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"No one else bothered so I'll have to do it"-edition
>>49148541 t'was the last thread
http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu That's a pastebin made by SDA. I have no clue what's inside.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B5vYX1bZd1SBUU05dGYtNzFydFk Because I know you'll be talking/arguing about it, here's the link to da pokemon cyoa
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posting comfy dimension from last thread. I take no credit for this content.
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>>49164390
Hey, creator guy - when you log on, any way you could make All Along and Life Reset let you keep your memories from your first go around? Younger me was a jerk, but I'm still interested in the option.
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>>49164357
Never done this one before. Not looking forward to it.
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>>49152504
A
>>49152715
If I cant boost familiar stat above 25...
Familiar - 50

normal egg - 50
Avian - 50
normal size - 50

time - 50
space - 45
flora - 40
unnoticed - 30
last resort - 25
mama, not mama - 30
hunger of the ages - 50
large size - 40
Adding stats:

str - 25
tough - 25
agi - 25
magic - 25
enchanced eyes - 5
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>>49164390
I like this one. Very forgiving but it doesn't feel "too easy" since that's the point.
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>>49164357
ok let's try it
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>tfw want a bigger version of this CYOA but I have no clue what I want
At this point I'd be willing to do it myself but again, I don't even know what I want. Just more.
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>>49164390
HQ HQ seems like it wouldn't work given the time dilation inherent in the Zone. Also, is there any way to bring stuff into the Zone, because if not that'd be an excellent option.
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>>49164390
>Room Type: The Gaian Library. An overgrown library, with a large tree growing in the centre, breaking the roof open, letting the sun inside. A waterfall runs down the tree, and forms a lake. Primarily consists of the central room (full of bookcases full of books which are magically protected from mildew, etc) with several smaller rooms to the side.

>Entrance Method: The Everywhere Door. I just need to imagine the door of my room, and open it with my hand or with my mind. Whilst the door is open, I can let other people through. I'm also able to reopen doors which I've already used previously and exit through there.

>Food
>/lit/
>Ocean Man
>Comfy
>/diy/
>/fa/bulous
>Lewd~
>NormieStation
>PC
>The Rest
>Companion - Another One (I don't really have a waifu)

>Be the Girl, 0
>Redesign, 2
>Lesbify, 1
>Inter-Bot 9001, 1
>Lasting Effects, 2
>Reality Convert, 2
>Last Resort, 2
>HQ, HQ, 1
>Machine Learning, 2
>Believe it, 1
>Charm Cognition, 2
>Multiply, 1

Gonna take an extra day every day and learn so much shit.
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>>49164971
>HQ HQ seems like it wouldn't work given the time dilation inherent in the Zone.
I'd think the time dilation is disabled for the duration of communication.
>Also, is there any way to bring stuff into the Zone, because if not that'd be an excellent option.
I don't see why you wouldn't be able to bring stuff with you. What you can bring might depend on the entry method, though.
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>>49164595
Maybe companions or more semblances or the thing that Ruby has that frezes things.
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>>49165022
>companions
Why would you ruin a nice cyoa by turning it into a friendship simulator?
I quite like that it didn't have companions. If you wanted to form a team, you'd have to interact with people ITT.
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>>49165171
>Interact with people
Are you crazie?
jokes aside I see your point and you wanted sugestions
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>>49164595
I wish Talents were just a little less expensive.
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>>49165201
Yeah I know, and all opinions/suggestions (well, almost all) are valued.
I hate when a cyoa has companions use the same point system you use on yourself - it's like I'm forced to pick between powers and friends... and can I not make friends later on?
I can definitely see a "you need a team, pick 1-3 people or let fate decide" thing being added, but I personally wouldn't be a fan.
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>>49164390
really like this CYOA, hope it goes places.
I think there's a lot of potential for the room type section, more suggestions for style and furniture.

anyways, my build:

Room type: A European manor or chateau from the outside, but a cozy traditional japanese style bedroom, a ottoman style lounge with infinite cushions and carpet, and a roman style bathhouse.
And also lots of gardens, forests and maybe have the whole thing on a floating rock?

Entrance method: Other
A special travel card that, when used to get on a train or bus, would cause everyone else to leave at the next station, and then travel through a magical tunnel to the chill zone. when leaving the chill zone, it can take me to anywhere that has a bus or train station.
I think the chill zone would be more chill if I have to take my time getting there.

Physical items:
sweet stuff
Yum
200% comfy
all board games
/lit/ as heck
Lewd~
/fa/bulous
Ocean man

/out/ - a field of flowers, a forest with fireflies, and an ocean with whales and other giant sea creatures.

companion - Waifu, Fluffy pets, Another one
pic related, is my waifu

Abilities:
Be the girl,0
redesign,2
very own soul,1
last resort,2
attractive forces,1
HQ,HQ,1
machine learning,2
skinship,1
2 birds ,one soul,2
aether orchestra,1
still alive,2
believe it,1
size up, shrink down 1
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>>49164246
Best cyoa coming through
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>>49165828
Tell us when you start posting it.
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>>49164595
Companions, maidens bullshit, timeline alterations (to remove the maiden ass pull), plot/quest/ section, drawbacks, some kinda plot armor.
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>>49165843

I'd post one, but it's 6497 pixels past the limit. Someone get Hiroshim00t to up it again.
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>>49164390
gonna post my build from the previous thread
>room type: other (beach house)
>entrance method: other (just thinking it makes me enter, i can also invite others in whenever i want)
physical items:
>yum
>200% comfy
>gaymen piisii
>the rest
>/fa/bulous
>ocean man
>l-lewd!!
>normiestation
>spend the remaining four choices on /out/ and companions (true love)

abilities/extra
>be the girl (0)
>redesign (2)
>inter-bot 9001 (3)
>very own soul (4)
>attractive forces (5)
>hq, hq (6)
>skinship (7)
>never let go (10)
>aether orchestra (11)
>stylish (12)
>size up, size down (13)
then I use my remaining four points on min-max and go back and buy Fucking Nerds and /o/ Hell Yeah

i'd probably mostly use it for chilling with just my waifu, i'd still have stuff like the games if i wanted to bring friends in
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>>49166135
Divide it into smaller images
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>>49166049
>including the Maidens
God, that would be a great shitstorm.
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>>49166288
Friendly reminder that the maidens are overhyped pieces of shit that get rekt by three college aged fuckers. And the fuckers didn't even pull out all the stops or get injured.
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Does anyone have the CYOA where a necromancer sent you away to another world (Earth), and a friend finally found you after searching for years.
You then choose what you were like during school which gives you a mix of Charisma/Companion points and Power point.
You could for example be a social butterfly with 20 charisma points and 0 power points, or an isolated prodigy with 0 charisma and 20 power points.
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>>49166404
Oh yeah I remember that. The necromancer was actually your mom.
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>>49166404
Where Worlds Collide, gotcha covered.
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>>49166583
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>>49166339
Yeah that scene was a loud of bull.
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Reposting this from the last thread.

「Visions」 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRRboEFaDWk

Power - C - A (6 points)
Speed - C
Range - E
Durability - D - C(4 Points)
Precision - C - A(2 Points)
Potential - D - A(0 Points)

Enhanced Wisdom - The ability to possess incredible wisdom.

To compensate for lack of range, I was thinking that this stand could use projectile weapons which rely on strength. Things like throwing stones, using javelins, bows and arrows, slings, etc. With enhanced wisdom, extreme strength and precision, it could be the most lethal fucker at range despite the operating range being low. Its speed is shitty though, so it won't be as good in a close range punch up.

Ripped as fuck - 1
Brojo - 2
Do you even pose? - 1
Plot Armour x 4
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>>49166724
>Yeah, S3 was a load of bull
ftfy
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>>49164357
this is dangerous but ok
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>>49164357
Coloration is cancer. I can't even edit the colors due to how the 'text' is coloured.

FAIL
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>>49167270
It's not nearly as cancerous as namefagging is tbf
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>>49166728
「Iron Man」
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uctu1e353os

Stats:
Power: A
Speed: D
Range: E
Durability: A
Precision: B
Potential: A
Power: Iron Mimicry
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Iron_Mimicry

-1 Ripped as Fuck
-2 BroJo
-1 Sharp Dresser
-1 Do You Even Pose
-1 Cool Hair
-1 Plot Armor

It's a Stand that directly effects the user, temporarily transmuting their entire body into iron.
Makes them very strong and tough, but slows them considerably. It also makes them very heavy, a little over seven times heavier than normal, making it completely impossible to swim while active. Can be activated and deactivated quickly however.
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>>49167402
>effects
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>>49167607
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>>49167613
Remoove Grammer Notseez
There killing 4chan.
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>>49167660
Deal with it kiddo. It's a doggy dog world.
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>>49167678
>It's a doggy dog world
>doggy dog world
>doggy dog
Dog eat dog. You're a shit tier Grammar Nazi.
You're supposed to get butthurt, damnit!
And actually know about the English language, and the phrases and idioms that are a part of it.
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>>49164357
7 = 26 Points
Add Comfy (21)
Add RWBY (11)
Amp Up RWBY Points (7)
Amp Up RWBY Choices (3)
Supervise CYOAs (RWBY setting) (1)

>>49164390
Room Type: Virtual (High tech, glowing lines)
Entrance Method: Touch Me, Touch Me
Physical Items: Yum, Gaymin Piisii, Stronk Gear, Fully Loaded, DIY Zone, FUCKING NERDS, /lit/ as heck, L-Lewd, Aesthetics, /out/ (Forested area, mountainous area, beach area)
Abilities: Be the Girl, Redesign (15), Lasting Effects (13), Reality Convert (11), Last Resort (9), Attractive Forces (8) HQ, HQ (7), Skinship (6), 2 Birds, 1 Soul (4), Multiplication (3), Machine Learning (1), Size Up/Down (0)

>>49164595
Guardian (190)
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Race: Human
Location: Beacon Academy
Semblance: Doormaker, Witch
Gifts: Hope (180), Will (170), Intelligence (160), Strength (140), Agility (120), Precision (100)
Talents: Tactics (80), Combat (40), Engineering (0)
Weapons: N/A
Items: Scroll, Wilderness Gear (950 Lien), Rebreather (900 Lien), Dust Capsules x 5 (650 Lien), Dust Collection (550 Lien), Armor (450 Lien), Targeting Glasses (300 Lien), Motorbike (0 Lien)

Didn't pick up any weapons because I've got all the guns I need in the Zone. I'm not sure if it'll include a bunch of combination weapons, but if not, that's what DIY and Engineering are for. And of course if anyone wants to know what the hell the Zone is, it's just a really crazy semblance.
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>>49167761
It's the same thing for all intensive purposes.
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>>49167761
Anon, grammar mistakes are a diamond dozen, don't get so bent out of shape over them.
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>>49167838
He's an idiot irregardless.
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>>49167847
>irregardless
I've got bad news for you...
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>>49167890
I could careless.
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>>49164390
>Room Type
Other - a Luxurious modern beach house

>Entrance Method
Touch me

>Physical Items
Sweet Stuff
Yum
NormieStation
GaymenPiisii
/lit/ as heck
/o/ hell yea
L-LEWD!!
/fa/bulous
Ocean Man
Aesthetics

/out/ - A beautiful Pacific island lined with perfect sand beaches that have no dangerous sea creatures in them.

