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Why don't you rap?

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Why don't you rap?
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>>39129667
I'm mentally ill and can barely hold a conversation with anyone.

I tried freestyling and it was so bad I shamed my soul for eternity.

my thoughts are too scattered to be good at all and I have crippling depression and not the "good kind" teenagers on 4chan talk about, you being calm and contemplative is not some how equivalent to depression

right now my life consists of 4chan and thinking about games I'll never play and trying to get a job
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im a slav and i taught myself english through old school hip hop

i don't listen to the new school template trap garbage though
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>>39129667
>tfw I'll never be making /fa/ music videos with ecco2k, bladee, and thaiboy digital
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>>39129726
>>tfw I'll never be making /fa/ music videos
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMn9NYIhM60
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>>39129667
Imma imma if if if
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>>39129745
Thank you for this gem.

>tfw no /fa/ japanese friends
>tfw no /fa/ japanese qt girls

I've got an /fa/ black friend and a pair of raf simons though so I guess anything's possible
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because i'm horrible at speaking, i cant even hold a conversation with people i don't know.

i just mostly listen to some dark type stuff like bones, ghostemane, syringe etc. i wish i could rap like them tho ; - ;
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I tried. This is the best thing I wrote.

>My shit'll hit you like a piston. So quit your bitchin. I'll stick you like a snitch in prison. I'm rich you're washin dishes in the kitchen. I'm lickin clits your dick is itchin. You're shittin bricks you prick you shoulda listened.

Honestly, should I just forget it?
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>>39129954
It's pretty bad but not terrible.
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>>39129667
Zero charisma paired with being monotone as hell and thus barely able to speak properly, much less rap out loud. I listen to new school rap all the time, which always makes me want to contribute whenever there's a "spit a verse" thread, though that's as far as it goes.

Most of what I write is shit, but it's fun regardless, and I will sometimes get positive feedback.
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>>39129721
i don't get how people can learn a language just by listening to music or watching tv

how do you know what stuff means
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>>39130436
That rap cut me deep
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I have no respect at all for rap music.
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But I do, OP
https://soundcloud.com/onsei9
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>>39130022
How about this?

This isn't gangster rap
This is about a guy who gives wanks for crack
Now crank the track
Smoke that dank and hash
Go into a bank and yank the cash
Tell the judge it was a prank, relax
Get sent to prison and shank the rats
Get out, have kids with a skank and spank the brats

An Eminemesque one is this

>I'm gay but only for shemales. Believe me I'm straight just bad with the females. Fuck spendin all day workin retail. Give me an ounce of lemon haze and some weed scales.
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>>39130597
You'd fit in well with Odd Future if they were still a thing. Take that however you will.
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>>39130436
You have potential.
Original
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Please BONES post more and leave lil peep to be. He is so fucking thrash fuck that guy
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>>39129667
I hate this trend of "lol so ironic" rappers who are all just catching on to /fa/ trends from years ago and base their whole identities/presence on it thinking they're so unique when they're really dime a dozen. I know so many people like this irl too
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Someone rate my faux-deep suicidal ramblings

It's supposed to be rapped to this beat, from 1:16 onward, if anyone cares: https://youtu.be/QYg3rbnbRNs

I don't need a bitch to tell me that I'm worth it
I don't need a mother to tell me that I'm perfect
I just wanna die mom
Now you gonna cry mom
Please don't say that anymore, you know I won't be fine mom
I just wanna go, let me go in fucking peace
I swear I'll take you with me if you call up the police
I don't have a will but grant me a single wish
Don't you tell nobody that I cried like a bitch
When I slit my wrist, say I died like a man
Leave the fucking room, I'm sure God will understand
Like he probably did when he put me on this earth
I swear I think the air taste worse than the dirt
Before i sleep, imbibe some antifreeze with the glycol
You know I will try any thing I can expire from
I can see your thinking, damn this kid is awful
You knew what I knew, you would make your kid an orphan
Don't you think I'm going just because a playa feel bad
Raise a child in this pit, fuck that I'd rather be dead
"You wanna make a change, gotta start with yourself"
Bitch I'm out of the equation, that's the hand that I've been dealt
And I never gave a crap about a fucking fellow man
We're doomed from the start, all according to the plan
May be I read it in a book, but I am of the inclination
God is seething in his throne cause we have ruined his creation
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>>39129667
Because I'd go to jail OP. Like seriously what question is this?
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I'm worse than the Antichrist
My words'll cut your nerves like Stanley knives
I'm smokin herbs and walkin round with slanty eyes
I'll put you in a hearse and laugh as your family cries
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>>39130436
anon u vince staples???
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>>39129667

1. i hate rap music. or, most of the popular stuff. i can listen to oldschool rap and horrorcore though.

