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Can someone read this for me and help me edit it? Basically I really like one of the characters from this game Contagion, she is my waifu and I am in love with her, and I found some friends to play with it and I promised them I would rewrite my fanfiction for the game so they could read it. I started out trying to write this trailer here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=at1yHOVitHg
Can you guys help me edit this piece? I just finished writing it, have barely done any editing at all. I want to write a serial series and try to incorporate all the maps from the game but the trailer barely makes any sense.
I know this is real fuckin autistic and weird but please help me. I'd post this on /lit/ but that board is slow as fuck.
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forgot to mention, if you post some of your writing in a pastebin link, I will try to read it and critique it before the thread dies.
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>>35226278
>>35226292
My oh my
Why do i think
You must die
Oh wait you are
OP
the faggot
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>>35226328
why am i a faggot?
orringgal
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