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Never Before Have I Been So Weary Edition

Old Thread: >>47739068
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https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches

1.15 is about 3/4ths done excluding the Lore that's going to be coming with it. I was thinking about making a special set of mission 'mystery boxes' for certain options, allies and such. Thoughts?
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>>47743483
It'd make the final mission less lonely. However, I'm sure you've noticed how some characters and CYOAs have been ruined by mystery boxes.

Hell, Harem is a textbook example of how mystery boxes can go wrong.

Just watch your footing, boss. I really like this CYOA.
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>>47743483
For this big of a cyoa, I think no on the mystery boxes.
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>>47743483
whatever gets it done a teeeeny bit faster.
cant wait to see the new version.
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If beri read this, please answer mais question from last thread >>47743041
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>>47743643
>>47743657
>>47743813
Feedback is much appreciated. I'm going to try and pull an all nighter tonight to get everything for the 1.15. Blood and thunder and all that aye?
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>>47744164
Hustle, don't hurry.
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>>47744164
Oh boy oh Boy new travellers CYOA!
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>>47744555
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>>47743657
Random parts to a CYOA are better for larger ones.
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anyone got Hibiki's updated CYOA? I haven't made a build for the vehicle version yet.
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Does anyone have the Persona CYOA? I didn't save it when it was first posted.
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>>47745426
What's the point of wearing skirts like that when just leaning forward a little lets everyone see the goods?
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>>47745475
You act like that's not the entire point.
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>>47745475
Which is a good point. ; )
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>>47745475
>implying that isn't the whole point
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I love this one, too bad Club Soda is hardly an option, quite like the real life version.
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>>47744262
>time loop

what if you're living in jail? LOL you're gonna get fucked.

>Reincarnation
good luck living as a fucking insect

>Transferal

go fucking die when there's no living beings left

>Perpuation

Get fucked when you're paused

my god, all of this is just pure shit. Atleast make an option where we get to reincarnated in a fantasy world
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>>47744527
>>47744545
>>47744555
>>47744565

So confusing, make it like others man, like from up to down, That thing makes me dizzy
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>>47745601
Luck is either hit or miss, both Charisma and No sleep are amazing, but I'll have to take the "only read something once and able to perfectly recall it"
>Lemon-Lime
At least I only have to drink it once.
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Welp ea conference is over guess it's time to go back to work on OC might even get it out before the annual Todd posting starts up
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>>47745647
The Isles CYOA has been that way for a long while, and many variations.
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>>47745605
>good luck living as a fucking insect
Then you die and live as something else.

I was thinking that reincarnation was one of the the few choices that was remotely palatable.
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>>47745605
Enjoy
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>>47745716
>You may ask, "How did this tradition get started?"
>I'll tell you!
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>>47745605
Sorry, I didn't save the whiny bitch CYOA for you.
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>>47744907

-Mammalian (like werewolf)
-Increased Strength
-Increased Defense
-Increased Speed
-Regeneration

Drawbacks & Mission
-Budget Rangers +2
-Magical Girl Team +3
-Nosy Reporters +1
-Infiltration +2

Boss Perks
-Enhanced Strength
-Enhanced Defense
-Enhanced Speed
-Enhanced Regeneration
-Band of mooks (Free)

imma use my band of mooks to rape the little magical girls you know blackmailing them, (all anime girls can't do shit once they got blackmail kinda like those shitty NTR manga)
and told the mooks to kill the rangers, wear their uniforms, then kill the reporters in PUBLIC. so that the knew it was the ranger's fault. If magical girl's blackmailing failed. imma use the ranger as a distraction so that it will be magical girls vs power rangers. Fuck. It's going to be great.
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>>47745767
this one's good, thanks god bless
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>>47745601
Cherry soda. I really need luck right now.
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hey guys, what are unique classes for a fantasy CYOA?
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>>47745986
Arithmetician
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If someone could make a nice CYOA about Warhammer ( Sigmar ), I would be gratefull.
I have already done the one that was posted here lots of times.
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>>47745986
Sewage Constructor/Epidymologist
Gynocologist(with specialization in Succubi)
Teacher
Scribe
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>>47745986
Moon Knight
Rune Monk
Dualist
Undine
Star Lancer
Steam Warrior
Demonic Rogue
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>>47745819
Wasn't there one with like 3 options?
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>>47745986
Rider
Lancer
Avenger
Shielder (using dual shields)
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>>47746214
>moon knight

KEK
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>>47745986
Stuff that's setting specific, like zombie turtle cavalry, or a "paladin" that uses a type of blood magic from a god of live, fertilitty and carnal pleasures.
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>>47745986
I like Alchemists, Gunslingers, Illusionists, Fallen Paladins, Swordmasters (just some dude really good with swords), Witch/Wizard (occultism and curses).

I think you can choose almost any topic and make a nice class out of it with some creativity, like a knight based around constellations, detective-type about tracking and noir stuff or berserker with rape powers.
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>>47745986
>Beast Tamer
Yes, it's common in fantasy games but it's extremely rare in fantasy cyoas.
>Artificer
Basically a glorified wizard smith, but sometimes very cool.
>Golemancer
Necromancers and summoners are common, but golemancers are not.
>Onmyodo
Special kind of japanese exorcist that's pretty fucking interesting but barely ever seen in cyoas.
>Ninjas
Good luck finding one of these fellas in a fantasy cyoa. Closest you can get is a rogue but they don't come with Ki manipulation powers and martial arts.
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>>47745986
Peasant
Pauper
Poor
Live Bait
Dragon Layer (no, there's not supposed to be an S there)
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>>47746268
If you like Alchemists on the battlefield, look up dragon's dogma online. It combines them wiith the monk to make them a status effect based tank.

Heck, that franchise hasgreat class systems in general.
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>>47745986
Battleship
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>>47746324
>not Apache attack helicopter

Fucking cis-scum.
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>>47746316
Just watched a video, looks fucking radical, you never see alchemist beating shit like that.
Shield Sage sounds good too.
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>>47746300
>Ninjas

Are they that rare in CYOAs? I've always liked the Final Fantasy ninjas that had elemental ninjutsu. That reminds me that Final Fantasy Tactics A2 and the Bravely Default games are a good source of some neat classes.
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>>47746349
Helicopters are too OP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xFxrzSrVv0I&t=35s
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>>47746395
Shield Sage was better in the First game, you could turn into a magic gatling gun.
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>>47745986
Potato
Background Character
Australian

All I got.
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>>47746316
I just looked it up, and Element Archer is just like one of the typical builds I make for my waifu.
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>>47745986
I do have an unfinished cyoa about fantasy classes lying around, but unfortunately I won't get to my PC for the next hours.
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>>47746398
Yes, you're lucky to find a battlemage in a fantasy cyoa let alone a ninja. It's really hard to balance mages - warriors - rogues and somehow ninjas are somewhere in between all 3 of them which makes it even harder.
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>>47746515
That's mostly non-sense mysticism. Ninjas are more of a sub-class to rogues/assassins or a local variety thereoff.
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>>47745986
Always found the idea of the Synthesist from pathfinder interesting despite never actually having had a chance to play one. The whole summon things to fuse with is an interesting take on a summoner.
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>>47745986

Semen Demon
Fluid Druid
Jizz Wizard
Cum Conqueror
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>>47746557
Seriously, you don't need all those different ones when the first you mentioned is already the best. But you did give me an idea. Imagine a lewd CYOA with a bunch of different sex classes like that.
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>>47745986
From Bravely Second
Catmancer
Exorcist
Hawkeye
Patissier
Merchant
Performer
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>>47746542
Depends on the type of ninja, but they are usually more martial arts based than assassins which tend to be 1 HKO types. KI based skills, often elemental, also gives them access to a form of magic. They basically dabble in all 3 base archtypes although do they lean most to the rogue/assassin side. That doesn't make balancing them easy though.
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>>47746557
Spunk Monk
Seminal Sentinel
Semen Summoner
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>>47746585
I'd gently fuck this idea.
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>>47745986
merchants are all too rare
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I already picked the classes I'm using, thanks for the responses guys.
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>>47746557
Cock Sock
Cum Dump
Lew Lieutenant
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>>47746656
Which ones? Don't tease us like that.
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Making a simple CYOA that's just "pick X perks from a list of Y"
there will be 24 perks total

what feels like a good number of choices? thee?
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>>47746719
I think it should have thou.
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>>47746727
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>>47746398
>>Ninjas
>the Bravely Default games are a good source of some neat classes.

Catmancer here desu. I'll fuck your shot up with the help of my friendly cats who for some reason can do all kind of special attacks.


I wonder what new jobs they'll add for bravely third.
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>>47746719
It really depends on the perks and how broadly applicable they are.
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>>47746719
Depends. How good is each perk?
"You can generate one cute doggo picture a day" 6+ perks
"You can move shit with your mind" 6- perks
"Satan is your assrape slut" 1-2 perks
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>>47746719
>>47746727
I'm fond of Ye
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>>47746689
Have to keep it a secret.

It'll be better when the CYOA comes out.
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>>47746774
ranges from making voodoo dolls to becoming an expert negotiator to being able to see well in darkness or blinding light.

So I'm guessing five, or so.
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>>47746834
>turns out it's just Arithmethician
>Arimethician CYOA
>also pick waifu-versions of historic Mathematicians
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>>47746639
>Super Novice

Fucking, Japan.

>>47746680
>Cock Sock
Absolute toppest tier, tbqh.
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>>47745426
i don't have it but i'm also interested
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>>47746898
If you wouldn't fuck Gauss you can just get right the fuck out of this thread right now.
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>>47746906
It's Korean?
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>>47746898
So we'd get a bunch of faux-geeky waifus who've all been gangbanged by warriors and bards, and now pretend to be shy nerds because their biological clock is ticking and they need to catch themselves a mage provider.
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>>47746834
Now I'm going to be up all night wondering if you picked one of mine.
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>>47746906
Korea, actually.
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>>47746920
Serious question, why people say Gauss is so great?
I don't see why he would be more important or impressive ou influent than Euler for instance.
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>>47746906
>Fucking, Japan.

IIRC, some people liked to play as the novice rather than upgrading to one of the other classes like you're supposed to, so they made a novice+ class for them. also it's korean.
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>>47746898
>historic Mathematicians

So most of them would be middle-eastern waifus?
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>>47746585
I don't think it's been done yet so you could have at it if you want.
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>>47745767
>>47745785
Oh boy, and I just finished bio soldier CYOA

>arthropod (Xenomorph style)
>increased strength
>increased speed
>increased defence
>Enhanced senses

Drawbacks
>budget rangers
>magical girl team
>dark hero
>nosey reporters
>exposure

Boss Perks
>enhanced strength
>enhanced speed
>enhanced defence
>enhanced regeneration
>napalm breath
>vibro blade (vribro whip tail)
>shadow step
>band of mooks

DEF SS
SPE S
STR A

and for the Faerie

Companions
>Blossom (Blossom a cute I say, A CUTE.)
>an old friend (come my minions rise for your master)

Adventurers
>none

Nations
>skylands

Locations
>sky pirate

Contacts
>swift flyer
>elemental lance
>first mate

Drawbacks
>hostile hostiles, The Ardent Flyer
>hostile hostiles, House of Roses
>hostile hostiles,The Rogue Tower
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>>47747015
Tasty brown al-Khwarizmi waifu
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>>47746898
That would need Zhou Bi Suan Jing and Pythagoras next to one another with the main differences being ethnicity and age.
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>>47747015
And Greek, English, German, Italian, Russian. There are a lot of mathematicians.
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What makes a cyoa memorable? What makes a cyoa actually good?
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>>47747213
>What makes a cyoa memorable?

Unique capacity for lewd.

>What makes a cyoa actually good?

Not needing to rely on obvious lewds for the above. Anons tend to be a thirsty breed, but make them creatively earn it and they'll love you. Or just make another slut life.
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>>47747213
>What makes a cyoa memorable?

