hey r9k I broke up with my girlfriend and I wrote about it. I know it's shitty but I need to show it to someone. I'd be embarrassed to show it to someone I know so please read my shit. I don't know what I'm expecting
I really didn't want to break your heart
but a part of me just doesn't care
I sat next to you crying in your chair
wearing flowrrs inside circles and squares
and I thought of how I'd write these workds
and then I thought of that line too
anything to avoid thinking
about you
and your face was like a work of art
the tears rolling down to complete the piece
I'd say that there's a hole in my heart
but I don't know if there's anything there
then we smoked cigarettes and stared
tiny fuses for my time left there
then we hugged for a hundred years
and we didn't have anything to say
you said please don't and looked at me
and then I left and caught my train
these are the moments that stick in your mind
not some bullshit about the joy of
summer time
try spell check next time, faggotron
>>35204551
It's beautiful. It paints a perfect picture, very emotive as well.
>>35204605
thank you for reading it and stuff I genuinely do appreciate it
>>35204551
Set this to a heavy metal ballad and it would be an ok song. Also enable spellcheck you retard.
>>35204823
one heavy metal ballad coming right up!
correct spelling is for lil bitches
>>35204551
That made me tear up a bit OP. Hit me hard. Wrote it down in my journal, credited to you.
>>35205499
knowing that something I wrote is in someone elses journal makes me feel like it's all actually worth it somehow, thank you