CYOA General: Bored shitposting until the Americans wake up-edition

>>48272090
>>48267163
Big Game Hunter(Rank 2 Hook, Rank 2 Earth Belt)
Non Classic Element(Mana, 28)
Rank 3 Magic(17)
Regen3(12)
Sentient Sympathy (9)
Precision 2(4)
Endurance 1(2)
Beast Eye 1(1)
Improved Lung 1 (0)

Companion (Babe)
Ancient Dragon (10)

Equips(30)

Mythril Armor (20)

Dual Machine Pistols + Rank 1-4 Ranged Weapons(1)
Stealth Satchel(0)

Challenges(Mega Yandere)

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>>48272090
Why burgers have the right to sleep?! They should be banned from ever leaving their pc

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>>48272158
wtf is wrong with you people that you can't save a cyoa with its original name.

>>48272358
because that takes effort

>>48272090
>>48267163
Oh come on, why is mega yandere locked for legend!

>>48272388
Maybe because otherwise there wouldn't be any problem with having the both of you in the same city or whatever (since only Legendaries are assigned in the one-per-city manner).

>>48272376
Anyone who's too stupid to save a cyoa with the original name, assuming the creator gave it one, doesn't deserve cyoas.

>>48272421
problem is that you can't pick waifu seeker as legend and can't pick mega yandere as non-legend

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>>48272467
If you want the mega yandere, why would you go around seeking monstergirls to waifu?

>>48272499
it's not about an end result, it's about a journey through the wooooorld

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>>48272153
just gonna make it easy and post that here.

>>48272441
How are you this triggered because someone posts an image with numbers for the name instead of the titel?
I have a 4chan extension that changes the name of files on its own, and I can't be asked to figure out how to change it.

>>48272509
Nothing's stopping you from going rogue as a legend, with or without mega yandere. Heck, the text for MA even states that she'd like to run away with you.

>>48272562
Bad day. Taking it out on the stupid.

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>>48272565
because it's not right specialization, my autism stops me from going that way when I can't pick Waifu seeker

>>48272595
I don't see how I'm stupid for using an extension and not being bothered to figure out the settings.
There are better ways to let out anger.

>>48272539
>>48272625
>>48272649
This could use a total cost by individual ranks for easier counting

>>48272649

I'm terrible at math, would a double rank 3 weight belt cost 9?

>>48272799
6
You have to buy rank 1 to unlock rank 2
Think of them as tech trees if you will

>>48272799
It'd cost 8 by my calculations (3 points for ranks 1 and 2 combined, 3 * 1.5 = 4.5 -> 5 points for double rank 3)

>>48272835
>>48272842

Oh yeah, I didn't even consider buying the previous ranks

>>48272799
>>48272835
>>48272842
>double
I am retarded
I think it's 11?

>>48272865

How did you get 11?

>>48272865
You're purchasing rank 3 twice - once with a single element, once with double. From what I read, that's not how it works.

>>48272481
archbeld, if you're reading this: have you considered allowing us to add stats to races other than our own with Blessing Of the People? Most importantly have you considered allowing us to add stats above level 0, if they 1) become hostile immediately; 2) one cannot gain the racial bonuses if one shapeshifts into them, and 3) one cannot select them as a starting race? I'd like to give Dragons level 2-3 in all the options just for a start.

>>48268707
>Methods!Dumbledore as a companion/mentor
I like that. Would he keep his knowledge of prophesies?

>>48273316
>Repost+comp
Why?

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>>48273390
Done.

>>48273592
Second one from the left.

>>48272539
>>48272625
>>48272649

>Exterminator
Being an epic legend and take down big monsters is nice and cool but someone needs to solve smaller problems too.

>Powers
>Precision 1
>Improved Lung 1
>Beast Eye 1

Going for the "weak but crafty" type here.

>Companions
>Good Dog 1
All-around useful
>Horse 0
Even if I'm going to just stay in one city, moving around fast is what i would want.

>Gear
>The Hook Rank 1
Tethering speed is slow, but that doesn't mean I can't pull with my hands. Even then, there're lot of possible uses.
>Light Armour Default
>Melee weapon Rank 1
>Ranged Weapon Rank 1
Tempted to forgo melee weapon and get ranged for free to pump more points into Hook, but I don't want to limit myself to ranged-only.
>Stealth Pouch - Rank 1
Even better since this don't affect me

>Challenges
>The Gang (tokens used to buy Stealth Satchel)
What I'm seeing here is a gang of Vermin led by a single Monster. Depending on whether they prefer to move around or camp in one place, I'll need tor esort to either baiting tactics, picking them off one by one, or hit-and-run style attacks, luring them into traps as I retreat. Depending on numbers, can take long time. The boss I'll have to either kite with ranged weapons or weaken with traps before finishing off.

>Cult
Going in Sam Fisher style. Scout out retreate route beforehands, trap it. Make as little noise as possible, avoid contact if neccesary, sneak up to as close as I can get - then either grab the thing and sneak out before anyone notices, if not possible - drop smokescreen/toxins, grab the thing and leg it. Fortunately I have advantage in when fighting in smoked/gas environments, so if I can use them before they get a jump on me I'm sure I can take several of the cultist at once (but not much)
>reads what I'm actually grabbing
Well... hopefully she knows how to keep quiet. At least she won't be heavy to carry.
>Reads what that actually does.
I'll take it.

>>48273592
Wojak

>>48273592
Pepe

>>48273609
>>48273630
So you anons want to be smart?
>>48273661
And you want to be happy?

>>48273695
>And you want to be happy?
No, I want to stop procrastinating.

>>48272090
Where is mystery sword?

>>48273374
>you have twenty points to design your hex
>high tech costs nothing
>restricting tech costs 5 points
It doesn't make sense, but I'm not complaining.
>Sufficiently advanced tech
>Psionics
>monolith 3
And holy shit why is everyone furries.

Can I ask the aliens why they picked furries to rule a continent?

>>48273374
>>48273966
which part of the world do you choose?

>>48268455
>>48270118

Anyone bored enough to familiarize me with TGWP!Keter, and why he would be a good choice for a wise and benevolent companion?

>>48272090
I'm awake! *coffee in hand*

>>48273125
'acheld', first. "The AC unit was HELD in place by the window." I only correct your spelling because sometimes I do a page search for my name; it doesn't bother me if you misspell it, but I may be more likely to miss your post.

Second, you can already use Blessing of the People to add stats to any neutral race on the planet, so I assume you are talking about the hostile races? The thing is that seems needlessly complicated. Dragons are already crazy powerful; I didn't spell out their specific stats, but you can assign them any power level short of worldbreaking that you like. I can put in a general "Upgrade dragons to world-breaking" option, if you would want it? Vampires and werewolves are already beyond what Blessing of the People can grant, and inherit any base abilities of the neutral species they are born from. Giants are already super tough, super strong, and require less food than they properly should.

Let me put it this way: if you want to interpret any of the (non-vampire, non-werewolf) hostile races as having one or more of the minor blessings possible from Blessings of the People, you're more than welcome to do so without needing to pay for it. It won't get you more negative balance, though.

>>48273165
I don't see why not. It's not as if that knowledge is going to be particularly useful in this new world; it might give him a bit of an edge in interpreting divination magic, at best.

>>48273695
>And you want to be happy?
I don't want to be tired.

>>48273592
I'll take the first one. Waking up with energy would solve a good amount of my problems.

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>>48273592

Gimme the Wotjak

>>48273935
>Eye Candy +5
>Cosplay +2
>Sexual Harassment +4
Will use "Reset Time" if any particular day is too bad.
>Accomplice +3
Assuming that this doesn't involve actually helping him to rape people. This will all be done in my "Eye Candy" body, so any 'reputation' I have will be left with that body. Plus, invisibility.
>Experimentation +4
>Master's Will +2
Using Invisibility to spy on women regularly doesn't seem too hard.

20 points

>1 Illusion
Incredibly good for such a cheap choice; will be using this liberally on myself to make my time with the wizard more bearable.
>2 Transform Human
Eternal youth for me and anyone else I want? Obvious choice.
>3 Heal
That much closer to actual immortality.
>2 Grow
I love violating thermodynamics. This can be creatively used to rid the world of resource limitations for many high demand elements, for example. Obviously can be used to make tons of cash as well, through gold, or other valuable substances.
>4 Reset Time
Another step toward true immortality; use it if I find myself in a life-threatening situation.
>2 Invisibility
So much utility.
>2 Flight
Combined with invisibility, this makes where I can safely go boundless.
>3 Enchantment
Rings that give flight/invisibility that I can give to friends, family, loved ones? Yes please.
>1 Magic Missile
I had a point left, and this seems reasonably useful for self defense and for lighting.

>>48272539
>>48272625
>>48272649
>Power Level: Legend (x10)

>Specialization: Dragoon (Free Rank 1 Precision, Rank 2 Air Belt)

>Powers (30)
Precision Rank 2 (26)
Magic Rank 3 (15)
Non-Classic Element: Explosions (13)
Regeneration Rank 1 (12)
Endurance Rank 3 (2)
Improved Lung Rank 1 (1)
Beast Eye Rank 1 (0)

>Companions (5)
Raven (5)

>Equipment (20 + 5 = 25)
Rank 3 Air Belt (22)
Rank 4 Ranged Weapon (12)
Semi-Auto/Revolver Gun: High Powered Sniper Rifle (6)
Light Armor: Nemean Robe (0)

>Challenges
Mega Yandere

I'm a legend specializing in aerial combat and extremely high-altitude bombing, both precision and indiscriminate. I harness the magical power of explosions to both destroy any and all monsters within range, as well as propel myself through the air at ludicrous speeds like a jet. Hopefully I can convince the government to let two legends stay in the same city, maybe by relocating us to the most dangerous location or something. If I'm forced to run away with the yandere, then I'll begin a non-stop, high-speed, high altitude bombing run on every single human settlement, never stopping in one place long enough to prepare defenses or catch me even at such high altitudes. Hopefully the government can see reason though.