>Abilities/Extras
Be the Girl 0
Lesbify 1
Redesign 2
Lasting Effects 2
Reality Convert 2
All Along 2
Life Reset 2
Charm Cognition 2
Never Let Go 3
Believe It 1


My Chill Zone is a beautiful mountainous island surrounded by beach. The house itself is a luxurious modern beach house set up on a cliff just above the beach, with several wide decks along the back overlooking the ocean. The bottom floor would have a garage leading to my track, as well as a large space, opening onto a back deck, with a stage and a bar for hosting parties. There would be a staircase in the back leading up to the second and third stories, where the actual living space would be - several cozy bedrooms decorated in different styles, a library, a home theater, several rooms just for storing clothes and costumes for myself and my guests. Almost a third of the second story would be taken up by a large, ornate bathhouse, all white marble and silver and gold, which would open up into a pool and hottubs on the back deck. The third floor would also have a... private "club"-like space, for certain kinds of parties...

I give myself the power back in time around the time I turned 18 and went to college. With all this stuff, plus the ability to bring things like Cars and Food out into the real world, and the fact that anyone I tell about it will be cool with it, means that I can go through my college years much more confident, make more friends, and help out the friends I would have made anyway more with their own lives... plus I'd get to live those years in the kind of body I'd prefer...
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>>49168064
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>>49164595
>ywn form a team with anons and be the best team of the school
This has to be in the top 3/5 cyoas I most would like to be real.

>Guardian (90)
>Female & 17
>Faunus (Lion: Ears and tail)
Mostly because there aren't many Faunus in the show. I wanted to be a Hawk for the vision boost. Female lions are active, right? It's just the males that sleep all day, and the females hunt?
>Beacon
>Semblance: Force of Nature, lightning
>Gifts: Hope, Memory, Agility, Precision (20)
>Talents: Tactics (0)
>Weapon: Variable + Additional form + Collapsible + Weight reduction + Dust mod: Battle Rifle + Pump-action shotgun + Spear (300)
Hopefully the spear is still useful at a lower weight.
>Scroll (300)
>Targeting glasses (150)
>Armor (50)
>Dust charges (0)

This should be fun. Only downside is the cast (not Ruby) is 16 IIRC when they start at Beacon, and I'll be 17. Not that it's too bad.
Oh, and since the notes say tail/ears = freak, I'll only get cool golden eyes... because then I'm totally a Faunus.
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anyone have some magic vs. tech cyoa?
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>>49168258
Don't think that was ever used as a main theme.

An idea if someone wants to make something I guess.
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>>49168304


Helgi

Paladin
+Warrior

Archers
Berserkers
Horse Archers

Griffins

Rest Tents
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>>49167761
Don't be so ruff on him, newfriend.
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>>49164357
Options: Purchase CYOA (X2), Amp It Up (X3) (Disciple CYOA)
>>49164595
History: Outlaw
Age & Gender: 25, Male
Race: Faunus (Snake)
Starting Location: N/A
Powers: Ghost, Ferocity, Will, Fear, Beauty, Intelligence, Memory, Energy
Shop: Ranged (X2) (Handgun) (Kinetic) (Collapsible, Weight Reduction), Scroll, Rebreather, Armor, Targeting Glasses
>>49164965
God: Exiled
Powers: Super Soldier, Linherjar, Lorekeeper
Merchant: Cash Up Front (X25), Detect Divinity, Minor Miracles, Comprehension, Character Creator, Manse (Genius Loci, Moving Castle), Fortunate, Mystical Companion (Snake), Shaman (Wild Shape (Snake)), Artifact (Ring) (Phylactery) (Invictus), Profane, Chosen One, Reincarnation, Demigod

Third times the charm. Fucked up posting twice and messed the meta right up until >>49167806 posted. Was already four CYOAs deep. This meta was a mistake.
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>>49166339
> A trained assassin.
> Discount Aizen of African descent.
> Demonic witch with explosive ammo.
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>>49167116
This pleases me visually.
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>>49168508
You know the second CYOA (RWBY) costs 10 and the third (Gods) costs 15, right? Cost is based on distance from the metacyoa, not numbers combined.
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>>49168591
And you know what? None of those three are very far above the main cast. Hell, Cinder+Maidenz powerz still almost bites it against Pyrrha flying solo.
2-3 people who are good can take one easily. And if 2-3 people can take you, you're not a strategic asset. Useful, sure, but not all that important. Especially when you have to keep your abilities secret. The maidens are over hyped pieces of shit.
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>>49168656
>RWBY COYA (5)
>Disciple CYOA (10)
>Amp It Up (X3) (18)
>33
This is me >>49164454 also. If that is how it is and I did do it wrong with it not being after the initial reply I don't care because that's stupid as fuck.
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>>49168671
True. But maybe their value was not in their ability, but simply in denying them to Salem? Cinder's dialogue implied a possible alternate use for the power. Maybe it was the original usage of those powers.
Either way I think it's safe to say all Ozpin really wanted was to keep them out of Salem's hands.
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>>49168671
>>49168591
The writers are incompetent, the voice actors suck, and the only good choreographer they had died to allergies.
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>>49164595
Look to combine existing cyoas, maybe. 'Power Armor' for the weapon designs and 'Battlemage' for the weapons and companions. Have each origin give you points for the three categories. Noble types like Weiss get bonus points for their semblance / magic, Hero types like Yang get bonus weapon / combat points, Leader types like Ruby get bonus companion stuff. Add traits too, to let the player manipulate their origin's point pool a bit.
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>>49168821
>aura / semblance and companions*
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>>49168746
That's a reach, and you know it. If that was the case they wouldn't have bothered trying to transfer their power. They would've just kept Amber locked up and on life support. >>49168752
Yeah. The animation got a little better for the last season, but the writers tanked it. Plot holes everywhere, other plot threads dissolved, a wild tone shift, and pointlessly idiotic deaths.
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>>49168304
Helgi
Necromancer + Paladin

Spearmen
Elite: Cavalry-Knights
Elite: Horse Archers

Wizards

Rest Tents
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>>49168742
>The next CYOA posted after this costs 5 points. The one after that costs 10 points.
It doesn't matter where you post, because during this entire thread Comfy will always be 5, RWBY will always be 10, and so on.
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>>49135354
All of these stones need to be smashed. Either the power is too easy to abuse like Inu, Kunibu, Narum, and Zumru or the people with the power commit great evil for no reason like Utu and Anbar, or great evil must be done to use the powers at all or in any reasonable way like Amelatu and Libbu. Itima and Mitutu are just useless.
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Greed 1: (Fewer Powers)
Sloth 1: Take it easy
Sloth 2: Home Servants
Envy
*Gluttony
Envy 1: Fortune Thief
Envy 2: Covetous Destruction
*Greed
Sloth
Envy 3: Trading Places
*Wrath
*Pride
Greed
Sloth

Speciality Versatility x4
Unknown
Fair Play
Demonic Weakness
Fewer Powers
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How important are companions in a cyoa?
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>>49169516
They're not.
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>>49169516
For me, very important. For others, less. Know your intended audience.
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>>49169516
If it's a choice between power and companions, I would spend all my points on power, every single time.
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>>49168816
Pichu
Gardevoir
Alakzam
Salamence
Genesect
Nine-Tails
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Hey, /tg/.
I need some ideas for some fantasy races to put in my CYOA, that aren't the classic Human/elf/dorf/orc.
Can throw some ideas?
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>>49168816

This CYOA, always got me to wonder about the main important choice.
Go in the pokemon world, mystery dungeon, or what? Because I assume that you're in the "normal" world without the Hoopa card. So theoretically if you decide to take on the cards like mew, ditto, wigglituff, and whatnot, it makes you pretty weird , and potentially awkward.
On the other hand, if one listens to the pokemon world fluff, the pokemon world is absolutely terrifying. I love pokemon, but damn you, fluff. Too many soul-eaters around the place and destinies worse than death.
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>>49169762
Creatures powered by magic. Their body is Largely just composed of their magic, so they're un affected by blood loss or even organ destruction, but if they use up too much mana (which damage is also deducted from) they'll enter into a coma like state in which they're helpless. Most are only capable of taking a humanoid form, but have some leeway with it.
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>>49169762
Weird semi-tangible humanoid ghost-like people that were the result of attempted interplanar travel.
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Domain Master Update is here.

Big thanks to Imaginos for helping me. He has a way with words.

