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Previoust thread: >>46405374

Useful information: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

Crazily Detailed Magical Realm Edition!
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Speaking of magical realms.
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Can someone post slut life.
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>>46422031
And here is the easier to use, interactive version: https://63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html
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>>46422162
I think you fucked up the link.
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>>46422169
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>>46422193
I did? It seems to work on my end.
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>46393742
>Skitter Mode, Non-Canon Present, Shardless Villain
>Crisis on Finite Earths, It's a Brand New Way
>Image Conscious, Outed, What's a Manton?, Shattered Limiter
>Power: Event-Triggerer

A simple, low-cost build to break the CYOA. Because without the Manton effect I am no longer immune to my own power; I can now use my power on MYSELF to give me new powers as needed. With Shattered Limiter thrown in? Phenomenal Cosmic Power here I come.
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>>46422251
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http://pastebin.com/RfDsDFtH
Corporation tree is done. But Gang and Bazaar trees, as well as Meister and Atlas remain to be done when it comes to text.
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>>46422132
>>46422169
>>46422214
>>46422251
>>46422285
So was this made to placate the people bitching about Dream Princess?
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I still want that Imaginos.xAngelanon fic.
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>>46422535
I believe he said he made it because dream princess inspired him.
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>>46422563
And I still want my Highlander.X.Quiet as lesbians fanfiction. But I got other fish to fry.
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>>46422595

I inspired a neat cyoa! I'm honored! Glad to be a inspiration!
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>>46422855
Hey angel. Have you made a Dreamprince build? I'd be curious to know what tickles your fancy.
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>>46422877
>Hey Angel
That does sound strange. Especilly when spoken out loud. And even more so when you consider you don't even know her.
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>>46422855
Yeah, it'd make me excited too if people liked my CYOA that much.
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Since when did Swamp Thing have fucking wings?
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>Your CYOA will never become popular enough to have its own threads
How do we accomplish this? Speaking of, we've never had any CYOAs get that popular recently. I think all the good ideas were just taken and now we're getting watered down rehashes.

I think our only hope is Traveller or whatever the fuck SDA is making.
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>>46423079
We've had multiple CYOA that take up an entire thread lately. Even more if we count this year so far.
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>>46423112
Maybe one or two threads worth, yeah. But they die out quickly afterwards. I'm talking about weeks worth of dedicated threads like the times of Conduit or Stardust.

Maybe PACYOA will be revived again, if that one anon is serious about starting it up.
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>>46422855
How's your dad?

Hows work at the new company?
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>>46423192
Those are bad.
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>>46423241
He's alright.

Pay's good. My boss is nice.
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Would you play another PACYOA?
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Hey guys.
For all the CYOA creatorsout here who may or may not want to include horror elements in their CYOAS I'll crosslink something for you
>>46423201
Entire thread is good with unravelling the horror tropes. Still young though, might die.
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>>46423243
>Conduit, Stardust, and PACYOA are bad
Anon, you are so cute.
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>>46423270
>tfw the woman you're shagging is Sandra
I don't now how to feel about it now that I'm here again...
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>>46423318
Is she into butt stuff? This is important.
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>>46423079
SDA was running Stardust quest thread up until the end of last year if I recount correctly. Don't know what happened to that.

>How do we accomplish this?
From what I've seen the cyoa authors have very little to do with thread momentum, and having more to do with dedicated enough fans willing to start the generals 24/7, setting up the IRC channels and get the ball rolling with RP system recreation and being the GM.

There are very few people willing to devote that much energy and time into something like a cyoa. In most cases, its done by people that aren't /cyoag/ regulars.
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>>46423348
...actually yes.
Well now we all know Sandra is a black woman.
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>>46423291
Interesting, thanks anon.
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>>46423349
Conduit and Stardust threads were driven mostly by the authors. Those threads were almost all doscussion about development of the CYOAs like Towergirls is. Magic Realm, Domain Master and PACYOA were mostly by players, the threads mostly being RP.
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>>46422169
How much do the skills cost?
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>>46423370
Nah she's a redhead.
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>>46423408
I should clarify, PACYOA:TE was mostly RP. The original wave of PACYOA was full of much less autism and was mostly about development as well.

>>46423349
As for Stardust, you're probably thinking of the quest threads. I'm talking about the actual CYOA threads... the quest is a separate thing.
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>>46423310
CYOA exclusive threads are shit. All should stay here.
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>>46423310
Stardust is made via Photoshop, it's shit
Conduit is undeniably shit
PACYOA was okay, but also very shit at being a CYOA
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>>46422193
Works for me too.
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>>46423408
Conduit and stardust died off as the authors left the threads and also applied directly to Quiet cyoa threads as well. With no Quietanon being there to disclose vague symbolical answers, the thread lost steam.

This also applied to a lesser extent to Monster Hunter and battlemage cyoa. Monster Hunter threads died due to Bliss meddling way too much with the 'official" interpretations of the cyoa and lore discussion and no one willing to step up with being the GM or setting up any RP. Battlemage ended in a similar manner, no one wanted to GM and Scientist really took too long with the battlemage update, which still hasn't been updated yet. And didn't really explain how the setting or detritus worked.

The current towergirl threads we have is a reboot done by a group of people completely unrelated to the original artist and his fans. They just picked up one day and wanted to continue the project in their own direction.
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>>46422240
Well I don't blame you for not knowing this since it's not stated in the CYOA but when you trigger and get a power in this setting your brain grows a new section. So if you keep triggering yourself your heads gonna explode.
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>>46423535
The Conduit threads were 100% discussion of the CYOA with none of this thread's shitposting. The quality of those threads were amazing and comfy. Fuck you, I miss those times. Stardust threads were good too.

>>46423579
And your CYOAs were exponentially worse than those.
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>>46423627
Now I know you're delusional if you think Conduit threads weren't full of shitposting.
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>>46423614
>Battlemage
>Scientist
Oh anon, if only you knew the truth...
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>>46423659
I'm trying to remember shit that happened one and half years ago. Which I am having great trouble with because I keep mingling shit that happened 2 and 3 years ago with stuff that happened as recently as last summer through winter.

Who made battlemage cyoa again?
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>>46423698
Assman.
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>>46423706
Why the fuck do I keep thinking Scientist made battlemage?

Oh right, updates that take fucking forever.

I'm still waiting for the necromancer cyoa update.
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>>46423698
Bliss.
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>>46423627
Hey, I'll have you know that my CYOA was really sexy before I deleted everything
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>>46423515
If there are redheaded asians, that too is a possibility
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>>46423698
Italics Anon.
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>>46423408
I feel like that might be part of the point. Here me out.

CYOA is a medium for presentation, like- film is a static medium that acts through presentation and a video game requires player interaction, CYOA is its own form of medium, however the choice and interpritation of those choices is how the medium functions, as is its brevaity, before it blends into something more table-top focused which relies upon 'players' imagination and interaction with DM and player.

But that is just my interpretation of it.

>>46423739
Perhaps one day brother. If he ever bloody finishes that highschool one.
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>>46422877

Just made one now.

>Asian Realm
>Medieval Realm
>Nordic Realm
6

>Magical land Enhancement
>Ancient Ruins Enhancement
>Humanoid Enhancement (Humans, Elves, and Dwarves living together!?!)
8

>Sorcerer Prince (Fire)
>Riding Master
>Prince of Thieves
>Prince Stallion lol
>Melee Master (Weapon and Shield)
>Prince of Maps
>Scholarly Prince
>Prince of the Hunt
16

>Easily Distracted
15

>Massive Monsters
>Pixie Poachers
>Valkirie Venture
>Sphinx Snafu

>Anastasia Davenport
>Gwendolyn Bennet
>Simone Mcleod

Plan is to solve the world's problems with extreme violence. If you're a bad guy, prepare to get slashed and burned! Have some sexytimes along the way, but try to focus on adventure instead of lewdness.

>>46423047

Maybe someday. Don't give up anon!

>>46423241

My dad is doing very well. He's pretty much walking normal now. Work is ok, but they keep me very busy.
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>>46423800
I hope those two cyoas update in this decade.

Only 4 years left.
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>>46423698
Quiet Anon.
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I really like this one.

Apparently it's an old one, but it got posted last thread.
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>>46423859

Forgot pic.
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>>46423859
How's California treating you?
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>>46423698
Kit.
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which CYOA has the biggest boobs?
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>>46424082
The one you haven't made yet.
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>>46423875
Location: Central US
High Tech
Sufficiently advanced tech (pisonics)
Preset: Asari
Stat change x5 (+3int +2cha)

The great plains are the breadbasket of the world. I have great natural resources, especially food, and a pretty good overall location without needing to change anything

The downside is I have extremely hostile neighbors with Aztec wannabes to the south. While they are definitely a danger, they are up against modern tech and magic both without access to either. I'd like to get an upgraded citadel, which would pretty much eliminate any direct threat since they have no flying capability of their own, but at 5 points it's just too expensive.

The race change is an odd choice, but it hits all the important details. Aside from being fetish fuel, it makes a diplomatic victory easier and even dramatically improves lifespans. Asari "win" by commingling with a population while still breeding true. High charisma helps smooth relations and high intelligence is just a must for a tech-based race, plus it probably feeds the psionic powers. Ultimately we should be able to reverse engineer the tech and use it with a more portable power source.
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>>46423878

Pretty good. People seem nice here. It's very different from Kansas.
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>>46424082
There's a CYOA, I think it's called Gigantomastia, that's all about an event that caused women's breasts to grow massively and gave them super-human abilities based on breast size.
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>>46424548
> Kansas
I remember Kansas. I hated it. But it was better then Florida.
My experience with Florida can be summed up with the words "We'll trade your coloured money for our coloured people" and some more vibrant language.
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>>46423627
>what are prison maesters
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>>46422132
The Realms aren't really that attractive to merge flavor-wise, but they're efficient purchases if you want the skills anyway. Most of the setting stuff I want is in enhancements.

Cyberpunk is a selectable enhancement, but there are no options to be good with tech or anything. I can't even be a space pirate.

You get way too many points. Like, 5 might be a little low, but only a little.