The writing and characterization really, it has to be spot on, concise enough to fit in one or two maybe three sentences per option but detailed enough for autistic players to put all the pieces together like a puzzle when they read between the lines. This keeps them hooked.

And the most important aspect of a good cyoa is inherent tribalism. There has to be competing factions that the players can identify and be part of, forming the cornerstone of their escapist narrative that shapes everything else.

Other then that, waifuable and non waifuable companions are a must.
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>>47746595
>catmancer
>not nekomancer
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>>47740429
Lost out due to timezones again. Oh well...
Cross-thread links suck.

MELODY:
Take a melody, simple as can be. Give it some words and sweet harmony~

Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - We are your friends! You'll never be alone again!
Surveillance - I am going to play harsh noise music for the camerabots and you will like it.

Lessons - Despite loving music, I have zero talent. So.

Video - Because I know today has been the most perfect day I've ever seen... Anyway, I think this is the most useful during concerts.

Voice Mic - I'm gonna be the next Mike Patton!

Bonus - Good way to compose music. I'll take the Instrumental Dress, 'cause instruments are fucking expensive.

Ranks: #2, between Jeanne and Harmony.
I REALLY like music, and I've always wanted to be a famous and talented performer.


FALCHION:
Minna, miteite kure!

Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - ONE PUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNCH! ...That's how it works, right?
Surveillance - I can edit it into a training montage!

Whip into Shape - I mean, otherwise I'm gonna be a lamb to the slaughter.

Lock On - Stops at the affected area and immediately dissolves!

Coat of Arms - Hey, kid, wanna buy a sword?

Bonus - Owie. Well, okay... Divine Radio sounds nice. Hopefully it's not b& in Valhalla.

Ranks: #22, between Lillan and Saki. I'm a lover and I am also not a fighter. There, now it's logically correct. Plus, I'm really sensitive to injury...
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>>47745986
King
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>>47745986
Cannibal.
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>>47747584
That reminds me of one of my favorites: the Princess from Etrian Odyssey.
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>>47745986
Proletariat
Bourgeousie
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reminder that Bumpsy is the best choice
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>>47746639
>Geneticist
"Lo! Your father is not truly your father!"
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>>47747526
Yeah, you always seem to be a thread late.
The Divine Radio is perfectly acceptable in Valhalla... in the right sort of events. You could get a fighter jet for the dogfight competitions or join a tank battalion in a group. Airstrikes are allowed in certain modern warfare events. Huh, weird how these were almost at the top and the bottom of your list.
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>>47747650
this is fucking aces
Ether Rex all the way
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>>47747697
That's because I'm living in China right now...

so timezones aren't exactly optimal.

I should be going back to America soon, though.
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>>47747650

>not rocking ether rex for consistent misses and crits
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>>47747639
He said fantasy, comrade, not real life.

>>47747707
How are things in Ching-Chong Land?
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>>47747753
Nobody pays attention to traffic lights, the sky is colored white, the government has blocked Tumblr but oddly not 4chan or Reddit, and everyone boils water before drinking it due to water quality.

I just want a cold drink...
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>>47745986
Radical
Groovy
Brutal
Gnarly
Metal
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>>47747650
>>47747704
>>47747719
>Not Samantha
Similar bonuses, but better-rounded, less speschul snowflake, and waifu potential.
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>>47747704
>>47747719
>>47747807
One-Shot Johnny fucks over all of you. Unmatchable speed coupled with maximum attack means you niggas will never hit me.
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>>47747833
Bumpsy is literally your hard counter.
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>>47747862
One-Shot Johnny has more speed, thus Bumpsy can't keep up.
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>>47747833
>>47747885

Ether Rex has 170% luck.
Let's be real about this folks... He's got crits and dodge checks nailed.
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>>47747833
You're faster by half a bar, if Bumpsy is chasing you then he's behind you, hydrodynamics dictate that you're forced to endure more drag and turbulent flow then Bumpsy and thus you're unable to utilize your full speed.
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>>47747956
You having trouble finding the next page or something? Let me fill it in.
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>>47748055
>>47748074
Not him, but thanks a lot.
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>>47748106
No problem. You're welcome.
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I wonder if there is going to be even more goddesses added.
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>>47745986

Something languages/linguistics related, like a rune master
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>>47748253
Do not pick this fucking box.
Don't you dare pick it.
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>>47748266
To late
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>>47744907
>Arthropod

>Increased Defence
>Increased Speed
>2x Bio Laser

>Great Devourer
>Rape
>Dark Hero

>Enhanced Defence
>Enhanced Speed
>Shadow Step
>Enhanced Regeneration
>Band of Mooks

I see it as some sort of boogey man endurance hunter, using its band of mooks, toughness, speed, teleportation and regeneration to battle or pursue its opponent until they simply cannot fight any longer and it kills them. Against the dark hero the battle will probably consist of jumping and teleporting everywhere firing lasers. If the hero does somehow wound me I will just teleport and/or flee to safety while my mooks keep him busy so I can heal.
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>>47747650
Big Crimson or Zippy Smalls for me.
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>>47748266
But Goddess wills it, anon!
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>>47748055
I started posting it, but loading the image took forever and my kettle started whistling and I just forgot about everything else.
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>>47748338
I just realized throughout Yaweh's profile there is no mention of he/she/him/her in it.
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>>47748437
There's an image right there.
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>>47748266

DEUS VULT!
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>>47745426
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>>47748266
The only real waifu in the entire CYOA.
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>>47748488
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>>47748266
You better believe I'd choose the option that invalidates the majority of the CYOA.
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>>47748528
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>>47748437
It's "Pick a Goddess" and The Four Letter Word is an option. Clearly that means she's a she.
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>>47748535
>Invalidates the majority of the cyoa.
>Yaweh allows the other deities to continue to exist and be real.
>Italics said you can ignore the mystery box entirely as it's an add-on and other stuff.
Come on anon.
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>>47748554
>can ignore the mystery box entirely
Can, but I won't.
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>>47748554
>implying I can calm down when someone's being wrong on the internet
>implying I'm not too autistic to accept a figment of the imagination can be a legitimate person in a fantasy world.
>implying I'm not too autistic to ignore the mystery box when it's provided
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>>47748554
>Be real
No, they're fake imaginary figments.
>Ignore the mystery box
Doesn't make it non-canon
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>>47747471

>Magical
>Beyond Human
>Military

>Focus 2 (free because Magical)
0
>Endurance 3
3
>Durability 3
6
>Immunity 3
9
>Directed Energy Attack 3
12
>Self Healing 3
15
>Strength 1
16
>Passion 1
17
>Self Improvement 2
19
>Flight 1
20
>Agility 3
23
>Enhanced Senses 1
24
>Stealth 1
25
>Reflexes 3 (3 because Valuable)

>Training (free because Military)
>Unique Weapon (magical melee weapon like lightsaber, powered by my passion)
>Armour (stylish armour)
>Reputation (known for being kind but very emotional and passionate by coworkers)
>Prime Subject (free because Fiona)

>Samuel Mason
>Yuito Kataoka
>Fiona Dawley

>find book of magic in old library
>start learning simple magic only to discover it's owned by ancient magical being
>mysterious being offers to help make me super powerful sorceress in exchange for favors
>military notices me because magic has changed my appearance
>military decide I'm valuable and capture me
>they destroy book and owner (prime subject)
>forced to work for military instead of magical benefactor
>kick butt of evil terrorist groups with help from Samuel and Yuito
>do lots of good, but have trouble with public image because 9 feet tall with wings and have bitchy reporter trying to make me look bad
>will have to find a way to deal with annoying reporter, but unfortunately can't just kill her
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>>47745601
Root beer is objectively the best
Think of all the possibilities (the non-rapey ones)
Lemon lime comes a close second
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>>47744262
Reincarnation and 25 pizzas. I will be unstoppable. 100 toppings.
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>>47745601
Lemon-Lime

Time to become a scientist hellbent on achieving immortality.
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>>47746639
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>>47747471
>Mutagen
>Inhuman
>Renegades

Abilities
>Natural Weapon 1
>Self Healing 3
>Adaptability 3
>Extra Limbs 1
>Strength 2
>Durability 3
>Agility 2
>Endurance 2
>Reflexes 1
>Weapon Mastery 3
>Unarmed Mastery 3
>Stealth 2
>Enhanced Senses 1
>Power Burst 3
>Natural Toxin 3
>Immunity 2
>Flight 1

Perks
>Bootcamp
>Armour
>Authority
>Defector (Free)

Allies
>Ryan Elmore
>John York
>Big Mike
>Satan

Enemies
>The Prototype
>Ghost

Drawbacks
>Toxic
>Pain
>Aging
>Valuable

The very best of the super soldier project and the very worst at the same time, I was created not to blend in or train future soldiers, simply to kill. The renegades liberated me from the laboratory where I was being held and now I hope to destroy the organization that created me for giving me this short and painful existence.
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>>47747956
>>47748074
How the hell am I supposed to pick any of the lewd tiddy witches when Skala is sitting there crying like that
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God damn it I was hoping I could finish the expansion before the Bethesda conference.

Oh well should be able to finish and post it after the conference.
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>>47748946
>Implying there will be anything worthwhile there.
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>>47748957
yfw new elder scrolls game and its more slimmed down than fallout 4
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>>47748957
>implying I would miss out on my yearly dose of Todd posting
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>>47748978
It just works
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>>47748938
Well, you could get Dispersion Chalk. Have your fun with the lewd ones & if you get bored of that, you'll still have Za Warudo to do stuff with.
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>>47749019
How does her sister work though?
I'm assuming she lives by saving dead battery-kun from getting hit by a bus, but how is she even a choice then?
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>>47748266
I read the discussions about the box when it was posted days ago. So here's a new version that fixs the thing that generated those long discussions. Still working on Pokemon Personified, 0rder, and Spire.

This goddess cyoa will receive 4-6 new powers, new living areas, and some other updates to make the cyoa interesting after above projects are done. New goddesses to appear next update: Loki (Norse), Saga (Norse), and some exotic ones from mythologies less cared about.
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>>47749056
Well, time-travel is on the table. Skala could either save dad bus man or she could just prevent Piet from forming a bond with him in the first place. In the latter case, you can also choose Piet to get a matching pair of witches, if you want.
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>>47746639
What game is this?
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>>47749101
*dead bus man.
No, the guy in question doesn't have any children he left behind.
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>>47748946
Is there some reason for the multi-colored ribbon everyone seems to be wearing?
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>>47749163
If I had to guess they're all trying to suck up to gays because of Orlando.
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>>47749086
>Loki
Get ready to have some freaky kids.
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>>47749163
Like 50 people got killed at a gay club with about 53 more critically injured at a gay club earlier today.
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>>47749086
Aren't both versions equal....? The text in them, at least.
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>>47749192
Shit. That sucks.
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>>47749221
Check Voat for more info
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>>47749216
They are equal in text except one small part about the goddesses.
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>>47747956
>>47748055
>>47748074
>>47748089
I'm going to choose whoever gives me an opportunity for femdom and preferably an easier life.

Tina seems to be 100% femdom but if she doesn't get older? Pass.
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>>47749253
>>47749253
>>47749086
Is there even any meaningful change italic? In the end it's all the same~

I compared it btw, it's the same.After all we are also people italics.

It doesn't change anything.
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>>47749293
He changed it to say they are 'real' and removed the word figment.
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>>47749293
It's even worse
it said without people's imagination, they are not real in the first place, in this new box.
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>>47748933

>now I hope to destroy the organization that created me for giving me this short and painful existence

Pretty rough desu:( Will you do anything to try and cure yourself?
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>>47749278
Nah, she can age more.
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>>47749049
But I need that chalk to keep Piet alive otherwise Skala is just going to cry for eternity in a never ending time loop
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>>47748946
Thanks for that comment, Box. Had forgotten about it. Late by forty but fuck it.
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>>47749403
Why would you?
She was prevented from bonding in the first place, so she didn't die when she would've.
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>>47749403
Nah, there's no time loops. Once Piet is saved, she'll stay saved & Skala will never be able to time jump again.
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>>47748957
Well, they re-announced a new Prey.

