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Old thread >>48313295
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>>48320642
and the box
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>>48320642
Thanks OP.
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>>48320642
While I appreciate what you're trying to do here, I'm not sure it will work.

That being said, I'll go with whichever stays active.
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>>48320671
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good thread, down with tripfags
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>>48320685
That one is complete

Attached one is WIP, use at risk, feedback welcome.
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>>48320642
Broken Reality Writing Machine is the best choice, and might actually be able to give you something decent if you manage to trick it.
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Incomplete Vampire Slayer cyoa.
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Feeling like living comfy.

1/3
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>>48320642
Not OC. I know one of these is obviously superior but let's pretend they're all equal.
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>>48320706
Comfy Living 2/3
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So, I finished making an alternate race choice. It might be a little overpowered so use it or ignore it, it's up to you.
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>>48320705
Complete version. Somewhat smaller and different.
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>>48320720
Comfy Living 3/3
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>>48320709
Okay, so how do we go about breaking that curse so the world may burn in an eternal blaze and tremble in the might of our everlasting glory?
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>>48320747
Well, you'd have to figure that out. The Dragons haven't been able to find a way to reverse it in centuries. It would probably require Fae assistance.
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>>48320671
>>48320687
We'll see.
I have him filtered, so when I log on, search for the new cyoa thread and see one (this), I'm going to use this one
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>>48320731
>Legend (of course)
>Traits: Resilience, Corruption
Incredibly tough even for a slayer, and resistant to magic, but fights against dark urges.

>Gang
>Roy Bradley: Secret Werewolf
Good muscle, interesting sub-plot. Love triangle with me and Reiv.
> Alistair Matthews
Not set on this choice, but good strategist.
> Maya Yanova
Mob connections, good for acquiring firearms and other illicit things.

> Supporting Characters
> xiaozhenghe'tian, Caged Ancient Evil
Love Illyria, and Xia is the next best thing.
> Reiv, Of The Third Circle
Crucial go-between when contact with demonic beings is needed.

> Watcher: Lieutenant Daniel Scott
Seems like a fun guy to ruffle, and less of a "weak link" than the others. I imagine he can hold his own pretty damn well, given the blurb.

>Tools
> Spectral Circlet
Wow, that's useful.
> Mister Stabby
Never be disarmed, always a stake at hand, very nice.

> Big Bad: The Demon Princess
Frankly, with this build this choice is necessary to have a challenge.
> How does she cripple me?
By killing Scotty, and leaving me emotionally adrift. 'Corruption' starts to win here, and I go to a very dark place.
> How do you fail to safeguard the last piece of the artifact?
I make the choice to save my friends over securing it.
> Who inspires you to pull it together at the last moment?
Alistair Matthews, who had an unrequited crush on me, knowingly sacrifices himself to save my life.

1/2
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>>48320802
"Will you be attending the school's ritual spring mating dance, then?"

The question was almost enough to distract me from the dark thrill that still coursed through my veins, even as the dust settled around me, Mister Stabby extended outward as I breathed in my conquest.

"It's called 'Prom', Xia, and no, I'm not. I've got better things to do."

"Hm."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"Oh, nothing..."

I wasn't really sure why I put up with her... well, other than the fact that I wasn't totally confident I could actually take her. And I suppose better her being curious about me than out wreaking havoc. Xia said she saw 'potential' in me... whatever that meant. Plus she'd saved by bacon once or twice... not that I'd ever admit that to her. Still, she never bothered to make an effort unless I was a hair's breadth from death's door.

Scotty (heh, he hated being called that) thought she was a bad influence, and should be banished back to where she came from. She, in turn, delighted in taunting him, knowing that he had no real idea how to make that happen.

I absently toyed with the circlet on my wrist; Scotty's greatest present to me, it made peoples eyes and hears sort of... slide over me as long as I tried to be quiet. Completely invaluable; I teased him that it was the main reason I kept him around. Heh. Not that that was the truth...

Anyway! No dwelling on mushy feelings right now, I had a job to do.

"Still no idea where these goblin-things are coming from, Xia?"

"No... as said, not something I'm familiar with."

The problem with Xia's advice, of course, is that I could never be sure she wasn't holding something back to test me. And Reiv rarely gave me more than cryptic warnings. Hmph! What's a girl got to do to get some straightforward answers!?

Checking that my gun was free in its holster, and with knife in hand, I motioned for silence, and proceeded to cross the street to the warehouse...

(fin for now)

>>48320802
I'm rooting for it!
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>>48320725
I think on an individual level it's overpowered but that's fine. The real problem is that it reproduces too fast. Seriously with that power and it only taking 4 hours to create a new one they can take over the city in a few years without the other clans stepping in to curb their population. Also they don't really have to eat too much compared to something like trolls that have to eat an almost impossible amount. I think a good way to balance them would be to make their reproduction very difficult.
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>>48320810
Double Points because I am not posting my build I made in a apparently dead thread.
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>>48320810
oh, that is just too bad.
More waifu = no laifu

I think I'll try it, not using the cyoas I post, of course
>A
Hopefully I get something fun
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>>48320725
Also did you see >>48320179
If so do you plan on changing anything or what?
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>>48320832
>can't use cyoas you posted yourself
or go meta-meta and ignore the rules of the meta-cyoa to ignore the rules of the cyoa
>>48320836
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>>48320861
I hear that. I was in the middle of making a build then we make a new thread already.
>>48320865
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>>48320725
How about another "race" where you're still normal but somehow the most important person in the world?
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Who wants to make a build for this? Also, I just learned tier 3 powers can be affected by specialty versatility, as mentioned in the changelog at the end of the pdf.
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>>48320670
Name: Elwin King
Gender: Male
Origin: The Now; Watcher
Skills, Perks, and Traits: Mid-Tech Understanding, Advanced Ethereal Manipulation, Silver Tongue, Natural Beauty, Entertainer, Handsome Jack, Unarmed Combatant, Nocturnal, Reconsider Baby
Initial Armor: Traveller's leathers+, Physical Enhancement Suit, Full Closet
Initial Weapons: Twin Yuta Brace+, Cestus, Akte-47, Custom Guitar w/ Liquid Ignic Flame Enhancement
Initial Knick-knacks: Pegs, Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Stand Type Entity, Flux Generator, Traveller Corpse Soap, Battle Music Projectors, Standard Breather, Flying Carpet, MagiblocTM Coinage, Glepnir Chain, Yasakani no Magatama, Wingsuit
Little Things: Ae-Child, Wanting Desire, Anon’s Bizarre Adventure
Faction: True Travellers
Covenant: Regal Congregation of ‘The King’
Allies: Saphfo Eresia, 219, True Traveller, Poetic Gunslinger; Wu Mei, 256, True Traveller, Photographer; Isalia Phouskas, 109, Biological, Newly Reborn Harpy; Selambarousas, 197, True Traveller, Yukazi Skirmisher; Agatha Niucrad, 492, Fighter, Highlander Behemoth; Lethice, 1440, True Traveller, Reforged demoness
Home District: Tamit – Why wander far?
Hubworld: Dem-A1 – The Hive city to end all cities
Mission: The Conquering Wyrm
Panic Button: The King

Stand Name: Mystery Train
Stand Ability: [Gravity Generation](http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Gravity_Generation)
Power - A
Speed - E
Range - C
Durability - C
Precision - B
Potential - B

Hopefully I made the Stand okay. I'm not entirely sure what makes a Stand too weak or OP.
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>>48320926
Why don't you post the improved version?
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>>48320642
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>>48320948
not into PvP, I take it?
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>>48320831
You might have a good point there.
I originally did it that way because it would create some interesting strife among the Others on how to deal with them.
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>>48320831
i think he was trying to create the crackpyres from blade 2, meaning they would probably get curbstomped eventually if they themselves dont limit their turning
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>>48320963
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>>48320858
I saw it, I'm not sure if I want to change it though because I meant for the Dragons to have dominion over all beasts.
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>>48320932
Sloth 3 (Tier 2: Envy)
Envy 2 (Gluttony, Sloth)
Pride 1

Drawbacks
Fewer Powers, Unknown

Perks
Specialty Versatility, Buff

All I want to do is find a place to hang out and snooze, and a University sounds like the perfect place. I just kindly ask someone if I can come into their dorm or apartment and just stay for as long as I’d like. While I’m there, I might as well cause mass chaos with Envy 2 and extend my lifespan. Of course, being in a University, It would be stupid of me to not steal the knowledge my targets have. Sure, this would probably cause them to flunk, but that’s okay with me.

Of course, given Sloth 3 allows me to view anything anywhere, I might be able to cause someone to kill a group for the sake of God, not knowing that the other side is what he just worked for. Any time stop I exist in will be used to travel from place to place or just to have fun. And that’s what I plan to do, have fun. Even at the cost of another’s well being.

Thoughts?
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>>48320900
You can head canon that all ya want but I don't think I'd want to write it.
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>>48320909
Male, 16
Genetic.
Emotional: Strengthened(+7)
Physical: Deformed(+10) Scars all over my back and chest from the experiment and fighting other mutants they send after me.
Mental: Sharpened(-3)
Life: Reset(-5)
Memory: Knowledge(-5)
Spiritual: Magnet(+5)
Curses for flavor not necessity: Unsettling(+5) I freak people out naturally, Insomnia(+9) already got it, Lust(+8) the dick don't stop.
Gifts, total points 82: Telekinesis-4(Precision-2,Power-3), Pyrokinesis-3(Control-3,Catalyst-2,Source-5), Future Sight-2(Relevant-1,Clarity-3), Pyschometry-1(Muscle Memory-3), Healing-2(Self service-5,Miracle-3), Teleportation-4(Quick Step-4), Apportation-2(Pocket Dimension-2), Vitality-3(Immunity-3,Painless+3), Athleticism-4(Raw Power-6), Tongues-2(Non Verbal-1), Barrier-3(Wide-2, Permanent-3), Charm-3 bitch am adorable, Mechanics-3, Empathy-2(Influence-1), Interference-2(Targeted-2).
Guardian Ally: Adam Wiley.
Home: Yarrow Falls.
Student Allies: Kate Fox, Peter Blake, Scarlet Manning.
Adult Allies: Louis Webb, Eric Strickland.
Perks: Inheritance, True Original: Aliens.
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>>48320971
Not into unbalanced PvP and that's exactly what it is. The problem with Slayers is that they're not necessarily wizard hunters which allows them to live openly as very popular monster hunters (just pick Leadership) until they have amassed incredible power. They can then get even more power by killing "evil" wizards. There's nothing stopping a Slayer from becoming an international hero, garnering support from the masses and indiscriminately killing mages they deem evil because they have the support of their rabid fanbase.
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>>48321030
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>>48320932
Every time I see this, I remember the faggot who had to get all butthurt and cry "I-it's a Choose Your Own Adventure! So I ch-choose not to play the CYOA by it's rules!"
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>>48321013
What about the werewolves and dragons always fighting over who gets to have dominion of beasts. Werewolves don't seem like people that would submit to another race. Especially without fighting them to test if they're worthy to rule over them
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>>48321037
Total points 91 not 82.
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>>48321036
How about a Slayer option then? Someone has to protect the normals after all.
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>>48321074
Werewolves are exactly the kind of people who would submit to a stronger, more dominant race.
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>>48320706
City (100)
House (60)
Really Great WiFi (50)
Hot Tub/Sauna (40)
Study/Library (30)
Game Room (20)
Business (0)