Changelog:
>Affinities
Some added abilities and balancing.
>Sizes
Moved Collosal to Final Form only. Added Large (the space between average/giant).
>Races
Some added weaknesses, some more lore.
>Boss Perks
Prowesses are fine-tuned, Corruption grants Psionic Power, Domain control grants teleportation inside the realm, Hybrid gives you a free minion hybrid, Empowerment makes it clear it also applies to domain and that affinities can be combined, Guardian is now a combination of 3 Lieutenants, Shapeshifting can also turn you invisible for a short time, Morphing negates the intelligence penalty, Final form has collosal.
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>>49164390
>All the Freebies
>Suburbia
>Other(I can turn any Door into a portal to the Zone)
>NormieStation,GaymenPIIsii,The Rest, Fucking Nerds, /lit/ As Heck, Aesthetics, Fully Loaded, Sweet Stuff, Yum, 200% Comfy,
>Custom Character
>Machine Learning, HQ HQ, All Along, Redesign, Inter-bot 9001, Very Own Soul, Lasting Effects, Never Let Go, Believe it, Multiply, Aether Orchestra
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>>49169855
>have a Honedge in the real world
>"hey buddy check out my sword"
>pass it over and watch the guy have his life force drained into the sword
>Honedge restored health!
>Honedge has gained EXP!
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>>49169762
Psychic race, which bonds to a 'host' to protect themselves as they're physically fragile. They harmlessly leach energy off of their hosts affection for them to help power their abilities.
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>>49169866
>>49169762
I should have noted that they can be killed in the coma state.
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>>49169869
Ah yiss.
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>>49167607
A

>>49167628
I choose 1 and use that to also choose 3, to swap as I desire.

>>49168081
D
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>>49169762
A species which eats rocks to help with their digestion. They slowly take on the characteristics of their diet, becoming very difficult to hurt. They can't swim.
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>>49169869
>Mooks
Now give 50! Most of them are now combat capable. Changed Slaves into Peasants but can be slaves to lore.
>Elites
Removed Battlemage, Added Summoners.
>Lieutenants
Nothing much.
>Minion Perks
Talented can be anything relevant now. Equipment changed to Upgrade as they give better items to your minions, Training buffed.
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>>49169939
>Realm Perks
Nothing much.
>NEW: Possessions
Powerful items or constructs to add to the lore.
>Complications
A whole rework. Too much to list.
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>>49169516
I rather like them.
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>>49168816
>Take Manphy and Shuckle
>Switch bodies and then kill your old body.
>You're now immortal and can go wherever the fuck you want.

Haha I win.
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>>49169869
>>49169939
>>49169982
Honestly you just made things weaker, so it's realyl a worthless update.
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>>49169869
>Undead have no emotion
Booooooo
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>>49169869
>Forcing shitty weaknesses on everyone who doesn't want to be a boring human.
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>>49169516
Female companions are very important. Male companions are all pretty much trash though.
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>>49169762
Fairy, angel, demon.
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>>49169926
This >>49169939
Doesn't count since the first part was posted before I posted.

>>49169954
But this? I love this Cyoa! Now with Double the choices!

>Wives
Tertia and Lilibeth

>Symbol of Office
The Ring and The Orb

Not sure how this bit can be doubled, so fuck it
>Beastly

>Estate
Great Pyramid and White Palace

>Vampire Country
Blood Oil, Rich, Lost, Blood Fruit, Blood Clouds, Skylines, Scenic, Bats

>Borders
Werewolves
Fairies
Goblins
Hunters
Pale Ones
Hell
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>>49169982
Possessions don't really seem to do anything.
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>>49169762
Ox men.
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>>49169762
Dragons.
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>>49169762
Centaur
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>>49170081
>made things weaker
Actually most things got a buff, but huh okay.

>>49170101
Eh, I might change that.

>>49170117
Such as? Humanoids are weak as is. And other races get plenty of bonuses already.

>>49170167
How are they not doing anything? They add to the lore and grant bonuses. Like everything else.


Oh CYOAg, always as grateful as ever.
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>>49170257
I thought this was pretty good.
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>>49169995
Your new position is more than 30 feet from the drinking spot, Shuckle prevents you from moving to a location more than that. As you are now surrounded by such locations you cannot move at all, and you no longer have heart swap to warp back.

You've met a terrible fate, haven't you.
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>>49169869
Storm

Petite

Dragon/Celestial

Hybrid[Celestial] (7)
Magical Prowess (6)
Domain Control (5)
Perception (4)
Charisma (3)

Empowerment * 2 (1) [Air, Mystic]
Guardian (0) [Archmage, Warlord, Psionic]


>Complications
Benevolent [ + 3 Tokens]
Hero[ I won't go personally but fr fr, I won't let them think for a second that they don't have my unwavering support. As long as they act LG/CG at least. + 5 Tokens]

Nemesis [Vitality]
Quest [Personal Guards]

I'm of two minds when it comes to Savior; I don't mind taking in SOME refugees, but why would I want to deal with the bullshit with their kingdoms? Some of use trend towards isolationism. Not taking it just yet. Not sure if I want to be involved with this rn.
Rival (+5 minions)


Total Minion Tokens: 28..

All my minions are Celestial Dragon-folk/Drakes.

The "Folk" are average sized but they tend to run the gamut between "effectively kobolds" to have as much influence as Drakes.
Drakes are Large sized and are the bosses.
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>>49170257
>always as grateful as ever.
Fuck off with the sarcasm. you posted shit, you should expect people to give opinions, even ones you dislike.

Yes you're a content creator, and there is respect you deserve for that. Don't act like a cunt.
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>>49170257
You made undead weak to everything and basically mindset, you made bestial a bunch of retards who can't function intelligently, made elementals 'always in war' with their counterpart instead of merely weak to it, celestials are ridiculously weak to the thing they're meant to defend against, and demoncs can't heal themselves.
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>>49169869
the very first sentence is missing a comma, or maybe a colon
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>>49170117
The weaknesses seem to be pretty logical for the races their assigned to.

And besides, in a world where all of these exist, humanity needs to be somewhat viable.
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>>49170126
>Male Companions are thrash.
Sup Anon?

I heard you talking shit about my husbandos King and Meliorate.
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>>49170257
>How are they not doing anything?
They're too vague. "You got a big house, you got a thing that does a something based on your affinity, you got another something that has something powers something somethings something"
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>>49170335
>>49169869
also the second paragraph of the intro needs to end with a question mark, not an exclamation mark
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>>49170341
>Logical
No, not really. See >>49170302 and they made several of them basically unplayable and pure garbage balance wise.
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>>49170354
More often than not Male Companions have less work or thought put into them than Female Companions.
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>>49169869
>Undead have no emotion
Fuck. You.
I just want to be a nice skeleton who has a domain full of music and light but you won't let me
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>>49170495
To be fair, he said he might change it.
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>>49169322
why is gluttony always so good?

speaking of which, Envy 3:Trading places, specialty gluttony, is the same as envy 2

can't tell if this was intended or not
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>>49170495
Screws over anyone that wants to be a skeleton who enjoys spooking people, a nice doctor zombie, or a vampire of any sort too.
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>>49170290
Gosh anon, you sure showed me.
>you posted shit
Why your post is top tier.

But anyway, I'm fine with the comments. Why are you so mad though? I'll be as sarcastic as I want though. Try and stop me.

>>49170302
>made undead weak to everything
No, only weak to elements.
>you made bestial a bunch of retards who can't function intelligently, made elementals 'always in war' with their counterpart instead of merely weak to it, celestials are ridiculously weak to the thing they're meant to defend against, and demoncs can't heal themselves
That was just as it was before. Go read up on the previous version. And you're exaggerating for real. They each have their benefits and downsides.

>>49170335
>>49170363
Cool, but these are very minor things.

>>49170358
They are, so they can be customized to your lore. If you want I can delete the section so you can enjoy it without the possessions.

>>49170341
Agreed.

>>49170495
I said I'll change it, don't rattle your bones now.
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>>49170287
>>49169869
>>49169939
>>49169982
Minions:

Guards * 3 (25)
Soldiers * 3 (22)
Mages * 4 (18)
Scouts * 2 (16)
Spies (15)
Servants * 2 (13)
Clerics (12)
Merchants (11
Engneers * 3 (8)
Recruiters (7)

Taking Savior here. Fucking hell. (12)

>Elites
Warriors (11)
Sorcerers * 2 (9)
Psionics * 2 (7)
Craftsmen * 2 (5)
Priests (4)

>Guardian
Champion
Warlord
Chosen
>Lieutenants
Oracle
Archmage
Hunter
Warlord

>Minion perks
Appearance (3)
Training (2)
Native (1)
Specialty [Magic] (0)

>Realm Perks
Unknown
Hidden

>Possessions
Grand Lair; I would have taken wealth for socialist utopia but due to the low numbers of soldiers, a fortification would be more useful. No reason to be tempting looters. My two warlords will know how to make best use of this territory as well.
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Can someone post the Exalted Slutlife DLC?
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>>49170571
>No, only weak to elements.
It's hyperbole, but it's not far from the truth. That makes them weak to the majority of everything that's not a mundane weapon.

>You're exaggerating for real.
No I'm not. If you're forced to devolve into a fucking mindless animal at the drop of a hat, you're basically useless. You can't function intelligently. If you're constantly at war with your element, you can't do anything else or have down time. Celestials being weak to corruption makes them nothing more than powder kegs, it's only a matter of time before they're easily corrupted and thus they're worthless against darkness. And not being able to heal means you're going to fall apart and be slain eventually.
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>>49170571
>They are, so they can be customized to your lore.
Too vague. I don't even know the sort of thing it can do, just that it's 'powerful'. That's not enough information to customize them.
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>>49169869
Honestly, I think your greatest mistake, and the one you continuously refuse to fix, is that you are bound and determined to use intelligence as a stat.

Don't you know where you are? No one here wants to play an idiot. We're insecure.

I suppose you could counter the problem by adding a boss perk that negates the INT losses from race and size, but everyone would go for that, and so you're back to square one, which is:
No one wants to play an idiot.

Also, removing emotions from skellies WAS kind of a dick move. What did skellies ever do to you?
Don't you know you have one inside you right now, hugging your brain and internal organs as we speak? Skellies love you.
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>>49170625
War does not mean constant battles.
There are long and protracted periods of tensely staring at each other and hoarding resources.
If anything, it should stimulate the war economy between realms.
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>>49170673
Yeah man having to constantly be on alert while shitting in your tent is so goddamn fun and great and counters my argument perfectly.