2. i dont have the accent for it. most rap is ghetto voice isnt it?

3. its just hard for me to do
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>>39129667
I don't rap, I mumble.

'i no u want this 4 lyf, takin pictuures wid all my aice, but i can't ...have... no wife, i just want this 4 tonite'
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>>39130767
Not bad, but rapping over an already made beat is a shitty practice
>>39130799
rapping is illegal in your country?
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>>39130591
Don't leave is pretty great anon, but the other two songs are not that good.
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>>39130853
You the type of nigga that only likes obscure jazz, aren't you?
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>>39130839
> rapping over an already made beat is shitty practice
How so? 98% of rappers don't produce themselves, and while I try to, it seriously undersells my lyrical ability. Most of the time I just hear a good beat and start writing on the spot.
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>>39130869
Not at all, I mainly listen to emo and trap rap, the thing is that the 36 song is a bit boring and the singing in Underwater really grinds my gears.
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>>39130839
>but rapping over an already made beat is a shitty practice
I mean yeah, it is. At least according to me, a producer. I'd much prefer people actually MAKE their own shit.

But hey, it's industry standard. What can you do?
>>39130924
Sad to hear you don't like it, anon.
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>>39130869
not him but obscure jazz is patrician af music taste, listen to pic related right the fuck now
>>39130890
I feel like rappers should either produce for themselves or find a producer to make a beat for them if they can't.
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No-one seems to care but here's another one either way

[Chorus]
Would you be my slime princess
Don't care what the fine print says
Girl listen i would never finesse
You know I see right through you
Feel right to you
Every one of my three wishes is I wanna get to do you

I'm running out of time
I might just go columbine
On this fucking school if you don't acknowledge me
Don't fuck with the rules, they can never tarnish me
Paint your picture on my eyelids cause its everything I see
Family asking if I'm fine
Can't seem to take my mind off your behind
And that ain't a fucking line
Standing with your friends by the red brick wall
One look at your face can make my fat dick tall
Feel like a million bucks when I'm with you
Feel like my life sucks when I miss you
Too bad the former never happens so I been depressed for ages
these emotions never help me so I keep em in they cages
I just wanna slit my wrist when I think about that guy you kissed
Wanna forget you, wanna cross you off the list
Can't do no drugs so I'm just faking that I'm high
Wear them Kanye blinded glasses they can't see me when I cry
In a cypher just pretending that I'm talking to myself
Girl you make me spit arsenic that can't be good for my health
But, when I'm at the bottom rhymes be coming from the top
Seems when my feet are on the edge my mind just doesn't wanna stop
Dreaming that you die but I can never find your body
Wake up wetter than a shower hoping you can do without me
Standing with your friends in the goddamn mall
One word from your mouth can make a grown man fall
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>>39130951
>ryu fukui
>obscure

