CYOA Thread

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>>46405374

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>>46405374
>good third of the left side is missing

One job, Terry.

I am SDA

>>46405538
No you're Lester.

>>46405534
*right

>>46405538
Does the namefield even work?

>>46405562
Nope!

>>46405562
>typed SDA in namefield
huh apparently not

>>46405562
You tell me.

>>46405534
>not understanding that the bad website formatting is part of the april fools joke
>blaming OP when you can just fucking zoom to correct the problem yourself

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>>46405562
Monica let me put it in your butt

>>46405374
Humility. Definitely humility.

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>>46405534
Name: CV-01 "Hatsune Miku"
Gender: Female
Origin: The Darkness; Free Floating Drone
Skills, Perks, and Traits: Advanced-Tech Understanding, Common Ethereal Manipulation, Entertainer, Natural Beauty, Languages Proficiency, Shining Soul
Initial Armor: Traveller's leathers+
Initial Weapons: Yuta Brace, M9-11 Modded, Skinning Knife, Sonic Blaster
Initial Knick-knacks: Pegs, Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card, Mechanical Transfusion, Non-Sentient Servo Skull, Flux Generator, Internal Memory Module, Battle Music Projectors, Magiblock Coinage, Internal Sustenance Module, Jetpack, Abstracted Shoggoth Minor, Universal Traveller Markers
Little Things: Aquarius Complex
Faction: Archivist
Covenant: The Church of our Lady, Destroyer of Despair
Allies: Astrolla-232, 850, True Traveller, Still Adapting AI; Asan Operetia, 150, True Traveller, Turkish Ozan ; Abraham, 487, True Traveller, Assyrian Fighter; Phyli 'Summoner of Darkness' Lumaii, 138, Archivist, Heavy Metal Musician; Ida, 334, Biological, Sapient Plant Horror
Home District: Little Beijing - Ten Thousand Faces and Ten Thousand Flags
Hubworld: Ogulamacadi-A12 – The Heart of the Galaxy
Mission: Gedzud's Problem
Panic Button: The King

Miku argues with a Collector over the price of a rare collection of Wookie tribal songs, but relents and accepts the price. She notices you and asks about your taste in music.

+ An android from a future where all songs were lost, aims to archive music of any kind.
+ Skilled in sonic weaponry, can pacify enemies or rupture innards with ease.
+ All weapons are internal, can't be disarmed.
+/- Excellent singer, can attract crowds and attention with her songs.
- Sometimes attracts unwanted attention with her looks and voice.
- Will break down and have a panic attack if left alone.
- Near useless against enemies with no ears.
+/- Trying to get a band together with Asan, Phyli and Ida. Wouldn't mind you helping or even joining as well.

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Requested last thread.

And mobile 4chan looks exactly the same as ever

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>>46406415

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>>46406441
I have a build for this saved; just gimme a sec.

>been wondering who angelanon that keeps getting mentioned is
>see >>46404505
How did cyoa gen survive this calamity without imploding?

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Keepin up the holy theme
>tfw inferior version of Azriel

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>>46406827

Hey NJYATD-anon, what time GMT are you usually on, I think I've been missing you on the IRC.

>>46406962
Down with IRC scum.

>>46406482
>>46406441
>>46406415
>West Mediterranean Sea
Nice weather, preexisting infrastructure and art, and near the center of a Mercator projection.
>High Tech 20
Literally no reason not to take Sufficiently Advanced Tech instead.
>+2 WIS 16
It's the hardest stat to replace with computers, it helps my citizens not be pointlessly contrarian, and Fallout stats are horseshit for anything that isn't Fallout.
The fact that it's basically an auto-win button is entirely incidental.
>Transformations
Total of 12 points.
>>Base Change: Shapeshifter 13
Basically just directed, perfected regeneration.
>>Major Change: Splice 11
Can take simple organs, instincts, etc. from a given sample of DNA from other species - eagle eyes are simple to add, cat ears take some skeletal changes, and insect exoskeletons ain't happening. Piecemeal changes require survival throughout the entire process.
>>Major Change: Kinesthetics 9
Giving people a sense for their internal layout. This is very important.
>>Major Change: Semi-infectious 7
Large blood transfusions can slowly transform other creatures into this species effectively shapeshifted into their previous form. If people can be somehow converted without a Soulforge, just replace this with increased lifespan, faster regeneration (ergo shapeshifting), lessened need for food/air/sleep, etc.
>>Major Change: Wit 5
Greatly increased 'social reflexes' and ability to think on feet. No effect on long-term planning skills or actual quality of jokes.
>>Minor Change: Chill 4
A general attitude of not sweating the small stuff.
>Monolith IV 1
Are the bonuses cumulative? What are 'retcon' effects? I'm assuming this lets me shapeshift my citizens within the limits of their species - that is, anything mammalian.
>Crystal Ball 1 0
Conference calls with No Tech hexes might be useful, and there isn't a whole lot else that cheap.

I plan on just sorta hanging around and diplomaticizing hexes (and possibly aliens) into being friendly.

>>46407164
Retcon is rearranging of stats I think judging by how the next option says transformations in it.

Would you play a another PACYOA?

Also, if it's a light RPG that's based off of Shadowrun combat, would it still fit in as a cyoa, sans the combat rulebook?
It'd be formatted similarly to PACYOA TE though

>>46408152
Having concrete things of build A is better than build B in situation C but not in D is cool, but involving actual rolls and such is generally not a good idea. Having stories to go with things are cool, but not circlejerks

>>46408184
There'd be no rolling involved for the actual CYOA part, it'd basically be like the original PACYOA; tacked on rules, but this time actually done sensibly for those who actually want to do the rpg

My plan is to have the cyoa to make people want to join the rpg but i know there's a market of people who would play a (mostly) simple rpg on /tg/

If I'm incoherent sorry, I've been awake too long

>>46408152
>Multiplayer
No because of this.

>>46408152
Fuck it. Why not?

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>>46406849
Going ahead and posting the demon counterpart to that

Fun fact! They layout is matched up with eachother: each archangel is a virtue and each demon is a sin. Azriel, first on archangel cyoa, is patience, the opposite of which is wrath, represented by the first on the demon cyoa: Felira, and so on

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>>46408918

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>>46406827
Here's the latest version.

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Sissy CYOA when?

>>46407218
I shall become the God of Progress. (Basically Tzeentch if he were a positive influence.)

IDEALS:
>Change
>Luck
>Learning (-2)

SERVANT PERKS:
>Ethereal Aspect (-1)
>Aspect of Awe (-1)
>Clandestine Aspect (-1)

DOMAIN:
>Absolute Will (-1)
>Afterlife (-1)

FOLLOWERS:
>Natural Invocations (-1)
>Everyday Ideals (-1)
>Divine Knights (-1)
>High Clergy (-1)

My followers seek to Understand and Improve, and they do this by taking advantage of the ample Opportunities given to them by fate.

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>>46408918
And here's the latest for that one.

>>46409030
When you make it, motherfucker

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>>46408981
>still inferior azriel
>jobs still suck ass
skimming through, I'm not finding any obvious differences. Any idea what they did? Probably just caught a typo or two I assume. I saved the more recent version anyway, thanks for sharing

>>46409086
inferior? How come?

>>46408152
>Would you play a another PACYOA?
Depends.

>Also, if it's a light RPG that's based off of Shadowrun combat, would it still fit in as a cyoa, sans the combat rulebook?
If you keep the RPG stuff separate and only post it in its own thread.

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>>46409107
They made her a bit more violent on 1.0.1 or 1.0.2. See her power how it describes turning her foes into red mist? That got added, and they made limbo a bit meaner to try to justify it, and giving her the pro of enjoying fighting monsters; but the virtue of patience is all about NOT being violent. Before she was a defender, now she's just like her demon counterpart

>>46409179
The only way Azriel can get laid is through implicitly stating what she will do to you if you don't pick her + give you a bad conscience

>46402678
Is Freyja going to cuck me? It's a shame because she's a cute
I wonder if immortality is really useful in a world with an afterlife

>>46409553
>>46402678

Can someone post Slut Life?

