CYOA Thread

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>>47249912
Mystery Box 1

First for Dragon Turles
Necromancer update never

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>>47249931
Mystery Box 2

>>47249912

http://www.strawpoll.me/10203143
http://www.strawpoll.me/10203106
http://www.strawpoll.me/10203070

Next set of ranks will done tonight, also if the anons who posted origins earlier could re-post? I lost those in with the near finished set of the ranks.

>>47249912
>temporary memory death

No, thanks. It's kind of funny to have not-me save the world only to be erased from our body as I return to reap in the rewards. I'm not that much of an asshole though.

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>>47249995

>>47249912
>SMT: Devil Survivor
>name: Simon Belieux
>appearance: generic goodlooking guy
>devious antihero
>RETURN TO EARTH

I'm going to win the Throne of Bel and bring all that shit back to earth. It should be easy as pie with devious antihero.

>>47250000
Amnesia is memory death, now? And getting your memories back somehow 'erases' the person you were when you had amnesia?

>>47249931
>>47249947
Its hilarious how good the mystery box 1 or 2 is. Either way you can't truly be defeated, history will absolve you!

>>47250090
I think neither of them let you have your memory back.

>>47250087
There are entire support groups out there for people who regained their memory after a long period of amnesia. They tend to undergo identity crisises.

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>>47249389

Oh, what the hell, I might as well post it.

I'm not sure about the things I've made there so far, so I could use some help and critique.

Should I tone it down with 'fancy graphics'? Did my attempt at making lore and worldbuilding fail? Is introductory part too long, if readable at all? Is my CYOA going to be absolute thrash that I should just drop and forget about?

>>47250000
While I hate the "hurr durr memory death" meme, in this case I hate the memory erasure more. It makes no fucking sense - why bother to take someone from Earth in that case?

>>47250163
I'm not going to read it, because fuck reading wips, but the way the box 'disintegrates' to the sides looks neat (in the intro).
I'd have it do the same thing at the top and bottom, too.
So, yeah, looks pretty. Definitely prettier than anything I make. I cannot be bothered to use/find background images.

One gripe, since it's the one thing I read
Under Seeker
>... other spells in this CYOA
Don't do that. Please. It breaks all suspension of disbelief or whatever the phrase is.
Like breaking the fourth wall.

>>47250087
Quads don't lie. >>47250000

>>47250230
What are you talking about? I see zero quads here.

>>47250163
So what happened to the Philippines, New Zealand, Papua New Guinea and Hawaii?

>>47250163
I like it. Two things.

Centuries cannot have passed between Void and Creation if Time was part of Creation.

Blood Magic can't or shouldn't be the 4th Sin since it is the exact opposite of a Sin. Blood Magic brings us closer to the Void, not further.

>>47250163
Britain is NOT part of Europe. PLEASE CHANGE.

>>47250325
das rite BRITEXIT

>>47250325
What is it part of then, Russia?

>>47250344
Woosh

>>47250224

I tried to make the 'disintegrating' thing at top and bottom, but it didn't look quite as good. Atleast I don't think so?

>Don't do that. Please. It breaks all suspension of disbelief or whatever the phrase is.

Okay, I'll rephrase that part.

>>47250287

Since I can't think of anything, nothing of importance.

>>47250294

>Centuries cannot have passed between Void and Creation if Time was part of Creation.

It's 'eternities', not 'centuries', but I'll change the wording of this part.

>Blood Magic can't or shouldn't be the 4th Sin

That's assuming you buy into the conventional wizard propaganda about it, but that's probably too complicated.

>>47250325

Okay, I'll teleport it to Asia. Have fun with hordes of demons and such.

Im looking for some really complex character creation CYOA
Alternatively, a good mystery CYOA (that's not Quiet) will do just fine.

>>47250344
It will be, soon after their economy crashed because of 'I want to be special for no reason or I'll get out of this beneficial agreement'.
Seriously the reasoning behind that boils down to ¨REEEEEEEEEEEEE¨

>>47250490
Traveler. If you want complex character creation, that's probably the best thing around for it. Also the lore is great.

Behold! >>47250012

>>47250550
>EU
>Beneficial
Sure Achmed, sure.

>>47249995
I'm not the original posters, but here are the ones I found.

>Fire and Blood | Road Warrior

You are a survivor. One of the last of humanity, fighting for survival on a scorched Earth. You barely remember a time before the end. Mankind went rogue, tearing itself apart and burning the world with nuclear fire. You and those you know are those that refused to die with the rest of the world. You have fought so hard, for so long, to hold onto anything that might be a shred of hope. You've watched everything you ever know die, with the only constants being your car, your gun, and the endless broken highways before you. Now though, past mistakes have finally caught up with you, and those are gone too. Your hope has finally be extinguished, and yet there seems to be a light at the end of the tunnel?


(Mid Tech Understanding, Martial Training, Survivor, Adaptability, *Not Currently in the CYOA driving skill*)

>The Old Civilization | Terrified Onlooker

You are one of the last of the first. Tens of thousands of years before Sumer scrapped chicken scratches on clay, your people built glittering citadels across the globe. Magic and science entwined into the lifeblood of this world. Great magus-engineers constructed wonders beyond your imagination, and you laid eyes upon them. You were a simple citizen, not one of them. When they started work on their greatest achievement though? You knew something was wrong. They built a tower that looked ready to scratch the heavens, and when it did? The sky split upon, and your world drowned in blood. You couldn't tear your eyes away, but someone else did.

(Advanced Tech Understanding, Basic Ethereal Manipulation, Educated, Languages Proficiency)

>>47250163
I notice that with each Sin the amount of "Chosen" becomes smaller. Only Earth had life. Only humans gained sapience. Only some wizards became blood mages.

So I'm theorizing that this will continue until one final entity becomes the complete antithesis of the Void and this entity will retroactively bring down the Creation and hence put in motion the chain of Sins that allowed for its existence. This entity is God, not necessarily the judeochristian one.

How did I do?

>>47250559
Traveller is one of the least complex character creation CYOAs. Hunter is more complicated. The thing about Traveller is that there is an absolutely insane amount of content to read through, and so much of it is a joy to read through.

>>47250490
>really complex character creation CYOA
Alice?

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Hey /tg/, I'm long-time lurker in those threads and I want to create my first CYOA.
I want to name it Band-it CYOA and it would be about creating a band (cheesy, I know). It would include some stats (like popularity, income, music quality, influence, loyalty of fans etc.), choosing genre, manager, staff and band members (you can be one by yourself), instruments, gigs and other traits. I have many ideas how to expand it, too. I want it to be big and versatile enough to be able to make k-pop band as well as brutal death metal one.
Is this idea any good? How to make it? I know how to use photoshop and I'm quite decent artfag by myself, but I have no idea what I should start with. Does anyone have any useful tips or wants to share experiences? What should I take notice of? I think making synergies and balancing the whole thing will be real pain in the ass.

>>47250490
Does this count?
>>47250425

>>47250425
I should do this again since he added that upgrade to tier 1 powers, but I don't know exactly what to go for, and I already made three builds.
But I haven't seen a CYOA that intrigued me for some time / I actually cared about enough to imagine how my "new life" would be like, and I don't feel like working on my own just yet, so maybe I will

>>47250611
The idea sounds fine to me.

There's some tutorials by SDA sitting around.

>>47250611
I don't know much about making cyoas (still need to learn how to make it into an image file), but your idea sounds good, and is certainly different.

>>47250614
>and I already made three builds.
>three builds.

So I'm not the only one who makes multiple builds for cyoas?

>>47250405
Can they be rogue nations?
like pirates?
Kiwi mage pirates

>>47250611
You should keep in mind that maybe 5% of cyoag has any musical skill and that most of us lack the appeal and charisma to become a succesful musician.

What I'm trying to say is, please add a boatload of traits.

Don't forget stuff like Opera either.

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>>47250660
>So I'm not the only one who makes multiple builds for cyoas?

Of course not. Though personally I rarely go all the way in stating out builds past the first I do like to sit and think about alternate ways of doing things.

>>47250660
I would consider any CYOA where I can (and want to) make multiple, diverse builds to be highly successful.
I think only this one, the Generic Fantasy CYOA one, Monster Hunter and Alice (but that's with rolling) have enabled me to do this.

So yes, there's at least one other guy who makes multiple builds IF the CYOA interests me enough. There's so fucking many combinations possible in this one.

>>47249931
What is the pic used in the mystery box from?

>>47250727
>Generic Fantasy cyoa

Which one is that? It sounds incredibly generic. I'm serious.