>Medieval Realm (15)
Adventurer, musician

>Lascivious, Magical Land, Humanoid, Technology (12)
Cyberpunk, Elf.

>Skills (-2)
Musical instrument (free)
Melee Master (sword) (free)
Prince of Thieves (free)
Mystical Master (I don't even know what this does, but I'm rolling in points)
Prince of Maps (I have so many points I learned cartography)
Prince Stallion
Scholarly Prince
Sorcerer Prince x10 (I don't even know all the kinds of magic I'm going to learn, I just have so many points)

>drawbacks
capture prone
easily distracted

>quests
pixie poachers
sphinx snafu
strip club struggle
confiscated catburgler
kidnapped cuties
misappropriated mask
paradise perverted
valkirie venture

>all available princesses.

This kind of feels like playing make-believe with my niece and nephew. They just have every power and role. They're astronaut princess super heroes with every power.
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>>46423616
>Trigger into Tech/Bio Tinker
>Build myself a huge mechanical apparatus to hold my swollen noodle while I ascend to godhood

Defective? You dare call ME defective?!
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>>46424882
He's going to add an artifact and item page for people like you who hate having a variety of environments.
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>>46424659

Yeah, Kansas isn't to great. I never been to Florida, but it sounds alot like Tennessee.
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>>46425272
>Implying Kansas isn't the best place on the planet
Get out of my country
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>>46424659
>>46425272
>Hating on a place because someone said a racist thing.
Can't enjoy anything about the environment or anything else about the people? Everyone seems to be rather reactionary like that, somebody has a view they hate and suddenly there's nothing good.
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>>46422169

Excellent CYOA

Best pics I've seen in a while. Great text, layout, etc.

The points costs seem weak. And where are the costs on skills? It's like the points were tacked on at the end kind of as an afterthought. A few minor grammar mistakes, but way better that 90% of CYOAs. And a rare wit that balances humor, wish fulfillment, and that illusion of tradeoffs.

I'll give it a 10/10 despite the minor flaws.
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>>46425319
To be honest I loved the environment, and it wasn't really racism, it was just the people. Ironically it was Canuck snowbirds that I had the most issues with, stack that up with a load of shit I had to put up with and I'm just not interested in the southern US as a whole in the near future.

Except Louisiana Ironically, still have kin and friends over there. Fucking nutjobs.
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>>46425366
>That font
>That font size
>That border with the fucking drop shadow
>That fucking purple background
>Fucking purple and yellow

This is a 3/10 at most
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>>46425534
>Hating purple
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>>46425552
Too much of it is eye grating
At least keep it fucking constant if you're gonna go with a shitty background color
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>>46424645
Sadly that one is just as much about big boobs as it is about giants
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>>46425534

Purple and gold are natural complements ; both connote royalty.

Of all the fucking things to bitch about. Why not just request slut life and be done with it?
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>>46424082
Some of the Art Connoisseurs have big breasts in them, like one had it so that girls became stronger the bigger their breasts, and another had it were you had full control over anyone and everyone's breast size.
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>>46425660
There's nothing sad about two kind of garbage falling into the same bin
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>>46425774
>Not practicing proper recycling.
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>>46424394
Word of God from when the namefag posted it says stat changes are capped at 2 for 4 points.

It's why I stacked beneficial Transformations instead of straight stat boosts to 20.
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Christ this is a slow night.
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>>46425660
>>46425774
Well there's a reason I never bothered to save it, but when someone is calling for CYOAs about giant boobs or "powerful breasts are inhabiting the world" (last thread), it seems like the thing to post anyway. If nothing else than to make fun of how shitty it is.

The giantess CYOA is pretty decent though, I could have sworn I saved that.
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You know, for all the shit it got it's really not that bad of a CYOA
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>>46426479
the horrible horrible truth is, most anons that make up /cyoag/'s userbase have social lives or work during the weekend. Hell I'm on my phone right now during break.
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>>46426507
And don't even mention that this is the 'old version', 1.7 is the only good version
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>>46426524
I preferred the pre-"teamwork" version. Teamwork is trying too hard to be a regular RPG rather than a fantasy.
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>>46426508
Fucking normies
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>>46426508
Figures, I'm sitting here waiting for paperwork to get passed so I can go home and sleep. This is getting absurd.
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>>46426588
I'm not a normie anon, far from it. I took the night shift so I wouldn't have to deal with people and I usually stay up to 4-6 am anyways.
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Anyone got the mystery box?
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>>46426524
>>46426507
Here's my favorite build I ever made:

Name: Armstrong
Suit Class: Heavy
Suit Type: Bio Sexy Amphibious - 40
Faction: AC
Dex: 7
Dur: 2
Pow: 4
Rec: 6
Spd: 6
Str: 5
Free: Fins, Gills
Features: Natural Weapons x2, Arms are Natural weapons for max dmg - 20

AI: Soldier - 10
UI: Brainweave Harness - 10
HUD: None
Comms: None
Weapons:
4x Power Fist - 60
Defenses:
Light Shield, Armor Plating, EMP Shield, Emergency Evac - 30
Upgrades:
Cyber Brain: Martial Arts - 15
Kinetic Stabilizers, Sub-Armor Pistons, Manuvering Rockets - 30
Nanites: Berzerker - 10

I'm pretty sure that this particular build could do over 96 damage within 1 single round, which could literally 1-shot anything if all 4 attacks hit
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>>46426625
I work nights myself, not everyone can get autism bucks, but "social lives" on the weekend puts you in full blown normalfag territory.
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>>46426710
Its funny my "weekend" are either Wednesday or Thursday. And the only activity I can get my real life friends involved in are multiplayer video games. Can't go to the movies or bar with them anymore, they live too far away and their schedules conflict too greatly for me to get in touch with them.
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>>46426773
>Went to movies and bars with his friends
>Thinks he's not a normie
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>>46426524
But it is a better version.
>Doesn't have weird D&D stats
>Sizes are more balanced
>Special abilities are cooler
>Almost everything else that seems new aside from weapons is covered in the old version, it's just not as spelled out

I like a lot of the options for the new one, but the balance, along with the lack of super cool powers ruins having more weapons and more concrete options.
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>>46423243
>>46423535
>>46423579
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>>46426782
Shit son, I have nobody to watch the latest Disney or Pixar animated movies with anymore. And I can't go watch Zootopia by myself or people will think I'm some sort of degenerate furfag.

And all we do at bars is shoot pool, while making fun of all the drunken chads trying to pick up chicks.
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>>46426588
If I could kill any meme, it'd be this one.
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>>46426830
>Watching Zootopia of all things
>Not a degenerate furfag
Come on man, you know it's true.
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>>46426830
I saw it and I have no regrets. Shit was solid yo.
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>>46426670
>anyone wanting SDA as a waifu
>mfw
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>>46426862
I only want to watch Zootopia purely for the aesthetics pleasure of enjoying how far 3D animation has gotten.

Fuck there is more polygons on Nick Wilde's nose then there are on every single character in Toy Story 1.

That gets me hard.
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>>46426824
>>46426795
>>46426685
>>46426524
>>46426507
>MFW I'm working on a spiritual successor to PACYOA
>MFW It will either be really popular or just 'another PACYOA'
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>>46426914
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>>46426914
It's yesteryear's favorite maymay Anon.
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>>46426914
But if I don't waifu SDA, who will teach me about tangs?
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Loser
+5 no GF
+10 mcjob
+10 virgin

Deviant
+5 entry fetish
+10 alt fetish
+15 furshit

nerd
+40 everything

Weeb
+5 anime

neckbeard
+5 card games

Edgelord
+5 weapon
+10 dark clothes/violent fantasy

Insanity
+5 despise normal people
+10 40 in a category (nerd)

Total 130

Vidya house

-40 Your PC
-30 private bathroom
-40 magical realm
-20 leftover

Worth mentioning that the AAs are based on things like hard drive searches, so there's no point in arguing "but I'm not really a furry" if there's furry porn on there.

Magical realm is powerful. Doubly so if I can inflict fetishes on myself as "someone who willingly enters the room". After all, almost half of all fetishes are receiving-end anyway. As long as I stay in my room it makes for an absolute defense, as the edgelords and crazys can't hurt me while subject to my magical realm.
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>>46426479
How do you Yautja name?
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>>46426670
Those option 2 Shenanigans.

> Lurl get the fuck out of the closet, it's just the mailman.
> Kit you can't cook for shit stay away from the kitchen.
> Quiet stop touching Highlander and find Bliss, she's laughing somewhere.
> Who the fuck made musclewizardanon cry this time?

>>46427019
Grunt, and then convert it into traditional chinese.
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>>46426479
this keeps getting posted, and after fifty eight threads I've almost finished reading it.
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>>46427127
I love long CYOAs. Exalted slut life is 40 pages and it WAS one of my favorites till the author nerfed it to oblivion. Traveler just doesn't catch my interest though.
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>>46422132
>Pirate Realm
Sail the seven seas!

>Humanoid Enhancement
An' with yer prince, the Merman, we'll 'ave ourselves a fine time indeed!

>>46422169
>Aquatic Prince (Sense Tides) (14 left)
>Melee Master (Cutlass) (13 left)
>Pirate Prince (12 left)
>Sorcerer Prince (Water Magic) (11 left)
>Prince Charming (10 left)
>Prince of Maps (9 left)
>Sorcerer Prince (Wind Magic) (8 left)
>Aquatic Prince (Fast Swimming) (7 left)
>Bard Prince (Singing) (6 left)
>Cultured Prince (Sculpture) (5 left)
>Crown Prince (4 left)
>Bard Prince (Accordion) (3 left)
>Bard Prince (Fiddle) (2 left)
>Bard Prince (Flute) (1 left)
>Fury Prince (0 left)

Yo ho, yo ho! Down to death, we'll never go!

>>46422214
>>46422251
>Paradise Perverted (Quest)
'ands off me crew, ye right sodden eel-lickers! I'll keelhaul the lot of ye!

>>46422285
>Gwendolyn Bennet
'old on, dear girl! Yer Prince is on 'is way!
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>>46427127
I finished reading traveler 4 months ago.