You fucking retard.
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>>49170661
He said he'd fix the undead issue.
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>>49170571
They aren't that minor. The CYOA has tons of mistakes like that, and many of them are bigger. For example how the hell does "Your reputation has exceeded into benevolent..." make sense?
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>>49164965
Anyone got the pokemon version of this?
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>>49170690
Well your jimmies seem to be rather rustled.
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>>49168081
A
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>>49167847
>>49167838
>>49168397
>>49167831
>>49167761
>>49167678
>>49167660
I love you people two fucking much.
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>>49170386
Sounds more like an author thing.
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>>49170789
REEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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>>49170789
Don't treat me like a pre-Madonna, I have zero taller ants for being put on a petal stool.
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>>49166547
Thanks!
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>>49170789
You missed the best one.
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>>49170816
>>49170753
Upgraded save states and precognition
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>>49165828
Ship
>Star Yacht
>flares
>crew
>shield
>med lab
>Chopterx2
>groundracer x1
Personal
>Medical and traders
>enviro suit
>med cache
>mix'n'match (mod & enviro)
>laser
>business investment(hospital)
>healer symbiote
>spiritual fetish
>mega drugs
entertainment systems
>film
>space internet
>tv
>vidya
>music
>book
Companions
>Dr.flynn Dreen
>Reiner Hoch
>Miivii Ket ?
>Nurse Dominique Quinn
>Donna walsh
Planet
>Phrustoh-fel
Perks
>Pureblood
>Family
>Conscripts
>Gut feeling

Mobile hospital providing emergency medical care and evac to wounded Fellians (for a nominal fee of course)
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>>49170830
Let's not get too overbored.
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>>49170830
Oh anan-e mouse how you make me giggle.
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>>49170854
Show me than.
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>>49170885
The double whammy here: >>49167897
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>>49170625
>That makes them weak to the majority of everything that's not a mundane weapon.
Your logic is a bit biased. Without elemental there's still enough so go ahead and take your pick.
>Physical
>Magical
>Supernatural
>Psychic
>Social

It's okay to talk about things, but all of your issues were in the previous version and weren't a problem at all. They're also very open to interpretation. Such as:
>And not being able to heal means you're going to fall apart and be slain eventually.
Read:
>cannot be healed through conventional means
Means you can heal through unconventional means.

I'm okay with this discussion going back and forth, but you need to give me something to work with. And calm down, it's becoming too tempting to post smug anime girls.

>>49170641
I'm open for suggestions. Really.

>>49170661
>adding a boss perk that negates the INT losses from race and size
Hello, have you read Morphing or my changelog post?

>>49170696
Eh, it's clear for everyone but you. Like I said, minor mistakes because they don't interrupt.
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>>49170900
Oooooooh that was really there best their.
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>>49170905
>Physical
Yes.
>Magical
Most forms of magic deal elemental damage. It's not all magic missile.
>Supernatural
Meaningless term.
>Psychic
Only raw telekinesis. Everything else like pyromancy etc would be super effective.
>Social
This isn't Exalted.

>Not a problem
Clearly I disagree. You're not seeing a lot of people picking the ones that blatantly cripple them like bestial, are you?

>Unconventional means
And what ARE those? If there's no clue as to what they can do the only conclusion is that there is nothing.
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>>49170952
> Unconventional means.

I think that would depend on your affinity. Like draining the ambient presence of your affinity in your realm to heal.
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>>49170952
make one of your possession heal you?
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>>49171006
Make one of your possessions turn you into God.
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>>49170952
Are these arguments or you just taking the piss out of what I said? You're basically going:
>Yes
>Nope, nope nope nope not in my headcanon.
If the problem lies with your own views and imagination, then there's not much I can do. I can reply to all your nonsense again with counterarguments but seeing how you disregarded them, it just means it will continue to loop.
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>>49171088
You already close when in your own realm with the right perks.
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>>49171112
Not that anon, but your counter arguments were retarded. The only good point was physical damage, and he had already acknowledged mundane in an earlier post
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>>49171112
Unless you have some really kooky interpretations of magic and the like, then you have to admit most of those attacks are elemental. Ever seen a D&D spell list? It's mostly fireballs and lightning bolts.

You aren't pretending counterarguments at any point. You're just going 'nuh uh' to certain complaints and ignoring others completely.
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>>49171203
IF you're dealing with the 4 classic elements then lighting may not be considered one at all. You still have magical acids, gravity attacks, pure magic force, magnetic attacks etc.. there are tons of things that aren't "elemental" in that sense.

>>49170952
>This isn't Exalted.
There is a social aspect to DM cyoa and if you want to ignore it then you're welcome to do so. Others won't. Don't try to blow it off with some game reference as an excuse
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>>49169869
Here's a build I've been thinking about for a while.

Affinity: Gaia, Mystic, Technology
Size: Tiny (6 inches)
Race: Humanoid
Boss Perks:
Agility, Magical, Perception, Charisma, Enchanted Armour (Drivesuit), Empowerment x2, Guardian (Tiny Humanoid, Champion/Warlord/Assassin) (Drift Partner)
Minions: Tiny Humanoid
Mooks: Guards, Soldiers, Mages, Servants, Clerics, Merchants, Engineers x2
Elites: Sorcerers, Psionics, Priests, Craftsmen x2
Lieutenants: Warlord, Archmage
Minion Perks: Devotion, Upgrade, Training
Realm Perks: Protected, Hidden
Possessions: Treasury
Complications: Benevolent

Let's go fishing.
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>>49171280
>Something you can't know, blind defense of Bliss.

Also even if there's a 'social aspect' there aren't literal social attacks.
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>>49169869
Could you theoretically pick Necrotic, Tiny, Monstrous, and corruption, would you be able to function as a parasitic entity? Could you use Phylactery to create a plague bearing your corruption?
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>>49171425
Charisma is one of the main social skills. There are social minions. Those would be your social "attacks". Or do you need some item written up that says "oh youze can nao physically attack with your very presence"...seriously you can't be that stupid.
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>>49171182
Why are my counter arguments retarded? Do you realize I designed the damn setting so I naturally would know it better. I really don't feel like spelling it out for you, but there we fucking go. You can call me a retard for falling for this shit, but this is the last time I will elaborate on this.

>>49171203
Magical is an aspect seperate, yes seperate, from elemental and doesn't have to be just magic missile. Magic enhances elemental, yes. But it's seperate. Don't make me pull out a damn wiki to lecture you on what magic is or magical energy.

Now I'm going on a limb here and say that my point came across. But you still find magical not a worthwhile type. That's your problem then.

>Supernatural is a meaningless term.
Oh okay. What is Light, Dark, Monstrous, etc to you then? It sure ain't elemental.
And you pool Psychic with Pyromancy? For real? Do you have any concept of what Psychic means?
>This isn't exalted
This isn't your CYOA.

>You're not seeing a lot of people picking the ones that blatantly cripple them like bestial, are you?
It doesn't cripple them. That's just in your head. If you read carefully, it says:
>bestials savage nature may descend into feral behaviour.
Which means it will have some feral traits that can be both good and bad. If you find that to be crippled, then, again, it's your problem.

Fact is, humanoid is always the most popular pick because it relates. However, I've seen plenty pick other races, and there's always hybrid to make up for negative sides.
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>>49171476
That's a pretty cool idea there.
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>>49171476
Yeah you can create a parasitic entity, but how are you going to use a phylactery to create a plague?

Either way, take the CYOA and imagine it in your own way. I'm all for creative options.
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>>49171550
I don't think you're understanding. We were talking about their weaknesses to attacks. Unless there is literal social combat, such as in Exalted, it's not relevant to the issue being discussed.

>>49171562
>A damn wiki
It's meaningless. We can go off generic magical spells, or we can go off of setting specifics. The later is on you, but unless you copied from somewhere, a wiki doesn't help.

>What is Light, Dark, Monstrous
I didn't mention the first two because I didn't consider them elements. I don't know how 'Monstrous' is an attack type either. But none of that information was conveyed in the term 'supernatural'. You had to clarify to lend it meaning.

>And you pool psychic with pyromancy? For real?
Do you know anything about how people think of psychic powers? Pyro/cryo/whathaveyoukinetics are often a huge branch of psychic powers.

>It doesn't cripple them
It does, if you don't just want to act like a wild animal. 'Feral traits' are never good unless you play your Domain Master like a mindless animal. There's a reason I specifically called it an issue for preventing you from being intelligent. Because when it is in effect, it does.

>Humanoid is always the the most popular
Then why nerf some of the others? That indicates there's little reason to.

>Hybrid to make up for negative sides.
Oh really? And where exactly are the combinations that remove the feral mindset, or the universal elemental weakness, or the inability to be healed?
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>>49171066
what is question mark?
>>
Sloth >>49169322

Sloth II's Gluttony secondary needs to be about getting more people into your current abode and switching abodes or keeping a small number of servants during a move. (Less than 24 hrs, but anything with a kitchen and beds can be considered a home. Including mobile homes.)
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>>49169869
>Affinity
Gaia & Illusion

>Size class:
Petite

>Race
Humonoid I guss is the closest on this list to being a fairy.

>Boss Perks
Agility
Magical
Perception
Empowerment
Domain Control
Enchanted Armour
Enchanted Weapon
Shapeshifting

>Mooks
Mages x 2
Guards x 2
Spies x 1
Servants x 1
Scouts x 2

Sorcerers x 1
Agents x 1

Archmage x 1
Assassin x 1

Minions vary between the fae and forest dwelling humans.
Fae are petite, humans are average.

>Minion Perks
Native
Devotion
Sustenance

>Realm Perks
Protected
Large

>Possessions
Grand Lair

>Complications
Do I need to choose one?
If I don't then I choose none and if I do then I choose Quest.

I'm aiming to drive anyone who trespasses into my domain mad through trickery, illusions and generally just being a cuntish fairy.
Otherwise I'll just enjoy my hedonistic life in my comfy forest.
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>>49171680
The question mark is a symbol generally used to represent an inquiry or something that is not known, and as such likely to lead to an inquiry.

Happy to help.
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>>49164246
Haven't seen the perfect Angel build for this in awhile. What happened?
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>>49171667
>I don't think you're understanding. We were talking about their weaknesses to attacks. Unless there is literal social combat, such as in Exalted, it's not relevant to the issue being discussed.