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>>46409083
Not seeing any major changes in this one either. Whatever.

For the record:
>best angel
Kristel, angel of diligence. Because fun in AND out of the bedroom. There's no weeb angel unfortunately, but I like electronica, and I could probably get her into vidya pretty easily. Honorable mention to Irinael, angel of kindness
>best place in heaven
high-class penthouse. Because class.
>best angel-maid
Golems, made into abstract beings but still wearing the traditional french maid outfits so it looks all kinds of ridiculous

>best demon
Mhyrienne, demon of envy. I actually find her picture cute, plus my number 1 fetish is SCIENCE. I can just imagine playing god in a holodeck of her creation, making my own virtual world. Plus jet packs. Felira's pretty solidly in second
>best hell house
Floating fortress. Simbly epig, plus I get to be neighbors with mai waifu
>best demon-maid
loli changelings for maximum adorable-ness

Overall best roomate is Mhyrie, which is kinda hard for me to admit since I'm generally all holy all the time.

>>46409030
Woah this is a really cute dress Where can I buy it, I want to wear it.

>>46403344
When I make companions, I find art first and write based on the characters. It is much easier to find non-porn, non-fetish art of girls that are made in a similar artstyle to my other companions.
It is not as easy to find men (who aren't either lolsorandumb traps or generic stoneface "I exist only to fight" men).
Post an album of boys and men in the same artstyle as in the CYOA, and maybe they'll be added to companion DLC 2.

>>46409969

nigger look at the picture

>>46405374
>as you climb out of the bed you step on a lego
kek

>>46405374
Now this is how you make a thread! Take note, y'all ignorant motherfuckers.

Also Diligence da best.

>>46406415
Thank you! I was the whiner who requested it. Been looking for it forever.

>>46408152
Yes but make a separate thread one it's sufficiently talked about and announced. Otherwise the people bitching are going to outnumber the players 10000 to 1.

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>>46410489

Are you even trying?

Where are the CYOA builds without links, or Angelanon pasta?

>trolls are so lazy nowadays

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How to fix CYOAs:

>>46410640
When was the first cyoa posted on 4chan? Mid-2000's? Maybe I can warn people about catastrophes, terror attacks, the financial crisis.. And once my creds as a modern day Nostradamus are established, climate change!

Also I get a sweet computer.

>>46410719
It just says first cyoa ever posted, that doesnt mean 4chan. Personally I like to think it'll throw you back into the dark ages where some guy nailed up a cyoa on some public message board

>>46410719
>Using your powers for good, not taking credit for making all the best CYOAs
you sicken me...

>>46410719

Nice plan. Given a bit of advance warning, the lads at East Anglia could delete those embarrassing emails before they leaked. The damage that whole thing did to the narrative and the public acceptance of the One World Government agenda was incalculable.

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>>46410579
Back to the 14th century, except with more Kaiju. I'mma set up in Capetian France. Pose as the Virgin Mary. And influence Philip the Fair and Pope Boniface VIII to lead a Crusade against the Devil-Beasts. Because why not?

Primary Spheres:
Life
Emotion

Secondary Spheres:
Purity
Inspiration
Pre-ordination

Powers:
Rejuvenation
Intervention
Cleanse
Imbue
Bolster
Fertility
Purify
Soothe
Pleasure
Beautify
Paragon
Worship
Judge
Prophesize (my favorite)

Well, I'll be a mix between the Lady of the Lake and the Mother of God. Healing, inspiring, blessing my Paragons with phenomenal strength. Hopefully the Beasts will give people a common enemy and they'll rally around my champions.

>>46410778
Keep telling yourself that buddy, right up until you and your whole family die in the great Drought of 2035. What a dumb and dangerous conspiracy.

Why is OPblaming so much better whe OP has a name?

>>46410843
Because anonymity sucks the fun out of most things.

>>46409083
Aezurea though.
Absolutely the best

>>46410930
I know, you get to play games with demonbros all day, won't bother you about stuff, and you get to cuddle all you want.
Also, Esme best angel, forever.

>>46410817

Droughts this week, is it? Last week they were threatening me with floods if I didn't support a global planned economy. Doesn't really matter I suppose, as long as the People's Climate Bureau gets set up at the UN and empowered to punish any nation that dares burn coal or oil to provide energy and jobs for its people.

I feel like making a nice short CYOA
It'll have three sections:
World
Secret identity
Superpowers
It's a superhero CYOA.
Any options you'd like to see? Probably a sidekick power?

>>46411087
How does it feel to be brainwashed into ignoring science and reality by the Koch Brothers?

>>46411168
Sounds interesting

>>46410640
Option two, because if I'm sufficiently narcissistic, I get to become a cute maid.

>>46411386
Decided to add "Origin", too.
Kinda undecided on how to do points. Probably every section will cost something.
Any power you'd like to see?
>>46411431
So you become your own maid?
What's it like to not criticize your own work?

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>>46411505
>>46411168
Personally I want to see exotic power sources.

>>46411168
>>46411505
Don't make it as overpowered as Worm. Street-level vigilantes are cool too. Hell, Daredevil's power is that he's blind.

>>46411549
Daredevils power is he can fucking see sound, which makes invisibility fucking useless and invis is a top tier power

>>46411168
A few of my favorite sort of powers:

Actually being able to BECOME your element if you have typical one-element powers (like how Iceman becomes made of ice). Is typically more useful with less solid elements such as air or water. Just being able to control an element isn't as exciting as being able to become it.

Density control, that is, that ability to change the mass but not the volume of your body. Allows you to give a really powerful punch, boost your defense, pin someone down and deal massive damage by standing on them, etc. If used to become lighter immediately after jumping, it would get you far more distance. It would need enough natural defense, though, that you can do ultra-heavy falls on people as an attack. If it needs to be more powerful of a power, just let it apply to objects you touch, for as long as you touch them, letting you easily pick up cars or be destructive with a paper hammer.

Kirby inhalation where your stomach is pretty much a black hole & you can suck things in. To be useful, you'd have to either be able to stretch your mouth open a lot or things being pulled in would have to be reduced in size as they head towards you. If this isn't tough enough, throw in some variant of copy power, either like Kirby or perhaps that one guy from One Piece.

Shapeshifting. It has a variety of sneaky uses, which many offense-only powers to not. For added potency, it might contain weaponized shapeshifting such as forming a hardened shell, swordarms, etc.

The ability to either make portals to the near future or to a pocket dimension. Either way, you can make portals to absorb enemy attacks & send them the other way.

>>46411087
>what do you mean climate change won't just change the entire planet in one specific way?
>there's no way weather could be that complex!

>>46411549
This. Also, don't make it so we have to be as overpowered as we do in Worm. I like street level, but not when the real setting is cosmic horror.

>>46411168
>World
>Any options you'd like to see?
A fantasy world would be neat. Maybe an otherwise sword & board setting.

>>46411585
Then
>WE ARE DESTROYING THE EARTH BY TURNING IT INTO AN OVEN WITH OUR HORRIBLE LIFE STYLES
Now
>n-no I d-didnt say that its climate change! You dirty oil shill!

>>46411505
I wouldn't mind being my own maid. I wouldn't be obliged to give myself any orders, either. And I do criticize my own CYOAs. I just have to consider myself to be one of my favorites, which I don't think is too difficult a stretch. When you think about it, you CYOA author that is yourself always includes the options you want most in their CYOAs. If someone else always did that, it would be wonderful. The only reason that the CYOA author that is yourself would have trouble keeping up in a favorites list is that you necessarily already know all the options. But looking at it purely in terms of what they produce, I'm going to like my own things a lot because they're exactly what I want.

>>46411613
I like breaking things, if I made a CYOA that I could break I would be obligated to fix it. Then it wouldn't be a CYOA that I liked.

>>46411632
I feel sorry that you can never be the cute maid, then.

>>46411652
Not everyone is a repressed tranny like you

>>46411606
Look up runaway effects and positive feedback loops you fucking ostrich.