Time to live a cozy life as the owner of a small FLGS who doesn't need to commute in this fucking horrible traffic
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>>48320818
why you no post boxes?
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>>48321074
I'm considering it. But in my head the dominance was establish far back in history and the power to control them was the result.
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>>48321089
Hmm I guess you could use the B option of >>48320810 to combine >>48320725
with >>48320731
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>>48321089
there are hunters mentioned, but then there is also mentioning packs of others essentially gangbanging them in alleys

so i mean if thats what your into anon....
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>>48321089
I might very well put in a hunter expansion later.
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>>48321102
Not without a fight though right? I mean the way you become alpha is you fight for it so why would they let dragons rule over them without them fighting to prove it
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>>48321139
>>48321136
Damm, Hunters are generally crap compared to Slayers.
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>>48321167
When one wolf is undeniably more dominant than the other, the weaker wolf won't even fight him but instinctually submits. I assume that is what happens between Dragons and Werewolves.
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>>48321069
I remember him as well. Why did he think he could do that?
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>>48321127
I don't know it's just to me it seems like it really gimps the potential of werewolves knowing no matter how well you lead your clan and how powerful it becomes you'll always have to submit to the dragons with no way of even challenging them.
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>>48320926
So that's the one I got double points for.
I guess double points means I get both two classes, and get to pick 6 specialties?

Gambler definitely sounds fun, but it would be a waste to sit behind the Veil
>Water
>Ice Specialist
>Enchanting
>Pressure Specialist

>Slayer
Of course! Since I get double points, I can ignore the whole "we don't have any magic", since I clearly do.
>Weapon Specialist
>Magic Specialist
>Leadership

Shit, that is a ton of power. I won't use it to kills wizards, that would be a douchebag move.
I'll have to lay low for a while, before anyone realizes I know two schools and try to kill me.

>>48320932
already made like, four builds.
There's nothing left that I want
>>48321069
who? The guy who went
>IF SATAN IS REAL THEN GOD IS REAL AND I REJECT THE CYOA AND HAVE NO FUN AND THEN GOD WILL LET ME IN HEAVEN
?
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>>48321169
Well if I did a hunter expansion they would be empowered in some way, but I wouldn't want to go just straight Buffy with it.
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>>48320818
>Ryota(ro Dojima)
>Nana(ko Dojima)
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>>48320818
Ryota and Nana. Only choice, really.
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>>48320932
I can't stop making builds for this. I have three written in google drive, with another two on the way. What can one do with multiple builds?
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>>48321191
That's why you make a deal with an Other race to take out the Jades.
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>>48321219
Maybe the double points just means you can take twice as many specialties.
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>>48321222
well theres always the whitewolf option
yeah you get all these supercool belief options that empower you past mere mortals...but your still going up against immortal psychos who will probably eat you for breakfast
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>>48321219
Yep, the guy who went full autism in that regard.
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>>48321222
Buffy is awesome though. The whole lone, empowered human vs the forces of evil is pretty fucking cool. Maybe you could consider doing both? You could have a more expansive order of hunters who combat the Other using old templar techniques or modern weaponry or something; and you could have the Slayer option where you're considerably more powerful than a hunter but have only a limited support network, are distrusted by regular hunters, and are somehow connected to the Other in some way. More power would mean more responsibility of course.
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>>48321268
>but your still going up against immortal psychos who will probably eat you for breakfast
Exactly, that's where the fun is!
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>>48321219
>already made like, four builds.
If I may ask, what were those builds?
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>>48320706
>Forest Town (100)
Love the idea of hikes in the morning.
> House (60)
Free house? Free utilities? Yes please)
> Really great wifi (55)
Crucial
> Maid (45)
I'm favoring service choices over room decorations. Having a lifelong, free maid is absolutely mind-bogglingly expensive if you were to try to pay for it. In contrast, decorating the rooms on my own is relatively cheap.
> Chef + Nutritionist (30)
Same as the Maid.
> Security (25)
Peace of mind like this is something that cannot be purchased at all.
> Immunity (20)
Similar.
> Business (0)
I'm taking this to mean that my business will be at least moderately successful; enough to support. Shouldn't be hard, given that I have no costs associated with food, a mortgage, or utilities. Really the only thing I still *need* to pay for is clothing and healthcare.


>>48321108
I feel you. You have some extra points, though; the wifi and hot tub are only 5 points each, not ten.
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>>48321276
Autism? I just pointed out that anyone who believes the devil when he tells you that following him is your only option, is an idiot.
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>>48321277
I might do that actually.
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>>48321308
that would be awesome!
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>>48321293
>You have some extra points
Oh shit, you're right!
Hm... Add in Immunity and Security
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>>48321144
>Lewd girl
>Angel girl
I'd pick Magical girl if there was a team of anons
>Happiness
Mostly because of the "can't be too lewd" clause on Cuteness
>Well-endowed
Of course I want that. I'd assume the "can't be too lewd" clause still applies, even if I'm legal.
>Feminization
Oh cool, I become mentally a girl, too, rather than a transsexual. Not really a drawback.

>Me?
Really wish I could get Big sister, too. I really, really do.
>Lax

Comfy life with a nice big sister who I am not related to by blood
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>>48321298
You went on a tirade over how you "rejected" the CYOA and "m-muh CHOOSE Your Own Adventure!" You were being autistic, friend.
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that new dragon cyoa we've been hearing about from its creator, has it been posted yet?
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>>48321432
I don't think that was me then. I only remember mentioning how stupid it was to trust literally the devil.
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>>48321262
well, it says double starting points, and I read that as being both a
>pick one of these six
which is more than 3, so A gives me double points
and
>pick 3 of the specialties
so not a "pick on", and A applies
>>48321276
how is it fun to go
>hahahahah I don't play!!!!!!
>>48321290
Most, if not all, are something like (excuse me, it's been a while)
>Pride 3
Depending on what I'm feeling I either become a lazy musician and actor, who rarely shows up for interviews
>Sloth 2 + Greed bonus
So I can stay in their house for a month
The drawback I take to get the bonus, is the one that makes it so my powers don't work on like 1% of people.
Which is hilarious to me - there'll be a small group of people who hate my acting because I'm shit, keep looking into the camera, and I'm a lousy fit for the role... but they're alone in these thoughts.
Think "angry old man who shouts at wireless phones"
then
>Lust 1
because I want to be pretty.
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>>48320932
Can I use this cyoa to make everyone gay and turn the world into an eternal orgy of sodomy and lust?
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>>48321456
I don't think you can pick the Greed Bonus with Pride and Lust as your other two Sins.
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>>48320725

Hey Strife, whatever happened to Doppelgangers? I know they got dropped, but why? They're still mentioned in a Werewolf quest, and they were the option I was most looking forward to.
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>>48320939
I've avoided using Stands because I have no idea how they work.
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>>48320685
There should be illusion magic.
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>>48321541
Well when it came down to making them I couldn't come up with enough theme fitting powers besides just shapeshifting.
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>>48321506
>The drawback I take to get the bonus
yes I can. I took the drawback and got the boon that lets you take an Affinity whatever-it's-called that isn't my two other powers.
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>>48320725
Not sure how I feel about the Experiment Origin. Too broken and min/max feeling for me. I can see the appeal, however.
I'd have loved to see the Doppelganger option.

>>48304597
Anyway, once again, repostin' mah Peaceful Wandering Drunken Troll Hulk
Troll – Jotnar
Muscle Mass
Bridge Network
Alchoholistry
Drunken Aura
Item: Dragonscale

I guess I'll just be a travelling, boozing hulk of a troll, that's just about fucking indestructible.
I'll spread peace through excessive consumption of alchohol.

Did no else immediately go for the Trolls? Specifically, the Jotnar?
>Big Guy for you
>STRONK AS FUCK.
Third physically strongest build possible.
>Great alcohol.
Literally magical.
>Extradimensional home with portals around the world.
Amazing comfy possibilities right here. The only thing missing is to recruit a Belphagus Demon to just lay around, emitting that fuckin' comfy aura.
Comfy, man. It's what I live for.

How fast can a Troll run, how high can they jump? Is it proportionate to their strength?
Do the bones they have to eat taste good to them or is it something they have to choke down? Also, are their mouths/teeth/tongue tough enough to handle munching bones or do they have to be careful not to cut up their mouths?
And are you planning on making a companions page, Strife?
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>>48321600
Food requirements are shit and the other races probably think you're an autistic retard one step away from tearing something apart. That's why people don't pick them imo.
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>>48320963

>Innate
>Weak
>Renegades

>Strength 2
2
>Agility 2
4
>Endurance 2
6
>Durability 3
9
>Enhanced Senses 2
11
>Stealth 1
12
>Reflexes 3
15
>Immunity 2
17
>Stylish 1
18
>Self Healing 2
20
>Weapon Mastery 1 (Katana)
21
>Weapon Master 1 (Handgun)
22
>Overcharge 1
23
>Analysis 1
24
>Passion 1
25
(+3 from Valuable)
>Powerburst 2
27
>Unarmed Mastery (Karate)
28

>Unique Weapon
super sharp and strong katana
>Boot Camp
>Safehouse
>Reputation (from John York foe)
>Defector (from Renegades)
Fiona Dawley

>Valuable

>Lindsey Reyes
>Jim Boyce

>John York

>be seemingly normal girl
>get kidnapped by human traffickers who want to prostitute me
>get rescued by "supersoldiers" who recognize my hidden potential and been tracking me
>they help me awaken my hidden powers and train me to fight
>become ninja vigilante who fights crime and evil organizations
>quickly execute criminals who are sorryfor their crimes, brutally torture unrepentant ones
>Jim helps with crime connections and muscle, Lindsey helps with more sophisticated evil organizations by hacking them
>eventually Fiona the investigative reporter finds out a little about me and helps by defending vigilantes and calling out criminals
>I'm still valuable to human traffickers who are after me and hire John to hunt me down, so always on the run
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>>48321600
>How fast can a Troll run, how high can they jump? Is it proportionate to their strength?
It is proportional, but they are slightly clumsy.
>Do the bones they have to eat taste good to them or is it something they have to choke down?
They taste good and have nuances of flavor depending on what animal they are from and what part of the animal.
>Also, are their mouths/teeth/tongue tough enough to handle munching bones or do they have to be careful not to cut up their mouths?
They are plenty tough. The bones have the consistency of pork rinds to them.
>And are you planning on making a companions page, Strife?
I don't know, probably not. I'm not very good at writing companions.
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>>48321506
>Specialty Versatility - You may choose an additional Specialty for one of your secondary
powers. You may even choose a specialty for which you do not have the requisite Sin. You
may choose this ability multiple times.

