CYOA Thread

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So what's her problem?

>>48286080
>So what's her problem?

4chan.org/tg/

>>48286080
People give her attention when they shouldn't. But it's hard to stop poking a monkey when they give good reactions.

>>48285997
Iron General
Brawny Gentleman
Wise Old Wizard
Sophisticated Psion

Through the peerless training of my four companions, I will become unmatched in physical, mental, magical, and psionic prowess, and an inviolable force for good.

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OC from the end of last thread.

Will eventually update with a monster portion.

>>48286080
People like you are her problem and this boards problem too.

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>>48286209

>>48286209
Just a friendly reminder not to let screaming children get you down. You did a great job for what it's worth, so take what you learnt from the experience and get better :D

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>>48286300

>>48285997

How many are you supposed to pick

>>48285997
>FFI Style:
>>Lifelong Warrior Friend
>>Seasoned Veteran Relative
>>Experienced Warrior Girl
>>Female Law Enforcement Paladin

>Bravely Realizing (Ourselves)
>>The Cheerful Druid
>>Lifelong Warrior Friend
>>Eternally Hot-Blooded Rival
>>Experienced Warrior Girl

>We've Still Got It:
>>Seasoned Veteran Relative
>>Not-So-Spoony Bard
>>Wise Old Wizard
>>Grizzled Detective

>Already a Demon:
>>Dick-Ass Theif
>>The Iron General
>>Vengeful Viking Man
>>Evil Black Knight

>Harem Ending:
>>Scantily Clad Warrior Princess
>>Realigned Villanous Vixen
>>Runaway Foreign Catgirl
>>Amazon Huntress

>Those Cats Were Fast As Lightning:
>>Eternally Hot-Blooded Rival
>>Brawny Gentleman
>>Runaway Foreign Catgirl
>>Drunken Dwarven Monk

>Lethal Joke Team:
>>Loyal Family Pet
>>Infectiously Adorable P'orc Druid
>>Androgynous Cleric Kid
>>Inexperienced Young Hero

>In the Name of the Moon:
>>The Cheerful Druid
>>Female Law-Enforcment Paladin
>>Scantily Clad Warrior Princess
>>Runaway Foreign Catgirl

>Praise the Sun/Jolly Co-operation:
>>Brawny Gentleman
>>Orc Troublemaker
>>Drunken Dwarven Monk
>>Pompous Knight

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>>48286329

>>48286338
I think the general answer is 'four', though it's up to you.

>>48286353

I pick them all then.

>>48286367
Welp. Guess I"d better fire up that wargame I had planned, so I can eventually put out a Broquest campaign.

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>>48286388

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>>48286416

>>48286429
THE WALL
Weight Class: -40 Ultra Heavy (15', 2500 lbs)
Caste: -0 Worker
-10 Arm Extra Strength x2
-20 Progenitor Worm
-30 Extra Armor 3
-20 Shield x2
-30 Chitin Upgrade 3
-15 Regeneration
-20 Organ Redundancy
-40 Purifier

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXp8Th41rBs

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>>48286080
Isn't it strange that someone who was allegedly physically abused by a girlfriend is okay with mentally raping people?

>>48286405
Why would you go to all the effort of making such a thing then censor the work fuck?
You know what the word is.
Anyone that's seen the meme knows what the word is.
Anyone who is of primary school english proficiency knows what the word is.
Anyone so oversensitive to be offended by the word fuck is going to be offended anyway because again, they know what the word is.
This censorship does not compute.

>>48286509

It's not my cap.

>>48286329
>Alien
CHILDREN OF THE ELDER GOOODS
>s.p.e.c.i.a.l.
Fuck it, I'll copy my fallout stats.
T3
D2
A1
F3
L1
M5
E however much I have left.
>Powerset
I sprout tentacles and do cool 4-dimensional magic shit with them. So, biomancy, I guess.
>Personality
Sincere wrathful stoic.
It would be wise not to step on my toes.
>Perks
Natural resistance. Let's just hope there's no steamboats.
Genius. So I have enough brainpower to operate any newfound organs or limbs, and to not kill myself with them.
One of many. The elder things had a lot of children.
>Team
Wildcat
Huntress
Stargirl
Captain Atom

We fight for freedom and the American way. Also for a bite to eat.

>>48286519
I'd guessed that mate.
It was a rhetorical question for the void.
I'd be pretty shocked if someone on this website of all places was censoring fuck.

>>48286508
Don't have screencap, but I'm pretty sure she said that even though she's a submissive pushover irl, she sometimes fantasizes about dominating other women.

>>48286508
People end up with weird distinctions between what is and isn't ok, particularly in response to emotional trama.

>>48286080
>>48286156
>>48286508
>>48286156
>>48286135


Stop trying to ruin another thread. If you're so thirsty for bullshit discussion, there's an archive.

>>48286212
This. None of us cares about your namefag/tripfag crap. If you want to discuss them, take it to some other thread. The worst part is that none of you ever say anything interesting or new; you just post your half-baked CYOA about raping & abusing her, then sometimes also take about how she's a lesbian.

>>48286750

The fuck are you lumping me in with the rest for? I said the same thing as >>48286212 but much more succinctly.

>>48286750
>implying my post was trying to ruin the thread

Rude. All I did was point out that people keep trying to get reactions out of her, leading to unnecessary drama.

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>>48286189
>>48286341

no nameless rank and file soldier

trash/10

>>48286416
>>48286429
Call me Cirice, I'm a psycho-focused hunter..

Weight Class: Ultralight [0]
Height: 4ft
Weight: 50pd
Strength: Athlete
Speed: 50m/h
Shell: 12.7mm thick
Caste: Hunter [25]

Brain/Senses: [125]
Telekinesis
Psychokinetic Bolt
Telepathy
Mental Assault, Domination, Mind Probe
Olfactory Upgrade
Night Vision, Thermal Vision
Brain Upgrade 1-3

Organs: [20]
Skinsheathe
Compactible
Progenitor Worm

Defences: [50]
Regeneration
Reflex Upgrade

220 points spent.

>>48286080
>Sapphoshire

NOBODY TOLD ME SHE CALLED IT THAT. Now I finally have a reason to dislike her as much as everyone else seems to! What a horrible, awful, stupid name.

>>48286344
>see final page
?

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>>48287408
>>48287412

>>48287408
>>48287412
>>48287435

Dark Fairy (1)
Create Fog (1)
Tempature Control (2; 10°)
Daytime Duration (2; 10x)
Nighttime Duration (2; 10x)
2 became 1Dark
The Rot (1Dark)
Noxious Miasma (3Dark)

>>48287118

>>48285089
Reformulated things into step-by-steps that weren't there before.

>>48285110
You don't have to personally teach majors. If you buy "Taught (Major)" than anyone who knows the major magic can teach it.

>>48286013
That is a very good point, and exactly the kind of reason I post WIPs. I didn't even think of a human v. human sort of situation. Clearly that needs some work.

>>48287671
>it's travellers tale
>every build is 100% for combat
what can sate anons bloodthirst?

>>48288159
More power. Though, it might help if you have him something to try it on?

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>>48285135
I was trying to give the same feel to the sins that the original did (pic related). Of course, I'll consider your statements.

>>48285960
Don't worry, there is only 10353 words and that's including a minor alteration I forgot to put in when I posted it.

>>48285997
Vengeful Viking Man
Brawny Gentleman
Dragon Knight
Honorable Kabuto Samurai

Cross between a pub crawl and a quest, going around beating the living shit out of evil with the power of pure testosterone.

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>>48285997
More characters. And I think there was a page with quests and BBEGs too.

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>>48285997
>>48288577
Here it is.

>>48288460
>10353 words
>pdf
>no images
I think I'll pass.

>>48287827
Considering that -2 acts as a lower bound of species value, having different expressions of the same magic seem to break the game.

