

Gender: female

Body features: D-cup, UNnatural, Huge, Green, To ass, Brazilian, Blonde, Sultry.

Pervy mutations:

restrained donation
Phylactery
Enhanced Production
Sticky situation
technophile
Edging amplification
Alternative Discharge (saliva)
Sharing is caring
elastic capacity
Coming apart
Efficient exchange
Auxillary storage (Tougue)
Shock and Awe
Wild side (fox, douphins)

generatior +2
Open Tap +2
Hair trigger +2
Seed Bearer +2
Holey Vulnerable +2
power leak +2

points: +26

Weapons
Nipple clamps of cloaking -2
sound of fury -2
buttplug of power -2

Meanwhile at the Hall of justice

Barbara the Sidekick
legiona
The Trupta (with my powers I shall bring a new era of peace and unity among the creatures of the galaxy)


Meanwhile at the Hall of Doom

milkmaids +3
the Mountaineer +3
Jon Longson +3
Double team +1
second skin +3
Andromeda the Amazon +1
The Keeper +3
doctor robotica +3
Cundiruticus +1

points: 38
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>>49258537
Secret identity
Brothel owner -3

Powers

Perfect Healing Power -5

super senses -2

danger sense -1
telepathy -2
astral projection -2
mind reading -3
illusion projection -4

wall crawling 0
flight -1
shape shifting(buttplug)-2
growing and shrinking -3


teleportation -1
matter ingestion -1
healing touch -2

lewd powers

pheromones -1
whore-aura -1
get sprung (buttplug) -1
wardrobe malfunction -1
resize -1
irresistible (buttplug) -1

total:0

Legends tell of a goddess of fertility who still resides among humanity to this day. A personification of love and lust who can gift both men and women the night of their life.
Though her powers are beyond mortal comprehension,she never uses them for harm or personal gain, only to bring to life the fantasies of others. though she is immortal, her skin is that of a normal human, to enjoy the pleasures and pains of mortality.
Throughout history many have sought to capture her to take her powers, and many have succeeded. However they say she has followers among the stars, any group that tries to subjugate a goddess does not last much longer.
However, if you seek her help, simply go to the center of Metropolis' red light district, and make a prayer.
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>>49257796
Like >>49257838 says, gentle femdom involves the woman being in charge, physically and mentally, but without the elements of degradation or humiliation common in femdom. While nurturing femdom is one version of it, she can also be playful, commanding, seductive, or simply superior.

Think of it as having a good boss rather than a shitty one. She's in charge, you will obey, and if you disobey you will be punished. But she's not going to treat you like shit while she's doing it.

Personally, I like it because I don't find being psychologically degraded attractive. I still want her to hold me down, scratch me, bite me, flog me, and piss on me, but I want it to be because that's what she enjoys, not as a way to exert superiority over me. She plays with me because she's in charge, she doesn't play with me to show me she's in charge.
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>>49258037
Ditto.
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>>49258537
>>49258551
Really nice build! Never thought about storing energy in your tongue!
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>>49258157
Things like making friends and trying out new hobbies since he was unhappy with moving to a new area with no real-life friends, or trying to meditate or something, anything that helps deal with all that stress he seems to have built up.
I don't personally think working on a cyoa has the same de-stressing effect as exercise, or reading a book or what have you. I could be wrong of course, I just think there are more important things he needs to focus on right now than making stuff that keep some unknown people busy for a few minutes.

I mean
>work leaves me mentally drained,
Then he should do something that doesn't require creativity, right?
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>>49258501
I'd still like to see a Gorgeous mode for people who want to focus more on being conventionally attractive and Heroic for those who want to focus more on being fit and muscular.
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>>49258623
thanks, only started posting CYOA builds last week and now I have an addiction.
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>>49258664
Why?
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>>49258766
For the same reason we have modes for average, scrawny, fat, and weird.
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>>49258551
Is there more like this?
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>>49258836
its a game called eiyuu senki, you can find more on danbooru.
thats Julius Ceaser
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>>49257422
>>49257252
Okay I've thought more about that. My current idea is something like an Eldritch God offering you powers: For every power on the left you take, you must take one on the right.
The left powers are your generic immortality, mind control, wealth yadda yadda, the right are some more... extreme and violent ones.
Like one power would be the ability to uncreate anyone you touch - removing them from history, you being the only one who knows they ever existed. And the one about world peace through, essentially, drugging everyone so they can only feel peace.
Basically the left are generic wish-fulfillment, the right are powers you might expect a "good"/benevolent Eldritch God would give you.

I just don't thing it's a good cyoa. I can already tell there'll be screaming because you have to harm people to get your beloved immortality/waifu. Plus, there's no replay value.
It's a one-pump cyoa.
I also had an idea for a sort-of Slice of Life with an Eldritch abomination. Something about her doing "nice" things for you, such as killing your coworker so you're more likely to get a promotion, or making you bald so you never have to get a haircut again, or extinguish the sun because you said it was too bright out, or write your name on the moon because she thought you might like that.
Make her have no concept of moderation and (human) morality.
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>>49250189
I really like this so far man. Though one problem I have is that if you take death to get will doesn't it sorta make otherworld easy?
Maybe not literally, but you'll never give into the otherworld right?
Other than that, WORK ON MAKING MORE OF THIS FASTER! I want to see what the quests and pacts are!
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>>49253308
I know this response is late as fuck.
>Any other suggestions?

Welp, not really. I guess I'd just suggest something where one doesn't have to buy muscle mass to be able to lift more than hundreds of pounds at a time. I mean, I feel like your strength having range should be more like a bonus you get via buying both strength and Occultist than something that goes hand in hand with telekinesis.