Bad news, it looks way less interesting than space bounty hunters.
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>>47749427
>>47749430
Nah man time fuckery is never that clean.
Like the time Spiderman got god powers and used it to stop his uncle Ben from dying, then Ben just died again several times every day because the universe was wrong.
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>>47749483
Yeah? What about the time in Scooby Doo Mystery Inc. where all the killed people were unkilled after the whole world was saved and time starting going different? That was everything going well.
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>>47749086
Are you ever going to add back the Token amount for selecting 10+ Goddesses in Pantheon?
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Hey does anyone have the ASOIAF/GoT CYOA?
That one's pretty fucking neato.
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>>47749595
Yes. In time Anon.
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>>47749599
YOUR WISH IS ANSWERED
my wish is that you get better taste in fiction, though
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>>47749657
Thanks dude. Now I can get to the correct mind set since I'll be in an ASOIAF campaign.
Also, can't people like many different things rather than just one?
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>>47749695
Man that latest episode...
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>>47749695
>the correct mind set since I'll be in an ASOIAF campaign.

I do hope you're recreating that Taragaryan prostitute build for your game.
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>>47748191
>>47748212
>>47748233
>>47748253

I appreciate the work that was done on this one, but it's full of grammatical errors. If I were to make a proofread version would somebody typeset it?
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>>47749657
>>47749720

It's not my fault! I had to prostitute because slave! But I still found a way to use it to become Queen, so it wasn't all bad in the end.

>Girl in Kingdom of the Reach
>The Smile with Advanced Education -1 Blessing
>Animal Companion, Targaryen Blood, Touched By Magic, Grace And Beauty, and Valar Morghulis -4 Blessings
>Ashara Hewett
>Chains and Without A House +2 Blessings

>be long lost Targaryen who inherited unhatched dragon egg
>get captured and sold into slavery, but not before burying dragon egg
>get training to be pleasure slave and learn how to manipulate people
>escape and dig up dragon egg
>bump into Ashara and convince her of my royal heritage, might be easier after dragon egg hatches
>marry somebody with a army who wants to be king and would have better claim if they married a Targaryen, here's where the smile might help
>Valar Morghulis my biggest rival (probably Dany)
>raise dragon to be big and use it to help in quest
>take over with army and dragon and become Queen
>feed husband to dragon and take charge, proclaim myself Empress
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>>47750122

Forgot pic.
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>>47748191
Hastur a cute.

>Increased Endurance
>Urban Living
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>>47749657
>Region
Beyond the Wall
>Profession
Higher Education, The Blade
>Gifts
Tools of the Trade
Giants Blood
Targaryan blood
Touched By Magic
Animal Companion
>Curses
Wanted
Without a House
>Companion
Corton Penrose
>We should have acted.
They are already here. The legends told of their return. Their defeat, was merely a delay. Until the time after Valyria fell. When the sons of the North would spill their own blood. But no one wanted to believe. Believe they even existed. And when the winds of truth finally came... they were winds of winter. But! There is one they fear. In their tongue, he is Dovahkiin. Dragonborn!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UsnRQJxanVM [Open]

After my mother revealed the truth to me about my heritage, and the strange stone she had given me, everything fell to pieces. My clan was slaughtered for mixing blood with kneelers with everything I knew in that seaside town burned to the ground. Alone and hated in the frozen North, I might have died, yet some fire kept me alive in the snow and ice. Corton tells me it is the fire of the Lord of Light, I have no reason not to believe him but I cannot know for sure. What I am sure of, is that THEY are coming, and they would see us all dead by winters end. The Kneelers and Crows will not save us, they are fat and coddled. We must seize our destiny with fire and blood, as my ancestors once did across the sea. First, we will turn back the tide of the Others and bring a dawn to the Long Night. Then, once our children and our women are safe at our hearths, we ride South.
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Well now's as good a time as any I suppose.

1/6
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>>47750355
2/6
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>>47750355
>Box please mortal man was not ready for this
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>>47750370
3/6
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>>47750374
well its a good thing you're all immortal in my heart

>>47750386
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>>47750404
Can I be immoral in your heart?
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>>47750404
huh apparently i can trigger (you) by posting fro a different tab, learn something everyday I suppose.
5/6
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>>47750355

Is this new update?

>>47750280

Kneelers?! Who you calling kneelers barbariancousin!!!
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>>47750444

Meant to spoiler "cousin".....
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Rolled 1, 15, 9, 6, 11, 7, 6, 20, 8, 16, 16 = 115 (11d20)

Page 6?
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>>47750432
Thought I would use this time to talk on some stuff relating to hero academy.

So about the new page, clubs are desined to be very vauge and openended much in the same way as events. If none of the ideas listed suit your fancy I highly suggest and encourage you to make up your own club and just categorize under either sports, education, arts, or culture (this is purely for book keeping purposes on my end.) Drawbacks are pretty self explaintory so I won't go musch into them unless asked

As for future content the next planed is not one but two brand new schools, one will be desert/arabian themed academy the other will be a school themed after the Vatican. I would love to hear what kinda of classes and companions you would like to see in these new schools.

As always leave critiques and comments on the new page or the cyoa in general at your leisure. I rally hope you all enjoy the new page!
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>>47748014
If you're ever on the defensive as One Shot Johnny you're doing it wrong.
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>>47750522
As if any St. Flare worm would be allowed into Lunestier.
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>>47750355
>>47750370

>School
Lunestier

>Classes
0/12
Martial Combat-2
Tactics-3
Physical Training-2
Smithing-2
Diplomacy-3

>>47750386
>>47750404

>Companions
Sera
Eloise Avery
Chandara
Suzette Highking

>>47750432
I kinda wanna take all of the events over my years

>>47750522
Student Government+Disciplinary Squad

Bookworm
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>>47750522

Is Vatican theme school going to be nice and pure or like smitey?
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>>47750522
>Drawbacks that allow anon to drop companions for classes

Oh boy, may the obnoxious min-maxing begin.
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>>47750522
Time to murder all my friends for gains.
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>>47750522
>Drawbacks
Now we're talking. Who needs friends, anyway?
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>>47750588
>>47750589
As I've stated before Hero Academy is part 1 of a cyoa trilogy, which companions you did or didn't have will be reflected in parts two and three so ditching companions has some risk attached to it

>>47750581
bit of column A bit of column B
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>>47750522
>>47750549
So what is the schools policies on students from rival schools challenging each other to duels?
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>>47750631
also you can only lose like 2 friends so its not that big of a deal
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>>47750631
>Risk
I'm sure, but it's better to be able to protect yourself, I feel.
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>>47750631
>I only dropped one friend
>Who I picked up because I didn't want an All-female party, and needed a Master of Tactics
>But if I dropped him I could Master Tactics and Diplomacy.


I'm not sure how to feel about the fact all my friends are girls. I wasn't even trying to Waifu Build. I just got a Cleric, a Healer, a Rogue, and the Hero-style Noble who is also a powerful Mage.

Balance Party ahoy
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>>47750638
it's generally accepted as long as both parties are consenting and it doesn't distract from a students studies

Of course killing each other is a no-no but accidents do happen.
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>>47750669
How suspicious will two 'accidents' be? I rolled two really evil characters for my Blind Dates, Damia and Kara'Tee, and I feel like the world will be a better place if I can off them at school.
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>>47750669
Yes, accidents. It's not my fault that snooty Lunester types were too busy studying courtly manners instead of their sword work.
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>>47750588
Welcome to my world. Just like that other CYOA which gives points for killing companions.
>No shame, no fame.
>Mfw Ej Har
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>>47750692
Depends on your naritive brah
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>>47750692
How is Kara'Tee evil? I can sort of understand Damia with her whole Fallout style neutrality. But Kara'Tee does not kill every mage, only evil ones. At worst she is just slightly racist/magist? against mages. Thats not that bad. Especially because of her past.
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>>47750692
>Damia, Kara'Tee
>evil

In what world?
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>>47750522
I am disappointed there's no way for me to use guns in this quest despite bombs, airships and other crazy stuff being around.
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>>47750724
Mage Slaughterers are the worst of Uzuza's hatred and evil.

>>47750730
See above for Kara'Tee, and Damia's entry says she goes out of her way to destroy the rich no matter what they believe or how they act to enforce absolute neutrality. She's basically acting like a rabid Communist.
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>>47750631
>As I've stated before Hero Academy is part 1 of a cyoa trilogy, which companions you did or didn't have will be reflected in parts two and three so ditching companions has some risk attached to it
What! I didn't know this now I'm super hyped.
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>>47750777
>Mage Hunters = Evil

At best, Uzuza refuses to use magic and views it as potentially dangerous. It doesn't state that they hunt every mage. You're being dumb about this and assuming things that weren't even remotely explained.
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>>47744262

Lets go with Digitalization (-6)
I wouldn't say the biggest downside is getting stuck in a toaster. Its that your new existence is completely different from your old one. With only sight and sound being familiar every other input would be new. How does it feel to be clicked?

Self Destruct (-3)
Might not be strictly necessary. Even if you get trapped in a computer with no internet access you could shut down most computers, problem is if you get trapped in something with no I/O that keeps itself online. Then you're trapped as long as the power source lasts.

Never Alone (-8)
You pretty much need this or Pull the Plug with a lot of these. Lasting past the heat death of the Universe and then some is something I'd rather avoid.

Pull-The-Plug (-3)
Even if there will always be something to connect to I'd rather always have the option. Always assume that full eternal immortality has some downsides.

Death's Number (-5)
Death's a pretty cool guy. Plus if anyone could help me get in touch with other immortals it'd probably be him.

Sadly this leaves me no points left over to spend on Training. So it will take a while to develop the skills to pretend I'm a Vocaloid.
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>>47750852
Suspicion, paranoia, and hatred are hallmarks of Uzuza's stance on magic.
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>>47750355
Name: Azioth Uhra
Clubs: Cultural Club (Mage-Armour Enthusiasts)/Education Club (Magitech Engineering)
Drawbacks: Bookworm
School: Odesium
Class: Mage Armourx3/Divine Artsx3/Enhancementx3/Knowledge (Magitech Engineering)x3

>Born to a obscure family of clockmakers and tinkerers
>A tragic airship accident left her orphaned and crippled
>Devised her own prosthetic limbs to get around and windup toys to keep her company
>claim that her toys spoke to her during her darkest hours, revealing wonderful secrets and magnificent truths
>finally recognized for her craftsmanship and invited to attend Odesium, when word got around that her clockworked toys rebuilt the crumbling orphanage after suffering a fire
>invests her faith in a higher power, the Father of Machines patron god of all artifice and artificers
>She believed this invitation was a gift from the Great Father, who deemed her worthy to ascend from flesh to metal, to create wondrous masterpieces to venerate his name
>feel constantly uneasy and nauseous for living and studying on a airship academy, not fully shaken off the childhood trauma from all those years ago

Companions:
Tarkun Ironstout/Eloise Avery/Bathsheba/Znanje

>Form a think tank
>Tarkun is our chief combat and warfare specialist, testing/sparring against new mage-armour models and artifice gadgets. When given the chance study her dwarven weapons and incorporate the near indestructible alloy in all armour models.
>Eloise's surgical expertise and medical knowledge will be invaluable for cybernetic augementation.
>Help Znanje with her classes and bounce ideas and design philosophies off her, she will be my closest friend and research colleague.
>sympathize with Bathseba's situation. Study her AI and artificial brain architecture.

Continued.
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>>47750865
Yeah they don't like mages. But they don't kill and burn every mage they come across. Otherwise they wouldn't be able to participate in any inter school events. Mage hunters may be dicks and think mages are bad, but that doesen't mean they kill them. At most probably they get a mean look or bad words. And Kara'Tee has a good reason since her family was killed by a mage.
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>>47750631

>bit of column A bit of column B

I, for one, would like very smitey while still being very holy.
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>>47750865
Suspicion? Definitely.

Paranoia? For some, possibly.