Like having Enchanting being Rare for -2 worth of races, and Common for -1 worth of races, it will give a total cost of -7, compared to -4 if all those races with Common manifestation changed to Rare.

While the text does not recommend repeating the process for the same kind of magic, it does allow for it, so yeah.

>>48288577
>0 character description
trash version

>>48286065
SETTLEMENT: START (400 SP)

>Apocalypse: Zombie Apocalypse
Boring, sure, cliche, yes, but reliably so, and I think this one is where the odds are most even.

>Shelter: Ship
A pretty easily defensible position with lots of potential for improvement.

Buildings:
>Water Processing Plant (Free with Ship)
>Clinic (380 SP Remain)
>Generator Room (350 SP Remain)
>Store (335 SP Remain)
>Tavern (320 SP Remain)
>Town Hall (295 SP Remain)
The ship already has places for bunks in it, so I'm not too concerned about living space. The majority of points have gone into renovating the ship so that it can be livable again.

Perks: (5 PP)
>Lucky (4 PP Remain)
>Medic (3 PP Remain)
>Armory (2 PP Remain)
>Natural Leader (1 PP Remain)
>Sniper (0 PP Remain)
Luck is indispensable in a situation like this. An armory will be a huge boon to fend off zombies with. As zombies create fear, being a natural leader will help calm those around me, as well as my sniper skills. Being a medic will also likely have the same effect.

Mechanics:
>Gordon Wey (288 SP Remain)
>Mateo Enrique (285 SP Remain)
>Raul Tejada (280 SP Remain)
With this combination, I have more than enough manpower to get the ship up and running on schedule.
Doctors:
>James Harvey (272 SP Remain)
I'll be able to cover most of the more dedicated work in the clinic, while James can cover field medicine. Over time, he'll learn more skills.
Cooks:
>Miyo Miyazaki (263 SP Remain)
Adaptability is the most important trait in a zombie apocalypse. The more palatable, the better.
Muscle:
>Bubba (252 SP Remain)
>Nita (242 SP Remain)
>Zane (229 SP Remain)
>Danny (223 SP Remain)
A moderately powerful combat force. Danny will be useful in negotiating with other settlements.
Merchants:
>Damien (221 SP Remain)
>Sasha (206 SP Remain)
>Felicia (191 SP Remain)
Drug usage will not be tolerated. The situation is real and requires the utmost seriousness. We must make do with what we have.
>Worker *2 (171 SP Remain)
>Farmer *3 (156 SP Remain)

>>48285997
>>48288577
>>48288706
My character is a hippie-ish ranger who wishes she was an elf.
Big Bag:
>Corrupt and Deceptive Noble
Companions:
>Grizzled Detective
>Cool Lesbian Paladin
>Elvish Time Mage
>Hot Rival as husbando

>>48288818
Well this whole thing is unfinished. It's still really rad though.

>>48288875
1 and 3
i mean it's 2016
who even has friends anymore?
societal atomisation babay

>>48288878
What's your long-term plan? Just consolidating your base?

>>48288757
Good catch; thanks. Yeah, this part still needs a lot of work. I'm definitely at the upper bound of how complex I want to make it.

wait! are we just casually allowing women in here now??

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>>48288966
Is pdf related the latest version? I'll delete it if not.

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>>48289001
no we don't, last women here was driven out not long ago and our forces claim decisive victory. Though, who knows how much time this peace will last until next great evil will arrive

>>48289020
Yeah, that's the latest. That one is in a state I'm reasonably happy with, so I'm concentrating on the DLC.

>>48289001
>>48289044
there's at least one ~grilll itt >>48288882

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>>48289069
not everything that claims to be a girl is one, remain vigilant but know that one you linked is a ruse

>>48288875
Friends and money. I have come to terms dying alone, it doesn't matter anymore. If I have to I can pay a prostitute to pretend to care about me.

>>48288159
Wasn't there a pet rock build last thread and some sort of manipulator build a few threads ago?

>>48289112
>pet rocks
>not bloodthirsty

>>48288745
It'll be in image form soon enough, so no need to worry.

>>48288875
I choose the girl and the money. Sex is the only social thing I care about, and I hate working. Although I don't like that she seems to be a traditional girly girl. Probably a sub, too.

>>48289059
Do the (non-food) items in the Pocket Dimension and the books from the item section have ranks in Impervious/Regeneration?
I'd be pretty mad if someone burned my book of knowledge.

Great CYOA by the way. I'll post my build if I ever manage to decide on one.

>>48289147
>Brightest
>All About Me
Kindness gives people a nice shield. Oh and I'm immortal and potentially very influential on a global scale. Nice.
>Aquatic Infrastructure
Sounds like it could curb pollution efficiently. Also, fun.

>>48289122
Well rocks do tend to be pretty gritty

>>48289202
Things in the Item section explicitly cannot be destroyed (or, not destroyed permanently in the case of the Omni-Weapon).

Things within the Pocket Dimension have no special protections, but you are free to interpret them as "respawning" if you like. But... why are you letting hostile forces into your Pocket Dimension?

And, thanks.

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>>48287545
New Arrival
Male, 17, human
Semblance: Force of Nature, Lightning.
Location: Beacon Academy, Vale. There are beast and enemies that need slaying.
Gifts: Memory(-20), Strength(-20), Agility(-20), Energy(-20), Intelligence(-10), Will(-10).
Weapons: Melee will be a simple hand and a half long sword, then I will get a Variable weapon that is a Shield with a Assault rifle combo that has the Dust mod and is Collapsible. Total cost(-600).
Equipment: Scroll(free), Parachute and Grappling Hook(-150), Armor(-100)pic related mainly the left one, Wilderness Gear(-50), Dust Charges(-50). That will be it and I'll pocket the last 50 Lien. Let us preform Jolly co operation.

>>48288159
Not every build is built for combat. Every single Archivist I've seen, even if they have weapons, aren't 100% meant for combat. Some dude made a build for some average lanky guy who can see the fourth wall. There are other builds, but with the armory options, I'm not surprised that people make combat builds.

>>48289314
>But... why are you letting hostile forces into your Pocket Dimension?
If I live here several thousands of years, I'm bound to end up dropping at least SOME pitchers.
Even if it's self-cleaning, the carpet won't last forever either.

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>>48286416
>>48286429
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q2KZhuD5RzQ

>Weight
Medium [20]

>Caste
Warrior [45]

>Brain/Senses
Olfactory Upgrade [55]
Night Vision [60]
Brain Upgrade 1 [65]
Electrosense [80]

>Limbs
Extra Strength x2 [100] ;I have to buy this for each arm, right?
Extra Power [110]

>Organs
Skinsheath [125]
Gullet [130]

>Weapons
Bioelectric Pulse+EMP [155]

>Defenses
Regeneration (Warrior)
Extra Armor 1 (Warrior)
Reflex Upgrade [165]
Chitin Upgrade 3 [195]

>Mobility
Flight [225]

>>48289510
the hell is this awesomeness that I just watched?

Anyone have the mech one where it starts off as pods falling from the sky, allocating points, and then shows different merc groups forming and the police saying warning to be on the lookout for elfish looking people?

>>48289572
Ultraman Ginga Densetsu The Movie

>>48289614
Japan does some things right.

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>>48289579
Power Armor CYOA? There's so many versions that it's hard to post here but you can find the wiki easily.
Here's one that I have on my archive.

>>48289510
Please...
Shoulda went for electric pusle melee attacks.

https://youtu.be/jo0C5MQA-0g?t=32

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>>48289635
You can get some pretty awesome stuff from anime movies that are supposed to be for children.

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>>48289653
I went, didn't I? I think the EMP upgrade is just an alternative attack for the melee and not mutually exclusive.

>>48289457
Heh; fair enough.

>>48289653
Why is this band off so good?>>48289684
wat?

>>48289702
And what the hell is with the lucha libres in gimp suits?

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>>48289702
It was more in response to your video. Saying you shoulda Kamen Rider hibikid it up.