>>46411545
Like?
>>46411603
It'll be some Spiderman-tier villains you'll be fighting - regular crimefighting, a couple villains, some recurring nemesi shit that's a good idea. No looming threats, no "Galactus gon fuck u up, boi".
>>46411605
I hadn't actually thought of a fantasy one, since you'll run about with superpowers.
>>46411652
>tfw can't be a cute maid
There's a tiny chance I can be someone else's cute maid, though. Maybe I'm lucky.

>>46411689
>l-look at these solar funded studies that say solar is good!

>>46411691
>Like?
Like pic related, cosmic power. Void, blood, etc.

>>46411698
Of course solar isn't "good". You won't have enough rare metals to equip everyone, and renewables will never replace fossil fuels. Doesn't mean anthropogenic climate change and environmental disturbances aren't real.

>>46411168
I always like object creation and force construct creation. They'd have to be toned down from the versions commonly seen to be viable, but they're still my favorite powers.

Also, unusual takes on existing powers could be fun. Maybe the ability to shapeshift parts but not all of your body, for example? Or slowing time rather than super speed?

What genre do you want to see more of in cyoas?
Any series you'd want to see made into a cyoa?
Are waifus mandatory for a good cyoa?
Will the times where we autistically discussed cyoas ever return?
Why does no one post their builds anymore?

>>46411759
>genre
weird, random powers with weird, random built-in "drawbacks." Careful that the drawbacks aren't too bad or it could ruin the CYOA for many people. Maybe more like odd power limitations.
>series
I'm not a fan of this concept.
>waifus
not at all. There's plenty I've liked before that didn't have them.
>times return
Yes, but it requires the following to happen:
>post builds
People would if the discussions returned.

It is a feedback loop.

>>46411725
Why would drinking blood suddenly give you super powers?
>>46411759
>Genre
Urban fantasy
>waifus
I generally don't care even in the slightest for imaginary girlfriends.
>no new builds
It's been a while since I saw a new CYOA that I didn't make that interested me.

>>46411168
I wouldn't do sidekicks. Companions also tend to bloat a CYOA, particularly if you're trying to be nice and short.

Also, I hate companion mechanics.

>>46411808
Anon probably meant controlling blood, ever kill a nigga with his own blood?

>>46411821
Actually he meant powered by blood. Like vampire magic.

>>46411759
>genre
Urban fantasy
>series
Does overhuman count as a series?
>waifus
Not but they're certainly are nice.
>autism
Only if you make it happen
>builds
Because most people have already made a posted builds for the cyoas that get posted.

>>46411759
>What genre do you want to see more of in cyoas?
Lewd. Specifically stuff that caters to my tastes, rather than the femdom/sissification/humiliation/submission.
>Any series you'd want to see made into a cyoa?
Dunno.
>Are waifus mandatory for a good cyoa?
Not mandatory, no.
>Will the times where we autistically discussed cyoas ever return?
That usually happens when someone mentions Pokemon Personified, so most likely.
>Why does no one post their builds anymore?
They do. The ones that don't either haven't gotten around to finalizing theirs yet, or they're too lazy/shy/(fitting adjective) to bother posting builds regardless.

>>46405374
>>46405498
Patience, all the way. Za Warudo + Fucking Tinkers = "Where the fuck did that mecha come from!?" Or, given its prohibition on direct violence, "why am I suddenly bound in Superman-tier restraints?" The emotion control is just icing on the cake.

>>46411862
> stuff that caters to my tastes,
Have you considered, you know, making it yourself? No one else knows what you want.

>>46411937
That would be too haaaaaard for him.

>>46411951
You jest, but CYOAs are actually somewhat hard. They require quite a bit of time and some competency with software like gimp or photoshop.

>>46409713
Mhy really is the best. Careful with those changeling maids though, she gets jealous enough when you look at other women, you really don't want to see what she would be like when she finds you looking at other changeling women.

I'd want the changlings for variety outside of the typical human/demon model. I'll bet they could do monstergirls, or who knows what else. Plus with changeling powers myself we could always reverse things. Unfortunately I just couldn't do that to Mhyne, so I'd just stick to the sirens.

Can't believe anyone would pass up the pocket dimension in the Heaven CYOA though.

>>46411937
>Have you considered, you know, making it yourself?
Yes, but then I realized that even if I weren't too lazy to do it, I can't design for shit (and I mean systems and such, e.g. CYOA choices).
>No one else knows what you want.
Been thinking lately that maybe even I don't know what I really want.

>>46411971
not really. It depends on your interest and knowledge in the subject, and how big you want to do it.
If you make a "pick one of X", you can make it in a matter of hours. If you don't include pictures you can make it even faster.
>>46412041
Making a CYOA would be one way to figure out what your turn ons are.
I'm speaking from experience.

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>>46412096
quick cyoa anons!
i need cyoas with lightning themes!

>>46412096
As far as I can tell, my hang-up isn't so much the "what", but the "how".

>>46411986
Pocket Dimension seems like it would have some logistical issues when it comes to inviting people over, and has the worst view of any of the locations.

>>46412227
You'll have to use more words if you want help.

>>46412295
A minor issue, you can stick a portal anywhere. You can probably control the view to be anything you want, artificial or live-feed.

>>46412227
Same way any number of CYOAAs started - make something that looks like shit, then figure out how to make it less shit next time.

>>46412327
Yeah, but "hey, just come down to the corner of Pious and Main and pop into the energy field" seems... Off somehow. Plus, call me crazy, but I'd rather have an actual view rather than just watch a glorified TV.

>>46412313
>You'll have to use more words
Okay, so-
>if you want help.
...eh, nevermind then.
But in case you're just that curious, the "what" being something along the lines of "what sort of stuff would I like to see in the CYOA", and the "how" being stuff like "how do I present it in a manner that's not simply a 'pick one' where all but one option are shit (and the one that isn't is the stuff I want)", among other things that I can't currently articulate.

>>46412329
>make something that looks like shit
It's not the looks I'm hung up on, it's the content.

>>46409713
Fall: New loyalties
Weapon: Staff of Aether
Powers: Smouldering gaze, Favoured by demons, Friend to animals, Tongues, Charisma, Deception IV
Companions: Assassin
Time to bring the world under the control of an evil god.

>>46412379
Have fun with your view when the demons invade and rape you to death after climbing in your window

>>46412404
Personally, I overload my favorite options with drawbacks I think others will really care about but that I don't mind at all. That way it is balanced with the other options.

>>46412404
Wow, you really managed to lose any sympathy I felt for you.

>>46412482
...why did you feel sympathy for me in the first place?

>>46412441
>implying it won't be the other way around now that Heaven has two Level 6 beings
>implying I won't be the one to present a certain wayward angel to Mickie bound in ribbons
>implying I won't claim a harem of Sins to "rehabilitate"
>implying Deus won't fucking Vult

>>46412534
>Implying Big G is going to let you bring back Lucy when she kicked her out in the first place.

>>46407218
>IDEALS

Chaos, Order, Luck (-2)

>SERVANTS

Ethereal (-1)

>DOMAIN

Afterlife and Absolute Will (-2)

>FOLLOWERS

Natural Invocation, Everyday Ideals, Divine Knights, High Clergy, Sacred Wards (-5)

As a god of Madness, I grants great power to my worshippers, but at the cost of their sanity as they struggle to live up to my contradictory Ideals. My cultists do not seek power, but only to spread my message of Hope and Despair to those with the spark Madness in their hearts, be they the lowliest of beggars and thieves or the grandest of the great and good.

>>46412534
Ten bucks says you fall within a month of getting to heaven

>>46412548
That was a long time ago. It's probably one of those fights that just got out of hand, and by the time she realized Lucy wasn't going to come back home and apologize, she had already signed a deed to her new place.

Why do you think she's on her bluegrass phase?