That probably depends on your interpretation. I don't think many of the races are strong against social "attacks" unless they have no emotions or desires that can be manipulated in various ways. Then they'd be strong vs social attacks.
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>>49171663
My line of reasoning though was that that the Corruption perk would hold negative effects for anything that would come into contact with a Phylactery, which in this case would be a single specimen of bacteria. The bacteria itself could conceivably become corrupted as well, and thus replicate into various harmful diseases. Without the soul, of course.
Thanks for the CYOA.
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>>49171768
Well he's removing the no emotions thing because of general negative reaction.
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>>49169954
>Bride:
-Magdalena
>Symbol of Office:
-The Sword
>Archetype:
-Batfolk
>Estate:
-White Palace
>Vampire Country:
-Bloodsprings
-Bloodfruit
-Days
-Scenic
>Borders:
-Werewolves
-Demons
-Pale Ones
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>>49171822
Heh so now undead are "weak" to social "attacks". Ask and you shall receive eh?
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>>49171877
or perhaps susceptible is a better word then weak.
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>>49171877
Fuck off, you admitted you just do this to drive away content.
>>
Were I to 'admit' to being the mastermind behind all trolls or descent, I'd do it to cause paranoia that I could use to shut down arguments that I didn't like.
Boogiemen are useful like that.
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>>49171910
What the hell are you talking about? Where did you get that idea? I'm not >>49172010 that anon. I posted about the social aspect of the cyoa.
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>>49171877
>intimidation attack against undead
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>>49164390

>Room Type: Other
Each room is decorated in a different tasteful style (modernist, lolita fashion, coastal, etc.)
The theme is somewhat obvious, but not over-the-top.

>Entrance Method: Other
An internet hyperlink that will magically take you physically to the Chill Zone. Will only work if I personally give the link.

>Physical Items
Yum
NormieStation
Gaymen Piisii
The Rest
/lit/ as Heck
L-LEWD!!
/fa/bulous
Aesthetics
/out/ - I'm going to change it up occasionally, but I'm thinking something like a palace garden initially--with a lot more fun stuff like hedge mazes and cute sculptures.
Another idea I have is to have the entire Zone be somehow on a train and have pretty mountains/oceans/whatever be visible out the window.

>Companions
Custom Character
I'd feel incredibly weird to have actual fictional characters with me, so I'd just use them as "templates" if need be. I'm not really going to use them much unless I'm in a point of my life where I'm incredibly lonely though.

>Abilities/Extra
Be The Girl - I am going to be a cute trap and I will have lots of hot trap sex.
Redesign - Useful for friends who might want something.
Very Own Soul - save it for later.
Lasting Effects
Reality Convert - I guess I'm going to have to leave eventually.
Last Resort - If I get hit by a car or something.
HQ, HQ - Machine Learning combo.
Skinship
Charm Cognition - hey where did you get that fucking machine---OKAY I SAW NOTHING WHAT AM I DOING HERE
Aether Orchestral - I wish I could make money from recording these, but I'm a /mu/tant anyway so it'll still be fun.
Machine Learning
Believe It
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>>49169869
THE WALL is now a ruler. Again. And huge again. And a robot. And updating a build.

Affinity: Technology
Size Class: Large
Race: Construct (metal)
Boss Perks: Vitality Prowess, Physical Prowess, Perception Prowess, Charisma Prowess, Enchanted Armour, Enchanted Weapon x2 (2 Tower Shields), Domain Control

Minions: Average Humanoid, Large Constructs
Mooks: Guards x6, Soldiers, Scouts, Servants, Merchants, Engineers
Elites: Warriors, Agents, Craftsmen
Lieutenants: Champion, Warlord, Assassin
Minion Perks: Diverse, Appearance (Strong), Talented (Shield-Bearing), Specialty (Defense), Equipment, Training
Realm Perks: Large, Protected
Possessions: Grand Lair
Complications:
Benevolent
Saviour

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i1Fr-SE0kNk
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>>49164390
>>49164390
All freebees
log Cabin
Acme Hole

Yum (muh stew and muh bread)
200% comfy
Stronk Gear
Fully Loaded
DIY zone
/tg/
/lit/
L-Lewd
Outdoors(Perfect winter, soft snow fall, gentle winds, permanent white sun.)
Custom
Redesign
Lasting Effects
Very own soul (for muh new waifu)

Really thats all i need.
A quiet place to bring friends to and play games, get strong and smart, and be free from this hell.
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>>49169869
>>49169982
Illusion + Separate + Expansion = The material world being devoured by a mindscape representing the human subconscious.
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>>49164595
ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA

History: -0 New Arrival
Age/Gender: 17 Male
Race: Human
Starting Location: Beacon Academy
Semblance: Fast Mover
Gifts:
-10 Ferocity
-10 Will
-20 Strength
-20 Agility
Talents:
-40 Combat
Shop: -1000 Cybernetics x2 (Both arms)
Items and Gear: -0 Scroll
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>>49169869
Comfy faerie hermit build.

>Affinity: Gaia, Illusion, Mystic
>Body: Average Humanoid

>Boss perks:
>Vitality Prowess
>Agility Prowess
>Magical Prowess
>Perception Prowess
>Charisma Prowess
>Corruption
>Personal Guards
>Empowerment x2

The sorcerous queen of the fey, beloved by all of my subjects, for they know well that the power that keeps the kingdom alive comes from me.

>Minions:
>Personal Guards: 1 sidhe Champion, 1 sidhe Archmage, 1 sidhe Chosen, 1 sidhe Hunter
>Lieutenants: 1 sidhe Warlord, 1 sidhe Oracle, 1 sidhe Assassin, 1 pixie Chosen
>Elites: 10 sidhe Warriors, 10 sidhe Sorcerers, 10 pixie Sorcerers, 10 sidhe Summoners, 10 sidhe Psionics, 10 sidhe Haremites, 20 pixie Agents
>Mooks: 50 sidhe Guards, 50 sidhe Mages, 50 pixie mages, 50 pixie Scouts, 50 pixie Spies, 50 pixie Servants
>Minion Perks: Appearance, Native

The two races in my domain are the sidhe and the pixies, though they refer to themselves as belonging to a single race, which they call the fey. The sidhe, including myself, are humanoids of average size, and the pixies are humanoids of tiny size. The sidhe are all about human-sized, while the pixies vary in size from the smallest to the largest size available under the Tiny size bracket. Oh, and as outsiders may often be disturbed by, all fey are female.

I only wish the CYOA told me how many civilians I have.
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>>49172839
>Realm Perks: Hidden, Unknown

The realm is just another patch of deep forest, set somewhere within an already alarmingly huge wilderness of dense vegetation, jagged mountains, and wild magic. The entire area is nearly impossible for foreigners to navigate and full of natural and magical hazards. The surrounding wilderness has an ancient reputation that says those who enter are quickly lost and, in most cases, never heard from again. Unsurprisingly, only the desperate or mad ever actually stumble across my realm itself. Magic keeps the interest of strangers away, and even if it didn't there's nothing to physically distinguish the realm from its surroundings. Once inside the realm things get many times worse for those with hostile intent. The plants turn on them, magical phenomena attack them, and their minds are clouded by background illusions.
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>>49172883
>Possessions:
>Miracle: Astral berries.

Translucent berries that softly glow in the dark and have a very minty taste. They are fragile and fruit only once a decade, and cannot be cultivated on purpose but only found in the wild forests. They are also incredibly valuable and therefore protected by the fey with great devotion. Eating one berry heals and revitalizes the body. Eating a handful restores youth and heals any old deformities or mutilations. Eating many over a longer span of time slowly imbues the eater with affinity powers - mystic, gaia, and illusion.

>Complications:
Hero (good)
Quest (neutral)

For the Hero quest I put in a substantial investment. I and my personal guards will command the support effort, and we also bring my warlord and oracle lieutenants along. Oh, and we bring three quarters of the elites and mooks too. The assassin and chosen lieutenants, commanding the other quarter of the elites and mooks, are left at home as defenders.

For the Quest quest we have to keep a low profile, so it's just me and my personal guards, plus the pixie chosen lieutenant with a few pixie sorcerers and pixie agents under her command. That should be a potent force while still being almost undetectable.
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What is the best program to make CYOAS?
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>>49173138
notepad
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>>49173138
Paint
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>>49173138
I use ms paint.
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>>49173138
First notepad, then MSpaint once you've written your stuff up
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Anyone got one of those prison-type CYOAs where you get points to upgrade your stay. ie nicer shower, better food, companion, library.

Please, dying to find one again
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>>49173171
>>49173195
>>49173258
>>49173326
Ok I'll see how it goes.
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>>49169869
So what do i pick if i want actual werewolves, humanoids who can turn into beasts? Morphing for me? And what for minions, Hybrid?
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>>49169825
>your tongue can be a penis
wut
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>>49173475
I read penis as pelvis, and it was even more wut.
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>>49164390
Alrighty! Time to make our wonderland, friendos! Life gets rough a lot of the time, so having a chill-zone is just about the best present an anon can ask for at this point. The freebies by themselves are great, too.
What type should our rooms be? I've always been partial to tatami mat Japanese rooms, cluttered with tons of stuff, gives off a really cozy feeling, so I guess that wold be under the Ethnic section for a Japanese apartment.
Power Gem is a no-brainer for an entrance method, just put it in a ring and live like normal! Nobody'll ever question it, and it's not as autistic as the Crazy Combo or Instant Hole option.
Ooo, time for our physical items! Twelve is more than doable, thank you very much. We'll take Sweet Stuff and Yum first off: eating is very, very fun. The Gaymen Piisii and The Rest are absolute necessities too, as well as the Normiestation and Comfy option. Jeez, that's six already? Well, I guess having workout gear is useful too, so we'll take Stronk Gear. The /tg/ and /lit/ options are more essentials, too. For our last one, let's take /fa/bulous: always be prepared!
We're forgoing two options to get a fluffy friend, which I guess I'll define as a friendly cat for now.
Seventeen points for extras? Sure thing! Let's get the Inter-bot, Last Resort, Reality Convert, Never Let Go, Aether Orchestra, Machine Learning, Believe It, Redesign, Charm Cognition and Lesbify!