>>47250425
Buttfuck it, might as well go in. I know I just need to do companions, and I could honestly probably knock it out today, but I want to do cyoa for once, too, not spend all my time making them.
kek, guess I'm saltier than I thought. But I do mean it seriously.
Rapture academy CYOA was cool even if it didn't appeal to me, because it was something beyond "pick one".
Is it too much to ask for some OC, that i didn't make, that has plot and a world to explore?
See you in like, fourty minutes.
Is story-time okay?

>>47250841
It doesn't have a name, and it's really generic and includes fantasy races, so I thought it was a fitting title.
>>47248455

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>>47250832
That's Kumagawa.

Remember guys, don't make CYOAs that involve rape in any way. It's very triggering.
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>>47250962
From what?

>>47250588

>Only some wizards became blood mages.

Well, theoretically anyone could become a blood mage, since everyone has blood within them. You don't have to have an inborn magical talent to draw a circle with blood and say a few words to summon a demon.

>one final entity

This isn't what I had in mind, but I like the idea and I know where it would fit. So this might be a thing now.

>How did I do?

You did good.

>>47250694

It would be too much of an effort to draw a new location just for this. But I'll give you specifically a unique privilege to make a build with New Zealand as your location.

>>47250983
rape

>>47250983
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE

>>47250983
Triggers are my fetish.

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>>47250984
First result in google you lazy bum.
Medaka Box.

>>47250631
Where I can find them?
>>47250636
I thought it would be nice to make CYOA I would have fun with and original enough to offer something new.
>>47250708
I know, but you don't have to be a part of the band you're creating - you can be also the manager, staff member or some sort of grey eminence. Of course tutors will be accessible (not only for you - for band members, too), as well as magical-tier plastic surgeries.
About genres - I thought there will be 5 main genres (like pop, rock, classical, folk, metal - each of them giving bonuses to each of stats), a trait that makes it possible to choose any two main genres (but you suffer penalties from both) and trait-like subgenres (like progressive, indie, symphonic, electro, punk, funk, black, death, jazz, blues, you name it) so it will be possible to make such crazy combinations like "progressive funky black folk metal".

>>47250995
I-I did good? Thank you, bloodanon. No ever told me that before. I might go full yandere on your adorable little ass now. I mean, it's not yandere if it's destined love but I won't get ahead of myself. I'll just keep track of your cyoa for now. You'll do better if I'm watching, right?

>>47251062
In the cyoa archives in the pastebin

>>47251091
Thanks anon, that was silly of me to not check it beforehand.

>>47249912
Chosen hero seems like the best choice.
Boring sure, but they tend to live long and happy lives while many of the others... don't.

>>47251050
Manga started off kind of banal, then went so far away from there at some point all I could say was there was some kind of theme being expressed that's way too deep for me to get.

>>47250983
QUICK, SOMEBODY POST SKELETON GANG RAPE

>>47251081
>That last ?
I DON'T REMEMBER THIS
WAIT JUST A FUCKING MINUTE

>>47250425
Huh, I usually take Envy as my primary and just noticed the Gluttony subpower for tiers 2 & 3 are the same.

>>47250962
Fun fact: When there was a poll to determine the most popular character in Medaka Box, Kumagawa won with well over 4000 votes. Medaka, who came in second, had less than a thousand.

>>47251081
>? that wasn't there before

Well, color me intrigued.

>>47250550
The fact that continentals think like this is proof Britain needs to get out.

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>>47251504
Yea this one and the third character poll were very clear with Kumagawa being a clear favorite.

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>>47251504
Plus he got his own spinoff and an actual harem of top tier waifus.
He deserved to win for once ;_;

>>47250163
Is anyone feeling a certain sense of deja-vu? I feel like, unironically, someone is going to do or say something un-pc and this will trigger something. There'll be a minor fight and this one here will ignore the calls to change something about his/her CYOA and that'll cause something else. I might have it confused but I don't know.

>>47251555
Who cares if some whiny whorebag gets triggered?

How do I do magic for a highpower mage cyoa? Is it fine to stick to archtypes (druïdism, necromancy, etc.) or should I give out specific spells?

The problem might be in my premise. You need to take out a BBEG in X years when the fucker suddenly shows up so you need to have magic geared towards taking out BBEGs. Yet until those fuckers show up, you're free to do whatever you want so I figure you also need magic geared towards usage in your daily life. How can they do both though. Maybe I'm overcomplicating stuff?

>>47250163
looks cool. I didn't really read everything because it's a wip, but liked the parts I did read. I probably wouldn't read the intro because it's long, doesn't seem very interesting, and is white-on-white. Some other places have the "small white text on a white background" problem. Looks really good, although the rotated location images have artifacts on their edges.

>>47251555
I hope so. Bitches whining ineffectually is my fetish.

>>47250983
Hell hath no fury...

>>47251537
Where?

Gentlemen, in honor of our lord and savior Misogi Kumagawa, I propose a Kumagawa CYOA where every option involves Kumagawa.

Can it be done?

>>47251586
I mean, some people would want to adventure and kill shit in general or be a merc.

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>>47251643
Where what?

>>47251807
where, or what is the name of the spinoff?

>>47251215
Say that to Joseph Joestar.

>>47251586
Go with archetypes. It makes it a lot easier on you, and most have at least a few uses in both combat and daily life.

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>>47251840
Good Loser Kumagawa

>>47251507
well...
Now it's here

>>47250425
Starting with drawbacks
>Unknown
Honestly isn't a drawback. I'd rather my parents don't know the shit I'm planning to do. The whole "people who loved you before will hate you" won't be a problem. I'm not staying in this country, of course.
Getting Identification papers shouldn't be too hard with these powers.
Demon waifu was tempting, for sure, and Third times the charm would make it more likely I do enough bad shit for a not-totally bad time in Hell.
Let's try something new is fun, and a horribly devilish thing to do, but doesn't mesh with Unknown.
>Specialty Versatility
Is just too good. Kinda sucks that it only works for the secondary power, I assume he forgot to change it when he added specialties for the primary powers


Lust tertiary, Sloth secondary, Pride primary
>Lust 1
I can't decline a power that makes me more attractive. Yes, other powers are more useful, but it's just such a nice thing.

>Sloth 1
Such an amazing way to spread evil. Only question is how it interacts with Pride 1: On one hand, I can skip eating and sleeping to improve myself, and it would harm others. On the other, not eating healthy = not improving myself, but it won't actually harm me anyway.
So I guess half the week I eat cake and candy, hurting others, and the other half I eat nothing but healthy stuff, to improve my body.
>Sloth 2
It's okay, I guess. Not a fan of the "you have to visit every 24 hours". Since I have Pride 3, this isn't too useful. I still feel this is more useful than Lust 2, thanks to how great Pride 3 is.
+Pride, because Lust is useless. Again, it's not too useful since I don't plan to stay in the same place too long. Still, it's kinda cool for the early years.
+Gluttony (Specialty Versatility), mainly because of that 24 hour rule.

>>47250984
Medaka Box

>>47252050
>Pride 1
Amazing.
>Pride 2
+Sloth, because that's just so useful, too. I could leave hateful reviews for restaurants and amusement parks and cause their decline, or leave positive responses to awful movie scripts. Both easy ways to spread evil.
>Pride 3
Cult. Basically, write some "self-help books" (Pride 2's Sloth Speciality will help greatly) that don't actually help you out (Think PUA or red-pill), and suggest they go out causing damage and rape. Hey, it's not my fault that's how they interpreted the book.
+Lust. Huh. So I didn't need the Lust 2 power afterall. Goodie. And it's even easier to get my fans to rape and do other degenerate shit. I'm going for a harem end, personally.
+Sloth. Neat. My followers will go out of their way to grant me more followers. So I guess with the Lust Speciality, this means those I would be attracted to go out of their way to attract more girls for my harem.
And they're all the not-murdering-me-or-my-harem type yanderes.

I went Pride 3 -> Celebrity before, but this time I'm going more for some Anonymous-tier thing, with harassing people both online and in real life. Just basically troll the shit out of everyone.
And I swear there used to be a way to get an additional tertiary power. Sloth and Pride's primary tier weren't too useful for my plans of anonymity and spreading of chaos.
Wasn't sure on what to get with Specialty Versatility.

I spent insane amounts of time hopping back and forth, figuring out whether to get Sloth or Pride as the Primary power, and which Secondary Specialization to spend the Specialty Versatility on.
I didn't need Lust thanks to Pride 3 with Lust. I thought about SLoth 2 with Envy, to steal attributes, but Pride 1 kinda negates that and the 24 hour rule can fuck you up.