it's nu-jazz btw
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>>39130951
>>39131010
wannabe patrician btfo by anon-kun
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>>39131010
>>39131074
>Scenery
>not obscure
It's barely even discussed in circles of people who listen to/play Jazz
>nu-Jazz
back to /mu/
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If anyone needs beats I can make them
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>>39131145
>If anyone needs beats I can make them
I do actually. Can you actually make something good? I'd like to try. I want something edgier and more emo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXP5mhIvNhs
Kinda like this but more crisp, like this sound but mainstream-tier production.
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I KNOW THAT YOU LIKE ME KISS ME WITH YOUR EYES CLOSED HATE IT WHEN YOU FIGHT ME LOVE IT WHEN I DIE SLOW
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>>39131097
t. youtube suggestions
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My rhymin scheme is kinda mean
I grind MCs inclined to flee
And bind to trees like vines and weeds
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I can't afford FL Studio, and I'm not too good at writing. Every now and then I come up with a FIRE line, but that's it.
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>>39131641
Care to share some of your favourites?
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>>39131641
get FL cracked
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>>39130444
You know when you watch tv the characters move and shit right? So when they point at something and say a word, its pretty safe to assume that the word they said is what they're pointing at. There's a reason people can learn a language and have abhorrent grammar.
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>>39130597
>Tell the judge it was a prank, relax
Kekeroonie
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>>39129667
Even if you make good songs, there's no way you can make it big if you're not at least somewhat good looking
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I got love for my gay boys
My smoke everyday boys
My cray boys and my never get laid boys
My always gotta pay boys
My minimum wage boys and my government cage boys
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>>39133089
>Even if you make good songs, there's no way you can make it big if you're not at least somewhat good looking
k
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>>39133235
Literally who?
Original original originally
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rapping is cool but i would rather sing, and I can't do either well. Play your strengths i guess
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>>39133307
>be fat ugly chinlet jawlet facelet
>make shitty music
>become millionaire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tMgkt9jdjTU
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Why hasn't a rap group formed on 4chan yet?
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But I do...

>>39130591
Those are pretty nice, mind if I write/record on them?
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>>39129667
Because I'm not a nigger loving faggot
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>>39133473
Yes, but you're a nigger hating faggot.
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Who /rubber band cartel/ here?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEqN53AM1BQ

WOCK WOCK
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Motherfuckers fucking fucked in the cunt.
Fuck the other motherfuckers in the butt of the gunt.
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Because I need a good producer
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Yeah, yeah,
Stuff the turkey in the oven to flush.
Flush the murky stuff in currents for the nothing of such.
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>>39133930
>not producing his own lo-fi highly underground hip hop
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>>39129667
seeing this little faggot fills me with a murdeous rage. First him, then everyone else in this thread. Don't bother saying prayers. You're going to hell.
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>>39133930
Do you have good lyrics, flow and vocals that make you deserve a good producer?
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>>39133989
Hey, now I'm mad, too, and I'm gonns take it out on you!
Little cunt. You think you stand a chance? I'll take you to 500 miles above the Earth for my "Millenium Suplex" attack. Just face the facts, twerp: you're out of your league.
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>>39134012
I think I have great flows and can come up with some good one-liners but I'm still working on putting together cohesive verses (which is hard to do without having a beat to put it over)
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>>39133204
You rhymed 'boys' like 7 times...
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>>39134122
>he doesn't know how rhyming works
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>>39129667
Not being arrogant, I'm the greatest rapper who has ever lived.
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>>39134216
Spit a verse about Donald Trump.
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>>39134053
Just find free beats all over the internet and practice. This is what I did until I managed to produce my own beats
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>>39134053
Post some stuff you been writing, I make beats and have no rappers to work with desu
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>>39130630
seriously it sounds exactly like something off of earl's first EP
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>>39134368
Where are you from?

this is original i swear reee
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But I do.
https://vocaroo.com/i/s0l2etuw4iBI

Sorry that it's in German.
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>>39134379
Which part?
Originally
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>>39134438
both parts honestly
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>>39134368
Do you have any place I could hit you up at? I don't want to put them anywhere public just yet.
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>>39134454
I'm guessing you don't like Odd Future. Neither do I.
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>>39134475
I feel fucking weird linking my soundcloud or bandcamp on r9gag desu
If you have a discord my incompetent ass can try to find you there
Also I wanna record a verse for this thread now
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>>39134495
I was hard up on them for a while when their was news everyday but now I think they're bad but I always knew in my heart they were bad. It's kind of personal for me because I live in LA, in not a very good area and the seeing them having adventures in mid-city LA made me jealous especially because I have to go through a bunch of ghettos to even get over there.
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I was cruisin online
Abusing my spine
Bent over watchin scat porn and boozin on wine
Oh look he put poo in a rhyme
Yeah is doodoo a crime?
I mention number twos and now you're losin your mind?
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I do, and it's going okay. My self hate made me scrap most of my writings for years but I've grown to somewhat be able to tolerate them so I figure it's not too bad.
Now I'm struggling with delivery on recording. I still sound autistic and can't express the desired feeling I'm trying to convey when recording, but practice will make perfect, I guess.

