CYOA thread

>>46309408
>Why would anyone spend points on terrain?
Do you want your pocket dimension to be a vast, empty (aside from your purchases and the monsters that infest it) limbo?

>>46309467
Sure, why not?

I think you get infinitely more value if you take other options instead of terrain.

>>46309408
I want to live somewhere pretty.

>>46309493
Then get some powers, bring your waifu, and buy a house.

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>this is OC btw

>>46309449
Deredere. Why wouldn't I want to be a good person?

>>46309527
>>46309542
Why bring your waifu and buy a house separately when you can do both together?

>>46309467
Yes, Yes I do. I'll buy the portal back to earth and then all the powers i can afford. Leave realm come back here and never worry about going back. Could spend another 10 pts for the portal to be indestructible. It's possible the mansion is indestructible as it's been there forever.

>>46309563
I don't like it.

>>46309527
That's not nice.

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>>46309563
Thank you, guy who made that orc-rape CYOA. You somehow gave me this idea.
The quests became an optional DLC page instead: I said I'd post it Monday, but I didn't manage to write enough.
I guess that's okay, some people hate obligatory quests.

>>46309573
Well see you get more powers if you don't put your house into another dimension.

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>>46309589
12 extra companions.

>>46309589
Don't like this either.

>>46309563
Wait, I've been harassing people so the necromancer sent me away and now 3 years have passed?

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>>46309608
And a few, totally optional quests to explicitly give an idea as to what else you can do (that isn't implicitly stated through options/companions)

>>46309608
This is no good.

>>46309563
Your graphics continue to improve, desu. Colour choices are a bit saturated and the green could be a little brighter but it's not much of an issue.

>>46309629
Honest opinion, this CYOA is pretty bad.

>>46309408
In the grim darkness of hardcore minmaxing there is only emptyness

>>46309661
There's no reason to keep more than an emergency safe house or something in your demiplane.

>>46309563
>>46309589
>>46309608
>>46309629
Huh, this looks pretty extensive. Just from a skim it seems pretty neat, I'll work on a build soon as I can.

Question, though. When you said you couldn't finish some stuff for Monday, did you mean that you'll release more later or that you rolled with what you had so far?

>>46309660
Dude, everyone can tell you're the same IP responding over and over. Get real.

>>46309575
Okay.

>>46309715
>implying I was trying to hide it

>>46309715
Agreed on both counts. What were the other cyoas that you've made? This one looks interesting so far.

>>46309745
I'm not sure what you think you'll accomplish by looking and acting like a newbie troll desu

>>46309750
Directed at Kit, right?

>>46309629
>>46309608
>>46309589
>>46309563
This seems like a lot of fun, though I question the use of a green background. Still, it's not straining on the eyes, so no big deal for me. I'll make a build once I'm done with work.

>>46309563
What the fuck are memories? Are those your stating points or are those points being deducted from something, if so, what? If they're your starting points, why the fuck is there a dash there.

>>46309764
>newbie
Well 2bh I apparently confused you as to my intentions, despite using a sentence like "I don't like this either," because it makes perfect sense that I'm trying to secretly samefag by saying something like that, and you totally figured me out despite all my best attempts at hiding it.

>>46309681
Like if you want to have your own realm to rule? To have an estate like the CYOA intends?

>>46309773
The green is fine, actually. It could be a little more pale, though. I just don't think plain black text looks good on it.

>>46309808
Really I don't think points are so tight that you won't be able to afford a decent amount unless you want to go Eldritch yourself. In which case, you're apparently a baby old one so you don't NEED all the other powers since you'll eventually grow them or something equivalent.

>>46309808
I know the CYOA intends it in a fluff sense, but it doesn't make it an attractive choice in a points sense. What reason do I have to pass on a few more superpowers so I can get identical terrain to what I can have on Earth for free, at least points wise? There's no reason to put your realm into your demiplane, you get more value by just taking powers.

>>46309851
On my end I don't see the point in min-maxing to avoid the point of the CYOA. I mean yeah you can, but is that really fun for you?

>>46309764
Oops I should have been clearer, I meant the anon who made the Waifu Abomination one as far as what others did they make. The rest was aimed at kit. His looks good so far reading it.

Witches and Inquisitors pls

>>46309874
Oh, that guy made the Worm CYOA, I know that much. Not sure if he did anything else.

>>46309868
Yes? Imagining conquering a few countries is just as good, and the power build you take shapes that.

>>46309851
Well, you sure can conquer something on Earth, but it's a hassle to do and to keep them in check afterwards and the powers are not SO powerful, you can still be destroyed by conventional weapons(even if you reform in a week). It's much more easy to have a ready realm with already fully loyal population.

Starting my pre-planing on a crime empire/mafia cyoa hopefully I can think of enough content that it actually pans out.

>>46309953
Don't forget the big four, Drugs, Smuggling, Prostitution, and Racketeering.

Also there should be a front business section, where you can build your cover. REALLY big criminals have huge fronts that actually function as real, legitimate companies.

>>46309937
It sounds better than dealing with eldritch horrors. I mean if you're satisfied with a small demiplane you could just go conquer a remote island or something else that wouldn't be a hassle.

>>46309589
>Dating costs -1 Friendship
>You can buy Dating several times.
>Gives you discount on a single Friend, who cost Friendship.
This seems a little convoluted.

>>46310039
I wouldn't abuse it too much unless you dig love triangles.

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>>46310056

>>46310056
Is there more coming or did you just fail spectacularly at cropping?

>>46310076
I see... Fail it is.

You know you could combine those two images even without getting rid of the excess space? But still getting rid of it, preferably.

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>>46310084

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If Bliss is still around, abstracting the minions and layout might help make the CYOA simpler.

>>46309812
What are you doing out of the CYOA mines? Back to work slave!

>>46309589

Might be fun to offer a discount or bonus on the dating option as long as you've got two or more companions and decide to roll among them instead of picking. Since the majority of the companions are waifus and all(not that there's anything wrong with that)

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>>46309589
>Megumin as companion
<3

>>46309563

Memories: Bold 4 Friendship, 16 Character

Character:
Training -3
Health -3
Agility -1
Intelligence -2
Sustenance -2
Elemental -2
Alchemy -2
Survival -1
Stealth -1

Friendship:
Diplomacy -2
Calming -2

Drawbacks:
Ashamed +1 character

Quests:
Philosopher's Stone
Sage
Beasts

Return to the land and look for the sage and philosopher's stone while doing the chores for the beasts, then go and convince the necromancer to be a good girl instead of a naughty one.