That covers it. Our perfect Wonderland. Now, won't you come with us?
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>>49173337
bumping this request.
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>>49173337
>>49173818
That sounds fun.
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>>49169869
Affinity-light
large celestial

physical prowess, magical prowess, perception prowess, charisma prowess, enchanted armor, enchanted weapon, personal guards, empowerment-acoustics

giant constructs
average humanoids

3x construct guards
1 construct soldiers
1 human recruiters
2x human priests
1 construct craftsmen
2x human riders
1 human oracle
1 human warlord
native, devotion, upgrade
personal guards-1 human chosen, 3 champion constructs

separate, protected
Miracle
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>>49174074
Blue-board, fag. No nipples.
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>>49174074
And the sequel
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>>49174424
There's a SFW Sissy Life PDF too you know.
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>>49169516
For me personally, very. One of the most important part of a CYOA
>>49169762
Do an insectoid race.
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>>49174366
>No nipples.

>being this american
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>>49171729
but what is symbol and inquiry?
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>>49174456
I didn't post sissy life
that was a different anon
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>>49170596
>>49170287

Changing this build to add:


Whispers. This'll only trigger after all the other complications because there's no way I could handle everyone all at once.

The boons would go to Corruption for the psionic power and Personal Guards. Guardian's Chosen aspect is getting replaced with Oracle.

My other four lieutenants will be:
Chosen
Warlord
Witch and another Oracle.

Thus I have three warlords, one arch-mage, two oracle-power users and a witch. Seems overall balanced with a slight tint towards the military aspect.

No Asssasins are getting past these oracles, though let's just get that shit clear.


Also the sizes of my lieutenants:

Guardian is Large and male.

Chosen, Warlord 1 the first of the Warlords that aren't Guardian, Hunter are of Average size and male.

Warlord 2 the second of Warlords that aren't Guardian, and Archmage are of Large and female.

Oracle that isn't Guardian and Witch are of Average size and female.
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>>49174074
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>>49174878
Damn I wish Rumors and the marriage drawback were less harsh. I want more minion perks but who wants to serve some grasping mortal king and get married to a shithead? Plus it's damn hard to quash Rumors, doesn't matter whether or not they're true.

Want to take devotion, evolution & sustenance but shit.

Shit I'll take it but shit's going to be...shit.
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>>49169869
Realm Name: The Arcology

Affinity: Technology/Mystic
Size Class: Large
Race: Construct
Boss Perks: Vitality Prowess, Physical Prowess, Agility Prowess, Magical Prowess, Perception Prowess, Domain Control, Empowerment, Final Form (Colossal, Technology/Storm)

>>49169939
Sizes: Large and Medium
Races: Elementals and Constructs

Mooks: Guards x 2, Soldiers x 2, Mages, Scouts, Servants, Engineers (7)
Elites: Warriors, Sorcerors, Craftsmen (4)
Lieutenants: Champion, Warlord, Archmage, Assassin, Oracle (-1)
Minion Perks: Talented (Craftsmanship), Native, Upgrade, Training (-5)

>>49169982
Realm Perks: Expansion, Protected

Possessions: Source

Complications: Rival (Nature Realm)

Once a bustling metropolis created by a forgotten race who blended science and magic together effortlessly, the Arcology now stands silent and empty. Its gears are still, its guardians immobile, its power faded. In time, it faded into the forest, and then from living memory.

But that was before. Before the guardian deep within its heart awoke, and set out to continue the work of its lost people. Before servitors and soldiers began to reawaken, and repaired its damaged machinery. Now it stands rebuilt, filled with constructs alive with new purpose, though what that purpose may be only its Guardian may say.
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>>49164357
Purchase CYOA: Disciple - >>49164965 (11/26)
Amp it Up x4 (-1/26)
User's Choice (2/26)

Alright, who wants to make my first choice for me?
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>>49175657

Monolatry
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CYOA where anons are Lovecraftian horrors competing with each other to corrupt and control a massive realm of the Gods when?
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>>49174878
Sure they can. A guardian who picks Oracle, Witch and Assassin would be able to get past them. It would be hard, but easily managable.
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>>49175512
Cool
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>>49175512
Why does the print options come up when I view this
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>>49176224
I linked it from Google; probably something there.
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>>49176044
CYOA where anons are the ancient evil sealed away for all eternity, and the CYOA is all about designing the prison and the obstacles that you must circumvent to enact your terrible will upon the world when?
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>>49176252
I just want to be an all consuming Hivemind, my man.
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>>49176016
>>49176016
Neat. Ok, let's do Monolatry: Vedara
Demigod - Lazari (32/40): Communion, Lorekeeper
Demigod - Eternal One (24/40): Indominable, Hero
Reincarnation (18/40)
Chosen One - Elsiel (13/40): Sophist
Shaman (10/40)
Fortunate (7/40)
Character Creator - Peak physical form (5/40)
Comprehension (3/40)
Minor Miracles (1/40)
Proselytize (0/40)

In service to Lazari, I have three primary goals. First, spread the word of Lazari, and convince people to stop destroying the little blue bubble we're living on. Second, fix humanity's mistakes - the Pacific Garbage Patch, Chernobyl, China's smog, and the like. Finally, once our own mess is clean, it's time to take our rightful place among the stars.
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>>49169954
>One of my Favorites

Seconded. It really won me over with it's lore.
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>>49175306
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>>49164390

Freebies
>All

Room type
>suburbia
> /out/ - 2 areas of farmland/grass fields, and a forested ridgeline that over looks it. Want it to look like North Eastern Alabama. Standard non-threatening woodland critters as well please. Also, have it be cloudy and or rain often.[2]

Entrance
> [Other] Sit down and say there is no place like home three times

Items
> Yum [1]
> Normie Station [1]
>Gaymen Piisii [1]
>Fully Loaded [1]
>Stronk Gear [1]
>200% Comfy [1]


Companions
> True Love [2]
> Fluffy [2] (Short Haired light Brown Dachshund)

Abilities
>Very Own Soul x2 (2)
>HQ HQ (1)
>Reality Convert (2)
>Aether Orchestra (1)
>Believe It (1)
>Machine Learning(2)
>Life Reset (2)
>All Along (2) (14 years old)
>Skinship(1)
>Min-Max (2) (/diy/ zone)
>Inter-bot 9001 (1)
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>>49176287
Huh. I just want to be a low consumption Hivemind.
Weird...
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>>49175330
You can diffuse rumors by starting your own rumors that conflict, making all of them moot as no one will know what to believe and will eventually move on to other things.
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>>49176584
I guess that has its merits. Actually now that I think about it, shit would be pretty lonely if everyone was me.

Oh darn.
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>>49169869
>>49169939
>>49169982
Christmas comes early this year.
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So how much of a headache do you think someone would have if they chose to marry terre and ozeane in pokemon personified?
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>>49176824
You best grind to god levels as soon as you can or have Ciel on speed dial.
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>>49176699
Exactly.
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>>49176852
Im actually trying hard to think what a worse situation would be? Maybe melliorate and loli. You couldnt even say a word before triggering space and getting dragonrended out of existence.
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>>49176901
Add Genesis to the marriage list.

Watch them fight over your fate. Preferably while explaining the birds and the bees to Loli while their distracted.
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>>49176937
Why not add constel to the list for that really akward family reunion.
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>>49176971
Decadence for maximum "fuck the world's safety" in the case of these events.
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>>49177035
I think that'd be a bit much, only for a braver man.
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Where are the waifus?
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>>49177095
I'm crashing this universe.
With no survivors.
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>>49177095
A braver man would take the Distortion World event and try to waifu the evil clones of his waifu as well. Speaking of which.
>Amew2 can't be waifued
>Mysterious Meteor Event
>can't waifu Deoxys
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>>49177258
Thats if go the monogamy route with constel then IMMEDIATELY cheat of her with like passille or something.

>>49177281
Implying you cant mate, give it a go.
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>>49177246
Inside you, for you were the waifu all along!
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Darn it, Virtue anon; your leaving us hanging again with your add on. Do you need help?
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>>49177374
>your
>Not you're

Darn it, not again.
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>>49177381
Blue board, man.
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>>49177415
Whoops
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>>49177347
How awful.
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>>49176534
You only have to pay 2 choices once for as many companions as you like, anon. You can pick 2 more items if you want.
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>>49175512
Awesome!
For solar exalt, do enlightenments cost half AND grant two?
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>>49177743
Yes
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>>49177415
That has been posted without issue before, hasn't it?
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>>49177877
It's not technically NSFW, but some mods react negatively to butts and ban you anyway.
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>>49168816
Lopunny
Ninetails
Alakazam
Gardevoir
Slurpuff
Doublade

And we both lived happily ever after.
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>>49177877
Harpy's showing bush, though.
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>>49164246
What would be the most masochistic typing for a Pokemon Personified build? I need a challenge.
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>>49164390
Room Type: Other
It's a fantasy tavern type situation, with the bar itself resting on a raised platform on top of which one can look over the dining area of the tavern. Above the bar, there's a doorway leading to some bedrooms and a large living room.

Entrance Method
By knocking on a door and stating a certain key phrase, you can create a door to the tavern that lasts until the door is closed. Opening the door again leads you back into the real world.

Sweet Stuff
Yum
NormieStation
FUCKING NERDS
/lit/ as heck
Aesthetics
Gaymen Piisii
The Rest

Outside: A rolling green countryside. Sometimes the weather varies, but it usually defaults to a gray, rainy day.