Hatred? Post the actual line where Uzuza is known for hating magic.

Hell, considering how the Pen Pal drawback allows you to get a magic companion with an Uzuza background, that pretty much kills your point.
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>>47750880
Year 1: Fund Raising
Year 2: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Mage Armour nanomachines)
Year 3: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Cybernetic augmentation)
Year 4: Fund Raising/Research Proposal (Artificial neuro-networked architecture)
Year 5: Battle Royal

>Spend four years raising funds, set up a booth for repairing and maintaining various machinery and rudimentary mage-armours, from there accumulate enough funds to start up a company/workshop/research facility.

>From second year and on wards, create and sell small trinkets, toys, tools and mage-armour components at discount prices to all students, with spyware installed to gather combat, magic and ki data
>At the same time, I should have a sufficient comprehension of engineering theory and the technical skill to develop microscopic mage-armours as a prove of concept for the first research proposal demonstration. "In the beginning, The Great Father forged the primordial engine from the void. And with a spark the multiverse began."

>By year 3, Eloise should have mapped out the human neurological system and we should have developed direct working nerve-mage armour USB prototype, have her augment one of my own crippled limbs as a proof of concept for the second research proposal. "Father of Machines! Your filigree gaze carves us and the scars dance upon our grateful flesh."

>By year 4, Bathsheba's AI is solved and we have developed a basic working AI architecture for the third research proposal. "Child of artifice, divine by creation, beautiful in function and perfect in form."

>By year 5, all magitechnologies developed are sufficiently refined and integrated into combat ready Mage-armour nanomachine bodies for Battle Royal under all events. "Let weak feed upon weak, that we may divine the nature of strength."
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>>47750522
Well you might as well increase the base points and companions by 1. Bookworm and Social Butterfly aren't mutually exclusive. I guess you're giving up exchange program and pen pal, but that could be handled more elegantly than getting to the end and having to re-do your build.

As for the other schools, the vatican one should probably have an ancient and obscure knowledge course, with the vatican library and all. Call it Applied Semiotics, to tie in to all the Da Vinci coding. Take it to have bizarre and applicable knowledge about how to stop cultists, where the hidden map is leading you, and the cultural habits of long lost tribes. Anything that would fall under Indiana Jones Archeology.

Exorcism would be a good idea as well. Shut down spirits, break curses, etc. Sort of a less combat focused anti magic build, compensating with a greater area (but not necessarily overlapping) of affect.

As for companions, some bishop's bastard would be good, along with Joan of Arc. I would suggest not having a Paladin type, since you can find those in the general list. But something Jesuitesque and maybe a spy of some kind should work well. You don't go to Vatican school to beat people up, you go there to learn and talk your way through challenges. The church doesn't lead armies, it leads nations.

I don't have any thoughts on the middle eastern one, there's not enough to go on at the moment. What angle are you going for?
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>>47750910
There's never a good excuse to slaughter others without cause.
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>>47750355

I like the drawbacks. They fill out the character and do as much good as bad, so the're hardly drawbacks at all. And idea for churchy school is good to. I see Beri and SDA in there, are there other cyoa authors included?

Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)

>Lunestier

>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Maneuvers x2

>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed

>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard

>Art/Music
>Paranormal Research

>Bookworm

I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.

Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.

Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
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>>47750355
>Silas Underwood

St Flares

Druidism x3
Survival x3
Traps x3
Unholy Arts x1

Trap Catcher
Sorte
Kaerulaus
Sera

The Great Hunt x4
Security x3
Blind Date x1

Cultural Clubs (Gardening)

Exchange Program

I'm super glad you made the ability to get some classes from another school. Always had the idea for a dark druid.

One question though, does exchange program mean one level of a class at another school, or the ability to take all three tiers of that class?
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>>47750932
Nothing in the CYOA states that they slaughter others without cause. You're literally accusing the school of shit that isn't even there.
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>>47750355
So what's society and technology like in this CYOA setting?
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>>47750355
Updated my build. I like the drawbacks, I was making a bookish character anyway and really didn't like how few classes I got (I can understand it, though).

>Name: Arisath Norwind
>School: Lunestier
>Bookworm 2
Son of a moderately well off merchant, I got a scholarship to Lunestier due to me natural talent with magic.

>Arcane Magic 3
>Illusions 3
>Refinement 3
>Knowledge (Magical Theory) 3
>Diplomacy 2
Im the best at what I do: graceful, refined Arcane Magic.

>Malyvin
He seems like he'd be a good friend, smart, but also ready to sit back and relax.
>Valerie Bluewood
I can see her trying to get me to take classes in dueling, and even trying to train me herself.
>Suzette Highking
She'd be more of the "popular rival" type. I can picture going over each others Arcane and Refinement homework and pointing out flaws, and as a result we both do even better. She gets the recognition, though, because she's royalty.

Year 1:
>Escort
I'm going to try to bind the ghost into a mannequin or something so that her existence persists. Fuck oblivion.
Year 2:
>Basilisk Den
I'll spend this fall and the next two falls trying to work to undermine the Basilisk Den.
>Blind Date (1/1, Sorte)
They set me up with Sorte to try to get me out of the dorm. It worked, it was a nice evening and I guess I could go to parties and such.
Year 3:
>Basilisk Den, Research Proposal
The next three winters will be used to refine and present a method of using subtle illusions to enhance the body's shock from arcane magic damage, allowing a clean kill with relatively little damage.
Year 4:
>Basilisk Den, Research Proposal
Year 5:
>Research Proposal

>Educational Club (Magical Studies Club)
Because I'm spending 85+ percent of my time here studying magic, why not join a club for it?
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>>47750355
>Still didn't fix the grammar mistakes
You're welcome, I guess?
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>>47750355
Thanks for adding drawbacks. I sorely needed them.

>Uzuza

>Mage Hunters - Master
>Physical Training - Advanced
>Unarmed Combat - Advanced
>Ki Attunment - Advanced
>Maneuvers - Advanced
>Berserking - Advanced
>Teamwork - Basic

>Chandara
>Sera
>Malyvin

>Battle Royal x2: 2v2
>Security
>Bodyguard x4

>Disciplinary Squad
>Bookworm x2

Someone's gotta make sure these mages don't get too big for their britches.
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>>47750986
>You're literally accusing the school of shit that isn't even there.
First time for one of these, eh?
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>mfw I forgot the characters I've made
>mfw I didn't save them

Guess I gotta do them again.
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>>47750355
I've made builds for Odesium, Ej Har and Lunestier. Might as well do one for St. Flares while I'm here.

>Classes
Martial Combat
Ranged Combat
Blue Magic x2
Teamwork
Maneuvers
Survival x2
Monster Hunting

>Companions
Malyvin
Luvyna
Valerie Bluewood
Dax
Kit

>Events
Y1: Fund Raising
Y2: Security
Y3: Blind Date [rolled: Mecherath, my character is kind of creeped out]
Y4: Battle Royal
Y5: The Great Hunt, Escort

>Clubs
Sports Club

Name: May Carter

An orphan with a traumatic childhood yet an unbearably positive outlook on life, May seems to be suffering a delusion that she is the "protagonist." When asked what she is the "protagonist" of, she gets confused. Although she is somewhat dense, through what may be perhaps sheer luck she always seems to get into the most important and dangerous events, and always seems to walk out unscathed. It's almost like there's some sort of plot brewing, and she has a vague idea she's at the center.
Besides that, she is also known for having strangely-colored hair. Although students from other academies often point it out, nobody from St. Flares seems to ever notice.
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>>47750355
School: Odesium
Drawbacks: Bookworm x2 (-2 buddies, +4 classes)
Classes: Smithing x3 (3)
Arcane Magic x3 (6)
Mage armor x3 (9)
Enhancement x3 (12)
Explosives x2 (14)

Companions: Znanje
Farhat
Kengen

Events: Research proposal (year 1)
Battle royal (year 2)
The great hun (year 3)

AI research? sounds like a good proposal but im thinking more...advanced. What about working on what i'd like to term as a "metal gear"? something to end all wars? of course after the proposal there would have to be testing and finally a field trial against something BIG...
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>>4774848
Isn't Satan depicted as a servant of God who tests mortals in Megaten, while Lucifer is the Christian Devil?
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>>47751113
Essentially. Satan is usually Lawful in SMT, while Lucifer is usually the main Chaotic demon.
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>>47750355
Can magic refinement's efficiency be used to increase a spells power instead of casting it more times?
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>>47751030
I did but lost the progress when my power went out I was planning on redoing the grammar stuff later

>>47750927
Welp guess I can't balance for shit I'll fix up bookworm and social butterfly tomorrow
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>>47750370
What happens when I become friends with both Dax and Scal?
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>>47751217
You could just make bookworm and social butterfly mutually exclusive. It would make sense.
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>>47751217
Agreed with >>47751251
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>>47751217
Here's an idea instead of bookworrm granting you 2 class that you normally can take, how about allowing you to take one class four times instead of the normal 3? Because you're spend far more time studying for said class and developed an absolute mastery of the course material far beyond what it is required from you.

As for social butterfly I have an different idea, increase it to +3 or even +4 companions at the cost of only able of taking all classes at two levels.
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>>47750927

I like your ideas for Vatican school classes. I hope Boxy uses them.

But

>Joan of Arc
Not having a Paladin type

Pretty sure she's a paladin.
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>>47751305
No, fuck that, it's stupid.
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>>47750522
All companions should be organized by schools and be exclusive to that school
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>>47751388
>No, fuck that, it's stupid.
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>>47751359
Why is it stupid? Its just different flavors of drawbacks that isn't transferring points from one section to another.
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>>47751410
The idea of free floating companions that just happen to show up wherever you are is stupid. They're students, therefore they need to be enrolled somewhere.
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>>47748542
Thanks
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>>47750355
Hey, so would you consider it property stealing if I used Lunestier as a magical college in a CYOA I am making? Not meant to rip off, just as a reference.

Great CYOA by the way, if you don't mind me asking the magical schools accept almost any intelligent race, right?
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>>47751411
Because now you have to overspecialize even more and those of us that want broad experience are fucked over by the change.
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>>47751433
Eh i agree with the other anon. Neutral companion is a good choice to have. 3 of them are your childhood.

"Show up wherever" it's a story anon.
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>>47751433
The point is to give flexible canon and school experiences.
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>>47751456
But you can still have your broad experience in addition to a shit ton more life long companions.
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>>47751477
No I can't, because you removed the drawback that lets me take two more classes.

>Companions
Who the fuck cares? That's not experience and skills.
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>>47751489
Hoo so edgy, even though companion capable of teach you skills.
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>>47751499
Not as good as a class.
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>>47751518
Then box wine should just remove companions entirely, double the amount of courses you can take and just put in 20 or more classes.
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>>47751535
Just because I don't like companions doesn't mean I'm trying to spite you or criticize you for liking them, anon.
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>>47751577
Leaving bookworm as it is and making it and social butterfly mutually exclusive won't prevent everyone just taking double bookworm for the 4 extra classes.

That's still pretty unbalanced.
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>>47751620
Is it? I felt the number of classes is a little small as is, and I like the option. Isn't Social Butterfly more unbalanced then? It's +80% companions and -20% classes if taken twice as opposed to +40% classes and -40% companions for bookworm.
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>>47751655
He just wants to take 5 companions and is salty at the idea that others will have more skill points than him.
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>>47750355

Time for my Uzuza build.

>Classes
Unarmed Combat x3
Ki Attunement x3
Maneuvers
Berserking x3
Physical Training

>Companions
Kengen
Tarkun Ironstout
Trap-Catcher
Helena

>Events
Y1: Sports
Y2: Battle Royal
Y3: Sports
Y4: Battle Royal, Security
Y5; Sports

>Clubs
Sports Club, Disciplinary Squad

>Drawbacks
Bookworm (well, more like gym rat)

Name:
Simon Bronson

Simon was a very impressionable child. So impressionable, in fact, that when he read a pulp fiction novel about a legendary hero that "broke his limiter" and could take out all sorts of monsters in one punch, he aspired to be just like him, going as far to even dress like him. Ruthlessly training his body from a young age, he isn't quite as strong as his childhood hero, but hopes to be one day strong enough to effortlessly handle any great threat that comes his way
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>>47751703
Now that's a good person to look up to.
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>>47750697
Are you refering to titan lands?
I heard you cold get many points by killing companions there or something like that, someone said it was "min maxers haven".