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>>48289737
That's nothing.

>>48289742
Oh, yeah. You're probably right, it's just that music was the one I was listening to while making the build.

>>48289761
>>48289742
>>48289702
the hell am I looking at?

>>48289721
>>48289653
I've already listened to the song now 4 times. Somone unplug my laptop so I'm only stuck several hours.

>>48289777
Concept art for a new CYOA

>>48289795
good. I don't know it all, but good.

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>>48289777
Kamen Rider or Masked Rider, one of the triumvirates of japanese heroic tokusatu, along with Ultraman and Sentai (Power Ranger).

From wiki:
The series takes place in a world plagued by Shocker, a mysterious world-wide terrorist organization. To further its plans for world domination, Shocker recruited its agents through kidnapping, turning their victims into mutant cyborgs and, ultimately, brainwashing them. However, one victim named Takeshi Hongo escaped just before the final brainwashing. With his sanity and moral conscience intact, Hongo battled Shocker's minions as the grasshopper-themed altered human superhero Kamen Rider.

>>48289842
cool

>>48289141
>Sex is the only social thing I care about
oh boy

For anyone who cares, just a note that I've decided to give World of Myth and Wonder DLC a major overhaul which is now underway; I realized it had become FAR too complicated and detail-oriented. I plan to retain all of the content, but am aiming for something much more choice-based and streamlined, leaving more interpretation up to the reader to allow both simplicity and flexibility. For this reason don't expect any more updates until late tonight at the very earliest, or this weekend.

This will not impact the main CYOA, Altering History; that is fine.

>>48286065
>Nuclear Armageddon
-Accept mutation
>Bunker
-Water Processing Plant [Free]
-Clinic [20]
-Generator Room [30]
-Hotel [15]
-Tavern [15]
-x2 House [14]
-Store [15]
-Barricade 2 [10]
>Perks
-Armory
-Center of Commerce
-Drugs and Alcohol
-Green Thumb
-Natural Leader
>General Residents
-Christian Gillian [15, Mechanic]
-Doctor Michaels [20, Doctor]
-Aldo Avicci [16, Cook]
-Benjamin Chambers [9, Soldier]
-Rudy [11, Soldier]
-Mad Mutt the Mutant [15, Soldier]
-Scott Fisher [15, Soldier]
-Katherine Howell [18, Soldier]
>Merchants
-Felicia [15, General Goods]
-Crazy Karl [15, Spare Parts]
-Doc Sanders [15, Medical Goods/Drugs]
-Sasha [15, Weapons]
-Amshula [20, Clothing/Armor]
-Damien [2, Scavenger]
>Misc
-x3 Animal Trainers [45]
-x3 Workers [30]
-x3 Farmers [15]
>Animals
-Chickens
-Cows
-Cats
-Dogs
-Donkeys
-Horses

A trading hub in the wasteland. Enjoy our fine cuisine and alcohol while here, much of it personally grown by me. Our merchants sell a wide assortment of practical goods for all types of buyers. Feel safe and sound knowing our commitment to security and extreme, agonizing punishments for thieves and raiders. Rudy truly makes an art form out of deterrence.

Want to know more about me? I use my superhuman physical abilities to farm. It's not glamorous and Mad Mutt and I may look ugly, but together we ensure everyone is fed. The town is mostly run by respected residents of the community. I only step in during crises.

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I don't know if any of you remember, but there was a really basic MS paint little girl CYOA a few threads ago, but what caught my eye was that there was an option called "Innawoods" that had you operating with a magical rifle and a backpack that regenerated supplies. That inspired me, so have a peek at what I'm currently making.

In addition to what I have already made, there's going to be weapon mods, companions, backpack supplies, factions, and few missions.

I already wrote down what I had planned for weapon mods, though. Will post right after this.

I'll finish the Ace Combat-esque CYOA sometime soon too I promise.

>>48290047
Not to my taste (don't care for firearm oriented stuff), BUT it looks high quality and interesting. Objectively, in other words, it looks good.

>>48290047
MODS – Pick 3

Secondary Weapon: You now have two personal guns instead of one. You can use this to have a proper personal sidearm, or you can use this to wield two guns at once. All mods apply for both.

Bells and Whistles: Anything and everything that can make your rifle more tacticool is covered, from overpriced tactical lasers to silly bipod foregrips. Proudly sponsored by Magpul Industries.

Offensive Attachment: Underbarrel grenade launchers, bayonets, standoff/glassbreaker devices, and the works. Now you can kill things in ways other than bullet.

A Little Work: Sometimes, the best way to improve a weapon isn’t adding things to it, but rather, refining what’s already there. Whether it be as discrete and modest as you want, or as lavish and show-offy as you please, it’s sure to make for a finer weapon in the end.

Major Modification: Want an M82 chambered in 14.5×114mm Soviet? Want your double barreled boomstick to have four barrels instead? Want an Mk 108 that you can haul around and fire in hand? Additions of this nature can be all yours, for the bargain price of one point.

Optics: From Aimpoints and Eotechs all the way to high magnification scopes, these will help you aim quicker and further than standard irons. Free for DMRs, sniper rifles, and anti-material rifles.

Suppressor: These specialized muzzle devices makes your firing report quiet enough that you will no longer suffer permanent hearing damage without ear protection, on top of hiding muzzle flash. Free for integrally suppressed weapons, and weapons designed from the ground up to be suppressed. Free for integrally suppressed weapons, or weapons designed from the ground up to be paired with a suppressor.

Product of Fiction: Your gun doesn’t actually exist in reality. Costs twice as much if the gun in question is far more advanced than real life varieties, or if there’s some kind of supernatural or magical component to it. Try to be reasonable, okay?

>>48286329
-Alien (Kryptonian)

Rank

Toughness = 7
Endurance = 6
(i have 1 remaining useless power this is bullshit fix this author)

-Superhuman Stats

Personality : Trustworthy, Reserved, Guarded.

Perks : Natural Resistance, Genius, The Brightest Spark.

Compainions : Zattana, Captain Atom, Huntress

>>48290032
good news! bon courage, watashi no yūjin

>>48290114
You start at one in everything, though, so you actually have four left.

>>48288159
Remember that this could be considered a narrative thing. In the lore section we've got info that the Travellers were literally a paramilitary group before the old ones chewed their collective assholes at the denial, Credits are short for requisitionary credits, and in a way they're still militant, though now closer to a holy order mixed with a Cossack hetmanate.

does anyone have A journey home cyoa in one page? it's been deleted from imgur

it's still available in 4 parts there
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0Bwl-aJm3wG4nV3RqOV9CYzE3ZUk&usp=sharing&tid=0Bwl-aJm3wG4nN2w1TGJCSVlQZ2M

>>48290047
Looks good to me. Definitely will make a build or two when it's out.

>>48286227

1.7 Version when? I remember reading something about it about a year ago.

>>48290481
Possibly never, the creator got a gf and a job.

>>48290481
Author has abandoned that project, but said that anyone can update it if they want to.

>>48290572
what an asshole

>>48290645
Right ;_;

>>48290652
still got the gf and the job? traitor

>>48290652
It's gonna be alright spess man.

>>48290677
Barely
>>48290679
I think about updates, but.. i just get distracted with immense amounts of new companions and no other content.

>>48290745
>Barely
oh sorry to hear that
hang in there spess buddy
you'll always have us always always always

>>48290773
>>48290745
ONE OF US, ONE OF US, ONE OF US! NO WAY OUT, NO WAY OUT, NO WAY OUT!

>>48285997
Cheerful druid.
Experience warrior girl.
Elven time mage.
Grizzled detective.

I think this is a well rounded, and interesting party with a bunch of fun characters. The detective is there to bring balance (IE moodiness) to the team.

>>48288159
You have to be somewhat prepared for combat if you're going to travel around the multiverse, I suppose.
Also it's easier to be a badass action guy than a badass technician guy.