>>47251785
I probably explained my premise wrong. The idea is that you are a Sleeper Agent Mage. You will pick a single major city to live in for the next 10-15 years. At some point in the final 5 years a BBEG will awaken in your city. It is your responsibility to stop it when that time comes. Until then you are free to do whatever you want in your city. Just don't mess up.

>>47251845
I think I'm indeed going for archetypes.


Don't make fun of me but what are the major/most important cities of the world? I'm thinking New York, Paris, Bruxelles and Hong Kong. Is that about right? What other cities should I include?

>>47252075
Well you're really going to have to define major/most important. Economic/cultural impact in the modern day? Historical/cultural importance? Since you have a more magical theme the latter would make sense but then none of your choices besides maybe Paris would be at all relevant.

>>47250575
Thanks for posting those, I would have lost them.

>>47249995
Highlander, do you want some more? Round it out to four or six? I've got some more ideas I've been stewing over.

>>47252142
There's a limited amount of people like you so for a city to be included they should mostly be economically and politically valuable. Maybe one cultural city can be included because of magical world heritage reasons. It's mostly about political influence though.

City should also be fun for anon to live in of course.

>>47252193
Sure, I'll take everything I can get, even if I don't use it I can store it for later.

>>47250425

Primary: Greed (Spec: Pride)
Secondary: Sloth (Specs: Pride, Gluttony)
Tertiary: Pride

Curses: Vampiric Thirst
Boons: Secondary Versatility

I'm supernaturally good at self-improvement and able to convince anyone that I'm the perfect fit for any job. That's going to be a serious spring board into some serious dosh.

Gluttony's upgrade on Sloth 2 is just lovely, combined with Pride. I only need to visit once a month.

Abuse, cruelty and screwing people over for my own gain.

It's not the most fancy evil but it's classic and it's evil that works.

>>47252142
Another important consideration, is the city tied to the BBEG or affect it in anyway?

Because then you might want to pick cities with special history or legends that a magical BBEG would draw power from. Like Cairo making the BBEG some kind of ancient pharaoh, or if the BBEGs are interchangeable then they could get some kind of ancient Egyptian maggufin artifact or something.


Tokyo is practically a mandatory city on all counts, being literally ancient, populous, physically huge, economically important, and the crux of the inevitable weeb magical girl builds.

Syndey would be pretty much the only city in Australia most people would instantly recognize. so if you want to include Austrailia that's probably the one to go with.

How about Vatican City (Or rome, really but the political power of the Vatican as a religious center is what I was thinking if)

London. Nuff said.

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>>47249947
>Implying there is something wrong with being a good hunter

>>47250425
So, the obvious endgame here is scamming your way into starting global thermonuclear war, right?

>>47251235
I think the whole theme was a deconstruction of Shonen/SoL/general manga

>>47252742

Maybe if you are Wrath.

The others? Not likely so much. I can't see Sloth's endgame changing the world dramatically.

>>47252742
my endgame is causing the beta uprising, not war between countries.
Also scamming weak-willed people and raping, and improving myself as much as possible.

>>47250983
>pocket dimension of concentrated pain and anguish
>living nightmare that feeds on darkest fearsvand insecurities
That's some pretty dark magic you're getting into anon. I'm not so sure the magical council would approve.

>>47252050
might as well write out my plans since nothing else is going on.
>Very early game (first year)
Since I don't have any proof I am who I say I am, thanks to unknown, and my appearance is changing thanks to Lust 1, I have some problems with identity. I can't stay where someone who used to know me lives, but leaving the country will be a minor inconvenience.
Well, I can't fly anywhere, so the plan is to take the train to whereever and find someone to live with using Sloth 2.
Then, I'll stay here or move around, still in the same country, for the first year, and be abuse to my host to trigger Pride 1.
Basically, spend a year improving myself as much as possible, gaining more power.
When the year is up, I'll need to get some identity papers, which I hope Pride 2 will help with: If I can claim to belong in a business meeting, I'm sure I can talk my way into getting new papers and a credit card.
I'll see if I can steal a credit card from someone else, but not with Pride 3 since that shouldn't be in effect yet.

>Early game
Amass power with Pride 1 and generally have fun with ruining restaurants with my reviews etc.

>Late game
Use Pride 3 to get even more wealth, get fans and then be awful to them to get even more power.
Eventually I'll have enough fans, and they'll generate even more, where I can probably start taking over businesses: Get my fans to boycut movies I'm not in, get them to buy products that I advertise. They'll make me famous, which I gain through power of fans, not through believe just believing I'm worthy of praise.
How would it be Prideful to receive praise when I know my performance could be better?

>Very late game
With Pride 3's cult, I plan to get control of politicians. How much control I gain depends on the number of fans, of course.
I'll probably start out small, working from the shadows through Pride 2 so I can deny any involvement.

With Sloth 1's "you age at 50%" speed plus no ill effect from my lifestyle, I have enough time to work.

>>47250425
Unknown used to pay for Specialty Versatility. Wrath 1 (Body of Violence). Wrath 2 with Lust specialty.

There's probably something better I could pick, but why would I want anything else? I bet I could do a lot of raping before I go back to hell and I'm unlikely to get bored of it.

>>47253347
I honestly don't think JUST raping is enough sin to get out of an eternity of torture in hell. I mean, my original build involved a lot of selfish, hedonistic pleasure (as any sinful build should!) but the point is to have an effect beyond yourself.

Aspire to be more than just Rapeman.

>>47250983
That's pretty edgy, desu. Pretty sure this drops you into CN territory.

>>47252787
Deconstruction? Like, the 'this would suck in real life' thing, or the 'matter-antimatter reaction' thing?

>>47249995
I like to see a page that lists the different species that you can be. Like negatives and the positives.

>>47253585
Well given that we're going to be having, Humans, Nisetics, Yautja, Quarians, Giga-Deer, Mokresia and three more races of abominations then I think I'm going to need to do that, spirits, AI and hardlights not withstanding. The only questions remaining are how to do it and where.

>>47253626
I'd say in between the origins and the skills. That way people know the immediate differences before investing in skills.

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>>47250983

>>47250983
>getting triggered by revenge fantasies
You're an embarrassment.

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>>47251249
You called?

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>>47253932

>>47250983
What's the appeal of a rape cyoa? Is it all about carnal desires? Is it about the power?

Wouldn't you rather have a waifu or husbando if that's your thing who genuinely loves you?

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>>47249947
>Unlimited Power
>Leave humanity behind
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJUmD3ZYS38


C'mon

>>47253954
Some people can't be happy unless someone else isn't.

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>>47250983
>choose to whore yourself for mone and powers
>know well in advance they you will be raped for many mounths as part of that deal
>be mad that you actually had to pay the previuosly negotiated price instead of getting shit for free
>torture the guy who was a part of the deal for all eternity
women logic

What is some new oc cyoa in development/have been released?

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>>47253983
This. Also, just realised-

>>47253932
-deepest lore.

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>>47254024

>>47253954
>you get a perfect 10/10 with the exact personality, desires, fetishes, bla bla you want
that's dull as shit
>>47250983
>four responses in ten minutes
Guess the Americans wake up when I go to bed.
>>47254005
Well, you haven't told use anything about the one you're developing. I'm all ears.

>>47253984
The fact that you knew what you were getting into doesn't change the fact that the guy is an abusive rapist. We just knew what would happen through the power of CYOA insight. Why wouldn't you punish him?

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>>47253954
Also I do like that, I'm just in the mood for different things at different times.

Sometimes you want an affectionate super waifu to dote on you. Sometimes you want a shy girl to comfort and hug. And sometimes you just want a bitchy domme to glare at you with killing intent as you perforate her anus while looking her in the eye, for hours on end until she won't walk right for weeks or have proper bowel control ever again.

It's like how sometimes you're in the mood for a full-course meal at the best restaurant in town, and other times you just want some instant noodles.

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>>47254005
Eh, soon. Probably some time next week.

>>47254053
Punish with eternity of torture? That's some disproportinate retribution out there, all the other stuff like torturing him until he perents and sending him to another rapist to be abused i can see, but that shit is too much.

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>>47254178
Hey, what does a Kingdom Crusher actually look like? What are its' powers supposed to be like? I've never been really clear since everything's been abstracted into arbitrary win/loss conditions. Are the things more like C'tan shards or greater Chaos daemons?