But I read that CYOA before and I didn't remember this. So I read once again the files I had saved in my computer and still didn't find it.

If someone knows if such option was indeed included in the Titan Lands CYOA, can please tell me where to find it in the CYOA?
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>>47751655
Balance isn't about what you personally want, its to make sure all the options are equally relevant choices anon.

The problem here is mechanically don't offer you experience and skills like classes do, so classes have more intrinsic value then two companions. I don't understand how total percentage increases mean anything when you're looking strictly at utility and value.
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>>47750355
Tomas Womalski, Sky Captain

>Academy
Odesium

"The sky calls to me, and I shall answer!"

>Drawbacks
Bookworm (-1 Companion, +2 Classes that you could normally take)

"There's too much here to learn, I can't afford to waste a single moment!"

Pen Pal (-1 Class, +1 Companion from Another School)

>Classes
Knowledge (Engineering) x3
Airship Training x3
Mage Armor x3
Tactics

Extra Class: Arcane Magic

"I shall design the best airships to ever fly the skies of this world, and crew them with

magnificent technomagical constructs!"

>Companions
Eloise Avery (Healing, emergency melee combat)
Bathsheba (AI research, emergency melee combat)
Znanje (AI/Mage Armor Research buddy)
Jiel (Airship Research buddy)

Extra Companion: Cassiopeia (Ej Har, Necromancy/Spirit Binding, Artificial Constructs)
"Her study into the construction of artificial bodies and the binding of spirits thereunto

will be a great boon to our efforts in Mage Armor research!"

>Events
>Year 1
The Grand Summit - Research Proposal (New Methods in Airship Construction, with Jiel)

>Year 2
The Grand Summit - Research Proposal (Non-combat Uses of Mage Armor, with Znanje and

Bathsheba)

>Year 3
The Grand Summit - Research Proposal (Dispersed Management of Mage Armors, with Znanje and

Bathsheba)

>Year 4
The Grand Summit - Research Proposal (Exploring New Energy Sources for Airship Power, with

Jiel)

>Year 5
The Grand Summit - Research Proposal (On the Construction of Autonomous Mage Armors, with

Znanje and Bathsheba)
The Harvest Festival - Escort (Work with Cassiopeia, Bathsheba, and Znanje to create a Mage

Armor/Doll suitable for binding her soul to)
The Gathering of Life - Blind Date (Lunestier - Suzette Highking)

>Clubs
Educational Club (Engineering)
Art/Music Club (Choir)
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>>47747956
>Megan
>Spirit Potion
>Knitted Kitten

Every mundane day-to-day activity just got a lot more exciting.
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>>47751741
You argued >>47751499 earlier. It seems more like you're spiting people who focus on classes, rather than that you feel companions are actually worse.
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>>47751741
You don't see the value of two lifelong friends (Who are graduating from the same school, I might add, even if they are half as skilled as us they're bringing 5 classes worth of skill to the table) over proficiency in two skills or expertise in one?
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>>47751787
Sorry for the botched formatting.

Also, here's a picture
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>>47751787
>Blind Date (Lunestier - Suzette Highking)
Wow, what a roll. Suddenly princess!
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>>47751792
Because a lot of people are abusing double bookworm to get 12-14 classes? Because people in general value class far more then companions from a mechanical standpoint?

So the rational conclusion is social butterfly should offer more companions to compensate for the value discrepancy of losing one class?

If you don't like my idea for how bookworm works, that's perfectly fine. I'm just bouncing off ideas.
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>>47750522
Does Exchange Program only allow me to put one point into this one class, or can I put as many points into it as I can afford?
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>>47751887
I think those people are being a bit shortsighted, you rely on companions for a lot of the events, surely a few more classes of personal power doesn't make the difference of a whole body for that.
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>>47751887
>Using as intended
>Abuse
No, not how that works. If those people want to be loners good for them, but if you ever played a game, tabletop or video, then you know that two decently skilled opponents are harder to deal with than one greatly skilled opponents. You're ignoring entirely how beneficial it is to have a party.
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>>47751217
Hey box could you answer me here >>47751925 ?
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>>47750355
>teamwork
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>>47751933
Box even implied that sacrificing too many companions will bite you in the ass in the sequels.
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>>47751933
>>47751943
All I'm doing is looking at what people changed about their builds in the update and suggesting stupid suggestions to encourage people that are biased towards classes because they offer more intrinsic value to them as an individual to consider a take more companions. Its almost 2:30 am here and I'm drunk. Sue me.
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>>47746585
Kek, I felt the exact same way.
I'll wait and see what you did before I make mine.
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Almaxialia
Origin: Death of Saris | Mokresia Commoner
Tech Understanding: High
Skills, Perks, and Traits: Lucky, Educated, Martial Training, Runner, Adaptability, Memory, Foresight, Natural Physique, Sneak
Armor: Base Power Armor
Weapon: Talde, Stun Hammer, Flint Knife
Knick Knacks: Universal Timekeeper, Physical Formatting, Enhanced Occulatus, InvisiYUT Cloak, Leader Line, Low Level Adrig Manipulator, St. James Finger Bones, Traveller Markers
Little Things: That Guy, Your Best Friend, Tlysner, Wrath, Govna’s Dollas x 4
Faction: Commercialists
Companions: Luther, Syg, Durga Shah, D.B. Cooper
Home District: Pipeline 102
Hubworld: Dem-A1
Mission: Murder in the Night

Made a build to contain my hype for the upcoming update. Wanted to do a destined for great things, but I'm really tired and have work in the morning.
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>>47751986
I probably won't even take it, just Exchange program so I can diversify my build a bit.
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>>47751986
Ehh just make you can only take each drawbacks once then~ Isn't it easier?
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>>47750370
>>47750386
Reposting my build that has been expanded

Part 1

>Name: Alexandra Lannis
A noble whose mother hates her for the actions of her dead disgraced father who was revealed to be a demon worshiper and killed shortly after Alex was born. Since he was of lessor standing married into the family his secret brought them great shame and as a result killed him. He did manage to kill Alex’s grandfather and granduncle before being finished off by Alex’s Uncle. Almost all of Alex’s family dislikes or hates her and as a result Alex developed a hatred of arrogant nobles. Alex’s mother Samantha even tried to kill her once when she was 13 during an attack on her family’s vacation home. Samantha was about to run Alex through with one of the assassin’s swords but stopped because she was interrupted by her brother who didn’t realize what she was doing. Her mother however, doesn't know that Alex was awake and not passed out from her wounds during this. Her mother teaches magic at Lunestier and that is the main reason Alex ran away to Ej Har with help from her uncle Maximillian. Her uncle and his son are the only people in her family that she was close to.

>School: Ej Har Institute
She ran away to this school out of a combination of escaping her mother's influence and giving a big fuck you to her.

>Classes:
>Ki Attunment (x2)
>Blood Magic (x2)
>Unholy Arts (x2)
>Arcane Maigc (x3)
>Martial Combat (x1)
>Elemental Magic (x2) – From Bookworm

Raised to be a sorceress she is extremely talented and skilled in the magical arts. At Ej Har she discovered to have talent for Blood Magic. Chose to study Unholy Arts out of spite and out of desire to have some small connection to her father who she has very complicated feelings about. Like her father she worships the Blood God Curze whose domains are blood, passion, and violence. Her influence is what has made Alex’s blood run hot causing her to become wild by indulging in sex and fighting.
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>>47750669
Box.. you may have a typo in mage hunters..do you mean they are tired of mages or they are cautious about mages being a problem.

Weary = tired, fatigued
Wary = cautious, alert
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>>47752060
Part 2

>Companions:
>Chandara
>Scal
>Inas
>Sanyo

Making real friends for the first time has really changed Alex's outlook on life. She is deeply loyal to them. She and Scal bonded over their hatred of their families but unlike him she doesn’t care about revenge. Alex loves playing along with Inas and encouraged her to join the drama club.

>Events:
>Basilisk Den (x4)
>Battle Royal (x2)
>The Great Hunt (x2)

All Alex cares about during the festivals is having fun. Whether by fighting both monsters and other students or by indulging in the Basilisk Den.

>Clubs:
>Disciplinary Squad
>Cultural Club

When she was growing up books were her only friends and as a result joined the book club. The club reads all sorts of genres whether its, adventure, mystery, romance, or erotica.
As a member of the Disciplinary Squad she is tasked with help keeping order in the girl’s dorm. However, it’s suspicious how many girls start acting out or making trouble when she’s around. It’s almost as if they want to be punished for being naughty girls.


As much as she hates her mother she really doesn't care about any idea of revenge. Showcasing her abilities is enough of an "Fuck You" for her. All Alex cares about is an uncertain future filled with opportunity and adventure. She hopes to travel with her friends as a group of mercenaries fighting monsters and corrupting innocent maidens in her downtime. She views slaying impressive monsters as the perfect offering to her God. Alex loves finding a shy innocent girl and turning her into a nympho.

Personality wise she has a bead habit of acting slightly smug and arrogant because of her skill and ability. As stated before she is also a bit bloodthirsty which is most likely a side effect of her patron diety and being good at blood magic. Or it could be due to a dark experiment her father subjected her to when she was less than a week old.
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>>47746738
"Thee" is not a number, it's a form of "you" used in "Ye Olde Englishe", as is "thou".
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>>47750522

Guess I will wait until the Vatican school is out before I make a full proper build. Especially now that I can get Suzette at another school.

For the Vatican I would recommend a special avatar class where you channel your god to the point where you can pull some minor powers and become like an angel temporarily or something.
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>>47750355
What benefit does Physical Training over Ki Attunment?
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>>47750355
>School
Ej Har Institute
>Classes
Ki Attunement 3, Arcane Magic 3, Physical Training 3
>>47750370
>School Specific Classes
Enhancement 1, Blood Magic 3
>>47750386
>Companions
Eloise Avery, Bathsheba
>>47750404
>School Specific Companions
Cassiopeia
>>47750432
>Events
The Great Tournament: Battle Royal
The Harvest Festival: Basilisk Den
The Grand Summit: Research Proposal
The Gathering of Life: Bodyguard
>>47750522
>Clubs:
Educational Clubs, Paranormal Research
>Drawbacks
Exchange Program, Bookworm

HEALBRUTE IS ON THE SCENE. As far as I know, I have the greatest healing potential NOT beholden to any god. Servitude for power is not power at all. In the place of my lack of resurrection ability, I've been making connections with just the right people to figure out exactly how to keep being alive even after their death, through a combination of necromancy and artifice. If they even die, because those poser gods know full well I'm not gonna let that happen. Every event I make sure to get into fights, make sure to make myself stronger, to have every opportunity available for myself and my cohorts to test our magics, and at the Great Summit propose that research should be done into ensouling artifacts for resurrection instead of relying on the wills of gods, which could have agendas not in the best interest of the people they claim to serve.
Additionally, through enhancement, I light myself on fire while in combat, because punching things while on fire is an important aspect of life that everyone should know the joy of.
Sometimes Fist is the best spell to cast, so long as you know the burning spell metamagic feat.
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>>47749657

>Principality of Dorne - Ruling House
>The Blade - Higher Education
>The Cowl
>Grace and Beauty
>Tarria Gargalen

House Dayne, Sword of the Morning
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>>47752160
PT is always on, while KA needs to be activated and only lasts so long.
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>>47750955
>Beri and SDA in there,
What characters are they?
Or is that only from the new page?
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>>47752160
why choose? take both, be a man
or a buff woman
whatever
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>>47752278
Beri is a wyvern and SDA is a horse.
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>>47747650
Hmhm... no, I'll pass, none of them look tasty enough.
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would you watch an anime based on box wine's hero academy cyoa?
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>>47752292
Sure, as long as bitch isn't in it.
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>>47752292
BESTHIBIKI
which is your build for hero-institute?
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>>47752292
I would watch an anime based on a lot of CYOAs.