>>48290832
quest? >>48288706

>>48290745
Understandable, but if you need help you could always reach out to the general, while it might not get everything you need, it could help stimulate your creativity.

>>48289044
>last women here was driven out not long ago
You talking about >>48286080?
She always comes back.

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>>48286429
Codename: Stalker Delta

> Medium -20
> Soldier -25
> Electrosense -15
> Olfactory upgrade -10
> Echolocation -5
> Brain upgrade 1 -5
> Legs + extra power -20
> Extra armor 1 free
> Regeneration Free
> Tentacle (Tail) + extra length -15
> Electrolysis Lung & compactible -15
> Jaws -15
> Bioleletric pulse -20
> Telepathy -10
> Chitin upgrade 1&2 -15
> Camoflage -10
> Burrowing -15 -10 (Penalty)

Stats:
Movement penalty: 0%, 50mph sprint
Burrowing move speed: 25mph; 12.5mph through concrete/stone/dense materials
Armor: 2.5" Thick; 63.5mm of steel equivalent
Bite force: Estimated at 170,000 newtons of force (not quite enough to bend steel)
+50% more damage
Singleminded
Melee reach: 12' tail, 6' normal
Weight: 500lbs
Strength" 1,600 press

An ambush predator that relies upon burrowing in upon unsuspecting victims, Stalker Delta as he has been designated is proving quite a problem to ISIL in Iraq and Syria and numerous other jihadist groups. For now the entity is content with hunting down and scaring the living daylights out of Terrorists, we don't know what it plans upon doing after it has either scared them all into hiding, or left their... eviscerated remains hanging from flag poles or left within walls and floors in an apparent psychological mode of warfare...

Stalker delta is not to be approached at this time, his behavior is as yet still unpredictable, though we hope he is more well intentioned than how he looks or has behaved...

>>48290773
We'll be aight'!
>>48290792
STOP IT, STOP, BAD.

It doesn't help i dug myself a big hole by having Titanlands be all unbalanced and shit, one day i'll fix it all, one day ;-;

>>48290893
that is fucking terrifying.

>>48290894
Honestly Lurl, the best way to balance titanland is to just remove all the stats entirely.

>>48290679
is there any reason for you to use a name right now?

>>48290960
No. Stats are great. The only need is removing sacrifice.

>>48290894
>Titanlands
now that you mentioned it, why not post it

>>48290846
New?

>>48291056
Nope.

>>48286243
>Breed
Arcane vampire
>Perks
Luck & Fast healing.

I hope I can stay alive for long enough to become powerful. Magic is always fun.

>>48286300
This one looks interesting.

>Titles
The Bulwark, Gravity Adept, The Greatsmith, The Traveller & Medicus.

>Artifact
Armour -> Disguised & Magic Absorbent.

So, I just want to travel the worlds and survive.

>>48288875
2 & 3.
One would be nice if I she was more interesting, right now she's practically a hot maid who is DTF.

I can survive without a meaningful romantical relationship. But life without friends and a shit economy would be depressing.

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>>48291001
Must you mock me?
>>48290960
I thought about it but there are always people who disagree.

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>>48291136
truth be told, yet again, i'm more than happy for someone to take it and have a go themselves, keeping the basic structure atleast.

I quite like my pantheon of giants.

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>>48291165

>>48291136
>>48291165
>inb4 someone posts the most min/max'd build we figured out a few months back.

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>>48291185

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>>48291197
>that feel when there is no help you can give a person for their addiction to creating virtual companions.

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>>48291220
>Update

>>48290047
>I'll finish the Ace Combat-esque CYOA sometime soon too I promise.

If you're the one who posted the pastebin of it months ago, I guess I can stop working on it.

>>48290866
>>48290832
>>48288706

Going for the Dark Monarch. He seems like a great BBEG, and we can have our own little revolution against him.

>>48291189
Yeah that was fun, I made >>47214571 as min-maxed as I could get it without homebrewing rules for Chimeras; but I think it's much more fun to min-max with more restrictions, like I did in >>47207039.

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>>48290923
Precisely why I picked this form... I mean I won't be getting hugs from anyone anytime ever... But I can make murderers and criminals fear the dark... the very earth rumbling beneath their feet...

Besides I could have gone for a more efficient and arguably scarier mode like gif related..

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>>48291240
You mean this?

I am a firm believer of the more the merrier, by the way. I'd hate for you to stop because of me. Maybe we can even work together or something, I dunno.

>>48291338
fair point.

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>>48291369
I posted an older version by accident, shit. But you get the point.

>>48287671
Sometimes I worry that writefagging for this gets too autistic.

>>48291664
>too autistic
There is no such thing, my dear boy.

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>>48291405
Needs more mega corps

>>48291885
I planned on optional modifiers at the end of it, that included everything from turning planes into mechs into AC3 style megacorp wars. You'll get your fix.

>>48291664
Perhaps, but that's why I grab everything and edit it. The first draft of anything is too autistic, but some background info and balance can reduce it to a useful amount of autism.

>>48291369
>>48291405
Yeah, that. I haven't actually done too much to it right now, started writing for some companions (and adding a few to round out the number) and fleshing out some of the options, but it's pretty much intact unless you changed some things yourself. I had an idea on how to better streamline purchasing planes, but I'm not so sure how it would work in practice since the rest of that section is unfinished.

We could work on it together I guess, the crushing possibility that I might disappoint someone who's worked hard on a project we share has usually been a good motivator in the past, but I'm not so adept at the image-making portion, at least that's why I haven't finished my other project.

>>48291939
>>48291664
Define autistic in this context? Do's and Dont's?

>>48292075
For me, too autistic is when you drift into Fanfiction.net levels of autism. But everyone's tolerance levels are all different.

>>48292133
So in this context autism is synonymous with self-indulgence?

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>>48291902
God's work, anon.

>>48292133
for someone with only a budding interest in this such a description doesnt say much

>>48292159
Kind of. I get that all Travellers are speshul snoflaycks, but I backstories that are little more than glorified handjobs really kill it for me. Thankfully I haven't seen one like that yet.

>>48292195
See above, but don't use my limit if you don't accept it. Just make a build that's fun for you.

>>48292075
If you have to ask, it's too late for you.

>>48292320
Or just not well acquainted with the colloquialisms that you use here. I understand the general sense of the what you mean, but some general advice would help.

>>48292320
>it's too late for you
No!
Even now, there is still hope for anon!

>>48292075
There are some basic rules to follow in my opinion.

1) Understand that the character you're making is a part of the world, they sleep, they eat, they shit every now and again unless they're Antarctic Elders, they think that's gross and interact with other Travellers. They must actually exist in tandem with their environment.
2) All characters must have flaws and strengths, these can be directly visible or simply implied but they must have presence.
3) They're gonna die some day. When creating a character you need to understand they exist at a moment in the timeframe of their lives. And one day they will be nothing but memories and soap.
I try to follow these three rules for every companion I add on, barring a few exceptions which have a longer list of rules.

>>48292313
Then Have I been doing a decent job?

>>48292358
I haven't read traveller or any of the builds but generally, if your writing style reads like your wanking while writing, or that you're a super special snowflake who can't lose, it's bad.
Basically read angelanon's posts and don't do that
Don't go "As the unholy child of an angel and a demon, I knew no place to call home. I was banished to roam the world", or shit like how you're literally the best person ever at something, without even practicing.

>>48286300
Scourge of the Cosmic Seas, The Meteoric, Lord of Fire, Far-Sighted, The Reaper

Melee Weapon: Cutlass
Autonomous, Bound Spirit

>>48292395
I think so. While I think that builds that don't take any Little Things lose out on character building, none of them are "absolutely perfect" at everything.

>>48291189
>Not going thematic.
>>48291136
Here's my build for an undead priest of Vilges.

