Haiku

>>37753632
Haikus are 5/7/5, anon. You fucked up. Like everything else you do.

I got bullied hard
I am a beta faggot
It's a call for help

Oh my fucking god.
I hate myself so much I
want to die soon, please.

I thought I did it right
That I could make you happy
I guess I was wrong

>>37754178
What happened anon?

orig

>>37754229

Haiku is art
That "I" was really cheap trick
You should not do this

>>37753995
>You fucked up. Like everything else you do.

Nice projection lad

>>37754327
Omitting an "a"
Is just as bad you nigger
Original post

>>37754411
Haiku is hard bro
I fucked up sorry my bad
I am pretty dumb

>>37754281
This happened.
>>37753632
>>37753995


asodfhu

>>37754500
It's okay anon
You tried, and this time, you failed
You'll get it next time

>>37753632

I don't need heaven
A hall of inward mirrors
Sates me much more.

The sun is settlig
The cat is sleeping aside
Comfy is this day

What's the point of haiku?

>>37753995
Haiku are not measured in syllables, dumb fuck. English Haiku are usually written in brief free verse. Also, Haiku are composed of three "elements" but only a single line.

>>37754618
A simple restraint
turning speaking into art
It all just flows well

>>37754653
Ah, "free verse" again
just a way to ignore that
your rhythm is shit

As someone who studies Haiku, these threads really piss me off. "I" and "me" are forbidden words in haiku, fyi, and they must be written in the present tense and make a direct reference to the season in which they were composed.

>>37754715
That makes it harder
Like your mother's vagina
On this damp spring day

>>37754715
So basically OP's haiku was spot on

tfw can't find an art museum selling op's picture or really anything other than it on an iphone 6 case
kill me

>>37754993
If it weren't badly written. If nothing else, a haiku provides a clear image of nature. "Fell in beats of merry weather" is a muddy image if it's an image at all.

lilacs bloom in the meadow--geese peck grass