Then question why the hell anime studios are scouting here for material.
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>>47750522
Vatican school
I like the idea of exorcist training, but another thing to consider is the black library. Those that understand darkness to fight it all the better.

Arabian themed?
Hmmmm....Taftani magic...
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>>47749086
What people don't understand is it never mattered. If they have enough power to cause calamity, enough capacity to bear children and interact with you they are as real as the next person.
Also SoD guys.
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>>47752309
I kinda prefer bitch in it desu,
So i can see her get tortured or soemthing
not that i'm edgy but i think i have a thing for guro. i think

>>47752309
waiting for the new school
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>>47752285
Well shit, I even saw the Sda horse when I made my build, but it wasn't capitalized
I didn't see a wyvern, I couldn't be assed to read classes and companions I couldn't pick.
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>>47752356
you missed with that first reply, hibiki
but that's ok
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>>47752285
>SDA is a horse
Wait, what? The only one I knew was Kit.
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>>47749086
Taking this and three divine blessings would be interesting from theological point of view
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>>47752356
>Not edgy
>like guro
Choose one m8.
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>>47752363
>I didn't see a wyvern, I couldn't be assed to read classes and companions I couldn't pick.
First Lunestier companion.
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>>47752371
A fitting role.
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>>47752394
Where the hell is this horse because now I have to make a build for it
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>>47752418
It's the companion Allyce's horse.
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>>47752394
>>47752418
>>47752371
>Alyce Westhold
Holy shit, how did I not see this?

This is fine because she is a redhead.
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>>47752418
Allyce Westhold's horse is Sda
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>>47752370
s-sorry :'s

>>47752380
twas a hard choice
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>>47750522
Don't know if this has been mentioned but
Bookworm+Social butterfly= 11 classes and 6 companions
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>>47745805
I understood that reference.

Seriously though, how do you read those damn things.
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>>47750522
Gonna do this later to update my build, but I'm too tired right now. I love the drawbacks though. I can give up 2 companions to get two classes from other schools I want, and then I can give up a class to get the two companions back.
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Rolled 3, 4 = 7 (2d4)

>>47750355

>School
Lunestier

>Classes
Knowledge x2 (languages)
Martial Combat x3
Tactics x2
Lumestier Only: Diplomacy x3

>Companions
Malyvin, Silene, Hana, Mecherath, Tennie Northbreed

>Events
The Great Hunt
Bodyguard
Blind Date

>Clubs/Organisations
Student Government


I'm Ameryd Sörnruvht, an aspiring diplomat.
Talented with the pen and sword, i know how to get my point across, and how to cross points.

I will take my friends on the Great Hunt, and hopefully we do well. As a bodyguard, i think i may do well, employing my skills in swordsmanship and tactics, as well as roping in my friends to make a security detail, to ensure success.
The blind date may be the most difficult event in which to partake. Hopefully i do not make a fool of myself.
I should be able to speak the language regardless, as i have taken that class.

How did i do?
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>>47752646
>you may pick up to two

also,
>I can give up a class to get the two companions back.
you know that wasn't his intention, that you could use drawback loops to end up with more than you started with.
you'll say "b-but you should play it as written, not as intended!!!"
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>>47750355
Lunestier

Classes:
Knowledge (Magic Theory) 3
Arcane Magic 3
Magical Refinement 3
Potion Mixing 2
Smithing 1 (For building mana/blood tanks)
Blood Magic 1

Eloise Avery (Life-support. Should help significantly for tank research. Force her to wear risque costumes to encourage fundraising for research)
Malyvin (Drag him everywhere as bag carrier / assistant. Also test subject)
Suzette Highking (A shared love for mana efficiency!)

Events:
Fundraising (Need money for research proposals!)
Research Proposal (Humans encapsulated in a tank full of mana potion - can they survive?)
Research Proposal (Perpetual Mana Device[PMD] - Is it reachable in our liftimes?)
Research Proposal (Refining the crude art of Blood Magic into something elegant - a Lunestier approach)
Research Proposal (Localised Reality Warping - Achievable with enough mana?)
Blind Date (rolling)
Battle of the Arts (An attempt to apply previous research to an Arcane Magic lightshow - powered by as much mana as possible. A terrible failure or a wonderful success?)

Clubs:
Paranormal Research (New mana sources)

Drawbacks:
Exchange Program (Ej Har Institute)
Bookworm
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Rolled 2, 3 = 5 (2d4)

>>47752778
The daughter of an ennobled mage, Meredith grew up in an isolated household surrounded by the wonders of her father's creations and research. Practicing her father's art young, she found her limitations quickly, only able to do a limited amount of basic arcane magic before succumbing to mana fatigue. The frustration of being denied her childish whims lead to a life long obsession with expanding her mana supply and through this the potential of the arcane art.

Enrolled in Lunestier, she ignored most of her peers and began pursuing the wealth of information available. She eschewed combat, forced social interaction with those who she thought could help with her research and began looking for ways to create the Perpetual Mana Device, something most serious magicians scoff at as Magic Fiction.

Of questionable morals, endless ambition and a forceful personality, most steer well clear of her. The year she spent in Ej Har was welcomed by the Lunestier student body as a correction of the cosmic balance, many praying that she stayed there permanently.
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>>47752788
She'd probably get along with explosions guy once he considers just how much bigger she could make his explosions.
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>>47752720
Well, I did say I was tired.

And I'm conflicted. definitely want Duxix, Silene, and Hana for companions, and kind of wanted Bathsheba and Evergreen for maximum no humans allowed team (except for me(plus, evergreen is the only real mage on my team)) but I really want beast taming, and kind of wanted aerial combat for that wyvern mount.

So I either get both classes I want, but lose on two companions, or lose out the wyvern mount and get to keep my companions and get an extra on top of it.

Hmm. I suppose I already have Silene for a mount for when I become a very close friend with her. Still, this would've been a much easier choice if beast taming had stayed as one of the base classes instead of school specific. I kind of need it for my build. wyvern is less important, but it's a reptilian flying mount. Who doesn't want that?
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>>47750522
If I had Blue magic and Mage armour could I get the magic while remotely wrestling monsters with the armour or do I have to be there?
Alternatively could I use it from inside like Pacific Rim and have that count?

I look forward to seeing what the new schools offer, hopefully at least one of the companions will be non-human like Evergreen or Hana.
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>>47747471

Putting the finishing touches on my first OC since doing this ages ago.

How masturbatory is it to add connections to SS in what has until now been written as totally unrelated OC? Make it part of a Super Soldier Expanded Universe.
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>>47750522
Yeah, there's no way I'm not taking bookworm twice.
But this trading with courses is weird. If you have less than 10 courses, wouldn't you just not graduate? You didn't complete your education.
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>>47752951
I have an idea, what if you could trade in the amount of events you can visit?
Because you're too busy studying or networking to have any memorable adventures.
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>>47752940

It's ok as long as it works. Don't force the connection though if it doesn't match.
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>>47750355

Nicholas Fletcher: Arch-Archer!

Uzuza

Classes
Ranged Combat 3
Ki Attunement 2
Imbuement 3
Teamwork
Maneuvers
Physical Training

Companions
Kengen
Allyce Westhold
Duxix
Kara'Tee
Sorte (from St. Flares)

Events
Battle Royal
2v2, 3v3, 5v5
The Great Hunt x2
Blind Date (rolled offsite)
Sorte
Inas
Bodyguard

Clubs
Disciplinary Squad
Newpaper Club

Drawbacks
Bookworm
Pen Pal

Nicholas Fletcher seeks to perfect his form of Archery. By empowering his arrows with ki, he creates arrows that can fly faster, farther and even pierce through boulders. By empowering his bow, he can shoot arrows of his own ki, meaning he can never truly run out of ammunition. His sharp eyes allow him to spot injustice for the Disciplinary Squad, or hot events for the Newspaper Club.
Nicholas constantly looks for approval from others. He believes he will never be perfect and will strive to the point of self-injury. He has a habit of following those who he believes are strong and independent.
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>>47752990
I'd argue against it. Some events, like Blind Date or Bodyguard, take up a single day of your life.
Even the Battle Royale can't take up more than a week (not including your training leading up to it)
It also isn't mandatory to take more than three.

Three days in a five year education are not comparable to a course (of which you have ten over 5 years), or a friend for life.
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>>47753031

I accidentally reused a surname and now I'm super tempted to make this kid the son of a SS companion.

It even sort of fits.
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>>47753037
I would also say a friend, of which you can always make more, isn't compatible to an education.
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>>47753133
Agreed.
In general it's weird to "buy" friends in CYOAs, but how else are you gonna do it?
Say you get a free friend from taking X amount of Y-type classes, since they have the same classes as you?
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>>47751448
Go for it man and yea

>>47751925
1 point
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>>47750955
It's just kit. Beri, and SDA but an earlier build had highlander and Scientist
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>>47752951
There's no grad requirement in fact your companions would graduate with 7 classes
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>>47750355
I feel i must also create a necromancer build.

Name: Sye Antis

School: Ej Har Institute

Classes:
Potions x3
First Aid x2
Necromancy x3
Knowledge x3
Blood Magic x3

Companions:
Cassiopeia, Hana, Scal

Events:
Escort
Research Proposal
Blind Date

Drawbacks: Bookworm x2


Just a nice necromancer/bloodmage.
I want to help people in an unconventional way.
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>>47753223
>in fact your companions would graduate with 7 classes
Any particular reason why? And does this mean they're only at school for 3,5 years, or they have more lessons in those classes, or they have more free periods?
Because I'm imagining classes work like in college, where you only have a class for one semester, rather than like high school where you have a shitload of classes for multiple years, but few lessons each week.
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>>47753190
Is it possible for Uzuza students to exchange student into a magic class?
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>>47753273
I believe the CYOA indicated yes
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>>47753223
When can we expect the expansion pack school?
And would I be able to increase my healing output with anything from it over what I have here >>47752185 ? Like, will the ability to join my ki and arcane pools make Ki attunement and Blood magic work better together than just having blood, ki and normal arcane at max?
Additionally, should I have put points into Imbuement over Enhancement to gain the ability to light myself on fire (add a fire enchantment to my "weapons (fists)")?
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>>47753297
Just checked it said mages could go to Uzuza, and Uzuza's could have magic pen pals that tutor them so I think the implication is that no an Uzuza could still not be taught magic directly (but could be tutored by their pen pal)
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>>47744907
>Reptilian
>Increased speed, strength, defense, natural weapons (claws)
Fuck it.
>Budget rangers, magical girl team, dark hero
>Enhanced strength, defense, speed, vibro claws, enhanced regeneration, and band of books
I call this:deathclaw form, subtlety isn't an option, but mass butchery is.

>>47745601
Lemon-lime, just too useful for day to day life. Kind of wish we were allowed to pick two.

Actually, if you could pick two, which two sodas would you guys pick?

>>47744262
>Reincarnation
>Blacklist
>Free, death's number, proceed to load up on training with the rest and become the super renaissance man.
>Or, if I flubbed a bit, use my insane bluffing talent to make people think I am a man when I m actually a bear.
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>>47750355
>Lunestier
Seems like a nice place. Also, true elites definitely sounds good.

>Unarmed Combat x 2
I'm an Orc, it'd be pointless not to use some of my strengths

>Arcane Magic x 3
Unstable power maybe, but it's quick. Speed is the essence of battle, no matter how powerful someone is if they get knocked out or incapacitated first all of their power matters for not.

>Magic Refinement x 3
If I'm going to be an offensive caster, I'll need some of this to continue my attacks

>Divine Arts x 2
For when I'm hurt.

>Drawbacks
Exchange Program x 2
3 Companions

>Druidism x 2
Go full beast mode and use enhanced animal strength with unarmed to claw and smash my enemies.