>>46309619
She sent you away to Earth, removed your memories on this World and put in some new ones (like childhood memories). The day after, she attacked Fwib
>>46309648
Aww shucks. Thank you. I loved how the intro picture looked, and I tried to get that "fade intro background"-effect to look just right.
It was a bitch on my processor for whatever reason, maybe that whole "having a box within a box".
>>46309715
Thanks. Yeah, I wanted it to be one page, but my autism hit me.
I don't think I'd make more quests, but I could write more companions after some time, if it's succesful
>>46309793
>what are "your memories"
How people remembered you, how you used to act.
>>46309812
So, brighter green boxes?
>>46310039
Dating costs one point. You can buy it several times if you're into polygamy.
The first time you buy Dating, it gives you a 1 point discount aka. it is free to date one person, but it will get expensive if you want a harem.

>>46309793
Those are your stating points, just disregard the slash.

>>46309589
I feel like some of those drawbacks are pretty extreme for so little return.

>>46310411
Just wanted to say the same things; they're just not worth it. Defector for example, basically exchange at least 1 friend point for 1 character and gain a deadly enemy for it? Maybe double the point rewards?

>>46309563
Does intelligence give you skills for free? On one hand they're going on about you mastering smithing and alchemy, on the other you might not have purchased any of those skills.

What's your maximum capacity for flaws in your imaginary girlfriend? Past which point do you throw an autistic shitfit and declare her completely pointless regardless of her merits?

>>46309608
Taylor's a trap, isn't he...

>>46310510
Think of it like this, how annoying/horrible/treacherous/disgusting would someone have to be that you wouldn't consider being married to them in real life? Unless you have REALLY low standards this should put you at a good starting place.

>>46310458
Or at the very least have the troubles resolvable. Panic station and coma are just permanent fuck you overs for only one point. Like I think blackout and ashamed are fine because you can eventually clear up bad rumors or find the one who controls you

>>46310510
Pretty sure that depends on the severity of said flaws.

>>46309563
Dependable

>Strength of Character: 8
Power 3 [3]
Agility 2 [2]
Bow [2]
Stealth [1]

>Power of Friendship: 13
Speaker [2]
Inspiration [2]
Diplomacy [2]
Beauty [2]
Charm [2]
Jule [3]

>Drawback
Stockholm Syndrome: Jule [+1 Friendship]

>Quests
Militarized
Diplomacy

The monarchy is over. With my massive charisma I'll be happy to serve as the leader of the new republic.

Power 3 + Bow is also hilariously powerful since the bow apparently responds to your strength and doesn't need to be loaded, increasing the firing rate. Spam arrows all day every day. Definitely a glass cannon though without defensive magic or skills.

>>46309563

So what happened to my mother? Or is that some unexplored future dlc?

If you're taking solicitations for other avenues of expansion, might be interesting to see an alternative quest to return the old queen to sanity instead of letting filthy democracy flow among the undeserving(and unappreciative apparently) kingdom. Maybe even waifu her and get the throne.

Also speaking of waifuing, apparently the necromancer is a woman, so clearly you should be able to waifu her too, somehow.

>>46310510
Why the hell would I imagine a girlfriend with flaws if I can have a perfect one? That's what imagination is for, isn't it? Not having to put up with bullshit.

>>46310539
Hence the question.

>>46310551
If you're going to just imagine everything being perfect, why bother with CYOAs? Don't constrain yourself with rules, just make yourself omnipotent and be done.

>>46310508
I assumed it was mastering the theory, not necessarily practice.
So you might be able to write a dissertation on the subjects, but couldn't actually cast something to save your life.

>>46310257
>So, brighter green boxes?
Nonononononono.
PALE boxes. I'm not enough of an artist to explain exactly the difference, but add more white, not less non-green.

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>>46310510
>this is not a trollpost

>>46310552
It's a bit too broad of a question to answer so easily. Number is probably the worst measurement at that, people are going to be more forgiving of a bunch of small flaws like "snores, gets gassy after dinner, enjoys Dragon Age games", over one major, unforgivable flaw like "eats babies".

>>46310575
For new, interesting and stimulating ways of perfection.

>>46310552
Then my answer is a range between 1 and X (and no, I don't have a formula in mind for solving X), depending on flaw severity.

>>46310056
>>46310076
>>46310084
>>46310101
You can combine all of these images into one without needing a pdf, man.

>>46310510
Lots of little flaws are significantly better than one absolute flaw. Things like "requires the kink you hate worst" or "holds the political opinion that annoys you the most and won't shut up about it" are things that wouldn't make it past the dating stage, while things like "is into a lot of weird shit" or "disagrees with you on a number of issues" aren't as bad.

>>46310611
>"eats babies".
Also remember that this is /tg/. Most people here never have nor never will have a girlfriend, and their priorities in choosing one are basically alien to normal human beings. Observe the shitstorm that's going to ensue as I imply that most of them would rather their girlfriend eat babies than look at other men.

>>46310675
I don't care if she looks as long as she doesn't touch.

>>46310675
Depends what you mean by 'look'. Obviously people need to look at each other to function.

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>>46310056
>>46310076
>>46310084
>>46310101
>>46310645
Use this from now on, friends.

>>46310550
>So what happened to my mother?
What do you think happened?
I can tell you what happened canonically, and what I think as the not-author, but the former doesn't sound fun.
>>46310411
I did consider giving +2 to some of them, so that you could pick the 20 Strength of Character option, a drawback, and one 2 point companion (and waifu them, if you want)
I might change that.
Fun idea for a quest.
You can waifu the necromancer, but you may not want to.

>>46309563
>>46309589
>>46309608
>>46309629

>bold
power 3 (13)
health 3 (10)
shield 3 (7)
sustenance (5)
supportive (3)
Agility 2 (1)
learning (0)

leron (3) (What specific fun?)
wendy (1)
dating (0)

(only enough points for leron and 1 friend.
>jenifer
you don't make this easy anon do you?)

Lieutenant
(don't worry leron, I'll do morale boost after I get my memories back. also, probably destroy the queen.)

I'll go right through everything and then fix the problems verbally denounce the queen as a coward and useless. Following that, I'll probably do all the sidequests.

such a fun CYOA

>>46310056
ah and look, more OC.

>>46309589
Muse are ok I GUESS.

Radiohead are better desu.

>>46309449

Chip me up with the kuudere circuit. Freezing a pool in seconds is some serious megawattage, there's a lot you can do with a heatsink of that capacity. Especially in aerospace applications. I could be a one-girl Skylon.

The chip will suppress my emotional responses in general, but presumably less so towards my designated target of affection. I might explore the romantic uses of ice powers as well; how much heat do I have to remove from a cloud in order to produce snow rather than rain, for instance? With a circuit in my head blocking out other emotional triggers, seeing my ToA charmed by something I did will probably become quite a big deal for me. I might even smile.