Race: Human
Perks/Features:
Ugly/Disfigured
Spiritual
Social
Curse: Undeath
Titan: Vilges the Holy
Spells:
Heal
Stamina Overclock
Resurrection
Feast
Curse and Cure Curse (Undeath)
Arcane Projectiles
Glow
Lightning
Bonuses:
Enhanced Literacy
Silver Tongue
Mystical
Medical Knowledge
Armour/Attire:
-24 Robes/Cermonial Wear combo (Stamina Overclock)
Primary Arms/Equipment:
-3 Dagger
-10 Martia Art
-20 Staff/Banner Multitool
Misc. Items:
-5 Lantern
-6 Brew-Stock
-20 Siren Jewels (Lightning)
-15 Cure-Tome
-11 Runes
Mounts:
-17 Horn-Beast
-18 Caravan
Companions:
Julius Omeran
Eva Chadwick
Temoraclese Astargus
Arden Forest
Life Title: Scholar (Enhanced Literacy)
Quest:
The Roving Horde (+3 Unalligned) (Glow, Arcane Projectiles, Medical Knowledge)
Operation: Gravedigger (50 Gold)

Final Stats:
PER: 3
STR: 4.25
END: 7.5
CHA: 9
INT: 7
WIS: 6.5
AGI: 3.25

We roam from place to place, putting down villains while I proselytize the masses for Vilges the Holy.
I'm basically a Priest for Vilges, but I'm not defenseless, and an assailant would sorely regret attempting to accost me, not even accounting for my much stronger companions; Julius, Temoraclese, and Arden.

After we razed that bandit clan, we hear that a bunch of misguided clerics are going to make an attempt on the life of Saint Vilges.
ABSOLUTELY. UNACCEPTABLE.
I will talk sense into them, and if they will not hear my words, I will beat it into them.

>>48292569
Of course, which is why I have to infer things from such builds and characters. I've gotten two legitimate Mary Sues on other forums that I had to De-Sue. Was not fun when dealing with the writers.

>>48292637
>other forums
gross.

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>>48292637
>I've gotten two legitimate Mary Sues

>>48292684
I remember being told that in the past, if I had listened I wouldn't be here.

>>48292707
The first one played like a badly written Shonen protagonist with no clear limits on power and a desire to enforce 'justice' on other travellers.

The other was a 'child of the great old ones' that came about as close to it as that Japanese porn version of Nyarlathotep.

Neither could do wrong and could apparently "crush most other Travellers."

First guy I put kicking off the eleventh time war and ending up getting Oberyn-Martell'd by Gadraki, the other one is locked in a pocket dimension and the bitch is never getting out. Such characters Ironically work better as antagonists.

>>48292883
>I remember being told that in the past, if I had listened I wouldn't be here.
okay and?

>>48292883
So what are the reasons for each Time War? So far, I've seen:

>The very first Time War amongst the ‘travellers’ was the divide in the use of our technology, the leftovers, our gifts from the void things, when the first generation had remained to be submissive unaware lapdogs.
>There was great initial debate over whether or not ethereal beings with total physical basis should be allowed to join the ranks and was a contributing factor to the third Time War.
>fourth [No Traveller may own another sentient being be it a physical, ethereal or artificial being]
>fifth [No Traveller shall use mercenaries, and other non-travellers in their journeys, Ae shall remain under Traveller foot aside from a hallowed few.
>The Sixth Time War was a slow burn up of a refusal to abide by the council of Nine’s decision to follow the rules instituted by the Judiciaries input, notably the basis that all Travellers had to be recruited, doing away the concepts of conscription and genetic inheritance that had prior been floated.
>seventh time war between the Travellers and a group of Time-travelling Slavers who seized upon the chaos

Which leaves the Second and the Eighth through Twelfth unknown.

>>48293097
>and other non-travellers in their journeys
So they can't make friends with locals?

>>48292572
>no character art

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>>48293410

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>>48293377
Sorry.
I don't visit many sites that have that sort of thing.
I basically just go here, youtube, and netflix.

This is the best I could find on short notice.
I don't like it very much.

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>>48287671
Name: Red
Gender: Male
Origin: The Now; Watcher
Skills, Perks, and Traits: High-Tech Understanding, Beast Master, Tactician, Explorer, Traveller Adept, Adaptability, Surgeon, Languages Proficiency, Hearty, Shining Soul
Initial Armor: Traveller's leathers+, Everwalkers Cloth, Traveller’s Medinah Scarf
Initial Weapons: Yuta Brace+, M911-Modded, Skinning Knife
Initial Knick-knacks: Pegs, Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Monster Containment Orb, Advanced Medical Kit, Noble Beast Minor (Ferret) ("Rebel"), Noble Beast Greater (Roc) ("Thunderclap"), Non-sentient Servo-skull, Omni Camping Equipment, Self Operating Cooking Gear, Hover Bike , 24HR Multi-Reality News Feed, Enhanced Occulatus, Hypertracia, Healing-Chip, Flux Generator
Little Things: My Best Friend, Minor, Don't Need No Governa's Dolla!, Destined for Greater Things
Faction: Archivists
Covenant: The Church of our Lady, Destroyer of Despair
Allies: Hildegard of Bingen, 76, Archivist, Travelling Saint; Paria Pasha, 38, Mechanical, Field Researcher; Tenzig Norgay, 191, True Traveller, Humble Sherpa; Glig-Irmuns, 765, Independent, Beast of Koln; 'Mithra', 17, Independent, One Who Lights the World Aflame
Home District: Free Traveller – The Road Never ends
Hubworld: Semlaga-A1 – The Primeval World
Mission: Scorpion Rodeo
Panic Button: The Duke

Destined For Greater Things: http://pastebin.com/XkJn46JR

On another note, what leads a build to be Panic Button material?

>>48293449
Do you wanna be the very best? Like no one ever was?

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>>48293461
To catch them is my real quest. To train them is my cause.

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>>48293484

>>48293097

The second was a blatant power grab by a potent AI and a hyper-aggressive Yautja, though they both overstepped themselves and were cast down by Sam and Marco.

Eighth was a resurgent war and a technical continuation of the fifth-through-seventh conflicts with survivors from the losing sides simultaneously strike several hundred hubworlds in an attempt to gain leverage on Ae.

Ninth was another attempted power grab that attempted to bring in several legions of spess Romans onto Ae that ended in a complete wipe by the godheads.

Tenth began as a conflict within the void hunters that would fuck up their numbers to date on accepting the help of some of the more benevolent children of the old-ones and void entities (Shub Niggurath, Papa Nurgle and Yog Sothoth) it expanded into a full time war when cohorts from the Fighters and administrators started taking sides.

Eleventh was best described as a six week war that no one can remember who started and cost most of Biological and Medical their infrastructure. What likely began as an internal in Bio spread out and brought thousands in with very little idea of what was going on.

Twelth was the smallest time war that began as a feud between Igra and a number of third generations over his several centuries in charge of admin, the third gens were bureaucrats within his department and attempted to assassinate him, and when that failed they attempted a coup. Which was inadvisable as the rest of the council didn't take kindly to that.

>>48293170
They can, but you can't take them back with you to Ae, at least not without permission.

The rule itself was put into place when the Travellers were still few in number, and it was possible that a rogue Traveller could hypothetically use bought manpower to make up for size to seize control of the Travellers.

>>48293449
A combination of experience, distinct lack of purpose and a will to aid those who cry out into the void.

>>48293559
>Paladin/Warlord
>Endurance: 3, Strength: 2, Resolve: 4, Awareness: 2, Charisma: 4, Combat Ability: 3 (Every other skill at 1)
>Defense Master, Persuasive, Great Fortitude
>Diana, Rhoarkas, Somni

I recall there being more pages to this CYOA.

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>tfw the Americans don't shitpost on Fridays
so it's one of those days.
>>48293797
he kept removing stuff with each update

>>48293797
>I recall there being more pages to this CYOA.
really? such as? I only found that one pdf on one of the pastebin's dropbox.

