>be me
>sitting in front of computer at 11pm one night
>unsure of what to do, start thinking
>"The human mind is an amazing device.
>It has the power to convey any idea that it creates using only its body.
>It can express opinions and emotions in ways that may be completely unique to others.
>It can craft entire elaborate worlds known to no one else but themselves.
>It can control every aspect of that elaborate world and do as it wishes.
>And the mind has the power to utilise the most basic of tools to paint its opinions, emotions, and desires into the real world.
>And the mind can even contort what little tools it has to fulfil its desires in a way enjoyable to themselves."
>mfw I accidentally ejaculated to a game of The Sims 3
>>5650519
Who are you quoting?
Me, post-ejuaculation
>>5650519
There are several serious issues with your essay that need correction. First, the lack of citations is alarming. Plagiarism is a serious problem in academia, and an act that is not tolerated on [s4s]. Please properly source your quotes. Second, the entirety of your essay is quotes. This is also plagiarism! Learn to develop your own voice, incorporating in properly-cited facts and ideas from other sources as you build your argument. (See Chapter 2.5 for more information.) See me after class, and I can give you additional guidance.
>>5650531
u talk funny lole