>>46310912
Wellp.

>>46310912
Not if she's mom :P and yeah most of those drawbacks aren't worth the point they give.

>>46310912
That just emboldens my dick.

>>46310912
yeah, all of drawbacks was a little much. you've done your companions correctly. I was always thinking "more, i want more information. give me it"

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>>46310257
>>46310593

I think he means doing something like this.

I don't really think it makes a huge difference though

>>46310912
>I can tell you what happened canonically, and what I think as the not-author, but the former doesn't sound fun.
>You can waifu the necromancer, but you may not want to.

this only makes my penis harder

>>46310527
Do you want her to be a trap?

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>>46310975
You take that back you wanking wanker.
>>46311047
Thank you. It was fun to include lore information in the companions. I may need to do more, but I need a break.
It's so much more fun to write companions when you know how the World works.
>>46311048
Megumin aka. best girl isn't enough?
>>46310527
No way. Didn't you notice all those female pronouns? Taylor must be a girl, there's no other possible way.

>>46310458
Yeah, as it's never worth picking Detractor, since all you're doing is getting an enemy.

OrdionAnon, did you make a terraformars cyoa?

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Researching plants is so boring. Save me from this hell.

>>46311273
What are you taking? Babby's first botany?

>>46311166
Muse is shit

>>46310056
>>46310770
Do we just arbitrarily pick an ecosystem?

Lord
Materium: 5000
Immaterium: 10

>Materium
x1 King's Regalia - 50
x1 Dark Altar - 30
x984 Art - 4920

>Immaterium
Beast Taming [5]
Natura [5]

>Structures
Mana Hall [5]
Dark Temple + Thaumatic Engine [Illusion] + Hidden Door [21]
Thaumatic Engine [Monstrofy] + x10 Sacred Spring [35]
Thaumatic Engine [Chimerism] + x10 Sacred Spring [35]
x5 Crafter Station [100]
x100 Mechanism [200]

>Minions
x3 Giants [150]
x10 Doppleganger [100]
x20 Trolls [100]
x775 Monstrofied Insects [31]
x200 Monstrofied Beastmen [400]

Giant beastmen armed with giant equipment. Large insects to harass and patrol for enemies. The King's Regalia and Dark Alter are kept in the same room along with the 10 dopplegander guards.

Art's vulnerability is actually more of a problem for the thieves than for me; they're hard to transport and thus hard to steal. And damn, who wouldn't want to guard the beauty that is almost 1000 pieces of fine art?

>>46311289
No, I'm being comprehensive making my CYOA. There's a plant section and I want the 30 most interesting plants. This is a bit of a problem because I don't have much formal education in plants, not a lot of hobby interest, and there's something like 300,000 species of plants.

Technically animals have comparable numbers but there's so many animals that are morphologically distinct that you have a very easy time fillings things out, to the point where you have to select higher groupings just to include it all, whereas with plants I have to pick through every single genus looking over hundreds upon hundreds of flowers that are all functionally identical.

>>46311390
I see.

This is a hell you chose for yourself. Or simply scale down your cyoa to include fewer plant options.

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>>46309542

>Favorite Kamen Rider is Decade.

I fail to see how this is a negative.

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>>46309563
Hi Kit, I like your new CYOA, it's looking better than usual and the setting and writing is lovely. I like the companions, a lot. <3

Good, a little bit more character than friendship is fine.

Training 1
Health 2
Power 2
Shield 2
Agility 2
Intelligence 1
Apothecary 1
Survival 1

Diplomacy 2
Money 1
Leron 1
Elely 2
Lucy 2
Allyn 2

Panic Situation +1
Stockholm Syndrome +1

Philosopher's stone
Morale Boost

>>46311316
Listen here you little, insignificant shit, I will turn you into a waifu that loves cuckolding if you don't watch your language.

>>46311435
I have about 11 pages of animals, so I'd just feel wrong not giving plants a page (plus it needs to have an equivalent length to one page, which is 30 options.)

It's a hell I've chosen for myself, yes. But I'll endure. Hopefully. It's all worth it for including stuff like this one plant I found that produces organic flash powder.

>>46311477
Good way to eliminate all good will you've built up with the new CYOA, senpai.

>>46311492
Just combine plants and crystals or fungi or something, faggot

>>46311530
I already combined fungi with animals though, since they're more closely related.

Also crystals, I've debated making a page for non-organic biology like that, but I've also felt that maybe it would interfere with the magic options where you can pick a modifying elemental theme.

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>>46311336
>Do we just arbitrarily pick an ecosystem?
It's a WIP from the other chan. My guess is that if there is an answer to any questions you can have about it it'll be subject to change.

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>>46311166
>Taylor must be a girl, there's no other possible way.

>>46311513
I told you his CYOA was shit, but did you listen?

>>46311564
Then combine plants with protists/bacteria/archeans

>>46309449
I choose to adopt >>46309569 and take the Dandere chip.
Gotta stress-test the love limit on those chips, after all.

>>46311600
Anon, you're not gonna get anything interesting out of the protists and algae other than what I've already included.

There's no other way but to suffer.

>>46310056
>>46310770

crypt keeper
>king's regalia 50 (0)

might 30 (120)
natura 10 (110)
illusions 10 (100) (maze's)
polymorph 30 (70)
runes 10 (60)
Dark heart 20 (40) (greed and lust, polymorph, runed on all doors)
Tantalus 5 (35) (trick people into eating it, make sure that intruder's live or die in 4 days)
mirror magic 20 (15)
portals 15 (0)
create a mirror, seal it in a room and put a portal to it. never create a portal out. if i die, they must break through literal walls of rock to get to it and then go through the mirror world.

70 resource's (minion's first)
shadow people 5 (65)
goblins 10 (55) (put them all in the same room together, use shadow people to hide goblins, kill anything that enter's)

>Giant
earth 50 (5)

false treasure 0 (5) (cursed with polymorph)
hidden door 1 (4) (leads to giant and me)
Sacred spring 2 (2) (all fountains, sometimes have shadow minions drink from it and use illusion to show them healing wounds)
Mechanism 2 (0) so cliche, that it might get some people.

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>>46311166
>Megumin aka. best girl
Darkness DLC plz.
At first I thought Jennifer might be her but the butt fetish reminds me of the vampire boss chick from that adorable necromancer animu...

>>46311564
>>46311628
>Combining fungi with animals
>Expecting plants to take a full page
You have nobody to blame but yourself.
Just combine plants and fungi; nobody'll care about scientific inaccuracy.

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>>46311628
Then you're not trying hard enough.

So put your cyoa on the backburner, take a course in intro to microbio and botany then finish the cyoa with whatever new you have learned from those courses.

