Hey, R9K, I write erotica for fun, and would like some feedback.

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I tried copy/paste, but R9K keeps complaining about ASCII characters, and I can't figure out what characters are the problem.

>>38501822
where's the erotica?

>>38501822
its k desu, girl is a bit generic imo.

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I hope you guys don't mind reading them in screen shot format.

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>>38501893
There tends to be a bit of build-up in mine.

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>>38501898
Generic was intended, initially.
Or do you mean in some other way?

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Still reading?

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As the more observant among you may have noticed, I'm not on Windows.

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If I was on my Windows PC, I would have been far better equipped to make it a more readable image.

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I hope I'm not posting to a void o.o;

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Anyone still around? *listens for echo*

Cheap copy of 50 shades of gray.

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Well, I'm almost done posting what I've written today...

>>38501822
It's decent.
Post it on literotica for ratings
You sort of need an editor, you can find that at literotica too.

this story would have been better if her master was a girl that bullied her to submission.

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>>38502230
Funny how that works, given that I've never read 50 shades of gray. What little I do know of it, however, indicates that, if I ever finish this story, it will go well beyond 50 shades of gray. Bestiality, animal breeding, dehumanization. Stuff along those lines.

Any other comments?

>>38502318
I know that literotica does not allow bestiality, sadly.

I know it needs editing... this is just a rough draft.

>>38502376
Where is the bestliy? Did I miss that panel? I guess you are stuck with alt.sex. then

>>38502420
No, you didn't miss it. This is a far from complete work.

Would people be interested in reading more if I wrote mote?

>>38502420
By alt.sex, do you mean ASSTR?

>>38502457
yes, please upload it somewhere as you go on. my wattpad?

>>38502508
maybe* oregano 123

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>>38501890
I think the ASCII characters you are having problems with are the quotation marks. Happened to me before

Why are you using gnome and not a tiling WM that's the real question here

>>38502650
Long story short, this is my cheap laptop I take with me when I work at a location that involves very little work.

My normal PC is an entirely different matter.

>>38502745

A tiling Wm is ideal for laptops. Try out i3 or awesome. You'll never look back

>>38501822
What Linux is that?

Looks like Ubuntu Gnome

>>38502783
This POS was quite literally given to me for free.
I put gnome on it at advice from a friend, and only pull it out from time to time.

My normal PC runs windows, but only because I play video games.

>>38501822
>a man just under six feet tall
Stopped right there. Dropped for unrealistic manlet favoritism.

>>38502987
I thought R9K was /b/ without the cancer, but I guess it's just cancer light.

>>38503073
/r9k/ is literally cancer. Robots are a cancer on society.