Since I opened the cyoa just 4u, here's the build I almost always go with
>The Witnesses
1% are unaffected. Kinda pissed they know I'm demonic, but hopefully most people will think they're lunatics
>Specialty Versatility
>Lust 1
>Pride 1
>Pride 2 + Sloth
It's so much easier to control people over text messages. Also imagine the shitposting when 99% of people ITT think I'm the greatest shit ever, and the other 1% REE-post about me, even when I'm not online
>Pride 3 - Celebrity + Sloth
Perfect for my plan of being a horrible actor, but 99% of people absolutely love me.

>Sloth 2 + Gluttony
Is what I usually go with. But honestly, I could get more out of other powers, likely Greed 2

Fuckit, changing build to
>Lust 1
>Pride 1
>Pride 2 + Sloth (Specialty Versatility)
>Pride 3 - Celebrity + Greed
>Greed 1
>Greed 2 + Pride
I always thought Greed was fucking amazing, and really, Sloth 2 isn't useful with my plans.
Actually I could probably change Lust 1 for something else, since I can buy attractiveness with Greed
So - changing Lust 1 to
>Sloth 1
Which means I don't need Specialty Versatility OR the drawback.
Score!
Yes, this is a cancerous post and I should rewrite it, but I don't want to. It explains my train of thought and reasoning.
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>>48320725
Do 13s you create hold any affinity to you? It seems that way given that we get so upset about losing our first. Do they have the same powers you have?

I personally like this option. Not only for what it is but because it addresses as to why no one has tried to make amalgamations of power before.
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>>48321821
>Do 13s you create hold any affinity to you?
The affinity comes from something close to a parental bond.
> Do they have the same powers you have?
They draw their powers from the same races you did.
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>>48321062
slayers have the most limited set of powers, even when you factor their growth. having the support of normies is their best ability, but they're still just normies, and they don't even have guns. slayer is hard mode if anything.

can slayers become dangerous? yes, if they work really hard. but if you spend decades doing nothing while they build up power and an international following then you deserve to get killed. form alliances with other wizards, get humans working for you (charisma is good but you can promise them riches, magical items and whatever else), trade favours with big organizations, make friends with other slayers if need be. work on increasing your magic power, summon monsters to defend you, create enchanted weapons and traps. build a secret fortress somewhere (depending on your speciality, there are places you can live that a slayer can hardly even reach). prepare escape plans if you're caught unaware. if you catch wind that a slayer is killing random wizards, don't just twiddle your thumbs waiting to die, make a proactive effort to find and destroy them.

history dictates that in situations like this, the great powers (in this case, wizards and slayers) will look out for situations where the balance of power risks being disturbed (a slayer or wizard growing too powerful) and team up to restore balance, because if a bunch of powerful people don't want the situation you're talking about, they won't let it happen.

basically it's only a problem if you want amazing magical powers with no risk or conflict. and fair enough, but there are lots of CYOAs like that already.
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>>48320932
Greed 1: (Fewer Powers)
Lust 1: God of Sex
Lust 2: The Quickie
Envy
Greed
Gluttony
Sloth 1: Take it easy
Sloth 2: Home Servants
Greed
Sloth 3: Remote Viewing
Lust
Greed
Specialty Versatilityx3
Weaker Power
Unknown
Fair Play
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>>48321597

After I saw the completed stuff I expected that to be the case. Before though, I didn't know where you'd go with them, if you'd just stick to stuff you can find on Wikipedia and the like or if you'd mix in other shapeshifters that /x/ seems to love, or used to. Goatmen, skinwalkers, and I think they said something about yetis being one too, but it's been a while since I read any of those threads so don't hold me to that. I just remember it was supposed to be something from the north that people usually associate with something else.
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>>48321543
>Weird Cave thing: START! (50 Shen)

Well, for my immortality thingy, there's no way I'm not picking the Jai Body. I've always been afraid of dying, and I want to experience everything that I can. (40 Shen).

For my healing sign, I choose the Ein symbol. I trust in my own ability to avoid things that would kill me. (34 Shen)

For my mind sign, I choose Dama. I want this. I want it for sure. What usage is immortality if my mind eventually goes senile, yes? (24 Shen).

My eyes are undoubtedly Jidith, if only to compensate for my own sight issues. (19 Shen)

My oral skills evolve to Arthmat, because if I choose to travel the world I will need to learn language. (12 Shen)

Sithr. I have no need for the extraterrestrial and otherwise. (7 Shen)

I'll splurge on Alma. (2 Shen). The remaining points I don't use.

I chose pretty well.
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>>48321646
Strife did say they were accepted but not respected.
30 lbs of bones every two days seems like a lot, but do you have any idea how many hundreds of pounds of bones a slaughterhouse processes every day? It'd be easy to keep up, assuming you could set up a deal with someone running the slaughterhouse.

>>48321718
>It is proportional, but they are slightly clumsy.
Far enough, it is to be expected.
>They taste good and have nuances of flavor depending on what animal they are from and what part of the animal.
>They are plenty tough. The bones have the consistency of pork rinds to them.
Fuck yeah, I love pork rinds.
Troll sounds better and better to me.
Wait a sec –
>Their food is like pork rinds.
>They drink tons of alcohol.
>They can have nasty tempers but are generally cool.
>They're strong, but kind of 'slow'.
Are the Trolls a race of frat boys?
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>>48321995
>>48320932
Greed 1: (Fewer Powers)
Lust 1: God of Sex
Lust 2: The Quickie
Envy
Greed
Gluttony
Sloth 1: Take it easy
Sloth 2: Home Servants
Lust
Greed
Sloth 3: Remote Viewing
Lust
Greed
Specialty Versatilityx3
Weaker Power
Unknown
Fair Play
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>>48322024
Well 15-30 pounds is the weight of an entire human skeleton so that's what I based it on.
>Are the Trolls a race of frat boys?
Yes, yes they are.
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>>48320926
Earth wizard with Geology, Enchanting, and Summoning.

I am the Dorf Wizard. I carve my fortress into the earth. Geology specialty helps with the construction and helps in picking out any valuable resources.

Summoned creatures and golems populate my realm. In addition to serving as both servants and guards they can also run industry, forging those raw resources into items that I can enchant, or at least refining the materials to await more skilled labor.

I'd like to team up with a more benevolent Life wizard who could support some form of agriculture in the stony depths. Between the two of us we could actually create a sustainable underground city.
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>>48320685
Does Giant/Small World change starting population numbers?
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>>48322022

You were placed on a weird world and have to survive it. Your lack of supernatural abilities means your taasty and have no defenses. You are eaten. (This was a RP/CYOA by the author, OuterWorldsAnon long ago. 4plebs link: http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/33356948/#33361789 [It's describing the thread. I can't find it on 4plebs.)
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>>48321738
Hmm, Interesting. Though I have to ask, did you know that you get both lower power specialties in a tier 3 ability? Because you might have more power than you realize. The concept of a lazy celebrity sounds good, and yet I slightly shy away from it.

Reminds me of one of my other builds. In particular the first one I tried to use Pride 3 on.

Pride 3 (Cult) (Tier 3: Greed and Sloth) (Tier 2: Sloth)
Greed 2 (Sloth, Pride)
Sloth 1

Drawbacks: Unknown, Fair Play
Boons: Specialty Versatility, Cult of Evil

Many people want wealth, and I’ll be willing to give it to them; for a price, of course. In reality only a small percentage of my followers will receive wealth beyond imagination, in addition to longevity. As you might have gathered, I’m going to make a cult; one that will blossom into a fine stable religion. Since I have someone else writing the doctrine, I can spend more of my time doing what is important; making deals with mortals, giving them what they want in exchange for some wealth or lifespan if possible. Eventually, I’d offer them wealth in the form of loans; loans with an interest rate at just the right level that they won’t be able to pay it off easily yet will still hope to do so. At this point, my cult swoops in to claim their services as compensation, possibly forcing them into heavy labor for many years.

While this is happening, I’ll be milking my followers for money and slowly growing my net worth. In addition, I’ll encourage resentment and competition within my ranks; Those who bring in more followers (and by extension, more money) will be rewarded with greater wealth. Those who show themselves to be failures will lose a portion of their share. They could be willing to try and haggle it back in exchange for something dear.

Welcome, mortals. Welcome, to the Church of Deals!
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>>48322085
>weaker power
>Your primary power doesn't give the tier 1 power
You don't have Sloth 1
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>>48322402
I screwed up, you don't have Sloth 3
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>>48320642
So when does the best contemporary cartoon get a cyoa?
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>>48322446
The only interesting thing about that setting is that one race.
It would probably only work as an ersatz in a space opera setting.
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>>48322446
Depends on how fast you work.
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>>48322488
Well the gems are already basically the hardlights form Traveller.
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>>48322446
The concept of the race is borrowed for the Hardlight group in Traveller.
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>>48322446
There are already tons of CYOAs based on all sorts of different anime, anon.
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>>48322488
Hardlight weapons, natural immortality, fusion powers, free the little girl, notmagic magic powers, etc. Being a Gem would be pretty fucking great.
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Is the anon who made that martial arts cyoa here? If so, did you abandon that project or are the next pages still in the make? Please I just want closure.
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>>48322567
I think it's in pic related somewhere.
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>>48322535

Does this mean Travellers have access to the fusion dance?
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>>48321665
Classy build; I like it.
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>>48322602
>not posting the real lewd version

Steven universe has the best fusions.
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>>48320926
I always choose the same thing for this, every time.

>Life Wizard
>Healing Specialist
Gonna
>Plant Specialist
>Animal Specialist

I gotta find Death Wizard, and see what bullshit we can pull out of our magical asses by combining Disease Magic with Healing Magic.

Maybe we'll be able to make some sort of immortality retrovirus.
Gonna make some pretty ass flowers, tasty herbs and spices.
Gonna make some flying monkeys.
Gonna make tastier cows, pigs, and chickens
And get a pet tiger, that's definitely on the list.