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>>47248833
Hey sorry I didn't get back to you. I took some consideration of all the options, the quill and pencil seemed a little too dangerous. You could rewrite history with the quill but there was no guarantee that you kept your memories from before, other than the fact that you wrote something down. The pencil is finite and it seemed possible to write yourself into a mess that's impossible to get out of and then run out of the pencil. I wasn't interested in the brush, just not my style. The golden pen in addition to making calligraphic art, which is something I've wanted to do for a while, can let you write qualities on yourself and other people if they volunteer/are sleep. To write on a person unwilling/without due cause would be immoral.

>>47251081
I'm torn between the tracksuit and coat of squatting, but I'll choose the coat.

>>47253932
Normal skeleton
Top hat
Magnetic bones
Time travel
Skeleton cave
Eric Von Skullkill
>>47253950
Killroy
Jackpot
T-Bone
Diary
Alliance


I'll try E just for fun

>>47252255
> The Colony Insurrections | Post Human

You've seen things those people wouldn't believe. You were created to be better than them, stronger, faster, smarter. Yet you are a slave. They created you to fight their battles, to win their galaxy, and you were never given a choice. That is, until you pushed back. You ran, you hid, you made it back to the homeworld. Now, biological killswitch disabled, you're not sure what do with yourself. An alien, an angel, drifting aimlessly among mortals. That is, till heaven seemed to outstretch you a hand.

(Advanced Tech Understanding, Memory, Natural Physique, Poetic, Free Healing Chip)

> Cold War Era | Unfortunate Son

You were just a boy, rafted to fight in The Man's war across the world in some sweltering cesspool. You've seen your friends disemboweled in front of your eyes, you've seen women and children burned alive in their huts, you've even seen yourself do things that cannot be forgiven, and you almost feel stronger for it. Hard times breed hard men they say. You've adapted to this place, this insanity. Now though, you've seen something worse. Your superior's called it "exposure to unknown chemical agents", but you know damn well what you just saw. You hurt it, but you can still feel it's presence. Has it been following you?

(Mid-tech Understanding, Combat Training, Pariah, Chosen Blood, Free Companion: Shoth-uragamo'to)


Here's two more. I'll work on two more later I suppose.

>>47254053
Knowing and choosing makes it consensual, which makes it not rape by definition.

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>>47254246
It's supposed to look like you, but you can take any shape, form or size.

You're somewhat like Aku, Master of Masters, The Deliverer of Darkness, The Shogun of Sorrow. And similar in powers really.

>>47254328
Except there is technically no consent since you gave yours onesidedly and he did not care or ask for it. He has every intention to rape you.

>>47254117
I've asked this before, but how is "City" not auto-win?

No matter what you feed on you will find it in even a relatively small city reliably without having to put in any effort. There will always be people dying, at least a couple murders every year, people wasting away their lives, losing friends, going crazy. The CYOA even specifies that this is a LARGE city.

Even if you have to be directly involved, all you need to do is find at-risk people and give them a little push. Being able to see and hear virtually everything that goes on in your realm makes that pretty easy.

Meanwhile, the city itself is fairly normal. Even if you go out of your way to fuck someone up with ghost powers every few months, it's generally going to escape the notice of the general public and the authorities are only going to figure things out if you leave a distinct pattern. So you won't be causing a mass evacuation unless you WANT to (and even then it would be difficult), and even if you did prime real estate like that city won't stay vacant for long without damn good reason.

>>47250590
>Hunter is more complicated.

Which one was that?

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>>47254355
I presume the powers are equally versatile, then?Actually I like the idea of there being this fantasy world full of people with proportions and hair colours out of an RPG.

And the one they refer to as the Shapeshifting Master of Darkness is...just this dorky nerd with bad posture. Who's surrounded by minions and casually unleashing nightmare magics with a gesture. "Oh yes, there goes Anon the Unspeakable Demon God. We're still trying to figure out what kind of materials his shoes are made of"

Kinda like Supernatural, except with better CGI.

>>47254399
If you could have avoided it but willingly did not it's consent.

>>47254399
>you can't give consent without someone asking you for it
So when you see a room named Rape Parlor with a and hostess at the enterance warns you that anyone who enters will be raped and you have a free choice of entering it or not and you choose to enter, it would still be noncosensual?

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>>47254399
lol remember guys, even if she consents you could be raping her. this moral indignation totally makes sense in the context of a person premeditating making him their everlasting torture slave.

>>47254503
It's an abandoned city. Seriously, what makes you think anyone lives there?

>>47250425
Primary: greed
lv2:pride
lv2:sloth


secondary: lust
lv2:greed

tertiary: pride

drawbacks
Unknown
Weaker power

boons
Specialty Versatility
Third times a charm
buff

A trillion is quite a lot, but if I move to a rich place I might be able to make it. I'll also make sure to sell my rape powers as much as possible to other people.

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>>47254503
Dunno but I don't think the creator took auto-wins into account and the point of the location choices was more to fluff the kind of horror story you live in rather than to account for minmaxing

>>47254355
That said, I'd really like it if you did do a supplementary image where you can buy powers and minions and unique advantages or something. Just a little flavoring to fluff your dark reign with.

>>47254536
Why is that man covered in limes?

>>47254575
Because he is a faggot, and so is the poster.

>>47254525
Except in this case, you wake up inside of the Rape Parlor, and she's asking you which rapist you want to lead you out, raping you all the while.

>>47254518
>if a killer is chasing you, and, at the end of your strength, you decide not to uselessly dodge anymore, even though you might have lived 1 second longer, you are giving consent to be killed
I see what you're getting at, but it's a bit of a stretch the way you worded it.

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>>47254518
You consented. He didn't know. He raped you. That was his intent.
>>47254525
Yes. If the man in the room don't know that I gave my consent then they raped me.
>>47254536
I'm not her.

Just imagine you're the rapist in one of those rape cyoas. Would it suddenly not be rape if those girls actually consented to being your target in the cyoa but you did not know?

You're basically saying it's not murder if my victim is later revealed to have been suicidal.

>>47254571
Not everyone has Aspergers. It has four general options for minions and guidelines on customization. That's all I need.

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>>47254603
This conversation is never ever going to be productive in this setting and you know it.

>>47254620
4pol has to have its daily two minute hates.

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>>47254587
You forgot the option to just leave peaceably, sans rape, but without getting paid mad moneyz and granted magic powah. At that point, you're choosing money and power over not having sex with that guy.

Like, if a girl decides she wants to fuck a guy for money and status, but in fact secretly hates the idea of fucking him and wishes he would never do so, is he a rapist for following through?

>>47254355

Hey, how do Rewind and Reset work from an in-universe perspective? Is it time fuckery? I was thinking of taking Reset but I have a no-timefucking policy.

>>47254516
>fantasy world full of people with proportions and hair colours out of an RPG.

That's exactly what it is. All kinds of diverse humanoids. From white hair of the Frostlands to purple of the Dusklands.

But in the new CYOA you're only noble/baron level rather than kingdom toppling.

>>47254571
>supplementary image where you can buy powers and minions and unique advantages
So, like Domain Master? I apoligize, but I'm not going to do that. I wanted to focus on worldbuilding rather than the aspect of power choices. Which is why I expanded the world of Kingdom Crusher, and created a DLC of it with a more reasonable interaction.

>>47254659
It's exactly time fuckery.

>>47254609
>in one of those rape cyoas
Kind of a loaded generalization, a conversational trap option.

But I respect you for being able to distinguish that there is a consent component to murder, re: assisted suicide, ritual combat, etc.

>>47254655
Pretty much yes. Even then the female could actually be raping the male by the fact she is having sex with him under a false premise as well.

>>47254503
MAYBE you got stuck with some disaster zone like Pripyat with a permanent evacuation order. Although with an original population of less than 50 thousand Pripyat hardly qualifies as "large", and it's the second-largest formerly-inhabited city on the planet. The largest is mostly destroyed.

In that case though you take Nomadic Realm and situate yourself on an actual, populated city instead. It'll be tough for a while depending on how many miles away that is, but sooner or later you should be able to take your victory and retire, so to speak.

>>47254525
But Anon, if you say it was rape afterwards, even if you gave your consent before and during the act, then it was tape :)

>>47254609
>You consented. He didn't know. He raped you. That was his intent.
What matters is that if you haven't consented, you wouldn't get raped. You actively decided to get raped therefore it is your responsibility.

>>47254673
>noble/baron level

That sounds like it would be a hit or miss. I'm intrigued.

>>47254355
Indeed. I want a Dark Reign CYOA, where your powers are somewhat lesser, but now you have to hold what you have taken.

>>47254697
Your fucked up theory of rape mechanics doesn't even work, and your shitty politics is a useless eyesore.

>>47254673
>It's exactly time fuckery.