>Companions
Eydal Northbreed
Suzette Highking
Sera

Eydal will be my go to sword in a pinch as well as a trainer in duelling and martial combat, Suzette and I will practice magic together, and Sera can help me in healing.

While all the students were casting arcane bolts, Uzgur still could not create a wisp of arcane. I though, perhaps mother was right, an orc can't cast magic! But I couldn't go home, and my professors recommended hitting the books and asking for help. And I did. With a couple lessons I finally could cast, and got back those snarky and stuck up nobles with my fast spells. I'm still an orc at heart though, and we're not too friendly with others- I made a few, good friends. The exchange program was really neat, St. Flares are awful nice, and I like the Druidic magic too.

>Events
YEAR 1:
Battle Royal (Orc blood necessitates I fight!)
Fundraising (Research proposal funds)
Research Proposal (Can we refine spells to have no cost whatsoever?)
Party Planner (need to develop social skills)
YEAR 2:
Sports (Come on, no boxing? I guess maybe baseball or something)
Fundraising (More money)
Research Proposal (Combining Druidic and Arcane- extremely fast nature spells?)
Blind Date (Rolled a: 1: St. Flares, and 2: Darnia. Neat, we're both Druids)
CONT
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>>47752709
A body guard is different from a soldier. Depending on how anime the setting is (gimmicky assassins rather than rowdy crowds) it could be advisable to invest in dueling more than martial combat
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>>47750522
>Vatican school

I like this but can you please make sure they do not get a monopoly over all things spiritual: stuff related to shamanism and the spirits of nature really belongs in St Flares.
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>>47753355
YEAR 3:
Sports: (Gotta keep the body strong and healthy)
Escort (No research this year)
Security (Good place to test my research)
Nothing for gathering of life, social anxiety is too much

YEAR 4:
Great Hunt: Orcs are wild at heart. Plus Druidic magic helps for hunting.
Fundraising (Money)
Research Proposal (Getting kind of limited here since I didn't study much in other areas, but maybe combining Healing and Arcane for extremely fast healing)
Party Planner (Not much else to do)

YEAR 5:
Battle Royal: Hopefully my research has helped me
Basilisk Den: Leftover funds for gambling, beat the shit out of people in pit fights
Battle of the Arts: Last year, time for some fun.
Bodyguard: I can handle what comes with (hopefully) 0 cost spells, super fast nature and healing and my buddies to back me up (hopefully).
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>>47753356
That makes a lot of sense, however it's not my goal to simply become a bodyguard.
However duelling is probably better for a diplomat, i could go the whole "trial by combat" wat then.
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So is it ok to rp a bit with your builds?
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>>47750355
The Ej Har Institute

First Aid X2
Potion Mixing X3
Illusion
Summoning
Stealth
Blood Magic X2
Assassination X2
Unholy Magic X2

Duxix
Nashwa
Cassiopeia

Basilisk Den X5
Research proposal
Blind Date (Helena)

Sports Club
Bookworm X2

Hexil is a goblin. Kind of like kobolds goblins are thought of as dumb and cowardly but they don't even get the recognition of being considered a threat. If Hexil faces discrimination it is the soft discrimination of low expectations. After reaching the age of nine he has reached physical maturity and still gets mistaken for a kid, especially by freshmen.
Goblins respect strength above all else, which is sort of unfortunate because they are the weakest intelligent race. Hexil has failed the entry exam for every physically demanding course but has decided to settle for support magic to be a hero anyway. He uses potions and blood magic to complement his medicine skills.
He joined a martial arts group but they just keep him around to do chores.
His inferiority complex has resulted in a nasty and vindictive personality, delves into shady business in the gambling world and conducts questionable experiments on his friends. But at the gather of life during graduation he has fallen head over heels for an Uzuza student, he follows her around like a puppy. It's more worship than a relationship but it keeps him on the side of good.
I was thinking it would really fit the character to be pen pals with Mecherath, supplying truth potions, exchanging blackmail information and all that, but courses are just so much more valuable than companions I couldn't not take bookworm twice.
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>>47753473
>Monk
I've already got Martial Arts from Kenichi and plenty of physical power I've gathered through the crossworlds so this should help me use it properly.

>Tarrasque
Less scary if you consider the powers you took in Harry Potter and Marvels. A boatload of Draught of the Living Dead maybe?
>Orcus Rising
Same. There's no reason at this point to stick to the easy quests.

I can't wait to beat the shit out of Magnus... too bad that's not going to happen day.
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>>47753473
I can't remember, is there anything in the first page that outright says you can refuse angelship?
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I'm having trouble deciding what cyoa to make next:
>Expand on a Short and Simple Succubus CYOA
basically turning it into "succubus in monstergirl boarding school CYOA"
>make a full-on monstergirl boarding school
add male races / races that can be both genders, or keep it girl-only?
>make a Comfy Succubus in an Urban Fantasy World CYOA
>make a Somewhat Generic "you're transported to a magical RPG world" / Konosuba CYOA
(I personally really would like a new one in this genre)
>start working on a bigger, serious one that will result in a sequel using builds from the first CYOA
(Note: I don't think I can finish it before I go on holidays and won't make cyoas for a month)
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>>47753550
ok it doesn't say it but you can if you like.
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>>47753567
Teaser 3. Felt like sharing for that sleepy anon from last night. Rune powers page.
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>>47753567
I vote for Comfy Succubus or Generic/Konosuba. You can probably at least plan the bigger one out during holidays and start working when you get back.
As for the "both genders or girl-only" question, would be nice to be able to have male bits.
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>>47753567
>add male races / races that can be both genders, or keep it girl-only?

The majority of us are not trans, so that would give it more of a lasting appeal. You could skew the rate in favour of male students (10% male 90% female) to make sure the KEKING anon doesn't piss himself.
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>>47753622
L O N D O N
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N
D
O
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Senpai, your memeing has gone too far. This has to end. You don't want to go to meme jail, trust me.
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>>47753648
MOTHER FUCKER

I wanted the cities thing to be surprise.
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>>47749125
The Korean grindfest Ragnarok Online.
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>>47753618
will all the pages be posted next thread?
I can't remember if there were alternate routes to something similar to immortality if angelship was rejected. I think death and war give something like that, don't they? I can't remember the story with that page though, and really want to avoid having to swear fealty to them if I have to.


As an aside question, hows does one A) Become a god in the hub world, and B) when one does, what happens to their role as an angel to another god when they do?
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>>47753656
You got Moscow in there?
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>>47753683
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>>47753696
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>>47753683
Not the author, but I wouldn't risk waiting with immortality until the Death/War meeting which you technically don't know anything about. You're spending a lot of years in some pretty dangerous worlds before that.
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>>47751723
Let me check the drive...
iirc you had to take a specific skill that granted you a "sacrifice" technique.
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>>47753683
Sufficient power leads to godhood and they may become part of their deity's pantheon.
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>>47753705
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>>47753716
it's a danger I'm willing to risk if it means I can achieve the same status without needing to bend a knee to a higher being.
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>>47753692
Ofc I do.
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>>47753736
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>>47753729
>Sufficient power leads to godhood and they may become part of their deity's pantheon.

Can I say fuck you to that and be an independent God like Anime/Hentai?
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>>47753748
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>>47753656
How about Bruxelles? Don't laugh, we're the capital of Europe ;-;
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>>47753750
Yes, it is only an option due to good will.
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>>47750522
I want a Sister Esther companion for the Vatican school.
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>>47753757
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>>47753760
I have P-Paris. Is that good enough Belgian-anon?
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>>47753750
>not wanting to become Yaoi
>not being a part of the Trinity of Degeneracy

There shall be no greater pantheon.
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>>47753775
No, but I honestly didn't expect you to even know Belgium existed so we're cool. Can't wait till our nuclear program kicks off and het Belgische Rijk becomes a reality.
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>>47753747
Oh great! I hope it's not a hellhole so i can choose it.
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>>47750522
I want a Father Pucci companion in Vatican school.
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>>47753760
It's spelled Brussel silly walloon.
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>>47751723
>>47753724
It is in fact Titanlands. On "Occult", take the "Sacrificial Offering" skill and for each companion you sacrifice, you earn +5 in any stat. Combine that with the extra companion from reaching 8+ charisma and you can really boost your stats to godly levels. Iirc I had all at 10 or over except defence (but who needs defence when I can resurrect with "Return to body", just helps me taunt my opponents more by making them feel helpless).
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>>47753829
Think Pre-Revolution Tsar's Moscow with Stalin's Industrial hellhole on the side along with a booming Guild Business (Over 300 combat guilds alone!) and a hard line divide between the rich and the poor.
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>>47753478
Sure, just remember to ignore Angelanon.
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>all those Bookworm x2 minmaxing builds

I hate all of you so much. I hope Hime gets your parents raped and murdered while you're reading those stupid books trying to become edgelords. Stupid shitty stinky smelly minmaxers.
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>>47753869
I would have preffered it if bookworm wasn't so good, I would be able to choose something else.
As it is now, yeah, bookworm X2 is the only way to go.
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>>47753567
Comfy Succubus sounds neat. Speaking of succubi, is there a booru where I would have a higher chance of finding pictures of succubi wearing cute clothes or just street clothes?
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>>47753869
Keep crying. Only Luniester bitches need their friends to have connections in high places. As if self improvement in an individual is something to be shunned upon. Also that just removes them from the whole lifelong friend thing, we can still make friends regardless.
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>>47748266
Literally the worst.
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>>47753895
>specifically picks option to trade in companions for more classes
>"I can still make friends regardless"

Kill yourself.
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>>47753314
All those mage sluts signing up to Uzuza exchange to whore themselves out and enjoy the bullying.
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>>47753920
Bookworm X2 lands you 60% of the companions and 140% of the classes.
Companions are companions, lifelong friends, who needs lifelong friends? You can just have normal friends. Courses are crucial, they decide your effectiveness as a hero.
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>>47753920
Yeah, that's cancer
Not as bad as
>hurr I can overcome all drawbacks with ease
but still bad
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>>47753947
No, you're specifically picking an option that makes you considerably less sociable to focus on your studies, and then munchkinning yourself into making "normal friends". The people who pick Bookworm x2 seem to completely ignore the social awkwardness aspect of it, and just see it as a powergrab.

You're not so much paying in friends as in social skills in general, and that can be a serious detriment to your life.
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>>47753973
>The people who pick Bookworm x2 seem to completely ignore the social awkwardness aspect of it, and just see it as a powergrab
This.
I would love more courses and wouldn't mind a companion less, but I actually care about the result Bookworm will have on my character's social life, fluff wise.
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So, regarding that 18 page waifu cyoa and omne.

If you get the Citizenship, right? Can she directly interact with you when you are so tiny? I mean could she place her hand on the part of planet with you and you would be pressed by and surrounded by her hand?

can she step on you?
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>>47753947
Social Butterfly x2 lands 180% of the companions and 80% of the classes.
Classes are classes, learning opportunities, who needs learning opportunities? You can just put in extra work in your studies or be extra talented. Companions are crucial, they give you vital networking skills as a hero.
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>>47753973
You can focus on your studies while in school without being a complete social retard.
I mean come on. That's an unreasonable thing to say.
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>>47754015
The CYOA has a very strict numerical representation for your skill though. The companions are representations for companions, not a numerical value for your networking skills.
If they are supposed to be as important as the mechanics of the drawbacks seem to imply I would love to see that represented in the companion page. Because now they seem as importantas to what events you go.
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>>47754021
"Whatever the reason students who are like this tend to accel above and beyond their classmates but are prone to spending many nights alone."

The cyoa heavily implies you're going to be socially stunted.
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>>47754021
So it isn't a drawback, you're not trading anything
Why do you then gain something from it?
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>>47750522
So Exchange Program + Pen Pal means I get to trade in a normal companion for an exclusive companion?