>>48293097
Question on the Fourth War. "[No Traveller may own another sentient being be it a physical, ethereal or artificial being]" I've seen plenty builds where players own artificial beings, and been implied elsewhere in the cyoa. Thoughts from Highlander?

>>48293908
Honestly that rule seems unenforceable.

>>48292883
And I thought my characters were bad!

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>>48293883
Here's one with BBEG's.

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>>48286508
>>48286602
Found it. She's a sub, but sometimes fantasizes about being a dom.
>Isn't it strange that someone who was allegedly physically abused by a girlfriend is okay with mentally raping people?
If she can mind control women, then she has power over them and can live without fear of them abusing her.

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Oh hey, it's me again, author of that Principality CYOA! Do you remember me? Of course you don't.

But no matter. See, this here is a WIP. I'm wondering about how people would pick provinces for their principality on a map. Last time I've posted this map, voicing my concern about the design, people were like "Pffft, we're not idiots, we can read this map just fine", but I know that things aren't that simple. Constantly checking between the map, province characteristics and your own build can be quite annoying and searching for half an hour for the province you've read in the lower section may turn people away. I wouldn't want that, so I went for the following solution - I added the picture of the province below its description to make this a bit easier.

Was this addition the right one (if useful at all), and can you propose anything else?

>>48293925
Very difficult atleast. I can imagine a dozen settings where one would have to be "okay" with slavery in the setting, atleast publicly, in order to complete a traveller-quest.

>>48293947
thank you!
>>48293951
>Do you remember me? Of course you don't
this has become your catchphrase hasn't it?

>>48293951
>Kingdom of Norseland
Fools the Great Steppes will rule over those bitches.

>>48291185
Are the unaligned points we get from picking a titan for out stats, or for our spells?

>>48293908
Bro-bots are equal to AI in the same way a human being is equal to a squirrel. While the unformed AI isn't actually a full sentient yet and when it does actually reach the end of its growth the Traveller who initially took custody of it will no longer own it. The issue itself is messy, with varied opinions all around, aside from a surprising number of AI who actually endorse 'those who will yet be' getting experience. True AI are odd like that.

>>48293925
Seemingly, but when you've got the Judiciary skulking about there's surprisingly little trouble.

>>48293963
Of course Travellers may deal with the worst scum reality has to offer, but its the moment you start banking on them and buying slaves a Judicial hits you with a sack of pennies.

>>48293615
You don't know just how EVIL is being you summoned!

>>48294156
I actually know exactly how evil being me is.

>>48294156
meh, as long as someone starts posting builds and shit besides pdfs. I cant even read them.

>>48294108
I mean, you can just fuck off and don't deal with any of them for eons and just do whatever you want. They may be 'skulking around' and in theory be able to punish you, but when you actively stay away from other travelers there's not a lot they can do, and if we're being logical, they shouldn't care that much at that point anyway.

>>48293963
I think the rule just means Travellers can't get it in their heads that they can own other sentient beings. It's likely that the rule also doesn't allow Travellers to decide what's sentient or not. It isn't a call to abolish slavery in every timeline forever, just a rule that specifies that Travellers can't own slaves. Doesn't stop them from knowing or interacting with people who do and doesn't oblige them to free every slave they come across.

>>48294108
The important question is, are you actually going to do anything with that pet rock one?

>>48294190
but I already made four builds for Hero Academy.
It's sorta dull when I don't have an idea of what happens after the character creation. The missions during the education are cool and all, and help with writing a story, but why do I need to be a hero?
Is there danger?

>>48294292
don't know, I just posted it.

>>48293975
Someone remembers me! I will celebrate this fact.

>>48293994
And you will let them pass through your land?

...

>Not a single complaint or suggestion about the CYOA and the map
>No one even said "You did good enough, anon, you worry too much"
>No one cares

Well alright... I just know that there will be complaints when the damn thing is released, and this isn't helping. Oh well...

>>48294292
yeah, having different quests and stuff helps with replayability.

>>48294192
I would agree with you were it not for a few things. First and foremost the presence of Augurs and those whose explicit job it is to watch over the Travellers who will utilize them. While of course you can just fuck off and wander across the void for a few centuries it's not unlikely that someone will come by to check on you, once a century. While Traveller numbers reach into the millions, it is still very possible to keep an eye on everyone with the tools admin has.

>>48294250
I think I can actually do something with it.

>>48294322
I don't have any complaints about the map so far. I just hope I can rule the Great steppes.

>>48294322
Ok I think the thread ate my post but I don't have any complaints of the map so far.

>>48294332
Little too police state, to be honest with you. Way too controlling. I don't think you're the kind to change lore at request, but it kinda ruins the feel if you always have someone breathing down your neck and who won't leave you alone.

>>48293951
good, good, though how big are those provinces (in km^2 or compare to Europe)? And how big that whole land, because without any scales I lose myself

>>48294323
Even still, I almost ended up with the exact same quests each time.
I think the only difference between the four builds, is whether I pick "culture festival".

It hurts me so when I see a cool cyoa, and I'm left with a feeling of "what now?"
When all it is is a character creator, without giving any ideas on what to do next. That's especially seen when you have a non-Earth setting.
If I don't know how the setting works, what I can do, I have to make every part of the story up without anything to go on.

>>48294332
Still, even if the Travellers number in the millions, that still on the size of modern day armies. Its not hard to think that the Administration department has a pretty good eye on things.

Thing is, can one leave the travellers, and if so, if one commits acts the Travellers would consider a crime, would they then still punish you?

>>48286227
Space Opera start 13,000
Crew hire x20 mercs as chosen by me: 4000c (20% cheaper 3200c)
Business investment 650c
Sub total: 9150c
Training Novice level:
Traders Apprenticeship
- 4 things are 20% cheaper
- free local / modern attire
Detective Training
- Free revolver, Jets, Modern Attire, holocom, hover bike
Starship:
Gravship 3000c (20% cheaper 2400c)
- Roomy, good crew quarters
- very fast, good armour
- weapons half strength
Sub total: 6750
Fighters:
Ironbill dropship 3150c (20% cheaper 2520c)
- Turret: Lightning 150c (I guess ill call them lightning ironbill, in my mind this is the ability to cause lightning storms over a target)
Attire:
Mix and match 100c combine modern attire with vanguard armour 550c
Weapons:
Zorg treatment: 250c, Laser assault rifle 550c & Tractorgun 400c
(I can cut things aswell as pick them up with the tractorgun, very good for using impromptu shields made from rocks and trees, even better as missiles)
Subtotal: 2230
+1500 from losing 1 companion
Subtotal 3730
Dual Citizenship 3000c (20% cheaper 2400)
Subtotal 1330
Ship defences: Shield 550c
Ship turrets:
- Lazer 150
- Railgun 300
Subtotal 330
Entertainment:
Blablabla -300c

Im done with this for now. Ill do the companions later.

>>48294333

You can't, but you can ally with them and get some nomad troops to fight for you.

>>48294379

Alright, I shall proceed with this variant then.

>>48294407

Smallest provinces are about the size of France. The whole land is like Russia, but tilted on its side (that's literally how I did the map, I just rearranged the parts to make it look different).

>>48294391
But they aren't, consider the technology a Traveller wields, the possible damage a person could cause with it. You can literally leave Ae at any point, not join any factions or have any contact with any Travellers for decades. It's not unreasonable to think that a member of Admin will check on you once every century to make sure you're alive, remember the power a Traveller has literally strapped to their wrist and the enemies the Travellers have.

>>48294417
As stated earlier it is possible to just walk away and wander the universe alone, but it is also possible to just flat up leave your bracer behind and renounce the organization, it has happened before.

>>48293950
>there are people here who spend hours searching the archives for their favorite Angel posts
How far is to far?

>>48294595
People have the strangest hate-boners.

>>48286535
I actually never type it, much less speak it. It situations where I need to reference such language, I hold SHIFT and press random numbers.

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>>48294595
not him, but I apparently screen-caped some of her insanity, and decided to put it in a folder to make things easier on me. So at least I haven't searched for her posts
That's what you get for namefagging.