True Love

Very Own Soul [1]
HQ, HQ [1]
Machine Learning [2]
Aether Orchestra [1]
Never Let Go [3]
Charm Cognition [1]
Inter-Bot 9001 [1]
Redesign [2]
Attractive Forces [1]
/d/ enchant [1]
Lasting Effects [1]
Stylish [1]
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>>49177795
So the x2 part only applies to enlightenments that can be taken 3 times?
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>>49178747
>So the x2 part only applies to enlightenments that can be taken 3 times?
It means that options listed in the Enlightenments section cost half and grant double the points they would normally.
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>>49177957
>Now neither of us will be virgins!
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>>49178705
Go just plain normal type giving yourself no good items and abilities surround yourself with people better than you and jyst grind your way to the top.
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>>49178965
Wrong. Go Ice/Normal and stat yourself as a defensive type.
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>>49178705
Make a Magikarp/Metapod build.
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>>49178705
Grass and Dark, you'll have seven weaknesses and your typing will only be good against five types.
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>>49164390
>TFW you want to ask for a waifu but you're too heartbroken and attached to reality to do it in any CYOA
>TFW you just want to become wiser by reading, become a smith, maybe get ripped and dick around in a small lake.
>Wait, do I get to /his/torical?
>TFW sweet melancholy forevermore, chilling around with Socrates and a few invited bros.
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>>49175512
Slightly newer version. No major changes just a bit of making the fluff a bit more generic.
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>>49165828
Rate this:
>Training 2K
Slavers License
Cyber-Tech
Science Degree -> Tuition Fee
>Personal
Hoshi "Gust"
Donna Walsh
Tina Haywood
Vega Hjort
"Blinks" Uzo Sjel
>Starship 4K
Phantom Cruiser
>Vehicle 1250
Saucer <- Starship counting as a heavy one
Hover-Bike
>Armour 2150
Synth-Skin -> "Blinks"
Hard Light Shield x2 -> Vega,Donna
Stealth Attire -> Hoshi
>Weapon 1900
Sniper Rifle -> Hoshi
Custom Melee -> Vega
Custom Rifle x2 -> Vega, Donna
>Misc 3000
Holocom
Neurohelm
Scanning Wand
Eroticorp toy box
M/B/P Labs
>Freebies
AI
System Jammer
Hoverborad
Control Colars
Containment Cells
>Citizenship
Ming-Twins
>Perks
Blends
Suspicious
Robot Talk
Gut Feeling
>Cash Back -1500
Battle-Straffer from Tina

Total: 12800
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Small, probably final update to Chill Zone.

Just fixed up some wording to make things more clear, changed some text coloration to make things more consistent, and expanded the essentials pack to include furniture (just to justify the different styles of aesthetic you can choose, and I didn't really think "furniture" was a very good option to have to choose specifically). Also includes now a full kitchen (since I'm not adding a /ck/ option)

Anyway, just posting it now so no one posts the old version in future threads (I mean shit you beat me to it in THIS thread and it's only the first new thread after I finished it). Also just putting it down here, if you find a guy on DA that posted this, too, that's probably me, so don't worry about that.

Have a wonderful night, thread. Take care.
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>>49177591

Guess I better grab Lit and the aesthetics then. Thanks for the correction Anon.
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>>49179667
thanks cozy anon
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>>49179667
>>49179863
Oh fucking hell, I forgot to change /d/ enchant to include enchantability for Size Up, Size Down.

Well now that's been fixed. My apologies.
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>>49164390
>Freebies
All...because it's there?

>Room
Log cabin, 2 bedrooms, 2 full bathrooms, kitchen, livingroom

>Entrance Method
Crazy combo, giving a thumbs up while saying "time to get the fuck out".

>Physical Items
Sweet Stuff
Yum
200% Comfy
Normie Station
Gaymen Piisii
L-lewd
/fa/boulous
Ocean Man

>Out
Snowy mountains, magical village

>Companions
Custom Character
Another One

>Abilities/Extra
Be the girl
LESBIFY
Redesign
Lasting Effects
2 birds, 1 soul
/d/ enchant
Special

There, don't care if points are left over, this is all I will ever need.
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>>49180064
I hate to break it to you anon, but the latest version was posted >>49179944 right above you.
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>>49168816
Lopunny
Klefki
Meowth (×3)
Gardevoir

I got what I wanted. Kept things simple.
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>>49179944
>Freebies
All. Because why the fuck not?

>Room Type
Log Cabin

>Entrance Method
Touch Me, Touch Me

>Physical Items
200% Comfy
Stronk Gear
Fully Loaded
/diy/ Zone
Lit As Heck
/o/ Hell Yeah
L-Lewd!!
Aesthetics
/out/
Companions

>Abilities/Extras
Redesign
Lasting Effects
Skinship
Still Alive
Machine Learning
Reality Convert
All Along? - October 28, 2004
Lesbify!
Last Resort
Very Own Soul

It Begins...
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>>49180084
That's cool. I was responding to the original. If I feel like making a rebuild I will. It's late though, so maybe tomorrow.
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>>49179944
Freebies: Noice
Room Type: Other (Modern)
Entrance Method: Touch Me, Touch Me
Physical Items:
Sweet Stuff
Yum
200% Comfy
NormieStation
Gaymen Piisii
The Rest
/lit/ as Heck
/fa/bulous
Ocean Man
/out/ (grass field, dotted with trees, a few hills, all sorts of flowers)
Aesthetics
Abilities/Extras:
-0 Be the Girl (Just a taller, /fit/ter, better looking version of myself)
-2 Redesign
-1 Inter-bot 9001
-2 Lasting Effects
-2 Last Resort
-1 Attractive Forces
-2 Charm Cognition
-2 2 Birds, 1 Soul
-1 Aether Orchestra
-1 Multiply
-2 Machine Learning
-1 Believe It
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>>49168816
Alakazam
Gardevoir
Salamence
Vaporeon
Vigoroth
Meloetta - WAR
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>>49164357
x=?

Let us see what number I get.
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>>49175512
>>49178799

ah, sorry for being stupid.

well heres my build, hope I'm allowed to post it on /tg/

>Source
Solar exalt -50

>Form sculpting
Toned, Girlish, Petite, A-cup, Bubble, adaptive vagina
Child, White hair, Amber, Tan skin, Feminine 26
Tools make the craftsman +1
youthful Mountains -1
supple joints prodigy -2
laughing at bears -2
man-pelt amendment +1
Pleasure-Pain synthesis +8
orifice Teat transformation +2
overthrow the Lunar Tyrant -2
throat Taming exercize -1
seven gates yielding -1
ardor-glance indication +1
Orgasmic Birth +1

catgirl +5
mind psychology +5
cleanliness near godliness -3

total : -12

>Derangements

Lethe Gate Cleansing +8
dreamstone -3
Sheet Drenching Nightmares +3
passionate Raksha?
semen addiction +3
spear-bent cognition +3
fetishized compassion +5
ascending mercury +2
ascending Venus +2

total: 11
cont.
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>>49180714

>durance

lifelong servitude +14
breath of freedon -5

>entanglements

lolita dominatrix + Shapeshifter combination +40
Behemoth +25
Frayed destiny +25
True Love + Archetypical Master +25

True love
linked lifespan -30

total: 94

>Geasa
restricted Raiment +10
lingerie, shoes, swimsuits, sleepwear, cosplay, jewelry, girly clothe, plain clothe, harlots Regalia, headgear -22

health and hygine
body care -2
makeup -4
Healthcare -5
preventatives -3
naughty maid -9

mortal taming collar and leash +6

sex slave training +20
week days -3

total : 59

> Enlightenment Cost 1/2, Grant x2

enlightened essense -5
essense refinement x2 -30
by prayer norished -2
martial art style -15
erotic +8
sorcerous Initiation -10
marverlous arcane bounty (pussy juice) -10
plentiful -10
empowered x 5 -40
time denying kata -14
longevity X3 -30
immortality -20
behemoth apotheosis -25

total : -26

> bride of all scriptures (kaguya you slut!)

sutra of loving maiden sealed knowledge,
sutra of bountiful maiden sealed knowledge , consuming wisdom
sutra of desired maiden sealed knowledge, consuming wisdom
sutra of patient maiden sealed knowledge, burning truth
sutra of the pleased maiden
sutra of contest sealed knowledge
sutra of not maiden consuming wisdom

total : 36

I become a demigod of lust and a slave to my waifu for eternity, couldn't ask for more.

patiently awaiting the illustrated /d/-edition.
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>>49180084
You know what? After reading the re-write, I still keep all of my choices. Things didn't change significantly enough to make me regret anything.
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>>49174424
Ultimate hardcore build
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Are there any original (as in, not Worm) CYOAs?
I remember this one, but it was never finished.

And on the topic of Worm, would anyone mind posting the latest one, by the guy who did Times of Trouble?
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>>49164246
Here's a first rough try at a Champion of Chaos CYOA, it can be both used as a generator or a typical CYOA. I based it on the Realms of Chaos books.
It's still quite in the trials, may change stuff, let me know...
Didn't check much the grammar and there may be typos and such, english isn't my native language so it can explains some blunders.
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>>49181321
>CoC
It's a fetish cyoa I take it?
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>>49181348
Some people will always manage to think of anything as a fetish I suppose...
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>>49181405
Oh. Turns out Champion of Chaos is not that furry game, but they share the same initials.
Sorry about that.
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>>49165828
>"Кaкoгo чepтa ты cмoтpишь чeтыpeх нoгaх?"
It have no sense.
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>>49181808
Maybe he's speaking Neo-Future Russkie?
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>>49169954
Drusa

The orb

Beastly

White palace

Werewolves
Fairies
Trolls
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Oh fine I'll get us to the bump limit again. Not like I have anything better to do.
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>>49182218
That was perfectly timed!
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>>49181808
it literally means "why the hell are you looking four legs"
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>>49182355
Four legs is in the wrong case, so it sounds like some kind of foreigner who is bad at language speaking, not a native speaker.
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>>49179944
Hey
could you maybe change the picture of waifu/husbando to include a waifu AND a husbando?
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>>49182539
maybe because the anon who created the CYOA used google translator because they didn't speak russian?
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>>49182161

Asian realm
martial art and mystical arts

enhancements
Lascivious
living land
magical land
sky islands
steampunk

skills
bard prince
crown prince
extra martial art
prince stallion
sorcerer prince (air)

items
amuzans armament
amuzans aegis
copacetic conveyance
flying rug
wonderous artifact

nightmares
peasant revolt
capture prone
danger prone (i don't want no trable)
easily distracted

quests
strip club struggle
turtledactyl terror
misappropriated mask
paradise perverted

princesses
gwendolyn bennet
vamina taradon
ashanti willowsong
priscilla rockingham
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>>49179944
It seems that lesbify isn't compatible with /d/ anymore, which is very disappointing.
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>>49181164
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>>49182710
Probably. I actually mentioned it to him when he posted it initially, but he never changed it.
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>>49182809
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>>49182833
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>>49164390
>Rooms
Other/Virtual aesthetic. Tron Legacy style interiors. Rooms are separated by hard-light holograms, designed to look like the rest of the wall, that disappear when someone gets close (if it's unlocked). Entertainment and resting rooms are average sized, the rest are far larger than they need to be.
>Entrance Method
Other. Similar to Power gem, except the teleportation looks like a reverse of Kamen Rider Decade's transformation (9 black&white, "tv staticky" versions of me separate from my body and fade away as I disappear, and they form up into my body when I reappear)
>Physical Items
Yum, 200% Comfy, NormieStation, Stronk Gear, Fully Loaded, /diy/ zone, /lit/ As Heck, /toy/ time, Ocean Man, Aesthetics, /o/ hell yeah (Min-Max).
>/out/
Plains, short grass and always lightly raining during the day. Normal sky colour, time and star. Aurora every other night, massive nebula covering the night sky.
>Companions
None.
>Extras
Inter-bot 9001, Reality Convert, HQ HQ, Attractive Forces, Charm Cognition, 2 Birds 1 Soul, Aether Orchestra, Multiply, Machine Learning, Believe It, Stylish, Min-Max.