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>>48274278
New Arrival (free)
Male, Human, 17.
Beacon Academy(Vale), I will go to the biggest hotspot for fighting.
Semblance: Unstoppable.
Gifts: Memory(-20), Strength(-20), Agility(-20), Energy(-20), Intelligence(-10), Ferocity(-10). Ultimate combination of gifts.
Equipment: Melee will be a battle ax with Dust mod(-150) pic related, and a Variable weapon that is a Riot Shotgun that turns into a broadsword, with Dust mod pic also slightly related. Total cost(-600).
Items and Gear: Armor like pic as well(-100), the Scroll for free, Parachute and Grappling Hook(-150), Wilderness Gear(-50), Dust Charges(-50), Rebreather(-50).
I am a berserker for hire, and I want a good hunt. Shock and Awe line breaker. Can learn other job requirements quickly, also a general education.

>>48273592
First one, for sure. "wake up full of energy" and "always feel good being productive"... so useful. Others I have much less need for, or already have large chunks of.

What is the best way to post some writefaggotry in connection to a build? Pastebin? 6700+ words.

>>48273935
PERVY WIZARD: START (2 SP)

Favors first, gotta earn disposable income
>Master's Will (4 SP)
>Accomplice (7 SP)

Alright let's get spending
>Charm (3 SP Remain)
>Flight (1 SP Remain)
>Magic Missile (0 SP Remain)

Well that was way too fucking quick.
I'm not gonna Be The Little Girl because fuck that noise.
3/10 CYOA.

>>48274449
yeah that or 4 consecutive posts

>>48274468
I couldnt post normally, 2000 characters per post and the story is 38 000 characters.

>>48273592
I'll take the furthest one to the right. Cucking a girl is my fetish and I can't wait to taunt her while she's crying, knowing that she'll never actually leave.

>>48274449
it's for Traveller, isn't it?
And I want you to post it normally. I want you to make 19, consecutive posts with your writing.

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>>48273935
>Favors
Eye Candy (7)
Cosplay (9)
Sexual Harassment (13)
Accomplice (16)
Masters Will (18)

>Spells
Transform Human (16)
Transform Inhuman (14)
Reset Time (10)
Pause Time (6)
Flight (4)
Charm (0)

This one is easy if you have the right fetishes... I'm not quite ready to sign away my consent to an old perv, but I'm perfectly happy to let him watch me be pervy otherwise - it's not like that's not what I'd want to use my powers for anyway...

>tfw
>You're make a build for a CYOA that you made
>and you desperately want more points.

>>48274606
Haha. Is it the one which complements your dangerous as fuck Myth&Wonder build?

>>48273935
START: (2)
>Eye Candy (7)
>Cosplay (9)
>Sexual Harassment (13)
>Accomplice (16)
>Experimentation (20)
>Master's Will (22)

>Heat Shield (21)
>Illusion (20)
>Transform Human (18)
>Magic Missile (17)
>Heal (14)
>Shrink (12)
>Grow (10)
>Creation (7)
>Wizard Strength (4)
>Summon Property (3)
>Dance Magic (0)

I might be willing to go pretty far for magic powers, but like hell am I going to sleep with another man for 30 years. Or at all, really. Likewise, the Secret Project some really bothersome, and I don't know if I want to deal with the aftermath. Though there are some mad tempting options.

I honestly don't know what would be best to command with Creation, but Dance Magic assures me that I have some good magic at my side no matter what. Hell, even air or fire couldn't be that bad. Probably either wind or water. It's a shame I can't have flight, but I can always Iceman it, I suppose? Especially with super strength jumps. And Growth, that's also helpful.

Did that Urban Fantasy thing ever get made? I remember seeing constant progress pics a few weeks ago.

>>48274679
Quiet had to go away for a while for some reason.

>>48274626
Yeah... I think I've just about got something that will satisfy me, though.

>>48274409
anon it's a cute build and whatnot, but there's no need to spam it five threads in a row.

>>48272481
>Races(Neut)
Neanderthal x Neanderthal acceptance (1)
Sylvans x Alliance x Zealous (-2)

>Races(Neut/Pos)
Fairies(Flitters, but will re-skin in another post) x Big (-13)
Centauric Tribes x Spirit Of The Beast x Allies Of The Beast (-15, chosen after sky skimmers)
Giants(Peaceful, -19)

>Races(Neut/Hos)
Stonefolk x Greedy x Alliance (-5)
Ugrish x Warlords (-12)
Sky Skimmers x Winds @ Their Call x Alliance (-18)
Seafolk(Homoflorensis re-skinned) x Seasingers (-19, after Centaurs)
Taki(scroll down for Other Than Human +1, -21)
Dragons(many great but not as many as before, -25)


None of the races are compatible with each other which the exception of Neanderthals and humans.I also wanted to add Alliance to each section but empires can be built with blood and sweat as easily as milk and honey. So many points in the red. I just want a magical dystopia. These are the end times!

Other Than Human (Fairies, -18)

Minor Magic Of The People (Just Fairies, Enchanting, Innate-Rare)

>>48274679
Quiet was honor-killed by her family.

>>48274724
I like using the pic. sue me.

>>48274752
NOOOOOO

oh also quietcyoa here:
http://imgur.com/a/KFyk2/embed#0

>>48274702
>>48274752
That's a shame, I was looking forward to it.
Thanks for letting me know.

>>48274156
>>48274742

achbeld, if I choose not to buy a magic here can I still buy it in AlteringHistory? What does it mean if I do, say, [Minor Magic Of The People (Just Fairies, Enchanting, Innate-Rare, Major)]

Would just I have major magic or would every lucky fairy have it too? What if I buy it twice? Would I then spend +3 x 2? or -3 x 2?

>>48274879
>What if I buy it twice? Would I then spend +3 x 2? or -3 x 2?
What if I buy two "levels" *.

>>48274879
>achbeld
There's no B in "acheld".

>>48275047
true but it varies
last night for instance there was a big D in acheld

>>48275047
reee.

>>48275084
>true but it varies
Only if he changes names for some reason and typoes it when changing back.
>last night for instance there was a big D in acheld
There's always a D in "acheld", but from what I've seen it has never been big.

>>48275064
Love
/d/
Eternal Youth
Waifu

>>48275125
Shut the fuck up.

>>48275064
Soul
/tg/
Eternal Youth
Demigod
World peace, fun tabletop, immune to age and semi-godly? Sweet deal.

>>48275134
As soon as you get it right.
There's only one A in "acheld".

>>48274742
I'm not sure I understand your numbers. Neanderthal x Neanderthal Acceptance should be -1. So, then, -4 after the Sylvans. And how you got from that to -13 for the Fairies, I'm not sure.

The ideas look cool, though.


>>48274879
Yes. Buying magic for the world in WorldOfMythAndWonder makes it cheaper to buy it in AlteringHistory, but if you want to be the only source of magic of that kind, then you can always buy it in AlteringHistory, regardless of whether you bought it in WorldOfMythAndWonder.

That would mean that 1 in 10,000 Fairies was born with the ability to use major enchanting magic. Assuming that you are a fairy, the cost for that would be:

(+2 for Innate-Rare, +2 for Just Fairies) x2 = +8. The x2 is to make it major.

As it specifies in the WoMaW, this does not guarantee that YOU will be one of the lucky ones, but it does let you buy that magic in AlteringHistory at a cheaper cost.

>>48275127
>picking love and waifu
Love is a wasted choice, unless you don't actually love your waifu.

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>>48275064
I prefer this version because it lets your waifu be immortal, too.

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>>48275165
dlc update when?
also your cyoa is pretty cool so congrats

>>48274785
ill see you in /cyoag/ court you son of a bitch

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>>48275316
bring it>>48275295

>>48275295
>implying the case will ever see a judge
Angel has about 1000 pending harassment suits bruh.

>>48275355
Poor angel, she's never getting that library of restraining orders she needs to function.

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>>48275370
Being her sort is suffering.

>>48275394
I'm pretty sure being the sort of person who'd come here in general is suffering.

>>48275165
>I'm not sure I understand your numbers. Neanderthal x Neanderthal Acceptance should be -1. So, then, -4 after the Sylvans. And how you got from that to -13 for the Fairies, I'm not sure.

>The ideas look cool, though.

I'll scrap it and work on it again from the beginning. I tried to sort it and now it's just all a mess.

>>48275290
Going to post a build I made to test things out, soon, and then I'll be working on it more. Today or tomorrow.

The main problem I'm running into right now is it's getting *too* complicated. The options to give magic to people, for example, via Magic of the People are very flexible but can be difficult to understand. My top priority at the moment is to try to streamline it a bit.

>>48275394

What sort do you mean?

>>48275253

Personally I liked the original version that everybody complained about. I thought it was more interesting with less points and you basically had to take curses.

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>>48275427
> sort of person who'd come here in general is suffering.
"Keks through suffering" - 4chan motto

>>48272158
>>48272481
Okay, the build to accomany my Wild World here >>48267312

Basic Idea: A large party of demi-god kingmaking wizards who guide the races into harmony, uniting them against the many threats of the world.

110 Points to start

>Twenty Five Unpowered Companions (95)
Only twelve of these slots will be filled at first, making a party of 13; an auspicious number! The remaining 13 slots will be left available for each person to assign to a partner, as they wish.

>Magics that companions have (among five different companions)
>Major Master of Motion + Imbuing (80)
>Minor Telepathy + Imbuing (72.5)
>Major Shapeshifting + Imbuing (57.5)
>Major Blessed One + Imbuing (47)
This is slightly discounted due to the world itself having this magic innately.
>Major Stormsage + Imbuing (35)
Also somewhat discounted due to the rules of the world having this magic.

Idea is that, at the start, all companions are imbued with all of these kinds of magic.