>>48294548
But again, that's full on police state to have someone always watching you and everything you do, sending their officers to hassle you when convenient.

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>>48293951
>Provinces
Konotop, Long Shore, Wild Field, Khlynov

I declare constitutional Hetmanate and while don't bother with Svetlanian culture make other pay toll to move goods through my lands. Though it kinda bothers that Wyrmland has wooping 75k pop, while being small forested island land

>>48294713
>basically look like a boy
She only looks like a guy because of how she dresses. When she wears feminine clothing she looks pretty good. But apparently dresses are offensive to her for some reason.

can any of you actually explain your obsession with angel?

>>48294713
Stalking her by screen capping her meticulously isn't any better, if anything it takes more dedication.

Do you have that post where she said she wants to be transformed into a dildo and have her girlfriend say that she was always worthless before, at least now she'd be good for something?

>>48294506
>Smallest provinces are about the size of France
I guess "population" number is number of soldiers they can rise, because if it's how many people live there than it's very lonely provinces

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>>48293559
>>48293947
Ki Monk/Ki Master
Swiftness 3
Strength 3
Endurance 3
Resolve 2
Quick Wits 2
Charisma 2
Combat Ability 4
Magic Ability 3
Combat Reflexes, Tactician

Let's go find that Heart! And then a celestial feather in the Divine Plane, and a demon limb in the Demonic Plane and a golden lotus in the Physical Plane... Then the Heart again. But after that I get to rule the World!


Companions:
>Iratha and Hsaru, elf ranger+pet
Orientation and survival skills are a must for finding hidden stuff. Comes with a bonus pet wolf.
>Morrigan, blue-skinned mentalist
Extrasensory Perception and Divination, also great to find hidden shit.
>Akshera, foxy battlemage
Defense magic to protect the two aforementioned weaklings. Knowledgeable, and good at killing demons. Sounds useful for the demon limb chapter.

Companion quests:
Iratha's tracking combined with Morrigan's divination allows us to find the latter's Empowering Crystal. Boom, she powers up and rewards me with sex. After that we travel around in search of the Heart, with a quick stop at the elf's forest to wipe out these bothersome orcs. She shows her gratitude with sex. We'll find the hellgate once we've gone through in and out of it with the demon limb. At this juncture Akshera will of course reward me with sex.

Challenge:
>The Flying Fortress
Reward:
>Ruling the world, and getting that sweet hoodie (pic related)

>>48294726
But they aren't, this isn't-
>[the augur is always watching you]

It's more akin to-
> M8 is the augur up?
> I'm listening you utter prat of a man. What is it? I want to get back to my constant internal screaming.
> We got a guy who we ain't seen in two decades. Can you check on him?
> Miserable welch. Fine.
> [Groaning]
> OH FOR- He's fine. Now go away.
> Well what is he doing?
> Nothing worth your precious time paper boy. Now get out before I get someone to drag you out.
> Very well, see you in another decade meat sack.

You understand that you can have a situation where you could have a kid, raise him, watch him die of old age and only then someone comes in and checks on you right?

>>48293951
>Was this addition the right one
VERY useful, you don't even need whole map after first look, since you can check province maps to make sure all your land is connected

>>48294548
Highlander, could you answer some questions I have, please?
First, will you still use the livejournal? I was unaware of the text version updates because I usually checked there for it.
Second, is there some requirement for selecting possible recruits? There seems to be little in common among the origins except for the fact that most of them doesn't have a "home" and are all well talented.
Finally, is it possible to exchange gear earned from origin for credit and get a better one? For example, Privateer Extraordinaire gets a Tebulasi Frigate, can I exchange it + 600 credits for an INS Ship?

>>48293797
I think you took one too many special skills.
>>48294927
I think your build makes no sense?

>>48294929
Yes, it's the same as if the NSA had a camera trained at you all the time. They don't pay attention to most data they get, but they're watching and recording and violating your privacy whenever it suits them.

And time frames are relative. It being a 'century' doesn't mean a lot when you're eons old.

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>>48294841
we don't know that without a full-body pic.
for some reason I don't have it. Would you kindly help a brother out?
>>48294868
she's a namefag who uses the threads as her diary. Also she has a fetish for mindrape.
>>48294888
how does it take "more dedication" to take a screenshot when she's being a psycho? It was so little effort to do. Hell, except for one image, I only saved screencaps others had made.
>spoiler
Already posted here >>48286508
If anyone has the post where she says she's a womanlet, I'd like that one
I like this "angelanon trading card game"

>>48295010
Then drop Somni.

>>48294734

>Hetmanate

There is literally this option on the government type list, so you have my blessing. I'm looking forward to seeing your build once the CYOA is done and watching you cope with just 3-4 unit types.

>Wyrmland
>Small forested island land with lost of people
>Literally Japan

>>48294898

Yes, you have the right idea. I guess I should've worded that better. Though they aren't exactly crowded either, so you have the right idea about loneliness.

>>48294946

Good, that's exactly what I was going for.

>>48294868
she's a girl, she's recognizable in a uniformed mostly anonymous forum, she seems vulnerable, basically she's an outlier and those often get bullied

>>48295025
>>48294929
This really doesn't seem to be going anywhere, so let's call it differing views, yes?

Watching you two arguing the same thing for about an hour is kind of tiring, desu senpai.

>>48295032
>>48295079
and when was the last time she actually posted to still warrant the conversations about her every thread?
genuinely curious

>>48286209
I salute you, this is really well made. Too bad the game was a mediocre cashgrab.

>>48285997
> Not a single gay option.
How about sage, m8t?

My thinking is that if a Traveller thinks they're violating his space by giving him a call once every two-three hundred years or so then any kind of organization is probably too committal for them and theres no point of them remaining a Traveller

>>48295082
It's just that I'd pretty much abandon the whole organization rather than have someone watching me and able to violate my privacy like that, so I can't realy build for the CYOA like this.

>>48295121
the paladin is gay
if you meant gay male, then just make your own
all those male characters are romanceable if you want them to be

>>48295121
Why can't you just be a straight faggot like the rest of us and fap to dickgirls like normal people.

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>>48295107
That would be on the seventh.
The more important question is, if you are so against talking about her, why are you talking about her?

>>48295134
A phone call isn't really the same as having a camera trained on you anon.

>>48295070
>3-4 unit types
>implying you need something more than superior horses and good, frontline troops
if it will be really that hard, I guess "annexing" Wyrmland and turning them to christianity is an option

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>>48295137
You do you, my friend.

>>48295152
Stalker much? I don't really get why you're so into hating that girl.

>>48295177
that's part of our culture angelanon, we can see through your anonymous disguise

>>48295134
at least quote the cyoa so I can hide posts about it.

>>48294929

Jagidierial, 972, ???, Spirit of the Rising Sun
> While unable to directly influence this plane of reality

Would she be able to influence it directly in a pocket dimension?

>>48295177
>how does it take "more dedication" to take a screenshot when she's being a psycho? It was so little effort to do. Hell, except for one image, I only saved screencaps others had made.

>The more important question is, if you are so against talking about her, why are you talking about her?

>>48295231
I'm not the anon you were initially talking with, but I don't think either of us said we were "against talking about her".

I guess I don't understand negative fixation. Why not just like her and become her friend? Seems more straight-forward and honest.

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>>48285997

>>48295255
nudes with timestamp or gtfo

>>48295255
Because she's a lot more interesting to bully than just listen to.

Also, it helps her get thicker skin.

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>>48295255
>Why not just like her and become her friend?
>implying
I used to roleplay a ton with her. Then I got annoyed that every time, she would use the exact same build.
Zero imagination. One time she hadn't even bothered to update her build when a new version was made - so she doesn't even look at the cyoas beyond the name.