Do it faggot, enrich yourself with knowledge so you can enrich us with a new cyoa.

>>46311513
>can't take a joke

>>46311591
4 posts, all your's, not even thinly convieled as being a different person. should have put more points in illusion. (this is true but also a joke, try not to get offended)

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>>46311473
Oh lord...
I'm almost done updating Monstergirl Quest: Epilogue.
I hope you get my favourite Yellow mystery box.
They're both great, but I love one more than the other.

> it's looking better than usual
Shot through the heart, and you're to blame.

>>46309563
So Enchanting basically needs another school of magic to be effective? Out of curiosity, what would it do if you added Alchemy to it?

>>46311687
I'm a biologist and I will. I could never live with my sin if I did that.

>>46311692
If you knew the premise you'd know why single cells make bad options here. Only ones I included are those that do something unique that can be extrapolated, like diatoms.

>>46311677
I could honestly watch this for at least twenty minutes straight.

>>46311748
>plant/animal cyoa made by a biologist
I am really interested in this, please finish this anon.

>>46311473
source please or at least the minute before and after this scene.

really went jack of all trades with that build but you got enough friends for it.

>>46311748
You keep digging this hole deeper and deeper anon, remember to say Ni Hao when you dig to China.

>>46311748
>extremely excited in this

>>46311723
>and then i read this

2 new OC's today, both with great world's, neither purely waifu and now this. happy day.

also:
>accept kit as new cyoa maker
better day, he now has joined the ranks of cyoa creator class: beri. Good, improves over time, lots of content, but nothing overwelming legendary.

One day you may reach cancer class: cyoa and possibly even legendary class: The scientist.

and now i want to make a class system/ranking based off cyoa creator's.

>>46311795
>source please or at least the minute before and after this scene.
Subtitles are from Kokoro Connect (can't remember which episode, though I believe it's from the first "arc"), while the video in the background is from the episode of Dagashi Kashi with the ghost story snacks.

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>>46311765
I know, right?

>>46311731
Pretty sure you can do generic "+1 Butter Knife" enchantments without anything else.
Also, I'm pretty sure Alchemy could make magical catalysts; potion bottles that slowly turn water into potions, empowering ingredients themselves, etc.

>>46311748
Just give every kingdom/family its own option set, and put the Fungus and Plant (and maybe Other) sections on the same page.
Or, you know, add a footnote "Fungi are technically closer to animals, but I lumped them with plants because shut up."

>>46311890
Alchemy is density and shape manipulation. You're thinking of apothecary.

>>46311878
>not completely related
>ghost stories

the good and the bad. dancing so well around each other.

>>46311564
>combining fungi with animals
CYOA is shit confirmed.

The scary part is this is my honest opinion.

>>46311473
Did that anime seriously reference Kokoro Connect or did someone use fake subs?

Fuck, I miss Kokoro Connect. S2 never.

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>>46311677
Sorry, but this thread is only for Axis cultists, such as myself.

>>46311677
butt what happens next?
>>46311879
i see a theme a calling in this anime.

>>46311890
Did you know that in some classification schemes, animals and fungi are in the same kingdom?

>oh wow a biologist is making a CYOA

Amazing. I didn't know biologists really existed in a place like this. What are you doing here? How old were you when you realized you were a biologist? Do biologists eat food?

>>46311959
It's like telling /k/fags that they're being autistic about the pointless distinction between clips and magazines. Don't bother.

>>46311911
Oh.
Yeah, I can never keep that right.
AUTHOR! FIX IT!
In that case, it'd be the standard ludicrously heavy sword, waterskins that hold swimming pools full of water, and bullets that expand to cannonball-sized lumps when fired.

>>46311944
Her skirt is genius.

>>46311879
Man, the animation quality really took a nosedive after a while. They fucked up most of the fanservice.

Darkness would be totally my type if she wasn't so hideous in this anime's style.

Well, we still got Megumin (one of the rare not-shit lolis) and Aqua's incredibly feminine voice.

>>46311960
>Do biologists eat food?
They photosynthesize and take required nutrients from the earth, any third grader knows this.

>>46311390
If you want some plants I got 2:

Araucaria araucana- Unique appearance
Cunninghamia lanceolata- Unique cones

>>46312009
I thought clips were bullets on an open belt and magazines were enclosures for bullets. That sounds like a pretty important distinction.
Did I misunderstand something?

>>46312029
>Biologists
>not lithotrophs

>>46311925
Fungi are bothersome for the same reasons plants are, only fungi have even less to distinguish them on a functional level. Sorry, Mr. Mycologist, but I just couldn't come up with enough options that were functionally distinct.

>>46311960
I feel like people may be expecting something a bit different than what will manifest. It's not going to be a CYOA about science or anything, it's more that my profession is what's driving me to offer the breadth of options I am.

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>>46311944
SDA is an Axishitter? Should have expected this, really.
Your goddess is an idiot and a huge useless slut!

>>46312057
It is an important distinction when you're actually getting your hands dirty, just like the distinction between fungi and plants is important when you're getting your hands dirty.

It's still pointless in a casual context.

>>46311931
>Did that anime seriously reference Kokoro Connect or did someone use fake subs?
See >>46311878.
>Fuck, I miss Kokoro Connect. S2 never.
The kids deserve their freedom.

>>46312086
Well, yeah, but it's not like RTS vs RTT, where I can kind of understand the fuckheads that completely fail at distinguishing them.
For fungi/plants and magazines/clips the difference is pretty blatant even to a layman. It's a bit like refusing to distinguish between mirrors and windows.

>>46312067
You should just categorized your options based on domains, not kingdoms.

>>46312009
Pretty sure you're saying that to the wrong person; I'm in favor of interesting choices over autistic accuracy.

>>46311959
And in the common mind, fungi and plants are close enough nobody'll bother BioAnon about it.

>>46312067
Like I said before, just offer two smaller categories (fungi and plants) on the same page, possibly with a note about its scientific placement.

>>46311931
>Fuck, I miss Kokoro Connect. S2 never.
What's the point, best girl already won.

>>46312077
Hey, don't pick on her.
She got brain damage from being reincarnated.

>>46312122
The point is that even if you say "clips" or "plants" but are actually talking about magazines or fungi, nobody is going to misunderstand what you meant if they've been paying the most minimal amount of attention. That's why it's not worth being autistic about in anything but a very serious context. No, this isn't a serious context.

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>>46311723
If you ever want to make something together maybe, hook me up. Though it'll be something different than your usual theme but we could discuss everything in detail.

>>46312140
>What's the point
Comfy as fuck show about teenagers being retarded and all issues being solved by shouting at them that they are retarded.
It was a splendid execution of the setting.