Figured. Oh well.

>>47254603

Still hype for this guy's autistic magical girl thing.

>>47254728
Nope. If I'm suicidal and walk into a dark alley in a bad neighbourhood, get killed and robbed, then was I murdered?

>>47254609
But you chose to be raped.
You saw a list of the potential guardians, ignored the teenager you could just give "the talk" to, and the guy who just sorta will ask you to get his dick wet, and the guy who you will definitely 100% fall in love with, and chose the asshole who will rape you every possible way for over a year - specifically to take revenge on him. Not justice, but mean-spirited revenge.

Do you have any problems that you want to talk about? What was your relationship with your father?

>>47254734
Please refute my theory of rape mechanics. :^)

>>47254757
No, that's called "taking a risk".
If you walked up to a hard-ass gangster and insulted him to his face, that would be "assisted suicide".

>>47254753
>Still hype for this guy's autistic magical girl thing
He said he quit it weeks ago.

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>>47254554
Because those don't actually exist, as I was explaining >>47254700 while you posted. It also does not specify "abandoned"

This is the largest abandoned city in the world. Former population 150k, it barely qualified as a large city in its height. Now it barely qualifies as a ruin, just some rubble really. You can't call this a "large cityscape" by any stretch of the meaning.

The closest you will ever find is Pripyat (site of the Chernobyl disaster if you aren't already familiar). Former population of 49,400. Besides, it's kind of unfair to give us an active disaster area where people aren't even ALLOWED to go.

>>47250248
o u

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By the time I finish a new build for this you guys will have raped us into a new thread.

>>47254803

Well... well shit. Okay.

>>47254655
Shit analogy. In this case, the money and power is rightfully yours, and you're being forced to give it up unless you let the guy rape you. If some shithead lawyer held a woman's father's will for ransom, threatening to burn it unless she fucked him, you better believe that'd be rape.

>>47254733
Why not make one, friend? I can't make CYOA's forever. This will probably be my last one, for multiple reasons.

>>47254732
Yeah, it could be a hit or miss. I still put in a lot of work into it even though I slacked on design.

All that time thinking, writing and gathering images. I hope at least people will respect it for that.

>>47254817
It actually does. Or at least it says you have to get victims to come to you rather than just starting with them inside of you. Seriously, you might as well claim starting as a house gets you an entire family inside of you.

>>47254890
>the money and power is rightfully yours
no it isn't. did you read the cyoa?

>>47253954
It often is about the power, about domination, about not getting things easy but actually conquering them.

[/spoiler]Doesn't mean it's great, just that's why some people prefer it.[/spoiler]

>>47254952
Dun fucked up spoilers. Gonna go to bed now.

>>47253954
Do the constituent causes matter for design purposes? There are different flavours of rape, which different people will prefer or not. What matters is that the preference, not the why.

Unless you are trying to satisfy rape fetishes without including rape? Which seems kind of counterproductive, though not completely useless. Anyhow, good luck in your research.

>>47254944
Did you?

>>47253984
I think you and other people in this debate are forgetting that this is meta knowledge. The way I see it, she's making the choice for the cyoa, but "in character" doesn't know what her guardian will do.

>>47254901
>Why not make one, friend? I can't make CYOA's forever
I've been saying that for months. It never works.
It's sad to hear the already low number of authors is dwindling even more, but that's life.
Maybe someone new will pick up your mantle.
One can hope.

>>47255080
>It's sad to hear the already low number of authors is dwindling even more
It must've been love, but it's over now.

>>47254837
Can you move from one room to every adjacent room or can I chose how the rooms connect to one another myself?

>>47255147
But why?

>>47255147
Wow man. You sure showed them.

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>>47255147
>Make a reddit account just to shitpost on some obscure subreddit about how much you hate them for not using -insert other website here-

Got 'em!

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>>47255065
Then the guy is just the blunt instrument of the rape. The real perpetrator, the mastermind, the person on whom your character should be bearing down for revenge in hate and spite and agony of soul... is you.

>>47255159
>With manual organization, you can rotate and place these however you like within a pre-made grid that you will select. You can place walls and doors however you want. You can, for example, group several corridors together to make one larger chamber.

My interpretation has been that the connectivity between rooms is entirely up to you. Complete adjacency would be pretty weird, though I suppose you could play it as a middle-manager style Dungeon Meister who heard all about this new "open floorplan" business and wants to synergize new efficiencies.

>>47255080
Oh and why doesn't it work? You just need an interest in seeing your work completed and posted.

Sharing my interests with others is something I love, but it's just that after so many projects I feel like I'm finally reaching my limit. Ideas, images and fantasies are running out. Don't get me wrong, I loved working on each and every one of them.

>>47255147
Good job anon, you sure told them what for. I'm sure even now they're staring slack-jawed and open-mouthed at your-

Let's be honest, there's no way that post is gonna still be around in an hour, if hasn't already been deleted.

>>47255274
My characters would (rightfully) be angry at me for all the shit I put them through.

Or, well, they would be if they weren't all such huge sluts.

>>47255301
It's already gone.

>>47255318
Called it.

>>47254944

Other anon is actually correct, the money and power ARE rightfully yours. The money is from an inheritance, you know, something bequeathed to you by someone close to you, like a relative, upon their death. Their analogy about a shithead lawyer holding your father's will for ransom is spot on for what's happening here.

As for the power, the new body you've received no matter if you wanted it or not comes with a lot of latent magic energy. Are you really going to argue that one isn't entitled to any advantages their very body would provide them over others?

Now, sure, attending a magic school isn't something you're born into unless we're discussing something along the lines of Harry Potter, so arguing that could be a fair point. However, your body magically changed and you've got a vast inheritance on the way, it's very possible that your dearly departed relative was, in fact, a wizard and that your body and abilities, as well as tuition for the magic school are all part of the same inheritance. Since the cyoa in question goes so far as to state you're on the fast track to joining the magic council upon graduation, it's very likely said relative also held a high office and appointment to those offices are decided via Matrilineal primogeniture, which would explain why you've suddenly received a new, female body despite the fact you were born as a male.

Absolutely nowhere in the introduction to the cyoa is it mentioned that you will need to "earn" your inheritance by whoring yourself out to one or many people, instead you're told you must become the ward of your selection of appointed caretakers, all of which sound as though they will sexually abuse you.

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>>47255289
>Oh and why doesn't it work? You just need an interest in seeing your work completed and posted
As I said, I've tried to no effect.
Plenty of people here post "ideas" and "asks" others to make the cyoas for them, but they never make them themselves.
It's especially prevalent with fetishists.

>>47255358
I'm going to follow another anon's lead and make a distinction between "you" and "your character". The money and power don't belong to YOU, they belong to your CHARACTER, who only exists at all if you choose to play - which is to choose the conditions of the play, which are known to you at the time of your choice.

You are CHOOSING to CREATE a rape victim; your character has no choice in the matter, and neither do the "rapists". They are simply forced to follow the script you consented to, because YOU wanted to have a character with wealth and magical power (if not flat out to live out the fantasy of being a rape victim who kinda asked for it).

>>47253954
>Wouldn't you rather have a waifu or husbando if that's your thing who genuinely loves you?
Can't I have one who does that and also rapes me?

>>47249995
I know that the Travellers are pretty much the largest organization in the multiverse, but it'd be cool, in my opinion, to have another multiversal organization running around as tivals or something.

>>47255459
Well, yeah. This is in no way unique to CYOAs or fetishists. If anything I'd associate it most with video games. Have an "idea" is always less effort than actually putting that idea into practice and realizing oh, hey, you need more than just an idea! People just tossing their random, half-baked thoughts out into the void is moderately annoying and a waste of space but I'm not sure why some people take it as some affront to their proud CYOA-maker honour.

>>47255459
It may just be me, but I like posting OC more than seeing OC.

It's probably because my projects are all things I love, and the amount of effort in them is immense. A fantasy of nobility and power. No tech but some magic. They sometimes contain hidden streaks of my fetishes.

Let's just say I'm excited to post KC diplomacy, but I still have to do: 10 more kingdom descriptions, 11 rewards, the callings and the system.

>>47255576
Calm down there, partner. This is all just pretend here.

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>>47255594
Yes, you can. It's a classic false dilemma. Or it would be, if it were actually saying there was no other option. It was actually asking whether you preferred one over the other or not.

>>47254794
Taking a risk is walking into the neighborhood, not getting murdered.

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>>47255687
Also I updated this a little bit, based on feedback and calculations. The overall system is so broken and unexplored it wraps back around to being good again.