Step up your game pleb.
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>>46427237
I tried reading it twice but was annoyed by the writing style and never made it past the first page.
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>>46427279
Not my problem, friendo.
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>>46427164
You got a pre-nerf version?
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>>46423290
Nope.

Last one turned into sex and love triangles, and nobody was interested in the plot beyond one person - and the main DM used that person primarily for plot fuel anyhow.
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Anyone got the generic hentai Orc fantasy rape Cyoa ?
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>>46427165
+5 Eye candy
+2 cosplay
+4 sexual harassment
+4 experimentation
+2 masters will

-2 transform human
-2 transform inhuman
-1 heat shield
-3 heal
-3 creation (water)
-3 enchantment
-2 flight
-1 summon property

Creation: Water + Heat Shield allows me to make objects of unmelting ice that are not cold to the touch. Enchanting allows objects to retain heat shield permanently. Transform and heal are requisite personal powers, and they along with flight are also great choices for enchanting.
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>>46427164
>>46427279

I can understand where you're coming from, given the weight of the material. But the next version will be here eventually, so I'd recommend keeping an open eye.
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>>46426670
>back in time with all knowledge, skills, and memories
>go to early CYOA threads and recreate Tinyworld, Domain Master, and Jumpchain
>laugh maniacally as the world burns
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>>46427329
Not mine either 2bh
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>>46427331
sure here.

In the most recent versions, backgrounds do nothing, enlightenment costs are about 50% higher, and owners give around 30% fewer points. Net result is that I need half again as many points as I did before, and I only have about 1/3rd as many to work with.

I'll post the current version after for comparison
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>>46427405
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>>46422132
Do the Realm perks duplicate the effects of the Princely Skills, Abilities, and Perks? E.g., if I take Pirate Realm, does that provide me with the full skillset of Prince of Maps and Pirate Prince?
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>>46427428
The regular slut life went the other direction and actually became easier for me to build with.

I don't feel like going through a full build right now, but just to summarize some key points...

>>46427405
celestial deity origin.
Female body optimized for sex (NOT procreation). lust-inducing tattoos and water-infusion are neat extras too, make the tattoos flow like a liquid under my skin.

Owners are behemoth + shapeshifter combo, girly trainer, and maybe one more if I still need points. Job is courtisan.

A few misc bonuses like taboo-defying and Garda-Union to keep the effects I want. Extended durance.

Basically every option from Enlightenment, including behemoth and an extra two refinements. Sex based martial arts. Several of the sutras as well

My durance is a training period. I agree to serve my patrion as a sex-based espionage agent, and the durance is designed to train me primarily in seduction and in using sex as a tool instead of succumbing to the pleasure, regardless of who or what I'm with. The idea is I should learn to be conversational and lucid even while a shapeshifting behemoth is trying to fuck my brains out every way he can.

>default slut life build
Basically starts the same as the exaulted. An immortal/android body optimized for sex, a few owners, the succubus/incubus and shapeshifter primarily, maybe the engineer or siblings if I need some more points. No job. A full set of implanted vibrators (no viewer control), and the controlled orgasm denial chip. Also an independant AI that acts both like an owner and a companion while at home, not nearly as strict though.

This one mainly hits my fetishes with orgasm denial and forced stim, genderbend and maybe some incest along with some really good sex. and I still get immortality in some form in the end.
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>>46427861
Slut life is super easy. Even hard mode is really doable, and still gives you tons of nice shit.
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>>46427861
So built up around engaging and training to continue this kind of lifestyle past your actual 'show' period right? The thing about Slutlife at least (haven't done the Exalted version yet) is that I've always been stuck on trying to be able to live a normal life to my morals after the whole song and dance, so I always avoided options that permanently 'crippled' me in some way and picked stuff that would have non-sexual advantage instead of/in addition to the sexual ones so I could live how I wanted to and not be forced to slut it up afterwards. Just generally coming out with a higher quality of life. It always seemed to me like picking things such as remote controlled orgasm chips and the like would reduce quality of life in the long run unless you wanted 24/7 sex forever.
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>>46427959
Exaulted is keeping the life. It's actually more of a career at that point, less about chasing pleasure and more about using it for some kind of political advantage.

Slut life is somewhat of a middle ground. Some of the shit is irreversible (eg the implants), but it's not too crippling if it isn't actively used. I take the "new home" option and probably won't need to worry about work afterward, but I don't plan on just being a permanent sex toy.
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>>46425774
Sooo, you one of those guys that insist boobs should be small and the girls pure, eh? I'm sorry for your lose.
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>>46426914
Don't worry anon I have already accepted Eleonora SDA as my waifu, you can go about your business now.
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so anon who is your Conduit waifu?
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>>46428589
and the Fan worlds
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>>46424082
>>46424645
I believe it's called Boobmageddon. I have it saved on my computer at home, but I'm at someone else's house for the weekend.

And technically speaking, there's the giant/giantess CYOA, and those boobs are definitely the biggest of any CYOA. It's also one of my favorite CYOAs, but that's probably mostly because it panders to one of my main two fetishes. It is well made though. I have it saved on my computer as well.
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>>46428659
I'd appreciate the giantess CYOA if someone would post it. I could have sworn I saved it...
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>>46427016
Loser: No GF, Low wage job
+15

Deviant: Entry fetish, Alt fetish, I think fur (does this include kemomomimi?), ERP
+40

Nerd: Bulied, Beta, Play a lot of vidya games
+25

Weeb: DL anime, Raw anime, Watch more anime then cartoons, speakin that nihongo
+30

Neckbeard: Played Pokemon once when I was 8
+5

Edgelord: Weapons
+5

Insanity: Pranked someone, Other category (Deviant)
+25

Total +135

The Love Shack

My consoles: Free
My porn: Free
My anime: Free
Private bathroom: -30

Loliform: -20
Reality marble: -22.5
Magical realm: -20
Transformation -40
Left over: -2.5 $7.50/week

No one said Loliform couldn't be an oppailoli, so that mixed with what it's really chosen for Transformation let's me be as I wish and along with the rest I have myself a nice little deviant haven over in the Love Shack, I'll also visit Vidya House often to play games with all the nerds there and of course go over to the girl's prison for fun times. And if anyone should try and mess with me I've got the reality marble waiting for them and my god have mercy on their anus.
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>>46428589
Sunless Seas edge's out Spire for me.
I like how spire is independent and views you as an equal, but I like some dependency in a woman too.

Sunless Seas is bossy and seems to be lovingly dominant which is cute, and she has a way to cheat death, which is a pretty important attribute for a long term relationship when adventuring is common place and dying is pretty small of a deal.

Prison is nice if you're into ice queens, but she's not an overly cute anime, and her powers are kinda weak for going other places.

Void is pretty annoying, sure she's a good painter and shit, but not willing to be invested in a relationship or fight for me makes her pretty much useless as a friend or a lover.

Bleak Fields is a bitch. Plus that drawback kinda sucks.

Bevin seems pretty evil, I mean the only reason to pick her is because she can possibly hook you up with other people, so maybe the best choice because you can get many teammates, but she herself sucks.

The Rim is pretty cute and cool, but useless unless on her world, and the time difference would make being with her weird.

Polywhater is a slut from slut world, useless, and has no personality. Having a fuck doll isn't that appealing when likely any other girl would have sex.

Uthuli is pretty cool as a person, plus she's music Korra. Plus she's all tsundere light.

Glass Desert is shit abilities, in or out of her world because the only good thing about glass desert is one of the powers is giving you a high tier waifu, which is only useful to who has the power of course.

Crucible weak powers because she needs to be emotionally strong to be strong.
Plus
>CRAWLING ON MY SKIN

Aether Weak powers, mostly her powers are good for her world, because she's playing some kind of religious war game thing. Plus she's just a weaker version of Sunless Seas in personality.

Kupider awesome powers, it's like my own personal Shirou/Green Lantern,, but autstic personality plus kupider powers are so great I'd take them.
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>>46428801
You totally fucked that up.

Loliform costs 40 with weeb.
Reality marble costs 45
Magical realm is another 40.
Transformation is 80 because you don't have edgelord.

Why did you cut everything in to a quarter instead of half?
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>>46428589
Crucible. To be completely honest I just feel too sorry for her and can't leave her like that.
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Anyone want to do an EVE Online addon/DLC for Stardust?
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>>46427384
It's not heavy material, it's annoying to read. I wouldn't have a problem with it if the narrator's tone wasn't obnoxious.
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>>46428914
part II

Letendre is dominant, but not in any kind I would like, and she just seems like a pain to deal with. Life can't always be hunts and fighting, sometimes it's nice to take a century off to rest.

Eath is kinda cool if you were an experienced conduit, but from my understanding you also just started out yourself, so having people already versed somewhat in the world seems invaluable. Also what's the point of guide if your from a world with no native dangers? That's not a weak power, that's an utterly useless one.

I don't even care enough about whatever version the last one if from to care about thinking too much about her character

So in conclusion Sunless Seas is objectively subjectively the best waifu..
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>>46428933
It says if you satisfy two AA's then it costs 1/4, did I get the meaning of that wrong?
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>>46428093
Nah, I love big boobs, problem is we aren't talking about big boobs here, we're talking about freakish abominations that with tits bigger than their heads.
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>>46429011
Well you are dealing with a bureaucrat.
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>>46429042
You have to satisfy the AAs listed on the choice. So for Transformation you have to be a Deviant and an Edgelord for 1/4th.

If it only has 1 AA listed, like little girl, it can never go lower than half.
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>>46428933
Doesn't say anywhere that you need both preferences on items that list two.
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>>46429089
see >>46429086
"Some options PREFER certain alignments. If you satisfy one Preference, than that option costs half. If you satisfy two, then it costs 1/4th."

You have to satisfy the preference listed with the item. It doesn't just count the total number of AAs you have.
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>>46429032
Quellers is another expansion thing. They exist to kill conduits.
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>>46429116
I see, that's unfortunate. Really limits you quite heavily doesn't it?
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>>46428589
Crystal Spire. Geek waifu is best waifu, and since I generally go Kuiper primary, I want to see what the two of us can end up doing together there.