It's much better than the usual faggotry that comes with the territory.

Plus, hilarious supernatural shenanigans at the hands of an omnipotent avatar of the author.
I bet that other supernatural thing was a buddy of the author who had a few disturbing ideas.

>>46312052
Unique appearance is definitely a plus, but except for some favorites I'm including out of personal taste, most of my selections are based on some unique functionality. Like Sandbox trees for being abominations.

>>46312127
I have 11 pages for animals. That ship was sunk before it left port.

>>46312139
It's not happening.

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>>46311947
You're imagining things.

>>46312196
>It's not happening.
And why not?

>>46312196
>I have 11 pages for animals. That ship was sunk before it left port.

Then reduce and streamline the animal section.

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>>46312142
She was always brain damaged. She fucked up the world so badly in the first place.

>>46312212
Because it would disgrace my ancestors.

>>46312219
It's my vanity project and I want 11 animal pages.

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>>46312199
Oh hey, I made that webum.

wbms trigger me

guys please stop posting webms they have nothing to do with the thread

think of my feelings and the quality of CYOA general!

>>46312231
She looked pretty sane to me when she originally mocked the MC after he died his disgraceful NEET death.

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>>46312236
The softest and most bullyable lich in the history of undead monstrosities <3

>>46312174
Man, I hope that doesn't happen. I recognize you and you're both annoying and have shit taste in pretty much everything.

>>46312234
>want 11 pages of animals
>killing yourself to come up with enough plant options
>forced to combine fungi with plants

This is why nobody in the STEM majors like biologists.

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>>46312269
She's just a bullying bitch.

>>46312275
Oh really, who am I?

>>46312067
Can I be a lambda phage?
If not, I don't even give a tiny shit about your cyoa.

>>46312234
Your ancestors wouldn't care about a clearly demarcated line between two casually similar categories of life paired up for space-saving purposes.

>>46312296
Forced, no. I just wanted a fungi option but they don't have much that's functionally distinct so I couldn't scramble up a page. It's entirely for the sake of the fungi, not the animals.

>>46312299
Well, yeah, but her original self definitely looks less brain damaged than her reincarnation.
And brain damage WAS on the list of possible results of reincarnation.

Also, wasn't she friendly to that Gary Stu guy whom the MC robbed of his infinite sword of bullshit?

>>46312302
That guy who always makes builds where he's turned into a woman and raped or prostituted in CYOAs while pretending he wants to be a waifu.

>>46311874
>nothing overwhelmingly legendary.
I'm trying my best, okay?
Also,
>2 new OCs today
I think I might wait until tomorrow, or at least next thread. Maybe I'll make a bonus page in the mean time.

>>46312321
>>46312067
Please
I just want to penetrate your cell wall and squirt my genome all over your insides, covering you in my thick, juicy genetic material.

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>>46312356
Friendly? She didn't give a damn about him, she just used him.

>>46312377
Alright, now narrow it down beyond 80% of /CYOA/.

>>46312356
She likely just put on the same act as she would have to all other people she reincarnated, forgetting about him afterwards. Hence why she didn't know who he was when he first showed up in the show.

Also, it is Aqua's fault that fantasy Australia is so fucked up.

>>46312377
Nope, you have me confused with someone else.

>>46312321
But that isn't even a lifeform.

>>46312344
I've already got 20 plants anyway, there's too much for half a fungus page.

>>46312347
That's because your animal section is too large and covers too much functionality already.

But its your vanity project. Bash your head into your textbooks until you figure it out.

>>46312442
Are /all/ your plants interesting enough to be a full-fledged option? No redundancies?

>>46312406
Love you Beri, your slime CYOA is one of my favorites.

>>46312442
>But that isn't even a lifeform.

>virus
>not living
Fucking biologists. What kind of shitty definition of "living" are you using?

>>46312416
Well aren't you a lewd virus.

>>46312477
The ones that aren't there just because of personal taste.

>>46312472
Give me 30 fungi that do something other than decompose dying material or infect living tissue.

>>46312551
Pay attention in school.

>>46312551
>No homeostatic capability
Are calculators alive? Assembly line arms?
They may be a faggot, but you're just wrong.

>>46312570
You know, there is more to living organisms then the method of which they acquire they sustenance.

Here's 20 cool looking fungi. Do the research yourself.
http://imgur.com/gallery/SUIDk

>>46309408
>Why would anyone spend points on terrain?
The way I read it, the Estate is your responsibility. You want powers? You have to maintain it. That's why it was given to you after all, the previous owner didn't feel like dealing with the Horrors. If you don't want to either he can just give it to someone else.

Terrain is necessary to support a settlement. People can and do live almost everywhere, but a flat expanse of nothing doesn't support life. You could still buy a settlement, but unless you immediately relocate them to earth they will die, quickly. It does raise the question of why they were even there to start with, but we can assume the demiplane is in a state of flux until you get it

As to why you would want a settlement, that's because otherwise you would be tasked with fighting off the horrors by yourself, or with whatever humans from earth you can convince to help you. That's PROBABLY pretty impractical. Even with help exterminating them completely is probably out of the question.

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>Changelog
Updated Holy Sword so no option allows you avoid Ilias touching you in your special spot.
Update Guardian Angel.
Added Yellow Mystery box

Give me like, thirty minutes to complete the second Yellow box.

>>46312640
I know, but when the premise requires the end result be motile or at least to have functionally distinct body parts that justify separate options, fungi fall flat.

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>>46312690
You know what I'll pick. The yellow box.

>>46312728
Then from the very beginning your vanity project was doomed to fail.

>>46312756
From the perspective of a mycologist perhaps, I feel like everyone else (who can tolerate the premise at all) will be fine.

>>46310770

Would taking all gold melting into one single slab and dumping it all into a deep Living Water lake be overpowering?

Populate the lake with piranha or living statues at the bottom.

>>46312640
First one looks like cherryjelly drops in cream.
Second looks like a dense cleaning sponge
Third looks like a fancy insect nest
The next three are neon shrooms. Cool.
Kinda reminds me of poisonous insect stingers
Someone seems to have cut open a fancy stone. but still a stone.
What's that starfish doing in the grass?
That one goes into a tank of bubbling water. with some nerd glasses.

>>46310608
Oh, this gives me an excellent idea. The last few threads have all given me excellent ideas. I'm going to combine them.

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>>46312690
Old, unchanged mystery boxes
>>46312736
>roll a 1d2/coin
One job

>>46312838
I can tell you right now there's no good idea than can be had from that shitstorm kindling.

>>46312854
But he's going to do it anyways, because some people just want to watch the world burn.