I guess my pet project will be making a species of flying eusocial intelligent giant spider that are hyper-poisonous and loyal to me. Also they'll make badass silk equal to the Darwin Bark Spider's stuff.

After that maybe I'll combine the best parts of centipedes, scorpions, and bats to make a flying, poisonous creepy crawler of big ass claws.
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Rolled 34, 3, 2, 26, 33, 12, 50 = 160 (7d50)

>>48322659
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>>48322653
I know I said I wanted to team up with a life wizard with plant specialty >>48322232, but somehow I don't think you'll be a good fit.
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>>48322591
You talking about this one? Are you sure the author wanted to add more?
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>>48322647

Thanks so much!!! I was literally seconds away from crying cuz nobody commented on new build!
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Rolled 44, 25, 7, 6, 22, 30, 8, 48, 50, 22, 20, 12, 36 = 330 (13d50)

>>48322659
God of True Chaos
God of Eternity
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>>48322446
When you make it
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Rolled 41, 32, 50, 41, 9, 20, 2 = 195 (7d50)

>>48322659
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Rolled 10 (1d50)

>>48322872
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>>48320642
Has a cyoa ever made you cry?
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Rolled 33, 50 = 83 (2d50)

>>48322872
>>48322903
Shit, forgot that I had 2 more rolls from the 50.
I'm Magneto btw
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Rolled 43, 48 = 91 (2d50)

>>48322676
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>>48322426
Repost. (I meant Fewer Powers in the drawbacks section. Note I said that after 'Greed 1:'. I never intended to take Weaker Powers.)
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Rolled 9, 22 = 31 (2d50)

>>48322932
Holy shit 50 again, thanks god of randomness, you're so random.
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Rolled 33 (1d50)

>>48322950
I would reroll this repeated number privately to not clutter the thread, but I'm feeling like there's another 50 coming.
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Rolled 8 (1d50)

>>48322964
Close enough.
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>>48320693
Apocalypse (+20)
Giant World
Random World(+19)
Ancient World (as long as I don't have to worry about asteroids, maybe the world as it was during the peak of the cretaceous age but with mammals from this time as well; let's see what happens. +18)
Caverns Of the Expanse (Fungus, +19)
The Living Forest(+16)
Isles In The Sky
Clever Beasts(+15)
Creatures Of The Deep (+12)
Reality Is Perception(Balanced)

>Races, Neutral
Giants
Sylvan
Avare
Those Below
Humans

>Races, Friendly
Neanderthals(+18, +3)

>Races, Hostile
Littlefolk (-3, -3)
Taki(-12, -3)
Monkeymen(-15, -3)
Dragons(-18, -3)

>Races, M.Threat
Flitters[Fairies](+12, -6)
Mermen + Piskel (+6, -6)
Sky Skimmers(+0, -6)
Centauric Tribes(-9, -6)

Sky Skimmers + Fairies can work but in this case fairies can increase their physical size. None others barring Human x Neanderthals can interbreed. Dragons can shapeshift into humanoids but their true nature is easily noticeable, and no dragon would have it any other way.

>cont
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>>48322978
Holy shit, can you kill yourself already.
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>>48321665
hi Angel
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>>48322915
No. But some CYOAs apparently make some of our less stable members cry. >>48322793
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>>48322321
>did you know that you get both lower power specialties in a tier 3 ability?
I did not.

It's a shame, I don't have time to write out my build and my plans. I think Satan would be proud.
I'm gonna abuse the fuck out of Pride 3's fangirls with Greed 2 being able to buy their attributes.
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Rolled 30, 16 = 46 (2d50)

>>48322659
True Chaos
Stability x2: 41, 44
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Rolled 39, 6, 45, 14, 3, 46, 44 = 197 (7d50)

>>48322659
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Rolled 19, 39, 49 = 107 (3d50)

>>48322834
Fuck that was stupid.
Anyway, two extra rolls from the 50, plus one reroll for the double 22.
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>>48323011

Hi!

>>48323020

Sometimes I just cry. There's nothing wrong with that.
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>>48320706

>all that shit for house when I just want the 3 extra rooms

Fuck.
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>>48322834
>>48323167
Immortal – Immune to aging and illness.
Can tell when people are lying.
Can sense emotions.
Astral Projection
Levitate stuff >200 lbs, self levitation.
Invisible when I hold my breath.
Actual flight.
Instantly murder someone once a day.
Ferromagnetism
Cryokinesis
Best musician (guitar – eat it, Hendrix and Clapton!)
Gravity control (gravitokinesis?)
Master entertainer.
Limitless Food and Drink

What the hell happened here? It started off as a sort of stealthy spy build, then went demolition mode+murder time, and ended with a sort of… bard twist?
What the hell, man.
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>>48322749
When will this be updated?
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>>48323227
It makes you versatile. There's very few encounters you can't contribute to.
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>>48323205
Please stop writing your builds like
>Option
>points left
>option
>points left
It unnecessarily takes up vertical space. You did it for Space Inheritance, too, and it's really annoying.

It's nice to see you make new builds, and I'd RP with you and properly read your build if I had the time.
... but could you tone down the Mary Sue'ness, just a tad?
I'm talking about this
>be seemingly normal girl
>ackshuly be super special, and these cool guys come find me!!!
it's apparent in all your SS builds, I believe.

>sometimes I just cry. There's nothing wrong with that.
That's pretty messed up, actually. Again, I don't have the time for deeper explanations, or probing you for why.
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>>48320963
I am done with the Alex Mercer build. Time for something New.
Origin, Mutagen: Natural Toxin 2
Appearance: Beyond Human.
Cult: Remote Viewing 2
Perks: Prime Subject, Expert, Armor(Power Armor). With these Enemies I will claim: Unique Weapon(Sternguard Bolter), Authority( I will be the leader of the order some day), Identity.
Drawbacks: Hated, Valuable, Pain, Traitor(Jim Boyce, the traitor will die), Controlled, Memory Loss, Uncanny.
Abilities, total points 46: Strength 3, Agility 3, Endurance 3, Durability 3, Enhanced Senses 2, Stealth 2, Reflexes 2, Natural Toxin 2 free, Immunity 3, Mind Reading 2, Self Healing 3, Unarmed Mastery 3, Social Enhancer 1, Weapon Mastery 1(my unique weapon), Mental 3, Focus 3(my will is Ironclad), Flight 2, Adaptability 3, Inheritable 3, Self Improvement 3, Remote Viewing 2 free, .
Allies: Ryan Elmore(fellow battle brother), Yuito Kataoka(Will help make the pain go away and maybe do something about my face)
Enemies: Unknown( My mind reading will let me snuff out this heretic), Corrine Devoe( ALL THAT WORSHIP THE DARK GODS WILL FALL BY THE EMPERORS ANGELS OF DEATH!), The Prototype( the poor man has lost his mind, only thing left is to put him out of his misery).
>>48321665
MAY WE TAKE THE BATTLE TO THE ENEMY!
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>>48323247
When you update it.
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>>48323334
>he complains about a mary sue on the wish fulfillment mary sue containment thread
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>>48323001
Race(Fairy)

Magic Of The People(Primary Antagonist: Mermen + Piskel coalition)

Fairies[Enchanting Minor to all, Blessed One Major to all, Master Of Motion Minor to all, Firedancer Minor to .01%]
Coalition[Telepathy Major to 10%, Beastmaster Major to .01%, Spirit Singer Minor to .01%]

Dragons[Every spell at Major for all. + all buffs in Altering History at level 2 on average, many have it higher. -99 if we're just throwing numbers out desu.]


Blessing Of The People

Super Senses, Temperature[Fairies only, 2 * 2,-14.]
Impervious 0, Regeneration 0, Reflexes [Fairies only, 2 * 6, -2]
Genius, Limited [Giants, +1]
Speed & Strength[Avare, 2 * 3, +7]
Werewolves[Natural, Animal (+3)]
Restless Dead(0)

This is an interesting world.
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>>48322793
It's always nice to try new builds.

>>48323001
Excited to see this; I'll wait to comment in detail until I see the whole thing.

It does look like you are lowering your balance with species more than you should (the CYOA specifies that you can't lower it by more than 12, in total, via species alone. While that may seem arbitrary, it's to prevent builds that just add every possible hostile species and then spend the huge amount of points gained on giving humans (or their chosen species) every magic and upgrade possible to ROFLSTOMP everything.

Maybe you have some guardian species in the next section.

In any case, it's not something I'm going to take a pitchfork to you about; just pointing out the restriction that is in there.
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>>48323417
The issue I was having was that I wanted all the others to have their own magics, that I couldn't access and to be every bit as intelligent as my faction. The bios for neutral or hostile didn't really allow that. I went with apocalypse to even make sure that I couldn't just roflstomp everything either. I added a second part, if you want to look over it actually. I feel like it's kind of kosher.
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>>48323403
>>48323417
The coalition referred to here is the one made of Piskel + Mermen Major Threats.
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>>48323403
I'm not following all of your choices to be honest. For example, you say that your Antagonist is the Mermen + Piskel coalition, but I don't see what magic that they are being assigned?

In any case, I think it's a fine build, and not one that I would nitpick over. Even if we say that you can't lower your balance by more than 12 from your race choices, then that still puts you at 0 balance at the end of the species section.

And it certainly seems, in an abstract sense, that you've certainly balanced things in the magic section by buffing dragons so much; giving EVERY dragon ALL magic... well, I hope you know what you're doing.
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>>48323516
Ah, that clarifies a lot. I thought you were referring to the "Coalition" option under magics of the people.
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>>48323334

>It unnecessarily takes up vertical space.

I guess I can put points next to picks instead of under. That will cut space in half. But I have trouble following builds that are compressed like paragraphs...

>could you tone down the Mary Sue'ness

I thought supersoldiers were all kind of special? I just want to be saved and then become strong so I don't need saved anymore...

>That's pretty messed up, actually.

Yeah, I'm emotional wreck.....

>>48323336

Together we will purge criminal scum and evil! *fistbump*

Does your order have a problem with me torturing unrepentant evildoers?

>>48323417

Yeah, kinda hard to come up with new ideas sometimes though.....
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>>48323469
>The bios for neutral or hostile didn't really allow that.
Could you elaborate at all what you mean by this? I'm not sure what you mean they didn't allow for; maybe give an example of a species?