Then I started noticing sure, she's responding to people, but she's posting nothing. It was always crap like "Uh I like that!". Basically, she was only responding as an excuse to get other people to read her builds
I'm not joking, I think I roleplayed with her in the Generic Fantasy CYOA maybe four or five times, and she's always used the exact same build.
She's one of the few people left, I think, who do roleplaying and read people's builds.
But it's still fun to see her scream at people, and it's been a while since last time

>>48294956
>First, will you still use the livejournal?
Exile blog was good for it's purpose to help me absolve my shame but now that I'm back here I haven't done much other then check on in every now and again. I imagine I probably will start using it again when we start doing more characters again, but I'll let people know when I do.

>Second, is there some requirement for selecting possible recruits?
No one knows the exact specifics of the recruitment process besides Marco Fulcanelli, and he isn't talking. Usually it comes down to an augur pointing to timelines and locations with possible recruits, going there and rubbing a Crystal Marco made into peoples faces until you find someone.

>Finally, is it possible to exchange gear earned from origin for credit and get a better one? For example, Privateer Extraordinaire gets a Tebulasi Frigate, can I exchange it + 600 credits for an INS Ship?
Sure, why not.

>>48295025
But your not, the oldest travellers are in aged by Millennia not eons. The organization has literally existed for just around nine centuries.

>>48295137
But they aren't. A dude checking in on you once every few decades =/= surveillance state.

If you don't believe me as the person who wrote the damn thing consider the situation in the cyoa. The Travellers have feuded constantly, twelve bloody time wars, after the first one the possibility to use Draconian laws was open and even a reasonable option for the power they had, but they refused that. The council of nine would rather let another time war where thousands if not tens of thousands would die then try to enforce greater authority on the Travellers as a whole.

>>48295204
Now your thinking with cooking oil anon.

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>>48293363
>Uzuza
>Divine Arts(3)
>First Aid(2)
>Tatics(2)
>Beast Taming(3)
>Helena
>Trap-Catcher
>Kengen
>Allyce Westhold
>Kara'Tee
>Blind Date
>Security
>Fund Raising
Probably did it wrong.

>>48295336
>>48295350
Hmm all right thank you for answering. I understand it slightly better now. It's still sad that you have basically an abusive relationship with her. I dunno maybe there are ways to engage that are as interesting but without hurting her.

>>48295137
>>48295381
So like you mother calling you to see if it's okay, yes? That's hardly a surveillance state,

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>>48295032

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>>48289147
>Heavy Armor
>Bomb Goblin
>Breast Warrior

Bomb robot with swords, fuck yeah

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>>48295406
>you have basically an abusive relationship with her
Because I think posts like
>REEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'M NOT CLOGGING UP THE THREADS BY POSTING MY SAME BUILD OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND STOP BEING MEAN I CAN INTERPRET YOUR CHARACTER THE WAY I WANT AND TIE HIM INTO MY BACKSTORY IF I WANT
>ALSO HE'S TOTALLY STUPID, NAH NAH, AND YOU'RE MEAN, AND YOU JUST RIPPED OFF OZYMANDIAS
are funny as hell?
And I have tried to roleplay with her, because again, she's one of the few people who do. I only wish she'd actually make new builds, and not make gigantic Mary Sue's who are never challenged by anything

She made me watch Overwatch or Overmen or whatever the movie's called.
Fucking three hours. The movie has no focus, and the only superhero who actually has powers is a gigantic Mary Sue who's retarded as hell and easily manipulated.
It's pretty bad if I accidentally rip off a movie's antagonist, without having watched it.

>>48291189
>>48291165
>>48291136

If it's not a Sem build it's shit.

Sem best waifu.

>>48295449
Thanks.
Do you have the pictures with >puffy nipples ? I didn't save them.

>>48295381
A dude able to watch you anywhere, doing anything, that you have no way to stop or control or predict at all. Your privacy is always at risk, you could be watched at any time.

People keep trying to use phone calls as a comparison, but a phone call is something you can control. You don't have to answer, and the only information they get is that which you tell them. This is different. They can see anything, at any time, you have no control or safety at all. That's the difference here. Even if it's only occasionally, that's still ALWAYS hanging over your head.

>>48289147
Tough choices.

>The Invasion
>Carrier Arc
>Heavy Armor

These would dramatically advance technology. The logistical advances alone enabling an entire metropolis in space are incredible. The Heavy Armor makes for an excellent space or diving suit and could be repurposed for civilian construction. The Invasion unites humanity and would create an enormous economic boom after the war, both dramatically lowering the odds of humanity's self-destruction.

That, and the three choices allow me to fight aliens in a mech. Who wouldn't want to do that?

>>48295489
I just use a Alex mercer build when Super Soldier cyoa gets posted. Then I take it on to Fairy cyoa. Though I do wish Fairy had a bit more to it than just you show up, and here are some places you could show up at, and big groups to fight. Then some loot and places that are barely fleshed out to loot.

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Any sections you guys would like to see in this Space Criminals thing I'm working on?

Premise is you're an escaped prisoner in a stolen spaceship. Setting is a space faring society in decline, in which the core worlds are dystopian cyberpunk hellholes, and the outer worlds which thousands of years ago sat on the fringes of known space have regressed to various stages of primitiveness, from feudal societies to cave dwellers. No aliens.

So far decisions are:

>What you were in for (choose a crime, and one of two unique perks related to it)
>Your skills/abilities
>What type of ship you've stolen
>Add ons to the ship (facilities, weapons etc)
>Your equipment (points to spend across weapons, cybernetic implants and general gear)
>Your crew (fellow escaped prisoners)
>Team equipment (another smaller gear section in which there's enough of what you choose for everyone, a bonus as crew comes with whatever gear they need for their function anyway, you're not having to kit everyone out)
>Who's space you're in (galaxy is controlled by various factions, pick where you're starting)
>General perks/bonuses

I was thinking maybe a foe section, picking who is in charge of tracking you down, or a missions/quests section, but I feel they often make a CYOA feel a bit railroady.

Want to get the writing and image gathering finished this weekend, so I can put it together in photoshop next weekend. Can never be fucked doing anything with it after work.

>>48295381
Boss, you might want to pull out on this one. This argument's going nowhere real fast.

>>48295555
This seems pretty good, any options for crimes to commit for money or power, or options to try and lay low and live a peaceful life somewhere, or maybe to fight against the system that imprisoned you in the first place?

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>>48295531
Pic related

>>48295032
I never got the broken vag thing. What's wrong with it?

>>48295534
If this bothers you to this extent have you considered just talking to a hubworld admin once a decade so they don't have a reason to bother you?

>>48295586
No, I'm curious to see where this goes to be honest. Things like this can actually be of use.

>>48295555
Looks fucking neato.

>>48295534
To be honest, I smell a good storyline rather than an argument here. Could be that one of the Auspices or whatever goes rogue, which happens. Doesnt imply that the government itself is a police state. Its how you use the tools at your disposal.

Why isnt there an Angel Cyoa

I'm going to use this weekend to finally do my shit tier CYOA! However due to time constraints and my laptop being a toaster I'll probably do the first run as a text file.

How do people feel about what's essentially a building CYOA where you have both a time limit and a cash flow?

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>>48295555
Impresive quads
>picking who is in charge of tracking you down, or a missions/quests section, but I feel they often make a CYOA feel a bit railroady
this can be an optional choice

>>48295549
I don't really know how that relates to my post.
>>48295600
aw, thanks!
IIRC Psychogenic Dyspareunia = doesn't get wet easily, so getting dicked would be a painful experience. The question is why she treats this place like her blog, then complains people are being mean.
She even acknowledges her psychological disorders has nothing to do with cyoas.
Oh poo, and now we're back to posting about angel
I'm still slightly annoyed that I made another build for the fantasy cyoa that was centered around cooperation with her, but she hasn't posted her build for a while.

>>48295600
I would gladly massage her tits while spooning her. Trying to make tits bigger is a mans job in life. At least natural tits, I don't like the money and fake tits.