...Although I kind of feel like >>46428966 in regards to Crucible waifu.
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>>46429032
Earth has Earth's Maester perk, which means she never suffers Native Dangers or Unwelcome Guest from any world she's on. Combine that with Guide, and you will never suffer either from any world (except Crucible, because Crucible hates you).
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>>46429310
Oh yeah, that's true, and she's the only one who get's a maester perk. Yeah, that's pretty damn useful, though death is pretty much a slap of the wrist still, so not too useful
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>>46428914
>Glass Desert is shit abilities
I don't know anon for me the abilitly to enchant things (Jinn Biding) is pretty useful
especially as the Glass Deset is the only canon world that let you make that, if memory serves me right
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battlemage yet
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>>46429344
There's always worse than death stuff that can happen.
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>>46428914
>>46428966
>>46429032
>>46429222
interestingly it seems that no one even look extra word waifus

come on CYOA anos don't you want to help the Qlippoth girl find a place to belong?

>>46429433
never more
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>>46429399
They're okay, but you run the risk of pissing of some kind of monster that may kill you, you need a lot of side abilities to even bind things, you get what might be the weakest death cheat, and I just don't see tons of use for most binding, aside from the army thing that it makes it sound like you can do. I mean, there's not a lot of firepower granted from binding compared to say Spire or Kupider, plus those two also grant lots of mobility related stuff and fields gives you laser eyes.

I may though just be reading it wrong.
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>>46429399
>>46429344
iirc, glass desert works by binding Djinn into the second soul, and then borrowing their powers from the second soul directly. That basically gives you elemental powers at will.

>>46429503
Not interested. I don't really like most of the extra worlds to start with, and there's no one I would take over either cruicible or earth, maybe one or two others even.
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>>46429503
>pretending non-canon worlds exist
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>>46424082
the giantess one with like 20 giantess waifu's.
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>>46429532
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>>46429116
I'd happily get by with transformation and magical realm but sadly transformation is gender locked for some reason, hardly fair for the TG deviants to have to get loliform so they can use transformation properly.
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>>46427165
I like how most drawbacks are my fetishes.
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>>46429644
I'm hearing you, since that's my thing exactly. Doubly shitty since Loliform is weeb-preferred. There's just nothing for us.

Magical realm is the next best if you interpret it very loosely. That's what I meant about "self inflicted" fetishes. You can be the girl in your own room/realm.
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>>46427100
Beautiful.
I'd love a Slice of Life CYOA with the authors.
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>>46429645
So you have a fetish for having sex with old men?
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>>46428614
Badlands is fun as hell and Arcadia is modelled after mai true waifu. I also want to rescue Crucible....
Surely, a powerful Pontifex is allowed a harem?
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>>46429645
They aren't drawbacks, they're bribes for the pervert.
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>>46429645
The real drawback is that it takes a year to learn each point. Unless you've got a trust fund good luck ever actually making good on your apprenticeship.
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>>46428986
You do, apparently.
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>>46428986
Nope. Not even you.
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>>46429722
for you anon it will just cost 3 points on Conduit CYOA
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>>46429503
>Fan worlds REEEEEE
Plus in actuality I just wrote so much already and didn't feel like whining more.

Gesmene would be nice, but I've dealt with druggies, and even the nicest ones can be a bit hard to deal with just because they always seem, even when sober, to be a bit slow on the uptake. Also for the life of me I don't understand the powers of that world.

Malsanis has really specific powers, which doesn't seem so great. I might not just understand her world though.

Badlands is evil, and sure specialized weapons are incredibly useful, but she can't carry 1000 bullets on her easily, as well as reload them in quick time, plus just summoning a RPG works wonders I would assume.

Mu is a cute, high tier anime (is she from Kantai or something?) but she's a little autistic, plus mind reading is a pretty big no in my book, way worse than lash of authority, because at least my mind is my refuge.

>Arcadia
>Rebellious
Also, I'm getting the sense that lot of the fan worlds have very specific powers that aren't overly great.

Mandala is high tier, very sweet, onee-chan-esque woman. Plus built in death cheating for her.

Pharon is a cute innocent girl who dindu, though a little yandere about the sleep thing. She might be one of the most powerful least conduits with her powers.

Deep Dark has really cool powers, but the talking thing sounds pretty annoying. But her powers with kupider portals let's me live out my Gate of Babylon dream.

Lyoness is no Kamina, also again, I need dependability on a teammate/ sex mate.

Joton's personality makes her seem unreliable and a but flaky

Black Bay has useless powers and doesn't even give me muh treasure.

Qlippoth is a cute who's smile must be protected. Out of all the people here I would pick her and just put her in Bevin.

Pit-Zot is evil, and bitch, won't even pretend to play fair, creates multiple universes and end them which has moral implications maybe, and worst of all is into steampunk.
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>>46427016
Edgelords can instantly teleport behind someone and one-shot them every 5 seconds. For really cheap.

Isn't that kind of stupidly OP?
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>>46428614
No hosubandos?
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>>46427165
Start
+2sp
Favors
-Eye candy +5sp
-Cosplay +2
-Sexual Harassment +4
-Accomplice +3
-Experimentation +4
-Master's Will +2
-Secret Project +4
Total before Spells: 26
Spells
-Transform Human -2
-Transform Inhuman -2
-Enchantment -3
-Illusion -1
-Heal -3
-Magic Missile -1
-Summon Property -1
-Golem -3
-Necromancy -4
-Summon Familiar -3
-Invisibility -2
-Heat Shield -1

We will have all the magical realms. And an Army.
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>>46429677
That's true if we use a loose interpretation, but when we leave the room then the illusion is gone and we fail as true deviants.
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>>46429811
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>>46429795
Unless they fuck up, which given the nature of edgelords is a high probability, and depending on who they're fighting could be a death/rape sentence.

And there's also the issue of 'backing to the wall' which ends with a very dead edgelord.
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>>46420453
You might want to reduce the width to somewhere around 1200 pixels so people don't reee about it. Other than that, looks alright to me.
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>>46429795
Doesn't work on a magical realm user in their own room. Doesn't work in the presence of a sonichu medallion. Can be countered by reality marble, and potentially ray of feels or baneposting.

And of course you still get thrown into the pit if you get caught.

Purge is a lot more threatening IMO. Edgelords are generally safe as long as you stay the fuck away.
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>>46429837
>leaving your room
>your place of power
>ever
You fail at autism.
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>>46429895
Failing to eat... well shit, you just failed at survival.
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>>46429784
>is she from Kantai or something?
Wo-Type Enemy Airship Carrier to be exact

also I agre with you about Pit-Zot
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>>46429811
>>46429844
Way worse options than the waifu ones.
The only good ones are badlands and Lyonesse.
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>>46427360
I missed the two free points. Take illusion and Magic missile. I don't really care about magic missile, it's just filler, but illusion will make the whole experience more agreeable.
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>>46429928
It's tough being autism.
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>>46429870
Well, that's true if "nothing personal kid" takes any amount of skill or time to do. But, It semi-implies that it's basically an easy free kill against anyone since it's a power. Otherwise it's no different than simply backstabbing or sucker-punching someone without a power, really.

I mean, it's not that bad by itself, it just in combination with the teleport power they could just gank anyone without warning rendering all other combat-related perks entirely moot.
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>>46429503
A lot of the extra worlds are kinda... eh. Some of them are pretty cool, but most of them are just lacking some key factor or another.
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>>46430015
probably not any skill. Given the nature of the ability it probably involves you saying the line out loud, or one similar to it, and then the power takes over from there.

"Instantly" would be a bit overpowered. But again, killing somebody still carries consequences.

PURGE lets you walk in anywhere and murder the fuck out of whatever type of person you don't like, with no consequences. Unless they can reality marble your ass or are edgelords themselves they don't stand a chance. Hell, even the Sonichu medallion isn't a sure defense.
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>>46430085
Mu with meister is op desu, especially if brain = mind.
>Make clones of yourself with illusions, making them real with your meister power.
>Put a portion of your being into those clones with "that which dreams"
>Turn them ethereal so they don't age and no one can touch them
Plus you basically get to make anything you can imagine. Which is basically Kuiper's main draw.
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>>46430184
>hey, you can do all this OP shit with one of the fan worlds
>it totally makes one of the best worlds obsolete
Yeah, you're really selling me on it.
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>>46430209
I wasn't trying to sell it senpai, I was more in agreement.
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>>46427100
>>46429691
What I'm seeing right now, is:
>get 10 points
or whatever
>Authors can be waifus (more expensive) or daughters
>points can also be used on getting a great house, money etc.
since you won't have time for work when you have your bestest author as your wife/daughter.
Eh?
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>>46430314
Sounds rad broseph. Slice of life shenanigans are my fetish.
Pray tell good sir, how doth thy super hero cyoa go?
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>>46422132
>>46422169
>>46422214
>>46422251
>>46422285

I made my build last thread, but I thought I should refine it a bit. Monstergirls and breasts are my focus.

Medieval Realm (15)
Roman Realm (13)

Lascivious Enhancement (13)
Lost World Enhancement (12)
Magical Land Enhancement (11)
Humanoid Enhancement (10)
Technology Enhancement (9)
Undersea Enhancement (8)
(Not everywhere is under the sea, some cities just are)

Melee master, duel wield (8)
Riding master (8)
Bard prince, Musical instrument (8)
Prince Charming (8)
Bard prince, singing (8)
Aquatic Prince, water breathing (7)
Prince of the Hunt (6)
Prince of Maps (5)
Prince Stallion (4)
Prince of Thieves (3)
Scholarly Prince (2)
Trader Prince (1)
Sorcerer Prince, flesh magic (0)
Wondrous Artifact (-1)

Easily Distracted (0)

Massive Monsters
Pixie Poachers
Sphinx Snafu
Strip Club Struggle
Kidnapped Cuties
Paradise Perverted

Zariea Sha'tul
Taleri Kassendel
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>>46430370
Also, just noticed my points should be (12) after roman, so I guess I'll take away Prince of maps.