If it's a problem I'd like to see if it's fixable.
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>>48321144
"Lewd" is lewd enough. Being 2lewd is too much obligation.
Angel Girl is the better of the two for the purposes of my fetishes, but I feel like there should be more options here.
Happiness is stronger apparently.
Twin, to have someone to motivate me to not just hang around all the time.
Classic onii-chan for classic lewds.
Lax parents.
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>>48320642
Tell me about that fictional setting you would like to turn into a cyoa and what's stopping you.
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>>48323624
>I feel like there should be more options here.
At some point the author was working on a whole new column of choices, but it seems like they never got it done.
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>>48320693
Hey acheld can you teach magic to a race that doesn't have it? Say, I have Major Firedancer but I didn't give them Firedancer magic. Would they be able to learn it? Teach it? Inherit it to their descendants?
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>>48323558
Actually I'm probably going to re-word it as all dragons have Major in up to three random spells that they can't imbue anyone with. Three random except enchanting Major.

Also I was planning, sorta, of stretching the definition of the magics. I.e by creating a new eye with shapeshifting major that had the combined enchantments of divination + master of motion to create an Eye Of Perfect Past Sight. Gonna teleport my sight back through time, you know? Also it would be made up of one eye cut in half (eye of divination + eye of see-everything with portals) and enchanting separately then re-fused. Then I'd also create divination horns that allowed me to passively sense whether or not someone/something was going to/wished me harm and how it would come + when. Among other things like a Hammer Of Smash-Things-With-Force-Of-Magnitude 15-Earthquake/Continent Splitter to be used at whim. We'll see.
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>>48322749
How heretical is it to take an unfinished cyoa and finish it? Does that count as stealing?
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>>48323615
Let's take the centaurs for example; it's only their hostile form that gives them the ability to use the power of their animals. Then there's the giants that are only intelligent when they're major hostile. Or the Piskels, Mermen etc. It feels like, as I said before, it's only when they're at major hostile do they really assert themselves on the world and have their own way.
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>>48323712
Indicate somehow that the update/expansion is not by the same person that made the original and everything should be fine.
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>>48323675
Wheel of Time; but can't think of any way to make the magic unique from dozens of other CYOAs.

Ranma 1/2, but can't think of any way to make it more than just a re-skin of the jumpchain version.


>>48323688
If you've defined the magic to be "teachable" in the World of Myth and Wonder add-on, after assigning it to at least one race, then anyone how knows it can teach it to anyone else. It can't be both teachable and inheritable, though; one or the other.

If you only have the magic from the main CYOA, then only people you yourself imbue with it have access to it.

>>48323698
I think that's more reasonable for the dragons. Frankly, I think you would have been completely boned with the first way you had it.

If you have Major shapeshifting, divination, and master of motion, I would not take offense at the idea of researching something like you are describing.

I'd personally recommend waiting until after quests are complete, or at least make it very difficult to accomplish, because what you're describing it sounds like it would remove most challenge, but whatever is fun for you. I'm not one to try to restrict creativity, only give guidelines and notices toward the idea of balance and challenge.

>>48323715
Okay; I see your points with regard to centaurs. I'll add in a line about Giants being optionally the equal in intelligence to humans, that's easy enough, and centaurs... that's a stickier problem, but I'll think about it.

Piskels and Mermen, though... I can't, for example, have Friendly Mermen master the Creatures of the Deep, because then, all of a sudden, Creatures of the Deep isn't really a drawback. I'll think about it.
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>>48320725
All according to keikaku mode, activated:

Grand Design - Noble Vampire
Equalize - Lucifus Demon
Drain Intellect - Cardinal Zombie
Haste - Kage Hito Yokai

>Round up a bunch of bums.
>Brain Drain them, use the borrowed intellect further increase my Grand Design ability. Plot against the other races.
>When they're all used up, eat their thyroids.

I don't think anyone has asked yet: is the stolen intelligence from Drain Intellect eventually recovered by the victim?
I'm gonna be leaving behind a bunch of braindead people otherwise.
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>>48323924
It wears off at the same rate the benefits do.
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>>48320671
>>48323824
Hey acheld would love to see you respond to those posts:
>>48321593
>>48322247
thanks
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>>48322488
Like this.
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>>48323979
Neat.
I'm gonna be the souper speshul donut steel smartypants Other.
>I'm like that guy from Limitless, guiz!

If I brain drain someone completely would the go unconcious until the power wears off? Or would they behave like a starving Zombie or something?
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>>48322659
So I made a bunch of rolls with this just to see what I'd get, and there was an odd bias toward ice affinity. Apparently my dice don't think I give cold magic enough love.
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>>48323573
>Angelanon blog general
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>>48323573
Just so long as they die, its fine. Although the repentant ones need to be brought in if they can be convicted. Otherwise I'll hold them still while you cut them.
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>>48324014
Thanks; didn't see those.
>>48321593
Yeah; I agree. I'm trying to think of how to word it.
>>48322247
Yes; proportionally.

>>48323715
Tell me, if you would kind anon, if the additional of the following clause would "resolve" this problem for you:

"Some of the species listed below gain additional abilities or features when they are a Major Threat. You may feel free to optionally add these abilities or features to their Neutral or Hostile versions without any change in balance cost. If you wish to add these abilities or features to their Friendly version, you must make them a Guardian species to do so."
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>>48320716
Luck and pluck obviously OP
Heart matters most
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>>48324043
They basically become an animal if you drain them completely.
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>>48324089
That seems perfectly fine. I'd take enormous Chaotic Neutral/Neutral Evil Ugrish hordes with pleasure. All told, however, I don't think my build would change all that much except for the fact that my Hostile section would be even more disproportionately large. I'm more or less building warhammer but with an ending.
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>>48324089
>"Some of the species listed below gain additional abilities or features when they are blah blah blah"
not that anon, but it makes sense to me
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>tfw no cyoa that makes you a robot
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>>48324182
Yes there are. For example, that "Become a Monstergirl" one has a robot page.
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>>48324182
Super Soldier could do it, if you go Mechanical+Inhuman or Monstrous
You could become the Attack Helicopter you were always supposed to be.

Space Refuge has a full body cyberization option.
Go now, become the bleep-blooper you are on the inside.
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Here is my bullshit fantasy build. I'm unstoppable in this world and can safely go about becoming the Eternal God Emperor of Man. To help supplant my Empire, I"ll have a select number of Master Blessed Ones and Enchanters, which should give me a leg up over any rival empires. Said people will be paid handsomely but will have limited freedom of movement from me.

I'm thinking of doing a Merlin build, but getting Major in everything is 44-66 points and the world would already be heavily butterflied at the beginning from magic existing. Let alone fantasy races.

There's also nothing stopping me from doing a more modern, or even contemporary build. A lot of the quests would be difficult, bur Sorceror Supreme would be doable. But to have a recognizable world, you'd need no one to start with magic and have no fantastical elements.

You can't do that easily With 110 points without sacrificing in the amount of Magic that you have and/or that can be taught. you can have four Major Magics and make them imbuable at Minor for 50 points.

Origin: 1500BC Greece

Genius 3: 10
Memory of The Ages 1: 3
Wellspring of Harmony: 5
Reflexes & Reaction 2: 8
Impervious 4: 16
Temperature Tolerance 3: 9
Beauty: 2
Non-Reactor: 2
Diet 1: 3
Iron Gut: 2
Map Maker:5
Economist: 5
Major Blessed One: 6
Major Master of Motion: 6
Major Firedancer: 6
Major Binding: 6
Major Enchanting: 6
Book of Culture: 5
Book of Knowledge: 5

Balanced Magic: 0 Levels
Extra x5: +10
Inheritable, 1:10000.
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>>48324182
Traveller gives the option to be a robot. Costs an arm and a limb unless you take some drawbacks or choose the particular origin.
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>>48324344
Well they are making you into an actual robot, rather then making a robot you to avoid a S.O.M.A type situation.
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>>48320685
>>48324089
could Firedancer get equivalents in the other elements? I love me some bending
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>>48304512 >>48304525 >>48304540 >>48304557 >>48304597 >>>48304620 >>48320725
Other: Kobabiel Fallen Experiment
Powers: Telekinesis (Noble Vampire), Inhibit (Ly Erg Unseelie Fae), Divine Rebuke (Kokabiel Fallen), Stone Hide (Jontar Troll)
Item: Siegeblade

So, there I was; surrounded by guys in lab coats. It was like a switch stuck at halfway flipped on. Not quite sleeping but not so much daydreaming either. I knew what transpired in the last month but as to why I did what I did was a mystery. Speaking of which, why only now was I thinking about that?

One of the coats must've realized my quizzical expression all but looking like a deer in headlights. The next thing I knew questions were coming at me one after another while some assholes were pinning me to the floor. What gave them the right? In an instant my face of rage turned to one of horror as the man to my left exploded into chunks. Then the soon-to-be modern art on my right, then the coats, then...
>>48321889
Can't say I'm too inclined to make more of myself. Artificial bonds no matter how real they feel can still lead to too much trouble that I don't want to and to a point can't deal with. Maybe a few here and there while guiding them from the shadows.
>>48321139
Have you considered making what you already have done into a PDF? Actually looking at the file sizes it seems doable. This a CYOA that could really benefit from it. I'm one of those who reads the entirety of something before making choices but not everyone shares in that. It would also make it easier to post.
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>>48324073

Just responding to questions and comments...

>>48324074

>Just so long as they die, its fine.

Always.

>repentant ones need to be brought in if they can be convicted

Brought in?! Why?! All kidnappers, rapists , murderers, and evildoers deserve death! It's JUSTICE!!! I intend to fight for reve-justice no matter what! If these scumbags apologize then I give them a swift death, otherwise it's pain!
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>>48324449
Justice isn't our job, that title belongs to the justices appointed by the Lord. Although my helmet's audio malfunctions from time to time, weirdly enough its around the Kidnappers and Rapists. Isn't that strange? Besides we are supposed to be better than them, not like them.
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>>48324219
>>48324299
>>48324344
!!!!!!!!!!
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>>48324503

Killing is always a successful solution.
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>>48324528
In the shortest of terms.
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>>48324540

It's still a successful solution.

That's also why you apply the solution to the problem very frequently
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>>48324449
Killing someone without a trial is murder. Do you plan to kill yourself?
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>>48304512
>Vampire
>Knight
>Vigor, Grit, Poisonous, Incendiary
>Disposal Team
>Siegeblade

Vampire is actually not half bad, when you read the abilities. I should probably draw my blood out into vials for both poisoning the blade and tossing at Others.
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>>48324578
Ah, the vigilante's conundrum.
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>>48324578

Do you really need a trial if someone kills someone else in front of you?
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Anyone here have the lastest necromancer version?
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>>48324422
Would be better if either a) it was just elemental control in general and/or b) consolidated into stormsage because there isn't really that much of a difference between ultimate heatwave and a fireball conjured to destroy an army in terms of effect.
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>>48324639
Why? It's going to be obsolete once Scientist finishes the new version that he's currently working on.
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>>48324324
Nice.