>Powers purchased for myself AND for 'Imbueable - Great Heroes'
> Gift of Gab (25)
> Genius 2 (13)
> Memory of the Ages 1 (7)
> Wellspring of Harmony (-3)
> Impervious 1 (-11)
> Pain Control (-15)
> Endurance 2 (-31)
> Iron Gut (-35)

>Powers purchased for just 'Imbueable - Great Heroes'
>Disease Immunity (-37)
>Extended Lifespan 1 (-38)
>Strength & Speed 0 (-39)
>Reflexes & Reaction 0 (-40)

So, all the powers for 'Imbueable - Great Heroes' will be automatically assigned to all 25 companion slots, leaving another 74 slots open for other non-companion "Heroes".

(1/?)

>>48275504
In summary, myself and all companions (13 to begin with, eventually as high as 26) will have the following powers:

Imbued: Major Master of Motion, Major Shapeshifting, Major Blessed One, Major Stormsage, Minor Telepathy
Purchased: Gift of Gab, Genius 2, Memory of the Ages 1, Wellspring of Harmony, Impervious 1, Pain Control, Endurance 2, Iron Gut
Free: Unaging, Immune to Disease, Strength & Speed 0, Reflexes & Reaction 0, Regeneration 0, Temperature Tolerance 0, Diet 0

* Vulnerable, but not startlingly so.
* With all the vegetation around, Iron Gut is going to be more than sufficient to ensure enough food, especially in combination with Diet 0.
* Impervious 1 means that at the current levels of development killing one of us before we can, at the very least, escape with Master of Motion is almost impossible. No going up against dragons, though! Not yet.
* Pain Control plus Major Blessed one means that we can use the equivalent of Regeneration 2 on ourselves, or others, even in the worst of pain. Also lets us teleport away without being distracted by a gut wound.
* Genius 2, Gift of Gab, Memory of the Ages 1, Major Shapeshifting, Minor Telepathy and Wellspring of Harmony is going to let us do our eventual job, which is to be uniters of the civilized races, peerless diplomats and guiders.
* Major Stormsage is going to be the big offensive magic used in battles when necessary.
* Endurance 2 is just to let us get twice as much done. Very valuable.

Further, I can imbue 74 "heroes" with almost the exact same set of powers, only they will not have Immortality (slow aging instead). The general idea is going to be to use a lot of these on good "kings" and leaders of the various races, to ensure stability, to make assassination next to impossible, and to increase their ability to govern effectively and well, knowing that their powers can be stripped from them if they begin to act tyranically.

(2/?)

>>48275516
>Drawbacks
>Slow Pace of History (-25)
Annoying, but not a "problem"
>Tower of Babel (-10)
Dealt with via unity; we can always talk with each other, so if we learn several languages between us, this can be worked around.
>Supporting Cast (0)
One of the other companions will be the true "leader"; I'm not sure which yet.

Quests:
1. Sorcerer Supreme
2. A Cosmopolitan World

Course of Action (with the understanding that I will not have direct control, this is the way I envision things happening)
1. Get bearings; establish a safe 'home base' while we figure out this world. Teach each other various magics, and then scout the entire world to gain an understanding of how things are. Help people where we can, but no "major" actions. Timeline: several decades
2. Learn magics; highest priority is learning the Major Spirit Singer magics of the Sylvans. With a combination of Minor Telepathy, Major Shapeshifting and Gift of Gab I'm reasonably confident this will be successful. Also want to learn Major Enchanting from the Stonefolk, Minor Binding from the Littlefolk, and Minor Beastmaster from the centaurs using similar methods. These are all teachable, so can be shared among each other. In the meantime, we will be imbuing the more "decent" type of people (in this world, humans, sylvans, littlefolk and centaurs) with various magics that we know, most importantly Stormsage, Master of Motion and Blessed One, in order to hold back the "enemy" creatures. Major Master of Motion makes it easy for us all to converge on any given location to defend settlements if needed. Timeline: several hundred years, as long as a millineum.

Now all companions have : Major Spirit Singer, Major Enchanter, Minor Binding, Minor Beastmaster, in addition to the above magic.

(3/?)

>>48275527
3. While continuing to defend the races needing our protection, work to complete the requirements of Sorcerer Supreme. Imbue heroes and kings with various abilities to make their rule more successful. Work to build alliances between the different races of human, sylvan, littlefolk and centaur to allow their population to grow more peacefully. Still in largely a holding action against the dark forces of the world, and much will still be lost. STAY OUT of the caverns for the timebeing; simply take defensive action against the creatures within. Collapse cave entrances using tornadoes and storm power where possible. Timeline to complete Sorcerer Supreme: As much as 7-8,000 years; it depends on how successful we are in pushing back dark forces to allow for population growth. Could be much shorter.

Sorcerer Supreme Complete! Powers gained:
"Leader" Major Telepathy, Major Binding
Me Minor Firedancer + Imbue

Now the leader can teach us all Major Binding as well, since it is a teachable magic in this world. Major Telepathy is not teachable, so that will remain with the leader, who can use it to coordinate to unparalleled levels among the various races now (hopefully) closely allied. I give everyone Minor Firedancer.

4. It's now time to take the fight back to the enemy. I'm not sure the best way to do so (the characters in this narrative being far more clever than I), but with the extreme levels of magic we are able to share with allies, along with alliances build over thousands of years, and the ability to be complete masters of coordination and logistics, I trust that it will happen.

Upon eventual completion of A Cosmopolitan World, take: Economist, Polyglot (now allowed since Tower of Babel drawback removed)

A final note is that even though any given companion, or myself, is somewhat vulnerable, the success of our mission does not depend on us all surviving.

(4/4)

Now I just need to finish deciding on my 12 companions, and who will take the "leader" role. Gandalf the White seems almost cheating in terms of being pretty much perfectly wise, incorruptible and benevolent.

But that's why I was asking about wise, good, trustworthy characters last thread.

>>48273592
Already the 3rd one

>>48272421
Really assuming the government is at all smart you could easily just say "Um, this girl is crazy in love with me. She will not take being seperated from me well."

>>48275084
>>48275125
>can't tell if being humorously obtuse
>or just that dense to the joke

>>48275629
Still, something that wouldn't even need dealing with if you were ranked below Legend.

>>48274606
My North American God-Sorcerer build felt very balanced, I didn't even need any drawbacks. 110 feels perfect. Those drawbacks are harsh though. If anything, I'd like to see more tiny perks like the omni weapon. I had two points left over, so I blew them both on that, despite being able to punch a hole in a bear. Something else to do with leftovers would be nice.

>>48275708
Hey dude! I read your last reply to me
>Thanks! I actually like the Domain Master type of CYOA a lot, and have tried to do it myself, but I always end up overcomplicating it or ending up with exactly Domain Master. Maybe someday.
Why not now? Hell, I was thinking of updating Domain Master with Imaginos. You want in?

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>>48275253
>Identity
16 year old girl (pic related)

>Power Source
Old God

>Changes
Emotional: No Change
Physical: Perfect (-4)
Mental: Sharpened (-3)
Life: Leech
Memory: Fresh Start (+10)
Spiritual: Nothing

>Gifts
Remote Viewing (-2)
Teleportation (-4)
+Quick Step (-4)
+Indirect Sight (-2)
Apportation (-2)
+Pocket Dimension (-2)
Interference (-2)
Invisibility (-3)
+Invisibility Field (-3)
Empathy (-2)
+Infulence (-1)
Charm (-3)
Vitality (-3)
Barrier (-3)
Mechanics (-3)
Tongues (-2)

>Curses
Lust (+8)

>Guardian
Ally

>Home
Westood Heights

>Allies
Danny Glass
Leah Dawson
Carl Knight

Louise Webb (Guardian)
Lorie Copeland

>Perks
Boarding School
Inheritance

Causing chaos in the Suburbs (and in the wider world) shouldn't be difficult if I can teleport anywhere I want, while being invisible so I can't get caught, and shut down any electronic security that could stop me. I can steal anything I could want, and if that's not enough chaos, there's always assassinating corrupt politicians or businessmen, stealing corporate secrets and selling them... Sky's the limit, really.

And given my powers and new body, it's not like I'll have any difficulty taking care of my Curse...

>>48275708
>kWay
Did you post a build? It's fine if not, I just want to make sure I didn't miss anything.

I was considering adding tiny 1 point perks like skills. Being amazing at hunting, for example, or metalworking. Not sure if that would be worth it; I'm agonized because I really don't want to over-clutter the CYOA.

And, yeah, I don't plan on increasing the point limit. Some difficult decisions like I had to make are a good thing. I will be revisiting some of the drawbacks, though. Some, I think, are balanced (Tower of Babel), but others are too harsh for the points you get, I know thing (Stormbringer)

>>48275851
So your a kleptomaniac slut. Were are your cat ears, and were is batman?

>>48275749
Mostly just because I want to finish this one before I lose steam. I hope to have the blueprint done today and then a week or so of image hunting and flavor texting. But I'd totally be up for a collab after that.
>>48275889
I didn't, might type it up later. I don't know if skills are the right way to go, since many players are geniuses and all of them functionally immortal. I can set aside a dull decade to git gud at metalworking instead of spending points. I'd go for minor magic abilities outside of the big categories, like astral projection or alchemy maybe? I understand the fear of over cluttering, but to be frank, you've made a 17 page document with DLC. You're in that category of pdf CYOA where you are already over the top, but still have a lot of room to grow before the next category (Traveller).

>>48276092
Fair, and it's a good suggestion. I will think about it.

>>48275889
IMO, the skills would really only be worth it if they offered a level of ability that was otherwise impossible.

Like making cold iron armor and having it resist .50 caliber rounds. Or a wooden sword sharp enough and strong enough to cut through steel.

>>48274679
>unironacally asking when a dead cyoa from the dead author would be finished

>>48276274
Also, since I failed to say it, I liked it a lot. Very fun concept, interesting quests, and plenty of material for power fantasy.