Nothings better than chilling out while improving myself at the same time. Maybe I'll eventually make cool enough things to bring out into the real world. Since I can't really get hurt or tired in the space, it'll be a goal to eventually train in dbz-tier gravity tfw able to flawlessly build, sand, paint and detail PG Gunpla while under 200x gravity
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>>49169869
cool stuff
hope your team-up continues for other projects
>>49182161
one of my favorite
comfier than the comfy cyoas for me
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>>49182809
Aw sweet!
I'll post it next thread, there's some things I have to take care of. How screwed am I if I don't know anything about Worm besides space whales?
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>>49164390
Best CYOA I've seen in a while, these are my favorite kind. Thanks a lot.

Gothic-European style, for that classical architecture and aesthetics.

Entrance Method:
Touch me!

Items:
Sweet Stuff
YUM
200% comfy
Normiestation
Gaymen Piisii
The Rest
Fully Loaded
L-Lewd!
Ocean Man
Aesthetics

/out/ - Mountains, weather is mostly rainy. Day night ratio is a 5-hours day to 19-hours night. The moon looks much closer to the world, the forest has friendly animals and lovely bugs such as fireflies and butterflies.

Companions:
Custom Character: Strong onee-sama who shares my hobbies.

Abilities:
Be the Girl
Lesbify
Redesign
Inter-bot 9001
Very Own Soul
Lasting Effect
Last Resort
Attractive Forces
Charm Cognition
Aether Orchestra
Min-max x2 -4
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>>49182974
Most likely you'll die in two years when shit really hits the fan. Assuming you survive until that point, that is.
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>>49183048
Oh darn.
I guess that's the good part about knowing nothing? I know Scion is apparently unkillable and unbeatable or something, but if the cyoa doesn't say so, is he really unkillable?
I mean, if all the descriptions are only in the novel and not in the cyoa, are they *real*?
I need sleep
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OC here.
I kinda don't like this one, but meh.
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>>49182161
>Realm
Medieval (Wizard, musician)
>Realm Bonus
Scholarly
Sorcerer (elemental)
Bard (music, xylophone)
>Skills/perks
Martial Master (unarmed)
Mystical Master
Prince Stallion
Wright Prince (aether)
Sorcerer Prince x4 (raw/force, negative energy, light, psionic)
>Items
Displaced Domicile
Immaculate Sponge
Murky Move Mantle
Travelers Transcript
>Quests
Lofty Lantern
Club Struggle
>Princesses
Anastasia
Gwendolyn
Ashanti
Taleri
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>>49179944
This is nitpicking a bit, but you misspelled "loneliness."
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>>49169869

A update for one of my very favorite cyoas!!! Thanks!

I don't think I'll post build this time though. My idea was kind of but not exactl faeryish, and there's already like 3 good faerie builds.....
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>>49183325
Coin
Forest

Bridge
Brook
Hot Spring
Gas Lamp
Fog

Kitchen (1/3/5)
Bedroom (2/3/4)
Bathroom (1/3/5)
Library (1/2/3)
Computer Room (1/2/3)
Indoor Pool (2/3/4)
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I spent my points on two amp it up's and a supercede cyoa for the next cyoa
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>>49179277

So, are there points or anything? Need for a negative or positive balance at the end? Something to restrict you?
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>>49183291
>if all the descriptions are only in the novel and not in the cyoa, are they *real*?
What is the point about making a CYOA about a novel if said novel is going to be discarded immediately? Of course they are real.
Just read Worm, it's pretty good.
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>>49183325
Chill Zone 2? Not that I'm complaining though.
The overall style reminds me of those 90' "asian" style, surprised there's no "slashy" font.
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>>49183687
Well, someone said they'd like to see my take on a comfy cyoa, so seemed simple enough and tried.
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>>49183325
The Coin. I might want to move at some point, you know?

Forest. Space is tempting, but I think I'd get bored of it awfully quickly.

Brook. Because sometimes you just want to relax by the water.

Hot spring. Because sometimes you just want to relax in the water.

Wildlife. I always like seeing critters while I'm going out for a walk.

Fickle Weather. Sometimes you just want a nice thunderstorm.

Events. Auroras at will sounds fantastic.

Bedroom with temperature controlled blankets, ultra comfortable mattress, and physical needs halted. Perfect for sleeping and other things.

Kitchen with Pizza Oven, Industrial Appliances, and mythical ingredients. Seriously, how can you turn down mythical ingredients?

Bar with limitless fictional and finest spirits, which can't cause a hangover. Screw the Pan-galactic gargle blaster, I'm trying the pan-dimensional version. Also, makeshift dining room.

Luxury bathrooms with jacuzzi and smell neutralizer. I'm going to need to poop at some point.

Huge library with nonfiction section and no eye strain or focus loss. I've always wanted to read more, and this is a great way to just do it.

House Gym with limitless stamina, double fat burning and muscle gains, and an android personal trainer. Everything I need to get in shape.

This is a fun one, thanks for making it. My kingdom for one or two more rooms, though...
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>>49183748
As I said, I'm not complaining. I like it.
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>>49183669
>What is the point about making a CYOA about a novel
I wonder that.
No really, I mean it. I get basing a CYOA off an existing franchise, but not copy-pasting it like that guy did with his Evolve CYOA.
And it's especially cheeky to assume the player has meta-knowledge on the setting. I remember some people saying they could take a bunch of drawbacks because they didn't do anything, or certain powers leading to your death.
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>>49183325
I can never get enough of comfy CYOAs. Thank you so much, I'll make a build for it when I get home.
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>>49183854
Glad you like it.
Also, if the pan-galactic is like having your brain smashed by a slice of lemon wrapped around a gold brick, the pan-dimensional might be lethal.
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>>49183325
So, a couple of things. First, there's basically no reason to pick the door, since if time is flowing people can just call you if they need you. Coin is much more portable, garage lets you bring more stuff in at once.

Second, an acre is extremely small. It's smaller than a football field. A six room house, especially with some of the bigger rooms, would take up a very large chunk of it. I'd suggest at least a square mile.

Third, bedroom and bathroom are sort of bare necessity rooms which you have to buy. Maybe offer a stripped down crappy master bedroom with a toilet and shower if you don't want to buy something better?

Lastly, you've got a good mix of upgrades which would be impractical to get from the real world, but others are which are possible to acquire in the real world (like a big-screen TV or all the consoles). Are you just not able to customize the rooms to include those real world items unless you pay for them, or is it more the cost and shipping involved?
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>>49184086
>Intragalactic (Planetary) travelers speak in hushed, reverent tones about a bar where you can get the strongest drink in the galaxy. They say drinking one is like being hit with a slice of lemon wrapped around a gold brick.

>Those with slightly broader horizons know that the quality of a drink isn't measured solely in how bad a hangover it gives you, but how good it makes you feel. A drink that causes instant vomiting, for example, is more useful in Poison Control than in a bar. The Pan-Dimensional Gargle Blaster gives you all of the pleasant effects of alcohol, while shunting most of the nasty aftereffects to a parallel you in another dimension.

>Just know that any time you drink one, there's a decent chance a parallel you in another dimension is drinking one, too. Mwa-ha-ha.
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>>49183325
does you gear (computers, consoles, etc) update with time?

Are room options bound to their rooms? Can I have the maid fetch books for me? Use game room VR with my PC? Does the AI function throughout the house?

How does the electronic communications work without cell towers and stuff? Do my computers just automatically have internet access? Do I need to have some real-world service plan?
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>>49184183
>First, there's basically no reason to pick the door,
Well, that may be true, but I thought some people might like to have a door that things can be delivered to.
>Second, an acre is extremely small
It's an acre outside the house and it's mostly just for scenery.
>Third, bedroom and bathroom are sort of bare necessity rooms
Bedroom isn't necessary, you could sleep on a couch. I was only going to let you choose 5 rooms, but then I thought of the bathroom.
> Are you just not able to customize the rooms to include those real world items unless you pay for them, or is it more the cost and shipping involved?
It was so you didn't have to pay for the stuff.
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>>49184204
We just found the explanation for random cluster headaches.
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>>49184354
Gear does upgrade, forgot to write that.

Options are only bound to a room if it says so, AI runs the whole house.

Wifi is included, cell service functions from the towers where the portal was opened.
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>>49183325

coin

Island

Hot spring
gas lamp
Wild life
fickle weather
events

kitchen
wood fired pizza oven, industrial appliances, mythical ingredients

bedroom
all is bed, temperature controlled blankets, ultra mattress

bathrooms
jacuzzi, smell neutralizer, deluxe

library
upgrade size, no eyestrain, lucid dreams

computer room
9.5 ghz, 4 nerve gear, smart AI

indoor pool
sauna room, lazy river, perfluorocarbon

time to get comfy.
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>>49183325
coin
lakefront

brook, hotspring, trees, wildlife, events

kitchen (fictional ingredients, industrial appliances, breakfast nook)
guest rooms (larger rooms, double rooms, sound-proof)
bathrooms (deluxe, groomer, smell neutralizer)
computer room (AI, VR, enhanced processor)
gym (stamina, double efficiency, personal trainer)
dining room (maid, wine, half calories)

Time passes while I'm here.
Does the coin override the electronic communications rule?
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>>49184836
No, electronic communication still works with coin.
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