If there are any Canada bots (GTA mostly) who do rap and would like to bring each other down you should hit me up on email desu
[email protected]
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Because I have an IQ above 100
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>>39129667
rap is literally the normie genre of music, nearly all of it is about success or money or women or """beef""" or stupid shit. And on top of that, it all sounds the fucking same. Some stupid cunt talking over some generic beat. It's fucking garbage.

And yes, if you're reading this Alex, you know who it is.
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>>39134759
Somebody's bitter they suck at rapping.

If you're tired of pop-rap subject matter, might I suggest listening to the song No Regrets by Aesop Rock?
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>>39130597
Actually pretty hot, not super original but technically proficient.
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>>39130767
IMO using bitch too often makes it sound like you're trying to sound edgy especially when talking about a personal, serious issue. Also i think this would be better as a second verse with the first one easing you into the mood
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>>39130767
>>39134949
I should add though that it is a pretty good verse
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any r9k rappers wanna collab?
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>>39134799
>Aesop rock
I'm glad i'm not the only one that loves that guy. His lyrics are amazing.
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>2017
>everyone's pretending to be black

wtf happened to the world? why is being a gangbanging nigger something to look up to?
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>>39134854
I'm glad somebody thinks so.
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>>39135136
Don't slip off that edge, boy
>implying rappers are black
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https://vocaroo.com/i/s14TYmRCHvIx

I don't actually like anything about this, including that I'm doing it
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This is the tip top of hip hop
You whacker than a mofo wearing flip flops iat a chip shop
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https://vocaroo.com/i/s1OMA62mjozi

r8 me
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>>39135316
>https://vocaroo.com/i/s1OMA62mjozi
Your voice is too quiet and sounds like idubbz's "gay retard" voice
you rhyme really well but because your delivery's so quiet and forceless it just makes you sound like a ridiculous nerd to me
You're probably really good at writing though, like, I can tell a fuckton of thought went into writing that
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>>39135316
The first part was good.
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>>39135358
thank you. i've always been aware i sound like a gay retard, but needed actually someone to confirm it
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>>39135399
Honestly if you didn't sound like you were taking yourself incredibly seriously as a lyricist I think it wouldn't hold you back.

Look up this Euro battle rapper Nils M Skills sometime if you're into battle rap. His accent's similar.
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>>39135521
Thank you, I will try to go less "violent"

>Look up this Euro battle rapper Nils M Skills sometime if you're into battle rap
I get what you mean. I don't know if this type of flow will work on songs but I will definitely use him as an example. Thank you for being honest though!

>>39135365
Thank you buddy, I fucked up near the end
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I do sometimes. When im at work at my wagecuck job i dont talk to people much so i come up with rhymes in my head to make the day go quicker. Heres one i did a while back
https://vocaroo.com/i/s0uISyIppoLJ
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https://artfuckingmoney.bandcamp.com/track/living-in-hell-2

only thing i've ever recorded :(
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>>39135903
Funny. You should put it on YouTube.
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>>39135908
The vibe and flow sounds nice but the recording quality is awful I can't make much of the words.

>>39135903
That's nice. Do you have more?
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>>39136053

yeah i used a shitty webcam mic for it. headphones kind of help but i plan on re-recording it at some point.
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I do a line of ket
Make vaginas wet
Break your spine and realign your neck
Imma swine for sex
A rhymin Einstein who outshines the rest
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>>39136053
Sure here

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0wc4K0PtazZ
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>>39137062
Do you make the beats yourself? Good stuff.
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>>39137362
Yeah i make all my beats, it helps my autism knowing the exact bpm i used to try and flow.
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>>39137428
We'll your flow is good.
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>>39130436
Those are some spicy rhythms my guy
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>>39133930
soundcloud.com/occharacter

Peep my soundcloud, if it's something you're interested in I can make you something if you'd like.