>>48275253
Age: 16
Female
Points: 30

Source: Nature

Changes
Emotional: Strengthened (37)
Physical: Perfect (33)
Mental: Sharpened (30)
Life: Prime (Age 27) (15)
Memory: Dissonance (15)
Spiritual: Magnet (20)

Gifts

Familiar w/ 20 Points (6)
>Future Sight + Clarity, 5
>Tongues, 2
>Empathy, 2
>Vitality, 3
>Mind Reading, 4
>Healing, 2
>Remote Viewing, Scrying, 1; requires natural water such as a river, pond or lake
>Mediumship, 1

My Gifts
>Telekinesis + Precision + Power (-3)
>Dowsing + Specific (-5)
>Teleportation (-9)
Can bring familiar with, but as a trade-off, can only travel from one tree to another
Familiar included if sitting on shoulder
>Vitality (-12)
>Healing (-14)
>Interferance + Uncontrollable (-11)
>Blessing (-15)
>Friend of Nature + Animal Friends (-21)
>Weather Control + Precision (-27)
>Mechanics (-30)
Extremely useful with precise telekinesis

>Drawbacks (each an extra 3 points from Overcome Perk)

> Muted + Complete 13
Familiar does the talking
> Asexual 8
Be at peace; seek enlightenment from nature
> Anxiety 9
Extremely uncomfortable around people, excepting close companions

>Perks: Overcome x2

>Adults: Jane Farley (Guardian) & ???
>Students: Mia Cross & ???

(1/2)

>>48276628
Basic idea: awakened as a spirit of nature. Will immediately be drawn to abandon "civilized" life and live in the woods. My many physical advantages and friendship with animals allow me to get by just fine. I'm also handwaving a "resistant to the elements" type power, which is thematically appropriate but not one of the options available.

My familiar, likely a bird of some kind, does all the talking for me. He can read surface thoughs, empathize perfectly, detect lies, see the future, read portents, etc. Basically a wise mentor type familiar.

While I grow into my powers, I'm found in the woods by Jane Farley and "adopted". She teaches me some survival tricks that are useful. Eventually I travel the world, handing out blessings to those who respect and love nature.

My main defensive/offensive ability is Precise & Strong Telekinesis; combined with the Mechanics ability, this is incredible. Along with the fact that the familiar can forsee life-threatening things, the Vitality ability, and the fact that the familiar and I can heal each other, I'm functionally immortal barring truly extraordinary events.

>>48276636
You could go Vitality with resistant to elements.

>>48276659
True, which I purchased, so I don't feel as bad about handwaving it. Good point.

>>48275851
Nice. Evil, but thematically fun.

>>48276287
Sounds like a pain to balance, and too much overlap with Enchanting. I appreciate the suggestion, though.

>>48276333
Thanks!

>>48275451
>Personally I liked the original version that everybody complained about. I thought it was more interesting with less points and you basically had to take curses.

Creator here.

The complete version has always had 30 points. Only a very old WIP, which only had the first 3 pages, had less, and the costs of the abilities were different too so it's not a fair comparison.

>>48276092
>Mostly just because I want to finish this one before I lose steam. I hope to have the blueprint done today and then a week or so of image hunting and flavor texting. But I'd totally be up for a collab after that.
That's cool. If you feel like suggesting things, hit me up. I can put it in the doc.

>>48262988
I'm sorry, anon.
Maybe when we hit the bump limit, it won't be a problem that I write? I might have to go to bed before that happens, unfortunately

>>48277210
Just throw it on a pastebin or two and link them.

Rolling for an immortality type (mod 12 of post number)

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>>48275253
>>48275277
>>48275316
>>48275348
>>48275392
Name: Brenhin Halcyon
Gender: Male
Age: 11

Perks: Overcome x2

Curses:
[07]Apathy
[12]Inhuman
[20]Weakness
[27]Asexual: Neutered
[35]Animal Foes
[52]Insomnia
[62]Sacrifice

Total Points: 105
Power Source: Experimental

Changes:
[110]Emotional (Dulled)
[117]Physical (Sickly)
[111]Mental (Enhanced)
[096]]Life (Prime: Age 11)
[106]Memory (Fresh Start)
[111]Spiritual (Magnet)

Gifts:
[102]Telekinesis (Precision/Power)
[091]Pyrokinesis (Control/Source)
[081]Healing (Self Service/Miracle)
[081]Vitality (Painless)
[075]Barrier (Permanent)
[069]Weather Control (Precision)
[062]Mechanics (Inner Focus)
[042]Mind Control (Flawless)
[036]Teleportation (Indirect Sight)
[031]Future Sight (Clarity)
[029]Tongues
[025]Blessing
[022]Mediumship (Command)
[014]Charm (Adored)
[000]Familiar (Spirit Animal: Raven/20 Points total)

Familiar Name: Percival
Familiar Gifts:
[16]Mind Reading
[14]Empathy
[12]Invisibility (Ghost)
[06]Interference (Targeted/Destructive)
[02]Apportation (Pocket Dimension)
[00]Dowsing (Specific)

Guardian: Ally (Joseph Harrison)
Home: Riverfront East
Students: Derek Wright/Scarlet Manning/Anna Ramstead
Adults: Joseph Harrison/Charlie Hedden

Rule an underground empire in the heart of Riverfront East. Derek and Anna are my hitmen, Joseph Harrison is my mind controlled puppet, Charlie Hedden is my drug supplier.and Scarlet and her family's wealth and connections are going to cover up our dirty business transactions. No gang, monster, demon or supernatural horror is going to muscle in my turf without my personal blessings. From my seat of power, recreate and mass produce the original drug that gave me my powers and become a living god among men.

>>48275165
>As it specifies in the WoMaW, this does not guarantee that YOU will be one of the lucky ones, but it does let you buy that magic in AlteringHistory at a cheaper cost.

Where does it say that and how much?

>>48277221
>pastebin
that's so... ugh. It feels wrong to write in, for some reason, and wrong to read. To me it feels less like a story.

>>48277456
put in up on 1d4chan or something

>>48277456
Than don't post your story at all.

>>48277435
In the entries for "Innate, Rare" and "Innate, Common". If you selected "Everyone", then you get it for free, assuming your species is included.

>>48275434
No worries; I'm still working on trying to make the magic less confusing myself.

>>48277522
Will you be adding more 'modern' origin points by the way? Though I guess the sooner the setting is, more different it'd be if you took the DLC options.

>>48277559
As the CYOA specifies, you can choose any time and place you want to; the listed origin points are only interesting possibilities, nothing more.

That being said, I do plan to eventually fill out that list more, it's just a very low priority.

>>48276681
I try. Now to let my inner munchkin out.
>>48275253
Age:16
Male.
Genetic.
Emotional: Strengthened(+7)
Physical: Deformed, covered in scars across my chest and back, got a barbers smile on my neck(+10).
Mental: Enhanced(-6)
Life: Reset(-5)
Memory: Knowledge(-5)
Spiritual: Magnet(+5)
Curses: Unsettling(+5), Phobia x3(+21), Animal Foes(+8), Insomnia(+9), Lust(+8).
>Gifts, Total points(87) this is going to get dirty:
Telekinesis-4(Precision-2,Power-3), Pyrokinesis-3(Control-3,Catalyst-2,Source-5), Future Sight-2(Relevant-1,Clarity-3), Psychometry-1(Muscle Memory-3), Healing-2(Self Service-5,Miracle-3), Apportation-2(Pocket Dimension-2), Teleportation-4(Quick Step-4), Vitality-3(Immunity-3,Painless+3 because of the scaring from deformity), Athleticism-4(Raw Power-6), Interference-2(Targeted-2,Uncontrollable+5. I keep an electronic on me at all times to point where it goes because its easier.), Tongues-2(Non-Verbal-1), Friend of Nature-3(downplays animal foes), Charm-3(downplays unsettling), Mechanics-3(Inner Focus-4) using in conjunction of the pocket dimension, telekinesis, and muscle memory, Barrier-3(Wide-2).
>>48275348
Guardian Ally: Louise Webb. Teacher got my back.
Location: Westwood Hights. The Neighbors are aliens sent to hunt me.
Student allies: Kate Fox(waifu), Peter Blake(bro that helps the hunt and gives me access to guns to put in my pocket dimension), Carl Knight(saw me using my powers while helping Peter, and wants in on the action).
Adult Allies: Eric Strickland(friends with cops, self explanatory) and Julie Slater(caught me out teleporting one night and wont leave me alone).

>>48277766
Curses override any choices that contradict them anon.

>>48277766
Fuck me I forgot the perks. One moment.
True Original: Aliens, and Overcome+7.
will be used on.>>48275277
Permanent-3 for barrier. Empathy-2(Influence-1), and the Siren upgrade to use the last point.
I am an illegal alien experiment that is in hiding from the space government. If I am caught I will be forced to live off world.

>>48277832
Which is why I got these when I noticed I forgot to add them.>>48277855
yes I am a little slow today.

> Gimp crashed seconds after I saved the 2nd page for the first time

Talk about close calls. Remember to save often kids.

Will definitely have this finished soon.

>>48277885
Care to share the synopsis of your 2+ page CYOA?

>>48274606
I consider that to be a good thing. Forces you to leave something for another build.

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Hello CYOA General.

I wish to update Domain Master and Imaginos will be helping me. Change a few things such as various options, images and descriptions. I will be adding a few new things. The layout and core will remain the same.

I have come here to take suggestions. What would you like to see added or changed? I'll be taking all suggestions in account for the document.

>>48278346
that's great news
i hope you two knuckleheads have fun
but Imaginos should be polishing his masterpiece: Dreamprince!

>>48278346
>Hello CYOA General.
Hello, Bliss. What happened to your tripcode?

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>>48278385
He said he's burned out on Dream Prince right now. He wants to, though.

>>48278404
Emergency use only.

>>48278346
*Ability to spend both a minion token AND a shard to add an actual affinity to your realm. As is, spending a token and a shard can give the enhancements from an extra affinity to everyone (by picking Empowerment in both cases), but it would be nice to be able to make the Realm itself a "combo".

