jessica fanfiction

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Okay guys I am trying to write a fanfiction based off of this trailer: www.youtube.com/watch?v=at1yHOVitHg [Embed]

Which is really autistic but basically I am in love with one of the characters from the game (pic related) and as a result I flip the fuck out trying to defend her in the game and a real life girl friended me on steam because of it and now I have a bunch of steam friends who want me to re-write my contagion fanfiction which I had deleted most of because it had a lot of sex scenes between me and jessica.

Please help me make this less shitty.

Also in the trailer they go outside and see tons of zombies in the streets. Should I do that and have the book start with the city under zombie attack? People turn within like 60 seconds in the game so it is possible but I don't know. The other option is lots of boring investigation shit. Or maybe they go to the police station and it is overrun by zombies? But they also do that later to get weapons. I just want to tie all the maps in the game together.

I would post it on /lit/ but fanfiction is banned there.