I just find it shitty that I have to buy Muscle Mass for telekinesis to really have use in a fight.
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>>49258909
You'll need to do something to require people actually use the powers on the right. Otherwise they'll just take them and never use them.
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>>49243711
Where is it?
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>>49258661
I'm actually immune to stress. 100% hakuna matata. My weakest socio-emotional stat is probably self-esteem. Doing anything that can earn gratitude (pulling off those POTG quad rez in OW, being DM, making CYOAs) fills the void.

"Mentally drained" applies more to things like selecting images, proofreading, and formatting. Creativity is effortless. I could be creative in my sleep. The key is to avoid thinking about the color green.

Personally, I find exercise to be more anti-escapism than anti-stress. In that sense, it isn't healthy. Books on the other hand are pro-escapism, making them a more useful asset (though I'm the lazy sort that just watches TV when an acted or animated version of the same story is available).

I'm not too busy this weekend, so unless things change, I'll try to do something CYOA related.
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>>49254524
>Anya
>Gets railed like a slutty Elf with some Orcs at the conventions she goes to.

>Dalia
>Eating the semen of her customers in her food.

>Elizabeth
>Takes loads of MMA dick.

>Mikeome
>Probably being a prostitute.

All these waifus a shit.
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>>49259302
>getting cucked in your own fantasies.
Top kek
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>>49259101
Oh yeah sure, don't worry about it. The world peace one would happen the instant you picked it, the uncreation might happen at random.
I thought of one that was "your thoughts become real", so better not dream about the world ending.
Like I said, it's shit, but what's new.
>>49259227
Same. I can create no problem. It doesn't feel like work to give words to my thoughts.
But I'm in a stump and the second I start trying to make anything, motivation is instantly drained. I just have to write companions then I can finish this cyoa, and writing companions is the easiest part, and I can't do it. I can't open photoshop. I can't open the file. I can't write.

I do disagree with you on exercise. You really ought to do something physical.
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>>49242693
can i be his friend if i let him go?
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>>49259449
>the second I start trying to make anything, motivation is instantly drained.
it's why i like small projects, things I can finish in a few hours. Because come next day, I have no motivation, and the unfinished work haunts me.
The amount of WiP's I have where the first and possibly second page are finished, and I can't continue, are staggering.
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>>49253209
Tarot card images. pic related.
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>>49253384
Wow. I honestly didn't know I was asking that much. Maybe there is something wrong with me.
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>>49258664
If I do another major revision, I'll add it.
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Chose your waifu and her father...
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Avarst ye, I got me a wicked pirate waifu

http://wanna-joke.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/art-pirate-woman.jpg
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>>49254583
>The father is a tyrant

Is this a reference? If so, to what? I must know, for reasons.
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>>49260119
Emi

Also
>Rei
>Ryota
I see what you did there.
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>>49260119
Secret boxes
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>>49260433
Pretty sure it's reference to another IA CYOA, namely the one where you're a Tyrant and you choose daughterus and powers.
>>
the fool
the tower
temperance
>>
I remember a time where these threads only barely lasted a day.
I wonder when we'll have a thread that lasts two.
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I can't even recognize what Pokémon some of them are based on. Would it really be that hard to add that to their information?
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>>49260886
I remember a time when these threads lasted several days.
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>>49260908
Would it really be that hard to just not be a scrub?
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>>49260920
Is it my fault none of them actually look like the Pokémon they're based on?
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>>49260911
Really?
Wow. Was that before the big, famous cyoas that get reposted constantly (e.g. Star dust)?
>>49260908
Git fucking gud.
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>>49260977
>"git gud" at a CYOA
You really have no skills to be proud of, do you?
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>>49242693
>nobody ever wants to release the immortal
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>>49261021
>implying anyone on /tg/ does
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>>49260490
I still haven't regretted picking the brown box.
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>>49260947
No, it's your fault you're a scrub.
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>>49261063
>"scrub at recognizing what Pokémon a girl is supposed to be based on the color of her bikini, when every Pokémon type has the same color palette"
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>>49261133
That's right.
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>>49261023
That actually might be the best choice. The options given are a bit too vague/limited for my liking (future science will no doubt be able to do better) and someone else might make the situation worse than it is now if the immortal remains cuffed.

The only question is, what'll the immortal do once freed?
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>>49261178
The most competitive of all Olympic sports.
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>>49260908
Yes.
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>>49260908
At the end of the day, does it even matter what they're based on? It's not like it plays a huge part in the CYOA or would have any impact on your choice at all unless you were just going to pick favorites or really wanted to know what their stats might be like.

I can seriously recognize most of them because of the typings, I even called Italics out for getting one of the Warlords wrong.
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New thread: >>49261498
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>>49261510
How do I make my choices not suck? Is there a CYOA I can do that makes my choices not suck?
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>>49261621
If you don't like CYOAS you could try not playing.
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$€# tier 2
plot tier 2
draw tier 2
time travel tier 4
dreams tier 2
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>>49261657
Anon says my choices still suck and I'm trying to figure out how to make them not suck.
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>>49261727
ok I will upload a CYOA that makes you almost a god but in the new treat
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disadvantages case 53, reincarnation, with out a map and pint-sized

difficulty god mode
powers wildcard omniscience, apprentice and twins

advantages comic book pretty, charles atlas super powers, special snowflake, man of mystery, item of power, companion, cauldron vials, plot armor, resources and bad@&& normal
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>>49261784
Will it make my choices not suck?
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