*More minions. Just adding more minion tokens is probably a bad idea, because they are well balanced with minion perks, but more mooks/lieutenants per token, so it seems like an actual realm, rather than an itinerant band. I might suggest 100/20/3, but that's just off the top of my head.

It's a genuinely great CYOA, so don't take these suggestions as any more than that. Not complaints.

>>48277961
Agreed.

>>48274156
HERE SORRY I WAS AT WORK.

Keter gains his power from the Sephiroth, Keter, which is the crown above the head. Essentially, he's not a human consciousness, so he's free of bias and always clear-minded. He also has the power of the Gamer, which allowed him to increase his Intelligence and Wisdom absurdly high.

But really you should read TGWP since it's great.

Also, debating taking a name for this thread, since I'm already posting in a pretty obnoxiously clear style. Thoughts, anons?

>>48278346
I like see the numbers you get for each minion type rebalanced, because quite frankly you're only getting either a handful of powerful lieutenant /elite minions or a pitiful few hundred mooks and that's with maximum minion token investment.

Also clarification if affinities from your empowerment perk count towards your realm affinities or not, or just streamline the empowerment and affinities altogether and just state any extra affinity you do get from your empowerment perk counts towards your realm affinity and minion affinity.

>>48278455
don't. There's zero need.
It would make it clear who makes the posts, and incase you're obnoxious, would only turn you into mopeycunt or whatever his name is.

>>48278455
>>48278482
Or worst yet another angelanon.

>>48278482
Fair enough. If I ever have an actual, real need, I can always change my mind.

>>48278346
A way to specialize your realm beyond affinities. Being able to combine two would be cool, but perhaps being able to choose specific locations like mountain areas or coastal areas. Basically being able to choose the appearance in a way that isnt Affinity.

>>48278346
Why change what's already perfect?

Jokes aside, the thing that comes most to mind is more in-depth Realm Perks, and perhaps personal powers that affect your realm at large more. Some sort of option to be a separate affinity from your realm would also be fairly interesting (Like an aquatic affinity in an inferno realm) and allow for more build diversity. Another thing would probably be a way to allot the minion perks more selectively; perhaps reducing the cost of each in exchange for only giving it to a limited amount of your minions, separated by either race or profession.
Perhaps the biggest issue with the CYOA is for those who want to focus more on one aspect of it or another. For that reason, I propose a method of changing shards of power into minion tokens and vice versa.

>>48278453
>>48278463
ALL aspects of the first affinity selected for your realm applies to everything in your realm; those bought with personal empowerment apply to yourself and the realm, while those empowerments purchased in the minion tab only apply to your minions.

>>48278502
>being able to choose the appearance in a way that isnt Affinity

Can't you just do that? Does it need to be an option?

>>48278502
I'm pretty sure it's implied that's already possible. Affinities are applied in any which way you like; in a specific area for each, overlapping, or whatever.

>>48278512
>those bought with personal empowerment apply to yourself and the realm
If so, that's nicer that I thought, and makes that option crazy powerful compared to most of the others. It's not how I read it, though.

>>48278536
Well, any Affinity that you specialize in changes the lay of the land if you so wish; that's made clear in the little blurb for Affinity. While it's made clear that empowerment doesn't affect minions (Because they get an empowerment of their own), it is never stated that this does not affect the realm, as there is no Realm Perk that affects empowerment of the land. The CYOA would be very shitty if you couldn't have more than one affinity for your land (Which is 99% of the time why people ever choose empowerment), so it makes sense that it would affect the Realm.

Also, I fail to see how it would be crazy powerful compared to the majority of the perks, as it's mostly just so that you can get more flavor in your build.

>>48278346
Realm size which determines different things like population size and maybe effect how many minions you get per purchase.

Some minion options are too mundane. Like guards and servants? may as well have shit like barbers and farmers too.

Like some of this is oddly specific while I have no idea about how much land I have or how many subjects.

There's the medieval demographics calculators (like this https://donjon.bin.sh/fantasy/demographics/ ), though those don't assume magic or other fantastic elements.

I would switch the name of Engineer and Craftsmen around. Engineer implies more sophistication/being able to do larger works.

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>>48278346
suggestion:
1. Rework minions/mooks: 25 soldiers is laughable number
2.Improve/expand domain customization

ain't going to happen edition:
1.creation of council/cabinet of ministers, where you pick people to strengthen your domain in specific aspects (so improved lieutenants)
2.Domain infrastructure customization as you pick minions : Building more forts and great wall of Chyna for defending or rather schools, roads, trade centers for commerce
3.Can someone think of a peasants?
4.Laws are not for pussies: Absolute monarchy? Prussian constitutional monarchy? Gommunism?
4.2 Free trade? Closed economy? Protected Economy?
4.3 State Capitalism? Planned economy? Laissez-faire?
4.4 Free press? Censored press? State controlled information?
4.5 Immigration?

>>48278625
Empowerment in theory could be crazy powerful when combined with enchanted Armour and enchanted weapons, assuming identical affinity effects stack.

And than there's champion lieutenant minions who can tap in your domain boss powers and affinities, which suggest that empowerment perk affinities don't apply to minions at all.

>>48278346
The ability for your minions to take on your race if it's hybrid by default.

>>48278346
Waifus please!

>>48278625
Ah, I thought you were saying that (Boss) Empowerment was equivalent to getting an extra affinity choice at the beginning, in which case it WOULD also affect minions. That's why I was saying it was "crazy powerful". With your clarification it's just "powerful".

>>48278753
God, I hope you're joking.

>>48278346
How about options for your lair/manor/castle and being able to customize it? Maybe some synergize with affinities or other choices.

>>48278781
Object to this. I already have a castle in my realm; adding specific options for this would actually be more restrictive, because it would imply you couldn't just craft a castle in your realm on your own.

>>48278753
god dammit I was waiting for this post. I knew it would happen eventually...

>>48278705
When it says "physically imbued with your affinity" and "capable of directly tapping into its raw power", it is talking about your first, primary affinity. This one affinity is the only thing that applies to EVERYTHING; you can tell because it is the one that minions, yourself, and your realm are all influenced by. I never acknowledged that your own empowerment applies to your minions, which is why I kept clarifying that they have their own empowerment perk. Also, when enchanted stuff is said to be "imbued with your affinity", I'm pretty sure that it just meant that you have like a fire-sword or a spear of angelic light or stuff like that; not that it multiplies your affinity's affect on you.
>>48278768
It really wouldn't make sense otherwise, as why would you never be able to have more affinities than your minions? The way it is right now allows you to have the configuration any way you want EXCEPT for your realm being an affinity that you and/or your minions are not aligned with, which would add even more variety to the CYOA; however, I can't think of any way to do that very cleanly, so I can't really suggest that.

>>48278453
>>48278463
Empowerment does add the affinity to all aspects: you, your realm and your minions. Needs clarifying probably.

More minions? I don't know. I feel as if the CYOA is already balanced to be able to make a gang or an army.

Okay then maybe mooks need a buff maybe?

>>48278502
That's already possible.

>>48278512
Thanks, but I felt it could just use a slight fine-tuning to go with the times.

Yes, there will be more in-depth realm perks (aka Lair Perks). Treasure will be removed from complications, by the way.

You can always change shards to minion tokens but not minion tokens to shards and I feel that needs to stay.

>>48278662
>Switch Engineer and Craftsman
Alright gotcha.

>Some minion options are too mundane. Like guards and servants? may as well have shit like barbers and farmers too.
Not sure I agree with that statement.

Anyway, Minions will get some rework. Such as a more specific option for the Companion perk from the DM power section.

>>48278691
1. Sure, mooks need reworking. Probably bump up the number to 50.
2. Could you be more specific in what you would like to see? Lair options will be a thing, suggest me stuff.

1. Generals will be a thing. (Probably 4 types). They will be expensive though, as in costing shards.
2. That will be too expansive. As lair perks I could create an infrastructure option I guess.
3. Peasants are free.
4. Determined by you of course. No need to put that as an option if you can choose freely.
>rest
Well probably not. It's a fantasy not a civ sim.

>>48278728
Yeah Hybrid/races need a buff.

>>48278753
Now how would I do that? Not that I will, but just, how.

>>48278781
>>48278801
There will be lair *PERKS*, similar to that of Realm Perks. Your actual lair is still up to your imagination as to how wonderous. Hope that's fine.

>>48276395
Perpetuation (0)
-Hybrid (6)

Training - Self-Amusement
Training - Mathematics
Training - Computer Science
Training - Self Discipline
Training - Creativity
Empire (5)
One Time Shapeshift (3)
Soulmate (2)
The Ultimate Question - "How do I create the best possible perpetuation for me?" (4)

Perpetuation implies there is no hedonic treadmill. Combined with hybrid, that is absolutely amazing. Just imagine combining the very best fleeting moments of your life, like:

-Joy and happiness as a baby
-Feeling of security in your parent's arms
-Excitement and wonder as a child
-Feeling of /fit/ from shapeshift
-Absolutely no pain from anesthesia
-The greatest high from drugs
-The love between you and your waifu
-The sex with your waifu

All of that, forever. It would be even better if one's thoughts could be influenced by dreaming and hallucinogenics during perpetuation.

I'm... actually kind of sad now since it's not real.

>>48278838
You should still add something to do with the general population of your domain, and amount of land it has. That should also be a modifier for how many minions (soldiers, etc) you can have.

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>tfw cyoa isn't real

>>48278838
>Empowerment does add the affinity to all aspects: you, your realm and your minions. Needs clarifying probably.
With respect, that seems really strange. It means that your minions can have affinities you do not (by buying the Empowerment minion perk), but you cannot have affinities that your minions do not (because if you buy it for yourself, your minions get it as well).

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>>48278980
Feel free to do the math, but honestly I just want to keep it a little simplified.

>>48278980
True, but it's just like that.

Off to bed now but I will read and document all your comments later. So keep em coming.

Especially would like to see more specified options you wish to see in the update. It's easier to get detailed suggestions than vague ones.

'Night all.