Alright. I'm viewing the world as a big RPG where I have a bunch of quests I can start in any order. Paradise perverted is probably one I shouldn't let go on for too long. It might be entertaining for a bit with people growing multiple breasts and other such fetishes, but I'm not really a fan of futa and am gonna have to draw the line there.
For massive monsters, it says reverse the effects, but maybe I can just reverse the rampaging berserking parts.
Pixie and Sphinx are monstergirl related, and I'm just gonna replace the strippers with monstergirls, or even the kidnapped cuties.
I rescue Zariea for obvious reasons.

And then we come to Taleri. She's sort of my end game. I'd rescue her pretty early, and get to working on her quest throughout the game. With magical enhancement, she's bound to be using spells even more often. However, I'm not actually going to completely fix her problem. In fact, I'm using my prince of thieves to sabotage her attempts unknowingly. I will however help create a potion that will shrink her breasts back down to a normalish size, but they can still grow. With my flesh magic and Scholarly background, I'll figure out what spell of hers went awry and use it on all the women in the realm. I can then mass produce my breast shrinking potion and sell it to magic users for a huge profit, but huge breasts will be very common.

Everything else is just a bonus.

It's brilliant, BRILLIANT, BRIIILLIANT!
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>>46429784
>Steampunk
What? Where? I've seen you say that before and it never makes sense. It's clocks, not steam.
Incredible how I disagree with almost everything you said, it's like you're intentionally wrong in order to rile me up specifically.
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>>46430353
I'm honestly surprised no one posted it. Thanks!

Well, I woke up an hour ago, so I haven't made changes yet
Planned changes for today
Remove power armor option, make it free for Tech / make anon understand his powers come from an armor
In general, give Origins a free Power.
Make anon understand that Origin = Origin of your powers = If he wants a flying power armor, he'll have to buy the Flying power
Change Racial to Alien
Either reduce points given or increase cost (rpobably later, and include smaller powers)
Give discounts on some powers e.g. Flight is cheaper for Symbiote/Tech
Include the rest of the powers I had planned, some of the ones that were suggested
Include some nemesi.


I'd love to include lesser-known/minor authors, like Photoshop-anon, as 1 point daughters, but we'll see.
I think it'd be written sort of in the same style as Monstergirl: Daughters.
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>>46430587
In general I need more Magical powers that aren't fucking powerful and thus need to cost so much you can't take anything else.
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>>46430554
>Steampunk perhaps most recognisably features anachronistic technologies or retro-futuristic inventions as people in the 19th century might have envisioned them, and is likewise rooted in the era's perspective on fashion, culture, architectural style, and art.

Also It's my first time posting about this one, so it must have been someone else who called it steampunk before.

>Incredible how I disagree with almost everything you said

It's must be hard to always have wrong opinions senpai :^(
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>>46429784
If anything fanworlds aren't specific enough.
Arcadia has a power that let's you cultivate plants with which 'literally anything is possible'.
In Malsanis there's a perk that's just any type of surgery.
Compare this to canon worlds where a power might be something like eyebeams, flight or binding a specific kind of djinn and all the applications came from cleverly combining them.
I saw the Rorch WIP though and that's all your complaints taken up to eleven. There's specific perks for selling certain categories of things.
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>>46430694
I have a hard time believing people in the 19th century would have envisioned clockhands and brass everywhere.
Futurology of that time had a whole different theme to it.
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>>46429503
Qlippoth girl is an insane abomination. She deserves a mercy kill.
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>>46430736
Rorch is a special beast.
I get the feeling that it's supposed to be a setting for the conduit market CYOA by focusing on trains and commerce but it tries pretty hard to suck the mysticism out of the markets. I mean why are there special perks for enchanting your wares? How boring is it for the mystifying special object you bought from that strange shopkeeper to be made by him just to sell? Conduit gives you just the setting for things like that to have a history and alien origins that the buyer can only imagine.
It's not like you'd lose much by removing that, you don't need to have thirty different powers, all one point.
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>>46431198
Addendum to that.
What's up with the cabal? I mean they're just some guys. Tier 3 suits, you can make tier 3 suits.
How can it be a perk that you have an account for something with them? That's not arcane knowledge. Anyone could get that, anyone can lose that for whatever reason.
Upper management should be more god-like and unapproachable.

Okay, back to the bazaar. I think it should be removed entirely. A market stall is just a very small business from before you've managed to climb the ladder and you're already mystical because you're a conduit.
So really, there's no point.
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Does anybody have the set of around 15ish separate files where each is one option? I don't remember much about it except that as you approach each altar there is a whole paragraph spent setting the atmosphere reflective of the option you are reading.
Does anyone know what I'm talking about?
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>>46427016
Oh boy, my turn.

+5 No GF
+10 No Job
+10 No sex
+5 for thigh high Fetish
+10 for Exorcism Fetish
+5 Bullied
+10 for Passive
+15 Games are shit
+10 I play lots of shit
+5 I played MTG
+5 For weapon (Broken Beer Bottles)
+5 for not liking normies (Or really anyone)
+10 for insanity bonus

105 points total.
Vidya House.

60 points spent on Booze.
30 on Banebosting Belt.
$15 a week income.
Run my fucking room like a speakeasy to make mad dosh. Start baneposting if people don't leave... Or just fucking shank the bitch with broken bottles.
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>>46431302
This always triggered the living shit out of me

>Fire: yellow
>Earth: red
>Wind: blue
>Water: green

How do you fuck this up so much
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>>46431302
This is really bad.
>1 hour time limit that doesn't make sense for some of the primary powers
>Secondary powers just seem better
>Fire secondary power of wind implies that you can somehow use your fire primary, which doesn't make sense if it's your secondary.
>Poor color choices
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>>46431709
Ah, never mind I misread how powers work
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Are there any modern x fantasy cyoas? I want to make one like it, but can't find any to take inspiration from.
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>>46431721
Do you mean "Earth is invaded by fantasy races" or what?
Great Hunter takes our reality, destroys anything electronic and fucks it up with monsters.
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>>46431733
I think they meant something where the fantasy and modern stuff coexist, rather than the former replacing the latter (as is the case in Great Hunter).
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>>46431767
We'll never learn.
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>>46431733
Basically: >>46431767

Do we have anything close to it?
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>>46431860
nope.
Why would they coexist? Why wouldn't the fantasy world adopt technology, and why wouldn't the modern "kingdom" adopt fantasy stuff?
Why wouldn't they be at war, why would they live peacefully?
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>>46431733
That's still the stupidest shit to me. Is it just so you can say you're still really you and not transported to a different world?
Cause really, the 'fantasy races invade the modern world' trope exists only to pit dragons against fighter jets and the like. That and SoL highschools but with catgirls. Those are the only reasons to do that.
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>>46427356
You have my interest.
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>>46431953
Hey, I think it was fucking stupid, too, but I'm not the author.
I'd have just said you're "playing a character" in the other world - but then we'd have turbo autists arguing about "not being you", because that somehow matters with make-believe.
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>>46422031
You can upload pdfs to 4ch?
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>>46432033
On /tg/ at least, yes.
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>>46432033
It may very well be a function unique to several boards that need it, like /gd/ also can upload .pdfs, and /p/ has exif data and other /p/-related functions.
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>>46431721
We can make up one right here. But we could take some freedom with the concept.
The fantasy part doesn't have to be DnD and the modern part doesn't have to be 2016.
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>>46432127
Here, have the latest version.
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>>46432127
Archdemon is an example actually.
There's clearly magic and inhumans but also modern conventions and buildings.
I think the dragon CYOA is, monsters get released in the world (and you're turned into one) but modern marvels remain.
Then there's also that one hunter CYOA that pits you as a hyper advanced human in a predator role against fantasy races.
We need more of that, instead of magic coming to our modern world our modern tech invading a magic world.
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>>46424988
>>46423616
>>46422240

If current WormAnon is around, I got a question.
When deciding what an Avatar looks like, are there any no-no's? Like, could I make my Avatar a wearable living suit of armour or something?
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Demiplane:

6x Earth [11]
Insertion[1]
Population 6[12]
Population - Pretty, Meta-human, Extra-human, Immortal, Demographics-9:1 Female to Male[15]
Tech4 [4]
Magic 5[10]
Society - Aesthetics, Mystical, Technomagic, Wealthy, Healthy, Secure, Industrial. [28]
Culture - Sexual, Mechanical, Food, Intellectual, Animation, Festival Music. [7]

Landscape - Magic Phenomena, Odd Materials and Fauna 3 [11]

Dungeon 3[5]
Spirits 2[2]
Afterlife 3 - Reincarnation [3]
Fate - Maybe do good and be reincarnated as something alright plus a side of 'red ribbon of fate' lovers?[3]

Lifestyle - Upgrade 1, Automata 2.[3]

Personal - Immortal, Spirit Walk, Tongues, Memory, Awareness, Superhuman and Peak Physique. [14]

Powers - Biomancy, Technomancy, Alchemy, Glamour, Energy Manipulation and Element 3, Psychoactive, Conjuration, Enchanting and Healing. [18]

Waifu 2 [4]

Familiar [3]

Complications - Trapped, Word is Bond and Amnesia and Benevolence. [100]


77 Tokens remain.
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>>46432234
> monsters get released in the world (and you're turned into one) but modern marvels remain.
which would be an example of
> Is it just so you can say you're still really you and not transported to a different world?
>Cause really, the 'fantasy races invade the modern world' trope exists only to pit dragons against fighter jets and the like. That and SoL highschools but with catgirls. Those are the only reasons to do that.

If he wants to put magic into an Earth-like world, or a world with non-medieval technology, that's fine. But don't make it
>Earth, but SUDDENLY MONSTERS INVADE!!!!!
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>>46422031
I want to build a magical realm linked to the real world, whose purpose will be to help humanity help itself. In regards to the environment, wars, existential threats, avoidable suffering etc.
Let me see. I need it to be safe from humanity's bad tendencies. With a benevolent attitude and a diplomatically inclined culture. And also to be technologically and magically advanced. Anything I can bring to the real world that can be useful, I'll bring. Oh and as a last, desperate measure I need the space to relocate refugees from the real world.