>>46312899
And he'll get called a shit and forgotten about like all his kin before him. It's not a very rewarding life.

>>46309563
Balder didn't tank hits, everything simply avoided hitting him. First thing that didn't, a simple wooden arrow with neither head nor fletching, and he dropped dead.

>>46309629
Emely misspelled as Elely near the bottom.

Rolled 2 (1d2)

>>46312843
>>46312736
Oops. Alright 1d2.

>>46312838
Are you the anon that was going to make a new "Cursed" Girlfriend CYOA?

If so, please don't put any actual, shitstorm-inducing flaws anywhere, pretty-please.

>>46312928
>A simple wooden arrow
Someone got his story wrong. It was a sprig of mistletoe, the only thing in the world that didn't promise not to harm him.

>>46312854
>Do you want to burn your humanity and kindle the shitstorm?
> >Yes< No
>No
>No
>No
>No
>Yes<

Anyone have that Treasure Hunting CYOA? I saw it on here a long time ago, forgot to save it.

Rolled 1 (1d2)

>>46312690

>>46312989
>Treasure Hunting CYOA
Was it a single-page, greenish background, or multi-page, white background?

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>>46312963
Fashioned into a makeshift arrow and fired from a bow.

>>46312914
>we have a duty to expel from this place those who would dare introduce thought provoking content into our hallowed halls of circlejerking wish fulfillment

>>46312843
Where is the omorashi option,

>>46313109
The what

>>46312963
You have to explain why the mistletoe didn't promise.
The Aesir found the mistletoe to be way to young, when the promises were collected.

>>46312928
Avoidance tank is still a tank, though the logical extreme usually isn't viable anymore

>>46313096
People are kinda bored of you posting bad CYOA then insulting everyone who doesn't like them for not finding them 'thought provoking'. Pretty much everyone's figured out your MO by this point.

>>46309563
>Bold (4 Friend, 16 Character)
>Blackout (5 Friend)

Character
>Power 3
>Training 5
>Agility 7
>Learning 9
>Elemental 11
>Survival 12
>Stealth 13
>Shield 16

Friendship
>Inspiration 2
>Dating 3
>Leron 4
>Elely 5 (-1 for dating)

Quest
>Philosopher's Stone
>Beast (If im allowed to take more than 1)
Save the bikini competition for after the adventure Leron we got work to do

This is quite comfy for a saving the world CYOA.
You don't make it easy to chose companions, really wanted to take Rie and Jule but damn it Elely is too good.

I want to try and use Elemental as a sort of movement boost in combination with agility to just fly around the opponents.

>>46312690
>Not picking King
>Not gradually convincing her that a Human King needs a human Human Queen
>Not slowly exerting more power over her, and delegating her responsibilities off to others
>Not explaining to her that a colonization effort in the newly empty Monstergirl lands will help increase our power and secure our rule
>Not surpassing her in wisdom and cunning, but leaving her position for her irreplaceable services
>Not implementing paths for monstergirl citizenship, under stringent regulations
>Not bolting her nameplate to the floor in front of your desk
>Not signing bills allowing monstergirls of sufficient integrity into the kingdom right over her head
>Not applying cultural engineering to form a mixed-species utopia under their King, Queen, and Royal Courtesan.
Pleb taste.

>>46312139
>fungi and plants are close
>are close
>close
Only as close as vertebrae and bacteria.

>>46313036
Multi page, white background.

Also Captcha, pizza pies aren't pies.

>>46313226
Technically closer than that, but yeah, fungi are about as distant from plants as you can be and still be a eukaryote.

>>46313220
>Wanting anyone other than your loving goddess.
>Tolerating evil raping monstergirl whores.
You're a bad hero.

>>46313239
Did it have some sort of kobold librarian/archivist/other bookish-type occupation what could translate languages?

>>46313226
>>46313259
>In the common mind
"Living things that don't think or move" includes plants, fungi, and especially lazy autists.

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>>46310113
With what, my friend?

>>46312690
Consider my offer. Maybe you can help motivate me and we'll churn out something good.

>>46313282
No, it was the journal of a famous treasure hunter, and you were following in his footsteps.

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>>46312843
So, a bit less than 30 minutes

>>46313181
>This is quite comfy for a saving the world CYOA.
yeah... there's a reason why I changed it from being "The Necromancer has been slaughtering people for three years" to "She's been kinda chilling in one place, and she even lets people leave if she wants to."
It was originally titles "Short and silly".

And yes, you can take multiple quests.
>You don't make it easy to choose companions
Thank you. I'll need to re-read it later when I'm making another CYOA. I'll have to do a proper Waifu-CYOA at some point.

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>>46313348
And both the old + new Mystery Gifts

>>46313284
I did two hundred push ups and four hundred sit ups today, cut a rose bush down to spring size, fought my way through a TSUNAMI of common ivy climbing over the walls.
What did you do?

Also fungi. are. no. plants. they are their own kingdom.

>>46312690
>>46312843
Lewd angels are cute.

>>46313348
I really don't like these, though. They're boring and go against the prior theme and tone of the CYOA.

>>46313287
I mean just being able to purchase as many tiles and minions as you have points for, and assuming everything else (space, food) sorts itself out or at least gets solved without spending points.

>>46313395
Чтo eбaть ты пpocтo чepтoвcки гoвopилa oбo мнe, мaлeнькaя cyкa?.

>>46313381

I think I will stick with the options from before.

>>46309629
>>46309608
>>46309589
>>46309563


I like this CYOA, personally.

Let's see...

>Good

(12 character point + 1 from drawback)
>Power 3
>Shield 3
>Intelligence 2
>Learning 2
>Agility 2
>Health 1

Drawback : Ashamed

(8 friendship points)
>Calming (-2)
>Taming (-1)
>Beauty (-2)
>Money (-1)
>Speaker (-2)

As quest, I shall choose "Beasts" for first! Then probably go to check out the sage, the lieutenant, yadda yadda.

With this build I got myself enough power and speed to do any "SUPRISE , MOTHERFUCKAH" entrances due being almost a living brick, and at the same time I will see to use my learning skills to learn both magic and combat.
Whatever it'll be, I have perfect basics to start from.

>>46313423
Sorry but I've given up on the whole map/tile idea. Maybe, maybe I will make something in the spirit of it or continue it in a different direction.

>>46312933
Darn, that was totally my plan. Even wrote out their curses, and the hidden curses.
Welp, so much for that April Fools CYOA. I already figured out all their curses, too. Back to the drawing board.

>>46310510
Don't just add flaws to characters to make them feel balanced. Use the flaws as part of their person, otherwise you might end up making their character less interesting to balance them.
E.g: Blind girl is very curious and goes on asking questions or testing objects occasionally so that she may understand them better, or a sick girl with a permanent infection that is too prideful to let anyone else handle it.