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>>48274278
>Noble (80)
>Human
>Atlas Academy, Atlas
>Fast Mover
>Beauty (70)
>Intelligence (60)
>Agility (40)
>Precision (20)
>Energy (0)

>Two light katanas (800)

>Armor (700)
>Pistol that fires dust rounds (450)
>Sick ass car (0)

>>48274785
Don't be like She Who Whines, anon.

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>>48278946
Here, have a newer version.

Affinity:Technology
Size:Average
Race:Construct
Perks:Vitality, Agility, Magic, Perception, Armor, Phylactery, Hybrid:Mystic, Guards, Arena
Minions(Size:Average/Giant,Race:Elemental/Construct):2 Engineers, 2 Mages, Sorcerers, 2 Craftsmen, Overseers, Riders, Guards, Battlemages
Guards:Archmage, Oracle, Assasin, Witch
Minion Perks:Talented(Enchanting), Talented(Engineering), Specialty(Magic), Ascendancy, Sustenance, Training, Equipment
Realm Perks:Unknown, Hidden
Complications:Benevolent, Nemesis

Did a Dominion build. Do I even need to explain what I was thinking? Hide, grow exponentially in power, take over the world.

>>48279210
Race:Elf
Perks:Weapon Master(Sword), Money, Energy Magic, White Magic, Mind Magic, Elemental(Air & Earth), Luck, Talisman, Extra Time, Stealthiness
Protagonist:Lone Wolf (preferably female, but whatever)

I'll gladly mindrape this lone wolf into submission in exchange for all these magical powers. Thanks, god!

>>48279141
I wasn't complaining though, I just posted my build.

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>>48275253

>>48275253

>Identity
15 year old boy (Douglas Freeman)

>Power Source
Genetic

>Changes
Emotional: No Change
Physical: No Change
Mental: Enhanced (-6)
Life: Leech (Free)
Memory: Knowledge (-5)
Spiritual: Magnet (+5)

>Gifts
Telekinesis+Precision+Power (-9)
Future Sight+Clarity+Relevant (-6)
Curse (-4)
Healing+Self Service+Miracle (-10)
Mediumship+Command (-3)
Mind Reading+Deep Scan (-7)
Remote Viewing+Presence (-9)
Teleportation+Quick Step+Indirect Sight (-10)
Tongues+Non-Verbal (-2)
Psychometry+Muscle Memory (-4)
Apportation+Pocket Dimension (-4)

>Curses
The Voices (+11)
Animal Foes (+11)
Empathy (+10)
Inhuman (+8)


>The State

>Home
Westwood Heights

>Allies
Kate Fox
Leah Dawson
Scarlet Manning

Louise Webb
Joe Harrison

>Perks
Overcome (2)

The bastard son of Daimon Seelenfäule, a German oil magnate and an unnamed Afro-German maid. Daimon was trying to birth a child with the "Legacy Gene" abnormality, a mutation that ran within his bloodline. In exchange for drastically increasing the natural powers of the child, it also gave them a connection to the genetic echoes of all of the previous psychics in the bloodline. These echoes soon become voices that whisper long forgotten secrets and other ways of gaining power. This would allow him to be able to still have control over his businesses long after his death through his children. Although his legitimate children all have "gifts" they did not have the Legacy Gene. As the other children grew up they wanted control over the estate and assinated him using their combined gifts. They proceeded to cull their father's consorts to solidify the inheritance amongst themselves. Realizing this Douglas's mother fled to America and gave birth to him upon settling down as the maid for the Manning Family in Westwood Heights.

On his 13th birthday his powers awakened along with the echo of Daimon.

Part 1 of 4

>>48278515
I guess if you count the Real Perks but they are pretty random and diffuse. I ment more like specific landmarks like mountain range or even a fortress/dungeon/labyrinth as part of your realm, or population/manufacturing/navy and similar things.

>>48279374
I'm pretty sure the other anon wasn't accusing you of complaining, but of posting the same build every single time that particular CYOA gets posted, just like certain other person (whose other charasteristics include whining).

>>48279425
that was a new build though, he only noticed because I used the same picture for it last thread.

>>>New Arrival (100)
>Human
>Shade Academy, Vacuo
>Force of Nature (water)
>Intelligence(90)
>Beauty (80)
>Memory(60)
>Agility (40)
>Guile (20)
>Tactics (0)

>Scroll (1000)
>Wildernes gear (950)
>Rebreathers (900)
>Armor (800)
>Parachute and Grappling hook (650)
>Variable Kusarigama-Crossbow (250)
>Dust mode (200)
>Weight Reduction (100)
>Collapsible (50)
>Dust charges (Water) (0)

>>48272090
Do any of you guys play wiki-style CYOAs? I found this one recently and it's pretty good:
http://editthis.info/create_your_own_story/Smutty_Sex_Romp
Loads of content too (10000+ pages).

>>48279512
you do know that the dust charges are a mix pack with more than one element in it, and that the dust mod just allows the weapon to use the dust charges right?

>>48279456
Should've told that to the other guy(s) (>>48274409, >>48274785).

>>48279513
Sorry, but we're using the term a bit differently (or just plain misusing it) here. Actual branching path adventures like that don't really belong in this thread, AFAIK.

>>48279579
Still my build. and the other guys are me too. It doesn't change the fact I like the pic and only made the build last thread. Which I changed in this one.

>>48278838
>Could you be more specific in what you would like to see?
The affinity gives general description of our realm, but is our realm landlocked? Or is it surrounded by mountains? Or is it on island? Such things have big impact on your realm and are not specified

>Well probably not. It's a fantasy not a civ sim.
worth a try

>>48279619
Gah, sorry. Meant to link the posts by the actual other guy(s) (>>48274724, >>48279141) to your earlier confirmation of having posted a new build with an old picture (>>48279456).

>>48279692
Ahhh. Still fine either way though.

>>48279563
I was thinking it just any of 5 types in 1 charge.
Yeap that why crossbow taken dust charged bollts pif pif.

>>48279714
Nah it says in the offer that it contains about 6 months of assorted goods to make shit blow up. But I guess you could spin it to 6 months of only one element. Why you don't want to have Batman tier shit is beyond me though.

>>48279082
if (you)'s where commendations you'd have enough of them

>>48279738
Cuz semblance proc be water dust.

>>48279766
But you would already have that in a mixed bag to begin with, and having a single gimmick can be easy to defend against even with your semblance helping.

>>48279800
Well if it betwen 1 and 5 types dust then of course i pick all 5.
But if i able pick which dust types get in exchange for others then all water go go.
Water can also deal damage by crush push and drown the enemy.

>>48278346
May I suggest nixing the line about Behemoth and Colossal Size Classes dampening intelligence?

>>48279918
Why would you choose the others then that are more frail? Should a pixie be as durable as a behemoth for balance reasons then?

>>48279847
You do realize you overinflating what are essentially trick arrows you made for your crossbow, the kind with only one trick unless you can make more water out of nothing. Otherwise you don't have nearly as much of a power source for your semblance as you thought.

>>48278838
Also for balance reasons, I think minions should not be bale to have Behemoth and Colossal sizes, they are like boss fights even if it's simply 25 soldiers mooks.

>>48279938
The smaller Size Classes get a speed/agility boost at the cost of strength/durability, the larger ones get a strength/durability boost at the cost of speed/agility.

Having a 'you're retarded now' clause on top of the lost speed/agility seems more unbalanced to me.

Who wants to be an idiot?

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>>48278346
Perhaps a small section dedicated to personal artifacts you can either use or gift to loyal minions.

For instance, how about a robe that camouflages itself in the background when worn.

In addition, you could add a giant personal creature as a loyal pet to you, though really I only suggested this because I wanted to see pic related in a cyoa.

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>>48280020
What is that thing?

>>48280077
your sister in a good day.

>>48279962
Move water even arrow miss.
Have some with me like Katarra.
Drain it in air.
Create it be Semblance.
Its pretty much choises there.
It depend of enemy and can be trained.
The only problem it persons like Emerald or Yang/Nora.

>>48272090
So, what does the sword do?

>>48280098
ok I refuse to continue this conversation until you fucking check your spelling. Post that again in English.

>>48280077
An old legend from my area.
This should explain it.

http://www.altonweb.com/history/piasabird/

>>48280077
google says "southwestern piasa birds"
make of that what you will
it's probably a high school mascot or something

>>48272539
You should make waifu hunter be available to legends but specify that it would be VERY dangerous due to assassins.

>>48280098
What the hell are you saying?

>>48279973
The Giant classes would be unquestionably superior if not for the stupid clause

BUT, having an boss perk option that removes the intelligence loss would seem to be good.

>>48280128
not the maker. also I think Waifu seeker should be available to everyone, not just legends or great hunters.

>>48279456
48279141 here, fair enough. So long as it's a new build, you're cool in my book.

>>48280159
thank you I guess.

>>48279386

Part 2

DF=Douglas
DS=Daimon

Shortly after his powers awakening, his mother was found dead in an alley, her body showing signs of physical torture. As the state took Douglas into their care, so did Daimon within the confines of his mind.

At first Douglas was fearful of Daimon, especially after talking with him in his inner monologue. At first they would quarrel and have spats like so.

Daimon: You were one of the african maid's offspring right? I made sure to pick women with genetic characteristics of more bulkier men in their bloodline but beggar's can't be choosers.

DF: Well I apologize for not being the ubermensh you wanted Herr Daimon. Maybe I could of been better if I inherited your Aryan beauty.

DS: Don't be boring Douglas. We both know that's never what I wanted.

DF: Well tell me what you want.

DS: Simple, I wanted an heir that I could watch over and see my bloodline prosper. If I hadn't been usurped by my pernicious offspring! Besides is it wrong for a father to want to see his children do well and guide them to their true potential. I expected you to be overjoyed that you finally know your father, many in your situation can't say the same.

DF: Your not my father!

DS: Theatric semantics Douglas! I was dead long before you were born! You should be the pinnacle of the Seelenfäule line. Why must you resist your birthright?!