Next version of World of Myth will have an "option" that ensures that the history of the fantasy world will "parallel" that of the real world (again, barring your intervention). Like, it might have a "Roman Empire" of Men and Dwarves, and Ugrish hordes invading, or whatever. Sounds like that might be something you'd like.

One minor nitpick; if I'm reading correctly, you gave humankind five levels of magic via "Extra", specifically Blessed One, Master of Motion, Firedancer, Binding and Enchanting. Since that is five levels, and not five schools, that means you can only give the Minor version to mankind. Which means you'll only buy the minor one at discount for yourself. Meaning, 3 points for the minor version, +5 additional points for the major = 8 points to buy each of the Major magics for yourself.

Not a huge deal, but pointing that out.

>>48324422
I haven't so far because there is a lot of overlap with Stormdancer for both water and air. I'll consider adding them in or, at the least, adding a "feel free to add schools of equivalent power for the other classical elements". Would you find that satisfactory as a compromise?
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>>48324666
Elemental control in general would outclass the rest of the magic too much, in my view.
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>>48324688
>satisfactory as a compromise
sure. thanks.
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>>48324579
Nice, you're the first to do knight and only the second to do vampire.
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>>48321593
>>48324089
Illusion magic would be awesome for my Myth Maker+Reality is Perception build!
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>>48324503

>my helmet's audio malfunctions from time to time, weirdly enough its around the Kidnappers and Rapists

Sounds like we have a understanding then ;)

>>48324578

That's your opinion. We supersoldiers are destined to be judge, jury, and executioner for the despicable human garbage that corrupts, degrades, and parasites off the weakest and most helpless in society! We bring just punishment swiftly without remorse or regard for useless laws that can be manipulated by the rich and powerful!
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>>48324756
>>48320963
>Name: Sharqueena, Big & Beautiful
>Gender: pansexual panromantic genderfluid

>Origin: magical
>Appearance: inhuman
>Faction: cult, Tumblr

>Hated

>Strength III (3)
>Agility III (6)
>Endurance III (9)
>Durability III (12)
>Enhanced Senses III (15)
>Immunity III (18)
>Self Healing III (21)
>Mind Reading II+I= III (22)
>Passion III+I=III (23)
>Focus II (25)
>Stylish III (28)
>Unique Weapon: The Patriarchy Smasher, hammer
>Expert
>Authority

>NO ALLIES

I agree. The sexist, white, menimist, bigoted, racist, misogynyst patriarchy must be dismantled. They cannot be allowed to tread on the weak and weary people of colour.

I will devour them all.
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>>48324840
Haha. Pretty good last line.
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>>48324756
He is right>>48324578
Though when they fight back its usually when they think they can win. Open season is a fun time. Although I have to reprimand you, we are to protect the humans, for they are the chosen.
>>48324840
You are obviously deranged and on the hit list. You may run if your fat ass can, but you will only die tired. If you surrender we can proscribe some therapy to help your mind.
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>>48324756
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>>48324730
Which boggles me, in a sense.

Nobles have shit like Incombustible that makes them near immune to their fire weakness, in addition to long-plan bonuses like Dominion, Manipulation, Blood Rituals, Grand Design, and Secrets.

Peasants have Autohemokinesis that ensures that they're never disarmed, and mixed with Poisonous might even be more effective than Knights. Add Death Kiss's ability to sicken even Others and Shadow Stalker that makes you near unnoticeable to anyone, and the name hides it's real potential.

Beast mixes the Knight's strength with the Peasant's stealth, with Beast Form giving you fair protection against mind alterers like the Fae and the C'thulids. Tenebrous is also very useful for a surprise attack, forming from any shadow and as dexterous as your limbs are.

There really should be more Vampire builds.
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>>48324840
You don't even have predator 1, what are you, a pleasure cannibal?
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>>48323573
>I guess I can put points next to picks instead of under.
that would be nice. It's especially an issue with your Space Inheritor (or whatever the cyoa is called).
>We're all special now
sure, but there are limits. Maybe that's just me, but I'm generally against the whole "you were actually super important all along!!!!", thing. Like Harry Potter, a miserable kid who's suddenly the savior.
>I'm a wreck
well, then crying isn't really normal, yeah? There's a reason.
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>>48324687
Oh I thought scientist already posted the new version. My mistake.
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>>48324874
>You may run if your fat ass can, but you will only die tired.

Uhum.

Strength III
Agility III
Endurance III
Enhances Senses III
Immunity III
Self Healing III

Say that again, fuckboy. Cause I will SMASH you.
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>>48324899
I don't need predator to feast on male tears.
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>>48324929
Cute, am bigger.>>48323336
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>>48324906
Nope, we can't be /scarabic/ just yet.
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>>48324840
>thinking Angel would fight for poc
Her infamous lesbian magical realm was only for "10/10 european women".
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Anyone have that Persona CYOA that was posted here like a week ago?
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>>48324947
Then I get to eat you next. No one elses tears will be eaten.
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>>48324951
I don't give a fuck. My stats and passion III and stylish III ensure I'm pretty fucking unstoppable. You can't kill me and I can't kill you, but I've got plenty of white men left to kill. You can slow me down but that's all you can, boy.
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>>48324999
Wrong. You cant touch me, I get better over the fight, and I can take off your head at a thousand yards. YOU cant kill me. Your going to be killed. Like so.
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>>48324874

Who are you to reprimand me?! I am protecting humans! By removing cancerous villains who prey on them and making them an example to others!

>>48324840

I'm not much of one to fight against "the system" cuz I don't really get politics. I just want to fight criminal scum.

>>48324885

Perfectly justified.

>>48324903

I'll try and do builds better then.

> then crying isn't really normal, There's a reason.

Don't worry about it.

>>48324999

You sound like you're on the side of evil now. I kill plenty, but I don't kill innocents.
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>>48324840
> The Nidhogger finally reveals itself.
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>>48325103
Nah, I will just blow out the fatasses kneecaps, rip open her chest, cut through the fat, then I will take her heart, chew it up, break her jaw, then spit it up along with a nice acid flurry down her throat.
>>48325118
We are to make Justice an example, not being a vigilante, you doing it for satisfaction is no better than York doing it for money.
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>>48324025
Is this image part of larger cyoa? I'm not familiar with it
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>>48325118
>Perfectly justified.
I hadn't seen that before, but, as a note...

if you put any human in a pocket dimension filled with the essence of anguish and sufferish and nothing else for six months, then assuming they didn't die, they wouldn't qualify as human at the end of it. They wouldn't be capable of any thought, let alone the "contrition" that you are apparently seeking in that blurb.

Damn, Angel, you definitely have a dark side.
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>>48324975
I'm assuming you mean this.

1/3
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>>48325175
See he is right, and that is why I want to cuddle fuck Angel into a puddle until all her worries are gone.
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>>48325118
>Don't worry about it.
oh, I don't want you to elaborate. That's far too personal for an anonymous forum.

>tfw don't like Super Soldier but love playing out our builds
>tfw looks like there'll be another SS RP

Dream Princess RP when?
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>>48325209
>Dream Princess RP

I have already become Slaanesh. There is no point in building for it anymore.
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>>48325161
Damn, thats a little more brutal than I was thinking. I would have just shot her kneecaps then hung her. Props man.
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>>48325161
It's cute you think you can do that to someone with maxed physical stats even if you have those same stats.
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>>48325398
Dawg, take a fucking chill pill.
She isn't currently doing anything wrong.
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>>48325426
>She isn't currently doing anything wrong.
She exists. She's existing.
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>>48325295
The Emperors justice is harsh on the mad, but I will deliver it.
>>48325397
I have self improvement 3, you don't. Any one of them will give a soldier like me an extreme advantage, and with Remote Viewing 2 you cant hide. Face it, your only a fat angry cow with a hammer. I will end you like so
>>48325161
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>>48324891
It sucks to not be able go out in the day when there are many equally powerful options.
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>>48320926
>Slayer
Energy Specialist
Body Mastery
Leadership

I'll be a beloved hero of humanity, using a martial art-like fighting style to defeat monsters and empower myself.

I'd rather be a popular and loved, than a powerful hermit. Why would you even become a Wizard instead?
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>>48325458
That's kinda disturbed thinking, anon.
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>>48325190
Fucking internet dropped.

2/3
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>>48325460
You also don't have Passion III and Stylish III which puts you at a major disadvantage. You can have all the power you want but against a shoujo "heroine" using flashy moves even the strongest demon king is but a side character.
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>>48325175
what did Johnny originally do to angel?
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>>48325163
It was a proof of concept.
I made it just now.
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>>48325575
Companions like Tsukasa should be illegal. Stop trying to make me gay.
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>>48325575
3/3
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>>48325576
I have Mental 3 and Focus 3. You can not distract me from your execution. I am a warrior of god, and as I have said. You are just an angry cow throwing her undeserved weight around.
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>>48325466
You're missing the point about Vampires. They aren't meant to be going about during the day, as their skillsets soar in the dark of night. And remember that every option is powerful in their own way: there's no win-all option when everyone has a part to play.
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>>48325576
You have no Allies. Everyone hates you, and you will die alone while your fellow tumblrites cannibalize each other.
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>>48321030

Does traitor also give you an additional perk?
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>>48325710
No. Just the points for taking a drawback.
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>>48325710

But it doesn't say because taking foes gives perks, even if they're "allies"
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>>48325595
angel don't respond to such obvious bait.
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>>48325676
Yes, but to be limited to only half of the day sucks.
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>>48325634
With Albert he does not see me as white? What groups does he not see as white? Because I am white.
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>>48325710
>>48325792
>Kek, it doesn't say I CAN'T. Play2win scrub

Point at these faggots. Point at them and laugh!
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>>48325887
The weird thing is, I am certain it used to say we don't get a extra perk from them.
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>>48325864
At the benefit of being the scariest motherfucker at night, slipping through the shadows and debilitating anyone who stood against you.
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>>48325887

>implying winning isn't fun
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>>48320642
Is there a better superhero cyoa than option 4 of this one?
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>>48324891
I'll give you the Nobles. That's the Vampire's one real strength, manipulation and control. No one else really fits that role very well.

For all others, Vampires are EXCEPTIONALLY weak both offensively and defensively. They simply don't have the abilities to keep themselves alive against any real threats. At best you can mildly poison Others and maybe escape notice, when other races have super strength, impenetrable hides, teleportation escapes and full illusion magic.