Cheers.
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production software is expensive and the free ones are about as complex as a toy that plays farm animal sounds
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>>39137880
Thanks. My comp is down atm so all i have is a phone mic to record with, usually i have a better set up just no money to fix stuff till next week. Heres 1 more
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>>39138164
Woops forgot link
https://vocaroo.com/i/s1yXlzCnmBxp
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>>39129667
rap is for fags
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because i'm poor and white. white people rapping are only acceptable if they're considerably wealthy.
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>>39138323
a lot of black rappers even went to college
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>>39129667
I'm not an insufferable faggot with a thesaurus and a kindergarten level of rhyming.
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>>39135009
I'm an /r9k/ producer. Want to collab? I make stuff along the lines of more modern rap/trap/pop-trap. I recently tried my hand at sampling anime ost tracks for beats, thinking of making a kill la kill track.
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>>39129667
When I'm home alone i like to freestyle about my depression and self-loathing, i'm not a native english speaker but i like to rap in english sometimes. Sometimes i record myself freestyling while i drive alone.
It's just a way to cope.
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>>39138545
i would. contact me:
im >>39134571
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>>39138733
I produced some kinda depressed beats too, can i email ya vro?
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>>39138733
>i would. contact me:
Got you, sent, can't wait to hear back.
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Never really attempted it.
Started producing a while back tho
Shit's working out
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>>39138791
please do, i would love to hear

>>39138888
thanks, will get back to you in a few. currently wagecucking
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>>39129873
Bones has the sexiest voice and style, straight up.
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>>39134759
You obviously haven't heard anything other than mainstream surface level rap.
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Rap maniac
Traps are gay...niac
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can't rhyme and have no rhythm
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My voice is too high-pitched and monotonous for it and I don't know where to begin writing lyrics/beats/bars/lines/whatver.
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>>39130767
sounds like an edgier earl
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I try to but my voice is too deep and monotone, i sound like a less interesting rich chigga
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>>39133089
earl sweatshirt ??
oregano
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>>39130998
This was pretty good, there's enough of a story to be engaging, as opposed to a bunch of random rhymes. I was actually going to say it sounds like something from a cypher before seeing you mentioned "cypher" near the end.

>>39130536
>>39130687
>>39130823
>>39137935
Wow, thanks for the nice replies. I did put a lot of effort in that one.

I couldn't think of anything good to write in a hurry, but wanted to post this garbage anyway.


Dad's like "you ain't hung with your old group in years"
I'm not alone, I've got my daki souvenirs
Would rather buy figurines than new veneers
though if ice cream touch my tooth, *poof*, in tears
Robots liking traps ain't proof they're queers
haha, not really, just trying to soothe their fears
Don't worry about me, I'll become self-aware in time
Fix my schizo, buy crypto, quit anime, repair my hairline
find a nice girl, feeling like Amine and Caroline
Fuck off, cucks, I'm not sharing mine
You act like monogamy's a new paradigm

If life's a game, I'm just button mashing about
Shit never clicked like an old plastic mouse
Tell those bitches to shout their laughing mouths
before I hook their face like I'm catching trout
Swallow pills for that everlasting doubt,
therapist thinks I'm merely acting out,
attention seeking with that vodka flask stout
Wanna crawl in a hole, 'cause my efforts are last ditch now
I can't wait to move to my new casket house
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>>39129667
Because of my gay ass stuttering
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>>39129667
Anyone else have a soundcloud they wanna share? I make beats

https://soundcloud.com/user-683486472/spookyyy
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>>39143956
Your beats are so soothing anon, I like it
I feel like if I rapped on them, I would do injustice to the innocence and beauty of them
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>>39129667
cuz it's a sucky music genre. I want to play heavy metal guitar.
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>>39143956
This is really nice, good job.
On a side note, how can you catch a beat and rap to it? Listening to that first beat, I don't see how words can fit with it without sounding forced.
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>>39145225
not him but it's new style rap. it's a lot more slow than what, i'm guessing, you listen to.
for example:
"i murder a beat with.... (2 second break)
pistols and sick wits (2 second break)
so listen to these bars (2 second break)
like i'm escaping police cars (2 second break)
"
and so on... a lot of modern rappers do it, i'm sure you've heard it before
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>>39145396
Yeah, that example makes sense. I can imagine how you'd do it with that beat.
With a lot of faster lyrics, the rappers shape their words around the beat perfectly, but when hearing the instrumental on its own, I can never understand how words can flow to it.