>Normal Giant, Chainmail, Sword, Spare Hand, Haste

>>47253927
She's the one who got triggered by a rape themed cyoa. I find her tears of rage entertaining.

>>47255685
As far as I can tell the caps were for emphasis and not because they were screaming at their computer desk.

>>47252875
Mine is just to fuck people over as much as possible, with as little work as possible, all while having as much fun as possible.

>>47237531
Loli body, Ron. I think I would not rape a little girl in exchange for magical powers.

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>>47255685
>hey, let's look into the moral implication of our game of make-believe, for fun
>oh hey neat! I have some observations too-
>HEY WHOA COWBOY, IT'S JUST PRETEND
I love /cyoag/ sometimes.

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Another thread gone and hardly any CYOA or CYOA related things posted. Congratulations faggots, you failed.

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>>47255576
>I'm going to follow another anon's lead and make a distinction between "you" and "your character".

I personally use the terms interchangeably, because cyoas aren't real, and I think most others take "you" to mean "your character" as well.

With that addressed... From the view of your character, laws are being broken here by shady law practices. That's all I'm saying, not that you should be raped, or that you should not be raped. Nor am I saying you should kill the person that raped you, or that you should just let them go. It's observation and extrapolation from the information the cyoa provides.

Basically I was bored as shit with too much time on my hands, so I wrote more on a subject that there really wasn't any pressing need to reply to in order to kill time.

By the way, I don't disagree with you regarding scripts and the like, I think most people hold issue with the fact that all choices end in rape without any hints that it's what you're getting into. Maybe they liked the very simple concept and got invested in it, then imagined how they would react in such a situation. I really can't say. We're all a bit autistic here in our own way, could just be some people want to stir shit up for the hell of it, because they can. Slut Life is popular enough and it's basically a more detailed version of the same thing.

>>47255576
>"you" and "your character"
Choose YOUR Own Adventure

>>47255912
I don't think you understood that post.

>>47251504
>>47251529
>got intrigued
>looked up manga
>read the first chapter
>main female is super smart, super attractive, great at sports, and super rich

I wish I would stop trying to like anime

>>47255576
Only in the sense that you can choose to close a CYOA, and closing the CYOA and walking away only exists as a meta-option. The premise is that you've found yourself in these circumstances, so decide what to do next.

>>47251841
He got senile

>>47255668
>tfw you will never learn what Bliss' fetishes are
>tfw there will never be a CYOA where you get to be Bliss' loving waifu, and reward him when he works on his cyoas
that last part is kinda iffy, because it would feel like denying myself.

>>47255808
Ron is an odd choice. The way it's written conflicts with what it is, because I know exactly how I would react to certain things. Making Ron the way Ron is would require him to be completely different from me.

>>47255962
She's as much of a Mary Sue as she can be, and the series gets really meta about her having the powers of being a main character. Personally as far as I am concerned though she's also the worst character in the series.

>>47255808
She's not a little girl, she's a magical construct shaped like a little girl. One who is not only soulless, but who is incapable of gaining a soul unless you do horrible, degrading things to her - and who will love you for it once you have one.

At least, thats the premise. I think I'd realize something was up when she started crying and begging me not to as well.

>>47255913
The whole concept of "your character" exists for the sole purpose of situations where something isn't real.

>all choices end in rape without any hints that it's what you're getting into
Was the "they're all going to rape you" notification not enough of a hint?

>>47255922
Yeah. You know those Choose Your Own Adventure books were not about you as an individual either, right? You were playing a character, a role. Roleplaying, even. I know, the concept must be so alien.

>>47255962
I'm trying to remember which chapter Kumagawa first shows up in, and I think it's Chapter 20.

>>47255966
Yeah, exactly. You, not meta-you, found yourself actually playing a CYOA and continued to do so. The meta-ness of a choice you make does not absolve you of responsibility for it.

>>47256002
Why is "you except X" such a difficult concept for people? No one's persona is 100% "I would never have sex with hot, soulless homunculus such that she gains an immortal soul".

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>>47256001
Oh my... Do you like my CYOA's though?

>>47256098
The CYOA doesn't say that Ron will force himself on you. It just describes his situation and what has been told to him. How he reacts is up to him/you.

>>47256098
Sadly, it seems many people here are literally one dimensional personalities, and so any difference at all represents a 100% alteration.

>>47256165
If we are going to continue referencing it, we should probably repost to avoid the telephone effect.

>>47256001
I genuinely feel like I've gotten to a point in my life where I'm worse than waifu-fags: They want a perfect, hot, virgin girl who loves them completely for no reason, who shares all their hobbies and fetishes etc.
and I basically want to be someone's waifu. It unironically doesn't seem like an awful life, to dedicate myself and give pleasure to someone else, assuming the relationship isn't abusive.
Only God can help me at this point.

I shall grant ye aging thread a mighty spam wish
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Pbh9eBJk4Cc

>anon has made next cyoa double it's points with the power of the metacyoa's A

>>47249912
>iq 500

RAW this is the best option no questions asked. 500 IQ is so far beyond anything physically obtainable by humans it's absurd. There would be little you would not be able to do. Forget being a leader, you could do that as a little tiny hobby on the side while you advance science literally tens of thousands of years in the span of your singular human lifetime. You would be a humanity defining name for all of time. Whenever someone wanted to claim greatness they would claim to be born of your line. Whenever aliens from worlds dominated by future generations spoke of humans they would know most of all the human leader and innovator of ages past, said to be the most intelligent being in the entire universe. You would be the giant who scientists claim they are building on the shoulders of.

>>47256154
Of course.
I've made so many builds for Monster Hunter, but I don't think I've made one for that one that SDA used as inspiration for Domain Monster.
the one about a creepy domain

>>47255620
Well to be honest not really, the first generation of 'Travellers' were timelord type assholes who despite having obscene levels of power wiped each other out, and there are plenty of other shithead organizations running around, they just fracture easily. Traveller's might be basically non-functional as an organization but if there's one thing they've done right its actually make the boat full of psychotic nutjobs work together.

>>47256256
>SDA used as inspiration for Domain Monster.
>the one about a creepy domain
What? Which ones are you talking about? I hope you'll like KC diplomacy. It has some Monster Hunter inspiration.

>>47256214
There's pretty much nothing wrong with the situations you described. The heart of love doesn't care so much for reasons, anyway.

>LOVE not me for comely grace,
>For my pleasing eye or face,
>Nor for any outward part,
>No, nor for a constant heart:
> ` For these may fail or turn to ill,
> ` ` So thou and I shall sever:
>Keep, therefore, a true woman's eye,
>And love me still but know not why—
> ` So hast thou the same reason still
> ` ` To doat upon me ever!

- John Wilbye

>>47256098
Because at this level it's "you except not you".

"You except a girl" or "you except attractive" or even "you except smarter" would all be fine concepts. The core personality is unchanged. The way it's described in that CYOA is something I would never be on a fundamental level, it's just some asshole that looks like me.

>>47256287
It was something about having to survive a year in this place.
One option was living in a creepy mansion.
The bottom of the page had some mention of going to some "void" where you couldn't move or feel.

I'm sure I'll like it

>>47254258
(A)

I remember that meta cyoa being grounds for hilarity when you have it connect to cyoa's that have no business getting extra points. The gun crafting cyoa, for example. I remember making a hand-held machine gun that was able to fire .50 cal rounds because of this.

>>47256029
>Was the "they're all going to rape you" notification not enough of a hint?

There wasn't one in the introduction, it's something you only get from the individual descriptions. So ultimately, no, it was not enough of a hint to prevent kneejerk reactions of upset people at the lack of any kind of forewarning.

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>>47256337
This was my first CYOA. SDA had nothing to do with it, though. Only Domain Master was originally Level Design from SDA.

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>>47256194
You asked.

>>47256214
>It unironically doesn't seem like an awful life, to dedicate myself and give pleasure to someone else, assuming the relationship isn't abusive.

You just want a loving relationship. In a healthy relationship, that's what both partners do for each other in their own way.

>>47256378
Oooh. Right

You're still staying ITT after you stop making cyoas, right?
I want to pretend you make build(s) to my cyoas

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>>47256433
I will, don't worry. And I do make builds to your cyoa sometimes, but you really ought to make a nice fantasy one!

>>47256334
Except no one's core personality is "I would never do X in this incredibly niche fantasy scenario". For context, consider that a not insignificant portion of relatively intelligent people will assert that gender is, indeed, a core element of their personality. You can laugh at them, but it doesn't change their belief, or vindicate yours.