>>46313428
40 years ago, it was mandatory to learn that were I come from, now not so much, even if I liked to.

>>46313499
On a scale of 1 to 10 that was basically a 30 as far as bad ideas go.

>>46313499
I hope you'll still make and release that new "Cursed" Girlfriend CYOA, though, I just don't want it to become a CYOA that I'll just hide on sight.

>>46313499
Autists will complain if their waifus have even ever talked to a man in the past. Just ignore them and make interesting characters. Don't intentionally make dumb shit either though, so whatever.

>>46313395
Well, you've got the moving part down at least.

>in the common mind
This assertion was made aaaaall the way back >>46312139, saying that the functional difference (that is, to a casual observer) is negligible, no matter what the scientific difference is.

>>46313487
I was mostly using 'tiles' as another word for 'rooms'; it won't hurt much to let people buy 18 separate kitchens and say how they're laid out.

>>46313514
it's just the first line of the navy seals copypasta in Russian.

>>46313410
I don't disagree about the tone in regards to "fall from grace". "Clean Slate" actually fits in exactly with the other options and she might very well only be pretending to have amnesia

On the other hand though, Clean Slate actually works pretty well in regards to the canon.

>>46313679
er, Fall From Grace works pretty well. Illias does eventually redeem herself, and if you took away the eternity of loneliness that eventually turned into a lust for power she could actually give up her hatred.

>>46312690

Couldn't you technically take the sword and then do nothing with it? I mean you'd be squandering your gift but its a possibility. Perhaps it should draw Monstergirls in as well so its inevitable that you fight them.

>>46313709
I'd like something that's more of a domina-style deal.
Most of these have dominant undertones, but are not overtly so.

Also, could there be something that is actually submissive and not just a girl forcing her sexuality on you?

>>46313709
>>46313679
But it doesn't end with her fiddling your diddle.

>>46313749
The point is Illias forcing her way into your pants, though.

>>46313756
Yes it does.

>>46313820
I'm reading Fall from Grace again and I'm not seeing it.

>>46313278
Speak for yourself - I'm staying true to my human wife.
If we both have an issue we need council on at the some time, well, that's unavoidable.

>>46313580
I will, but I have to start all over, now.
I'm guessing "you become beautiful so other girls will look at you" is too close to cheating on her, right?
Or is it okay when you're the one cheating?

>>46313844
>Implying she let you get married.

>>46313778
Well, yeah, but it doesn't have to be her directly.
There is already one where she manipulates fate. How about an element of the amnesia box, except with less "I'll soon awaken to my carnal desires and oh it looks like I'll need to rape you tomorrow because reasons"?

It should be something like her reincarnating into a totally unaware persona who just happens to be destined to be together with you, with details on how fate will cockblock you on anyone else and shit.

>>46313833
But you know it does. Same as you know human king does even thought it's written as "optional"

>>46313878
No, no I don't. The human king one has her implying you should fuck. This one doesn't evne have that.

>>46312236
>this is a lich
What heresy is this

>>46313864
She does that in the stalking option.

>>46313912
No, that one is her doing fate-assisted rape.

I meant something where she rapes you on a meta level but, personally, is actually an ordinary love interest who just happens to be the only girl you could be together with because the fates got bribed.

>>46313857
>I'm guessing "you become beautiful so other girls will look at you" is too close to cheating on her, right?
>Or is it okay when you're the one cheating?
It's not cheating if it's just a third party (people other than you and your GF) being interested in the first or second party (you and your GF, respectively), unless said party responds with similar interest.

Besides, the first "Cursed" GF CYOA had one option where the GF wanted threesomes with you and her hot friends.

>>46313895
She has the mind of a 10 year old, the libido of a monster and the powers of a goddess. You are gonna fuck.

>>46313740
... yes.
Ilias damn it.
That is a good idea, I've added it.
>>46313844
>Implying Ilias won't make all your subjects and other advisors realize how great a couple you'd make, and break up any relationship you have with other women.
She's had millenia to plan this.
>>46313864
That sounds fun, if I'm reading this right
>She has no memories of being Ilias
>Fate has decided you end up together
or what? So Stalker+Clean Slate, except Fate is the one making sure this happens?

>>46313973
Look, the CYOA is about getting raped by her. If you don't like it, don't take it. Leaping through all these hoops just to give you an option so the girl won't be on top because it scares you? Would be an excessive waste of time for the CYOA maker.

>>46313381
What happens if I open, say, the red and zellow box simultaneously?

>>46313988
It doesn't imply anything, dude. How the fuck are you missing that this option is out of tone with the rest? With how overbearing they are? There's no implications of lewdness here.

>>46313973
I guess the option of choosing her from the get-go kinda fits the niche, on second thought.

>>46313989
>So Stalker+Clean Slate, except Fate is the one making sure this happens?
Exactly.

>>46313993
I'm just giving out suggestions. I wouldn't even select that option.
Personally, I think it would be great abuse of her own powers.

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>>46313900
A heresy of Love and Beauty.

>>46313989
>So Stalker+Clean Slate, except Fate is the one making sure this happens?
Maybe Fate decided that this was the way to finally get rid of her.
After all, she'd even cooperate if she was given this suggestion. And then finally fuck off into human realms.

>>46313986
I'll see how many of my original ideas I can convert to not be omg2impure
I definitely won't finish for April First.

>>46314177
>I definitely won't finish for April First.
That's okay, take your time and make something fun.

>>46314065
BACK OF SLAANESH SCUM! I DO NOT CONSENT!

>>46314304
But that only makes them want it more

>>46314368
>Initiates gellar field and swags out of here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUW8sBaacQI

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>>46312519
thanks. the new one is also slime.

>>46314503
That's goo-d

>>46314503
Can I kill them?

>>46314519
You need to leave this thread right now

>>46314561
Read the original CYOA, edgyanon. You can't hurt slime waifus. They're made of love and goo.

>>46311874
>and now i want to make a class system/ranking based off cyoa creator's.
Please do so. The old Author waifu CYOA is ancient.

>>46314586
Can't make me.

>>46314589
I can hurt her with muhdick.
I'm gonna invaginate her entire body with muhdick

Did anyone here participate in PACYOA:TE?

I kind of want to make a thing similar to that without the design flaws and the mistakes that were made throughout its run. It's probably gonna be similar in format to a CYOA but actually maintain reasonable gameplay rules

Think it's feasible?

>>46314634
I think multiplayer CYOAs always end badly.

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>>46314425

>>46314627
You go anon, show that slime who is boss. I'm sure she'll appreciate it.