Fluffwise that just means I spend my time in Exchange making a friend instead of learning.
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>>47754015
Yeah, sure, you can put in extra work, you can be talented. But that's no replacement for an actual education. Companions are not crucial, they're just fluff, they can be easily replaced by normal classmates during school and coworkers after graduation.
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>>47754021
>>47754015
>>47753947
>>47753996
>>47754052
>>47754056

Alright, let me impart something here
Companions, which is to say close friends, can teach you lower level powers they are skilled in
untaken friends cannot
so while, yes, you are more powerful at base with x2 bookworm, you have liess access to the variety these other individuals have to offer by way of supplementary powersets. The less friends you have, the more planning you have to do in regards to covering the bases your current powers simply cannot.

I myself take the more powers options, yes, but do admit that I have incredible gaps in my supplementary power selection.

Basically, my guess is that mechanically one legit companion imparts 0.5 points in what I assume to be 4 different courses. This balances out with the 2 whole points gained from bookworm.
If you stack companions correctly, you could possibly earn those 2 points lost back, with interest, but your guess to what each companion provides is as good as mine.


BOX WINE, IF YOU ARE LISTENING: Were it stated somewhere exactly what benefits specifically to your character each companion individually provides, the loss of one being a drawback might become more apparent.
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>>47754056
Because it's unbalanced.
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>>47754015
>>47750522

I wish there were more disadvantages. LIke sacrifice 2 normal companions for an alternate school companion. Or gain an alternate school companion but a normal or school companion becomes an enemy. Gain an extra rank in a specific magic class but choose another that you can never learn. Etc...
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>>47753696
>>47753705
>>47753736
>>47753748
Etc.

I do like the idea of this cyoa... However my problem is the weird kind of set order to it. Jumpchain has that because it has an entity named Jumpchain that is throwing you around fictional universes.
I was kind of into it until page four as I have no idea what Kenichi is and I haven't watched/read A Certain Scientific Railgun. So I just plain wouldn't really go there.

I vaguely get the start, of wanting to go off and relive my youth but with magic and banging Hermione and then going to get some super powers but after that I am kind of lost.

It's just so extremely specific with it's weird gods and specific places you go and whatnot. It's not 'what would you do?' it's 'This is what you would do, how would you do it though?' which kind of loses me.

It is a fun cyoa and I'm sure there are people that are super into it I'm just... I can't appreciate it? I feel like you need to maybe relax on the specific order of things so it can appeal to a wider audience? Maybe a smarter anon than I can see what I'm trying to get at and better articulate it for me.
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>>47751996
I can't really get to the idea very soon b/c busy with other CYOA. Go ahead & do something with it if you want.
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>>47754073
You're pulling that out of your ass. Not only are assuming we're all going to have study sessions with our companions, you are also assuming that each skill can be taught and that all companions are willing to do so. Meanwhile Nashwa is an abberation, Evergreen has unique fairy magic, Malvyn is naturally gifted and lazy, etc.
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>>47754014
Yes, the has the effects of Gentle Touch, so she can touch you all you want without you being dead.
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>>47754083
>Gain an extra rank in a specific magic class but choose another that you can never learn.
This is a minmaxer’s wet dream. Gain an essentially free bonus at the cost of something you never wanted in the first place. It’s not a trade-off.
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>>47754098
*she has the effects of Gentle Touch
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>>47754089
Just wait until Crossworlds takes off and people start making their own replacement/additional pages.
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>>47754073
Or go the other way and not have the drawbacks affect any objective thing at all.
>bookworm, you are more studious but less social
>social butterfly, you are more social but less studious
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>>47754100
What about if you were extra weak against other people using that on you?
Like, you legitimately have no way to counter it.
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>>47754112
I would honestly prefer this. Currently people are seeing it as trade-in of options, instead of what is actually is: a personality affecting drawback.
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>>47754119
I like stuff like that. A video game example would be you deal more damage with ice, but you take more damage from fire.
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>>47744062
I just saw this message. I'm gonna assume you saw >>47744280 though.
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>>47754100
>It’s not a trade-off.
Exactly. It's not a drawback so it shouldn't be included.
Not learning Spanish doesn't make me better at French.
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>>47754144
You could frame it as a magical affinity due to biology, for everybody coming up with xeno characters.
Suddenly the swamp giantess isn't way overpowered but she's a normal character with the Physical Training affinity and Stealth weakness.
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>>47754144
>BONUS: Arcane magic
>WEAKNESS: Knowledge (Pottery)

You can't stop this minmaxing express, motherfucker.
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>>47754184
Y-you remembered my build?
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>>47754190
I do I remembered it because it specialized in first aid and (I think) divine magic but could totally wipe the floor with any soldier character. Because she's huge.
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>>47754203
>but could totally wipe the floor with any soldier character

She might have if she had a fighters mentality or even basic fighting skills. She doesn't though. Her best chance of injuring enemy soldiers is accidentally stepping on them while she's running across the battlefield to deliver first aid. She's honestly no match for any Hero who knows how to deal with her size.

You can't beat her at basketball though.
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>>47754184
nondivine healanon here, I would gladly sacrifice stealth for more classes.
Working unseen is for gods, and gods are chumps
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When can we continue our tutelage under Master Fu?
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>>47754186
Why do you have to use your autism to ruin things for others?
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>>47753473
What if your band class is the same as your d&d class? Do they stack into 1 class?
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>>47754219
I don't have any fighting skills IRL but if I was as large as she is in the pic I could just grab a tree my enemies and throw them away. Maybe with a glove if they have pointy weapons.
Unless strength doesn't increase proportional to size.
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>>47754226
That'd be a a no-brainer if it only meant you couldn't learn stealth. But what if it meant you can never notice anyone stealthing? Would you still take it?
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>>47754231
Nothing's stopping you from specializing in Pottery based heroism, senpai.
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>>47754186
Idiot. You'd have to choose something that is an actual weakness like strong in arcane weak to illusions or bloodmagic.
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>>47754231
Don't worry, we'll construct crockery weaponry.
Once defeated we'll trap him in a giant pot.
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>>47754266
Please don't do this.
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>>47754266
Trap him in a bedpan/chamberpot...it's far more fitting.
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>>47754186
>Implying it wouldn't just be WEAKNESS: knowledge
>implying you wouldn't be the most clueless mofo to ever graduate
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>>47754264
Still very susceptible to minmaxing. Blood magic and Druidism are extremely rare branches of magic. Druidism especially is not something you'll see a BBEG wield and is a very safe weakness.
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>>47754234
Each would compound the effects of the other.
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>still not possible to get a Legendary rating in a class

Being a Master doesn't do it for me.
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>>47753622
I don't know what that has to do with me, but I'll take it.
>>47753636
1 comfy / 1 Konosuba
>>47753893
1 comfy

Dang, I was hoping for more Konosuba votes. Dangit, I just want to be a Hero / high leveled character in an RPG world
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>>47754310
Maybe, rather than make a list of allowed weaknesses, you'd be weak to a certain archetype.
Weak to dark magic, weak to light magic, weak to martial disciplines or weak to cleverness.
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>>47754310
School exclusive disciplines wouldn't be an option.
>>47754336
Maybe that's what mentors will be for.
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>>47754348
I vote for Konosuba or the Monstergirl academy. I mainly just don't want a mandatory vagina.
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>>47754348
I want both. Even if they're both in one CYOA.
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>>47754380
>>47754359
be a comfy succubus in monstergirl academy in konosuba but you're not a girl you're a boy even if it's called monster"girl"??
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>>47754404
I'm gonna go with "yes, please".
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>>47754404
Comfy succubus/incubus adventures in Konosuba?
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>>47754404
Sounds good, but I'd rather be a girly succubus with shapeshifting.
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>>47754404
Now that's just false advertising. I wholeheartedly disapprove.
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>>47753869
my build had three filler companions from the very beginning, so it makes sense to trade them for courses.

>>47750355
Updated build

Sigurd (changed from alex)
St.Flares

Blue magic 3x, druidism 3x, monster hunting 3x, knowledge (monster biology), magic refinement 2x.

Kit, Chandara, Evergreen
1st year: great hunt
2nd year: great hunt
3rd year: great hunt
4th year: great hunt
5th year: great hunt, escort, security, bodyguard

Art club (literature) , Educational club (Monster research club)

Exchange program 2x

Sigurd family got killed in a monster attack when he was still a child, this originally left him with an intense hatred towards all monster. This hatred eventually died down as a wandering druid taught him that monsters are just another part of nature and to let his hatred go. Now he’s on a quest to learn as much as he can about monster for UNDERSTANDING.

His fighting style revolves around combining multiple different monster abilities to create unique effects. This requires a large amount of magical control and concentration which is why the magic refinement course is pretty important.

As he learns more about monsters and nature he’s slowly shifting his body into a monster human hybrid form, he gains things like retractable claws, a tail, a third monster eye with heath vision or something fancy like that, maybe wings eventually. This is actually something that’s happening unconscious, because of all his study into monster biology, but even after he notices he doesn’t really mind.

His hobby is reading amateur fiction novel and watching plays by new groups and authors.
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>>47747213
I've seen this before, but never did a build for this. Might as well try it out...
>Blessing of Vitality
>Blessing of Mind
>Blessing of the Wanderer
>Caravan Camp
>The Comrade
>The Nemesis
Travelling around the world with a good friend, going on adventures, meeting interesting people, doing battle with an evil rival - overcoming the challenges set before only with cleverness and luck. Seems like it could be fun.
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>>47753636
>>47753567
>It's a Succubus CYOA
>people ask to be incubus
What the fuck is wrong with you people? It's just as bad as asking to be a prince in a Princess CYOA or to be a princess in a Prince CYOA.
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>>47754452
Immunity to "I am from Lunestier and I will rape and kill your peasant parents"? Nice build, man, it has potential to stop this school war.
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>>47754533
They're both the same demon ya dingus.
Shapechanging intersex turboslut.
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>>47754533
Being a princess is a pure experience. Being a sex demon is a lewd experience, and I'm not into fucking guys. Yuri is also the nastiest thing on the planet.
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>>47754533
>What the fuck is wrong with you people?

People want what they can't have. It's a never-ending case of "the grass is always greener."
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>>47754533
Both let you have male bits _and_ look like a girl, though.
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>>47747213
Nightmare fuel. Each time you die, you get weaker until you permanently lose your life.
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>>47754557
>Yuri is also the nastiest thing on the planet.
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>>47754533
Don't blame me, anon. Half the responses to a short and sweet succubus cyoa were "pls gib benis".
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>>47754576
>he wants to rub two vaginas together for fun until they squirt inside eachother

I'm going to throw up.
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>>47754569
Real life is even worse.
You can only die once.
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>>47754612
>he doesn't believe in reincarnation
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>>47754533
>2016
>not everyone is trans

Don't remind me, anon-xan. Or at least give me a trigger warning.
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>>47754604
I find that idea significantly less disgusting than oral or anal, but it is a bit confusing/doesn't seem like it would be all that fun.

With two girls I imagine it's mostly oral, fingering and toys. The right double-dildo I imagine would feel just as good as a man to both of them.
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>>47754628
Transsexualism is harmful.
It forces an identity upon you.
Just be who you are, be the guy that likes to be a girl in escapist fantasy, don't go turning it into political movements.
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>>47754612
Nah, this is like a creepy cat and mouse game where you die once, come back weaker and are hunted down again. Your mind and body slowly degenerate until you are finally embraced by death, in a feeble body that mocks your legacy.
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>>47754604
>ancient roman understanding of lesbianism

Hell, not even. At least the Romans were creative and imagined lesbians could grow huge clit-dicks if they were gay enough.
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>>47754097
While it is a big assumption the CYOA does indicate that companions could tutor you in their specialty. Namely the penpal drawback says Uzuza students can learn magic from their penpal but there would be no reason other things couldn't be taught as well.
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>>47754534
sadly not immune to my druid father/mother figure being murdered and raped.
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>>47754658
They can't?
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>>47754640
Losing one of your superpowers is not worse than dieing.
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>>47754713
I'd rather die a hero than be spared time and time again until I have lost everything that made me one.
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