Rate my abomination

Pauldrons are too small.

>>44056590
Not too shabby.

Keep practising and you'll do even better.

>>44056590
I'd give it an A too.
A for abomination.

File: 1449004859546.jpg (70KB, 720x404px) Image search: [Google]

70KB, 720x404px

>>44056639
I'll give an 'A' for

>>44056740
>X-com 2

File: Space Marine7.jpg (250KB, 1175x1358px) Image search: [Google]

250KB, 1175x1358px

Better than my attempt in paint

>>44056590
Not the worst thing I've seen, but you should seriously consider to build a "skeletal frame" for the sake of shapes and proportions, bud.

>>44057363
Yeah I've always been shit at getting proportions right.
That and fingers.

>>44057408
>I've always been shit at getting proportions right.
You'll fare well in 40k, OP.

>>44056590
Better than anything I'm capable of drawing.

>>44056590
are you in fifth grade?

>>44057491
No but I share the artistic and autistic talent of one.

>>44056590
Not a bad piece. By no means a masterpiece (hence why you're in a drawing class, I suppose), and parts could use some work, but the talent is there. It just needs to be honed.

>>44056590
Thin your pencils

>>44057593
Kek

>>44056874
Don't spoile it , Also so hype.

>>44056590
I suggest drawing on a smaller scale, Stay in greyscale for now, otherwise, not bad if you didn't use a reference

>>44056590
Stay still so the Commissar can execute your for heresy.

>>44056590
Surprisingly good.

>>44056590
You want /ic/ or /co/
On /co/ you want the "Work on your Art" threads. They pop up here and there.

Work on your photography. It is too blurry to critique.