Area Increase 5
Portals
Attitude Adjustment
Culture & Customs
Population Longevity
Metahuman Population
Technology Upgrade 6
Magical Upgrade 5
Public Education
Diplomatic
Technomagic
Infrastructure
Sanitation
Secure
Healthy
University
Intellectual Affinity
Nature Affinity
Fertile
Exceptional Materials
Afterlife
Benevolent!
Bound!
Gateways 3
Transient
Protection 2
Assimilation
Wealthy
Industrial
Mystical
Rich
Pantheon
Influence 2
Immortality
Spirit Walk
Tongues
Memory
Inspiration
Peak Condition
Blessing
Friendship 2
Healing
Guidance 2
Machina Mind
Automatons 2
Theme
Fauna & Flora 3
Magical Phenomena
Dominion

I made myself Bound to my word and Benevolent, also Inspiring, Blessed and temporary leader. The theme of my magical realm is Utopian Omnibenevolent. There are sorcerers, superheroes, Gods, super IAs and so on. All have had their ontological nature woven with good intentions and an inability to hurt others. Everyone is immortal, including myself and anyone I deem my friend. Anyone who wishes to can be brought to my Magical Realm through a gateway or a portal, healed of any afflictions, blessed and made immortal too. But they won't be able of using violence anymore.

What could possibly go wrong?
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>>46432289
>77 Tokens remain.

This was my counter. Ignore it.
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>>46432289
>Amnesia
So you won't be yourself...?
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>>46422535
Yes I was inspired by AngelAnon's Dream Princess cyoa. That and everyone who was complaining about not being able to be male. I liked Angels cyoa quite a bit and figured at first I'd just do the same stuff hers had, but then started thinking "What do storybook princes really do?" and thus it went from a page or two out to what you see now.

>>46422855
Thanks AngelAnon. Really liked your cyoa. Hope your dad is well and your move went ok.

>>46423079
>Your CYOA will never become popular enough to have its own threads

Doubt this one will ever do that. When most cyoas are posted they get talked about for a thread or two then fall off. To me real longevity is if people keep reposting them months later because they enjoy them.

>>46423477
1 each sorry. It's modified in the next version. I'm working on equipment page now, just need some ideas of what kind of equipment people would like to see.
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>>46432313
What the ever-loving fuck are you talking about you hippie?
Fantasy races invading the modern world is self defeating if the modern world is fiated to not be modern anymore. The dragon CYOA is definitely about pitting jets versus dragons, that's the most straightforward way to do it, so it's not just for it being 'still you'. It's for a valid reason.
A world in which dragons have always existed would have vastly different technology so you'd have to break immersion something fierce to have everything the same as on earth. There's a reason why 'monsters invade' is a trope, it works.
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>>46432410
Glad to know you're working on an update!
>equipment people would like to see
Magical/high tech weapons, vehicles and mounts, something like the Wondrous Artifact but costing more points and more detailed.
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>>46432284
As far as canon goes, not wormanon but did read worm a lot, projections were whatever the person wanted and in the case of Siberian it was subconsciously modeled after his daughter iirc.

So a living suit of armor type thing is valid. Heck your projection could be gumby.
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>>46431721
Does this count? Its unknown how far the fantasy goes, but the world at best can be guess modern.
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>>46427016

Deviant, fetish +5, weird fetish +10, and I shit up so many of these threads with ERP +10 = 25

Nerd, bullied +5, beta +10, extensive gaming +10 = 25

Weeb, animu +5, figures +10, moar animu than Western +15 = 30

Neckbeard, some Pokémon cards from the nineties, +5

Edgelord, old bokken somewhere, +5

Total 90pts. Affinities with deviant, weeb and nerd, assigned to weeb school.

With three affinities I get my consoles, pr0n and animu stuff free, which is nice. So I'll take Loliform for 40, and Reality Marble for 45. Most of the time I'll be in school hoping sempai will notice me (any sempai who took Cute Boy, not any sempai who stayed a fat slobbering cheese-stained weeb, obviously); I'll use my Reality Marble to project a happy outdoors world full of friendly animals and forest spirits and so on. Lovely place for a picnic with a cute boy. Terrible place for anyone who likes to harass a little girl who doesn't want to be harassed. Forest spirits hate people who hurt little girls.

I'll go visiting the nerd house from time to time; I'm sure they have excellent LAN parties, and I'm sure they'd be happy to welcome a girl to a Mario Kart tournament.

(And once in a while I'll sneak out and visit a Deviant who took Magical Realm. And deny everything afterwards.)
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>>46432464

Oh, and five surplus points gets me $15 weekly pocket money. How much are cute dresses around here? Anime style school uniforms are cute but I can't spend my whole time just changing between a fuku, gym pants, and the classic schoolgirl swimsuit, can i?
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>>46432410
We could buy castles, palaces or upgrades for our kingdom. Companions, mentors, waifus.
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>>46424882
You'll be happy to know I've added a Wright Prince skill that lets you buy engineer type skills so you can be a mechanic or shipwright or cyberlimb maker.

Also clarified the wording that you don't have to merge every realm you buy into one mass and can just have those as parts of your dreamrealm.

>>46425001
Yep just need some more item ideas or things people would like to see. Figure I'll add the same amount as skills on the skill page, just using that layout. So 11 items not counting a reworked wonderous item.
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>>46422132

I do prefer to be a princess, but this looks like fun all the same. If I can't be like Zelda and attract beautiful hero boys to my realm, well... a magical prince can still have fun. I'm thinking big eighties hair and very tight trousers and goblins everywhere...
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>>46432439
>is a trope, it works.
It'll be just another CYOA that's been done before. Nothing new, nothing interesting.
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>>46432572
Random ideas incoming.
Flying carpet! Magic Mirror! Animal companions! Grooming products! Enchanted mask that lets you shapeshift! Cursed wine cup that acts as a roofie! Wait, that last one is pretty bad. I'll stop there.

>>46432620
Nihil sub sole novum, citizen.
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>>46427218
Nice. I think you're the only person who has taken any aquitic prince abilities. I've modified them a little for v1.1.....Fast Swimming instead of just swimming and Sense tides & shoals for instead of just sense tides.

I guess I'm surprised that peole don't take multiple realm flavors or a lot of realm tweaks
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>>46427455
>Do the Realm perks duplicate the effects of the Princely Skills, Abilities, and Perks? E.g., if I take Pirate Realm, does that provide me with the full skillset of Prince of Maps and Pirate Prince?

Yes those are the core skills listed under Prince of Maps and Pirate Prince. so Pirate Realm gives you those two skills....and a ship of your own.
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>>46432677
Are you gonna make princesses cost points? I think they would feel more valuable that way and it'd help the balance.

I've heard someone suggest that only one damsel be free, what do you think?
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>>46427356
>Orc fantasy rape Cyoa
Is that a real thing?
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>>46432643
Wouldn't you rather have a new take on a setting, rather than a CYOA that's 95% the same as another?
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>>46432620
There are thousands of ways you can innovate. The plot device is just a small part of the story which is just one element of the CYOA.
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>>46432643
>Enchanted mask that lets you shapeshift!
Why would you take that instead of Sorcerer Prince with the appropriate specialization?
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>>46432750
I hadn't thought of that! But yeah if you interpret "field of magic" liberally enough you can do anything with it and all the other perks are redundant.

Have a random cyoa!
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>>46430430
LOL I Love it. Nicely thought out and very funny.

>>46430554
Steampunk also incorporates clockwork mechanisms into it's genre. Not that anon, just saying.

>>46430587
Magic origin shoudn't just be demonic but magic imbuement of some sort. Artifact of power, ancient old guy, fey, angels, devils, dimensional firehead guy etc...

Magic seems to be able to replicate other powers as it's primary power or the whole break the laws of physics, which in a superhero genere happens all the time with any power.
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>>46427356
>>46431974
>>46432713
Yes.
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>>46432367
Just because of your near constant bitching, I think I'll go ahead and add a "you lose your memories" to all my future cyoas.
It won't add a function beyond triggering your autism and preventing you from engaging in a fucking pastime that has zero actual influence on your life.
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>>46432903
Thank you anon. So you start one with 1p in Desirability and 1p in Defiance?

>>46432906
Identity persistence is a legitimate philosophical problem.
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>>46432952
You'd start with the stats from your Role, naturally.
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>>46432443
>Magical/high tech weapons, vehicles and mounts, something like the Wondrous Artifact but costing more points and more detailed.

Currently I have 20 slots for magic items/equipment, well 19 really as the wondrous artifact will get reworded a bit.

I was aiming towards everything being 1 pt but that's not set in stone. Also was thinking it would be 1 or 2 weapons that could take the form of whatever you wanted as per your purchased realm flavors.

>>46432560
That's doable but i'm only doing equipment type stuff. Not sure if I should add mounts at all, though I guess storybook heroes do ride around a lot, though mostly on normal animals.
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>>46432750
Personally I don't see why you'd want items over inherent powers anyway but people seem to want them and as they aren't spending stuff on realm flavors/tweaks there has to be something to dump points in to.
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>>46432643
Good list. some of those I have written down already but the rest give ideas so thanks.

>>46432702
Never really thought of princesses costing points. Seems to me people wouldn't want to have to pay for a quest...but then most quests in other cyoas award you stuff and they don't here. They're more something to do and be a dream prince, then gimmie stuff.

You think people would really want to buy the princess quests for 1 pt each?