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ideals unliving aspect, etheral aspect and wild aspect

domain absolute will and afterlife
followers natural invocation, everyday ideals, divine knights, high clergy and sacred wards

>>46412625
There was a point where you should have stopped, you have went far past that point

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>>46407218
God of Order, Lord of Logic, Keeper of Universal Law

>Divine Ideals
Protection
Order
Learning
Time (3)

>Servants
Unliving Aspect: Machines (4)
Ethereal Aspect: Runes and Scriptures (5)
Clandenstine Aspect (6)

>Domain
Absolute Will (7)

>Followers
Natural Invocation (8)
Everyday Ideals (9)
High Clergy (10)
Sacred Wards (11)

The world is a place of change and diversity, spanning as a system of such divine complexity that Humanity would see it as chaos. Yet beneath all systems there is law and logic, cause and effect defined by divine calculation. There are those who would attempt to defile such law and reason in a misguided sense of progress or change, this madness will not be permitted to exist.

>>46410789
Considering the amount of rigorous testing the Vatican would go through before they approve a Marian apparition and the strict amount of criteria each apparition has to go through I would say you could probably influence the king, certainly a great deal of peasants, but good luck on convincing the Pope.

>>46412774
I think the Vatican will be a lot laxer with their testing with great demons straight from Hell walking the earth. And I have Worship, amplified by the carrot (Pleasure) and stick (Judge). If the Pope doesn't bulge, I can always have him replaced. Philip the Fair did just that a few ears prior.

>>46412850
If you're going around giving people orgasms there's zero way they're going to accept you as Mary.

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>>46410579

Corporeal: Tangibility, Avatar and Spirit Tools (5)
Death: Soul Harvest, Guide, Glean, Defy Death, Call to Serve, Reconstruct, Zombify, Horrify (12)

Beastworld drawback (-6)

I shall usher in the Age of Death, leaving a wake of zombie outbreaks and weird death cults wherever I go.

>>46412850
It's not just the Pope but also the rest of the Vatican and whatever bishop is in the charge of where your apparition appears that have to be convinced. And the "pleasure" carrot is the worst way to do that. Christian mystics recognized the difference between pleasure and ecstasy (the latter of which was often just as painful as it was joyful). Again, it's a pretty rigorous test. Even the popular apparition Our Lady of Medjugorje in modern Croatia has never been approved despite its popularity precisely because both the Pope and the local bishop have said it has not met the rigorous standard to be approved.

>>46409083

I have a blowjob fetish but Mhy is the best demon, so whatever. I'll just be her slave for eternity.
>>46409086
Lux sounds based but I want to fuck, so.

Optus sounds right up my alley but even my love of money allows me to throw bums a coin every now and then, so.

>>46412879
>>46412948
Worship makes mortal 'adore me and find me worthy of adulation". Pleasure is a feeling of unadulterated bliss, not an orgasm. And Judge makes the target feel incredible guilt. Perfect for Catholics. I can also miraculously heal people.

I mean, maybe I'm underestimating the 14th century Church but were they really as rigorous and careful as they are now? They recognized miracles and saints pretty often, and I would actually be the real deal. I'd give out actual miracles left and right.

>>46413031
Mary doesn't give people orgasms you stupid succubus. End of story. You're fucked.

>>46413066

Ecstatic experiences are a common part of religious traditions numbnuts, pleasure does not mean orgasms it just means pleasure.

>>46413101
Physical pleasure.

>>46413174

All pleasure is physical, your brain is a physical organ.

>>46413186
You're doing a good job revealing how shit you're going to be at pretending to be Mary.

>>46413195

I'm not that faggot but intense pleasure IS part of the concept of religious rapture.

>>46413214
Spiritual pleasure, bro. If he's going around making people cream their pants by poking their endorphin zone he's not going to get the same effect.

>>46413031
>>46413186
The physical pleasure of ecstasy is very specific though and is often accompanied by a great deal of suffering as well.

You'll be able to convince a few people to be the seers of your apparition. You'll even get a great following but the church at the time understood that many supernatural sources could cause visions and pleasure and are suspicious from the start. Remember, Joan of Arc was not considered a saint until the 20th century.

The church acknowledges many things as supernatural. It's a bit more difficult to get those things recognized as Divine though.

>>46413228
Especially if demons are running around as anon says, their first instinct will be a lying succubus.

>>46413225
You realize the ability description says "bliss" right, not sexual pleasure. You can interpret that a little more loosely.

And anyone who doesn't agree will feel incredibly guilty over doubting anon until they change their minds.

>>46412191
say, what's your reason for not doing it yourself?
I'm starting to get this feeling there's only like, four people who actually make cyoas.

>>46412948
>>46413066
>>46413228
Y'all are forgetting that in that scenario "powerful beasts are inhabiting the world" ergo people are terrified and probably think the End is Nigh. So when a magical woman who looks just like Mary does in the paintings and makes you want to worship her appears... and helps you defeat the beasts... and heals the sick and the insane...

I mean why the heck would they reject me? I'd be their one hope in a scary world.

>>46413269
Vile succubus corruption. Purge.

>>46413291
Anti-Christ.

>>46413269
They would feel doubt maybe, but not guilt. Testing spirits was not only allowed but encouraged as a commandment. Apparitions that were approved would even submit to the authority or local bishops. Doubting an apparition that was approved later was seen, even by the apparitions themselves, as prudent rather than lacking in faith.

>>46413291
>...
REEEEEEEEEEEE ANGEL GET OUT

>>46413321
No, that's one of his other abilities, "judge". It causes the target to feel incredible guilt.

It doesn't say specifically, but I interpret it that you can specify a reason/cause for the guilt.

>>46413351
goes without saying that he wouldn't tell them he's using that of course.

>>46413291
I read this as "powerful breasts are inhabiting the world"

>>46413415
I want to play that CYOA.

>>46413437
someone needs to post gigantomastia or whatever the hell its called. Unfortunately I don't have that saved.

>>46413321

You speak like a literal demon. There's no way they will fall for your tricks. Not to mention how morally questionable you are thus making them completely right in thinking that.

>>46413468
Well, to be fair, both demons and angels are quite the logicians.

>>46413291
>makes you want to worship her appears
Exactly. If I immediately think
>I should worship that person
when I see them, I know some unholy shit is going on.

>>46413300
>>46413317
>>46413321
>>46413468
I have Beautify so I can appear as the Christ too, or as a dove or a beam of light or whatever. I can do the Lazarus trick with Intervention.

Hmm. Maybe I need to change my build a bit, take out Pleasure and get Smite instead, to turn the doubters into salt. On the other hand, Pleasure sounds so nice...

>>46413508
Not if you want to believe already. Which you would if Kaiju were ravaging your country.

Stop talking to angel.

>>46413554
why? it's fun to tease her
and we've yet to see where her lesbianism comes in
and at least we're talking about a build

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So, this is how it's looking so far.
Honestly, I fear the options (two rightmost) are feeling too edgy and non-appealing.
Getting started on the next categories now.

techno singularity cyoa with a side of superheros and Imperial guard when?

>>46413554
>>46413597
Why do people think I'm Angelanon? I didn't make a lesbian princess, I made a mix between Nimue and Mary. To help out people and buff monster-slaying knights. Also guide French history, avoid the hundred year war, mitigate the religious strife that followed etc.

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Ok finally finished, so here's some new content.
Dream Prince 1/5

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>>46413728
Dream Prince 2/5

>>46413664
I'm leaning towards scrapping all but the left world, since the point is FUN

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>>46413728
Dream Prince 3/5

>>46413664
Nah I like Burnt World, seems like one could be a revolutionary hero. And The World is a cool challenge. It reminds me of the Brandon Sanderson series Reckoners. Keep going!

>>46413724
Because you think your idea is perfect and in now way flawed, also the focus on pleasure and beauty.

>>46413724
I don't know, the hundred year war helped define French and English national identity.

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>>46413728
Dream Prince 4/5..posting is going slow

>>46413778
Make a waterworld or an alien planet or something. Or a marvel/dc world?

>>46409086
Amlia a best
anybody who disagrees can go to time out

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>>46413728
Dream Prince 5/5

>>46413838
I'm just explaining my build brah.
>>46413840
Yeah and they both suck. If I do well I'll unify most of Europe in the fight against the Beasts anyway.