DF: Because I'm going crazy and this Seelenfäule blood is to blame.

DS: Try as you might to deny your blood, your siblings will not. They will hunt you down and butcher you like they did your mother. If you want to survive then you will need my tutelage, like it or not! I am not the enemy Douglas, as soon as you realize this then you'll be ready to exact your revenge and realize your potential!

DF: I don't want...

DS: Don't lie to yourself Douglas! Your a Seelenfäule through and through. We are the manifestation of satisfaction and rightfully demand it when we are wronged.

>>48280149
Am I the only one who read the Size Descriptions?
Giants take a hit in Agility/Speed too.

Not only that, but Giants don't have the 'you're dumb' problem.

It's just the Behemoths and Colossals that are supposed to be idiots.

>>48280195
I read them carefully. Agility versus castle-smashing size is NOT an equal trade-off.

>>48275064
/co/ needs to be updated. Wakfu season 3 was already confirmed.

>>48280365
>I read them carefully.
No you didn't. You brought the Giant class as being superior without the stupidity clause, but they aren't even affected. You would have known that if you had read it.

>Agility versus castle-smashing size is NOT an equal trade-off.
Then the Size option should be done away with, everyone should be Average.
Depriving the two largest classes of intellect doesn't just make them bad at planning, or fighting.
It would also make them shit at magic more complicated than 'breathe fire at those assholes'.

As it is now, I will be fucking surprised if anyone seriously chooses to unironically be a big dumb monster that's slow as hell and shit at magic.

I mean, IRL, humans have driven literally dozens of big, dumb animals to extinction. Without even really fucking trying.

Being big and strong means nothing when you're the size of a house, and only a little smarter and faster than one.

>>48280368
Yeah people were saying that as early as October 2015.

>>48280518
Dude, he obviously fucking meant behemoth and colossal. He just didn't remember exactly what they were called. You're not proving any point other than that you are a asswipe

>>48272539
Hunter. Not a scrub, but still free. I ain't about to tangle with a fucking titan, anyway.

Outdoorsman is nice I guess. Fighter is good too but I like the job options better as an outdoorsman. The special snowflake choices hold no appeal.

Powers:
Precision 1 (free)
Strength 2 (1+3) to use a fuckoff big anime bow. Like, a handheld siege weapon. Kill a menace with one arrow, son.
Regen 1 (1/5) Just so I'm not totally fucked unless I'm dead.
Endurance 1 (2/7) To survive what I want to be surviving.
Stealth 1 (2/9) I don't want to have my nature be obvious. Not because of enemies, but because of humans, I'd rather be able to be normal.
Beast Eye and Sentient Sympathy are also really appealing and I wouldn't mind more Endurance, but I didn't want to spare the points for them.

>>48272625
Horse and raven. Free, useful.

>>48272649
Bump the Ranged weapon up twice. (6) With the kind of shot I can make at this incredible strength, more than doubled by magic, I could fell a castle wall in a single shot.
Free weapon is a short sturdy sword.
Stealth satchel 1 to round out my points and have replenishing tricks.

I'll go to the mountains of madness. What fool would I be to ignore a well-paid job? Shooting the dragon with my badass arrows, which I'm convinced are Great Hunter tier, though I won't tell anyone that, should be good.

>>48280518
First, what >>48280765 said. Though I wouldn't have said 'asswipe' myself.

Second, I'm not saying it isn't a problem because, yeah, I would never pick a size above Giant as it is (looking at my two saved builds for this, Giant is exactly what I picked in both cases). I'm saying just removing the intelligence clause isn't going to fix the problem, it's just going to swing the balance in the other direction. If you remove that, almost everyone will pick the colossal forms.

It probably makes sense just to make the "base" forms Giant through Tiny, and then require a shard use to access the truly enormous forms, which would then have no intelligence penalty.

>>48280914
I think colossal and behemoth would be better served to be used as companion sizes.

>>48281038
Then its possible to have 2000 colossal sized minions.

>>48276395
I hate the concept of dying. I've always been afraid of it, the nothingness of it, and I still hold onto the hope that I can be, one day, immortal.
Please work.

IMMORTALITY: START (25 P)
>Type: Digitalization (19 P)
>Android (14 P)
>Self-Destruct (11 P)

Bonuses:
>Soul Mate (9 P)
>Never Alone (1 P)
>Large 4 Topping Pizza that I CANT HAVE (0 P)

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Posting this for reference. I have some writefaggotry incoming.

>>48281398
I am listening.

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Name: Eria Layka
Gender: Female
Background: The Old Civilization; Terrified Onlooker
(Advanced-Tech Understanding, Basic Ethereal Manipulation, Stone Soul, Languages Proficiency)
Species: First Human

Bought skills
Advanced Ethereal Manipulation (From Basic)
AI Expert
Mechanical Adept
TechnoMage
Runemaster
[Free Trait: Phoenix-Chip]

Covenant:
The Children of Quetzalcoatl

Department:
Mechanical

Companions:
Mochizuki Chiyome, 427, Administration, Master Assassin (Guardian)

Home District: Little Beijing (Mochizukis residence)

2000 Credits

I don't need no Governa's dalla! x2 [+2 Skill -800 Credits]
Destined for greater things [1000 Credits]
Forever Alone x3 [1500 Credits]

Can't wake up inside [500 Credits]
Minor [500 Credits]
Off-world Obligations [400 Credits]
My Best Friend [500 Credits]

Points to spend: 5600

Points spent: 5575

Weapons [980]

M911 [50]
[Rune Effect] Dispel Magic
Urumi The legendary Rajput sword whip [100]
*Blackening Effects (weapon awareness) [500]
*Internal Weaponry Module [300]
*Weapon edge Electrification [30]
[Rune Effect] Drain Magic

Armor [1300]
The Kelder Biological suit [500]
*InvisiYUT Cloak [400]
*Magical Protection Vestments [50]
*Jetpack [200]
[Rune Effect] Magic Fortification, Resistance to electricity, Regeneration

Tartan Cloak [50]
Coharty Plasma Shield Mark-7 [100]

Drone, small x2 [600]
[Rune Effect] Magic Fortification, Resistance to electricity, Regeneration

KnickKnacks 2695

- Entanglers [50]
- Tebulasi Frigate [1400]
- Flux Generator [200]
- Runist Kit [300]
- CIY Brain Implant [400]
- Specialized Watch Equipment [50]
- Hacking Module [100]
- Leader Line [20]
- External Memory Module [50]
- Lock-Cracker Module [25]
- Limb Replacement [100] (Right arm)
- Limb Replacement [-] (Right leg)
- Limb Replacement [-] (Left leg)
- Organ Replacement [-] (Ears - Echolocation + range)
- Organ Replacement [-] (Heart)
- Organ Replacement [-] (Lungs)
- Organ Replacement [-] (Eyes - Thermal, nightvision)

>>48281437
You prefer pastebin or posts? Its 20+ posts.

>>48281460
Pastebin is easier for editing.

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>>48281398
>>48281437
traveler build?
traveler build

Dabria, 14, Travellar Aspirant
>The Now, Watcher

Skills (11): Architect (free), Advanced Tech Understanding (8), Ethereal Mastery (5), Technomage, Field Leader [evocation], Organizer, Educated, Martial Training

>Items (2050): Upgraded Leathers (1850),Dual Upgraded Braces (1550), Grenades [Timed] (1450), Akte (1310)
Bottomless Bag (1210), Anonymity Mask (1010), Flux Generator (810), Organ Replacement [Cybereye, Rebreather Implant] (710), Multiversal Timekeeper (660), Psychic Paper (640), Hat Closet (620), Traveler's Encyclopedia (600), Cedril Vibration Dispenser (300), Grapevine Cross (150), Wealthy Attire (50), Plebian Attire (40), Leader Line (20), Rail Line Pass (5), Stop Sign (0) Seeder Kit (Free), Bro Bot (Free)

Little Things: Minor, Full Moon Touch, Forever Alone, No Governor's Doller x3

>Faction: Architects

Covenant: Ikko-Ikki

>Companions:
Chaplain Eustach (Guardian)
Saphfo Eresia
Janine Yamamoto

House: Roma Territory

>Hubworld: In Which Big Brother Wins

Panic Button: The Duke


->>>
Pic related, many years later.

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>>48281449
[Core of Universal Truth|A rather odd anomaly found at the core of the galaxy, what appears to be a station held together by strategically placed black holes and still collapsing stars, something put there long before this age of FTL began. The job itself is simple, find what lies in the heart of this galaxy and bring it back, be it knowledge, or something else.


Her eyes, along with every other piece of photo-recording equipment she owned, were glued to the windows of her Tebulasi-class frigate. The view was magnificent, awesome in the truest sense of the word. Six massive black holes orbiting around a lonely, impossibly large space station, with long cables stretching out like tendrils towards each collapsed star. Eria smiled as she thought back to what 'zuki had said. "That's your first job?! You do know what a black hole is right? No one has touched that job for years for good reason!" She had answered confidently that time, eager to prove herself. "Fine, go then, but if you die I'm going to find you and kill you again, you hear me?" Her training under Mochizuki Chiyome had been rigorous, even brutal, but it had been effective, and she had improved her skills greatly, particularly in the art of being present but unnoticed. Her grasp of technology and physics were great, and thought she knew what she was getting into. She was ready. But now, gazing upon the divine power and might of the universe itself, she had not known.. could anyone truly know? Who could possibly have built such a station, and bent such raw power to its will? It seems impossible, yet there it is.

http://pastebin.com/RX2R3LhJ

I dont have a background in physics, nor am I a native English speaker, so I've probably missed a bunch of things. Feel free to point and laugh, then I'll know what to improve.

Pic related, the drones in question.

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And thanks to having no school today, I'm done my OC.

I figured since I've already put the wraith in two of my CYOAs, I might as well go ahead and just make an entire CYOA about Evolve. Especially since the game just went F2P on PC (At the risk of sounding like a shill, I would encourage you guys to try it out. It's pretty fun)

1/2

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>>48281548
2/2

Hope you enjoy!

