show me your drawings, paintings, photos, sculptures etc
>>34953231
reminder to only ever draw from still life if you want to get gud
Made this a while ago back in spooky season.
>>34953231
Alright, once again sharing my vaporwave script (currently 7 or 8 pages)
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6uwaxNQt5HRbkQtQktqMUZRMHc
I'm not adding anything right now because I'm tired as fuck, but I'm proud of what I do have and hope that I can flesh this out into a 30-page short film.
My chef d'oeuvre.
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>>34953374
thats quite nice anon. you could do illustrations for childrens' books
>>34953297
it reads good mate. how long have you been writing and when finishing it, do you actually plan to film it?
I recorded this two days ago.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0iGUGsMfpRi
I'm really proud of it. It's the first time I've ever done something with a script that I wrote.Please give me (You)s.
I'm making progress. I'm also finding writing to be easier.
I'm also currently writing a script for some pornography about a barbarian fucking a goblin that I'm having a lot of fun with. I was going to write it as prose but it's been so long since I last wrote short stories and ever since I got my motivation and drive back a couple of months ago, I've only been writing film/radio scripts so I think I've forgotten how to write prose. Now I'm writing it as a film script instead.
Really trying to develop a style
>>34953231
I create a bunch of OC for /pol/
>>34953690
You sound handsome, and probably funny. How are you a robot.
>>34953297
It reads well, the dialogue is natural, the in-universe jargon is interesting without seeming forced and the story is progressing well.
I'm liking it so far.
>>34953231
I wamted to learn how to draw but have avoidant personality disorder and have destroted absolutely everything I have ever drawn or written. I learn things quickly but quit so fast it doesn't even matter.
How the fuck do I just get over the self loathing and commit to learning thigs I want to learn? How do I stop getting angry and upset with myself for not being good at everything I try?
>>34953636
Thanks bruv.
I just write a little at a time at night when I'm bored and I've got headphones available to me. I write it all on my phone, in celtx.
I'd absolutely love to film it, but it'd be a much bigger production than anything I've ever planned. Right now, it's just an aesthetic pipe dream.
Pic sorta related, a neat bridge near me. Has the look I'm gunning for
>>34953690
Not gonna lie got kinda turned on from that.
>>34953769
Cool stuff
>>34953729
>You sound handsome,
That's not my actual voice, it's a fake American accent. I'm honestly surprised it's not immediately noticeable that it's fake.
But I have been told I have the perfect face for radio.18 years of abuse at home, harrassment at school and mental issues that developed as a result. I want to make people laugh because if I play the clown and have them laugh at me intentionally, maybe they won't laugh at me out of malice.
But that's not relevant to what I'm working on so I won't say anything else about it.
https://www.docdroid.net/DLOukXs/script-erick-and-the-goblin1.pdf.html
This is the pornographic script I'm working on. So far this is just setting up the characters and the world. I'm in the middle of writing more at the moment but the heat makes it hard to keep going sometimes.
>>34953742
Thanks! I really appreciate that.
I really am just writing it off the cuff, but I have a basic outline (Kira learns about some mind-control stuff happening within the Yakuza, tries to figure out the origin, learns this is the work of a group of disgraced neuroscientists or something working with the Yakuza to turn their low-level flunkies into remorseless assassins)
I honestly have not expected such good reception so far.
>>34953847
>I honestly have not expected such good reception so far.
You got a good handle on scriptwriting. You're capable of conveying enough relevant information for people to get a good mental image of what's going without excess padding and you know how to use correct formatting which makes everything easy to read.
That's like half of writing a good script.
>>34953810
It sounds sort of fake to an American in the sense I can't place it anywhere. like that accent doesn't have anything. It's a good voice though.
So are you going to be animating this one? It sounds good so far, I'd replace the That'll do nicely sir with a y-you too.
Got to admit it's a weird subject though. Definitely a robot writing it.
have posted thisonebefore
Do they have to b namec
you are all so talented
>>34953885
I've been doing it since high school (in sophomore year of college right now). I'm glad I'm improving to the point where I don't get absolutely fucking shredded on every mistake I made with formatting.
You should see the thing I wrote before this, when I was trying to write a tribute to The Warriors/Escape From New York.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6uwaxNQt5HRRjFwOTVVYzROM1k
I mean just look at this shit. There wasn't even an ending.
>>34953798
I am honestly surprised. I thought the cartoon sound effects and outrageous situation would overwhelm any unintended arousal.
Can I ask why?
>>34953913
> I can't place it anywhere. like that accent doesn't have anything.
All right, I'll have to work on that if I want to voice act more of these in the future.
I won't be animating it because I've got no artistic talent. If I'm lucky and somehow get some money, I might commission someone to animate for me if I can do the voice acting for Erick as well. He's a lot of fun to write and would be even more fun to voice. Like Conan the Barbarian speaking in purple prose.
I actually got the idea for it from a request on /d/. Someone wanted to see some femdom shortstack and it got my brain-box sparking.
I had to firmly establish Erick as an extremely proud "Chadson Thunderhoof" so the role reversal of being dominated by a short, big-hipped goblin would be even more intense. That's probably why it seems so /r9k/. It's like reading a greentext of what it's like to be a fantasy Chad.
Writing pornographic sex scenes is actually a really fun challenge because I'm essentially writing without a roadmap. Most productions only write the dialogue and set-up and the sex scenes are left entirely up to the director. Trying to write the sexual content in way that provides a mental image, is readable in a script but isn't completely rigid is strange. I'm having to go for some strange hybrid of explaining the sexual intent of the scene, any areas of sexual activity that need to be focused and character motivations so the actors have an emotional framework for the sex act their supporting.
Sorry to let the autism out in full force, I just really like talking about this stuff.
>>34954123
Hey, I read that script in one of the previous threads. It's good to see you're still making good progress.
>>34954210
Hey, good to see someone remembers.
That must have been like a half a year ago, damn.
>>34954080
I like it.
I'd wear it on a t-shirt and consider it one of my "good shirts".
>>34954310
We've all got works we're ashamed of.
I've got one that desperately needs a complete write-up but I'm so ashamed by how bad it is that I just want to trash it completely and never revisit it.
haha i have no talent
u guys are making me feel bad
momma :'((
>>34953723
idk what this is but tasteful use of shape and color, i like it
music/rapper guy here
his a chill beat for the thread
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppe8GS166LA