>>46413868
Healing a shit.

>>46413756
you consistently use "then" in place of "than."

>>46413728
This seems fun. Gonna make a build when I get home.

>>46414066
SIGH. Yep I do. Where did I do that this time so I can fix it?

>>46413728
>>46413756
There's not enough to spend points on, or else you have too many and the options are too cheap.. Realm flavors are expensive, but assuming I stick to one I end up buying everything I want and then having another 5 or so points to dump into magic.

>>46414095
What are you going to do with whatever points you have left over once you've bought 15 abilities as they're hard capped outside of arts?

Are you going to run around a bland dream realm all the time?

>>46413845
Hey! Is that Uncle Harris from Strange Coins? Is there a magic shower somewhere that I've missed?

>>46414135
To clarify that's bought or gotten for free, abilities.

>>46414162
Heh yeah that's Uncle Harris from Strange Coins. I was going to add a quest in with Bathsheba but ran out of room. Can probably add a dlc with a few more abilities/realm boost or two and a couple more quests if people like it.

>>46414135
You are just restating the problem. I might as well make a build to show you.

After reading a few options, I immediately thought monstergirl world, so lets go with that.

0 Medieval Realm

0 Ancient Ruins Enhancement
1 Lascivious enhancement
1 Magical land enhancement
1 humanoid ehancement

0 art musician (from realm)
0 riding master (from realm:knight)
0 melee master (weapon) (from realm: knight)
1 prince stallion
1 mystical master
1 wonderous artifact
1 prince charming
1 prince of maps
7 sorcerer prince

Not even going to bother being specific with the magic. It's either that or master a half dozen different art forms.

>>46414274
the last 3 pages either give points or cost nothing, I didn't feel like including them in what's basically a preliminary, example build.

>>46414274

That's because you want too little. Other anons like myself find the point value to be excellent.

>>46413728
>>46413756
>>46413809
>>46413845
>>46413873

Excellent work my friend. I'll make a build later.

>>46414274
I like the point costs personally. I have big dreams, anon. I want something fancier than how droll you made your reality.

>>46414274
You know what's funny? I knew from reading the first sentence of the intro and the purple colour scheme and heavily photoshoped/Gimped layout that this cyoa is going to either give the players way too much points or free shit and nothing to spend it on, or have fantastically broken options that make all other choices inferior.

>>46413728
Arabian Realm
Asian Realm (3)
Medieval Realm (3)
Pirate Realm (3)

Ancient Ruins Enhancement
Sky Islands Enhancement (1)
Magical Land Enhancement (1)

Rider
Martial (Unarmed)
Mystical
Melee (Sword+Shield)
Melee (Spear+Shield)
Sailor
Navigator
Singer
Poet
Prince of Thieves
Scholarship (1)
Merchant-Trader (1)
Sorcery (Djinn magic) (1)
Sorcery (Abjuration) (1)

Disgruntled Desert Djann
Sphinx Snafu
Confiscating Catburgler

>>46414379

Anon please read the cyoa itself before criticizing it instead of taking another anons opinion as fact. I will only take a few minutes.

If there are too many points (not sure yet as I haven't made a build), maybe you can make the damsels in distress cost 1point each?

>>46413728
>>46413756
>>46413809
>>46413845
>>46413873
All right, I'll try this out.

Medieval realm

Lascivious enhancement
Lost world enhancement
Humanoid enhancement
Technology enhancement

I don't see any point costs on this next one so I guess everything is just 1 point?

Dual wielding
Prince charming
Prince of the hunt
Prince of maps
Prince Stallion
Riding master
Wondrous artifact
Scholarly prince
Bard prince (Singing and Musical instrument)

Do quests cost points? Do damsels?

Kidnapped cuties

I was gonna go Zariea Sha'tul hands down, but then you HAD to go and appeal to my main fetish, so I'm gonna have to go with Taleri Kassendel.

I feel like you have a ton of points. Almost too many. I would give up a ton to be able to pick two damsels so that I can have Zariea too.

>>46414361
And how, exactly, are you going to make it fancier? The different realm flavors fit different builds, but generally they work best solo. Keep in mind it affects the entire realm, not by-region, so if you pick asian and arabian you are going to get a realm that's some weird mix of the two that I honestly can't even imagine properly.

There's not a lot you can do with enhancements either. 3 of them are tech level replacements, if and only if you want something other than medeival (magical land is already a sort of tech replacement as well, and I took that one). 4 of them are locations, which are also mutually exclusive. Everything else I already took.

Can someone do an imaginosxAngelanon fic?

>>46414426
You have 5 points left over. 3 are spent on enhancements (first one is free), the realm is free, and you also get dual wield, riding, and one rank of bard for free from the realm pick.

>>46414416
I didn't know you were the supreme overlord of /cyoag/. Sorry my liege, this altercation will not happen again.

>>46414456
>if you want
There's what people are telling you.

>>46413728
Felicia mentions Music Enchancment, but there is no such.

>>46414539
It's a change, not an addition. And seriously there are only two more points you could possibly spend in that section, it still leaves you with 13 in the personals including freebies.

Hell, even if you did take more Flavors, you just end up getting more personal freebies, so you still end up with more points than perk options. That's before you take any of the drawbacks even, because of course you are going to take those if you want to make things interesting.

>>46405374
Is it possible for Kindness to grant wishes to the sin champions? Or for Humility to Deify them?

>>46414531

You are forgiven anon. Next time form your own opinions.

>>46413664
I like the middle two options. I think the one on the right is a little edgy, and with how hard core it is compared to the other options, it seems like it should be free or even give you coins. Maybe explain why the average civilian is OK with villains but afraid of heroes?

>>46414624
But master, only your opinion matters, all other vile acts of free thinking is outlawed, as it is by your decree.

>>46413728
15
Roman Realm
Ancient Ruins Enhancement
Lascivious Enhancement
Magical Land Enhancement
13
Melee Master: Shield, Shortsword, Longsword
Prince Charming
Prince of Maps
Prince Stallion (Don't judge me)
Riding Master
Trader Prince
Scholarly Prince
Sorcerer Prince
Prince of Thieves
Wondrous Artifact
Cultured Prince: Drawing & Painting, Illumination
0

Sphinx Snafu
Confiscating Catburgler
Valkirie Venture

Ashanti Willowsong

Fuck, there's way too many points. You should cut it down so the reader only has like, 10 or 5 points, otherwise it seems really op. Or maybe you could raise the cost of the abilites

>>46414647

It is my opinion that all should first read the cyoa they criticize instead of blindly decrying it as bad. Thus my will is for my courtiers to provide the minimum of courtesy to a cyoa before passing judgement.

>>46413728

Medieval Realm
Pirate Realm [3]
Asian Realm [3]

Ancient Ruins Enhancement [1]
Lost World Enhancement [1]
Magical Land Enhancement [1]
Humanoid Enhancement [1]
Sky Islands Enhancement [1]
Subterranean Enhancement [1]
Undersea Enhancement [1]

Pirate Prince
Trader Prince
Prince Charming [1]
Prince Stallion [1]
Prince of Maps
Riding Master
Melee Master: Sword & Shield
Mystical Master
Bard Prince: Singing, Poetry

My realm is basically a generic fantasy setting with a lot of different environments to explore.

>>46414426
You're right I forgot to say each skill was 1pt on the skills page.

Quests and Damsels don't cost points. You can take more then 1 quest/damsel. It is of course up to you to decide how they'll react to each other or if they even meet.

>>46414410
1 too many realms there.

>>46414361
Really didn't want to have to make "Dream Prince Points" and "Dream Realm Points" but seems I may have to. Lots of people just taking a default realm for bland worlds.

>>46414423
That's an idea I'll keep in mind.

>>46414456
Perhaps I need to word it so that people don't think the whole realm has to be the different realms mixed together but that they can flow into each other instead. I'll rethink the wording on that as it is your dreamrealm so you can decide how stuff merges/works together.