>>46309563
>>46309589
>>46309608
>>46309629
Anyone else get a faint sinister vibe from parts of this? Like how for Shield, Leron keeps going "no, no, I'm misremembering, it was like this" when you upgrade it, and also refers to Earth as "your world". Or Lucine being unable to find your mother with her magic. Nothing major, just a bunch of little things that seem off about the framing scenario of the CYOA.

>>46313860
>"No, I suppose you can't help it if some of the leaders at the summit are female. But one of my angels will watch you the whole time, so don't try anything!"
>"Alright, I get that watching you would strain relations with the colonial diplomat. I'll know if you did anything by how well our 'advisory' session goes, though."
>"If the colonial situation's that bad, then I guess there isn't any option besides political marriage... But stay true to me, alright?"
>"Th-they wanted you to consummate it? Well, if an heir strengthens the bond... You are the king, after all."
>"A joint councilling session, sir? A s-special one? I suppose my job /is/ to serve the nobility..."
>"What? B-by yourselves? I-I'll have to supervise, to make sure nothing heretical goes on..."
>"Yes, my lord. I'll fluff the pillows, my lord."
It's like you dont even max Charisma.

>>46314519
A slime that does that all the time was one of the last ones I added.

>>46314561
Yeah, what >>46314589 said.

>>46314634
>without the design flaws
>maintain reasonable gameplay rules
Pick one. If former, good luck. If latter, good luck but get out please.

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Does anyone have png art of a chibi Tamamo?
This is the best I've found, and i think it's by the same artist as the others, but she looks like a whore.

Thinking about constructing a CYOA about super-waifus, maybe as a Nick Fury-type looking to recruit. What kind of characters would you guys consider necessary for something like that?

>>46314730
I sure know you don't.

>>46314825
Batwoman, Superwoman, Wonderwoman but not a bitch, Spiderwoman, Sniktbubette, Starfire but not a slut, Raven,

>>46314807
>she looks like a whore
As opposed to?

>>46309563

who is Leron's older sister? the description for Allyn implies he has one but only the younger sister is available
was this intentional or just a wording fuck up some where

>>46314715
Your mom is the necromancer. Everything else you think is probably just reading too much into the text.

>>46314852
>Mixing marvel with DC
Absolute madman

>>46314852
I'm thinking of having original characters, like archetypes and references, since I'd be here forever if I had to add in every existing marvel/dc-waifu.
Something like a cute, buff superwoman-type and a brooding, dark batwoman-type without it being the actual characters.

>>46314677
I won't stop until she's dead by a thousand dickings.
>>46314715
Did you read the "become the girl" option? Shit's wack, yo.
>>46314730
>cucking Ilias
You know she gets off to that, right?

>>46314807
Well what were you expecting her to look like?

>>46314825
One that is a super hero just for fun, but is unreasonably powerful.

>>46314825
Recruiting one as GF, or multiple as harem?

>>46314901
That's what I meant, I want those archetypes, I figured you'd use them as inspiration for OC.

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>>46314854
>>46314904
>being mean to touch fluffy tails
Wow.

>>46314954
Some people are just too rude.

>>46314954
That should've been spoilered, but whatever
It was lovely having almost an entire thread dedicated to my new CYOA + an updated one.

>>46314941
Recruiting them as a new team of superheroes. Whether or not people want to make one their GF or to have a harem is their own business, I think.

>>46314946
Oh, my mistake. Thanks for the help, friend.

>>46314898
Yeah, her being the Necromancer was one of the more likely explanation I could think of for the weirdness about her. Good to hear the rest is just me being paranoid, though.

>>46315009
I didn't make the CYOA, so. I'm just going off of what I've read in the thread and in the CYOA. Anyway you should dick the Necromancer.

>>46314980
It was a nice, quick thread too.

>>46314954
The mystery box should be loli Illias.

>>46314272
>tfw Sissyfication is probably too extreme, too
You people are no fun...

>>46314827
>Not dumping all physical stats
>Not making your character the most persuasive person alive at the start
>Not beating monstergirls through an intricate web of bluffs, deals, and political manipulation
>Not solely levelling your charisma to deific levels and beyond
>Not completing your quest without laying a finger on a girl, in wrath or lust
Pleb taste.

>>46314902
Well then, that just makes my job a whole lot easier!

>>46315107
Pretty sure there's sufficient market for feminization of varying degrees. How else would you explain Slut Life, Paperwork Error, and the like?

>>46314825
A girl with illusion powers.
Her illusions can become tangible in a very short range around her body.

She basically goes around naked, because her illusions can convincingly create any outfit, with her tangible illusions giving her any sunblock/anti-cold effect she needs.

She's also incredibly powerful, because her tangible illusions grant her abilities like monofilament claws and a kind of exoskeleton to strengthen her body. She can also control her trajectory in the air by expelling imaginary mass.

Has a very teasing personality.

>>46315107
It'll only piss people off if it's a surprise. If it's up front that she wants to do that to you, people probably won't complain.

>>46315104
It is.
Was it seriously that obvious?
Godverdammte Sheisse, must I really come up with someone else?

>>46314902
Illias needs an option where you enrage her with your choice and she creates a magical choker to turn you into a girl, then fucks you like one.
She's the only one who can take it off and she'll use it depending on her mood.

>>46314954
Erubetie is adorable

>>46315190
I just took a guess. But really, I want the mystery box to be Illias. It's a good one.

>>46315107
I don't mind, anon...

>>46315150
Yeah, but anon would bitch that he can't pick that waifu because of the curse.

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>>46314994
Kinda like this?

>>46315107
Either add an option to escape (the fetish or girl) or don't make it a surprise. That's why the green waifu CYOA was a shitstorm.

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>>46311874
This is in my opinion, so it's nothin' personnel to you guys.

>Top Tier
SS Anon, Bliss, Thrallherd, Lurl
>Good Tier
The Scientist, Royal Guardian Anon, Spadesy, Beri, Highlander (unfortunately Traveller won't fit in these threads, what the fuck man)
>Decent/Getting There Tier
Tunebuggy, Kit, Quiet, Trainwreck, Dr. Divergent
>Alright/Legacy Tier
Lamas Krone, Dumbledaft, Most-of-the-one-shot-CYOA-guys
>Shit Tier
Skeleton Gangrape Anon (though I like the CYOA because it's funny), Most-of-the-one-shot-waifu/fetish-CYOA-guys
>Meme Tier
The-guy-who-made-Alice, Whoever-the-fuck-made-Slut-Life, SDA

There's a bunch of CYOAs with unknown artists (or one shots/legacy CYOAs) I'd consider Top/Good/Decent but I can't really list them here.

Also I probably missed a lot of names.