>>48281548
>>48281558
>Can't be the monster

>>48281548
>>48281558


Seconding >>48281578

Make a Monster counterpart.
Now, to actually read your thing.

>>48281578
There's plenty of "be the monster" CYOAs out there, and there's not nearly as much of a choice/replayability as there is for the hunters, so I thought this would work better.

I might eventually make an add on for being the monster and being able to choose which abilities you have and what map you're on.

>>48276395
Slime
Environment Immune
Material Change
Free
Training-Disguise
Flight

I get to be a slime, change my substance into a variety of interesting liquids, and I'm a master of disguise. Also I can fly for some reason. Should be fun.

>>48272539
>Mariner Hunter
>Powers:
Beast Eye 2 (Free)
Improved Lung 3 (3) - Sound-based 'breath' weapon to blast out force-screams. Fun fact: shockwaves are incredibly deadly underwater.
Endurance 2 (5)
Regeneration 1 (1)
Beastmaster (Later, as Challenge upgrade)
>Companion: Phoenix (Later, after gaining Beastmaster)
>Equipment:
Hook 2/Rank 1 Ranged (3), handheld Harpoon Launcher (underwater crossbow design)
Weapon 2 (2), one-handed harpoon with a low-tier Blood-aligned enchantment to desiccate foes it's embedded in (1); used as the ammunition for my Hook/Harpoon Launcher
Second Weapon 1 (Free), a mundane hunting knife
Leathers (Free), a fur greatcloak and hardened leather bracers/greaves/neck guard to protect from animal bites
>Challenges
I will take on the Mountains of Madness.

>>48280768
Shall we engage in jolly cooperation, fellow Hunter?

>>48281548
>>48281558
>it's just a video game copypaste

Holy shit I just killed myself that's so boring.

>>48281826
Let's work together on this gig, neighbor.

>>48281753
There's also plenty of "be the hunter" cyoas out there too.

The problem is you're taking a pre-established video game franchise and excluding one of the primary attraction of that franchise. People are going to be disappointed.

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>>48281548
>>48281558
Oh boy an Evolve cy-
>only hunters
Fucking Dropped.

Not only that it's rather bland compared to other "ur a hunter" cyoa's
Disgustingly average/10 Completely outclassed by almost every other hunter cyoa.

>>48272539
>Great Hunter x6
I'm specialized enough that it's not like I'd be doing much more than guard cargo vessels anyway.
>Mariner
+Improved Lung x2
+Beast Eye x2
>Powers (18)
Strength x3 (11)
Regeneration (10)
Endurance x3 (0)
There's all sorts of shit that lurks beneath the waves. I'm going to punch it.
>Companions (3)
Megalodon (1)
My Mount.
Cute Fairy (0)
Because I had an extra point, and a dog probably wouldn't like staying on a ship.
>Equipment (12)
Weapons: Trident (10)
Rank 2, because it's that kind weapon where you can hold it with both one hand or two
Aligned to lightning (9)
Net: Rank 2 (6)
The Hook: Harpoon, what else would it be?
Rank 4 (1)
And I'll just leave the last point unspent.

Just call me Ahab. When the government isn't asking me to guard some cargo ship or another I'm riding around on my giant shark and harpooning monsters for their blubber. Or whatever they have.

>>48281548
>>48281558
very decent first try anon
design is good
don't let the whiners get you down

>>48281398
Has Traveller been around for the past few days? Wondering if he got down the builds in the last week.

>>48282342
>Has Traveller been around for the past few days?

You mean Highlander? They literally posted in this thread

>>48281468

>>48282369
Yes I did. Also, apparently I'm blind!

>>48282316
Thanks anon. I'm definitely going to create a new page for a monster path thanks to the feedback. It is a little disheartening to read mostly negative comments about something I made for other people to have fun with.

It doesn't help that Marvel just announced that in their new Venom comic this fall, Venom's not gonna be Flash Thompson or Eddie Brock, which is very upsetting for me.

>>48282392
It's cool. I just grabbed everything from the past 15 or so threads. The bin of Traveller builds and assorted writefaggotry is almost up to 300 pages, and 60 build cards off to the side.

I'm quite satisfied.

>>48282436
Any nice panic buttons?

>>48272539
Hunter: Legend(Dragoon)
Powers: Strength 3, Improved Lung 2, Precision 2, Stealth 2,
Endurance 3, Regen 2, Beast Eye 1
Equipment: Hook 4, Double Belt 2, Melee 4, Stealth Satchel 4

I am... a coward! I didn't ask for this magical talent, or all this gear. I didn't ask to be positioned in a town and told to defend it from kaiju! Fuck this! I'm out! Good luck hunting me down, assholes! I'm gonna be a fugitive for the rest of my days, and nobody's going to stop me. Oh, my weapon is an unadorned standard-issue broadsword, by the way. Every bit of magic has been put into the increase to damage, so it has no elemental affinity. It just hits like a Titan-sized truck.

>>48282452
Three if your interested.

First is the dude from hatred. Second is Rhan-Tegoth Iä! Iä!
Last but not least. Do you like hurting other people?

Of course I'm still taking everything I can.

>>48281548
Dragonborn Mariner here, may as well make a build for this as well.
>Trapper
Custom Shotgun, Tracking Dart Gun, Harpoon Traps
>Team:
Lennox, Bucket, Caira
>Monster: Gorgon

>>48282431
Good luck on the CYOA. As anon said, don't let it get you down.

Also... don't let comic book announcements be major emotional events in your life.

>>48282540
Probably writing up a character card for Eria tomorrow, and maybe even some more writefaggotry if it was recieved well. I like the universe, and have plenty of ideas fpr fleshing out the character. Not presuming to write canon though.

>>48282682
Well write what you will, even if it doesn't go into the cyoa, it does help me expand the world.

>>48282623
It's definitely not a major emotional event or anything, especially with all the bullshit Marvel's pulled in the last few years, but I'm just sad one of the things I was looking forward to has now been ruined.

Here's hoping Richard Rider really is coming back though.

>>48282730
Do you have an end-goal with this? Or just letting it 'evolve' organically?

>>48272539
Why isn't there a Rank 4 Guns option for people who are going to take on Menaces/Titans?

>>48282774
A combination of both, I have some big overarching plots that have already been set into motion, but those are distant and not really relevant to the average Traveller at the time the cyoa is set, and the stories made now give the setting life.

>>48282908
Someone else attempted to answer this, but how do the Containment Orbs work? Are they a subscription?

>>48283075
A subscription aye, I'll clarify it a little better in the next update.

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>>48283098
Hey Highlander, I have a question; do you know how many words your cyoa is? And if so, how many? I'm just curious.

>>48283161
At the moment with the latest version? 117000 words, though I have been editing a bit.

>>48278346
More Affinities would be cool.
Luck
Energy
Time
Space

Just a few suggestions.

>>48283181
>117000 words
My lord, I think that's as long as a novel. Good work.

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>>48283249
>Energy.

I was thinking the same thing.

>>48283181
Highlander what exactly does disfigured dreamer do, can you not dream or what?

>>48283161
>Life Wizard
Best Class, prove me wrong. Protip: you can't.
>Healing Specialist
I'll grow a bitch's arm back. Bitches love arms.
>Plant Specialist
Gonna make pretty flowers, great booze, and bomb-ass herbs.
>Animal Specialist
Skitter Mode Engaged.
JK, I'm just using these mutant bees to make the best honey on earth.
And make some fuckin' giant dogs. I love dogs, they're my bros.

>>48283181
Can you elaborate upon the Cohort Setup Package? What is a Cohort in this setting?

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>>48272539
>Great Hunter-X6
>Exiled Outdoorsman
-Precision rank 1
-Regeneration rank 2
-Beast eyes rank 2
-Stealth rank 2
>Companions
-Good Dog
-Bizzare Lizzard
>Equipment (12 tokens I think?)
-Lever action rifle (Ranged rank 2: 6 points)
-Neman robe: 6 points

>Infested mine

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Hey, guys. How is this cyoa so far? Any criticisms I can fix? Any balancing issues? I will make it into image version so don't worry about that. Speak now or forever hold your peace.

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>>48281398
Name: Sir Knight Titanstompa The DedKilly
Gender: Yes
Origin: The Watcher
Faction: Free wanderer
Religion: Dakka Conventionalist
Home: Wanderer
Hubworld: The Tower, Krump the face of God
(Exchanging Motorcycles for a Large Drone)

Perks: Tech understanding mid (1)
Steam Adept (2)
Magnetic Adept (3)
Adaptability (4)
Natural Physique (5)
Martial Training (6)
Pariah (7)
Superhuman Body (8)
Scavenger (9)

Drawbacks: Looter +100
My Best Friend +500
That Guy +500
Harbinger +1,000
+4,100 starting credits

Armor: Power armor (3,100)
Plate Armor (2,900)
Tartan Cloak (2,850)
Scarf (2,800)

Weapons: Yuta Brace, Upgraded (2,600)
Seven-Shot revolver x2 (2,500)
MAD.11 Hunting Shotgun (2,300)
RPG-71 (2,100)
Blessed Plasma Lance (1,750)
Pen Flamethrower (1,400)

Knickknacks: Basic Bag (Free)
Large Drone, "Noble Steed" (Free)
Liquid Determination (900)
Spirit Walk Components (700)
Whale Markings (600)
Overclocked Healing Chip (100)
Liberty Torch (0)

Companions: Alexis, "The Watcher"
The Stranger
Arcu, Mechanical Bird
Willmond Koch, Firearmaster
Xeo, Noble Steed

>>48283432
>Best Class, prove me wrong.
Well, Slayer has no power ceiling, fire mages are more destructive, death mages have a more reliable method of immortality, and occult mages can telekineticly throw you around like a dodge ball.

>>48283181
WHO IS ME? WHY DOES HE GREET THE NEW KIDS?