>>46414087
>Where
>>46413756
>"You may have no more"
>"then"
than*
Third to last sentence before all the ability stuffs.
>"You may purchase this option more"
>"then"
than*
In all of the green text last sentences of all the ability stuffs.

Too tired and headachy to read the last three pages. Just give her a quick look through and I'm sure you'll spot the rest if there are any. I wouldn't stress over it. Happens to the best of us.

>>46405374
Thank you for posting this. I have been waiting for the virtue counterpart to the seven sins cyoa for a while.
As for my choice, I would go with either Diligence (not having to sleep and great physical power sounds good) or Temperance (Telekinesis would be helpful and I can think of a few creative uses for Clairvoyance).

>>46414694
Ah our master is very wise and all powerful! Why read cyoas when we can simply depend on our lord and his great wisdom for guidance?

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>>46413728
I'm just posting this for comparison.

>>46413728
I gotta be honest, the visual quality of this seems overkill. Honestly, it feels like you did too much, especially with the text.

I'll age normally to 25, then stay there.
>Roman Realm
I don't know which "art" to pick. Instruments?
>mentioning harems
Oh boy you've done it now!
>Ancient Ruins
>Magical land 14
for more riches
>Humanoid enhancements 13
For them monstergirls.
>Melee master (free)
Shield. We Captain Rome now.
>Prince charming 12
>Prince of thieves 11
>Sorcerer Prince 10
Ice
>Scholarly prince 9
>Trader prince 8

I'd have made it more obvious the choice on page 1 affects stuff you get for free on page 2. I had to go back and change things.

>Strip club struggle
>Pixie poachers
sounds fun
Yes, I did realize all/most of the titles start with the same letter (sphinx snafu etc.)

God, it must have taken you forever to find all those pictures.

If the sister is true, I have to pick
>Anastasia Davenport
I have no interest in marrying her, but she's going to die for a crime she hasn't commited.

>>46414690
You have 1 point left over. I think you forgot to account for Soldier from the realm choice, which gives you a rank of melee master for free.

1 melee master, prince charming, and 1 cultured prince are all free here.

>>46414546
Bard Prince has the music abilities in his list. I'll replace music enhancement with Bard Prince for clarity.

>>46414599
Realms cost the same as the abilities you get so you're not getting anything really for free, just the "feel" of your realm.

>>46414690
Figured people would spend more points on merging various realms so wanted them to be able to buy abilities and realm stuff but it seems everyones trying to min/max and go for skills, which is why there was a hard cap. Maybe I need to split points into 2 types or something to promote spending on other things besides skills.

>>46414707
Piss.
>"You cast faster"
>"then"
than*
Sorcerer Prince's second sentence. Should be the last of them on the first two pages.

>>46414767
Exactly my point. Wayyyy too many points.
It's basically wish-fulfillment, because it doesn't force you to choose

>>46414763
Dunno, it doesn't seem more complex than something like Stardust.

Hey does anyone have that Harry Potter CYOA. It's one of the ones I made a long time ago but I don't think I have it on my computer.
It's shit, but it's my shit. And I miss it.

>>46414480
See? This is what I'm talking about. Too many points. I feel like some perks/enhancments should cost more than 1. It feels silly that being able to visit aliens with tech enhancement costs the same as being a master painter. Or add a 5 point perk to be able to have multiple damsels, because I would really like both Zariea and Taleri.

I guess I'd add roman realm, trader prince as the free art form, living land enhancement, and magical land enhancement.

Probably should've put in magical land enhancement in anyway, especially if I want Taleri's breasts to get bigger.

>>46414799
>It's basically wish-fulfillment, because it doesn't force you to choose

Isn't that the goal of every cyoa?

>>46414707
>>46414794

Mistake I always make. Thank you for pointing them out. Seems I have to do something more with the points anyway.

>>46414799
>>46414818
Maybe not the goal of every CYOA, but since this is a CYOA about being an extra cool dream princes isn't the point of THIS CYOA supposed to be wish fulfillment? That seems to be the theme, guys.

>>46414799
>It's basically wish-fulfillment, because it doesn't force you to choose
I don't think you're using a proper definition of wish fulfillment. Even the strictest CYOAs here give you amazing stuff. Unless they just fuck you over, but that's a different matter.

>>46414734

Alas my subject I shall not be able to guide you in all things. Thus it is my solemn wish you learn to stand on your own two feet and judge cyoa on their own merits so that you may all grow to become fine men making /cyoag/ the greatest thread in the history of /tg/.

>>46414736
That's fine. It's what inspired me to make this one anyway. It just grew beyond the base concept.

>>46414705
>You can take more then 1 quest/damsel.

Oh, sweet. I still think there's too many points too, but if I can choose 2 damsels, then whatever. I'm happy.

Maybe there should be a perk or enhancement that makes harems/polygamy more common/accepted though.

>>46414832
>Thus it is my solemn wish you learn to stand on your own two feet and judge cyoa on their own merits so that you may all grow to become fine men making /cyoag/ the greatest thread in the history of /tg/.

We're just one tier above quest threads in shittiness and autism.

>>46414694


But Sire- what of the presence of Highlander and AliceAnon? Normal men break beneath such autism.

>>46414840
Not complaining, personally I find yours way more fun and although I haven't made a build yet I can't believe people are actually complaining about there being too many points. Also, the CYOA doesn't look over designed. It's awesome.

>>46414639
Noted, I changed things.

>>46414763
>I'd have made it more obvious the choice on page 1 affects stuff you get for free on page 2. I had to go back and change things.

Noted.

>>46414763
>Yes, I did realize all/most of the titles start with the same letter (sphinx snafu etc.)

That was fun but got a bit difficult in spots.

>God, it must have taken you forever to find all those pictures.

Yeah that ate up about 1/3 of the time making this. Maybe 1/2 the time. Lots of hours scouring for images and I ended up merging a few images together to get something that works or modifying images to fit a theme, like the strip club sign.

>Anastasia Davenport
Yep! Life sucks then you need a hero.

>>46414824
Rule-of-thumb or whatever: Use "than" for comparisons, "then" for when one thing follows another.

>>46414815
Need more info. What did it look like? Did it say Harry Potter in the title?

>>46414872
Lascivious Enchancment makes harems more common

>>46414705
>Perhaps I need to word it so that people don't think the whole realm has to be the different realms mixed together but that they can flow into each other instead. I'll rethink the wording on that as it is your dreamrealm so you can decide how stuff merges/works together.

If you don't mind some suggestions, I think you should make the realm flavor a "pick where YOUR kingdom is" option. Everything else exists if you travel abroad. Buying multiple makes your own realm a mashup, which is expensive mainly because it doesn't make much sense (also because it gets you perks anyway)

It doesn't make sense to gain the benefits of roman realm for instance just because it exists somewhere else in the world, when your own kingdom is in the nordic region.

But along with that cut the points down to 10, which is still pretty generous for building your character and buying general realm enhancements. Even 5 would be pretty decent, but in that case you would need to eliminate the option to spend points on Flavors entirely (pick any combination of flavors for your kingdom for free, but you only get the bonus from one of them)

>>46414910
>Lots of hours scouring for images
I personally cannot be bothered with it anymore. I want to make a CYOA, not attempt to find and image that's close enough to what I want, hoping I'm using the proper search words.

>>46414964

Its probably that shitty one with the memory loss condition.

>>46414896
Thank You. I was thinking the golden flakes on the edges was a bit much but I was shooting for something dream like and prince like all in one go.

>>46414971
Well that's what I get for reading fast.

Alright, I'm happy with my boob/snek build. Might do some more quests like the pixie, but I'm happy.

>>46414705
I agree with >>46414993 's first point, but not his second. 15 is a good amount of points.

>>46415011

I also think the points are fine for what that's worth.

>>46415000
>I personally cannot be bothered with it anymore. I want to make a CYOA, not attempt to find and image that's close enough to what I want, hoping I'm using the proper search words.

I hear you there. Not sure I'll do that again. Took way too long and was frustrating at times. On my other 2 cyoas I had the images first or didn't care what they were to a point and that made those go far faster.