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>>47256401
Yeah, but the important part is feeling like I was chosen by them, like I was an option in a waifu CYOA and won.
Something about feeling wanted and appreciated, I guess
>>47256471
You know what, just for you I'll bump it up to second place on my to-do list.
Looking over the notes it actually steals the "become King" part from Kingdom Crusher, but the system isn't done yet.

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>>47255147
>flaws in your shitty community that gape more than your mothers' assholes
Shit, that's good.

>>47256347
>>47256378

This is... not a good combination. Still, let's do this.

(Meta CYOA doubled everything)
>Trial: Survival+Exploration
Mystery compounded with exploration sealing everything off would be bad and solving mysteries with your life in danger is much harder, too. S+E seems to be the best choice here.

>Domain: Hunter's Castle + Perverted Manor
Hunter's Castle will give me a chance to find armor and weapons to protect myself with and the perverted manor should make the traps less lethal, hopefully.

>Gifts:
>Upgrade - Electricity+Plumbing
The first two perks just make the Perverted Castle a lot more comfortable.
>Reward - Master + Weather
This should make the place more comfortable if I can keep it.
Overall, This build looks to be a year-long, less furry CoC in a castle. Not the best Cyoa to combine the Meta with, but I think I managed a survivable outcome.

>>47256544
>just for you
You earned a headpat.
>steals the "become King" part from Kingdom Crusher
Love it. Mimicry is the highest form of flattery.

Anyway, keep an eye out for my DLC CYOA next week!

>>47254837
Just made a dungeon in which you need to move from one room to another 165 times to get to the fountain. I know you can do worse but I felt this was enough to keep most adventurers away.

Also, getting a free elite means becoming a fairy is actually free of any cost.

>>47256671
>>47254837
What I'm trying to say is that I like the dungeon a lot and whoever made it should feel proud of himself.

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>>47256645
It'll be a tad darker and more serious, and much more plot-heavy, than what I usually do.
I really wanna make it good.

>>47256505
It might be that I'm reading too much into it. It's just that the idea that I specifically wouldn't be able to convince myself to be skeptical of the situation, or that I would even be capable of forcing myself on someone even if THEIR life was on the line is utterly unbelievable without significant levels of modification or mental interference.

>>47256732
If you need my help, just holla at me.

>>47256505
I live my life according to a rigid code of behavior. If you say "Javert, except he is a thief" there is nothing of Javert left.

>>47256779
I can't find an image, but imagine some anime girl with twinkling stars in her eyes.
I guess you helping me with a CYOA is the closest I'll ever get to my fantasy
You still haven't said what your fetishes are. I need to know.
Please. It's already 1:30

>>47256671
I've been working on a minotaur dungeon that used a series of teleport traps and a repetitive pinwheel layout such that if the adventurers were mapping out their exploration they'd soon start having to write over their either path when they started backtracking. However, mapping that out myself started becoming too much of a headache even before I brought in the Minotaur's power to move the dungeon around.

Putting it in the Spiral layout would've been best, perhaps, but I figured the Square gave me more room to work with.

I'm very interested in seeing how you got to 165. A lot of backtracking with locked doors/teleports or something?

>>47254005
I'm gonna do one final proof-read of a 9 page CYOA & then post it. There's a lot to it, so I probably won't finish until next thread.

>>47256866
Yeah backtracking with 7 different locked doors and spiral patterns. I even put a lake and pit in the corner that the adventurers would have to move through 6 times or so. I would post the layout but I already closed me PC and am now just posting from my mobile.

>>47255687
>>47255763
I feel like more than just giving us the option to choose which sword, you should also explain WHY they need to be chosen. As it is it currently seems kind of pointless.

Fire + Thunder Sword
>Champion
Race: Elf
Plate armor
Sword
Shield

Normal Elf

Teleport.

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>>47256853
You really want to know? It's not a topic I enjoy, and it's over midnight here too. I'd just like to finish writing this one kingdom. Oh dear, it's a bit dark though.

>>47256401
Thing is, one partner's "own way" can seem valid to an outside observer, while the other partner's may not. This leads to the perception that "their relationship dynamic is completely and overwhelmingly skewed and therefore abusive or at least dysfunctional by default". Despite the couple being mutually supporting, happy, and stable.

This is actually somewhat common, outside of a strictly homogeneous monoculture; even couples who are friends harbor judgements against each other, or even shittalk each other, privately within the couple or playfully in the open or even in heated conflicts.

>>47257054
I do. I really, really do.
Unless it's completely fucked, like vore or male inpregnation.
please be something like non-violent yandere
I'm honestly only staying up thanks to this conversation. I mean, I couldn't sleep if I stopped, so it makes no difference, but whatever.

>>47256738
I agree with you, I think the Ron choice should be a mage comes to see you, well not you the clone you, and drops off the real little girl you, and tells clone you that real little girl you is a homonculous. And he wants you to take care of her for a while and he'll pick her up later. Then you can decide what clone you would do based on what you would do in that situation.

>>47256809
Javert's defining trait is his rigid code of behaviour and the mental anguish it causes him in the complex moral grey of the real world, not an especial hatred of thievery. He could simply adhere fanatically and self-destructively to the letter of a different moral code, or even the same code from a different angle (a fire and brimstone preacher, rather than a lawman, etc). In fact, that gives me an idea...

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>>47257128
>like vore or male inpregnation.
No it's nothing like that. Alright fine. I got a lot, but I'll narrow it down a little. Sigh. Yandere is nice, monstergirls, shortstacks, normal impreg, domination, girl on girl violence (ryona). Yeah...

>>47251081
Hussar wings. I live in chicago, there's literally no downside

>>47257158
>Then you can decide what clone you would do based on what you would do in that situation.
That honestly seems more than a little flat and boring to me. Just opens the door to "lol I'd never rape someone so I guess I win everything forever and avoid the entire premise of the CYOA in a completely predictable and meaningless way!"

>>47256098
No, but I'm not someone who would rape a young woman who's crying and begging me to stop, even if someone told me "hey, she really wants it, she's going to die if you don't, and you'll get cool shit if you do." It just feels so viscerally wrong, and I think it'd instantly convince me that the guy is a fucking liar who wants me to rape a woman so he can watch and jerk off.

>>47257286
Hypothetically, what if she died 2 minutes later. And the guy said "Told you so, she was under a magical curse, where only a muggle can save her life by having sex."

>>47257286
So you basically can't imagine being under a Compulsion spell or effect? Or just being sure and unquestioning of something that you just woke up viscerally believing?

>>47257260
I don't understand the last one, don't know what "short stack" is, and am I right to assume Monstergirls refers to cat girls etc., not Monstergirl quest?
As in, you like hot girls with animal ears, not horsepussy?
Really, I don't see any reason why you would be ashamed, unless you chose not to post the worst ones.
I can see inpregnation as a romantic thing (she's literally carrying a part of you for nine months, and she's chosen to have your baby), but not as a fetishy thing.

6/10, could be worse. You definitely need to add gentle femdom to your list.

>>47257356
Shortstack = short & stacked.

>>47257356
Shortstacks are short women with developed assets, like big thighs or boobs. I think ryona is beating people up.

>>47257158
Under this circumstance we would both compare notes and realize there was SOMETHING sketchy. I think he's a copy of me, he thinks I'm a construct, but he wasn't informed of the fhe fact I'm a "copy" of him.

We'd likely agree that neither of us have enough information to determine which story is true. If having sex will earn him powers or me a soul, if I will ever inherit anything, or even if everything so far is a lie and we need to do exactly opposite of what we've been told.

Ironically after that we'd probably end up fucking anyway. I might not be attractive, but I'm not overly disgusting and I like myself enough to give it a chance.

>>47257336
Questioning is in my nature. Enough compulsion and I stop being "me", at least to the degree that it's no longer possible to predict how I would behave, which makes the choice meaningless in context.

>>47257321
Hypothetically, even if I saw that and then traveled back in time two minutes I still don't think I would be able to do it.

>>47257396
>if I can't flawlessly predict the outcome, the CYOA choice is meaningless
I dunno about that one, senpai...

>>47257385
Oh. That's just weird.
So he jerks it to a girl beating another girl?
I thought it was like "two girls fighting, both get turned on an end up fucking"

>>47248890

Thanks! I liked the nightmare idea but I already have a mysterious horse creature as a quest so I'll have to find another fitting image or a very different horse type image to represent it.

>>47257455
Well, jesus, I didn't want to blow the whistle on him or something. I think it encompasses a lot of different scenarios, probably including the one you're describing. Seriously, though, I don't know for sure. Don't take my word for it.

>>47257446
If it doesn't act like me than the option saying it is like me is meaningless, because for everything that actually matters it is not like me.