I do want to add a dlc or something with a couple more realm and princesses seeing as I don't have any alien princesses or any art that is a specific realm outside of like the valkyrie.
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>>46432903
I'm not clear on how tokens work.
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>>46433265
>You think people would really want to buy the princess quests for 1 pt each?
Yep. And they'd have to choose which princesses they like best. As it is your CYOA has some great stuff but not a lot of choices to make beyond the realm stuff.
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>>46432127
>>46432190
Got the angel one too?
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>>46433311
previous thread has them
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>>46433324
ok, thanks.
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>>46428589
Glass Dessert is shit because you're part of her harem.
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>>46432952
Is it too much to ask for you to keep your mental issues to yourself?
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>>46433406
Yes.

http://imgur.com/a/M3btb time travel cyoa i'm too lazy to post
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>>46433479
Later Middle Ages
South East Asia

Fitting in
Reincarnation+Fertility

I become a Bodhisattva. Maybe something like a Tibetan Lama. Life for religious figures was okay right?
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>>46422132
Brackets note an error being pointed out
DreamRealm Shaping - About half of these entries have Enhancment instead of Enhancement
DreamRealm Shaping - Lascivious [Enhancement] - (this isn't an error, so much as doesn't feel right) "[...] people dress, act, [and the creation of their items, art and buildings]."
DreamRealm Shaping - Magical Land [Enhancement] - "[...] and the people [of the] [] have a greater nack for using magic." Either "people have" or perhaps "people of the land have"

Bard Prince - Why is the image for this a bad singer?
Prince Charming - "[...] and enjoying the company of people[,] you've picked up great skills [...]" Let's eat grandma vs Let's eat, grandma

4/5 "So you have seen the general troubles that are acattered [across] the land [...]"
5/5 Gwendolyn Bennet - "A Dark Knight has captured [Princess] Gwendolyn [...]"
5/5 Vamina Taradon - "She stumbled [across] a powerful fire [...]"
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>>46432903
>Dat ork face in the bottom right corner
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>>46433673
>[and the creation of their items, art and buildings]
Personally would suggest "and in the designs of their items, art, and buildings". Maybe switch "designs" for "appearance" or some other appropriate word.
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>>46423875
>>46423896
>>46423917
FYI: This CYOA was in my "good ideas, poor execution" folder, so if the creator (Greylore) is fine with it, I'd love to see a better-formatted spiritual successor.

>West Mediterranean Sea hex
>High Tech 20

>+2 WIS 16
>Transformations
Total of 12 points.
>>Base Change: Shapeshifter 13
>>Major Change: Splice 11
>>Major Change: Kinesthetics 9
>>Major Change: Semi-infectious 7
>>Major Change: Wit 5
>>Minor Change: Chill 4
>Monolith IV 1
>Crystal Ball 1 0

The hex is pretty good - nice weather, preexisting infrastructure and art, and far from any active enemies.
Wisdom (common sense, ability to learn, etc.) is the hardest stat to enhance or replace with computers, it helps civilizations keep running day-to-day, and the Fallout stat system is horseshit for anything outside its game.
The Transformations are very in-depth, but I'll just say that if I can get a Preset made out of it I'll buy additional stat boosts (+1 CHA, +1 INT), Strange New Life (shapeshift-intoable slimes), and even more Transformations (the obvious stuff - lifespan, faster shifting, yadda yadda), in that order; and come back to it later.
The Monolith's very strangely formatted; it doesn't say the purchases are cumulative, but the point values imply that they are. Also, clarification on the powers it has each level would be nice. As it stands, I'm assuming the three point option lets me transform my citizens (and myself) into any form possible within the species (which just so happens to include about anything with DNA, including other alternative humans), and includes the lower cost powers to 'retcon' minor purchases into other ones with the same value, make force fields around my house, and display statuses.
The Crystal Ball's just cheap and might be useful for parleying with multiple low- or non-tech hexes at once.

1/3
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>>4643381

First, the shape shifting isn't what you think. It doesn't let you completely turn into someone else in a few seconds. It's closer to directible natural regeneration - changing eye color might only take a few minutes, but a full sex change is days or weeks on the low end, and significant alterations to bone structure need a month or two. This affects everything above the cellular level, so all organs are fully functional, but aging still happens up until your cells fall apart.
Of course, sticking to human forms is no fun, so they can also take DNA from another species and copy instincts, organs, and such from it. This follows the basic laws of biology, so not only would forming functional cat ears necessitate several other physioligical changes, but replacing vital organs requires either making a backup beforehand or staying on life support the whole time.
A sense for your own internal layout and condition, even if you can't sense every cell individually, is essential for shapeshifting so you can troubleshoot and fix physiological problems before you die of brain hemmorhage or something.
Soulforge is expensive, creepy, and doesn't scale too well, so everybody of this particular species can convert others. It doesn't affect the mind (besides the stat boosts and usually subtle Transformations), and each conversion must fall in two of the categories of [Willing, includes large blood transfusion, takes a long time]. When freshly converted, someone's effectively shapeshifted into the form they had before until they decide to change it.
Finally, both mental changes were mostly picked to help make diplomacy easier and spend three points - Wit helps my citizens think on their feet and react in ways that aren't 'fight or flight', while Chill primarily removes the panic response. It keeps fear and adrenaline and all that good stuff, but helps them maintain composure despite it.
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>>46433843
>>46433811

Really, I think that the imbalance in the options is part of the test - seeing if you could pick out the gussied-up trap options.
For instance, a Mercator projection is skewed enough that the equatorial hexes are actually quite a bit larger than the polar ones, and anything besides High Tech is pointless - you could defend your hex just as well by buying Sufficiently Advanced Technology and having magical powers as well as guns, and keeping indoor plumbing, internet, medical supplies, and other modern conveniences.
The minions are basically only good as a tactical strike force, and even then, people could be trained (or just Transformed) almost as well for a much lower point value.
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>>46433673
>DreamRealm Shaping - Magical Land [Enhancement] - "[...] and the people [of the] [] have a greater nack for using magic." Either "people have" or perhaps "people of the land have"

Yeah caught that one just recently. Thanks though.

>>46433673
>DreamRealm Shaping - Lascivious [Enhancement] - (this isn't an error, so much as doesn't feel right) "[...] people dress, act, [and the creation of their items, art and buildings]."

Not sure what you mean?

>>46433673
>DreamRealm Shaping - About half of these entries have Enhancment instead of Enhancement

Will recheck that. Odd as I ran it through a spell checker. Thanks.

>>46433673
>Bard Prince - Why is the image for this a bad singer?

Because it's a joke. Also good bard images that look princely are tough to find. So I went with the silly one instead.

>>46433673
>Prince Charming - "[...] and enjoying the company of people[,] you've picked up great skills [...]" Let's eat grandma vs Let's eat, grandma

Corrected.>>46433673
>4/5 "So you have seen the general troubles that are acattered [across] the land [...]"
>5/5 Gwendolyn Bennet - "A Dark Knight has captured [Princess] Gwendolyn [...]"
>5/5 Vamina Taradon - "She stumbled [across] a powerful fire [...]"

Corrected. thanks
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>>46432677
>I guess I'm surprised that peole don't take multiple realm flavors or a lot of realm tweaks
Maybe add some minor personal benefits to the realms and flavors? Subterranean could make your family even richer than normal through deep gold mines or lost world could let you make yourself into a swole Conan type of prince. Realms could work the same way instead of just forcing you to take lists of skills. Or at least stop the lists from overlapping, because if I want Arabian, Medieval, Nordic, and Roman realms I have to waste points on essentially "buying" Melee Combat four times.
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>>46433811
Cool, looking forward to your redo!
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>>46431637
>yellow-hot flames
>red clay and sand
>green seas
>blue skies
I don't see the problem.
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>>46433811
>I'd love to see a better-formatted spiritual successor
would you do it?
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>>46433734
B-but I was just a merchant after all
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>>46433882
>Not sure what you mean?
Pretty sure they mean that the current wording for the first sentence in Lascivious Enhancement's description could be better. See also my suggestion for it: >>46433759
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Thoughts? I'm pretty shitty at this kinda stuff and writing.
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>>46433971
What's it about?
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>>46433964
Yes I've changed it to this now...

The world now has a naughty kink in it and all things sexual are more open, showing up in the way people dress, act and in the design of items, art and buildings. The creatures of the land are also far more lusty. Things like harems are aplenty.
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>>46433811
Greylore has a lot of unfinished stuff that will never be completed. I think a spiritual successor would be pretty cool.
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>>46432716
Is that a WiP?
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>>46433917
I recently did add that subterranean is rich in mineral deposits and arboreal in exotic plants.

Problem with a swole conan type prince is you get to choose your age and looks anyway so that becomes a moot point.

>>46433917
>Or at least stop the lists from overlapping, because if I want Arabian, Medieval, Nordic, and Roman realms I have to waste points on essentially "buying" Melee Combat four times.

Not really sure how i can do that unless I divorce skills from realm flavors entirely and that was kind of the point for those who only buy a single realm. You basically get 3 skills for free with 1 realm.

I could add a section on the skill page at the bottom that if a skill overlaps you can instead choose another skill but people are already complaining about too many points as it is.
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>>46433936
I'd probably have done earth as yellow or a brownish and fire as reddish to stick with a more classic translation.
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>>46434033
Unfinished hero thing by some anon...might have been Greylore.
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>>46434085
You could give more of them a choice the way you do with Asian Realm. E.g., Arabic Realm could make you a skilled rider, warrior, or merchant (pick 2 of 3), and medieval could let you be a sorcerer.
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>>46433981
I just wanted to make a CYOA heavily focused on armour and weapon customization, the rest is kinda fluff I guess
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>>46434229
It looks neat from a skim, but you'll get a lot more feedback if you annoucne that kinda thin.
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>>46434179
Hmmm that has merit. I'll see if I can rework them all 5 to be like that.
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>>46433971
>Re enforced
Reinforced.
>Peirce
Pierce.
>Visability
Visibility.
>The Holy Shield Maiden's
You probably meant to use the plural form "Maidens" instead of the possessive singular form "Maiden's".
>sacrafice
Sacrifice.
>Nible
Nimble.

Are you sure you want to have a fuckload of customizable weapons and armor? 'Cos you're going to have to stat every single piece. You'll also have to explain what exactly the stats (not just the weapons/armor stuff, but also the main stats you choose at the start) signify. Will probably need to stat the beasts as well.

Overall, the starting equipment/bonuses don't seem that enticing, and there doesn't seem to be any particular indication of being able to get more or better stuff down the line.

Final verdict: Rule 0.
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>>46433971
Looks kinda tedious, to be honest. You do you, though.
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Hi, Bliss here.