That's before even considering their base weakness. QUICKLY killed by sunlight, need to feed frequently (2 pints of human blood per day), and the very well known weakness to a simple wooden stake.

Unless you are going for a specialized manipulator build vampires are a horrible choice, and I just doubt they are strong enough in that area to make up for their overall weakness. It's a very hostile world.
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>>48324688
Ah. I would just fix that by choosing Utopia and adding more Extra Magic, but I'm too lazy to do that atm.

Hey acheld : How about specifying you can reset your age to whatever you want upon completing a quest that grants agelessness?

My plan: Be a minor noble from a religious Catholic family. using my battle prowess and magic, I"ll help speed along unification. Maybe I could use my magic to convince the Pope I'm a messenger from God sent to unify Italy. Alternatively, I"ll be covert about it at least until unification happens and/or I meet the pope. I"ll probably only use Binding for golem/elemental/familiar making to avoid getting lynched as some demonic occultist.

Once Italy is unified, I"ll use the fortunes I've gained and that of my family to bring technological innovations to Italy. I"ll also dedicate say, 15 hours a week to teach 100 students the magic of Blessed One and Enchanting. In selecting my students, generally preferring those with a medical or engineering/smith/artisan background.

I"ll try to avoid the military, political and economic pitfalls Italy historically had. Failing that, my military prowess should at least help with the poor reputation Italy gained in warfare.

Hopefully by 2016, Italy will maintain its' Great Power status and maybe even be one of the top countries.

Origin: 1847 Savoy, Italy
Quest: Sorcerer Supreme

One Percenter: 1
Commander: 5
Genius 3: 10
Memory of The Ages 1: 3
Wellspring of Harmony: 5
Reflexes & Reaction 2: 8
Impervious 3: 12
Regeneration 3: 9
Beauty: 2
Non-Reactor: 2
Iron Gut: 2
Book of Knowledge: 5
Personal Omniweapon: 1
Major Blessed One: 15
Major Master of Motion: 10
Major Binding: 10
Major Enchanting: 15
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>>48326009
I'm making one after Emperor is done.
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>>48320670
Someone was asking whether they could make an imgur of the image version. Here's a link to one: http://imgur.com/gallery/wJfsX/new
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>>48326042
current is 1.15 though, this imgur gallery is 1.11. Still nice with a gallery, but a friendly reminder it could be updated.
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>>48326019
Yeah, it's not like Knights can set Others like Trolls on fire or anything. Or that Poisonous harms Others without having to pierce their hides. Or that Peasants and Beast with Shadow Stalker can only be found by Werewolves. Or that Knights with Grit can only be staked by special tools.

You're totally right, Vampires stink.
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>>48326009
Mutants and Masterminds character creation.
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>>48326009
6/10 no waifus.
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>>48326025
Didn't you already make that one several months ago?
>>48326236
Huh?
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>>48326163
At best, you'd the personal lieutenant mook of a Noble. You'd still have all the common and commonly known weaknesses of a vampire and all of their needs. Not that I'm saying Vampires stink but they do kind of smell compared to many of the other choices.
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>>48326277
You can marry the Sultan's daughter in the first option. I think there's more in the mystery page too but you'd have to risk taking it.
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>>48326283
What do you mean "huh" nigga, it's a simple question and a simple answer.
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>>48326353
I have no idea what Mutants and Masterminds is but it doesn't sound like a cyoa, brotha.
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>>48326283
hm?

Desert Soldier?

I've had more of a superhero in a modern setting idea for some time. Well, maybe superhero isn't quite the right term for it.
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>>48326023
>whatever you want upon completing a quest that grants agelessness?
If you can explain to me why it would be important to be able to be one age before the quests, and another age after that, I'm willing to write something in.

I like the Italy quest; starting so late (relatively speaking) it's interesting to think about what the effects on introducing magic are, politically, culturally, etc. Either Italy is going to be overrun by other countries panicking at magic, or will become a great world power, permanently.
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>>48326372
So look it up, download it, go over it. There's pretty much no way you could make a general purpose hero CYOA better than it.
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>>48320685

Arrival Period:
Way the fuck back in time, 20,000 BC

Position:
Mysterious Stranger

Mental Upgrades:
Genius 2 -6
Memory 2 -7
Harmony -5
Polyglot -5
Gift of Gab -5
Commander -5
Economist -5
Map Maker -5

Physical Upgrades:
Strength & Speed 1 -4
Reflexes & Reaction 0 free
Impervious 4 -16
Non-Reactor -2
Regeneration 0 free
Endurance 2 -8
Super Senses 1 -2
Temperature Tolerance 3 -9
Sanitary Convenience 2 -4
Diet 2 -5
Iron Gut -1

Supernatural Gifts:
Master of Motion, Major -10
Divination, Major -10

Companions:
A Companion -6 (5 floating slots)

Items:
Book of Knowledge -5

Drawbacks:
Temporally Lost +15

Quest:
An Empire Eternal
Free & Sustainable

The fuck was happening in 20,000 BC? I have no idea, but you all better believe that humanity is going to be my bitch in no time at all. I might not be taking the Emperor of Mankind quest, but that's exactly what I'm going to be.

In my early days, I'll travel the world and perfect my magical powers. Once I have the lay of the land, I'll start teleporting all over the place, forcing the various tribes/families/whatever exists in caveman times to shape up and get that agricultural gravy train moving way back in 19,000 BC. In time, I'll take a few of the most brilliant minds I can find as companions so that they can access my Book of Knowledge, and I'll use them to start seriously educating the people. All the while I'll be keeping an eye on the future, ready to open escape portals the second I divine some kind of impending natural disaster.

I'm pretty confident I'll succeed in the Empire Eternal quest before my 12,000 years of agelessness are used up, so I'll have plenty of time to work on the Free & Sustainable quest (which should be fairly simple, when you consider the fact that humanity is united under my banner). I'll probably dump all my rewarded fate points into powers for my companions.
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>>48326305
That's why you plan, strategize, and think. Of course Vampires aren't gonna win any 1v1 battles of might. Where brawn fails, planning pulls through.

Also, working for a Noble isn't too bad compared to the Alpha-or-Bitch deal with the Werewolves.
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>>48326376
No, I mean didn't you already make the Emperor one?
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>>48326424
>implying I'm not going to be a kind benevolent Alpha with a cute bf

We a progressive pack.
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>>48326435
Oh, you mean the red Empire one?

I'm making another, where you become the Emperor. It's in essence a reboot of Crown Quest set in the Empire universe. Mainly making the class system better, changing missions, and adding more waifus, er marriage options, and making them more distinct and detailed.
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>>48326424
But the thing is, the vampires aren't any better at that than many of the other classes like Demons and Fae, who have much less weaknesses and don't have the horrible feeding requirements. And other than Nobles none of them are even good at planning.

And being even a Noble makes you the servant of the head vampire in the city, and he's noted to want to kill you anyway.
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>>48326406
>The fuck was happening in 20,000 BC?
The middle of the last Ice Age. Heh.

I have no doubt humanity will be your bitch, but you're going to have a bitch of a time getting agriculture up and running with the extremely low human population and environment.

I don't doubt you can accomplish your goals for a moment, but the fact that so much of the Earth is covered in ice might make your Empire goal a bit harder than you think, especially in terms of getting enough population to "control" territory.

Thanks for sharing the world!
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>>48326639
I wish vampires had a clear option to take over the vampire faction like how werewolves have the Alpha mission.
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>>48325575
>Kaoru Adachi

Sounds trustworthy.
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>>48326651
>so much of the Earth is covered in ice
You might want to look up what an ice age is actually like. It isn't like the movie.
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>>48326664
Vampires are the scrub option, that's all there is to it.
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>>48323336
>Space Marine
>Faction is cult

Dude, you're a Chaos Marine. You kill children and worship an old and dark god.
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>>48326639
Demons, Fallen, Trolls, and Yokai are all easily better picks than Vampires unless you are going for a manipulator build. Fae may or may not be. They are mechanically "easier" (feeding, sunlight, blending in) and much stronger offensively but their defense might be even worse than a vampire's.

Dragon is suicide, Zombie is stupid. Werewolf isn't too bad except for the alpha situation. Picking Cthulid is like losing before the game even starts.
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>>48326699
To be fair, massive parts of the world ARE covered in ice caps during an ice age. It's mostly tundra and taiga until you get to the equator, true, but huge glaciers do cover country-sized areas.
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>>48326651

If things are bad enough, I'll fortify small enclaves for my empire in the early days, natural progression of history/technology be damned.
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>>48326745
That's basically it, Vampires are your worst choice unless you wanna be a Zombie, and I guess at least Zombies don't have to worry about feeding or politics. But like I said, vampires aren't even particularly special when it comes to manipulation because some of the Demons and the Fae are better.
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>>48326639
Demons have next to no structure and Fae are alien in their wants and thoughts.

And drinking blood isn't that hard of a feeding to accomplish. Ever heard of blood banks? Sneaking into Normals' houses at night to drink isn't too difficult either.

As for the Lord, it could be that he likes you, and wants to use you before taking you out.

You don't need Grand Design to plan ahead and be smart.
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>>48326745
Dragon can be easily dealt with if you just move the fuck out of your city. No Dragon is going to assume you're that rumoured infected Dragon assuming they already believe that's possible and not anti-dragon propaganda or a mistake by the cleaner.

Fae have a ton of magical potential if you stack that Magical ugrade with Arcanistry or whatever it's called. That magical power could be used defensively just as easily.

I agree with all the rest you said though.
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>>48326749
Yeah, but not nearly enough glaciation to stop agriculture because things are literally covered in ice. It would be harder, because life is always harder for humans when it's cold, but it would still be possible with hardier crops (ie barley), it just might not make economic sense to do when you've got less caloric output per hectare and you need more caloric input per person.
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Geez. Can't even make a build anymore without people telling you that your choices are shit.

It's like, once you see a potential winning option, you refuse to play around with other things and experiment. That's kinda boring.
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>>48326866
Don't be a boob. People like to discuss builds. That's what this thread is for.
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>>48326395
>If you can explain to me why it would be important to be able to be one age before the quests, and another age after that, I'm willing to write something in.

Because if you go back far enough you might be an old fuck by present day and stuck that way for eternity. That's a pretty big penalty.

>>48324688
You could also have a "Shadowrun" option. Supernatural stuff appears either at your arrival, x years before or after. No more than a generation before/after though. Form The Earth options would have to be excluded. So some humans become Elves, etc.