>>46413728
Nice brodooski.

>Medieval/Asian, Martial Arts, Mystical Arts, Musician, Adventurer, Musician again.
>Magical Land
>Mystical Master
>Melee Master
>Sorcerer Prince, I don't know what field. Protection force field bullshit or something. Or healing.

>Lanterns I guess. Maybe Lighthouses or warped world? Guess it doesn't matter if I can't die.
>Taleri

Wait shit I still have like 7 points left. I guess I'll just take 7 different flavors of magic in a variety pack or something.

If I had to recommend something It would be to toss a page of like "equipment" you could buy for various points. Some for one point, some for two. It's not that there are too many points, but there just aren't a ton of things to buy for the page-length of the CYOA. Also I don't really know why I would do quests. Do they just not happen if I don't take any? Seems like I'd just want to fuck off and explore the area or whatever.

>>46415001
Hey you're that guy who I added the footnote for. Still upset? It's not a condition lol you're just not a grown fucking man in a 10 year old wizards body.

>>46414964
Yeah I think it just had white background with some Dumbledore ramble up on top. I can probably look through the archives for it.

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>>46413728
Realms:
Asian Realm
Pirate Realm
Medieval Realm


Enhancements:
Magical Land
Ancient Ruins
Humanoid (moar magical races)
Sky Islands (because it's beautiful)

Arts:
Crown Prince
Bard Prince (Skilled in Poetry, Singing and musical instrument: Erhu)
Cultured Prince (Calligraphy)
Martial Master (unarmed combat)
Mystical Master
Prince Charming
Prince of Maps
Prince of Thieves
Scholarly Prince
Sorcerer Prince (element bending)
Wondrous Artifact

Darker Dreams:
Oathbound (not that I need the points, it just sounds cool)
Peasant Revolt (gotta help the people)
Easily distracted

Quests & Adventure:
Cryptic Currency Circulator (I like the crossover)
Lofty Lanterns
Pixies Poachers
Turtledactyls Terror
Misappropriated Mask

Damsels in Distress:
Anastasia Davenport <3


I didn't manage to spends alll my dreampoints. I think paying to have more than one waifu could be cool.

The idea of my build is basically a wuxia hero. Heir to a small Asian Kingdom, he walks the earth to better himself. He splits his time between defending the weak, slaying monsters, finding treasures and dueling other masters. Also he has a ship and visits tropical islands, eventually sailing as far as the western kingdom. Because why not.

>>46414901
Cool.
I look forward to the finished project.

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>>46414410
>>46414705

Alright, amended build.

Arabian Realm
Asian Realm (3)
Medieval Realm (3)

Ancient Ruins Enhancement
Sky Islands Enhancement (1)
Magical Land Enhancement (1)
Humanoid Enhancement (1)

Rider
Martial (Unarmed)
Mystical
Melee (Dual Swords)
Melee (Spear+Shield)
Sailor
Navigator (1)
Negotiator (1)
Singer
Poet
Prince of Thieves
Scholarship (1)
Merchant-Trader (1)
Sorcery (Djinn magic) (1)
Sorcery (Abjuration) (1)

Disgruntled Desert Djann
Sphinx Snafu
Confiscating Catburgler

Option A it is then

>>46415178
I doubt that guy is the only one who hates you wiping our memories.

>>46413728
>medieval realm
>not distinguishing between german dark fairy tales and arthurian high fantasy

>>46413756
Needs more clarity on what taking Realms get you. For example, if I take Subterranean and Undersea, does my entire world become flooded caverns, or do I get a normal world with massive underground caverns and undersea civilizations?

>>46415346
Why don't you decide that for yourself fuckboi?

>>46415303
That's where magical land enhancement comes in, although generally all of it is on the lighter side unless you take too many of the darker dream options.

>>46414479
Just saw this. Hehehe, too funny.

>>46415277
.. are.. are you the same guy still? I mean really I honor the dedication. Most people seemed to disagree but to each their own.

I mean it's make-believe you know that right? The dream CYOA isn't actually going to take you out of your life in your dreams if you complete it.

>>46415405
No anon, I'm a third party who noticed your post, and pointed out that more than just him hate this kind of thing.

>>46414817
Some quests require non combat skills to complete so I felt they should cost the same.

Perhaps I really need to break the points into realm and prince points and just have the drawbacks give a generic point that can be spent on either one.

What do you think would be a good number of Prince points for skills?

>>46415360
Very constructive. Thanks for adding to the conversation.

>>46413873
>no male options

Aww

>>46415375
How about you come from another dimension/planet? How about a magical artefact? Or your power is also a curse, or requires you to recharge it.

>>46414694
>It is my opinion that all should first read the cyoa they criticize instead of blindly decrying it as bad. Thus my will is for my courtiers to provide the minimum of courtesy to a cyoa before passing judgement.

But that's logical!

>>46415417
Oh. Well I don't know. You don't have to like it. Just when I think of Harry Potter half the magic is that you're like "Oh shit I'm 10 years old and growing up here", it's not really as fun when you're a 25 year old man suddenly going to wizard school hanging out with eleven year olds.

I mean you're free to edit it yourself if you're really worked up about it. I really don't think it's a big deal, I like it that way. The majority of people seemed to think the same way.

>>46415477
It isn't really fun when you erase me from existence and kill me to do it. I'm not having any fun. Some random ten year old is having fun.

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>>46415459
>Not protecting the family lineage by producing an heir
Shit prince. 0/10. Would not follow.

>>46414786
I think most people just don't want a desert/underwater/asian/tree/roman land. Settings are kind of fun when they're grounded. Really, you should add like items and equipment and stuff. The "artifact" is a good premise but it's too vague so depending on interpretation it's either OP or not worth it, make an entire page of artifacts and weapons or clothing or whatever.

>>46415498
Do you have an existential crisis when people ask you for nonfat or whole creamer in your coffee?

>>46415501
>implying I can die

Get a load of this faggot.

>>46414763
>I don't know which "art" to pick. Instruments?

Instruments is valid, so would any of the cultured ones as the key word is art. I should probably put that in blue too.

>>46415522
Not even remotely comparable, anon dear.

>>46415510
I want an asian underwater land.

>>46415561
It is though. I'm also pretty sure that guy used the exact same argument like two years ago. And it's still bad.

>>46415637
If he did then I don't have any idea what either of you are talking about at that point.

>>46415121
>Also I don't really know why I would do quests. Do they just not happen if I don't take any? Seems like I'd just want to fuck off and explore the area or whatever.

Pretty much. Would you want some quests to be mandatory? If just running around your dream realm is something you'd be fine with then why not?

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>>46415178
this one?

>>46415711
Yes. Thanks! Theres another page to it (or maybe there were two more?), but if you just have the one thats all good too.

>>46415689
Adding a line to make it clear that they're entirely optional might suffice.

>>46414993
>>46415023

Noted.

Not sure what to do about the points. Wanted people to buy more flavors, so I guess I need to reword them and break points up or something.

>>46415742
Can I still combine themes? I want to combine certain themes like underwater and asian. I think only the CULTURES, like Asian/Roman etc, could be split up like they suggest.

>>46415189
I like this and why couldn't I find a good image like that for a monk heh.

Interesting that people are assuming you can only rescue one damsel as there is no limit. What other stuff would you want to spend points on?

What do people think are a good number of points for only prince skills, assuming you still get skills from realm flavors?

>>46413728
Roman Realm, skilled in oration
Lost World Enhancement
Technology Enhancement (14) Space Opera
Humanoid Enhancement (13) Strong AI and aliens
Prince Charming (12)
Prince Stallion (11)
Scholarly Prince (10)
Trader Prince (9)
Prince of Maps (8)
Sphinx Snafu
Valkiric Venture
Gwendolyn Bennet
Ashanti Willowsong
There are too many points.

>>46415585
So, hyotl?

>>46415855
What?