With the song Tiimmy Turner, every time I hear the instrumental by itself and picture myself rapping it, it feels like I'd have to do a rapid, clunky delivery to rush the lyrics out before the beat changes up. I don't understand how Desiigner's delivery matches a fairly slow beat.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Yh_fipHuPc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ProbPpO_8oo
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>>39129667
Because I don't want to shill the Illuminati to get famous and sell my soul for rapping magic.
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>>39145949
what they do is just match the tempo of the instrumental to their rhythm. look up beat counting tutorials on google or youtube anon. it's in basics of music theory, but in essence, you're supposed to count 4 beats in a bar (a repetition of the rhythm, if we can simplify it) so it is even and quick as needed. You can count with saying 1, 2, 3, 4 or just clapping. So you can fit as many words as you want within these "bars"
That's a short tutorial I found:
http://neilhawes.com/sstheory/sbeats.htm

There are a lot of practice exercises and tutorials for rhythm and pacing, and the good news is that it's really simple once you get relatively short practice and you brain gets the idea of how rhythm works.
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>>39146086
Thanks for the advice and link. I took piano lessons many years ago (clearly too long ago to be useful now), and know exactly what you mean about beats/rhythm counts, so I'll check out that tutorial.
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>>39133235
>>39133340

Leandoer is handsome, fuck off with your meme aesthetics
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>>39131641
any examples of these fire lines?
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>>39130444
To be honest I don't have any idea and I've learned English trough media. I tried imitating what they say in shows and movies and now I can speak without an accent. Just took some online courses to polish my grammar a bit so I don't sound like a fucking retard
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>>39142692
Anon got discord or something similar where I can message you?
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>>39145949
>>39146086
These two posts give me an alright idea on what I need to be doing but I'm still completely unaware as to how I'm meant to formulate or structure my bars rather so everything sounds good overall.

I don't know how people write usually everything comes to me best when I'm listening to a beat and letting everything flow.
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>>39129667
Is that Pewdiepie?

Orignaldo
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How do I write sick rhymes
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>>39142692
*vodka flask spout

>>39147587
I'm guessing that's a phone app? I don't have a phone. Do you produce beats or write lyrics? I also made the posts asking how people keep time to beats, just in case you assume I know what I'm doing at all.
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>>39147747
There's Discord for PC too. It's like Skype but better and more versatile.
(Not the guy you replied to)
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>>39130436
I remember you from that thread that you capped. I complimented that same rhyme
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>Be outcast robot.
>Expected to be interested in regressive r-selected hobbies for hyper social people.
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>>39147552
>talking about language
>polish my grammar
Was this intentional?
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>>39148540
Oh, okay. Thanks for telling me, I'll make one if the other guy responds. For all this time, I thought Discord was a type of mobile chat room robots would go into to role play and pretend to be girls in. Actually, some of them used it for that because
those threads used to be everywhere and I included it in a rap post.

>>39148572
Thanks for checking it out/complimenting. I used to post a lot of crap (it was horrid) in those threads and would have probably quit trying long ago if all the feedback was negative.
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>>39133235
he's not even that ugly though
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I like rap
Original
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>>39147722
I don't think anybody here can tell you.
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Here's some shit, I posted some stuff yesterday and the thread is still around so go ahead and berate me

She wanna know just who I am
I don't know where to begin
I'm the evil twin
Did a tour of every sin
Got the forty in my hand
With my temple on the other end
All the while tryna understand
Why God put me in his plans
But, i ain't got a clue
When I think about a purpose baby all I see is you
And I don't think it's funny actually it's kinda sad
I had hopes I had wishes I lost everything i had
Girl i sent it all to you but I didn't pay for tracking
Now it's lost in transition and in every way I'm lacking
I'm just talking like I'm raised, does that make me sound pretentious?
I love you so, i want you to be mine till I'm in dentures
All my boys they don't believe me
When I say these girls can't see me
I can't throw it around that freely
Keep it zipped till I've found that feeling
You're so pure, and I'm contaminated
I just wanna touch you, i fucking hate it
I used to be so different but
Inbetween those steps I hesitated
Fast sedated, 808 kicks and half a pill
I'll tell you bout this life cause I live it still
Spitting digital zen but I keep it real
Might need a double cup cause I've had my fill
Girl i feel, every word you say
You're not right, but I've lost my way
I wanna do anything it takes
Can't take anymore of these mistakes
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>>39129726
dr3am gang
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>>39148715
I'm glad someone appreciates my puns
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>>39148967
You might like songs "happiness" and "exception" from Token man
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