By the way, by the time the renaissance would come around or earlier, Sylvians are going to become a small minority at best. That, and/or forced to live outside forests. Forests wont compete with humans in agriculture, etc.
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>>48326873
I think hes more annoyed with the people min maxing just so they can be the biggest and baddest guys in the thread and then brag about it.
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>>48326797
Needing to eat TWO PINTS a day is hard. It means a significant part of your ~12 hours of time has to be spent finding a mark and draining them without being noticed.

>He likes you and wants to use you before taking oyu out
How is that a good thing, anon? He's still going to kill you.
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>>48326749
>>48326804
Believe me, I did read up on the last ice age to do this project. I'm aware that literally not everything is ice; I was just observing that introducing agriculture would be more difficult; nothing more.
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>>48326800
Fae magic is ritual shit. They get some minor on-the-fly spells but nothing powerful enough to actually be very useful when a dragon shows up out of the blue to fuck your shit up.

That's what I'm basing my offensive/defensive assessment on. If someone powerful shows up trying to kill me by surprise, do I have what it takes to either fight back and win or survive and escape? This kind of shit is probably going to happen every couple decades, maybe I can space it out to a century or so if I'm extra careful but sooner or later someone's going to come calling and I'd better have the means to survive.

>>48326904
My build is never about being the biggest or baddest, it's about survival and outlasting everything that wants to kill me. If that means that I have to hide in a pocket dimension for the next ten thousand years then so be it.
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>>48304512
Fae, of the Tuatha.
Royal Prerogative and Magical Potency.
Glamour, Enchantment, and Druidry.
Crystal Rod.

Gonna build me a magical realm.
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>>48327030
>Fae magic is ritual shit.
Same with Noble Vampires, and the worst part is that we don't even know what their rituals can DO.
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>>48304512

>that feel when nobody pick Cthulhid
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>>48327030
>ritual shit
>implying that can't be potent as fuck
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>>48327091
It absolutely can... but it's completely useless when you are attacked. Great for setup, but sooner or later you get caught out.
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>>48327030
Druidry has divination magic which can help you prevent threats before they happen. Glamour lets you hide yourself with illusions. Enchantment lets you craft protective items. Witchcraft could perhaps temporarily blind your attacker.

I'm sure you can find many more defensive uses there. Offense can be quite the defense aswell.
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>>48326023
One good thing is that while I don't think Imbued Magic is inheritable (Is it, acheld?), there's no limit on how many people you can imbue.

So you could imbue a shit ton of people and have your graduates teach them.That would let Italy become hot shit, otherwise your imbuing would be limited.
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>>48327078
Two people posted builds for C'thulhid.
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>>48323824
>If you've defined the magic to be "teachable" in the World of Myth and Wonder add-on, after assigning it to at least one race, then anyone how knows it can teach it to anyone else. It can't be both teachable and inheritable, though; one or the other.

Fuck. So I can't just have 1 in 100 people be mages by blood and capable of learning any magic, just not start with knowledge of them all?
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>>48327078
I'll do one then. Warp space, warp life, inhibit, royal prerogative. Perfect agent.
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>>48326892
If that's the only reason then it's a non-issue. The only way that you would age *at all* before present day is if you took the Temporally Lost drawback. That drawback already specifies that if you complete a quest you can reset your age to whatever you like. So, that takes care of it, yes?

I'll consider the Shadowrun thing.

As for the Renaissance, it was too much a hassle to try to assign dates to each species. Instead, I just added a note at the beginning of the species section basically saying "look, after certain time periods, some races are not plausibly going to be threats. Use your common sense".

Anyway, changelog for 1.5, the attached file. 0.9 of World of Myth and Wonder to follow in next post.

1.5 Changelog
* "Born in the Water", "Flight", "Mage Eye" added as "Minor Gifts"
* Added note on making magic for other elements than fire.
* Added Illusion magic.
* Betrayal drawback no longer forbids Telepathy; note that you *will* be caught off guard by the Betrayal, no matter what abilities you have. If you think that doesn't make sense in combination with Telepathy, then don't take that combination.
* Cursed by the Spirits drawback mitigated slightly in textual description
* Stormbringer drawback made less awful; now bad weather does not begin to set in for a full day of you staying in one place, and will take a bit to fully escalate.
* Nearly Mortal has no prerequisites now.
* Adding idea of "Special Reward" to each quest so that each one has a minor, but unique, reward. You can still only get the main Reward from 2 Quests, but will be able to get this Special Reward from as many as you complete. Right now, only The Historian has a Special Reward added.
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>>48326465
you a cool dude anon
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>>48327311
0.9 Changelog for World of Myth and Wonder
* Living Forest now makes vegitation larger, and offers a +0 option that just makes vegitation larger without making it "active".
* 'That Which Has Past' NEW option allows you to litter the world with the ruins of a civilization that has gone before, with various customizations.
* 'Steampunk' expanded to allow the option of making "technology" run by magic.
* 'Reality is Perception' elaborated to explain the creation of "gods"
* 'Uncanny Parallels' NEW option allows you to have the history of the fantasy world "parallel" that of the real world in form, if not details.
* The species abilities that some species have as Major Threats can now be optionally assigned to Neutral, Guardian and Hostile versions of a species with no change in balance.
* 'Xlitza' NEW species of reptilian humanoids
* Race Choice expanded to allow any species but Dragon as a choice. Certain races require you to make certain power purchases, in order to account for differential in species ability.
* Several costs for Magic of the People altered.
* Multipliers for Blessings of the People tweaked.
* Vampires now have 'The First' option which allows them to act as a species, rather than convert others to vampirism.
* Few more clarifications in notes section at end.
Next version will be 1.0. No *major* changes will be made after that point, though adding new races, or something like that, does not count as "Major".
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>>48326981
Only if you're dumb and don't play the political game. Being smart is how you survive. If he likes you now, you can use this time to get allies and resources.
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>>48327311
hurray for incorporating feedback! well done
>>48327347
>That Which Has Past
love it. I can finally do my Robert E. Howard-inspired world of danger and mystery!
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>>48327347
>* Several costs for Magic of the People altered.
Increased or decreased?
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>>48327381
You're implying he's a moron without allies and resources himself.
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Gifted Build

-30
Origin: Experimental
Body: Dulled Emotions, Deformed Body, Enhanced Mental, Prime Life, Dissonant Memory, Supernatural Magnet

-29
Curses: Empathy, Asexual+Neutered, Insomnia, Unsettling, Muted, Cowardly

-76
Powers: Invisiblity+Ghost+Field, Vitality+Immunity+Painless, Athleticism+Raw Power, Telekinesis+Precision+Power, Mechanics+Focus, Future Sight+Relevant, Levitation+Flight, Teleportation+Quick Step+Indirect Sight, Healing+Self Service, Mind Control+Flawless

Guardian:None
Home:Westwood
Students: Adam, Victoria, Scarlet
Adults: Julie Slater, Henry Morris
Perks:Overcomex2

A mute, invisible kid, who can fly incredibly fast, utilize massive telekinetic power with perfect control, and teleports, heals, and can perfectly enslave people when they're alone with her.

The allies are really just there to give her a human connection. She's going to take over the world.
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>>48326744
The Emperor is an Imperial sanctioned cult, the babies we kill are chaos spawn.
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>>48327467
I'm really not. It's obvious that he has allies and resources. That's why you get your own.
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>>48323336
Remind me again why anyone would want to be a brainwashed frat boy, aka a space marine?
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>>48327517
Yes, but you're acting like it's reasonable or even possible for you to get a support base to defeat him in time.
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>>48325825
Looks like she abandoned the thread. To bad because it looks like the mods deleted the offending post anyway.
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>>48327585
I get a Bolter and Power Armor, go to new places, and kill the inhabitants. Its really nice.
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>>48327347

Quick question, the relationship values are only applied between your race and the other specific race right? One race might be friendly with us and hostile with another, right?
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>>48327598
These Vampires look to be like the Masquerade types, so it's not like he's gonna kill you blatantly, unless you're seriously considering openly rebelling against him. The initial grab would be to make sure you survive long enough to have a chance.

Someone should probably make a new thread soon.
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>>48327849
No, I forbid it. It's time for cyoag to die.
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>>48327849
The Masquerade type LOVE paying off groups of vampires to murder you or arranging something with less aware agents or selling you out to hunters. He's gonna murder the fuck out of you even if he'd like to not do so ith his own hands.
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>>48327187

Yeah, two out of thousands
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>>48327311
Any chance of a few quests that can be completed in a more modern era? Many require you to start centuries or millennia before now. All except for Sorcerer Supreme.
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>>48327849
Thread: >>48327740
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>>48326009
I have a question about the hero option. Would be being blown up in half count as total destruction?
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>>48327962
You really are running on the assumption that you're not thinking ahead. Do you really have no backup plans?
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>>48327684
Why would mods delete a post for offending Angel?
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>>48326009
this is hard to decipher
tl;dr on the superhero one?
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>>48328218
I presume that this lord also has those.
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>>48304629
Mind War.
Big Damn You.
I want to be a harem maker, but I want rivals to combat. Just wish fulfillment is a bit boring, eh?
And BDY has the best picture.

Far-Flung Future, because space opera is comfy as fuck: You can go on adventures while bringing your nice home with you.

Mystical Mysteries, to keep things fun, but Quiet Cortex. Too much magic is indistinguishable from technology. Psionics is just a limited form of magic with nothing all that cool to back it up. Naive Normalcy for the same reason. All the cool supernatural stuff is already covered.

Mix and Match for "furry" stuff, since apparently that includes catgirls, so I can have C'tan C'tan planets and whatnot.

Bright tone I guess. No need for suffering, especially with rivals in the picture.

I'll do self insert, for want of any other desires.

Character points: Crazy rich. I want a badass luxurious space ship to live in.

Iron Will and Mental Elasticity, because being controlled isn't my fetish.

Superb Athlete, because I'm not gonna be achieving that shit otherwise. The Skilled stuff would be tempting to make me really good at a bunch of stuff, but whatever. I can pick up space ship flying and stellar navigation and whatever else on the fly.

Six points in magic. The way it's set up, that's by far the best way to go. Full-on archmage and I can do just about anything. It's sort of OP, and psionics and pheromones might be more fun, but the idea of being the space wizard is just too amazing.

My rivals will be Kitsune. Elf Princess, and Succubus. They're a great set of prizes to show off, and a useful group of underlings to assign to their own ships and crews. I'll find a harem of assorted other folks to serve as crew. Doctor, engineer, etc. Ninja, Heiress, and Amazon are the only ones from the listed posse that I want in particular.

Bonus points: One to control to buy passive pheromones. I'll spend the others on traits. I'll be good at space ships, economics, combat, and engineering.
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>>48322446
What kind of sick damaged fuck want's to live in Rick & Morty's setting though?
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