Furthermore, if I'm not given enough information to say what the outcome will be then there's nothing for me to write about.

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>>47257356
I also like corruption, hence the many options in my CYOAs. Gentle femdom? That's alright, I guess. And yes, not horsepussy or anything furry, but just monstergirls. With like minor changes mostly behaviour.

If I could choose my fetishes it would've picked and chosen better, but that's just something innate, though.

>>47257455
What can I say? I like bad girls.

>>47257455
Ryona is blood, cuts, bruises, general bodily harm and anything probably below missing limbs as that's just gore at that point, though I'm not sure what he specifically meant by it. It's usually part of an implied or explicit rape scenario.

>>47257537
Well, I don't understand the last one, then.
Depending on the degree, corruption isn't bad. I'm more a fan of purifying demons, though: Turning a succubus into a qtp2tie, overly lewd waifu
Not so much mind break.

Okay, I'm actually stopping now, even if I've enjoyed this. It is way too late.

>>47257128
>completely fucked, like vore or male impregnation
>male impregnation

So you don't want to experience the miracle that is the birth of new life, through your ass?

>>47257356
Monstergirls are things like lamias and centaurs.

>>47257483
Your limitations are painful to behold.

>>47257537
>If I could choose my fetishes it would've picked and chosen better, but that's just something innate, though.
Just fap to stuff in the intersection between "fetish you have" and "fetiah you want", then move farther and farther from the fetish you have.
Pavlov to the rescue once again!

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>>47257625
>purification
Based

>>47257649

That's the thing about how I do CYOAs. I take all the pieces I know about everything and fit them together like a puzzle to explain exactly how things would work out in the most direct way. Filling in the gaps with as few and as reasonable assumptions as possible and pointing out where the possibilities for divergence and failure are (usually due to a lack of information or a test of ability)

What I do not do is take it as a seed of inspiration to tell an original story, one of infinitely many that can be told using a few common devices between them. I'm not trying to write a book, I'm trying to predict reality in a "what if" scenario.

>>47257687
I find it ironic that she is technically LESS covered in the leftmost panel than the rightmost. It's mostly due to the leggings, but those are still some short shorts.

>>47257692
All you're doing is structuring a story like a scientific journal article.

Dry, predictable, reproducible and boring.

>>47257625
I hate how mind break and shit is usually linked with NTR, but corruption can be something that just clicks between people. An intense desire which completely overrides the facades of social boundries. And that click is amazing, in my opinion.

>>47257687
Is this by the same guy who did Aoi Cast?

>>47257687
>not naming the file "consequences of dating a Paladin"

>>47257687
I kind of like how her purse strap is a direct callback to her slutty outfit but man it is just not a good look for her.

Opinion on a netori CYOA? Like you're a mortal who got punished because the gods didn't like you, but then the god of lust and love want you to cuck them because trolling.
So you start with basic powers like hypnotize, mind control or lust aura, after you fucked some wife-goddess you gain more powers to target greater gods.
End game would be enslaving the goddess of lust and love then gender bend everyone else into your bitch-goddess

>>47257734
If you think so. I'm only interested in imagining what would actually happen given the circumstances, so the less I have to invent the more accurate the mental simulation is. Predictable is the point, but how dry it is depends on the content.

Throwing in a wildcard character that doesn't behave in any known way (in this case because the only known way is also explicitly what won't happen) breaks the whole simulation process. The only thing worse is when the protagonist becomes a wildcard as is the case in memory death scenarios, in which case I can't predict the first thing.

>>47257833
You must be fun at parties.

>>47257854
I don't go to parties, I find them increadibly boring.

>>47257687
Slut Purification CYOA when?

>>47257868
I want my penisvore cyoa first.

>>47257625
I think I can forget everything about sleeping. I'm having a nice fantasy about becoming a high school girl and getting a crush on a guy, except the crush evolves into some yandere-tier stuff and included stealing his underwear after PE to sniff it while handling my business

>tfw no CYOA about becoming a girl and later on going full yandere
Making it myself just wouldn't ne as hot

>>47258006
That actually does sound kind of interesting. The mind alteration bit you are implying could be a bit sketchy but I don't think it would be received nearly as badly as full mind wipes usually are.

>>47257816
Considering that's my fetish, yes, I would like that.
Not gender bending people or forcing the nice Goddess into loving me, but the rest absolutely.

>>47256378
What other cyoas have you made?

>>47250163
Would play. Only downside is that something of that epicosity needs a lot of options in character building. I look forward to the final product!

>>47250163
tfw didn't realize it was a WIP,
now I'm depressed because I can't finish making my character
feels bad man

>>47258119
It's the whole "your love is slowly corrupted" thing that I'm enjoying.
Just waking up and BOOM, seeing him talk to other girls is painful isn't as good as it happening slowly.

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redhead halfblood vaiking
muscle big jumps, bellow lungs, well-oiled body, shield, flame and thunder and full-body beard

beard asbeardtos, facial warmth and mead-soaked beard

$&@# katla, sigrid and freya
challenges elf forest, drow cave, giant mountains, al-kebab, craftworld, sweden, endor, mirrodin, the underworld, eagleland, the ithica, the warp, the great city of yith, equatria, atlantis, ancient african empire, naboo depths, skyrim, jabu-jabu's belly, convention center, monster girl village and valhallas

rewards back to war camps, valhalla the crater, valhalla the halo 3 level home, valhalla hamlet in new york, valhalla australian movie theatre, valhalla the real one and monstergirl world

>>47258241
You only get 3 missions though. I know you are eager to get raping but you have to save some for the rest of us.

>>47258132
Anything I have made after that I have stamped with my name, Bliss. In order:

>Trials (Horror Domain) CYOA
>Power Armour CYOA
>Magical Realm CYOA
>Domain Master CYOA
>Monster Hunter CYOA
>Kingdom Crusher CYOA
>Kingdom Crusher DLC: Kingdom Diplomacy CYOA (WiP)

>>47257816
Hell yes. Do it.

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>>47258241
>>47258297
How does this picture make you feel?

>>47258387
Ah cool I like most of the cyoas you've made.

>>47258387
Don't think i've seen Trials (horror domain) can you post it? Probably have it under another name.

>>47258387
>Magical Realm
>Domain Master
I blame you for the Angelanon problem.

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Well gang, it looks like we're up to a mystery today kids

trial exploration and mystery
domain haunted mansion and pirate's island

gifts electricity, extra chance, pendant, master, flawed, command and book

drawback double up, apparations and prisoner

>>47258387
>Monster Hunter CYOA

You must have had fun during the Culling debate.

companions heronnir the mystic, casmir the stalker and maiden sophia

power wanderer's aspect

>>47258518
It's here >>47256378

>>47258498
Thanks!

>>47258538
Glad to have helped.

>>47258747
A lot of fun. Opt-in whines, murder and rape simulator whines, PvP whines. I feed off of these things.

>>47251493
Oh there was an update...

The drugs look more appealing with the +20 permanence, +20 mandatory and only -10 initial cost (+10 high concentration if you want it too). Pretty easy to end up a broken husk, but I guess that's drugs for you, tempting but dangerous.

Makes me kind of want to inflict them on a roommate/contestant just to see what happens with sensitive/erogenous body, permanent high-concentration sensitivity booster and libido booster, and climax control/edging. I think a total mind break is pretty much a guarantee if they even survive.

>>47251493
Am I reading the Oldfag origin bonus incorrectly? To use the free bonus doesn't the base price of the item have to be -50 without extra options?

If that's the case then I think there is only two viable option (the android upgrade and the significant other)? Royalty has a similar problem. I think those two origin bonuses need to be changed. There seem to be lots of problems with the Origins in general (most body mods are so cheap that Reincarnation seems weak, why would someone "lucky" to be on SL want to take speed run? bonus credits for time adjustments that increase the stay seem better). Family and Criminal seem to be the best origin options.

Also my $.02, Popular should affect the professional gamer job. You'd be surprised how much some people on twitch make.

New one: >>47259105

>>47259066
meant to say aphrodisiac.

So they are so horny they masturbate involuntarily, but can't cum until someone lets them because implants, all while being so ridiculously sensitive that their brain probably would never recover from actually cumming.

>>47259099
Best by what measure, balance? Because oldfag negates over half of my build costs. I kind of assume it should have been UNDER 50.

>>47259066
>>47259173
The reason why I want to do this on a roommate/contestant is basically because the option is so tempting and so dangerous that I'd probably wind up doing it to myself if I don't witness it happening to someone else. It's literally mindblowing.