I feel like making my dungeon design CYOA but doing it without the map. Acceptable?

It will be different in terms of design, concept and stuff. But it will still be a dungeon CYOA. Or I can turn it into a dark academy CYOA, or something.

Thoughts?
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>>46434344
Yeah, that's cool with me. I don't mind the map stuff, but at the same time the main appeal for me is imagining all the monsters and minions and heroes and how they interact with the rooms, and a map isn't all that important for that as long as there are room options.

Dark ACademy sounds neat, though. How would that one be different?
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>>46434344
literally only one guy gives a shit about maps.
Could you post it?
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>>46434344
>I feel like making my dungeon design CYOA but doing it without the map. Acceptable?
Of course. Makes it easier to make a build if instead of having to place everything manually on a grid, you can just say "the dungeon has these features".
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>>46434358
Dark academy would be a different theme, but has the same kind of options as one.

A bit like this:
Dungeon Master = Headmaster
Dungeon Themes = Classes
Dungeon Rooms/Features/Upgrades = Facilities/Features/Upgrades etc.

I could also just make an option to turn your dungeon into a dark academy for some bonus or vice versa.

>>46434367
I haven't begun making it yet, though I have been thinking about it a lot, and have been gathering images this entire week. Unless you mean the previous dungeon design CYOA that I cancelled due to the oversight on how complex it would become.

>>46434395
Yes that was my line of thinking. Any requests?
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>>46434465
A school theme sounds interesting.
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>>46430736
>>46431198
>>46431271
you know you guys could've linked to my post, that way I could've found your complaints more easily.
From what you've said, the problems are with lore, the core city's aspects, the bazaar tree, and perk quantity.
Lore can have this world being created by ancient conduits as a marketplace with the cabal (which I've decided to change to tier 4) having once worked for them,
the account is free and necessary due to the nature of the world,
I can understand the issue with bazaar so maybe changing the mystic stuff more to finding then making (though I'm not removing it),
And there aren't perks for selling certain categories of things, it's development of products.
Either way read through it http://pastebin.com/RfDsDFtH I've started making a few changes. though it is most definitely WIP, I still appreciate suggestions. (though I'm not messing with the quantity of perks...)
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>>46434465
>Dark academy
eh, there's already about 90 other school CYOAs
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>>46434629
How many of them make you into the headmaster, though?
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>>46434465
>Any requests?
Something to customize (appearance, powers, maybe even equipment) yourself and your minions with.
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>>46434465
Hey, could you send a link for all the land pictures please?
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>>46434465
Bliss... Bliss plz, finish this.
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>>46434957
That's pretty much what they said they were planning to do right here: >>46434344
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>>46426479
Name: Shufen Kuang
Gender: Female
Origin: Kingdom of the Taegeuk; Muisim Shaman
Skills, Perks, and Traits: Low-Tech Understanding, Basic Ethereal Manipulation, Unarmed Combatant, Martial Training, Chosen Blood, Tech Eater, Infused Essence, Natural Physique, Reformed Man
Initial Armor: Traveller's leathers, Possessed Warrior Monk Robes, Kelder Biological Suit, Plate Armor
Initial Weapons: Yuta Brace, Upgrade, Twin, Combi Stick, Longbow
Initial Knick-knacks: Pegs, Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Yasakani no Magatama, Grapevine Cross, Traveller Corpse Soap, Glepnir Chain, Liquid Determination Vial, Noble Beast Minor (Crow), Magiblock Coinage, Witching Bottle
Little Things: Fuck your Glowy Bullshit
Faction: Fighters
Covenant: The Ubermensch Society
Allies: Deniz Seljuk, 29, Fighter, Professional Skirmisher; Lord Auspeg, 160, Commercialist, Eccentric Aristocrat; 'Sam', 1196, Fighter, Second Gen Man Hunter; 'Oghuz', 1203, True Traveller, Second Gen Horse Archer; Mitsubashi Goto, 27, Fighter, Hot blooded Ronin
Home District: The Sky city of Anmanga- Best of Everything, for those who earn it
Hubworld: Tokai Jidai – Eternal Conflict
Mission: Reality Bridging Assholes
Panic Button: The Demon

Shufen is staring at the snack machine, apparently attempting to will it to feed her. She's just about to punch it when she sees you, and asks for assistance.

+ A skilled Wushu fighter, her very body is a deadly weapon.
+ Can rip apart high-tech opponents with ease.
+ Always trains to better herself, can teach you her moves.
+/- Kali ma!
+/- Loves to fight, won't back down from anything.
- Hopelessly bad with tech, will need help with anything more complicated than a padlock.
- Won't willingly back down from a fight, no matter the odds.
+/- Aims to take down Gadraki to fulfill a "destiny" of some sort.
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>>46434344
Unironically avatar posting and saying shit like "Hi, Bliss here" instead of using the name field are why I've always found you the most obnoxious contributor here.
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>>46435144
of all the things you could whine about, this is what you choose?
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>>46435225
Yes, and?
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>>46434625
>(though I'm not messing with the quantity of perks...)
But that's the one problem I have....
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>>46435233
Oooh are we doing improv? I'm a dinosaur butler! Where have you put the saucers?!
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>>46434482
>>46434629
Haven't decided yet which.

>>46434778
I kind of want to focus on the estate and themes. Minions come a close second.

>>46434849
There are no links, and there are twelve of them, can't be bothered to post them unless you really want a specific one.

>>46434957
I am, just not the way I first intended.

>>46435144
If that's what triggers you then I don't know what to say. I'm not here to conform to your desired mannerism anyway.
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>>46435245
It really does go against the feel of conduit.
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>>46435245
My plan is to keep perk amounts even across the trees, i.e. if i remove a perk in, say, the bazaar tree, I would also remove a perk within the gang and corporation trees as well.
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>>46435225
Heh choose your own whine cyoa.... To be fair though he has a point on the name field. It is good for answering questions.
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>>46435303
>I kind of want to focus on the estate and themes.
You could mention something about being able to set your appearance to whatever you like, for example, and maybe add some sort of effect to the estate/theme options that empowers you and/or your minions in a specific way?
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>>46435378
>You could mention something about being able to set your appearance to whatever you like
Sure I can add that to the personal features.
>add some sort of effect to the estate/theme options that empowers you and/or your minions in a specific way
That will be the themes you can choose. They will "unlock" minion types, skills and add that aesthetic to your dungeon.
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>>46435429
Neat. Looking forward to the finished product.
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>>46434625
I think it should be a general rule of thumb to ask yourself; 'does this need to be a conduit expansion instead of a stand-alone CYOA'.
A conduit world is its own world and setting but at the same time can form synergy with other worlds.
Take Lily as an example of what not to do. Lily was basically a 'be the little girl' CYOA, one of those specific situation CYOAs with some slight variations to choose from. There was no reason why it needed to be its own world and there was no reason why it needed to be connected to conduit.

Now, does Rorch need to be a conduit expansion? What is the synergy with other worlds. Are there elements to Rorch that can be approached differently by conduits of other worlds in a meaningful way? And do the perks you can buy in Rorch help you achieve things outside Rorch?
If you don't want that sort of thing in your CYOA you could just make it its own thing. That's not giving up or downgrading, it could be just as good without being bogged down by a connection to a larger CYOA. A CYOA about being a businessman in a fantastical setting could work just as well as a CYOA about being a dream prince, space refugee or dragon.
If you do really think it should be part of conduit I suggest letting otherworldly perks benefit the conduit in in Rorch, glass desert allows you to create magical items, Pit-zot allows you to automate the use of your powers, have Rorch reward that kind of thing. And let Rorch benefit you on other worlds, you have the train station to take you everywhere and that's pretty good but what if you could extend your corporate reach to shipyards in kuiper and moneylenders in the glass desert.
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>>46435347
Just keep the perk costs the same, if you merge four different perks just make the resulting perk cost 4.
All the trees deserve the same treatment to be fair, you could merge powers in all of them.
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>>46434625
All I want is to openly oppose the cabal without losing perks that add to my metaphysical weight and require an arcane bloodletting ritual to discard.
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Does anyone remember the race-mixing CYOA? It was about different races'physical attributes, and it had fantasy stuff like orcs elves and monsters too.
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>>46435673
otherworldly perks would benefit rorch conduits, making spire-based technology, using uthuli song magic as a DJ, using mu to create new sellable pets, enchanting. And rorch can benefit in other worlds, train networks moving goods between them, resource extractors on rim, suits assisting exploration, safely selling and crafting otherworldly materials, disassembling errants and rebuilding them in other worlds. It definitely has conduit connectivity in mind.
>>46435735
Merging powers is my primary plan for cutting down on perks.
>>46435824
You can compete against them in business somewhat, they can't take perks from you, but they have a centuries long head start on you, everyone in Rorch is used to their presence, and all together pretty much have every single Rorch perk.
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>>46434465
Dark academy sounds lulzy.
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I can't find the pick your genie CYOA. I remember there was an evil trickster genie, a nature genie, a benevolent girl genie etc... This is a thing that exists right? A real CYOA?
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>>46436221
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B03PxmupuDVLN1lNdjFxdlN3SVE
2016.03 > Djinn CYOA
This what you remember?
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>>46436221
You mean the genie portrait things? Should be in the pasta at the top of the thread.
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>>46435850
This one?
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>>46436358
>>46436375
>Djinn CYOA
Yes that's it! Thank you.
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>>46436442
mystery box
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>No WW2 tank CYOA
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>>46436464
Not until you make it, Brosepher.
There's also not a
>build your own (race) car
but I don't know anything about cars nor do I care for them
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Hey everyone. I could use some suggestions for powers for a weapon and armor for the equipment page.

Each weapon/armor is going to be a generic form until you choose it, then it'll look however you want it to, but I need powers for it that fit in a storybook/dream realm type setting.

So far I can think of unbreakable? or can be summoned back if lost? Suggestions?
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>>46436677
Floaty weapons
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>>46436677
Pointy weapons
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>>46435914
The cabal can't freeze your account or cancel your manage-net?
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