>>46415742
Don't reduce points I'd say. When you get down to like 7 total points or something you're really not interacting too much. Just either add another page of items to 'buy' or make waifus cost points. Honestly you could scrap the entire third page as it is and add specific artifacts. It's not bad, but I don't know if anyone has taken anything from it and it just seems like a giant burden when the CYOA feels like it should be about adventure and exploration.

>>46415346
You decide if they're flooded caverns or undersea civilizations. It's supposed to be your dream realm and the choices merge how you want.

>>46415855
>>46415870
no idea what he's talking about. I was thinking ryugu-jo

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>>46415459
Hmm I should have added at least one guy in there. Sorry about that.

>>46415510
Thanks for the feedback. Noted.

>>46415739
Ok that's easy enough to do.

>>46415738
Got you covered Hoss.

>>46415793
The concept is it's your dream realm and the "points" you spend is the energy you put into your realm through remembering it. So you can merge themes or have them just be in the same dreamrealm.

>>46415849
Romans Riding Mecha Dinos...with lazer spears!

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>>46415711
Here's the other page.

>>46415711
>>46416044
>>46416079
Thanks friends.

>>46415711
>>46416044
Ravenclaw

Charms
Divination
Quidditch

Snitch

Spiteful Professor
Dementors

>>46415870
Hylotl, sorry. They're an aquatic race in Starbound who build Asian-themed architecture and run around in samurai armor.

>>46416075
>Romans Riding Mecha Dinos...with lazer spears!
Don't be silly. We keep the dinos in jurassic parks and ride mechs everywhere.

>>46413664
I like it, kept up the good work anon.

>>46415711
>>46416044

>Slytherin
I''m not racist I just cheat like crazy.

>Transfiguration, Herbology
And in the art of cheating like crazy you gotta grow some evil plants and learn how to transform into a giant monster or something.

> Gifts; Time Turner, Love Interest
> Dumblefuckups: Rival, Spiteful Professor
It ain't easy being /u/, time to go bully a cute nerd.

>>46416681
>not dinosaurs riding mechs

>>46416079
The bottom kinda feels like there was supposed to be a mystery box.

>>46416774
I thought it was just a joke about book six's ending.

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>>46416733
What about smaller dinosaurs riding mecha dinosaurs?

>>46416774
The snitch is kind of a mystery box option. It's not that great, but what could be inside? Nobody knows. Well I don't at least.

>>46413728

What if you had to buy a dream realm flavor instead of getting 1 for free. You'd still get the skills but it would lower your point total for prince perks by 3, so it would be like you had 12 points to spend.

I could also add a page of gear I suppose for people who don't want to spend points on Flavors for their realms. This also might make taking drawbacks more desirable.

Thoughts?

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>>46413728
>DreamRealm Flavor:
Asian Realm
Medieval Realm
Roman Realm

>DreamRealm Shaping:
Ancient Ruins Enhancement
Magical Land Enhancement
Humanoid Enhancement- Adding the typical fantasy races to the mix along with a few more unusual ones.
Technology Enhancement- Cyberpunk

>Princely Skills, Abilities & Perks:
Bard Prince- Singing, Musical Instrument: Guitar
Cultured Prince- Drawing & Painting, Acting
Prince Charming
Melee Master x2- Dual swords
Mystical Master
Trader Prince
Prince of Thieves
Prince Stallion
Scholarly Prince
Crown Prince
Prince of Maps
Wondrous Artifact

>Quests:
Cryptic Currency Circulator
Lofty Lantern Lament
Massive Monsters
Pixie Poachers
Sphinx Snafu
Strip Club Struggle
Misappropriated Mask
Confiscating Catburglar
Valkyrie Venture

>Damsels
Anastasia Davenport
Gwendolyn Bennet
Ashanti Willowsong
Felicia Sackhoff

>>46417068
Sounds good, so you would be required to spend points on at least one flavor? That would make sense. Just make sure you clarify that, I think a lot of people wern't sure how many waifus or quests they could take or if they could take none at all and all that.

Excited to see V.2 though.

>>46417068
I don't like it, your dream should have SOMETHING to it for free.

>>46417068
>Choose not to spend points
>Have no dream
Logic dissonance.

>>46413728
On a scale of 1 to 10, how jealous is Angel right now?

>>46417068
I honestly like the current points. Means I can get a decent set of skills and still build the realm I want.

>>46417458
She's dead.

>>46405374
>>46405374
Charity. Possibly the shittiest job in the world, but someone got to do it.

>>46417117
Right. You'd have to spend points on a flavor but still get one realm shaping for free.

I clarified that you can go after more then one waifu. You'd just need to be able to complete her "quest" with the hints in the text via whatever skills you have, but that should be obvious.

I can add another page for items and clarify that you must buy a flavor on the first page.

>>46417382
I can get the same effect by dropping the points by 3 but 15 is a nice number. Maybe the gear added will soak up points people didn't spend on realm changes?

>>46417408
As you are the secret creator of this realm you get to decide on various factors of
your realm. You MUST buy 1 option below. Each option costs 3 DreamPoints and no more
than 3 realms may be bought. Each additional option adds that flavor to your dreamrealm
or merges them into a gestalt. Each flavor gives various skills, which are detailed later on.

That would be the new opening paragraph and requires you to spend points on a flavor.

>>46417068
>>46417532
I'd say try the artifact page first. Make that page before changing perk totals, when you add more material you don't want to change point balance before getting feedback on how the new content effects it.

>>46417546
>perk totals
Point totals

>>46417493
Pure tank can be fun. It also helps make kindness a lot more useful since then she can actually do stuff herself when you give her some of your power. Not to mention that sparring with diligence is probably the fast way for the both of you to gain power

>>46407218
Healing, Life, Fertility, Love. Polyamorous God of sacred sex, sexual healing, and child birth.
Wild Aspect, Aspect of Awe. Satyrs and Dryads, basically.
Absolute Will, Afterlife. Gentle plains, with bountiful lakes, wild orchards. Pleasant sights, sounds, scents; many fine and simple things to enjoy.
Everyday Ideals, High Clergy, Sacred Wards. We've got our way of doing things; we don't mind other people doing their own thing, just give us our space, and remember the golden rule: always respect the other person(s).
Demons: Tough choice between this and vampires... but these guys, I get the feeling they'd really harsh our mellow. That's why our wards will be especially effective against them.

>>46409080
Your followers and mine should be able to get along. Mine can teach them all sorts of fun things.

>>46412549
You can just keep your distance.

>>46417491
She's just moving to another state. When she's settled in she'll come back. I hope.

>>46415838
>What other stuff would you want to spend points on
Advantages like wealth or objects, houses or weapons maybe.
>good number of points for only prince skills
10?

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>Want a good title font for a cyber cyoa
>Can't find any good ones

>>46416845
I like it.

>>46413728
>realm
medieval realm
>realm shaping
lascivious enhancement
"lands reflects your fetish's" oh boy.
Magical land enhancement (14)
Humanoid enhancement (13) (I'll stick with human, have to have some ground to stand on)

>perks
martial master, unarmed (12)
prince charming (11)
Prince stallion (10)
sorcerer prince (9) light magic, ie, healing, barriers, etc

huh, 9 points left and nothing but perks to buy.

sorcerer prince x 9
lustful magic
polymorph
cantrips
summoning magic
discovery/detective magic
enchanting
offensive magic (specifically beams of damage)
terraforming
mental magic

quests taken:
cryptic currency circulator
lofty lantern lament
massive monster's
pixie poachers
sphinx snafu
strip club struggle
misappropriated mask
Valkirie venture

>damsel in distress
Ashanti willowsong.

Had enough grappling to last me a life time but those breast tattoo's are pulling me in.

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>>46384237
What happens if the cabal gets overthrown? Do you just lose your powers? You don't make it feel like an innate connection to the realm but more like some perks you get by integrating with their society.
Also, do you really need a specific power to sell exotic animals? Isn't the idea that you have access to otherworldly creatures anyway because you're a conduit? We don't need thirty separate powers of 1 point. Combine the stuff, selling different kinds of things should not be separate perks, create a single perk for instantly bringing your possessions to your stall from any world.