Check them out please:
http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600088532
http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600088292
You can post anonymous reviews without an account, so please do so. Would appreciate it:
http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=add&no=600088532
http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=add&no=600088292
I would but I'm trying to crawl out of a porn hole I dug for myself.
Have a bumperino
>>35371321
What are they about/what do they cover? I could always use more zombie rape.
>>35371392
First story is a zombie (among other creatures) gangbang featuring Jill
Second story is about a minor character from RE3 raping Jill
>>35371321
So I'm like ten paragraphs in, and your writing style is terrible. Like half of the times you used a period you should have used a comma. There are definitely other problems, but that's the only one I can really put my finger on.
YOU POST THIS SHIT 3 TIMES A DAY
FUCK OFF WITH YOUR SHITTY FANFICS
GO SHIL LTHEM ELSEWHERE FUCK YOUR PROMO
NOBODY WANTS TO READ YOUR CRINGE WRITING
TRY READING A F UCKING DECENT BOOK BEFORE CRANKING OUT SHITTY 10 YEAR OLD FANFICTION. STOP ASKING PEOPLE TO CLICK IT ON EVERY SUB. NOBODY WANTS TO READ YOUR SHITTY PATHETIC WRITING.